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Title: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: Ada XD on May 31, 2010, 08:25:22 AM
Louder than the Rain (Page 1)    AiSayu
Kiss Like Crazy (Page 1)    AiGaki
Remote (Page 1)   AiGaki &  AiSayu
Blood on my Neck (Page 1)   AiGaki
Body Language (Page 1)    AiGaki
Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~ (Page 1)   AiGaki
One silky Black Dress (Page 2)   AiGaki
Lullaby Game (Page 2)   AiGaki
Koi Choko I, II, III - Perv (Page 2)   AiGaki
Reasons   (Page 3)   SapphireNouveau

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Louder than the Rain

Even with the pillows pressed against her ears, the wild burst of thunders against the window caught her totally unaware. From the quiet rain that pissed the young woman off and couldn't let her sleep, to the deafening storm that it developed into, it has been more than an hour in which she vainly struggled to fall into a slumber.
She opened her eyes and looked around; Only a dim light shaped the pitch black room for a millisecond, soon followed by another loud rattle that made her grasp onto her sheets.
An adult already, she would have never expected herself to be afraid of a storm, but because of the exhaustion and the foreign hotel room she has never been into before, it was even more difficult to rest peacefully.

She crawled out of the bed and reached out to the table, smacking it nervously until her fingers touched the lamp.
Before flicking it on, her now adjusted eyes caught glimpse of a vague light coming from under the door of her fellow member's room. She grabbed her phone instead and lightened with it all the way there. Leaning closer to it, her cold hands gently knocked three times.
"Aichan~ ... Are you awake?"
"Yes, come in."
That familiar voice pierced through all her fears, a feeling of safety welling up as she quickly rolled the door knob.

The older woman closed the book she was reading and put it to the side as her junior jumped on the bed and desperately clung her arms around her neck, whining.
"Sayu... You're freezing!"
She tried to warm her up by fully embracing her also, stroking her back comfortingly, but she got squeezed even more, feeling tears on her shoulders.
"It's ok... calm down." Having heard those words repeating in the most soothing way possible, Sayumi stopped shaking and loosened her grip on Ai's firm and muscular back. She still lingered in her leader's arms though, knowing that kind of proximity isn't going to happen everyday.

The way how Ai's fingers ran patiently through her hair almost made Sayu let out a yawn, the tiredness still marking its presence. She pulled away and checked the time whilst Ai put the pillows in place and arranged the covers.
"Come here."
Sayu obeyed and placed her head on her leader's chest, being tucked in in the same time. With one arm around her cute kouhai and her chin nestled in her black hair, what she smelled was familiar fragrance from times they had been snuggled like that before. This brought back a warm closeness which probably both of them connected it to one of a mother, sister... or maybe lover.
"Want me to leave the lights on?"
"No, it's okay now~"

The silent rain assaulting the window could still be heard, but for some reason the vicious summer storm with its thunders stopped.
Sayu shifted closer, climbing her cold leg over Ai's thighs, and causing her to gasp. Her mischievous smirk wasn't visible in the darkness, Ai probably thinking Sayu was already asleep.
It was after some time when their voices blended with the rain again.
"Nee Aichan?"
"Yes?"
"Can I get a goodnight kiss? It's just that you don't let me kiss you during concerts but I real-"

A quick kiss on her nose stopped her from finishing her sentence.
"Whoops" Ai spoke up again, hoping she would aim her target in the darkness on a second try.
Out of nowhere, Sayu felt her leader's lips pressed onto hers. It lasted for a few seconds, enough time for her cheeks to flush.
The older woman placed her head back onto the pillow grinning widely, while the other one managed to get louder than the rain with her squeals.


***

So Ada decided to post here all her one-shots, ... just because. :D (:panic:)
This is actually one of my favorite works, hope you guys liked it  :3
<3

EDIT : Ai and Sayu will have a FC Bus Tour together soon, so this is how I got inspired to write this fic 8D (in case anyone wondered xD)
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Louder than the Rain 31 May]
Post by: badsaints on June 01, 2010, 06:01:40 AM
This is cute :D I can almost imagine the scene in my head

So~ any plan of continuation?
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Kiss Like Crazy 3 June]
Post by: Ada XD on June 03, 2010, 09:06:46 AM
^ only if they will release a dvd with lots of AiSayu interaction, enough to inspire me again xD

This was meant to be a song fic of 'Love Like Crazy' (Shuffle date version) but. you can't write a TakaGaki oneshot on an AiEri song xD

***

Kiss Like Crazy

"Gaki-san, why are you so pale?"
"Did you see a ghost?"

She was still a picture of grace, exactly how I remembered it. Her chin held high above the delicate lines of her neck and she stood on tiptoe, struggling to place the books back onto the shelves. I actually have...
My knees turned limp in an instant at the sight.

"Nee Eri, is it just me or the new librarian has our little Gakisan hypnotized?"
"Ahem. I wonder if she knows her~"
I shooed them back to the class frowning, then turned my head back at what seemed to be like a dream come true.

***

Totally caught up in her work, she hadn't noticed my presence. I found myself half hidden after the books, with only two options to chose from. Either I was going to run back to class and act like nothing happened, or simply walk up to her and ask what was the reason for all my tormented nights when she left.
The curiosity together with the ache I was still having for her got the best of me; therefore I brought myself closer to her desk, my heart beating like a drum.

"Aichan..."
She stopped from whatever she was doing, the pen falling from her hand as she looked at me wonder-stuck.
The library was still empty quiet, and the only perceptible sound was that of a clock. I unknowingly held my breath for a few seconds, trying to assimilate the fact that she was no longer gone, that after four painful years she was in front of me again. Her silence worried me though...
The chair pushed backwards as she got up, her eyes watering. "I'm so sorry"
She did not dare to make another movement afterward. On the other hand, the anger that I felt turned up again, and together with the nostalgia and all the years we shared together, torn me apart. I couldn't stand to hear her shaking voice. I couldn't cry either, because I was so happy.
"Don't be."
I pulled her in my arms, embracing her with all my might. Her hands immediately grabbed my shoulders from the back with the same force, as she sank her forehead in my chest, sobbing.

***

From the couch in the corner I was able to observe her fully, as she impatiently rummaged for tissues through the drawers of her desk.
Because of how adorable she looked when she finally found them, I couldn't help but giggle. She made a spin on her heels and walked towards me, wiping her dripping makeup.
It's been so long since I saw you in a short skirt~
She joined me on the couch at an awkward distance between us. I listened carefully as she told me about her travels and whatnot's, smiling widely like I haven't done in a while.
That careless laughter of hers was my true happiness. I was so lost in it that I didn't realize she went out of things to say, and she was now smiling cutely at me. It was all too familiar, she hadn't changed one bit. I touched the frame of her grasses with two fingers and took them off gently. Her darting eyes stared at me with undisguised startle. Whereas her parted lips became increasingly irresistible, my fingers landed on her shoulders, getting tangled in the curls against her neck. She was taken by surprise once again, but she made nothing against it. Neither was she looking too inviting...
Shifting closer to her face, I could feel her jerky breath brush against the top of my lip.
Her eyes now carried a sorrow that I could have sworn I've seen before. Closing them, she brought her hands up to my cheeks and pulled me in, tilting her head to the side.
As if my heart wasn't beating fast enough, now it was thumping like a horse's hooves on a dirty road.
Her full lips felt sweet because of the slight nude colored gloss she was wearing. While tasting them in a soft peck, my palm fell on her thigh longingly. Despite the heat, her whole frame shivered, and I pushed myself into her, nibbling her lower lip.
She fell on her back panting as I kept teasing her, tracing the tip of my tongue on her earlobe.
"You have no idea..." I managed to whisper through little kisses on her neck "...how much I missed you." Her chest grew in and out with sharp intakes of air.

I have tried to rebuild this image of us a long time after her departure. Now having her so close, not even an inch between us, everything fell into place perfectly. We were teenagers, and this was the furthest we ever went.
This time it was different.

Her hand rested on my hip when I leaned in again, kissing her full on. Her tongue flicked against my teeth, making me quiver. I groped several parts of her chest till I managed to unbutton her coat, and she sucked on my lip, dragging me on top of her till her head fell on the couch.
My fingers went under her shirt, stroking her belly. Out of nowhere I heard her whimper so I pulled away, not understanding why she suddenly looked so sad, as if she was doing something wrong.


***

This is the second part of an AiGaki trilogy i`m planning :3
If this confused you, let me tell you that there will be two more parts (one before and one after what happened now) so all your questions will be answered 8D
Feedback is much appreciated x3
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Kiss Like Crazy 3 June]
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 03, 2010, 06:59:38 PM
Yeah, I'm dying to know what happened and what's going to happen! Takagaki librarian make out scene FTW!
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Kiss Like Crazy 3 June]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on June 03, 2010, 09:45:34 PM
Louder than the Rain

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Her mischievous smirk wasn't visible in the darkness, Ai probably thinking Sayu was already asleep

XD  evil bunny

The kiss, so cute with Ai missing the lips  :wub:  :wub:

That’s a cute AiSayu oneshot, I like it author-san  :thumbsup


Kiss Like Crazy

4 years is a long time for this kind of thing.

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as if she was doing something wrong.
:O  don’t tell me she’s in a relationship with someone.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Kiss Like Crazy 3 June]
Post by: Ada XD on July 06, 2010, 04:33:27 PM
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Prologue

A chilly breeze rustled past me, carrying the damp, earthy scent of a new season.
Heavy circles of steam came out with my breathing, synchronized with the fast pace of my already tired legs. The daily morning jog was coming to a close end, when I decided to take a break before heading back home, and then crawl into a warm blanket with a nice cup of tea under my nose. I didn't expect it to be this cold.
As usual, the well-known park was still empty quiet, and the fog made it look like heaven...

I headed to the closest bench and pulled out the earphones, enjoying a few minutes of serenity. My schedule for the day promised to be very busy, and it only included myself, spending quality time with my special someone.

But that certain morning, the usual sound of the distant cars wasn't the only thing that I could hear. A faint weeping reached my ears too, so I turned around to figure out where it was coming from. Having the wind mask all the nearby sounds, I would have probably thought that it was just my imagination playing tricks on me, if I hadn't spotted something under a tree.
I got up and found my way closer, the petite frame of a woman with her face hidden in her knees taking shape.
The cry suddenly stopped, replaced by a loud cough that raked her body. My first impulse was to sit next to her and put my hands on her shaking shoulders, but I only managed to startle her though. She jerked away, yelped and tripped, and when she lifted her teary eyes in fear, we were both taken by the surprise of seeing the least expected person.

"Sayumi-chan?"
The sweat shirt she was wearing on top of her light dress didn't seem to keep her too warm. She still laid there, hesitant and worn-out, but most of all, ... surprised and embarrassed that it was me who found her, out of all people.
The next thing I knew I pulled her up, and the weakness in her knees shocked me. Slowly leading her to the taxi rank outside the park, she reclined against my arm and avoided looking me straight in the eye. Even in the cab, she linked her hands between her knees and looked down the whole time; it was then when I noticed some tints of light purple bruises on her legs.

When the car stopped, she gaped at the surroundings in confusion, while I tipped the driver and got out of the car. Her eyes got even wider when I opened the door and gave her my hand, but she took it without a second thought.
She tried to hold back little sneezes, since the morning was growing colder with all the wind howling in the trees.
"Takahashi-sensei, I thought you were taking me to the hospital."
"And I thought you hated hospitals."
A tiny, barely visible smile appeared on her face as we entered my house, but loud calls coming from the living room made her go back to the unusual shy, quiet and scared self I found her in.

"Mou~ Aichan, you're finally back! I wan..."
My girlfriend stopped in her track when she saw a stranger literally hugging me, as I was helping her up the stairs.
"... Do you have something to tell me?"
I smiled with a big sigh and told her to wait a few minutes, then I turned back to Sayu, patting her shoulder.

She seated herself on my bed and looked around curiously, her lips curved into a small 'o' and her dark eyes following every detail. After I told her to pick the clothes she wanted from the wardrobe, I quickly stepped in the bathroom and hid my dumb grinning face.
Once the tap from the tub was rolled open and some towels were in place, I quickly came back and found her stare at me cutely, with a pair of short jeans and a pink shirt to her side.
"A bubble bath should make you feel better."
"Takahashi-san, why are you doing this?"
I didn't think she would be back to her senses so soon.
"When you're done, come downstairs and have breakfast with us. Maybe you can tell us what happened..." I smiled softly and simply walked out, skipping all the way back to the living room, where a pissed Gaki was waiting for me.


***

This will have more parts (?) xD So stay tuned <3   :grin:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Remote" - 6 July]
Post by: badsaints on July 06, 2010, 04:55:21 PM
Sensei? So Ai is a teacher here? Or a doctor? My guess is the former and Sayu is her student :P

Sayu was abused? Hence the bruises? Ai sure has some explaining to do since her Gaki walked in on her being hugged by another hawt girl :lol:

Do give us the second part soon :)
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Remote" - 6 July]
Post by: Ada XD on July 25, 2010, 10:13:22 PM
^ Yes, very soon 8D I promise  :grin: Thank you for reading!

Blood on my neck

What is that noise?
Using the closest towel to cover myself, even with the uneasy feeling that tells me something bad might happen, I gather enough courage to turn myself around.
I'm afraid even to blink. A breeze stirs the wisps of hair dangling over her forehead and the moon shines brightly on her transparent black dress. This isn't the first time that I'm seeing her like this : on her knees, on my window ledge, with her pale hands folded above her thighs.

She gets up and her beautiful pointed teeth are revealed with a gentle smile. I gulp and back away, my skin tingling with anticipation at the sight of her body.
She carries herself like a docile fox, but her eyes hide something else, just as if she has ...  this desire to scorch off all the ground before me if I plan to run away. Her footsteps disperse loud squeaks in the wooden floor, and I struggle to fight this panic rising in my throat.
No, I wouldn't call it panic. It's rather... fluster? My cheeks turn hot and I can feel the unusual flicker of adrenaline now that I have no more room to move and my back is touching the wall. She closes in, placing one palm flat on the concrete somewhere near my ear, and all the candles on the desk expose more of her perfect figure. 
My thoughts get clouded.

She stares at my throat absently, and her bright red lips start to shake. I can't stop my heart from pounding. Her other hand quickly lands on my jawline, surprising me and electrifying  me, because her fingers never felt so cold before. They slide downwards at my pulse point, her short nails gently and carefully tickling me.  Chills rise through my skin, and I shiver closing my eyes slowly, because I know what's next.

Wait... She's not biting me? This feeling certainly blew up all my expectations.
Yet another wave of excitement runs up my spine as she lays a few gentle kisses on the crook of my neck. Her tongue escapes her mouth and glides under my chin, then over my lips, as her fingers touch the back of my thighs. I gasp in the back of my throat, unconsciously moving closer to her warm breath.
I find it awkward to cling onto her, but there's no way I could be standing still on my feet with all this treatment going on.
I think I'm sinking into a trance. My mouth opens too so she proceeds to kiss me heatedly with her tongue lapping the inside, and I can't think anymore.

Her hands jump up from my thighs to a firm grasp on my back, lifting me and backing away from my face.
Do all vampires have this enormous strength?

Only the towel stands between us, and my mind goes blank. With her hands under the white material on my bare back and my legs tightly wrapped against her slender waist, she carries me on top of the desk and cups my face. I start to feel scared again, seeing how the look in her eyes changes completely. It's not lust anymore. There isn't even that sweet gentleness that stopped me from calling for help. It's ... something else? Just now I can fully realize what would happen to me without my blood.
A beautiful, almost naked vampire stuck between my legs, is ready to devour me. I can't cast my eyes away though. Why can't I scream? Why can't I push her away?

She tilts my head to the side and parts her lips, my hands trembling nervously. I can notice her dealing with faraway thoughts through her half closed eyelids, and a deja-vu image immediately flashes though my mind. The last two times she visited me last month... she only bit my wrists. Does she want to kill me now?
Her two fangs dig deeply into my flesh, and I try to jolt off the desk but she keeps me secured and in place so I can't fight her. I can feel the energy drain out of me slowly, and a smile creeps along my face.
It's like nothing I felt before. So much blood coming out of me at this steady pace, I can't take much more of it.
My elbows and knees turn limp as I sink into the desk. It's a good thing I'm sitting down, or else...

"Are you okay?"
Huh? Is she actually asking me this? "I guess..."
Looking up at her, I find the concern in her facial features quickly turn in a genuine joy. Her adorable smile shows up, convincing enough to make the ends of my lips go upwards too. She actually left enough blood in me to remain conscious?
I try to get up from this uncomfortable sprawled position, but I can't move properly just yet, so I fall onto her, with my head in her shoulder. She lifts me up again with a cute giggle and helps me sit down on the floor. Her fingers are so warm against my legs... I fail to realize that the towel is now falling off, because I still feel so sleepy that it's not even funny.
She gets on top of me smirking sensually, staring at my whole frame, and I start to feel hot once again.
"When are you..." my voice lowers to a guttural mumble.
"... Coming back? Maybe sooner than you think, dearest Risa."

She is like this... She can survive. All because of my blood. I saved her life.
My stomach flips at the statement, and I use all the remaining energy to put my hand on her shoulder and say this louder so she can hear me properly "You're so beautiful."
Her brown long curls touch my chest as she leans in to kiss my forehead. The last thing I'm aware of before falling asleep is her thumb brushing against my neck, followed by a cute sound of her sucking the remaining red liquid.
"Sleep well, my favorite victim."
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: kawaii beam on July 25, 2010, 10:43:53 PM
i said it on H!O and i'll say it again...

THAT

WAS

HOT

 :imdead:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 26, 2010, 02:02:54 AM
^ I definitely agree! Whew~! *fans self* just what I needed to wake up!
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: kawaii beam on July 26, 2010, 09:24:42 PM
ok i seriously cant stop rereading this XD ada u must do the vampire ver to this u have to~ :cry:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: Ada XD on July 26, 2010, 09:31:16 PM
@rndmweird : hehe xD  :grin: Don't read this before going to sleep (?) :lol: :whistle:
@ kawaii beam : aww than you  :heart: and really? oxo I haven't thought of doing that X'D But it's a very good idea though oxo
Ok it's decided xD I'm writing it and dedicating it to you how does that sound  O0
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: kawaii beam on July 26, 2010, 09:32:43 PM
that sounds epic! i cant wait to read it X3
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on my neck" - 25 July]
Post by: Ada XD on July 30, 2010, 08:48:22 PM
Body Language

Routine is like rust.
The girls sat in silence on their usual seats, staring through their windows at how the sun fell on the same old buildings.
A certain turtle's lashes were becoming heavier after all those hours of traveling, while another only hoped to reach faster at her destination and start attacking on the fridge.
Gakisan, the only one on earth at that moment, found vaguely surprising the fact that the private van made a sudden turn to the left, right after the phone of the driver flipped shut. There was no traffic in the front either, so she decided to ask away what was concerning her.
"Yoshida-san, I believe this isn't the way to our homes."
The middle aged man looked at the sub leader through the mirror "I'm sorry Niigaki-san, your choreographer just called. I was ordered to bring you to the rehearsal room."
Eri shot up from her doze, rubbing her eyes "She did what?!"
"But we're just coming back from the bus tour!" The driver was feeling guilty seeing LinLin's eyes reflect with sadness, but he shook his shoulders because there was nothing he could do. "Can't we skip this? I'm very tired..."
"I'm afraid not, Lin-san."
She sighed heavily and threw herself back on the chair, while Eri stretched and yawned loudly.
"Fine." Gaki rummaged through her purse for the wallet "Let's grab some coffee, and then we can go. Why don't we make her wait a bit?"


They were more than an hour late, but they knew for sure no one would blame them. Before opening the door, Gaki feared of interrupting an intense dance rehearsal, but she was greatly relieved to see that the 5 Morning Musumes were having a break.
Kamei immediately found her way to the couch where JunJun and Reina were chatting, and LinLin ran straight to her leader that was reading something in a corner. Alone in front of the door, Gaki dropped her bag and proceeded to take off her sweatshirt, remembering how much she had missed Ai in the meantime.
When she turned to look at her once more, she saw how LinLin was lured away by the tinfoil sound of candies given by Eri to Sayu and Aika. She took full advantage of this opportunity and stepped closer, greeting her cutely. Ai wasn't fully facing her though, but she still replied, a noticeable monotony in her voice.

"How was your trip?"
No one was close enough to hear what they were talking, so Gaki felt free in saying what was really on her mind. "Three words : tiring and boring."
"How come?" Ai still didn't look up from the Seishun Collection song sheets.
"I was caught up with loads of events that I can't even count on my fingers. Then, at nights, I was alone without someone to talk to, because Kame and LinLin were already asleep at 10 pm"
"I see. But you surely had pleasant memories of it too, right?"
"Yeah, ... I suppose. Anyway, how was it to be 4 days apart from me?"
She scooted closer to her leader so that their legs were touching.
"Was singing Melodies with Eri one of those memorable experiences too?"
"Huh?" Gaki's eyes shot wide open at the sudden change of topic.
Her dark glare was still directed downwards "Whose idea was it?"
"Uhm... I'm pretty sure it was hers but-"
"Oh. I bet you enjoyed touching those thighs and that ass and the rest of the assets, because you're naughty like that."
"What? What's with all these questions Aichan...?" The leader stared absently at the pile of paper in front of her, her brows furrowed in anger. "Could it be that you are... jealous?"
Ai sighed helplessly, then turned to the side to face Risa for the first time in 4 days "Jealous of who?"
"I don't know... Eri maybe?"
The leader started to chuckle sarcastically, in a rather exaggerate manner, unaware that she was scaring Risa in her attempt to cover up the obvious. She got up quickly and walked away without looking back, stopping only when she was at LinLin's side. Risa exhaled, turning a longing glance back up at the ceiling to stop herself from crying.
Around 10 minutes later, with everyone changed in their newest single outfits, the harsh rehearsals started. Oddly enough, the sub leader was too occupied with her own thoughts to even look tired the least. All her muscles ached and a yawn threatened to come out, but she didn't let it show.


After being called in the meeting room to debate various things with her manager, Gakisan walked down the hallway towards the dressing rooms area. Little did she know that behind her curtain was a very special someone, growing more impatient by the second.
Pulling the thick material away, a pair of hands linking around her neck gave her the fright of her life. She had no time to gasp or to react, since she was pulled inside quickly with a familiar mouth crushing against her own, making her heart leap of joy inside her chest.
The older one's lips moved softly and slowly, but with a devilish passion that heated generously her lover's whole being. Snaking her arms along Ai's hips, Risa's fingers played with the hem of her pants, until she finally pushed them down. She gasped quietly at the feeling of Gaki's palms moving slowly on her butt, their tongues mimicking what the skilled hands were doing down below. Feeling her leader's legs slightly parting, the younger squeezed the firm back generously.
Oh how long she had missed this. 4 days, was it...?
Ai brought her hands downwards to place them above her lover's, their fingers intertwining desperately as she pushed her chest more into Risa.
A smirk creased the corner of her bruised mouth as Ai backed away panting. She wasn't expecting her to be this bold with the tired muscles and everything.
"What were you saying? ... That I'm the naughty one?" Gaki whispered, on the verge of laughing. Ai only shoved her into the wall angrily "Shut up."
The sub leader, still giggling, made a mouth-zip sign. When she noticed Ai was staring intensely at her chest, she took off her shirt immediately and glanced over at the approaching leader.
"Ooh what are you gonna do to me Aichan~?"
She smiled charmingly "You'll see."
It was hard for her to step closer with the pants down at her ankles, which amused Gaki even more. Her smile wiped off though when Ai pulled her by the hair towards her face to kiss her again. Gaki complained with a soft groan but everything was only enticing her unbearably, to the point that she felt herself getting moister.
With the other hand, Ai unhook the bra and snatched it away, moving her mouth on the slope of her breast. A single moan rippled through her at the sensation, her hands smacking the wall for support.
Leader loved how quickly Gaki's defensive weapons had weakened "Could Kamei ever make you feel like this?"
She repeated the action with the other side of the chest, feeling how she was getting tingly herself "Say it."
Her fingers glided downwards in a circling motion, up until they reached their goal.
"A-Aichan... "
She twitched nervously several times under her girlfriend but delayed her answer on purpose.
"You're not in the mood to make jokes anymore, are you, Gakisan? C'mon say it."
"No, she.. she can't." Ai smirked playfully and kissed her shoulder. "...Are you h-happy now?"
Of course she was happy. This is what it was all about: Ai's big fat ego had her property back, no more jealousy, no more doubt and no other hands on her lover. Other than hers that is.

It doesn't happen too often when the dressing room is completely empty for them to have a little fun, and Ai might as well help her sub leader get rip of all that tiredness.

***
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Body Language" - 30 July]
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 31, 2010, 12:20:08 AM
I really love a jealous, possessive Ai. She's just so dominating! :drool:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Body Language" - 30 July]
Post by: badsaints on July 31, 2010, 06:26:40 AM
 :on bleed:

This was after the GakiKameLin FC tour right? Aichan was jealous. No doubt about it :lol:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Body Language" - 30 July]
Post by: Ada XD on August 02, 2010, 08:19:45 AM
Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~
Greeted by a well known fragrance coming from inside, I freeze at the sight of her taunting silhouette emerging from the water. She steps out of the tub slowly with her back at me, and just now it's when the wind decides to knock the window in the outside wall with loud noises.
A piece of white material that she wraps around her stops me from contemplating any further the beautifully glowing skin.

As she turns around, the smiling face I've had in mind since the last time I saw her now stares at me with undisguised hostility. I put on a pretty smile to not scare her away as I get up, it's the last thing I'd want after all this waiting.
Following and scrutinizing her across the room, my mind fills with images I shouldn't be daydreaming of at the moment, and this constricted sensation is something I'm not too fond of.
A glimmer of excitement flashes through her dilated pupils as I corner her in the wall.

I can't believe my eyes how alluring her bare neckline looks in the pale light. So white and tempting, smooth and perfect. I run my hand on her jawline tantalizingly in a try to seduce her, but I'm only tricking myself, because it's the other way around. Her scent lures me in, making all my senses flare with impatience.
I touch her throat lightly as to not soil everything with my hands, noticing how a small shiver slips off her shoulders at my action. She faces me with closed eyes, almost as if waiting for something.
Should I...?

There's no time to think now that she's exactly where I wanted her : vulnerable and flustered, her skin too irresistible for me to not taste it. I immediately bring my mouth to her neckline to kiss it gently, feeling her shoulder pushing up slowly into me. Obviously taking it as a good sign, I start to drag my tongue all the way up to her delicious lips. I can feel the blood pumping inside her with such a force that... it's nerve wrecking. It's all thanks to the little, little conscious part remaining inside my head that I haven't eaten her neck already. But I must forget about my hunger, I'm not here for that today.

She's enjoying this for sure, since she's holding onto me as I feel her thighs in a tender touch. Her breath picks up a little more to match her heartbeat, and I only try my hardest not to listen how beautifully her blood flows, but to concentrate on this lovely girl and how her full lips open for me.
I waste no more from the very little time that's left, and cover her mouth possessively with my own to show her the desire that only herself awakes in me.
My tongue flicks over hers in a hot and wet dance, and her arms immediately fall limp from my shoulders.
She has no idea how much I enjoy to have this effect on her.

These last 60 seconds had been a blur, but everything's clearer now that I'm hit by a sudden revelation. My hands grasp hard onto her naked back side, eliciting a wave of warmth that takes over my lower part. But I ignore it.
I don't want to do this...
I stop our kiss to lift her up, and her spread legs around me only adds to my excitement. My mind doesn't want to allow this, but the weakening in my muscles tells me there's something much more important than making this girl mine. I take her to the desk quickly and bring my hands to her face, my mind going wild at the feel of her pink and warm cheeks in my cold palms.
There's fear in her eyes, but it's too late to show any signs of regret because the unbearable scent of life within her burns my mind.

My teeth pierce quickly through the soft skin of her neck as my hands pin her onto the desk, ready for any physical reaction from her side. She's not going anywhere.
The sweet liquid starts to run back through my veins as I lay a groan of bliss against her flesh. I could go like this forever, but the logical part of my mind comes in again to trigger signal alarms.
I'm not completely rejuvenated, but I must stop now if I want to see her again.

I back away and wipe my mouth with the back of my wrist, then look down at her. She's panting madly with her eyes closed, and her lips turn a more purple shade.
My body goes rigid at the realization and the new blood that rushes inside feels instantly colder.
"Are you okay?"
My heart beats powerfully again as I'm waiting for her reply in panic.
"I guess..."
A huge smile appears on my face in the greatest relief I've had yet to feel. I know it's me who brought her into this state, and I am feeling guilty about it, but I can't help to find the fumbling of her arms and legs extremely adorable.
I take her in my arms again and bring her down, feeling how the warm sensation returns as I brush my hands along her legs. Her head slowly touches the floor as her eyelids flutter heavy, and my eyes widen after her towel looses and falls off.
Now completely revealed in front of me, my cheeks start to palpitate with heat. I climb on top of her carefully studying her curves in the process, not wanting to lose myself once again. She's too tired now, but this view will surely delight my eyes the next time I visit her.

"When are you..."
Her deep voice reaches my ears more and more quietly, and I finish her sentence so she won't waste her energy left in vain "...Coming back? Maybe sooner than you think, dearest Risa."
Yes, definitely next time.

She touches my shoulder lightly as her full lips open up again to compliment my beauty. Probably unaware how much happiness it brings to me to know that I'm not some kind of a repulsive creature to her, I lean down to kiss her forehead, long turned cold too.
Her eyes close one last time and her chest moves along with her slow breathing as I take in more of her details in the diffuse light.
I can't let even a drop from the precious red liquid waste away so I clean it off with my thumb before bringing it between my lips.
"Sleep well, my favorite victim."


***


Dedicated to Kawaii beam!  :heart: Hope you enjoyed it dear ^_^
A new (cute, and not hot. *LE GASP!*) update in the next days so stay tuned  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~" 2 August]
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 02, 2010, 02:40:21 PM
THANK YOU, KAWAIWAI!!

This was, again, so  :drool: Hmm, maybe needs a perv continuation? *hint hint nudge nudge wink wink*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~" 2 August]
Post by: kawaii beam on August 02, 2010, 05:34:33 PM
kekeke i an so spoiled~ XD

thankies agaib ada~>3< my reply on H!O was more allover the place XD but still i shall show my reply in emocons XD

founding out when u updated: :onioncheer:

started reading it: :ptam-ok:

still reading it: :luvluv2:

nearing the end: :wriggly:

when it was over: :temper:

when i replied: :imdead: :on GJ: :mon lovelaff:

lol there XD its not EXACT but its close XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~" 2 August]
Post by: Ada XD on August 02, 2010, 05:41:14 PM
@rndmweird :  :lol: Queenie and Glassie on H!O want me to make perv version too xD I'm not sure yet but I'll try, sometimes, just for you you awesome bunch of hentais  :grin: XD
@Beam-chan : awww  :heart: thank you so much ;_; that reaction's just adorable xD and nothing matches with the JPH!P emoticons 8D pwnage  :twothumbs Glad you liked it  :heart:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~" 2 August]
Post by: xanimefreak13x on August 04, 2010, 10:59:27 AM
PERV VERSION! PERV VERSION! PERV VERSION!  :wahaha: :mon fyeah: :mon cute:
Haha, I actually read this over at H!O also. :nervous

Just gotta say how awesome this is over here too~ :mon lovelaff:
My reactions -->  :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff: :mon bleed2: LOL...

Actually the first thing that came to my mind (after reading the discussion/replies on H!O) was... how YOUNG you are! :shocked Yeahh... I was quite shocked and was in disbelief for a while... :mon one: quite a long while might I say.

Haha, I even tweeted it on twitter!
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"right now.. i am sitting here in disbelief at how YOUNG one of my fav fanfic writers are... gosh DAMN!"1:30 AM Aug 2nd via web
OMGAHH, you write so freakin awesomely well!!! :wriggly: I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! It totally threw me off, haha. I love all of your fics~ :wub: Never stop writing!!!  :lol:
Phewww, lol. I finally got that out.  :cow:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Blood on your neck ~Vampire version~" 2 August]
Post by: Ada XD on August 23, 2010, 03:17:50 PM
^ Awwww ;_; I'm really glad!
And I'm not that young... XD  I'll be 18 in a few months  :rofl:
I really appreciate it <3 Naah, I'm not that much of a good writer xD You should have seen me last year when I first started o_o
Thanks so much for your comment xD


Ada is back with another oneshot ;D
Enjoy 8D
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One silky black dress

Quick steps echoed around as she skipped down the staircase with the towel on her shoulder, towards the intimacy of the only place she loved in that building.
She rolled the knob of the dressing room slowly and wiped her forehead before slipping inside, exhaling contently of getting free from the extreme rehearsal she had just had with a noisy pair of bunny and turtle.
Something wasn't right though. The room she expected to find empty, only to herself, was already occupied. Moreover, the person hadn't even acknowledged her presence yet.

It took a couple of seconds for the situation to settle completely in her tired reasoning, the dark orbs finally popping wide to the other side of the room: fellow gokkie Niigaki Risa was swaying her hips around while making cute poses at the mirror, providing the music herself with a sensual hum. This wasn't a rare sight actually, if it wasn't for the black dress that Risa had on. 
Amused and slightly aroused, Ai leaned against the door with a curious and bright grin plastered from side to side, continuing to observe her sub leader.

The younger placed the pointy finger on her lips and bent forward for more poses with slow body moves, unwillingly revealing more of her legs to Ai.
Check it out~ Watashi no uta
How about? Watashi no subete wo, Yes!
Dakishimete~ Ii no yo..

She touched the bow casually, satisfied with her little performance and confident in her skills of challenging the bunny as the cutest of the group. Finishing the chorus, she spun on her heels, but her smile disappeared immediately and her heart began to race when she caught glimpse of someone at the door.  Stopping immediately, she made the dress wave around furiously.
Ai, still smiling like a dork (and obviously pleased of what she had just witnessed), made her way towards the mirror too, clapping with enthusiasm. "That was very cute Gakisan."
Cute wasn't actually the right word to use and she knew it well.

Risa blinked several times as the color in her cheeks changed to a rosy pink, then turned around quickly with no other ways left of hiding her face "I-I'm sorry!"

Leader grabbed her shoulders gently, leading the bean to face her again "What for?"
"I shouldn't have stolen your dress."
"Huh? Aww don't worry about it. It looks so nice on you.."
Gaki gave a small mew of embarrassment as she looked down, avoiding to look straight in the pretty brown orbs in front of her "I wanted to uh... take some pics for the Pocket Morning blog with these dresses."
The older raised her eyebrows, nodding quickly "I can help you if you want."

A minute later she found herself with a phone in her hands, staring for a bit too long at the smiling bean before her. With a click, the photo was taken and Risa disappeared after the curtain where she had the other outfits waiting for her.
With nothing to do while she was changing, Ai browsed through the pic gallery of her phone for more pics, delighted at the amount of adorable shots. She would have certainly not been afraid to squeal out loud at Gaki's cuteness, but something stopped her from raping the next or the zoom buttons.

"Uh... Aichan?"
"Is something wrong?"
"...The zipper, I can't open it."

Leader placed the phone down and poked her head in through the curtain carefully, even though she knew that the bean was fully dressed. The bow and the gloves were taken off, and Gaki was anxiously waving her arms backwards, trying to reach to the blocked zip, but it just wouldn't budge.
Ai reached over to the dress and simply slid the zipper down, forgetting about how easily removable are the concert outfits. The dress fell loose till Gaki's midsection, clearing a perfect view of the smooth back with the blue bra straps, which Ai totally didn't see coming. Gaki felt the unaware dawn of a smile on her lips on hearing Ai gasp quietly, and when she turned around, her best friend was having her face covered, peeking through two fingers.
She tried hard not to laugh and pushed her outside slowly, reminding her that the others will be back shortly.

Checking the temperature in her cheeks with her palms, Ai sat on the floor with her legs crossed. She took a quick glance at the phone and picked it up, the screen flashing on with the image of the sexy silky black-dressed Gaki. Muttering something to herself, she sent the pic to her own phone using blue tooth, then stuffed it deep into her pocket.

"Aichan, did you say something?"

Must.save.the.others.too.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["One silky black dress" 23 August]
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 23, 2010, 04:26:10 PM
Love love love! this one shot! I really love anything Takagaki, but that little black number was so hot :drool:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["One silky black dress" 23 August]
Post by: fallenxangel24952 on August 24, 2010, 11:50:57 AM
OMG!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy2:
Good Job Ada :on GJ:
luv ur TakaGaki Story :mon geek:

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Must.save.the.others.too.
Just take the real one :twisted:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["One silky black dress" 23 August]
Post by: Ada XD on October 26, 2010, 08:07:36 PM
@ ^ and ^^ : late reply, but yes~ thank you guys  :heart:


I'm back with an emo update lmao xD
<3 Enjoy? 8D

Lullaby Game

That day won't be forgotten too soon. Just when I was so excited to see you, to take you in my arms and to feel your warmth that I had so much missed, I found myself hit by the dreadful truth I wouldn't have accepted before.
Clinged around your arm as you were skipping down the stairs, there she was, trying to steal a kiss from you, smiling and giggling with such joy that almost brought me to tears.  Even though each and every piece of me was screaming to get out of the taxi and bring my fists at her, I decided to leave from where I came, my lips twitched in a bitter smile.

The road home was quiet and empty, and the pathetic cowardice that I showed back there was mercilessly torturing my conscience. I would never allow myself to be humiliated, but just look in what state you've brought me.
Leaning my forehead against the cold window to get a better hear of the rain, I could only distinguish how everything seemed to speak the awfulness of my situation.

Even when I reached home, the hallway mirror never showed a more depressing reflexion. Pretending to be happy even with tears straining down my face, has become a ritual by now. The good part is that I've finally caught notice of the blindfold you so gracefully tied around my eyes all this time, as I was powerless to stop it.

Thinking about what you may have done in your splendid afternoon with your work mate was crushing down every corner of my mind, for I was absolutely defeated. With the clock hitting midnight and still no sign from you, I brought the cellphone near my face underneath the covers and stared at our picture.
Is there anything higher than the love I have for you?
The phone suddenly vibrated in my palm, bringing me down from my thoughts. Seeing that it was you the one to call me so late in the night, contrary to the anger I was supposed to feel, my own heart echoed in my ears as it was beating too fast from the excitement.
"Aichan?"
"Hi... Did I wake you up?"
Just by hearing you again, a tiny trace of a smile appeared out of nowhere. "No, no, I wasn't asleep yet."
"Ah, good to hear that" I could even feel a tickling sensation flowing through, as you were slowly breathing into the phone.
Flopping on the pillow to stare at the ceiling, a beam of joy took over my face as I played with the small necklace that I had on. "I was waiting for your call today..."
"Oh, about that. Sorry Gaki-chan, I was really busy."
Busy? With the smile now completely erased from my face, I turned to the side and unwillingly pulled the knees to my chest "With what?"
"Uh, let's see. After work I ran home and uhm. I took Ouji to the vet and then.. I helped my mom and. Yeah, you understand."
She went out with her, god knows what they might have done, and now she is lying to me. "Right..."

I closed my eyes and bit my lip to hold myself together, completely aware that I was nothing but a coward again. Who could blame me though?  Acting like I don't know I'm being deceived is slowly becoming one of my talents.

***

Normally, three days apart from eachother would not mean much. This time though, I couldn't sleep nor concentrate, I couldn't eat properly, all because of a constant suffocating sensation that didn't let me live. It's like I had a premonition, and I never was so right before. Deciding to make you a surprise visit at work was soon proved to be a very bad decision.

Frozen in the door frame, I looked up from where your arms rested on her backside, to where your tongue was grazing past her lips. Even with her eyes closed I could see the excitement that she felt from having become so intimate to you, and the more I stood there to watch you sweetly and exquisitely torturing her, the less I could keep myself from bursting out loud.
As expected, the panic was not within my power to control, so I turned around and quickly ran away behind the corner, with the great relief of not being noticed.

My shaking legs brought me to the parking lot, empty at that late time of the day. Pausing a moment in breathless misery, my eyes shot back to the building, stinging and starting to water. I could hardly bear to deal with it anymore, so I cried without hearing myself think, and i screamed without hearing my own voice, because that's how low I reached. The only comfort i truly want right now is to remember...

***

Thanks to I don't know what miracle I was able to get a few hours sleep, though I couldn't get rid of all those images with you kissing Sayumi. I twitched in my bed endlessly, whispering through cold lips all the questions that I couldn't say with looking you in the eye, up until the handle of the bedroom door clicked slowly.
I opened my eyes, instantly alert at whatever sound I could hear.
The small steps got closer to my bed, and I felt the chills of terror climbing up my spine as my whole being got numb. It was too dark to even see the silhouette of the intruder, and with nothing close to my bed to break his head, I clutched onto the sheets silently, waiting for him to go away.
The lamp flickered on, taking me by surprise and making me yelp loudly.

"Oh my, I'm so sorry Gakisan. I didn't mean to scare you.."
"You, here?"
My surprise to see you immediately switched places with a weird and elating joy. You were so absolutely lovely with that make-up and that fancy curly hair, wearing that tight dress that showed a bit too much skin... Wait, what?
She took you out in the clubs again.
That very moment when everything clicked into place, I never felt more confused. My own feelings got messed up so badly that I didn't even know what was I supposed to feel. Happiness that you're finally back to me, or anger because you shoved me to the side without a second thought?

Probably noticing how red my eyes were and how pathetic I looked after hours of crying myself to sleep, you suddenly jumped on the bed and placed your palms on either sides of my face.
"Did something happen? Are you sick?"
Your piercing gaze tried to read right through me, so I put on the happiest smile in the world to avoid that at all costs.
"No, no, I'm okay." pausing a moment to debate my next move, I was taken aback by your lips pecking me in that adorable and playful manner of yours. Though it didn't last more than a second, it still made my stomach flip, even if I've made out with you so many times like nobody's business.
I started dumbly into your pretty orbs, wondering if it was okay to want so badly more of those little kisses. But no, you just had to pull yourself a meter away with this sad expression that made me even more confused.
"I bet you were really lonely my Gakisan." Slowly pulling down the zipper that was located in the rib area, the unmistakable smirk that I've always been mad about crept along your face again. "I'm gonna make sure that won't happen anymore..." you said pleasantly, as my eyes almost popped out from the shock.

With the dress and the shoes now on the floor, you climbed straight on top of me with your lips and your hands bolder than never. This is it; being seduced by you is the end of my road.
Overwhelmed by your sudden affection, I also started to feel your intimate places with my greedy hands while I was more than gladly answering all your kisses. Somehow though, a tear came out from the corner of my eye, not entirely of joy. What most wrenched my heart away was how I could still smell her perfume on you...

Doubting is a waste, forgiving is a waste, it's all about the time we can never get back, sleeping soundly in my heart.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Lullaby Game" 26 October]
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 27, 2010, 08:43:31 PM
Wow, that's really kinda sad. Poor Gaki, knows she's being a sucker, but can't do anything to stop herself. And Ai, is she really unaware that Risa knows? Anyway, Takgaki at the end. Hmm, maybe to make it even, Risa should get it on with Reina? :lol: Or is that just my inner Tanagaki lover talking?
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Lullaby Game" 26 October]
Post by: Ada XD on February 13, 2011, 11:24:28 PM
Wow, I'm not dead! 8DD
Happy (early?) Valentines Day people! <3
In here, it's the 14th 8D I worked all day on this oneshot, and dang it came out long >_>
I hope you enjoy and you don't fall off asleep or something while reading it *sad face* ;_;

Koi Choko


Senior student Takahashi Ai was in her usual eating place during lunch break, when a sudden roaring from across the college yard caught her attention. There was a flurry of interest in a small but noisy crowd of boys and girls, all of them gathered around one single familiar figure and overwhelming her with one single question. It appeared that they were asking her out on a date for the long awaited Valentines Day, and also forcing her to pick one of them.
That familiar person was none other than the junior hottie Niigaki Risa, also known as the popular heart-breaker that had her own fanclub and fansite.
Ai put her bento down on the bench and held her breath, not taking her eyes away from the young and beautiful Miss Perfect, trying to read some sort of answer on her expressionless face. Her eyes were empty, her shoulders dropped down, a sigh of boredom escaping her lips as she let them all enjoy their usual fangirling moment. They didn't show signs of stopping anytime soon though, so the young woman made a little irritated puffing noise and pushed them aside, walking away as if she hadn't heard them.
Ai breathed out in relief, her eyes somehow not ceasing to follow with a glint of excitement the swaying of the younger's hips around the campus. 

She hated to admit it, even to herself, that she was actually in love with Gakisan too, and that she envied with a passion all those people that had the guts to go to her. An intimidating look from her dark chocolate eyes, a sensual and deep voice, a bright and heart-warming smile cornering her two full lips, and even a common yet mesmerizing way of walking that turned heads towards her in an instant... She didn't even know when she had started to notice all those things. Ai and Risa never had many conversations outside the Student's Council, as they were both the iinchous of their respective classes. During that time though, Ai would start to feel her heart pick up a dangerous speed and her palms starting to sweat. But who could blame her?
A sudden temptation to rush over at the bean and shout out all her feelings made its way through all her doubts. She knew she would be rejected just like the rest, but Ai preferred it to be like that instead of living with the regret of not asking.
She clenched her fists and got up, her heart starting to race yet again as her steps brought her closer and closer to her crush.


***


"Oh my god what the hell am I going to do?"
From all that panic, Ai's head felt like it was about to explode.  She stopped her desperate rummage for clothes in her wardrobe and sat on the bed, pressing her fingers against her aching temples. Gakisan? To want to go out on a date with the biggest nerd in school? Ai certainly didn't expect an answer like that.
She plopped down on the bed and stared at the ceiling, a visible smile lightening up her features. She felt like a teenager again, getting ready for her first date. What was she going to wear? How the hell was she going to make the chocolate? And most importantly, the question that kept bugging her, why would Gaki want to go out with someone so plain looking and not interesting enough for her fancy tastes?
Ai sighed and looked at the clock. 5 in the afternoon and she still wasn't even started with the chocolate since she had been too busy deciding on the outfit.
"I wish someone would help me.."

Just then, from the corner of her eye, Ai could sense a warm and dim light that was growing stronger from the other side of the room. Startled, she immediately grabbed the bat from under her bed and shot up, holding it out threateningly at this girl with... a white robe and a halo above her head?!
There was a weird silence.
"Who.. what are you?" Ai asked with her brow slightly lifted and starting to wonder if she was dreaming or not.
"I am an angel." Her voice carried out infinitely sweet and soothing, but the huge grin that was plastered on her perfect face would have made Ai think that it was a lie, if it wasn't for the fact that she could actually see a bit of furniture through her semi-transparent figure.
"Okay I believe you" she said awkwardly "W-What do you want from me?"
"Nothing my dear, I'm just here to help you win the heart of your crush, for it is..." she closely examined her glasses, her messy hair and her clothes "...kind of hard to do that by yourself. No offense." That big grin was beginning to piss her off immensely, but she kept her mouth shut as it was nothing but the truth.

She looked down and thought for a bit if she should let the random angel help her, when her senses picked up that strange light of a new presence again.
"Yo."
"Oh no, not you again!" the white angel slapped her own forehead in frustration while the other one, looking mighty fine in her short red dress and her black boots might we add, rolled her eyes.
"Seriously now, why are you so surprised? It's obvious that when a good angel appears, a bad one must follow too, duuh."
"Would you get lost for a bit? This seems like a pretty difficult VDay situation and I want to handle it by myself."
"Oh really?" she looked over at Ai, that was staring back at them with a mix of confusion and disbelief. "Dang, this really looks like a challenge. I mean look at those glasses, and that hair and those clothes..."
Ai's jaw dropped. "Would you give me a break? You either help me out or you get out, it's as simple as that."

"Ohh you heard her Eri, let's get to business." She showed her usual cat-like smirk and pushed the white angel towards Ai, before poofing away in a quest for the kitchen. "I'll make the chocolatesss~~"

Eri sighed and obliged to let the naughty red angel have her fun, then looked down at Ai and started rubbing her chin, as a sign of deep deep concentration. After a long debate, she grabbed the frame of the glasses with her fingers and made a little grimace as if they were poisoned, then slowly slid them out. The turnout made the angel gasp in shock and her small eyes to widen; the change was THAT big.
"Man, I'm good."
Ai blinked several times as her lips turned downwards in an are-you-kidding-me manner.
"Yesss, you're really pretty like this!"
Ai kept staring at the wonder-struck face of the angel before her, not knowing if she should feel amused or annoyed. "Uh, that's the face I have all the time."
"No no, it's like the mighty hands of God took out those atrocities and now you're free to hook up with whoever you want!"
".... Eri, is it? You're crazy."

She could notice a slight change in the angel's attitude now that she was a prettier experiment for her to play with; Eri brushed her hair with the most gentleness, she picked out the shortest skirt and the prettiest top from Ai's wardrobe, then she kindly convinced Ai to dress up in them and to quit being so shy.
As the white angel was waiting for Aichan to come out of the bathroom, Reina made her appearance in the room too, visibly pleased with the little prank she did with the chocolates. Her cutesy humming of some annoying song irritated Eri to no extent.
"Reina get out. Now!"
"Huh? What if I don't want to~?"
"If you ruin this moment I'm gonna strangle you and send your skinny rear back to hell in an instant."
Reina put on a flirtatious pout and catwalked sexily towards Eri, noticing how she made a step backwards to support herself on the table. "I doubt you would do that really." Just when she  was about to hit bullseye and lean over her, the door cracked open and Reina immediately took her hands off of Eri, leaving her without a breath.
Hesitantly, Ai walked out of the bathroom with a massive blush coloring her cheeks, clearly not too happy with being dressed in something other than her usual baggy shirts and jeans.
"Is this okay?"
That silence was not what she expected. The both angels were staring at her up and down, blinking once in a while and not taking out one single sound.
"What's wrong? Why won't you answer me?" Ai was on the verge of freaking out, when Reina cleared her throat and nodded professionally.
"That is an awesome pair of thighs. You'll knock the chick over."


***


For most of the night, Ai wasn't able to sleep from the excitement. Just when the sun was starting to rise she managed to get some shut eye, that didn't even last for more than a couple of hours since something... started to tickle her ear. She jumped right up screaming in a rather manly way,  creeping out the two cheeky angels that had poofed in Ai's room really early.
"Whats'dvcdvhcmdibn?"
She tried to rub off the sleep from her eyes but everything was spinning around so badly that she just had to put her head back on the pillow and get some more sleep.
"Come on, sexy butt, time to wake up~"
Ai finally gave in and dragged her sleepy self into the shower, coming out half an hour later with the excitement level a bit higher compared to beforehand.
"Okay! Today will be awesome, yoosh!"

As Eri was helping Ai with her make-up, Reina was wrapping the special chocolates in cheesy red and pink paper. Ai was having this feeling that something was not right though, and the question that was itching her thoughts had to come up again sooner or later.
"Why do you guys think she agreed to go out with me?" 
Without even turning around, Reina replied flatly "Maybe she wanted to make fun of you?" The older flinched at the thought and her brows furrowed in deep concern. She certainly forgot that aspect.
"No, that's not likely." Eri added, her eyes still focused on the make-up colors. "Aichan said they are both meeting two times per week at the Students Council as they are both class presidents; Maybe she respects you and doesn't want to offend you?"
That didn't seem to make Ai any calmer, and Eri noticed that.
"Aww. Look at the bright side! She promised she would come and that's good. At first, I really thought that she would just dump you by making you wait or something. I mean, those glasses..." Eri shivered at the memory "Good thing you got rid of them now, thanks to me~~"
"Hey, aren't you supposed to be the good angel?" Ai shot a glare then felt how tears were welling up.
"Don't worry, everything will be just fine."


***

Surprisingly, Ai didn't have a hard time walking on high heels and showing off her pretty legs. For the first time, she was able to make people turn their heads around for her, and the cheeky angels in the back poked each other with their elbows while grinning in delight. It didn't make Ai any happier though, because she was determined to confess and win just one heart that day.
There was no sign for Gaki in the park, so Ai just decided to wait.
She was growing more and more anxious, as around 20 minutes had passed and she was still on the bench alone, looking in all sides for her crush. She had somehow forgotten that the angels were there; all she wanted to see and hear was Gaki, and the biggest doubt made its way through all the optimism. She was now thinking that she would not come, just like Eri predicted.
Her heart almost leaped out of her chest when a hand was placed on her shoulder.
"I`m so sorry for the wait."
At the sound of that voice, the older shot up immediately and threw herself in Gaki's arms, surprising even herself by her sudden actions. She felt Gaki's hands wander gently in return up and down her back as Ai inhaled the sweet fragrance of her hair, smiling contently.
When she finally let go and met Gaki's eyes, her face was on fire.
"I.. I thought you wouldn't come."
"Hm? I promised yo-... Wow. You look just... woah."
Ai noticed how Gaki's eyes were angled downwards at her legs, then how they climbed up to her cleavage and widened a bit, then finally to her face, then how they went back down. Her heart's fast pace settled a bit as a shimmer of confidence made her lips curl into a small smirk. 
Reina's voice echoed in Ai's ear and before she knew it, she said out loud everything that she heard. "You're looking just as hawt, babe."
She covered her mouth quickly, worried of what would Gaki think of such awkwardness. The younger only blinked several times before giggling in genuine joy and grabbing Ai's hand.
"Come on, I'll take you somewhere to eat."
"Oh, wait. Those are for you.."
Gaki looked over at the bench and took notice of the small red package, her eyes popping wide. "Eeeh? You made chocolates for me? really?!"
"Yearghtdkhd. Uh I mean, Yeah. You don't have to eat them now though."
"Okay, thanks Aichan. I didn't expect this..."
They walked holding hands towards Gaki's car, with Reina in the back wriggling her eyebrows at the white angel, getting in return a complice-like smile.

Lunch in a fancy restaurant was beyond Ai's imagination, and because of the constant nervousness, she kept stumbling over her words, making the bean giggle loudly. She even freaked out when she spilled the water by accident, also cracking Gaki up.
Aside from that, it all went great; thought she was too concentrated on her food to notice how intensely was Gaki staring at her.
When they were done, Ai excused herself and dashed to the restroom, where she was finally able to sigh freely and to let out her squealing.
The two angels poofed right next to her and patted her shoulders with proud looks on their faces.
"Way to go Aichan! Now the big part comes. You know you have to do right?" Reina asked, looking at Ai's reflection in the mirror.
"... Oh god. What do I have to do?"
"Tell her this. You know what girl? I could look into your eyes all day and never get bored. Heck, scratch that. I could give you sexy times all day and never get tired. Rose are red, violets are blue, Let's go to my house together, Cause I know you want it too."
Her smile was so wide and confident and her teeth showed in a cute manner. "How does that sound?"
Eri's blush said it all.
"Uhm... isn't it..." Aichan trailed off "a bit too. Passionate? I really don't want her to think I'm an old pedophile or something."
"Pssh, she won't think that! I mean look at your legs. I wouldn't say no to such an offer really."
"Grah!" Aichan turned her back and covered her ears at Reina's bluntness, noticing from the corner of her eye how Eri proceeded to display a death glare directed towards the red angel, similar to one of... jealousy?
Some weird sounds made Aichan turn around again, her jaw dropping at the sight of the two angels making out and groping themselves shamelessly.
"Just go jump on her tiger!" Reina shouted in quick breaths.
"Huh? No! NO! Not before the marriage night!" The pure little white angel added also in between zipping down the red dress with her teeth.
Ai came out of the restroom with her cheeks palpitating in heat, then slowly made her way through the tables, empty at that time of the day, towards the corner where Gaki was sitting. She could notice from afar that the bean's head was resting against the chair, as this awe-struck smile was taking over her face.
She had a bit of chocolate left on her lower lip.
"Gakisan?" she asked worriedly and leaned over Gaki to take a better look at her. Before she knew it, she was pulled by her waist in Risa's lap, a forehead and nose nuzzling against her chest.
As if she wasn't blushing from the previous scenes, now her whole frame flushed furiously at the intimacy.
"You have something to tell me?" Gaki's deep voice sent shivers up her spine, and even more when her lips touched the crook of Ai's neck.
Ai hated how badly she enjoyed it, but she had to come out of that grip before she was going to lose herself. "Gakisan, please... people are watching!"
"Nobody is watching Aichan. Now do tell me what you have to say please?"
"I'm not sure if... I have something to tell you."
Ai got lost in her own breath as a hand started stroking her thigh under the short skirt.
"So you want me to think you asked me out for nothing?"
"Stop it... To be honest I was actually curious if you would say yes to the biggest nerd in school. I`m still surprised you did."
"I like that nerd very much" Gaki stopped the torture and looked straight up into her eyes. "Yes, I do like that nerd a lot actually. Have you considered that?"
"You... you what? You like me?!" Ai gave a little snort of disbelief and was about to get up from Gaki's lap when a pair of hands grabbed her face and pulled her in.
Gaki, the junior hottie was kissing her?
Ai squirmed a bit but finally gave in to the softness of Gaki's lips and to the chocolate scent that were melting any resistance left. She closed her eyes in a try to not let tears to come out and seated herself in a more comfortable position while bringing her hands to Gaki's shoulders, to pull her closer.
She could swear this was still a dream that she didn't want to wake up from, but the feeling of Gaki's scorching kiss her was just too real.

In the end she got to be the confessed one, and not just by anyone, but by the one she liked too. A Valentines Day couldn't get any more perfect. If the Aichan in this fic was able to wait 24 years for a moment like this, then all the single ladies in the world can do that too 8D
Happy Valentines Day!


*runs away*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Koi Choko" 14th of February]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 14, 2011, 04:46:14 AM
I knew Reina was going to go all aphrodisiac on the chocolate. :lol: Glad she did, though, or we wouldn't have gotten that Takagaki teasing scene. Or would we have? XD The Tanakame thrown in for good measure, too, was pretty awesome in it's own right. :lol:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Koi Choko" 14th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 14, 2011, 05:44:29 AM
Glad she did, though, or we wouldn't have gotten that Takagaki teasing scene. Or would we have? XD

I'm leaving that to your imagination  :grin:
<3
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Koi Choko" 14th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 15, 2011, 07:57:19 PM
Uh, bumping this XD

Koi Choko BONUS!

The enormous college library was dead quiet after the classes, since everyone was too hurried to reach to the cosiness of their homes after a tiring and crowded week. No one would have expected that on a Friday afternoon, a certain petite monkey would choose to work on her essays instead of going out with her girlfriend, completely leaving aside the promises she made to her.
She pushed the glasses with her index finger on her nose before sinking in between a pile of books, maps and pictures, with a steel determination to finish the research as soon as possible. The silence was deafening, just as she loved it. During some other day of the week, the library would be too full for her to be able to concentrate, so she took this as the perfect opportunity to work in peace. Little did she knew that it was going to turn into a very difficult task, because she wasn't alone. 

As she was too focused on her reading, the small steps and the quiet chuckle behind her passed unnoticed. Her attention was finally interrupted when a pair of palms covered her eyes, taking her by surprise and making her yelp loudly. She didn't need turning around to figure out just who on earth did that though, and with an irritated sigh she took those hands away from her face.
"I told you to go shopping or something."
The younger bent forward and hugged Ai's shoulders from the back, supporting her chin on the crook of her girlfriend's neck. "And I said, I'm gonna take you out of here."
That didn't seem to change anything in her attitude; Ai swore to herself that just for one day she was going to keep her hands away from her girlfriend, as to not neglect her college duties anymore. "Please Gakisan, I'm really not in the mood for this right now."
The bean smirked and pecked her girlfriend's neck, squeezing tighter at her tense shoulders. "I thought you're always in the mood."

Ai burst out in a suppressed laugh, finding oddly hilarious the way Gaki brought that up . It was true though; just a bit over a week since they first went on that date, and they couldn't stay apart from eachother ever since? Gaki knew perfectly well just how to turn the switch and transform the nerd into a beast, though Ai was not going to give in too soon.
"You're wasting your time." she said in a low voice, the plain monotony only hurting Gaki's ego and making her even more determined.
"Fine~~" Gaki whined, puffing her cheeks "I'll just stop"
Her girlfriend just nodded slightly, still not taking her eyes up from the books, when a weird noise coming from her stomach made her blush. At that, Gaki's lips curled upwards into a sneaky grin when this brilliant idea popped from the depths of her mind again; she had been planning to use them anytime soon, but she wasn't sure as of how to make her girlfriend eat them. Now that the chance came up so unexpectedly, she wasted no more time in finalizing her naughty plan.
"You hungry? Here, have these." She stuffed her hand into her jacket's pocket and took out a small black package, then placed it in front of her girlfriend. Ai stared at it for a bit before opening it up, three familiar heart-shaped chocolates shining in the dim light and looking absolutely delicious.

"You actually saved some of the chocolates I gave you?"
Gaki took a few seconds to think of a good answer, for her Aichan was not so easy to fool. "These aren't the ones you gave me, because I ate them all." She walked across the table and took a seat on the other side, hoping she won't be questioned again. Ai didn't look suspicious the least, and she quickly proceeded to eat them one by one, making cute faces at the divine taste.   
If the dream that Gaki had after the date a week ago was true, then Aichan would be throwing away her work at any moment as to attack Gaki with hawt smoochies or something. Basically, a good-looking red angel came to her one night and told her that those chocolates were no ordinary ones, and that she should use them on Aichan wisely. Just that... there was no effect yet? Ai kept staring down into her books, licking her lips from time to time and nodding to herself, still absorbed into her reading.
Gaki took a seat and waited for the moment to come, but by the looks of it, she probably had to take matters into her own hands.

"Whew, it's so hot in here.." she exclaimed out of nowhere and took off her jacket, making sure to loosen up some buttons from her blouse and flash a bit of bra material. Ai looked up for a second but managed to ignore staring at it, still being her stubborn self and lowering her gaze back.
"You want to wait for me till I'm done?" The monkey asked slowly, somehow catching glimpse of a pair of legs placing themselves one by one on the shiny table. "Yes. You have a problem with that?"

Aichan made a seemingly uninterested shrug, while the bean looked in all sides to see if someone was coming. As there was no sign of company any time soon, the bean pushed herself into the chair and got into a more relaxing position, playing with her hair in a seductive manner and accidentally lifting her skirt higher up on her thighs.  As her girlfriend still wasn't looking at her, Gaki cleared her throat and made some weird noises to get attention.
"Gakisan, if you're staying here please don't try to distract m-..."
Ai loved the sight before her so much that she had somehow forgotten she had her mouth open. Gaki only winked cheekily and showed a bright grin, hoping that they'll both leave that boring place for some more intimate one.
"You're so evil, you knew that?" Ai accused, her brows furrowed in annoyance.
"Oh yes I did~" Gaki's victorious smile erased completely when Ai looked back in the books, making Gaki believe that a wall of text was more interesting to look at rather than her legs. She whined in defeat and adopted an emo expression, partly from pride, partly as a last try to convince her. She still didn't get one bit of attention.
Ai suddenly got up and turner around, the index finger tapping at her chin while she looked through the shelves for some other book, still acting as if Gakisan wasn't there. When she finally spotted what she needed, a bit too high than what it seemed, she tried to jump and grab it, but with no avail. She cursed herself for not wearing high heels that day.
Gaki on the other hand did wear them, thus she quickly rushed over and stretched out for the book, grabbed it and then held it out for Aichan. For some reason she didn't take it, since her eyes were fixed on Gaki's face, with her breath coming out heavier than normal and her parted lips slightly shaking.
"Aichan...?"

Gaki had no time to react when Ai jumped at her with her lips, clumsily pulling her closer and working her way under her skirt. Much to the bean's delight, Ai's hands grabbed firmly at the younger's rear and made her sigh quietly into her mouth, while on the other hand she took Ai's glasses off and ruined her ponytail as to stuff her fingers into the thick  hair.
Ai was trembling in a tormented lust, that was for sure. Late but well-received effects of the chocolates much?

She shoved her girlfriend into the shelves and pressed herself along her hot figure, not even noticing how a couple of books fell next to them. 


***

Perv is on the way 8D
But I'll PM it because it will be safer, since lots of kids are constantly reading this board (including me LOLOL but I'll be 18 in a month so.. O0 )
Leave a reply for that?
You guys better not leave thankyous and then leave again, Ada will be sad D:
Edit : I really love the "You're always in the mood" quote, I really do :lol:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 15, 2011, 08:21:11 PM
Oh man! :drool: Did the chocolates just take a while to sink into Ai's stubborn brain or was she ignoring their effects until Gaki got too close? I so want to read the rest of this, please send it to me.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: xxkaori-kittyxx on February 15, 2011, 08:47:06 PM
I didn't think Ai- chan could hold out for that long lol (I know that I wouldn't be able to XD)

I've kinda been a lurker for a little while, and I have trouble thinking of comments to say, sorry

and if it wouldn't be too much trouble for you, could you please send me the rest of the chapter?
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: kawaii beam on February 16, 2011, 12:19:34 AM
lol yay part 2~ XDDD we must remember that ai is a special being....things that should take seconds to make her do something take a bit longer XD great as always ada~ :D now send meh ze perv....or i'll im u to death~ XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: YumePouk on February 17, 2011, 07:10:36 PM
Kyaaaaaaahhhh~~~~ *fan girl mode up to is max*

1st part

OMG....I want to see nerd Ai-chan turn into smexy :mon mischief:  :on bleed: is that dream could come true soon, I wonder?!?!

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Some weird sounds made Aichan turn around again, her jaw dropping at the sight of the two angels making out and groping themselves shamelessly.
Yeah way to go for some TanaKamei  :inlove: :wub:

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"Just go jump on her tiger!" Reina shouted in quick breaths.
agree do as she tell you  XD :twothumbs

Yeah TAKAGAKI is in the place and ready to do more  :inlove: :wub: :wub:

2nd part

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"I thought you're always in the mood."
LOL...someone can't keep her hormone down XD......
LOL at Aichan trying to study and do her duties but with Gaki around that will not be really easy XD XD

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She shoved her girlfriend into the shelves and pressed herself along her hot figure, not even noticing how a couple of books fell next to them.
.....some hawt scene wanna come soon???? :hehehe: :mon thumb:



Me want the prv part when it's done onegaishimasu~~  :mon innocent: :mon hanky: :mon love:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: gab98 on February 17, 2011, 07:34:51 PM
haha lo que una tiene que hacer para leer un perv XD!!

Naa i'm just kidding , when  Ai-chan is nerd and cute and then is more perv ...is so Hot!!  :w00t:

In the library?? haha wow , how do you said me, uniforms, school, table...  :drool: mmm my mind is working now  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 17, 2011, 08:00:28 PM
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"Tell her this. You know what girl? I could look into your eyes all day and never get bored. Heck, scratch that. I could give you sexy times all day and never get tired. Rose are red, violets are blue, Let's go to my house together, Cause I know you want it too."
:hiakhiakhiak: Reina ftw!  :twothumbs

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"Huh? No! NO! Not before the marriage night!"
:roll: and what was she doing? lol

Nerdy Ai-chan is hot and surely Gaki-san knows that  O0
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 17, 2011, 08:27:33 PM
Yay! I sent you guys pms with the pervs 8D lol


@ rndmnwierd : Actually both of them  :twothumbs lol. XD I was wondering whether someone was going to point that out 8D
@xxkaori-kittyxx : Aww hi! 8D I'm glad you finally decided to come abroad on Ada's oneshot boat, I hope you'll enjoy the perv lol  :heart:
@kawaii beam : LOL yeah. exactly XD  :heart:
@YumePouk :
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".....some hawt scene wanna come soon???? "
Oh yesss you betcha  :w00t: Thanks for reading!
@gab98 : Haha yess XD Though one thing is wrong in what you said ;D It's shelves and not table  :lol: Though a table would have been more comfortable? Idk .. XD
@pretend_2besome1 : Thanks for reading!  :heart: Though oh crap! I sent you the perv too with the rest that replied, and THEN I remembered that you didn't actually ask for it oxo I didn't do something bad now did I ;_;
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 17, 2011, 09:00:33 PM
^ Yeah I didn't ask because I usually didn't read perv. No worries, I'll just skip, though that means I'm not gonna comment on it, sorry  :nervous
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: xrainbowgumdropsx on February 17, 2011, 11:33:17 PM
-delurks-

D'awww, Koi Choko was adorableee. (: <3 Totally called Reina tainting the chocolates while I was reading. XD

I'm not exactly sure what to comment on, 'cause I usually don't, being the good little lurker I am. D:

But~ Would you be oh so kind to send me the perv? (:

Sankyuu, sankyuu~ XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: sunc on February 18, 2011, 01:02:13 AM
pervs are the key to delurking...yes true story :nervous
i'm on a 5 step program of delurking so i think asking for that perv is one of them because i feel that if i don't read that missing part i'll feel incomplete because i loved it lol 
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: kawaii beam on February 18, 2011, 01:12:10 AM
perv was....EPIC~!! X3 i wonder how round 2 went~*HINT HINT*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 18, 2011, 04:44:16 AM
Holy crap, you told me not to make any weird faces, but I'm pretty sure the grin that won't leave my face falls into that category. Library, there's just something so erotic about doing it there. :drool: :drool: Awesomeness!
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 18, 2011, 05:15:30 AM
@ pretend_2besome1 : Pheww XD and it's ok <3
@ xrainbowgumdropsx  : Thanks for reading! (and for deciding to come abroad too  :D)  Hope to see you around more ;D
@ sunc : Awww really? Glad you liked it  :twothumbs And exactly, pervs are awesome when it comes to that  :lol:
@ kawaiwai : Thanks dear  :heart: And I'm leaving that to your imagination too ;D (god i love saying that  :lol:)
@ rndmnwierd : YAY  :wub: And definitely, smexy times in the library are smexy  :drool:

*goes to send pms for xrainbowgumdropsx and sunc*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: gab98 on February 18, 2011, 08:48:00 AM
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one thing is wrong in what you said  It's shelves and not table   Though a table would have been more comfortable? Idk ..

Ok...change my mind XD Shelves is more Hot!!!  :shakeit:

Hahaha the perv was great ... Ada-chan should be write more this  :roll:  O0

You Know...just for...leverage your talent  8)
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: sunc on February 18, 2011, 05:43:16 PM
wow the perv was great i really liked how you described everything  :on_hot:  and isn't the fear of getting caught more exciting? maybe that's just me  XD anyway i'll be waiting more of your great one-shot's,from now on i hope to be less of a lurker and comment more  :D
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Lady Stostine on February 18, 2011, 11:44:29 PM
I've been lurking for a while... >w>Uu

Koi choko was cute, sweet and funny *__* aww  :wub:
I really like your redaction :D

Can you please send me the perv?  :oops: (the power of the perv xD I registered just for this... but I'll try to delurk more :))
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 19, 2011, 05:55:18 AM
@Gabi : Yay! thank you dear :blush:
@sunc : Thanks so much!  :w00t: I appreciate it <3
@Lady Stostine : Wow, really? oxo I'm so glad that your first post is in my thread  :heart: Well not wasting anymore time, *goes to send the PM*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: chao_88 on February 19, 2011, 06:12:27 AM
i'm sorry for not commenting here before, been lurking around most of the time,, >_<
but i really love your story,, very sweet and cute, dorky aichan~  :love: and most of all are TakaGaki~ my fave pairing  :heart:

can i read "the continuation" of Koi Choko? If that's okay with you,,  :)
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 19, 2011, 06:55:59 AM
^ Yayy another reader  :cow:
And sure~  :heart:

Edit : Woah, this was my 100th post *dances around*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 19, 2011, 07:02:43 AM
I love it when authors say, "I'll send you the perv~!" It really brings all the lurkers from the woodwork. XD Just thought I'd mention that, seeing as how every time I get on, I see a new name here. :lol:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: YumePouk on February 19, 2011, 08:17:22 AM
 :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
I'm dead from so much Blood  lost >_<

  :ding: yeah the perv
 :shy2: after read the first lines
 :on_hot: waouh the  temperature increase so faster?!?! :on roll:
:imdead: untill the end you killed me....
With how describble are ur fic....

Hope i wanna read ur new work soon  :on hypto:
Really great autor-chan :on GJ:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: LovelyGaki on February 19, 2011, 08:57:24 AM
Koi Choco is such a cute story, great Valentine's present hahah :lol:
Angel/Devil in the story was a cute pair too
nerd getting the hot chick :twothumbs

May I request for the perv too, i like to continue this story :oops:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: EriKan on February 19, 2011, 09:25:49 AM
came out from lurking.. :P

it's because i was a die hard fan of takagaki  :heart: :wub:
that i need to come out  :nervous

and i was late for reading this  :sweatdrop:
a little tired from work but happy and a little satisfied (*points to the missing perv)
that i can read such a sweet takagaki..

so.. may i request for that part very please  XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 19, 2011, 09:45:51 AM
@Rndy : Lmao yess XD I wanted to do this for a very long time to pull out lurkers, but just now I got confident enough to actually write a perv  :lol:
@YumePouk : Thank youuu!  :heart: I'm having a lot of ideas for new oneshots, and not precisely with AiGaki ;D It's probably the next popular pairing after AiGaki  :twisted:
@LovelyGaki : Wooh~ Glad you liked it :D And sure~
@EriKan : Awww D: Thank you lots! Hope to see you around more too, I'm glad you're enjoying it x3

*goes to send pms again*
Pssh I'm SO loving this XD  :yossi:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: chao_88 on February 20, 2011, 07:27:13 PM
I've read your PM and it's just... WOW!  :mon blood:
you described all the details very well, so hot! i thought gakisan would be in charge, well maybe another time..?   :P
it's funny to see dorky aichan turns into beast so quickly, thanks to certain naughty angels  :lol:

you should write more~  :twothumbs

and thank you for sending me this,,  XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: EriKan on February 21, 2011, 12:35:29 PM
just read your pm yesterday..
and i couldn't comment right away   :banghead:

maybe because i was like >> :mon blood:

so you should write more or update one of your story..
coz i'll be waiting..  :hee:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ [Koi Choko BONUS 15th of February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 25, 2011, 04:41:30 PM
@chao_08 : Thanks a lot!  :heart: and haha yes~ xD Though smexy Gakisan is enough to make you turn into a beast imo ;D
@EriKan : Yay! I'm glad 8D  :heart: And I listened to you guys, here's something new  :D

Reasons

Thinking before acting has been her guiding principle ever since she's known herself. At that point though, whether she was making a terrible mistake or not, it was the last thing she cared.  The answer echoed immediately without too much thought, maybe even quicker than what she had expected; Sapphire's heart was pounding so fast not with love, but with knowing what to be afraid of.

***

The castle was emanating happiness from all corners. A certain long-awaited announcement, finally delivered by his Highness the King one Sunday morning, send the court and the whole region in elated cheers of joy. The greatness of such news, together with the noticeable emotion in the King's voice brought some to tears.
It appeared that Sapphire, the one and only heiress of Silverland, was finally promised by her parents to the prince of Goldland. An union that would bring riches, well-being and a greater territory to both countries, together with a strong political connection was what everyone hoped for so long.
The level of excitement was getting ridiculous, and there wasn't one single person in the whole land to not know about it. Even the royal horses knew what was the commotion for.

In all that euphoria, someone was not quite as excited. She looked with teary eyes through her window at the feast in the middle of the court, where everyone, her parents included, were celebrating her bitterness. Sapphire was repulsed and most sorrowful of being married against her will with a man she did not love, but there was nothing she could do. 
Her pain and grief were worrying her company ladies, because the princess preferred to be locked up in her room and alone with her self-pity, than to hear comforting words without much effect.
She needed nothing but one single thing, that was quite impossible to grasp at that time. Still, the hope was still somewhere deep, and even if the feeling of despair was overpowering it at that moment, she still hoped.

*** 

Finally giving in to the pleads of her ladies that convinced her to get some fresh air, the princess was on a stroll alone in the garden, for the first time in a while. The weather was perfect, contrary to her gloomy mood; the sun was blocked at times by big, fluffy clouds and the wind blew warmly from the east. Nothing could lift her up from her grief though. The prince of Goldland was going to arrive to their castle at any minute, and Sapphire sunk more and more in depression, mainly caused by the mental turmoil of being in another man's bed, other than the one she loved.

Taking her life... would it be a solution? She swore she would never betray his love; she promised she would wait for him no matter what; she repeated to herself every night how she loved and missed him. Marrying another man... would be devastating for him.
He might have found out the news already, even in the first lines of the war against the western enemy. He was fighting for her and for her country! In return... What was she going to do? Obey her parents and be someone else's woman?

Tears linked at the base of her chin one after another, and she needed to sit down as to breathe properly again, on a bench hidden from the curious windows of the castle.
As she couldn't help but to resume her thoughts, her crying was no way near stopping.
If she didn't marry that prince, Silverland wouldn't be able to get military reinforcement, and he would die in that war. He would die without their dreams to be fulfilled, and she will never know the meaning of happiness anymore.
Sapphire would have to take her life either way, sooner or later.

Completely drowned in her thoughts, constantly wiping her eyes and in the midst of her heart tearing apart, the young princess could not notice at first the presence that appeared next to her on the bench. Only when a hand touched her shoulder Sapphire turned her head, her eyes widening in shock at the sight.
"You are a very brave woman, Sapphire."

The princess dared not to speak, as the fear froze her completely. By instinct, she felt like shifting to the side further away from that woman, but the control of her body seemed to fade away from her as that dark gaze was just too piercing. Sapphire had a slight idea of who that might be, after having heard so many tales that warned not only her, but also all the people in the court, to stay away from the legendary witch.
But she was indeed pretty; When she took off her see-through black veil, the young princess certainly didn't see something quite as terrifying as it was being said. The dark eyes glimmering ever so lovely and the fine lines of her lips pursed together in seemingly honest concern were the first details that drew Sapphire's attention.   
"You have nothing to fear, I have the answer to all your problems."

The princess blinked several times breathlessly, her confused stare was a silent question; What did she just say? There is no middle way for my problems.
Hecate gave a helpless sigh, her cold palm reaching out to Sapphire's shoulder again, in a comforting manner. "Listen, it's not that difficult to achieve actually. I will bring Nouveau back to you, if..."
The younger half turned, her heart leaping at the sound of that name. "If what?"
"If... you bring me a royal soul."

There was a strange silence. The wind made their curls levitate slowly and their eyes stared deep into each other, without connecting in any way, as one of them was just too bewildered. The flush of terror climbed up on Sapphire's back once more, at the realization that those tales about the witch were actually true. But the fear was still not strong enough to fight against the desire of seeing her love again. She allowed a long deep breath to calm her racing heart, before whispering the question that Hecate had been waiting to hear.
"How am I supposed to do that?"
The witch showed a dark grin before leaning closer to her ear.

***

Locked up in her room again, the young princess anxiously moved around with her hands tightly linked. The insecurity in front of such a risk was heart-wrenching, and the fact that her job was now done, and all she had to do onwards was just to wait, brought a mighty frustration over her.
I just killed Prince Franz on our wedding bed, she whispered through bruised lips.




.... o_o;; This is really different than what I've been writing so far~ *runs away*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Reasons" new oneshot up 25 February]
Post by: kawaii beam on February 25, 2011, 04:52:08 PM
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?!
the ending made me say that XDDD epics ada~ X3 i honestly thought like she had a kid and gave her kids soul to miki^^; XD but killing the prince she's supposted to mary is good too! XD i wonder what'll happen next~?
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Reasons" new oneshot up 25 February]
Post by: gab98 on February 25, 2011, 05:27:35 PM
haha y si que es diferente, pero me atrapo desde el inicio.

Por alguna razon imaginar a Sapphire asesinando a alguien parece...interesante XD

GJ!!
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Reasons" new oneshot up 25 February]
Post by: gab98 on March 18, 2011, 11:08:29 PM


Ada!!! HBD to you!!!  ontajoubi omedetto one-chan!

haha ok let's sing this...

http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F%3Fgl%3DES%26hl%3Des&hl=es&gl=ES#/watch?xl=xl_blazer&v=0f2BDPl5aLQ (http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F%3Fgl%3DES%26hl%3Des&hl=es&gl=ES#/watch?xl=xl_blazer&v=0f2BDPl5aLQ)

juju felicidades mi Ada linda!!

I luv you :heart:  haha
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Reasons" new oneshot up 25 February]
Post by: Ada XD on March 18, 2011, 11:12:36 PM
Awwwww Thanks Gabii <333
I love you too dear  :heart:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Reasons" new oneshot up 25 February]
Post by: Ada XD on February 03, 2013, 03:52:53 AM
HEY HEY HEY
GUESS WHO'S BACK  :ding:
I've missed this thread, I've missed writing and I've missed H!P (especially AiGaki)  :yossi: So here's a comeback oneshot for you guys. :D Do tell me what you think please.  :grin:

Sexuality

Every morning before classes, without fail, senior Niigaki Risa - the beautiful and talented heartbreaker to ever roam the Yokohama campus since Yoshizawa Hitomi's graduation, would have her coffee at the same cozy bistro and at the usual corner table, an odd habit to stick to for a whole week especially for a notorious over sleeper.
Ever since one friend casually commented one day how Risa reminded him of a certain girl, so much that one would think they were twins separated at birth, the beautiful student felt the need to either certify or dismiss the opinion of her one friend that would always tell the truth.
"And what exactly do you mean by that? Do we look alike?"
She received a silent chuckle and one long suggestive look in reply. "I would recommend you meet her yourself. You'll be surprised at what you find."

And so, Risa found herself very early next day shooting penetrant gazes at this petite waitress while sipping from her cup, her initial assumptions that the waitresses' features would in fact differ a lot from her own confirmed. The shape of her eyes, of her lips, her nose and the frame of her body did not remind her of anyone; as fiercely as she tried to think if she had seen her before, it came to no avail.
"Maybe my friend was mistaken after all. What a total waste of time." She yawned and stretched in her chair, longing for the fluffiness of her bed, when the piercing sound of glass breaking caught her attention.
Apparently, a younger boy that Risa knew from past Iinchou meetings knocked over some glasses on a table and almost fell on his butt if it wasn't for a plant to steady himself against. The coffee shop was not very crowded at that time of the day, so the suppressed giggles that the boy's clumsiness generated around him could be heard from across the room. The waitress smiled pleasantly and gave him a wink before bending over to pick up the larger glass parts on the floor, the generous view of her thighs making him gulp hard and move his chest in and out frantically.

Risa squinted her eyes and tried to process what had just happened that made her feel a most incredible deja-vu; the lack of sleep slowed her reasoning a bit at that time of the day. A couple of seconds later, when the girls around the tables started nudging themselves or biting their lips at what the short skirt in front of them offered, she realized something.
"Oh, she's so charming, I don't blame him for losing his balance."
"Takahashi-sama is so sexy! Hold me before I fall off my chair too..."


Both of them had the same influence on the people around them, oozing charisma in layers of cute and sexy that no one could look past, even if they wanted to.

Risa supported her chin on her palm, smirking in her usual sneaky way at the unexpected discovery, patting herself on the back for deciding to show up so early in the first place.  She was not feeling threatened at all; in fact, her curiosity was so down right delicious that she showed up the next day too, and the day after that, witnessing how Takahashi Ai made more and more victims by the day, and how the coffee shop was filling with people even before the clock hit 9 a.m.
A week later, as Takahashi approached the corner table with Gaki's coffee, the younger brown-haired girl pushed some strands of hair behind her ear and leaned more into the chair, legs crossed in a provocative manner and her eyes wide, clear and innocent, a deadly contrast that nobody resisted to. She curved her full lips wider when the waitress put the coffee in front of her and thanked her politely, waiting eagerly for a reaction.

The waitress turned to leave in haste, but stopped in her track for a couple of moments more.
"Is something wrong?" Gaki inquired matter-of-factly, her voice flowing sensually in low tones naturally and effortlessly. When the older turned around again, she had a suggestive curious smile that reflected the same amount of delightful surprise as Gaki's, when she first saw her.
She placed one hand on her hip as if ready to scold, as if she cannot believe what she had just witnessed. "Are you flirting with me?"
Gaki was taken aback by the bluntness of her reaction. "N-no, of course not, what makes you say that?" She had never actually thought of seducing women, and even if all sorts of people confessed their love for her, she never dated another girl. What was the young student trying had nothing to do with the art of flirting, she was just curious as to how will an attractive woman, just like her, react to the natural beauty of another one. Was she confusing the two concepts?

"Well, I've seen you for the last few days and it's the first time that you're actually flaunting your stuff to me. That's why I'm asking."
Gaki blushed furiously; flaunt her stuff? - the idea alone was outrageous! She compared the show off of the waitress' butt to the world and the crossing of her own legs and found no similarity whatsoever.
"No." Gaki declared, an adorable frown replacing her shocked face.
The waitress placed her second hand on her hip, quite amused. "No... what?"
"No, I am not flirting with you. Just so you know, I... I like men."
The waitress tutted in acknowledgement as a pleasant smile cornered her lips. "Enjoy your coffee." was all she said, heading back for her work whilst humming a song.
Right before she proceeded to gather her stuff and leave, the bean took one more look at the waitress that intrigued her so much; with one finger she lifted the chin of a blushing fangirl and blew a few whispers into her face, making the poor girl's knees buckle lightly before she stormed out the door, screaming in delight. At that sight, letting aside the convictions she had against having intimate relations with someone of her gender, even the bean wondered if she could resist being seduced by such a woman.

***

"Actually, I've had enough of boys. I'm bored."
"Okay, this I can believe. That's why they call me a heartbreaker too. I usually dump them before I give them a chance to prove themselves."
The two girls started laughing, lightly punching each other over their cups of tea for being so insensitive. Somehow it did not take long for them to become friends since Gaki continued her visits at the bistro in the mornings, occasionally for lunch and this evening for a chat. The reason, obvious enough, for wanting to befriend the waitress was that she was still intrigued to the core. Gaki was craving for a sexual experience with a woman, she was not feeling as self-accomplished as her newest friend since she didn’t have her confidence, but the dilemma was how on Earth was she going to launch that proposal.
“I’m not as open to relationships anymore, you know?” the older volunteered as to break the silence while playing with her tea spoon. There was not one single trace of regret in her voice.
“Committing to one person alone is indeed a big deal, even for me.” Gaki kept her eyes forward, fidgeting beneath the table with the hem of her top. A sudden urge to reach forward and grab Ai by the collar and kiss her flooded her mind but she kept herself composed, she was not going to miss the opportunity.
“Tell me, Gaki-san… why is it that you’re so tense?”
 

The younger’s lips parted in surprise, but no word came out. Was it really that obvious? Was she becoming that drawn into Ai’s natural charms that she had forgotten she shouldn’t get intimidated in the first place?
“It’s… nothing.”
“Nothing.” Ai repeated, unimpressed.
“Fine!” Gaki gave in, laying her true intentions on the table. “Ai-chan, I’m really curious about your sexuality. It’s just that… you have experienced everything so far haven’t you?”
“Well,” the waitress started, having predicted this would eventually come – “… let’s just say I made the choices that I wanted, when I wanted, I had no limits when it came to my emotions and… that’s all you need to know.”
Gaki stared into the dark honey orbs in front of her “I’m still curious about you. I want to know how it will feel like if…”
“If we were to become more intimate. If we were to kiss. If we were to have sex. Go on, say it. Because the feeling is mutual. It will happen if you want it to.” The waitress added in a slow whisper, with a big grin plastered from side to side, thinking that she had caught her prey even easier than expected and that the younger would sink in her chair, blushing, just like the rest, and that Ai was the tough one. She thought that she had managed to seduce a convinced straight girl, since that was her goal all along.

Gaki kept silent, feeling her heart rate pick up the pace a bit. But when the waitress had least expected it and was about to laugh at the bean’s adorable blush, Gaki snatched Ai’s hand from the table into her own, quickly leaning in, her eyes dancing from the determination. “I will hold you to that promise, Ai-chan.”
The waitress blinked several times, realizing that their friendly dialogue had been steered in a completely different direction, and not by her own choosing.
To her astonishment, the bean did not release her until the closing time was announced, and by the time that the older got up from the table, she had realized that the “friendship” trap has been used against her. The last sly smile that the younger shot her seducer was full of promise and secrecy.
“I’ll wait you outside."

***

Leaning against an old cherry tree, Gaki looked up at the sky wondering what will follow, thinking about her true self, about what her true orientation was when it comes to love. The waitress was not late to come out of the bistro.
"See you tomorrow! Otsukare~" Muffled cheers were heard before the door was closed, drawing Gaki's attention just in time to notice Ai's skirt bouncing around her thighs as she skipped down the stairs.
Gaki licked her lips unwillingly. A couple of buttons loosened and the top really did justice to her chest as she pushed it out, and she stood there waiting, her inviting smile never quivering.
There were no words to be said. Their eyes roamed each other's bodies again, this time without restraints.

Ai's small steps brought her closer to the tree, the sole passion in their eyes making Gaki's intimate parts grow warmer. Without notice, they embraced against the tree and clung to each other fervently while their lips locked, the smell of intimacy inciting them both unbearably. Gaki's heart was racing against Ai's chest as they tasted each other, throwing her hands on the older girl's butt to tug at her skirt brutally before squeezing it hard, while the older grabbed Gaki by the hair and moved her head this way or that to deepen their kiss.
They moved together like in a well-known choreography, their bodies responding in the same way as Gaki went to slap Ai's hands away to get more access to her chest, leaning in for her lips more since the tree hurt her back. In the end she was grateful for the support because the contact, Ai's scent, the way they swayed together melted her knees away.
Ai pulled back to look at her friend, wiping her wet, smiling lips.
"Are you satisfied yet?" she asked in between breaths.
"Not one bit."
"So you're curious for more."
"Aren't you too?" Gaki whispered naughtily while detaching herself from the tree.
The older started tracing circles on Gaki's stomach, moving her fingers downwards, teasing her before grabbing her hand and dragging her towards her place.
"More or less.."
Their laughter filled the night that was barely beginning, and the notorious over sleeper left aside her night time favourite activity in order to enjoy the new experience unfolding before her to the fullest.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: kawaii beam on February 03, 2013, 03:59:47 AM
my goodness you know im glad your back~ :deco: i've miised chu ;3;

and what a great way to come back too :inlove:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 03, 2013, 07:10:41 AM
I love a little steamy action between these two~! Nice come back, for sure.
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: MsSmigge on February 03, 2013, 09:38:16 AM
Woah, Aigaki fic!!!  :inlove:

This was something different I have read before and I liked it. (Or at least I don't remember I have read this kind of Aigaki fic...)

Making them both players is just something.... Interesting.

And the ending was soo....  :drool:

Welcome back, though I don't really know you or where have you been, but you can always welcome someone back, right?  :nervous
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: Ada XD on February 03, 2013, 10:40:50 AM
@kwaiibi: awww, I've missed you too hehe <3  :cow:
@rndy: Why thank you  :oops: I love some AiGaki action too, anytime.  :grin:
@MsSmigge: aw, that's very nice of you!  :oops: Thank you for the feedback, I don't know you either but I do hope to see you around the forums!  :twothumbs

By the way. This is the song that inspired me  XD
Rihanna - Sexuality ( Unreleased 2011 Album ) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s83Ti9IrlOM#)

edit : did I just see S!hui around here giving me a thanks? XDDD  :heart:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: H!PShipper on February 10, 2013, 09:57:18 PM
Reasons

What an amazing twist to Robin no koishi! Ahhh! But this knight that she loves so much, its played by Risa right ?! Man I loved the few minutes if knight Risa in that play lol she's so handsome !

Sexuality

One word. Hot!
Man Risa is rarely portrayed as a heartbreaker/player good thing she found Ai and that's why I love your fics, so glad I found your Fics today. :) 
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Sexuality" new oneshot up February 3rd]
Post by: Ada XD on February 14, 2013, 11:43:54 AM
^ I'm very grateful for the feed-back, thank you!  :oops:


Happy Valentines Day, everyone!  :otomerika:
It does not matter if you have a Valentine or not, if you're planning to confess to someone or if you have slaved all night in the kitchen, burning your fingers in an attempt to cook some chocolate (no idea if people still do that, but meh). What matters is that an occasion like this is such good fanfic material  :lol:
*sigh*
I was really bored the last couple of days, and kind of frustrated too that my boyfriend is 2200 kilometers away in my hometown in Romania, while I keep on sulking under the damp and grey clouds in the UK. :smhid My university life sux.
COME ON MARCH, COME ON ALREADY. I NEED MY FAMILY ;_;

Anywaaaaays, here's a treat for you guys.  :grin:
I must tell you how much I love love love this oneshot  :wub: Haha.
I'm updating it in two parts because it's rather lengthy... But I really hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it  :inlove:
Part two will be updated really soon, and just like 2 years ago, when I wrote Koi Choko (dunno if anyone remembers XD), this will end with an awesomesauce perv  :twisted:
ENJOY!

***

Valentine's Gift

What could possibly be more depressing than a single woman surrounded by love-crazed couples, floating around everywhere with the stupidest of grins on their faces, chirping along even at my meanest comments since nothing can ruin their pristine perfect moods?
Yes, exactly. A worse scenario is when those couples take every opportunity at hand to let you know, a woman of 25 years old in her own right, just how sad they feel for you and how they would have loved to set you up with someone. “You know, I have this hunch you and person X might actually get along very well…”
Oh, spare me. Not even the friendliest, sexiest, smartest single guy could handle me on this precise day.

As I sank deeper into my couch, I realized that the purple fuzz on my key-chain had been almost completely plucked out in the midst of my irritation. With a deep sigh I threw it to the side, realizing how unfortunate it must have been for my favourite keychain accessory to find itself in the firing line of my jealousy. I scooted to the side to lay on my back, arms and legs stretching pleasantly in the quietness of the apartment.
What would a sane woman in my situation do…? Spend the rest of the evening pitying herself over an extra-large bowl of ice-cream, maybe? Try to go to sleep early so that this doomed day will pass unnoticed?
Pft. I could not help but scoff at my own foolishness. It happened to occur to me out of nowhere that the only thing for women in my situation to do (quite a simple solution to resort to actually, if only I had kept my eyes open instead letting myself be swept away by the grumpiness), was for them to get together for a couple of drinks and laugh at the utter Valentines cheesiness lingering in the air. In an instant I reached for the phone on the table, speed dialling the familiar number kept for emergencies, just-in-cases and whatnots, whose owner was always dear to my heart. 
“Moshi moshi?”
Hearing the soothing voice alone was effective enough to half pull me out of the terrible mood.
“How’s it going, Gaki-san? Are you enjoying this formidable, marvellous evening?”

***

I could not help but giggle, as I always did, at her unique ways of starting our conversations.
“Ah, you know… just watching a sappy movie by myself, eating the chocolate that I cooked myself by… myself. I’m having such a blast.”
The adorable snorts of laughter that followed brought a smile on my face too; whether we were teasing each other, arguing with each other or laughing at each other, it was always so entertaining.
“Why did you not call me, baka?”
“Hey, don’t blame me. You’re the one with the ever-changing work schedule.”

She kept silent for a couple more seconds as I savoured another small chocolate, leaning more comfortably against the pillows with the satisfaction that after a long afternoon of waiting, her call finally came.
This would not be the first Valentines that we would keep company to one another; I guess true friendship is all about that, and more. Her job may not allow her to be here for me whenever I need her to be- which by the way, happens a lot for some reason, but she does make up for it by stopping by with small gifts or movies at my dorm. From the likes of it, this particular day managed yet again to pull the grumpy out of both of us, just like in the previous years. In our opinions, it’s the chilly reminder that we have failed to find someone special in our lives…one of us at least. 
“This job is going to be the end of me, I swear it. Now tell me, have you been studying for your finals?”
“Ha~i!”
She gave a pleased hum at the pride in my voice, just the thing I needed to hear after a long day.
“Good Gaki.” I could almost feel her fingers pat me on the head, making me slide on my back from the sitting position with a small smile. “Then if you’re free…Ano… Do you feel like going out…?”
“Eeh? Isn’t that kind of romantic, Aichan? You never let me go out with you at night, for the sake of my course attendance. Is this… by any chance… a date?”
At her silence I was both sad that I could not see the priceless reaction on her face and also grateful that she could not witness the huge mischief written all over mine.
“Shut up, you idiot. Are you coming or not?”
Her tone was not scolding or in any way near upset; she was on the verge of laughing, I just knew her too well.
“Yes, take me with you! I’m such a bad girl, going on a date with Ai-chan on a weekday!”
“Baka.”

***

21:32
I'm here. Are you ready yet?
To: Gaki-san


When the text message was sent, Ai rested her hand casually on the steering wheel, her eyes wandering aimlessly into the darkness of the street. She thought of the long-lasting relationship that she shared with the only person able to fully understand her, even better than she ever could, of their friendly little routines and their secrets, of how similar they truly were.  Even now, after so many years since the young student confessed her love to her and Ai was not ready to reciprocate them, even if things have remained the exact same way and their friendship was not damaged, the older woman still thought about it, from time to time. Risa’s maturity and her ability to move on without jeopardizing the strong bond that they had, as nothing more than best friends, gained Ai’s appreciation and gratefulness.
A light knock on the window pulled her out of her thoughts; Gaki was waving shyly with one hand while trying to keep herself warm with the other. As she unlocked the door, two more details drew Ai’s attention: the fancy, curly hairstyle and the touch of red gloss on Gaki’s smiling lips.
“Ah, this is so exciting!” the younger exclaimed as she shut the door behind her, leaning over to give her best friend a hug.
“Ne… Gaki-san?” the older mumbled into her friend’s neatly curled locks, rubbing her back comfortingly to warm her up in their embrace.
“Yes?”
“…Why are you so dressed up?”
Gaki pulled away, the obvious glint of puzzlement in her eyes still less noticeable than the satisfaction caused by Ai’s acknowledgement.
“Well, I thought I’d dress up for you since it’s our first date. Why, you don’t like it?”

Of course Ai liked it. How could she not admit how nicely that navy blue dress fitted on her hips, how gorgeous was her pair of black boots and how perfect was the amount of skin showing in between them? To make matters even more awkward, as Gaki slipped the coat off her shoulders, to place it on the back seat together with her purse, Ai found herself staring at the taunting cleavage, not very revealing but still intriguing enough to make you want to imagine more.
“This is not a date, baka.” She repeated stubbornly, slightly troubled that unlike her best friend, she was dressed as casually as always.
“I know, I know, I was just teasing. Mou~ loosen up a bit!”
Ai reached forward to turn on the engine, agreeing to herself that Risa was right; she would not let her bad mood ruin this outing or spoil the thrill for her gorgeous friend. “I’m supposed to be the one in charge with the teasing. Jeez, when did you grow up like this?” she asked, trying to keep her eyes on the roadway and not on the girl’s body.
“Ai-chan, I’m 23 and I’m about to graduate. You cannot expect me to be babied around by you forever.”

As much as the older woman had tried to deny it over the past couple of years, Gaki proved yet again she was right. Just that, this time, the accompanying ‘proof’ that she was no longer Ai’s ‘little sister’ caught the driver a bit off guard, a knot settling in her throat.
“You smell really nice, by the way” was all she said.

***

Gaki was the one to get out of the car first, literally launching herself out the door, impatient to see where she had been brought for the night by her best friend since she did not know the neighbourhood. In an instant her eyes widened; even if the cold February wind rose goose bumps all over her exposed arms and neck, the mew of delight that she let out at the sight of a gorgeous coffee house with huge glass windows made Ai pat herself on the back for the idea.
She placed the coat that had been forgotten inside the car on Gaki’s shoulders, rubbing her arms for her from behind, almost hugging her, the urge to scold right on the tip of her tongue but she refrained herself.
“Aichan! I’ve never been here before~”
The older woman’s quiet chuckle was cut short when her friend turned around to face her. Next thing she knew, arms were linked around her neck and a warm body pressed against hers softly and sweetly. The stunned Ai even earned herself a peck on the cheek for her good deed too; for a bookworm finally released to nightlife activities would never hold back from showing some gratitude, she knew too well.
Ai took the girl in her arms, the instinct telling her to pull her even closer against the curves of her own body. As she buried her face in the nicely scented locks, she felt a strange mix of two different feelings tumble up her stomach. On one hand, she was very grateful that the most important person in her life was there for her, both sharing the awful consequence of ending up alone on Valentines because of their earlier tendencies to keep pushing guys away.
On the other hand… Ai Takahashi was very, very turned on.
She could not believe it herself, but it was as simple as that.
Even if she had NEVER thought of seeing the day when her own best friend would make her feel so tingly, it was just too painfully enticing to not enjoy.

***

“This place is indeed very nice…and these pastries are just mmm~” the young graduate-to-be exclaimed longingly as she took a taste of her chocolate –filled cake, in the shape of a heart, only one among various other flavours on the platter.
Normally, such a sight would make Ai’s glycemic level skyrocket from the amount of cheesiness, much more so now that their outing was indeed starting to look like a typical Valentines date. She took a glimpse of her best friend from the corner of her eye, and felt her lips turn upwards unwillingly; the girl was just too adorable, flustering over the divine taste. If Gaki was happy, then so was Ai.
“Why is it so empty, I wonder…?”
“Most of the customers that usually come here are too busy clubbing tonight.”
“Ah, I see…Well that’s a pity.” Gaki added, licking her full lips in a rather mesmerizing way. “On a Valentines evening I’ve always seen myself in a quiet place, not many people around, only a special someone keeping me company… just like we’re doing right now!” she squealed at the sudden realization “Arigato, Aichan!”

With a nod, Ai turned her attention on her green tea, loving the warmth against her palms. All her senses opened up without her knowledge to the signals that her best friend was sending; it was plain certainty that Gaki’s crush was more alive than ever and Ai was absolutely not oblivious to that even if she acted like it, to protect the girl from being hurt.
But still… Why did she crave for her body to respond in the exact same way that Gaki needed her to? Why did such a casual embrace that happened so many times before trigger just now that chain reaction of pleasant pulses in the lower part of her body? Was it because of the general fuss around this particular day, when every living being craved for the chance to love and be loved?

“Ai-chan? You’re unusually quiet. Have you been listening to me?”
The older woman raised her head, blinking several times.  “Actually, no” she exhaled deeply, putting on the apologetic face that would always get her out of trouble “Gomen, Gaki-san~ You were saying?”
“Mou~ I don’t like it when you space out like that… Just what on Earth are you thinking of?”
After being treated with one of the gravest moments of silence in Takahashi Ai’s history, the bean instantly regretted snooping around; after all, Ai-chan’s work problems were none of her business and this date was supposed to make her forget about all the constraints and the pressure.
“Oh, I know!” she continued playfully “You’re wondering what will be my present in return for all these cakes you bought me.”
Ai shot her a confused look but her best friend quickly shrugged it off “You must know that my present in home-made, and I did not take it with me.”
“Eeh? Uso!! You actually baked something for me?”
“Yep!”
“When will I get it then?” the older could already feel her excitement building up; a Valentines gift would be the last thing she needed in order to call it a day.
“You’ll receive your present when you get me back home.”
“Should we leave then?” the older inquired impatiently, starting to get up from the table when a hand held her in place by the shoulder.
“Na-ah, you’re not thinking of abandoning all these fabulous pastries, are you? Besides, I don’t plan for this evening to end this soon. Ano...Sumimasen!”
Gaki started beckoning for their waitress to come over as her best friend sulked in her chair, her watch indeed showing that it was still early.
“Can I help you with anything else?” the waitress offered, her smile never wavering.
“Hai, do you serve wine here, by any chance?”
“Actually we do, what kind of wine is to your liking?”
Ai could not help but disapprove of her friend’s idea “Oi, chotto Gaki-san! Did you forget you have classes tomorrow?”
But the young graduate-to-be ignored Ai’s intervention, determined to end the evening her own way “A Choya plum wine should be just fine, thank you.”
“I’ll be right back with your order.”

Gaki’s polite smile disappeared as soon as the waitress turned to leave; she leaned over the table to give her friend a piece of her mind, hissing under her breath: “I told you to loosen up, Ai-chan! My classes are in the afternoon tomorrow. Now that you brought me here, you have to suck it up, I’m not leaving so soon.”
Ai stared silently into the fiery eyes before her, her mouth agape at Gaki’s never-before intent to stay in control. It did kind of suit her after all, Ai-chan thought, as she stared unflinchingly at her friend’s beautiful face. The dim light of the candle was bestowing upon her a very sultry look, and for some reason such a confident Niigaki Risa was starting to put Ai’s imagination on fire again.
“Fine,” the older gave in, smacking herself on the head for having such odd urges to jump across the table on her best friend “I’m still the driver though, so you’ll be drinking alone.”

***


Yosh! :twisted: Comments are loved  :grin:
Edit : I apologize if the POV switching is disturbing. XD It's just that I imagined the oneshot like that and I went ahead with it :D
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 1 - February 14th]
Post by: MsSmigge on February 14, 2013, 01:30:09 PM
You just gave me an idea that I should write something for valentines day too XD Lets see if I have time, for I'll return home this evening/night Yup, my valentine's day goes with working and travelling and the only thing that awaits me at home is an empty house which is under dust and must be cleaned, dang XD  Well at least my good friend called me...

I love it how Risa is making Ai do what she wants and wont let the stubborn monkey get away~

On the other hand… Ai Takahashi was very, very turned on.

Just go with your feelings Ai-chan!!! Lol, this made me laugh for some reason XD

“Fine,” the older gave in, smacking herself on the head for having such odd urges to jump across the table on her best friend “I’m still the driver though, so you’ll be drinking alone.”

Yes! Bring the alcohol and lets get Ai-chan drunk so Risa can seduce her, but dammit Ai's the driver....  :err: Well Risa will manage to do something with her nee~

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!  :cow:

Happy valentines day to you too!

ps.

this will end with an awesomesauce perv :twisted:

*Erases the line away* YES PLEASE!!! XD
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 1 - February 14th]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 14, 2013, 04:44:10 PM
Valentines perv story yay~! Can't wait for that. This is really, how should I put it? Ero-Kawaiii? XD Ai-chan is so protective over Gaki-san and it's cute, Gaki-san is cute, but the implications of what will happen later are pretty hot. Already want more of this!
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 1 - February 14th]
Post by: Ada XD on February 16, 2013, 12:23:18 PM
@MsSmigge : awww, yes, please do write! :D we can never have enough of AiGaki smut fluff  :wub: I've been meaning to check your thread for quite a while, and I will do that really soon, look forward for my feedback  :twothumbs
@rndy : YES. ;D Ero-kawaii is the perfect way to describe my favourite writing style  :oops: You're quite right about the implications~ Sorry to keep you waiting and thank you  :heart:

Here's the second part darlings  :yossi: :otomerika:
My face was hurting from grinning like an idiot while writing it. I'm f***ing serious right now. I had to take breaks and relax because I was just too overwhelmed  :lol: I've pushed away my love for H!P ever since Aichan graduated, and now it hit me back with full force xD By the way, I watched AiGaki's fanclub tour last night, the latest one, AND DAMN WERE THEY HAWT OR WAT :fap I miss them so bad ;_;
poor kawaii-beam being spammed with my fangirl ranting  :bleed eyes:
OH, ALMOST FORGOT.
Raise your hand those who want the perv, I will pm them to you as soon as I can  :grin: *is feeling deliciously evil* :twisted:


***

Valentine's gift PART 2

Anata onegai yo~ Seki wo tatanai de~
Iki ga kakaru hodo~Soba ni ite hoshii~
Anata ga… Suki nan desu!


Ai found the simple task of climbing up the stairs quite a challenge, mainly because she was doing the job for two persons; apparently the curly-haired student was focusing more on getting the lyrics to the song right rather than actually paying much effort to get to her room. The sober woman of the two was quite irritated, but not by the fact that the girl was heavily leaning into her, a hand “accidentally” grabbing at her butt; she was irritated by the little show that her best friend was putting for the whole dorm, in the middle of the night.
“Stop fooling around, baka. You couldn’t have gotten so wasted just from half a bottle.”
“It’s the dizziness, Ai-chan, but I’m not drunk~” she whined while clinging even harder to her friend’s neck, secretly enjoying the closeness in between their bodies.

Once at the door, Ai leaned against the wall quite exhausted from the constant dragging of her friend up to the second floor. On the other hand, Gaki fumbled helplessly with the key, trying to look as if she was in deep focus but repeatedly accusing that there were two locks and she had no idea which one to use. In the midst of her “concentration”, Gaki threw the coat off her shoulders as if it were the greatest burden, finally succeeding in slipping the key inside, offering yet another look at her sexy outfit to her tired friend.
“Ha!” she exclaimed victoriously while shaking her finger at the lock ”you were no match for me.”
Having witnessed such a rare behaviour from her best friend, the older was yet again torn between either relishing in the stimulant view of Gaki’s sexy outfit or laughing out loud at her grogginess. She had never seen her studious friend drunk before.
Gaki pushed the door dramatically to make an alluring entrance and Ai made sure to pick up the poor, innocent coat on the floor before following her friend inside.
It was pitch black. As soon as the door was closed being them and the lock was safely set back, without notice, the younger woman plunged forward and took a surprisingly good aim at her friend’s lips, stroking the sides of her face lovingly.
From the surprise, the coat in Ai’s hand dropped to the ground again. She was taken aback, no doubt about it, but she did nothing to stop it even if every corner of her mind was screaming that this was wrong. Truth be said, she had been craving for this to happen and she had been alone for too long…

Risa’s lips were deliciously moist and sweet, still fragrant from the glasses of wine she had. Ai’s heart was racing, her arms reached forward, they clung to each other heatedly as their tongues met hard against one another. At the terrible intimacy enveloped by the darkness, Ai chose to disregard the panic. At least by not seeing, she could allow the rest of her senses take over since everything about the kiss felt too good.
She got pushed several steps behind towards the bed and in the blink of an eye the older woman was on her back, Gaki landing on top of her whole length. It was crystal clear now that Gaki was far from drunk.
“Ah… I need you so bad” the young student whispered against her lips.
At that point, Ai’s intimate parts were tingling more than ever. Gradually, sensually, the kiss Gaki initiated was turned into various small ones, since she was too busy fumbling with the chest beneath her to concentrate on her kissing technique. “I really do, I’m tired of waiting~” she repeated with a hiss, bringing her lips to the area in between Ai’s breasts.

***

Still in complete darkness, Gaki was cuddled up against her lover’s chest with a satisfied smile. Ai on the other hand, while staring into nothingness, was absently brushing her fingers through the bean's ruffled hair.
“I can’t believe what we just did.”
At her lover’s words, the bean tightened the hug around the smooth torso “Why is it so hard to believe? I’ve been imagining this moment for a very long time.”
“Oh, did you?” she teased, pinching a certain area on her lover’s chest, eliciting a suppressed squeal from her. The, she immediately regretted it. Whatever took over her, she should have stopped it in time. While she pondered as to what were the odds for their relationship to go haywire in the immediate future, a bitter smile cornered her lips. “Gaki-san, this is truly unbelievable, I mean… Why did it happen just now? Is it because of this stupid celebration?”
In reply, the younger woman let out a warm sigh against her lover’s skin “You always looked at me in one way only, as the girl you needed to take care of. But you know, Aichan…?” she looked up without even seeing, cupping the side of Ai’s face “You don’t need to worry anymore.”

The contradictory thoughts kept bothering the older woman for a couple more minutes, and the silence surrounding them soon caught the naked bean dozing off, her muscles loosening up around the body she was pressed against.
“Oi. Gaki-san.”
There was no answer.
“Gaki-saaan~” the older whined again, lifting up her lover’s chin to peck her on the lips; she immediately felt them spreading into a sneaky grin.
“Nani yo…?” she breathed huskily “Want another round?”
“No, baka. Not that! Aren’t you forgetting something?”
The young student slightly lifted her head in confusion, feeling Ai’s warm breath on her forehead; they were that close. “I don’t think so.”
“My present, Niigaki.” she ruled, her tone both bossy and pleading; “Where is it?”
“Ahaa~ gomen Ai-chan. I’ll get it for you.”

The young student got up from her lover’s arms reluctantly, turning to the side to turn on the lamp on the nightstand. As she took a couple of moments to get used to the sudden light, Ai got a good glimpse through her squinting eyes at a smooth, naked back. She grinned weakly, biting her lip.
Gaki pulled a shirt over her head and headed towards the desk; again, Ai could not take her eyes away. She wondered why on Earth she denied herself with such fierceness the chance to return her best friend’s passionate love over the course of the past years. Everything at that point seemed natural, cosy and outflanked by the loveliest sense of protection. None of them was hurt because of the tremendous step that they took with the same amount of willingness.
Gaki shyly stepped back towards the bed, taking a seat on the edge to face her lover. She handed over a heart-shaped box and Ai wasted no more time to take it, smirking in delight at the girl’s blush.
She held the girl’s gaze even after the small lid was taken off; there was something in the way their eyes connected that both of them found familiar, since it was definitely not the first time that they were able to stare deep into one another’s thoughts and still be amazed by it every single time; nothing had changed after all.
Ai finally looked down from the intimate and profound proof of how compatible they truly were, gasping softly at the sight of various chocolates, shaped differently, surrounding a pink piece of paper in the middle. As she read Gaki’s neatest handwriting yet, Ai’s lips pursed together. What she felt shooting through her body was a ripple of emotion so intoxicating that she started to feel unusually giddy.

Watashi no Takaramono.
Daisuki yo, Aichan~


Moreover, as she read the heartfelt confession over and over again, a stingy pressure covered the centre of her face. The big cry-baby was about to strike again.
She looked up teary-eyed to meet her lover’s shy smile. There was the meaningful and electrifying connection again. She put the box to the side and spread her arms, welcoming her eager lover to straddle her and pamper her with soft kisses.
Even if the older of the two took more time in realizing it, now they both knew that the “special someone” they have been looking for was right there all along.

***


- the song Gaki-san was singing is Romance, Pepper Keibu's Coupling ;D
- the confession means "You're my treasure." I think  :bleed eyes: my Japanese is such a phail
- the perv does not quite follow... the same patters as the typical... pervs.   :shakeit:

YAY. This is it I guess... I really hope you enjoyed it <3 *happy dance*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: MsSmigge on February 16, 2013, 02:16:31 PM
Awww this was so cute~  :wub:


“Nani yo…?” she breathed huskily “Want another round?”

“No, baka. Not that! Aren’t you forgetting something?”


Damn you Ai-chan, the answer to that is always yes when Risa asks it...  :bleed eyes:

And Risa winning the battle against her lock was just something hilarious... XD I don't know why but it made me laugh~

And that present was quite cute  :wub: At least I would have melted if someone gave me something like that XD (Maybe because I love chocolate and go hyper after eating it....)

And then happy ending~ Just cute.



- the perv does not quite follow... the same patters as the typical... pervs.   :shakeit:


*Raises both hands up and jumps around like this  :panic:* ME ME ME I WANT IT!!!!! Lol....  :nervous

Great, cute ans awesome story. I really like it  :wub:
And what comes to my valentine Aigaki Fic... It doesn't exist XD I just didn't get any good ideas so I decided to wait when AiGaki fluff inspiration kicks me again. Nah, who I am trying to cheat, it kicks me all the time XD But I just didn't get anything in my mind this time and cause I am just so damn lazy right now... :nervous

And indeed I am waiting for your feedback XD I just love comments~
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 16, 2013, 08:58:28 PM
*raises hand* Do you even need to ask?  :lol: I'm more of a sucker for pervs than I am anything else.

Despite the slight Japanese fail ('ore' is very masculine XD )I love how unabashedly sexy this is. I love Takagaki, I really do. :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: kawaii beam on February 17, 2013, 01:45:17 AM
im sorry i didnt reply to the 1st pard ada ;3; but hot damn i loved this~! spoiled demanding risa is always the best~  :deco: and who doesnt love some ero kawaii goodness?

and you know i want that perv plz n thanks! keep it up nee! :thumbsup
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 17, 2013, 02:16:13 PM
lol lol lol..
Seem like gakisan planned all this huh..
to get aichan to go back to her house with her and do naughty things huh :twisted:
spoiled demanding risa <3
hahahahaha
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: Ada XD on February 18, 2013, 01:48:57 AM
@MsSmigge : Who doesn't like comments? xD I quite enjoyed reading yours  :heart: I'm glad you liked this~
 I have yet another idea for an oneshot, a more realistic one this time lol but I'll have to get past these 3 deadly days first  :nervous (an important phase test and the assignment deadline ._.) Also, chocolate is always a piece of heaven. nuff said.

@rndy : hahaha sorry, I know. XD I would have done the exact same thing. Y DO U NEED TO ASK GIMME DEM PERV NAO And awww man, I just KNEW that maybe 'watashi' would have been more suited. I'm gonna go and change it xD Thanks~  :wub:
@kawaiwai : don't worry about it <3 as long as you liked it and it was entertaining for you I'm happy  :grin: :otomerika:
@alwaysYou : Yes XDD <3 Actually that's my favourite type of Gaki ever portrayed in fics oxo well along with rndy's legendary rendition of badass Gaki in Black and Blue that blew my socks away a long time ago. I have no idea why people make her so vulnerable in fics D: owait that's the exact same thing I did in my newest fic... nevermind  :banghead:

*delivers perv as promised*
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: H!PShipper on February 18, 2013, 05:23:17 PM
Drunk Gaki-san, I can only imagine how Adorable she can be lmao. How Ai-chan kept Risa waiting for so long, I Don't understand. So I liked the way you portrayed Risa's "I need you so bad" OMG Hot!oh speaking of hot, I'd like that perv please~   ^^
Title: Re: Ada's little oneshot boat~ ["Valentine's Gift" PART 2 - February 16th]
Post by: yellow on February 21, 2013, 01:36:29 PM
how disappointing to miss such a nice post at such a good timing. sorry i'm late

 :hand: :hand: :hand: i want to read the perv, plz pm me thanks :grin: hope it won't be too late to request this  :nervous