Author Topic: Broken [JuriMayu sister's relationship][OS] (Read 18461 times)

mo-chan · « **Reply #20 on:** May 26, 2013, 09:52:37 PM »

c si touchant que lorsque Mayu a décidé de laisser tomber le passé et vivre le présent je te jure ca m'a fait pleurer (T^T)/
your fic warmed my heart at the end
PS j'ai po oublié la saison 2

j'attens encore

kuro808 · « **Reply #21 on:** May 26, 2013, 09:59:59 PM »

The mind really wanders in this fic like all the thoughts in in the mind when you have to choose between lovers.

Incredible one shot

Kiri-el · « **Reply #22 on:** May 26, 2013, 11:57:58 PM »

You wrote my current feelings.

Is a difficult question and a painful response, but it's a right decision.

It was a sad day but I calmed down a bit when I read this fic. Thank you for writing this!

Kazan · « **Reply #23 on:** May 27, 2013, 12:12:05 AM »

Here's the story I always wanted,
glad to see you show up again

kurogumi · « **Reply #24 on:** May 27, 2013, 05:10:45 AM »

awww jurinaaaaa noooo

but im glad mayu have yuki, if it's not yuki maybe mayu is not even life...

yuki thank for helping mayu....

Llyloo · « **Reply #25 on:** May 31, 2013, 09:24:37 PM »

Thanks you all, I'm really glad to see all your comments. I never thought this OS could receive such comments. Thank you. I wasn't really sure if that OS was enough good for be posted before do it, but now I'm reassured.

Since school is more calm for the moment I'll maybe have more time for write.

mo-chan · « **Reply #26 on:** May 31, 2013, 09:33:26 PM »

yaaay!! I'll be waiting for your updates

gek geki · « **Reply #27 on:** June 01, 2013, 10:47:16 AM »

AND I CANT WITHOUT MAYUKI FIC ~~~~

cisda83 · « **Reply #28 on:** June 01, 2013, 11:30:14 AM »

very sad...

Very hard to come to that kind of decision...

But it was the right thing to do...

Thank you for the touching OS

Can't wait to see more

cisda83 · « **Reply #29 on:** September 06, 2013, 10:09:51 PM »

ah so sad that Mayu and Jurina couldn't be together

Great OS as always...

Thank you

Can't wait to see more OS

sakura_drop_ · « **Reply #30 on:** September 16, 2013, 12:09:59 PM »

This was really emotionally strong, and I nearly teared up. I guess we - that little bunch of fans who never complain and understand, see through the surface deeper into an idol - really can understand (in a way) what things they go through... I read this like it's really Yuko's thoughts... I guess she might be thinking like this in real life...

This makes me wanna write a TakaYuu OS... If I have time...I will definitely write one...

Yes, being able to fall asleep only with that one person...

Thank you for this touching piece, I can't wait for more OSs from you

P.S. I loved all of them, really, sorry for not always commenting

cisda83 · « **Reply #31 on:** September 16, 2013, 01:25:14 PM »

Very detail view of Minami's situation...

So touching and so heart breaking for Minami to feel all that..

Poor Minami to have to come across all those haters, responsibilities and loneliness as a AKB48 GM, leader and first generation member.

At least she has Yuko to always be there with her...

Great OS there...

I like this Takayuu OS

Thank you

Can't wait to see more OS

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #32 on:** September 16, 2013, 02:01:01 PM »

This was a herat-breaking OS....
It says everything about Minami and her responsibilties as a General Manager and the lonely life the members have.
But in the end she is not alone, she has Yuko by her side!
So sweet!!
Thank you for this OS!

Shinoki · « **Reply #33 on:** November 11, 2013, 02:29:36 AM »

"..." silence for five seconds
breaks out into tears...
I need to learn some new words, but this was:
wonderful...
That twist... gah!! Overwhelmed by awesomeness....
Mayuyu!!! Yukirin!!

FairyNyan · « **Reply #34 on:** November 11, 2013, 03:10:41 AM »

My Mayuki feels

this is sad/happy ending (?) . idc i love the ending

Konoe · « **Reply #35 on:** November 11, 2013, 03:13:57 AM »

It's so sad but beautiful

ZorxCemoon · « **Reply #36 on:** November 11, 2013, 03:54:01 AM »

Hahahahahaha, I'm smiling widely like a retard in class, but heck care hahahahaha.

That was an awesome story, got my hairs standing, seems weird though.

This's the first few stories that I literally couldn't predict the outcome, I seriously thought it was Sae, and I was like Mayu! Kiss her already, don't waste time!

Thanks for tending my wound, a.k.a sickness, currently still sick, so I'm reading all the Mayuki stories:P

Llyloo: May I take your order?

Zorx: Could I have 2 more Mayuki stories please.

Llyloo: That would be 5 dollars please.

Zorx: Ermm..... do you have changes for a thousand dollars?

Sorry for using you hahahaha, Muacks

imteedee · « **Reply #37 on:** November 11, 2013, 07:23:10 AM »

WE NEED TO TALK.

Terragen · « **Reply #38 on:** November 11, 2013, 08:39:13 AM »

Quote from: imteedee on November 11, 2013, 07:23:10 AM

WE NEED TO TALK.

ANIKI GOT YOU!

soraheartAKB48 · « **Reply #39 on:** November 11, 2013, 10:15:36 AM »

It's sooooooooooo good

but its kinda sad