Kurosawa's Poems 12/26 Iikubo/DAWA

[badsaints]

Ehh? Nacchi & Risako? That's new, but interesting

[kuro808]

Thanks for everybody's comments, I wanted to try something more unique with the Nacchi/Risako and it wasn't really true but admiration even though it may seem like romantic but it was more one way

Swallowing Fear

Watching Her hair

Flow in the wind

The current

brushed against my face

She stands there

While I dive deeper

Her hands reaching

Out of the water

I feel her touch

My breathing becomes difficult

The words fell

In front of me

Please

Forgive me

I have failed

She kneels down,

Brings me up,

Brushes off the dust

Her hand on my shoulder

I knew what she said

I jumped onto her back

I closed my eyes

The feeling made me nauseous

Why couldn't I say it?

Then the whisper comes,

"Momo, I love you"

Thank you for everything

I wanted that right now

[kuro808]

Birthday Poem

Staying with you

Has its challenges

Avoiding the cameras

Showing the crowds

In private

We spent our time together

She left us for one second in time

Our eyes met

I never noticed the bright skin

The flesh

Never looked better to me

Shall I shout it out?

You seem quiet

What's wrong

You love me

Oh

Don't worry

No one can break us apart

My kitty

I love you

You look cute in water though

Your cute pout

Now that you are of age

I need to taint you

Maybe something strong

Or something weak

Either or

Happy Birthday

And don't let Ai-chan give you alcohol

Gaki

I

Jun

Sayu

Got caught

[kuro808]

Take me Away

Take me away

I want to feel you touch again

Every move

Every breath

I feel you on my body

Where are you?

I feel cold

Ever since you left

I fear for anyone taking you

The pale complexion

Appears in the mirror

The couples around me

Makes me sick

I walk back home

Hoping you would be there

But

You are not

The dark nights

The calm days

The gloomy weather

I want your touch

The picture of you

Cannot comprehend

My feelings

Depression sinks

Into my soul

One day

I found you

Keeping my comprosure

I see you smile

Still see the look

I still love you

I hear the phone ring

She answers it

My heart swells

The contents

Becoming my words

She extends her hand

I follow her

She lets me sit

With her new girlfriend

But they seem

Not connecting

She introduces me to her

An instant connection

We talked

Talked

and talked

We soon found

Our link to each other

Thanks to her

I found that person

A special person

Makes me smile

Comforts me

Lends her ear

Hugging partner

Lover

Sensual being

Thank you

Maybe you'll find one

SOON

[Beecubed]

Sometimes I'm left wondering who the poems are about.. ahaaa. Especially the last one.. we're free to imagine, right?

Hehee.. anyways, good writing, Kurosawa. Your poems are really lovely to read. Simple, yet somehow able to capture many feelings and impressions. Very sweet too.

 

Keep up the good work!

P.S thanks for letting me know about the IshiYoshi poem.. LOL. It was a different feeling for them.. getting drunk and stuff T__T heheee.. but a refreshing look at them anyhow. 

[kuro808]

I never like to say the pairings b/c its open to different pairing but some give off clues

There is an opening to other people so everybody can enjoy it without being bias

[badsaints]

Take Me Away - I like the title. Kinda ake you wish you can say this to someone Ah the irony of love

[kuro808]

Take Me Away - I like the title. Kinda ake you wish you can say this to someone Ah the irony of love

There is always to portray love this is one where she leaves and she doesn't want to admit the other moved on, too bad for the speaker

[kuro808]

Total Eclipse of the Heart

I sit alone at night

I don't realize the pain

I don't know how numb I am

I cannot put myself into your shoes

I am scared to tell you

I love you

I pushed away

I ran to through the rain

Maybe she'll see me

And I need you now tonight
And I need you more than ever
And if you'll only hold me tight
We'll be holding on forever
And we'll only be making it right
Cause we'll never be wrong together
We can take it to the end of the line
Your love is like a shadow on me all of the time
I don't know what to do and I'm always in the dark
We're living in a powder keg and giving off sparks
I really need you tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight

Is it true?

Do I have to feel this way?

Please answer me

I am begging

I want to be loved

Please

I want to be with you

Let me stay

LET me Stay

LET

ME

STAY!

Once upon a time I was falling in love
But now I'm only falling apart
There's nothing I can do
A total eclipse of the heart
Once upon a time there was light in my life
But now there's only love in the dark
Nothing I can say
A total eclipse of the heart

Does it mean?

I agree

I am reckless

I was a fool

No you were the fool

You loved me

But I guess

It was not meant to be

Thank you

Anonymous
---

Credit goes to the song

Bonnie Tyler - Total Eclipse of the Heart

[kuro808]

An Old Woman's Story

To approach an age

Is not fun

Men pass by like fools

Realizing my tones has faded

Then join the two younger people

One hitting an important age

The other hitting her glamor stage

Picking up their cups

I give them a clue

Eyes pierce into their hearts

I wish I was younger

The next two come in

Damn them two being famous

They get to do something fun

Dressed up and stuff

Arghh

I wish I was younger

Then the final group comes up

Damn amateurs

They can't drink all that

Leader

Sub-Leader

Turtle

Bunny

Kitty

Banana Girl

They like talking

I should stay here sulking

Yuko

Stop that

You guys have spirit

One more drink

Kompai

I'll stay this age for now

[kuro808]

Untitled

As I sit here

I wait for you

The image of years past

Comes into mind

I want to be with you forever

I admit

I hated you at first

You were a rival

But once I saw you

Running through the rain

You walked in front of my path

You lifted my chin

Your lips met mines

You walked away

The words were

Taken from me

I saw the snow

Soon after

You walked me home

We went for each other's hand

The struggle to make it cling

I shivered

You kept near your body

My head near your heart

The white snow

Fell upon my nose

You scraped it off

Let it melt

On your bare finger

I felt immature

I laughed at your seriousness

I realized when you became

An adult

You still loved me

I wanted that white snow again

You smiled

We went outside

I saw that snowflake again

It landed on my nose

But I put it on your nose

I kissed it

The arms went around

The body felt the warmth

I'll be

There

Whenever

Where ever

And Forever

-Risa

[rndmnwierd]

  Cute!

[kuro808]

Real Emotional Intellectual Negative Actions

The cold feeling inside

Has drawn me to cuddle up

But you are not there

I feel that

I am not worth it

The empty feeling

Overcomes my need

I may not be there

But I will try

I won't hurt you again

Please I promise

I finally shed that tear

You told me

I am stone cold

But I proved it

That tear fell onto the ground

Creates a puddle

I feel alone

Naked

Hurt

I saw your face

I couldn't help

But to hold myself in the corner

Letting the guilt out of me

I want you

I need you

I crave your warm touch

I need an embrace

I lack emotions

I found my heart

I saw the dust

I blew it off

It started to beat

Slowly

It beated faster

The pumping grew into a rage

Then

It slowed down

The image

Made me cringe

Scared

Alone

Eyes are red

The bloodshot eyes

Have done its work

I am sorry

I will never hurt you again

When you come back

I will love you

No one will touch you

You should be precious

I grow hungry for you

The touch

The kissing

Your voice

Your face

Now it is history

Just because

I could never loved you

[kuro808]

Don't Speak

Deep cuts

Open wounds

It claims my soul

I feel hurt

Everyday

You walk by me

I want to rip you apart

Don't speak
I know just what you're saying
So please stop explaining
Don't tell me cause it hurts
Don't speak
I know what you're thinking
I don't need your reasons
Don't tell me cause it hurts

Hurting in my world

I wanted you

Hunting my hurt feelings

Picking up the pieces

Just to see with you her

Don't speak
I know just what you're saying
So please stop explaining
Don't tell me cause it hurts
Don't speak
I know what you're thinking
I don't need your reasons
Don't tell me cause it hurts

I hook up

With another person

To reveal the jealousy

What I find is

I am jealous

Please leave

Don't speak
I know just what you're saying
So please stop explaining
Don't tell me cause it hurts
Don't speak
I know what you're thinking
I don't need your reasons
Don't tell me cause it hurts

Breathing hard

You walk by

Alone

Kneel down by me

I couldn't help

But to let go

Let it run til

I couldn't anymore

However

You finished me off

Please

Please

Don't Speak

[kuro808]

Flying High

On a candlelit night

I sat across my friend

Feelings flowing out

She is a good friend

Looking into her eyes

My heart beats faster

The present is offered

Tearing off the red paper

I find a box

Opening it up

Seeing the shiny thing

The necklace etched

Our initials

She slides her hand

On top of mines

Happy Birthday

She says

Feeling the regret

Leaving childhood

To a new stage

Ready to cry

She catches me

In her arms

Finding comfort

Stroking my hair

Closing my eyes

Smiling

Childhood was short

Adulthood

But she calms me down

Warming my heart

I had a dream

Her arms wrapped around me

We were flying

Flying high

The wind flowing

Through my hair

Looking at her

Smile

I must smile too

 

[kuro808]

Dating

Watching the time fly

I wait for my friend

She is usually early

But her time

And my time differs

We decided to go out

I sat at the bench

She walks by

I grab her arm

Drag her down

And her face

Was so kawaii

Her puffed out cheeks

And her puppy dog eyes.

Her head on my shoulder

Risa can you kiss me?

Eh,

Looking at me

Her lips extended

I left my lips out

Psyche

Walking away from her

Grabs my hand

Her lips met mines

The fireworks in the background

Lit the night sky

Which made more sense

The fireworks in the sky

Or the fireworks that were in my mind

[badsaints]

Total Eclipse of the Heart

Going for songpoem now 22? When 2 people love each other, why can't they be together?


An Old Woman's Story
Hmm I wonder who's the old woman here


Untitled
Sweet


Real Emotional Intellectual Negative Actions
I'm imagining Ai is the speaker here, but it could anyone...


Don't Speak
Damn this is sad


Flying High
  I'm smiling too


Dating
 

Wow that's a lot of poem readings for one night

[kuro808]

thanks badsaints for reading and commenting

Current Obsession

She looks in the mirror

She sees her once cute face

Become a distant memory

Remembering her past

The one night she sat alone

With all her friends

Breaking the news

Of heartbreak and sorrow

She was leaving

For the real world

The idol appearance

Had worn her out

She didn't make the mistake

Of being hasty

Instead she took the long path

It winds

It turns

Then the door appears

She opens it to her new obsession

She grabs it from the shelf

Opens it up

Her smile glows

The people crowd around her

Knowing that she left for

Her own purpose in life

Her lover crushed

Her friend crushed

Her group members saddened

She woke up that morning

Realizing the dream

She looked at the TV screen

It had been revealing her life

She stood up

Walked outside

See her friend at the front door

"Nee, Ai-chan"

"FF again."

She nods and hugs her

Then, grabs her imaginary sword

Moves on to Tomorrow

[kuro808]

The Problem

Sitting there next to you

I laugh

You look back

“What's funny?”

I trace her face

“You look cute”

You deny it

But I couldn't help

Reading every smirk

She felt uncomfortable

I pat her

“Don't worry you still look cute”

“No, I don't”

“Yes you do.”

“Stop complementing, you know that it is horrible”

“No, I think it is wonderful.”

Her face in her hands

I put her hands on my face

Looking into her eyes

I see everything that she is thinking

I just giggled

She drops it to the side

Walking away

I grasped her hand

“I still love you, short or long.”

A dark night became bright

Because she knew that

I still love her.

Despite a bad haircut

[rndmnwierd]

Cute.
Does this mean you don't approve of Risa's new short haircut?