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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #200 on: February 19, 2013, 12:27:56 PM »
so Yuki loved Rena at first
Rena loved her back or still love her
 that's why she hates Mayu that much
 there nothing make Rena do this only that
 she still loves Yuki back that time
and jealousy is what make her act like that
I'm still worried about Mayu in the futur T.T
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #201 on: February 19, 2013, 12:29:49 PM »
YukiRena!  :inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:

Seriously gosh! I like YukiRena too!  XD But of course MaYuki MUST end up together.   :lol:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #202 on: February 19, 2013, 12:58:06 PM »
rena chan!! :cry:
yuki was so cute  :heart:  :yep:
poor jurina :(
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #203 on: February 19, 2013, 02:17:24 PM »
Ooooooh! There is no way I can hate Rena after this chapter >< 

What happened to Mayu? ><  I'm just too curious about everything!!!

Thank you for the update o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #204 on: February 19, 2013, 02:32:29 PM »
So that why Rena act like that :w00t:
I'm curious what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon :onioncheer:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #205 on: February 20, 2013, 09:00:54 AM »
I would do the same if i was rena,

But,its not true if yuki leave rena cause she scared of the black queen...

rena should trust yuki at that time,yuki must have her reason...

But the black queen will goes to jurina if she's not take the lead,poor rena,but im pity jurina too,now that we know rena doesn't love her...aww~


Hope in the future jurina love not just one side anymore...since rena take the lead the black queen cause jurina too~sweet

Im still worried mayu's...hopefuly the next chapter mayuyu appearance...LOL as nezumi maybe,mayu is not that weak...she just too lazy cause her ill,but now her black in danger she must do something too,not just a burden for yuki...(why im too much imagine LOL im too love this fic)

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Thank for the update cmze-san,ah rena-sama~you still have your jurina...
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #206 on: February 20, 2013, 10:43:56 AM »
What happened to Rena was so horrible...She got tortured physically and mentally.

If Rena didn't become crazy like Gekikara, it would be a miracle.

So the leader of Black Queens was Maeda... but she asked them to disband it... but the others didn't want to.

Yuki left Rena to Paris coz' she thought Rena liked Sae.... and also because she was bothered with what Sae said previously before she went to meet Rena.

Now that Yuki is back... and Rena has changed... How are they going to get together?

It's going to be interesting to see what's going to happen, I can't wait to find out....

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #207 on: February 25, 2013, 04:50:48 PM »
This Yuki...is really a mess and caused a lot of mess and messed rena's life up!!! haha
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
« Reply #208 on: February 28, 2013, 10:59:54 AM »
YUKI!! GOD THIS STORY REALLY GOOD! I LOVE IT! AMOR! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #209 on: February 28, 2013, 12:35:57 PM »
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.21

~In a dark room~

Mayu woke up, she looked around and noticed the bars "what's this?" she wondered as she touches the bars "A cage.. where the hell am i?" she says and hits the bars "HELP ME!! HELP ME!!" she shouts many times and hits the bars many times deperate

Suddenly someone hit the bars with a wood "SHUT UP!" she shouted

Mayu was scared and looking at that girl afraid,she was wearing a black hood

"You're going stay here so you better shut up, i hate the noise and i also hate you because i wanted to see how Gekikara destroy Yuki but instead i have to watch over you!" The same girl says irritating and playing with the wood

"Yuki..." Mayu murmured sad some tears got in the corner of her eyes while she thinks about the other girl who's having a rough time because of her

Mayu wiped her tears "i have to be strong..i have to help her!" she thought

"You know our leader is amazing, she's brillant and kind but as leader she needs to make everyone respect us!!" The girl says as she walks around

Mayu only looked at her analyzing any posiblity with her "Nezumi side"

"Even when that girl died because our bullying, she was strong and never looked back" The girls keeps talking and walking

"She must be cool.." Mayu says coldly

"She's not cool,she's everything, smart,kind, beatiful and also wise!" The girl says excited and distracted with her back facing her

Mayu took that as a sign and grabbed the girl then putted her arm around her neck and started asphyxiating, the girl tried to realease but Mayu made her hit her head with the bar

The girl fainted while Mayu had the keys already,she run and noticed the back of a bookshelf "what? this is.." she pushed the bookshelf and it revealed that she was in the library "that why they say there are ghosts in the library.." she thought then she went to her best friend room to hide

"KNOCK!KNOCK!"

"what?" Jurina murmured then got up from bed and opened the door

Mayu fast got in with a fast breathing

"what's wrong? did that jerk did something to you?" Jurina asks scanning Mayu

"no! They took Yuki chan!" Mayu replies desperate

"Who??" Jurina asked confused

"The black queens!!" Mayu replied scared

Jurina was shocked

~Meanwhile~ In the pool area..

Yuki was crawling away from Gekikara

"Don't try to run away from me again Yuki chan!" Gekikara says smiling as she walks closer to other hurt girl

Yuki spit blood

"Looks like you're pretty hurt!" Gekikara says grabbbing Yuki by her hair

Yuki only smiled

"Why are you smiling?" Gekikara asked loosing her temper

Yuki coughed "Because i'm an idiot,i end up hurting the person i used to love the most!" she says and cough again

Gekikara let go Yuki's hair then looked other way "you don't know how much i suffer because of you.. you should be here not me!" she says sad and then smiled

Yuki looked at Gekikara "i'm sorry.." she whispers as she tries to crawl

"Why you always try to run.. it's not cool running from your problems!" Gekikara says as she watches Yuki crawling

"I'm not running,i'm trying to look for something to help me to get up.." Yuki replied with a smile

Gekikara grabbed Yuki by her collar and looked at her in the eyes

"I can't give up.. you have Mayu and i have to protect her from you so you can not win!" Yuki says struggling as she speaks

"Why? Why you insist on protecting her AND DIDN'T PROTECT ME?" Gekikara shouted

"If i only new they would go after you, i would never left.." Yuki says as tears comes out

~Flashback~

After Yuki and Sae argue because of Rena in the racing track..

"Damn it! Damn it! stupid Sae chan!" Yuki muttered to herself as she walks away "who she thinks she is to know who's good to Rena? i would never hurt her!" she says as she enters to the changing room to look for her uniform

Nobody was there so Yuki stood in front of her locker and then remembered Sae's words about her life "arghhhh" she left out as she hits her locker hard and ends up hurting her hand

Yuki's hand was bleeding so she sat and the locker opened by itself because the damage

"Wow that's impresive, i guess there is a lot of hate in your heart Kashiwagi san!" A voice of a girl says

Yuki looks around "who's there?" she asked still sitting

"Nobody.." The voice replied

Yuki was still looking around but her hand hurts so she was still sitting

"The Black Queens are bullying you right?" The voice asked

Yuki fast got up "How do you know that?" she asked and started to look for the vouce but somehow she was fast at moving

"I just guessed, you know they're looking for a new leader and you're the only one with a cold heart and so much hate to fill the blank.." The voice says

"what??leader?" Yuki says confused

"Of course you won't, i won't let that happen!" The voice says then hit Yuki in the head from behind

Yuki fell on the floor and looked at the person who hit her, she was wearing a white mask only to hide her eyes and nose

"You know, i know if you get there, you're going to love the power and that my friend is dangerous!" she says and kicks Yuki on her stomach

"AHHHH!" Yuki shouted in pain

"Do yoy think is cool bullying people because they got here thanks to a schoolarship?" The girl in the mask asked as she grabs Yuki by her collar

"Why you're doing this?" Yuki shouted

"Trust me i'm doing you a favor!" The girl says with a smirk then pushes Yuki to the lockers and gave her many punches on her face and her stomach

Yuki was sitting leaning against the lockers

The girl in the mask ducks "Listen to me..  You're going to leave this school at least 1 month or 2 months and if you don't i will make u regret!!" she says punching her on her stomach before leaving

Yuki stood there for a moment till she gain energy and manage to get to Rena's room

~End of the flashback~

Gekikara heart aches as she watches her first love crying

"Now i know why you change and i'm really sorry but please leave her out of this and hate only me!" Yuki says in tears

"Gekikara destroy her!" The four Black Queens that were there shouts

Gekikara looked at Yuki in the eyes "why? why you insist on protecting her?" she asks as she presses harder on her hold of Yuki's collar in the edge of the pool

[That side of the pool is the deepest]

Yuki smirks "I love... Her!" she replies

Gekikara eyes's open wide

"Finish her!" The other Black Queens shouts

"Don't you recognized the feeling?" Yuki asked with her last breath

"C'mon Gekikara!" The 4 Black Queens shouts

Gekikara looked at the Black Queens before punching Yuki on her stomach and throws her on the pool

Suddenly Mayu,Jurina and Sasshi entered 

"Yuki!!" Mayu shouts

The four Black Queens went straight to Jurina and Sasshi

"You'll pay this you traitor!" One of them says to Sasshi

"I'm not a traitor i was never in your team!" Sasshi replies and takes off her black hoody

The six girls starts fighting while Rena was still spacing and Mayu noticed that Yuki was inside the pool cause Rena was looking at it

Mayu desperate looked around but Sasshi and Jurina were fighting and she couldn't enter because if she does she could die

"Rena! Rena please save her!" Mayu says with teary eyes and pulling hed by her arm

Rena looked at her but ignores her and watches Yuki inside the pool

Mayu wanted to enter but she wasn't sure if both would come out "Rena please.." she says desperate "If you ever loved her do it!" she says

Rena looked at her and slapped Mayu

"Love?" Jurina murmured a Balck Queen took advantage and punched Jurina on her face

"Gekekira!" The same Black Queen shouted

"Gekikara?" Jurina murmured while other Black Queen kicks her many times

"Leader finish Mayu!" The same Black Queen shouts

Jurina was on the floor "Leader.."

The two Black Queens were beating her while.she was on the floor

After a few seconds Rena reacted "Yuki...Yuki chan!" she murmured before jumping inside the pool to save her

Jurina was being beaten but still watched everything

Rena pulled Yuki out of the pool

Mayu fast checked her and  gave her CPR

Yuki woke up and hugged Mayu "Mayu you're okay!" she says happy hugging her girl

Rena looked around then got up "Stop Fighting!" she says

"Gekikara!" The four girls says and stopped beating Sasshi and Jurina

Rena looked at Jurina who got up left the room mad

"What's so fun about hurting other people? and even people we care about" Rena asked looking at her hands

"We protect the school honor!" One of them replied

Rena takes off her Black Hoody "Is not worth it.." she says feeling empty then leaves

The other 4 girls also left the pool area..

Sasshi smiles "Finally they over!!" she says happy

Yuki looks at Mayu and both smile..

"I love you.." Mayu says and kisses Yuki all over her face

~After a week~

Yuki and Mayu were walking around the campus Yuki with her arm around her neck while Mayu with her hands on Yuki's waist "what are you going to do for holidays?" the taller girl asked

"Nothing..Here!" Mayu says giving her another ice cream

"Look if you wanna go to Hawai you can tell me, stop buying ice creams my brain hurts!" Yuki replies as she opens the envelope

"huh another R!" Yuki says

"Ehh R!" Mayu says and snatches the envelope

Yuki starts licking her Ice cream not caring

"It's an R i win! i WON!" Mayu says excited

"Really?" Yuki asks

"Yeah i won i won let's do our packing!" Mayu says and goes to her room happy

"what a lucky girl...what a dork.. a cute dork that can be easily fooled!" Yuki thinks then smiles and keeps walking licking her ice cream

END OF THE FIRST SEASON!! :) HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! :sweatdrop:

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3 season with Mayu living in the hospital the continuation of the chapter where Mayu got really ill after the trip (few chapters already done at the beginning of the chapters of the 1 season.. do you remember right?")

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #210 on: February 28, 2013, 01:47:43 PM »
Yay! Mayu and Yuki is safe :onioncheer:
Yuki very love Mayu and so does Mayu :shy1:
Poor Jurina...What does she feel? :on cloudeye:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #211 on: February 28, 2013, 02:07:57 PM »
Whoaa what happen here cmze-san?

When i open this fic thread,almost all your fic on the first page,it was like SUPERMASSIVE update!?

But im totaly get fooled LOL,the real update is this one LOL

Ok stop blabering,this my comment:

Sò this the end of season 1,totaly want the next season LOL

Jurina mad at rena,
How rena fix all her mess?
How mayu get to hospital?
Who sayaka?
How the rest member the black queen?
And how they graduated?
And not to mention SAE! Oh GOD even i dont really care about her but she yuki and rena friends for god sake LOL


Cmze-san this time is good as gold really,i cant make a good word to describe but im really satisfied as reader and as your fic fans
Really thank you for this
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! YAY
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #212 on: February 28, 2013, 04:01:22 PM »
Ah.. Yuki loves Mayu... Poor Rena...

She loved Yuki... coz' of Yuki, she became the leader of Black Queens....

And Yuki... just said "SORRY"..... so unfair....

Yuki gets her happy ending with Mayu...

While Rena gets the whole mess she made while she was Black Queen's Leader... and also no love life at all.

What's going to happen next...

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #213 on: February 28, 2013, 06:32:54 PM »
rena and yuki loved eached other, now yuki loves mayu   :shocked
poor rena  :cry: :cry:
actually poor jurina aswell, don't be too mad at rena, jurina  :(
mayu won a trip to hawaii, but in fact was just yuki's doing :lol:
thanx for the update  :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #214 on: March 01, 2013, 01:51:45 AM »
getting complicated what a fool Mayu

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #215 on: March 01, 2013, 04:03:53 PM »
Waaaaah SORRY Cmze-san I wasn't saw this update so sorry!!!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

It was beautiful Thank you!!!!! It have  3 season cooooool?? :cow:

It was your birthday????
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #216 on: March 04, 2013, 05:52:32 AM »
nice nice~
cant wait for season 2, and even have season 3 too~ *ureshi*
So this is what happen in the past,

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
« Reply #217 on: March 04, 2013, 10:28:39 AM »
Omg! That was so good!

The black queens were disbanded after Rena quit, right?  >< I can't wait to next season o/

Sorry about the delay ><

And let season two in!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #218 on: March 06, 2013, 07:09:01 AM »
Thanks for the comments... i would reply everyone but my hand hurts spend like 5 hours writting!! xD
                                       
                                           ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.22 (1)

~In Hawai~

"C'mon Mayu chan, i wanna go to the beach!" Yuki shouts wearing a white beach dress with her black swimsuit under

Mayu was inside the bathroom watching her scar "Maybe i shouldn't wear swimsuit after all.."'she whispered a little sad

Suddenly the door opens "c'mon the sun is shinning and…" Yuki stops talking and looked at her girlfriend who was covering her scar with a towel

Yuki gave Mayu a sweet look then gets closer and looks at her in a playful manner as she pulls the towel down

Mayu looked down embarrassed and blushing

"You know is stupid to hide your beautiful body.." Yuki says with a smirk

"But.." Mayu says not feeling secure and grabbed the towel from the floor

Yuki sighs "Thank god i'm smart and rented a private island for us so let's go, it cost a lot for minutes!" she says pulling Mayu with her

Outside was a car waiting which took them to a pier then the two girls used a boat to get the island

After 20 min max then get to the island

Mayu was shocked "An..an..is..land.." she says stuttering

"Kashiwagi san i'll pick you up at 17:30.. enjoy your day!" The man says as Yuki and Mayu are getting down

The boat leaves..

"I can't believe it!" Mayu says as she watches the boat getting out of sight

Yuki smiles "let have fun!" she says like a little child as she puts the towels on the sand and puts the umbrella to avoid the sun

Yuki pulls out her dress and looks around "This is beautiful!" she says looking at the blue/green ocean

Mayu hugs Yuki from behind and smiles

Yuki also smiles "oh c'mon let's go to the water.." she says playfully as she pulls Mayu with her

"No,i can't!" Mayu replies fast scared

Yuki frowned "why?" she asked confused

"Because i can't.." Mayu says looking down serious

Yuki kisses Mayu's forhead "I promise nothing bad will happen, take my hand" she says with a smile

Mayu hesitated first but Yuki offered her hand again and she could do nothing but do what she was told

"c'mon let's go slowly.." Yuki says as she helps Mayu

They in the water till it reched Mayu's waist

Mayu smiled then splashed Yuki's face

"My eye.." Yuki says with her hands on her eyes

Mayu got worried "i'm sorry,i'm sorry!" she says

"Got you!" Yuki says with her tongue out and splashes Mayu softly

Mayu wanted pay back but Yuki herself into the water to soak her hair then came out fast and grabbed the shorter by her waist "why you don't try to get your hair wet?you'll feel better after that because it's too hot here!" she says

Mayu looked around

"Just arch your back or i have a better idea float face up and i'll have your back!" Yuki says excited

"what'" Mayu asked

"c'mon it's going to be fun!" Yuki says with a smile

"ughh why i always do what you want me too?" Mayu muttered to herself

Yuki smirks "because you love me but first!" she says as grabs Mayu by her shirt "take it of!" she says as she pokes it

Mayu looked other while Yuki removes the shirt which totally got lost in the sea then Yuki made Mayu float face up while she holds her

After a moment Mayu started to get more confident inside the water because there was waves or anything it was like a pool a beautiful pool..

So the two started to play more and get deeper but it was ok

"Yuki chan i'm having so much fun here!" Mayu says as she floats (because she now can do it alone)

Yuki is also floating next to her "i'm glad that's what i wanted from the beginning Mayu..to make you happy" she says looking other way

"We're in paradise and the sky is so beautiful so clear!" Mayu says spacing

Yuki smiled then stopped floating and she was standing up following Mayu who noticed and also got up

The two lovers looked each other in the eye and smiled, Yuki grabbed her hands "i'm happy.." she whispers still looking at her cyborg

Mayu smiled then got closer and kissed the taller girl, Yuki let go Mayu's hands to cup her cheeks while Mayu's hands got to Yuki's waist

By the passing seconds their kiss became more deep, the two girls wanted more from each other

Yuki wasn't only kissing Mayu's lips now she was on her neck while Mayu kisses her on her face

Yuki stopped their kiss suddenly "i'm sorry.." she says catching her breath

Mayu was all red and also catching her breath

Yuki was about to get back to the sand but Mayu grabbed her by her hand "Yuki chan!" she whispered

"huh?" Yuki turned to look at Mayu

"I want you.." Mayu says red

Yuki blushed then looked down not knowing what to do .After a short moment Yuki looked at her girlfriend again then got closer and kissed her like previously they were kissing

Hands roaming on each other, devouring each others lips, kissing, sucking and biting with no mercy (for all the time they couldn't)

Suddenly the thought of losing Mayu hit Yuki's brain which make her separate from the hot cyborg and stop that passionate kissing scene

"What?...why?" Mayu whispered open mouth as Yuki steps backs

Yuki looks at the cyborg "You have no idea How bad i want you... but i love you! she says sad then walks away to cool off

Mayu also gets out, she looked at Yuki who was laying on her towel face down with her eyes closed

Mayu got on her back and kissed her shoulder "I love you too.." she says making Yuki to open her eyes then turned to look at Mayu

"At least can put you the sunblocker on?" Mayu asked with a smirk which cause Yuki to smile also "Silly.." she whispered

"But you love me!" Mayu says still hugging Yuki's back

"That's true! That's true!" Yuki replies with a smile

~At Nagoya~

Rena sighed as she watches the outside the window of her room"It's holidays why am i so bore?"she thought

"Matsui san are you okay?" The butler asks

"Totally *Hip* okay!" Jurina replied as she walking hugging her friend

Rena gets up and got out of her room "Jurina!" she calls as she watches her little sister and her friend entering to her room

Jurina turns around "Shut up Gekikara.. deal with your bussiness and leave me alone!" she shouted laughing as her friend laughs also

Rena just looked at the two while they enter and the butler just stand there also

"Don't tell my parents i'll deal.with this!" Rena says serious

The butler nodded and left

Rena entered to her room and the hours passed (she can hear the music from Jurina's room) so she couldn't sleep and nobody in the house also

Jurina finally came out of the room and went to the kitchen were Rena was by casualty

"Jurina chan!" Rena says shocked

Jurina pouts "you.." she says not so happy

"Don't you think now's the time to set the party off?" Rena says calm

Jurina ignored her and grabbed many things from the fridge, one of things on her full hands slipped

[Noise of glass on the floor]

Rena fast reacted "Are you okay?" she asked getting closer and checked Jurina's hand

Jurina looked down then harshly removed her hand and with tears in her eyes she finally spoke "Don't touch me... i hate you so if you wanna live stay way from me!" she says with hate on her eyes

Rena recognized those eyes "I'm sorry.." she says before leaving

TO BE CONTINUED..okay some ideas how Mayu gets the Yukirin nickname? because nothing comes to my head -_-

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #219 on: March 06, 2013, 08:40:36 AM »
Wah.. Yuki spoiled Mayu a lot... and she's very sweet too

Ah... Yuki wanted Mayu so bad that she needed to restrain herself

What's going to happen with their date there....?

Oh... poor Rena... is being coldly treated by Jurina..

She even got threaten and hated just because it was not even her fault... that she became Gekikara... the leader of the black queen

I really think it was unfair that Yuki can get her happy ending but not Rena....

All in all Yuki was at fault... and Rena was the victim... the after cause of Yuki's cowardliness when she ran off.

Please make Yuki paid for all the abuses and the pain that Gekikara endured because of Yuki's escaped.

All the sins that Gekikara commited can be given to Yuki... most of it.

However, I understand that Rena needed to take responsibility for her actions but not all.... only the small half... the large half was supposed to be given to Yuki.

Please give Rena more happiness... because she does deserve them

I can't wait to see what's going to happen with everybody in this story (esp. Rena, Jurina, Yuki and Mayu)?

Thank you for the update

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