A Young Girl's Odyssey
by rokun
Dear rokun,
Here I am again, reading your fics and...reviewing.
Once again confirming that it is/can only be you that plays the Reina/Mikitty card.
First things first,
Thank you for that fact I just pointed out above. Thank you.
Then, I scream
"THIS STORY DESERVES A SEQUEL".
I want to see Reina grow to love Sayumi. The feeling I got from the end was that Reina wasn't quite in love with Sayu-chan yet. It was described as Sayu loving Reina but nothing on Reina's side except that time when she mentioned she wanted to grow to Sayumi.
This calls for a nice romance/drama version of this universe developing these two's relationship. like, you know, Berryz beau. This fics ending left a lot of things un cleared, well, not a lot but the most important, Like Ai-chan and Reina's relationship after this and Ai-chan's side of things and the company. What happened there like?!
That out of the way, since I wanted to not forget it I said it first, I quite enjoyed this story. Like I mentioned somewhere else here, I am not into main stream couples except GAM but this story introduced me to a new ship, the Reina/Sayumi, the reason, I confess, that I was able to finish it.
At first, I was grabbed by the events in the beginning about miki. My first thought was;
"W.T.F"Seriously, no foolin'.
I was thinking what you was smoking for killing off THAT person of all people. I mean, Reina got to me in CotD but this was...This was ....This was the first reason I was pulled to this story. then somehwere fsrther, I was really getting scared that that was for real when it came to the funeral and such so, thank the gods for the finished story, I decided to spoil my self and read the last chapter.
imagine my Shoku when I discovered the ultimate girlfriend of our heroine. I felt like how I did, almost like how I did when I found the charming YurinaxRisako. Just like that, I found a new ship to add to my Most wanton. I decided just then and there to go back to page 1, Sentence 1, the first word and re-read to the last word.
It was quite painful in the beginning when I was fooled like everyone else, I wanted to jump in there and comfort poor Ayaya myself. I still can't decide if I should be mad at you for that so I will be getting back to you.
Yes, I am one of those who get so pulled into a story that we can't help feel for the characters strongly.
It sure did take a long time to get to the ReinaxSayu bits but by then, I had learned the truth so I was already sold. Wherever Mikitty is, everything is right with that fic.
I also loved every bit of ReinaxMikitty that you through in there. Everyone.
Wait, I just thought about this now, but since Mikitty wasn't really dead, did she actually sneak into Reina-chan's bed, or was it all in Reina's head?! I guess it was all in her head since they never actually talked about it when Mikitty was 'resurrected'. But if it wasn't all an illusion, even if it was actually, then this means there is a special/strange bond btn the two. the more wierder it might be is that this is all on Reina's side which makes my head spin more. But I won't make my thoughts on that known for I know I wouldn't survive the stone from the Ai and Eri corners.
Arr.
if this bit is in all you MM fics, I am gonna dig them all up and read them no matter what pairing they support. I have a feeling this is actually bigger than just ReinaxMikitty playing around. there might be a GRANDE plane in the making. - oh how I dream. Dream s are nice.
They remind me of Usagi x Rei from Sailor Moon. Soulmate don't have to be lovers you know ...
Now that I think about it, you aren't the only one playing around with this ship, I read "All Aboard" and they had moments there too though in that universe, Mikitty is made out to be a Glomp Glomp Playa or something Demon!
Any who, you are the nest rokun.
You have really come a long way from CotD to this. this reminds me of the review of that story I did in the Reviews section. I am still a little hurt by the end of the first arc. I will pray still that you reconsider in the sequel. I already "raged"
about it in the Reviews section so I will spare this pace.
I am still waiting for mortivation to continue BB but I the fact that the heroine in...not in my top girls of Berry, I am still finding it hard.
Sorry about this but I have been told to be one of the most straight forward people.
Great story this one AYGO, turned out to be but it felt open ended.
Oh well, can't have then all now can we...
Definitely printed and stored for re-reading.
Great job
rokun.
Keep it up.
4.5/5