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Re: [part 21] memoir III: memory (Sorry for the long wait~!)
« Reply #200 on: January 16, 2008, 06:25:04 AM »
QUESTION TIME

WTF was chapter 20 and WTH did you do it? Is it just to fuck up readers minds? eh? Eh? EH?
Chapter 20 is on the previous page. It's the Maki flashback chapter.
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=13607.msg434168#msg434168
lol, i now, my question was more like "So chapter 20 is lost in time or you're gonna take it back later?" but in a more hysterical way :lol:
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Re: [part 21] memoir III: memory (Sorry for the long wait~!)
« Reply #201 on: January 16, 2008, 06:30:12 AM »
^ Oh. :lol:

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Re: [part 21] memoir III: memory (Sorry for the long wait~!)
« Reply #202 on: January 23, 2008, 11:13:54 PM »
And a very funny and cute one at that! The Nakazawa appearance was really random, and got me thinking that maybe she wanted to talk with Yossie in private but changed her mind, or something like that. Or maybe I'm reading too much into it, lol.
You wanna know the truth? XD
Nakazawa just kinda showed up in my head and demanded to be in the chapter. I couldn't think of why in the world she'd be there, so I wrote it like that  :pen_whirl:

Yuko XD  This fic makes me like Yuko more and more everytime she appearances in it :D
I know! I need to write her in more. She's insane.  :gmon pissed: <-- Yuko

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"You're on top," she retorted.

"Dammit," I cursed, dragging myself out of bed. "Next time, you're on top, Yoshizawa!" I yelled as I stumbled over to the door and threw it open.
Damn...so much possibilities...for...PERV commentary! 
I KNOW!!!!!  :muffin:

WTF Yuko? :o

Did she know they were sick, or is this just a coincidence that she's in the neighbourhood?
:? You say that like Yuko needs a reason for anything...

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"Yoshizawa!" Nakazawa barked. "What are the ten commandments of Nakazawa?!" Yossy sighed dramatically.

*YOSSI RECITES 10 COMMANDMENTS OF NAKAZAWA*
THAT'S SO EPIC!!! MUTHAFUCKIN' EPIC!!!  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol:
OK! I forgot to mention this earlier, but my beta Kueken co-wrote the Nakazawa Commandments. She mentioned it in passing and I took it and ran with it.  :sweat:

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QUESTION TIME

WTF was chapter 20 and WTH did you do it? Is it just to fuck up readers minds? eh? Eh? EH?
:wahaha:

oh, u know, while poor Maki was all alone being emo,
those two were slamming up each other all over their apartment.
LOL!!!
C'est la vie?  :hee:

Yaaay, crackfic is back!!  :muffin: Sorry I didn't comment sooner, was kinda lazy, please don't whip me!!   :hip cry:
*hides whip* >.>

first, sorry for not commenting in such a long time.. I had the forum a bit forgotten..
second, this chapter was so silly and cute that I couldn't stop giggling XDDD

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And yes! This means! Part! 22! I like! Exclamation! Points!!

Narrator is

Trivia - That is my favorite pic of Yoshizawa!

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #203 on: January 23, 2008, 11:15:48 PM »
PART 22
YOSSY - SEPTEMBER 3RD

I jerked awake and glanced around. Miki was sitting up in bed next to me reading a book.

"Did you say something?" I asked.

"Hmm? No, why?" She didn't even glance up from her book. I shook my head.

"Must have just been a dream," I replied. I leaned back onto the pillows and closed my eyes, trying to remember.

"You asleep?" I opened my eyes and looked up at her.

"Nope, why?" Miki grinned and put her book down on the bedside table.

"I was just thinking..." she said slyly, running her hand up my leg.

"Miki, we're sick."

"Not THAT sick," she retorted. I sighed.

"Mikiiii."

"Hitomiiii." I almost fell over in shock at Miki suddenly using my first name. She took advantage of my surprised state and rolled herself on top of me.

"Fujimoto Miki! What are you doing!" a voice snapped from the doorway.

"Busted," Miki muttered, flopping back onto the mattress and pulling the covers up over her head.

"Tan," Aya continued, leaning against the doorway. "If you don't behave, you're sleeping out here on the couch."

"Meh meh meh sleeping on the couch," Miki mocked softly in a high-pitched voice. I coughed to hide my laughter. Aya glared at us.

"Sleep!" she ordered, spinning around and slamming the door behind her. Miki peeked out from under the covers.

"Damn, she needs to get laid," she muttered.

"Miki!" I exclaimed.

"No, seriously. It's been years," she shook her head. I stared at Miki in horror.

"Why? Why did I need to know  that? Why!?" I exclaimed. Miki laughed.

"It's true though - she really needs to get out more."

"Mikiii," I sighed and shook my head. She didn't say anything for a few minutes, so I rolled over to go back to sleep. Suddenly, Miki sat bolt upright next to me.

"OH MY GAH!!" she exclaimed. I sat up and looked at her in alarm.

"What!? What's wrong!?" I asked. She turned to me and grabbed my hands in hers.

"We should totally set them up!"

"Set who up? What are you talking about? Did your fever come back?" I debated bellowing for Aya.

"No no no!" Miki started laughing in that evil way she has. She dropped my hands and rubbed hers together with a grin on her face. "We're gonna get my beloved Ayaya laid."

"...Miki, what are you plotting?"

"Hmm?" she said innocently as she reached over to grab her cell phone.

"Mikiiiii... who are you calling?"

"No one~" she sang as she dialed her phone.

"Miki!"

"Shh! It's ringing!.... Hiiii, it's Fujimoto Miki!"

I groaned and flopped back into bed, pulling the covers over my head and resigning myself to my girlfriend's insane plotting.

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Sorry for the short chapter ._.

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #204 on: January 23, 2008, 11:42:44 PM »
Nooooooooooooo!!!!  :pleeease:
I need to know who Miki's setting up Aya with! I'm extremely curious right now!
and poor Aya, taking care of a sick Miki and Yossy and having to watch them together...
I still feel bad about that! :(
that's why I hope Miki sets her up with a nice person (so that she can get laid, also)  :roll:
cute/funny chapter, as usual!!!  :lol:

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #205 on: January 23, 2008, 11:46:38 PM »
QUESTION TIME

WTF was chapter 20 and WTH did you do it? Is it just to fuck up readers minds? eh? Eh? EH?
:wahaha:
DONT START WITH IT!!!!!

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GOTO? She's calling Goto?????

and about the short chapter I forgive you if the next comes fast :P
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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #206 on: January 24, 2008, 02:56:27 AM »
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Ah yes, the Hong Kong trip...
* JFC remembers how hot Yossi looked in those Chinese dresses.
:drool:  :jerk:




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I jerked awake and glanced around. Miki was sitting up in bed next to me reading a book.

"Did you say something?" I asked.

"Hmm? No, why?" She didn't even glance up from her book. I shook my head.
Hmmm...what book is our dear Miki-sama reading? :twisted:




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"Mikiiii."

"Hitomiiii." I almost fell over in shock at Miki suddenly using my first name.
Gotta admit, I did a double-take myself at this part. :O



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"Fujimoto Miki! What are you doing!" a voice snapped from the doorway.

"Busted," Miki muttered, flopping back onto the mattress and pulling the covers up over her head.

"Tan," Aya continued, leaning against the doorway. "If you don't behave, you're sleeping out here on the couch."
EEP! STRICT AYAYA! :o


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That's actually pretty hot. ;D



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"Meh meh meh sleeping on the couch," Miki mocked softly in a high-pitched voice. I coughed to hide my laughter.
:on lol:




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"Damn, she needs to get laid," she muttered.

"Miki!" I exclaimed.

"No, seriously. It's been years," she shook her head. I stared at Miki in horror.

"Why? Why did I need to know  that? Why!?" I exclaimed. Miki laughed.

"It's true though - she really needs to get out more."
Well, Aya herself sort of admitted that to Yossi a few chapters back.  :lol:




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"OH MY GAH!!" she exclaimed. I sat up and looked at her in alarm.

"What!? What's wrong!?" I asked. She turned to me and grabbed my hands in hers.

"We should totally set them up!"

"Set who up? What are you talking about? Did your fever come back?" I debated bellowing for Aya.

"No no no!" Miki started laughing in that evil way she has. She dropped my hands and rubbed hers together with a grin on her face. "We're gonna get my beloved Ayaya laid."
EH???  :hip blink:

What exactly does "set them up" mean here? Does Miki already have someone in mind for Aya? (if so, damn that was fast)




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"...Miki, what are you plotting?"

"Hmm?" she said innocently as she reached over to grab her cell phone.

"Mikiiiii... who are you calling?"

"No one~" she sang as she dialed her phone.

"Miki!"

"Shh! It's ringing!.... Hiiii, it's Fujimoto Miki!"

I groaned and flopped back into bed, pulling the covers over my head and resigning myself to my girlfriend's insane plotting.
MIKI'S INSANE PLOTTING FTW!!!  :wahaha:



QUESTION TIME

WTF was chapter 20 and WTH did you do it? Is it just to fuck up readers minds? eh? Eh? EH?
:wahaha:
DONT START WITH IT!!!!!

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GOTO? She's calling Goto?????

and about the short chapter I forgive you if the next comes fast :P
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH??????
 :mon spit:
« Last Edit: January 24, 2008, 04:20:21 AM by JFC »

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #207 on: January 24, 2008, 03:21:44 AM »
My bet's on Goto... Smart Miki, getting them together so they could pine after Yossy for a while, then get it on.  :lol:

Unless you meant Ayaka, but I can't really picture Aya and Ayaka together.  :roll:
« Last Edit: January 25, 2008, 01:22:49 AM by Amarghetta »

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #208 on: January 24, 2008, 04:01:44 AM »
Miki is sick! XD

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #209 on: January 24, 2008, 04:28:39 AM »
MIKI CALLING:

Who Miki is calling i have no idea!  :D

AYAYAY HOOK UP WITH:

If i had to bet with who Ayaya might get hooked up with... i'd say someone we're totally not expecting.

Who i want... RIKA DUH!

but if not Rika... Goto sounds like a good choice.. but i want Goto to have that sad happy melancholic feeling to her. You know that feeling you get when you know you totally screwed up but have come to terms with it and moved on... but you'll never quiet get over it because it affected you so much.

So i wouldnt Ayaya with someone who i want to "not quiet get over" yossy.

My third choice would be Ayaka! but i gotta agree that would be a hard coupling to write about... at least for me.


 
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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #210 on: January 24, 2008, 06:29:59 AM »
 :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
other chapter!!!! Well, well, what we have here?  Man, Miki really has energy, it's a shame that Aya has ruined her plans :on lol:
Looks like the only one sick right now is Yossy... and when Miki said they should set them up I think in Ayaka only for a second because then Maki comes to my mind... I totally agree with that
When poets said Rika... yeah... I thinks there's a possibility and for the way Miki was talking in the phone it could be Rika

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #211 on: January 24, 2008, 02:47:13 PM »
Oh god! Who is it!!!!??? I must know! *glues self to thread*

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #212 on: January 24, 2008, 05:05:55 PM »
Oh god! Who is it!!!!??? I must know! *glues self to thread*

Almond, u better not take too long for the next chapter coz that's gonna start smelling soon :p

Its gotta be Maki, who else could it be?
Maybe its Tsunku with the way she spoke!  :hehehe: Now that would be weird!  :mon headbang: (I just wanted a reason to use that smiley coz I love it :lol: )

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #213 on: January 29, 2008, 10:04:17 PM »
 :shocked: out of all the girls I want to see Matsuura hooked up with, I would like Goto. I'm a big yomaki fan but because Maki totally screwed up her chances with Yossie :'(

Ayaya would be the next best thing.

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #214 on: February 11, 2008, 12:38:16 PM »
hey almond..we need UPDATES! :lol:

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #215 on: February 12, 2008, 08:42:19 AM »
^ Lol, Agreed.

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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #216 on: February 13, 2008, 05:00:35 AM »
* JFC is having almondfic-crack withdrawal.   
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Re: [part 22] memoir III: memory
« Reply #217 on: February 14, 2008, 08:17:43 PM »
 :gmon peakaboo:

that's why I hope Miki sets her up with a nice person (so that she can get laid, also)  :roll:
no comment.

and about the short chapter I forgive you if the next comes fast :P
Oh.
Well, crap. XD

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Ah yes, the Hong Kong trip...
* JFC remembers how hot Yossi looked in those Chinese dresses.
:mon bleed2:

Hmmm...what book is our dear Miki-sama reading? :twisted:
Uh... *thinks* Best Lesbian Erotica 2007  :rofl:


EH???  :hip blink:

What exactly does "set them up" mean here? Does Miki already have someone in mind for Aya? (if so, damn that was fast)
It's Miki. She's always plotting something. It's just a matter of whether or not she shares with the class.

Unless you meant Ayaka, but I can't really picture Aya and Ayaka together.  :roll:
Neither can I  :sweat:

Miki is sick! XD
In more ways than one  :wahaha:

but if not Rika... Goto sounds like a good choice.. but i want Goto to have that sad happy melancholic feeling to her. You know that feeling you get when you know you totally screwed up but have come to terms with it and moved on... but you'll never quiet get over it because it affected you so much.
Wow, that's a pretty harsh fate. Poor Maki in your mind.  :cool2:

When poets said Rika... yeah... I thinks there's a possibility and for the way Miki was talking in the phone it could be Rika
With the way Miki was talking on the phone, it could be a lot of people XD

Oh god! Who is it!!!!??? I must know! *glues self to thread*
:pig refuse:
*pries rndmnwierd off thread*
*begins scraping off the dried glue*

Maybe its Tsunku with the way she spoke!  :hehehe: Now that would be weird!
Ok, it's definitely not Tsunku.

:shocked: out of all the girls I want to see Matsuura hooked up with, I would like Goto. I'm a big yomaki fan but because Maki totally screwed up her chances with Yossie :'(

Ayaya would be the next best thing.
"Miss out on the Yoppai? Try your hand at some Ayayayayaya! Hurry! Quantities limited"
 :gmon bang:

hey almond..we need UPDATES! :lol:
^ Lol, Agreed.
* JFC is having almondfic-crack withdrawal.   
:badluck:
Well, here we go then! XD

Actually, I had a very busy 3 weeks, so... sorry. Life happens.  :sweat:

Chap 23 coming up!

Narrator is!


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Re: [part 23] memoir III: memory (Finally, I know....)
« Reply #218 on: February 14, 2008, 08:19:33 PM »
PART 23
AYA - SEPTEMBER 4TH

I groaned and looked down at my watch. Five more minutes. The girl had five more minutes.

"Ma'am, are you ready to order?" I glanced up at the waiter and smiled politely.

"Not just yet," I replied. "My companion's freshening up." He nodded knowingly and vanished back amongst the tables. I sighed and propped my chin up with my right hand. How the hell did Miki talk me into this anyway?

Oh, that's right. She guilt tripped me.

"The poor thing hasn't been out since that horrible break up. And, well... we both know you're not getting any, so I figured..." I could still see Miki's fake-innocent look. Ugh.

"Aya?" I glanced up in surprise at the figure standing next to my table, looking at me curiously.

"Hey! What are you doing here?" I asked. Goto grinned and flopped down in the chair across from me.

"Oh, I was just meeting Yossy down the street to give back her clothes."

"To give... What!?" I stared at her incredulously. Goto started laughing.

"It's not what you think!"

"I hope not! I'm still Mikitty's best friend after all!" I grinned.

"I know that!" she laughed and shook her head. "She puked on her clothes the night she got drunk and - "

"And then ran around like an idiot saying you'd slept together?" I offered.

"Exactly," Goto sighed and rolled her eyes. "Yeah, that was fun to deal with when I got home." She leaned conspiratorially across the table towards me. "Did you know your precious Mikitty was lying in wait for me when I got to my apartment?"

"What!?" I exclaimed, leaning in towards her. "How in the world did she get in?"

"She stole my spare keys from Yossy!"

"Oh my God, you're JOKING!" I looked her over. "And you're still walking?"

"She pinned me to the wall with her hand around my neck." My jaw dropped.

"That girl is crazy," I sighed. I glanced around the restaurant and leaned in even closer. "Speaking of that, you'll never guess why I'm here."

"She wants to get Friday'd again?"

"No," I laughed. "Miki set me up on the weirdest date ever."

"Date?!" Maki exclaimed, leaning back in her chair. She grinned. "Hmm... who's the lucky girl?"

"Trust me, you don't want to know," I groaned. I glanced over her shoulder. "Ugh, she's coming back."

"Hmm, guess I'll make myself scarce then," She stood up from her chair and paused thoughtfully. "You know... I don't have anything to do right now, so I think I'll just have a drink."

"Huh?"

"So, if a former Gomattou and Nochiura Natsumi member maybe needs some rescuing from a bad date... she could always send me a secret text message..." Goto winked and sauntered off towards the bar. I grinned after her as my... date came up to me and smiled.

"Sorry I took so long! I just couldn't tear myself away from the mirror!" Michishige flashed me a grin and sat down across from me.

"That's ok," I smiled weakly and sipped my water.

"Where was I? Oh! That's right!" Sayumi took a quick gulp of water. "So, I said to Eri, 'I don't know what you're talking about! JunJun and I are just friends!' and she says to me 'Then why was your hand on her butt after filming?!'. I mean, honestly!" She sighed dramatically. "Then I pointed out that Yoshizawa lets Fujimoto do it all the time and Eri said 'But Sayu, you're not Fujimoto' and I replied 'No, I'm much cuter.'"

"Right," I murmured as I discreetly slipped my phone out of my pocket.

"But you know all about that, Matsuura! You used to be almost as cute as I am!" She smiled sweetly.

"Aya! Thank God!!" Sayumi and I looked up as Goto rushed over to our table. Goto faltered a bit when she caught sight of Sayumi. "Uh... right. Aya, I locked myself out of my apartment. Do you still have my spare key?"

"Your... oh! Yeah! Of course. It's at my place, though." I lied smoothly.

"Oh, great. Can we go get it now? Sorry, but I have an appointment pretty soon..."

"Oh, ok." I turned to Sayumi and smiled apologetically. "Sorry, but duty calls."

"Oh, that's ok. It must be painful to look at someone as cute as me for so long anyway." Goto started coughing loudly as I smiled weakly and stood up. I could hear Sayumi chattering on her cell phone as we made our way out.

"MICHISHIGE!?" Goto practically screamed with laughter as we walked down the street.

"I KNOW!" I exclaimed, cracking up. She threw her arm up to hail a cab. "I don't know what in the world Tan was thinking."

"'I like to grope. Sayu likes to grope. Aya likes me. Aya will like Sayu.'?" Goto guessed as a cab pulled up. I shook my head. She smiled and opened the cab door for me.

"Did you want to share a cab?" I asked.

"Oh, I just live down the street. Have a nice evening, Aya." Goto winked.

"Thanks for rescuing me."

"Anytime," she grinned, shutting the door behind me.

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Re: [part 23] memoir III: memory (Finally, I know....)
« Reply #219 on: February 14, 2008, 08:43:58 PM »
Michishige
IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!! MICHISHIGE SAIKOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
srsly, i laughed SO HARD at this I almost fell from my chair.

So... I like where this is heading... Goto and Ayaya...
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