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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #40 on: January 09, 2013, 10:15:07 AM »
cisda83: Thanks~~ :love:

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #41 on: January 09, 2013, 12:35:15 PM »
A/N: Thanks for the comments~~ :heart: Without further ado.......I present to you Chapter four :cow:



                                                                                      Chapter 4

In the morning at Acchan's house...........

                    It was 8:30am in the morning...........and a certain midget was up. *I can keep on staring at Atsuko forever.........what am I thinking?! I will get killed.......by her crazy fans!* Takamina thought. Acchan was still sleeping soundly and Takamina was staring at her. 
(Writer's note: On that day the members have the day off.......to do anything they want. So......Acchan is still asleep:3) 
Acchan suddenly moved closer to Takamina.........and they were just inches away from each other lips. *Whoa........hold on here!! Is God trying to do something here?! Should I kiss her in this kind of scenario? M-maybe I should steal a kiss from her.......should I? I don't know anymore! If I wake her up........I will just say that was a morning kiss......* 
(Writer's note: You watched too many dramas and anime........) 
Takamina lean forward and kissed Acchan. It didn't last for long........Acchan suddenly woke up and opened her eyes in surprise. Takamina quickly pulled away and blush. "Urm......that was a wake up call"? Takamina laughed nervously. "That was bold of you Minami~ Stealing a kiss from me while I was asleep~" Acchan teased Takamina.
(Writer's note: Takamina was caught in action~ What kind of excuse is that? LOL.) 
Acchan leaned forward and kissed Takamina.......surprising the midget. "Ohayou~ I will make some breakfast for us~" Acchan said and left a stunned Takamina in the room. *Urm.......EEHH??!! D-did Atsuko just kissed me?!* Takamina thought. 
(Writer's note: Yeah. She did. Wait......Acchan doesn't know how to cook......Takamina will seriously die.) 
(Takamina: Wait......I will?)
(Writer's note: Yeah. Wait......why are you here?)
(Takamina: Cause you said I will die. Don't kill me.......I thought main characters don't die?) 
(Writer's note: I won't kill you......the readers will hate me for life if I do that:3) 
(Takamina: Go back to the story.)
(Writer's note: That's my line. And back to the story..........) 
Suddenly,Takamina's phone vibrated and she looked at the caller ID and smiled. Takamina picked up the phone. "Ohayou Yuko. What's up"? Takamina greeted her fellow midget. "Ohayou Bakamina~" Yuko said over the line. "Yuko!! Stop that"!! Haruna's voice could be heard in the background. "Hai~" Yuko said playfully. "So......I was wondering if you wanna join a few of us to the amusement park? We will be meeting at Tokyo main station~ At........wait I forgot.......hold the line". Yuko said. "Nyan-Nyan~ What time will we meet the rest again"? Yuko voice could be heard in the background. "12pm......stop forgetting that.......that was the fifth time you asked me that"! Haruna complained. "I got Nyan-Nyan to remember that for me~" Yuko said playfully. "The captain is waiting.......go and answer the phone". Haruna said coldly. "Awww......Nyan-Nyan is mad~" Yuko said and answer the phone again. "Well.....12pm at Tokyo main station......don't be late. And bring that tsundere of yours". Yuko said and hang up the phone. "I didn't even said I was going.......and that was the second time this week someone hang up my phone......guess I can't spend time with Atsuko alone........"Takamina said disappointingly. Takamina walked to the kitchen and saw a troubled Acchan trying to think of what to cook for Takamina. "You don't have to bother cooking anymore........Yuko just said that we will be going to the amusement park........12pm at Tokyo main station.........I didn't even said that we are going.....Yuko said to bring you over too". Takamina said. "Eehh~ And I wanted to cook something too~" Acchan said and pout. *Looks like I'm saved......from Atsuko's cooking.......thanks Yuko.....although I still hate you for disturbing my private time with Atsuko.* Takamina thought and sighed.



At Haruna's house...........

                     "Nyan-Nyan is scary when she is in tsun mode~" Yuko said and laughed. "YUKO"!!!!  Haruna shouted. "Whoa........I just invited Takamina to Disneyland........and you shout at me"? Yuko said. 
(Writer's note: Couple fight? Whoa.......) 
"You said amusement park! And that not why I'm angry"! Haruna shouted. 
Yuko just stand up and leave. "I......will see you later........I remembered that I need to do something......" Yuko said and excused herself. "Yuko! Come back here! I'm not done with you! Don't run away"! Haruna shouted but she heard a door close. "That idiot........." Haruna said. 



At Mayuki's location...........

                    "Yay~ Amusement park~ Disneyland~ Tokyo station~ And date~" Mayu said and jumped around like a little kid. "Mayu......stop jumping around.....I know you are excited.....just stop jumping". Yukirin said and smiled. "A date with Yukirin~ Yay~ I don't even remember when was the last time we went on a date~" Mayu said and pout. "Urm......last month"? Yukirin said. "No! Two months! The last time we went on a date was two months ago~" Mayu pout and look away. "Eehh? That long? I-I'm sorry Mayu.....looks like I'm too busy lately......that I forgotten about you........" Yukirin said and apologize knowing that Mayu was waiting for her all this time. "And.....that's why Disneyland~" Mayu said and smiled. *That was fast! I thought she was angry at me......* Yukirin thought. "Let's go~" Mayu said and grabbed Yukirin's hand and dragged her to the station. "Walk slower......." Yukirin said and smiled. 

To be continued. 

(Writer's note: The next chapter will be about dates and kisses and more jealously~)

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #42 on: January 09, 2013, 01:01:36 PM »
Wow! You updated already! :twothumbs

I love the perverted side of Takamina XD
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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #43 on: January 10, 2013, 02:25:09 AM »
This is so f*cking great  :panic:  :D

no more words   XD

thanks for update  :twothumbs

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #44 on: January 10, 2013, 02:41:02 AM »
Thanks for the update :) Cute moments between the pairs & lol moments as well. I laughed when Takamina left the story & chatted with u :p
Looking forward to the next chapter :D

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #45 on: January 10, 2013, 06:28:00 AM »
Dates, kisses and jealous my 3 favorities words :B

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #46 on: January 10, 2013, 10:36:56 AM »
Wah.. Minami is pretty bold there to make such a move.

Well as usual YukoxHaruna pair always fun

And MaYuki pair is also fine... coz' their interaction is like looking at sisters together than lover.

Anyhow, can't wait to see your update again...

Thank you

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Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
« Reply #47 on: January 12, 2013, 03:51:11 PM »
A/N: Thanks for the comments~~ :heart: Chapter 5 Part 1 :cow:



                                                                                   Chapter 5 part 1

At Tokyo main station......

                    The first couple to reach was.....Mayuki. Mayu was so excited she can't stop....going crazy at Yukirin. "WE ARE HERE~~~"!!!! Mayu shouted and throw her fist in the air. Yukirin quickly looked around and cover Mayu's mouth. "We are idols! And we will have another scandal in AKB if we were found out! So stop shouting and drawing attention! It's embarrassing"! Yukirin hissed at Mayu. Mayu pulled Yukirin's hands off her mouth and smiled.  "I won't mind having a scandal....if it's with you~" Mayu said playfully. *She is really blunt.....* Yukirin thought and faceplam herself. "That won't be good at all. We can't be found out....and we are in public so behave yourself. Or no hugs for you today". Yukirin said sternly. "Hai~ But you can't resist me~" Mayu said. Suddenly,a man approached the Mayuki couple and grabbed Mayu's hand. "Hey kid. Wanna have some fun with me"? The man asked.
(Writer's note: He is just some random guy.....)
"Hey bastard. Wanna die"? Yukirin grabbed the man shoulder and give out a dangerous arua. "Yay~ My hero~ Black Yukirin is out"!  "Don't lay your dirty hands on her". Yukirin said and kicked the man's shin. "That hurt bitch"! The man said and was about to hit Yukirin when Mayu hold his arm. "Wait a sec mister~ If you wanna hurt Yukirin I will make sure you won't be living tomorrow~" Mayu said and gave a fake and scary smile.
(Writer's note: A yandere smile. I'm scared~)
Out of nowhere a girl sudddenly punched the man in the stomach and grabbed his shirt. "If you were to hurt one of the girls....I will kill you. So move it! If you wanna live"! The girl shouted. "I'm sorry"! The man said and quickly ran away. "You guys alright? Hurt anywhere"? The girl asked and removed her mask. "Yuko"! The Mayuki couple said in unison. "Arigatou~" Mayu thanked Yuko and hugged her. "No problems ya know~" Yuko said and smiled. "But really....if you didn't come to our rescue we won't know what to do". Yukirin said and smiled. "Where's Nyan-Nyan"? Mayu said and looked around. "Nyan-Nyan will be here later~" Yuko said. Mayu and Yuko started talking about the members boobs and butts....as usual. "Yukirin's boobs has grown lately~" Mayu said and looked at Yukirin. "Mayu"! Yukirin lightly smacked Mayu's head. "Yuko~ Yukirin hit me~" Mayu said and pout. "Let's buy some ice-cream while we wait for the captain and the others to show up". Yuko pat Mayu's head and smiled. "Yay~ Ice-cream~" Mayu said. "I thought you said you were cold....." Yukirin said. "Don't worry~ I got Yukirin to warm me up". Mayu said and kissed Yukirin on the cheek. "I will be right back~" Mayu said and give her cutest smile. "D-don't be long". Yukirin said and blushed. "Awww~ That was so sweet of you~" Yuko said and pat Mayu's head. "Yuko-san! Yukirin and Mayu-san"! A voice called out to them. "Ohayou gozaimasu. I thought I will be the first to be here.....I hope I'm not late". Yuihan said politely. "Ohayou~" All three of them greeted. "You are not late at all....since Takamina and the others are not here yet". Yuko said. "Yuihan"? Mayu asked and showed puppy eyes. "Hai"? Yuihan said and wait for Mayu to continue. "Can you please look after Yukirin and if anyone comes randomly and touch my Yukirin....kick them. You can kill them too". Mayu said seriously. "M-Mayu.....I can look after myself.....and Yuko.....if anyone comes randomly at Mayu......I give you permission to murder them". Yukirin said and turn to Yuko. "I can see why both of you love each other so much". Yuko said and giggled. "Yuko-san......did you just said that Takamina-san is coming too"? Yuihan asked. "Yeah I did". Yuko replied. "Eeh?! At least tell me that when you invited me"! Yuihan said and started to panic. "Clam down Yuihan......you looked cute today so it's fine.....geez.....is that all you worry about"? Yuko said. "I-I'm sorry....." Yuihan said and claimed herself down.
(Writer's note: Looks like this won't be good at all....if Yuihan is here.....Takamina will have some......woman's problem.)



At atsumina location.......

                    "Atsuko......you are too close......" A midget said and blushed. They were.....in the train. It was kinda packed......so Acchan was worried that someone will touch Takamina so......she went super close to the midget to protect her. "Don't keep moving Minami~"Acchan said and pushed Takamina closer to the train door. *Why am I in this kind of situation again?* Takamina thought. "We are alighting soon~" Acchan said. "R-right......." Takamina said and look away.
(Writer's note: Acchan is so bold~ LOL.)



Back at Tokyo main station.......

                    "Nyan-Nyan~~ Aitakata~~" Yuko said when she saw Haruna walking towards them. "Kimi ni~~~" Mayu sing along with Yuko. "Mayu"! Yuko said. "Roger"! Mayu said and salute Yuko. "On three......one.....two.....three"! "AITAKATA~~~"!!! Both Mayu and Yuko sang and throw both of their hands towards Haruna. "Mayu....I said lower your volume......." Yukirin said and facepalm herself. "Yucchan! not so loud"! Haruna said and smack Yuko on the head. "Yuuchan? Nyan-Nyan~ You are not mad at me anymore~" Yuko said happily. "I am"! Haruna shouted. "But you only call me Yuuchan when you are not mad at me~ And you call me Yuko when you are mad~" Yuko said and hugged Haruna. "Yuko". Said a midget that popped out of nowhere. "Whoa! You scare me there"! Yuko said and turn around. "Ohayou". Takamina said. "Ohayou~ Why so moody"? Yuko asked. "Ask yourself......." Takamina said. "Minami~ You are too cold~" Acchan said from behind. "C-cold"? Takamina said. "T-Takamina-san......" Yuihan said. "Oh.......Ohayou Yuihan~" Takamina quickly recovered and greet Yuihan. "Wait.....how many people did you invite Yuko"? Takamina looked at Yuko suspiciously. "Let's see.....Jurina,Rena,Yuihan,Atsuko,Takamidget,Mayu,Yukirin,Mariko,Mii-chan". Yuko counted and name the members that she invited. "That many"?! Takamina shouted. "That's only eleven members.....plus me and Nyan-Nyan. I wanted to invite more people ya know"? Yuko said. "Please don't......we don't want to attract to much attention.....it will be troublesome". Takamina said. "Fun killer~" Yuko said and stuck out her toungue. "Whatever". Takamina said and rolled her eyes. "So cold~~" Yuko said and laugh. "
(Writer's note: Takamina is still annoyed at Yuko for calling her out.....interrupting her time with Acchan.)
(Takamina: I'm not annoyed!)
(Writer's note: Than.....angry?)
(Takamina: No!)
(Writer's note: Why are you here again?)
(Takamina: Break time......and Mii-chan,Jurina,Rena and Mariko will be here soon.)
(Writer's note: I know that! And please stop talking to me!)
(Takamina: Just passing-by~ And hi Chichay~~)
(Writer's note: Don't greet Chichay here......)
(Writer's note: And back to the story.......)
(Takamina: I'm not done yet!)
(Writer's note: Go back.......Acchan is waiting for you.)
(Takamina: Acchan? Alright! Back to the story people~~)



10 mins later.......

                    "Ohayou gozaimasu~" Jurina was the first to greet them upon reaching. "Ohayou~" Yuko and everyone greeted her. "Where's Rena"? Mayu asked. "Rena-chan is buying some melon pan.....again". Jurina replied. "Again"? Yuko asked. "She brought.....5 melon pan this morning for breakfast....." Jurina said and showed her five fingers. "5 melon pan? That's......a lot......and saying about breakfast.....Atsuko.....I'm hungry~" Takamina said and face Acchan. "Minami is hungry~ That's so cute of you~" Acchan said and hugged Takamina. *Argh! She hugged Takamina-san! I'm breaking them up!* Yuihan thought and stepped forward and pulled Takamina away and give Takamina a sandwich that she had with her. "P-please eat this! I made it this morning"! Yuihan blushed and handled the sandwich to Takamina. "Oh....is this for me? What about you? And it's handmade~" Takamina said and smiled. "I'm fine....you can eat it.....I-I don't really have to eat or something........" Yuihan said and blushed. "Wow.......that almost looked like a confession". Yuko said and Mayu nod her head. "It's just breakfast....." Haruna said and facepalm herself.
(Writer's note: Okay~ Skip this part~)



5mins later........

                    Everyone finally arrived at the meeting point....and Rena finished her bread.
(Writer's note: She can really eat......)
"Yay~ Finally~" Mayu said. "Settle down~~" Yuko said. "Let's spilt up~~" Yuko said and starts giving instructions. "Mayu you will go with Yukirin~ And I will go with Nyan-Nyan~ "Mariko.....and Mii-chan~" Yuko said and grin. "I'm fine". Mariko and Mii-chan said in unison. "Good~ Than.....Rena and Jurina~ And.....the most troublesome one........Takamina"? Yuko faced and asked Takamina. Takamina looked around and sighed. "Atsuko and Yuihan....I'm fine.......I guess". Takamina said. "Okay~ Than we are settled....12pm....at Disneyland~" Yuko said and give everyone a peace sign. "If we spilt up....what's the point of meeting"? Takamina said and sighed. "Go and have your nice breakfast and shop around I guess? It won't open to us until 12pm.....so we meet at 12pm....at Disneyland"? Yuko explained. "You lost me....." Yuihan said.
(Writer's note: Yuko is up to something........)
"Opened to us? It's already opened....." Takamina said. "Not to us~"See you later~" Yuko said and dragged Haruna off to somewhere. "And she left us?! Yu—"Takamina mouth was covered before she can finish her sentence. "Takamina-san......I think you should keep it down for now.......there is a man with a camera nearby.......he has been looking at us for awhile.......let's go first". Yuihan calmly explain before releasing Takamina. Takamina just nod and signal to the rest to go off first and contact by phone. The rest nod to show that they understood what Takamina was saying and go to their separate ways.



In a certain cafe.....

                    "That was close.....". Takamina said and sip on her drink that she ordered a few minutes ago. "I'm tired~~ Minami~~" Acchan said and sat closer to Takamina. *Whoa.....too close.....she's too close!*  Takamina thought and blushed. "Ahem.....Atsuko-san....we are in public. Although we are in a private cafe....please behave yourself...." Yuihan said. "Meanie~" Acchan stuck her tongue out at Yuihan. "Atsuko". Takamina said and hit Acchan lightly on the head. "Minami hit me~~ I hate you~" Acchan said and turn her head away. *Argh! What did I just did to Atsuko?! Now she hates me!!! I hate myself!!*  Takamina thought and mentally faceplam herself. *Sniff* a sound was heard next to Acchan. "Sniff"? Acchan said and turned around and saw Takamina crying silently,tears dripping down  her cheeks. "Eehh!? Minami?! Why are you crying?! I'm don't mean it~" Acchan quickly apologize to Takamina. *Sniff* "It's okay....there's something in my eye". Takamina quickly think of an excuse. "Takamina-san.....that was a lame excuse......" Yuihan said and giggled.
(Writer's note: Lame.....but your wife knows it's not like that~)
"Minami~ Don't lie.....I know you well.....we have been together for a long time already~" Acchan said and smiled at Takamina. *She figured it out so fast! Is my excuse too lame? I'm always failing....even in my lies....I'm even impressed with my own fail character......*  Takamina thought and looked away. "Takamina-san.....acts like a kid~ It's so cute~" Yuihan whispered and giggled silently. "What was that"? Acchan said and looked at Yuihan. "N-nothing...." Yuihan said and blushed. "Okay......" Acchan said and went back to tend to Takamina.

To be continued.
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Wah... I really feel sorry for Minami there... being surrounded with 2 girls that going to fight for her attention.. although Minami likes Atsuko more...

Yuko and Mayu... are so childish as usual... Yuki and Haruna... would get high blood pressure soon enough.... because of their partners.

Rena... can eat lots of melon pan huh?

Anyhow, great update... Thank you... hope to see the next one

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waaa.. about atsumina train´s scene.. OMG!! jeje takaboy you are the man!

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lol Yuko is really something ^^
I like the fight scene xD

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Lol! Poor Takaboy! Being surrounded by 2 sexy girls!  :mon evillaff:
Go Takaboy choose Acchan!  :mon blowhorn:  When will be Kuchi's apperance? just kidding...
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your writing style is funny, i like when takamina out of the story. And it's too much cuteness inside heree, i like when yuko and mayu sing aitakatta together it's funnyyy. Looking forward he next update

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A/N: Sorry if I took a long time to update this chapter...I was busy with tests and stuff :sweatdrop: LOL.



                                                                                 Chapter 5 part 2

At 12pm in front of Disneyland.......

                    "W-whoa...." Takamina said and her eyes sparked with excitement. "So this is Disney? I-it's huge....I should take a picture....." Takamina said as she takes her phone out. "Minami~~ Let's take one together~~" Acchan said as she hugs Takamina from behind playfully. *A-again? T-too close! You are to close Atsuko!* Takamina thought and blushed a deep shade of red. "Of course~~" Acchan said as she held Takamina's hand. "I-if you say so...." Takamina said as she was about to take a picture with Acchan,Yuko popped out of nowhere. "ATSUMINA PLUS YUKO"!!! Yuko shouted and pose behind them. "You scared the hell out of me Yuko"!! Takamina shouted at Yuko and smacked Yuko on the head. "Only Nyan-Nyan can hit me!! Acchan!! Control you husband for once"!! Yuko shouted and rubbed her head. "H-husband"? Acchan blushed and looked at Takamina. "I have a wife"? Takamina said and looked around. "Idiot". Mariko said and lightly hit Takamina's head. "What? Are you stupid? Bakamina? Yahoooo~~ Are you there"? Yuko knocked Takamina's head and waved her hands over Takamina's eyes. "Did I do something"? Takamina asked. "Wow....I'm not surprised to hear that....." Tomochin said as she approached the group. "Hi Tomochin~~" Yuko said. "Hi again? Anyways.....you fail too much my dear captain". Tomochin said and flicked Takamina's forehead. "Stop aiming for my head"!! Takamina shouted and hid behind Acchan for protection. "Shouldn't it be the other way round"? Tomochin asked Yuko. " Hmm....wife protecting the husband?

I think it's okay if you apply that on mayuki....not atsumina though....Takamina is the man~~" Yuko said and put a thumbs up. "Since when"? Takamina asked. "Since the beginning~~" Acchan said. "AKB papa". Mayu said and hug Yukirin. "Well....Mayu's right. You have been AKB papa since the beginning". Yukirin smiled sweetly at the captain. "Takamina-san has always been a leader and AKB papa to all the members and fans". Yuihan said. "Hmm....there were fans that told me that during handshakes event". Takamina said as she tried to progress what Yuihan had just said. "Well then! Since everyone has gathered....let's get going~~" Yuko said and pulled Haruna along.



After that....

                    "I'm at the top of the WORLD"!!!! Yuko shouted at the top of her lungs. They were at....the roller coaster ride.
(Writer's note: I can't take roller coasters >.<)
*I'm scared....freaking scared....but.....* Takamina looked to her side and saw Acchan's smile. *BUT HOW CAN I REJECT HER?!* Takamina shouted in her mind. "Minami"? Acchan called out to Takamina. "Y-yeah"? "Why...is this roller coaster so high up"? Acchan looked up and pointed at the top. "Maybe—" Takamaina started but was cut off by Yuko. "Maybe because you are a midget"? Yuko suggested. "You are no taller either...like you are the one to say". Takamina said. "At least I'm taller than you~~" Yuko said and poked Takamina cheek. Takamina glared at Yuko. "Acchan! Your midget glared at me"! Yuko complained. "M-m-my m-midget"? Acchan asked and blushed. "Well...she will be yours soon~~" Tomochin whispered in Acchan's ear.

"Tomochin"!! Acchan shouted. "Calm down~~ I'm just teasing you~~" Tomochin said playfully. "It's not like that idiot will know...." Tomochin said and pointed at Takamina who was choking Yuko...for insulting her height. "She not an idiot"! Acchan said. "Whatever~~" Tomochin said. "Well...she is".  Rena said. "Wait. melonpan again"? Tomochin asked. Rena just nodded. "How many had she eaten so far"? Tomochin asked Jurina...who was clinging on Rena. "Let's see....5 in the morning....2 before we came...and 3 now". Jurina said. "Wait...that's...." Tomochin said. "10 melonpan". Rena replied. "You really love eating melonpan....". Tomochin said. "Well more like...sweet stuff~~" Jurina said. "Too much sweet stuff". Takamina said. "Where's Yuko"? Tomochin asked. "Haruna is saving her soul". Takamina said. Tomochin looked at Yuko. "She looks dead...." Tomochin said. "Anyway....Rena eat proper meals at proper time. It's not good if you do not eat properly". Takamina said. "Hai~~" Rena salute Takamina. "Let's go up~~" Acchan said and drag Takamina up. *I'm doomed....* Takamina thought.



After the roller coaster ride.....

                    "I feel sick....." Takamina said as she sat on the bench with Yuihan. "Are you okay Takamina-san"? Yuihan asked worriedly. "I-I'm fine let me rest for awhile......" Takamina said. "Minami~~" Acchan called out. "Y-yeah"? Takamina said nervously. "Drink up~~" Acchan said and pass a bottle of water to Takamina. "T-thanks..." Takamina said. "The captain is sick". Mayu said. "I didn't know you can't take roller coasters Minami~~" Acchan said and sat down next to Takamina. *Well...you were the one who drag her up Atsuko-san* Yuihan rolled her eyes. "I'm fine....I guess"? Takamina said. "You are definitely not fine". Yuko said. "Oh? Worried about our captain? That's rare". Haruna said as she place a wet towel on Takamina forehead. "No. I'm not! Why  must I be worried about Bakamidget"? Yuko said and pointed at Takamina. Without a word,Haruna smacked Yuko. "That hurts~~" Yuko pout and rubbed her head. "Blame yourself". Haruna said. "I'm hungry". Mayu hugged Yukirin.

"Didn't you already eat more than you need"? Yukirin asked and pat Mayu's head. "Cyborg...out...of energy...." Mayu said and pretended to faint. "Okay...no ice-cream". Yukirin said. "Yay~~ Food~~" Mayu said and put her hands in the air. "Did anyone said food"? Yuko asked. "Me~~ Mayuyu is hungry~~" Mayu said. "Let's eat than~~ Mayu is hungry~~ So am I~~" Yuko said.
(Writer's note: Food again? They can really eat....LOL.)



At a cafe.....

                    "May I take your orders"? A waitress asked politely. "Let's see...." Mayu said and stared at the menu that was given to her. "I want...." Yuko said and make eye contact with Mayu. "We want everything on the menu"!!! Mayu and Yuko shouted and passed the menu to the waitress. "E-everything"? The waitress asked and looked at the duo surprisingly. "Yup! Everything~~ Thank you~~" Mayu and Yuko said together in chorus. "Not everything"!! Haruna and Yukirin shouted and smack their partners in the head. "I'm sorry about that..." Takamina apologize sincerely. "Is everyone okay with the lunch set"? Takamina asked. "We will gladly take that"!! Haruna and Yukirin said and covered their partners mouth in case they said anything else unnecessary. "T-thank you and please wait a moment before we serve your drinks". The waitress said politely and leave. "Meanie". Mayu and Yuko said when they are released. "We can't eat everything from the menu"!! Haruna shouted. "Mayu....please stop eating so much in a day..." Yukirin said and sighed. "Than can I..." Mayu started. "No". Yukirin said firmly knowing what Mayu wanted to say. "Awww....Yukirin is angry~~" Mayu said and pouted.  "
(Writer's note: Let's skip this or all of you will fall asleep before reading the end XD LOL.)



After eating......

                    As usual....Takamina will go for the bill when Yuihan or Acchan wants to pay the bill. "No way"! Acchan shouted. "Takamina-san please let me pay this time. You paid for my meal the other time". Yuihan said. "The other time? What other time Minami"? Acchan asked. "It's just a meal...." Takamina said. "Let go of the bill Minami~~ Let me pay~~" Acchan said. "No way! I won't let AKB top beauties to pay for a meal"! Takamina shouted. Upon hearing what Takamina had just said...Acchan and Yuihan released the bill that they were fighting for and blushed. "Oh~~" Mayu and Yuko said and looked at Acchan and Yuihan than at Takamina who was paying the bill. "Takamina was so manly~~" Jurina said and hugged Rena. "I want to eat melonpan again". Rena said. "You just ate...." Tomochin said.
(Writer's note: Rena can really eat...LOL.)



                    As time passes....more members came and join in the fun at Disney. Of course...Team K twin towers are needed...for Yuko's plan to work.
(Writer's note: I did mention about Yuko planning something...I have short term memory XD LOL.)

It was already 6pm in the evening when they finished playing almost every ride in Disneyland. "Alright! Let get ready and head home~~ There will be a bus waiting for us to fetch us home~~" Yuko said. "Wait~~ I need to buy a souvenir for my sister" Umeda Ayaka,one of the members who joined in after her jobs were done for the day said and head towards the souvenir shop. As a few of the members wanted to do some other stuff,Yuko decided to have a short break before leaving.
(Writer's note: It was part of the plan.)
"Yuko! Don't call for breaks randomly! We can't let the bus driver wait for us"! Takamina tried reasoning but Yuko just totally ignored Takamina and quickly wink at Sayaka and Sae who was with Takamina and walk away. "Argh!! Oshima stop ignoring me"! Takamina shouted. "Calm down Takamina". Sae said calmly. "Geez...that girl can drive me crazy sometimes...." Takamina said and facepalm herself. *Now!!* Sayaka signaled to Sae and both of them immediately covered Takamina mouth and blinded folded her. Dragging Takamina to the assigned location as planned. Takamina couldn't fight back with two of Team K's strongest members.



At the assigned location....

                    "And...we are here". Sae said and signal to Sayaka to let Takamina down. When Sayaka removed the blindfold Takamina immediately move away from the duo. "Why the hell did you guys do that for"?! Takamina shouted. "Let's see..." Sae said and looked at Sayaka for help. "We..." Sayaka started. "That was part of the plan actually". Mariko appeared from behind with everyone following at the back. "What plan"? Takamina asked. "Look behind you. Midget". Tomochin said. Takamina obeyed and turned around. She saw a huge bridge before her with two different path to two different places. "This bridge...coincidentally called 'The bidge of fate' you know what that means right Takamina? "Where's Acchan and Yuihan"? Takamina turn around and asked. "Your answer...is right before you". Rena said. "Huh"?  I don't get it..." Takamina said and look at Yuko. "As usual...care to explain to her Nyan-Nyan"? Yuko asked and looked at Haruna. "Okay...look at the bridge in front of you". Haruna said and point towards the bridge. Takamina obeyed and looked towards the bridge. "There are two ways for you to choose. Left or right? That...will be your choice". Haruna finished.  "On the left...we have Acchan. And on the right...we have Yuihan". Jurina said and smiled. "They will wait for you at the end of the bridge...you can only choose one path to walk on". Takamina thought about it for awhile and understood what's going on. "If...I choose one of them...what will happen to the other"? Takamina asked seriously. "You got it...that's our captain". Mayu said. "Well...Mayu and I will handle that...don't worry about it". Yukirin said. Takamina nodded and walk towards the bridge. *Acchan...well...I always look out for her...and Yuihan...she was always there for me...But...I want to be with Acchan and protect her until the day I die...and too continue to look after the adorable junior of mine and see her make her dreams come true* Takamina thought. Takamina bowed towards the path that leads to Yuihan and apologized. "I'm sorry...I knew you had feelings for me but I am not able to return those feelings that you gave me. I'm sure there will be someone out there who will take care of you and look after you until the day that you part from this world....there is someone...who needs me more...thank you for always being there for me...please look after me from now on". Takamina said and bowed once more before walking to the left path of the bridge. Everyone smiled and knew what to do next. Mayu and Yukirin head towards Yuihan while the others wait at another location for them to return. Nobody knows what will happen from now...but..everyone knows that a certain midget made the choice on her own.

                    "Acchan". Takamina called out when she reached the end of the bridge. Acchan turned around when she heard her name and smiled when she saw the person she wanted to see.


To be continued.
« Last Edit: April 12, 2013, 12:46:02 PM by Kanata48 »

Offline Elo

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yeyyyy finally atsumina  :wub: :deco:

please update very soon the next chapter  :bow:

I cant wait anymore :bow:
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Love this Pairing
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haha Mayu and Yuko want to order everything on the menu  :lol:
Takamina acting like a gentleman  :heart: :yep:
awww Rena want's more melon pan :P, I wanna try it myself :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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yeah..I love Atsumina
but why dont you make more Takayui moment ?
I like them too
thanks for update :welcome
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its been awhile...

the chapter is really cute   :wub:
yuko always bothering  :lol:

minami choose acchan...  :inlove:
cuute.. thanks for upload.

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