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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #40 on: October 30, 2012, 02:51:24 AM »
thanks :shy1:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #41 on: October 30, 2012, 07:56:38 AM »
The one shots were really cute! :lol:

now i know how it feels when i write after this or after that :rofl:

Thanks for writting Yellow! sorry for not being around (i got drunk and it was a really bad hangover!!)  :panic:

About Riho x Daishi (i'm curious..) i asked for something cute.. :nervous

anyway, i will try to write something sweet, nice and normal about them to atone my sin on the funny fantasy about them... :nervous but definitely not now.... it is on my fiction list... i will get it up in a months' time after i have settled with what i have to settle now. :D

so for this time being, i play my part like i always did... be the good and loyal reader of your guys and try to give you guys the  good and maybe funny comments on your chapters  :P

so update often  XD

yellow is always looking forward to read your fictions... :mon sundae:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #42 on: October 30, 2012, 08:12:46 AM »
I'm sleepy!  :catglare:

i just saw your comment!  :shakeit:

yeah i'll update soon as i can!!  :cow:

thnks for letting me black mail you!  :rofl:

thank u very much update when u have time ok  :bow:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #43 on: October 30, 2012, 08:24:16 AM »
I'm sleepy!  :catglare:

i just saw your comment!  :shakeit:

yeah i'll update soon as i can!!  :cow:

thnks for letting me black mail you!  :rofl:

thank u very much update when u have time ok  :bow:
maybe if without your blackmail... i woudn't have start writing... so should be thankful to you  :lol:

anyway, good night and sweet dreamz  :P

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #44 on: October 30, 2012, 03:21:53 PM »
Yellow here have a question for any of those experienced writers here.

I am thinking to start a fiction with 3 chapters plus 4 special parts. Where should post it at? Here or  the main thread (i.e. H!P Fanfics)?

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #45 on: October 31, 2012, 01:56:33 PM »
Sorry for disturbing.
Could you sent me Touch no evil (Yashi/Daishi)?
I'm sorry for not being any help :sweatdrop:

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #46 on: October 31, 2012, 02:10:02 PM »
Sorry for disturbing.
Could you sent me Touch no evil (Yashi/Daishi)?
I'm sorry for not being any help :sweatdrop:
sent. hope you like it  :)
nvm... I will ask around again when I want to post the fic :D

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #47 on: November 01, 2012, 09:07:09 AM »
Ok I have some feedback.

1) Why do you have two forum accounts?

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This shot involves some rabu rabu scene on the minors , so not postable here nor treasury box .
If you are interested to read, pm me or drop me a message in this thread.

PMing fics with perverted content concerning underaged girls is a severe rule break!

1. Any Perv talk/images/video/etc. of underage artists are not allowed

The first rule we ever wrote still holds true and will be most strictly enforced. ZERO tolerance will be applied. That is, No warnings. Instant ban.

a) Strictly NO sexual themed images, videos or talk about persons below 18 years of age.
b) NO bikini/gravure pictures of persons below 16 years of age. Exception will be made in some cases.

You are NOT allowed to ignore this rule by PM'ing the pervy content instead! :smhid Be glad you're not already banned!

If you can't post it in public here, don't post it here at all. PMing people stuff is some shady business.
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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #48 on: November 01, 2012, 10:15:13 AM »
i have some question regarding this.is it ok to send a pm to some underage reader here ?

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #49 on: November 01, 2012, 10:51:09 AM »
Technically, no. You can communicate off the forum for such stuff if you really have to, but the rules here are that we're not supposed to do that.

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #50 on: November 01, 2012, 10:57:21 AM »
okay .. i have to read all the rules here ! i am very sorry for the trouble .. ang thank you .. it's our fault.. i am sorry.

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #51 on: November 01, 2012, 11:16:05 AM »
Sorry about that... I will remove the content about it. I will take note of it in future.

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - The Oneshots List
« Reply #52 on: November 01, 2012, 11:37:51 AM »
@shirenu:
1) the writer account is i have created out of accident so i think since created, i just use it fruitfully.  :nervous
(don't tell me it is also something against the rules to have multiple accounts when I have done nothing offensive at all with them :nervous)

2) I was totally not aware of that but I will take note of that next time and thanks for giving me this chance. I will be careful next time. :heart:

once agin, i am very sorry about it. i have removed all content in regards. Thanks again for giving me this chance. I will certainly be wary of that and will not share the stuff again to anyone.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 03:08:07 AM by yellow »

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Yellow's Funny Stories - [1-Nov-2012] Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #53 on: November 02, 2012, 05:01:01 AM »
Let's be together

Taking the flight back to the homeland, Sayumi have some recollection of the past just before her family migrated abroad due to her father's sudden assignment post.

That year, despite of her unwillingness, she still take the step to break the heart of her then lover, Reina by suggesting the breakup before she left as she knew in the long run, due to the distance between them, they will lost each other eventually.

So for the past 6 years, they have never communicated. Furthermore, with intention to forget about the girl, Sayumi try not to get information from their common friends about her. Same goes for Reina.

During these 6 years, both of them though have a swamp of bees going after them which they turned them down due to unforsaken love for each other.
Her trip back, this time round, was to attend the wedding of her 1 year older cousin’s wedding with her girlfriend. When she reached the ball where the ceremony was held, she met her.

She was besides the cousin, the bride chatting with some guests in the ball. Thinking that Reina might have put down her past with her, Sayumi went up to interact with them to get herself acquainted since it was her first time returning after 6 years oversea.

When the bride was introducing her guests to Sayumi, she suddenly feel the awkwardness of the situation with Reina feeling a bit tense up when she was introduced to the just returned and didn’t response when Sayumi initiate a handshake with her. So, the bride tried to break the ice, excused herself with Sayumi, saying that she has some catching up with her younger cousin since it was her first time return for her 6 years’ stay abroad. So, they left and went to the bridal room.

During the catching up with her cousin, Risa, she then realized how silly she and Reina were, not able to let go of their love for each other after so long.

After the ceremony, when the newlywed walked out of the hall off the aisle, where the bride threw her bouquet. Sayumi, intended to join in the fun to catch the flying bouquet, went after it and accidentally came into the embrace of Reina where the bouquet landed on them. Picking up and holding on to the bouquet, Sayumi once again took up her courage and confessed her love to the younger girl even that the fact, she was not very certain about the cat-like girl to accept her once again.

But never to her expectation, Reina accepted her and captured the long missed lip of hers.

~end~
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I know it is short and quite rotten.
But, anyway,hope you like and enjoy it!

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« Last Edit: December 03, 2012, 04:05:29 AM by weird »

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #54 on: November 02, 2012, 05:45:17 AM »
TanaShige ? why ? :'( hmp anyway its quite short huh but its an interesting story.please cntinue this story :)))))

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #55 on: November 02, 2012, 06:10:32 AM »
TanaShige ? why ? :'( hmp anyway its quite short huh but its an interesting story.please cntinue this story :)))))
ok... if i have that time, i will re-explore the story and  see how i can go in-depth about it  :nervous
but definitely not now, since my mood is still quite condemned  :catglare: (not because of you don't worry. it's my own personal problem that i am a bit angry with myself.)
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 06:19:23 AM by yellow »

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #56 on: November 02, 2012, 06:21:31 AM »
interesting, I don't mind the TanaShige though, however I have a weird conflicting view of them
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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #57 on: November 02, 2012, 06:23:41 AM »
interesting, I don't mind the TanaShige though, however I have a weird conflicting view of them
what weird conflicting views?

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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #58 on: November 02, 2012, 06:26:08 AM »
its like they are like fire and water, that yin yang where they match up because they act differently with each other
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Re: Yellow's Funny Stories - (1-Nov-2012) Let's be together (TanaShige)
« Reply #59 on: November 02, 2012, 06:38:27 AM »
its like they are like fire and water, that yin yang where they match up because they act differently with each other
that's the fun and chemistry about them... they are kinda interesting whenever they are together.  :lol:
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 09:26:53 AM by yellow »

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