Alrighty, my first attempt at a H!P fic. (I've written fics before, but not for H!P. I just recently got back into writing again. I haven't been writing for a few months now... I hope it turned out okay.)
I was watching the psych test eps of Hello!Morning and I was wondering 'bout Sayu and Eri, seeing as how they got the same result twice. And well...that gives you the plot of my fic. I used the end part of Hello!Morning 315 to write the beginning. ^^ I wasn't sure about the title for this fic, but I'll leave it as is unless I can think of something better. XP
This fic is a THREE SHOT! (With an optional special at the end. You'll have to tell me if my writing burns your eyes or not.
) Chapter 1 in Eri's View, Chapter 2 in Sayu's, and Chapter 3...I'll have you guys vote on that.
(If this fic gets that far.) It's meant to be a KameShige
friendship fic, but if you wanna take it as KameShige itself, by all means go for it. (I haven't quite accustomed myself to writing with the H!P girls...more specifically, Morning Musume girls, together. But that's about to change very, very soon...)
So here it is, I present to you, my very first H!P fic! Enjoy, and
make sure to give me every last bit of criticism that comes to mind. I can use all that I can get. Point out every little problem you see. (Lol, I have a tendency to screw with tenses, too...Sorry.)
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~My Apologies~
Chapter 1
[STORY HERE]
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So...I hope you guys liked chapter one. I actually find it lacking a bit of description...And sometimes, there's an action put in there that I can see in my own mind, but in writing, kinda seems out of place. (If you get what I mean.) It's not the usual fic for me to write, but the idea just wouldn't leave my head so I had to get it down. Make sure to let me know if there's any spelling mistakes or anything like that. I'll fix it asap!
Chapter two is on it's way. (Again, if my writing doesn't burn straight through your eyes...)
Topic: My Apologies [KameShige...Kinda] [Three-Shot] [Chapter 1 Up] (Read 4731 times)