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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS
« Reply #80 on: April 24, 2013, 06:01:32 PM »
Please continue  this fic  :cry:
I really wanna know what happend  next?

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS
« Reply #81 on: April 27, 2013, 08:57:01 AM »
Please don't stap  :cry:

Your fic is really good  XD

Update soon~

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* Surprise chapter?
« Reply #82 on: May 02, 2013, 01:10:41 PM »
I warn you, I have no drawing and writting skills *insert pouting face*


                                                                           Omake 1


Nezumi : Ne Ne Black~

Black : *staring blankly*

Nezu: Why are your breasts so big? Can I massage them? It will help with their growing~ *touches Black's chest*

Black: ...... *blushing madly*

Yuuki : h-hey! That's not a question you should ask a lady Nezumi! *blushing*

Nezu : *stares at author*  Look who's talking ! *sends knowing grin*

Yuuki : ..... *shuts up*

                                                                     From the previous chapter ----


'Nee, Black? do you want to go back to school?'



'Because now you are my everything....I believe in you' Black kissed Nezumi's forehead and started walking to school, leaving Nezumi alone.'


'*sigh* well, I see there are not many changes..' Sado smiled


                                                                            In this chapter ----


It was ok , right? To just leave Black like that, to talk to her friends and be on top again. Maybe they will ask her, about what Nezumi had done to her, about where she had been, if she was hurt or if she was ok. It was only normal to worry, they were her friends. But what if Black told them something? What if Black told them that she never wanted to see Nezumi again? Then they would protect Black with all they have, they would take care of her. But then, Nezumi wouldn't be able to ever talk to Black, to touch her or to be beside her. Should she go and talk to Black about this? Now? Later?

Nezumi sighed and relaxed her body a little, all these thoughts were making her head hurt. She was worrying , lots and lots. Something like this had been on her mind all day long, after Black had given her her cross and had left ahead. Was love this troublesome? Nezumi knew that she can't stop her shaking heart when she thinks of Black.

Nezumi's only wish right now was not the top, not to beat god. Her wish was to be in Black's arms. The warmth and gentleness only Black could offer her was radiant, love was troublesome, Nezumi decided.

The sun was slowly getting ready to set,and even though she should go ahead and wait for Black at their meeting spot, Nezumi couldn't help this shattering feeling. With a final look from the top, she turned to Centre.

'Then, lets go Nezumi! ' Centre smiled warmly at Nezumi and extended her hand even though she knew she will be rejected.

'Yeah, bye Centre ... ' Nezumi walked out with a last look at Centre who waved her bye

At the meeting spot Nezumi sat in a hidden place, waiting for Black to appear. Soon , she heard talking and saw the Rappapa members walking by the place she was hidding in. With sharp eyes, Nezumi saw that Gekikara had not returned yet. She knew that Gekikara will come soon, and then she will have to deal with her but it was good for now that she was not here.But it was also a reason to worry, the fact that Gekikara wasn't there, then where was she? She must have been gone freee a day or two before but there was no sign of her.

For the \n\ time that day, Nezumi sighed.

And there was Black, she was walking behind the group, probably wanting to hid in the shadow so she could leave without the others noticing.

Nezumi smiled as she saw that Black was walking in her direction, the others walking ahead without noticing.Black stoped and looking around, then when she was about to walk ahead to see if Nezumi is coming , she had to keep her feets on the ground to keep herself steady. Nezumi had jumped on her front, her head in Black's breasts.

'Black.....you come...' Her voice was somehow low and soft like a child that was about to cry ' I thought you won't come...that you will leave me...'

Black patted Nezumi's head and hugged her close, not talking. Then she kissed the top of her head and whispered 'It's ok...I won't leave you...I belong to you...'

Nezumi smiled in her chest and pushed the tears that were forming in her eyes away, to not worry Black.

'then, lets go home together?' Black whispered and held her hand out for Nezumi to take . Nezumi smiled warmly at Black's action but insted on taking the offered hand, she jumped on her back and hiding her face in Black's neck. Sniffing on her neck, Nezumi said

'lets go home...together..'

Black smiled and holding Nezumi tightly to keep her from falling, walked them both home.

Maybe  she should trust Black a little more, Nezumi decided, after all relationships are based on trust and love.

They both got in bed and ready to sleep, Nezumi got in bed after Black and closed the light. Getting in bed, she looked down at Black and placed a soft kiss on her lips .

'I love you...'

These words made Black froze. Her thoughts stoped and her hole mind had gone blank. Nezumi smiled knowingly, Black wasn't ready to say these words and she accepted that.

Nezumi nuzzled her face in Black's chest and sucked and licked them softly. Black stroked her hair softly and kissed the top of her head from time to time. This felt like heaven .

'If only this could go on forever...'

« Last Edit: May 03, 2013, 02:17:14 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

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You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #83 on: May 02, 2013, 03:43:51 PM »
You finally updated this fic :farofflook:
I've been waited for your new update so long :err:
Mayuki is so sweet :luvluv1:
The omake you made is so hialarious :hiakhiakhiak:
Mayu is worried about Gekikara come back :smoke: and whether Black would leave her :on study:
Why Black wasn't ready to say 'I love you' to Nezumi :on speedy:
Your fic is too awesome that I don't know what to comment more :sweat:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #84 on: May 02, 2013, 04:39:20 PM »
Oh, my first comment in your fanfiction  ;)
I'm not a Mayuki shipper but your story is so interesting

Black... wow just love her character in this, with Nezumi~  NezuBlack  :D

So Geki is coming back now, she still loves Black...
I can see little moment of Nezcen here but Centre is... so weird
Geki loves Black, Centre loves Nezu
How can these two fall for each other???

It will end up by NezuBlack so I dont mind at all  XD
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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #85 on: May 02, 2013, 10:13:26 PM »
Lol, I've started a weird habit of talking to myself
quote me:
ah...... how wonderful~~~~~
gekikara! gah.... there's gonna be lots of trouble
if it was just straight foward, geki appears and wants black...
it would be safer for Nezumi, but then Geki seems to have something going on
........creating suspense in mind....

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #86 on: May 03, 2013, 02:32:03 PM »
*teary eyes* It worked! *jumping of happiness* ..... *gulp* yeah , nothing. *nod*


                                                                      I damn warn you, I still have no drawing and writting skills *frown*



This is no update >_> , tomorrow. or another day maybe.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #87 on: May 03, 2013, 07:06:26 PM »
Wah sugoi!!!!

Awesome drawing!!  XD

Looking forward to next update~ :P

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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #88 on: May 03, 2013, 07:25:01 PM »
Yuuki, my ship!! You are amazing!! Captain approves!!!!  :deco:
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Re: Yuuki!!!!! Risky game* HIATUS Update. 5/2/13
« Reply #89 on: May 04, 2013, 06:35:13 PM »
I warn you , again, I have no writting and/or drawing skills.




                                                                              Omake 2!


Black: ...*passed out on the floor*

Yuuki: ...*poking Black *

Nezu: Hey -- *enters room and stared at the scene*

Yuuki: Oh, you are back. *smiles at Nezumi*

Nezu: Don't 'Oh' me! *suddenly coming close* Who's that awesome guy on the floor? and where is MY Black?! *arms crossed*

Yuuki: *stares at the boy Nezu pointed on the floor* Oh...* pokes Black again*

Nezu : Don't 'Oh' me! *smackes Yuuki on the head* Who is this?

Yuuki: *teary eyes* Black... *stares back at Nezu*

Nezu: *stares at Yuuki*

Yuuki: *stares at Nezu*

Nezu: You can't be serious.... *stares at the Black 'boy' and pokes him too*

Yuuki: *smile* I'm serious !

Nezu: *slaps Yuuki on the head* You didn't have to answer!

Yuuki: ...sorry.... *goes to the corner and makes circles on the ground*

Nezu: *sweatdrop* ...*trying to not feel bad for author, pokes Black boy* so....how did this happen?

Yuuki: .....*doesn't answer*..

Nezu: *sigh* you...*takes out choco* here! *gives Yuuki choco*

Yuuki : *eats choco happy* She ate one of my chocolates *bright smile*

Nezu:.....you mean one of the choco I give you.... *facepalm*

Yuuki:....? *tilts head*

Geki:  Blackkkkkkkkkk~~~~ *enters jumping and looking for Black*

Nezu:.... not now ....please....

Geki: *running around* Blackkkkkk *slips, falls on Black boy*

Black: *groans* ....why......me.....?


*Author is too lazy to write a chapter, but was active enough to mess a drawing. You have the right to slap the writer.*
« Last Edit: May 04, 2013, 06:41:31 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki!! Risky game* Omake 2! 5/4/13 *Nezu/Black/Geki*
« Reply #90 on: May 04, 2013, 06:44:40 PM »
Hahaha....  :lol:

I like the Omake 1& 2

Thank you for the Omake....

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Yuuki!! Risky game* Omake 2! 5/4/13 *Nezu/Black/Geki*
« Reply #91 on: May 05, 2013, 10:11:49 AM »
This omake is hilarious :on lol:
GekiNezuBlack :on GJ:
Poor Black 'guy' :wahaha:
Update new chapter or omake soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Yuuki!! Risky game* Omake 2! 5/4/13 *Nezu/Black/Geki*
« Reply #92 on: October 17, 2013, 10:15:45 AM »
Ganbare Author ~  XD
I'm sorry for being a silent reader, but I'm still waiting for this continuation
love your works   XD :wub:
my forever Kami OTP which is starting to bloom again:
MaYuki!

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Re: Yuuki!! Risky game* Omake 2! 5/4/13 *Nezu/Black/Geki*
« Reply #93 on: July 17, 2014, 08:21:18 PM »
I wonder what will happen after this??
who is the mysterious man?
update please  :twothumbs

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Re: Yuuki!! Risky game* Omake 2! 5/4/13 *Nezu/Black/Geki*
« Reply #94 on: July 23, 2014, 02:18:53 PM »
PLEASE UPDATE I MISS THIS STORY!!! Wahhh yuuki come back and continue pleaseeeee!

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