Author Topic: Love Stoned – Update and Opinions – (12/31/14) - FANFIC DELETED (Read 39620 times)

dukkong · « **Reply #20 on:** December 06, 2011, 01:01:39 AM »

Hi, I'm new mem here but I absolutely love your AKB-fics (RIVERS was hand down the best one I've read in this fandom yet) ^^ Since I saw you wrote a new one I decided to check it out and of course not disappointed at all. It's interesting as always ^^
I wonder how the couple stories gonna develop in a setting like this but I'm trusting in your imagination.
Please update soon ~

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #21 on:** December 06, 2011, 01:23:02 AM »

Just here to say a quick thank you to everyone who has commented so far. I wasn't sure if I was executing the first chapter right or not, but since you guys seem to enjoy it, I feel much more at ease about it LOL I'm glad the first chapter has caught your interest so, and I hope later chapters do not disappoint orz

Also, scary threats are... not scary and are very amusing LOLOLOL Particularly that M one... *cough oist cough*

@dukkong: Welcome to jphip! I hope you enjoy your stay here xD I'm glad you like RIVER so much, and I hope this story will match your expectations in the future ^^

Thanks again to all the readers and commenters! Your support is as greatly appreciated as always, and please stay tuned for more! m(_ _)m

Haruko · « **Reply #22 on:** December 06, 2011, 06:04:49 AM »

yeah!! you need continue for us please...

jaj ai think that takamina can be "the ikemen" character in the club, because in this kind of club always need the "men" character.. jajaj sexadicchan is prepare for atack

wonderful kiss.. we need more atsumina

turlde · « **Reply #23 on:** December 06, 2011, 09:31:36 AM »

Holy cow... That was like WOOOWWWW!!
I definitely am looking forward to the next chapter o_o

oddball · « **Reply #24 on:** December 06, 2011, 11:11:39 AM »

great opening chapter!

So our Acchan feels as though Takamina isn't cut out for this type of work..... interesting way to prove her point.... seems as though perhaps there was more to it than that though... hmm perhpas she does have a point though, about Takamina not quite being cut out for what they do, still should make things fun though....

Poor Mayuyu, seems as though Kuro's name didn't take long to be figured out by her, still, perhpas this Kuro, oh who am I kidding, Yuki likes things that are small and squeaky, seems as though despite the outlook she has gained a little soft spot for the clubs newest recruit....

atlowjack · « **Reply #25 on:** December 06, 2011, 05:38:19 PM »

Continue continue!!!

silllythings · « **Reply #26 on:** December 06, 2011, 06:21:46 PM »

any MaYuki story I like, so please continue!

i love your River story!!! just reread it the other day. makes me smile while reading it! thanks for writing great stories!

Nyanoha · « **Reply #27 on:** December 10, 2011, 05:53:40 PM »

A ZuZu must write faster-*is shot*

Also, I TOLD YOU SO.

Stay G.~

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #28 on:** December 11, 2011, 02:31:24 AM »

Love Stoned

Chapter 2
(Posted 12/10/11)

A/N: And here we go~ I hope this chapter doesn’t bore you to death >_>

Warning: Potentially more mature themes ahead. Proceed at your own risk.

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A/N: Dun dun dun… Anyways, there was Chapter 2~ I hope you enjoyed it OTL

Here’s a shout out to someone who should know who they are :P Happy birthday, and I hope you enjoy this update ;D I’m sorry it’s not the other thing you requested, but I’ll get to that soon orz

Anyways, thanks for all the comments on the previous chapter ; v ; b I’m really glad that you guys like the premise so far, so I hope I’m not flying off the tracks with this one LOL As usual, any comments are more than welcome ;___; b

Thank you for your support, as always m(_ _)m

Sok · « **Reply #29 on:** December 11, 2011, 03:32:41 AM »

YAY!

Update! Awesome chapter.

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“Well… it’s not everyday that you see Takamina hanging out with a pretty girl,” Miichan grinned, unfazed by the dangerous look she was getting. “You would know,” she added as she tried to not laugh.

Miichan and Acchan conversation. I wonder what Miichan meant?
haha. Takamina passing out.

Thank you. Will be waiting for your next update.

blughise · « **Reply #30 on:** December 11, 2011, 03:45:05 AM »

This story is SO HOT!!!!

and I bet it's only going to keeps getting Hottier and Hottier!!!

DANG!!! Takaboy!!!

I wonder what really happened after that hot kiss they shared

and Atsuko's 'ice queen' character is slowly crumbling down because of our Takaboy!!!

So interesting!!!! Its just 2 chapters so far and I'm so loving it

!!!
Saguga!!!

A Job Well Done, as I expect from you Divine Vengeance as always!!! :

I can't wait for the next update!!!

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #31 on:** December 11, 2011, 04:54:22 AM »

Cannot find words to describe how much I like this story.

Definitely an interesting and unique theme.

Nyanoha · « **Reply #32 on:** December 11, 2011, 06:43:11 AM »

I dunno about you, but I loved this chapter

Now, you must give me the next chap-*is shot*

Stay G yo

oddball · « **Reply #33 on:** December 11, 2011, 01:45:09 PM »

seems as though perhpas are goofy Takaboy is breaking down Acchan's defences one by one

hmm what did happen after thier kiss....

seems as though Mayu might well be ok too, seems as though despite apprances Yuki is getting more protective, and may also be beginning to like and respect her little mouse!

Megumi · « **Reply #34 on:** December 11, 2011, 05:05:15 PM »

*smirk Acchans first kiss? wooo!
Waaa Yuko is also working there kekeke

Seems that Acchan is was a secret stalker or something?
Because Miichan saw her from before and in the 1st cap Acchan asked Takamina
about the café she was working and that she got fired....hrrm

Aaaand no as always your fic doesn't bore me it's good to fill these kind of scene so we can know
more about their background...

Thank you for your update!

immortal_K · « **Reply #35 on:** December 11, 2011, 06:20:06 PM »

Divine Kira!!! You updated

I almost missed it, until it appeared at the top again keke, this is so good and addictive, I want to know what happens next.
Seems like Mayu and Takamina got the job and will be appearing there more often working with Yuko too. Oshiri sister!!! YAY!

Mayu is so smart she can take all the things the slave driver, Yuki, hand her and it seems like Yuki is already having a soft spot
for their underage co-worker. I wonder if anyone will find out and will they get in trouble because Mayu is working underage....
Will have to wait and see I guess.

As for the atsumina pair, wow I'm surprised that it was acchan's first kiss given that she works as a hostess, and surprise that
she saved it all along until Takamina comes along, I guess that big pink ribbon is really hard to resist keke. I wonder what kinda
work will Takamina be doing and how Acchan can help train her.... I assume Acchan probably won't want to share her girl.

Ahhh so Takamina worked with Miichan before at a cafe, I wonder if Haruna works there too (no3bs!)
Please continue to update, I really want to read more. This story is very interesting, its different and keeps me at the edge
waiting to see what is going to happen. The little bit of details you throw in here and there, helps give us some background
information but doesn't take away from the main plot at the same time. Not a single boring moment while I read this.

~emo_K

Haruko · « **Reply #36 on:** December 11, 2011, 11:04:39 PM »

aww atsuko first kiss :d

and miichan gorgeous

but.. in this fic we gonna se kojiyuu couple?

kahem · « **Reply #37 on:** December 13, 2011, 08:13:54 PM »

I don't know why but this fic makes me smile like an idiot lol
Yuko and Meetan work in that kind of place, well I'm sure interesting thing will come hehe

Loveforever · « **Reply #38 on:** December 16, 2011, 09:27:32 AM »

Amazing story. Two thumbs up

. Forget that 35425643643x thumbs up

lol!!! Keep up the good work.

straawbeeryy · « **Reply #39 on:** February 03, 2012, 07:42:25 AM »

I've been reading this on tumblr and decided to come out from lurking to comment on how much I love this story. I hope that you still plan to continue this and update soon! <3