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Title: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: writerjunkie on March 03, 2010, 01:44:58 PM
CHAPTER 1

“Please be careful when you walk home tonight, Ai-chan.” Risa warns.

I roll my eyes and sigh at her normal motherly instincts that always take over when I work night shifts at the cafe. I smile politely at her and nod. Even if she's being overly protective and concerned about me I still put up with it in the same way she puts up with me being stubborn. It's the least I can do. After all, I do owe so much to Gaki-san. If it weren't for her I wouldn't have this job or have my small apartment because the cost of living in Tokyo is too high.

I still can't seem to get why she's always so worried over me, like whether I’ll reach my apartment safely when it's only three blocks from here. However, I will remain grateful for Gaki-san's help and caring nature. It was because of her why I'm here today. She is friends with the owners of this cozy coffee shop and that guaranteed me the job as a waitress. She pulled a few strings a few months back and before I knew it I was employed and working in Morning Cafe within two weeks.

I decided to move to Tokyo a year ago to pursue a career in acting to my parents' dismay. I may be a little too headstrong since I went against my parents' wishes to go after a dream they can't seem to understand, but I'm a performer. I was born for this. Of course, like expected I currently have no luck in getting any roles. I knew that would happen though, because not everyone can get a big break so easily.

So here I am, finishing my midnight shift and ready to go home only to work again tomorrow afternoon because I have classes in the morning. This routine gets tiring sometimes, but I've grown to like this shop as well as the staff members. The workers here are the friends I've gained since I left Fukui, and I've been able to make a few friends at college also. I feel less homesick because of my friends. It makes this job I attend to daily more enjoyable.

“I'll be fine Gaki-san there is no need to worry.” I reassure.

“Ai-chan, are you sure you don't want me to drive you home?” Risa offers.

“Risa, I live only three blocks away. I can walk.” I remind her.

“That's right. OK, I'll see you tomorrow then, Ai-chan.” Risa agrees.

I walk over to give her a goodbye hug then turn back to the two owners of Morning Cafe. From behind the cash-register, I can see the two owners putting chairs on top of tables to get ready to clean before locking the doors and leaving too.

“Goodnight Yoshizawa-san, Ishikawa-san!” I yell.

I lift my hand into the air and wave to the two owners of this cafe.

“Goodnight Ai-chan, be safe.” Ishikawa-san calls back.

“Don't forget about tomorrow. Come here on time, OK?” Yoshizawa-san admonishes.

I nod to my boss's statement. I put on a cheery smile, more than happy to finally be home, then turn toward the wooden framed doors. I push open one door, stepping into the cool night air. I hear Risa give me one last goodbye. The only bad thing about tonight is that it's raining. I open my umbrella before beginning to stroll down the sidewalk.

Maybe, when I get home, I can play my DS again to beat that final boss I can't just defeat yet. Clutching my umbrella firmly into my palm, I absentmindedly look around me to the blinking bright neon colored lights, never really noticing my surroundings, but focusing my thoughts on what magical spells I can use to weaken this undefeated boss in my video game. I look forward to playing again. I haven't had any time to play for several weeks because work has become more demanding since the shop lost a waitress recently. Yoshizawa-san hasn't found a new worker suitable for the vacant position yet.

I hope someone will be hired soon. I would like to have some time with my friends too. Lately, I have only been leaving my job to sleep in my apartment instead of going to work, going with my friends to a karaoke place together, then coming home to sleep. Things are much harder since I attend college at the same time. It's a shame I haven't really gotten the chance to spend quality time with my friends for a few weeks.

Whenever I walk through Tokyo late at night it reminds me of all the places I want to visit or a restaurant I would like to try with my friends instead of buying half my meals at a convenience store. I should really try to cook at home for once. I'll worry about that later. Right now, I'm looking over the places I will like to try for any free time I get after work. Searching through crowds, I come to realize that it always amazes me at how different the city in Tokyo looks when the sun falls. The entire city changes into night mode. All the buildings shine more with their blinking signs and bright blues and yellows.

That's only a few colors out of the many I see going through food markets and any other local stores. I've never seen so many lights in one city. The noise from this sleepless city I’m used to now, along with the large crowds. I look over different shops briefly and turn the corner, reaching the end of the food markets. The yelling of shop owners trying to catch a customer dies down.

Walking now in silence and passing a small alley way, I hear something stirring from within the narrow path. The noise is faint and I can't really figure out what is making that strange sound. I listen more closely. Is that...crying? No wait, whimpering? I stand still, squinting through the dark. I can't see anything.

I start to see a small dark figure from within the distance of the alleyway. The shaded figure begins to grow as it comes closer and closer to the opening of the alley. The sound also gets clearer and I piece together that it isn't crying, but in fact whimpering.

“Ah, a puppy!!” I squeak, rushing over to the animal that just revealed itself. I bend down to get a better look. “What are you doing out here in the rain?”

I reach out to pet its white fur. The dog is completely soaked and ice cold. I can feel the puppy shaking through its thick fur. Who could just leave a small dog out in the streets on a day like this? The dog lets out another whimper and weakly jumps on to its hind legs to press its front paws onto my lap.

The hungry dog gazes sadly into my eyes, silently asking for my help. There's this twinkle in the puppy's eyes as it looks at me. I've never seen a dog with eyes like these. They're a light haze of brown with a bright sparkle behind the soft colored eyes. I stroke the back of the dog's neck and feel something hard against my hand.

I realize the damp thick material at its neck is a collar and trace my fingers around it. I reach to the front of the collar and find that the tag that is supposed to be attached is missing. I pick the dog up from the floor and lift it to my eye level. The white colored house pet remains still as I hold it while it still continues to whimper and cry. I carefully examine the dog for any wounds and get a horny view at its lower half on accident.

Well, I now know this dog is a girl. My eyes settle back to the puppy's light colored eyes.

“What type of pet dog doesn't have a tag to its collar?” I whisper. “Did you escape from home? Are you lost? Your owner is probably worried about you. I'll take you home before you get sick. Then I'll return you back to your owner.”

The dog lets out a happy bark that's still weak. How long has the dog been here? I carefully bring the dog into my arms to give some type of warmth to its quivering body. The second this dog is in my arms it starts to lick rapidly at my face in excitement. I cringe and turn my head away to dodge the licking, but the dog instead starts to lick at my ear, causing me to giggle.

“Hey, stop.” I gently command.

Surprisingly, the dog obeys and just pants happily with its tongue hanging out looking at me. Whoever owned this dog trained her well. I shift the dog into my arms to a more comfortable position so that I can hold my umbrella in one hand and the puppy in the other. I can feel her thick bushy tail wagging side to side against my back in joy.

“Come on, let's get home. I'm sure you're hungry.” I say.

The puppy lets out another bark and I start to walk, but at a much quicker pace. First thing tomorrow morning I'll find this puppy a home.

 ***

“It isn't much, but it's all I have.” I say, before dropping the dog to the floor. “Just don't wet the floor!”

I watch the young dog search around my home then stand still. Before I can ponder what she's doing the dog's whole body shakes. I feel hundreds of water droplets land on my face and make me wet all over. I should have remembered dogs do that when they get wet. Did she have to do it when I was near though?!

It doesn't matter. I'll just change my clothing later. Right now I need to wank through what the dog will need for the night. Maybe I should make something for her to pee on. I rush over to the kitchen table. She follows me as I start to walk away. I take a few sheets of newspaper from the table and pile the sheets together. 

The small puppy watches me curiously, and then follows me again when I go to put the stack of papers down in the corner of the hallway. I look back at her with a raised brow. She tilts her head, panting with her mouth open.

“Uh...you're potty trained right?” I ask. Wait, why am I talking to her as if she understands me like a human? Well, no one is looking, why not? I point to her. “You,” Then I point to the newspaper. “Pee there! Don't pee anywhere else.”

She looks up at me still happy then tilts her head to the other side. I put my head down and feel my shoulders sink. I wish I paid attention to how my mom got my dog to pee outside. Right now I can't remember anything. The white dog looks at me still happily wagging her tail. I should probably feed her now.

What can I feed her though? I don't have any dog food - just normal human food. How old is this dog? She licks her mouth then sits down staring with her tail still wagging. I go over to my refrigerator and open to see what I have inside.

There's a single container inside, leaving me no choice but to feed it to the dog. I take the rectangular plastic container and pry open the top. All I have in here is rice and fish. I examine the food closely to see if I haven't left it in my refrigerator too long like last time. There isn't any mold on it. I bring the food closer and smell it. It smells fine.

I shrug and turn around to the waiting dog in my kitchen.

“Here you,” I wonder if it's fine to feed her rice and fish. I put a finger to my chin, carefully thinking my choice over. She barks catching my attention again. It should be OK just for today. Tomorrow I'll buy her real food. I wonder if Gaki-san knows what I should feed her. “Alright, I hope you like this. I'm not sure if this is exactly safe, but if I wake up and you’re still alive I guess that means it's fine to eat it.”

I put the container down and she rushes over, chomping as much food as possible in her mouth. I reach down and pat the top of her head as she continues to eat.

“You're cute.” I cry. “I don't get how someone can just throw you away.”

It doesn't take long before all the food is gone and I'm left with trying to see what else the dog will need for tonight. I've given her food. She's already dry, thanks to shaking it all off on me. Through all the careful thinking, a yawn exits from my mouth, stopping my thoughts. I cover my mouth with one hand, while the other reaches out above my head to stretch.

That's right, I should make her a bed! I know I have some extra blankets here. I leave the kitchen to go through a closet next to my room and I can hear the sound of nails tapping against the wooden floors behind me. Is she going to follow me everywhere I go? I take out a blanket then enter my room. I turn on the lights and quickly pick out a spot to place the sheet.

I make sure to fold the blanket and make it fluffy so that it will be nice to lie on then I stand back, admiring my work. It doesn't look that horny, but it will have to do. I look at the dog beside me.

“You don't pee here either.” I warn. “I think that's everything you need for tonight.” I feel another yawn come out, realizing how tired I am.

So much for playing my DS tonight. I might as well sleep. I have work tomorrow. I go over to my drawer to get into dry clean clothes then get into bed. I sit up in bed and peek over the edge to see where the dog is. She's still next to the make-shift bed, staring at me.

“Get to bed,” I command. She remains still, looking directly at me. “Go on! It's time to sleep.”

She whimpers, but I remain firm. She stands on her four legs then gets on to the bed I made for her. She walks around in a circle on the bed then lies down with her head on her paws. I lean over to the lamp next to my bed and shut off the light. I lie back in bed, pulling the blanket up to my chest, and close my eyes.

 I exhale slowly, preparing myself to get into a deep slumber. That is until I hear whimpering, disrupting me from much needed sleep. I decide to ignore it this time, but the noise doesn't stop and it gets louder. What does she want this time? I sit back up and switch on the light.

She looks so scared sleeping there by herself. Should I let her come up here with me just for tonight? Well, she was in the freezing rain for a while. If she sleeps here she'll be a lot warmer. This will only be for tonight though and then I'll tell Gaki-san to help me find her owner.

“Alright, you can sleep here.” I agree.

She jumps off from her bed and runs to the foot of the bed scratching at the wood to the bed frame. I crawl over to pick her up since the bed is too tall for her. I lay onto my bed and she lies next to my chest, curled into a ball. I smile at how cute she looks sleeping next to me and stroke her head a few times.

“Just remember, you are only sleeping here for tonight and if you wet my bed you'll be in so much trouble,” I explain.

She brushes her nose against my shirt as if trying to break me of my serious tone. I smile at her cute action to get me to be less strict. Sensing that I've loosened up, she lies still almost instantly asleep. Her eyes droop and her breathing is less heavy. I stroke the top of her head until she's finally closed her eyes.

She really is cute. It makes me feel sad knowing someone could have thrown her out instead of her accidentally escaping from home.  At least she's out of the rain and with me. Of course I don't plan to have her long, but for now it's fine. I pull the blanket up to my chest and close my eyes. It's too bad I can't keep her.

I would like to have her as a pet. It gets lonely living by myself in this apartment.
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on March 03, 2010, 06:05:16 PM
 :w00t: new fic!

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I still can't seem to get why she's always so worried over me, like whether I’ll reach my apartment safely when it's only three blocks from here.
She likes you?  XD

IshiYoshi   :otomerika: :yossi:  :D

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I carefully examine the dog for any wounds and get a good view at its lower half on accident.
Well, I now know this dog is a girl.
:lol:

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Did she have to do it when I was near though?!
XD  poor Ai...

The puppy is cute  :love:

I'm already wondering what the pairing will be in this fic   :grin:
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: rokun on March 03, 2010, 11:46:11 PM
Hey, you posted! :D It's so nice to see - this chapter is sooo cute :heart:! Ah the TakaGaki, and hard-working, caring Ai-chan. :heart:

Not too much to comment on yet (other than the massive cuteness), but the ending is ominous... 8) Looking forward to what's next!
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: stefy on March 04, 2010, 04:31:43 AM
Kawaii~!

Not really sure which direction this fic is heading so can't comment much on it... Only that it's TOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEE!!

Damnit... now you reminded me of me dog.. I so miss her :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: Beecubed on March 04, 2010, 06:06:07 AM
Writerjunkie, you're really spitting out stories  :D

I'm actually up to chapter 8 of TTCL, and will comment when I've finished that...

But...

 :w00t:

 :heart: :otomerika: :yossi: :heart:

I didn't expect that... I'm a super IshiYoshi fan, and though I have a sinking feeling they're only going to be mentioned in passing for the story, I hope they can play a bigger role  :nervous

But yeah, Ai X Puppy has to be just as cute. The title is "Puppy Love" after all. The way you described the puppy and the interaction between it and Ai... *sigh* I feel all warm and giddy inside. Dogs are my favourite of all animals, and puppies reign supreme.  :theking
Is there going to be TakaGaki? It seems so... but the puppy may just have Risa flipping mad with jealousy  :lol:
Or maybe the puppy will be the link between Ai and *insert musume here*??? Since an unknown musume may be the owner of this poor puppy (though hopefully not one to just abandon animals like that >.<)

And lastly, Ai's such a dork. ^__^ Even I don't randomly think about such things like "what magical spells I can use to weaken this undefeated boss in my video game"....  :rofl:

I'd like to see where this may go...

Update soon please! <333
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: badsaints on March 06, 2010, 02:49:29 PM
Aichan with a pup....what can be cuter than that? :wub: Can't wait for a barkalicious story from you :lol:
Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: aussie on March 07, 2010, 02:03:35 AM
At first glance I thought this was a TakaGaki story, but it turns there is an actual puppy who makes an appearance  XD
I'm wondering who the puppy may turn out to be, or who the puppy will end up introducing to the story. If it was a kitten I would have come up with a guess immediately *cough* :D Will the Rokkies have a role in this story? I can't wait till your next update.


Title: Re: Puppy Love
Post by: writerjunkie on March 07, 2010, 07:20:49 AM
Thanks everyone who has left a comment! ^_^ Look forward to the dog because she is important to the story. You will all see what I mean later on. I'll try to update often since this fic I intend to keep it kind of short.

Well, anyway, I have a new chapter! I don't think it's that good though. I've struggled over it many times and well if I can think of other things to add or a better way to write this I'll be sure to change the chapter. I hope it is at least somewhat enjoyable how it is right now though.

CHAPTER 2

“OK, enough already! I'm up!” I groan.

I push the blanket away from my face and frown when I hear another bark come from the wide-awake and lively dog to my left. She scraps her paws gently against my arm as if trying to wake me easier. Is it time to feed her  again? I sit up in bed and rub my drooping eyes. The dog goes onto my lap, waiting for me to move so she can follow. Through my fingers, I can see her bushy tail wagging again as she stands.

She whimpers when I sit there for a few minutes, trying to gather my thoughts on what I need to do before getting to class. I stretch my arms and let out another yawn. The eager dog scraps at my arm again, becoming impatient with waiting.

“Alright, I'm awake.” I announce.

I get out of bed and pick her up into my arms afraid she will get hurt jumping off the bed. I put her down when I'm into the kitchen and search for any food I have left to feed her. My refrigerator is empty and that kind of makes me worry. I don't think I will have any food in the cupboards. I open the first cabinet I see and peek inside. There isn't anything worth feeding to her. I have got to go shopping. I close the doors to the cupboard and sigh disappointed. What will I be able to feed her now? Do I even have enough time to buy something at the store before class? I hear a sharp bark behind me and jump at the sudden high pitched noise.

“I know you're hungry! I'll get you something to eat.” I promise.

I face the dog again and reach down to pet her. She must be so hungry. She is just a puppy after all. It looks like I'll have to make a quick visit to the store. I stand up to search for my purse to count how much cash I have on me.

The last thing I want is to make a run to the bank because I don't have enough money. Rummaging through my bag, my cell phone resting inside my purse goes off, glowing through the dark bag. I grab it already knowing who is calling me this early in the morning. Who else would call me this early?

“Hello?”

“Ah, Ai-chan, you made it home safely.” Risa sighs, relieved. “It's a good thing I've called you before you left.”

“What's wrong?” I question. This doesn't seem like our normal morning conversations before I go off to class.

“Nothing is wrong. In fact, I have some good news to tell you!” Risa chimes. “I was speaking to Yoshizawa-san today and I've managed to let her give you the day off.”

“Huh?! How did you do that?” I ask, surprised.

“Well, I told her how hard you've been working lately since we're one girl short. It wasn't easy, but after a long discussion she agreed. I know how tired you must be. So you don't have to worry about coming in today.” she explains.

“Gaki-san, you're the best! Thank you.” I cheer.

I hear her laugh on the other end to my overjoyed statement.

“My shift today is short. Maybe we can finally go out to this restaurant Sayumi mentioned to me.” Risa suggest.

“Well, I'll have to see how much...” The sound of trickling water interrupts me from my conversation.

I don't remember having a leaking faucet. I slowly turn around, following where the noise is coming from. I nearly drop my phone when I  see what made that dripping sound. “Hey, no! I told you not to pee here!”

“Ai-chan?” Risa questions.

I rush over to the small white dog who decided to make my kitchen floor its own toilet. I pick her up and rush over towards the bathroom since I have no idea what else to do. I place her into the tub and notice that I've chose a bad move. Great, now there is a trail of pee all over the house! I slap my hand to my forehead and sigh.

“Didn't I tell you to not pee anywhere else, but on the newspaper!?” I yell. The puppy starts to whimper and cowards into a corner. “Now look what I have to clean! You're going to make me late!”

“Ai-chan, what are you talking about? Who's over there?!” Risa shouts.

I exit the bathroom, leaving the puppy behind. If I take her out now she might walk into the puddles and make it worse. I enter the kitchen again taking the mop into my hand.

“Ai-chan!” Risa screams again.

“Huh!? Oh, sorry Gaki-san. I didn't expect her to do such a thing.” I answer.

“Ai-chan, what are you talking about? Is someone with you?”

I start to clean the puddles with my mop, carefully. “Well, you can say it's someone. I um...last night I found a puppy in the rain while walking home.” I reveal. “I didn't want her to die Gaki-san! She's only a puppy!”

“Did you just take a dog into your home last night?!” Risa interrupts.

“Uh...yes.” I squeak.

“Ai-chan, that isn't your dog! It's probably someone's pet. You have to give that dog back.” Risa demands. “What if that dog wasn't so friendly?! It could have bitten you!”

“Gaki-san, it's only a puppy. I don't think it will hurt me.” I shoot back. “Besides, I felt bad for her. She was shivering and whimpering.”

“You have to give that dog back, Ai.” Risa reminds me.

“I know. After class I'm going to make fliers for her.” I agree. “Right now I kind of need to buy her food since who knows how long she will stay here.”

“What have you been feeding her?” Risa curiously ask.

“Well, last night all I had was rice and fish.” I respond.

“Ai-chan, I don't think you're suitable to take care of a dog. You barely can cook for yourself.” Risa advices.

“I know! I'm going to change that! Besides, I was kind of hoping you would help me with taking care of the dog too.” I beg. “I need your help Gaki-san! What should I get for her?!”

There's silence on Gaki-san's end as she thinks this situation over. I really need her help. She always knows what to do when I'm in trouble or need an extra pair of hands. I know I can always rely on Gaki-san. I just hope she won't decide to turn away from me on this situation.

“OK, I will help you. I'll come over to your place after work. I should be out at five o'clock. Wait for me until then. You should buy dog food for now before you head to class.” Risa instructs.

“Thank you!” I cry, feeling one hundred times better with Gaki-san's guidance.

“Have a good day at class, Ai-chan~!”

We say goodbye to each other then I hang up to clean the rest of the mess. When I'm done with my work I come back to the bathroom to take the dog out of the tube. When I get there I see the puppy trying to climb out of the tub, but because it's slippery she keeps falling back down. She lets out yelps as she struggles to jump over the tub again. I can't help, but smile and laugh at her weak attempts. She falls back and lands on her side again, stubborn to get out of the tub.

“Come on.” I call, while taking her out of the bathtub. “I won't have to put you in there again if you don't have another accident. I don't have time to clean up anymore of your mess. I need to buy you food.”

I place her on to the living room floor and go into my room to get out of my pajamas. If I don't hurry now I'll probably be extremely late for class. I grab the remaining cash in my purse and stuff the bills into my pockets then race out the door. This is going to be one long and stressful day.

 ***

“Ai-chan!”

I turn around as I walk down the last step to the main entrance of my university. I grip on to my backpack and search for the girl that's called my name before I made a dash to the train station. I was hoping to be home quickly before Risa comes over to clean the mess that might have been caused from the dog while I was away. I better not find a huge mess that looks like a tornado went through my apartment when I get there. I feel my friend's hands cling around my forearm, breaking me from my thoughts.

“Ah, Sayu, good afternoon! Are you heading home too?” I greet.

“I'm coming with you, silly! I received Gaki-san's text today. She told me we're going out together. Have you forgotten?!” Sayu pouts.

I chuckle at the cute expression she instantly puts on that usually gets anyone to side with her in arguments. I have to admit though, she does look cute when she pouts or puts on a sad face even if it's fake. I pat the top of her head to get rid of her false upsetting pout.

“Ah, of course not!” I deny. “I've just had a lot on my mind today. I would be happy to have you with us, Sayu!” I give her a cheerful smile to confirm my exclamation.

Pleased with my answer, Sayu grins and the grip on my forearm tightens. She tugs my arm gently, eager to leave.

“Come on, let's leave together!” I enthusiastically shout. 

Sayu lets out a cheer of joy and allows me to guide her straight towards the train station. I can't wait to see the puppy again. I've been worrying all day about her being alone at home. I hope she's OK.

 ***

“Ah, she's so cute~!!” Sayu wails.

Her high pitched shout startles the dog and she runs fast away from Sayu, straight onto my lap. I pick her up and hold her, petting the top of her head to sooth her fears. I can feel her heart racing against my palm and frown towards Sayu who's in a daze at how cute the dog is. I probably shouldn't have brought Sayu here if she's going to give the puppy a heart attack like this.

“Sayu, don't be so loud! You scared her!” I scold.

Sayu's eyes remain transfixed on the dog in my hands, ignoring my yelling. I won't allow Sayu to hold her! Who knows what she'll do to this poor dog. The last thing I want is to see the dog dyed pink if I decide to leave to buy another can of dog food. I look up to Gaki-san, who's still searching through her laptop on my bed. I place the dog down, noticing that she's less frightened. She decides to sit next to me when her four legs are on the floor.

“Ai-chan, where did you find such a cute puppy?! I want to take her home with me!” Sayu exclaims. “Are you going to keep her?”

“Of course she isn't Sayu.” Risa answers, her eyes still focused on the laptop screen. “That dog was never Ai-chan's pet from the beginning. Ai is going to make posters to return the dog back.”

“What?! No way! You should keep her, Ai-chan! Someone gave her up and you found her! That sounds fair to me.” Sayu reasons.

“Sayu, we aren't even sure if this dog was abandoned. It could have just escaped from a backyard for all we know.” Risa clarifies. “Ai-chan and I are making fliers for the dog's owner, it's already been decided!”

I feel the dog brush her paw against my thigh to get my attention. I grab on to the bag of biscuits I've bought her on the way home with Sayu and take out the small bone shaped treat. I feed her the mini biscuit and pet the top of her head when she stands on her back legs to take the offered food. From the corner of my eye, I can see her bushy tail move side to side in contentment. It's always so cute how she moves her bushy tail so enthusiastically when I give her my attention.

“I don't see why Ai-chan should give up the dog she found. I mean look at her! That dog is already in love, Ai-chan, look!” Sayu announces.

I feel both pair of eyes from my friends and stop petting the dog to put my hands to my sides. Risa puts on an annoyed look and Sayu just smiles at her accurate statement. My eyes cast down towards my lap and I exhale.

“Whaaaat~!? She's just a puppy!” I defend. “Puppies need love and affection!”

“Ai, you shouldn't be attached to a dog that isn't even yours.” Risa reminds me. “Have you named her?”

“No, I haven't! I'm just making her feel comfortable while we wait for her owner to show up.” I stutter.

“I'm warning you Ai-chan! If you end up attached to that dog it will hurt you to see her leave you.” Risa grumbles.

“Gaki-san~!! Stop worrying.” I whine.

For once I find her motherly behavior high annoying. Risa goes back to typing on the laptop and the room is silent again. The dog nuzzles my hand, wanting to get me to pet her again. She's always so cute when she does that too. I feel myself faintly smile and give in to shower her with affection once again.

Watching her, I notice that maybe Sayu isn't so far off on what she said about the dog liking me. She sort of acts as if I've been her owner for years. I've only meet her no less than two days ago.

“So...what breed is she?” Sayu curiously questions.

“Ah, I've been searching for that.” Risa responds.

“I thought you were supposed to make posters?” I remind her.

“I've made a few posters already. All I need is a picture of the dog then I'll post it on to the internet. We'll stick posters outside later.” Risa assures. “Anyway, after checking a few sites I've come to a conclusion that this dog is a Shiba Inu. She's probably around eight months old.”

I know now what I should shop for if I run out of dog food. The white colored dog jumps onto my lap and I pick her into my hands. I place her on my lap and she remains still laying there. Now that I think about it...I just might be getting attached to her. And amazingly, this fast?! It's only been two days!

“Ai-chan, place her on to the bed so I can take a picture. I'll use it for the posters.” Risa instructs.

I put her on top of the bed next to Risa and sit at the edge of the bed. She glances at Risa then comes hurry over to me for cover. What is she so scared of? I take her and push her back towards Gaki-san, but again she rushes away.

“Ai, keep her still so I can take the picture with my cell!” Risa complains.

“She won't stop moving!” I snap back. “Come on, she's only going to take your picture. You can trust Gaki-san.”

She cautiously walks over to Risa, stares at her then takes two steps back. Risa takes out her cell phone, flips it open and points it to the dog's direction. There's a click from the cellphone followed by a flash and the dog comes racing back to me. I pick her up again and stroke her back.

“Gaki-san, you think this will work?” I question.

“Of course, someone has to show up sooner or later.” She agrees.

“I still think you should keep her, Ai-chan~!” Sayu demands. “I mean look at her! Isn't she so cute~?!”

“Well...I have to go and print these poster. Tomorrow we'll start to put them outside.” Risa announces.

She closes her laptop then puts in into her carrier bag. Sayu grabs her books then gets up to follow Risa out. I put the dog to the side and go with my friends to the front door.

“We aren't going out to eat anymore?” Sayu questions.

That's right! I've forgotten about our previous plan before we went to help the dog go back to its rightful home. It isn't too late to eat for a few minutes. I think if I do say no Sayu might be very disappointed anyway, because she seems already a little down just asking the question.

“There's still time left to go out together. Why not?” I say. “We can all meet at the restaurant in thirty minutes. I know you two have my cellphone number.”

Sayu's face lights up again to the answer she wanted to hear.

“Yes, of course we do.” Risa recalls. “I suppose I can spend a few hours with you two before I make those posters.”

“Perfect~! So we'll meet in thirty minutes and we can eat.” I confirm. “Don't forget to call me when you're both done.”

“Bye, Ai-chan~!!” Sayu jeers.

She pulls me into a hug and doesn't let go until I hug her back. The two of my friends finally walk out the door, leaving me in peace again. I lock the door and lean against it as I let out a heavy sigh. The serious words given to me from Gaki-san as advice is still fresh in my head. Is it wrong of me to not want the dog's owner to not show up.

If this person claims the dog they are taking the dog away from me. What if it's true that this owner just abandoned her. That is clearly a bad owner and they are not fit enough to watch other pets. Or what if the dog escaped from an abusive owner?! I run a hand through my bangs, self consciously playing with the strands of hair while I begin to wonder.

I should stop myself from thinking too much or I'll scare myself thinking I'm putting this dog into untrustworthy hands once the owner shows up. I push aside my frightening thoughts and center on the plan to of meeting Sayu and Risa in just a few minutes. I shouldn't worry so much and most importantly like Gaki-san has said, I shouldn't grow an attachment towards the dog.

I walk away from the door and go back towards my room to get the dog left behind on my bed. My cellphone rings in the kitchen before I can reach my room and I hurry over to answer it.

“Hello?”

“Ah, Ai-chan I left my cell phone over there!” Sayu quickly replies.

“I'll bring it to you downstairs. Where are you?” I proclaim.

“Gaki-san and I are already on the train. Just give it to me when you see me, OK?”

“Sure! Where is your phone?” I question.

“It's in your room on the nightstand.” Sayu directs.

I walk towards my room to locate the forgotten phone so that I can remember where it is when I go to grab it before leaving.

“Oh, Gaki-san said that you have work early tomorrow at the cafe. She wants to know if you need a ride after class.” Sayu says.

“No I-UWA~!!!!” I scream.

“Eh?! What?! What?! Ai-chan, what happened?!” Sayu shouts.

I stand stiff at the sight I've come across. Someone tell me I'm seeing things! This is all in my head!? Have I gone insane?! What is going on?!

“Ai-chan!?” Sayu yells again.

I just can't bring myself to speak to even lie to Sayu that I'm perfectly fine. I stand up stiff and petrified. My brain has just shut down. As I stare, my mind is running with various thoughts and questions. I only settle down for a second to think one small sentence.

This can't be real...
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: Beecubed on March 07, 2010, 08:51:40 AM
>.<

Nice of you to end off with a cliffie  XD

Nice chapter - more Ai X Puppy interaction  :wub:

I like how level-headed and firm Risa is. Definitely a reflection of her in reality. While of course, Sayu is swept away in anything cute ^___^

I'm thinking if Ai allows things to continue as they are, she's going to have a really hard time letting puppy go! (she needs to give her a name, btw :P).

But yeah, I really do have to assume that puppy has destroyed Ai's room, but I can't be sure...

Way to leave it hanging like that, lol... I really want to find out what's happened!!!!!!!!

Update soon <333
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: stefy on March 07, 2010, 01:29:19 PM
Man Risa's just TOOOOO responsible!

Somehow I'm guessing that the puppy... isn't exactly a puppy?... Maybe she'll transform or something. hah.

Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: Retro Bubble on March 07, 2010, 05:41:56 PM
I swear, the interaction between Aichan and the puppy is just too damn adorable. Reminds me of how I used to interact with my aunt's dogs, except I don't yell at them 'cause I'm afraid they'll run after me and eat me. Gosh, Risa's like my mom! I know how Aichan feels at having to let go of the puppy, especially since she's so attached to her. How come motherly people always seem to do that? I know they do it for good reasons, but it's so mean, lol.

And, argh, a CLIFFHANGER?!?!

I reckon the puppy transformed into a human. And if it did, I bet it's Aika. XD
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: LovelyGaki on March 08, 2010, 11:10:26 AM
Quote
I stand stiff at the sight I've come across. Someone tell me I'm seeing things! This is all in my head!? Have I gone insane?! What is going?!

“Ai-chan!?” Sayu yells again.

I just can't bring myself to speak to even lie to Sayu that I'm perfectly fine. I stand up stiff and petrified. My brain has just shut down. As I stare, my mind is running with various thoughts and questions. I only settle down for a second to think one small sentence.

This can't be real...

I just hope it's not what I think it is. If Ai-chan thought the pee was bad...

I reckon the puppy transformed into a human. And if it did, I bet it's Aika. XD
That's what I'm thinking too. Since Aika is into dogs and such.
Wouldn't be surprised if Ai-chan named the Shiba, Mitsui or had similar characteristics as her too.
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: lil_hamz on March 10, 2010, 11:53:15 AM
Oh? A new fic by Junkie. I have to keep an eye, or rather, both eyes out for this one :)
I'm not sure how the puppy will come into play yet so I'm gonna have to wait for you to reveal it ;)

Ai and the doggy is really cute together :wub:
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: Haruka on March 11, 2010, 02:58:57 AM
I bet it's Risa giving an Astral Form in some kind of Puppy xDDDDDDDDDDDD

I'm sorry I have no idea of what i'm talking about xD I just know... TAKAGAKI 4EveR xD

Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/7)
Post by: writerjunkie on March 17, 2010, 11:13:07 PM
CHAPTER 3

“Ai-chan what's happening?!” I hear Sayu's voice scream through my cellphone.

I blink a few times realizing I've been silent for too long. Quick! Think of something! Let me just relax my nerves for a second. I take a few deep breaths and gather in as much courage I have in me to blurt out a few words.

“Sayu, everything is, OK!” I lie. “It was j-just the dog! She made a huge mess while I was gone. I don't think I'll be able to come out with you and Gaki-san today!”

“What?! What do you mean?!” Sayu questions.

“I have to go! Bye!” I shout frantically to quickly end our conversation.

I hang up my cellphone then shut it off so that I won't hear my phone ring for the rest of the night, even though I know that I'll have too many messages to count when I turn it on again tomorrow. I slowly place my cellphone down onto my drawer and stand still, in complete shock at the....thing on my bed! I take a few steps closer to it. I am not seeing this. This is all a dream!

Yes, a weird, freaky, insane dream! If I just close my eyes, maybe...everything will go away and I'll know I have my sanity still intact. I am not seeing some naked girl in my bed right now! With a sharp intake of breath I close my eyes tightly, not moving a single muscle or daring to breathe. Slowly I open my eyes, but she's still there!

My eyes open wide in shock. How did she get here?! Wasn't the dog there just a few minutes ago?! Where is she now?

“W-who are you?!” I demand.

The person sitting naked on my bed looks at me and smiles. My hands curl into tight fists as I continue to stare, annoyed that my question has gone unanswered. This girl just continues to smile as if she's seen me for years. I don't even know who she is or why she's naked on  my bed in the first place!

“What did you do to my dog?!” I speak again.

“Ai-chan~!!!” she cheers.

She jumps off the bed and races towards me with that happy smile still on her face. Her body crashes into mine with such a force that I'm knocked clean off my feet and fall backwards to the ground.

“AHHH~!!!” I cry.

My back hits the floor, bringing sharp needles of pain all over my backside. If that wasn't enough, I get the wind knocked out of me when she lands right one top of me. The pain in my body intensifies from her heavy weight. This is not my day, is it? I feel her arms wrap around my neck then our bodies press together.

I'm taken away by her brave and shameless move. She continues to hold on to me and brush her nose against my neck. Who is this person?! She notices that I'm not hugging her back and lets me go. She puts on a pout then begins to tear.

“Is Ai-chan upset?” she questions in a cutesy voice.

She puts her arms down and looks toward the ground in shame. Whoever this person is I'm going to make a guess she isn't a robber or a murder otherwise I would have been attacked the second I came into my room. Her head remains low and she sniffles a few times. Staring at her at a loss for words, my eyes being to travel, and that's when the fact of her being naked comes to me again.

“AH!” I push her back and scurry away.

She sits on the floor even more hurt to my sudden action. She pouts and wipes a tear away from her eyes.

“Ai-chan, doesn't like me anymore?” she cries. “Has Ai-chan forgotten me?”

Seeing her start to cry for some reason makes me feel sad and guilty from pushing her. I sit up straight and slide over to her cautiously. I put my hand to hears to get her attention. She looks at me, tears gathering at the brim of her eyes. I give her a soft smile.

“What's your name?” I politely ask.

“Eri! My name is Eri.” she introduces.

I stand and stare, taking in her appearance and trying not to think about her not having no clothes on. It's a lot harder than it seems to just look at her and not her naked body. Wait...on top of her head...floppy...dog ears?! She has a thick red collar around her neck with a missing dog tag. That's when I see the big bushy curled tail wagging rapidly behind her just like the...

“You're the dog I found?!” I yell.

“Ai-chan remembers~!!” Eri bellows with glee.

She hugs me again, unaware of her lack of clothing. I automatically turn stiff and motionless again when she hugs me the second time. I just can't wrap my mind around this. Is she even aware that she's naked?! I squirm in her arms and take a step back. She looks at me then pouts at my cruel action.

“Is Ai-chan mad at me?” she whispers.

How is this happening?! This isn't the dog I found only two days ago! That isn't possible! S-s-she's human! Or...half human at least, but nonetheless human! I pick up my hand that's gone limp at my side and slowly reach out towards Eri's dark brown locks. My finger slips through a strand and I close my fingers around that lock of hair. This feels real. I cringe, feeling a sudden throb of pain on my back from my previous fall. The pain is real too. I stare back into dark yet lively eyes. I know those eyes anywhere. I gulp and pull my hand back, placing my now-closed hand against my chest.

“You are the dog I found in the alleyway.” I whisper, my eyes staring down to the floorboards, in a daze.

“Ah~I'm happy! Ai-chan remembers Eri~!!” Eri smiles and claps her hands together in joy.

She rushes over to put me into another aching hug. Ah, god, not again! I don't think I can take being body slammed to the floor again!

“STOP!!” I shout.

 She remains still, tilting her head to the side as curiosity comes to her face. I can't help but let out a small chuckle and smile. She's definitely the dog I found. I go back to a serious expression remembering why I've stopped her in the first place.

“You can't go around tackling me to the ground and you most definitely can't do that while you're naked!” I proclaim.

Her cluelessly innocent filled eyes shift down to her own body then back up to me still lost at my cause for yelling. I quickly stand to my feet and rush to my drawer. I can feel her eyes still on me as I go about gathering any clothing that's needed.

“You need to put on clothes!” I mumble. “You can't walk around naked!”

“Clothes?” She repeats.

I turn back around and place the clothing in front of her, but she doesn't seem to get the message and continues to look back at me for my reason for presenting her these clothes. I sigh and scratch  my head annoyed once again. Why does she have to look at me like what I've done makes no sense!?

“Ai-chan?” She questions.

“Haven't you ever worn clothes before?!” I shout. She shakes her head. “Eh?!”

“This is the first time I've ever transformed.” She says.

“First time? Wait...does that mean you can transform again?” I clarify.

“Un!” She nods.

“Good! Then transform into a dog again!” I quickly demand.

She starts to sniffle and become teary eyed again to my urgent order.

“Does Ai-chan not like Eri in this form?” She whispers. “I-I thought Ai-chan would like this form better. I want to fit in.”

I always make her cry! I rush over to subside her threatening sobs and tears. I get down to the floor and grab the clothing in front of her into my hands again.

“Ah, don't cry Eri-chan!” I beg. “I like you in this form as well. You can stay in this form as long as you like!”

She rubs her eyes with the backs of her hands then peeks through the cracks of her fingers. I put on another sincere smile and that does the job to stop her from bursting into tears.

“Ai-chan means it?” She hiccups.

I stroke the back of her head and nod. “Yes.” I hold out the clothing I have in front of her. “Come on, let me put some clothes on for you.”

“Okay~!” She smiles.

She's defenseless in this world as a human. How can I even leave tomorrow for my shift if she can't even put clothing on for herself. The last thing I need is to come home to an apartment that's been blown up or set on fire. I've worked too hard to keep this apartment on my own. Should I bring her with me instead?

 I look at her as I pull the last article of clothing, a yellow T-shirt, over her head and notice her carefree smile. She's so innocent and dependent. I should probably bring her to work, but if I do that who knows what she would do. I'll worry in the morning on where she should go. I pat the top of her head when I'm done dressing her and grab her wrist.

“Let's go Eri, it's time for bed.” I announce.

“Will Eri sleep with Ai-chan tonight again?” Eri replies.

“Yes, but only until I figure out what to do with you now that you're human.” I stare at her moving ears. “Or...sort of human.”

Eri smiles to my answer and willingly gets up from the floor and pulled towards my bed. I yank back the sheets and get into bed, while Eri takes the left side. I click off the light to the nightstand then lay back with the blankets against my chest. I let out a deep sigh of relief as my back sinks into the soft padding of my bed.

“Goodnight, Eri.” I whisper.

I close my eyes feeling sleep beginning to take me away again, until I feel a pair of arm tie around my midsection. I open my eyes just as I feel the left side of my bed move and I feel warm breath lightly brush against my cheek.

“Goodnight...Ai-chan...” She mumbles, just before drifting to sleep.

I don't have the heart to wake her either even if she's too close and the feeling of her breath against me bothers me only a little. I close my eyes again, finding myself fall asleep much quicker with her arms comfortably around my waist. The warmth her body gives off is soothing. I put a hand onto Eri's forearm and fall into a peaceful sleep with a content smile in place.

 ***

What the hell is that sound? I close my eyes annoyed and pull the blanket up to my head. Is that...barking? I roll into my thick sheet and try to block the sound from my ears, but the noise continues and my clouded mind is starting to become clear. I frown and push the blanket off my face to see the source of the barking.

“Eri!” I shout. “You can't go barking at my alarm clock and most importantly you can no longer bark while you're in human form!”

Eri turns around, her curled tail wagging again.

“Ai-chan!” She cheers, before jumping at me.

“No not again~!!” I'm tackled down to the bed and pinned from Eri's body onto me. She locks me into another firm hug. “What did I tell you about the pouncing?!”

Eri rubs her cheek against mine and continues to wag her tail. Well, getting slammed onto a bed is a lot better than the ground.

“Ai-chan, let's go outside and play~!!” Eri begs.

I push a piece of dark hair from my nose and try to move her away for some distance. She won't budge and still holds on to me.

“I can't Eri. I have to get ready for class.” I mumble through her hair that's fallen onto my mouth. “Can you get off me?! You're making me eat your hair!”

She lets me go and sits at my feet, looking at me with a joyful expression. I sit up and rake my fingers through my hair to try and get rid of my bedhead. Since I have someone here now I have to at least try to show that I'm dependable, especially since Eri can't seem to understand human customs. I pat down the back of my head and see that Eri is still looking at me. It's a little weird with her watching my every move like that. It's embarrassing.

Eri tilts her head and grins then lets out a small giggle.

“Hehe...Ai-chan is so cute in the morning~!!” she states.

I feel my whole face fill with embarrassment. That makes Eri giggle even more. I turn away and cover my cheeks with my hands. Will she stop looking?! It's making it worse!

A loud rumbling breaks Eri's attention towards me and I'm relieved. She rests a hand on her stomach and gives me a curious expression. I laugh at her reaction to the grumbling in her stomach. She's cute when she's confused.

“You're hungry Eri,” I tell her.

“Do humans always make this noise?” She questions.

“Only if they're really hungry.” I reply. I put my feet over the bed to touch the ground. “Come on, let's go make breakfast.”

“Okay!” She enthusiastically shouts.

There has to be food around here somewhere. I go through a cupboard and see at the very top a packages of instant noodles. Why did I even put that thing so high!? I'm much too short to reach it. I extend my arm to the container and slowly stand at the tips of my toes.

Damn, still no luck. I really have to stop putting things up higher than my height! Eri shuffles over to me and just watches me struggling to reach the top. Her head goes from the cabinet to me.

“Ai-chan, is so small!” Eri notes.

I stand back down to my feet and glare. “I am not!” I deny.

Eri has on a huge smile then pats the top of my head. “It's OK. Eri likes Ai-chan small. It makes Ai-chan cuter.” She confirms.

I can feel my face turn hot again and turn away. I sigh and cover my face yet again. She has to really stop making me blush! It's too early for this. I hear shuffling behind me then scraping against the floor.

I turn around and see a chair next to the counter with Eri's hand resting on the top of it. She motions for me to climb on. I stare at her. Is she trying to make fun of my size? Her stomach gurgles again, reminding me why I'm about to step onto a chair in the first place.

I take a hold of the chair with my right hand and use my right foot to push me up then bring my other foot onto the seat. I take the noodles then get back down.

“There's only one left, but you can have it Eri.” I say.

“What about Ai-chan? Isn't Ai-chan hungry too?” Eri ask. “Eri can share.”

“It's fine Eri. I will buy something on the way to class. Please, eat and enjoy the food.” I insist.

She's unsure, but I give her a stern nod and that seems to make up her mind. I fill a pot with water and wait for it to boil. I'm really nervous about leaving Eri at home alone. I hope she won't get scared or get into trouble. Can she even stay alone with me gone for just a few hours?

From the side of me, I can see Eri standing next to me, her eyes focused on the pot of water with her hands resting on the counter and her tail wagging, while she waits. She seems harmless to be left alone. Eri notices me looking at her and smiles at me. I face back to the pot only slightly embarrassed this time that she caught me looking at her. She really has to stop making my blushing become a habit.

 ***

“All done?” I announce.

“Mhm.” Eri responds.

“I promise to make real food next time rather than instant food, OK?” I promise.

I take the container from the table and throw it away as Eri sits back in the chair content at her satisfied hunger.

“Eri, I have to leave now.” I start. “But I'll only be gone for a few hours. I'll come back.”

“Huh? Where is Ai-chan going?” Eri gently ask.

“I have to get to class now. You will be OK by yourself for a little, right?”

“Ai-chan can't leave!” Eri demands. “W-what if Ai-chan never comes back!? Eri can't be on her own. Ai-chan is needed here.”

“It won't be long. I promise Eri. I'll come back in one piece.” I vow.

Eri doesn't seem to believe my statement and eyes me warily. How can I assure her? I scratch the top of my head. I just don't want her to cry because I might not be able to stay strong about my choice if she cries. I hate seeing Eri sad.

“Eri, when I come back I'll take you somewhere later.” I say.

Eri sits up straight and her tail sways again quickly.
“Ai-chan will?!” She squeaks. “Where?!”

“You will see. For now, I want you to remain good and wait until I get back, OK?” I ask.

“Uh-huh! Eri can do that!” Eri agrees.

I walk over to the living room and on instincts Eri gets off her chair and follows. I have to start teaching her to be more human as soon as I get the time to. I turn towards the TV, searching for the on switch.

“Sit down, Eri.” I order. “You'll like this. It will help you from being bored.”

I push the button and the TV makes a buzz sound then slowly light emits from the black screen. I don't think talk shows will suit her so I run through a few channels until I find an interesting anime. This ought to keep her occupied until I return. I only pray nothing will be broken when I come back. I spin around and feel my face shift into confusion.

“Eri, sit on the couch not the floor! You're a human now. You have to sit like one.” I correct.

Eri scatters to the couch, but she still sits with her legs open and her hands between her legs, her knuckles pressing into the couch cushion. I slap a hand to my forehead and shake my  head while sighing. It's going to be hard teaching her the proper way to be a girl. She looks at me unsure then scratches the back of her ear with her foot. OK, now it's impossible. Eri then scratches her nose.

“Hey! Don't put your finger in your nose!” I scold.

She instantly puts her hand down at my raised voice and starts to whimper with tears in her eyes. No, not the crying again. Her bottom lip sticks out and it starts to quiver. I really don't want to see her tears again.

“Ah...Eri it's just...as a human girl there are certain things that are expected of you. If you are going to be a human you have to act like one.” I explain. “And one of the things girls do not do is sit like that with their legs spread open! Please, put your legs down and keep your legs closed.”

She quietly obeys, but she still looks a little teary-eyed. She rubs one eye to stop herself from sobbing.

“It's OK Eri I will teach you, but first I have to go.” I say. “For now just watch TV.”

Eri notices the flickering box and automatically her eyes are stuck on the flashing screen in amazement. Has she never seen a TV before? Seeing that she's distracted, I grab my things on the way out. I make sure to pick up Sayu's cell phone on the way to return it back to her when I see her today. Then I'm quickly out the door.

I think Eri do fine as long as she stays on the couch watching TV all day. What can a few hours of TV do to her anyway?

 ***

Returning Sayu's cellphone today was awkward. She kept asking me if I was OK. She wanted to know what happened yesterday and well I avoided that as much as I could. I know that she won't believe me. I don't need someone telling me how crazy I am when I think I am.

 I still can't believe the dog I found turned into a human! So if I couldn't even believe it and it happened in front of my very eyes, who else could believe it? I just avoided Sayu at all cost. I know she'll tell this to Gaki-san and I'll have to deal with her next. She'll be a lot worse than Sayu though. I really don't have time to convince Gaki-san I'm fine or stay away from her for a week or two.

I have other things to worry about, like Eri and the mess I'll see when I enter my home right now. I didn't, however, expect to come home with the TV still on and Eri no longer in the couch watching. Now a thousand scary thoughts come across my mind and it makes me afraid to search my apartment not knowing what I will find. What if Eri is hurt?! Or if she's dead!

I feel my heart race in my chest at the last thought and suck up courage to search properly through my house. She has to be around here somewhere.

“Eri?” I call.

Entering the living room, my eyes settle on to the windows to inspect for any damage. Neither of the two windows are open or broken. I exhale relieved to that fact. It has to mean that Eri is around here somewhere.

I quickly zip through the living room, search through the bathroom, a few closets, until finally I've reached my bedroom. I have gone through my examination without any bad news and now that I'm here at my room I fear I might come across something really bad. Biting my bottom lip, I lift my hand, which was resting limply at my side and push open the room door.

“HUH?! HEY! Eri let go of my DS!” I shout.

Eri jolts at my voice and the DS goes flying into the air. I rush over to save it, afraid the screen will crack of it drops. I stretch out my hands and dive in to save the electronic device that's brought me enjoyment most of my time at home. I hit the ground and cringe, feeling hot pain throb through my funny bone and elbow. My DS falls perfectly into my hands and my fingers automatically cling around it.

I see Eri at the edge of the bed surprised at my choice of action.

“Is Ai-chan OK?” She ask.

I quickly stand and look to see what game she's been playing while I was gone. I nearly have a heart attack when I notice she has been playing my Final Fantasy game!

“You weren't supposed to play my DS, Eri!” I scold. “I had a game saved on here! Please tell me you didn't save what you did?!”

I search through the game, checking the amount of items I've stored for my party, and even going over the gil I had. Scanning through the inventory, I'm surprised at what I see. I exit the inventory menu and explore the station I'm around. I don't remember being here. In fact, during my inventory search there are some items I don't even remember having and they're all stocked at ninety-nine.

“You beat the boss I was stuck on?!” I croak. “How did you do that?! I've been stuck on him for weeks!”

Eri looks at me with her head tilted again and I save the game before shutting off my DS. She doesn't even know what she's done, but she still managed to beat a powerful boss?! That's some beginner's luck. I put my DS inside the drawer beside my bed and pat the top of Eri's head. Her tail instantly starts to move again to my kind gesture.

“Ai-chan is no longer angry at Eri?” She questions.

“No, I'm not.” I reply. How can I be angry with her if she's helped me beat a powerful boss and even given me good items? Eri smiles again, pleased with my answer.

“Does this mean Ai-chan will take Eri out now?” Eri eager ask.

She sits down on the bed and scratches her ear again with her foot then scratches underneath her chin. On second thought...maybe taking her out around plenty of people is a bad idea. She has a lot of training she needs to go through first before being around other humans.

“Um...well, I changed my mind.” I start. “I've decided to teach you how you should act as a human. We can go outside another time. Is that OK, Eri?”

“Eri understands.” Eri agrees. “Eri wants to learn.”

I smile at the cute determined expression she made at her declaration and pat the top of her head again. She smiles and her tail wags again. I stroke her hair and that makes her tail move faster. She always looks so cute when she smiles like that. I can see her teeth and from staring at her now I've noticed she has a crooked tooth that stands out.

A small fang. That only makes her cuter. She opens her eyes and looks at me and that makes me feel instantly shy again. I've never seen her look at me this intensely. I can feel my skin start to turn warm just from her gaze. My cell phone goes off interrupting my strange moment.

I withdraw my hand rapidly to pick up my cell from the drawer. From taking a look at the screen, my entire body turns cold. It's Risa and I know she's calling me to see if I will come to work today. I forgot about work! What am I going to do?

 I can't leave Eri here again. I'll be gone for too long today. My shift today is over eight hours long. I did promise Eri I would teach her human customs. I get the feeling if I let her down she'll be upset and I don't want that either.

I should probably answer the phone though. Gaki-san won't stop calling until I pick up.

“Hello?” I whisper.

“Ah, Ai-chan! You have your phone on today.” She notices.

“Uh...yeah. I'm sorry about yesterday. I had quite a mess to clean because of the dog.” I lie.

“I understand. I told you puppies are a big responsibility Ai-chan. You won't have to worry about that anymore once we find her owner though.” Risa explains. “I have to put a few more fliers later. Would you like to come and help me?”

“Uh...I can't right now. I um...I'm not feeling very well.” I stutter. “I feel sick.”

“Eh?! Does this mean you aren't coming to work either?!” Gaki-san questions. “Do you need to see a doctor? I can drive you, Ai-chan.”

“Gaki-san, honestly I'm fine. I think I just ate some bad sushi today. I just have stomach aches. I'm sure I can wait it out.” Please, someone make her believe me! There's a pause of silence on her end and it makes me worry that she's seen through my lie. I don't lie normally to anyone and since it's Gaki-san she knows me a lot better than anyone else at the cafe.

“I'll be sure to tell Yoshizawa-san you aren't feeling that well today.” She speaks. I'm relieved to know she's bought my lie. “Be sure to get plenty of rest Ai-chan. Call me if you need anything. I have no problem driving you to a doctor.”

“Thank you Gaki-san~!” I smile.

“Take care of yourself Ai-chan.” Risa says.

“Gaki-san really I'm fine.” I assure.

Then we both hang up. I stand there with the cell still clutched in my hand as I take in what I've just done. I can't believe myself. I just lied to Gaki-san and ditched work! And for what?

 Just to stay home for Eri out of fear she might destroy my house and try to teach her how to act more human like. How am I going to explain this to Risa? Or to anyway? I feel a hand gently wrap around my wrist, breaking me of my daze. I look to the gentle hand around my wrist and then into soft brown colored eyes.

“Ai-chan?”

“It's nothing Eri.” I shake off. “It looks like I'm free today. I have a lot to teach you so let's get started.”

“Okay~!!” Eri agrees.

Eri gets up off the bed and runs out of the room while I stand here thinking over my choice and Gaki-san's words. Eri was never mine to begin with. She must have a family somewhere and the more she stays here the more worried her family is. Eri isn't so worried about that though. Does she even want to go back home?

She perfectly happy here. She enjoys my company. If she likes it here then why should she go back to where ever she came from? A surge of nausea rips through my stomach at the thought of returning her back to her home. I put a hand over my stomach to stop the sickening feeling.

Gaki-san told me to not get attached to her and without realizing it I went against Gaki-san's orders. What am I going to do when it comes time to give her up?

“Ai-chan~!” Eri calls.

I push back my feelings and thoughts when I hear Eri's voice calling me. I close my hand and build up my strength to move again. What Gaki-san doesn't know won't hurt her, right?

“I'll be right there, Eri!” I announce.

I hurry out the room to meet Eri who's eager to learn how to adjust. It's too late to do anything now. What comes I'll have to face when it gets here. The regrets will come another time.
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: Haruka on March 18, 2010, 02:18:53 AM
ASldnaksbdkasd

OMG!! Naked ERI  :drool: >.<!!!!!

So I guess this is not a TakaGaki T_T but it's still great XD well everything it's great
if you have a naked ERI XD DAMN with puppy ears and a tail.... this makes me remember...

mmmm INUKAMI!!!!!... HELLZ YEAH! xD

I want an Eri to >o<!!!!!!  :wub:
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: Beecubed on March 18, 2010, 06:41:57 AM
Whoaaa... this is getting more and more interesting!!!  XD

My guess was pretty off - the others got it though. Just proves how boring my mind is  :nervous

....

Eri puppy!!!! This chapter was uber fluffy cute, I loved it!  :love:
Eri's the most lovable thing here, I couldn't help but grin at everything she said and did... so cute. I like how she keeps thinking Ai-chan is mad at her  :oops:

I was also half expecting for Eri to give Ai one nice face lick (Kimi wa Petto style)  :twisted:


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It's a lot harder than it seems to just look at her and not her naked body

Naked Eri  :w00t: You know, in light of her new PB and everything, I felt excited reading about Ai's confrontation with a naked Eri. Lol.


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“Ai-chan, is so small!” Eri notes.

I stand back down to my feet and glare. “I am not!” I deny.

Eri has on a huge smile then pats the top of my head. “It's OK. Eri likes Ai-chan small. It makes Ai-chan cuter.” She confirms.

KAWAIII!!  :wub:
I dunno if the patting of Ai's head was a good move on Eri's part. She's the dog, not Ai  :lol:


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Eri scatters to the couch, but she still sits with her legs open and her hands between her legs, her knuckles pressing into the couch cushion.

GAHHHH!!!
We need a picture like now...  :heart: :heart: :heart:


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She quietly obeys, but she still looks a little teary-eyed. She rubs one eye to stop herself from sobbing.

This puppy is one crybaby...  :lol:
I want to hug Eri so badly everytime you mention how teary-eyed she is or how her lip quivers... oh my gah, so adorable  :panic:

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I search through the game, checking the amount of items I've stored for my party, and even going over the gil I had. Scanning through the inventory, I'm surprised at what I see. I exit the inventory menu and explore the station I'm around. I don't remember being here. In fact, during my inventory search there are some items I don't even remember having and they're all stocked at ninety-nine.

“You beat the boss I was stuck on?!” I croak. “How did you do that?! I've been stuck on him for weeks!”

 :rofl:
This was very unexpected... Eri's some super dog if she can beat out hard bosses with a first try. Awesome!!!!  :shocked:


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That only makes her cuter. She opens her eyes and looks at me and that makes me feel instantly shy again. I've never seen her look at me this intensely. I can feel my skin start to turn warm just from her gaze.

Ai-chan's so crushing on her puppy, hahaaa... she's blushing left, right and centre. Maybe she can't quite keep her mind from wandering back to naked Eri. And how droolicious that first encounter with Eri's human form must've been.  :drool:

Some things I'm curious about:
- Why hasn't Ai asked Eri if she's some kind of alien?  :lol: When Eri was talking about transforming to her human form and all, I would've put the girl on the spot right there and then.
- Does Eri actually belong to anybody? T__T
- I'd love to see how Sayu is going to take all this... especially when she sees Eri for the first time (and falls in love with her cuteness xD).

This was a great chapter... cuteness in its extremity. I wanted more.

I can't wait to go on some more AiEri adventures... there's so much room for laughs here, as Ai *patiently* tries to equip Eri with the tools to become a civil human being (though puppy Eri would probably be 1000x more cute than human Eri... continue to pounce Ai-chan, onegai!  :heart:).

And of course I'm also looking ahead and feeling a bit of dread and heartache when the time comes for these two to part. It seems inevitable that they will. Pet stories are always like that  :cry:

Anyways, that was a lot of fun. Please update soon!!! I'll be waiting here with my tail wagging.  :heart:
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: writerjunkie on March 18, 2010, 02:37:41 PM
^ I'm glad you've enjoyed this chapter. The few things you've asked and mentioned might be answered on in later chapters. It will take some time though. For now, I think everyone will like to see some fluff AiEri with some funny stuff in store.  :D

@Haru- I want a Eri puppy too! ^_^ Hehe and naked Eri is  :drool: lol

Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: aussie on March 19, 2010, 12:25:17 AM
So I was right in thinking that the 'puppy' will turn out to be one of the two remaining rokkies in human form :D
I guess Eri suits the role of a 'puppy-human' better than Reina, as I don't think Reina would have made the shock easier for Aichan to swallow  :lol: Plus, Eri just seems more puppy-like than Reina would. Speaking of the kitty cat, will we be seeing her make an appearance in this story? *hint hint*  :P


Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: lil_hamz on March 20, 2010, 07:09:28 AM
Omg naked Eri! XD I think everyone had the same thought when we read this chapter :P hmmm seems like Eri pup loves her owner and judging by this state of affairs, Ai will like her back too. Awww Gaki :P Still a AiEri pairing is cute too :)
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: kRisZ on March 20, 2010, 12:56:38 PM
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I'm not sure if this is exactly safe, but if I wake up and you’re still alive I guess that means it's fine to eat it.”
:lol:

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I exhale slowly, preparing myself to get into a deep slumber. That is until I hear whimpering, disrupting me from much needed sleep. I decide to ignore it this time, but the noise doesn't stop and it gets louder.
Reminded me of Bochok, my first ever and only puppy, woke me up every dawn... never stop whimpering until I get to him and walk him out... in the dark and silent neighborhood... now he's at my folks  :D

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“Alright, you can sleep here.” I agree.

She jumps off from her bed and runs to the foot of the bed scratching at the wood to the bed frame.
She can understand. Yay!

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“Ah, Ai-chan, you made it home safely.” Risa sighs, relieved.

lol Overly protective indeed  XD

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The sound of trickling water interrupts me from my conversation.
And the crime commences  XD

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“I know! I'm going to change that! Besides, I was kind of hoping you would help me with taking care of the dog as well.” I beg. “I need your help Gaki-san! what should I get for her?!”
Raising a puppy together  :inlove:

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Her high pitched shout startles the dog and she runs fast away from Sayu
:lol:

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I probably shouldn't have brought Sayu here if she's going to give the puppy a heart attack like this.
:rofl:

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The last thing I want is to see the dog dyed pink if I decide to leave to buy another can of dog food.
OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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I put her on top of the bed next to Risa and sit at the edge of the bed. She glances at Risa then comes hurry over to me for cover. What is she so scared of? I take her and push her back towards Gaki-san, but again she rushes away.
Maybe they both sensed a feeling of rivalry  :grin:

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This can't be real...
WHAT IS IT?  :shocked

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I am not seeing some naked girl in my bed right now!
OMG! I wanna see  :twisted:

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I get the wind knocked out of me when she lands right one top of me
Should not think perv... should not think perv...  XD

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“AH!” I push her back and scurry away.
OMG  XD

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“Eri! My name is Eri.” she introduces.
OH.EHM.GEH.  ERI!!!

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I stand and stare, taking in her appearance and trying not to think about her not having no clothes on
That would be hard  :twisted:

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“You can't go around tackling me to the ground and you most definitely can't do that while you're naked!”
Come here Eri... i won't mind  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:

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“Ai-chan, is so small!” Eri notes.
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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“Eri, sit on the couch not the floor! You're a human now. You have to sit like one.” I correct.
OMG  :on lol:

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She looks at me unsure then scratches the back of her ear with her foot. OK, now it's impossible. Eri then scratches her nose.
:wahaha:  :wahaha:  :wahaha:

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“Ah, Ai-chan! You have your phone on today.” She notices.
lol


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Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: writerjunkie on March 20, 2010, 10:08:51 PM
@ Assuie- Will you see Reina in this fic? You'll just have to wait and see. There is still room for more characters in the fic.

@ Hammy- You might be feeling even sadder for Risa later on in the fic.

OK, I've made a few drawings for this fic long before this chapter, but just couldn't post the drawings yet. These are all chibi and well some came out alright though not how I wanted it. I hope at least it's cute.

(http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6317/snapshotofme13.th.png) (http://img139.imageshack.us/i/snapshotofme13.png/)

(http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2262/snapshotofme15l.th.png) (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/snapshotofme15l.png/)

(http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/4579/snapshotofme16.th.png) (http://img693.imageshack.us/i/snapshotofme16.png/)

(http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/6084/snapshotofme17.th.png) (http://img535.imageshack.us/i/snapshotofme17.png/)

(http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2885/snapshotofme9.th.png) (http://img291.imageshack.us/i/snapshotofme9.png/)

In this one it's supposed to look like she has a piece of steak in her mouth in case no one can tell.
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: Haruka on March 21, 2010, 09:55:42 PM
I don't want Risa to suffer T_T but even with that the fic its great xP

=O how cute pics =3 thats a piece of steak? ._. I though... it was a whistle ._. I'm sorry u_u
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: StephanyLee on March 22, 2010, 02:32:13 AM
* coming from the shadows*

For now, I think everyone will like to see some fluff AiEri with some funny stuff in store.  :D

I know i do!!!
Ai teaching Eri how to act like a human promise so much fun  XD
This is absolutely great. Eri as a puppy suits her soooo well. And damn Risa! take it easy o.0 she really care about Ai.

Wanna se what's next :P
 
Title: Re: Puppy Love(UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: Aisacchan on April 01, 2010, 02:57:58 AM
Cute story~  :heart:

Eri as a puppy is kawaii~  :wub:  I want Puppy!Eri too  XD

AiEri interaction is  :heart:  :heart:

I hope Reina will make an appearance since she is the only Rokkie left here
Wonder if Eri's owner before was Reina...maybe??  :?

Hmmm...Next chapter please  :bow:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 3/17)
Post by: writerjunkie on June 18, 2010, 07:13:53 PM
Thank you everyone who has left a comment on this fic. I'm sorry that it took so long for me to post a new chapter. I caught writer's block again. T_T That and well...I was way too hard on myself when I wrote the new chaper and would end up erasing a lot of the things I wrote. I now have a new chapter that MIGHT be worth posting/reading. I'll promise to make the next chapter interesting and funny unlike this chapter. It'll still be filled with cuteness of course! ^___^


CHAPTER 4

“Here, try to drink from this glass of orange juice one more time.” I say, handing over the tall glass of juice.

Eri reaches out to the cup on the table and picks it up properly into her right hand. We've been practicing all day on how she should walk and no longer run on all fours. She hasn't mastered that yet. I'll still need more time to get her out of the habit of getting around like a dog. I decided to teach her manners when she eats instead.

That seemed easier. It's less challenging, but still a struggle. This is the fourth time we're going over how to drink things from cups. I watch Eri  put both hands around the cup when she picks it up then tilts it slightly up when it reaches her mouth. She drinks the juice normally for the first time.

Until she starts lapping at the drink inside again. Well...that lasted longer than when she first tried.

“Eri, you're licking it again like your drinking from a dog bowl!” I yell. She puts the cup down. “You are supposed to tilt the cup to make it easier to put it in your mouth then swallow.”

Eri puts her head down and pouts no longer thirsty. I should probably move on to something else. I've been teaching her for an hour on just how to drink right.

“Eri's sorry!” she yells. “Eri still has a hard time learning.”

Great, she looks like she's going to cry again. Isn't she such a crybaby? I don't feel like dealing with tears today!

“It's alright. Let's try something else.” I say. I watch Eri sit back in her seat less upset.

She nods her head agreeing with my choice. She pushes the cup back in my direction and I take it before she has an accident again. The first time she went to pick up the cup it fell from her hand and shattered. She had a poor grip on it. She's made her grip better, but  I don't want to end another cup short if she decides to forget how to hold a cup properly.

I can't understand though how she's poor at holding a cup yet she can speak to me and understand the words I say. The more I ponder though the more I realize that there are a lot of things I don't know about her and forgot to question first before welcoming her into my home.

“Hey Eri,” I call.

“Yes?” She questions, sitting up straight in her seat with one ear pointing up to listen better.

“I was wondering...how is it that you were a dog at first then a human next? That isn't exactly what normal people can do. What are you?” I ask.

“Changing forms is an ability Eri was born with. I was told humans call us...shape-shifters. It isn't easy to shift though. It takes a lot of time and practice. Eri was training to transform.” she replies.

“We? So you're saying there are many of you?” I question.

“Yes, many different species! Some have become masters and can change to any animal they want. I've heard of some who can even mimic human forms! There aren't many that can do that though. We also live in a different world from humans since the humans won't easily accept us. Eri doesn't believe that! Ai-chan accepted Eri.” Eri clarifies.

I rest my chin on top of my curled fist going over Eri's words in my head deep in thought.

“Worlds? So if you have your own world why are you here, Eri? How did you get here?” I mention. “Don't you have a family in your world? Friends even?”

Eri sinks back into her chair with her shoulders bunched up as if trying to hide. I sit up straight in my seat and raise a brow, curiously.

“Eri?” I ask.

She looks at me and opens her mouth to speak, but then my doorbell rings, interrupting our intense conversation. I turn towards the door, puzzled. I didn't expect any visitors. I stand from my seat and make my way to the door. I unlock the top lock to my door and peek outside.

“Gaki-san?!” I shout, surprised.

I open the door half way, remembering that Eri is here and if Risa sees her she'll expect answers. If Risa sees Eri I'll be in big trouble. She'll know I was lying! I just have to keep calm, just keep calm Ai. Risa smiles at me and holds out something wrapped in a blue and white stripped cloth.

“Hello Ai-chan! I came to drop off some remedies that might help you feel better.” Risa announces.

“Uh...”

I stand there, feeling like a complete idiot. She's so kind, always thinking of me. She probably even had to take my shift back at the cafe and all I did today was talk with Eri. She went through the trouble to even make me medicine which probably took her quite some time to make. I rub the back of my head, mentally kicking myself for skipping work and lying to Risa.

“Ai-chan? How are you feeling today? Are you feeling queasy right now? I can drive you to the doctor!” Risa yells, immediately taking my silence as danger to my health.

“No, I'm fine! I just...I really didn't expect you to come over.” I admit.

Risa lowers her hands and looks away, embarrassed. I can see her cheeks turn a light shade of pink.

“Well I...I was worried when you told me you felt ill. As your best friend I should try to help you, so when I came home I had my mom teach  me a recipe for soup that always made me feel better when I was sick.” she replies. “If you're feeling better than you don't have to take the soup! I'll just bring it back home with me.”

“No, it's fine! Thank you Gaki-san. You're always watching out for me!” I encourage, then take the wrapped container from Risa's hands.

With my free arm, I pull Risa into a comforting hug. The hug only last a few seconds. When I look at her again she turns her view to the wall beside her too embarrassed again to look at me. She sure is acting strange today. This whole conversation is just getting too awkward for me.

“Well I'll just go now and get some rest.” I announce.

“Yes of course! Please take care of yourself Ai-chan. If you don't feel any better tomorrow let me know so that I can tell Yoshizawa-san you'll need another day off.” Risa agrees. “Oh, and Sayumi said she hopes you get well soon all the girls at the cafe do.”

“Thank you, Gaki-san! I should be fine by tomorrow I promise.” I confirm.

Just before I go to close the door there's noise coming from the kitchen. I stand still staring at Risa in fear. She looks at me confused. She leans to the left to try and see over me to locate the noise, but I lean in her direction quickly to block her. She looks at me even more confused.

“Ai-chan is the dog, OK? I haven't heard anything about her from you today.” Risa questions.

“Uh...y-yeah she's fine Gaki-san!” I croak. “She's never been better. I've been taking good care of her.”

“You know, I haven't gotten any calls yet from her owner. It's almost been two days.” Risa announces. “Do you think after a few weeks we should bring her to the pound?”

I nearly have a heart attack at that suggestion.

“N-NO!” I shout.

Risa blinks at me, surprised from my outburst. I blush and clear my throat nervously.

“I-I-I mean...it's only been two days it isn't very long. It will take time for her owner to see her fliers. Besides, I would feel better having her in my care. It's just...pounds are never a fun place for dogs.” I elaborate.
 
“Ai-chan, I don't think you can keep the dog. You are just too busy to take care of her. Puppies require a lot of attention and training.” Risa argues. “It's best that you give her up to the pound soon.”

“Trust me Gaki-san she's a lot easier to take care of now.” I assure. “I got the hang of caring for her.”

Yeah now that she's human! I still have a lot of work to do with her even if she is human because it feels like I have a child living in my house. It's so tiring! Risa stares at me, squinting as if trying to read into my mind. I stand up stiff, afraid she'll see right through my mirage.

“I  uh...should get going before the dog ends up having another accident on my kitchen floor.” I state, excusing myself.

Risa's face becomes softer and less fixated on trying to read my thoughts. I let out a small sigh. She nods, understanding my responsibility to take care of Eri.

“You're right. I'll get going now. Goodbye Ai-chan! Please remember get plenty of rest!” She advices, before walking away.

I close the door and feel a massive wave of emotions rip through me. I feel my shoulders sink down and my head lower. I feel like such an idiot. I can't spend another day doing nothing. I can't lie to Gaki-san anymore, but I can't tell her either about Eri.

She may be my best friend, but there are certain things that even best friends can't understand and telling her how Eri came here isn't very believable to anyone. I make my way through the living room and into the kitchen and pause, seeing that Eri is no longer in her chair. The chair is also knocked over. Eri nowhere to be seen. I place the container of soup on the counter before searching for Eri.

“Eri? Eri where did you go?”

I get to my room and see Eri sitting on the bed, looking at me curiously. I glare at her and her curious look turns to a guilty expression. She puts her head down and stares at her feet.

“Eri didn't I tell you to stay in your seat at the kitchen?” I scold.

“I'm sorry! I-I got thirsty so I went to get a drink myself, but I made the chair fall with my tail. The noise scared me!” Eri explains.

I walk over to her and smooth down her messy hair with my hand. She smiles and leans her head closer towards me. She wants me to pet her? Even though she's a human she still looks cute when she's trying to get me to pet her. She seems to always forget she's a human.

Eri smiles when I give in and start stroking the top of her head. I feel myself start to smile at how cute she looks leaning over to get closer to me.

“Ai-chan?” Eri whispers.

“Yeah?” I reply.

“I don't think she likes me.” Eri answers.

She? Does Eri mean Gaki-san? Why would she think such a thing?

“Why would you think Gaki-san doesn't like you?” I question.

Eri sits up straight and looks at me with a serious expression to her accusation. I've never seen her this stern.

“She acts different when she's around me. She always wants to get rid of me.” Eri sniffles. “Why does she hate me Ai-chan? Did I upset her by living with you?”

I place my arm around Eri's shoulder and take a seat next to her on my bed. She shifts to the side so that her head is against my shoulder.

“Gaki-san doesn't hate you. She just thinks I'm not mature enough to take care of a dog. She also doesn't want me to keep a dog that already has an owner.” I explain.

I hear Eri sniffle a few times then see her lift a hand to wipe away at some tears.

“Really?” she questions.

“Of course! Just give Gaki-san time and she'll come to like you. Right now probably isn't a good time for you to meet her though. She'll flip out.” I suggest.

“Okay.” Eri agrees.

We sit there together in silence until I can't hear Eri's sniffling anymore. That stops for a few minutes, but then she starts to shift in her seat.

“Eri will you stay still?! You've been doing that a lot lately. What's wrong with you?” I complain.

“I-It's my tail! It doesn't have enough room to stick out. Ai-chan how can you wear these pants?!” Eri whimpers. “They're so uncomfortable and binding!”

I completely forgot about her tail! That's real smart of me. It looks like I'll have to cut a few holes into some clothes for her. I really have to go shopping for Eri. How can I do that though if she's not there to figure out her size? I can't exactly go out with her in public with her tail and ears sticking out.

“Alright I'll cut a hole in them for you. Just let me find a pair of scissors.”

I get off my bed trying to recall the last place I put the scissors.

“Oh Ai-chan!” Eri calls. “What about my bath?”

I forgot about that too! Wait a minute...a bath...Eri needs to take a bath...she's going to be naked again?! This means I'll also have to be there to GIVE her the bath! I don't want to sit there while she's naked! She's old enough to wash herself!

I know though that if I do leave her there she'll probably end up drowning herself in the tub! I sigh. I'll have to take her a bath. I get the feeling though it isn't going to be easy.

 ***

“ERI!!!” I growl. “You were supposed to take the bath not me! Look at me! I'm soaked!”

“But...taking a bath is no fun if no one is there to play with me!” Eri cries.

“Next time you're taking a bath alone!” I decide.

“No! Y-you can't do that!” Eri begs. “I-I promise I won't get you wet next time Ai-chan! Just don't leave when Eri takes a bath! If you go...who will scrub my back or make sure I don't get shampoo in my eye?”

I scoff. “Eri, you got shampoo in your eye even when I was watching you. You didn't know how to stay still that's why it got in your eye in the first place! Then water went everywhere because you panicked!”

“Eri's sorry! Eri was just having so much fun!” Eri smiles.

I ignore her and make my way towards my room to find dry clothes for myself since my clothes are dripping with water. I'll have to mop up the floor just before I go to bed too. I take out two sets of clothing and make sure to put a hole in one for Eri's tail. I get dress quickly since it's easier for me to dress myself. Then I gather Eri's clothes and turn around to hand it to her.

She just stares at me and tilts her head.

“Ai-chan has a nice body.” she mumbles.

“Ah, hey!! Were you looking at me the whole time I was changing?!” I shout, feeling my cheeks burn.

Eri nods and that only makes my face burn even more. I can feel my ears getting warm now.

“Eri! You're not supposed to stare! Haven't you heard of privacy?!”

She continues to look at me then scrunch her brows together to piece together my information. I put my arms around my chest to cover my body even though I know I already have clothes on.

“But...Ai-chan saw Eri naked many times. Why can't Eri see Ai-chan naked too?” she questions.

“I don't mean to look at you naked! The first time you came to me like that and you can't take a bath for yourself so I had to stay in the bathroom with you like that!” I defend. “Just...don't look at me naked anymore, okay?!”

Now she's got me flustered!

“Alright.” Eri agrees.

I hand over her clothes. “Here just put this on yourself.” I instruct.

Eri gathers the pieces of clothing and I turn around so that I can't see her once she takes off her towel. I stand there in silence, but it seems really awkward to me because I can't get out of my mind that Eri has been looking at me while I changed! Are dogs usually that curious?! I put a hand to my cheek and realize it's turned really hot again just from thinking about Eri staring at me a few minutes ago. What is wrong with me?!

Calm down! I take a deep breath and close my eyes to relax myself.

“Ai-chan, did you used to dance?” Eri questions.

“Uh...yeah. I took a few dance classes and did ballet for a couple of years.” I answer. “How did you know?”

“You have a body of a dancer. Eri used to dance too. Can we dance together some time?”

“Um...sure.” I agree. “Are you done now?”

“Uh-huh!”

I turn around and feel relieved to know that Eri has clothes on. She even put everything on correctly this time. I walk over to her and pat the top of her head.

“Good job Eri! You dressed yourself the right way. You are learning after all.” I encourage.

Eri smiles and I see her tail start to wag uncontrollably. She's always cute when she moves her curled tail like that. I leave the room to mop up the puddles of water and then go back into my bedroom when it's complete. Now I can finally get some rest.

“Come on, let's get into bed.” I order.

Eri is first to get on the bed and crawls to the head of the bed to claim her spot for the night. I go after her and take the right side. I lay back, taking the blanket with me then turn off the lights. The second the room is covered in darkness Eri scoots closer towards me and clings on to me. She must be afraid of the dark.

For some reason...I find that really cute rather than annoying. I smile then close my eyes to fall asleep. It's been a hard and long day trying to get Eri to be more human. It required a lot more work than I thought. I'm just glad to be in bed so that I can get ready for tomorrow.

I feel myself start to doze off. Until I'm interrupted.

“Ai-chan?”

“Uh-huh?” I sleepily reply.

I would have expected Eri to be asleep by now. I know for a fact that I'm tired from all the training we went through. Eri seems pretty much hopeless to teach her human behavior and table manners. She always forgets and makes the same mistakes, but every time I try to scold her for what she's done wrong she always gets teary-eyed and her bottom lip quivers. I think she does that on purpose so I won't get mad at her!

“Thank you for taking care of Eri. Eri knows it isn't easy and that Eri is frustrating, but Eri tries to learn. Eri will try to be better for Ai-chan.” Eri promises. “Please don't give up on Eri.”

I turn around to face her and put a hand on Eri's waist. I don't think I'm mad at her anymore. How can I when she comes to me with a speech like that? She's just so cute.

“Of course I won't Eri. I'll take care of you.”

Eri smiles then scoots closer to me to put her head underneath my chin and tucks it into my chest. I close my eyes and let out a slow breath. She trust me and I shouldn't break that. I wish I just knew how she got here. I get the feeling that even though she's cute and innocent about the human world she's still hiding something from me.

 Maybe she's scared of something. What could she be hiding from?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/18)
Post by: kawaii beam on June 18, 2010, 09:46:12 PM
AW~ it's still cute~~ X3

and lol about eri's fail of drinking XD she cant help it if her instincts are kicking in lol i'm wondering where she came from too~ and if there's more ppl/creature things like her who,where and which memebers are they~~? XD

keep it up~ X3
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/18)
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 19, 2010, 12:16:13 AM
Hmm, I guess Risa does like Ai. If this is an AiEri, that means the bean's probably going to get hurt later. :( Damn.

But, this chapter was pretty adorable, Eri's so cute! Wonder what kind of trouble she'll get into while Ai's at work? XD
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/18)
Post by: writerjunkie on June 20, 2010, 08:01:38 PM
CHAPTER 5

“Does Ai-chan have to leave?” Eri complains, watching me from the couch as I gather my belongings before getting to work.

“Yes, I have to go to work this time, Eri. I can't have another day off. The cafe is always busy and we're a girl short so Yoshizawa-san needs all the help she can get.” I answer, grabbing my keys from the kitchen table.

“Yoshizawa-san?” Eri repeats, curiously.

“She's my boss and one of the owners to the cafe.” I explain.

“Can I see the cafe?” Eri excitingly questions.

“Of course you can't!” I snap.

Eri pouts and sits back into the couch with her head down. I sigh and put on a gentler face.

“Eri...you know you can't go out with your ears and tail out like that. You would stick out like a sore thumb.” I remind her.

“Eri knows it's just...Eri will miss Ai-chan while Ai-chan is gone.”

I walk over to her and pat the top of her head. She looks up at me and smiles.

“I'll be back before you know it. Besides, with any luck today might go quick and I can be back here to be with you.” I promise.

“I want to be outside with Ai-chan and go to restaurant like on TV!” Eri ask.

I laugh at how her eyes begin to sparkle at the thought of eating out in a fancy restaurant. She has such simple dreams, but it's so cute how much she hangs on to them with joy. She seems to be happy from the simplest thing. I don't remember the last time I was happy from things like that. Every since I moved away from home I had to be more like an adult to keep my apartment and make a living for myself.

“Right now what you should be eating is the food I made you this morning. Finish your breakfast.” I encourage, pointing to the plate on the coffee table.

“Okay~!” Eri obeys, picking up her chopsticks.

I'm relieved to know that Eri likes my cooking. Today is the first time I cooked something other than instant noodles, or bought food from a local store. I woke up early today to get what I needed to make breakfast. I wasn't sure how it would turn out, but Eri seems to like it. It's something simple from a cookbook I bought this morning, while going to the store to collect some ingredients.

I didn't know what I was looking for. I was just looking around. Eri just seems really happy to eat something I made for her.

“Hey Ai-chan,” Eri calls, taking another bite from her sushi roll. “What's that thing on the counter over there?”

I look to where Eri is pointing and notice the container that Risa gave me last night. I completely forgot about it! It's been there all night! I hurry over to take it off the counter. How could I forget about this?! I feel like such an idiot. Risa went out of her way to make this for me! I just completely ignored it.

I put it into the fridge, planning to eat it later.

“It's nothing, Eri. Just something I forgot to put away.” I bypass. “I have to go now before I'll be late. Don't make a mess while I'm gone! Bye!”

“Bye bye~!!” Eri calls back, her eyes focused to the flashing TV.

I smile as I close the door and make my way down the apartment hall. She's so cute. I'm sure she doesn't know how much. If making food for her makes her this happy I should do it more often.

 ***

“Ai-chan, you're back~!!” Sayu notices, as I step through the cafe front door.

She runs over to me and smothers me in a tight hug. Everyone else then comes towards me, happy about my arrival. I'll be going through a short questioning stage.

“Takahashi-san! I was worried about you once Niigaki-san told me you were feeling ill! What did you have?! I'm glad you're okay.” Another of my friends questions.

This hug nearly knocks me off my feet. I laugh and pat the back of my coworker's head.

“Linlin, I'm fine! And please, call me Ai-chan.” I insist.

Linlin nods and give me another hug before letting go. I look back and forth between my two friends and smile. They care about me just as much as Gaki-san does. They're just like my family too. From behind the counter, I can see Yoshizawa-san and Ishikawa-san coming towards me. They look just as happy to see me too.

“Ai-chan, I'm relieved to see you're better.” Ishikawa-san says. “Are you fully recovered to be working?”

“Yes of course!” I reply.

“You had us worried yesterday, Ai-chan.” Yoshizawa-san grumbles.

“I'm sorry. I didn't expect myself to feel sick so suddenly.” I apologized. “I know that now isn't the time for that since we're short of a worker.”

“Ah well...make that TWO workers short this time.” Yoshizawa-san sighs.

“Huh?! What happened?”

“One of our girls quit today. She had a family emergency.” Ishikawa-san informs.

They don't seem really happy about this. Yoshizawa-san looks pissed and Ishikawa-san just looks worried. I'll have to work harder today and try not get on either of their bad side.

“We'll need you to work a little longer than your planned schedule is that okay with you Ai-chan?” Yoshizawa-san ask.

“It's fine. I could use the extra money.” I agree.

“Thank you. I'm very grateful for your extra help, Ai-chan.”

“Hey! Are you all going to help me set the tables or what?!”

I know that voice anywhere. I turn around to the counter and wave at Gaki-san. She stares at me surprised when she notices I'm here. She didn't expect me to come in today?

“Ai-chan you're back! Are you sure you should be working?” she says, acting like her motherly self.

I laugh and nod. “I'm ready to work again, Gaki-san. You don't have to worry!” I assure.

“Well let's get started! I'll help you Niigaki-san!” Linlin offers, then dashes off.

“Hey, does this means I have to was the dishes?!” Sayu complains. “My hands will turn prune-y!”

“I'll take care of it Sayu. Go sweep the floor.” I volunteer.

“Thanks Ai-chan!”

“Everyone seems a lot happier today now that you're back, Ai-chan.” Ishikawa notices. “It was like while you were gone their energy was too, especially Mame-chan's.”

“Gaki-san worries about you too much you know? It's like she's your older sister. You should be thankful about her always taking care of you like this.” Yoshizawa-san advises.

“I always am. She's a true best friend.” I smile. “Well, I better get going now.”

I excuse myself from my two bosses then make my way to the back where I know a mountain of dirty dishes are waiting for me. I walk over to the sink and grab the rubber gloves from the counter.

“Hey, Ai-chan!” Gaki-san calls. “You have to put on your uniform first! Go change in the locker room.”

Oh I forgot about that. I head towards the back to change because I know that if I won't then the dishes will only build up. I walk up to my locker and quickly put in the needed code to open it. I swing open the door and nearly have a heart attack when I hear a crash behind me. Who else could be here?!

I'm the only one who doesn't have the cafe uniform on. I turn around afraid to what I'll find. Please don't hurt me! I put my hands up to my face to protect myself. The only thing is nothing attacks me when I spin around.

I stay there a little longer and still nothing happens. I lower my arms and peek out over my hands. Through the cracks I can see a small fuzzy...cat? I was frightened by a cat?! I put my arms down and blush.

I feel really stupid. The cat meows looking at the plastic containers that fell then walks over to me and starts to meow again. The gray colored cat rubs its face against my leg then purrs.

“Hey, what are you doing here?” I ask, bending down to pick it up in my hands. “Did you come in here last night and got stuck inside?”

The cat looks at me with its blue shimmering eyes and I stare at it, studying its face.

“You have such strange eyes.” I whisper.

“AI-CHAN!!”

“UWA!” I scream. “Gaki-san! I have to get ready!”

I walk over to the door and drop the cat outside then close it once it runs away. Then I quickly get dressed before Gaki-san gets really angry and comes inside. I don't want to face her when she's in complete mother mode. I tie the apron to the outfit around my waist then rush out when the whole uniform is complete. This is going to be such a busy day. I hope Eri will be okay while I'm away for a  few more hours.

 ***

“Thank you again Ai-chan for willing to stay a little longer than the other girls. I'll be sure to pay you extra for next week's pay check.” Yoshizawa-san promise. “Go home and get some rest.”

“Thanks Yoshizawa-san. Are you sure you don't want me to help lock up?” I offer.

“No, no, you've done enough for today Ai-chan!” Ishikawa-san agrees. “You've done too much for a girl that's just recovered from being sick. If you don't go home I will take you home myself!”

“Alright, I'll go home.” I chuckle then take my bag from the table. “Goodnight!”


I make my way to the front door and take a step back when it opens on its own. I look up from the door knob, puzzled at who would come in while we're closing. I look up at the girl standing in the door way and get lost in her dark angular-shaped eyes. Have I seen her before? I break out of my slight haze and open my mouth to try and speak.

“Um...w-we're closed.” I mumble, finding myself in another daze as I stare into her eyes again.

“I'm here to apply for a job. There's a help wanted sign out front.” she states.

“You're coming a little too late for an application don't you think?” Yoshizawa-san questions.

The small girl in front of me turns away from my eyes and glares at Yoshizawa-san. She folds her arms around her chest and gives Yoshizawa-san a 'your-point-is?' look.

“Look, I really need this job. I'm willing to work for as long as you need me to.” she snaps.

Yoshizawa-san puts a finger to her chin, thinking about interviewing this tough girl this late then looks back to Ishikawa-san. She shrugs.

“We do need some extra help.” Ishikawa-san recalls.

“Alright. I'll give you an application and give it back to me tomorrow morning. We open at 7am tomorrow.” Yoshizawa-san agrees. “By the way, what's your name?”

“Tanaka Reina.” she looks back at me as if hinting me to tell my name next.

Why is she always staring at me?! I don't even know her! She's a lot weirder than I thought. I look down and grip tightly on to the strap of my bag. I really should go.

“Uh...I'll just be going now. Bye!” I announce again before racing out the front door.

“Goodbye Ai-chan!” Ishikawa-san calls.

At the corner of my eye the new girl in the shop turns to me and I turn around to glance back at her.

“It was nice meeting you.” she coolly speaks.

I turn stiff and nod then turn back around. I can't be the only one who finds her weird. It doesn't matter now. I have to get home and take care of Eri. I need to make a quick stop at a market that's still open to buy some ingredients to cook dinner for her. She must be starving. What can I cook for her tonight?

 ***

“Eri I'm home~!!” I declare. “I'm sorry I came back late! Another girl quit at the cafe today. We're a lot busier than usual now. This new girl came though to apply so it might be a little easier if she's hired, but we're still one girl short!”

I look up from my bags and notice that it's silent. Wait...was I just ranting to Eri about my day? Never mind! That isn't important. Right now I can't hear her. Where did she go?!

The living is empty! The TV is...off? There isn't a huge mess here either. She's more civilized? I quickly place my bags on the table and search for Eri afraid to what I'll find this time.

There is only one other room she would be in. I walk directly to my room and prepare myself as I carefully push open my bedroom door. Then whatever feelings I have in me disappears and I smile. Eri fell asleep, waiting for me. I go over to her and put a hand over her bangs and brush them aside a few times.

They always fall back to the place they start in which is in the middle of her forehead, covering a section of her eyebrows. Eri finally stirs when I move the strip of hair the last time then she swats her hand to my hand. Her fingers slap the back of my palm. When she feels my hand she slowly opens her eyes.

Eri finally looks up at me and blinks a few times and I smile at her. She's even cute when she wakes up.

“Ai-chan?” she croaks.

I nod. She gets up to sit then reaches out to tangle her arms around my neck to put me into a warm hug.

“Eri's glad you're back. I missed you.” she groggily says.

“I'm sorry. I had to stay at work longer. I can make you something to eat if you'd like?” I suggest.

I feel Eri shake her head against my neck. Then she starts to sink forward into me. She must be going back to sleep.

“I'm not hungry. I just wants to sleep...with Ai-chan like usual.” she requests.

“Okay.” I comply.

With out thinking, I crawl into bed, with Eri still wrapped around my neck. Then make my way to the middle of the bed before laying down with her. She lets out a content sigh and rolls on to her side, but still remains close to me.

“Goodnight Eri.” I whisper.

“Goodnight Ai...chan...” she breathes out just before going to sleep.

I smile then close my eyes too. I'm glad she's here. Eri always makes my night after work a lot better. It's as if the stress goes away when I'm in her presence.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 20, 2010, 11:48:54 PM
I have an inkling that Reina is up to no good. Maybe she's who Eri was running from?
Either way, whatever, I'll just have to wait. Aww, is Ai already falling for Eri? What about Gaki-san?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: aussie on June 21, 2010, 04:56:48 AM
Kitty Reina is in the mix now! Maybe she's misunderstanding Aichan keeping Eri and taking care of her, which is why she eyed Aichan so coldly? She obviously has a connection to Eri, I wouldn't want it to be on the negative side (my inner TanaKameism coming out onto the surface :lol: ). Just a concerned shapeshifter friend(?) of Eri's who is a little jealous and suspicious of Aichan for keeping her in. Or something like that. Can't wait to find out more about Reina.


Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: Beecubed on June 29, 2010, 09:46:56 PM
Junkie!!! Thanks for the two new chappies  :twothumbs  finally free to read and catch up now  :)

Chapter 4:

OMG. Eri puppy running on all fours? Needing to practise to walk? To drink and not to lap? Referring to herself in third person and trying not to cry because she can't behave like a normal human being? I just can't imagine CUTE all that must be!  :wub:

Yay! Ai finally doing a sane thing and beginning to ask questions.
A shape-shifter? Wow, I hadn't thought of that before (or am I just that dense  :nervous). I was just thinking that she was an alien who could change form. Or do we call them shape-shifters? ^__^

Oh no, Gaki entrance. And what's more, she seems really into Ai. Are they going to get together in the end? Probably. Because I can't see AiEri happening like that, just coz one of them is a shape-shifter and all. Eeek. I'm getting really curious as to how this is all going to play out!

Gaki suggesting to bring Eri to the pound, and Ai's reaction  :rofl:

I honestly don't think I can ever tire of this Eri. The baby-cuteness is killing me  :bleed eyes:
More petting scenes, onegaishimasu!  :bow:


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“But...Ai-chan saw Eri naked many times. Why can't Eri see Ai-chan naked too?” she questions.

 :OMG:

Yeah Ai-chan, why not??!!

 :grin:

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“Thank you for taking care of Eri. Eri knows it isn't easy and that Eri is frustrating, but Eri tries to learn. Eri will try to be better for Ai-chan.” Eri promises. “Please don't give up on Eri.”

 :wriggly:
How do you say no to that?!

Ai-chan didn't follow through with her earlier question though, the one asking the WHY about Eri's presence. Nande? It seemed that Eri didn't want to answer though. Is she lost? An outcast? On a mission? AHHHH, I want to know!
A very cute last scene though *sigh* You're good at this, Junkie.  :heart:

Chapter 5:

I'm starting to wonder.. if Eri's a shape-shifter, why is she three quarters human and a quarter dog? Is it because she's still an apprentice? She was able to change completely to a dog, but not completely to a human? I'm thinking it's because it's really difficult to maintain human form, but I wonder if there's another explanation behind that...

Eri's still so newbie, she doesn't understand that she can't be greedy and want Ai-chan there all the time  XD Everything she does and says is plain cute, oh my gah  :heart:

Wow, Ai's been feeding herself instant noodles all this time? And now she's learning to cook, for Eri? Our little puppy must mean a lot to her  :twothumbs
I wonder what trouble she's going to get herself into now that Ai's gone to work...  :twisted:

The moment you focused on the cat and its eyes, I thought it might be Eri who had shape-shifted... but then when Reina appears in the next scene, it's got to be Reina!  :shocked: Reina another shape-shifter? Puppy Eri's enemy? Eri has run away, and it's Reina's job to get her back? Hmmm... lots of conjecturing at this point, I really don't know until more is revealed! Reina is probably interested in Ai now only because she wants to get to Eri, right? And then comes the falling-for-Ai-chan-because-she's-so-awesome scenario?

Ooo ooo ooo... I really want to find out!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: writerjunkie on June 30, 2010, 05:46:29 AM
^  :oops: Your comment made me smile! hehe I didn't expect something like this and to be this long. O.O

I'm happy you like this fic since I need some encouragment to continue this fic since I'm unsure about it since it's not a common pairing and well there aren't many people that like this pairing either. So any comment on this fic I'll be more than happy to get and read.

It makes me want to update as soon as possible. lol I'll be sure to do so once I get a few ideas and some inspiration. I know something eventually will come along though. I just hope it won't be too long. I'll of course be sure to add in a bunch of cute scenes. XD
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: Beecubed on June 30, 2010, 06:22:27 AM
^  :oops: Your comment made me smile! hehe I didn't expect something like this and to be this long. O.O

I'm glad  :heart:
It's not THAT long yet, Junkie. Hehhee... My longest comment reply was (seriously) 4000 words long. In response to a 12,000 word one-shot. But I guess I need to be super duper excited/hyper and all... I don't think I'll be commenting that much again. It was tiring (though satisfying), and the author didn't even acknowledge it  >.<

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I'm happy you like this fic since I need some encouragment to continue this fic since I'm unsure about it since it's not a common pairing and well there aren't many people that like this pairing either. So any comment on this fic I'll be more than happy to get and read.

I love this fic so far. Ai-chan is my favourite Momusu, and Eri follows right after. So them, together, like this...  :wub:
I understand your sentiments because I'm a writer myself, and it can be discouraging when it doesn't seem popular with the crowd. That's also a reason I like to leave longer comments on fics, because I want to show that I really appreciate the writer's efforts and to egg them to continue. Short, one-sentence comments, while better than nothing, aren't much for encouragement, are they?   :P

And you've started this story already, so now you have the responsibility to finish it, you hear?  :tama-mad: *pat pat* I really don't like it when somebody starts something, I get into it and then it's never updated again. But if you do end up NOT finishing the fic, I will still demand a run through of what happens. Hopefully you will see this through!  :love:

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It makes me want to update as soon as possible. lol I'll be sure to do so once I get a few ideas and some inspiration. I know something eventually will come along though. I just hope it won't be too long. I'll of course be sure to add in a bunch of cute scenes. XD

Woooo! Great to hear! *rubs hands together*
Do you know what's going to happen in the end? Or do things evolve as you continue to plan and write? I usually make sure I know how everything is going to go...  XD

I'm really looking forward to your updates!  :mon cute:
Know that you have me behind you with this fic, cheering on with pom-poms! *searches for pom-poms emoti...* Pretty sure we had one? Hhaaa...
GANBATTE!


Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: StephanyLee on June 30, 2010, 09:37:59 AM
AAaaawww I missed two chapters  :panic:
I've been waiting for the next chapter and finally it's here and two!! yay!!  :twothumbs

Chapter 4

Ai-chan learning Eri how to drink for a glasses is awesome XDDD
Eri been all cute and sloppy trying really hard to understand for Ai's sake, I can totally imagine that  :wub:
Finally! Something about Eri's past and where she comes from but Risa! you have to interrupt ¬¬*
Risa just get out of the way  ¬¬'

“Oh Ai-chan!” Eri calls. “What about my bath?”
:twisted:

“Thank you for taking care of Eri. Eri knows it isn't easy and that Eri is frustrating, but Eri tries to learn. Eri will try to be better for Ai-chan.” Eri promises. “Please don't give up on Eri.”

I turn around to face her and put a hand on Eri's waist. I don't think I'm mad at her anymore. How can I when she comes to me with a speech like that? She's just so cute.

“Of course I won't Eri. I'll take care of you.”

Eri smiles then scoots closer to me to put her head underneath my chin and tucks it into my chest. I close my eyes and let out a slow breath. She trust me and I shouldn't break that.
That just too  :wriggly: for words

What could she be hiding from?
Aaaahh I want to know too!!  :panic:

Chapter 5

Don't go to work Ai-chan! You know you want to stay home with Eri ^^
Tell Risa you're still ill and let her take your shift XD

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Today is the first time I cooked something other than instant noodles
You know someone's speciall when you cook for them  :heart:

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If making food for her makes her this happy I should do it more often.
Yep, definitelly Eri is REALLY special for Ai-chan ^^

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Through the cracks I can see a small fuzzy...cat? I was frightened by a cat?!
NO WAY!!  :mon wtf:

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“Tanaka Reina.”
I knew it ¬¬
She looks pretty scary here. Is she here to take Eri back with her?!!  Don't you dare :grr: 

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What can I cook for her tonight?
Still thinking about her  :wub:

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The whole scene where Ai get home and see Eri sleeping and then sleep next to her

 :luvluv1:

I'm happy you like this fic since I need some encouragment to continue this fic since I'm unsure about it since it's not a common pairing and well there aren't many people that like this pairing either. So any comment on this fic I'll be more than happy to get and read.
And you've started this story already, so now you have the responsibility to finish it, you hear?  :tama-mad:
I totally support Beecubed here :P and yeah i know what you mean about the pairing and how it gets really hard to continue a story without exactly knowing if people will like it, also I haven't reply and comment a lot on fanfics specially since it's a long time since a read one but for sure I;m going to read this one ^^ so if a don't post in a chapter, it's not because I didn't read it it's because of my laziness XD AND like you said it's not a lot of this pairing here so now you have to finish it XDDD

Hope you can update soon. I know i'll be here waiting ^^
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: oddball on June 30, 2010, 12:53:33 PM
Hmm why do I feel as though Reina knows more thatn she is letting on, has she been sent to get Eri, or is Eri running from her?

Aww sleeping Eri is all ways cute, mind you, if I shared a bed with Ai I think I would skip meals to go to sleep too.... :drool:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 6/20)
Post by: writerjunkie on July 07, 2010, 11:48:45 PM
CHAPTER 6

“Is Ai-chan okay?”

I blink and realize I've been daydreaming for I don't know how long with my cup of coffee in my hands in the air. I was drinking my coffee and trying to cook at the same time, but stopped because of my sudden daydreaming. I'm not doing a very good job at hiding what's bothering me to Eri. So much for trying to hide my worries. I turn around and smile the best I can to put Eri's questions to rest.

“I'm fine Eri. I'm just a little tired today. I didn't get enough sleep last night.” I reply.

“Was it because Eri was cuddling with Ai-chan too much?” Eri ask.

I let out a small laugh and shake my head. So she thinks I'm like this because Eri was holding on to me too hard last night? That's so cute of her being concerned about me.

“No it isn't. Now stop worrying everything is fine.” I assure. “Your breakfast is almost done.”

I look back to the stove and grab my elongated chopsticks to stir the eggs inside the pan a few more times. I hope she likes eggs. I really have to start asking her about the type of foods she likes. That way she can eat all the food I give her. I sort of doubt she'll know what food she likes since she doesn't know about human food.

I should take her out sometime too so she can see the places she's mentioned to me before. I'll do that as soon as she gets rid of her ears and tail. I don't know how long that will take though.

“Eri's thirsty!” Eri shouts, from across the table.

“Okay, let me get you a cup. Do you want orange juice this time?” I ask.

“Uh-huh!” Eri eagerly answers.

I turn off the stove and go over to grab the things I need to serve Eri's drink then carefully place the cup to the table. I look at her and hold on to the cup when it's resting on the table in front of her. She looks up from the glass of juice.

“Do not drop this.” I warn. “I don't really have time to clean up after you this morning.”

Eri nods then I let the cup go. She carefully grabs the cup then slides it over to her. Eri looks up at me and pouts then tears start to build up in her eyes. Oh please not now. Why is she going to cry?! Eri bites her bottom lip then wipes her eye with her free hand.

“Ai-chan's scary~!!!” Eri wails.

Now I feel guilty. How can she always mange to get me to say sorry to her?! Even if she deserves the scolding. I was a little too mean though. I guess having that new girl possibly be hired today is bothering me more than I thought.

“Eri I didn't mean to scare you.” I take a deep breath. “I'm just...not my normal self today. I'm sorry.”

“I know. I will try not to bother Ai-chan today. Eri will be extra good today!” Eri promises, before picking up the cup of orange juice carefully.

“Let me go serve your food before I leave.” I walk back to the stove and get a plate.

I place it in front of Eri and smile at her, but that only makes her look at me like she's worried.
Eri stares up at me and tilts her head. Can she read through me that easily?! Am I  really that readable? Eri gives me a gentle smile and nods then looks back to her plate.

That only makes me feel a little relieved. It doesn't matter right now because I have to go. I turn around and pick up  my purse before racing towards the door.

“I cooked extra food that you can eat for lunch, so if you get hungry you can eat that. It can be served cold so don't worry about having to heat it. I have to go now, bye Eri!” I shout, walking out the door.

“Bye~!!” Eri replies, still drawn to her food.

 ***

“Good morning Takahashi-san!” Linlin cheers as I walk through the front door. “You know, I just realized for once you aren't the first girl to arrive. Is something wrong?”

“Everything is fine Linlin. I have a dog now and I have to take care of her before I leave for work.” I reply, scanning the area for that strange girl I met last night.

I hope Yoshizawa-san didn't hire her! I know we need all the help we can get, but I just don't trust that girl! I don't know why. I think it's just my gut feeling. My instincts are telling me to stay away from her and I can't exactly do that if Yoshizawa-san decides to hire her.

“Uh...Linlin, you didn't happen to see some new girl walk in here did you?” I ask.

“New girl?” Linlin repeats. “I didn't know Yoshizawa-san found someone already.”

“Linlin, I told you already you can't take a break when you just started!” Sayu scolds, rushing out from the kitchen. “Oh, hi Ai-chan! You're a little late to work than usual. Gaki-san was starting to worry. Let me tell her you finally showed up.”

Sayu goes back into the kitchen and I look back to Linlin who's still looking at me with her puzzled expression. She must be trying really hard to see if she remembers a new girl entering today. Either she's thinking about that or she's just having a brain fart. I put a hand on her shoulder.

“Come on, let's get ready for work.” I encourage.

“Okay!!” Linlin cheerfully agrees.

I lead the way towards the kitchen with Linlin behind me following. When I walk pass Yoshizawa-san's office the door opens. I stop in my tracks afraid I'll have to face what I've been praying wouldn't happen. Linlin nearly knocks me over when she slams into my back.

“Ah, Ai-chan you finally arrived! Now I can give everyone the good news together. Quick come to the kitchen.” Yoshizawa-san orders.

Please don't say what I think you are Yoshizawa-san! Please don't say it! I agree with my boss's order and reluctantly follow her to the back. With every step closer to the kitchen, I feel a wave of dread and fear wash through me over and over.

I go through the metal double doors and stand next to the counter and make room for Yoshizawa-san to pass. She stands in the middle of the kitchen and calls for everyone's attention. I glance at the girls for a second and notice Gaki-san next to me. She smiles at me and waves.

It's kind of hard to give her a proper greeting back since I'm so nervous so I just give her a quick wave before focusing back to Yoshizawa-san. I'm sure she'll ask me about the lack of happiness in my greeting later. I do not look forward to that.

“I'm sure you're all wondering why I'm here and called a meeting.” Yoshizawa-san started.

Well that's a given. We're all curious to why she has to have everyone here for some small announcement. She must like being the center of attention? I put a elbow on the counter to brace myself.

“We'll...that's because I want to introduce you all to our new worker.” Yoshizawa-san looks to the door. “You can come in.”

I knew it! I knew she hired someone! I'm positive now it's the girl from last night! That girl gave me the creeps. There was something off about here when I saw her.

She didn't seem right. She sure looked angry and...at me? She was angry at me for what reason?! I don't even know her. The kitchen door opens and I hold my breath as I peek over Yoshizawa-san to get a better look.

Curse my short height and Yoshizawa-san's tallness! Yoshizawa-san steps aside to give everyone a clear view to our new worker. I nearly have a heart attack when I see her.

“Everyone, this is Tanaka Reina. She'll be working in Morning Cafe from now on. I hope you all will take care of her and treat her with respect. She's new so she'll need all of you to teach her our rules.” Yoshizawa-san introduces. “Go ahead Reina, introduce yourself to everyone.”

Reina looks back at Yoshizawa-san who motions to her with her hands to speak. Reina sighs and faces back to the group with a dull expression on. She scans over the group of girls around her and gives me a weird look when we have eye contact. That feeling I had from last night is still there when she looks at me.

I do NOT look forward to working with her. In fact, I want to avoid her and never have any sort of interaction with her either.

“Well it looks like you all know my name. I'm Reina and...I got this job because I needed it.” Reina turns around to Yoshizawa-san silently asking if that introduction was okay.

“Don't you have anything a little more interesting to tell these girls?” Yoshizawa-san urges.

Reina lets out a low groan. “I'm from Fukuoka and I'm 19. There is that better?! Can I just get to work now?”

“Fine.” Yoshizawa-san agrees. “Like I've said before I need you girls to help Reina get around until she's used to working here. Please be sure to treat her well.”

Yoshizawa-san leaves with that message said and we're all left alone. The girls instantly fling to Reina as if they are amazed with her like she's some foreigner from America. I don't see what's the big deal. So, she's new, but we all were at one point! There's no need to ask fifty questions on her first day of work.

“Hi Tanaka-san! My name is Linlin!”

Reina gives Linlin a confused look. “Linlin? That's a strange name.”

“It's just a nickname. My real name is Qian Lin. I'm from China!” Linlin explains, enthusiastically.

“Yeah...nice to meet you too.” Reina dully replies, completely ignoring Linlin.

She's so rude! Linlin doesn't seem to mind it or notice. She looks at Reina in amused. Linin is sometimes just too nice. I stand still, watching the scene before me as a wave of anger slowly comes over me. Reina's attention shifts to Sayu who gives her a friendly wave hello.

“You're 19? You're just a year younger than me. You look a lot younger for your age.” Sayu comments, looking Reina over.  “Oh and my name is Michishige Sayumi.”

“Uh...thanks?” Reina answers, unsure.

“You have such a weird accent.” Sayu notices.

“Yeah just like Takahashi-san's! Yours sounds a lot scarier though!” Linlin agrees. “She sounds like a yankii! You're not from the Yakuza are you?!”

“Will you two stop pestering her and let her work!” Gaki-san interrupts. “We're supposed to be teaching her not asking her personal questions!”

Linlin and Sayu nod in agreement then look towards each other with clueless expressions. I already know what they're trying to establish.

“Who's going to be her teacher?” Sayu questions.

“YOU DO IT!” Sayu and Linlin yell together, pointing a finger at one another. They stare at each other lost. These two are sometimes such scatterbrains! I have to admit it's funny watching them together though.

“Jakenpyon!” Linlin calls, lining in front of Sayu to get ready for their mini battle.

“None of you are going to do it!” Gaki-san clarifies. “I don't trust any of you to help Reina at all. Just leave that job to Ai-chan and me.”

“Huh?!” I shout.

Gaki-san gives me a stern glare that makes me regret my words. Did I say something wrong? I look down to my heels and pout. I should have shut my mouth. Stupid reflexes!

“Ai-chan, you're the oldest out of everyone here. Don't you think you should make a good example to the girls and take care of Reina?” Gaki-san explains.

“Well...yeah, but-”

“You'll be like our leader Takahashi-san!” Linlin exclaims. “Can I call you leader?”

Gaki-san stares at me and folds her arms over her chest. She's angry. Am I going to have to be forced to say yes? This really isn't fair! I don't even like this person.

She gives me the creeps and I feel that I can't trust her and on top of that if she makes me stay extra hours I'll be angry. I have to make sure I get home so that Eri will have food to eat and so that she doesn't burn my house down!

“I trust you can take care her Ai-chan. Is there a problem with this responsibility?” Gaki-san angrily questions.

“Uh...n-no not at all.” I nervous chuckle. “It's fine.” I look at Reina and force myself to smile. I can feel a corner of my mouth twitch when I'm able to put on some sort of smile. “Nice to meet you Reina.”

Reina looks at me with a blank expression, but her eyes have this strange twinkle when she looks into my eyes. She's still weird! I just call it my gut feeling.

“Like wise.” she whispers.

Even when she speaks I turn stiff! I give her a small smile then turn around to get ready for any kitchen work. I get the feeling that today will go a lot slower. I'm not looking forward to that.

“Ai-chan, you should run Reina through our routine that we all do as a team.” Gaki-san suggests. “We need to get working now.”

I walk over to Reina and remain quiet for a few seconds. She always looks like she's in a bad mood. Maybe she is from the yakuza. What am I thinking?! I have to stop being around Linlin so much!

Reina's just some normal girl and our new worker. Or...at least she seems normal. I still haven't figured that part out. Maybe Eri can help me out with this.

“Um...so you have to get your uniform on first.” I start. “Do you have one?”

“Yeah, Yossie said she had an extra one in the back.” Reina answer.

“Uh, you should be calling our boss Yoshizawa-san. Only Ishikawa-san calls her Yossie.” I clarify. “Do you want me to help you put your uniform on?”

“No I got it.”

“Do you know where the locker room is?” I questions, as Reina makes her way towards the door.

“I'm sure I can find it on my own without help.” Reina snaps, then walks out the door.

Well that...went well? How can I teach her anything if she's always going to turn my assistance? This is going to be a lot harder than I thought. My hands at my sides close shut. I'm going to hate this day.

Why did Yoshizawa-san hire her? It doesn't matter now. I'm stuck with her. I can't change Yoshizawa-san's mind either. We need all the help we can get in this cafe.

All I have to do is just avoid her then. I'm not sure how I can do that, but I have to try? I let out a deep sigh.  I can't be home soon enough!

 ***

“Eri I'm back home!” I announce, rushing through the door.

“Ai-chan!!” I hear Eri yell.

I'm relieved to hear her. I put my purse on the table and walk over to the living room where she's at the edge of the it, standing on her knees. She has her hands on the armrest. I can see Eri's tail wagging uncontrollably. I guess she missed me.

“Ai-chan's home!” she says.

I hurry over to her and hug her. I feel her arms go around my neck into a hug also. She's always so cute. I have to admit it I did miss Eri. At the moment she makes things at home less hectic then when I'm at work. I take my other hand and pat the back of Eri's head.

“Eri missed Ai-chan!” Eri mumbles. “But Eri is happy Ai-chan is now home! Ai-chan didn't come home so late today.”

“Yeah Yoshizawa-san closed early for something important. I think it might be her anniversary with Ishikawa-san.” I ramble.

I feel Eri nuzzle into my neck and I giggle.

“Hey that tickles Eri!” I laugh. “Did you miss me that much?”

“Uh-huh! Eri missed Ai-chan very much!” Eri answers.

I let go of Eri and look down at her to see just how happy she looks. I've never seen her face this happy or her eyes sparkle this bright before. It sort of makes me feel bad because she's inside all day and home alone with nothing to do and no one to talk to. Eri must really hate that.

I pat the top of Eri's head and she wags her tail again. Then suddenly she leans over the armrest and licks me on the cheek. I freeze. This just turned awkward. I feel Eri's nose brush against my face and then to my nose.

She's extremely close! I stare into her glittering eyes, too frozen to move. Eri gives me a sweet smile that makes my body turn hot. I never noticed how her lips have this type of curl at the edges when she smiles a certain way. It's really cute. Eri keeps brushes the top of her nose against mine.

Until she goes further forward and I think our lips are about to touch. I'm going to freak out! This is too weird! I put my hand up between our faces and put two fingers on her chin. Eri stops and looks at me curiously. What the hell just happened?!

What is wrong with me?! What was I even thinking!? I put my hands to my temple and frown. I wasn't about to kiss her! Eri was about to kiss me! It's the other way around!


“I um...I-I-I'm sure you're hungry! I'll just...be in the kitchen!” I scream, before running away to safety.

“Ai-chan?” Eri curiously calls.

“D-do you want anything to eat for dinner Eri?” I stutter. “Um...how about meat? I'll just make whatever I have.” I run about the kitchen back and forth not sure what I'm looking for. “I-I'll sleep on the couch tonight. You won't mind will you?”

“Ai-chan.” Eri interrupts.

“Y-you know I'm not that hungry! Y-y-you can just eat dinner for today.” I stumble.

“AI-CHAN!!!” Eri screams.

I jump and slowly turn around, but don't look her in the eyes. My hands are starting to shake. Eri has on the saddest face I've ever seen. It makes me feel bad for ignoring her without an explanation. She rubs her eye and bites her bottom lip.

I'm such an idiot. Eri doesn't understand anything. I shouldn't be closing myself off from her because of something she did. I'm sure Eri isn't even aware of what she tried to do!

“D-d-did Eri d-do something wrong?” she sniffles.

“No I...it's just...you...” I sigh.

How can I explain any of this to Eri? She's so innocent. She can barely understand the human world and human behavior. I can see Eri starting to tear again. I have to say something!

“Eri it's okay. I just...need some space today.” I gently tell her.

“O-okay.” Eri sadly agrees.

I turn back to the stove and get a pot from the cabinet. I need to keep my mind off what just happened. It's best that I just pretend that nothing happened. It was just a mistake. Eri wasn't even aware of her actions. She's probably been watching too much TV today. That's it. She's only copying what she sees on TV. I'll have to give her a talk about that.

“I'll make you some food.” I announce.

“No...Eri isn't hungry. Eri will just go to sleep.” Eri declares.

I look down to the pot and hear Eri get up from the couch and walk across the living room. Then she closes my room door and I stand here, slumped forward. What is going on with me?  What am I doing? I walk away from the stove and go gather extra blankets and pillows for my bed tonight.

I set a blanket on the couch and place a pillow near the armrest. Then climb on it, laying flat on my back. I stare straight into the ceiling, not feeling tired at all. My mind is racing. My body feels restless.

Maybe today didn't end so great after all. Why do I feel so bothered? Why am I confused?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 7/7)
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 08, 2010, 12:13:12 AM
Wow, why am I rooting for AiEri when I'm sure there's some Takagaki hints in here?


Oh well, Ai! What are you doing?! You should have let her kiss you! Then show her what it really means to be human! :twisted:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 7/7)
Post by: Beecubed on July 18, 2010, 02:27:32 PM
Wooo! Update...
 :love:
Thanks for quickly putting this one out, junkie!
Now onto the comment...

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“Was it because Eri was cuddling with you too much?” Eri ask.

Totally a puppy-Eri question  XD
Is she this cute with everybody or only Ai-chan?

If I were Ai, I would definitely always be thinking of OTHER, more IMPORTANT questions to ask Eri... I'd keep probing her about her own world, about why she was here now, why she had shape-shifted to a puppy, what she had planned for the future... not what kind of foods she would like to have  :nervous
Ai-chan kind of has her priorities the wrong way around, lol... it's cute though, but kind of careless on her part.

Eh? How is Eri going to get rid of her ears and tail? Which leads me to the same question I had before - what's the reason why Eri hasn't completely turned into a human, and still has her ears and tail intact (besides upping the cuteness factor xD)???

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“Eri's thirsty!” Eri shouts, from across the table.

...

Eri nods then I let the cup go. She carefully grabs the cup then slides it over to her. Eri looks up at me and pouts then tears start to build up in her eyes.

...

Now I feel guilty. How can she always mange to get me to say sorry to her?! Even if she deserves the scolding.

Ahhhh, just like a child!  :wub:
I wonder if Eri is a child in her own world (since she also turned to a puppy), and is using an adult's body as a human  :grin:

I also wonder if Eri has super mental powers, like mind/mood reading. It was hinted at, but not looked into... hmmm. If she does, she's sure hid it well so far.

If Ai's having bad gut feelings about Reina, then surely she can't be good news  :panic:

The image of LinLin Man having a brain fart is complete win  XD What a little dorkus! Hhehe.. a meeting between LinLin and puppy Eri please  :bow:

Uh-oh. REINA, why of course... she's seemingly cold and heartless and reeks of evil (for Ai seems so creeped out), I wonder if she will have some kind of character change later on, perhaps falling for Eri or Ai and not wanting to cause any trouble.

Leader Takahashi makes its name debut  8)
Of course Ai-chan has to take care of Reina. Now things are just going to get more complicated... Yakuza Reina.. hahaha, you know, as badass and yankii as Reina makes herself out to be, I can't get past her idol façade. For me, Ai-chan is the only one in MM who can pull off badass whenever the job calls for it (that's why she's such an awesome performer/actor whatever you want to call it). So I'm only getting Yakuza vibes from Reina in her dress sense and the mood she's giving off.
And amidst everything, Ai-chan is still thinking about feeding Eri... :rofl:

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“Ai-chan!!” I hear Eri yell.

I really want my own Eri-puppy who yells out my name and comes scurrying to my side when I get home!  :inlove:

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I can see Eri's tail wagging uncontrollably.

That image is heartbreakingly adorable!  :wriggly:

AiEri interaction =  :wub: :inlove: :oops: :heart: :love: I'm totally loving the fluffy cuteness you put into this chapter, makes me all gooey inside...

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Then suddenly she leans over the armrest and licks me on the cheek.

 :mon spit:

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She's extremely close! I stare into her glittering eyes, too frozen to move. Eri gives me a sweet smile that makes my body turn hot. I never noticed how her lips have this type of curl at the edges when she smiles a certain way. It's really cute. Eri keeps brushes the top of her nose against mine.

 :mon crazyinlove:

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Until she goes further forward and I think our lips are about to touch. I'm going to freak out! This is too weird! I put my hand up between our faces and put two fingers on her chin.

NANI?!?!?!?!

Oh man, that would have been a great kiss... junkie, you better just be postponing this moment, k k. Because I CANNOT wait for the moment when these two lock lips, coz it could easily be the cutest kiss in the world!!!

Awwwww, Eri really must be just a child, if she didn't know what she was doing and getting all teary over Ai's abrupt running away moment >.< That's so cute!!!! Gaaaaah  :mon inluv:

Ai-chan, you're so bothered and confused because you OBVIOUSLY want Eri. That oozing sweetness, the ears and tail and that banging body. Duh. :nya:

A great, fluffy chapter with some problems looming on the horizon. Thanks for the good work junkie!  :twothumbs
I want more.
Update soon please!  :heart:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 7/7)
Post by: Swtme03 on July 19, 2010, 04:35:34 AM
Uuuuhhhh....all i wanna say is OMFG!! THIS STORY IS SO EFFING CUTE~!!!  :mon lovelaff:
Where the eff have I been?!!  :bleed eyes: I need more of this cuteness!!  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 7/7)
Post by: lonewind on August 16, 2010, 06:39:16 AM
READ IT~!! would've been done if my brother wasn't still talking after you left >>

but O....M....G.... Eri's is sooooo cute~!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: love it~

XDD i kept smiling and laughing at Ai-chan's moments with Eri, hope u can update soon~ ^^ looking forward for it~

ps. nice drawings ^^
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 7/7)
Post by: writerjunkie on August 22, 2010, 03:54:32 AM
CHAPTER 7

“Ai-chan?”

“Huh?” I mumble, blinking a few times and realizing I haven't touched my crepe. I look to my left and notice that Sayu is staring at me with an unease expression. Well I'm not being very discreet about what's been bothering me lately. “Oh, sorry, Sayumi. I haven't been feeling good.”

Sayu puts a hand on to my thigh and leans over to me. “Are you okay?! You haven't taken one bite from your crepe. Are you feeling ill again?! I'll go call Gaki-san!” She fumbles with her bag to fish out her cellphone.

“No! No, I'm not ill Sayu. I'm just very tired.” I sigh, knowing it's only half the reason to my sluggish mood. “I didn't get much sleep last night and today's lecture in class was extra long.”

“Ai-chan, you're working yourself too hard! You need to relax.” Sayu explains. “We should go out to eat today! All our classes are done. We'll go shopping first. Do you have work later?”

“No, it's one of my rare days off.” I reply, still in a down kind of mood.

I was planning to use my day off to talk with Eri about my behavior last night. I'm sure she's worried about me and if she isn't she is now because of this morning. When I woke up today I barely spoke to Eri, and made no eye contact with her, or acknowledge her presences. Thinking about it now, I feel really bad with how I treated her.

I knew she wasn't happy about it because she was quiet too and she just sat on the couch slouched over. Her ears her tucked downward and her tail didn't move the whole time we were in the same room together. I wonder if she's home right now, crying.

I want to tell her that my odd behavior isn't her fault, but every time I think about being next to her I instantly want to stay away. I honestly...don't want to be home all day. Does this make me seem like I'm some bad person?

“Okay it's done~!” Sayu announces.

I suck in a mouthful off air, having no clue to what Sayu means about something being doing. I was daydreaming again wasn't I? I mentally kick myself for getting lost in my own mind because I'm worried Eri might be on my bed crying her eyes out. I rub my tired eyes, trying to stop myself from slipping into my thoughts again.

“What? What's done?” I ask, puzzled.

Sayu lets out one of her girlish giggles and smiles. “Ai-chan you sure are acting strange today. I told you that I was going to call Gaki-san so she can hang with us. She said she gets off her shift at the cafe early so she'll pick us up in ten minutes.”

All this has been discussed about while I was in my own world? I really have to stop doing that!

“The plan has changed.” Sayu explains. “We're going to do some karaoke.”

There goes my plan to speak with Eri. I can't cancel on my friends though. Sayu seems to excited about our plans and Risa will be picking us up shortly. It wouldn't be fair to just bail on them both.

I guess I can use the time alone from Eri for now anyway. I don't plan to stay out that long. I'll be sure to come home before midnight. With my thoughts set, I smile at Sayu to show my happiness about our gathering.

“I can't wait.” I say.

Sayu's phone buzzes loudly against the wooden bench we're sitting on catches my attention and she picks up the phone in her hand that was pinned against the bench and her palm. She takes a look at the screen and flips it closed again.

“Gaki-san's here.” Sayu announces, standing up from the bench. “Let's go!”

I get up and stand beside Sayu. She clings onto my wrist then walks me through the crowd of college students on campus. I wish I'm as enthusiastic as Sayu, but I can't keep my mind off the feeling of guilt in my stomach. I need to make things right with Eri soon.

 ***

“Ai-chan, go inside with Sayu while I park the car, see if you can get us a room.” Gaki-san instructs, just before I step out of the car.

I agree with Gaki-san and close the passenger door. It's time to stick to my responsibilities again since I'm the senpai. I already have enough of that with Eri back at home. She's such a big slob. She throws her clothes all over my floor as if I don't have any closets or draws! I really have to teach her a lesson about cleanliness.

“Ai-chan!” Sayu yells, to get my attention.

I was daydreaming again and again about Eri. Why can't I just keep my mind off her for one night? I smile at Sayu and join her to enter the karaoke place we all decided to spend the night.

Sayu grabs on to my hand and yanks me inside, eager to start. I seem to be the only one happy about this. I just hope Gaki-san doesn't notice.

“You'll like this place Ai-chan! Gaki-san and I always go here when we have free time.” Sayu promises, fulling her to pull my arm harder.

We reach the front of the desk to ask for a room, but Sayu suddenly stops in her tracks. Is she easily distracted too? Sayu lets go of my hand and goes over to the girl standing in front of the registration desk, peering at her to get a better look.

“Reina?!” Sayu calls out, to see if this stranger can confirm her guess.

My heart drops as the small girl in front of me turns around and I feel my knees about to buck when I find that it is Reina. Why would she be here and on the same day when I've chosen to come here with Gaki-san and Sayu?! I don't know if I'm becoming paranoid, but she must have knew I was coming here! Is she spying on me?!

I have a stalker! I watch as Sayu smiles at our cafe worker, trying to start a conversation while Reina remains silent with no emotion on her face. Please, someone tell me she's not going to spend the night with us today. The reason why I'm so against this is because I hate how rude she is!

“What are you doing here?” Sayu curiously questions.

“Well...I figured I come here to do some karaoke. It's something that I enjoyed back at my hometown.” Reina explains.

“You are going alone?!” Sayu ask, shocked.

Doesn't this seem planned? I carefully watch Reina with a skeptic look.

“I don't have any friends here since I've moved from Fukuoka not that long ago.” Reina answers, unaffected from the fact she has no friends.

She's also heartless isn't she? Does she even want friends? I think she's just lying to why she's here. I don't trust her and I don't want to be nice to her either, but if Gaki-san sees how mean I'm acting to our worker she'll want an explanation.

I don't think telling Gaki-san that I don't trust Reina will be a good enough answer for her. Besides, what I've been feeling is probably just suspicion and usually that is proven wrong just like in the books I read. Unwillingly pushing aside my discomfort, I walk over to my two co-workers and stand next to Sayu, while keeping a watchful eye on Reina. She notices me and leans forward towards the desk to get a better look.

“Ai-chan.” she states, calmly.

I bit my bottom lip, wanting so badly to yell at her for calling me a name that only my friends are allowed to use. She has no manners! She could at least call me Takahashi-san first if I ever decide to give her permission to use Ai-chan, which I will never allow! I stare back at Reina then give her a weak wave.

“Hey, Reina! Why don't you join us?!” Sayu invites.

“What?!” I yelp, letting myself speak yet again without thinking.

Sayu looks at me taken back from my outburst and Reina is still unamused from my shouting. She must be laughing at me inside. That seems like something she would do. I look back at Sayu and put on a nervous smile, something tells me that Reina will end up with us tonight.

“Ai-chan, don't you want Reina to have friends?” Sayu questions.

“Yes...I do.” I mumble, staring at the polished desk surface.

“Then let Reina join us for tonight! I'm sure Gaki-san won't mind making friend with our new worker. Since we all work together as a team we should get to know our newest member to be more efficient in the cafe.” Sayu explains.

If I say no to this I know she'll go running to Gaki-san for sure and that would be the end of me. When Gaki-san lectures and scolds anyone she can do that for hours and I really don't want to face that. So, I'm left with no other option. I'll have to give in, yet again.

I was probably better off being with Eri despite our awkward silence to each other. That's a lot more comforting than to how I feel being around Reina. I take a deep breath.

“Okay...you can join Reina.” I reply.

Reina smiles at me, but I get the feeling that her smile isn't a true one. It's just something fake to make her look like a good person while she's in front of Sayu. I force myself to smile too, returning the false smile.

“Alright, then lets order a room!” Sayu urges.

I go back to the counter to get us a room like Gaki-san asked. This is going to be a weird night. I don't mean that in a good way. The lady at the desk gives me the key to our room and before I can move, Sayu grabs me and rushes off.

“Sayu, slow down!!!” I cry.

 ***

When I thought things can't get any worse since Reina was invited to do karaoke with my friends and I, but I was wrong. Very...very wrong! Everything started off fine, but once Reina bought the first glass of alcohol everyone else kept drinking beer and then came wine and finally a bunch of shots.

I decided to stay away from any of those drinks since I know I can't hold my alcohol very well. Besides, I don't want to end up like Sayu and Risa who are completely drunk and I find that a little odd since they aren't the ones who ordered the first drink. I glance at Reina from across the table, noticing that she looks sober. Wasn't she the one who ordered the first drink?! Either she can hold her liquor in very well unlike me or she just ordered drinks to get everyone drunk for some reason.

I'll be keeping a close eye on her. Reina turns around, staring back at me and I jump then look down to my plate. I just got caught staring great job for trying to seem discreet with it! I feel myself blush and grip my chopstick, nervously.

“Hey G-Gaki-san sing w-with me~!!” Sayu slurs, rushing to the table.

These two are embarrassing me! This reminds me why I don't like to drink so much. Gaki-san agrees then wobbles over to the stage, while trying to support herself on Sayu. I'm worried they both will fall on to something and hurt themselves. I sigh and shake my head as my drunk friends begin to sing, squinting at the small screen they can barely read. I really want to go home now. Why did I agree to come here? I pick up my chopsticks and attempt to finish my sushi.

“Embarrassing isn't it?”

I jump out of my seat and yell. I'm so glad the music is too loud for Sayu or Gaki-san to hear me. I think though because they're drunk they won't hear me anyway. I look to my left and see Reina sitting next to me with a raised brow. I blush and let out a small laugh.

“Easily frightened?” Reina ask, with a  smug smile.

“I uh...I didn't think you would...come this close to me.” I stutter. “I guess this also hasn't been my night.”

Reina tilts her head to the side in curiosity and I have to admit she does look cute when she does that. Since she's also wearing pigtails it makes the action even cuter. Wait...why am I even thinking about her in that way? I rub my eyes with my hand to wash away these strange thoughts. This night is just getting weirder!

“What do you mean?” Reina ask. “Is something wrong, senpai?”

I don't know why, but I blush a little when she calls me senpai. I let out a short chuckle and smile. I shake my head rapidly and smile again.

“I-it's nothing! I've just been going through some stress at home.” I answer, finding it safer to stare at my plate again. “It isn't anything you should worry about, really.” I look back up at her and Reina continues to stare at me with interest. Is it just me or her eyes seem to have this weird flicker? It's like she has some type of...interest in me and I don't mean in a friendly kind of way!

What the hell is going on?! Reina sits forward on the table, still looking straight into my eyes and smiles. I feel my heart throb when she smiles. I never noticed how cute her teeth are when she smiles.

I never even seen her smile and I have to say when she does smile it lights up her whole face and makes her more attractive. WHAT?! Since when did I find her attractive in the first place?! Just...look away!

Don't fall for that smile! When I think I'm calm enough to not fall for her trap, Reina places her hands on to mine and my chopsticks stumble out of my hand and fall to the floor. This is too close!

“You can always talk to me when you need someone.”  Reina says.

“Uh...um...” I'm completely surprised. I've never seen this softer side of her. What is she doing? What happened to her?!

Before I can get a chance to properly reply to her, I can hear Gaki-san's laughter at the table then she stumbles on to me. Breaking my eye contact with Reina, I pull my hands away to get a hold of Gaki-san who's having a hard time getting into her seat. She continues to laugh then clings on to me, seeing that she can't move on her own. She's completely drunk.

“AI-CHAN!!!” Gaki-san shouts, unnecessarily. “A-Ai-chan t-that was so m-much fun~! Y-you have to sing too! Y-you have such a beautiful v-voice when you sing.”

Gaki-san's arms wrap around my neck and subconsciously I put my arms around her waist to try and hold her still. I glance over to Reina who's still looking at me with a darker stare and I look away. At least she's back to the same stare, but I'm not sure if that's a good thing.

“Reina-chan, come sing with me~!!” Sayumi begs, before pulling Reina by the wrist, ignoring her protest.

I focus back to Gaki-san who can't seem to stay still for just a second. She keeps trashing around on my lap and it's a little uncomfortable! I'll have to remember to never let her drink this much ever again. I should have taken more care of her as a best friend. I shouldn't have let her get this wasted.

“Gaki-san, stop moving around will you!?” I complain.

Gaki-san giggles then shifts so that she's sitting on to my lap then rests her head to my chest. I sit back stiff, staring at her shocked. I didn't expect her to do this. Maybe she's cuddly when she's drunk. Gaki-san lets out a small sigh of contentment and I can feel her cheek rubbing against my chest. This is getting weird.

“G-Gaki-san?” I croak.

“Ai-chan y-you're so c-comfortable.” Gaki-san sighs. “I-I wish we can d-do this more often.”

“What? You mean cuddling?” I question.

“Mhm.” Gaki-san happily agrees, pressing herself further against me. “B-but only with Ai-chan! C-cuz Ai-chan is special. I-I only want to be this close t-to Ai-chan.”

I sit lifeless when Gaki-san says those words because it reminds me just too much of Eri. I can only picture Eri telling me these things with her goofy smile in place. Then I feel guilty again. I left Eri home alone without even calling her to tell her where I am.

She must be worried about me! I have to get home! I push Gaki-san off to the side and gather my belongings. Gaki-san looks at me disoriented.

“Ai-chan, you're leaving?!” she shouts.

“I um...I have to go Gaki-san! I-I forgot to feed the dog before coming here. I'm sorry I have to go!” I lie, then race out the door. I know when Gaki-san is sober she'll come to me about this, but that's if she even remembers anything tonight.

It doesn't matter though because I have to patch things up with Eri. It was wrong of me to put her through all this worrying and possibly sadness. She probably doesn't even understand the emotions she's going through. I have to get to her now!

 ***

“Eri?!” I yell, running into my apartment. “Eri I'm sorry!” I stop in my tracks and notice that it's completely dark in here. “Eri?” I turn on a light and see a huge mess everywhere!

The living room is messy and so is the kitchen. It looks like someone came in here and robbed me! I know that isn't true though because the door was locked when I came in and there was no signs of a break-in. The only person who can make such a mess like this is Eri. Did she do all this because she was angry?!

Slowly, I walk through the house, looking over the things that are sprawled across the floor. There are papers, pencils, bits of glass, food, and eating utensils everywhere. Why would she do such a thing?! I turn around and notice a trail of food, leading to the hallway of my room and cautiously follow it.

I don't know why, but I'm scared. I'm terrified even though the only person I'm going to is Eri. I know what I'm facing, yet I'm still so scared. The mess just now didn't seem like Eri at all. It was like some angry bull came in here and decided to destroy everything I own. I sneak to the door of my room and gently push it open.

“E-Eri?” I whisper, searching for the light switch. “Eri...are you in here?” The light flickers on and I step further inside.

It's hard to see since the lamp is knocked over on the ground. I inch closer to my bed, ignoring the feeling my body is giving me to run. I need to know where Eri is and what happened to her. I hope she's safe.

When I get to the other side of my bed I stop in my tracks and stare, speechless. Eri is sitting against my nightstand, bunched up into a ball with her face buried into her knees. I can hear faint sniffling from her knees. She's crying. She's crying because of me! I rush over to her side and put a hand on her shoulder.

“Eri!!” I yell. “Eri, what's wrong?!”

Slowly, Eri lifts her head from her knees and stares at the wall in front of her in a daze. What happened to her?! Why is she acting so strange? I tighten the grip on her shoulder and shake her.

“Eri snap out of it!”

She turns to me and blinks. Eri's face is wet with tears and her eyes are red and puffy. She looks like she hasn't slept and the color from her face is gone. Is she sick?!

“A-Ai-chan?” Eri whimpers.

I nod. Then before I can tell what happened I'm hurled across the room. My back hits the wall and I let out a small cry of pain, feeling completely disoriented. Did Eri just push me?!

I struggle to move, but the pain is too much so I sit against the wall, trying to recover. Eri stands up and walks over to me and I feel fear enter me again. What happened to her?! T-This isn't the Eri I know. When was she so strong?!

“E-Eri what are you doing?!” I yelp.

“Ai-chan left Eri! Ai-chan hurt Eri!!” Eri yells, then bends down to my eye level. “Why was Ai-chan so mean?” Eri starts to cry again. “D-doesn't Ai-chan love Eri? Did Ai-chan stop loving Eri? What did Eri do wrong?!”

“I-I'm sorry! I shouldn't have treated you the way I did Eri! I didn't mean to hurt you. J-just please don't hurt me!!” I beg, covering my face with my hands.

Instead of expecting another painful blow like the one before I hear whimpering and then feel licking against my neck. I slowly put my hands down, surprised at Eri's sudden mood change. She starts to nuzzle into my neck, asking for affection and fearfully I pat the back of her head.

I rather have Eri cuddle me than hurt me. It feels right. I exhale slowly, feeling a lot more relieved that Eri is no longer hostile and relaxed.

“E-Eri's sorry!” Eri cries. “I-I didn't know how to control myself. Eri got so mad! Ai-chan hurt Eri a-and Eri didn't know how to react. I-I felt all these strange feelings.”

“It's okay Eri. You're still trying to learn be a human and the emotions you feel are apart of being human.” I explain. “I know you didn't mean to hurt me. I forgive you Eri.”

Eri smiles then hugs me again, and behind her I can see her bushy tail wagging again like it normally does. I'm glad to see her like I normally do. She's back to her cute and cheery self. I don't ever want to see Eri angry or hurt again. It was all my fault.

“Ai-chan...” Eri mumbles.

“Yeah?” I sigh.

“There's a different scent on you.” Eri states. “S-someone touched Ai-chan!!”

“What are you-” Before I can explain anything to Eri she pins my arms against the wall and growls. I stare back at her petrified. I've never heard her growl or show this type of behavior towards me. It's like she's a completely different person. What happened to her?

“Ai-chan is mine!” Eri clarifies. “Ai-chan only loves Eri!”

“Eri what's...” Again I'm cut off, but this time by a pair of lips against mine. I try to move my arms to break free, but Eri's grip is strong.

Eri stops kissing me she pulls away, but our lips can easily meet again from the one inch distances between us. I sit here taken away and breathless. She...Eri just...KISSED ME! Eri stares intensely into my eyes, waiting for my response. She lets go of my hands and I lift one arm to touch my mouth where our lips met.

Eri closes the distance between us and I let out a small gasp in anticipation then lean forward. I press my lips against Eri's and slip my tongue into her mouth. I let out a small moan and grip onto Eri's back. I don't know why I kiss her back. I don't know why I want to kiss her so bad, but for some reason this kiss just feels right.

I can't stop kissing her! I her lips are so soft. I break apart from our kiss with a wet plop and exhale heavily. I take a few deep breaths then kiss Eri's neck. She moans and arches against me, with her hands resting on to my shoulders. I don't know why I let this happen, but I can't stop kissing her.

I like having her this close to me. I enjoy feeling the warmth of her body against my skin and I most certainly enjoy this kiss. Slowly, I lift my arm and place my hand to her cheek to try and somehow bring her closer. Eri gradually backs away, allowing me to let out a heavy sigh and open my eyes.

I blink a few times to remind myself that I'm not dreaming and when I see Eri's loving eyes look back to me curiously I listlessly begin to smile. Eri hugs me, protectively.

“Ai-chan...belongs with me.” Eri mumbles. “Does Ai-chan want to be with Eri too?”

Eri lets me go and tilts her head, waiting for my answer. I look back at her confused and motionless. She wants me...to love her back? But she wants more than a friendship kind of love. Does Eri want us to be more than friends? I-I can't do that! She isn't even human! I probably should have thought of that before I kissed her though. Why did I just give in to my desires?!

“E-Eri I can't...I'm sorry. Whatever...is going on right now...just can't happen.” I stutter.

Eri's expression changes to devastation. I can see her tears start to fill with tears and I feel so guilty. I came here to make amends with her and I ended up breaking her heart again. I put a hand to Eri's shoulder to keep eye contact with her again. She glares at me and pushes my hand off and rushes out the room. I quickly get to my feet and chase after her.

“ERI!” I shout. “I'm sorry I don't mean to hurt you!” I see her head towards the front door. “Where are you going?!” Eri unlocks the door. “Y-you can't go out there!”

Eri turns back to me with a angry look on her face. “I rather be out there than in here!” I run over and close the door shut and put a hand on her arm to pull her back.

“If you go out there you'll have now way of having food or a place to sleep at night! Eri it can be dangerous out there!” I insist.

I hear Eri growl again and she pushes me away, but this time I go flying into something, but I do get knocked off my feet. I cringe and sit up into a sitting position. I can see Eri crying again when she looks down at me. She doesn't really want to go, but she must feel that she has to because of me. The way I reacted is causing her to leave. She doesn't feel wanted in her own home.

“I can't stand to be around Ai-chan and have Ai-chan ignore me!” Eri screamed, wiping away her tears furiously. “Eri doesn't want to be hurt anymore!” Eri starts to cry and falls to her knees, too weak to stand on her own and sobs.

I sit here, staring, unsure on how to comfort her or react. I never knew she had such strong feelings to me. I'm worried that if I do hug her or have some sort of contact with her right now it will mislead her. I don't want to confuse her anymore than I did with that kiss.

But it's strange how that kiss didn't feel like a mistake to me at all and I feel that I should think that, but I don't.  Pushing aside the conflict inside of me, I crawl over to Eri and hug her. She doesn't push me again, but presses into my chest and continues to cry. I hold her and remain silent, giving her the comfort she needs.

I'll never do this again to her. Eri doesn't deserve me to treat her this way. The more I sit here, however, the more I realize that things from now on aren't going to be any easier. What have I gotten myself into?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: fallenxangel24952 on August 22, 2010, 05:13:06 AM
You know....I really like ur story :mon determined:


And I want to know how Aichan gonna deal with Gakisan, Reina and Eri :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: Haruka on August 22, 2010, 06:22:57 AM
No one can resist THE Ai.Chan xD
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 22, 2010, 01:03:21 PM
!!!LOVE PARALLELOGRAM!!!

Reina's intense stare! Risa's sweet cuddling! Eri's comforting kisses! Whatever shall Ai do? It seems that maybe she's already decided. :pimp: Pimp!

But still brings up some questions, like, "What's Reina's deal?" "How long will Gaki deny her feelings?" "And can Eri really be trusted to control her temper around Ai(or Risa and Reina)?"

Poor Ai isn't going to know what's hit her.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: Beecubed on August 27, 2010, 08:14:26 AM
 :w00t:
New chapter!

 :otomerika:

CHAPTER 7

It comes as no surprise to me that Aichan's finding it hard to keep her thoughts off of her puppy back home  :twisted:
It's also natural that she's confused about what's going on, her feelings towards that rather unexpected lick and that kiss that never happened ( :banghead:) and the whole what-is-Eri-and-what-is-she-doing-here dilemma.

Funny, how they're all so inclined to go running to Gaki-san with every little problem.  :lol: Cute too, Gaki-san such a motherly figure.. but in this story, I can't quite hope for TakaGaki too much, not when AiEri is this freaking adorable!


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I knew she wasn't happy about it because she was quiet too and she just sat on the couch slouched over. Her ears her tucked downward and her tail didn't move the whole time we were in the same room together. I wonder if she's home right now, crying.

Isn't Ai-chan the self-proclaimed crybaby? It's nice to have the tables turned and making it puppy Eri instead who's so sensitive  :wub:


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I want to tell her that my odd behavior isn't her fault, but every time I think about being next to her I instantly want to stay away. I honestly...don't want to be home all day. Does this make me seem like I'm some bad person?

Not at all, Ai-chan!
When are you going to see that these conflicting feelings are a result of you having fallen for the puppy?!  :tama-excite:
I'll give you a few more chapters to figure this out for yourself... *rubs hands together gleefully*

Awwww... as much as I'd like her to have her spending time bonding with Sayu & Gaki-san, I want Ai-chan back with Eri right now!
There's no doubt that the puppy is going through some hellish emotions, and she needs constant comforting. We all know how vulnerable she is and the guidance she needs to deal with these human feelings so new to her... I have a feeling that once the night is over and Ai-chan goes home... something bad is going to happen...  :badluck:

 :lol:
Ai-chan daydreaming about Eri again... even if it's about her slobbiness...


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“Reina?!”

 :OMG:

What's Reina's deal? She's not going to try and crash the party is she? Stalk Ai-chan? Well Ai certainly is very wary of her at first (for good reason I'm sure!).


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I feel my heart throb when she smiles. I never noticed how cute her teeth are when she smiles.

I'm not sure what to make of the latter impressions she has... please don't let Ai-chan fall for Reina... >.< that would break Eri!
Acknowledging her cuteness is fine, I mean it is kind of undeniable... but anything more than that...  :frustrated:


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“You can always talk to me when you need someone.”  Reina says.

Try to be more subtle next time you act suspicious...  :tama-mad:


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Gaki-san giggles then shifts so that she's sitting on to my lap then rests her head to my chest. I sit back stiff, staring at her shocked. I didn't expect her to do this. Maybe she's cuddly when she's drunk. Gaki-san lets out a small sigh of contentment and I can feel her cheek rubbing against my chest. This is getting weird.

Well OK, bonus TakaGaki cuddling I don't mind...
 :nya:


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I sit lifeless when Gaki-san says those words because it reminds me just too much of Eri. I can only picture Eri telling me these things with her goofy smile in place. Then I feel guilty again. I left Eri home alone without even calling her to tell her where I am.

Awwwww... that's so sweet.  :heart:
Yes, Ai-chan finally has some sense back into her!  :onioncheer:


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Slowly, I walk through the house, looking over the things that are sprawled across the floor. There are papers, pencils, bits of glass, food, and eating utensils everywhere. Why would she do such a thing?!

Eri showing her true colours  XD
But this part had me really worried  :O

Oh nos, puppy Eri!  :cry:


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Then before I can tell what happened I'm hurled across the room. My back hits the wall and I let out a small cry of pain, feeling completely disoriented.

...

“Ai-chan left Eri! Ai-chan hurt Eri!!” Eri yells, then bends down to my eye level. “Why was Ai-chan so mean?” Eri starts to cry again. “D-doesn't Ai-chan love Eri? Did Ai-chan stop loving Eri? What did Eri do wrong?!”

 :dizzy: :shock: :stunned:

Whoa! Eri almost sounds like a superhuman bot or something here... it's kind of  :inlove:
Compared to her usual cutesy self, of course...


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Instead of expecting another painful blow like the one before I hear whimpering and then feel licking against my neck. I slowly put my hands down, surprised at Eri's sudden mood change. She starts to nuzzle into my neck, asking for affection and fearfully I pat the back of her head. Strangely.

...

Eri smiles then hugs me again, and behind her I can see her bushy tail wagging again like it normally does.

 :luvluv2:
I can't get enough of puppy Eri. She is TOO CUTE FOR WORDS!  :bow: :bow: :bow:


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“There's a different scent on you.” Eri states. “S-someone touched Ai-chan!!”

“What are you-” Before I can explain anything to Eri she pins my arms against the wall and growls. I stare back at her petrified. I've never heard her growl or show this type of behavior towards me. It's like she's a completely different person. What happened to her?

“Ai-chan is mine!” Eri clarifies. “Ai-chan only loves Eri!”

 :stoned:
Whoa at the complete 360 change in mood again... mad Eri is pretty scary, isn't she?  :shocked
But Eri picked up the scent of someone else her own kind? Wait, no she must've picked up Gaki-san's scent? Uh oh... the next time Eri sees Gaki I don't think it's going to run as smoothly...


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THE KISS!

:mon blood:

WOW.

I guess I should've seen that coming... but didn't make it any less awesome. AiEri KISS  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
The temperature has gone up a few notches, hohohooo..

Eri wants to have a relationship with a human? Does she understand how this all works? It's so cute of her to be the one break away and pose that to Ai-chan..  :love:
It's all good and dandy to have this happening, but you still have a few questions to answer, Junkie..  :sweatdrop:
E.G What's ERI DOING HERE AND WHAT ON EARTH IS SHE?! Does she really have the time to enter a relationship with someone? I guess if you come into the care of someone as beautiful as Ai-chan, you'd be insane not to try to start something  :nervous

But here comes the drama! I'm all for it~!
Ai-chan going to have to make a decision now... she's obviously got the hots for Eri too, with her not being able to stop kissing the puppy and all...

Want I want to see:

- Superhuman battle between Kitty Reina and Puppy Eri  :twisted:
- Ai accept Eri as a lover
- Lots more fluff moments between AiEri, interspersed with cute puppy antics ^___^

 :hee:
 
Onegaishimasu!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING.
Looking forward to the next delicious chapter.  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: rokun on August 28, 2010, 01:27:40 AM
*bows to Beecubed's comment epic-ness*

Want I want to see:

- Superhuman battle between Kitty Reina and Puppy Eri  :twisted:
- Ai accept Eri as a lover
- Lots more fluff moments between AiEri, interspersed with cute puppy antics ^___^

 :hee:
 
Onegaishimasu!

THIS. XD
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: writerjunkie on August 29, 2010, 12:04:19 AM
@ fallenxangel- I'm glad you enjoy my fic. ^__^ You'll just have to see how Ai will deal with Eri, Risa, and Reina though just like everyone else IF Ai does deal with them that is.

@ rnd- XD Yes, a love parallelogram! That's what I said to my friend on msn although I called it a love square. There's still one more person to add, but you'll find out who later on in the fic. As for Reina, well you'll know soon enough what's going on with her. I can't tell you about Risa either, because I like to keep my readers curious. ^_^

@ Haruka- Yes, no one can resist Ai!!  :lol:

@ Beecubed- Such a long comment!! lol I like it though. ^__^ I enjoy reading your comments they always make me smile and laugh. And because of this comment, I chose to try and write another chapter of PL even though it's difficult for me to write and update it. I surprisingly got far. O.O I'm close to writing an end to the next chapter. I hope to have another chapter up soon, but I don't know if it will answer any of your questions or grant your wishes to what you want to see happen with Ai and Eri. hehe Thanks for your comment it motivated me! ^___^

@ Rokun- lol Do you second this?! XD
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: writerjunkie on September 15, 2010, 11:32:48 PM
CHAPTER 8

I've decided to wake up earlier today, but I plan to do it a little different this time. I don't know if it will make a difference, but I will leave a note for Eri. I don't want her to think I'm abandoning her. I've decided to do this because I figured it would be better for me to leave the house so that we can both reflect about what happened last night. I think it's best Eri and I stay apart for today, but I will call her so that it won't feel I'll never return.

I know how having me leave without a word really gets to Eri. I'm worried that if she sees I left again with no word she'll hurt herself next. I have no idea what's going on with her and I will ask her about the sudden rage she went through at a later time. At this very moment, however, we both need our space and I'm more than happy to grant it. Finishing my make-up and checking my hair I walk out the bathroom to get my purse. I decide though to go back to my bedroom to check on Eri one last time.

She's still asleep and she should be because she cried so much last night. I'm sure that emotionally drained her. I frown, remembering back to her crying as I held her. She had to be crying for at least two hours and probably more. I frown at the sad memory and enter the room noticing that she had kicked the blanket off her and started to shiver. I guess doing that is better than having her hog the covers when I sleep next to her at night.

Grabbing the covers, I carefully pull the blanket over Eri's legs and up to her chest. She lets out a comforting sigh then stops shaking. I smile at how cute she looks laying comfortably on my bed. Eri is so happy here and I make her happier. Without thinking, I bend down and place a delicate kiss to her forehead.

“Ai-chan?”

I feel my heart nearly burst out of my chest when I hear Eri's voice. She's supposed to be sleeping!! I take a quick step back and look down into soft brown eyes. Eri looks up at me and rubs her eyes before sitting up.

“Where is Ai-chan going?” Eri questions. “Ai-chan is leaving early again?”

“I'm sorry I-I didn't mean to wake you. I'm leaving because I...have to head to work early!” I lie. “I left a note for you. Please don't be angry Eri!”

Eri stares at me with a blank look then scratches the back of her head. “If Ai-chan has to leave why did Ai-chan come back here?”

Is she trying to embarrass me and rub it in my face that I had a moment of weakness?! Wait...does she even know that I kissed her? She wasn't even asleep was she?! I really have no time to worry about that I have to go. I now know Eri isn't angry so I can leave.

“I...I have to leave! I left food for you Eri and when I come back you'll help me clean up your mess.” I instruct, dashing towards the open room door. Eri grabs on to my wrist and yanks me back.

“Ai-chan!!” Eri calls. I slowly turn around, feeling tense once again. “If Ai-chan wanted to kiss Eri, Ai-chan should have kissed Eri here.” She points to her lips.

I gulp. “Eri...no, I-I can't.” I stutter. Does she have any idea how hearing her say that is killing me?! “Now stop bothering me with your nonsense I have to go.” I walk to the door, but Eri's hand remains on my wrist. “Eri let me go!”

Eri looks at me with a mysterious twinkle in her eyes and before I know it I'm pulled on the bed and pinned on my back. Eri sits on top of me to keep me in place. I look up at her shocked how quick she was able to get me down. She takes my hands and puts them to her thighs and sighs. Eri smiles and goes down to press her nose against my neck and takes a deep breath.

“Ai-chan smells so much better.” Eri giggles. “That awful scent is gone.”

Eri cuddles against me, making my body slowly start to turn hot. “I...took a shower today.” I choke.

Eri runs her nose against my collar bone. She starts to smell me everywhere and it's kind of weird having her smell me like this. What is she doing?

“Ai-chan...” Eri whispers, running a finger along my collar bone. “Somehow...you still smell different.”

Eri starts to sniff me again, but she moves down my body, eager to find what she's picking up. If things haven't gotten weird they are now! This whole thing is just becoming awkward!! Eri settles between my legs and my whole face turns hot when I see her push my legs apart. Does she even know what she's doing and how embarrassing this is becoming?! I put a hand to my face and look away.

“Eri stop it!” I cry, trying to close my legs, but Eri forcefully pushes them apart. “Eri this...this is so embarrassing! Get away from there!”

I close my eyes tight and bite my bottom lip to hold back my moans. I don't want Eri to know that I'm enjoying this and I don't want her to see how turned on I am from having her straddle me. She ignore me though and begins to pull down my zipper and quickly pop open the button next. I feel my pants get pulled down to my knees and whimper. She can see my underwear! That isn't what bothers me though it's because Eri can probably see how soaked my underwear is and that bothers me.

Eri's hands clamp around my thighs and I hear the bed creak as she moves closer to me. I slowly open my eyes and let out a small gasp when I see Eri's face above my underwear. Her nose is twitching. She probably smells how turned on I am! Is her nose that good?! Eri looks at me, her mouth slightly parted as she pants.

“The smell...is so much stronger...here.” Eri moans, going back to take in my smell.

I have to stop her! I can't stand it anymore! I'm probably as red as a strawberry. I'm completely ashamed!

“Eri stop this...” I let out a sharp yell when I feel Eri's tongue lick against my underwear.

I push her away and fall off my bed and land on my face. I quickly get up to my feet and tug up my pants. I can't be in here anymore! I have to leave! I'm sorry Eri.

I just can't do whatever this is and I can't give her what she wants. When my pants are button up I race towards the door. I don't look back when I leave the room and get outside, speed walking to my job. I'm sure this is another bad response, but I just had to leave. I will call Eri later so she won't be as sad.

I don't want a repeat of last night. Who knows what Eri can do to me if she gets lost in her own rage. I'm safer going to work at this moment.

 ***

“Good morning Ai-chan!!”

I let out a small yell and turn around. I thought I was the only one who came to work early. I close my locker and and sigh.

“Reina you scared me!” I chuckle, sheepishly. “What are you doing here early?”

“I figured you would be here early. I need to talk to you.” Reina explained timidly.

I've never seen her become shy. She's usually so tough and serious filled with confidence. Something must be bothering her that much if it's changed her behavior. I turn around, giving her full attention.

“What's wrong?” I ask.

Reina rubs the back of her head and looks down to her feet. I walk over to her and put a hand on her arm for comfort. I'm really worried. Reina has never shown this side of herself to me or to anyone. I should try and help her as her senpai.

“Reina?” I question again. She looks up at me with a stern face.

Reina opens her mouth, but remains quiet and looks back down again. “It's nothing. I need to get ready for work.” She walks past me, but I quickly get a hold of her wrist.

“You can trust me. I'm your senpai. I want to help you.” I proclaim. Reina looks at me at a loss for words for me caring about her. She's probably lived a life where no one showed any care for her. I feel bad for her.

Without thinking, I pull her into a hug. I feel Reina go stiff against me and that makes me hug her a little tighter as if trying to bring her out of the daze she went in. After waiting a few minutes, her body is more relaxed and she hugs me back. I let her go and look at her with a warm smile in place.

Reina still has that lost expression on her face. I start to smile. Reina looks cute even when she's surprised. I feel slim fingers on my chin and trace my mouth. I go stiff now and gulp. This is happening again?!

Seriously?! And like before, I can't move! I can't talk either! It's as if looking into Reina's eyes put some type of trance on me.

“Ai-chan...you're so kind.” Reina whispers. “How can anyone not like you?”

De ja veau all over again! This can not be happening! I can't let Reina kiss me. She can't kiss me! Just...no, not going to happen!

“W-wait...Reina!” I interrupt, before she leans in to close the small distance between us. “Y-you can't do this.”

Reina lifts an eyebrow unhappy about my protest. “And why not?”

I feel myself start to sweat. Please just...someone come in here and stop this before it gets out of hand!

“B-because you're my co-worker! A-and I'm supposed to set a good example as leader.” I stutter. “I-It would be best if you could just...not kiss me and step away.”

Reina grins. What does that mean?! I don't like that grin! What is she up to? Reina's hand strokes the side of my face and her other arm wraps around my waist.

This is wrong! I want to leave but...it's like my feet are stuck to the ground. Reina moves forward and I turn my head to the side she won't kiss me. I nearly melt though when I feel her kiss my neck.

“I don't know...Ai-chan...you're all flustered.” Reina chuckles. “Are you enjoying this?” I shake my head. “Ai-chan...I like you...a lot. I never got the chance to show you or tell you my feelings since I got here. I'm not very good with showing my emotions, but I want to be with you.”

Why is it that every new girl I come across they end up wanting to get into my pants?! This is so not fair! I close my eyes finally accepting Reina's demands. What else can I do? Reina laughs at my surrender and proceeds to kiss me like planned. Eri...I'm sorry.

Please don't be angry with me. The locker room door opens and I quickly rip myself away from Reina's arm in an instant.

“Ai-chan?”

All the color from my skin leaves when I see who's enter the room. When I said I wanted someone to come in and help me I didn't mean this person!

“G-Gaki-san!!” I yelp. “I-I...we...this isn't...” I should probably remain quiet now.

“Come with me Ai-chan.” Gaki-san instructs.

She sounds so angry when she says that. I'm in trouble. I guess Gaki-san saw everything didn't she? I'm in so much trouble!! We walk into the girls bathroom and Gaki-san locks the door.

She must be really angry if she's bringing me here and locking us in. I lean against the sink to prepare for the outburst that's about to come.

“What were you thinking?!” Gaki-san shouts. “Reina is your co-worker! What type of example are you setting to the girls by dating her?!”

“We aren't dating Gaki-san!” I correct. I can see a small fraction of Gaki-san's angry go away from my correction.

“Then what were you doing with her Ai-chan?! Friends don't get that close to each other!” Gaki-san demanded.

“I told you we aren't dating! We aren't anything! Reina is just my friend.” I exclaim. Gaki-san lets out a small laugh and shakes her head.

“What a friend that just wants to make out with you?” she snaps.

“She wanted to kiss me, Gaki-san! I was trying to get away!” I defend. She's really starting to piss me off. Why can't she believe me? Why is she acting this way? Who cares who I kiss! It's my choice.

“It didn't look like you were trying very hard to get away form her, Ai-chan.” Gaki-san sneers, glaring at me with disappointment.

I don't need any of this! Gaki-san isn't my mother! I can do what I want. I don't need her help or her guidance when it comes to something like kissing someone! Is she trying to keep me on a short leash? What type of best friend is she?!

“What I did or didn't do is none of your business Gaki-san! I can date whoever I want and I can kiss whoever I want too! I'm not a little girl! Just do me a favor and get out of my way Gaki-san! You're always trying to hold me back.” I scream, making Gaki-san take a few steps back in shock. “I'm done talking to you about this Gaki-san. Go mind your own damn business!”

I storm out the bathroom completely heated. I don't need another person to deal with! I have too much going on with Eri and now Reina and Gaki-san...what is going on with her?! I've never seen her react this way about anything I did. Sure, she's scolded me a bunch of times and corrected my mistakes.

Those were small things compared to how she reacted now when Reina almost kissed me. It doesn't matter though. I need to just start my shift and get it over with. I know that being around Gaki-san now is going to be awkward.

 ***

I'm more than happy to finally be out of this cafe! Ever since my encounter with Reina and Gaki-san everything between my workers has been very strange. The tension was really thick and in a very bad way. I'm sure Gaki-san told Linlin and Sayu what happened and now they probably aren't going to talk with me. I really can care less however, because I have too much to be worry about  instead of Gaki-san trying to get everyone on her side.

If Linlin and Sayu really are my friends though they will come to me to listen to my side of the story, but that can be unclear depending on what Gaki-san said to them to brain wash them. It doesn't matter though all I want to do is just get home and see how Eri's handling her emotions at home since I left so quickly after our...I don't even know what to call that event. It just got a little too...sexual this morning. I grab my purse from my locker and close my locker then nearly catch a heart attack.

“R-Reina what are you doing here?!” I gasp, placing a hand to my pounding heart. “Can you not sneak up on me like that!?” Reina takes a step forward and I take a big leap back, causing me slam my back into my locker.

“Ai-chan, are you okay?” Reina questions, putting on another cute expression.

I close my eyes and push her away. Maybe if I don't look it'll make this whole situation better.

“I'm fine! I'M FINE!!” I yell. “I uh...I really have to go Reina. I'll talk to you another time, bye!”

I run out of the locker room and head to the front. I better leave before something worse happens! I locate the entrance door and quickly exit. I feel more relaxed when I'm outside and fish out my cellphone to give Eri another call.

She's more relaxed when I call her a few times during the day to let her know I'll be home soon. I put my phone to my ear and wait for a few rings, during the third ring it gets picked up.

“Hello? Eri, it's Ai. I just wanted to let you know I'm...”

“AI-CHAN?!” Eri shouts.

I pull the phone away a few inches and rub my throbbing ear. “Eri, how many times do I have to tell you!? There is no need to scream into a phone I can hear you fine when you speak normally!” I complain.

“Oh...sorry!” Eri yells again.

I cringe. “Eri you're doing it again!” I sigh. “I just called you to let you know I'm on my way home now. I'll see you there.” I hang up before Eri decides to yell some more into my ringing ear. She sounds a lot happier today. I'm not sure if that should be a good thing or a bad thing.

“Ah, Takahashi-san!!”

Before I can get a chance to turn around, I feel a arm hang around my shoulder. I know that greeting anywhere.

“Hi Linlin!” I reply, turning to my left. “Are you going home too?”

“Well...I was until I found you.” Linlin answers. What does she mean by that? “Takahashi-san...”

She isn't going to ask me what I think she is, is she? I really hope not! I think right now would be a bad time!

Linlin looks down at her hands, bashfully and pouts. “I um...I noticed that you and I haven't spend time together like you do with Niigaki-san or Michishige-san and I was wondering...if we can hang out today! I know this restaurant that serves really good meat!” she rants.

“I'm sorry Linlin, but today isn't the right time. I have a few things to do at home. We can try tomorrow though.” I regretfully, deny.

I feel bad letting her down, but I feel even worse when I see the look of disappointment in her eyes. Linlin wants to feel like she fits in.

“I-Is it because Niigaki-san is angry at you? I-I can talk to her if you want Takahashi-san!” Linlin exclaimed. “I hate to see my friends fight!”

Gaki-san is angry at me? For what?! I did nothing wrong other than tell her for once to mind her own business! Gaki-san is starting to annoy me! I control my anger because I don't want to take any of it on Linlin. She has nothing to do with my problem. I sigh and put a hand to Linin's shoulder to calm her.

“Linlin, please, don't worry about what Gaki-san and I are going through. I'll fix whatever is happening. You shouldn't have worry about me either.” I assure. “I've just been having these problems with the puppy at home.”

Linlin perks up at the mention of a dog. “A puppy?! Can I see come over to see it?!” she begs.

“You can come over another time I promise. The puppy made a big mess at home a few days ago and I still haven't cleaned it all.” I reply, hoping to not crush her hopes again.

“Okay, I understand, Takahashi-san.” Linlin agrees. “I look forward to coming over soon! You promise to show me the puppy, right?”

I smile. “Yes, of course! I'll see you tomorrow, Linlin. Goodnight!” I wave goodbye and hurry home.

I really have to wonder though just what have the other girls heard from Gaki-san about our fight. It still bothers me. It doesn't matter anymore because now I'm home and I don't want Eri to worry about my problems at work. I unlock the front door and step inside. When I get to the kitchen I'm shocked to see that everything is clean.

There isn't a single piece of garbage anywhere. Did...Eri clean all this while I was gone?  I place my bag down and look around me still surprised to see everything in perfect order again.

“Eri?!” I yell.

The door to my room opens and I see Eri racing down the hall to reach me. I curl up in fear that she might slam me to the ground at the speed she's going.

“Eri don't crash into me!!” I cry. I close my eyes waiting for her to tackle me, but instead I feel her warm arms around me.

“AI-CHAN~!!” Eri jeered, rubbing her cheek against mine. “Eri is so glad Ai-chan is home!”

Just before I think I'm about to pass out from her bone crushing hug, Eri lets go and I desperately start to collect air to my lungs again. I never realized how strong she is. “Did Ai-chan see?!” I rub my throat and look at her.

“You mean the lack of mess?” I question, she nods with a goofy smile in place.

“Eri cleaned everything for Ai-chan!! Eri was sorry about making a mess before so Eri cleaned it for Ai-chan. Does Ai-chan like it?” Eri told me, with a proud smile in place.

“Of course, I like it Eri. Thank you for cleaning up while I was away.” I smile back at her to quash her worries.

I can see it makes her happy because her smile is bigger and I can see her tail thrashing around a bunch of times. She's still so cute. I have to admit, coming home to her even if she causes some trouble makes me happy. It means I don't have to come home to an empty home like I usually do.

“Want to see what else Eri did?!” Eri implies. Seeing that she's cleaned up her own mess, I'm going to assume that her next surprise is a good thing.

“Yes.” I answer, confidently.

Eri takes a step back, stands up straight, and right before my eyes I watch her ears disappearing and finally her bushy curled tail. I nearly have a heart attack when I see the last of the K-9 parts finish Eri's human form. I thought she couldn't do that! I stand stiff, speechless.

“I was practicing! Eri wanted so badly to go outside with Ai-chan. Does this mean Ai-chan will take Eri to a restaurant now?” Eri looks at me with hopeful eyes. Now how can I let her down!? I've already done that to Linlin. Eri tilts her head, waiting for my answer. I can see her starting to pout. She's going to cry?! I guess this leaves me with no choice then.

“Yes, I'll take you Eri. When I have another day off I'll take you somewhere nice.” I accede.

Eri lets out a yelp of joy and claps her hands with excitement. She wraps her arms around my neck and kisses me on the cheek. I feel my whole face turn hot when she kisses me. I can't stop thinking about what happened this morning. I quickly wiggle my way out of Eri's arms and stare to the ground.

“Ai-chan...”

“No it's nothing!” I instantly reply. “I um...I'm going to take a bath. Work today was very stressful.”

The second I say those words I see her start to tear. No, don't become a crybaby when I've had too much going on today. I sigh and put a hand to her face to try and calm her. Eri sniffles and looks at me with tears in her eyes.

“D-does Ai-chan hate me...because of what happened this morning?” Eri rubs her tears away. “Eri's sorry. B-but...I couldn't hide it from Ai-chan anymore. Eri does love Ai-chan.” I feel something inside me twist and turn. Is it guilt? Why would I be feeling guilty? “I know now though...that Ai-chan can't love Eri, but...it's okay if Ai-chan doesn't love me. Eri will continue to love Ai-chan no matter what.”

She would wait for me? Even if I will probably never love Eri? Why would she do such a thing?! I feel even worse.

“Eri please don't...”

I stumble back when I feel Eri's lips against my own. I didn't expect her to make such a bold move. Eri puts both her hands around my neck to hold me in place as I continue to walk back and fall onto the couch. No, not this again!! I'm not going to let her control me again! With all my strength, I shove Eri off and watch her fall to the ground.

“Stop it Eri!!!” I scream, seeing that she flinched. “What are you doing?! Why are you doing this?”

Eri's head goes down in a submissive form and whimpers.

“Eri...loves Ai-chan.” she whispers. “And...Eri will do anything to receive Ai-chan's love in return.”
She continues to stare at her hands. I can't tell if she does that because she's too ashamed or too angry to look me in the eye. This sort of makes me scared. She might suddenly explode again and attack me. I take a inch back from her, feeling my back sink into the couch.

“You can't force me to love you Eri!” I scold. “But...how can I love you? That night when you were angry you were so strong. You hurt me Eri! I...I'm scared of you. How can I love someone that I don't even know who they are or what they're capable of?”

Eri looks up with panic in her eyes. She comes over and puts her head against my lap to try and hug me. I sit stiff as she holds me not sure how to interpret this. She says she loves me, but when she pushed me she hurt me more than once. Eri was also just too aggressive and rough. How can THAT be love?

“I'm sorry! I'm sorry!!” Eri wails. “I...never meant to hurt Ai-chan. Please...Ai-chan don't be afraid of me. Eri wants to protect Ai-chan and be loved by Ai-chan too. Does Ai-chan not trust Eri?”

My hands turn into tight fist at the mention of trust and I look to the side. Trust? How can I trust someone that doesn't even tell me what they are? Yet...I'm willing to do anything to care for her. Eri picks her head up from my lap and stares at me.

“Ai-chan doesn't...” Eri begins to cry. I look back at her.

“Eri...how can I trust you if you haven't told me anything about you?” I whisper, realizing my mistake to easily take her in. “W-what are you? How did you get here? Why are you here?! There are so many questions, but you want to avoid them all.”

Eri bites her bottom lip and looks down to my still hands beside me. She takes a hold of both my hands and moves them so that they rest on my lap. The second I feel her palms curl around the back of my hands they start to open again.

“Ai-chan wants to know everything?” Eri questions. I nod. “Then Eri will tell Ai-chan everything.”
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 9/15)
Post by: Swtme03 on September 16, 2010, 08:13:35 AM
AGH!!  :shocked

I think Aichan accidentally let Eri watch all the pervy dramas without noticing  :nervous

I too want to know everything about Eri  :hehehe:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 9/15)
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 16, 2010, 06:59:56 PM
Damn! That beginning was hot and totally unexpected. Poor Ai, she's so frazzled with everyone and she finally snapped at Risa. She da pimp :pimp: :lol: And now? She's convinced Eri to tell her everything!? *grips monitor and stares into screen* Can't wait! Answers!
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 8/21)
Post by: Beecubed on September 20, 2010, 03:21:44 PM
:heart: :shakeit: :shakeit: :shakeit: :heart:

This was one AWESOME chapter for several reasons (as you can probably guess by now, junkie-chan...)  :nervous

I hope you don't lose the motivation to continue writing AiEri after AiEri chapter.  :love: And after talking with you and realising your possible intent for this couple, I hope you make the right choices! (Which means please don't break puppy Eri's heart!  :cry:)


CHAPTER 8:


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I figured it would be better for me to leave the house so that we can both reflect about what happened last night.

What? The more Ai is going to think about that DAMN HOT KISS she shared with Eri, I can only imagine the more she's going to want it.  :grin:
It's undeniable that they have something going on between them. Deep down, Ai desires Eri just as much as the puppy does her. I bet.

It's only that Ai understands the gravity of their circumstances and that it's probably for the best that she doesn't get too involved with Eri on any level. The puppy is just really too childish and oblivious to things to grasp that. She only sees Ai and wants Ai.  :nervous


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Grabbing the covers, I carefully pull the blanket over Eri's legs and up to her chest. She lets out a comforting sigh then stops shaking. I smile at how cute she looks laying comfortably on my bed. Eri is so happy here and I make her happier. Without thinking, I bend down and place a delicate kiss to her forehead.

 :mon inluv:

If only Ai would allow herself to express those feelings freely, always.

I am also of the opinion that Eri was awake and knew that Ai had kissed her.  :w00t:


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“Ai-chan!!” Eri calls. I slowly turn around, feeling tense once again. “If Ai-chan wanted to kiss Eri, Ai-chan should have kissed Eri here.” She points to her lips.

Oh Eri...

:shy2:

If I were Ai, I'd be all  :on slopkiss:
The girl must have a lot of willpower not to have done that on pure impulse. How can you resist puppy Eri saying something like that?!  :wub:


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Eri looks at me with a mysterious twinkle in her eyes and before I know it I'm pulled on the bed and pinned on my back. Eri sits on top of me to keep me in place. I look up at her shocked how quick she was able to get me down. She takes my hands and puts them to her thighs and sighs. Eri smiles and goes down to press her nose against my neck and takes a deep breath.

:OMG:

:dizzy:

YATTA! for puppy antics! This is so what a pet dog would do affectionately  :yep:
And only because we're not just talking any puppy here, the thought is oh so hot... I think Eri has absolutely NO idea how much she affects Ai-chan with all this playfulness!  :twisted:


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“Ai-chan...” Eri whispers, running a finger along my collar bone. “Somehow...you still smell different.”

It was at this point that I literally had to take a break from reading (and calm down before I exploded in front of a room of studying uni students)  :nervous

I instantly knew what Eri was referring to... after all, wouldn't YOU be turned on to have Eri pressed on top of you like that while running her nose along your skin?  :drool:

So yeah. She was picking up Ai's heat. And that simple thought made me turn to mush.  :fap


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Eri starts to sniff me again, but she moves down my body, eager to find what she's picking up. If things haven't gotten weird they are now! This whole thing is just becoming awkward!! Eri settles between my legs and my whole face turns hot when I see her push my legs apart. Does she even know what she's doing and how embarrassing this is becoming?! I put a hand to my face and look away.

 :imdead:


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I close my eyes tight and bite my bottom lip to hold back my moans. I don't want Eri to know that I'm enjoying this and I don't want her to see how turned on I am from having her straddle me.


 :on_hot:

Ai-chan, stop being so uptight about the fact that she's some kind of weird alien puppy and go with the flow...  :lol:


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She ignore me though and begins to pull down my zipper and quickly pop open the button next. I feel my pants get pulled down to my knees and whimper. She can see my underwear! That isn't what bothers me though it's because Eri can probably see how soaked my underwear is and that bothers me.

 :imdead:

Yeah, I died many times reading this first part. It's so hawwwwwwwt...  :bow:

I'm also constantly wondering that while doing all this, does Eri have ANY idea what she's doing? How it's affecting Ai? I'm sure Eri's getting hot herself, but I'm a little unclear about her feelings/knowledge/experience about this whole thing. Or is she really a dog and sexuality is an innate thing that she doesn't even have to think about? xD


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Eri's hands clamp around my thighs and I hear the bed creak as she moves closer to me. I slowly open my eyes and let out a small gasp when I see Eri's face above my underwear. Her nose is twitching. She probably smells how turned on I am! Is her nose that good?! Eri looks at me, her mouth slightly parted as she pants.

“The smell...is so much stronger...here.” Eri moans, going back to take in my smell.

Yeah, OF COURSE Eri's nose is that good. She's a puppy, or haven't you noticed, Ai-chan?  :thumbsup

But holy crap, this was a really good moment to imagine  :w00t: :drool: :oops:


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“Eri stop this...” I let out a sharp yell when I feel Eri's tongue lick against my underwear.

:mon spit:

To be honest, I didn't expect it to go that far... I would've thought (with Ai's continual internal struggle even with the mere thought of liking Eri) that Ai would've pushed her away a bit earlier than this... the fact that she waited for a lick to do something... 

:mon bleed2:


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I just can't do whatever this is and I can't give her what she wants. When my pants are button up I race towards the door. I don't look back when I leave the room and get outside, speed walking to my job. I'm sure this is another bad response, but I just had to leave. I will call Eri later so she won't be as sad.

.....I'm safer going to work at this moment.

DAMN. This first part really had me going  :nervous

I wasn't expecting it to be that  :drool:  :shocked:, and I'm certainly hoping for more delicious AiEri moments like this. So please junkie-chan, don't just leave it at that. I want moar.

Oh, and Ai-chan's just going to run off to work like that? Isn't she still pretty flustered? .....
:twisted:




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“You can trust me. I'm your senpai. I want to help you.” I proclaim.

...

Without thinking, I pull her into a hug. I feel Reina go stiff against me and that makes me hug her a little tighter as if trying to bring her out of the daze she went in. After waiting a few minutes, her body is more relaxed and she hugs me back. I let her go and look at her with a warm smile in place.

I'm sorry, but that was a little fast...  :mon sweat:

I was still under the impression that Ai didn't like Reina all too much, and that Reina was still acting rather cool and aloof about everything. I never saw them develop further than that (except maybe in the last chapter when Ai began to have Reina-is-cute thoughts...).

So this was a little abrupt for me, to be honest...


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Reina grins. What does that mean?! I don't like that grin! What is she up to? Reina's hand strokes the side of my face and her other arm wraps around my waist.

This is wrong! I want to leave but...it's like my feet are stuck to the ground. Reina moves forward and I turn my head to the side she won't kiss me. I nearly melt though when I feel her kiss my neck.

 :frustrated:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

Please, no kissing! What the heck is going on?! Is this all part of some master plan of Reina's? To get closer to Ai, and subsequently Eri?
I just don't see her falling for Ai that quickly.


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Why is it that every new girl I come across they end up wanting to get into my pants?! This is so not fair! I close my eyes finally accepting Reina's demands. What else can I do? Reina laughs at my surrender and proceeds to kiss me like planned. Eri...I'm sorry.

Yeah, it really isn't fair to be as hot as Ai-chan, hey? xD

What else can you do? Well for a start, you can fend Reina off like you did Eri earlier in the morning when she was on top of you. Hmph. I mean, it should be a lot easier avoiding a kiss than avoiding a superhuman-strong puppy clamped to you.  :lol:

And the fact that Ai-chan mentally apologised to Eri like that, it says a lot.


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*whole squabble between TakaGaki*


OK, so for the first time in the story, I'm kind of put off by both Gaki-san and Ai-chan. Gaki was certainly overreacting, though we all can probably make guesses as to why (she likes Ai-chan and if Ai-chan can give friendly kisses to Reina, why not her too?).

Ai-chan too, biting back pretty harshly. I guess she's just kind of stressed about everything. Everything's happening pretty quickly, and she's just trying to catch up with it all and make sense of it. But still, I didn't like how either of them reacted in this scene...  :smhid


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Linlin perks up at the mention of a dog. “A puppy?! Can I see come over to see it?!” she begs.

“You can come over another time I promise. The puppy made a big mess at home a few days ago and I still haven't cleaned it all.” I reply, hoping to not crush her hopes again.

“Okay, I understand, Takahashi-san.” Linlin agrees. “I look forward to coming over soon! You promise to show me the puppy, right?”

Uh-oh.

Why did Ai-chan make a promise that easily? What is she thinking? Now she's really going to have to show Lin Lin puppy Eri!...  :roll:



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“Eri don't crash into me!!” I cry. I close my eyes waiting for her to tackle me, but instead I feel her warm arms around me.

“AI-CHAN~!!” Eri jeered, rubbing her cheek against mine. “Eri is so glad Ai-chan is home!”

Just before I think I'm about to pass out from her bone crushing hug, Eri lets go and I desperately start to collect air to my lungs again. I never realized how strong she is. “Did Ai-chan see?!” I rub my throat and look at her.

“You mean the lack of mess?” I question, she nods with a goofy smile in place.

“Eri cleaned everything for Ai-chan!! Eri was sorry about making a mess before so Eri cleaned it for Ai-chan. Does Ai-chan like it?” Eri told me, with a proud smile in place.

 :mon lovelaff:

Her innocent self like this is too gorgeous. Contrast that with lustful Eri and.. and.. and..  :oops:
What a character, hey?  :P


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Eri takes a step back, stands up straight, and right before my eyes I watch her ears disappearing and finally her bushy curled tail. I nearly have a heart attack when I see the last of the K-9 parts finish Eri's human form. I thought she couldn't do that! I stand stiff, speechless.

 :shocked

Honto? Wow... you know, I was kinda hoping that Eri could go out in public under the pretense of cosplaying...  XD Her tail and ears are really too cute to imagine! And imagine the hordes of men who would turn heads to keep their eyes on her. ^___^


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“D-does Ai-chan hate me...because of what happened this morning?” Eri rubs her tears away. “Eri's sorry. B-but...I couldn't hide it from Ai-chan anymore. Eri does love Ai-chan.” I feel something inside me twist and turn. Is it guilt? Why would I be feeling guilty? “I know now though...that Ai-chan can't love Eri, but...it's okay if Ai-chan doesn't love me. Eri will continue to love Ai-chan no matter what.”

Why say something like that Eri...

 :cry: :cry: :cry:


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“You can't force me to love you Eri!” I scold. “But...how can I love you? That night when you were angry you were so strong. You hurt me Eri! I...I'm scared of you. How can I love someone that I don't even know who they are or what they're capable of?”

Sure Ai may be a bit cautious because of how Eri had reacted the other day, but still... seems like for the most part Eri gives Ai-chan a lot of happiness and she thinks Eri as very cute and helpless.. I didn't know that Ai would be saying this kind of thing as a way of rejecting Eri's feelings >.<  :thumbdown:


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“Ai-chan wants to know everything?” Eri questions. I nod. “Then Eri will tell Ai-chan everything.”

FINALLY!

Some questions will be answered!  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: Though I really do hope this isn't going to create a rift between the two girls!

Thanks for the chapter, junkie-chan... please continue to write (and enjoy the writing while you're at it!  :D), and I'm going to support this fic no matter what! (yes, even if you break Eri's heart, and my own... lol).

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Can't wait to find out what happens next when Eri spills everything.  :inlove:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 9/15)
Post by: badsaints on September 21, 2010, 08:43:04 AM
Phew that AiEri moment was hot :drool:


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Why is it that every new girl I come across they end up wanting to get into my pants?! This is so not fair!
I really LOL'd at this. Thank God I'm home alone :lol:

I see AiEri, ReinAi, AiGaki & possibly AiLin. Woah Ai is da' woman! XD


p.s. I really really wanna know more about Eri. Please update soon! :D
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 9/15)
Post by: Fushigidane on September 22, 2010, 01:05:55 PM
 :w00t: :drool:
Ai is in sooo much trubbel because of her cute & hot puppy, sexy kitty, cute Linlin and bitchy Gaki-san :lol:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 9/15)
Post by: fallenxangel24952 on September 22, 2010, 06:06:09 PM
Oh Em Gee :stunned: AiEri was just....too much... :mon blood: :mon angel:

Aichan is the  :pimp: wth AiEri, ReinAi, TakaGaki and AiLin :w00t:

and thx for the Update :on GJ:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: writerjunkie on November 24, 2010, 05:35:06 AM
So...it's been a while for this fic. O.O *blinks* I wonder who remembers this or still reads this. o.O I'm sorry for the wait. ^^; I hope this chapter also isn't crap I try real hard on this.

CHAPTER 9

Eri will easily agree to tell me what she's hiding from? I can't really believe that. Since the day I met her she's be secretive about her reason to suddenly showing up here. I'm unsure if I should trust what she says, but it's been stated that there are no questions asked or hesitations to my answers.

She just promised me everything. Eri held the most honest face when she agreed. I suppose that means I should believe her. I sit back in surprise to her quick decision. If Eri is willing to do that then she must really do love me.

I must mean something to her. I start to feel myself frown at that realization and even feel a little sad. I now know how much Eri cares for me, but why can't I figure out what she means to me then? I should easily love her back. At this moment though, I can't worry about my feelings right now. I have to get those questions answered! Putting on a much serious face, I start the conversation again with the first question.

“Why are you here?” I ask.

I can see Eri hesitate to answer and for a few minutes. She doesn't even look into my eyes. It's like she's gathering up her courage to answer or a way to answer me without possibly giving me too much information that might startle me.

“Eri came here...to get away.” Eri softly speaks. “I heard so much about the human world. I wanted to see it one day. When I saw my chance I jumped through the portal and ended up here. Then they found out I was gone and came to get me. I had to hide, but I had nowhere to go or how to get food.”

I slowly start to repeat Eri's words inside my head, properly analyzing what she's just given me to take in. What I'm hearing just doesn't seem real. It's almost as if this is all a fairy tale and I'm almost convinced Eri is crazy, but I just might be crazier for listening to her and believing some of her explanation. There's...a doorway between this world and Eri's?

Am I sleeping because I somehow did drugs image this talk and entered a magical realm?! I dig deeper into the presented information, if there is a doorway, does this mean that more can come? Maybe I can even send Eri back. I doubt she'll agree to return. She seems to like staying here.

“Who's they?” I press further on.

Eri seems even more uncomfortable about this question. It makes me wonder if I should continue to know everything if Eri is scared to tell me. There must be a reason to why it's so difficult to answer these questions. I can't change my mind though. I said I wanted to know everything about Eri and I will get everything! I've already decided that if I'm going to be taking care of her I need to know what I'm getting into.

“The best shape-shifters our leader has. They were sent to capture me. I...broke our golden rule. I was to never cross the line between our world and yours.” Eri looks at me with fearful eyes. “B-but I can't go back!! If I return they'll punish me! I rather die of starvation than go back to that world and face my punishment! Don't make Eri go back Ai-chan!!!”

I stroke the top of Eri's head to sooth her. I've never seen her so stressed out since the last incident we had when Eri was angry. I don't really understand what's going to happen, but it must be something awful. She looks at me with teary eyes. When I stare at her it gives me this odd kind of tingle in my stomach, pity maybe, or concern? All I'm sure of is that I'll never bring Eri back. 

“I won't do such a thing Eri. You're with me now. I'll protect you.” I promise.

Eri doesn't seem to cheer up from my statement. She's even more worried. Why should she be? In this world I can be sure to guide her into good things and steer her from bad influences.

“Ai-chan, doesn't understand! Our people...they can come in any form. Ai-chan can't protect me from what can't be seen.” Eri explains. I notice that her hands are shaking. Why is she so scared? What else is she hiding? Or maybe, I'm asking for too much. Eri would tell me if I did and since she hasn't I think it's safe to carry on with questioning.

“Eri, if it's a rule to not enter that portal why does your world have that door?” I casually ask.

“My kind still need to reproduce like humans. We can't breed with each other though so only a selected few who have gotten permission from our leader can enter the human world, but only to find a human suitable for reproduction.” Eri looked down to the floor in shame. “Sometimes...humans are forced to carry our children.”

How can these things still be considered human? They act so different. Eri's world doesn't sound human. It doesn't sound like earth. Is it a world in outer-space? Are these people aliens? Creatures? Does this mean that Eri is dangerous? Am I not safe around her?

“What are you?” I question.

“I've told you. Eri is a shape-shifter.” Eri replies instantly. “Eri is telling the truth. We only live in a different world because my people know how humans will react if they knew our existence.”

“Then why did you show yourself to me?” I ask.

Eri looks down to the floor and blushes. Now she's shy to tell me everything? It's a little too late for that. She has to finish telling me everything I need to know. She can't leave anything out anymore. I'm done having Eri hiding and avoiding my questions.

“It's because Eri knows Ai-chan is different.” Eri slowly admits. “I don't know how, but when I saw Ai-chan in that alley way I knew I was safe with Ai-chan. Eri knew with Ai-chan Eri was going to be truly loved.”

Eri looks back at me with a bigger blush on her face. I stare at her in shock. When I look into Eri's face I see a different shine behind them. It isn't sadness, but...happiness...and love. She wasn't lying when she said she loved me.

Eri does love me and I think from that light in her eyes she's loved me since that night she saw me. Love at first sight? Is that possible? I haven't yet to experience that! I haven't even experienced love. I'm sure Eri hasn't either, but she acts as if she knows what love is and what it feels like. Aren't I the one who's older than her and should be more experienced and wise?

“Do you love me?” I whisper, watching Eri nod the second I ask. “So you aren't sent here to force me to carry your child are you? Can that even be done?”

“Eri will never do such a thing unless Ai-chan agreed to carry the child.” Eri promises.

“Oh...” I mutter, lost in my thoughts.  Wait a minute... “You can get me pregnant?!” I shout in shock.

Eri smiles and laughs. “Of course it can be done! There's a certain ritual that needs to be performed before it can happen though. The people in Eri's world won't make a big deal about what couple it is that's doing the ritual. We are free to love whoever we want.”

“Are you sure you aren't just an alien?!” I question, getting another laugh from Eri.

“Eri is not an alien. My people are...we're like fairies. We are people except we aren't tiny or have wings. The two things we have in common with fairies are love nature and have magic. Eri lives in a magical world.” Eri clarifies.

I stare at her still confused. I'm not sure if I understand this world or believe it, but Eri seems to be serious when she talks about it. Maybe, she isn't lying? I'm not sure if I should believe her however or just play along with her.

“So...shape-shifter?” I repeat.

“Uh huh.” Eri agrees.

It's too difficult to believe that, yet Eri can prove her ability to change shapes in front of me. Isn't usually seeing is believing? I scratch the back of my head, trying to let all this new found information sink into my head.

No one will believe me if I tell them this. I'll end up in a nuthouse. If Eri is to step outside though, she'll need some sort of background to tell others like a last name for example. There's just one more thing I have to ask though.

“Ai-chan?” Eri curiously calls.

“Hey Eri, if you aren't allowed in this world does that mean people are going to come after you?” I question, carefully watching Eri shift uncomfortably.

“Yes, there are other shape-shifters after me. I don't know who they are, where they are, or what they look like though.” Eri honestly replied.

So...I'm in danger too for hiding her. Is this why Eri didn't want to tell me anything in the first place? She was trying to protect me. She really does love me if she's willing to suffer with something like this alone. Isn't she scared she'll get caught? Eri is always so carefree when I'm around her. It makes me wonder what she really must be feeling inside.

“Are you scared, Eri?” I ask.

“Yes, very much, but Eri isn't scared of what punishment to face. Eri is scared of losing Ai-chan forever.” Eri eyes start to fill with tears. “When Eri is around Ai-chan, Eri is happy. Eri is happiest in this world, with Ai-chan.”

I'm finished asking what I think I need to at this time. I can't deny Eri's feelings towards me don't exist. She's very honest not only with me, but with herself. This makes me wonder, am I really honest with myself also?  I feel sometimes strong surges of emotions when Eri does certain things, but I've had the same feeling when Reina was about to kiss me or when Risa cuddled with me during that time of karaoke. I close my eyes, washing away these confusing thoughts and sigh.

“I think...I should go to bed.” I grumble. “It's been a long day. Goodnight, Eri.”

I get up from the couch and walk into my room, but to my surprise Eri doesn't follow me. She's going to sleep on the couch? Well, as long as she doesn't ask if I love her back, because that's a question I can't even answer to myself.

“Ai-chan trust Eri, right?” Eri calls out, stopping me from walking. “Ai-chan knows Eri will never do any harm. I want to protect Ai-chan.”

 Finding my way into bed, I lay down and sigh when my back hits the comfortable mat, soothing the aches away. All I need is just a good sleep then maybe I can tackle on everything to finally get some answers. I feel my eyes slowly close and in a split second all my thoughts wash away.

 ***

“Good morning Takahashi-san!” Linlin smiles. “Are you okay? You seem tired.”

I let out a big yawn and take a sip of the coffee in my right hand. “I had a rough night. I'm sorry I'm late again.”


“You know, Takahashi-san only the third person to come in today.” Linlin replies.

I stop in my tracks and look around me. There are a bunch of customers in today. The cafe is half full and that's only just now it gets worse near the afternoon. I spot Yoshizawa-san and Ishikawa-san walking around either taking orders or cleaning up after tables when customers left. Who isn't here? I look back at Linlin.

“Who isn't here?” I curiously ask.

“Niigaki-san called in sick today and Tanaka-san hasn't shown up. Yoshizawa-san is really angry.” Linlin informs.

I feel myself cringe when I hear that Gaki-san isn't in. I know that she isn't here because of our fight. I'm not sure if I should be happy about that or not. I think it's best that I don't come and visit her after work either. We just might get into a fight again and as for Reina well...that's so odd. I'm relieved though to know she isn't in today that is until I hear Yoshizawa-san yelling at me.

“Ai-chan, what are you doing just standing there?! You need to get dressed and start taking orders!” Yoshizawa-san screams.

I quickly run into the locker room, not wanting to be a victim to Yoshizawa-san's angry anymore. Linlin scatters to the kitchen. This is going to be another hectic day. I race to the back room scared Yoshizawa-san might throw stuff at me if I don't move quick enough to put on my uniform. I've never seen her this upset or scary. I know because of the temper she's in Yoshizawa-san is going to make work for me today pure hell. Sometimes, I just want to quit my job.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: badsaints on November 25, 2010, 08:53:14 AM
Hmm...Eri's answers have only brought up more questions, such as "Who are They?" I kinda have a feeling Reina is one of them (and maybe she chose Ai as her partner XD). Or maybe Risa is Reina's target all along so she needs to get Ai away from Risa by making Risa jealous and now that Risa is alone at her home, she can make her move on Risa :huhuh

Or perhaps I've just been reading too much fanfics :lol:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: Tightrope on November 25, 2010, 12:58:32 PM
                         :mon baby:
:nya: PUPPY ERI IS SOO ADORBZZZZ :nya:

I love puppys! And I love Eri! She's on my favs members list  :heart: I think I never went AWWWWW~ so many times reading a fic. I read it in one go yesterday, took me a while  XD  So yeah, new reader here.

Like I was saying, Eri here is so adorable. I can't resist the puppy charm. She is childish and selfish, but I guess that comes with the puppy thing. Guess we can blame the sudden humor changes on it too XD After all, dogs can be very possessive. And I was wondering one thing about shape-shifters. What is their original form? In Eri's case, it would be a puppy then? Because if they born from humans it would be... awkward  :lol:.   

Ai makes me laugh so much. She has pretty epic lines, like this one.

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Why is it that every new girl I come across they end up wanting to get into my pants?! This is so not fair!

I lol'ed so much at this when I read it. Like someone said earlier, we have a love parallelogram going on! No one can resist the Ai-chan, no one :on asmo:

As an avid TakaGaki shipper, I should support them, or maybe the ReinAi but... but...! PUPPY ERI IS JUST TOO AWW :monk gboy: So I'm supporting AiEri here. So GO GO Ai, this puppy loves you, and you love her back! You only have to realize it.

I'm a little sorry for Gaki, though. But only a little XD I don't approve her behaviour lately. That fight between Gaki and Ai...  the two of them lost it there. I guess Ai-chan is only over-stressed, with all the things happening and she being almost sexually harassed lol. But I hope Gaki confess to Ai-chan, at least...

Reina is a character that intrigues me. I don't trust her at all, I'm sure she is plotting something... And I think all the ReinAi interactions happened a little too fast, but anyway. I'm still thinking she can do something to Ai when she is looking at her. Strange shape-shifters powersss ~~  XD Because YES, she has to be the cat, Ai found earlier. No doubt about that. And I want to see that epic battle Eri vs Reina too!  :mon woo:

For some reason I want Sayu to meet Eri. I want iiiit ~  I guess it's just the KameShige shipper in me talking  XD

And yay for this last update! FINALLY WE CAN HAVE SOME ANSWERS ~

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“The best shape-shifters our leader has. They were sent to capture me.

They? So there are more than one? I'm sure Reina is one of them but.... Who are the others?  Wanna know!

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“Oh...” I mutter, lost in my thoughts.  Wait a minute... “You can get me pregnant?!” I shout in shock.

OH MY GAWD :mon closeup: I'm not sure if I want that to happen XD

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“Are you sure you aren't just an alien?!” I question, getting another laugh from Eri.

This joke will never get old  :lol: Never fail to make me laugh.

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I'm finished asking what I think I need to at this time. I can't deny Eri's feelings towards me don't exist. She's very honest not only with me, but with herself. This makes me wonder, am I really honest with myself also? I feel sometimes strong surges of emotions when Eri does certain things, but I've had the same feeling when Reina was about to kiss me or when Risa cuddled with me during that time of karaoke. I close my eyes, washing away these confusing thoughts and sigh.

OH, THE DRAMA  :mon hanky: Don't be a player and choose Eri soon ~~

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“Ai-chan trust Eri, right?” Eri calls out, stopping me from walking. “Ai-chan knows Eri will never do any harm. I want to protect Ai-chan.”

Ai-chan didn't answer at this. Why not? WHYYY? Don't make Puppy Eri feel sad :cry:

Gaki is still mad at Ai and because of that, she didn't go to work? I thought she was more responsible. And what is Reina doing? I have a bad feeling about her evil plotting... please Eri, be safe  :cry:

Btw... YAY FOR ISHIYOSHI OWNING A CAFE  :yossi: :heart: :otomerika: I love those two. I hope you can give us a little interaction with them sometime?  :roll:

And the plot thickens! Please update soon?  :heart:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: Beecubed on November 26, 2010, 06:53:17 AM
 :OMG:

I can't believe it... you... you updated this thread. T____________________T

When you put it 'on hold', my heart immediately sank, thinking that when writers put things on hold... it usually stays on hold. For eternity.  XD

SO you have no idea how happy I am to see this update! It's been a while, but thank you for deciding to put up this chapter. It is in NO WAY crappy... I wanted answers from Eri too. And I got them. Though of course, there will always be more questions to ask. Like. What that certain ritual involves.  :twisted: lol

Now, this chapter was pretty much all about Ai-chan getting answers from Eri. And her confirmation of Eri's feelings towards her. I REALLY REALLY want her to return those feelings, but I get this impression that you won't let that happen... at least, you won't let it happen in the extremely cheesy and cutesy way that I have pictured in my head xD

I loved the conversation between them and the various feelings that surfaced... confusion, curiosity, fear, love...
There's nothing wrong with a chapter like this. It's a critical scene, for sure, although it could have been more dramatic (like I said, I love my drama! xD) but you still played it out very well.

Here's hoping that the next chapter won't take as long! Start writing junkie-chan, onegai!  :love:


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“Are you sure you aren't just an alien?!” I question, getting another laugh from Eri.

This joke will never get old  :lol: Never fail to make me laugh.


(http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6581/icusubshelloprojectdvdm.jpg)

I kind of wanted her to admit it. So cute.  :oops:

She seems more alien to me than shape-shifter. A shape-shifter alien is what I would've thought. >.< Because if her true form is the actual human Eri, then why when she shapeshifted from puppy to human, she still couldn't get rid of those ears and her tail? It automatically makes me think it's because her human form is NOT her true form. She also didn't seem 100% accustomed to her human body at first... so, if human Eri isn't her true form, then what is?


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“Eri came here...to get away.” Eri softly speaks. “I heard so much about the human world. I wanted to see it one day. When I saw my chance I jumped through the portal and ended up here. Then they found out I was gone and came to get me. I had to hide, but I had nowhere to go or how to get food.”

I figured as much. ^____^
From a different world... portals to jump through her others of her kind to hide from. All because Eri was curious about the human world? I wonder if there is

I have to wonder what Eri's world is like - why are they all shape-shifters? What do they need that power for anyway? The ability must have come around as part of evolution (I'm thinking...), so how does a world full of shape-shifters work?  :huhuh


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It's almost as if this is all a fairy tale

A fairytale? And not a sci-fi nightmare of some kind?  :lol:
I think that's Ai-chan's subconscious trying to tell her she wants to hook up with the shapeshifter.  :wub: lol


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She looks at me with teary eyes. When I stare at her it gives me this odd kind of tingle in my stomach, pity maybe, or concern? All I'm sure of is that I'll never bring Eri back.

I think it's a HELL lot more than just pity. Or concern. How about I-love-you-Eri-you're-totally-my-kind-of-shapeshifter. Ai-chan feels for Eri too, that's for sure. If she doesn't want to see Eri go back, doesn't want to see her hurt and resolves to protect her...

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“I won't do such a thing Eri. You're with me now. I'll protect you.” I promise.

Then can't she see how much she cares?!

Can't she see that she too, has feelings for Eri?!

*sigh* Ai-chan, you stubborn thing.  :banghead:


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“My kind still need to reproduce like humans. We can't breed with each other though so only a selected few who have gotten permission from our leader can enter the human world, but only to find a human suitable for reproduction.” Eri looked down to the floor in shame. “Sometimes...humans are forced to carry our children.”


 :mon freeze:

MAJOR SHOCK!

What?! Nani?! ...

This leads my thoughts right to puppy Eri juniors, and that is like... explosively cute.  :k-inlove:

I wonder if this information will be significant for later events...  :shocked:


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“It's because Eri knows Ai-chan is different.” Eri slowly admits. “I don't know how, but when I saw Ai-chan in that alley way I knew I was safe with Ai-chan. Eri knew with Ai-chan Eri was going to be truly loved.”


 :mon lovelaff:

Love at first sight... *sniffles*


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“Oh...” I mutter, lost in my thoughts.  Wait a minute... “You can get me pregnant?!” I shout in shock.

 :rofl:

This totally made me laugh out loud. xD

Is this how KameShige family came into existence?  :lol:


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“Yes, there are other shape-shifters after me. I don't know who they are, where they are, or what they look like though.” Eri honestly replied.

Let me explain! There's this kitten, Eri... and, her name is REINA. And I think she might know that you're hiding out at Ai-chan's place, because she's been nothing but SUSPICIOUS since she started work at the cafe where Ai also happens to work.

I don't have a good feeling about Reina at all. And even if she falls for Ai (or perhaps even Eri herself, down the road?), I will still not trust her. That's my relationship with Reina.  :lol:


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“Yes, very much, but Eri isn't scared of what punishment to face. Eri is scared of losing Ai-chan forever.” Eri eyes start to fill with tears. “When Eri is around Ai-chan, Eri is happy. Eri is happiest in this world, with Ai-chan.”

Awwwwwww~ kawaiii. Although, I thought at first Eri was concerned about going back because they'd punish her, as with this quote: "B-but I can't go back!! If I return they'll punish me! I rather die of starvation than go back to that world and face my punishment!"

It made me think about what sort of punishment Eri would have to go through. Could it be that terrible?

But yeah, knowing that Ai-chan is what makes Eri the happiest in the world, I vouch for AiEri all the way  :wriggly:


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“I think...I should go to bed.” I grumble. “It's been a long day. Goodnight, Eri.”

A disappointing response to Eri's lovely love declaration...  :smhid
Eri wears her heart on her sleeve, that much is clear. So endearing.  :heart:

I hope we get to see Ai-chan spill her emotions one day too. >.<

About that last part, I'm not quite sure how it's supposed to fit. It felt like perhaps you didn't know how to continue and left it there... since I was expecting Ai-chan to be thinking more about the revelation of Eri being a shape-shifter in hiding and all >.<

Anyways, a vital chapter, and I really enjoyed it. There hasn't been a chapter I haven't enjoyed - it's too hard not to enjoy something as cute as this.  :thumbsup

Thanks for the update again, junkie-chan. Please continue this, I have so many questions and am looking forward to more drama and complication~  :love:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


 :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: fallenxangel24952 on November 26, 2010, 11:19:00 AM
Eri said here are some other shape-shifter...and there is a certain girl with the name reina
           and some shape-shifters are going to bring eri back...and there is girl name reina XD

i don't know even if reina isn't one of these alien I still can't trust reina because she ...well, I don't know why :P

and I don't understand how aichan can stand against puppy eri :shocked :shocked :shocked :banghead:
if i was her I would be dead from noose bleeding :imdead:


and at the end...I have a bad feeling since risa and reina aren't here :mon tantrum:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 11/23)
Post by: writerjunkie on January 27, 2011, 08:44:18 PM
CHAPTER 10

“Gaki-san, I know you're in there so open the door already!” I shout, pounding on the door with the side of my fist.

I've decided to visit Gaki-san after my shift was over. I needed to see if she called out sick today because of our fight, or she really was not feeling well. I know most likely she called out sick because of our fight and I'm here to clear the distance that might be setting us apart.

After all, Gaki-san is my best friend and without her I'll feel lost. She's the only person who can understand me and she's helped me ever since I came to Tokyo. I can't lose Gaki-san! I bang on the door louder out of desperation.

“Gaki-san, I won't leave. I'll stay out here all night if I have to!” I scream, then take a seat on the ground with my back pressing against the door.

I wrap my arms around myself to beat the cold. I said all night and I mean all night! That's just how important Gaki-san is to me. I stare out into the setting sky. It'll get dark soon.

I know it'll only get colder too. I blow on my hands, feeling my fingers starting to burn from the icy cold. Gaki-san sure can get stubborn. Usually a stand-out like this last 3 seconds. It's been ten so far.

I feel my teeth begin to chatter, but I don't want to lose! I'm stubborn too. Then I feel the door give way and I stumble back, standing up to the ceiling. I see Gaki-san standing beside me with a frown.

“You're crazy Ai-chan! You'll catch a cold.” Gaki-san warns.

“Does this mean I can come inside?” I ask.

Gaki-san scoffs. “And you're still so stubborn! Get inside.”

I scurry to my feet and rush inside to the warmth. Gaki-san quickly closes the door and follows me to the living room. I quickly scan the room to see anything out of the ordinary and spot a glass of beer on the table surrounded by a few cans. I spin around and frown.

“You're drunk?!” I blurt out.

“Why should it matter to you?!” Gaki-san sneers, walking over tot he couch.

“Gaki-san!" I cry.

“If you must know I was just having my first drink!” Gaki-san, admits in a drone voice. “I'm only a little light-headed.” Gaki-san picks up her cup and takes a few swigs.

“Gaki-san, what 's wrong with you?!” I yell, taking away from her careless character. Gaki-san is never like this. She's always so mature and careful. “Stop it!”

“I do whatever the hell I want, Ai-chan. You're not the boss of me.” Gaki-san coldly snaps. She finishes her cup and pours the rest of the beer into it.

Fueled with anger, I run over and snatch the cup out of Gaki-sans hand. She doesn't even flinch, but takes another can and drinks from it. I take that too then grab Gaki-san shoulders and shake her.

“Gaki-san, you need to tell me what's wrong, please?” I beg.

Gaki-san looks at me with dazed eyes then shoves me away. I nearly fall back, off guard to such an attack. Gaki-san turns away from me and storms into the kitchen.

I follow her, but keep my distance in case she becomes more violent. Right now, I don't know anything she'll do. She's become completely unpredictable to me.

“I don't have to tell you anything, Ai-chan!” Gaki-san replies.

“Well, can you at least stop drinking? You have work tomorrow.” I remind her.

“It doesn't matter.” Gaki-san whispers. “I'm going to quit.”

I feel my heart stop. Gaki-san...will leave Morning Cafe? B-But why?! She loves it there! I don't understand.

Why is she making this sudden decision?! We're supposed to be best friends. We tell each other everything! What is Gaki-san hiding?

Then, I sudden remember Sayu's words with Linlin in the locker room today. I over heard them and got curious since they seemed to try and keep the conversation in secret.

'Gaki-san has always liked Ai-chan, but she never will confess that.'

My whole body goes numb and I grab on to the counter to hold myself. I can't believe it...all this time Gaki-san has always watched after me because she...loves me? Sayu wasn't making up a rumor?

Oddly, I feel like crying. I look at Gaki-san with a completely dreaded face and see that my tears are starting to turn my view hazy. I bite my bottom lip to gain back some courage so that I won't sob.

“Is it true?” I quiver.

Gaki-san looks at me with a confused face. “What?”

“That you love me.” I watch Gaki-san's face go pale. “Answer the question Risa. I need to know!”

I rush over and grab Gaki-san to have her face me.

“Don't be silent. Tell me! I have a right to know!” I insist.

“And what difference will it make?!” Gaki-san yells. “Will you love me back?”

I freeze. Love Risa back? I'm not sure if I love anyone. I've never been so confused. My best friend...the one person who's looked after me like a sister...is in love with me.

What does this mean? What about our friendship? Do I love Gaki-san too, or should I love her back because she wants me to?

Nervously, I lick my lips before gathering my thoughts. I have to tell her something. I have to comfort Gaki-san somehow.

“Gaki-san I-”

In an instant, Gaki-san steps up to me, but inside of getting a smack to the face I'm...kissed? She's kissing me! I can feel her lips press onto my own. My heart races and my entire body turns to lead. I feel like a huge rock stuck to the ground.

How should I react? Should I hold her? Maybe...kiss her back to try and comfort her like I've planned.

Unsure of what to do, the only thing that only seems to process into my mind is how soft and warm Gaki-san's lips are. Just like Eri's. ERI! I break the kiss and take a step back somewhat disgusted from what we just did.

I can't understand why, but having Gaki-san kiss me just didn't...seem right. It isn't how we're meant to be, but then what are we meant as? My heart rate increases and I feel my breath start to quicken. I think I'm panicking. I'm about to panic!

I try to make a run for the door, but I trip and Gaki-san sees this as a chance to go after me. I can't seem to see everything properly or register the events around me anymore. I'm staring up at her, completely frozen. I jolt when I feel Gaki-san's body against mine when she hugs. Even this simple hug isn't right.

“Ai-chan...I love you. Please, please Ai-chan, love me back?” Risa tearfully pleads.

I try to squirm out of Risa's hug, but she has me held down. “G-Gaki-san...I shouldn't be here!” I grunt. “We're friends. We're only...”

Gaki-san kisses me again and I become stiff. Why is she doing this?! She's taking advantage of our friendship. I know I should comfort her, but not like this! This isn't supposed to happen.

Gaki-san takes my hand and starts to move it towards her pants. What is she...I nearly have a heart attack when my fingers touch something hot and soft.

“Gaki-san, please?! I-I can't!” I croak.

I don't know why I'm rejecting this. It isn't like I'm dating anymore. I'm single, but it just feels so wrong. It's like I'm not meant to do this with Gaki-san. Does this mean my heart belongs to someone else?

Was I in love all  along, but never knew it? I can't understand! I'm drawn tot his, my body reacts, but in my heart it's telling me no! Gaki-san lets out a moan and grips on to my sleeve with her free hand.

“Please Ai-chan...” she whispers. “...move your fingers inside of me.”

 ***

“Alright already, I'm coming!” The door opens and I race inside out of breath.

I completely ignore Sayu's scary pissed off face and scurry to safety. I have nowhere else to go. I can't go back home and well...I obviously can't go to Gaki-san because she's the cause of my distress!! I've never been so clueless.

I feel trapped. I'm stuck in something I have no control over. I feel tears form in my eyes. Sayu's the only one I have left, but if she kicks me out and our friendship breaks up because of this I know I'm really doomed then.

“S-Sayu...I did something bad.”

“Ai-chan, calm down you're shaking!” Sayu replies.

She's less angry now that she sees the trouble I'm in. Sayu grabs my arm and walks me over to the living room so we can sit down. I can use the rest. I ran all the way over here. I can feel my legs start to burn and ache.

When I sit down I try to think thoroughly of what to say before speaking. I wonder if I'll have the courage to even tell Sayu my problem. It's still hard for me to understand that it's even happened. I'm a terrible friend!

I've probably hurt Gaki-san and Eri. If I don't say anything though I'll end up feeling worse so I have to get this off my chest. Alright, I'll tell Sayu.

“I visited Gaki-san.” I say, feeling myself start to shake again. “She confessed to me.”

Sayu's eyes open wide in shock. “Wow...I didn't think she had it in her.” Then her shock turns to confusion. “I don't get why you're so freaked out though, Ai-chan. You're both a couple now, right? It's no big deal. I support you both1 You know Gaki-san has always-”

“I don't love her!” I interrupt.

“T-Then why are you...”

I burst into tears. I'm an awful person! I'm a terrible best friend! I don't deserve Gaki-san. I take a few deep breaths to calm myself and wipe away my tears with the back of my hand. I feel Sayu rub my back to try and sooth me.

“Gaki-san confessed to me when she was drunk. Then she kissed me and I...did something I shouldn't because she was drunk, but she wouldn't let me go!”

I had no choice. That's it...I didn't have a choice. She needed it. I felt no emotions for her when I did. I felt nothing, but sort of...pity? I felt bad that Gaki-san will never have my love, because I'm very sure I love someone else.

“Ai-chan, you didn't sleep with her did you?!” Sayu shrieks.

“N-Not really.” I bashfully say.

“WHAT?! You don't know?! Ai-chan, it's a yes or no question.” Sayu growls.

If I'm going to tell Sayu I have to tell the truth. I have to because I feel so guilty and I hate this guilt. It hurts so much as if someone punched me six times in the gut. I know Sayu will be mad, but I have to do it just for some sort of release.

“She wanted me to touch her, okay! I didn’t do anything after I swear!” I stutter. “I-I kind of...had my hand...in her pants.”

“WHAT?!! Ai-chan that's sex! It's one-sided, but you had something intimate with her!” Sayu finalizes.

“No listen! I had my hand there, but I didn't do anything. I left. I kissed her a few times, but that's it.” I explain, hoping it'll squash Sayu's rage. “I didn't mean to. I just didn't know what to do. I didn't want to hurt her. She's my best friend Sayu.”

Sayu's arms wrap around my shoulder and I lean over to hug her.

“Can I...stay here tonight?” I quietly ask. “I don't want to be alone.”

Of course that's a lie. I just don't want to face Eri because I know she'll smell Risa on me. I'm not going to face her angry again. Not after witnessing the strength she has when she's pissed. I'm better off staying over.

“Yeah sure. Let me get some extra sheets.” Sayu agrees.

“Thanks Sayu.” I meekly smile.

She gets up from the couch and  goes upstairs to prepare a bed for me. I don't know what tomorrow will bring, but I only hope it won't be too drastic. I may not love Gaki-san, but I do value our friendship very much. I want her to be with me as a friend because without her I'll have no one to rely on as I can with her. I need her.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/27)
Post by: taylortot on January 27, 2011, 09:30:15 PM
whoa. this left me... blank.
well first of all i've been stalking this fic for awhile wondering when your next update was  :nervous it was awesome  :thumbup
eri is adorable in this story~
danggg poor gaki-san  :gyaaah: ai-chan is quite the pimp here, isn't she?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/27)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2011, 06:25:15 AM
Poor Mame, unrequited love is the worst. And poor Ai, she's afraid of the one she loves.

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“Please Ai-chan...” she whispers. “...move your fingers inside of me.”

 :stoned: :on bleed: :imdead:

I so wasn't expecting that.

You know, I'm not really an AiEri fan. I mean, I like to read stuff from my fav authors and because of such I've been introduced to new pairings, but for some reason, this one didn't really stick. So, to hear that Ai doesn't love Gaki, even though I already knew she would be with Eri, still hurts.

I think it's an intrigued hurt, though. I want to see how Ai handles the frightening Eri.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/27)
Post by: writerjunkie on January 28, 2011, 04:08:33 PM
CHAPTER 11

I made sure to not leave Sayu's house without taking a shower. I know that as long as I've washed myself well enough Eri won't be able to smell anything different off of me. It's the only way that gave me the strength to go home. I'm only returning back though because I need a fresh pair of clothes before attending work again. It'll be odd if I come to work with clothes I wore yesterday.

I need less attention as I can get right now. So, after getting a small prep talk from Sayu and eating some breakfast I left Sayu's place to continue my plan. I only hope when I get there Eri isn't awake. The walk was short about five blocks away.

Although, the closer to home I became the more worried I also became too. There's no point it panicking if nothing happened so I clutch the doorknob and use my key to unlock the door. I make sure to try and be as quiet as possible when I pull my key out and open the door. I peek inside and see that the place isn't a huge wreck.

So that's a good sign! That means Eri isn't angry, but it can also mean that she's terribly sad. I open the door half way and enter completely. I close the door and lock it before turning back around to examine my house better. Everything is neatly in place.

I walk farther inside to reach my room. I get inside with no sight of Eri still and that's starting to make me worry. Did she leave my house? She's probably out in the streets alone and lost!! Where is she?!

I can't concentrate on that right now though. I have to get ready for work. My shift starts in an hour. I open my draw to search for clothes and throw anything I think that will match on my bed.

Once I settle on an outfit I try to see how quickly I can get into it so that I have time left over to fix my hair and adjust my make-up. Okay, I have to go now. I race out of my room and down the hall.

“Hi Ai-chan!!”

“UWAAA~!!” I spin around, feeling myself about to have a heart attack. “Eri, where the hell did you come from?!”

Eri stops smiling at me and puts on a curious face. She walks over to me and I quickly coach myself to keep calm so that I won't give away anything that happened last night. I don't think she can smell lying. Eri stand in front of me and tilts her head as she looks at me.

“Ai-chan, what's wrong?” Eri ask. “Is Ai-chan sad?” she studies me harder. “No, no, the face doesn't match with that emotion. Is Ai-chan upset?” Eri scratches the top of her head confused. “Hey...where has Ai-chan been? Eri got worried. Eri made coffee for Ai-chan though in case Ai-chan returned! Come have some.”

Eri grabs my arm and pulls me towards the kitchen. I look at her as she guides me, feeling even more guilty. I feel even worse than I did over Risa. Eri is so carefree and kind, but she's also so innocent and that's one of the main reasons why I feel so bad.

I'm hurting Eri. I can't fully explain why, but I feel that I am and I don't like that. Eri doesn't deserve such things. She deserved to be cared for and loved. I wipe any traces of on coming tears before Eri faces me again.

“Tada~!” Eri grins, pointing to the cup on the counter. “Eri spent some time trying to figure out the strange devices Ai-chan uses. Eri would have made you food, but...Eri accidentally broke your...shinny small box.” Eri puts on a sad face.

“My what?” I ask, trying to understand what she's saying.

“It's this weird looking cube that was right next to the coffee machine. I tried to use it because I saw it on TV, but it didn't go so well.” Eri explains. “It's supposed to make the bread solid.”

“Eri, it's called a toaster and it makes toast.” I explain.

“Oh~” Eri giggles. “So...Ai-chan is okay with it being broken?”

I don't think I'll ever leave her alone again. I know she's trying to learn and be more human, but if I lost a toaster I just might lose an oven and before it I'll end up homeless!! I'm going to have to teach her how to make food.

“Where is the toaster?” I ask, afraid of the answer.

“Eri didn't know where to throw it and it was making smoke so...Eri panicked and...I threw it out the window.” Eri slowly asks, ducking her head down.

“What?!” I run over to the kitchen window and peek out.

At the bottom of the tall drop, I see bits of shinny metal pieces all scattered across the floor and the piece of black toast on the ground getting pecked at from birds. What was she thinking?! That was dangerous!

The toaster could have hit someone and possibly kill them! Not to mention, there goes about one thousand yen down the drain. I get out of the window.

“Eri, don't ever cook again!” I yell. “It's a miracle you didn't blow up the coffee machine!”

Eri starts to pout and she's tearing. She always does this. How can she do something bad and not expect scolding after? I wonder if she fully thinks anything through. I can't have her crying though it makes me feel bad.

“Oh come on, don't cry Eri.” I complain. Her bottom lip starts to tremble. “Okay, I'm sorry! Just don't cry.” I feel her hug me and squish me against the counter.

“Does this mean Ai-chan will try the coffee?” Eri questions. “Eri tried hard to copy what was on TV.”

I sigh. If I say no she'll most likely cry again. So, if it'll keep her not only from not crying, but happy I'll do it. I take a hold of the cup handle and pick it up to take a sip. It's a little too strong. I put the cup down and try to figure how I should comment on it. I don't want to hurt her feelings.

“Uh...not so bad Eri. It's just a little too strong than what I like.” I say.

“Oh...” Eri pauses for a second and I'm preparing myself in case she cries again. “Eri will do better next time.”

At least she isn't crying. I glance at the lock in my kitchen and sigh. Okay, I really have to go or I'll be extremely late!

“I'm sorry Eri, but I have to go now!” I say, making a dash towards the door. “I have to get to work.”

“But...Ai-chan~!” Eri whines. “Eri barely got the chance to see Ai-chan. Can't Ai-chan stay?”

“I'm sorry Eri, but I have to go.” I decline.

“Well...can't Eri come too? Eri will walk Ai-chan to work.” Eri happily says.

I suppose a walk with her won't hurt. It'll keep my mind clear and off of what happened last night. But then how will Eri get back home by herself? Eri puts on a pout, begging me with her eyes to say yes. I really hate when she does that! I can never win when she does that! I groan.

“Okay, you can.” I agree.

Eri smiles and claps then runs towards the door.

“Hey wait, you'll need a coat!” I call, and grabs any coat from the closet.

Then I run out to catch up with Eri after I lock the door. I fear she'll end up running right into traffic. I decide too, scared of that small thought becoming a reality.

“Eri not so fast!!”

 ***

“Hey, Ai-chan, what's that!” Eri questions, pressing her nose against the tank.

I know I should be at work by now, but for some reason Eri decided to make a stop at a pet shop out of curiosity. I don't know why. Why would she like to be in such a place like that, but she kept nagging me about it.

I thought it was going to be quick, but five minutes has already past and we're still here! I think though she probably wants to be here because she's part animal too that she wants to see others. I think it's not so much of a good idea anymore.

I sigh and look to where Eri is pointing. She smells the tank and takes a step back, observing the animal swimming inside the tank.

“It smells salty.” she notices.

“Don't even try to lick that glass!” I command.

I've also found out Eri has a taste for anything salty, but as not much as anything sour. She also obsessively eats cheese. I'll have to watch what she puts in her mouth more carefully. Eri stops moving and continues to stare, interested in the sea animal inside. She looks back at me.

“Is Ai-chan going to tell Eri what it is?” she ask again.

“That's a turtle, Eri. Haven't you ever seen one?” I flatly say.

“Eri has never seen other animals except my own kind.” Eri answer, turning back to the tank.

“Hold on...so that means there are more...like you, but just different types?” I whispers, looking over my shoulder to make sure no one is in hearing length to our conversation.

“Uh-huh, lots!” Eri says, as if it's no big deal.

A whole world full of  not only dog people, but lizard people and bears. The list just goes on! Do any other animals turn into humans?

This sounds too far fetched and yet Eri is living proof of a dog person. Or...dog girl. Does this mean that not only dog people will come looking for Eri?

“Eri, does that...”

“Hey, you two! Are you going to buy something or what?!” The clerk shouts.

I take a hold of Eri's wrist and yank her away from the tank. I march out the store, getting back on to the track that brought us out in the first place and that's work. I can ask Eri questions later.

 ***

“Ah, Ai-chan, right on time!” Yoshizawa-san sighs.

Ah, crap. I didn't expect to see Yoshizawa-san here. I wonder if anyone even showed up today. I kind of don't want Gaki-san to show up though, but I don't want her to quit either! The sound of my name brings my attention to my friends at the counter. 

I can see Sayu and Linlin walking around to clean the tables, but I can't find Gaki-san anywhere. The back door opens and I kind of wish it's Gaki-san, but it's Reina. She finally decided to show up?

“Good afternoon Ai-chan.” Ishikawa-san greets. “Oh, who's this? A new friend of yours?”

I look to my left and remember that Eri is still next to me. I take a step aside to give my two boss a good view of Eri. There's no point in trying to hide her from them. Eri inches close to me to hide from the group of people watching her. I pat her hand on my shoulder to relax her nerves.

“This is my friend, Eri.” I introduce. “I um...brought here because-” 

“Eri wants to work here!” Eri yells out.

This wasn't the deal! Eri was only supposed to walk me to work not work with me here!

“You do?” Yoshizawa-san ask.

“Eri!” I whisper.

She ignores me and smiles at Yoshizawa-san.

“Uh huh, Eri wants to work here! Is...that okay?” Eri nervous ask.

She puts on a small pout. That won't work on Yoshizawa-san. Unless Eri happens to be Ishikawa-san, which she isn't. So, it won't work! Please say no Yoshizawa-san, please!?

“Alright.” Yoshizawa-san agrees.

What?! Eri can't work here! She's not qualified. She can barely act human! I doubt she can even balance a tray of cups! Eri lets out a yell of joy.

“You can work here for today. If you work well I might consider having you here. We are a girl short and can use extra help.” Yoshizawa-san agrees. “Welcome...what's your name?”

Damn it, Eri doesn't even half a last night! Not one that I know of. What do I do? I have to say something. Eri looks at Yoshizawa-san and I try to motion with my hands for her to say anything.

“Kame!” Eri smiles proudly.

She receives odd looks from everyone. I sigh, wanting to hit her over the head for such a name choice.

“Um...K-Kamei. Yeah...Kamei Eri!” I nervously chuckle.

“That's an odd last name.” Yoshizawa-san comments. “Well...nice to meet you Eri. I'm Yoshizawa Hitomi and this is Ishikawa Rika. We both own this cafe.”

Ishikawa-san waves at Eri, gaining her attention. This is not going to work. She'll get caught and I'll get in trouble!

“I think you will do just fine Eri-chan. You're very cute. That'll attract more customers.” Ishikawa-san proudly says.

Yoshizawa-san and Ishikawa-san leave, but I'm not quite relieved yet because my friends come over to welcome our new member. I'm nervous all over again now.

“Hi Kamei-san!! I'm LinLin. I'm so glad we have another member!” Linlin greets.

Eri laughs. “LinLin sounds funny.”

“Eri!” I scold.

She looks at me with a sad face.

“Did Eri do something wrong?” she ask.

“Ah she is really cute!” Sayu squeals and smothers Eri in a hug. She starts to pat the top of Eri's head. “You are so adorable~!! I'm Michishige Sayumi, but Sayu will do just fine.”

Eri starts to smile and nuzzles against Sayu, enjoying the affection. I think now is the time to pull Eri away from Sayu before she ends up getting licked on the face. I take a hold of Eri's arm and pull her away. I bring her to the back of the counter.

Now that she's here and working for the day I should give her the required uniform for the cafe, a maid outfit. I don't agree with this, but I don't have much of a choice since I don't own this place. I pull her into the back room, ignoring my friends' stare.  I pause as I notice Reina's odd stare at me, but looking closer I see that she isn't for once looking at me, but at Eri instead.

I check to see if Eri is uncomfortable with Reina looking at her, but she isn't. Eri just looks really...mad? I walk a little faster and open the back room door.

Of course, the oddness doesn't end there because I see Risa standing in the middle of her room putting on the last piece to her outfit. We stare at each other for a while and I eventually just decide to look at the floor. I think it was better that either I stay home or Risa.

The staring is over because Risa brushes pass me without a hello and leaves. I sigh and focus back to the task at hand. I open a spare locker and take out the folded pieces of clothing needed to complete the uniform.

“Now remember Eri. You're a human and so you have to act like one.” I remind her.

“Okay~!” Eri happily replies. “Eri will do her best!”

“Let me help you get your outfit on.” I suggest.

I think today is going to bring even normal stress than I normally have. I'm not sure if I can handle that.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/28)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2011, 05:06:50 PM
Oh gawd! Eri at work?! She already killed the toaster, what next?
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/28)
Post by: gracula on January 29, 2011, 09:24:37 AM
I feel uncomfortable for Ai-chan. Workplace hell, indeed.

I could so imagine Eri shouting 'Kame!' with that cute open-mouthed smile, looking pleased with herself.

As with all love triangles (trapezoids?), may i suggest the Harem Ending?  :P
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/28)
Post by: writerjunkie on January 31, 2011, 12:06:51 AM
@ gracula - harem ending?! XD That would be interesting. I might use that for a different fic. I already have an idea of how PL will end.

CHAPTER 12
 
“Takahashi-san...are you okay?”

I stare away from watching Sayu laughing and joking with Eri as she teaches her how to work the cash register. Sayu has kept Eri busy mostly all day, so I don't have to worry about Eri coming to me complaining, or trying to be affectionate with me. Even though that has been keeping me somewhat stress free today somehow, watching Sayu and Eri interact with each other annoys me also. I haven't kept my eyes off them since.

I'm mostly worried what Eri will do something bad, but also that Sayu will try to do something to take advantage of Eri. Who wouldn't when they see a person so pure and innocent as Eri? I had to throw a customer out an hours ago because he was getting a little too...'personal' with Eri.

Of course, Eri had no idea the guy was intentionally touching her and Sayu should be no different with that. Eri can't easily trust anyone. I force myself to turn away from my two friends and finally look at Linlin.

“Y-Yeah, I'm fine.” I reply, focusing on the broom in my hands.

“Everyone has been acting so strange today Takahashi-san.” Linlin mumbles, viewing her surroundings. “Niigaki-san, is silent. She always looks angry and well Tanaka-san...looks angrier! Michshige-san is acting weird. It's like she's in love. The atmosphere around here feels tense.”

I clutch the broomstick tightly at the mention of Sayu. I can't let my anger get the best of me! Calm down. Calm down Ai-chan! I shouldn't take anything out on Linlin. She did nothing wrong. I just have to try and give her a good answer that doesn't show how angry I am.

“Really? I don't think I've noticed.” I reply.

That wasn't what I had in mind. I know Linlin isn't easy to fool. And of course, these odd behaviors can be seen easily except Reina's might be a little difficult to get a hold of. Considering, that she's always angry and has a scowl on her face.

“Has something happened with you and Niigaki-san?” Linlin questions, unaware of how touchy that question is to me.

I look up at her and put on a stern look. I can't lose my temper, no matter how angry Gaki-san makes me right now. But, she's been drilling holes in my back all day with her constant glaring. I'm not really sure how much more of it I can take.

“Linlin, this is something that should not be discussed in public. Besides, what might be going on between Gaki-san and I is private.” I answer, in a stiff tone.

“O-Of course! I'm sorry Takahashi-san.” Linlin stutters. She looks a little startled. Maybe even a little afraid? “I'll just go clean the tables.” Then she runs off.

I sigh. Damn it! There I go hurting someone else. I didn't mean to come on too strong. I'll have to apologize to Linlin right after work.

I take the broom and march towards the back. Maybe if I just go out back for a little I might be able to cool myself down. Some fresh air might help.

I walk towards the counter and speed up when I see that I'm near Sayu and Eri and I'm pretty sure now Sayu is just flirting with Eri. This is a cafe not a hook up place! I make it to the back door.

“Ai-chan?”

I freeze. Even though Eri looked like she was having a good time she must have been watching me as I approached them. She's a lot more observant than I thought. I turn around to see two pair of eyes on me.

Only Eri's seem to show the most concern about me and she's completely forgotten about Sayu. I sort of want to smile at that and laugh. Maybe rub it in Sayu's face...just~ a little.

“Yeah?” I ask.

Eri walks over to me and holds on to my wrist. The way she's staring at me. It's like she wants to help me, but it also looks like the only thing around her is me. It's like I matter to her and I'm the only thing that does. I start to feel nervous and gulp. I pull my arm away.

“Eri, we're in public.” I whisper.

Eri frowns. “Something is wrong with Ai-chan.” she notices. 

Eri takes a hold of my arm again and pulls me towards the back. I don't really have much of a choice when she's this controlling. She may seem cute and innocent, but Eri is sure stronger than she looks.

So, in order to not end up slammed into a wall about half a foot away again, I just follow Eri without any protest. She completely ignores the looks she gets from the others and doesn't stop walking until we're out of the cafe, standing next to the back door. That's when she also looks at me again, but with a little more of a determined face.

“What's bothering Ai-chan?” Eri ask. “Eri wants to help.”

I stick my hands into my pockets and duck my head. If I was nervous before I'm beyond that emotion that all I want to do is probably puke or have myself melt away from the embarrassment. I know there is no one in this alley way. No one can either see us or hear us, but I still feel so exposed here.

Probably because I'm with Eri and she has this sort of dominating look in her eyes. She wants to get her answer and I have a feeling that if I don't give it to her she'll keep me out here all night. Should I just tell her, or keep up my strong front?

“It's nothing!” I yell.

The strong front is is then. Eri folds her arms over her chest and grimaces.

“Ai-chan is lying.” Eri disappointingly says.

“How would you even know if I'm lying?” I angrily ask.

“The longer Eri is around Ai-chan. The more Eri will starts to smell and sense the emotions Ai-chan is in.” Eri points to her nose. “My sense of smell is strong.”

I'll never get a lie by her then. It'll always have to be the truth with her and I don't think I want to tell her the truth. I feel that if Eri knows it'll only hurt her so badly she'll never want to see me again.

I know a long time before I would have wanted that, but now, I don't want Eri to leave me at all. I don't need her to stay, but it's just...I want her to stay. I put my head down to try and hide my tears. I feel Eri place her hand on my arm to comfort me.

“Ai-chan?” Eri softly speaks.

I take a step back to break the contact. I still keep my head to the ground though.

“I'm sorry.” I whisper. “I always seem to hurt people and I never mean to, but...everything just happens too quickly! And I...never think things through.”

There's a long pause between. It feels like days, but I'm sure it has only been a few seconds, but in that time my entire body entered a state of panic. I became so scared.

I'm terrified, but I don't know why. There isn't someone putting a gun to my head, but in some odd way it feels like that. I can feel my lips start to quake.

“What is Ai-chan talking about?” Eri finally speaks.

“Eri, how can you be so sure what you feel towards me is love? How do you even know that you're IN love?” I ask.

“It's hard to explain Ai-chan. It's just...this feeling I get. When I look at Ai-chan I feel so warm inside. And...when Eri thinks about Ai-chan I can't stop smiling. Then...when Eri is near Ai-chan Eri's heart...it feels funny.” Eri explains. She carefully takes my hand and moves it up so it's between us. Then rest it onto her chest.

My knees turn to rubber at the feel of my hand against her, but I fight against my body's reaction to stand. I look up from the gravel and stare at Eri. She smiles at me and it's the happiest and most heart warming smile I've ever seen. It knocks the air right out of me and I'm speechless.

“Eri's heart beats so fast. I can't control it.” Eri states. “Eri may not know love from experience, but I do know that I have never had these reactions to anyone else Ai-chan. That's how Eri knows what love is.” 

Eri closes the gap between us and I only have a second to let out a gasp then our lips are sealed into a kiss. This one though, is so different. It isn't rough or dominating. And Eri isn't doing this because she's trying to claim what's hers. She's doing this because she loves me.

With my brain cut off from all logic, my body shift into auto-drive and my arms encompass Eri's waist in a firm hug. I feel my head lightly bump against a brick wall. Eri's kiss is so gentle. I pull her closer to press our bodies tightly together and moan.

It feels like the natural and normal thing for me to do. I feel myself start to tear. And as soon as that single drop falls, a truck full of emotions hit me at once. I quickly release my hold on Eri and make some distance between us.

“Ai-chan is...crying?” Eri notes, in a state of shock.

“Eri, I have to be honest with you. I've...done something bad Eri.” I confess. “And I'll understand if you don't want to be around me anymore, but it's only fair that I be honest with you.”

I take a deep breath to prepare myself. I don't know what Eri will do, but I know for sure how she'll feel. But there is never a good enough time to tell her.

She just has a right to know what happened last night. Feeling more courage, I open my mouth to confess, but Eri immediately turns into a defensive pose and puts herself in front of me.

“Ai-chan, someone is here.” Eri warns.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: kano-chan on January 31, 2011, 12:54:34 AM
Omg! I love this story~ :heart: (Been lurking around for a bit..) :P

This chapter is sooo cute! Well, the part with AiEri moments, of course. Gaki is just scary now. :nervous Poor Linlin for getting yelled. :( Sayu is trying to hit on Kame. ;) Reina and Eri are like cats and dogs. XD Well...duh, but they seem to really hate each other. I don't feel like Kame was running away from Reina since she wasn't scared, but angry. :roll:

What if someone was listening on their talk? They're right by the back door.. :O

Who's there?? :panic:
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 31, 2011, 04:53:12 AM
Man, you've been churning them out! Aw, I'm glad Eri's being gentle, it shows that she really does care, instead of her being all possessively scary.

Now what's going to happen?!
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: writerjunkie on January 31, 2011, 06:10:33 AM
^ Yes, I'm coming out of nowhere with new updates all the time. I hope it continues. lol That way I won't be so upset when it comes to lack of updates.

@ Kano-chan, oh a lurker? Well thank you for de-lurking then. I know how hard that can be. I used to be a hardcore lurker myself. I do it sometimes, but I do pop up now and then. lol I hope you continue to read my fics. ^_^

Alright well, this isn't an update, but I drew some fanart for PL about...40 mins ago? lol It's not that good, but I had a hard time setting on poses that weren't too difficult for me to draw.

(http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/teamkame/scan0019.jpg)

The only thing I really like is how I drew Eri's leg. XD It's still not so bad though, I guess.
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: astro18 on April 01, 2011, 02:00:17 AM
This story is super cute :inlove: I hope you haven't abandoned it >_<
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: xyukie56 on August 18, 2011, 10:56:24 AM
Haha, I read this not long ago & I totally forgot about it because there was barely any new updates !!!  :sweatdrop:

Are you going to continue making me suffer  :doh:  :lol:

JK,
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: xxkaori-kittyxx on October 17, 2011, 04:47:39 AM
A where did this story go... I miss it   :cry:

And the other thing on my mind: Who was it that inturupted Eri and Ai's moment? I must know, on your own time of course
Title: Re: Puppy Love (UPDATE 1/30)
Post by: writerjunkie on October 18, 2011, 02:33:52 AM
O_____________O

People still read my fics? XD

Honestly, I have no idea what do with this fic or where to go with the next chapter. I'm having a very hard time with it. T__T

I will try to write an update. I've been meaning too, but I'm stuck and this fic kind of fell apart with the plothole and messed up characterization. lol That kind of makes me want to write less, if I can't update this fic I will try to update other fics.