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Title: I am sorry Chapter 3 Finally Updated!
Post by: Haruto Lee on December 10, 2013, 03:38:34 PM
This is another new series of mine. I have another fanfic named as 'The feeling' so checked it out. And I am sorry for not updating that one. Actually I am having fever right now. So I am sorry. This fanfic is named as 'I am sorry'. And I have to thank TD for helping. Thank you TD!!!! And now the prologue. And I forgot to mention again. This fic will have a lot pairing!!! Pls enjoy it....

Prologue
'It had been five year since I last saw you. In this five year, I couldn't stop myself from regretting for what I did.'

A certain young woman with raven hair thought as she was surrounded by unknown guys with a bat on their hand.

'Did you pursue your dream? Did you live a better life than I did?'

She thought again and glared at them but they didn't even flinch and started to hit her furiously. Of course she did fight back but her strength completely lose to them. She started to feel tired and fall down.

'I should listen to you on that time but I was being stubborn.'

The poor girl had to curved herself up but they didn't stop hitting until the poor young woman was down. 'Mayu..... I am sorry....' She whispered before she fainted.

And sorry for making them suffer again. I know these days, a lot of mayuki fanfic are suffering but why don't let them have their hardship. Having a hardship together will make the relationship better. This is what I thought. And pls enjoy it.
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: Konoe on December 10, 2013, 03:46:28 PM
At least its Yuki who is suffering this time. :nervous It's always Mayu who gets hurt a lot!!!

Those guys are so low hitting a girl. Why did the situation became like that? Update soon. :lol:

Get well soon Haruto. :on cny2:
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: anakpanti on December 10, 2013, 03:55:05 PM
Cool Prologue..  XD
You have to update chap 1 soon, okay?  ;)

Woww... Is MaYuki become an angst icon now?  :lol:
Lately.. their love become a bit hard and extreme.  :cry:

This one is Yuki who beaten up? Interesting.

Quote
I know these days, a lot of mayuki fanfic are suffering but why don't let them have their hardship. Having a hardship together will make the relationship better.
This make me calm down.  XD
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: kenjoy12 on December 10, 2013, 04:01:42 PM
Now, Yuki's turn to be a punching bag.. :cry:

Ahh.. You are so right Haruto-san.. :thumbsup

Get well soon.. Thanks for your hardwork.. :bow:
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: imteedee on December 11, 2013, 12:53:44 AM
YEAH. BEAT YUKI! ahem~ I mean, I'm tired seeing Mayu being hurt and most of the time DEAD :V  :lol: XD and yeah I've seen quite a bit of the story and I could say this type of plot hits on my kind of thing  :lol:

I recommend it to MaYuki shippers  :thumbsup
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: Kirozoro on December 11, 2013, 04:04:12 AM
Interesting start

A hard-ship ka?

Please update soon
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: Zita on December 11, 2013, 09:23:00 PM
:mon scare:


someone: help her, please. :cry:
me: I am coming.
"is hit by baseball bat" 
me: maybe another time.
Title: Re: I am sorry (new series) prologue
Post by: Haruto Lee on December 22, 2013, 07:26:57 AM
@ Konoe: actually look carefully, I think Yuki was the one suffering the most. As Mayu always die in fanfic and a dead person only can suffer physical pain not mentally. Yuki felt the mentally pain which could only heal after a long period of time. So, I think Yuki was the one suffering the most for me. Just up to u that how did u see the situation. Actually the guys had their reason for hitting Yuki. You will read it soon. And thx for reading and commending and worrying for my health

@ anakpanti: wow.... Is it rare to see your commend in my fanfic... Actually I am kind of happy to see your comment... Thx a lot... Haha just like I said, it was better to be suffer then only have their happiness.  :? Am I using the correct sentence to explain? Never mind.... As akb documentary's name 'no flower without rain'. Actually it is quite true. If don't have hard work, how is the flower is going to bloom beautifully? Thx for reading and commending...

@ kenjoy12: haha.... I am sorry for making Yuki suffer.... Actually they had their reason for punching Yuki... You find it sooner or later.. And lastly thx for reading and commending....

@ imteedee: TD-san you like Yuki to get the punch... :cry: it will spoil Yuki's nice body body and face.... Haha... Thx for recommending..... I think I need your help a lot in the future.... Sorry to be a bother, TD-san

@ kirozoro: thx for commending and reading....

@ zita: lol zita-san..... Maybe next time you can help her and Mayu to get over the hardship.... Anyway thx for reading for commending....

Okay I am sorry if I am taking too long to update the chapter 1... I am going to update soon... So pls wait for the update and bear the pain for waiting....
Title: Re: I am sorry prologue (reply)
Post by: imteedee on December 22, 2013, 07:40:26 AM
Quote from: Haruto Lee on December 22, 2013, 07:26:57 AM
it will spoil Yuki's nice body body and face....

OMG! HAHAHA you got the nice body body body virus too!  XD (bet you didn't notice that LOL)  :lol: looking forward  :thumbsup
Title: Re: I am sorry prologue (reply)
Post by: Haruto Lee on December 23, 2013, 07:22:56 AM
 XD XD XD XD

I really didn't realize.... The song always haunt me..... It really wants to make me turn as a pervert already :banghead:

I really need to stop..... If not I really became a pervert...
Title: Re: I am sorry prologue (reply)
Post by: Haruto Lee on December 26, 2013, 04:56:54 PM
Yeah!!! It was Christmas, minna!!!! And have a happy Christmas. I know it was kind of late now as today is 26 not 25 but still I wish you all merry Christmas

@imteedee: TD-san I already received your mail and I did reply but I didn't know did it send to you or not.... :sweatdrop: but still thx for the message and merry Christmas!

And here is the new update!!!!
Chapter 1

Fifteen years ago.....

Under a sakura tree, there were two little girls talking to each other. They looked like around 5 or 6 years old. One shorter and the another one was a bit taller. The shorter girl had twin-pigtailed hairstyle and the taller girl had a long raven hair which was tied in ponytail.

'Hi.... Hi.... I am Mayu, Watanabe Mayu. I am five this year. Nice to me-meet you.' The shorter girl stuttered and blushed. Looked like the shorter girl was named Mayu. 

'Hi! I am Kashiwagi Yuki. You can call me Yuki or Yukirin. I am six this year. I am your new neighbor. Nice to meet you.' The taller girl said with a wide smile. Mayu just nodded shyly. Seeing no reply, Yuki started to talk again. 'Watanabe-san.... Can I call you Mayu? It is easier for me. And let's be good friends from today onward, okay?' Yuki asked and winked at her.

'Yes... Yes you can... Yuki-chan....' Mayu said shyly as this was the first time she talked to a complete stranger and the stranger was a beauty. She also could feel her heartbeat thumping like a drum when she saw the wink from her.

'Lets go to play! Mayu-chan!' Yuki pulled the smaller girl with her and smiled at her. From that day onward, they became very close with each other just like Yuki said.

Six years ago - In their Junior high school (Mayu-14, Yuki-15)

'Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan! I have a good news for you.' A certain long raven-haired girl shouted happily and started to shake the younger girl with twin pig-tailed hair who was sitting beside the class window while reading her manga.

'Okay.... Okay.... stop shaking me, Yuki.... I am going to faint....' Mayu begged Yuki and Yuki smiled sheepishly. Yuki stopped shaking the girl and started uttering something exciting for her but horrifying to Mayu.

'Someone just confessed to me! And guess who he is.... He is Nakagawa Hiro. And I accepted it.' Yuki said in excitement.

'What!? You accepted the guy's confession.'

'What's wrong? You knew that right? I have always loved him since I came to this school.' Yuki said. Mayu just nodded and she felt her heart ached painfully.

To Mayu's unfortunate, she had always loved Yuki all this time but the older girl didn't know about it. Of course, when she heard about this news, her heart ached  but she forced a smile for Yuki and congratulated her. She didn't want Yuki to know about her forbidden feelings.

After a few months, when Mayu was buying groceries for her mother, she saw Yuki's boyfriend. But the guy was not alone. He was kissing another girl in public. When she saw that, she was shocked and quickly bought the things that her mom wanted and ran to Yuki's house. She wanted to tell Yuki as soon as possible but to her bad luck again, Yuki didn't trust her words.

'Mayu don't simply say. Hiro won't do something like that.' Yuki said and sat on the couch, being slightly irritated with Mayu's words.

'Yuki. I saw it. Pls trust me. I really saw him kissing another girl.' Mayu tried to convince and approached the older girl to believe her words.

'Mayu this is not the first time you told me about this. And it always end up hurting both of us.' Yuki said and pushed Mayu away from her. It was true that Mayu had told Yuki about this but they all were only lie.

'It is real this time Yuki! I'm not lying. It is true that I sa----' Yuki slapped Mayu hard as Yuki already felt really irritated with Mayu's attitude. She couldn't tolerate her being childish anymore.

'Enough! Mayu! Why should I trust you again and again?' Yuki said.

'Because I am your best friend.' Mayu said innocently, trying not to cry and looked at Yuki.

'Best friend? Just only that!?' Yuki shouted angrily, feeling irritated and pinned Mayu to the couch. Mayu trembled as this was the first time she saw this Yuki. 'Then, I can't trust you.' Yuki said angrily and slapped Mayu. Mayu's hand moved to her cheek as she felt the pain for the second time. She was shocked as she still couldn't believe that her best friend treated her like that. Before Yuki walked away, Mayu shouted at her. 

'It is not just like that. Because I-I love you.' Mayu shouted and cried out loud. Yuki was surprised by the sudden confession but she rejected it right there and walked away just like nothing happened. Seeing her only best friend just walked away like that, Mayu felt that her whole world corrupted. She cried and cried until she had no more tears.

Five years ago (Yuki-16 & Mayu-15)

Chapter 1

Fifteen years ago.....

Under a sakura tree, there were two little girls talking to each other. They looked like around 5 or 6 years old. One shorter and the another one was a bit taller. The shorter girl had twin-pigtailed hairstyle and the taller girl had a long raven hair which was tied in ponytail.

'Hi.... Hi.... I am Mayu, Watanabe Mayu. I am five this year. Nice to me-meet you.' The shorter girl stuttered and blushed. Looked like the shorter girl was named Mayu. 

'Hi! I am Kashiwagi Yuki. You can call me Yuki or Yukirin. I am six this year. I am your new neighbor. Nice to meet you.' The taller girl said with a wide smile. Mayu just nodded shyly. Seeing no reply, Yuki started to talk again. 'Watanabe-san.... Can I call you Mayu? It is easier for me. And let's be good friends from today onward, okay?' Yuki asked and winked at her.

'Yes... Yes you can... Yuki-chan....' Mayu said shyly as this was the first time she talked to a complete stranger and the stranger was a beauty. She also could feel her heartbeat thumping like a drum when she saw the wink from her.

'Lets go play! Mayu-chan!' Yuki pulled the smaller girl with her and smiled at her. From that day onward, they became very close with each other just like Yuki said.

Six years ago - In their Junior high school (Mayu-14, Yuki-15)

'Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan! I have a good news for you.' A certain long raven-haired girl shouted happily and started to shake the younger girl with twin pig-tailed hair who was sitting beside the class window while reading her manga.

'Okay.... Okay.... stop shaking me, Yuki.... I am going to faint....' Mayu begged Yuki and Yuki smiled sheepishly. Yuki stopped shaking the girl and started uttering something exciting for her but horrifying to Mayu.

'Someone just confessed to me! And guess who he is.... He is Nakagawa Hiro. And I accepted it.' Yuki said in excitement.

'What!? You accepted the guy's confession.'

'What's wrong? You knew that right? I have always loved him since I came to this school.' Yuki said. Mayu just nodded and she felt her heart ached painfully.

To Mayu's unfortunate, she had always loved Yuki all this time but the older girl didn't know about it. Of course, when she heard about this news, her heart ached  but she forced a smile for Yuki and congratulated her. She didn't want Yuki to know about her forbidden feelings.

After a few months, when Mayu was buying groceries for her mother, she saw Yuki's boyfriend. But the guy was not alone. He was kissing another girl in public. When she saw that, she was shocked and quickly bought the things that her mom wanted and ran to Yuki's house. She wanted to tell Yuki as soon as possible but to her bad luck again, Yuki didn't trust her words.

'Mayu don't simply say. Hiro won't do something like that.' Yuki said and sat on the couch, being slightly irritated with Mayu's words.

'Yuki. I saw it. Pls trust me. I really saw him kissing another girl.' Mayu tried to convince and approached the older girl to believe her words.

'Mayu this is not the first time you told me about this. And it always end up hurting both of us.' Yuki said and pushed Mayu away from her. It was true that Mayu had told Yuki about this but they all were only lie.

'It is real this time Yuki! I'm not lying. It is true that I sa----' Yuki slapped Mayu hard as Yuki already felt really irritated with Mayu's attitude. She couldn't tolerate her for being childish anymore.

'Enough! Mayu! Why should I trust you again and again?' Yuki said.

'Because I am your best friend.' Mayu said innocently, trying not to cry and looked at Yuki.

'Best friend? Just only that!?' Yuki shouted angrily, feeling irritated and pinned Mayu to the couch. Mayu trembled as this was the first time she saw this Yuki. 'Then, I can't trust you.' Yuki said angrily and slapped Mayu. Mayu's hand moved to her cheek as she felt the pain for the second time. She was shocked as she still couldn't believe that her best friend treated her like that. Before Yuki walked away, Mayu shouted at her. 

'It is not just like that. Because I-I love you.' Mayu shouted and cried out loud. Yuki was surprised by the sudden confession but she rejected it right there and walked away just like nothing happened. Seeing her only best friend just walked away like that, Mayu felt that her whole world corrupted. She cried and cried until she had no more tears.

Five years ago (Yuki-16 & Mayu-15)

It was the first day of the school. Yuki went to Mayu's house to pick up Mayu. They didn't talk or say anything after the accident. Yuki only went to Mayu's house every morning to pick up Mayu as they didn't want their parent to worry about them but she would only stand in front of the house's gate. She wouldn't go in.

And that day, Yuki also went like usual but Mayu didn't come out from her house after waiting for 20 minutes. She decided to ask Mayu's parents and knocked the front door. She thought it would be Mayu's parent but it was Mayu's elder sister, Miyuki.

'What do you want?' Miyuki asked irritably.

'Pick Mayu up.' Yuki answered shortly as she didn't want to waste more time. She was going to late for her first day.

'Mayu was not here and you don't need to pick her up again.' Miyuki said and closed the door. Before Miyuki could, a hand stopped her.

'Why?' Yuki asked worriedly and it had been a long time that she worried about Mayu.

'Now you only worry about her?' Miyuki pushed Yuki and grabbed Yuki's collar. 'But it was too late!' Miyuki said and harshly pushed Yuki down. Yuki didn't care about her sudden rudeness action and stood up, after standing up, she brushed the dust away and straighten her uniform again.

'Why?' She asked again. Before answering Yuki's answer, Miyuki grinned childishly.

'She transferred to another school. She will live in the school dorm from today onward.' Miyuki said and kept her expression. Yuki was pure surprised as she didn't hear it from Mayu before. 'Now you only worry about her? You know? Mayu was crying every night when you did those things to her. You are lucky that my parents didn't know about it, if not, I am surely they'd be the first ones to kill you.' She said madly and slammed the door.

Yuki was surprised with that sudden news. She didn't even go to school, just stayed at her house the whole day and didn't stop scolding herself for being stubborn. She regretted her actions but it was too late now.

After that day, no matter how hard Yuki tried, she just couldn't find Mayu's whereabouts. She even begged Miyuki to give her some information about Mayu's location but Miyuki refused to give her and even warned Yuki to leave her sister alone. After some time, Yuki finally accepted the fate that she wouldn't meet Mayu again.

As for Mayu, she followed her sister's advice and transferred to the school which always offered her scholarship. Her parents were very happy and proud when Mayu finally accepted it. In the new school, even though she met a lot of new friends, a part of her still missed Yuki very much. Sometimes, she would ask her sister to send her mail to Yuki but to her unfortunate, she wouldn't get any reply from Yuki. After some times, she also gave up sending and accepted that she wouldn't meet Yuki again.

Because of that, they didn't even meet each other until.....

Now (Mayu-24 & Yuki-25)

A young female doctor was looking outside the window while sipping her hot coffee. It had been a hard day for her as she was working for a whole day without getting any rest. When she thought that she could have a rest, a nurse was rushing out from nowhere and ran to her direction.

'Dr. Watanabe! We need a doctor in the emergency department now.' The nurse said panicky and dragged the doctor with her without even letting her put down her coffee. Looked like the little girl, Mayu had became a doctor in Tokyo General Hospital.

'Marina-chan! Patient's name? And the patient condition?' Mayu said and rushed to the emergency center.

'Kashiwagi Yuki. A female Yankee. Badly-beaten and had a deep wound on her head.' The nurse said. When Mayu heard the name, her leg suddenly stopped her and cold sweat became apparent on her face.

Okay I know it is Christmas and the new update is not that fluffy but i have to still make it according to my plan.... Sorry :( and don't worry I will update an one shot when new year.











Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 1 (New update!!!!)
Post by: olive29 on December 26, 2013, 05:18:57 PM
They finally meet again after several years...  :w00t:

But, a doctor and a yankee??

Interesting..

Update soon, please... :bow:
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 1 (New update!!!!)
Post by: mo-chan on December 26, 2013, 08:28:24 PM
Sad story for Mayuki  :cry:
don't tell me Yuki will lose her memory  :shocked
Mayu save Yuki she was suffering for years  :catglare: :(
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 1 (New update!!!!)
Post by: Konoe on December 27, 2013, 01:32:48 PM
Huh? It seems that I missed your reply. :nervous
Quote from: Haruto Lee on December 22, 2013, 07:26:57 AM
@ Konoe: actually look carefully, I think Yuki was the one suffering the most. As Mayu always die in fanfic and a dead person only can suffer physical pain not mentally. Yuki felt the mentally pain which could only heal after a long period of time. So, I think Yuki was the one suffering the most for me. Just up to u that how did u see the situation. Actually the guys had their reason for hitting Yuki. You will read it soon. And thx for reading and commending and worrying for my health

You are right... I guess I was too bias at Mayu. :lol: It hurts me whenever Mayu is in pain. :cry:

Chapter 1, my poor Mayuyu got ignored by Yukirin. :cry: But what shocked me is what happened to Yuki. How did she became a yankee?! :?
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 1 (New update!!!!)
Post by: Zita on December 28, 2013, 04:53:38 PM
 :banghead: This is so many emotions for me.
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 1 (New update!!!!)
Post by: imteedee on December 29, 2013, 12:17:17 AM
I know I already said this in a private talk but LOL

WOOOH! DOCTOR WATANABE FOREVER! :jphip: XD I'm LOLing on how Yukirin can flexibly change roles as Mayu stays as a doctor!  :lol:

okay now it's a yankeexdoctor  XD
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: Haruto Lee on February 05, 2014, 04:17:16 PM
@ imteedee: hahaha! But it is still quite hard to write a long series about doctor x Yankee... And thx for reading and proofreading it! Really appreciate your help,  :thumbsup

@ zita: I am sorry if I am making it too emotional!  :bow: but I still hope you will enjoy it! Thx for reading!

@ Konoe: hahahaha! Same as me, I felt hurt whenever Mayu get hurts! And the next chapter maybe will reveal your answer. So pls do read it! Thx for reading!

@ mo-chan: yup sad story! I am sorry if you don't like sad story.... And don't worry! Yuki won't lose her memories that easily! Thx for reading!

@ olive29: olive-chan when are you going to update yours? I am still waiting here! So pls update it if you can! :bow: and thx for finding it interesting!

I am sorry if I am taking too long to update! And now enjoy the next chapter!

It was a quite quiet afternoon in the department of neurosurgery. Most of the doctors went out for a lunch. There were probably left some doctors there. Suddenly a young woman with long raven hair and a pale face was rushing down on the corridor. Looked like she was in a hurry to somewhere. Sweat and worry could be seen on her face. When she arrived her destination, she knocked the door but didn't wait for the reply and opened the door. It startled a certain doctor there.

"You know that you should wait for the reply, sergeant....." The doctor said and looked at her guest after recovering from the shock.

"Mayu-chan, how is she?" The sergeant simply ignored what her friend said and asked what she really wanted.

"And who do you mean by she, Rena-chan?"

"Kashiwagi Yuki." The atmosphere tensed up but just for Mayu. When Mayu heard the name, she immediately stopped what she was doing and stared at Rena like she said something in an unknown language.

Matsui Rena is a police officer in criminal investigation department. Mayu met her when they were in high school but Rena was one year older than Mayu. She really loved anime but not a lot of people knew about it. So sometimes she would invite Mayu to watch anime together. She didn't know about Mayu's secret love but she did know about Yuki because of Mayu's blabbering when she was asleep. And she had always wondered why Mayu will have tears forming every time Mayu blabbered about Yuki. And the most important point was she didn't know Yuki who Mayu blabbered about was the Kashiwagi Yuki who she knew. You know this world could have two person have the same name or even more people have the same name.

"Is she some criminal that you are looking?" Mayu said, trying not to sound panick. She didn't dare to look at Rena because she was afraid what the answer would be. While waiting for the answer, she could even hear her own heart beating. It goes to ping, pong, ping, pong and it became faster. Unconsciously, she also gripped tightly on the folder that had the patient's name on it. And unknown to Rena, the folder was the person she was looking for.

"No. I didn't remember that Yuki-san had done some crime which I had to look for her. So can you tell me now? I thought you will know about it as I heard that she was under your care." As soon as she finished her words, someone suddenly slammed the door and startled both of them.

"Rena-chan! You are here!" A certain young girl with a cat-like smile who was around Mayu's age suddenly came in and hugged Rena. Rena tried to break it off instead of breaking, she felt the hug was tightening.

"You know..... I am worried about you."

"And you know.... Jurina-chan you should knock the door before you come in and for your reminder, this is hospital not your house." Mayu said while looking at them. It was not surprised her that Jurina hugged Rena like that. In fact, it happens everyday.

Matsui Jurina was Mayu's best friend in high school till now. She worked as a police officer and was in the same department as Rena. She fall in love with Rena but she didn't dare to confess and Mayu knew about it well. Although she was the first friend after Mayu's transfer and best friend, she didn't know about Yuki at all.

"Huh? House? What are you talking about?" Jurina said and broke the hug. Rena quickly gasped as much air as she could before she would suffocate by Jurina's hug again.

"Thank god! Finally air! Mayu-chan, you still haven't answered my question yet about the things that we discussed just now." Before Mayu could say something, Rena continued their 'business' again.

"I just finished her report. Then you can have a look at it." Mayu said and passed the file to Rena.

"What business do you have here? A criminal?" Jurina said without any clue about what they were talking about.

She tried to look at the file but she got blocked by Rena. That instant rejection made Jurina have the little cute pleading puppies eyes and showed to Rena, trying to melt the cold wall away but unfortunately, she got rejected again.

"None of your business. Oh yeah.... Mayu do have duty tonight?"  Rena asked and returned the file to Mayu.

"No. Why?"

"The same as always. Can?"

"Can I join?" Jurina suddenly interrupted their conversation and she instantly got her glare from Rena. Jurina quickly turned away to avoid the glare or didn't even dare to interrupt the conversation again as she didn't want the glare to turn into gekikara's glare. It will really bad if that really happen

"Okay but I am not too sure about it. You know... Sometime.... Emergency...." Mayu said, trying not to make Rena mad as this was not the first time that she didn't make it. Rena just sighed and nodded as she understood the situation.

"And you know..... The more people it is, the merrier it is-----"

"Dr. Watanabe!!!! The Kashiwagi patient!!! We lost the patient! The Kashiwagi patient!" A nurse suddenly bragged into the room breathlessly and interrupted the conversation.

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'What do you want? Called me out and... Now standing here, looking at me?' Yuki yelled at her boyfriend angrily as her boyfriend called her out of sudden and now staring at her. Hiro didn't reply anything but continued staring at her. Uneasiness felt in Yuki's spine. She didn't know what it caused. Maybe because of the intense stare or the certain bad feeling or the cold temperature in that night. 

Suddenly her boyfriend chuckled and started talking. 'No... Just to make sure that you are beautiful enough if not it is useless.'

'Huh? What are you talking about?' Yuki asked but her boyfriend only laughed at her reaction, feeling something was really wrong. She rushed to the door, trying to get out. But no matter how hard she wanted to unlock the door, she just couldn't do it.

'Want my help?' Her boyfriend offered his help and his irritated smirk were still there. Instead of helping her, he pinned her on the wall. Yuki growled in pain as she felt her back and her hand were arched. Before the pain even registered fully in her mind, fear already took over her.

'You know.... You should listen to your little mouse...' Without further explaining, he crashed his lip to her.



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Yuki shot up in her bed, her heart thundering in her chest and tears were forming as she dreamed the nightmare which haunted her every night. After a long time of catching her breath, she turned around and realized that she wasn't in her room. She caught a nurse who was walking by and asked her whereabouts.

"You were sent in hospital. Are you okay?" The nurse replied as she saw sweat pouring down on her neck and it soaked her patient uniform.

"I... I am okay... Can I borrow your phone? I need to make a call now."

"Here you go. Pls return back to me later. I will be there." The nurse said and went away to the other patient who was calling for some help.

Yuki took the phone and quickly dialed a familiar phone number to her. While waiting for the other side to pick up, more swear were pouring down. Not long after, the other side answered the call, relief and small smile could be seen on her face. But it quickly turned to horror. She rushed out from the room and ran all the way to the emergency center. She could hear all the nurse's shouting but she couldn't be bother that much.

She ran and ran and ran. Different of thoughts were in her mind, scaring her that she might lost something important to her again. Finally, she arrived the emergency center. She caught a doctor near by but got ignored by the doctor as the doctor was rushing to the theater operation. That didn't stop her, she continue to ask but all the nurse or doctor ignored her or pushed her out of the way. At last, she couldn't contain anymore, she shouted out loud desperately.

"WHERE IS MY SON?"

"Son?" Mayu asked, not knowing what to reply and too shocked as she just arrived at the scene when Yuki out bursted.


I am sorry if it is a short chapter!



Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: olive29 on February 05, 2014, 05:32:40 PM
Ahhhh.... which story you want me to update??  :grin:

On the other side, about this fic...
Yuki was raped and has a son because of that rape incident??
Poor Yukirin... :cry:
What will happen when she finally get to see Mayu? When she know that it was Mayu who saved her...
And what will Mayu think about Yuki's son??

Bring me the next chapter !!!!  XD
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on February 05, 2014, 06:34:01 PM
hohoho~~~ son eh~~~~


i know where this will end >_<

mayu will be the father!!!!!!!!!!! XD

jk



it's up to the story XD






but mayu will be the father!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: Zita on February 05, 2014, 08:06:31 PM
Next please :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
She has a son? :O Ups....No worries Mayu will take care for both of them.
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: Konoe on February 07, 2014, 11:07:48 AM
Yuki had a son from that Hiro?! :shocked The son must be around 10 yrs old already.

Is the person tormenting Yuki until now is still Hiro?

I wondered what Yuki's reaction when she finds out Mayu is her doctor. And Mayu, it must have hurt her when she found out Yuki has a son. :(
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 2 Updated!
Post by: Haruto Lee on May 03, 2014, 07:12:55 PM
@ Konoe: Uhm...... I wonder about where the son came from but no worries it will be reveal sooner or later  :grin: And yes the son is aound 9 yrs old. About tormenting.... Maybe yes or maybe no... Yes Yuki will be happy for Mayu since Mayu's ambition is always doctor. Let see how Mayu suffer then... *evil laugh* anyway, thx for reading and commenting.

@ Zita: sorry for making the next that long. :bow: Uhm... I wonder Mayu will take care both of them or not. It's up to Mayu's decision! Let hope that she will take care both of them. Thx for reading and commenting!

@ MayuxMatsuixMusic: hahaha! It's really up to Mayu want to be the father or not but not only Mayu is the problem. Yuki's son is also a problem. He couldn't just accept a woman as a father right? I am having headache for this part.  :panic: anyway thx for reading and commenting!

@ olive29: update all your story especially the sinful love... I am waiting for the next chapter. I wondered will Mayu like Yuki first or the other way round. Thx if you can update! As for the story,  :lol: indeed Yuki was raped but about the father..... Maybe is Hiro or others(?) Uhm... About their feelings, maybe this chapter could help to answer your question. Thx for reading and commenting!

I am sorry for taking so long to update!  :bow: I don't even think that will be anyone will follow this story again. :doh: but now let's enjoy the next chapter!

Chapter 3
"I am sorry that I am late again, Yuki-san." Rena quietly and softly shook Yuki to wake her  up but not to startle the little boy who was sleeping soundly on the patient bed.

"It's okay." Yuki yawned and replied Rena shortly. After stretching herself up, Yuki took her backpack out from the patient cabinet.

"I am going now. Thanks for helping me to take care Hiroyuki, sergeant."

Before going out from the ward, Yuki looked back at her son, still worried about her son's condition. Rena saw the concerned look from Yuki and said, "Don't worry! I will take care him."

"Thanks once again. I am going now." Yuki said and looked at her son once again before going to her working place.

"No problem. Remember to be careful in today job." Before Rena could even finish her sentence, Yuki already lost of sign. She sighed softly and turned her attention to the little boy who was Yuki's son.

"How nice, isn't it? Just sleeping here and not having to worry about anything." Rena mumbled to the little boy but obviously that the little wouldn't hear it. So basically she was talking to herself.

The little boy is named Kashiwagi Hiroyuki. Hiroyuki was the main cause for Yuki to have a huge change in her life as Yuki had Hiroyuki in her high school years. Meanings Yuki got kicked out of her school and transferred to another school in order to finish her high school degree. Not only that, Yuki's parents were frustrated and angry when they knew about Yuki's baby and they disowned their only daughter immediately after they found out. Although Hiroyuki was the main cause, Yuki still loved her son like every mother would do or even more than that. This was one of the reason Yuki named her son as Hiroyuki because Yuki hoped her son could bring happiness to everyone, not because it was a coupling name for her and Hiro. Unfortunately, Hiroyuki's health isn't anywhere good and frequently gets ill and the thing that Yuki's most worried about is Hiroyuki's asthma. This was the reason that her son was admitted into the hospital this time.


Tap! Tap! Tap!


Before Rena could have some rest from her long day, she heard the heavy footsteps. The footsteps sound were getting louder and louder. Afraid what would happen, she slowly reached for her gun and prepared if there was any danger.

"R-Re-Rena-chan?" The young doctor shouted out breathlessly when she saw the gun was pointing at her head.

"Mayu-chan! Don't scare me like that." Rena felt relieved when she saw her friend was standing in front of her instead of the one that she thought. Slowly she retracted her gun to her gun holster.

"Aren't you the one who are scaring me now? Pointing a gun on an innocent citizen like me!"

"Lower down your voice, Mayu-chan." Rena didn't hope that the other patient in the ward would wake up due to their conversation especially the ward was full of children. It would be a pain if one of them wakes up.

"Aren't you easily get paranoid these days?"

"Am I?"

"Yes. Yes you are- wait! Where is Yu-Kashiwagi-san?" Mayu sighed in relief in her mind that she didn't blurt out Yuki's given name just like that. Why? Because she still haven't told anyone about her past relationship with Yuki. She hoped it stayed that way. But a part of her still hoped that she could talk to Yuki like the old days.

"Are you about to say Yuki?" Being not allow to answer Mayu any question, she asked another question instead which was in her mind all the time. Of course Rena had been questioning about the relationship between Mayu and Yuki but she always concluded that there's nothing between them except doctor-patient relationship. Even though she concluded in that way, she couldn't help but to think again and again when someone mentioned it.

Startled by the question, Mayu couldn't do anything but left her mouth gaped in shock.

"By any chance.... You know about Yuki-san?"

"Hahaha!! You sure know how to make joke, Rena-chan! Hahaha! Of course, I know her. She is my patient. Huh? It's still early. How about watch some anime to kill the time?" Mayu quickly changed the topic and could only hope that could stop Rena from asking.

Rena couldn't help but to sweat dropped at Mayu's comment but still went along with her idea. With that, they watched some random anime in the ward. Didn't even realize it, both of them slowly drifted to their dreamland.


Ring! Ring! Ring!


The ringing sound brought Rena back from her dreamland. Without even bother to open her eyes, her hand started roaming around to search for her phone. Finally, she found a hard solid thingy in her pocket. She took her phone out and opened her mailbox within a second. Lazily she opened her eyes and read the mail that she just received.

'Work done. From Yuki.'

After reading the content, Rena forced herself to wake up even though she was very tired, wanted to get back to sleep. But she still forced herself to be awake as she had something important to do. She stretched herself up and looked around. She saw Mayu was sleeping beside her with her head on the little patient's bed and the anime was still playing.

'When did I fall asleep?'

She thought. Realizing how cold it was in the room she lazily put her jacket on Mayu. When putting her jacket, she saw Mayu's tears were following unconsciously. It surprised her as this was the first time, she saw Mayu crying this much.

"Yuki..rin."

"Yukirin again?"

Rena mumbled questioningly but still couldn't bother that much. Before she went out, she heard someone uttered something but this time, it wasn't came from Mayu. It came from Hiroyuki.

"Mamarin..."

"Yukirin? Mamarin? Yukirin? Yuki-Mamarin? It can't be..."

Realizing what she had thought, she shook her head to erase those thoughts. For her, it was ridiculous that Yuki and Mayu had known each other before because both of their backgrounds were very different from each other. It was just really... ridiculous. But she couldn't help but to think the situation over and over again while walking to her destination.

Not long after Rena's departure, Yuki came back from her work. She was surprised to find Mayu in the ward with a laptop on.

"You didn't change at all, huh?"

She couldn't help but to smile at Mayu while approaching Mayu. Unconsciously, she caressed Mayu's cheek gently, feeling the cold yet smooth skin. Her smile grew even wilder but it turned into a frown when she saw Mayu's tears.

"Y-Yuki... Yukirin... D-don't leave..."

Even though Mayu was mumbling, Yuki could hear every single word that Mayu trying to say. The words just arched her heart. It was just like an arrow shoot through her heart. It pained her a lot.

"I-I... S-Sorry."

She quickly walked away. Before her tears could show out, she tried to get some refreshment before going to meet someone who had been sending her mails for a long time.



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"What kept you so long?" Instead of answering, the person who just went into the room turned on the television and maxed out the volume. Let the apartment filled with loud music.

"I don't think you can even hear me with this noise." Rena mumbled, felt a little fed up with Yuki's recent cold attitude. Their relationship was not as cold as this before but couldn't understand why Yuki had to be this cold to her recently. Less chit chatting, more on work.

"Can we start now?" Yuki's voice startled Rena and made Rena stopped from her grumbling. Nodded as a agreement, they started their 'business'.

"So... Did you find anything?"

"No. I can't find anything in his pub or even the underground casino. They just look like.... Disappear. Nowhere to find."

"Try his office. Maybe that will work."

"It is too risky." Rena sighed out loud. Everything just couldn't operate with her. She wanted to put out her gun and shoot anything that she felt irritated especially the particular someone that they are discussing. But it was a crime. She couldn't risk her job. If you are wondering what they are talking about, let just say they have some secret with them and lets don't reveal it until it is the time.

"But I found some information. They are going to have a meeting soon but I am not too sure what is it about." Yuki tried to give some information and had some hopes within them but it was a tiny information.

"When and where?"

"Next week Wednesday and about the location... I am still looking for it."

Sighed for the nth times, Rena felt that it was completely useless for them to continue what they are doing. Closed her eyes, trying to think something useful even though she thought it was useless.

"Sorry..."

"It's okay. It is not your fault that we can't contin-"

"N-No.. No... I mean yes... B-but I also meant that I am sorry for being cold these few days."

Seeing Yuki stuttered made Rena giggled and somehow it also helped Rena to forget their problems for the moment. "Oh you know that you are cold?"

Embarrassed by the way she stuttered and Rena's laugh, Yuki quickly excused herself. Before she could get out of the house, Rena shouted Yuki's nickname loud and clearly.

"Yukirin!" This made Yuki halted her movement and turned to Rena and questionably.

As for Rena, she quietly prayed for Yuki not to reply her because it would show her the truth about 'Who is the Yukirin that Mayu mumbled in her sleep?' But her pray didn't pay off. Yuki answered her call.

"Nothing... Just think the name suits you a lot..." A hint of disappointment could be heard in Rena's voice. Yuki did hear it but she just shrugged it off and walked to the door. Before she turned the knob to get out, she called Rena again.

"Rena-san, I have a request!"


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Two doctors just came out from the operation theater. Exhaustion could only describe both of the doctor but they still did their job and told the patient's family about the operation which was a success.

"Mayu-chan, you did well in the operation." Oshima Yuko, Mayu's mentor and friend praised Mayu while they were walking back to their department.

Oshima Yuko also known as Oshiriko for Mayu was Mayu's senior and friend. Both of them had known each other in their college years. They quickly clicked on each other due their favor towards Oshiri. Even though Yuko was Mayu's mentor, Mayu treated Yuko as a sister and friend. She would tell any problem that she had but she didn't tell Yuko about Yuki. She just couldn't do it.

"That's because you taught well... Right?" This made Yuko giggled and somehow it helped Yuko to relax her tense muscle.

"But you looked very exhausted today. Didn't they inform you about the operation?"

"They did. It just... I didn't sleep well." Nodded as an understanding while stretched her arm.

"Didn't go home again?" Mayu frowned at the statement because she already did her best to hide all her belongings from everyone in order to make the others to believe that she went back early. But how? How did her Oshiri fellow know about it?

Seeing the frown that Mayu had, Yuko laughed out loud as this was the first time the CG made that much expression. "You though that you could hide from me?"

Before Mayu could ask anything, Marina greeted both of them at the nurse counter in neurosurgery department. This made both of them realized that they were already in their department.

"Good afternoon, Dr. Oshima and Dr. Watanabe. This is for you, Dr. Watanabe. Your sister left it here and asked you to read it before you get back home." Both of them greeted back and Mayu took the notes that her sister left and read it on the spot but she couldn't understand what did it mean.

"Marina-chan what did my sister tell you before she left?"

"No... She didn't tell me anything. Instead I am the one who told her about the rumors since she asked for it."

"Rumors?"

"You can't be kidding right, Mayu? The rumors about you and the..... Who is it again?" Yuko said while munching a cake which don't know where it was from. She couldn't help but to be surprised that the CG didn't know about it at all since the CG was always the one who are failing not to know what was happening in her surrounding.

"The slut." Marina answered in an irritated tone and made the atmosphere into cold and dark which scared everyone who passed by but that didn't bother the doctors.

"Yup! Yup! right.... The Kashiwagi girl and you are dating."

Combined the words that her sister left and the rumors. Mayu couldn't help to be frowned.

"Oshiriko-chan, I don't think I can sleep well tonight."

A new character is here. Maybe two? Yuko and Miyuki. But Miyuki came out in the first chapter... Anyway, now Miyuki know about the return of Yuki in Mayu's life. What will she do? Rena found out that Yukirin is the Kashiwagi that she knew. What would she do? Let's wait for next chapter (maybe will be posted in two month again?)




Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 3 Finally Updated!
Post by: gek geki on May 03, 2014, 08:11:41 PM
I like the idea yuki loves mayu this time

Yuki looks do dangerous mission with rena

Wonder if that work will related with mayu's doing here

I want some drama!

But please dobt hurt yuki sama again

Maybe mayu?well event though she already suffer cause of yuki but she still live well right

Drama drama please
Title: Re: I am sorry Chapter 3 Finally Updated!
Post by: Kirozoro on May 03, 2014, 11:29:29 PM
Wahhh!!!

I hope Mayu and Yuki back together

Update soon