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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: IamNot_Glad on February 01, 2014, 11:57:22 AM
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Prologue
Maeda Atsuko’s mother is in poor condition so she needed to make a way to make her mother better. She needed a handsome amount of money. Atsuko is willing to give anything in exchange of money she needed.
Enter the dashing chinky-eyed Takahashi Minami. She is willing to help Atsuko but in one condition;
“Spend a night with me, Acchan…….”
Atsuko know what it means.
But she was wrong. At that night, Minami told her to wear a white dress and pose like model while holding a light-candle. She looks like a white lady while Minami taking a picture of her. Who wouldn’t be amazed? And to the good things she showed, who wouldn’t be inlove with her?
But Minami would always be the General Manager of AKB Construction, rich, playful and for her, love is a strange thing.
Is it a big risk to Atsuko to love her or can they make happy ending like others??
How was it ?? :mon sweat:
Sorry for my bad English. I'm a first timer :nervous :nervous :panic:
Feel free to comment :D :D :D
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It's great :thumbup
Please continue . . . . I can't wait for your next update :D
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your name really caught my attention atsumina048 :on lol:
interesting start :hehehe:
cant wait to read next part :on gay:
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author san~
you fic is so interesting :inlove:
and i want more....
please update for the next :twothumbs
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sounds like a great fanfic coming XD
please update ~~
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Update update update~ ! :on lol:
Update soon please ~ :hee:
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Please update~
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I'm quite interested in it :D
So Minami is a playgirl? Ah, I wonder how Minami will fall in love with Atsuko and how she'll pursue the young girl.
I have suggestion, it would be easier to read if you separate your paragraphs in the future :) since its a prologue, thats fine, but in the future chapters it really should be separated for easier reading. Hope that didn't offend you.
I can't wait for your next update, update soon! XD
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Interesting.. Atsumina story... Yeah...
Can't wait to see the start of the story
Thank you
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Chapter I : Our first meeting, our first kiss??
Atsuko breathe deeply after she talked to Oshima Yuko, the boss of her bestfriend. Her bestfriend is Kojima Haruna. It is already a month after Haruna left their town. Haruna go to Tokyo in exchange of the money borrowed by her stepfather to Oshima-san. She was working in Oshima-san's house as a maid. Atsuko take a seat in the bench of the terminal. She thought that giving away Haruna to the person she doesn't know was the worst thing that Haruna's stepfather would do.
But she was wrong...
Because he came back, accompanied by a certain rich man who said that he wants Haruna to come back and marry that man. This is the other reason why she is in Tokyo now. She wants to give Haruna a warning.
The real reason why she is here --- she needed a large amount of money for he operation of her mother and Atsuko thinks that Haruna's could help her. She would do anything in exchange of money.Atsuko closed her eyes. She reminisced all the bad things that happen to her to Haruna's life.
(Flashback)
Haruna is the companion of Atsuko in the store that her mother owns. Haruna was working at the very young age. Atsuko witnessed all the things that Haruna encountered. She often see Haruna's crying silently when she was alone. But in front of others people, most likely to their costumers, she give them her best smile. One of the things that Atsuko admire. Atsuko's mother treat her like her own child.
Then a tragedy came to their life...
A typhoon came to their town. Everyone get affected, including them. Because Atsuko's mother is a helpful person, whoever need help is helping by Atsuko's mother. In terms of food and money, her mother gave it with all her heart. After a week their store got closed because they can't operate it. All the money they saved was gone now.
Atsuko wants to stop from her study because she saw her mother is struggling in her work. But her mother always said,
"Atsuko, education is the way to make our life better in the future. You are my only hope so I would do anything to finish your study"
After a few months, Atsuko graduated in high school and ready to go to college. But at that moment, Atsuko discovered that her mother was suffering to a disease. Her mother hid it from her so she won't get worried.
Atsuko thinks that Haruna's boss could help her. The friend of her mother volunteered to watch her mother while she was in Tokyo. Atsuko don't know how to get the large money she needed but she promised that she can't come back without a money on her hand.
(Flashback End)
Right now, Atsuko was waiting at the terminal. According to Oshima-san a certain friend of her will picking her up. Atsuko slowly wiped her tears. She looked around to the place, hoping that person would come early. She told Oshima-san what she's wearing and where she can find her. But because no one give attention to her, she just bowed her head and stare at the floor.
Atsuko hear a voice of a girl. Nevertheless, she had not seen the face of the girl her heart was beating so fast. Atsuko doesn't even know if she's the one talking to.
"Maeda Atsuko?" the girl said
Atsuko raised her head when she hears her name. For a longer moment, she just stared to the girl. A girl was smiling to her. The girl is short that makes her a high schooler. She's wearing a plain T-shirt and a skinny jean with a pair of rubber shoes. Her hair was in ponytail with a ribbon on top makes the girl very cute.Atsuko doesn't know what so special about these girl that make heart beating nonstop
The girl cough and give her the best smile. Her heart was beating faster. The girl smile was trying to attract her. Atsuko breathe deeply and calm herself.
"H-hi," Atsuko said.
The smile of the girl grew wider. Atsuko doesn't know why the girl is just standing there and don't move.
"You're the only one wearing a huge smiley on your back."
"Y-yes. I am Maeda Atsuko," she said to make the girl stop from what she's saying.
The time is gold for her that she don't want to waste a single minute. She need to set aside her feelings right now.
"The smiley in your back is cute" the girl said.
She is mentioning the printed smiley on her back. It is Atsuko's intention to wear that blouse so if anyone sees her frowning atleast someone on her back is smiling. Haruna gave it to her as a gift so she treasured it very much. But instead answering the girl, she just take her bag.
“Btw, I'm Takahashi Minami but the others called me Takamina" she said while coming to Atsuko. She is staring directly to Atsuko's eyes.
“Her face was so tame" Atsuko said in mind.
The girl give her best smile. Because of her smile, she looks like she can't harm anyone.
"So you won't kiss me?" Minami asked.
"E-eh??... "
"No shaking of hands. I greet with a kiss.
Minami pulled closer Atsuko to her body. Before Atsuko can react, Minami was kissing her lips already
TBC :panic: :panic:
How was it :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :dunno: :dunno: :dunno: :dunno:
This is my first ever fanfic in English so I'm a beginner :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Btw I'm only updating in Sunday because that was my free time
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Takamina kiss acchan :inlove:
I'm really want to know what happens next...
Author san thanks for the update :twothumbs
I'm waiting for next...
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Eh... first meet... already kissing...
Very forward.... interesting...
What's Atsuko reaction be?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Oh my Takamina so bold xD
Please update soon
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I'm a little confuse, but I think eventually I'll get the story.
So is Haruna working for Minami as her maid? I thought it was kinda funny that Minami took Atsuko's first kiss, just like that lol
hope you update soon :)
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eh really?
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Comments:
@lezperv: Nope. Haruna is working at Yuko. :) :)
@Kirozoro: I make Takamina a playful person here. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Chapter I part II
“If this car can eat people, you won’t be here anymore Acchan!”
Atsuko doesn’t mind what Minami is saying She also don’t mind what name she was saying. Her name is Atsuko, and not Acchan.
Atsuko remember after she taka a seat in the passenger seat, she can’t locked the seatbelt because of nervousness. Minami leaned closer to her to help her to lock the seatbelt for her. Because of the sudden movement of Minami, Atsuko eke in the corner of the car that makes Minami laugh.
“Hey, I won’t rape you!” Minami said in an amused tone.
Atsuko felt her cheeks became red.
“Are you afraid that I might kiss you again?” Minami asked with a smile on her face while starting the car.
Atsuko became quiet.
“It’s just a kiss, Acchan! Just greeting okay?”
Atsuko doesn’t know what to say. She thought that it’s only in America that a kiss is a greeting. And that girl said that it’s nothing, but what about her? Her heart was beating so fast. Atsuko can’t understand but she still feels the lips of the girl in her own lips. She feels the tenderness of it. Her scent was stick in her body. Atsuko wants to rub her chest because of nervous but she stops herself from doing it. It’s so embarrassing if Minami know that she got affected by her presence.
“So you are a friend of Haruna? I don’t see you on you town when I went there.” Minami asked.
“I’m studying at that time.” She replied.
“Oh, I see. BTW do you have a contact with Haruna these past few months?”
Atsuko shook her head.
And a long silence came……………
Come on, Atsuko ask her a questions. Don’t let these awkwardness came up.
“You know what. You can call me Minami if you want” Minami said with the trademark smile on her face.
“E-eh”
Atsuko’s eye grew wider.
“It’s okay for me. Besides I want you to know me better.” Minami said.
“O-okay T-Takahashi-san. I-I mean M-Minami.”
Atsuko blushed when she said that.
“You’re cute when you’re blushing. Ha-ha-ha.”
Her cheeks become redder.
Minami’s laugh lightens her mood. She suddenly forgot her problems. It seems that whenever Minami laugh she can overcome all her problem
But something flashed in Atsuko’s mind.
“So, where is Haruna? Is she okay?” she asked
“She is in very good hands. Yuko won’t neglect her.”
“O-okay!”
Atsuko sighed in relief when she hears that.
At least Haruna is okay.
“Yuko is a person who’s willing to help―right when the girl she cares needed it the most” Minami said.
Atsuko stared at Minami after she heard that. Is there a meaning on what she said? Is there something going between her bestfriend and Minami’s friend.
“What do you mean?” Atsuko asked.
Minami smiled. “We are just basically kind people.”
“Who you are?”
“My friends. One of them is Yuko.”
“0-okay. Fine, you looked like a good person…..” Can I borrowed a money to you
Atsuko looked away and stared out in the window.
And the car stops…..
“Haruna?”
When Atsuko follows to what direction Minami is looking, she sees Haruna. It is really Haruna. Her besrfriend.
Haruna suddenly stop when she sees the car of Minami. Atsuko saw that Haruna is crying.
A shocked flash in Haruna’s face when she saw Atsuko but she run to Atsuko and hug her tightly. Atsuko was confused when Haruna cried in her shoulder.
What happen to her?
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--TBC-- :panic: :panic:
I'm always updating the part II of the chapter at Wednesday
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Yeah.. what's happening to Haruna?
Who made her cry?
And what's going to happen with Atsumina next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Haruna crying? Why haruna crying? :?
Minami easily take atsuko kiss. :lol:
She’s naughty haha. :thumbsup
Wait for an update. .. :cow:
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Please update this when you have the time. :bow: :bow:
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Chapter II: The Night with a full of questions
Atsuko let Haruna cry in her shoulders while letting out her all bad feelings. She continuously rubbed the back of Haruna. It was sight. They are in the house of Minami. She silently listens to what Haruna is saying. She wanted to ease the pain that Haruna felt but she doesn’t know how.Instead, she hugged Haruna tightly.
“You can do it!” Atsuko said
Honestly, Atsuko think how to say what she’s purpose here after Haruna said that she wanted to go home. Haruna is in love with Oshima Yuko.
Atsuko parted their hug. She stands to get a glass of water in the kitchen.
“Drink these. I don’t want to say you this because of what you going through. But this is important, Haruna.” Atsuko said.
She let Haruna drink before she told what’s situation Haruna is.Different emotions passed in the face of her bestfriend.
“Why did my stepfather do that such things.” She said crying.
Atsuko hugged Haruna again.
“I hope I can answer you” Atsuko sighed. “But you can do a thing to don’t get married with that man.”
Haruna gape at Atsuko.
“Get married. You have a few days to find a person you can marry.”
Haruna laughed bitterly. After a few seconds, she sat quietly. Haruna wiped her tears, and look upstairs, to the room of Minami.
“Haru….”
Atsuko hesitate if it right to say her problems. But she can’t carry it anymore. She silently cries to Haruna’s shoulders.Haruna was surprised of what Atsuko did but after of it, she rubbed Atsuko’s back. In between tears, Atsuko said why she was here. Afterwards, they hugged tightly and cried together.
“You need money for the operation of your mother. I have a solution. ” Haruna said. There’s a determination in her voice.
Haruna stand up. “Stay right there. I’m gonna talk to Takamina, ” Haruna said while wiping her own tears.
When Haruna go upstairs, Atsuko silently cried again.
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Atsuko’s POV
“Atsuko…..”
I wake up when I hear the voice of Haruna. Because of tiredness --- physical and emotional --- I slept on the couch.
“Haru…..” I said while rubbing my eyes. How many hours did Haruna and Minami talked?
Haruna smiled. Based on Haruna’s smile, I know the good result of what they’ve talked.
“I’m gonna cook at Yuko-san’s house. She doesn’t have a food there. Go upstairs,”
I blinked with a skeptical look
What I’m gonna do to Minami’s room?
“Takamina waited at you. Tell her all the things --- the help that you need. She’s kind” Haruna said and hold her hand.” She is richer than Yuko-san. It’s in your way on how to make Takamina agreed to the help you need. ”
I nervously nod.
“For the sake of my mother, Haruna, I do anything I can.”
“For your mother,” Haruna smiled before she goes away.
I looked upstairs. My heart beat faster. I closed my eyes and prayed.
Kami-sama, please help me. Give me the courage that I need. Yosh!! You can do it, Atsuko
I passed a minute before I go upstairs
“Come in, Acchan,” Minami said.
I flicked the doorknob and pushed the door. I saw Minami. She’s in robe with a wet hair. Minami is sitting in the bed and busy tapping the laptop. Minami suddenly stop on what she’s doing and look at me. When our eyes met, Minami smiled at me. My heart beat faster.
“Are you not hungry? I always eat at Yuko’s house so I have nothing to offer you but sandwiches and fruit juices.” Minami said
“I-I’m okay. T-Thank you…..”
“You can sit here. Don’t just stand there that you looked to me like I am a vampire.” Minami said in a light tone.
I sat to the bed slowly that I’m afraid to make a sound.
A silence filled between us.
“Haruna said that you have a problem and you need help?”
I breathe deeply to condition myself, and nodded. Minami looked directly to my eyes that she looks liked she can know what kind of problem it is.
“Tell me and I’m going to listen,” Minami said in a soft tone.
Minami’s eyes try to convince to talk.
“I-I need a large amount of money for the operation of my mother. I’m willing to do anything for you just help me. ”
After I said it I bowed my head.
Minami didn’t say anything. The sound of silence was echoing in the room. After a few second, Minami cough.
“You give anything?” her voce in assurances. “What can you offer, Acchan?”
“Y-You? What are you asked for?” I asked. I don’t know what answer I can give to Minami’s questioned.
Minami became silent again. When I raised my head, I met the eyes of Minami that staring at me intently. She was smiling. But after a few seconds, Minami’s face became serious.
“Why did your mother need an operation?”
“There’s a polyp that grow in her colon.”
“Colon? Oh,” Minami said in an agony voice. “How is she now?”
“She’s in the hospital right now. She is going to have an operation when I came back.” I bowed my head again. And I’m going back home with a money on my hand. I wiped my tears that flow in my cheeks.
Silence again.
“How much money you need?” Minami asked
“More or less 1M Yen”
“Can you give anything that I want?”
I nod and stare in Minami’s eye.
“Anything,”
Other than my body, I don’t know anything I can give in exchange of money I need.
“Okay. Are you going home after you received the money?”
I nod.
Minami stand and go to the cabinet in the corner of her room. She get the keys and open a drawer. She took the booklet of check and write there. After it, she handed it to me.
“One million yen, Acchan, in exchange of two conditions,”
“T-Tell me a-and I-I do it” I said in a nervous tone.
“Can you please stand.”
Minami come close to me and look at me intently. I was surprised when Minami pinch the tip of my nose.
“I think a white dress suits you,” she said and smiling sweetly while there’s something in her mind.
“A white dress?”
“First condition, Acchan, no one will ever know --- even Haruna --- what we have talked and things that will happen in this room.”
Kami-sama, help me!
I just nod while rubbing my chest. In the corner of my eyes, I saw Minami smiling. She looks liked amused to me.
“Why are you rubbing your chest?” Minami said in amused tone.
“T-Tell me the second condition before I collapsed,”
Minami laughed.
“Spend the night with me.”
It looks like a bomb in my ear.
“O-Okay…” I said “The day after tomorrow, I’m going to back home. Give me the money and I give you my body tonight. ”
“Deal?” she said smiling with a confirmation. There’s a twinkle in her eyes but I was sure that it’s not a desire. I couldn’t figure it out.
When I nod, Minami give me the check.
“T-Thank you,” I didn’t know if it’s the right thing to say.
“Don’t thank me. There’s an exchange of it.” Minami said in a casual tone while approaching the telephone and dial.“Talked to Haruna and tell her you’re going to sleep here because we going to talk about your problem.”
I come close and took the telephone. I told Haruna what Minami said.
“It’s okay,”
Minami dialed again. I hear that she ordered a food.
“Do you have allergy in foods?” she asked
“Nothing..”
Minami said her orders. “What kind of dessert do you want?”
“A-Anything,”
“Ahm, do you have a dessert ‘anything’?”
I laughed.
“Okay, my favorite dessert. Make it two. Yeah. Yeah, thank you. ” she said and ended the call.
“In less than 30 minutes, we are going to have a dinner. Take a shower first.”
I look like a robot and follow her instructions.
Minami stand and went to door. “I am going to bring upstairs your things.”
I waited Minami to come back to her room. I silently took my personal things in my bag.
“Where is the bathroom?” I asked when Minami came back.
Minami indicated the other door and goes back the attention to her laptop.
I intentionally lengthen my shower. I don’t want Minami to see me in towel. After 15minutes, I come out from the bathroom. Minami is not in the room. I heard a noise downstairs. I wear my clothes fast and go down.
“I thought you were drowned.” Minami said when she saw me.
“My mother have an operation so I don’t want to drown.” I said in casual tone.
All the shyness that I have was set aside first because I was hungry.
Minami smiled.
I sat in the chair. “I’m hungry, even if you don’t invite me; I’m going to eat now.”
“Good, it’s easy to me to feed you.” Minami said while smiling.
I smiled. “There’s so many food. Am I dying? ” I said jokingly to hide my nervousness.
“No. You’re going to get tired after we eat so eat plenty.”
I nearly choked; I took the glass of water and drained the contents of it.
Minami was smiling while looking at me.
A became silent and give the attention back to the food.
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TBC :dunno: :dunno:
What do you think will happen to Atsuko ?? :ding: :ding:
Feel free to comments
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An update! And it really is full of questions.
What on earth is Minami thinking?
Thank you. Will wait for the next one. :bow: :twothumbs
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as Atsumina fan :mon fu: I need to know what will happen next :mon lovelaff:
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I'm sorry everyone if it takes too long to update this fanfic. I've hospitalized for almost two weeks so the story is gone now in my mind. But I will do my best to continue this fanfic. This is my first ever fanfic so I really want to finish it. I want to be this successful like others so I can continue to write great story. I want everyone to feel my feelings and so, I announce that this fanfic will be
updated in Wednesday :on lol: :on lol:
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omg. i hope you'll recover soon.
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:usagiii: :usagiii: Hi there Gladys!! It's me Christine Caermare.. :D I have read this story before and... I don't even notice that it was you who wrote such a great fanfic :banghead: :banghead: .. Get well soon and yeah, finish this story.. :nervous :nervous
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Thank you for all your concerns. I tried my best to remember this story. I hope you enjoy this. :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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Chapter III: Thank you for that night
A tap on her cheeks make Atsuko wake up. When she opens her eyes, she saw Minami’s face.
“Minami”
“Yup. I’m not a nightmare, Acchan.” Minami said smiling while tapping Atsuko’s cheeks gently. “It’s already eight. You can go to Yuko’s house and talked to Haruna. I’m sure Yuko is in the office right now so I must go now. Follow me downstairs, okay?”
Atsuko go to the bathroom and fixed herself.
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Atsuko’s POV
After I fixed myself, I take my things and go downstairs. I saw Minami waiting at the living room.
“Are you ready? Do you left anything?”
“Footprints.” I said smiling and stare directly at Minami’s eye. I felt happiness at this moment because of the good news I’ve brought to my mother.
Minami laughed. “Come here,” she said in a light tone.
There’s no hesitation when I come closed to Minami. Because of the happiness I felt, anything that Minami say is I would
follow. When I’m in front of Minami, I was surprised when she hugs me. I don’t know how to explain the heat that I felt when I’m in Minami’s arm.
“Thank you, Minami…..”
Minami hugged me tightly.
“Our deal, Acchan, don’t forget it.” She said parting our hug. “What happened last night is our precious little secret, okay?”
I nod while remembering what happened last night.
(Flashback)
I silently followed Minami when she said that we can continue our tea at the room. At least my nervousness was at ease because of Minami’s funny side. After washing the plates that we used, Minami said that we should go to her room now. I silently condition myself. I must think the positive outcomes of what will happen right now –the operation of my mother.
I was silent when we enter in her room. Minami laid the mug in the table and took the remote control of the TV. She on the TV while sitting at the bed. She was watching world news. I sat at the bed and tried to calm myself.
After a minute, she off the TV and look at me.
“Ready?” she asked
I can’t answer.
“Acchan, are you ready?” Minami asked smiling
I felt Minami was thinking something. When our eyes met, there’s something that make me smile –the twinkle in Minami’s eye. Even her smile, there’s no sign of danger. Her looks was gentle except of the amusement, there’s no emotion I see.
“I’m ready.”
Minami smiled grew wider and stand. She goes to the cabinet and took something in it. “Wear this,” and threw something to me. I look on what she throws. “That’s the favorite costume of Sasshi, my friend, she was a model.”
I inspect the dress. It was a long-white dress that looks like a …….
A dress of a white lady?
I blinked. Minami was wearing this dress to me? Why?
“C’mon, Acchan, change your clothes! Make it fast!” she said accompanied by two claps. She looks like a director that told her artist to go faster.
To make it end, I went to the bathroom and change my clothes.
“Great! It suits you!” she said after coming out from the bathroom. Based on Minami’s expression, she was happy when she saw me. “Sit at the bed.” She command and go to the cabinet and took something again. It was a…….
Camera?
Minami was smiling while taking a picture of me. She come closed and shown her shots.
I really looked like a white lady. What kind of joke is this?
“The shot is clear, right?” she said overjoyed.
I was dumbfounded when Minami off the lights and the only light is the lampshade on her room. She took something from the cabinet again. This time it was a candle. And she was lighting it.
“What are you doing?” I wondered.
“Lighting a candles.” She said in a casual tone.
“I know. What do I mean is --?”
“Tonight, you are my model so you’re doing anything what I said.” Minami said and give me the candles. “Sit in the center of the bed and hold these candles. Listen carefully to my instructions, okay?” She took a few to steps to become far.
I dumbfounded accept the candles and stare at her with nothing to understand.
“Give me a sad look.”
My forehead wrinkled.
“I said ‘sad look’ not a ‘shocked look’.”
“W-Wait,” I said while sinking to my mind what Minami want me to do. I just wanted to laugh hard. The nervousness and fear that I felt a while ago was gone now. I wanted to be model rather than to be a bed partner. A smile was slowly appearing to my face. I and Haruna was an actress when we were in high school so it was easy to me to change emotions for the picture Minami want.
“Okay, I’m ready!”
Minami smile grew wider. “Okay sad look, Acchan! That’s it!” The camera flashed. “Now, an angry look honey. You’re a vengeful ghost here so more anger. The anger in your eyes is not enough. Oops, that’s it!” The camera flashed again. “Now stand both candles in front and look at them. That’s it! Give me a wicked smile. Wow……” the camera flashed two times.
After a few minutes, Minami’s instruction and the flashed of the camera give life to the room. I look like an artist in a photo-shoot, but of course, I’m a white lady.
I just shook my head while smiling when Minami stop and turn on the lights. She laid the camera in the table and go back to me. Minami kill of the candles.
“Is it hot?” she asked after inspect my wholeness.
“The dress, no. But the candles, yes.”
Minami laughed and look into my hands. “I’m sorry.” She winced when she that there’s a drop of candle in my hands. “Why are you not saying?”
“How can I say, you’re not stopping from your instruction.”
“I’m really sorry. I thought you were okay. There’s no sign in you looks that you are hurting.”
“I’m good at projecting.”
Minami laughed. “I know, I see.” She said while removing the drop of the candles in my hands. And suddenly let go of my hand and go outside. When she comes back, she was holding an ointment. “Let’s fill it with this, it might get swell.”
“It’s nothing. It’s only a candle.” I reclaim my hand but she just held it tightly. I have nothing to do but to tolerate her. I just stare at Minami’s face while gently rubbed my hands with an ointment.
“Don’t stare at me like that. I might get disappeared.” She teased.
My cheeks become red.
She looked at me. “Oh, the white lady is blushing.”
I laughed.
Minami also laugh.
“What are you going to do to the pictures?” I asked to change our topic. I don’t want Minami to tease me.
“Nothing. I’m a frustrated photographer, you know.” She said and let go of my hands. “I think that’s okay.” Minami took the camera again.
“Smile,”
I give my best smile.
“Then the two of us,” she said and put her arms around me. “One more time, hug me from the back.” She told.
I only think that I was an artist tonight and Minami was the director so I must follow all what she said.
“Now kiss my cheek and look at the camera.”
I followed her again. This is nothing to Minami so if I think a malice act here I might get a shame here. The other shot was in bed. The last shot was when Minami hugging me.
“It’s okay I’ve got enough shot.”
Minami stand and fixed the camera. “You can change now.” She said leaving the room. When Minami came back, she lay on the bed while I was standing at the side of the bed. “Come here,”
I put the pillow on the headboard and lean there.
“Tell me a story, Acchan,” Minami said
I instantly look to Minami. “What story?”
“Life in your town –your experience that you can’t forget, childhood memories, anything about you.”
“E-Eto, my life is boring,”
“You don’t like it, if I become drowsy and fall sleep because your life is boring, I’m waking up tomorrow. Meaning the night will be over to you.”
Because of what Minami said, I think fast to what kind of story I can tell. I suddenly thought the experiences I and Haruna shared. Minami was laughing, asking and inquiring to my story. But when my get longer and longer, she was become silent and just listen to my story. She seems interested to my life. I continue the story because I know that Minami was still awake. But when I turn to her to say there’s nothing I can tell about. I was surprise when I saw her sleeping. There’s a heat that I felt to my heart when I watching peacefully asleep.
I smiled.
Does Minami plan just slept? She doesn’t have any motive in her mind except to take a picture of me. Am I just thinking badly?
I slowly pulled the bed cover and cover her. When Minami didn’t move, I was sure that she was very deep asleep. I can’t give a name the strong emotions that I felt while watching the face of Minami, she was really an angel. I can’t believe that I was holding the money that make mother’s life prolong. I felt my tears were flowing in my cheeks.
“Thank you.” I said in soft tone. “Thank you for you kindness.”
(Flashback End)
(End of Atsuko’s POV)
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“You can call me,” Minami said while giving her calling card. Minami took a few steps when Atsuko called her. She turns around. Atsuko crossed the distance between them and hug Minami. She can restrain herself from doing it.
“Thank you. Don’t worry I’m gonna pay the kindness that you give to me. Sorry if it takes too long. ”
Minami laughed softly. “You’re welcome,” she replied “Freed me, Acchan. I have so many works in the office.” She said smilingly
Atsuko amusing let go of Minami. For a couple of second they just stare to each other. Minami pulled closer Atsuko and kissed at the lips. Atsuko was surprised for a few seconds but after realizing the situation, she was responding to Minami’s kiss. She doesn’t expect the effect of her first real kiss. Minami’s kiss was so sweet. She felt her knees turn into jellies and can’t explain the feeling right now. The kiss was different compared to the bus terminal when she picks her up. This time it was passionate. Minami gave a distance between them after a few second to kiss Atsuko again. In her way kissing, she looks like she doesn’t want Atsuko to leave.
“Acchan…..” she said breathless. Minami’s appearance was look like it was hard for her to leave Atsuko.
They remained in their position for a few minutes.
“Let’s go?” Minami asked
“Okay…..”
Minami let go of Atsuko that she was look like a hot thing. She quickly takes the things that she needed and go outside. Atsuko just followed Minami. Minami directly go her car while Atsuko was going to Yuko’s house.
What happened back then?
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Atsuko and Minami
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Very very good....
Ah.... Minami is reluctant about letting Atsuko go... but she must
Would Atsuko be back to Minami side once she settle everything with her mother's health?
What's going to happen to Atsuko and Minami next?
Can't wait to find out more
Thank you for the update
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Chapter IV: What’s this feeling?
Bar, 7:00 pm
Minami’s POV
I didn’t even blink when Yui, one of my constant dates, kissed me. There’s a second that I let her kissed me but I didn’t respond.
“What’s the matter, Minami?” Yui gave a space and stare at me.
Maybe she notices that I didn’t respond to her kiss. I’m not like that before. I’m stupid these past few days and my minds flying- flying to a certain town, in the sea, and to a certain woman’s face.
“Minami…” Yui whispered to my ear and hug me.
She kissed me again, more passionate this time. I closed my eyes to respond her kiss but other face flashed in my mind. Acchan’s eye shining with gratitude. Her skin soft. Her hands gently touching my face. Her kisses were innocent but sweet.
Oh, I missed her so much!
“Acchan….”
“Acchan? Who’s Acchan?” Yui pushed me.
I struck my eyes in surprise. I nearly fall in my chair. Because of the light that shines in Yui’s place, I saw the exasperation in her look while staring at my face. I sigh and give her a blank face. Although we don’t have a relationship, I know that what I did is wrong- utter a different name while kissing her. I also know that I her pride and most likely, her heart.
“I’m sorry…” I said in low voice and look away.
In the corner of my eyes, I saw her penetrating gaze.
“Talk to me, Minami!” Yui said in low voice, because of her sudden actions all the costumers in the bar was looking at our direction. I didn’t say anything.
“Fine!” she said and come away.
I just watched her walking away. Yui knows me very well so she acquired my silence. My silence meant ‘leave me alone’. Yui was one of my girl and those who were past. Well, I couldn’t remember the faces of some of them but not their name.
I prompted the bartender. She smilingly approaches me.
“Where’s Yuko?”
“In her office,”
We both look upstairs. Right from where I seat, there’s a glass wall you could only see but behind the thick glass wall, I knew Yuko was watching me. It is Yuko’s habit to watch people in private, to know what’s happening when she’s in her office. Nobody could see her because of the one-way glass wall that she custom-built. I was so sure that Yuko saw the scene a while ago. I want to talk to her right now- because I wanted to pour this confusion to someone- but I don’t want to do that. I don’t want her to know what’s really happening to me because I was sure that Yuko would laugh at me. And if it reached to Mariko and Yukirin- my two friends, I was really sure that I received a numerous tease from them. So no one would ever know that a girl disturbed my system.
How is she now? A week passed but she didn’t even remember to call me. Is the operation successful?
I can’t get news to Haruna because she seems spacing out these past few days. She’s avoiding Yuko for a week. Haruna is always at my house after she finishes her job to Yuko’s house. But when she’s in my house, she was always gawk. It seems that the situation get really complicated when they get married. Yuko had saved Haruna from her wicked foster father by marrying her. But instead of becoming close to each other, it seems that the marriage is the reason that they get kept them away to each other. Haruna is busy in her works and studies and Yuko is apparently turned to stone. But behind the mask, I knew Yuko was hurting. Whatever Yuko’s plan is, I wouldn’t interfere her.
And now, in my condition, I can’t intrude to love life of my friends because I might get facing a problem too. I was in trouble, too. Yes, trouble in capital ‘T’. Because when the first time, I met Atsuko’s eye in the terminal, I felt different to her. My heart beat faster for her. Beat that I never felt to the woman who walks in my life. I didn’t know why I felt that way. I thought that is natural to caught my attention because Atsuko is different to all the woman I met. Atsuko is simple, a typical beauty. She wasn’t sexy and stunning buy she possessed something that struck me. I didn’t know what it is. It was like a strong hypnotism.
Acchan, the sorceress…
I felt that I’m being hex because I wasn’t in my sanity. But for Pete’s sake, I didn’t believe in witchcraft.
I’m insane!
I remembered on how Atsuko respond to my kiss. By the way she responded to my kisses, I knew Atsuko was inexperienced. Though inexperienced, her kisses were enough to drown me. That’s why I suddenly release her and don’t look back when I ride my car. I was afraid of what I can do to Atsuko.
Before the bar gets crowded, I left it.
Because of help that I gave to Atsuko, I was sure that she called me and gave news. That girl id in need because of her ill mother and I was capable of helping. When Atsuko first said that she have a problem, I was already thinking that I helped her. Even if it takes a year to pay me, I wouldn’t mind. In fact, it’s okay for me if Atsuko didn’t pay me. Only just her mother has an operation and be in good condition. To help save a person’s life was one opportunity I wouldn’t ignore. I may be one playful when it came to women but I wouldn’t take advantage on Atsuko. Even if I have a bad record, I don’t have a heart to harass Atsuko.
I found pleasure in teasing her so that’s why I keep teasing her that night. And to the picture I take, I just want to remember that special night with Atsuko. For just in case Atsuko didn’t back here, I would have memories that I can go back. I have a picture of her in case of time that I missed the presence of Atsuko. And the white lady image? Oh, I was just teasing her!
Damn, what am I thinking?
I fasten the car. I just want to go home and stare at the picture of Atsuko
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I saw Haruna in the gate. I called her. Haruna smiled and opened the gate for me
“It’s already night. Are you still working?” I ask
She just smiled.
“Yuko is in the bar now.” I said in low tone
“Maybe she sleeps there.” She said in flat tone
I was sensitive enough to notice the sadness in her flat tone. It’s not obvious to Haruna that Yuko is always sleeping in the bar after they get married.
“There’s a food inside, if you want I’ll heat it for you.”
“No, thanks. I’m full.”
I turned away.
“You seem so sad. Do you have a problem?”
I faced her and shook my head. But I really need someone to talk. So I…..
“Are you going to sleep now, Haruna?” I asked.
Haruna just stared at me for long seconds. The tone of my voice must be the reason that Haruna can’t ignore me. If I was correct, there’s a mixed of sadness and confusion in my tone. A tone that needed a someone to talk to.
“I know you have a problem.” Haruna said. “I’m not still sleepy. I can listen to your sentiment- if only you want to share it to me.” There’s a concern in her eyes when she said that.
I breathe deeply. “I’m going to change first. We can talk to the garden.”
I don’t want Haruna to know that her best friend is troubling my mind. I would make sure she would think of other person. I don’t want Haruna to tease me, which I was sure my friends would do.
I turned away. After a two steps, I can’t stop to look at Haruna again. “D-Do you have news to your best friend?”
A smile formed in her lips. Happiness is seen in her look. “I received a call from Atsuko. Her mother is in good condition but there’s a test to check if it’s malignant or benign the polyp in her colon.”
“That’s good news.”
“Thanks to you,” Haruna said smiling. “You and your friends are truly an angel.”
“Angel? So one of the angel you’re talking about is the reason why are you sad this past few days?” I said smiling
Her smile turns into wince.
I laugh and continue to go to my house.
End of Minami’s POV
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Hospital
Atsuko smiled when she enter in the room of her mother, holding a two piece of roses. She saw the two friends of her mother. They suddenly stop talking when they see Atsuko.
“Oh. Why did you stop talking?” she said smiling and give the flowers to her mother. “For my beautiful mother,”
“Mrs. Maeda, I must go now. I will visit you again tomorrow.”
“Me too,”
“Okay. Thank you for coming here.”
The two oldies still whispering to each other. When Atsuko look to her mother, they smiled to each other. Her mother was indeed safe. She wants to cry right now while watching her mother. Atsuko set aside the thoughts of what move they next to do. She doesn’t want her mother back to work. Atsuko sure to herself that her mother was doing nothing but to rest. She is in charge of all. On how she would do that disregard from now. She would find a job and overcome all the trials. The important is her mother is safe. May the doctor confirm that it was a benign polyp in her colon?
“Where did you get money, Atsuko?” her mother asked in low voice.
Atsuko blinked. When they eyes meet, it seems that her mother would cry anytime.
“Who give you the money? W-What’s the exchange of it? ”
“Mom…”
“Tell me the truth, Atsuko. Don’t ever lie to me. Do you…..” her mother can’t continue on what she was saying because she was crying.
It seems that her voice clogged in her throat because of the worriedness and hurt she saw in her mother. Atsuko understand on what her mother was thinking. As a mother- that cared so much to her child- she knows that it’s very hurtful to know that Atsuko exchange herself in her health. Atsuko hug her mother.
“I didn’t do anything wrong, Mom. The money is from the friend of Haruna’s boss. Do you remember Oshima Yuko-san? I borrowed it from her friend. It’s a debt. She didn’t ask for an exchange, believe me.” Oh, there’s one thing, she make me a white lady.
“Is it true?”
“Yes, Mom,”
Atsuko told her Mom, what Haruna is doing. She is in good hands. Atsuko knows her mother didn’t skeptical to her.
“You know that I can’t keep secrets to you when I do wrong.” She said and parted their hug.
Her mother smiled. Atsuko knows her mother believe on her. Whenever she was with her mother, Atsuko knows that she can face and overcome whatever trials it is.
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your name really caught my attention atsumina048 :on lol:
interesting start :hehehe:
cant wait to read next part :on gay:
please update, i like this story :twothumbs
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You caught my attention so continue this please...thanks
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your name really caught my attention atsumina048 :on lol:
interesting start :hehehe:
cant wait to read next part :on gay:
please update, i like this story :twothumbs
please update :inlove:
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hoping for an update!
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fanfic muito boa :D :D :thumbup
atualize por favor!!!!!!!!
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author-san, I really hope you will update this fic soon >.<
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Announcement:
Ah~ it's been a long time since i update my fic. its been one and half month (i guess haha or more than that). But don't worry minna the next chapter of this is already done now and i just need to type it. And guess what i'm too lazy to type it hahaha gomen ne minna *kneelbow*
But i promise that this month i update it, so just sit back and relax
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@liabont: Eh~ but i already change my username from iamnot_glad
@amachan & noah minami & Archer1992 : don't worry minna the next chaptet is done now , i just need to type it
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Hello there! :D I read this already but just drop a comment this time..
Okay now I'm eagerly waiting for the update to be posted XD
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Hello there! :D I read this already but just drop a comment this time..
Okay now I'm eagerly waiting for the update to be posted XD
yeah, i'll wait also for updates :cow:
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@ atsukojiyuu_C: I hope you enjoy the chapter 5 :lol: :lol:
@ Justqle: You too, please enjoy
Sorry for the long wait, here's the chapter 5. :lol: :lol:
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Chapter V: Second meeting
Conference Room
"Well, we must not get surprised. AKB Construction is famous for our best quality projects. That's why were on top, aren't we?" Mariko said the big boss of AKB Const. and over two decades friend of Takamina, Yuko and Yukirin.
"I agree. Not to mention that our client now is good-payer" Yukirin said
"Of course, they are rich" Takamina replied
"So what's your decision Mariko? Is it me or Takamina do the plan this time?" Yuko asked.
When Takamina heards her name, she automatically raised her head.
(Flashback)
Her friends, Mariko, Yuko and Yukirin, consecutively enter in the office. She purposely because she felt she was going crazy if she stayed in her house. After she and Haruna talked last night, she just wastes her time staring to Atsuko's picture. Takamina think that she was crazy and can't understand herself. There's only one face in her mind all night. It is always replay in her mind what happen in the room that night.
"Ne, Takamina." Mariko said ""
"Earth to Takamina." Yuko said
But she didn't answered. Her friends just laugh. She moaned in irritation.
"You're snobbish today, Takamina" Yukirin said
"I noticed that, too!" Second by Yuko
"Yeah, I also noticed that you're gawk for almost a week. Do you have a problem, Takamina?" Mariko-sama asked
Compared to those two, there's no tease in Mariko-sama's voice. Concerned was evident in her eyes. Minami breathe deeply. When she look to Yuko and Yukirin, their face become serious.
‘Sh*t!!’
A silence filled the room. The are looking to Minami and wait for her to talk. She didn't want to tell them what she feels right now, not now. She just keep silent and her friends just shrugged their own shoulders.
"Okay, back to work" Mariko-sama said.
‘Phew!! That one is close.’ She sigh
"Yuko, you're in charge for the plan of the house for our client. Talk to him for details. Check it with Takamina after. I have a feeling that our client can't understand her right now." Mariko said smiling. "She might draw a wrong house."
Yuko and Yukirin chuckled.
After a few instruction that Mariko-sama gave, they faced there office works. When the coffee break arrived, Minami just stay at the front of her laptop while her three friends are happily talking. But they suddenly stop. When Mariko-sama coughed, Minami found out that she's just staring at the screen. Her fingers were freezed in the keyboard. Minami looked to them. They have the same appearance– standing and holding a mug of coffee while looking at her.
"WHAT?!?" She roared, the reason for the three of them to burst into laugh.
No one answered. Minami sighed. She can't control to voice out the question that lingering in her mind all day.
"Is there a really a one-of-a kind woman? I mean, they're just the same right?" Her friends jaw dropped. And a loud laugh filled the room.
‘Ok. I've got enough.’ Minami stand to leave her friends. But Yukirin called her...
"Mayu is different from all the woman I met, Takamina." She said, talking about her girlfriend.
"So is Haruna," Yuko said in serious tone.
Minami looked to them. Their face are serious. ‘Seriously?’
Mariko-sama coughed. "Mii-chan too," she said, "But it's not really the person, Takamina. It's how you feel for them makes the difference."
"Yeah, maybe..." Minami agreed. She continue her walks toward the door.
"This is the day I told you, Takamina" Yuko said. "The day when the heart of AKB's general manager fall to a person."
"I think I'm inlove... I think I'm inlove..." Mariko-sama sing
They all laughed again.
Minami slammed the door loud.
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"Takamina, let's go"
Minami snapped out when Yukirin tapped her table.
"Is it already lunch?" She said and looked to her wristwatch. "It's only eleven o'clock."
"What lunch? We have a meeting. Only the two of us left here. I just called Mayu."
"Okay." Minami said and take her things that needed for the meeting.
Flashback end.
The meeting ends fast. Mariko- sama just gave some updates and talk to other engineers to present the development to other projects. After the talking thingy, the others leave. But Mariko-sama says that the three of them must stay.
"Mari-chan~ I talked to our client's secretary and she said that one of us must go to Kyoto. His secretary said that she can't give the right description over the phone. She said that her boss have an activity that he can't left." Explained by Yuko
Minami raise her head. "Kyoto? Is Mr. Kuramochi that you're talking about." She asked. Just the name of that place, makes her excited and makes her heart beat faster.
"Yes. He's planning to have a vacation house there. He's impressed in our performance in Kyoto so that's why he wants AKB to handle the project." Mariko-sama answered and turn to Yuko. "Can you leave you bar, Yuk—"
"I can go!!" Minami said stand up and raise her hand
The three of them look to her. Maybe because of the strange things she said. Mariko-sama stared at her. Minami knows that it's not big deal to
Mariko-sama if she precede her, she knows how great Minami in designing. Both of her and Yuko is great, so it doesn't matter whoever go to Kyoto.
Yuko shrug her shoulders. "That's okay for me. After work, I'm close supervision to my bar today."
"Okay. So it's decided that Takamina were the one who go to Kyoto."
"Visit Atsuko and give news about her to Haruna" Yuko said
Minami look to Yuko.
She's grinning and looks like she read something in Minami's eye.
‘Did she notice what I'm going to do?’
Minami swallow.
"Ara~ it looks like you visit her even if I didn't remind you" Yuko said. And look to Mariko-sama and Yukirin who just stare at each other.
"Just go back to work," Mariko said in formal tone. "Stop teasing Takamina."
‘I'll see you, Atsuko...’ Minami thought.
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Atsuko's mother can discharged now so she's here now, finding a job for them. She thanked God because He answered her prayers. Her mother is recovered now. If it didn't treated immediately, in just few months, it might develop to a cancer. The money that Minami gave is not enough for them since she paid for the hospital bills, tests and medicine. So that's why, she was finding a job.
She breathe deeply when she arrived at the hospital. Her mother must not know that she was worried. It might caused her to be sick again. When Atsuko's walking in the hallway, she practiced her smile. She breathe deeply again and ready her smile. She open the door and said...
"Hi, Mom" she said with a big smile on her face.
"Oh, Acchan. It's good that you came back early. A certain someone is waiting for you. She's almost here for an hour."
"Hmm... Who is it?" she look to the direction where her mother is looking.
Atsuko was surprised when she saw the person her mother talking about— it's... it's her. It's Minami. Her heart beat faster, when she saw the smiling Minami. She feel weak after seeing her so she hold the side of the door.
Minami continue smiling while Atsuko is in shock state.
"How are you, Acchan?"
'Please heart, stop beating so fast.'
"Minami..." it didn't go out from her mouth. She didn't expect that the person, who is always in her mind after a short time of being together, are now in the same room with her.
"She said that she's your friend, Atsuko" her mother said "Why you look so surprised? Is she an alien from other planet."
[A/N: Kyaaaaa!!! How I love 'My love from another star'... I imagined Takamina as Do Min Joon. So kakkooiii!!! *fangirling*HEHE]
Minami laugh softly. Her mother look to Minami and also laugh. Atsuko's cheek become red.
"Based on your reactions, I'm right that she's not just a friend." Her mother stare to Minami. "I know all the friends of my daughter so you're not one of them. I just didn't comment because you didn't intenden to visit her if you didn't know her."
"Mom, stay still. You might get relapsed because of you're dialogue." Atsuko said and walked next to her mother.
Her mother smiled.
Minami brought the chair next to her. "Take a sit. You seems so tired." Minami said
Atsuko smiled (hesistant. "T-Thank you," she said but didn't sit. "How did you know that were here and—"
"It's easy for me," she said smiling to stop what Atsuko gonna ask. "Mr. Kuramochi is our client at AKB. I came from her office a while ago. Work, you know..."
"Ah..."
Why she wants to be sad when she knows that Minami didn't intended to visit her at Kyoto. She dismissed that thought in her mind.
"Is Mr. Sano Kuramochi you're talking about?" Her mother asked.
"Yes, ma'am. He's our client in the company that I work." Minami answered.
Her mother wants to ask another question but she cut it.
"She's Takahashi Minami, Mom. The friend of Oshima-san." She said introducing Minami to her mother.
"Oshima-san—" her mother freeze and stare to Minami.
Maybe she remembered who is their visitor now.
"You, you are..." her mother whispered. Her eyes is in moist.
When Atsuko look to Minami she was swallowed. She was worry when her mother was about to cry. And look to Atsuko, only to blame her because she didn't introduced Minami first. And look again to Minami with a tears in her face.
"I don't know how to thank you..." her mother said crying.
"Please don't cry Maeda-san. It might cause pain to you." Minami said while holding the hands of Atsuko's mother. "Don't think about it Maeda-san. The important is you are ok now."
Her mother burst in tears when she heard that. Minami hug her mother. There's a warm hand touched her heart with the scene. She knows that Minami is a very kind person.
"Acchan, call the doctors." Minami look to her with a concern eyes.
Her mother didn't stop crying.
Atsuko smiled in between tears. "Mom, you scared her."
After a few moments, her mother finally stop.
"I'm sorry..." her mother said while wiping her tears.
"She's just emotional." Atsuko said to Minami. "She's okay now. We can be discharge tomorrow." She said smiling.
"That's good to hear." Minami smiled. "Get well soon, Maeda-san."
And there's a knocked to a door. When Atsuko opened it, she saw the friends of her mother.
"Oh, they're here! Atsuko take Takahashi-san outside so you can talk alone. We have to talk about something important." Her mother said smiling.
Atsuko just smiled. "Let's just leave them." She said to Minami and casually grab Minami's arm.
Minami let Atsuko take her arm. She smiled. "Let's go eat, Acchan. I'm hungry."
Before Atsuko can answer, Minami hold her hands and leave the hospital. There's a electricity that run from her body when Minami gently squeezed her hand that she's holding.
"Take me wherever, Acchan. Just make sure the food is delicious. I want something hot."
"Even if it's a cheap resto?"
"Anywhere." ‘As long as I'm with you.’ Minami thought.
"Okay." Atsuko smiled.
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TBC :?
The next chapter is Atsumina's date and Takamina's thought about Acchan
Sorry for the spoil :P :P :P
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Finally an update, thank you author-san hehe :grin:
Please update soon :twothumbs
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Well I enjoyed this chap so much!! XD XD
Yuko you such a tease! :lol: poor takamina hhahaha
Yeah next Atsumina's date~~ wondering if there will be a double date with Kojiyuu for the further~~
Thankyou for update author-san, now I'll waiting again for the next :D :D
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Ah... Minami is visiting Atsuko...
What is it that Atsuko's mom discussing with her friends while Atsuko is out with Minami?
Would minami and Atsuko be together?
Would Minami have the courage to confess her feeling to Atsuko, vice verse?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you
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finally you updated author-san! and finally takamina met acchan again XD XD
i love your story :twothumbs
update soon! can't wait to see Atsumina's date :wub:
yohohohoh update soon update soon :cow:
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finally!
another atsumina fanfic :otomerika:
i found this story so interesting.
so atsuko sell her body to takamina?
and who is takamina? she is a photographer or taking a pic is her hobby?
i kindda confuse about that,can u help me there author-san? :?
sorry for my bad english -bow-
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TAkamina just tell your feeling already
Update soon
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Kakeru15 & Justqle: Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoy this chapter. :roll: :roll:
atsukojiyuu_C: If I can, I try write a bit of Kojiyuu. But who knows?? Hahaha :D :D
cisda83: You're such a paranoid person. But in a good way~ XD XD XD Just stay tune.. ;) ;)
ryu201: Let's just say Acchan think about that but no, Takamina didn't take her body because she was desparate. Takamina still have heart you know... :lol: :lol: Takamina is not a photographer, it just her hobby. She's an architect, (I guess :lol: :lol:)
Kirozoro: Don't be so rush. Takamina is still confused with her feelings to Acchan.. :) :)
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Chapter VI: First Date
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Atsuko was happy seeing Minami eating happily. She didn't expect Minami was so enthuastic at the food. Even if it's a cheap resto.
Her mother knows the owner of the resto. So even if it's cheap, she was sure that it was clean. Not to mention that the food was really delicious.
"What is it?" Minami ask when she saw Atsuko staring at her. "Don't just stare at me. You should also eat."
Atsuko smiled. "Nothing. I was just thinking that you also eat the food of the poor."
Minami stop from her eating. Her eyebrows met and looks like she didn't like what Atsuko said. But then she smiled.
"What are you talking about? It's just the ambience that makes other restaurant differ. They're also the same, to make people not hungry."
"I thought—"
"Your thought is wrong, so stop that." Minami stop her. "BTW the food is delicious. You know this is my lunch for today."
"What? Lunch? But it's almost three o'clock!"
"It just that I'm busy from my work. And I'm also waiting for you. Do you remember when we eat at my house? Your appetite is so contagious."
"Eeh?!? You're just shy to tell me that I'm such a glutton." Atsuko said pouting.
Minami laugh and pinch the tip of her nose. "I missed you so much..."
Atsuko left agape on what Minami said. Her heart beat really fast. She can't talk and just stare at the smaller girl. She feels so good. Like there's many angels singing to her.
‘Minami missed me.’
"Before you left, I told you to call me. But you didn't, even text." Minami said pouting.
Atsuko swallowed. In fact, she tried many times but she was shy enough to call her. She wants that, if she called Minami she can atleast give a small amount of money to her.
"I'm shy to you. I don't have money to pay you so—"
"Acchan, you just call me, not to pay me. And most likely, I didn't ask you to pay me."
"Even so..."
Minami sigh. "I didn't want you to be shy at me. Put it out, or else, I'll sue you a—"
"You wouldn't win." Atsuko said smiling, cutting the smaller girl from what she was going to say.
"And why not?"
"Because I won't run from my debt to you. I'm willing to pay. No one gonna sue because of the debt that didn't neglect and run from it."
Minami groan. "You know everything. I'll use my connections." She grin. "I even made Yuko and Haruna get married."
Atsuko groan. Haruna told her about the marriage Minami talking about. Haruna followed her advice but she didn't expect that Oshima-san is the one who was going to save her.
Minami smiled. "So, are you gonna be shy to me?"
"Yes!"
"Oh, you!" Minami look to Atsuko that she wanna kill her. She even gesture threateningly
of strangle that make Atsuko laugh.
Atsuko continue to eat. Hiding the happiness that she feels. She was very happy because she was with Minami.
"By the way, where are you came from a while ago?" Minami ask.
"I'm looking for a job. My mother is going to discharge tomorrow and beside we even going to pay you. I'm not allowing my mom to work again so I need to do a way." Atsuko said and look away.
Atsuko didn't know what Minami have that it's easy for her to say all the things she experienced. Maybe because she knows that Minami is a good person.
"So, you found a job?"
Atsuko stop eating because of the question. She suddenly became sad. What could happened to them if she didn't found a job. Her savings are not enough with all the expenses they have so she needed a job where the salaries is high enough for them.
"I think it's a no." Minami answered to her own question. "You know, I can offer you a job."
She just look to Minami with a confused face.
"You're graduate from highschool right?"
"Un." Atsuko answered. 'So Minami remembered what I told her about myself that night.'
"You can go to AKB. We are hiring because Mari~chan's secretary are going to retired. Or in HOH foundation?!?"
"HOH?!?"
"Hands of Heaven. My older sister is the director there. I can recommend you or hired you, even tomorrow."
"Do you have a foundation?"
Minami smiled. "Why? It's not obvious that I am a kind and generous person? It's in my face, right? Or you didn't notice it?"
Atsuko just stared to Minami. She didn't know what to say.
'Haruna said that Minami is richer than Oshima~san? How rich is this girl?'
"You know, it's rude to stare people. Your looks is like passing in my soul. Why? Ask me anything you want to know."
"Ah, gomen. Your family have a business right? Why you are in AKB?"
"I'm working for my family's business, too. I'm a silent partner of Juri, my younger sister. I simply rejected the position." Minami simpled answer. "She said that besides that I look like an angel, I also have a traits of an angel so if I'm the boss the employees might get abusive." She said and laugh. "My dad and Juri operate our family business. They are great leaders. They are strict but fair. They just stare and they can bind all the employees. I'm not effective on that. Besides I love architecture. AKB Corp. handle all the projects of my dad, from condominium, building to residential houses, we handled it."
"Your father is a real state developer?" Shock was seen on taller girl face.
"Yeah~" Minami said that it looks like nothing to her and then she continue to eat.
'Haruna is wrong. This girl is not just rich, she's super rich. I felt really small around her.' Atsuko thought
"So, do you accept my offer?" Minami said afterwards.
"I want to, but..."
"Acchan, look. If you are in Tokyo and got a work there, Haruna can take care of your mom. Let's presume that that you got a job here, but who's gonna look and take care of your mom?"
Atsuko think. Minami is right. Added that she can have a large chance to get a better job in Tokyo.
'But why Minami said that Haruna can take care of my mom?'
Minami answered her thought. "There's a vacant room in my house. You can stay there 'temporarily'."
"E-Eto... A-Ahmm..."
"Don't worry. I won't give the room for free so you don't have to be shy. Consider yourself a lessee. If you can't pay, be my cook then. If Haruna is not there, I don't have a decent meal. I'm scared that she might get tired to cook food for me." Minami said and laugh.
Atsuko still didn't react.
"I just don't want to hired a maid because I don't want anyone witness my insanity. And if she's young and single, she might rape me." Minami laugh again, this time much louder.
Atsuko laugh with Minami. With her looks and status, it can actually happen.
"Do you know how to cook?" Minami ask afterwards.
"Of course. It's my specialty."
"Great! Decide now. I included you with your mom when I go back to Tokyo tomorrow."
"You're not afraid that me or my mom will rape you?" Atsuko said jokingly.
Minami choked. "Eh? I didn't even think about that?" She smiled. "But if it happen, and if it's you, I willingly accept it." Minami wink and laugh.
Atsuko blush and look down. And she said...
"I'm going to ask my mom first, Minami."
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TBC... :? :? :?
I try to update the part 2 later, or tomorrow evening.
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Minami is so rich huh... better than Yuko
Would Atsuko accept the job?
Would Atsuko's mother okay with Minami and Atsuko together?
When will Atsuko and Minami get together?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
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Yey! An update!
Ah~ souka!
So takamina purely want help acchan here?
Yokatta! I thought u will make my takamina become super heartless person here :sweat:
Well takamina always be kind person right? :hee:
Heh~ takamina so rich huh?
I cant imagine how rich she is here?
But will acchan's mother want to come with acchan to stay in tokyo together with takamina without any suspicious? :mon yo:
But wait! U said takamina desperate? Why she desparate?
Am i missing something? Should i re-read this fanfic again? :grr: :mon huh:
Whoa! Without realize i ask too much!
Gomen author-san but i cant help it,u and ur fanfic make me so curious :mon sweat:
Hehehe! Keep updating author-san.
I waiting u ^^
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jejejejej minami... you want that atsuko rape you, don´t you?
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Lol Minami y are u mention rape there....oh i see what u did there
They going to live together
Update soon
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takamina has different character here, seems like prestige person not baka as usually :lol:
owh so takamina will recruit acchan? great :twothumbs with that they can be closer :whistle:
i hope acchan will do well :yep:
But wait! U said takamina desperate? Why she desparate?
yeah because while acchan goes to take care of her mother in hospital, she never contact takamina eventhough she has her number. maybe that's why heheh ..
yokai update soon ne author-san :cow: :twothumbs
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This is not like the takamina we know but is cool
Thanks
Continue soon
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PLESE UPDATE IT SOON CA'T WAIT FOR THE CHAPTER :rikabunny :onionwhip:
:ptam-mad: :ptam-mad: :ptam-mad:
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Surprise!!! :hee: :hee: :hee: :hee:
As I promise to a certain someone that I'm gonna update this fic. So please enjoy :on gay: :on gay:
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Chapter VII
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Atsuko's POV
Minami want to go to hospital to say goodbye to my mom but I stop her. Knowingly my mom, she won't stop thanking Minami and might talk to her the whole day. Me and my mom should talk about Minami's offer.
"Eh?!? You're just pushing me away." Minami whine.
They were walking side by side to the parking area.
I rolled my eyes. How can I push her if I want to be with her and talked to her all day? If only she knows how many night I can't sleep because of the kiss were shared.
"Talk. You don't want to be with me?" Minami held my hand.
I blush and I can't answer. I don't have enough courage to confess my real feelings to her. Not here, not now.
Minami saw me blushing. She smiled amusingly while looking intently to my eyes. As we arrive at her car, she lean at the side of the car. Not letting go of my hand. She pulled me closer to her. I have a feeling that she heard my heartbeat.
"I really miss you." And then she take my hands to her chest. "Can you feel that?"
I swallowed when I feel the intense beat of her heart. I want to look away but there's like a magnet in her eyes that attract me to look at her. I couldn't look down.
"You, Acchan, do you miss me? Or even remember me?"
"M-Minami..."
"Answer me." She whispered to my ears.
My knees turn into jellies. She smiled that makes her look like an angel to me. Instead of answering her, I hug her. My head rested on her shoulder feels so right. I don't want this to end.
"A-Acchan..." she moaned and hugs me back tightly.
I can't explain the happiness that I felt. It's so unbelievable that this person that I'm hugging right now give me so much happiness.
Are we just close because we sleep next to each other even if there's nothing happened between us? The kiss that she give me to, is there a meaning? But in his own mouth came that there's no meaning in that kiss. Is it okay if I expect more?
I raised my head. But before I open my mouth, Minami kiss me. I automatically closed my eyes. Now that I'm here kissing this person, I know that I yearn for her kiss again and again.
My worries were flown away by wind when I feel the sensation of her kiss. In my closed eyes, I see myself in fairytale land, only the two of us is there, we shared the beautiful scene and nothing compared joy.
Minami kiss deepened. Moan let our in her mouth. I don't know how to counterfeit her kiss. Her tongue search mine. When she did, she played and tasted it. Then she withdrew and kissed me again. I need to hold her back because I have a feeling that I might drown. I can't understand if I push or hug her.
"Be still..." she said and give a distance between us. She caressed my hair to calm me. "And let me kiss you. The feeling of missing you is driving me insane, Acchan."
And she kiss me again.
I didn't force myself to understand her, but I answer her kiss passionately.
Like what happened before, we ended up standing there while she was holding me. Caressing my hair.
"M-Minami..."
"Hmm..."
"I should go now." I said.
She just nod but didn't let me go.
Minami's POV
'What's these feelings? What's happening to me?'
These questions keeps repeating in my mind when I'm hugging Atsuko. I was feeling a strong nameless emotions that seemed to conquer my whole being. I have also a feeling that this emotion can control me.
In my past affairs, emotion is not included. I could hold, kiss, and say goodbye to any girl I dated after my need was satisfied. I could walk out without looking back. Because before I go into any relationship, I cleared that I don't want any commitment. I don't want them to expect more in our relationship where in last they demand more. I'm not ready for that and I still didn't found the person that I love. People were all the same. There is no special person. They are all the same— just an affair.
But Acchan was different. She have a strong impact when I first met her. My heart beat really fast. This girl, that it's hard for me to forget. This girl that I'm hugging right now. This girl that I can't let easily go. I have a feeling that there's a large piece in my being was missing if she's gone to my life. I feel incomplete when I can't see her.
Dammit, why am I feeling this way? I'm just with her for only one night and nothing happened between us but she have a big effect on me. I feel like her kisses were touching my very soul.'
"M-Minami..." Acchan murmured
She move to give us a distance but I hug her tightly. She became quiet. I kiss her in her forehead. That was new to me, too. There's no one I kissed in forehead. There's no I hugged for a long moments and didn't think what could happen next.
With Acchan it was different. I just want to hug her because I respect her so much. I want to take care of her. I'm happy just to hug her. The feeling was wonderful. And everything around us was beautiful.
I desired her, yes. In fact it was strong. Even my self control was too strong when I'm with Atsuko.
Atsuko was special.
'Special?' Said the other voice in my head. 'Do you hear yourself, Minami? You're out of your mind. You're not the same anymore. What's happening to you? And what's that feeling? Do you know what it is?'
'Love perhaps?'
'Love? Oh, c'mon! In just two days, you can say you love her? Hah! You don't even know what the word means? Dump her and get over your feelings. That's what you want right?'
Atsuko moved. Her eyes met mine. When our eyes met, she smiled gently. With that gesture, she made me love her more.
"I think my mom is looking for me now, Minami..."
"You sleep in hospital?"
Atsuko nod. She raised her one hand cupped my face. There's a hand that gently touch my heart. I want to kiss her again but I control myself. If I kissed her again, there's a big chance that I won't let her go again. I could easily push her inside my car but I won't do that to Atsuko.
"We tend to sleep next to each other. But I would sleep in couch." She said smiling. "So you can go now. We have to talk about your offer."
"Okay." Then I parted our hug.
"Take care." She said softly and gently kiss my cheek.
Atsuko turn back and walk away.
'Turn around, Acchan.' I said in my mind while I watching her back. 'Come back and hugged me again like what you did that morning in my house.'
"Minami..."
I felt my heart melted when she looked back. She was smiling while running back to me. Acchan hug me tightly.
I replied her hug and I close my eyes.
'Oh my, Acchan...'
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I know it's a short update :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:
You can kill me now XD XD XD
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AH... minami and Atsuko so cute together....
Like it how everything progressing between Atsumina
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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This story is just too awesome
I really like it
I love the relationship the have now but i hope that one of the two
Tell her feelings to the other
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Update!! :on gay:
THANK U, for remembering :omamori:
So Minami wants to push Acchan in her car and never let go :ding:
Takamina had lots of different girlfriends in the pass to satisfy her needs :shock: :shy1:
Acchan !! U SHOULD JUST RUN AWAY WITH TAKAMINA AND LIVE HAPPY EVER AFTER...... :smoke:
Anyways, again Thx for the update, and hope.I see u soon :stuffed: :on drink: :kneelbow:
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Coooll update. My atsumina feelings is growing ! ! waiting for next update xD
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I really enjoy the story, i hope you update soon :)
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Just discovered this fic...waaahhhhhh! Author-san your fic is sooOoooo interesting! :inlove:
Please update! Though I know it's been more than a year I hope you won't leave us hanging here... :cry: :cry: :cry:
Hope to read the continuation! :heart:
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AH... minami and Atsuko so cute together....
Like it how everything progressing between Atsumina
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs