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STORY COLLECTION:
ONESHOTS/DRABBLES:
Center of my Heart (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1069077#msg1069077)
You and me Against the WORLD (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1132334#msg1132334)
Drabble #1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1165780#msg1165780)
The Outside World (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1189720#msg1189720)
Drabble #2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1202460#msg1202460)
Unrequired Love (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1254525#msg1254525)
SHORT/LONG STORIES:
Problems for 1 Month (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1069480#msg1069480)[HIATUS, Atsumina]
HISASHIBURI [ STOPPED , Atsumina MANGA] [update for this manga is long. 12 pages update] [Last update 05/27/13]
Hisashiburi Chapter 1 - Guilty Feeling (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1188479#msg1188479)
Chapter 2 PREVIEW (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1199202#msg1199202)
PROTO:[ SROPPED ](SCI-FI,ADVENTURE)
PROTO Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1175535#msg1175535)
PROTO Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1177702#msg1177702)
PROTO Chapter 3 - Now Entering PROTO (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1180643#msg1180643)
PROTO Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1183589#msg1183589)
PROTO Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1185773#msg1185773)
PROTO Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1188084#msg1188084)
PROTO Chapter 7 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1190733#msg1190733)
PROTO Chapter 8 part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1192405#msg1192405)
PROTO Chapter 8 part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1192832#msg1192832)
PROTO Chapter 9 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1195012#msg1195012)
Pinky Swear:[ STOPPED ,Atsumina](ROMANCE,TRAGEDY)
Pinky Swear Prologue - A Promise from the past (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1144195#msg1144195)
Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1144831#msg1144831)
Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1145187#msg1145187)
Pinky Swear Chapter 3 - Etiolated Memory (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1158715#msg1158715)
Rainy Winter Season: [COMPLETED ,Atsumina](ROMANCE,SLICE OF LIFE)
Rainy Winter season (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1077711#msg1077711)
Rainy Winter Season part 2 - Letter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1098149#msg1098149)
Rainy Winter Season part 3 - Elope (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1101942#msg1101942)
Rainy Winter Season part 4 - Let's Start Here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1112633#msg1112633)
Rainy Winter Season part 5 - A Painful Decision (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1113190#msg1113190)
Rainy Winter Season LAST PART - Kiss me and Never let me go (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1116139#msg1116139)
My Pet Lover: [COMPLETED , Kojiyuu + Takayuu](ROMANCE,SUPERNATURAL)
My Pet Lover Prologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1120112#msg1120112)
My Pet Lover part 1 - Transformation (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1122634#msg1122634)
My Pet Lover part 2 - I am Happy (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1123738#msg1123738)
My Pet Lover part 3 - 2 Meters Away (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1126105#msg1126105)
My Pet Lover part 4 - Strange Feeling (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1126657#msg1126657)
My Pet Lover part 5 - Hopeless Dog (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1128277#msg1128277)
My Pet Lover part 6 - It's not That Easy... (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1131034#msg1131034)
My Pet Lover part 7 - A Help from you (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1134580#msg1134580)
My Pet Lover part 8 - Over Acting Yuko (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1135481#msg1135481)
My Pet Lover part 9 - Their Encounter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1138531#msg1138531)
My Pet Lover part 10 -The Happiness that I will Never Forget (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1141807#msg1141807)
My Pet Lover part 11 - My Guardian Angel (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1149654#msg1149654)
My Pet Lover part 12 - So Long! (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1158459#msg1158459)
Center of My Heart [ONE SHOT]
"Love....many people say that "love is the most important thing in their life.Someday I hope
I feel that kind of sensation about love..."
Acchan....
Wake up...
Acchan:Hrmm...
???:Mornin'!
Acchan:Takamina...
Acchan:*smiles*Morning to you too *leans on takamina's shoulder*
Takamina:A-acchan?It's too early for this...
Acchan:Ne...We don't often spend our time together you know?
Takamina:...yeah...
Acchan:1 month 'till that big event,right?
Takamina:..huh?oh the Tokyo Dome?yeah...it's so near...
Acchan:yeah...and so is....my graduation...
Takamina:(....)
Acchan:whenever I hear that thing..I always think on what is going to
happen on my new journey...
Takamina:(....)
Acchan:but the thing that I think most is that...
Takamina:(....)
Acchan:....can I still spend so many times with you?
Takamina:...uh..
Acchan:...the more I think about it the more I want to spend time with you
in this days lately,"I want to create many memories with Takamina"
that was the thing I always think after I announced my graduation.
Takamina:...But we did create many memories together...
Acchan:Yeah...but those memories are not enough...
* Takamina suddenly hugs acchan
Acchan:eh?
Takamina:Look...Just because your leaving in AKB...doesn't mean I'm letting you go..
Acchan:(.....)
Takamina:...And even if we don't see each other often after your graduation I will
still find many ways just to see and hear your voice....
*Acchan suddenly sheds a tear on takamina's shoulder*
Takamina: and always remember......no matter what happens.....You will always be....
the Center of my heart...
Acchan:yeah....I will
*then kiss~
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Yeah kinda shot ne? by the way Imma new member :3 so...Mai-chan here~! you can also call me "Yedz" if you want
too~!
Yoroshikunegaishimasu! :D :peace:
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iyeeey!! Welcome yedz!! :heart: :heart:
love this 1 shot.. hope to see more of your stories! :thumbsup
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Takamina: and always remember......no matter what happens.....You will always be....
the Center of my heart...
OMG!! THIS PART!!! :frustrated: It gave me goosebumps!!! :on freeza: AND LIKE IT!!!! :on lol:
need more of this.. :ding:
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welcome to the fanfic land!
your fic is short yet so sweet..
pliz write more stories..
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@Keisthename: wehehe~ :shy2: a comment from a great atsumina writer like you is very awesome~ thank you~! and yes I will create more stories~! :D
@Flean: hehe~ I also love that part >///< and yea~! I'll give you more of this :)
@yukofan Thank you very much~!!! *flutter**flutter* and yeah~! I'll create more stories :DD
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Welcome Mai-chan :welcome
Like your fic :wub: ~Center of My Heart~ :wub:
It's short but I love it~
Taka is being cheesy here XD
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awww minami.. you are a sweet talker :D
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@Ichikawa Thank you for the warm welcome~!!! & thnx for reading it ><
@Haruko the problem is she's hiding her affection to acchan in public OTL thnx for reading~! :)
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What is this? Why I'm being late reading this atsumina fic :banghead:
I felt I'm been gone too long in my vacation :fainted:
Thank you for writing such sweet story.. another atsumina madness yey!
btw welcome here :kneelbow:
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Welcome!
There can't be too many AtsuMina!
:kneelbow:
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@miayaka It's ok XD btw thanks for the warm welcome :3 :bows:
@megumi hahaha thanks for the warm welcome by the way~! :D
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ooooooh kawaii XD
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Thank you for this one shot!it was great! Please write some others^^ :twothumbs
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RAINY WINTER SEASON Lists of parts:
Rainy Winter season (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1077711#msg1077711)
Rainy Winter Season part 2 - Letter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1098149#msg1098149)
Rainy Winter Season part 3 - Elope (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1101942#msg1101942)
Rainy Winter Season part 4 - Let's Start Here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1112633#msg1112633)
Rainy Winter Season part 5 - A Painful Decision (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1113190#msg1113190)
Rainy Winter Season LAST PART - Kiss me and Never let me go (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1116139#msg1116139)
Yeah~ 2nd short fan fic.~!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Thank you for those who voted in the poll~!It made me inspired and typed the short fic. right away~!! :onionwhip:
Atsumina's love for each other is just to powerful ne~? :bingo:
Oh and if you would like to~! hear listen to this BGM while reading the fan fic to make it more dramatic?
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni - Yours - Gray EP (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SzscpI1vcBk#)
bahaha WTH am I saying? :on lol: you could not listen if you want to~!This is a free country you can do what ever you want~! (yeah right. :bored:)
So anyways~!!Enjoy the new fan fiction entitled....
"Rainy Winter Season"
My name is Takahashi Minami and I'm just a normal girl with a normal attitude *I guess... everyday is just a normal day to me here in our school,right now I am walking home in this rainy season here in Japan,it's kind of weird actually!that in the winter season the whole week we felt was just pure rain and the large windy storm, also today is Christmas Eve.Nature sure is weird sometimes.As I walk on my way home I saw a girl soaking wet,she has a shoulder length hair,she is holding not one but two umbrellas! yet she is not using it but just holding it.Her head is looking up straight to the sky,her eyes are closed,both of her hands are widely open and her lips is smiling.It's the first time I saw somebody did this kind of thing in real life,I only saw this on dramas but now I can see it in front of my eyes.I can't help but to ask the short-haired girl on why she is doing that and so I asked her.as she hears my voice she puts both of her hands down and so is her head,as she looks at me suddenly my heart pumped.I have never felt this kind of thing in my life before,her eyes were sparkling,her smile is appealing and her body posture is just beautiful,It's like I saw an angel coming down from heaven.The girl asks on why I called her and so I just said to her "Are you ok?is there anything bothering you?"her face turned clueless by my question and so she said to me with a honest tone of voice "No,I'm just enjoying the rain,wanna join me?"the girl is just so honest that I don't know if she is kidding me or just fooling around.I got all worried on her so I just shared my umbrella with her.As I did that to her I saw her smile once again and I was really happy that I saw that angelic smile once again.As I look back to her face once again, she said something to me,"Thank you for your concern but can you join me in this rain?"she suddenly invited me again to her doings earlier,I thought she was joking but I can see through her eyes that she is serious and so I dropped my umbrella down and as I did that she suddenly holds my hand and drags me along with her.
It's the first time someone did this to me and yet it is the best feeling that I felt so far in my whole life.Even though it's raining so hard it's like everything is so light, the way that I run was so light,My feet were synchronizing with the sound of her footsteps running through the heavy rain. I feel like I'm walking on a cloudy paradise with her but it's kind of weird because I just met this woman that is holding my hand and right now I'm instantly falling for her so quickly.The Rain is still pouring down heavily and finally we stopped running,as I look to the short haired girl I saw her looking at me too while smiling,her smile is indeed so beautiful I can watch this girl's smile everyday if I had too.She suddenly spoke and said to me "Why did you join me?"I got confused to her question and just honestly answered what most of the people I think will answer back by saying "Because you invited me!"not to be rude but that is the truth though!she suddenly laid another smile to her face and said "I see,Thank you."it was short yet full of sweetness as I heard it from her.I ended up blushing and made myself looked embarrassed at her but she just ignored my embarrassed face, suddenly the rain stops and the gloomy clouds were gone, the sun suddenly appeared but it was going to set down.The short-haired girl suddenly talked to me and said "Look at there" she pointed out on such a beautiful scenery,It was the most beautiful thing I saw in my very own eyes, "You know I've been waiting for you."I was shocked by those sudden words of hers, this was the first time I've met her but It made me think twice if I met her somewhere before and so I asked "Have we met before?" as I said those words she just chuckled a bit and made me more curious.She told me the reason on why she questioned that thing to me earlier, She said that she was doing this same thing over and over when it rains,she was waiting for someone to accompany her and she showed me the two umbrellas that I saw earlier,she said that it's not owned by her but by two kind-hearted persons,one was a High School girl and the other one was a High School boy.They also did the same thing when I saw this girl.I lent my umbrella to her and so she did the same procedure again but her invitation to the two were declined.The first one(H.S. girl) said that she is not in the mood for jokes and just gave her the extra umbrella that she has.The second one said that he is in a hurry and just gave his umbrella to the short-haired girl while running to his destination while soaking wet.I asked her on why is she doing this and for how long.She replied by saying "When my mother died."
I was shocked and out of words by the thing she said.I have no idea that she lost her mother and so I apologized to her but she said that I didn't do anything wrong,I asked her if where is her father and she said that she run away from her father because his with another woman.I was really shocked on her lifestyle.who would knew that the girl that I saw earlier smiling through the rain has a sad family background like that?I didn't hesitate but to hold both of her hands tightly and looked at her eyes straightly,she was utterly shocked but I just ignored her and said "Don't worry I'm here for you,I wont leave you no matter what." those words from a person that you meet for the first time is weird but right now I don't care about that I have the feeling that I want to protect her and free from those cage of darkness that she was trapped for so long.Suddenly she leans on my shoulder and cried,she lefts go off my hand and hugs me.I patted her back and said "Everything is ok you just need to let it all out."after I said that she let out a large uproar of crying through my shoulders,her hug was so tight I can hear her heart beating so fast and so is mine.I patted her back to let her pain go away,she suddenly lets go and stared at me,she smiled to me while she is crying,it's sad to look at but in the same time it can still make you smile.I wiped her tears from her cheeks and after i did that she suddenly said "It's so weird right?for us to do this physical interactions at the first time we met."her words made me chuckled and so do her."Hey let's spend Christmas Eve in our home!"I thought that I should invite her to go through our house to spend her Christmas Eve there than to celebrate it alone,she nod on a form of saying yes and so we head straight to my home to celebrate it.As we go to the downhill road she holds my hand all of a sudden and said "I almost forgot!My name is Maeda Atsuko!"as I heard her name my face automatically smiled,maybe it's because her name is good or in the way she introduced it.it's kind of funny though that it's too late for us to introduce with each other."My name is Takahashi Minami,it's nice meeting you Maeda-san!"as she hears my intro. she replied "You can call me Atsuko."her voice was shaky,maybe because she was nervous of saying it,it's kind of cute by the way."Ok then~!but you should call me Minami!"and so as I said those words I saw her beautiful smile once more"Alright Minami~!Korekaramo...yoroshiku ne!"her sweet and polite words are so good to hear and so I agreed on what she said and as our conversation finishes we held our hands together and walk down the downhill road in this Christmas Eve.Like I said Nature sure is weird sometimes!but in the end you will come back and thank for the things that it did to you.
END~???
It's like there should be a part two for this short fic. or something XDD I wonder~ NAH~ :bored:
well it depends if it's an audience demand :on lol:
and thanks for reading my piece of junk...I mean fan fiction~!!! :sweat:
that's all~ :kneelbow:
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aww sweet moment :D
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Sasuga!
Many atsumina stories here..
been gone for so long eh..
well am'back! :ding:
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I want part two~ please~ ^^
It's nice fic :thumbup
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Sasuga!
Many atsumina stories here..
been gone for so long eh..
well am'back! :ding:
hahaha~ Okaeri~
I want part two~ please~ ^^
It's nice fic :thumbup
I'll try working on it hehe DX
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i was reading the first one while listening to omoide no hotondo, i almost cried...
the story is short but so full of feelings :farofflook:
about the second one, the music choise was perfect, i always try to listen to something while i'm reading.
i'll be waiting for your next update :hee:
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i was reading the first one while listening to omoide no hotondo, i almost cried...
the story is short but so full of feelings :farofflook:
about the second one, the music choise was perfect, i always try to listen to something while i'm reading.
i'll be waiting for your next update :hee:
Sorry that I made you cry :sweat:
And thank you for listening to the music~! and also for reading~ :3
I'll be working on the next short story so please tune in~ :kneelbow:
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This fits my emotion right now.. as my oshimen graduates..
But still im supporting her and shipping atsumina all the way!
Thank you for this fic!
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This fits my emotion right now.. as my oshimen graduates..
But still im supporting her and shipping atsumina all the way!
Thank you for this fic!
Yeah...for some reason it kind of fits in her situation right now.also,I thank you too for reading this fiction.It has been awhile for me to see and
check if there are still many people that are reading my fiction.I will continue this story....someday but I'm still not sure when.again.thank you
for reading. :bows:
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Yey~!! from all the busy things I did in school I still got the enough time to make a part 2 for this short story~ :sweat:
many readers demanded for a part 2 in this short fic. saying that its so short and so here's the Part 2 of "Rainy Winter Season!"
also on the story I'm working on (Problems for 1 Month) has a possibility that it will be continued this week..IF!my brother installed
the drawing app that I need for the fiction.btw don't you think that fic. looks like a light novel? :on lol:
and btw! some people also suggest for me to put another soundtrack! :hee:
So here~!try listening to this while reading the fic. :kneelbow:
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni - Yours - Futari. Hitori (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLEncgZJzcY#)
Enjoy~~
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"Rainy Winter Season part 2"
It has been 7 and a half months since I've met Atsuko.I remember our first encounter with each other, on that rainy winter season it all changed in a single glance.
After she celebrated Christmas with me and mom,My mom decided to just let Atsuko stay in our house after she hears her family lifestyle.
Our relationship as friends grew much more, we shared stories with each other,go to different places together and have some sad and fun times together.But of all those
times that we spend together,I didn't even said the thing that I really want to say to her on the first time we met and that is the word.... "I love you",I know it's a short word
that consists of 3 words with 3 syllables but...you need to have a lot of courage to say it to the person that you love the most in your life.
"MINAMI~!!"as I think on my deepest thoughts at the school rooftop,I heard a certain voice that was calling me from afar.It was one of my most favorite voice in the whole
world and in my life.As that person came close to me, I wiped my sweat on my neck and in my face and get anything to be done to get ready to go home and after that as
that person approaches me,I gave a big smile as that person comes closer and closer."Uwah~!It's so hot!!well what am I talking about?It's summer duh!so let's go home?
"that person was Atsuko,a very childish girl with a big heart but still childish and yet she's still so cute at the same time,as she said those words I nodded my head in a form
of saying "yes" and we headed straight on our home.
"uwah~!!finally our summer school is over~ now we can enjoy our vacation this July huh?"
"yep!my brain really blow up the heat earlier in Math class."
"haha~ so am I~!plus the tension of the heat was so high!I mean literally!"
we shared our conversation with each other with some fun laughters and also some giggles until we reach our home.
"Tadaima~" we said together after entering the house.
"ah!Okaeri!" My mom replied,"Dinner's ready ok?I'll wait for you two to get changed."
As we went upstairs at our bedroom, we changed our clothes in to our daily clothes and after I'm done changing I look at Atsuko if she's also done changing her clothes but
she didn't even did any changing yet.
"Atsuko?what's wrong?is something bothering you?" I asked Atsuko while she's looking down on the floor looking like something's bothering her.Atsuko didn't replied to me
and didn't even gave a single glance to me.I suddenly clasped both of her hands and look to her eyes she didn't let go of my hands but she still didn't looked at me but on
the time our eyes met I saw her beautiful brown eyes making me blush a little but she looked away to me again,I didn't mind that I just said what my heart tells me to do.
"Tell me.What's bothering you?I can help you with that problem...Atsuko"I wait for her answer and so as she look to me she, inhaled some air looking like she's getting ready
to say something and then she suddenly said,
"Am I a bother to you...Minami?"
"What?there's no way that will happen.you're not bothering me Atsuko, and will never will be."
"...But what is this feeling inside me?I can't understand what it is but it hurts..."
Atsuko's tears suddenly roled on to her cheeks.I can't understand what's that weird feeling inside her but I want to let it go through her.I let go both of her hands and hugged
her tightly,she gripped my back letting our hug get even tighter.I could feel her tears wetting my left shoulder,I could hear her sniffing and letting her tears stop.I let go of our
hug but both of my hands are cupping her face wiping her tears off.
"uhm...I know this is a wrong time to say this but I still want to say it to you..."
"It's ok...you can do it...Minami"
The crying girl before suddenly smiled at me with some tears on her face and with a red nose.I inhaled deeply and then exhaled,after that I said the thing I want to say along time ago.
"Maeda Atsuko!.....ANATA WA!!!!....DAISUKI DESU!!!(Maeda Atsuko!.....I!!!!....LIKE YOU VERY MUCH!!!")
"Ahahahaha~!"Atsuko kept laughing and laughing making me looked embarrassed infront of her."Mou!Atsuko!stop laughing!I'm serious!"after I said that
she kept laughing like there's no tomorrow but then bit by bit her laughing tone turned into a crying little girl.I quietly looked at her with my worried face.
"Atsuko....."I looked at her crying face once again...I felt a weird atmosphere all of a sudden knowing something's really wrong and so I said,"I know something's up...you could tell me,It's ok."
Atsuko wiped her tears and suddenly put her right hand on her pocket reaching for something and after that she gave me the thing she reached and that is....A letter.
I read the letter silently and this is what the letter says...
Dear Mrs.Takahashi,
I have heard that you are the one who is keeping my daughter.I am not accusing you for that.Infact,I am thanking you so much for caring for my daughter.I let my people search the
whole part of Japan to search for her that is ofcourse secretly.On the day July 09,20** I am going to get my daughter back to me.Even though that you treat her as your own daughter I am
apologizing to you now because I am her father and it is my responsibility to take care of her and her future.Again, I thank you for your kindness and I am sorry that I didn't say this to you
personally,that is all.
Yours Truly,
Hiroyuki Maeda
After I finished reading the letter I became speechless and after a minute passes, I said, "No way...your father is Hiroyuki Maeda?THE Hiroyuki Maeda?!"Atsuko nodded gently,I can't believe it,
this person infront of me,Atsuko Maeda, is the daughter of Hiroyuki Maeda....The President of Japan!
"You know...after I read this thing, I said in my mind that "It's ok I can do it.."but then after you said that you love me....I don't want to let my dad...break us...apart..."Atsuko started crying again,
I hugged her tightly again but then a tear suddenly roled through my eyes,the tears on my eyes can't stop and so is Atsuko,now that I think about it...tomorrow is....July 09....
TBC??
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Again the next Chapter lies in your hands~
shall I continue it?it's your choice~
that's all! for now (^____^ )
--Mai
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NO!! Don't separate them!!! AtsuMina should always be together!!
Please update soon!!
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my GOD!!
Mai-chan!
Dont ask!just do it!hehe
Waiting no ur nxt update!
And update soon!
Thank you!! :thumbsup
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wow acchan is an important person :D
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you should continue!
hey, it was just after a confession, don't separate them that quickly D:
but.. who would have thought that Acchan is the president's daughter? XD
thanks for the update :thumbsup
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hello.
Mai-san.
I like your work! :twothumbs
So,...... :fap
Please Continue it...
I will wait for your next Update..
Thank You
_WMATSUI_
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Everyone thank you for your support and replies for this fiction :kneelbow:
The next update will be coming soon so please tune in~! :byebye:
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YEAH~!!Finally updated~!Happiness is inside me~ :on gay:
Anyways this story became much longer than I expect!thanks to you guys~ :hee:
oh and I think this is the Climax for this story so be ready~!!!
here~ another BGM this time there are 2 to choose from~ :)
Q10 (キュート) Original Soundtrac 23.Tender (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e2ENCB2NYLE#)
Q10 (キュート) Original Soundtrac 21.Solitary (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5hZuve3fe3I#)
and yes it is related to acchan~!!! yey~ but not in the story of course XD
Anyways enjoy~
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"Rainy Winter Season part 3"
[January 08,20**,Midnight]
After all of the turn of events,me and Atsuko decided to tell her situation to my mom when it's dinner time.
"EH?!!!You're Hiroyuki Maeda's daughter?!"after we discussed about Atsuko's issue my mom was in shock knowing that Atsuko's the Prime Minister's(President's) daughter."But why is the letter in your hands and not mine?"after my mom said her question I also wondered on why Atsuko have that letter and not my mom.Atsuko clarified the things that is needed to be answered.
The day Before the Summer class ended,Atsuko head straight home earlier than me & as she went to the house she saw a man putting something inside our mailbox,she said that it is not a mailman but a man that is casually attired and was really tall.She waited for that man to leave and as soon as the man leaves she quickly gets the mail.At first Atsuko planned on giving it to my mom but as soon as she saw the address of the sender she hid it from us.
"Eh...but why didn't you tell us?We should have gave you a farewell party or something!"Atsuko just smiled to what my mom said and me?I'm just sitting on the chair finished eating my food quietly.On that time my mom noticed that I suddenly kept quiet."Minami?is there something wrong?"I just answered my mom by moving my head horizontally.My mom didn't add anymore word but just left an awkward atmosphere to the three of us in the dinning room,But suddenly...
"Watashi...Minami ga suki!(I....I love Minami!)" My eyes opened widely after what Atsuko said.Saying that to my mom all of a sudden was a shock but when I look at my mom her expression was as blank as a plank."...Minami...Do you also love Atsuko?"My eyes opened much wider than before,I was wondering if my mom is serious or just playing around!on the other hand,Atsuko was looking at me with a blank stare and because of that I nod my head in a form of saying "yes".My mom stand up from the chair she was sitting on,holding the dinner table with both of her hands and said,"Then It's ok with me."Atsuko suddenly hold my mom's hands repeatedly thanking my mom while I was watching Atsuko smile.
"Mom is this really ok with you?"
"Minami,If you're happy then I am too and also...Love is mysterious and we don't know who or when we will love in the future.It's fine with me,Ok?"
"Thank you mom,you're really the best."
I can see in Atsuko's eyes her happiness of what is happening to us right now but did she forget about what will happen to her for tomorrow? ans so finally mom said what I was expecting to be said and that is,"But...what are you two going to do now?Tomorrow Atsuko will leave this house,right?"Atsuko's smile faded away.I knew she forgot her situation because of the overwhelming happiness inside her.
After dinner finished we head straight to our bedroom together to sleep but Atsuko cannot sleep at all and because of that I can't fall asleep."Ne Atsuko...why did you run away from home?is there something wrong to your father's new wife?"Atsuko leaned on my shoulder and hold my right hand and said,"No...there is nothing wrong with her,in fact she is nice and kind-hearted....but seeing my dad promising to my mom that he wont marry someone makes my heart break..."
"Do...you hate your dad?"
"About his new wife...no...controlling my future...yes."
"Atsuko...Do you want to escape t his pain you're feeling?"
Atsuko nodded to me knowing that she wanted to get away from her dad so badly.I remove her hand that is holding my right hand and use it to hold her left shoulder while my left hand hold her left had tightly.I take a deep breath......and said. ..
"then....Lets elope..."
"U-un!"
July 09,20** the most awaited day will arrive soon and that is also the day me and Atsuko will elope....our destination?My hometown....Okinawa.
TBC.
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What do you think will happen to the couple as they head up to Okinawa?Shout out~! :on woohoo:
and please tune in for the next update thank you~ :kneelbow:
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Escape!!! And be TOGETHER FOREVER!!!!!
Update SOON!!!
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Escape!!! And be TOGETHER FOREVER!!!!!
Update SOON!!!
Haha :lol: yeah I'll update soon~ :)
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run atsumina run!!
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uwah sorry for the long wait!here is part 4 of rainy winter season! :hee:
Soundtrack for this Part (a friend shared it to me and I decided to use this two BGMs for this part.
just choose on these two or if you want to listen to more BGMs then use both :D
Sepia no KyouSPAMsu - Proposal Daisakusen OST (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fMDEXlRLXM0#ws)
Sunao na Kimochi - Proposal Daisakusen OST (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zskTbUAj0m0#)
Enjoy :kneelbow:
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"Rainy Winter Season part 4"
[July,09,20**,Early Morning]
It was early in the morning in the city of Tokyo and it was a beautiful day to see the sun rise in this early in the morning but...not for me and Atsuko because this day is the day her father will be picking her up away from us and because of that,yesterday we decided to escape and elope together since we love each other.
We headed to the train station that is going to stop at Okinawa.
My mind was blank,what will happen to me if Atsuko was taken away from me?will I be sued?live in prison?be killed? or what?This is the Prime Minister of Japan's daughter I'm taking with me,Who knows what will happen?but one thing is for sure....I wont let Atsuko be taken away from me....not like this.
"Ne Minami....are you nervous?"
"Ah...no I'm alright"
"Me too....but....I'm....scared..."
I can see that Atsuko is really scared of what we are up to.Whenever she is scared,she holds the middle of her chest rubbing it to ease the pain.
I hold Atsuko's hand and said "Everything will be alright....I'm here to protect you Atsuko,no matter what happens....I'm not letting you go."
"Thank y....."
"*smile you are really a *Bukiyou person huh..."
(http://sphotos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/65353_353481298075455_595271700_n.jpg)
"No wonder I fell in love with you..."
[July 09,20**,Morning at Takahashi Residence]
"Y-YOUR GIRLFRIEND?!"my uncle exclaimed those words.His eyes gone larger than before knowing that I have a girlfriend and not a boyfriend.
"y-yeah...so I was wondering if we can stay here in your home uncle?"
"can you take the responsibility?this girl you're with is no joke!like you said earlier she's--"
"Yes.I can take it uncle."
"hmm....this can't be help then,as your uncle I understand how you feel,love can be weird sometimes but this is the path that you chose so....sure you two can stay as long as you want,you can even live here!"my uncle said with a smile.
"R-really?!"I hugged my uncle with pure joy while Atsuko was smiling at me.
"uhm by the way uncle....can we go and see your farm?"
"ah sure!but you need someone with you.....HEIJI!!!"my uncle shout a unknown name and after that call that my uncle said we heard fast foot steps running towards the living room.
"What's wrong dad?"A guy with silk black hair came in the room,he's eating a popsicle as he arrived the room.
"Heiji could you guide them to our farm?"
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"Sure!Hey.....Let's go you two!"
@Farm....
as we arrived at the farm me and Atsuko was astonished by how large the hectares my uncle's farm obtained."Beautiful,amazing,awesome,large"those were the words we repeatedly say.
"Beautiful isn't it?here wear these"Heiji gave us a hat made out of a strong type of grass."Ah thank you Heiji."
"Ne Minami!Let's go over there!"Atsuko suddenly pulled my right arm."Hey Heiji!you're not coming with us?"
"No no just enjoy and have fun."Heiji said with a smile.
"Minami~!","ok ok!let's go."me and Atsuko run fastly but as for me it was like the first time we met,the first time I felt so light in side....the first time I met someone that enlighten my world....the first time....
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I fell in love..."
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After many hours passed,me and Atsuko were drenched in our own sweat because of the heat by the sun."Here want some?"Heiji suddenly handed us some face towels and two popsicles."Thank you!"we both said to him."You two were having so much fun earlier huh?it's like you run the whole hectare of my dad's farm!","If we did that we fainted already!"Heiji just laughed at the thing I said."So!this is the first time I saw two girls love each other not to mention the Prime Minister of the Japan's daughter!",Me and Atsuko was shocked of what Heiji said knowing that he knew about Atsuko's identity.
I quickly asked Heiji on how he knew about Atsuko's identity but he just said that he overheard our conversation earlier with his dad."Well now that you know about that...could you keep it a secret for the two of us?"Heiji agreed to keep his mouth shut but he will keep is mouth shut if we tell him why we are so secure about Atsuko's identity and after we tell him the whole situation..."EH?!Y-you two......eloped?"me and Atsuko nodded at the same time,Heiji looked like he was out of words to say knowing that we are really taking our love for each other seriously.
"You two are really amazing huh?I'm really impressed.....How strong your love is."despite of Heiji looking like a tough guy he really has a warm spot inside his heart after all."So!Let's go you love birds!uncle made lunch already!","Hey Heiji!"Heiji looked at me as we three were walking straight home."Yeah?","Why is your father's house simple?it's traditional and not really fancy."Heiji smiled on what I said."Well father doesn't like looking rich and that house that we are living is special.","Special?","Yep!That house was hand-made.Father and Mother made it!You know my father also experienced what you two are experiencing right now.
The father of my mother was a rich person and he can't accept a guy like my dad to be with my mom and so my father decided for them to elope away from my mom's home and started a new life!they started it by working hard and bought a small land and after that they started building a house on their own and after that the owner of this whole hectare gave it to my father.This place....is the heart and soul of our family!"
I was moved by what Heiji said the love of his parents was indeed amazing,me and Atsuko was impressed by what we have heard and then suddenly Atsuko grabbed my hand and said,"Minami!Let's start from here....okay?"I smiled on what Atsuko said and hold her hands much tighter and said."Yeah we will start here and live happily.....right,Atsuko?"after what I said Atsuko nodded her head happily and so we three went straight home to eat lunch but as we arrived at home we saw someone talking to uncle,a person that is familiar in my eyes...no....not only me but in everyone's eyes....and it was.....
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Hiroyuki Maeda....Atsuko's father....
T.B.C.
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EHHHHH?!!!Why is Acchan's father in this scene?!man I'm the author of the story but still I'm like the reader of the story as well! :on lol:
Anyways yep I added picture because I was bored I guess.... :bored: when I'm bored I draw stuffs :sweat:
oh yeah by the way what are your thoughts in this Chapter/Part?leave comments please :kneelbow:
Next Chapter Still lies in your hands.
that is all for now~ bye bye~! :byebye:
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wow so fast he found them TT_TT
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wow so fast he found them TT_TT
well...he is the President of Japan after all :sweat:
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Oh! my AtsuMina! hide yourself now.
don't separate them (http://emo.niyay.com/emotion/906155104.gif)
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Waaw Heiji is is :hip drool2: :on gay:
SO IKEMEN :mon yeah:
I wish he exist in real life :mon fan:
LOLOLOL
BTW olredii found them?!?!?!
WHAT THE!!!
:mon runcry:
I wish the president let them be
Oh my AtsuMina
Please Update Soon
Well Take your time
Yow SEXY MAGANDA :mon cam:
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Waaw Heiji is is :hip drool2: :on gay:
SO IKEMEN :mon yeah:
I wish he exist in real life :mon fan:
LOLOLOL
BTW olredii found them?!?!?!
WHAT THE!!!
:mon runcry:
I wish the president let them be
Oh my AtsuMina
Please Update Soon
Well Take your time
Yow SEXY MAGANDA :mon cam:
hehehe Ikemen desu ne~
Yow AcchanIu-san I don't know you have an account here~ so Hi! hehe :sweat:
Anyways!Fast update~!I got alot of time right now since it's my sembreak~ :ding:
I'm taking my opportunity to update this fan fiction and here it is~!
So here is the new Update and anyways I don't have any BGM in mind that fits in this chapter...but might as well try this two.
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai Game BGM - Feel (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRBgMoPXbNY#)
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni - Yours - Friend (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9fDnsrNcoo#)
Ja~ Enjoy :kneelbow:
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"Rainy Winter Season part 5"
"D-DAAAD!!!!Stop!!you're hurting me!"I'm clenching my fist life I've never clenched them before seeing Atsuko being pulled by her dad while his dad doesn't even care if he's hurting his daughter is pissing me off.
"MR. P-PRESIDENT!!!STOP!"The father of Atsuko looked at me with his scary gaze on his eyes."You are....Takahashi Minami....right?you are the one who planned this thing...am I right?"A plain question was given to me and the whole atmosphere in the front door was nerve-wracking, a plain,simple question was given to me but what I did was just look at around,uncle was wiping his sweat all over his face,Atsuko was about to cry looking down on the floor and Heiji that looks so pissed off by Atsuko's father.
"Well?where is my answer,Ms.Takahashi?.....where...is...my....ANSWER?!!!"the sudden shout of Atsuko's father startled me,he was obviously mad,the veins on his forehead was showing up,his aura suddenly changed.
"...Yes I did plan this thing...Mr.President..."after what I said, Atsuko's father removed his glasses,let's go of Atsuko's hand,get a handkerchief in his pocket and use it to wipe the steam that has gone through his glasses,after that when he was about to reach Atsuko's hand,Atsuko suddenly came to me and embrace me.
"My....is this what you are giving me my daughter?this is your payback to what I've done to make your life stable and happy?THIS?!!YOU ARE REPLACING ME TO THAT GIR--"before Atsuko's father finishes what he was about to say
Atsuko answered his dad back."I WAS NEVER BEEN HAPPY ON YOUR SIDE!NEVER I WAS!!!MOM WAS THE ONE WO MADE ME HAPPY!NOT YOU!!!"
*SLAP*
Atsuko's father....slapped Atsuko....Atsuko kept silence,while me...no not only me...but we three,uncle,Heiji and I were pissed off.
"When did you learn to talk back to your parents huh,Atsuko?as far as I can remember you are not like that...or did this person that you love...teach you this thing?THIS PERSON THAT IS A TRASH?!!!ATSUKO YO--"
"STOP THIS!!!"suddenly Heiji spoke,his patience suddenly cracked and just can't handle what Atsuko's father is saying."And you are?a friend of this girl that stole my daughter?"
"CAN YOU JUST LEAVE THEM ALONE?!"Heiji's fist was clenched tightly,the veins in his hands was so visible and he's ready to punch the President's face but then...."Okay!you want this Atsuko?then fine go!do what you want!but don't come crawling back to me when that girl gives up on you!"
There it is....the President gave up but then I suddenly thought....can I really take responsibility to Atsuko?can I take the heat?to a person like me? and after compiling my thoughts I said..."Wait!"I stopped the president from leaving the house,I let go of Atsuko's embrace and hold his father's hand.
"...I....I will give you back Atsuko...just please don't be strict to her...."Uncle,Heiji and especially....Atsuko was shocked on what I said,the President suddenly smiled and began to clap his hands and laugh, "Hahaha look at that...World record Ms.Takahashi!World record!not a minute passes and you already gave up to my daughter!Amazing!"
"Will you....take her back?....Mr...Maeda..."
"Sure and thank you for making the right decision Ms.Takahashi and for that I will not sue you,your mom and those two guys.Good day to you all."I let go of his hand, while he grabbed Atsuko's hand but then Atsuko hold my hand and pulling it to her.
"MINAMI!Don't do this!y-you're just kidding right?!Minami!Don't do this to me!We promised right?!We will start here!right?!"Atsuko was crying and was about to faint while I was just staring at the ground....I let go of Atsuko's hand and said...
"Gomen ne.....Atsuko....."
after that....they're gone....Atsuko's gone and so is my life.....
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[July 09,20**,Afternoon @ the Farm]
I went to the farm to cool my head off, at the afternoon the clouds will show up and the wind will breeze up.I closed my eyes laying down on the large tree beside me,"....I'm such an idiot...."I kept saying it over and over.....why did I gave up on Atsuko?....why did I gave up?
"We promised right?!We will start here!right?!"
That word that she said still echoed through my mind over and over....we did promised and yet....I broke it..."I'm such an idiot...."
"HECK YEAH YOU ARE!" suddenly I heard a voice next to me, it was Heiji.The guy that gave us support on our love.
"So...you finally thought that what you did earlier was so stupid?"
"Yeah.....She's gone huh....I have nothing else to do..."
"What are you saying?!IDIOT!You can still do something!"
"How can you say that for sure?"
"BECAUSE!
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YOU LOVE ATSUKO!Right?"
I was an idiot....no a FULL IDIOT!Heiji was right....why am I giving up right now?I do love Atsuko....so why should I give up?...I stand up on where I am standing and walked straight home.
"HEY!where are you going?!"Heiji asked as he follows me on my way home.
"To the Prime Minister's Office!wanna come?"
"HECK YEAH!"
Today, the love of my life was taken away from me but still Today is the day I take her back from me.
T.B.C.
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Uwah~ Heiji's so ikemen~
Taka's guardian angel I think~ :luvluv2:
what are your thoughts about BAKAMINA? and others?
comment below~
that's all for now~!
and still~! like I've said in a thousand times~! The next Chapter lies in your hands :)
bye bye~ :byebye:
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takaidiot!!! what did you do?!?!! come on and fix it quickly!
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DID YOU JUST MAKE ME ALMOST CRY???
THE HECK UR FIC REALLY GOT MEE
I am really sad in the middle part wer I am really gonna cry LOL
but tnx in the end part it stopped Fuck Yeah *sorry language xD*
Takamina is sure an IDIOT!!!
she hurt my Acchan :scared: :angry:
Bakamina!
AND AND AND beforee I forgot
HEIJI :banana: :pepper: :leek: :taco: :muffin: :strawberry: :lock: :bounce:
LOL IKEMEN desu ne~~~~~~~
BTW Acchaniu san?
so formal and I am not that I am Marie :wahaha:
tnx for the fast update
I will give u a torrid kiss LOLOLOL :mon olympic:
Errrr xD
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DID YOU JUST MAKE ME ALMOST CRY???
THE HECK UR FIC REALLY GOT MEE
I am really sad in the middle part wer I am really gonna cry LOL
but tnx in the end part it stopped Fuck Yeah *sorry language xD*
Takamina is sure an IDIOT!!!
she hurt my Acchan :scared: :angry:
Bakamina!
AND AND AND beforee I forgot
HEIJI :banana: :pepper: :leek: :taco: :muffin: :strawberry: :lock: :bounce:
LOL IKEMEN desu ne~~~~~~~
BTW Acchaniu san?
so formal and I am not that I am Marie :wahaha:
tnx for the fast update
I will give u a torrid kiss LOLOLOL :mon olympic:
Errrr xD
Ah is that so??I think my memory got mixed up...Gomen ne Marie-san :kneelbow:
Ah....I'm sorry about making you cry well almost!that is!man!I hope she cried!
and Heiji really got your heart huh~?
He's really an Ikemen~ :luvluv2: he even got me~
Marie-san and Haruko-san thank you for sharing your thoughts :kneelbow: your comments actually made my day :)
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:shock: another BAKAMINA!! action ....... :grr: what a father :(
:twothumbs
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Bakamina :banghead:
Get acchan back to you now!
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UWAH~!!! Last part of the story is here~!!!happiness is inside me once again~ :on gay:
BGM's:
Higurashi no Naku Koro ni - Yours - Iru (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmvUDtb6pEU#)
ASPAMa Harerukana (Piano & Strings Version) - Proposal Daisakusen OST (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8zclx-AOg4#ws)
Enjoy~
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"Rainy Winter Season LAST PART"
[July 09,20**,afternoon @Takahashi Residence]
"Are done Heiji?"
"Yes."*Heiji wearing tux
"Ok then....Let's.....go."
My heart was thumping with fear and as I opened the door someone suddenly burst through me.A hug that utterly shocked me but still gave me a large amount of happiness inside me."A-ATSUKO?!"The person who did that was her,the love of my life,the one who made my life a better place....Maeda Atsuko."A....Atsuko H-How did you..."I can't complete the words that I was going to say to her,Confusion is still on my side but Atsuko quite have a hunch on what is the thing I'm going to ask to her.
"I ran away Minami,Before we got to go home, dad went to a restaurant to go buy some food for us but I decided to escape when he left the car."
Instead of being happy that Atsuko is with me right now I was actually sad because seeing her doing this aches my heart.She really kept our relationship strong while earlier I just released her while not thinking for it twice.....I was such a full stinkbrain idiot....
"Minami....your making that "It's all my fault" face again.It's ok Minami...I know that it's still hard for you because we just started our relationship but...Let's keep our promise...okay?"
"Y...Yeah....We will start here...Arigatou Atsuko."I smiled to Atsuko while crying like a baby but a few seconds passes an she also cried.We tighten our hug as a symbol of our strong bond with each other.
"UWAH~ now I ca remove this itchy tux!"Heiji removed his father's tuxedo that he just borrowed quickly while me and Atsuko laughs at him for having trouble on removing it not to mention that his dad was the one who put his necktie on his attire.
After that...
"OTOU-SAN!!!!"Heiji exclaimed as he calls his father far away from us while harvesting his crops with the farmers beside him."Ah!Heiji-kun!Minami-chan and Atsuko-chan!wait.......ATSUKO-CHAN?!"
After uncle finished harvesting me and Atsuko explained everything to uncle on the unexpected things that happened while he was gone.
"Eh~ you two are really amazing huh~!The love that you two have is really strong!"
"Although Minami almost broke it."
"Heiji!"
"Sorry."
"So what is you plan,you two?Any moment by now,Atsuko's father will be coming here...again."
Uncle's right,we still dont know on what we are going to do now.Yes we agreed that we will start here but there is still a big problem and that is...
Atsuko's father...
But still I reset my mind and chose to live happily and so I said to my uncle,
"I will not let go on Atsuko anymore.I will choose this path and I'm not going to regret this path that I've chosen."
"I see."A voice from afar suddenly came out of nowhere.It was Atsuko's father.
"M-Mr.President?!"my uncle exclaimed.I quickly grabbed Atsuko's hand and glared to the President's eyes."I will not let you have Atsuko!Say all you want but I wont let go of her!"The President's expression didn't change at all.He's still calm and silent at the same time."I know Ms.Takahashi.Alright....you win."
"W...What?"
"This is the first time my daughter did this to me and yet she didn't even think twice to escape.What I did earlier was a test for you and to my daughter.All those shouts and screams that I did earlier was a test for you two.At first I thought that you've given up to my daughter but by the looks of your attire right now I guess you two (Heiji & Taka) are about to visit my office,am I right?"
"Y-Yes but why did you let Atsuko escape?I let her go on that time but why did you set her free?"
"I have a feeling that you got confused Ms. Takahashi.So I made an excuse to go to a restaurant and buy us some food and see if she wants to escape to get back to you and I was right.You two have an unbreakable bond and right now you two have my permission and I will support you with the bottom of my heart and so is your mom....Atsuko."
"My....step mother or..."
"Your real mother Atsuko."
"Eh?"
"Your mom told me something before she died and that is to support you on whatever you choose and make you happy and right now I believe that you are in that path right now."
"F...Father...."Atsuko hugged her dad with all her might while her tears are flowing through her eyes non-stop.She apologized on her harsh words to her dad while her dad is also apologizing to her. As I look at her dad...he was also....crying.A father's love sure is something.He makes sure that the person his child loves is capable of making her happy like what he did.Me and Uncle were also touched and cried seeing the two make up while Heiji's smiling.
"Looks like Mr. President has a heart after all"Heiji whispered in my ear.
"Ofcourse he has one,BakaHeiji."
*BOINK*
"Ow!why did you hit me in the head?!"
"Shhhhh..."
"Thank you father and like I said before I am sorry for what I did to you."
"No Atsuko,it's ok.Infact, I should be the one apologizing to you and to these people too."
"Ah!,no no no!,It's ok!"we all said.
"I must go now and Atsuko...."
"Yes dad?"
"Advance...Happy Birthday."
"Uh...*smiles...Thank you dad."
"Ms.Takahashi."
"Y-Yes?!"
"I entrust my daughter to you.Is that okay?"
"Ah!Yes!You have my word Mr. President!"
"Thank you."
Mr. President left and the last expression of him that I saw is the smile in his face.Now that I think about it, maybe that's where Atsuko's beautiful smile came from.A smile that can move your stress away and a smile that can make you fall in love.
"Eh~ when is your birthday Atsuko?"Heiji asked.
"Hm....Tomorrow!"
'EH?!"I was shocked and have no time to buy a gift since we were at a province and there is no shop near buy.If I'm willing to buy one I need to travel to the nearest shop here and buy her a gift.uwah!!!why didn't I aked her birthday!Atsuko was looking at me at that time and gave me a wink."What was that for?!" I said in my mind.She's expecting a gift from me but I have nothing to give!!!this is so bad!really bad!!!
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[July 10,20**,Takahashi Residence]
It was July 10,20**, Atsuko's birthday.We celebrated it with a cake bought by my uncle by delivery service and we also made some barbecues for us and especially the Birthday girl and still I have no present to give her.When Atsuko finished blowing the candles and finished whispering her wish she requested for us to have a one on one talk and I what I was saying in my mind is "Oh shoot.....What should I do ?What should I do?!!!I don't have any gift to give her!!!"
"Takamina?"
"Eh?Y-you mean me?"
"Un~!You like it?it's your new nickname~!"
"AH yep,it Sounds Good!"
"what's with that sudden english of yours?hahaha"
"hehehe...."I'm still nervous and we were about to reach our favorite spot on unlce's farm and that is the big tree.The place where we made our promise.
"Hey~!Give me a nickname!!!I made you one!so make me one too!"
"Mae...Atsu?"
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"Eh????you're bad at giving nicknames!it's like that nickname was given by a computer while buffering!Give me another~!!!"
"Ah....eh.....erhmmm....then....A.....Acchan?"
"UWAH~!that's a nice one~!I love it!I take my word back~!you are good Takamina~!Very good~!"
"Ah is that so?I'm happy for that."
"Ok~!on this day onward we shall call each other by our nicknames!"
"Eh?isn't that reverse?"
"Re....verse?"
"Yes,reverse!when two people starts their relationship don't they call each other by their first names?"
"Hm~ well that's true but this one is special!we gave each other nicknames so your argument is invalid!"
"Ok then,Atsu-- I mean Acchan."
"We are here."
"Yeah.the tree that we stand and made our first promise."
"Which you nearly broke."
"Ah...sorry."
"Ne Takamina."
"Yes?"
"I love you."those words that she said made my hear throb."Me too Ats...er...Acchan.with all my heart."
"Where's my gift?"There it is!the thing I was afraid she might ask."Ah er.....","You don't have one,right?","Yes...Look!I'm so sorry I just--"
"Then Kiss me!"
"KISS?!"
"you don't have a gift right?so then....give me a kiss...then that would be your gift for me."my heart was throbbing so hard it's like it was about to pop out of me.
"O....Okay then...."After that Atsu...I mean Acchan leaned in front of me,closed her eyes and vanished the distance between us.I hold both of her shoulders while my hands are still shacking.I closed my eyes and joined our lips together.It was....the best feeling I ever did."So this is what a kiss feels like"I thought.I released our kiss and both of our face were superbly red.After a few seconds Acchan said to me...."You know....we shouldn't do that thing anymore...."
"Eh?!W-Why?"
"Because....from now on I wont be able to find anything that can make me as happy as now...."
"A...Atsuko...."
"Baka"Atsuko leaned on my right shoulder.
"I told you to call me by saying my nickname...right?"
"Ah....Sorry,Acchan..."
"Takamina...I love you."
"I love you too,Acchan.You are my no.1"
"Hey....can I be more than that?"
"huh?"
"Can I be....your only one?"
"Un."
"Takamina.Kiss me....and Never Let me Go."
"Yes...I will."
on that day we started a new bond and had our lips mark with each other but still....
This is just the start of our Love Story.
END.
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YATTA~!!!It's done~!! :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers:
It took 6 Chapter huh~ nice nice~!
Without everyone's support I couldn't finish this fiction! and for that Thank you!
bye bye! and thank you for the readers that read this fiction until the end! :kneelbow:
Byebye! and see you again! :byebye:
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I IT IT S FI FINI SH!!! :pleeease: :err: :cool2:
yeyeyeyeyeyey
WOW MAI CHAN SEXY MAGANDA
ANSAYA SAYA!
YOU REALLY DID A GREAT JOB :mon love:
YATTTTTA LOOKING FORWARD FOR YOUR NEXT SHORT STORY I MEAN LONG STORY
THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR SHARING :pig cute:
BTW HEIJI!!!! :mon psst: :mon look:
URGGH NO DRAWING? :mon prayer:
:mon fire: :mon runcry: :mon cweepy: :mon wtfmm: :mon worklate: :on shady: :on voodoo:
LOL :yuki:
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It was a really good story. I'm glad they are together. AtsuMina = Eternity!!!!!
It was a great ending and I'm happy I read your story! Thank you again!
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happy ending makes happy haruko :D.... cute one thanx :D
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I IT IT S FI FINI SH!!! :pleeease: :err: :cool2:
yeyeyeyeyeyey
WOW MAI CHAN SEXY MAGANDA
ANSAYA SAYA!
YOU REALLY DID A GREAT JOB :mon love:
YATTTTTA LOOKING FORWARD FOR YOUR NEXT SHORT STORY I MEAN LONG STORY
THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR SHARING :pig cute:
BTW HEIJI!!!! :mon psst: :mon look:
URGGH NO DRAWING? :mon prayer:
:mon fire: :mon runcry: :mon cweepy: :mon wtfmm: :mon worklate: :on shady: :on voodoo:
LOL :yuki:
Gomen ne for not drawing Heiji-kun :sweat: I know you know the reason why~ :kekeke:
It's a short story Marie-san~!that's why it's finished already :)
and Arigatou for reading this fic. until the end~!! :on woohoo:
It was a really good story. I'm glad they are together. AtsuMina = Eternity!!!!!
It was a great ending and I'm happy I read your story! Thank you again!
Atsumina = Eternity indeed~! :on GJ:
and I should be the one thanking you TakaminaBG-san!Thanks for reading my fic. :kneelbow:
happy ending makes happy haruko :D.... cute one thanx :D
I'm glad I made you happy~ :) thanks for reading Haruko-san~!
To Everyone~!
I'm working on a new short story called "My Pet Lover"
uwah~ I'm still working on the script so please tune in~!
and for the very first time it's not Atsumina but.......Kojiyuu~!!!
I'm still learning some basic facts about their relationship to make the fic. more realistic! :on lol:
I wish I'll make that fic. interesting..... :farofflook:
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To Everyone~!
I'm working on a new short story called "My Pet Lover"
uwah~ I'm still working on the script so please tune in~!
and for the very first time it's not Atsumina but.......Kojiyuu~!!!
I'm still learning some basic facts about their relationship to make the fic. more realistic! :on lol:
I wish I'll make that fic. interesting..... :farofflook:
OMG!!! you say my favorite word in the world.. KOJIYUU!!! I love them doesnt matter if they are many of fic about them Im still love them so much :D... you have instead a reader.. for this fic.. I waiting... :panic:
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Good story ; I love it!!
Look forward next story :deco:
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Good story ; I love it!!
Look forward next story :deco:
Thank you for reading Rainy Winter Season~!! :kneelbow:
Anyways This is the prologue of the new fan fiction and I'm still doing the script. (still have no time because of school)
and I have learned some basic info's about Kojiyuu but I beg your patience if my type of Kojiyuu fic. doesn't stick to much on reality. :sweat:
My Pet Lover SELECTION:
My Pet Lover: [ongoing, Kojiyuu + Takayuu]
My Pet Lover Prologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1120112#msg1120112)
My Pet Lover part 1 - Transformation (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1122634#msg1122634)
My Pet Lover part 2 - I am Happy (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1123738#msg1123738)
My Pet Lover part 3 - 2 Meters Away (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1126105#msg1126105)
My Pet Lover part 4 - Strange Feeling (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1126657#msg1126657)
My Pet Lover part 5 - Hopeless Dog (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1128277#msg1128277)
My Pet Lover part 6 - It's not That Easy... (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1131034#msg1131034)
My Pet Lover part 7 - A Help from you (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1134580#msg1134580)
My Pet Lover part 8 - Over Acting Yuko (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1135481#msg1135481)
My Pet Lover part 9 - Their Encounter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1138531#msg1138531)
My Pet Lover part 10 - Give the Happiness that I will Never Forget (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.msg1141807#msg1141807)
My Pet Lover
Prologue
"Ah!!!I'm so irritated!" a girl with a 152 cm height complains with the things that happened to her on her way home.Her day was so miserable it can be known as the worst day of her life.She was so busy on being mad that she didn't noticed the high speed car that is going to pass her by and then she instantly died.A simple death struck to her.After the car hits the girl, her whole experience in her life flashed back through her eyes.Her eye sight was fading and becoming as dull as white leading her to death...
But she's not the only one that had that amount of bad luck inside of her.There was also a someone that have the same amount of bad luck as she is.
It happened on the same day at the same time.A girl that was walking along with her little poodle dog that she loved ever since she was a little girl.A gift from her dad that died when she was 7 years old and the dog that she cherish so that every time she sees it she will remember her happy times with her dad but that is for now.
On that day the girl's poodle dog's lace looses off and run through the pedestrian lane, she rushed through the lane to catch up with her dog but the the stop light turned green and the girl saw a car rushing by through her.The girl's eyes got bigger and shocked by what's coming through.After what happened people started to make a crowd and help the girl that was....alive of course but her little poodle...died.
Tears shattered through the girl's eyes,she can't believed on what happen to her dog.The memories of her with her dog and especially her father faded away instantly.It's like her whole life got ruined instantly and can't regain it anymore.
Meanwhile....
"What?!"the girl with a 152 cm height exclaimed to God on why she can't be in heaven and should be in hell."Why should I be down there?!I can't remember doing anything bad!common God this is not fair!"
she kept complaining and complaining things to God on why she should be in heaven but God is just at its calm mood and just said,"You have done good things but the bad things that you did can be written on 2 books while the good things that you did can only be written in a filler.If you really want to be in heaven then you should listen to what I say."
The girl got curious-ed on what should she do on how she could be in heaven.She said that she will do anything just to get into heaven even if she will do the biggest challenge in her life.
"Ok then,I will give you a second life BUT!you shall make happiness to the person you are going to meet as the time you wake up,okay?"The girl agreed on her deal with God and as God flicks his finger, her sight suddenly faded away and after many minutes passed she waked up and saw a girl happily smiling in front of her.She can see the tears dropping from her eyes continuously.
She tried to speak but then she was surprised by her voice.It was not a human voice but.....a bark from a dog.
END of Prologue
Hope the prologue did great (^______^ )
byebye~ :byebye:
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yey!!! :on GJ: :wigglypanda:
:nya:
:mon squee: :on woohoo: KOJIYUU!!!!
I LURB KOJIYUU SOOOO MUCH :gmon twirl: :pen_whirl:
THANKYOU THANKYOU GORGEOUS SEXY NA MAGANDA :mon cute:
*waiting* :on shady: :on shady:
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eh?! Im a kojiyuu harcore lover jajaj and its sounds so weird... BUT.. interesting :B
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eh?! Im a kojiyuu harcore lover jajaj and its sounds so weird... BUT.. interesting :B
hahaha :lol: I know it's weird from the start but I think the next chapter might grab your attention. :glasses:
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Just Joining
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter
Thank you for the nice fanfic
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Sorry for the slow update.... :kneelbow: Busy with school and passing of report cards are coming :panic: hope I will get a average grade :frustrated: maybe line of 80+ or so~ hehehe :hehehe:
hopefully I'll pass all the subjects.....
Ah here's the update XD sorry for my blabbering
of words XDDD
My Pet Lover part 1
The girl cant believe herself.She kept saying words like "What the heck?!","What is happening?!" and so on but the other girl is just hugging her and kept hearing her barking
all over and over."Am I.....a dog?" she thought to herself,She can't believe at the challenge god gave to her.It's too hard to make a person happy by just being a dog and can't
even understand you.She finally noticed that she was so stupid saying to god that she would do anything to go to heaven.She could have make a fully detailed contract to god
and to make it more easy to her,but it's too late to back off,she got what she asked for god and here it is,right in front of her is her...second chance.
"Haruna~!is Shiro....okay?"Someone suddenly entered the girl's bedroom.It looks like a close friend of hers."Ah Mariko!y-yes!I'm really glad she's okay.Look!she's barking so loud!
I'm so glad."The girl can't understand what is happening,"Who is this girl with her?",she asks herself,but right now she now know the name of her owner and that is "Haruna".
"Haruna stands for spring.....what a nice name."She thought.
Many hours passed and it's finally midnight.The lights in Haruna's bedroom turned off and Haruna put her beside her bed.While the little poodle dog is still waiting to see god and have a
conversation with him.
Finally after many minutes passed,God showed up to the girl.
"So how's a dog's life?"The girl got annoyed and almost barked to god but god stopped her by saying, "You don't want to wake up your owner right?"
Which made her more angry.
"Let's go talk somewhere else."God flicked his fingers as a command on teleportation.
After a blink of an eye,the girl opened her eyes and just saw a plain white color surrounding her.She looked down and she saw that she have hands for a human,she said random words
and it sounded like she wanted to be.Suddenly god appeared.
"Missing being a human?"She didn't replied fastly but after 30 seconds or so she finally said,"Why?Why a dog?from all the things you're going to transform me....why a dog?"
"I don't really know."The girl got pissed of and almost grabbed god's clothes.Good thing is that she calmed down and asked.
"How is it that you don't know?You're god right?You should know that!"
"I am not a person that knows everything,so calm down....Oshima Yuko."She heard her name to god.She thought "It has been awhile since I've heard someone said my name."
"All I did is that I send you to the person that is the most miserable person in Japan and here she is.I used you to make her dog be alive once again."
"WHAT?!you used my soul?!how am I suppose to go to heaven in that way?"
"When she dies I guess."
"WHAT?!!!there could be some other way!"
God thinked for minute about "the other way" Yuko was talking about and finally after an hour or so,God finally thought of something but he didn't said it to Yuko he just said that
after she wakes up, the change of her challenge will happen later on,she don't have to worry because every midnight god will talk to her to have some companion beside her.
Yuko agreed to the contract and after that, God once again flicked his fingers and after that Yuko vanished through the scene....
The Next day....
"KYAAAAAAA!!!!!"A large scream woke up Yuko,as she opened her eyes,Haruna,her owner is looking to her madly.
"What did I do?Did I peed on the bed?did I pooped?"She thought because she's a dog.
But as she looks through herself she was also surprised because she's not a dog but a human,wearing a plain white jacket hoodie and a black pants.
T.B.C.
@cisda83 Thank you for reading~
@yourockmehehehe you're really active when it goes emoticons :lol: thanks for reading~!
Everyone~!Hope this thing counts as a short story because It might reach for uhm.....4 to 7 parts....I guess? :sweat:
and also sorry for the short update.....like I said...still busy at class....OTL
Hope you'll keep reading this fic.! This story lies in your hands if I should continue it or not (^_______ ^'')
byebye~ :byebye:
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This is so interesting! PLEASE UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS!! :bow:
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Wahh! I love this!! :wriggly:
Its so interesting!! :farofflook: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Kojiyuu kojiyuu kojiyuu!! :mon love: :mon angel: :mon crazyinlove:
Update pleasee :bow: :mon cute: :on GJ:
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@Tam_atsu & haruhi16 Thank you for the support :shy1:
My Pet Lover part 2
The Next day....
"KYAAAAAAA!!!!!"A large scream woke up Yuko,as she opened her eyes,Haruna,her owner is looking to her madly.
"What did I do?Did I peed on the bed?did I pooped?"She thought because she's a dog.
But as she looks through herself she was also surprised because she's not a dog but a human,wearing a plain white jacket hoodie and a black pants.
Yuko was surprise that she is human again.she felt something stuck in her neck and it is a collar,a dog's collar in exact,she tried to remove it but as she removes it it gets tighter and so she gives up on removing it.Haruna suddenly screamed and said,
"G-GET OUT!!!"Haruna shouted as she saw this unexpected person sleeping with her on her bed.
"W-Wait!!!Let me explain!!!!"
"GET OUT OR I WILL CALL THE COPS!!!!!
"SURE!call the cops I don't care!Just let me explain!!"Haruna was about to grab the telephone near her bed but then Yuko grabbed her hand.
"L-Let me me go you perverted burglar!!!"
"W-What?!!First of all I'm not a burglar and second I'm not a pervert!"
"Say all you want but I wont believe you!!!"
Yuko is holding both of Haruna's hands while Haruna is trying so hard to release Yuko's grip."Let me go!!"Haruna kept screaming to Yuko but Yuko just waited for Haruna to calm down but that never happened,she kept screaming and screaming until it reaches the neighborhood.
"Haruna?are you alright??"A voice suddenly came outside,it's an old man that can be specify from it's voice,It's Haruna's neighbor.
"Ah!!!Oji-san help m--"
Haruna was about to finish her SOS but then Yuko did something to stop her from speaking.What Yuko did gave a whole silence to the whole room while the old man outside got no reply on Haruna and just left the front door.Yuko is still holding Haruna's hands while Haruna is in shock because Yuko...kissed her.
After a few seconds Yuko let's go of the kiss and so is the grip of her hands on Haruna's hands.Haruna step back a few inches and still in shock on whats going on while Yuko is blushing so hard on why she did that to a girl that she just met yesterday.
Finally Haruna chilled out.She approached Yuko and....
*SLAP*
slapped her on the face.The sound of the slapped echoed the whole bedroom of Haruna but Yuko didn't said anything on what Haruna did but just left a blank silence on the whole room.
"How dare you kiss me.....and you are saying that you are not perverted?how should I believe in you?"
"If I say the thing that you should believe in,would you listen?"
"After that....LEAVE."
Yuko agreed on Haruna's contract by nodding in front of her,after that said everything that involves her dog,God,the reason why she is there and why she became human again.She waited for Haruna's reply but it took many minutes for her to answer back.Finally Haruna spoke and said,
"Do you want me to bring you to a therapist or to a mental hostpital?because I think your brain is upside-down."
Yuko got pissed off and said to Haruna that she is not kidding over and over but even if she repeat it over and over again,Haruna will still not believe on what she is saying.
"Will you shut up?!I wont believe on what you are saying!!You,my dog transformed into a human?!Yeah right!"
"Common Haruna!"
"What?How did you know my name?"
Yuko finally found a chance for Haruna to believe in her."I am your pet dog!I should know your name Haruna!"
"Eh?But this is impossible!you being a dog from a human is.....supernatural!"
"Believe me Haruna...I'm your dog..."
"Then....What is your name?"
"Shoot!"was the word that Yuko said inside her mind."What is her dog's name?!!!"Yuko started sweating a bit until she remembers that she have a dog collar attached on her neck.She looked at her right side and she saw a mirror but then as she sees her reflection and saw the dog tag.She saw nothing but a black-colored dog tag that is surrounding her neck."Why does this collar doesn't have any name?!"she exclaimed in her mind.
"Well?If you are my dog then I should know your name right?"
"Uh.....Shi....Shiro...is my name"Yuko said with a shaky tone of voice.
"Your kidding me......"
"Sh*t I made the wrong choice of a dog name!!!"Yuko exclaimed in her head as she sees Haruna's reaction on what she said.
"How can you know Shiro's name if you are just soul inside her?"
Yuko was surprised that she got the right name of Haruna's dog.She just said to Haruna that some of her dog's memories was inserted inside her head but of course that was just a fake reason for Haruna to stop asking questions and to finally believe in her.
"But...I'm happy right now!I don't need my dog anymore I guess.If I do that then God might bring you to heaven right?"
"It's not that easy....I need to make you happy 100%"
"Eh?No really I'm okay Shiro-chan!"
"Don't call me Shiro-chan.....My name is Yuko....Oshima Yuko."
"Ah.....my name is....Kojima Haruna."
Yuko felt happy but in the same time weird because Haruna suddenly accepted her after stealing a kiss from her.
"But seriously Yuko...I'm okay!I don't really need Shiro anymore since I'm a big girl now."
"Then what should I do right now?"
"Leave."
"EHHHHH?!!"
"Didn't you remember our deal earlier?that after I listen to you,you will leave after that."
Yuko forgot about their contract with each other earlier but she can't really leave because she needs to make Haruna happy but then she suddenly thought "Am I being selfish again?" that she is only doing this for her to return in heaven.Yuko suddenly agreed that she will leave Haruna's home.
Haruna didn't called the cops and just let Yuko be but still Yuko thought "If I'm doing this for my selfishness then maybe I shouldn't make her happy..."
After many minutes Yuko went to a small children's park that she saw as she wonder around the place near Haruna's house.There,she sat beside the large tree and slept for awhile and relaxed with the soft breeze of the wind.A few minutes passed someone suddenly stand in front of her.The shadow of that person woke her up.
As Yuko opens her eyes she saw a girl that is as small as her,a girl that is holding one grocery bag and the one that caught her attention is the girl's pink ribbon.
"Ohayou~!"the girl said happily.
"Eh?Who are you?"She said with a confused face.
"Ah!I'm Minami!Minami Takahashi!"
T.B.C.
Ohohohoho~ :hehehe: Minami why are you there~?
Fast update I did here XD anyways next update will be coming soon if I have inspirations because earlier I'm inspired :wub: about my oshi ofcourse~
anyways please keep supporting this fic. and lets follow each other on twitter (https://twitter.com/SH_Yedz)~!
that's all~!
byebye~ :byebye:
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Poor Yuko... :cry:
Ah... Minami appeared... Yeah, help Yuko pls :fap
Great update... hope to see new one soon.
Thank you
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its ok for me!! than you updated so soon :B, omg yeah human yuko!! and minami can help her!
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My Pet Lover part 3
After many minutes Yuko went to a small children's park that she saw as she wonder around the place near Haruna's house.There,she sat beside the large tree and slept for awhile and relaxed with the soft breeze of the wind.A few minutes passed someone suddenly stand in front of her.The shadow of that person woke her up.
As Yuko opens her eyes she saw a girl that is as small as her,a girl that is holding one grocery bag and the one that caught her attention is the girl's pink ribbon.
"Ohayou~!"the girl said happily.
"Eh?Who are you?"She said with a confused face.
"Ah!I'm Minami!Minami Takahashi!"
"Eh?"Yuko is still wondering on why is this girl in front of her."Do I know you?"She asks the girl but the girl just chuckled a bit.
"Nope!But don't worry I wont hurt you."the girl said with a smile.
Yuko is making her disgusted face that is like saying "Who is this "Takahashi Minami"? and why is she introducing to me in the first place?!Is she hitting on me?!" while Minami is still smiling at Yuko even if Yuko looks disgusted at her.
"Is my approach too much for you?"
"What?"Yuko wondered.
"Uhm.....I meant....What is your 1st impression to me?"
"DISGUSTING."Yuko said straightly.
"Ah....."Minami replied with a worried face.
After that nothing was left said but Minami is still standing in front of Yuko and Yuko didn't mind at all but just listen to the rustle of the grass blown by the wind at the park.Finally Yuko spoke because she really can't stand Minami standing in front of her.
"Hey.Are you hitting on me?"
"EHH?!Why would you say that?!"Minami said out loud with a shocked face.
"You woke me up,Said your name to me and ask my 1st impression to you and you are asking why I should say that?"
"Well first of all I'm sorry of my sudden approach and second....I'm not hitting on you!!"
"Then why are you standing in front of me?"
"Because!You look exactly like her."
"Her?"
"My.....Lover."
"Eh?!"
Yuko was shocked on what Minami said."Her Lover?"She said inside her head.Is her lover a girl?she can't remember meeting this girl so it can't be her in exact but she got curioused on this girl's lover and ask for more about it but then Minami didn't want to tell her about her lover and Yuko have no choice to let her be.
"Well....is that the only reason why you are standing in front of me?"
"Actually Nope.I want to help you."
"Help me?on what?"
"On what happened earlier to you!"
"Earlier?"
"You don't remember what happened to you earlier?A girl let you leave her house right?saying she doesn't need you and stuff."
"Ah...that?It's ok I'm fine with it."
"Well if you want me to help you....I'm here."
Minami lend her hand in front of Yuko waiting her to grab it and accept Minami's offer but Yuko is just starring at Minami's hands thinking if she would accept her offer.
The girl that offered her helping hand put her hand down and said to Yuko,"Well I think that is a no then?Well....see you."Turned around and was about to leave but then Yuko suddenly hugged her from her back which made Minami shocked.
"I-I accept your offer...."
"Ah....well then Let's go."
"Where?"
"At my dorm."
Yuko and Minami goes straight to Minami's dorm but with a distance between them because of their physical interaction earlier.
"Here we are."Minami opened the door of her room.
It was clean and really organized.It was an unexpected look of Minami's room for Yuko.Minami gazed at Yuko.
"W...What?"
"H-Huh?O-Oh!!It's nothing its nothing...."
"Wait a minute.....are you only helping me because I look like your lover?!"Yuko said with a mad tone of voice.
"Huh?No way!"
"Really?Then why is your voice shaky?"
"Ergh...."
"So it's true!You perv.!"
"Okay!It's true okay?So if you want to leave then go ahead..."
"You know what.....what the heck...I'll stay here instead of sleeping on the streets but don't do anything to me...OKAY?!"
"A-ah...Sure."
Yuko and Minami agreed to keep in distance with each other for atleast 2 meters and not less than that.
"Hey....Can you really tell me about your lover?just a little bit?"
"Uh......ok it can't be helped anyways.....even though it's weird but my lover was a girl,even though we have rough times with each other we are still keeping our relationship strong but then after a week ago....she died."
"Eh?What happened?Why did she died?"
"She died on a car accident.We have an argument on that day,I was going to chase after her but after I reached her I saw her body bleeding red....I grabbed her body and hugged it even if it stained my shirt.I was crying so hard....."
Minami can't hide her true emotions on how she said things about her Lover.It's still really fresh on her and still can't move on.
"That is why....When I saw you sleeping under the tree....I was so shocked but still happy because it's like....Yuko is still alive..."
"Huh?Yuko?"
"Oh that's my Lovers name.....Oshima Yuko..."
T.B.C.
Ohohohohoho~? What is this? I'm also confused :dizzy: is this a Kojiyuu or a Takayuu fic~?This might changed or stay still in the future updates of this fic. so stay tune~ :bingo:
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This is a kojiyuu at the end!!! XD
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I belive in kojiyuu! :twothumbs your fanfics is great! :lol:
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:ptam-cry: :ptam-cry: :ptam-cry:
OMG OMG
XD u know sexy gorgeous kakkoi maganda!
I really wanted to add more emoticons in this reply but NEVERMIND! whaha
:hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:
KojiYuu TakaYuu
where's mahh Acchan!!! :ptam-hbk:
anyway woohhh this is GREAT
thank you Mai Mai
muahhhh HEHHEEEHEHEH
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Where's acchan??
But Im happy with Kojiyuu!
But im really finding acchan :mon look:
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@Tam_atsu & sofylerry Let's hope that will happedn XD thanks for reading :)
@yourockme Thank you Sexy Cute that looks like acchan that has a scandal~! and just keep finding acchan I know you can do it XD
@miyaka Can we have enough acchan for one day~?hahaha joke XD
Anyways thank you for everyone that read this fiction and I'm hoping for you guys to read it at it's end :D
That's all (^____^ )
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yeah kojiyuu to the end...
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thanks for the update :D Love your fic :) Takayuu is cute but those two seem more family to me, their interactions r always hilarious tho :P I shall go with majority and say Kojiyuu. But woah loved that little twist in ur fic, curious bout Takamina's "lover" & lol @ everyone looking for acchan :P :D
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My Pet Lover part 4
"Hey....Can you really tell me about your lover?just a little bit?"
"Uh......ok it can't be helped anyways.....even though it's weird but my lover was a girl,even though we have rough times with each other we are still keeping our relationship strong but then after a week ago....she died."
"Eh?What happened?Why did she died?"
"She died on a car accident.We have an argument in that day,I was going to chase after her but after I reached her I saw her body bleeding red....I grabbed her body and hugged it even if it stained my shirt.I was crying so hard....."
Minami can't hide her true emotions on how she said things about her Lover.It's still really fresh on her and still can't move on.
"That is why....When I saw you sleeping under the tree....I was so shocked but still happy because it's like....Yuko is still alive..."
"Huh?Yuko?"
"Oh that's my Lover's name.....Oshima Yuko..."
Yuko gone stiff,she can't even move a muscle on what Minami said."My Lover's name","Oshima Yuko"Those words are still echoing inside her head.She can't understand on what is going on,she doesn't even know a girl that she met named Takahashi Minami.
She doesn't know if this is a coincidence or the power of Amnesia inside of her.
Yuko kept looking at Minami and tries so hard to remember something but none came out of her mind that involves Minami.Her mind was aching,she was trying so hard to think of any interactions with Minami before she died and did the agreement with god but no matter how had she tries nothing came out.
But then Yuko wondered..."Why am I trying so hard on remembering this girl?" she doesn't want to fall in love with a person that has the same gender as she does but on that time she can't resist on looking back at Minami.
"Hey....now that I think about it....What's your name?"Minami asked.
Yuko expected Minami to question her name and she thought "What should I lie and make a name?She'll find it out later on..."So she doesn't have any choice but to tell her real name to Minami.
"My name is....Oshima Yuko."
Minami left a slight smile in front of Yuko and said "you're really a joker,aren't you?" apparently Minami didn't believe at Yuko and just understood that thing as a joke."Is my fault that bad?that you wont let me know your real name?"Minami said with a small laughter.
"I'm not joking!My name is Oshima Yuko!"
"What ever you say....Yuu-chan!"Minami said while patting Yuko's head.
"Stay away!"Yuko pushed Minami.
"Eh?What is it?"
"2 meters is the agreement right?!"
"Hahaha roger that."Minami stepped 2 meters away from Yuko.
"Darn it.....Why is my heart throbbing?"Yuko said in her head while holding the middle of her chest.
After that....Midnight.
The clock was ticking and Minami was sleeping on the floor with a sleeping bag covering her whole body that almost looked like a caterpillar while Yuko is still awake on Minami's bed.She is waiting for God to show up in front of her and so after many minutes passed a bright shinning light suddenly appeared in front of Yuko.
"What happened with you and Kojima?"God asks.
"Don't act like you didn't witness everything..."Yuko said with a pissed off face.
"Hahaha As expected,you are really smart Oshima-san!"God said while smiling.
"Anyways..."Who is this Takahashi Minami?" and why is her lover as same as my name?!"
"Shh....Oshima-san,You might wake her up."
"Just say it!"
"You don't expect me to say the reason why right?Find it out yourself Oshima-san,I know you are that smart to figure it out on your own.Bye Bye."
"Hey wai--"
Before Yuko stopped god from fading away it was too late.After that she saw a note next to her.
"Don't forget your mission. -God"
Yuko remembered that she must make Kojima happy but then she can't concentrate because right now she fell in love on a girl named...Takahashi Minami.
The next day...
*Ding Dong*
The buzzer of Minami's door kept buzzing which made Yuko wake up and answer the door.As Yuko opens the door,she saw a short-length girl in front of her with a black solid hair.
"Who are you and what do you want?"
"Ah,I'm Takamina's friend!Maeda Atsuko!"
"Takamina?..."
"Ah!Acchan!Why are you here?"Minami suddenly showed up ad asked Atsuko.
"I'm here to tell you something!"
"Tell me something?Come in let's talk inside."
"Okay."
As Atsuko came inside and passes Yuko she quickly whisper in Yuko's ear.
"You look just like her.....Takamina's Lover."
After that Atsuko came inside Minami's living room and Yuko....is still confused.
T.B.C.
Wehehehehe Kojima's spotlight is still charging up!!When will her Spotlight be lit on?Tune in for the future Chapters~ :on woohoo:
Thank you for the people that are reading this fiction ^___^ I never even knew this fiction would get so many feedbacks so Thank you again for reading! :)
That's all :byebye:
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yay Acchan showed up lol :D Poor Yuko is confused now though! Looking forward to your next chapter, thanks for the update, I enjoyed the read :)
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yay Acchan showed up lol :D Poor Yuko is confused now though! Looking forward to your next chapter, thanks for the update, I enjoyed the read :)
I'm glad you've enjoyed it :) also the timing of the readers on finding acchan was great XD part 4 was really about acchan's appearance and at part 3 I wasn't expecting of some readers on finding acchan (maybe because I write ATSMN stories?? :?) but I'm glad they didn't forget on that OTP I mean Atsumina is a true couple~!!! :deco:
Thanks again for reading~~~ :)
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wow.. yuko what are you going to do?
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My Pet Lover part 5
After that Yuko was eavesdropping to Atsuko and Minami's conversation...
"Here?!Wh-Why?!"Yuko saw Minami with a shocked face but she doesn't know on what is happening right now so she just listen to clear things up for her.
"You Don't want to,Minami?"
"It's not that I don't want to....It's just..."
"Ah...it's about her....huh?"
"H-Her?"
"Oshima Yuko..."
"Atsuko...."
Yuko was shocked about Atsuko and Minami's conversation.She was again brought up to someone's conversation and was so confused on that time.
"Who am I?","What is my real identity?","What is my past and why can't I remember it?"those where the questions that are stuck in Yuko's mind that she wants to be answered.She can't understand the coincidences that is passing through her right now.
Yuko just continued on eavesdropping and she heard Atsuko said,
"What's the matter Minami?am I right or wrong?"
"...."
Yuko can see Minami's eyes pointed through the ground and started to shed a bit.Minami really can't forget about her lover that she also love so much.
"Minami...I know that you love Yuko but this is just too much!Finding a person that looks like her just to hide your pain?!GIVE ME A BREAK!"
"URUSAI!(Shut up!)" Minami suddenly shouted in front of Atsuko which made Atsuko and even Yuko startled.
"You....You don't know Yuko!She's much more than what you are saying earlier!!!I'm her lover and I understand her the most so...So!!"
"So what Minami?She's dead!Get over with it!It's not that I'm budging with your own business but this is just like I said TOO MUCH!"
"SHUT UP!!!"
Minami ran fastly to reach the door and leave the scene, she bumped into Yuko's shoulders as she reaches the door.Yuko saw a quick glance of Minami's face.Her eye's were read,her tears wont stop and her browns were clenched with anger.
After Minami left the scene,Atsuko approached Yuko and said,
"So!Why are you with her? and why didn't you think twice?Is that really you?huh Yuko?"
"Wh-What are you saying?"
"Don't play dumb that you didn't eavesdrop....now answer me,is that you?...Oshima Yuko?"
"....My name is indeed Oshima Yuko but....even one memory with her none got stuck in my mind...so If it's the Oshima Yuko,Minami's lover that you are finding then...I'm not that person."
"Interesting...you look like her though..."
After that conversation Yuko and Atsuko are facing with one another,Atsuko was looking straight at Yuko's face but Yuko was looking at the ground and can't look at Atsuko at all.
"Are...you...Minami's....new Lover?"
Yuko suddenly said something to Atsuko to break the ice and as Atsuko hears the thing she said she just laugh and laugh about what Yuko said,
"Stupid!I'm not her Lover!that's forbidden!"
"Forbidden?"
"Yeah!Because!I'm her Sister!"
"S....SISTER?!!!!"
Yuko was confused once again in that time."A Sister?!How?!"she said inside her head but even if she questioned Atsuko on how it is possible she didn't said anything to Yuko at all But she said something else to Yuko,
"Hey Yuko....can you find Minami for me?please find my sister....and tell her I'm sorry..."
She agreed on Atsuko and ran fastly to find Minami.
Yuko search everywhere until the sky turns black,Yuko went to her last destination and that is the park where they 1st met.
As Yuko reaches the park her breathing was about to pass,her whole body was sweating searching for Minami,seeing Minami's face crying in front of her earlier was the thing she want to remove from the girl.
Finally as Yuko search the whole park she went to her last check and that is the tree where Minami stand in front of her.
As Yuko reaches the tree she saw a girl sleeping that is wearing a large ribbon on her head,Yuko approaches the girl,sat beside her and said,
"Are you okay?"
"Why did you followed me?"
"Because....I can't resist seeing you cry earlier...."
"Is that so...."
Minami and Yuko listened to the rustle of the grass and their 2 meter agreement suddenly vanished on that time.
"So....you've met my sister?I think she said it to you...after I left...."
"Ah that?...yeah.."
"Me and Atsuko were sisters but with different father's,we live separately and after my father died I lived on their home.She was so stubborn on my childhood days,she was the one that wants to be followed and understood.
She never even gives me time to explain something,that's why when I have my 1st lover she took it as a joke but then as she noticed we are really taking our relationship seriously she talked to us....the day Yuko died.
She lectured Yuko saying that she has the guts to be with me but I talked back to my sister....but I don't have enough willpower to defeat her and just sit back seeing Yuko cry....I regret that moment.....so much...because after that...Yuko left our house and then I tried to follow her and talk with her but then my sister tried to stop me for a minute but I let go of her struggle and tried to find Yuko as fast as I could but....I was too late...I saw Yuko's body lying on the ground....covered by her own blood....It pierced my heart seeing that scene.....and until now It is still painful even though I am only saying it by words...."
Minami shed tears after she said the story while Yuko can't say that Minami's sister was "sorry" on what happened earlier.She thinks that Minami will just get more mad after she says that.
"Hey Yuko..."
"hmm?.....E-EH?!"
Yuko was shocked by Minami's approach...her face was so close to hers.Their lips were just inches away from each other,Yuko was holding Minami's shoulders to back it off but for some reason she can't push it off....instead she's pulling it to her....bit by bit their 2 meter agreement vanished and was reaching to 0...but then...Minami just leaned on her shoulder and said...
"I'm sorry..."
"Huh?"
"My sister was right...It's too much painful seeing you....it reminds me of Yuko....and for the fact you have the same name with each other hurts much more...."
"What are you trying to say?"
"I want you to be gone with my life...."
"Eh?"
"I want you to....leave my house and....to not see you anymore..."
"But...I actually fallen in lov--"
Before Yuko says the thing she wanted to say Minami touched her lips using her pointing finger and made a "shush" sound.
"Yuko....I appreciate that feelings of yours...but if I will hear it completely my heart will just be down for the rest of my life remembering the Oshima Yuko I love from the start of my life...."
Yuko was about to cry on that time but Minami gave her a warm hug and said..."this is going to be my first and last hug that I will give to you....Goodbye...Yuko..."
"Minami....."
Minami stood up to where she is sitting upon and leave Yuko under the tree where they first met.
After Yuko waited for Minami to ran out of sight she let out a large amount of crying both of her hands are attached to her chest and her upper body was bowing through the ground where her tears are falling through.
She kept crying and crying and even though it's night she didn't mind if she will disturb someone,She just kept crying until she gets satisfied and after she stopped crying she raised her upper body and she suddenly saw someone in front of her.
"Are you done crying?"
A girl with a curly hazelnut hair standing in front of her handed a handkerchief to her and wiped it to her cheeks while Yuko can't say anything to the girl that showed in front of her.
"What a hopeless pet dog you are....right...Shiro?"
"Ha...Haruna!!!"
Yuko hugged Haruna tightly and so did Haruna.
"Look at you....and you are saying that I should be the one who should be happy....Let's go home Shiro...."
T.B.C.
Yukoooooooo ;A;
Kojima's spotlight finally turned on~!! wohoo~!!
my neck hurts :fainted: hopefully you all will like this part :)
see you soon~!! :byebye:
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Aww Yuko :( So sweet in the end when Haruna came though!!!!
I feel bad for Minami though T_T Her choice to leave in the end was pretty mature but such a sad story for minami! Hope she'll be happy eventually!!
Thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!! Love this fic :D
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Finally an update!
Kyaa! Haruna to the rescue! :)
Thanks for the update! I want more! <3
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Hehehe great story, thank you for the update :cow:
Come on Haruna, please give us some action 8)
Update soon kaykay :twothumbs
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great history
I wait for the next update . :panic: :panic:
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Hello Mai-chan :) this is my first post and my first read on a JPHIP fan fic. and I stumble upon your fics.
I gotta say I was just about to read the "My Pet Lover" fic only but I read all of your S.S. :lol: and here are my comments for every S.S. ED's of it :D
@Center of My Heart Short but it made my hear pump and miss Acchan more....:farofflook:
@Rainy Winter Season THAT LAST LINE~!!! "This is just the start of our Love Story." so do I have high hopes for a season 2 of this S.S.~? :ding: & btw I love this story so much BUT!!!I HATE PART 5!!!!!It made me cry so much :pleeease: I used half the box of my tissue box!!! and I kept sniffing and sniffing until my mom questions me about it and just leave me alone after saying that I'm just reading a fic. :lol: still I love the ending and I hope for a season 2!!! :on woohoo:
As for my pet lover...Yukooooooo ;A; my Takayuu........ :gyaaah:
I'm a big fan of takayuu so this part 5 made my heart wreck abit....Minami's decision on letting Yuko go was such a painful decision but I still have a bit of hope for these two to meet again in the future chapters :farofflook:
Thanks for the fics Mai-chan! it made my day great~! :jphip: :on GJ:
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Interesting story.. please update soon.. :heart:
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Hmmmm Right now I don't have any clue if I should make one but we don't know until we try I guess? although should I still call that fic. a S.S.? :lol: andddd I'm sorry about your tissue box :sweat:
OHOHOHOHO~~~~ I like the sound of that~ :wub:
"....Yuko....How can I tell my true feeling for you?"
Woahhhhhh HOW???WHEN~?!! I want to see chapter 7 now.... :fainted:
and btw THAT OST!!!!I LOVE IT!!! :luvluv1: I suddenly felt a weird feeling as I click it and continued on reading!It suits the timing :D and what are you saying Mai-chan? your fic. ain't boring!!It great! :on GJ:
Please keep updating :)
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kojiharu likes yuko!!
yes, now all yuko has to do is forget about takamina...
kojiyuu!? :deco:
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Kojiharu likes yuko!??? Howw!????? They dont talk much on the other chapters?? Oh well its okay!
Atleast in the end this will be a KOJIYUU!!!! :inlove: :wub:
Yuko just forget about takamina. She's not the one for you :) nyannyan is THE ONE!! XD
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i wonder what feeling that is... please update soon! :grin: :grin: :grin:
kojiyuu hearts unite! :otomerika:
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You and Me against the world [ONESHOT]
Kids....Parents....Classmates....Everyone....I hate them all....Why are they helping each other?I can't even understand them at all....I'm Takahashi Minami...and...everyday as I do my daily routine I kept seeing different kinds of emotions that passes by through me...some are happy,sad,angry and some doesn't do anything....just....plain faces with no emotions.I'm one of those people....except,I'm different to all of them...well that is what my mind is set but let me get to my point on why I hate the world....OUR world for exact.For example...people do bad things and good things but for what?You'll die someday what's the use of stealing or helping someone if your going to die anyways?Life is just so useless...you help someone but then you'll die and someday that person will also die too....you steal something and did something so bad,you'll be put in jail and yet you'll die too and with that opinion of mine that I said on class when I was a 1st year High School student everyone called me "DarkEye" they said that it means "a person that has no feelings for others and with no understanding at all" but many people say the most reason of it all is because of the scar on my right eye,where did I get it?Long story and because of that nickname I didn't mind them at all I just do what I always do at my whole daily life.I'm going to wake up then go to the bathroom and shower,wear my same uniform,cook then eat my food and then wear my shoes and go straight to my school and enter the classroom and after that I'll study then if recess I will always go straight to the rooftop and eat alone after that I go back to the classroom,wait until dismissal ends and go home and after doing the things that is needed to be done I will go straight to bed and the next day I will do the same thing over and over again.
I have been doing this routine for the past 3 years and I thought this is going to be my 4 years straight but then one day as I go straightly to school,opened my shoe locker I saw....A letter.
I looked and inspect it properly to know if it was misplaced or any other excuse but at the back of the letter it has a handwritten mark that says,
"To Takahashi Minami"
I tilted my head slowly because of confusion.Knowing if the letter that I'm holding is normal or.....a love letter.
The coloration of the letter was pink but I suddenly thought that I'm just jumping to conclusions and just decided to read the content of the letter.
I slowly opened the letter,my palms were sweating,my heart was beating so fast.I was so anxious on what does the letter contain,"Is my hunch right?","is this a love letter?"those were the questions that I'm saying inside my head as I ripped the letter slowly to get the paper inside of it but I suddenly wondered "Why am I so anxious about this?yeah sure if this is a love letter I appreciate it but the one that loves me is going to die too so why should I be anxious?"there it is again,my lame long quote that I said in front of the class 3 years ago.
When I opened the letter with my normal mode again that is not anxious,palms not sweating and heart that is not beating so fast,My time suddenly stopped a bit.
"Memory Tree 4:00 p.m."
My head tilted a bit, "That's it?that's the content of this letter?"
After that,While my teacher was discussing a lesson I didn't listen to him but words about,"4:00 p.m.,Memory Tree" kept repeating inside my head.I can't handle but wait for 4 pm to arrive and that's when I realize that if you wait something it's like time slows 10 times than it originally was it was actually weird though.
Finally dismissal arrived and I quickly ran towards the Memory Tree of the school backyard.
As I approach the tree in a much closer angle I saw a silhouette of a girl.Her body was slim and the curves of her body was...sexy,she contains a shoulder length hair that I never usually see on other girls in my class.
She suddenly looked at me and rapidly approached me.
I was so shock of her sudden approach.Her lips were attached to mine,She suddenly entered her tongue through my mouth which made me push her away from me but her strength was superbly strong which made me quit.
Her tongue kept swishing through my mouth while my tongue was moving on its own,my tongue entwined to the girl that kiss me and forcefully suck it to feel her whole body."Hrmm..."She let out a soft moan,her eyebrows furrowed and her cheek were so red.At that time I have my chance to let go of her but then I turned to be aggressive and craved for more and kept on kissing the girl that I just met right now,finally as we catch some air she suddenly spoke and said...
"...My name is....Maeda Atsuko....and....I love you....Takahashi....Minami..."The girl said slowly as she grabs some air.
"that was the most weirdest confession I ever got..."I said to her straightly.
"Do you...love me too?"she questioned.
"Are you sure?For a girl like me?A girl that is known as the "DarkEye"?"I questioned the girl named "Atsuko" but then she just smiled on what I've said and stood up on where she is sitting upon.
"So?Even if you are an Assassin,a serial killer or anything much badass than that I don't care!As long as you are the Takahashi Minami I love then I will still love you even if you think that my love for you will just be wasted because I'm just going to die soon"
At that time those words made my heart jump it's so weird it's just a simple sentence!but this feeling in my heart is so new to me that I can't even understand it's own meaning!
I quickly stood up and stand in front of Maeda and said,
"Since when?Since when did you fell inlove?to a person like....me?"
"1st year,Christmas Midnight and two tugs tried to rape me but suddenly a girl with a midget height showed in front of me and protected me and after she beat the two tugs up she looked at me,lend her hand and said "Are you alright?did they hurt you?"I quickly hugged her and cry through her shoulders,she patted my back and said "It's ok...your safe because....I'm here to protect you..."I looked at her face and saw her right eye clearly shut while having a long slash with her blood flowing non-stop.
I quickly hold her hand and said to go to the hospital but she declined and said it's just small scratch from one of the tug's knife but I kept on begging her to go to the hospital to aid her bruise but then she carried me in a princess kind of way and ran away to the scene where the tugs are still unconscious.It's weird that she doesn't care much about her life.She escort me to my home as I show to that direction,she drop me and said "Well,See you next time,Kawaii-san!" My face suddenly blushed a bit on that time and I questioned her on why she chose that nickname and she said as she runs away from me,
"SIMPLE!!Because!You are CUTE!" on that time I just noticed that I fell inlove to you but then after that day as I pass on some students from a certain school the said a rumor about a girl that known as the "DarkEye" and said that she had a large scar on her face.My eyes actually sparkle on that time and have the chance to enroll at your school but I have no chance to approach you and Finally yesterday as you forgot to lock your locker I have the chance to put my letter for you and that's how I fell inlove to you...Minami!"
"So you are.....Kawaii....-san?"
"Yes!"
I can't believe it she is the "Kawaii-san" that my heart fell against too!
"I actually....love you....back then..."
"Back then?How about now Minami?Do you still love me?"
"NO"
"Eh????"
"Because I love you ten times more than I loved you back then."I said to her with a big smile.
"Mi...MINAMI!!"
Atsuko hugged me tightly and I answered her hug too she kissed me like we did earlier but this time it wasn't a forceful kiss,but it was a passionate kiss that contains our pure love with each other.As the time we let go of the kiss to grab some air I said to her,
"....A relationship to me...is it reall-"
before I even finish my word she softly put her finger through my lips and said to me,
"Like I said...I will love you no matter what and even if it's You and Me Against the World...."
After that We made a soft kiss to each other and attached our foreheads with each other and there I noticed that this is really the reason on why we are living,the reason why god gave us only one life and that is to cherish this life and find that person that will always love you no matter who you are...
"I love you Atsuko....I will protect you..."
"Un....I know you will....I also love you too Minami....100 times more than we first met..."
"Atsuko..."
"Minami..."
We once again did a passionate under the Memory Tree which will also be our Tree on where we finally meet each other again and were we love each other much more back then.
THE END
WOOOOOOOOOT Never wrote that kind of thing before that kissing scene was too much for me though ^^, I MUST REGAIN MY BLOOD~!!! :on bleed:
I hope you all like this oneshot though... :err: :prayers:
AND~!!!By the way Don't worry~ "My Pet Lover" will still be updated~ I just missed writing a Atsumina Fic. that's all~ :hehehe:
Anyways see you all again soon~!!
Byebye~ :byebye:
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t cute one shot. A little bit dark, though.. :d And a really hot scene!!!!!!
Thank you for this update!
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Well.......ermm......this is...awkward? :mon mischief: :mon sweat:
The timing of this fiction is really weird through my nickname and it makes me laugh though :lol:
anyways I like the fiction though Minami is being hatred at her school I slightly agree through her opinion wait your the writer here so I agree to your opinion! XD
The kissing scene was so..... :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy1: :on bleed: :imdead:
seriously! I blushed so hard!!!!
thanks for the fiction! and for the weird coincidence :sweat:
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I like your story Mai-chan :hee:
And I like how cool Takamina is in your story :luvluv1:
The kiss is just hot~ :on bleed:
Please do continue updating your fics :on gay:
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I need to go to the hospital now. I loss too much blood :on bleed:
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Yeah! atsumina!! :B
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OMAYGAH~!!!!!! :on bleed: MY HEART~!!! :luvluv1: ohohohoho~~~~ the details is too much for me~~~ :wub:
I like the story btw :on GJ:
but I have a question Mai-chan,I have noticed that you're still not drawing something in "My Pet Lover",Why is that?(....just asking :sweat:)
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Hello.
Mai-chan ! :)
I really like your OS about AtsuMina!!! :)
It's really GOOD!!!
I hope you make MORE!!!
Thank You
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so muuuch details
ahhgggggg ngggggggg :on bleed: :on bleed:
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WHHHAAAAAT?!!! :shock: :on blackhole: Well in that case please don't draw so that it wont end :kneelbow: JOKE~! :P
ahahaha :lol: don't worry M.P.L. have a lot to go until it ends,maybe it will have 12 or 10 parts only plus I will also ad some alter endings to M.P.L. :D
Thanks for those who tune in for M.P.L.! and also for those who read "You and Me against the WORLD"! I know I'm not that good at writing but I hope my stories brings you a bit of joy atleast ^^, I hope someday I'll improve in writing stories and in my grammar too :)
My Pet Lover part 7
After what happened last night between the two girls,Haruna made breakfast for the both of them while Yuko is still asleep.
"Yukooooooo,Wake up!it's 9 a.m.!" Haruna kept shaking Yuko while she repeats on saying those words.
Finally Yuko woke up,raised her upper body and stared at Haruna quietly.
"Wha-What is it?"
"Ohayou!"Yuko said with a bright smile.
"Uh.....S-Stop fooling around!Breakfast is ready!"Haruna said while hiding her blushed face on Yuko.
"Did I said something wrong?"Yuko said with a worried face.
"Mou!just go to the dining room and eat breakfast!"Haruna said while her face is still blushing and looking away from Yuko.
"Err....Ok....(Jeez I thought that thing that I did might change the atmosphere on what happened last night but I guess she took it seriously...)"Yuko said in her head while going down to the stairs.
*Sound of the door close*
Haruna's POV
*sigh this feeling of mine started when we first met,the time where she stole my first kiss.On that time I was ready to punch her in the face,so hard that it would bleed but as I feel her lips I was about to grab some more but good thing I didn't let my guard down and after that I just instantly let her leave to my house and why is that?because when I look at her face my heart thumps 10 times faster than before and my face starts to get red all of a sudden and of course I still don't believe that she's my dog I'm just listening to her on that time so that she would just shut up.
But still...I don't know this kind of feeling inside me,it's really new actually,I tried to question my friend,Mariko, and after I explain that weird feeling,she just said,
"Well if you just met her and you have that kind of feeling it a thing called "Love at First Sight""
But still is that thing possible?I though love is blind?I really can't understand things clearly,maybe this is the reason they call me "air-head" but then yesterday as I saw Yuko once again her emotion dragged me to come close to her I want to help her and resolver her problem,I felt a bit of regret when I saw her cry,her tears pierced my heart on that time,I really blamed myself seeing her cry and right now I hope I did the right decision on letting her live in my house once again.
END OF POV
After a minute passes,Haruna go to the dining room to eat her breakfast but as she arrived at the dining room Yuko wasn't there.
Haruna left a sigh and thought that Yuko might be angry at her because of her cold greetings through Yuko this morning.
@A small park
"Hrmm....How can I make it up to her?" Yuko said quietly while her body is leaning at the Big tree of the small park.
"*sigh...Maybe I'll just say sorry to her but...."
"It's not that easy"
*sigh* Yuko suddenly remembered her last word through Haruna yesterday.Now that she think about it,she's at the same place were she met Minami and this is also the same place where she leave her alone.Truly this Tree is such a bad luck for Yuko but then she remembered that this is also the tree where Haruna rescued her from her rejection against love.
Finally Yuko thought on what to do and stood up to where she is sitting upon and face in front of the big tree and there she said,
Play it here ;)
Tonari No Kaibutsu-Kun 'My Little Monster' Ost ~Full Version~ (Full Cover) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0OLcjD64wU#ws)
"Thank you...you might just be a tree but still you gave me time to think a decision that is worth useful,I will....(.............)I promise."Yuko whispered her promise to the tree and after that Yuko ran so fast to reach Haruna's house.
After some minutes passes Yuko finally reached Haruna's house and as she reaches for the door it suddenly opened and there she saw once again the girl that has a curly hazelnut hair,the girl let her out of her house but that doesn't matter to Yuko,most importantly she saw the girl that rescued her before her heart breaks.
As that girl looks at her,she gave Yuko a big smile and said,
"Okaeri(Welcome Home)"
And there Yuko approach that girl and gave her a hug saying,"Un....I'm glad I'm home....Haruna"
Instead of Haruna pushing Yuko away from her,she answered back Yuko's hug and tightens it.
"Sorry for what I did last night..."Yuko whispered on Haruna's ear.
"Un...*shakes head horizontally*....I'm the one who should be sorry..."
"Well...I have something to say to you,Haruna"
"What is it?"
Yuko let's go of their hug and stares at Haruna.
"I will forget about her....just like you said,I will do it bit by bit...but...I will be needing your help."
"Help?What kind?"Haruna questioned as she tilted her head.
"I want you to replace Minami and be the one in my heart,I will learn on loving you Haruna....in short....can I be your Lover?"
Haruna's face suddenly turned red ad was speechless on what Yuko said.
"Hey.....is it oka--"
Before Yuko finishes her words Haruna interrupt it with a hug which is so tight and there she said,"U....Un..."with a shaky voice.
"Yokatta...(That's good...)"Yuko closed her eyes and answers Haruna's hug.
Earlier at the Big tree...
"Thank you...you might just be a tree but still you gave me time to think a decision that is worth useful,I will forget about Minami and I will start it from here,I promise."
"This is a good start...."Yuko said inside her mind.
T.B.C.
I have no other OST's in mind!This OST is just frickin' awesome!
well thanks for reading~ ^^
:byebye:
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Yey!!! Thanks so much for the nice update!! :thumbsup
Keep writing~~ i love the story... :inlove: :inlove:
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Awwww ~
That's so sweet ~
I do love it (>_<)
Wait for the next chapter ne ~
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Thank you so much for the update! So now they're official! Ureshiii~ KOJIYUU <3
Update soon!
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I knew it!!! This will really be a kojiyuu!!!! Yeyyy!! <3
Now they're official!! Im so happy :) hope they will not break! :)
More updates pleasee :) :wub: :wub:
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my heart knows it all
it will be kojiyuu! :heart:
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Nice just finished reading from prologue to part 7 and I like the twist of the story but I have a curiosity on the ending.....if Haruna will be 100% happy then Yuko will be in heaven therefore Yuko will be gone and not with Haruna! If my hunch is right then WTF (sorry about that....)
Great story anyways :) :twothumbs
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ohohoho~ Yuko was the one that took the initiative huh~ interesting :hehehe:
@DarkEye OH!!Large point there!!! :shock:
I kinda got late to see this update :teheeperro~ good thing I still saw it in the 1st page XD
Hope you update part 8 soon :))
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Thanks for tuning in everyone~!
and Merry Christmas to all of you~!!!!
My Pet Lover part 8
"Help?What kind?"Haruna questioned as she tilted her head.
"I want you to replace Minami and be the one in my heart,I will learn on loving you Haruna....in short....can I be your Lover?"
Haruna's face suddenly turned red ad was speechless on what Yuko said.
"Hey.....is it oka--"
Before Yuko finishes her words Haruna interrupt it with a hug which is so tight and there she said,"U....Un..."with a shaky voice.
"Yokatta...(That's good...)"Yuko closed her eyes and answers Haruna's hug.
After what happened yesterday,Haruna and Yuko are officially lovers,of course they are still keeping a bit distance with each other since they are just new to their relationship but Haruna took the initiative to make their bond stronger and thus she invited Yuko to go to the place were most of the new couple go to.....The Amusement Park.
"Yuko!!Let's go there!"Haruna said while holding Yuko's hand.
"Eh~I can't see it...."
"It doesn't matter now!Let's go~!"
"AaaAahH!"
Haruna run fastly while Yuko is just being pulled away and as they reach the thing Haruna was pointing at...
"Uh.... :cry:"
"What is it Yuko?"
"Aah!!Nothing Nothing...."
The reason why Yuko is kind of scared and such it's because of the arcade Haruna picked and that arcade is called...
"OK!Your next young lady!Welcome to the Balloon darts arcade!where you will use your dart!only one dart!to pop the balloon to get your prize~! and since it's almost Christmas the balloons are 10 times bigger!all you need is luck to get the prize on what's inside!It's that easy!"
Yes...Balloons,Yuko's number one enemy.She's a tough girl but when it comes to balloons Yuko wont stand a chance and since the balloons are 10 times bigger and as big as a basket ball it's such a nightmare to Yuko.
"Hey Yuko!Let's start!"
'Y...You go ahead Haru....I-I'll just stand back..."Yuko said with her eyebrows furrowed and voice that was so shaky.
"Eh?Why not?It's sooooo easy!you just do this!"
*throws the dart*
*POP*
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Yuko suddenly hold her ears and screamed so loud, Haruna was shocked about Yuko's reaction and approached her quickly.
But suddenly a commotion started because many people thought that something bad has happened to Yuko.
After that...@ a bench
"Mou Yuko....You should have told me you're scared at balloons!"Haruna said as she holds her big teddy bear that she won on the arcade.
"Sh....Shut up...."Yuko said as she blushes with embarrassment.
"Sorry,Sorry :nervous Well anyways this is just the start of our trip!Let's do some more!"
"I'm not in the mood..."
"*sigh Come on Yuko...We're just starting our relationship and we are already fighting?"Haruna said as she holds Yuko's hand.
"Ah....so we're fighting in this case huh?OK then!"Yuko suddenly stands up on the bench and starts to go to the Amusement park's exit gate.
"Yuko?Were are you going?!"
"It's none of you're business!We're fighting right?So here!"
"Eh????Yuko!!Come back here!"
Right now Yuko has unleashed her true attitude against Haruna and yes this is also her attitude when she had a relation against Minami,a selfish,misunderstood and over acting girl,this is the Oshima Yuko that Takahashi Minami fell in love to but right now Haruna doesn't know what to do she's just new to the thing called "Love" and as she knows this is not the Oshima Yuko that she fell in love to.
"Yuko!!!"Before Yuko reaches the exit Haruna grabbed her arm and Haruna started to pull her away from the exit but their strength is so equal that their not moving an inch at all but just doing a steady tag of war or so.
Haruna have no other choice but not carry Yuko in a princess pattern,it's weird for her on doing that because she's not that type of girl when things are in that situation but she had no other choice but to choose that option while Yuko is saying over and over "Let me go!!!!"
Even if she's saying that obviously Haruna didn't let her go and finally as Haruna reaches the place where she wants to go with Yuko she put her down and gave the staff 2 tickets.....2 tickets for a Ferris Wheel ride.
As they are in the Ferris Wheel you can sense the awkward atmosphere between those two new couple,
As their view got higher, a beautiful scenery showed in front of them.
Finally Haruna have the perfect timing and finally spoke,
"Yuko....I know that you are really mad at me but right now I want you to know that I will love you just the way you are..."
Yuko's eyes suddenly shimmered,she suddenly saw a slice of memory about her and Minami because....Minami said the same phrase as Haruna did to her...
"You know....those lights that we are seeing right now...every one of it is special.....because they are combining each other to make something beautiful and right now I want us to make are bond strong Yuko!This is why we are here,not to fight! but to be happy and make our relationship get stronger than ever and make something beautiful too!"
After what Haruna said Yuko embraced her and said, "Sorry...I'm such a OA(Over Acting) person.....doing this to you...while I was the one who started it all...."
"No...it's nothing...I'm happy that you are not mad at me..."
After that they now both now each other"s personality and finally made progress on their relationship.
HARUNA's POV
Being in a relationship with Yuko is pretty hard actually...for a simple mistake turns to be that big is really weird....But seeing her do that is kind of cute actually and I want to see more of that from her too.
END OF POV
YUKO'S POV
Haru is really a caring person from what I'm expecting from her.I felt so sorry from her because of my harsh attitude....balloons really scares the shit out of me and it can really change my personality but right now
I think we did a big progress in our relationship.....i guess?
END OF POV
T.B.C.
Weird chapter is weird indeed I don't even know what I just wrote? OTL
Anyways tune in for more of M.P.L. :nervous
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Atleast, it did help them out.
I hope Yuko will be nice to Haruna after that incident.
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hahaha :lol: this is quite a funny chapter actually! but atleast they made a progress! part 8 title suits it well XD "Over Acting Yuko" indeed
hope to see part 9 fast~
And merry Christmas to you too :)
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awwww
Nyan nyan doin her best for yuko just
to fall in love with her
GO NYAN NYAN! I LOVE YOU XD
Yuko why soo OA
WHAHAHA
Soo cute
Waiting for part9
Meri krisumasu ♥ヽ(^。^)ノ
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Yuko's pretty over acting here :nervous but yeah atleast there's a progress that happened :D
Belated Merry Christmas Mai-chan and good luck on finishing this :on GJ:
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Short update for this story since I'm on vacation :nervous
My Pet Lover part 9
After the happenings on what happened yesterday Yuko and Haruna made their relationship stronger or so we thought....
"Yuko!!! come back here!!"
"Noooooo!!!"
Yuko and Haruna are fighting again with such a small thing and that is about well....
"Yuko!!I didn't mean to kick you out of the bed!I was asleep on that time!" Haruna said as she chase Yuko to the living room.
"Che!!My but still hurts you know!!"
"Mou!I don't care anymore!"Haruna can't handle her pissed of mood and just decided to leave the house to catch some air.
As Haruna opens the door she bumped into someone and caused her to fall on the ground.
"Ittai!(Ouch!)"
"Ah!Sorry miss!Are you OK?"
A girl with a small amount of height lend her hand in front of Haruna,a girl named "Takahashi Minami"
As Haruna reaches for the girl's hand,Minami apologizes for what she did.
"Ah you don't need to apologize!It's my fault!"
"If you say so...ah by the way are you also just strolling around?"
"Yeah why did you ask?"
"Mind if we have a small talk?"
"Eh?Why?"
"I want to talk about her."
"Her?"Haruna said with her face all curioused.
"about Oshima Yuko."Minami said with a smile.
Hopefully you all will understand that I'm a person that needs some rest too :sweat:
Happy 2013 and I hope that all of you are going to have a great year :)
-Mai
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So short..... :badluck: but how???WHY???WHEN?!! how did takamina know Kojipa??? UWAHHH well I guess I have to wait again...*sigh*
Happy New Year to you too Mai-chan~
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o_O... yeah that happen many chapters ago. but still freak me out that atsumina are sisters T_T...
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Hey sexy gorgeous maganda!
:jerk: :jerk: :jerk:
I want some txxxyxx (did.you.get.it?) momentss :on cigar: :on hypto:
Pleaseeeee XD (If.di.mo.nagets.nvm :rock:)
anyway yaa its short :(
But its okay i'll just wait
Takamina yuhuuuu! ヽ(^。^)ノ♥♥♥
Yuko be nice in nyan nyan! :bleed eyes:
Thatsss bad •﹏•
Thank you maimai ↖(^ω^)↗ muaa
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Eh?.......hrmm.......EHHH?!!!!Why so short??? :panic: <- doesn't look like a panic though XD anyways well what a twisted part for this story! :shocked: how did minami know that haruna knows yuko?? :?
Anyways this short story is like....not short anymore hahaha :lol:
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@DarkEye I do I agree XD maybe I should change this thread :? YEP! I'll change it :D
@yourockme yep I get your point XD
My Pet Lover part 10
"Eh?What about Yuko? and how do you know that I know her?"Haruna asked Minami with a curious tone of voice.
"I'll tell you if you are interested."
Haruna and Minami went to a coffee shop.Haruna can keep her curiosity hidden,she can feel that this girl in front of her knows many things about yuko and that's why she agreed to have a small talk with her.
"So what about yuko?who are you anyways?"
"Hey chill up,My name is Takahashi Minami"Minami said as she lend her hand in front of Haruna expecting a hand shake.
"Minami....Minami....."
"Uhm....is something wrong?"
(http://sphotos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/407895_381655721924679_816061857_n.jpg)
"Minami!!!"
"You...."
"Huh?"
*SLAP*
"O.....OUCH!!!Why did you slap me?!"Minami said with a large shout.
"You made Yuko cry huh?!It was you!You....BITCH!"
"Hey!Chill!We are on a cafe!"
Haruna suddenly looked around and all of the customers in the cafe are looking at them,so she sit on her chair and calm down for a bit.
"Okay...that's what I wanted to say...about what I have done to yuko...you are the one who helped her on that other day right?I saw that but seeing her in that kind of situation...I don't want to leave her by making her cry."Minami said in a low tone of voice.
"Then why didn't you came back and just leave her crying alone?!"
"Uh....it's just that...."
"See?you don't even have an excuse for that!would you just leave yuko alone?She's happy with me so can you just don't mind he--"
"But I love her!"
"Huh?!"
"I want to fix things and to let her realize that what I did is a huge big mistake!"
"What are you saying?After you make her cry are you expecting her to fell in love with you again?"
"Yes."
"Well that wont happen!I'm leaving this place!"
"Why are you so sure about tha--"
"Because I'm her lover!"
"Uh..."
Minami was speechless,she didn't expect that Yuko and Haruna are lovers,she can't understand the situation on that turn of events and then she suddenly stand up,looked in front of Haruna and said,
"Let's go."
Haruna looked confused and said,
"What?Where?"
"To your house,duh"
"What?!Didn't I said to you that we are lovers?!"
"Yeah but I just wanted a visit."
"NO WAY! THERE IS NO WAY YOU ARE--"
@Haruna's front door
"Why did I agree on letting you come here?"
"Because I wanted to~*whistles*"
"I still hate you,you know?"
"yeah I know ah by the way you didn't told me your name yet!What is your name?"
"Oshima Haruna!"
"Eh?Your kidding right?"
"......."
"I guess that's a yes then..."
*opens door*
"Ah Haruna?Is that you?I'm coming!!!"
Yuko's voice suddenly appeared by a far away distance.
"Haruna!I'm really sorry about earlier!really I......wait....why...why are you here?"
"Yuko...I'm really sorry on what happened the other da-"
"LEAVE THIS PLACE!I don't want to see you anymore!!!"Yuko suddenly kept punching Minami and pushing her to the front door.
"Yuko!please listen to me!I--"
*BAM*
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"Haru....why are you with Mina....i mean....her?"
"Uhm!It's because!er...how do I put it....she's--"
"You know what forget it...let's just eat."
"uh....okay..."
After many hours......[Midnight]
Haruna was sleeping but Yuko can't sleep at all and so she just go grabbed some air on the balcony but suddenly a large light showed in front of her and after that light fades away she saw god once again.
"What happened Yuko?is something wrong?"
"Ah...it's...it's nothing..."
"It's about Minami right?"
"Ye....Yeah....hey..."
"Hm?"
"Why is she like that?why did she came back when I finally found someone to make my life much happier?"
"hrm...well I think that's how love works...you will do a thing but when you realize it's a mistake it's to late to come back!"
"mistake?Minami did a mistake?"
"Why don't you find it for yourself,Yuko?but don't forget about your mission!you wanted to be in heaven right?"
"in heaven?"
"Oy,oy!don't tell me you forget your mission!if you did I will send you to hell right away!"
"Woah woah!I remember I remember!But.....wait...if I make haruna 100% happy then I would be...."
"Yep you would die one again but you will be sent in heaven."
"I see...if that's the case....then--"
"Yuko?Is this true or just a dream?"
"Eh?!"
Suddenly Haruna showed in front of them,Haruna can clearly see god in front of her eyes glowing so brightly.
"Yuko?"
"Ha-Haru!let's go back to bed!!"Yuko said as she pushes Haruna away from god.
"But Yuko!!"
"Come on Harun-"
"Yuko!Let her be." God suddenly said to Yuko.
"But--"
"She already knows so we have no other choice but to stop this."
"......okay....I accept..."
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"WAIT!!!!"
"Haru..."
"Wait!Yuko made me happy!so why are you taking her away from me?!"
"Happy?Your happy in your situation?knowing that you have a rival?"
"Haruna?A rival?who?"Yuko said with a confused face.
"It's okay!because I know that Yuko loves me!right Yuko!"
"Yeah,I lo--"before yuko finishes her words god cuts it off and said,
"Yuko would you stop lying and say the truth?a gril like that can't be in heaven you know?"
"Yuko?what is he saying?"Haruna asked confusely.
"Can you see?She's using you to forget Minami and to get in heaven."
"Shut up!that's not true!right yuko???"
Suddenly Yuko was speechless and can't say anything to Haruna....."god was right it's like I am using haruna as a barrier...I still love Minami..."she said in her mind.
"I need to go"God flicks his hand and disappears.
"Wha....he's gone?!who is that?A magician or what?Yuko speak to me!"
"Sorry Haruna...."
"For what Yuko?"
"For using you as my way through heaven....it was my only option....I need to gain your trust and to give you a 100% happiness....but doing that to you...I can't do it."
"Yuko......
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then.....learn to love me."
"Huh?can't you understand Haruna?If I make you 100% happy then I would be gone!I don't want to leave you!You might cry or mayb--"
"!!!"
Haruna suddenly hugged Yuko
"It's okay Yuko....right now....just give me some happiness in my life that I would never forget and I wont cry..."
"Ha....Haruna...."
T.B.C.
So I think "My Pet Lover" is not a short story anymore?since it is about 10 chapters long :lol:
see you all once again in the next chapter!
:byebye:
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My Pet Lover is getting more and more interesting... Thank you...
Well what's going on with Yuko, Haruna and Takamina next....?
Whatever Yuko choice is she needs to die in the end... well that's kind of suck
Very curious here....
Can't wait to see the next one...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Aw minami.....but your still bad because you make yuko cry! :thumbdown:
and what?!Yuko is really gonna die at the end?!Why????? and I thought god is a good guy!He almost broke Kojiyuu apart!
BTW
Hey so it's true huh....part 6 did really disappear....WHY?!!!!!!FOR THE LOVE OF!!!!Who is that hacker huh?! :angry:
anyways for all the parts of my pet lover....why part 6?.... :(
well I hope you'll change your password soon to keep stop that hacker....ganbarre mai-chan
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Aww nyan nyan really love yuko :love:
Yuuchan really needs to forget takamina!!! :angry: :banghead:
And takamina dont ruin their relationship aghhhh :banghead: :banghead:dont come back again :banghead: :banghead:
:twothumbs thanks for the update
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Hacker?part 6 gone???What's going on???? :? please tell us what's going on mai-chan :)
Anyways......AWWWWWW MY TAKAYUU....their fighting..... :on cloudeye:
Ah! :OMG: THERE'S A DRAWING!!!!*half happy and sad* because you said that if you draw in the story the end is near..... :(
YUKO!!Make up your mind!time is running out!
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Nyannyan~~~ go for it! Show Yuko what real love is!!
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Pinky Swear
Prologue
"Takamina~!!!Hurry up!*waving in a far-off distance*"
"Wait a minute Acchan!!you're running too fast!*sweating so hard*"
"Ah!I'll stop then!"
"Uwah~!I finally reached you Acchan!you're really fast there!"
".....Yeah*gloomy*"
"Acchan?are you okay?"
"Hey Takamina....remember the promise we did when we were kids?"
"Huh?oh!it's about you going in to the track & field team and win a medal right?"
"Yeah that's right,I'm glad you remember."
"How could I forget that we promised that if you won a medal I will treat you an ice cream right?It's really a small reward if we think about it!but when we were preschoolers it's such a big deal for us!*laughs*"
"Takamina I want to make another promise!"
"Huh?*confused*"
"This December I will be having a match and if I won a medal you would--"
"Treat you another ice cream?sur--"
"No!we are not kids anymore Takamina....*pouts*"
"Sorry about that Acchan...*scratches head+awkward smile* but we are middle schoolers!*natural smile~*"
"Yeah and that's why if I won the first place of this competition please promise me....
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that you and me will be lovers.
"Eh?!*shocked face*"
"Promise me Takamina!"
"But we are like...12 years old!and besides we are girls!isn't that odd???"
"Love isn't an application that needs some rules and regulation!Love doesn't need any explanation! it only appears in an instant Takamina!"
"Eh?Love?What do you mean Acchan?"
"*sigh*promise me Takamina....*does a pink square finger*"
"*smile*Okay....but pinky swear is like a form of saying to be bestfriends fore--
"it's my rule Takamina don't ruin it...*looks away+pout*"
"*sigh+smile*Okay then....*joins her pinky to the pinky swear*"
*both Takamina and Acchan said during the pinky swear*
(http://sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/3802_385468764876708_1863318031_n.jpg)
"I Swear...for the sake of us both,for the bond that we made, this promise wont
be broken nor our friendship will be,On this promise that we made,until it lasts,
we will have no hardships with each other but will love each other as the day pass
by.
A pinky can be broken but the promise wont,Pinky Swear to us both and so is our friendship that we love the most."
*both releases their pinkies"
"So....the promise starts now huh?"
"Yeah!Do your best Acchan*smile*"
"U...Un....*blushes*"
And so after many years passed Acchan and Takamina graduates as Middle Schoolers and became High School students,What happened to their promise and to their relationship as well?
Find out at the next Chapter of this fiction :D
T.B.C.
This fiction will be updated after "My Pet Lover Finishes to avoid confusion of the update of both fictions :)
-Mai
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Interesting. Please update as soon as possible
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oh :3 Another cute Takacchan fic from Mai-chan :luvluv1: :hee:
I hope they both have a happy ending :mon inluv:
Please do continue this fic Mai-chan :mon cute:
Ill wait for your updates :mon inluv:
PS: I missed reading your stories >___<
Good luck~ :onioncheer:
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Yay! New AtsuMina fanfic!! :mon XD:
Please update soon! :mon pray2:
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thanks for the fic! Seems really awesome! Loved the intro chapter :D Can't wait to find out what happens!
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Atsumina fanfic :cow:
Atsumina :deco:
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Atsumina :heart: My favourite pairing
I wonder what happened with their promise :roll: :roll:
waiting for your update
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aww my atsumina..
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nice!I thought you will ship takayuu!phew!good thing I was wrong XD
I like that pinky promise ritual!
A pinky can be broken but the promise wont,Pinky Swear to us both and so is our friendship that we love the most."
DEMN FEELS :farofflook:
Do I really have to wait until M.PL. ends????Don't worry!We wont get confused!<---i think???
just update it!I DON'T WANNA WAIT!!! :tantrum:
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LOL I forgot to leave a comment 2 days ago XD
How many chapter or parts is this??? :?
Good luck on My Pet Lover and this story too! :D
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UWAHHH Ididn't know that this prologue will have a high audience demand! :shocked:
well because of that I will update this next chapter
@TK.Yuu hrmm up to chapter 5 or more I guess?
I suggest you all use the soundtracks for every scene :D
Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust
To The Moon OST: "Once Upon a Memory - Kan R. Gao" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20nBn-tk3Lc#)
(http://sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/3802_385468764876708_1863318031_n.jpg)
"I Swear...for the sake of us both,for the bond that we made, this promise wont
be broken nor our friendship will be,On this promise that we made,until it lasts,
we will have no hardships with each other but will love each other as the day pass by.
A pinky can be broken but the promise wont,Pinky Swear to us both and so is our friendship that we love the most."
Those were the words of the young two girls made when they were still young but what happened on their relationship after many years as they reach High School and got their mind a bit matured?
After that day,the two young girls are still fine with no awkward feelings with each other,they are sharing their fun laughter and giggles with each other,it's like they are really born to unite with each other from the start and to be together until the end of their life,a two young cute twins we might say!
As those two girls grew up, Acchan did her best on training in her track and field team,although she failed many times Takamina was there behind her back saying that "there is always a second chance!" and Acchan never gave up and train as hard as she can to grab that gold medal and to show Takamina that she is worth of being her lover,Takamina do appreciate that and she kept cheering Acchan on.
Many years passed by Acchan got to stay abroad for 2 years and the two girls didn't see each other for so long but Acchan did that for Takamina,she really wanted to earn that golden medal and to be Takamina's lover,it's not a proof to shove it on her face and say "bow down to me and be my lover!*evil laugh*" but a proof that her love for Takamina is that big that she will do anything to get her love from her and finally when the competition finally finished Acchan Finally won her gold medal.
"Finally!We can be together forever!"
Acchan said in her mind as she wave her golden medal in front of thousands of audiences at an Arena in America.
After that many days later and Acchan came back to Japan,she was so excited to show Takamina the golden medal that was in their promise,she was excited to show it to her and more importantly she was so excited to see Takamina.
Acchan rapidly knock on Takamina's house and wanted to surprise her and as the door open she saw Takamina in front of her,she can't hold her tears and ended up crying on her shoulder.
"T-Takamina!!!"
"Acchan!Are you okay?"
"I miss you so much...*crying moan*"
"Ah...me too...it has been awhile,huh?"
"Ah!Takamina!*grabs golden medal from her bag*....HERE!Do you know what this means?*shows medal to Takamina*"
"I can see that it's a medal."
"and?"
"its round."
"aaaannndd??"
"annnnnnndddd golden!"
"That's all?"
"come on Acchan!Enough of that charades!come in!Mom will be surprised to see you!*smiles* here let me wipe your tears off *gets handkerchief "
"Takamina?Are you alright?*worried + gloomy face*
"Yep!*smiles brightly*Come on Acchan~!*grabs hand*
@Living Room
"uhm I'm going to buy some food on the store!I'm coming back okay?"
"Ok Minami,my daughter!have a safe trip!"
"Okay~"
*Closes door*
"Ne Atsuko-chan~!It has been awhile! 2 years right?*smiles*"
"Ah yes Mom!(the way Acchan calls Takamina's mom).....uhm about Takamina she's acting a bit str-"
"strange?"
"Ah....yeah..."
"You figured out that so fast?I don't need to hide this from you Atsuko so I might just tell you the truth...you are her best friend after all."
To The Moon OST: "Born a Stranger - Kan R. Gao" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFVPFDNRUtI#)
"Truth?"
Acchan and Minami's mom discussed a very serious conversation.Bit by bit as Minami's mom continue her story about what happened for the past 2 years she was gone her eyes started to furrow and tears rolled through her eyes and she began to cry,she can't believe on what happened to Minami as she was away with her,she felt a regretful feeling inside her chest...even Minami's mother can't hold her tears anymore,she wants to continue the story but her hic-ing stops her from doing it and after the whole story was finished Acchan's face is still full of tears.
"I can't believe that Minami suffered that much and to think that......*cries more*"
"So please....Atsuko-chan please don't tell that you know this to Minami....it's for her own good....I want you to not let her remind her past....that incident is still fresh in her mind..please Atsuko-chan....."
"It's okay Mom,I wont tell her or remind her anything.....*sad aura*"
"Thank you Atsuko-chan..."
*suddenly the door opens*
"I'm back~!I bought katsuD-D-D........DON~!!!!*victory pose+happy smile*"
"Ah....Takamina....sorry but I must go..."
"Eh?Acchan?you look pale!I just returned why not--"
"Minami!Let her be!"
"But Mom!--"
"*mom glare*"
"okay...urhmmm........Acchan!"grabs hand*"
"Eh?"
(http://sphotos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/74336_385922428164675_93159844_n.jpg)
"Have a safe trip!"
"Uh.....Yeah.*forced smile*"
*closes door*
"Mom is anything oka-"
"Let's eat your katsudon Minami.*slight smile*"
"Okay.....did I did another failed joke?"
"Let's just eat."
@Maeda Residence
Acchan entered their house and her mother showed in front of her saying,
"Atsuko!Welcome back and congratul--"
Her mother's words didn't got completed because she just ignored her presence and walked straight to her bedroom while her mom kept calling her name but she didn't answered nor looked back.
*closes door*
As Acchan entered her room she dropped her bag freely and looked at her golden medal that she worked hard for but then.....she threw away her golden medal like she doesn't care or work hard for it...
(http://sphotos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/72878_385932111497040_928074402_n.jpg)
she ended up crying so loud at her room....knowing Minami's situation for the past 2 years of her non-existence was a pain.She regret and blamed herself for what happened to Minami. Seeing her smile in such a critical condition hurts her heart because later on....as the time flies by...
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Minami's death is near....
T.B.C.
To the Moon OST's are the OST's I am going to use in this fiction :) because it's emotional.....
Tune in for the next chapter ^^
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what no again.. minami is gonna died.. why always.. argh.. .-_________-
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Woaahh!!! Cool!!
I enjoy the music while reading.. and the drawing :twothumbs
But... Minami is going to die???!!! :cry: :cry:
Waiting for your next chapter :cry: :cry:
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Minami's going to die... :on speedy:
poor Acchan... :mon runcry:
btw, nice fanfic Mai-Chan :thumbsup as always :twothumbs
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Thanks for the update :D Wow, awesome chapter, loved the pictures, the music and the words! Acchan worked really hard! But a sad revelation in the end :( I wonder what exactly is wrong with Minami. Hopefully she and Acchan can get through this tough situation!
Thanks again, looking forward to finding out what happens next :D
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Death?!Again?!Why don't you write happy stories? ;_________;
on My Pet Lover yuko's gonna die and here takamina?NOOOOOO my takayuuuu T______T
@TK.Yuu hrmm up to chapter 5 or more I guess?
ah so this one is a short fic huh?anyways I like the OST and please let this be a good ending :(
waiting for the next chapter again OTL
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:cry: Why does everybody want to kill atsumina by killing one of them .. WHY!!!!! :gyaaah:
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@saeyukilover W-Wait! I am not killing my OTP!!! D:
@TK.Yuu hmm....I don't know it's in my soul I guess :p just kidding~
Well I will update this fic because it's a thank you gift for the 6,000 views~!!! :cow: :cow: :cow: Thank you guysssssss :deco: :farofflook:
Well enjoy this fast update
Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings
After many weeks passed Atsuko entered Minami's school and their friendship finally unites once more.Everyday is like a routine to them!When it's recess they are going to eat their lunch together,when they are going to go home they are together and when they are in class they are even seatmates!the two twins are finally back and ready to have some fun and laughs and even though Acchan knows Takamina hiding her true condition from her...
To The Moon OST: "Moonwisher - Kan R. Gao" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NcudwIGeL4Q#)
she needs to stay strong and to look happy in front of the girl she loves the most.
@The School near front gate
"Uwah~~~~this tamagoyaki is so deliciousssss*closed eyes+tempting the flavor and savory of the tamagoyaki*"
"I'm glad you like this *godly smile*"
"Uwah Acchan~ you have a godly smile there~!Kawaii~"
"E-Eh?!M..MOU!Eat your tamagoyaki!*puts the food directly to takamina's mouth fastly*"
"HRMP!!!W......WATER!!!!!!I'm choking!!!!!!*violet face*"
"Ah! here!!drink this water!*puts bottled water gently on Takamina's mouth*"
*gulp,gulp,gulp*
"UWAHHHHH!!!What was that for Acchan?!*mad+pouting face*"
"because your so talkative!"
"Eh????"
"*laughs*"
"Yeah this is good....as long as she is alive I need to make her happy to make her last memories worth remembering for..."Acchan said in her mind as she clenched her hand hidden from Minami's point of view.Indeed it's painful for Atsuko but it's the only way to make Minami's last moments not troublesome and just positive memories to outcome from.
"Spring finally came right?*smiles*"
"Ah!y-yeah!"
"Hey Acchan are you alright?"
"U-Un!"
"Really?I think you're not tho--"
Japanese school bell sound (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xEQ3c8xyLZc#)
"SHOOT!We need to go Acchan!*grabs wrist*"
"Hey wait Minami!our lunch!"
"Forget about that we're late!"
"okay then...*furrowed eyebrows+smile*"
Yeah this is Atsuko's wish when she was abroad.To feel this sensation once more,to hear the school bell rang and to enjoy it with Minami but then she didn't even expect that this chance is in a limited time only.
After that they went to class just in time and both of the girls slack off once again,they are really the same even when it comes to attitude and after many hours passed dismissal arrived and both of the two girls went straight home and as they walk through their home,
"Hey Acchan~!"
"You know you should call me by my first name....*blushed face*"
"Eh?Okay then....Hey Atsuko....do you remember our promise?"
"Huh?what promise?"
"that's the problem I can't even remember it well!*laughs*"
"Stupid*bops head*"
"O-OW!what was that for?!*pouts*"
"nothing~!*crossed arms*"
"well???you should know that right?after all we do have the same brain!mine is dumber though! *laughs with a smile*"
"Well if you could remember...when we were kids we made a promise,that if I win a gold medal you will....
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.buy me an ice cream,right?"
"Hrmmm...*thinks hard on remembering it* I can't really picture it clearly but I think your right!But what is this feeling that I'm having?....somehow its like I need to clear something up everytime I see you Acchan!Well do I have anything to do?You could say it to me Acchan!*smiles*"
This is actually Acchan's chance to let Minami remind of their promise 2 years ago before she went to states but as she thinks deeply that thing wont be enough it will just make Minami more confused and wants to remember the whole thing.
"No there's nothing *smiles*"
"Hm~?Okay then! *holds hand*"
"Huh?What is it Minami?*shocked face*"
"I missed you Atsuko...So much that I really waited for your arrival...*tears suddenly rolled through her cheek*"
To The Moon OST: "Everything's Alright - Laura Shigihara" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p38o_M9EdE8#)
"*smiles....Me too....*hugs Minami + cries*
FLASHBACK
"What?"
"Minami is suffering a Brain Cancer......."
"What?!W-why?!When?!"
"She hides that thing when you went to the states....right now she is on stage 4.....she's in a critical condition and the doctor said...her life is going to end soon...."
"No....NO!This can't happen!!!I-I can't accept this!Why???Why now?*cries*"
"Bit by bit....her childhood and anything that happened from her pass can be erased.....that includes your promise with her..."
"Huh?Our promise?"
"After you got to the states,Minami talk that about your promise....actually she is really excited of you winning that golden medal but then.....after many months a car crashed her....causing her brain to malfunction....we did anything to heal it but it just became worst....and we have no choice but to use a medicine that can longer her life but there was a side effect...............an effect of loosing her memories...."
"I can't believe that Minami suffered that much and to think that......*cries more*"
"So please....Atsuko-chan please don't tell that you know this to Minami....it's for her own good....I want you to not let her remind her past....that incident is still fresh in her mind..please Atsuko-chan....."
"I-It's okay Mom,I wont tell her or remind her anything.....*sad aura*"
"Thank you Atsuko-chan..."
END OF FLASHBACK
Those small talk with Minami's mom flashed back through Acchan's mind while hugging Minami and it caused her to cry too...
Both of the two girls cried with each other on the downhill road and the sun started to fade and night covers the sky,stars started to show up and there Minami raised her arm,pointing at those stars in the sky...
"Can you see that,Atsuko??"
(http://sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/537221_386645391425712_1195349566_n.jpg)
"Huh?Where?"
"That yellow glowing thing!It looks like a.....
"medal."
"Oh~!We said it at the same time!High five!*raises hand*"
"Don't you think were a bit to old for that,Minami?
"Nope!*smiles*"
"*sigh*If you say so....*high fives*"
"Hehehehe!I missed doing that!*smiles*"
"*slight smile*"
"Hey Atsuko....I want say something important to you...."
"Huh?What is it Minami?"
"I.....*holds Atsuko's hand tightly* I love you..."
"Eh?"
Atsuko was shocked by Minami's words,she thought Minami would confess her real condition but what she got is a love confession but then....knowing Minami's condition really hurt Acchan,she really blamed herself for what happened and what she did is that she run away from that confession leaving Minami under a tree,alone and rejected....
She knew that she was so cold-hearted on doing that but if she loves Minami more than she loves her back from her past then she would accept her death....yes, she needs to become strong but still this is too much for a young girls heart...
"Atsuko.....*leans under the tree*....but that was our promise right?.....once you win we are going to be lovers....."
T.B.C.
Honestly I cried while reading the flashback :farofflook:
See you all on the next update :byebye:
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talk about LUCKY!!!! log in and 2 chapters are updated :wahaha: happy 6000+ views :D
Minami????why?!! aw man.....stage 4 brain cancer is..... :'(
Waiting for the next update.... OTL
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So Minami still remembers their promise. Guess the brain cancer couldn't manage to to make her forget the most important thing.
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now this is really interesting Mai-chan.. I really like dramatic stories, although hopefully some complications will be easily managed. And yes I'm looking forward if there are any miracles to happen on this story (Pinky Swear)...
I'm not ready to read another dying character esp. one from my OTP.. But.. the ending still is in your hands.. I shall wait how everything will work out.. Ganbare! :thumbsup
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brain cancer? :O
but minami can remember the promise
maybe is a good thing, and
she feel better. :wub:
thanks for udpate :twothumbs
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thanks for the update :D Aw, def sad for Minami, but glad she remembered the promise!! Her & acchan are both suffering now :( looking forward to finding out what happens next!
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thanks for update, but i need more updatee, are minami will forget acchan because acchan reject her ?
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OMG I finally read everything xD
I like your fics they make my heart feel something warm lol
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Fast update!!! :shock: happy 6000+ views ^^ here's a gift from me to you :D
(http://sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/399140_387197251370526_80461859_n.jpg)
although it hurts for a takayuu shipper like me
But Mi....Minami?!! brain cancer???noooooooooooooooo :on blackhole: I'm really curious at the end....how did minami remember their promise???
I guess I have to wait then....OTL
Waiting for the next chapter :twothumbs
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so sad what happening to Minami...
Wah.. Atsuko why you ran off...
Oh Minami still remembers the promise....
What's going to happen next....
Thank you for another of your interesting fic.
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"For using you as my way through heaven....it was my only option....I need to gain your trust and to give you a 100% happiness....but doing that to you...I can't do it."
"Yuko......
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then.....learn to love me."
"Huh?can't you understand Haruna?If I make you 100% happy then I would be gone!I don't want to leave you!You might cry or mayb--"
"!!!"
Haruna suddenly hugged Yuko
"It's okay Yuko....right now....just give me some happiness in my life that I would never forget and I wont cry..."
"Ha....Haruna...."
My Pet Lover part 11
The Next day...
It was a bright beautiful morning to both Yuko and Haruna,they enjoyed eating breakfast with each other in a coffee shop near by Haruna's home and talking about where should they go when it's their leisure time goes by but then there is something struck inside Haruna's mind and there she asked Yuko on what is the answer.
"Ne Yuko,How did you met that Takahashi person in the first place?"
Yuko suddenly spilled the coffee she was drinking after she heard what Haruna asked and some of the customers are looking at her worriedly
"Miss are you alright?"The waiter said as he wiped the half-spilled coffee.
"Ah!no no!I'm alright!Sorry for making you worry..."Yuko said while scratching her head.
"I'm glad you're okay mam,please continue eating your meal."The waiter happily said after he left the scene.
"Eh?!why did she said that all of a sudden?"Yuko said in her mind,she really doesn't know the reason Haruna would say that but she has no choice to answer it properly.
"Well Let's see....would you still believe me if I say truth?"Yuko said after she lay down her coffee cup and looked at Haruna's eyes.
"Ah...Sure..."Haruna said while slowly nodding in front of Yuko.
"Minami and I were lovers before I got resurrected....."
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".........." (can draw yuko easily.....Writter's comment)
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"You don't believe me huh?"
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"that's what I though you would say....*upset face*"
"Well if you really don't want to say it to me its fine!"
"It's true!!"
MINAMI's POV
After the day I reject Yuko I tried to forget her but as I tried much much harder her face just appears in my mind and I don't know why...Yesterday i tried to take her back but I was too late...well that's what happens if you make the wrong decision!but then as I arrived at home someone was sitting on my bed...its an old man that is sitting on my bed actually!
He contains a very long beard and hair that is color white,he looks like a magician that you can see in old books and magical movies.I didn't panic as I saw him sitting on my bed,instead I just asked him on why is he in here and how did he get in and he just replied to me,
"Why are you here?"
I smirked in front of him and not replying to his question."Is he silly?" I wondered in my mind.
"Uhm....Ojii-san...Can I guide you on your way home?Are you lost?"
After I said that the old man just laugh shortly and said "I never get lost,lady.I am here to talk with you." he said with his calm voice.
But a talk with me?Who is this guy? and why does he have so much guts to get in my house and just barging in my business?
"Ojii-san I think you better lea--"
"I'm here to talk about Oshima Yuko."
Before I finished my sentence he suddenly cut my words by saying Yuko's name.I was so surprised how did he knew Yuko's name?This old man is no joke...I gulped deeply and my palms suddenly sweat..."who is this guy?"I wondered,what is his business through me?I'm really confused on what's happening to me.
"Now calm down,I'm a nice man."
"How can you say that?!How can I be calm if I saw you in my house and I don't know how you get in or who you are?!"I said ferociously.
"Because I am god."
"Wh...What?"
"You wont believe me?then here touch my hand."
"A.....Are......Are you insane?!!Touching your hand wont do anything!"
"Listen to me.If nothing happens once you touch my hand then I would leave."
I have no choice but to touch the old man's hand to just end this weird things up.....but after I touched his hands a huge struck of light burst through his hands,causing the whole place to fade into a white colored room.
As I opened my eyes I can only see the old man facing in front of me and the whole room colored in white,as I look down the surface It's like I'm floating in mid air...
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"Now do you believe me?"the old man claiming that he is "god" said to me.
"Okay...what is it that you want God."
"First of all,the Oshima Yuko that you love know is the Oshima Yuko you loved back then."
"What?"
I said out of confusion....what is this old geezer saying?!Yuko's dead right?!How can she be alive once more?!
"I reincarnate Yuko."
"Whaaaaat?!"
"I only did that to let her stay in heaven and not in hell since she is willing to."
"Wait Wait wait!I can't even understand you!Can you explain this thing that you are saying more briefly?"
"Okay then."
God explain everything to me from scratch.from the day yuko died until his explanation reaches to the present time which is today.
"So....that's the reason why she is with Haruna-san?"
"Yes,she needs to do that in order to get in heaven."
"But she lacks time right?because....."
"Yes....because tomorrow I will get her back to me,since this mission only lasts for 1 month."
"B-But how about her life?!If she's in hell she would suffer!!"
"Then we don't have any choice but to let her be."
"HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT?!YOU'RE GOD RIGHT?!YOU SHOULD DO SOMETHING!"
"I did something!I gave her a chance! and what did she do?She didn't take it seriously and just slack off!She even waste time thinking about you!"
"What?"
"Yes Minami,Yuko is still in love with you,she's just trying to hide it!"
"Wh-What?But earlier she...."
"She's just hiding her true feelings..."
I didn't noticed it...Yuko still loves me and I didn't saw it marked on her face....I suddenly regret this because I didn't noticed that thing on that time.
"Tomorrow.....she will die once again right?"
"Yes."
"Can I ask you one thing?"
"What is it?"
"Can I.......**censored words*"
"Hmm?Are you sure?"
"Yes....well if it's possible..."
"It is possible but risking it....can you really do it?You still have a lot of things ahead of you."
"I love Yuko....I would do this for her."
"*sgh + smile* okay then...well this is goodbye...for now"
*god flicks his hand*
After our conversation as I opened my eyes I was back into my bedroom but without god himself in my room.This twist of turns in my life is getting weird....
END OF POV
The next day Yuko was having a fun random talk with Haruna,their relationship is taking into another level although they both know that today is Yuko's last day on earth and it pains them both to say goodbye with each other.
"Yuko...Today is your last day right?"
"Ye-Yeah..."
"Did you accomplished your mission?"
"I don't know....I hope so..."
"I hope so too....because...*gets near to Yuko*"
"Haru???*blushing*"
"I want you to be my guardian angel!"
"Eeeeerrr *blushing superbly red*"
Suddenly...
"YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"
both of the girl got startled by someone outside their house.A large chant of Yuko's name kept repeating and Yuko has no choice but to open the door and as she opened the door she saw,
"Ta......Takamina?"
"Yuko We have to talk."
T.B.C.
@TK.Yuu Thank you very much for that lovely gift :wub:
FOR EVERYONE:
Hey guys...sorry for not updating for such a long time....I just came from a team building program in our school and as I got home I suddenly got a cold that lasted for 2 days and after that the next day we have our college entrance exams...yes I'm still a high school student...and the next day we have our P.E. class and by whole body is tired.....and right now I half full revived since I still have my soar throat that I got from screaming and screaming
in the team building we have last friday and saturday......having a soar throat is a pain...you can't yawn easily,drink easily,eat easily and even talk easily.....I hope this pain would stop soon...... :cry:
Again sorry if I didn't update for the past few weeks....:kneelbow:
as for "Pinky Swear" it would be updated after the ending of "My Pet Lover" which is part 12....YES the next chapter of this story is the last chapter.
please stay tune for the next chapter.......*still has no energy.....*
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Thanks for the update! Aw, is Takamina going to take Yuko's place to die for her T_T I really want all 3 of them to get a happy ending but it seems impossible :P
Thanks again, I look forward to the next chapter :)
Ah, and HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! Take care :D
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So many fan arts :ding:
but what did takamina asked to god??? :?
well next chapter is the last one :err: but that's good so that Pink Swear would be updated since I'm still curious on why takamina still remembers their promise~ :P
As for your condition...I pray for your health,I hope you'll be 100% recorver soon :(
Godl bless you and so is your fan fiction :D
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Ahh Takamina what did you asked to god I dont want to see any sacrifice :(
hope 3 of them will be happy in the end :)
*Mai-chan*
Wish you will be fine I pray for you :heart: :heart:
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I like how everything turn out until now... very good flow....
Ah what Minami asked the God...?
Is she going to sacrifice her time for Yuko or may be replacing Yuko in Hell if or when she died?
Ah... still getting more and more interesting...
Thank you for the update for this story
Can't wait any of your updates for any fics.
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Hrmmmmm is takamina planning on being the sacrifice???? :? Well if that's true then.... I salute her....:farofflook:
MY TAKAYUU FEEEEEEEELSSSSSS and in pinky swear she's going to die too?! I thought your oshimen is takamina?! Y U KILL HER MAI MAI~?! :angry:
sorry about that :lol:
And by the way I hope your health will be better soon,God Bless and stay strong :)
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Still no update?I waited for so long though :cry:
Either way I hope you're okay ,I miss your stories :(
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Hi Darkeye regarding on your question,I am quite busy this days,I really want to update the fic. but I don't have enough time AND especially inspiration,Hopefully I could write the Chapter 12 sooner in the future.
AS FOR EVERYONE!
AUTHOR'S NOTE
After My Fiction of "Pinky Swear" I'm planning on writing a story that is really different from the genres that I usually choose.
I am thinking a action sci-fi thingy with a bit of tragedy to he story.
Hopefully I could write it in my leisure time on my notepad on my cp :3
I'm just going to release the story after I finished writing it to avoid the readers from waiting :3
AGAIN,Sorry if I forgot to inform you all about my current situation,Hopefully you will all have patience for the next Chapter.
I am deeply sorry for my selfishness throughout this fiction and so to my readers....I really hope I could update my stories and that includes "Problems For 1 Month" on that fiction I think I went a bit selfish on deciding to not continue it and for that I am truly sorry...
Honestly you guys didn't know about this but some anonymous readers are messaging on my tumblr and saying facts about my writings,I was so down by that,I know I should be appreciating it since they are saying my mistakes but somehow I kind of felt this sad sensation inside of me.....remorse I guess...some of them are saying that it is a waste not continuing PF1M and I totally agree on that and for that I will hold that fiction on HIATUS and not to a CLOSED fiction,I will regain my inspiration for that fiction to be able to continue it.
But maybe if I have so much free time or just a little bit I would like to write some Oneshots about my favorite pairings and others!
So....once again I am reaaaaaly sorry for my absence here in jphip I hope you all can forgive my attitude...I will try to improve myself as a writer here in jphip and fulfill my duty as a author on my stories.
That is all. :kneelbow:
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Hello Mai-chan :]
It's been a while ^^
Hmm... I've just decided to leave you a message since well, I umm.. wanted to thank you for your fics ^^
And well, I think you shouldn't feel that guilty for not updating since you have your own reasons for it ^^
The mere fact that you're apologizing clearly shows that you give importance to your fics cause, seriously, if I were in your shoes, Ill just leave my fics hanging :P ahaha :nervous And Im not suggesting for you to do the same! :mon ghost: :mon scare: Oh please Mai-chan's hardcore readers/fans out there, do not kill me :mon slapself: :mon yell:
Ehem, kidding aside, I do know how it feels like losing your inspiration for writing fics v_v
but at least your still updating yours right? :mon nyah: You're not retiring, right? :hee: RIGHT!? :shifty:
ahaha :on lol:
You know, if you want, you can update them leik a boss :mon cigar:
cause well, if you'll rush writing your fics then they'll not turn out the way you wanted them to be ^^
Just trust yourself ok? :] And whatever problems you're facing, I know you can make it trough :gmon bang:
btw, if you have free time, can you please make a TakaTomo fics? :mon psst: Pwease~ :mon pray2: Thanks
ehehe :3
Good luck and Gambatte Mai-chan ^^,
I'll support you no matter what :)
:on gay:
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My Pet Lover part 12
"YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"
both of the girl got startled by someone outside their house.A large chant of Yuko's name kept repeating and Yuko has no choice but to open the door and as she opened the door she saw,
"Ta......Takamina?"
"Yuko We have to talk."
Yuko was shocked by Takamina's appearance,she can see the girl sweating furiously.
"Can you please go?You know that I don't want to talk to you anymore."
"But Yuko!This is important!I--"
"OH YEAH MINAMI?!Tell that to yourself!Do you remember the day I told you that my love is important to you?!But what did you do?You left me alone at the park!"Yuko exclaimed.
Minami was speechless on what Yuko just said,she looked down to the floor and she can hear Yuko sniffing to stop her tears on flowing through her cheek.
"See?you can't even respond!back then you wished to not see me anymore and now you are coming back to me?stop doing this Minami....stop playing with my heart."
Minami was still speechless...she doesn't know how to respond on Yuko's words,She can see Haruna looking at her coldly but in the same time she can feel that Haruna is worried about their situation on that time.
Yuko was about to close the door but then Minami grabbed her arm tightly and said,
"I...I know I've been so harsh to you....but please....just this time......Let me talk to you! and I promise....this would be the last time I would bother you...."
"Minami will you st--"
"Yuko.....just agree on her."
"Haruna..."
Finally Yuko agreed on talking with Minami by the help of Haruna but before the two left Minami gave Haruna an envelope and said to her to "open it at the right time" and of course Haruna didn't understand what she meant and just listen to the girl's words.
After many minutes Minami and Yuko arrived at their destination that was decided by Minami.
"Really Minami?Here at this park?"
"Yuko....I will be replacing you."
Yuko didn't understand what Minami meant but then as a second passes she understood what she meant to say.
"Wh-What?!"
"Yuko....I know the truth...this is your last day and now you can live and I will be replacing you.This is my punishment for doing this kind of things to you."Minami said as she cupped Yuko's face with both of her hands.
But on Yuko's situation,she doesn't understand the situation at all,she didn't expect for Minami to do this for her and then she suddenly cried.
"Y...Yuko?Why are you cryi-- !!!"
Yuko suddenly hugged Takamina.
"Idiot.....Why?Why did you do this?....I was planning to clear our problem but then you did this....I....I don't want to see you go away from me!"
"Yuko...*wipes tears* I know that you wont agree with this but you are the most important person in my whole entire life and I would risk anything for you!Even my life."
Suddenly A light appeared out of nowhere,both of the girls saw God.
"N...No!please God!take me instead!I don't agree on Minami replacing me!"
"Yuko....It's too late.I'm sorry but this is really goodbye."
*kisses Yuko on the lips
"Mi.....Minami..."
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"So Long........I love you..."
"Mi.....MINAMI!!!!!!"
Turn of event were really fast,In a sudden glimpse Minami was gone and Haruna was shocked about that news,she couldn't believe that Yuko was still alive and after that day the name "Takahashi Minami" never existed at all,it's like she was in a dream all along and Yuko was sad about that happening but then Haruna remembered the letter Minami gave to her when she left her house and then she decided to give it to yuko.
What the letter contained:
Hi Yuko and Haruna!this letter is especially made for you too.
When you read this letter I am probably dead and not existing right now.
Yuko,I know that you're still mad at me because I leave you for the 3rd time,
1st was when I left you because of my sister,2nd is by the tree and 3rd is because I replaced your position,
But it's for the best right?I don't want you to waste this 2nd life of yours.
I want you to live happily,I want you to enjoy your life to the fullest!
As for Haruna,Thank you for showing this letter to Yuko.
I want you to love her okay?she maybe an over acting person but she is a sweet energetic girl!
If you learned to love her I'm sure you don't want to let go of her.
Yuko,Haruna,I will be watching you from above.I will be your guardian angel!
--Takahashi Minami
After both of the girls read the letter,they both cried and tears wont stop through their eyes.
Suddenly the doorbell rang and as Yuko and Haruna opened the door,they saw a brown cute little puppy.
"She looks cute,right Yuko?"
"Yeah....Let's take it!"
FLASHBACKGod and Takamina's conversation in Chapter 11
"Can I ask you one thing?"
"What is it?"
"Can I replace her?"
"Hmm?Are you sure?"
"Yes....well if it's possible..."
"It is possible but risking it....can you really do it?You still have a lot of things ahead of you."
"I love Yuko....I would do this for her."
"okay then *going to flick his hands*
"Wait!But can I be a dog for a change?"
"A dog?Why is that?"
"I just wanted to!"
"But once you get resurrected,your memories with them will be erased!"
"It's okay God,I just wanted to make yuko happy."
"*sigh + smile* okay then...well this is goodbye...for now"
*god flicks his hand*
END OF FLASHBACK
Many years passed and Haruna and Yuk's relationship turned into a beautiful one,they have lots of bond with each other and learnt to know each other more.
One day in the balcony of Haruna's house,
"Yuko!Takamina's running through your lap again!"
"Ah!is that so?Takamina!come here!"
*catches*
"Nice!....you know it's a great idea to name her Takamina*smiles*"
"Yeah *pats dog* atleast she reminds me of her."
"Yeah,You know Yuko?"
"Hm?"
"I bet Takamina is watching us right now!"
"Yeah,I think so too."
YUKO POV
"Though you are just a memory.....you gave me the most adventurous moment in my life...."
END OF POV
END.
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:err: :mon scare:
WHYY!!!! :mon ref: Why did my Takababy have to *censor* (dont wanna spoil the story, ahaha :lol:) :OMG:
Seriously, I like to pair Yuko and Haruna more but I dunno... :fainted:
I do like the ending :on GJ: but I think My Pet Lover would be more awesome if it had a TakaYuu ending :gyaaah:
And I laugh on Minami's deal with god (making her a dog just to make Yuko happy) :P
I dunno, I just find it funny :on lol: but I still do wanted it to be a TakaYuu ending :mon annoy:
ahaha :wahaha:
Anyway, congrats~ :mon dance:
Hope you'll continue to bless us with your fics :D
Gambatte Mai-chan :mon inluv:
:on gay:
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Ah... takamina is so great.... willing to take Yuko's place
and asking to be reincarnated to be a dog, then was send to Yuko's again to watch over Yuko.
Woah... at last My Pet Lover is ending....
In the end, the story is so heart breaking for Minami... but happy ending for Yuko and Haruna.
What Minami has for Yuko is a true love...?!
Great fic... Thank you for the ending...
Can't wait to see your others update
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Pinky Swear Chapter 3 - Etiolated Memory
"Someday I will befriend one of them!"
"Befriend?"
"Yeah!"
After what happened yesterday,the two girls known as the "unbreakable twins" suddenly gone silent.
For the past few weeks the two girls didn't do much bond with each other,even though they were best friends since then.
Atsuko is indeed sad about that kind of relationship with her friend since childhood and so finally she made up her mind to do the first move in their problem because she thinks that she is the one that started their rumbled up relationship that is happening for the past few weeks.
After the school bell rang,as the sign of dismissal of the class,Atsuko dashed to Minami's seat but somehow as Atsuko reaches Minami's seat she's no there anymore,like a dust flowing in mid air but Atsuko didn't gave up and gain information on were Minami went and finally someone said that she's at the school rooftop and there Atsuko dashed really fast to reach her at the right time.
Finally as Atsuko reaches the rooftop she saw a silhouette from afar,a silhouette short girl with a ribbon on top.
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Atsuko's eyes sparkle as she saw that kind of silhouette facing through the sunset,she dashed to that silhouette and shouted,
MINAMI!!!
As she said her best friend's name,the girl looked back and it is indeed her,Takahashi Minami,the girl that awaited her arrival for 2 years,the girl that loved her from the wasy she was and the girl that made her happy until now even though she's suffering brain cancer.
Atsuko felt the sense of relief through her heart and tears suddenly flowed through her eyes,she kept saying in front of Minami the word "Sorry" while sniffing with tears on her cheek.
Suddenly,Minami cupped her face and wiped Asuko's tears by using her handkerchief.
"M...Minami..."
"You have done nothing wrong."
"B...But I..."
"Besides...I think you're apologizing to the wrong person!"
"W-what?"
"I'm sorry miss but I really don't know who you are,I think you've misplaced me for someone else."
"Come on Minami!that's your name right?Takahashi Minami!"
"....Yeah but that doesn't proves that I'm that person that you are finding!"
"But Mina-"
"Minami is suffering a Brain Cancer......."
"!!!"
"Miss?Are you alright?"
The words of Minami's mom suddenly flashed through her ears,her eyes suddenly showed a scared condition with a bit of confusion inside."No....Is this because of her cancer?"Atsuko thought as she suddenly gone silent in front of Minami.Atsuko suddenly felt the sense of regret inside of her,If she just apologized to Minami much more earlier than now....then everything will be alright.
"Miss!*holds Atsuko's shoulders*"
"E-Eh?*shocked face*"
"Are you alright?Your face is so pale!*worried face*"
"A-ah!No no,I'm fine...sorry for worrying too much..."
"Is that so? then that's good...*removes hands from Atsuko's shoulder*"
"......Un....."
"Hey!Don't be so down!I'm sure that she will forgive you on what you've done so cheer up!"
"E...eh?"
"Come on!Don't show me that sad face of yours!Come on,smile!like this!*points at her own face while smiling*"
"Uh...*stares at Minami*"
"You don't want to smile huh?TAKE THIS~!*pinches cheeks*"
"I-ITTAI!!!!!Stop it!!!Take this!!*pinches cheeks back*"
"Oh~?fighting back huh?hehehe"
The two girls suddenly played under the fading sunset with some laughter coming out of their stomachs.Many minutes later and darkness covered the whole sky.
"Ouch......my cheeks hurts.....*holds both cheeks*"
"Me too....."
"But I guess I win huh?"
"Eh?Why is that?"
"Because!......You smiled!"
Atsuko's face suddenly gone red,Minami's words plus her shimmering smile made her heart skip a beat.
"Uh....thanks...."
"About what?"
"About cheering me up..."
"Ah that?It's nothing!"
"Un.....*nods head horizontally*....If you didn't cheered me up then I'm still lonely..."
"*sigh + smile* Okay then..."
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"Wow...."
Both of the two girls were amazed by the scene that they are witnessing,It is a simple image of the moon ad the stars but for some reason it's like what they are seeing is much more brighter than the same old sky that they are seeing since birth.
"This is the first time I saw something like this."
"Me too..."
"Can you see it?"
"See what?"
"The lighthouses..."
".....Hmmm......No...I could only see the moon and stars but no lighthouse!where is it anyways?"
"There."
Minami suddenly stand up to the bench of the rooftop and stretched her arm up to the sky,it's almost like she's reaching for the sky.
"These are the lighthouses I am talking about!they are bright and wonderful stars!Just like lighthouses!*smiles*"
"I see!They do look like one!"
"Yeah! and someday I will befriend one of them!"
"Befriend?"
"Yeah!I'm going to reach them through that place they are living on! and thank them on the things they have done for me!"
"Like what?"
"Helping me on getting home for starters!My mom said that they are my only lead on getting home."
"How can that be a lead through home if it's still dark?"
"Yeah!I know that nothing quite change....but....you could see it a whole lot better!*smiles*
"So....you wanted to be a...."
"An astronaut!"
"That's nice."
"I know right?*smiles*.....Hey!My names Takahashi Minami!*hands out her hand*"
"Uh......*smiles*....Maeda Atsuko....nice to meet you.....*shakes hand*
The two girls finally reunited with each other but that is for Atsuko's situation but as for Minami it is a start of a new friendship of Atsuko and her.Both of the girls left school with some smiles on their faces as they separate from their own destinations.
@Takahashi Residence
@Dinner table
"So how was school,Minami?"
"It was great mom!plus!I made a new friend!"
"Really?What's her name?"
"Maeda Atsuko!"
"*shocked face*.....What did she said to you as she met you?"
"Uhm....she's acting a bit weird at first but then she did well!*smiles*"
"Is that so?"
"Mom are you okay?You don't look so good..."
"No I'm fine Minami!Let's just continue eating."
"O...okay...."
@Atsuko's Bedroom
"What am I going to do now?.....*crouches on bed*......It......It hurts Minami.....It really does...
Atsuko indeed promised herself to be strong and not cry on their situation but as for a little girl's heart....she couldn't take anymore of this pain that she is feeling right now,a large uproar of crying can be heard through her room,her mother wasn't there because of her late time job and there,Atsuko is crying alone....with a pain inside her heart....
But then as she cries much more a light burst on her window,she got attracted to that light and decided to look on what is happening right now and there she saw tons of small lights falling in mid air....a thing called "Meteor shower",her tears suddenly stopped and stared at the beautiful scenery that she is seeing in front of her,her eyes sparkled and watched the meteors fall through the ground.
Suddenly her phone rang,
"T.Minami"
was the thing written on her cellphone,it was an incoming call from Minami,now that she think about it before they got separated from their walk to her home they exchange cellphone numbers.As Atsuko stops thinking,she answered Minami's phone call,
"Yo Atsuko!"
"Hey Minami,Why did you call all of a sudden?"
"Can you see them?"
"What?the lighthouses?"
"Yeah!Cool right?"
"Yeah......Hey,they are coming for you,right Minami?"
"Huh?"
"They are visiting us,here in earth!"
"Ah!ahahaha!I know right?That's so nice of them!"
"So you don't need to go there anymore."
"Huh?What do you mean?"
"Go to space I mean,visit the stars and stuff...maybe they are saying that there are more important things to do than to visit them."
"Hmm~.....I still want to go there!"
"Why is that?"
"I don't know.....somehow I got this feeling that I am striving for something...like...I want to complete a wish that I haven't completed yet!"
".....Wait...there are billions of stars in the sky,what are you going to do when you are there?Who's the lighthouse that you are going to visit?"
"The brightest one of course!"
"Well that does make sense"
"Ah!It's over!"
"Oh...It sure did...ahaha!We didn't even looked at it much longer."
"hehehe!I know right?...Hey Atsuko!Can you see that star?"
"What star?"
"The brightest one of them all!Once you see it,the other stars that surrounds it can form something amazing!"
"really?let me grab some time to find it...."
"Oka-- *unknown voice*...Oh!mom said I should sleep!ahaha!she's really caring huh?Well once you find that star you will be amazed I'll tell you!"
"Really?why is that?"
"Well....because that is the star that I'm going to visit!Because it looks like a--"
"Like a what Minami?"
Atsuko suddenly noticed that her cellphone is out of battery.
"Really?....well...let's see what she is saying......star....star....."
After many seconds Atsuko's eyes showed a shocked pattern by the thing she saw.
"....Medal....."
Of course,A medal,that is what Minami is talking about,what Atsuko saw is a medal that is formed by many bright stars.
The brightest one is the medal and the white ones forms the lace of the medal.Instead of crying,Atsuko suddenly smiled and said,
".....They do make this place even more brighter......Minami......I still love you...."
T.B.C.
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Thanks for "MY pet lover" update & end, it was a great fic :D Bittersweet ending for Minami but glad Yuko&Haruna are happy with doggy Takamina :3
& Thanks for "Pinky Swear" update!!! I really love this fic two! So sweet and beautiful and sad and happy all at the same time lol. Really sad to see the effects of Minami's conditon taking effect but glad she could "meet" Atsuko again. Oh, and I love your sketches. That one of Minami is really cool :D
Thanks again! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Ah... coz' of her brain tumor, Minami got a memory loss every now and then.... I think
So sad for Atsuko for having to miss out the window where she can apologize to the Minami that she had hurt.....
Even with her loss of memory... unconsciously she still remember about the medal's promise....
Atsuko be brave and strong.... be there for Minami please.... give her happiness even for the little time you have left to spend together with.
What's going to happen next....
I can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Awwwwwwww My Pet Lover is over :( taka's decision about being a dog is kinda funny for me :lol: sorry about that XDDD
and about Chapter 3 of P.S.: I WANNNNNNNNTTTT CHAPTER 4 DDDDD:
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New fan fiction entitled "PROTO" is going to invaid jphip :D
"A sci-fi fiction that makes the readers feel that they are the main character."
MAIN CASTS:
Takahashi Minami
Watanabe Mayu
and many more AKB48 members
Releasing date for this fiction is on ext month(April)
designated date is still unsure -____-
*This fiction is being written since the start of march so that the readers don't need to wait anymore for the fiction to update*
1 chapter update per day is the schedule :3
This is a sample of the fiction.
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I'm still thinking if I really should shorten Minami's hair :/
and this is the 2nd one
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^BADASSSSS/ I'm still thinking if I should entry this in the story. MEH will know in the future XD
Well~ that's all ^___________^
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wow! I like the sound of Proto so far :D Liking the sci fi idea :) & Interesting to have Minami & Mayu as main cast :D Also love the pics! Both of them look really cool in that first pic & the 2nd pic is just too awesome! Minami def knows how to weild a sword :3
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I miss them.... (T ^ T)
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that was so cute *_____* I miss them too :( Very cute & great drawings of the two :D
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I always love your drawings :3
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D'aaaaaaaaaaaawwww :wub: Takamini is so adorable~~~~~~~ MORE DRABBLES~!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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AWWWWW~~~~
Takamina is so adorable!!!
I Need more Drabbles to heal my Atsumina Heart!!!
I'll Surely be waiting for "PROTO"!!
u know since it's April and all...
so yeah!!!
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PROTO Chapter 1
"Minami! Breakfast is ready!"
"Coming!"
I run downstairs as I heard my mom's voice. I can smell her home-made cooking that is grabbing my whole body to the kitchen to eat breakfast. This day is really starting so well.I can see the sun shining so brightly that uplift my spirit and made me smile. As I go down the stairs, I greet my mom with a smile saying "Good Morning!"
She suddenly smiled and said, "What's up with you today? Waking up early and greeting me happily?" My mom said while smiling as she puts the plates on the kitchen table.
"I don't know really! But I think this is the best day of my life!" I said as I sit on my chair.
"Well I hope this mood of yours is forever since it won’t be any bother on waking you up on your bed." My mom said with a bit of laughter.
"Mou! Mom!"
My mom and I enjoyed breakfast together and have some laughs and giggles. This day is really going so well for the both of us. My mom and I are the only ones that are living in our family.
Actually I have a very sad family background. I had a sibling but then she died and my father left my mother because he blamed her for the death of my sibling. I was only 6 years old at that time so I can't really understand what was happening. Honestly on the day, my sibling's coffin was buried through the ground.
I was asking my mom so loudly, "Mom why are they doing this to Nao? I thought she was only sleeping!" I said as I grabbed my mom's darkish dress.
As I asked my mom with my question she kneeled in front of me and hugged me so tightly. She cried and cried and cried on my shoulder although I didn't understand why she was crying but I also cried not because of Nao's death but because I can't understand the situation that was happening and worst of all, I can see Nao's coffin being buried.
After that year by year, my attitude changed, from the Takahashi Minami that was cheerful, active and easy to approach, became a dark person that isn't approachable (amicable) and doesn't give a care to anyone at all.
Many of my classmates are afraid to be friends with me and when there is a group project, I always have a 70% grade since I don't attend to it or even if I wanted to, my classmates doesn't want me to join their group. As my elementary and middle school life was over, I tried to change my attitude for the sake of my mom and it did turn out great but somehow seeing people smiling breaks my heart...I don't really know why but by seeing someone smile, I can see ...Nao.
"Minami? Are you alright?"
"Eh?"
I was shocked at my mom waving in front of me. I have been spacing out which I often do when we are eating breakfast.
"Are you thinking about Nao?" My mom asked as she looks at me with a worried face.
"Y...Yeah." I said with a low tone of voice. I suddenly felt that I lost my appetite on eating after thinking about Nao.
My Mom just smiled at me and said, "If you don't want to eat anymore it's okay, you don't have to force yourself!" My Mom is so nice. I am really grateful to God because he gave me a really nice mom that can be with me when I get lonely.
"Let's just watch the news on t.v. okay?" My mom said as she grabs the remote near the small table on the dining room.
As the television was turned on the reporter talks about the weather and the current events that is happening to Japan and to some countries too but what really grabbed to my attention is the next segment of the news, this is what the reporter is saying,
"Ohayou Everyone! Are you all enjoying your breakfast? Or are you not eating right now? ahahaha! Just kidding!" The host said while scratching his head after he said his lame failing joke.
"Anyway, here is the Gaming Corner! On this segment, we are going to talk about the current events about what is happening in the gaming industry!" The host said with a smile as he introduces the segment.
"Just get on with it..." I said as I watch the segment boringly.
"First up is the "PROTO" gadget! It is a new creation developed by a famous gaming genius, the great “Akimoto Yasushi!" The gadget cannot be shown to any news or anything that involves picture and stuff according to Akimoto Yasushi himself because once you do you will be in prison! What he only approved is the explanation of the looks of the gadget! So, by the looks of the gadget, it is really plain and it really looks like a headset but with a blue transparent glass! Although you would really think twice if you are really going to buy this item for ¥25,000, but gamers were really intrigued after they hear Akimoto Yasushi's words!" The host said with his eyes sparkling with passion which I clearly see that he really loves his job.
Suddenly the news shows a short video footage of the Akimoto Yasushi guy being interviewed by a certain reporter asking him on why should the gamers buy his product and all he said is,
"The gamers are not the one who is waiting for the game, it is the game that is waiting for the gamers."
My eyes suddenly widen as I hear his words, it made me think of what he actually meant but as I try harder, the more I can't really understand but his words really touched my heart I really never played any game before nor touched a game console! But his words sure are amazing, so that's the reason why the host introduced him as the"Great Akimoto Yasushi"
After that the host said that the "PROTO" gadget received many pre-orders online and because of that the pre-orders can only be accepted up to 2,000 orders because of the enormous amount of it. While the releasing date for tomorrow, only 6,000 copies are going to be released and sold to Japan and the host added that once you activate the gadget there is a game in it although no one knows what kind of game is it, even the production company doesn't even know it, the only one that knows it is Akimoto Yasushi himself.
After the segment was finished my mom suddenly spoke and said,
"You wanted to buy that huh?" She said with a teasing smile.
"E-eh? Hrmmmm....Y...yeah...but I don't have any money so it's impossib--"
"Then I'll buy you one!" My mom said with a bright smile.
"EEEEEEEHHHHHHH?!!!!! Are you really sure?! I mean that is ¥25,000 Mom! ¥25,000!!!! Isn't it too much???" I said as I stand up in front of her with a really shocked face.
"It's really okay!"
"But.....don't you think I am bothering you too much?" I said with a depressing tone of voice.
"Minami, when is the time I said that you are a bother to me?" My mom said as she crossed her arms in front of me
"It's when......uhm........hrmmm.....when uhmm.............okay, you’ve never said that that I’m a bother..." I said with a sigh.
"See? So just take this money and buy it for tomorrow!" My mom said as she grabs my hand and puts the stack of ¥25,000 to my palms.
"Already?!...*counts the money*....But this is ¥30,000! You should take the extra ¥5,000 mom!" I said as I reached for her hand.
"Don't worry it's yours! Use it for your allowance at school!" My mom said as she leaves the dining room.
"But Mom!"
"Minami...." *glares.
"Okay....."
Well I have no other choice but to buy the "PROTO" gadget. Hopefully I CAN buy it because I am really sure that this thing would be sold out the next morning I wake up.
I forgot to mention that the "Takahashi Family" is a wealthy family. Outside of our house is an enormous garden and if you look at the far end, there is a river close to it and yes it is also owned by our family but on my point of view I just wanted to have a really simple life that is not being served by butlers and that's why my mom fired all of our 50 butlers and just served me with all her love.
The employees that we only have in this mansion is Yurika-san, our one and only maid, Mr.Kurosaki, our gardener and Mr. John Voclain, our driver and head butler. I also treat them as my own family since they are all really nice.
I went outside the mansion and just sat by the stairs and sniff the clean, soft breeze of air. Mr.John suddenly noticed me while he was helping Mr. Kurosaki watering the flowers and plants. I waved my arms and smiled to the two gentlemen and they waved back to me as well. I suddenly look at my wristwatch which alarmed me since it is already 8:30 a.m.!
"Shoot! I will be late for the last day of summer school!" I said as I head upstairs and wore my civilian clothes and ride on my bike as I head to my school. Suddenly, Mr. John called me and said,
"Mistress! I should send you to your school since it is really far away!" he said with a worried face.
"No Mr.John, it's okay! I still have 2 hours before class starts!
"Minami why won’t you go and let Mr. John escort you to school?" A voice suddenly appeared on Mr. John's back. It was my grandfather, the owner of the land I am standing at.
As Mr. John saw grandpa, he quickly bowed and greeted him a pleasant morning which my grandpa did the same.
I ride on the limousine that Mr. John is going to drive and left our residence. On our way to school Mr. John suddenly spoke and said,
"Mistress, why don't you want me to ride you on your way to school?"
"Uhhmm....I don't want to be a bother," I said quietly as I look at the window of the limousine.
"Mistress, you know you are not a bother to me and besides being like this is a butler's job, so please tell me the truth, Mistress."
I left a sigh and just told the truth to Mr. John. He smiled as I said that I just want to be a normal person that everyone can approach too and also I wanted to feel on what is the feeling of being a normal student. After that Mr. John suddenly giggled a bit and said to me,
"Mistress being normal isn't about blending through the atmosphere, it is about being you.
You don't have to force yourself to a thing that you are really not. Being a normal person comes with your heart and with your soul. It is in you when you were born in this world. You are the one that controls it, don't you agree, Mistress?" Mr. John said with a smile.
I suddenly smiled through Mr. John's words and agreed to his short opinion to a "normal person". Many minutes later, we are near my school but then Mr.John stopped the limousine and went outside to grab something. As soon as he got what he wanted on the back seat he suddenly knocked on my window and when I opened the door I saw my bike and Mr. John said with a smile,
"School is way up ahead Mistress! you can now use your bike!"
I smiled and thank Mr. John for understanding me. After that, I ride my bike and said goodbye to Mr. John but before I forget, I gave him a order about buying me the "PROTO" gadget for tomorrow and he agreed on it so I gave him the ¥25,000 money to buy it for tomorrow. I headed to school using my bike.
I suddenly felt an excited feeling on what I could expect through that gadget named "PROTO" but suddenly as I think some thoughts inside my head another bicycle knocked over me, causing me to fall with my bike. My flesh on my knees started to bleed and the wheel of my bike suddenly broke and as I hold my head I suddenly felt that my knees swelling and my head suddenly aches in pain. My vision started to get blurry. And I can’t see clearly who had knocked my bike, but that person is somewhat approaching me. As the unknown person draws nearer and nearer, my vision suddenly turned black.
And I thought this IS my best day ever.
T.B.C.
HELLO~~!!
Sorry for my BIG absence... :kneelbow: So that was PROTO Chapter 1! Update is held Every Sunday! plus I am making a Atsumina manga story entitled HISASHIBURI~!!!
here's a preview:
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Okay~!that's enough preview~
I think this will be finished when a month finishes or much more than that O______O
well that's all~ :byebye:
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mann, i like the preview part,minami really cute and in the same time she really cool.
looking forward the next part :kneelbow:
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Minami as a rich person...
Who was the one that approaching Minami as she lost consciousness?
Can't wait to see Atsuko coming on...
Thank you for the start of the new series...
I enjoy reading it... for now... it's still the start...
There are lots of mysteries to be reveal... later on...
Can't wait to see the next mystery and of course how the story going to develop
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Sci-fi huh?II'm going to wait for the next chapter again ' A')
By the way I like the preview of your manga!Hopefully you'll finish it soon :)
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great update
chapter 1 make me curious, i'll waiting for your next upate
thanks for update
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P/s: I had to admit that I want to see your manga so much may be more than your fic XD
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I wonder who bump her?
ACCHAN ACCHAN PLEASE LET IT BE ACCHAN
WAAAAAAW!!!! That preview is hot~!!! I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGERRRR!!!! joke~ yes I can!
Please take your time on making the manga Mai-chan! :)
and what happened to Pinky Swear????
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@Hii_Chan ahahahahaha I agree! many people like you,can't wait for the manga itself XD
@TK.YuuHrmmmmm Pinky Swear huh....err....I am still grabbing inspiration to continue that fic. plus I don't want to continue that with a half-hearted story if I am not inspired so hopefully you could understand and also to the people that is reading this note. :)
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PROTO Chapter 2
As I opened my eyes, I saw a white curtain that is swaying so blissfully in my front view. I touched the solid object that I am lying at and knowing that it is a soft cushion bed. As I set my realization mode, I noticed that the place where I am is really familiar since it is my own bedroom. How did I get in here in the first place?
I try to forcefully remember what happened moments ago but I can't really remember what happened or at least how did I return to my home in the first place. As I refreshed my mind while lying on my bed, I heard a creak on the door. As I turned my head to that direction, I saw our maid, Yurika-san.
I greeted Yurika-san with a smile. I can see her carrying a tray that contains a tea set and a sandwich. She put the tray down on the table near my bed and bowed down in front of me saying,
"Good day Mistress, I am glad that you are now awake," she said while smiling.
"Good day to you too Yurika-san," I replied back as I tried to stand up to my bed.
"Wait Mistress! Please take some time to rest. You still have some injuries." Yurika-san said with a worried tone while gently pushing my shoulders to let my body lay on my bed.
"Injuries? What exactly happened to me Yurika-san?" I said as I looked straight at her eyes.
"Ah I see, because your head struck on your metal bike. Maybe it has caused you to lose your memories with what happen to you earlier... Or wait, maybe you’ve forgotten when you were born?! Mistress, answer me quickly, what’s the sum of 2+2??"
"Four! Wait Yurika-san! Stop joking!"
Yurika-san just laughed at me because she’s trying to be silly with her plain jokes. But since I’m her Mistress, she explained what happened to me earlier. She summarized the things that happen, as I leave home, riding on the limousine that was driven by Mr.John and then as Mr.John left, someone knocked my bike and gave me a minor injury to my knee and to my head but then as Yurika-san finished her explanation I suddenly got a question to my head and asked her quickly by saying,
"What Yurika-san ,how do you know what happened to me after Mr. John left?"
"I AM WATCHING YOU MISTRESS~~~"she said with a smirk and with her glasses, sparkling so brightly.
"Y...Yurika-san!!!"I said with a creeped out tone.
"Ahahaha~ I am just kidding Mistress! That information came from the suspect herself," Yurika-san said as she touched her glasses.
"Suspect? You mean the one who hit me right?"
"Yes Mistress! We’ve put her in prison now," she said with a smile.
"W-What?! Why so sudden? And don't do that without my permission! And she is a “girl” so why punish her so harshly?" I said as I lift up my upper body facing Yurika-san with an upset face.
"Ah...My apologies Mistress, I will report this to Mr. Takahashi and tell him to free the young lady." Yurika said as she bows in front of me.
"But for now mistress please eat your meal. It’ll make you feel better."
"Hmmmm...okay then. Just tell uncle about it.”
"Yes, I have respectfully received your request" Yurika said while lifting the end of her skirt as she bows in front of me.
"Why so formal? You could say it to me in a normal way!" I said to Yurika-san with a smile.
Yankee tone" I GOT YOUR ORDER, LITTLE PAIN IT THE ASS "CHICHAI" MISTRESSSSSS"
"Yurika-san!!! Stop joking around!"
"Eh? Doesn't normal people talk about that nowadays?" Yurika said as she puts her finger near her mouth.
"Well some people do but not in that kind of way! Please Yurika-san."
"I got you Mistress. I will message your order to Mr. Takahashi. Roger that!" Yurika-san said with a salute.
"*sigh* Okay, thank you Yurika-san" I said with a smile.
After that, Yurika-san gently closed my bedroom door and left my room at peace. I pour some tea on my tea cup that Yurika-san prepared for me and took a bite of her home-made sandwich. Eating Yurika-san's cooking is really going to give you a short trip in heaven. Several minutes passed, I finished eating my meal Somehow half of my energy was restored thanks to Yurika-san's cooking.
I tried to stand up on my bed and I did it easily and after that I went outside my bedroom and headed on our garden. I really do love seeing fresh flowers and sniffing up some fresh air. It somewhat boosts up my energy!
Finally as I reached the ground floor of our mansion, I gently sat down on the nearest bench that I could see. I closed my eyes and listened to the rustle of the grass, sniffed some of that fresh air and hummed a calm, random song that is playing through my head. As a person that is going to school on ALMOST every day, this is the best time to just lay down and relax.
After many minutes passed, Kurosaki-san approached me and greeted me a "good day" while smiling and I greeted him back just like what he did and then he sat with me on the bench and exhaled really long, I guess he is really tired seeing from the sweat in his head.
"Kurosaki-san you can rest for today. And besides, you have done many things today in our garden. It really looks so beautiful."
"Thank you for your words Mistress but I will just take a short break and after that I will start putting some fertilizer on the cabbage and tomato section!" Mr. Kurosaki said as he swept his sweat by using his face towel.
"I really think you need to take some rest though." I said to him with a worried tone.
"Thank you for being concern my Mistress but don't worry, I'm okay since I love what I am doing. I will keep on working!" Kurosaki-san said while smiling in front of me.
"Kurosaki-san why do you love being a gardener?"
"Ahh~ that is a good question Mistress! Let me see...." Kurosaki-san suddenly crossed his arms and bowed his head to think why he loves his job and after a few seconds he finally answers my question.
"I think it's because I love seeing the flowers and crops that I value. Seeing them as a little seed at the beginning and watching them grow into beautiful flowers or crops makes my hard work pays off in no time!" Kurosaki said happily and with a sense of satisfaction in his words.
"I see....so it's like taking care of a child, right?"
"Yes!"
"I bet your kids at home are like the flowers in our garden, huh?" I said while smiling.
But as I said those words, Kurosaki-san didn't reply at all. I was expecting for him to respond happily through my words but instead, he gave me the opposite emotion that I was expecting to see from him. He gave me a sad aura that caused our whole conversation into an awkward one but after a minute or so, Kurosaki-san suddenly spoke and said,
"Sorry about my sudden silence Mistress... I think my break time is up so I must continue my work." Kurosaki-san said with an upset tone as he stands up to the bench that he was sitting at.
His actions made me feel remorse. Maybe if I didn't ask him about his kids, maybe we are still having a fun conversation together…. But then I took the wrong path and it turn out to be like this but I don't want him to feel gloomy. I grabbed his hand and said,
"Kurosaki-san, it's alright. You can tell me your problems."
After I said that, Kurosaki-san slightly smiled in front of me and said,
"I have a child. My daughter named Watanabe Mayu. Actually, I am just her step-father. Her real father died long time ago and I married her mother. I tried to get close to her but she just became a troubled child. She kept cutting classes, always locks herself to her bedroom and now she wanted to buy the PROTO device."
"PROTO?" I said with a shock.
"Yeah, she is one of the beta-testers of the company and after that she wanted to buy the company’s product, saying that she wants to be inside that hi-tech world but the game and gadget is worth ¥25,000. Who could even afford that?" Kurosaki-san said as he crossed his arms with a sad expression.
"So what are you going to do? Will you buy her the PROTO device?"
"No but she already have the money to buy one. Can you believe it? She took a part-time job just to buy that crap!"
"Y....yeah....." I agreed slightly.
"Well Mistress I have to go. Thank you for listening to me." Kurosaki-san said with a smile.
After that I suddenly thought, "Wait it her daughter is a beta-tester, then she knows the whole process of the game!", yeah, I just need to talk to her daughter secretly without Kurosaki-san knowing it! And with that, I’ll know the process of the game in advance!
Many minutes passed and I am still sitting at the garden bench and suddenly I saw Yurika-san approaching me with a really fast amount of speed. When she finally reached me, she said,
"Mistress!Your order is now done. The suspect is now free."
"That's nice to here! where is she?"
"She's over there, Inside the car. She wanted to thank you, apparently."
"Is that so? then let's go."
As I arrived at the back side of the limousine, I saw a girl that is wearing a hood jacket, chewing a bubblegum and looking at the window with a far-off gaze. I sat down on the seat of the car but it's like she doesn't even felt my presence that’s why I knocked the window. I finally got her attention but she’s giving me a look like saying "Who is this person that is disturbing me?". After a minute or so she suddenly spoke,
"Thanks for setting me free. I thought that you are going to keep me in jail just because I knocked you on your bike."
"Ah! It's not a problem. Sometimes my uncle is over reacting to things. I'm really sorry about that."
"No it's okay. Hey, mind telling me your name?"
"I’m Takahashi Minami. Nice to meet you." I said as I give my hand in front of her to receive a handshake.
"Nice to meet you too. I'm Watanabe Mayu,” she said as she gave me a handshake.
But wait......Watanabe Mayu? Didn't I heard that from somewhere?....yeah! She's Kurosaki-san's step-daughter! The beta tester! I can't believe that this is happening. I wanted to ask her all about the “PROTO” but I don't want to just budge questions to her. She will be wondering how I knew that she's a beta tester in the first place. I must think of a way to put the "PROTO" device into our conversation but....how?
Suddenly Mr. John knocked through the window and as I roll down the window he said,
"Mistress I have bought the PROTO device! If you want to see it please inform me!"
"Eh? How? I thought they sell it for tomorrow?"
"I actually got the package because I pre-ordered one and my order got in!"
"Is that so? Thanks Mr. John"
"My pleasure Mistress, now please continue with your conversation."
"Okay.” After that I rolled up the car window to let our conversation continue.
After that, I heard a pop that came from Mayu's bubble gum. After that, she took a paper from the pocket of her jacket and put the used bubble gum into the paper and put it to her pocket again. She suddenly looked at me with her glaring eyes and said,
"So you’re playing too huh?"
"Playing? Oh! The “PROTO” device? Yeah. I will."
After I said to her, she let out a smile and said,
"A word of advice from me,Once you play this game,I'm sure you will regret on playing it in the first place."
Regret? What does she mean? Is the game inside the PROTO device really violent or anything that can be strictly dangerous? I pretended to not know that she is a beta-tester for the device and asked her about something and that is,
"How do you know? Are you a beta-tester or some sort?"
"Touché Minami. Yes I am a beta-tester and as for helping me on getting out of jail I am now advising you to not use the PROTO device for your sake."
"For my sake? What kind of game does the PROTO device contain? And why for my sake? Can you say it clearly?"
Mayu suddenly smiled in front of me and let out an "It can't be helped then" face and said,
"I know that once I said this to a person that can spread the word, Akimoto-sensei will hunt for my name but since you save my life and you look like a person that can be trusted I will give you a little information about the game inside the PROTO device. Listen carefully because I won’t repeat it again, okay?"
"Okay." I agreed.
Finally she's going to say the function of the game. My face suddenly turned into a serious one and listened carefully on Mayu's words.
"The PROTO device is a three dimensional game that will bring you into another world. Three Worlds to be exact. World One is the Styx, the 2nd World is the Gradia world and as for the 3rd World.....it is unknown."
"Unknown? Why?"
"Akimoto-sensei didn't showed the 3rd World to the beta-testers because he knows that some of us are going to play the actual game and that would be not good because we are going to spoil the fun and that's the reason I am going to buy the PROTO product for tomorrow.
"I see....but what kind of world does per world contain?"
"*smiles* That...I must not reveal. You have to see it for yourself though you save my life, giving information still has its limits."
Darn this girl is really smart maybe if I take her as my companion in the event then I can clear it easily.
"Hey can we be companions?"
"Companions? Hmm....ah sure because to the PROTO's game, it is important to have at least one companion with you."
"Why is that?"
"Oh, I forgot to mention, inside the PROTO is a game that can be the "hell" we know itself."
"Hell? Why is that?" I asked.
"Because once you entered the 1st World, you could never back out. Meaning, you can never log out."
"W-What?! But how can you log out to the game?"
"You need to finish the first World and if you don't want to play anymore then you can log out or if you want to play again you can log in and start on World 2 but once you enter you can't back out."
"Then....Can I back out now?"
Mayu didn't answer my question but she stared at me. She didn't talk for a minute and after a minute passes she suddenly talked and said,
"....Weakling."
"Wh-What?"
"I thought you are not like them but you are just all the same. Scared, Weak, Selfish."
"What do you mean?"
"You bought the PROTO device to enter a new world that you haven't seen before and now you're backing out? You're such a weakling."
"But you don't understand! The PROTO device can kill us! What if you didn't finished the 1st World quickly?! Your body will be dying because of hunger in the reality world for sure!"
"Are you scared? Scared of facing a new world? Why not just try? Try the 1st World and I'm sure you can pass anything."
"I will try it but with your help."
"Sure. I know that you will change once we finish the 1st World."
"Okay.....it's a promise then"
Both of us shook hands and after that I let Mr. John escort Mayu to their home. I talked to Mr. John before he left and he said that my PROTO device is in my bedroom.
As I looked up to the sky, it is really dim and that's when I noticed that our talk with each other was really long and thus I go straight to my bedroom and as I arrived at my room I saw the package of the PROTO device lying on my bed.
I opened the box and as I saw the device. It was a simple, plain device just like the reporter said on T.V. but who would think that this small device can kill your body? I read the instruction manual and all of the controls for the device that was written on it. All I need to do is link the cable of the device to a socket and I can play the game. It indicated that the game is already installed through the device itself.
To make it short, the PROTO device is simply a device that can only activate one game but what people don’t know is that it could change your entire life once you enter on it.
Tomorrow, the story of my life is going to change REALLY BIG! That is for sure, just what kind of world am I really going to enter? Questions about what's going to happen to me for tomorrow rolled through my head. But for the meantime, I'll just sleep on my bed to get ready for tomorrow.
T.B.C.
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Ah.. the suspect is prisoned just because she hit and caused injuries to Minami...?
Very Harsh indeed...
Yukari is such a joker...
Eh... Mayu is Minami's gardener step daughter.... and the suspect.... very nice twist...
Ah.. what a dangerous game...like //hack&Sign 'the World' game... but unable to log out...
And similar like the game in 'Sword Art Online'
Trap in the game until they can clear the stage
Wah... can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Mayu and Takamina in the game...
Thank you for the lovely update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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thanks for the update!!!!!
Never wouldve guessed that was Mayu :D & lol, wow Minami's uncle sure does take things seriously for improsining somoene :P
Pretty cool meeting between Minami and Mayu. Those two will make interesting companions in the game :)
thank again. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Lol Minami's grandfather is so strict!
and Yukari-san is so funny XD
And I thought the one who bumped her is Atsuko! Guess my wish didn't came true....but! Seeing these two in A fiction is pretty interesting!
Thank you for updating! and as always I am looking forward for the next chapter! :D
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Everyone thank you for supporting this fiction! Hopefully I wont loose any supporters :cry: :cry: :cry:
PROTO Chapter 3
"Gooooood Morning Everyone!I am Seiji Nakayama reporting live in Akihabara!We are here in a long lane of a certain shop in Akiba!why is the lane so long?Because today is the grand opening sale of the PROTO device!yes!you heard me right!today is opening sale of the brand new device that is being screamed by the gamers voice,nationwide!Now let's ask that guy over there!Sir!Sir!What is your comment to the PROTO device and why do you want to buy it?"
"Because it's features are awesome!"
"Oh!Is that so?do have any further comments or expectations to the device?"
"Ofcourse!for starters I want the device to---"
*turns off television
"*sigh* so it's really going to begin huh?"
I said as I watch the news on the television set that is in my bedroom.
Few hours to go and i'm going to enter the world of PROTO and once I get in that device I need to clear World 1 before I can log out.Darn it....what kind of thing did I just get into?I want to back out but my mom would be wondering on why I don't want to play the device but atleast I have Mayu on my side,with a beta tester on my side I'm sure I can pass World 1 in no time and just pretend to mom that I finished the game and got bored already,it can be a perfect lie to her and to some people that will question me.
Suddenly someone knocked on my bedroom door and as the door opened I saw Yurika-san carrying a tray with my breakfast on it.She greeted me by saying "Good Morning mistress" and laid down a small wooden table on my bed to put the tray on it.
"Mistress,Are you getting better?"Yurika-san questioned as she brewed some tea for me.
"Well my head is still aching a bit but I'm getting better than yesterday."
"I'm glad about that Mistress."
"Thank you,Yurika-san."I said with a smile.
As Yurika-san finished brewing my tea,she suddenly saw the package of my PROTO device and there she asks,
"So you have already bought it huh?Why are you still not playing it?"
"Ah...I'm waiting for a friend to contact me.Once that friend of mine texts me,I'm entering PROTO."
"I see.Uhm Mistress I must leave,I'm going to prepare your mother's breakfast so if I could."
"Oh!It's okay,please take care."
After that Yurika-san left my room and I started to text Mayu if she bought the device and then she replied by saying,
"Yeah,I'm just waiting for you to text me back.I'm going to enter PROTO,hurry up and enter too."
Wow she so fast at buying the device...but I can't believe I'm going to enter PROTO at this early!Well I have no more choice but to plug the cable of the device to the socket and enter PROTO.As i look at the description's manual of the device,PROTO is a device that is activated in voice command."Well that is really easy!"I said in my head.Before I went inside the PROTO device,I looked once again to my whole bedroom because maybe I'm not able to come back again because honestly I'm scared on entering PROTO.
After an hour or so,I opened my TV and looked at the Game corner news and there I saw a marquee that is saying that the PROTO device is finally sold out and after that I closed my TV set and let out a big sigh,I put the device on my head and lay down on my bed,I scream out loud the voice command of starting the device which is,
"LINK START!"
After that,the blue transparent glass of the device let out a really bright light that let my eyes close for a second but as I opened my eyes I was so surprised that my whole body is floating in mid-air and my whole surrounding is just plain black.I was scared for a second but then A huge word came out in front of me.
"LOADING GAME...50% complete"
That is the word that is written in front of me,bit by bit the loading of the game is reaching to 100%,somehow my heart is beating rapidly.I was so anxious on what does the 1st World look like and as the game reaches 100% and the "Welcome to PROTO" word appeared,I slowly closed my eyes and as I opened it.what I saw is this,
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rough sketch of the author without people in it because it's too difficult OTL
What I saw is a stadium-like place.My whole body is landing softly through that surface that contains many people in the small circle of the stadium,many people with dark glasses are blocking their way to not step over the lane of the circle and all of the participants are wearing the same transparent blue glass that I am also wearing and as I look above to observe the surroundings,I saw 3 big floating flat screen TVs above the stadium-like place but what really catches my attention is the number of doors that is aligned to every corner of the stadium.
As my body reaches the surface,A guy that is also wearing a dark glasses told me to follow him in the circle and I agreed to be assisted by him.As I stepped inside the circle,someone poked my shoulder and as I turned my head around I saw Mayu.
"Hey,you're pretty late huh?"Mayu said as she chew her bubble gum.
"Yeah...sorry about that,I just did some things and stuff."I said as I scratched my head.
"*Sigh* anyways the event is about to start in a few minutes so let's just wait."
"Okay...uhm by the way!How does the device do this?knowing the clothes that we wore as we enter PROTO?"
"Ah that?it's not written on the manual but the PROTO device can read your whole body and analyze it,after that they will entry everything that your character is wearing,even what's inside of it,that's why I have this bubble gum with me and my bag."
"I see,but why did you wear a bag with you?"
"I just wanted to,I feel really out of balanced when I don't have my bag with me."
"....your weird"
"I know."
After many hours passed and the 3 flat screen TVs turned on above us and what we saw is Akimoto Yasushi,the creator of the game itself.What he did is that he smiled to us and said,
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999: 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors OST - Digital Root (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qD5fBpqOSj8#)
Play it here
As I observe my surroundings,I ca hear some voices saying,"Why does he want to budge into the game?","Can't we just play already?","I think I just wasted my 25,000 yen" and many more words but Akimoto-san just continue to introduce the world of PROTO,he explained everything like Mayu did to me.He said everything about the 3 Worlds and what we are in is the World 1 itself but then as he gets to the part about the log out button and explains the whole situation of it,
"WH-WHAT?!ARE YOU INSANE?!!!"
Someone suddenly screamed to the crowd,After that many complains suddenly submerged to Akimoto-san's face.Everyone is in a panic just like I did as I heard this thing from Mayu but right on that moment,there were some people that are not speaking.Me,Mayu,the other beta-testers and the people that are so shocked they couldn't even speak.
Suddenly Mayu whispered and said,"tsk,Weaklings..."
After the crowed finally quiets down,Akimoto-san continue to speak out that the only way that we are going to escape this hell zone is to finish World 1 and our first step is to find one partner or even more and after that the body guards that are surrounding them,will be their assistance through the door that they will be entering.After his explanation,the 3 televisions turned off and the crowd gone insane once again."Is he insane?!","Why did I buy this game?!","I was fooled!","He's such a devil!" those are some words that I heard once they complained about Akimoto's game,PROTO.
"Hey Minami,Let's go."Mayu said as she gets out of the circle with a guard assisting her.
"Ah okay,Mayu."
"Don't call me by that name....call me Nezumi."
"Nezumi??Why is that?"
"Because I wanted to."She said as she continues to follow the guard that is assisting her.
"Okay then..."I replied as I follow her footsteps.
After a minute or so,we finally reached the door that is dedicated to the two of us but as I look at my back,I can still see many people that haven't decided to move forward and find a partner.They are still in panic on what is happening to them,I actually pity them because I don't want to see people suffering because of this kind of thing.So that is why World 1 is entitled as the Styx...
It's a river of wrath that contains the angry,irate,furious, wroth,ireful expressions.Styx is defined as the punishment for the wrathful and the gloomy.The former are forever lashing out at each other in anger, furious and naked, tearing each other piecemeal with their teeth. Because you lived a cruel, vindictive and hateful life, you meet your fate in the Styx that is based in the book of Divine Comedy,I remembered that I read this when I was on my dark memories,that only books are closest friends.
Maybe that is the reason why Akimoto-san named this 1st World as "Styx",many people here played the game to let go of the reality and to leave the life that they hate and now we can see that people releases their anger,wrath and furious expressions through their whole body.Akimoto-san really saw that happen but right now I must get out of this world and live my normal life once more.
"Hey Minami,Stop daydreaming and Let's go!"Nezumi said with an angry expression.
"Oh!I'm sorry!"
After that the guard that is assisting us opened the door and said,"Go inside." straightly to us and so we did.As we went inside,the whole light that was coming through the door that we just went to suddenly fade.The room that we are into is just a black-colored room.I really have no idea what to do but all I have to do is let Nezumi do the work and I'll help her out but many minutes passed and nothing happened or change inside the room!
"Hey Nezumi?What are we going to--"
"Shhhh.....just wait."
That is the words that Nezumi said to me.So I did what she said and as another minute passes,A sudden spotlight flashed in front of us and there was a chair and the interesting part is that there is something that is sitting on it and that "something is....
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a rabbit.
T.B.C.
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thanks for the update!! Wow so they finally entered the game. Guess it's a good thing that Minami knew what to expect since Mayu told her, otherwise she'd be freaking out like the rest of the players.
great chapter and sketches as usual :D I look forward to finding out what happens next!
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Ah... Minami is quite insane to play the game just because she is bored....
I can understand the other players feeling...
To say you have to complete 1st stage to log out...
And if somehow you died in the game... you also died outside...
That's very scary...
Eh... the 1st battle is with a rabbit....
Can't wait to see what happen next....
Thank you for the update
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Nice! Finally they are inside the game!
and the first battle is a rabbit?how interesting :w00t:
I also like the 2nd sketch :DDDD and the BGM really fits their situation :OOO
Please continue this :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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satsugayyyy~
nice plot you got here :thumbsup
love the drawings your specialty..
keep it up up up!!
in case I won't comment my thank you is present :3
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@arrow27 Yep! Minami might really panic! and loose control! Thank you for reading and I hope you'll stay reading this until the end :kneelbow:
@cisda83 Thank you for reading sir! :D :D :D
@TK.Yuu Good thing someone still saw my 2nd sketch XDD It's a late entry for that Chapter,Sometimes I'm an air-head so sorry about that :sweat: by the way!Thank you for reading! :D
@miayaka Dawwwww Thanks Mia! :farofflook: A great fan fic writer,reading my story! It's such a huge honor! T^T thank you very much for reading :')))
Chapter 4
"A Rabbit?"
I suddenly questioned out loud but as I look at Nezumi's face, she didn't wonder at all..... Maybe she's waiting for something to happen.
And so it happened. After a few minutes passed, the stuff toy rabbit suddenly moved its head. Its left eye shined bright red which indicated that it might just have activated. Then, the rabbit spoke and said,
"Welcome to Styx's Door 01,Mr. Rabbit's Room."
The creepy, weird rabbit said with a cheerful voice.
"Here in door 01 we will be ha-- OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH~!!!!!Wait a minute~?Is this who it think it is?! Is that you my lovely Nezumi-chwan~?"
"Chwan?"(<---Minami)
"It's so nice to meet you again~! Cute (Kawaii) as always~!" :3
"Will you just shut up and just explain the rules to her?" Nezumi said irritated while pointing at my direction.
"Ahahahaha~ I like this gap of yours Nezumi-chwan~ and oh~? You didn't take a beta tester as your partner? Well this is interesting! Hey little young lady~! What's your name?"
"Oh...uhm...My name is Takahashi Minami, please to meet you Usagi(Rabbit)"I said with a low tone of voice.
"HEY! THAT'S MR.RABBIT(or Usagi-san) TO YOU!!!" The stuff rabbit said to me with a mad tone.
"Aaahhh!! S-Sorry Usagi-san!" I bowed down in front of the stuff rabbit.
"That's better~....Well! Minami-chan! Let me explain how this room works! Shall I?"
"Yes you can,Usagi-san."
"Ohoho~ I like the sound of that politeness you got there!"
"Oy...you don't need to be that polite..." Nezumi whispered to me.
"*EHEM*...In Mr Rabbit's room or should I say MY ROOM! Is known as a puzzle game and if you look at your left wrist, you will see a rectangular chip that is attached through your skin."
"Chip?" I questioned myself. I rolled up the sleeve of my jacket to see what Usagi-san meant....Then, there it is! I did see a rectangular chip that is attached through my skin. Somehow I was quite disgusted as I saw it in front of my eyes since it looks surreal to me. As I looked at Nezumi’s, she also showed her left wrist which also has the chip attached to her skin. After that, we continue to listen to Usagi-san's explanation.
"Now if I may continue..*ehem*...remember, that chip of yours is really important. You will need that chip from World 1 up to World 3 and why is that? Because here in World 1,that chip is known as a "puzzle counter". It counts the number of puzzles that you have completed or solve from the very beginning of the game, and once that chip reaches it's full tank, you shall know its use! Andddd SO, that's all the things that you shall know in World 1! Now let's begin Puzzzzzlllleee NO.01!!!"
As Usagi-san shouts the number of the puzzle, A huge panel showed in front of us and after that, Nezumi suddenly said,"Eh it changed?",I wonder what she meant to say?
I observe the look of the rectangular panel and as I look at it on my point of view. It looks like a plain green box that is floating in mid-air although it's not literally floating so high! it's only floating half of our height and on top of it are buttons, symbol buttons to be exact.
There are 5 buttons. A star button, a triangle button, a moon button, a square button and a sun button.
After the setting for the first puzzle was compete and done, Usagi-san finally spoke to the two of us and said,
"Her is puzzle no.01 ladies and no gentlemen!"
"What is this? Why did it changed?" Nezumi suddenly said as she questions Usagi-san with a mad tone of voice.
"Oh....right~....I suddenly forgot that you are a beta tester Nezumi-chwan~! *ehem* well for starters, do you think Akimoto-sensei is dumb?"
"Wh-What?"
"Nezumi-chwan~It doesn't mean that if you played the game before as a beta tester, it is still the same as you played it last time! You know that Akimoto-sensei doesn't want to spoil the fun, right?" Usagi-san said in a teasing voice.
"Tsk." Was the only reply Nezumi gave to Usagi-san's long explanation.
"Well! Let's start shall we? Here is puzzle number 1! Worth for 2 chip points! That is 1 chip point per partner, so once you solve this puzzle, each of you will receive 1 chip point! Do both of you understand?"
We both agree on Usagi-san's question but as I look at Nezumi's current situation, her whole aura suddenly changed, from the Nezumi that is calm and matured turned into a Nezumi that is nervous and anxious that I thought that I wouldn't see from her. She really didn't expect for this to happen but we have no choice but to solve this puzzles that are blocking our way to clear World 1 and after a second or so, Usagi-san finally said the problem of the puzzle but not in a form of speaking but by the help of a holographic image that is coming out from Usagi-san's left shiny red eye.
And here is the thing that is written to the puzzle:
"Though I am dead, right from your view, I am still bright. Although we are far away from each other, Nod you head up high! Go and look to the sky and we will meet, eye to eye."
After many minutes passed, Usagi-san said,
"I will only give you 1 hour to solve this puzzle.....so your time starts......NOW!"
Finally I started to play this game but somehow why do I get this feeling that I'm going to die from this? Hehe....it's really nerve wracking if you are on my place. Seeing this kind of case scenario in front of your eyes, can really lose your guard and you will forget that this is just a game.....but is it really a game? Or are we just being fooled by Akimoto-sensei?
Questions rolled through my head once again but what matters now is I have to solve this puzzle.....in order to leave this hell zone that I am stepping on.
T.B.C.
Hey! why not trying on solving the puzzle on your own? :D
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So even Nezumi dose not even know...
hoping Takamina would be able to solve it...
though when I first read the problem I then immediately thought of the moon...
Maybe it's just me...
anyway thanks for the Chap.!! Mai-Chan!!!!
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Interesting... 1st test is solving riddle....
You're dead and far way but can seen up in the sky...
I think it's star
If you die you become star
That's my guess... Dunno if I misunderstand the riddle...
Nezumi got trick... now she needs to play the game the same as others
What's going to happen with Takamina and Nezumi...?
Would they be able to solve the riddle?
Thank you for the update
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Missed your stories Mai Chan! I went to a trip to Japan last week so I wasn't able to check your works out!
@topic Hmm....Nezumi doesn't even know the answer huh?Well.....I don't really know the answer but what I do know is that this is a trick puzzle.
Not a single word in Chapter 4 mentioned that the 1st puzzle was a riddle....Usagi-san just said that it's a puzzle,am I right?
So that is one of the weird things that I noticed,because if you are going to say the puzzle you will say,"Here's a riddle for our 1st puzzle" and etc!So that's my reason of thinking that this thing is a hidden puzzle or more like a hidden word puzzle....
Knowing the words are so long I am thinking that the answer is a long word too,So....I will go with Triangle.
Hopefully I answered it right ahahaha :sweat:
Thank you for the update Mai Chan! and more updates to come! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Wow this is a really interesting Chapter! What is the answer?I wonder... :? :? :?
Well there are so many theories in the comments section but DarkEye's theory really stands out the most!He is right about the Riddle part!
I don't really know the answer but I'm excited and cannot wait on what IS the answer! :D
@DarkEye I guess you like puzzles!Looking at the way you answer,you are really an observer :lol:
Waiting for the update Mai-Chan and keep it up! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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PROTO Chapter 5
Virtue's Last Reward OST: 2-11 Clarification (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJvZwZQV7fs#ws)
Play it here :)
After I heard Usagi-san's question I rushed to the panel and I was so prepared to push the star button to select my answer but then Nezumi stopped me by holding my hand.
"Are you stupid?"She asks me in a mad tone.
"W-What?Come on Nezumi!The answer is so obvious!!"I said as I try to let go off my hand but Nezumi's grip strength is really hard to defeat so I just listened on what she is going to say.
Nezumi suddenly called Usagi-san's name by saying "Oy.USAGI!I know you're still there!I have some questions for you!" in a really mad voice and in a bad manner of language.(Yankee tone of some sort) and after that,a second passes by and Usagi-san's voice was heard by our two ears.
"Chill out Nezumi-chwan~!What is your question?"Usagi-san said in a calm way.
"I....I agree with Usagi-san.....you should chill out...."I said to Nezumi but still I'm scared on what is she going to say.
Nezumi let out a big sigh and just continued her questions by saying it properly,she crossed her arms,face Usagi-san and said,
"First,this is the thing I really want to clarify.........is this puzzle a riddle?"
"Uhuhuhuhuhuhu~ How should I know?I'm only a stuff rabbit~!"
"C...Cut the crap off!!I am not kidding!If you don't answer me properly then I will rip you off!"Nezumi said angrily.
"THEN DO IT.You will need me more than I need you."Usagi-san said with a plain voice.
Nezumi didn't continue her move,she's so pissed off and you can tell it by looking at her body posture.Both of her fists are tightly gripped through her palms and her eyes are like burning red....literally.Suddenly Usagi-san spoke.
"Well this is the only thing I could say.BE CAREFUL,why is that?because once you push the wrong answer on every puzzle that I give to you.The reward of the originally CP will go down to 1 point.For example!the puzzle has a total of 2 CP,just like now and then Minami or Nezumi chose the wrong answer to that puzzle and what's going to happen you ask?That 2 CP will be a 1 CP so that means if you answered that puzzle but the CP reward is only 1 CP then you two will have to share that CP!"
"So....my CP will only get the half of that 1 CP which is 1/2?"I asked.
"CORRECT~!That's right!"
"But if our 1 hour on solving this puzzle finishes....will the original CP reward will still low down to 1 CP?"
"Right again Minami-chwan~!and it will go on and go on! even if you reach the negative score because here in my room(Mr.Rabbit's room), you should finish all of the puzzle,EVEN IF IT MEANS FOREVER."Usagi-san said in a happy voice.
"FUZAKERUNA!(Don't joke around!!!! or *F**K OFF!)"Nezumi shouted.
"Nezumi-chwan~ do you think I am fooling around? and just what happened to your cool aura?Why did you became a really scared girl?ahahahaha~ this gap of yours is really cute~"
"H-HEY!Usagi-san!You're going too fa--"
"Minami....it's okay."Nezumi said as she stopped me from getting mad.
"Hey...Usagi...do you have any paper and pen I could use?"Nezumi said in a calm voice,good thing she calmed down.
"Ah yes,We have prepared those for the players to use.You can see it coming out of the panel,it's under the buttons.If you need another pair of pen and paper,there is a blue rectangular button near the horizontal hole and you just press that button and you'll get the piece of paper and pen that you want!"
As we walked towards the table,we saw a paper coming out of a thick horizontal hole,it's like those things that you can see in a convenience store when they give up your receipt and after we get the paper we heard a clank that was under the table and as we looked down,We saw a rectangular hole that has a pen on it and so Nezumi grabbed the pen and started to jot down the words of the puzzle.
I wondered what she is planning,she just re-wrote the whole sentence so how does it help? and besides isn't it already there?Star is definitely the answer to this puzzle!that's why Usagi-san gave this puzzle a 2 CP rank only! it's because it's easy! but as I look at Nezumi,her opinion was different....it's like she's finding a secret through this puzzle.
50 minutes has passed and we only got 10 more minutes to finish the puzzle.If can't solve this then we will loose 1CP on the original CP reward....I looked at Nezumi and she was so tensed but then I looked at the hologram screen,I re-read the whole sentence,
"Though I am dead, right from your view, I am still bright. Although we are far away from each other, Nod you head up high! Go and look to the sky and we will meet, eye to eye."
After that,my eyes started to shimmer,I went to the panel and press the blue button.The paper and pen came out from were we get them earlier.After that I jotted down the whole sentence but in a different pattern and there I saw my answer.
"I FOUND IT!"I shouted out loud.
I went to the table again to push my designated answer and as I pushed that button,Nezumi stood up and said,
"ARE YOU INSANE?!DECIDING ON YOUR OWN ANSWER WILL NOT HELP!"She said angrily.
"Listen to me Nezumi!this answer is correct I'm sure of it!"
"And if it isn't?"
"Then you could slap me in the face or put both of our pens until my nose bleeds!"
".....Okay then....."
After that Nezumi and I faced to the hologramic screen.The screen says "ENTERING ANSWER....." and many seconds passed.A catchy tone suddenly appeared and there the screen says.....
"YOUR ANSWER IS CORRECT!You have gained 1 CP"
We looked at our left wrist and we saw that 1 Chip bar glow.Nezumi thanked me for my answer and then she questioned me,
"Hey....How did you figure it out?"
I went to the panel to show her my solution.I pressed the blue button to get another pen and paper.I really didn't need the pen so I just left it where it belongs.After that I wrote the whole sentence but in a different pattern.As Nezumi saw the finished output of what I've written,her easy also shimmered.
"I see....I can't believe that I didn't noticed that....thanks again."
"No it's okay!Now we understand that this puzzle is not a riddle but a hidden word puzzle."
"Yeah...Akimoto-sensei is really good at giving puzzles..."
"He did this?"
"Yes,Everything that's in here is made by him."
"I see....his puzzles are really hard then...."
This is only the start of the game and what welcomed us is a hard puzzle and it only consists of 2 CP's and if you shared it, you will just gain 1 CP....it's really far away to reach the full tank and to think that the answer to this puzzle isn't really that obvious.....this is how the word looks.
"Though I am dead, right from your view, I am still bright. Although we are far away from each other, Nod you head up high! Go and look to the sky and we will meet, eye to eye."
But then you would normally think "It's a star!It's soooooo obvious!" and I also thought of that! but Akimoyo-san didn't,at this puzzle it wasn't mentioned if it's a riddle or not and if it is then why hide it?Usagi-san gave me that clue of him by his actions.
"Uhuhuhuhuhuhu~ How should I know?I'm only a stuff rabbit~!"
It was obvious that this puzzle is not a riddle by just avoiding Nezumi's question.So the only thing that you will think is that the answer to this puzzle is hidden.You need to find the hints to understand it and the hint that i found is....a comma (,).It was so suspicious to have many commas to that sentence.Mostly in the part where the puzzle says " Nod you head up high! Go and look to the sky",If you were the one who will write the sentence then you can make the sentence much more shorter right?instead of a " Nod you head up high! Go and look to the sky" sentence,you could have just write the word "Look through the sky" in the sentence and replace it!
And that was the time I wrote this pattern,
"Though I am dead,
right from your view,
I am still bright.
Although we are far away from each other,
Nod you head up high!
Go and
look to the sky and we will meet,
eye to eye."
and after that I saw my answer.You can also see it...by reading the first letters in every row and then I reached for the panel to press the triangle button.
After many minutes passed,Usagi-san's voice finally showed up.
"CONGRATULATIONS~!!"Usagi-san said in an English accent.
"Minami-chwan~!nice work!You figure out the answer to this puzzle~!But don't be too happy okay?I still have plenty more puzzles for you two~"
"Right now?We don't have any rest at all?"II asked.
"Fufufufufu~ of course~!this is not a hotel for you,ya know? this is MR.RABBIT'S ROOM!!!My room,my rules!now here comes Puzzle number 02 that consists of......6 CP."
"What" I said in my head.6 CP is a big amount of points.This is the puzzle that we must solve properly...no matter how hard it is,if this is the thing that will help me and Nezumi escape World 1 then I'm in!.
More challenges are blocking our path and this is just the start of our journey in PROTO.Just how can we surpass this blazing world called "hell"?
T.B.C.
@DarkEye You got it right bro~ :3
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Ah.. I was wrong... I only read the meaning of the riddle... not looking at the word puzzle...
Yeah Triangel was correct...
I can see it... I saw DarkEye-san answer...
Can't wait to see the next riddle
Thank you for the update
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Awesome~ I didn't expect to get the answer right!
But what I didn't know is that it can FORM the word itself!
and the next chapter is about 6 CP?! :shocked that's a lot!
Waiting for the next chapter! :twothumbs
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PROTO Chapter 6
"6 CP's no matter what it takes we need to gain these points....."That is the word that I kept saying inside my head.My temptation of gaining that kind of amount rip my conscience through reality.I was just standing in front of the stuffed rabbit that was portraying Usagi-san.My mind was so focus on waiting for the question but then as I waited and waited,nothing happened.
The whole room of Usagi-san(Mr.Rabbit) was so silent that you can hear every breath you inhale and exhale and what's weird is that Nezumi isn't even complaining for the time that is passing by, instead she is just standing up,waiting for something to happen and then many minutes passed and the wall that is behind the chair of where the stuffed rabbit is sitting upon wreck.
Collapsing into a hole but not just any hole.It is a really smooth hole,a rectangular hole that looks like a door.A large ray of light is strucking through our eyes.We didn't moved from where we are standing,perhaps I was just waiting for Nezumi to move or I'm just really confused on what's going on.We were about to take the 2nd puzzle but a wall breaks,forming a door-like hole,who wouldn't be confused in that kind of situation?
A minute passes and We heard a chime of a bell,it repeated 3 times and after that calm voice of a lady surrounds the whole room it's one of those things that you can hear at the supermarket when it's about to announce something.
"Please step outside."
and after that we did exactly what she said.We stepped outside but we didn't know what's on the other side or maybe I was the only one because maybe Nezumi knows what is it.As the large amount of light fades out on my eyes I finally saw what's on the other side.
We were on a grass field.The sky was so blue,the sun is shinning so brightly,you can sniff the fresh air!so fresh that it's like you are paying for it!It was really good to be true,It's like you're really not in a game but in a vacation.I looked at my back and I can see the hole that we came out off and I can see the whole row of the rooms were each player has been into.they came out of the exact same shape of hole were we came out off.
Some player's face are pale and some are just as calm as Nezumi and some are just like me,wondering....wondering what's in front of me.
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Just.....what is that thing?I can't see the whole thing clearly since we are quite distant to that thing but all I can see is that per tower is being guarded by a guard.Is that were our next game start?Why is there a die-like drawing per tower?I have so may questions through what I am seeing and I think some of the players think the same too but questioning myself and just standing up while doing nothing can't solve anything so I just move closer to that place and then Nezumi said,
"It's about time you moved a muscle"
"Ah....sorry about that"I said with an awkward smile.
"No it's okay."
Now that I think about it,I just have 1 long conversation with Nezumi and that is where we first met but that's it.So I just decided to talk with her while we are still far away from our destination point.I want be closer to my ally to make our bond stronger.
"Uhm...Nezumi!Do you have any idea of those towers?"
"Nope."
Eh...I was hoping for a "Yes" to make the conversation even longer but this just turned into a question and answer portion!I need to make my ally feel at home when I'm with her!
"Uh....Nezumi....how's your family?"
"Don't budge in my family's business."she said in a cold aura.
"AaaAaaaAaAAHhhHhH~!!S-S-S-SORRY!!!"
"ahahaha I'm just kidding!jeez trying hard to get close to me huh? *smiles*"
I can't reply straight to Nezumi on that moment,I was so busy looking at her face while smiling.It was the first time she smiled so purely! and for the fact that she did that in front of me!
Finally some seconds passes and I came back to reality and continued our conversation.
"You're not bad at smiling huh Nezumi?*smiles*"
"Idiot.What do you think I am?Cold-hearted?"
"apparently yes...."
"What did you say?"
"I-I didn't say anything ma'am!!*awkward smile"
"Don't hide it...I heard you clearly.Is it because of my appearance? or because of my attitude of being ahead of my goals and putting aside the people I am with?"
"Uh.....is that how you look at yourself Nezumi?"
Nezumi suddenly gone silent,all I can hear is the rustle of the grass that was coming out of our footsteps as we get closer to our destination.Seconds just passed and Nezumi finally spoke and said,
"Sorry for that long pause...I suddenly remembered my past."
"No....I should be the one who should be apologizing...."
"Well enough of that,let's take that aside and head to our goal first.We are close to the towers.
As Nezumi said we are close to the towers and many minutes passed and tons of players gathered in front of the 6 towers.You can hear a lot of murmuring coming through each players mouths."What's about to happen?","6 CP is such a big amount!I think this is going to be a difficult one!","I can't really understand what's going on!","I want to fill my chip right now!!!!" and many more things to be heard from them.
Nezumi was just calmly standing up like there is no trouble at all.30 minutes passed and the 3 large monitors that we last saw in the main lobby of World 1 - Styx appeared once again.Some players,including me,expected for Akimoto-sensei's face to appear to the screen but it didn't instead it was Mr.Rabbit.
As soon as his face appeared through the monitor,some players whispered to each other,"Eh? who is this?first a talking doll and now this?"
"What?A doll?"That was the question that I asked myself.I though we all faced the Mr.Rabbit challenge but my question was rapidly answered as soon as Usagi-sam talked.
"Everyone~!I know some of you are wondering,"What a talking rabbit???first a doll then a rabbit???" Well wake up! this is a game and everything can happen!*EHEM* Anyways Some people are NOT wondering who I am since they have faced me in the 1st door! and those people are the beta-testers and the people that they are with!Although you don't know who are they am I right?but don't worry!they are just like you guys!they don't know the answers to every puzzles that are in PROTO because we change it!FAIR!!! am I right?
So!I know you are all wondering on what's those 6 towers in front of you!Well they are your ticket on aiming for the 6 CP!!!! "How can we get that,Mr Rabbit" you asked? well here it is!!! the question you all have been waiting for~!!!"
The 3 monitors showed the same picture and it is a Bowl.....a plain,white,bowl.
"Now!what I have hear is a dice!and right now I'm going to throw it through the bowl just like this~!"
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We watched the die until it stops and then,
"There~!as you can see the number 1 showed up!Let's roll it once more!"
Usagi-san repeated the same procedure and,
"Number 5! and again....."
The die rolled through the edge of the bowl,it kept rolling and rolling and rolling, we watched the die's eternal circling through the bowl and when it's about to stop,
"HIYA!!!!!"
Usagi-san suddenly put a lid through the bowl,making us unable to see on what number appeared through the die as it stopped.We were wondering on what purpose did he do that for and there he said,
"Now then time for the question......Just what do you think the last roll was?"
"What.....What the hell are you saying??!!!!!" a random player complained.
"Didn't you hear me?Okay look.I cover the bowl so you couldn't see what the last roll was!So again!I am asking you....What do you think the last roll was?"
The crowd was silent they don't know what to do,how to answer or anything else.They were so stiff just like me, thinking of anything so logical to answer the question.
"Well everyone as you can see in front of you,there are 6 towers and it is counted 1 to 6,so all you have to do is to get in that number that you think the result was and that's it!BUUUUUUUT!!! be careful!once you've answered it wrong!as you can see above the tower there is a giant steel ball! once you've got the wrong answer it will damage your whole body and you're out of the game!! but I think you're saying "MEH!It's just an online game!I wont die in reality! WELL YOU'RE WRONG! do you know the PROTO device that you attached through your head?well that is an activation of a chip! that once you die in the game then you will die in reality too!it sounds insane but it's some kind of a benefit for an individual!for example,you're partner died and you're still alive then you will gain a full amount of 6 CP just for you~ isn't that cool???
NOW THEN.......CHOSE THE CIRCLE YOU LIKE~!!!!Have a nice TROUBLE~!!!!"
the 3 monitors faded out,like a dust thrown by the wind.The crowd was silent for a second but then everybody went nuts and kept saying that they will die and didn't do the things they wanted to do in their life.
this is really Styx, a place were regrets are made,a river of wrath that contains the angry,irate,furious, wroth,ireful expressions.I looked at Nezumi and she kept thinking logical things but nothing came out.I can't believe it.....I might really die in this game or what's worst is that maybe my ally would die or half of these thousands of people around me will die.
Just how MAD can PROTO be??what I just need to do is think outside the box and to save my butt and Nezumi's butt too....
T.B.C.
Puzzle and drawings is not made by me and is owned by FUKUMOTO Nobuyuki
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Interesting new game...
What's going to happen next to Minami and Mayu?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Hi.. This is my first time to comment here.. :')
I'd read all your fics and.. everything are just awesome! Excellent story line.. Love it.. (o>.<o) Every type of genres you wrote were excellent, well written.. \(^o^)/
Now.. I'm reading PROTO, seriously.. Just wow.. WOW~! I love the storyline.. Mayu and Minami.. Uwaaa.. MayuMina.AWESOME (>…<) Very thrilling, i love how your ideas to put the players on the edge of their sits..
Wooo.. I can't wait for your next update.. \\((^o^))//
Hope Nezumi and Minami won't be crashed by the giant steel ball.. (-...-'!) Come on! Nezumi and Minami.. You guys better think fast.. (>…<)
Thank you for the latest update *bows* (o^_^o)
*sorry for my bad english* :bow:
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@kenjoy12 D'awww :') thank you!! that really means a lot *sniff*
Anyways my first manga Hisashiburi will be posted here!
UPDATES WILL BE SLOW AND LONG! Since I'm going to school by June! every update MIGHT consist of 10 to 12 pages :D
HISASHIBURI Chapter 1 - Guilty Feeling
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T.B.C.
I know it's short but the process on making this is NOT short.
I'm the only one who is making this manga.No helpers for the art.
What I can only do is 1 page per day and sometimes I have appointments and commission arts to others so the continuation for this manga will be really long so hopefully all of you will understand my situation.
Like all of you feel,I want to finish this too but inspiration and time is what I am lacking right now. The script for the story is already finished but the drawing is not finished.
Here is a sneak peek of the process of the manga :D
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YEP! really hard and it's numbing my neck and left hand. :'(( BUT!!! This is Atsumina that we are talking about so that's why I am doing this~! for the shippers like me and for Atsumina itself~!
Hopefully you appreciate this Manga and I hope you all can wait patiently :D
Check out my other artworks at: LINK~!!!! (http://SHTooru.deviantart.com)
Ja~ That's all~ :byebye:
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Mai-chan...
very great comic there...
The drawings were good...
Can't wait to see more
Thank you for the comic
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great i like your manga :thumbsup
i want to see next chap
thank you for this :jphip:
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MAI-CHAN!!!!!
AWESOME AS ALWAYS!!!!!
You know you could become a really famous Mangaka someday... :on GJ:
I can't wait for it!!!
:panic:
I really Love It!!! :heart: :heart:
I'll be waiting for More!!!!!
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WOw you're awesome
Love the manga <3
Pls Continue ^^
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Wow, the manga is really impressive...
I've tried making one before and it failed miserably(though it was completely handdrawn)
wow... nod nod...
I like how you can do the different viewpoints and such....
The shading was also pretty epic...
but they have no ears...(not big prob as most ppl I know don't draw the ears)
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the manga...it was WOW...
just like what would came from a pro mangaka...why don't you start lookkng for assistants?
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No problem, Mai-chan! :')
Seriously! Your drawings are amazing.. :thumbsup: Hope i can draw good as you.. My drawing skill is so-so >_< And hope i can write excellent story too..
Oh well.. When your school starts and busy with school works and it will take you forever to update *well.not forever exactly* i'll be waiting.. Hehehe
For now, please keep on updating :D
Thank you :bow:
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All atsumina´s fans appreciate this..thanxs a lot!
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OH MY GODDDDDDDDD!!!! IS THIS REALLY REAL~?!!! WAW!!! :deco: :deco: :deco:
Mai-chan~!!! awesome as always :rockon: :rockon: :bounce: :on GJ:
I like the drawings!!! SO PRO :drool: :drool: :drool:
I didn't expect it to be THIS good! and your artworks from your link is so awesome!!!! :w00t: :w00t:
I can wait patiently!!! Just please continue this :cry: :cry:
And I don't mind rated 18 drawings~~~ :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
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@cisda83 Thank you for reading :')))))
@Hii_chan Hope you still tune in for the next chapter \(^o^ )/
@7sam14 ahahaha is that so~? :shy1: :shy2: but I think I wont aim to be a mangaka in the feature :lol:
@dark48 You're awesome too :rockon: Thank you for reading! :D
@Shinoki but....I DID drew many ears in this manga :( maybe the way I draw ears doesn't even look like ears OTL thank you for the compliments though~
@bunny_rabbit Finding assistants that will really listen to you is hard and besides I'm only young so I don't really like bossing around XD and it's a good experience on working by yourself so that you could work much more
harder for me and for the readers too :D
kenjoy12 you can write stories too!!I know that I lack in grammar and I have made many typos here in JPH!P but that doesn't matter!what matters is that you share your fantasies stories here just like me!It's a way for sticking to your fandom and having experience too! :D and I think IT will really take forever ahahaha but I will try my best on continuing this manga :D
Haruko I hope they ALL do XD thank you for reading~
@DarkEye NO!This is a dream~!!! just kidding :3 yep this is real!clean your glasses! it might be foggy XD and I am no pro! I still lack here in this manga! DX but I really thank you for the appreciation and the compliments that you gave me :')
EVERYONE~!!! Thank you for reading! and this topic have reacked 10k+ views~!!!! YEEEEEEEY!!!! :banana: :pepper: :leek: :taco: :muffin: :strawberry: :lock: :bounce: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Thank you for all those who kept reading my junk-- :shock: I MEAN STUFF!!!
every person that appreciates my work really makes me smile! this is a way of getting motivation to something and I really thank you guys for staying with me on my ju-- i mean...."stories" :sweat:
I hope you will all still stay tune for my ongoing stories and have a nice life~!! :twothumbs
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@PROTO wow....I don't even have an idea about the last role would be! maybe a little diagram would help~? :D
@HISASHIBURI WAAAAAAAAAAAAAW this is the first time I saw a manga posted here in JPH!P!!! KEWLLLL I think per chapter will definitely worth the wait!
Good luck and awesome as always Mai-chan! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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You're right.. Thanks for the encourgement it means a lot to me…*crying like a river* T^T It just so hard to describe the feelings and put it into words.. You know what i mean.. Hehehe..
Thank you so much (*^_^*)
Well, like i said before even though it took you forever to update.. Atleast, we, your readers know that you'll not going to abandon your stories.. right?
And btw you got yourself a fan.. *dancing t-ara n4's countryside* I'M YOUR #1 FAN~! ..\\(^O^)// Though i know you have already.. Ahahaha XD
Thank you.. Keep on updating :bow:
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The Outside Word
"It's raining again...."
"Yeah...Do you think it will stop?"
"I believe not...."
"I guess it's raining on the outside huh?"The girl said as she leaned to the girl that she is talking with.
"Yeah....I guess you're right...."the girl said as she accepts the lean of the girl.
[insert town name],Is a place where they live.A place of darkness.A place where there is no sun.The whole city is covered by a huge "umbrella-like" shape.There is actually no rain in their town but they can here the rain from the outside world.
Every time it rains,Bit by bit they feel like they are birds that are trapped inside a cage.
Minami's POV
I was born in this town and I have no idea why this umbrella-like thing is covering the whole town.
As I was thinking really deep,Atsuko suddenly spoke and said,
"Let's go to the outside world...."
"What?Why so sudden?"
"I want to see the sun....that we are only seeing from story books..."
"But we will be punished if we go inside the umbrella!"
"Please Minami..."
I stand up and showed her my palm,
"Here....let's go."
She gave me her simple yet beautiful smile.
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We ran as fast as we could until we reached the main base.
We got inside the umbrella without any troubles.....no one stopped us.Atsuko and I climbed the umbrella by the long amount of stairs that is above us.
Many hours passed and we finally made into the top.We are about to go to the outside world.....The place where there is....
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Light.
"Finally....Minami....we made it....."
"Yes we did Atsuko...."I said as I hold her hands tightly.
Both of us felt restless and laid down on the grass field...
Atsuko and I both smiled at each other and rest......peacefully without regrets....
END of Minami's POV
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Not really and ORG story but I can't stop myself on showing this story here X3 and I can't think of a town name ahahahahaha :lol:
@kenjoy12D'aaaaaawww I never thought I have a fan *tears of joy* thank you for that :'))))) and just write what you want~! \o/
@TK.Yuu I knew someone would ask for the diagram XDD Well I have done that :D Just wait until Sunday for the update!
(c)Project DiVA
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Great OS there...
So are they dead or something...?
Rest with no regret... is like dying without regret...
Anyhow... great lovely Atsumina story
Thank you
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@The Outside world - Atsumina! Always together .. Sweet.. :deco: So familiar, i don't know if i'd watched it or read it somewhere.. Ummm.. :? Well, still the story is well written nice idea showing the picture.. :thumbsup
The Outside Word
[insert town name],Is a place where they live.
At first my face was like :shocked then :D I just laughed at it.. Funny!
@Mai-chan - Oh! You never thought? Well, you have one now and i'm honored to be your #1 fan.. :fap
Thank you for the OS you shared :bow:
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Wow this is Project DiVA's WORLD's END UMBRELLA!! :deco:
awesome for pairing atsumina up! ;)
and the ending was nice too :D
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PROTO Chapter 7
"What should we do now Nezumi?"I asked her while the crowd is still nuts.
"....We need more hints.....OY!USAGI!"Nezumi suddenly shouted.
After what she said just 1 of the 3 large monitors appeared above and thus the noisy crowd suddenly stopped on what they are looking and stood up their head,waiting on what's going to happen.
"Oh!what is it Nezumi-chwan?"
"Could you show the flat diagram of the dice you presented earlier?"
"Eh???Hmmm.....I don't know on how that is going to help but okay!"
After that the monitor that is presenting Usagi-san's face change into the dice's flat diagram and it looked like this,
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"Is that the only thing you need Nezumi-chwan?"
"Yes.Just let that picture stay and don't fade out the monitor."
"Okay then!Everyone you only have 45 minutes remaining!Hurry up!!!your gates through the 6 CP's are going to fade out if you keep em' waitin'!!!well See ya later~!!!"
After that Nezumi looked up through the monitor and so does the other players.Group by group are giving theories to each other on which circle should they select and some are playing dirty....planning on betraying their allies,just....why are they doing this?thinking and saving their own lives and not for the both of them?Why are some humans so selfish?!
"Hey Minami.You should go in number 6 while I go in number 3."
"Eh?Why should we be separated?"
"Because we need to be sure."
"WHAT?!That doesn't make sense!!!Wait.....are you betraying me Nezumi?!"
"Hey!don't get the wrong idea!I'm not betraying you!"
"Then why should we be separated?!"
"Because!!!---"
Before Nezumi's words were complete,a random player suddenly shouted,
"H-Hey!someone got in the number 2 circle!!!!"
"I-It's my partner!!!She's a beta-tester and she's really good at puzzles!!!"
The crowd suddenly ran through the number 2 circle but not all of them got in.The beta-tester that was said to be a good puzzler was a girl.I am pitiful on seeing her situation.She was just crouching at the edge of the caged circle and getting crushed by the crowd that's surrounding her.Other players were afraid to risk their lives and just backed out of the 2nd puzzle and some are still thinking on which circle should they pick.
I looked at the monitor and I see why the girl chose the number 2 circle and it's because it's really close to the 2 numbers that appeared earlier and those are the number 1 and number 5 but why does Nezumi want me to be separated from her?There are still thousands of us outside the 6 circles and only 26 people are in the number 2 cage.Suddenly Nezumi spoke and said,
"Hey!All of you in circle number 2!Do you really believe her answer?"
The crowd inside the number 2 circle were confused as Nezumi asked them and a random player said,
"Ofcourse!She's a beta-tester!"
"And I am too!"Nezumi said.
"Do you really think that the dice that Usagi rolled was the exact dice that is in that bowl right there?!"Nezumi said as she pointed through the floating table.
"That thing that we saw earlier is clearly fake since the one that rolled it is impossible to see in reality!"
The crowd suddenly began to murmur and murmur and then another random player said,
"This is a game!!!an online game!Even carabaos can roll a dice here!It's on the code!You're theory doesn't make sense since we are in an online game!"
"Oh really?Well half of what you said is true but do you really think that this game would present the bowl in which the exact answer was? and if it is that exact bowl then did they maintain that answer?If you don't believe me then fine! but I'm just trying to save all of your butts from dying!"
All of the players in the circle 2 were shocked,they decided to get out of the circle as fast as they can.The theory of Nezumi was straight to the point.This game can betray us since it did betrayed us already!They betrayed us on playing this game so maybe this game would play tricks on us and betray us again!
I looked to the number 2 circle and the player that is in the circle is the beta-tester itself.She was still in the edge of the caged circle,it's like she's not even planning on going out of the circle.I looked at the time and I can't believe that we only have 10 minutes left.
Some players get in to different circles.What's creepy is that some of them are murmuring,"I don't have a great life so I should end it right now." and many more.Why do Akimoto-sensei have to do this?!Making us suffer instead of enjoying the game!
Suddenly Nezumi approached me and said,
"Minami.I am going to the number 3 circle,Right now I am not going to let you in the number 6 circle but I will just let you choose your own.It's your choice in the end if you still want me as your partner So I need to go."
After that Nezumi went straight to the number 6 circle.Some of the players followed her and if you look at it carefully most of the crowd is in Nezumi's side.They trusted her since she is very logical through the theory she just said earlier.
5 minutes remaining and I am still outside.Will I go inside or just stand here and save my life?but even though I save my life in this 2nd puzzle,I'm still at risk because I am still inside this game.
But suddenly...
"*hic* *hic*"
I heard a moaning cry that is coming at the 2nd circle.It was the girl that is know as a beta-tester.I don't know why but I approached her without thinking.
*side comment*I will insert a drawing here of Minami and the girl but the tablet's cable is broken :/ *end*
"Why are you crying?"
"It's none of your business....now leave me....you're just wasting your 5 minutes!"
"I'm not wasting it!so tell me!Why are you crying?"
The girl hugged me all of a sudden.It's like we have known each other for about a year or so.She kept crying and crying and I just patted her back and said,"What happened?"
I waited for her answer while she is moaning and sniffing the fluid that is going out through her nose.I used my jacket to wipe her tears and then she looked at me and said,
"My....my...partner betrayed me....he said that he will stay by my side but now he doesn't want to accompany me....."
she said that to me but not straightly,she can't look at my eyes straightly because she kept crying and can't hold her tears.I am so pitiful to this girl.I want to help her with all I got,her,being in this kind of situation is really sad to see so I said,
"Don't worry....It might not be too much but I will accompany you...even though I will die here in this circle!"
"We will not die here."
"What?....What do you mean?"I wondered as she said those words.
"....I said this to my partner but he didn't believe me because I have no theory."
"Why can't you say your theory?"
"....because I....I can't put it into words."
"What do you mean?"
"Well what made me do it is because of Usagi-san's words.The time he said I know you are all wondering on what are those 6 towers in front of you!Well they are your ticket on aiming for the 6 CP!!!! ",It means that all of these circles might be the answer!but my partner didn't believe that and just left me."
"Ticket on aiming for the 6 CP........I GOT IT!"
"Eh?"
"You were right!Your hunch was right!"
What this beta-tester said gave me a really great hint,she remind me of the loop holes that Usagi-san said and what she said is one of those loopholes! The other one is that when Nezumi requested the flat diagram,there he said "Hmmm.....I don't know on how that is going to help but okay!",It means that the answer is all of the circles!but you really have to think outside the box because you need a trick to be alive in this puzzle and it is really simple.
"Hey what's your name?"The beta-tester suddenly asked.
"Uhm...Takahashi Minami! and you are?"
"I'm....Maeda Atsuko.Nice to meet you!"
"Yeah nice to meet you too."
I replied as I shook her hand.
"Uhm....Takahashi-san...thank you for being here with me..."
"It's okay Maeda-san!Just tell me if you need something okay?"
"Okay *smiles*"
Wow....her smile is so angelic.....
"TIME'S UP EVERYONE~!!!!NOW HERE IS THE ANSWER~!!!"
Usagi-san's face suddenly appeared at the giant monitor and replaced the dice's flat diagram that was standing still along ago.The floating table when down through the ground while being guarded by the guards and after that the assigned guard to open the lid from the bowl was standing in front of it.
"Now Mr.Guard!You may now open the lid!
The guard grabbed the lid by using both of his hands,half a thousand of people are in each circle and I am scared to see someone that is going to die but this is how life rolls....
Me and Maeda-san are the only people in circle 2 while there are plenty in the other circles and the majority of the most player in a circle is in number 6 because Nezumi is in there but I was so concerned in Nezumi's current state,did she also thought on the thing that was running inside my head?did she saw the loophole in this puzzle?Only the bowl in front of us could answer those questions.
*Usagi-san's voice*
"AND THE NUMBER IS!!!!!!!!!"
T.B.C
What do you think the number is?
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Ohmygosh! Aachan a beta-tester.. Yey! Me too Takamina I understood what Aachan said.. Atsumina moment! :fap
Aww.. Takamina being worried to Nezumi! Sweet..! :') :thumbsup
Oh! What will happen to Nezumi-Takamina's partnership? Will Takamina continue and give her trust to Nezumi? Will Nezumi betray Takamina? Will the PROTO be successful to revealed underneath the mask of each player? Are everything going to be okay? Alot of questions? Mysteries? Puzzles? Who's going to be safe? Who's not? Ohman! Can't wait!
This story made me hyped,! >_< I'm so tense from excitement right now! :fap Very thrilling! :banghead: Get a grip of yourself kenjoy12!
Thank you for the latest update :bow: :twothumbs
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So Acchan appears... as a Beta-Tester!!! :w00t: :w00t:
Awww..... very small Mayumina moment... Takamina being worried about Nezumi...
I wonder what happens!!!
oh yeah... Mai-Chan...
Where the heck do you get these Puzzles and such? :? :?
U know... just wondering... :doh:
aww~~~ Man~~~ now I have to wait next week... I hope I can still read it with Classes Starting all.... :banghead: :banghead:
Thanks For Zee Chap Update!!!! Mai-Chan!!!! :D :D
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I want the number to be both 2 and 6 xD
Thank you for the update :D I liked it ^~^
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Yeah... Atsuko was there... eh... she was the beta tester...
And Minami seems to be attracted to Atsuko...
Would Atsuko and Minami going to be together...?
Or Minami and Nezumi would still be partner...?
What's the number....?
I hope Atsuko, Nezumi and Minami able to survive this test
Thank you for the update
Can't wait for the next one
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@kenjoy12 Ahahaha :lol: Thanks for tuning in :D
@7sam14 Well on the first puzzle I made that up and the second was from Fukumoto Nobuyuki :D About how I get the puzzles,I like playing puzzle and logic games since I was a kid and some are my own puzzles.So whenever there is a new puzzle upcoming in this story,PROTO and has no credits in the end then that puzzle or logic puzzle was created by me :D
WotaOtaku~ Ahahaha but you can't XDD Thanks for reading! :D
cisda83 So many questions are running in your mind aye~?Thanks for reading :)
The release of the new episode of PROTO is early because it has a part 1 with it!So everytime there is a "part 1" Chapter,I will post it every Saturday so that you wont say that it's too short and it uplifts your curiousity XD
Tomorrow I will post Chapter 8 part 2 :D and today is the Senbatsu Sousenkyo! Hope our Kami-oshi's will get a good rank!!! Especially my oshimen,takamina~ :wub:
PROTO Chapter 8 part1
"Number 1"
After that the wholecrowd per circle gone nuts. All of them panicked and why is that? Ironically,no one no one was in the number 1 circle.
"AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!*evillaugh tone* Looks like everyone is going to die! This is so entertaining to watch~!"
Every crowd per circle can't believe what's happening. Right here, their lives are going to end but some cold hearted players from outside are smiling since they’re happy that their partner is going to die and that they’ll have a chance to gain 3 CPs.While some players are concerned of their partners..Just like me.
"ENOUGH BLABBERING!!! NOW!! RELEASE THE GIANT STEEL BALLS EXCEPT FOR NUMBER 1!!!"
After what Usagi-san said, I heard loud cries from the players that are inside the circles and also,the players outside the circles.
I suddenly backed out my whole body until it reaches the edge of the caged circle and so does Maeda-san.
Bit by bit I can hear the releasing sound of the giant steel ball. I am afraid even though I know that what I and Maeda-san are doing will both save us our lives. I heard a loud BANGas the steel ball fell from the ground which shook the whole area.
We are still alive.
The giant steel ball will kill you in this cage but not on the edge of it.Considering that the cages are circular.
The giant steel ball can't reach the edge.That’s the answer to this puzzle and it's all thanks to Maeda-san's since she saw it through Usagi-san's words.
"Everyone that is still alive and is in the cages, CONGRATULATIONS!!! You all have gained 3CP's!!! The next puzzle will begin shortly."
I looked at my chip bar on my left wrist and I really did gained 3CP's. I let out a big sigh of relief and as I looked at Maeda-san,she smiled back at me and gave me a hug and I patted her back.For some reason I cried a bit.
I was so scared of dying,dying in this kind of game.After a minute or so all the steel balls from the different numbers of circles came back to their original position and after that,I stood up and so did Maeda-san.
I was so shocked with what I saw as I looked at the cages of the other numbers...All of it except the number 2 and 1 cages are full of blood...Lifeless bodies of the other players.It was so gruesome but I tried to calm myself as I hold for Maeda-san's hand and ran to the 6th circle.
"T-Takahashi-san?!Where are we going?"
"I need to check something!"
"What is it?"
"I need to check something... I need to check if my partner is still alive..."
"Ta...Takahashi-san..."
Even though she's acting a bit weird earlier, it's like she knew from the start that the answer is all of the cages but why did she let me think that she's betraying me?Does she also want to check how much I trust her? Usagi-san did say something beforewe start this puzzle...
"World 1 is the world were you will learn how totrust your partner"
Darn it! Did she test me this time? I am such anidiot for not trusting her... But now... Please... Just please... Let me seeher breathing...Waiting for me to arrive at the 6th circle and say"You are so slow..."
But then... I was too late as I and Maeda-san arrived at the 6th circle... We saw...
*a picture of acrushed body that is covered by a jacket which resembles the jacket of Nezumi*
(I can't draw it DDDD: too much bloooooood"
"....Ne......NEZUMI!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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SHOCK :shocked
Ohmygosh~ Takamina and Acchan still alive.. Phew..
NOO~! Nezumi! Is she alright? Hope she's playing trick..
This just add to my anxiety.. :nervous Though i'm excited! Uwaa.. Can't wait :fap :thumbsup
Will be waiting for your next update :bow: :thumbsup
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Atsuko and Minami survived...
How about Nezumi....?
Nezumi like jacket was found....with lots of blood coming out of crush body...
I hope Nezumi was alive...
Minami didn't trust Nezumi...
What's going to happen next
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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PROTO Chapter 8 part 2
"No......No......NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"
I can't believe it....Nezumi is gone?This.....this is a joke right??!"
I can't understand this situation I'm having right now.....Nezumi is gone in just a blink of an eye....
"Ta.....Takahashi-san.....don't tell me that is your...."
"Sadly....I think she is my partner,Maeda-san....."
"I....see....."
Tears flow down through my cheeks,expressing how much hatred I feel through this game......Right now....I just want to punch Akimoto-san's face by inventing this stupid game!.....but I think....I am the most stupid one here...
"A word of advice from me,Once you play this game,I'm sure you will regret on playing it in the first place."
Nezumi warned me.....She warned me by this game.....but....
"You bought the PROTO device to enter a new world that you haven't seen before and now you're backing out? You're such a weakling."
Why did she suddenly wanted me to go in the game?I just can't think straightly....Nezumi is gone and I am halfly blaming her why I am here at PROTO.
"Hashi...."
.....Nezumi....why??I thought you have figure it out?
"Takahashi..."
Darn it......DARN IT!!!!!!!!!!
"Takahashi-san!"
"Eh?"
I looked straight up and saw Maeda-san.She kept calling my name while I am spacing out earlier.Her eyes shows a bit of pityness through my situation that I am having right now.She's holding her chest and she crouched her body and patted my back.
I just kept silent while looking at Nezumi's crushed body.
"...You're such a caring team mate Takahashi-san.......I am sorry for your lost...."
"It's okay....I just....wish I trusted her in the first place...."
Maeda-san didn't say anything....she didn't say anything at all.She just stayed silent,like I didn't said anything to her.
I didn't want to waste my time so I stood up and head through the front of the Big screen T.V. so that I would know what will happen next.I'm sure Nezumi would do the same too....
"Ta...Takahashi-san..."
"Eh?"
As I was about to leave Maeda-san,her hand stopped me by pulling my jacket.
"What is it Maeda-san?"I said as I faced in front of her.
"....Ca....Can we....team up?"
"What?Don't you have a team mate with you?You said that you have one right?"
"But....."
"But what?"
Maeda-san didn't say anything....That's it....I remembered that she was betrayed....
"My....my...partner betrayed me....he said that he will stay by my side but now he doesn't want to accompany me....."
That's right...she said that to me as we met for the first time....
I didn't think twice as I remember her situation about her partner.
"Here...."
"Eh?"
"From now on....I'm looking forward to our companionship.....Maeda-san.......Is that okay with you?"I said as I turned my head away from her sigh while scratching my head.
"Minami...."
"...Y...You answer?"I said with a bit of embarrassment.
"A-Ah!!Y-Yes!Definitely!!"Maeda-san said as she quickly grabbed the palm of my hand that is reaching through her.
"Well....Let's not waste our time and just finish World 1,okay?"
"Yes....."
After all that drama,we headed through the Giant T.V. to wait for Usagi-san's return and as many hours passed the T.V. finally turned on and there we saw Usagi-san once more.
"Hello everyone~!Break time is over~!Did you have a good rest~?Well lets just continue our game shall we?The next round is called the!!!...."
Usagi made a long pause that made us all more curious than before and there it happened.
We suddenly saw Usagi-san fade out and a doll showed up.
"Hello and I am your new host!Mary~"the moving doll said with a smile.
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OH MY GOSH! :shocked Why is this happening?! :banghead:
NOOOO?! Nezumi-chwan~ My heart! :bleed eyes: Please tell me i'm just dreaming! Can someone just slap me! :banghead: I know there is a reason why Nezumi had died. :'( So i believe in you Mai-chan.. :thumbsup Keep going :fap
:cry: :banghead: Need to calm my nerves~ Okay! Moving.to.next round! Now, Takamina and Acchan are partner now. Hope everything will be alright.. :) Atsumina gambatte ne~ :twothumbs
What will happen to.next round? What puzzle or game that they will going to face next? Why sudden change of host? What will happen to Atsumina partnership? :? :?
Can't wait :fap Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
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Ah... so Mayu did die here....
Ah... why....? Poor Mayu...
Yeah... Atsuko and Minami pair up....
How are they going to operate with each other...
Would they betray each other later...?
Can't wait to see the next game
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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PROTO Chapter 9
"M-Mary?" I said in a low tone of voice.
"Mary is the one who faced the non beta testers...." Maeda-san whispered to me.
"How do you know that?"
"Common sense...remember what happened as the other players saw Usagi-san?"
I tried to remember on what Maeda-san is trying to say to me and I remembered that there is one random player that said,
"Eh? who is this?first a talking doll and now this?"
and there... Usagi-san replied and said,
"Everyone~!I know some of you are wondering,"What a talking rabbit???first a doll then a rabbit???" Well wake up! this is a game and everything can happen!*EHEM* Anyways Some people are NOT wondering who I am since they have faced me in the 1st door! and those people are the beta-testers and the people that they are with!Although you don't know who are they am I right?but don't worry!they are just like you guys!they don't know the answers to every puzzles that are in PROTO because we change it!FAIR!!! am I right?
"Darn it...."
"What is it Takahashi-san?"
"....PROTO will pay...."
"What?" Maeda-san wondered.
"PROTO will pay for what they have done to Nezumi!!!!" I screamed out loud.The roar of my voice startled almost every player and Mary itself.
"Hey little smurf!before you blabber around you should listen on what I am saying!!!"The doll said with an annoyed tone.
I didn't replied anymore,I don't want to start a fight or create a ruckus on such a childish act but I'm seriously going to crush PROTO.....just you wait....Akimoto Yasushi.....just you wait....
"NOW!Let me introduce our next game~!!!!The "3 DOORS!!!"
"3 doors?" Some of the players said and even me.
"The rules are simple!,there are 3 doors to choose from and it right.....HERE!!!"
Suddenly a big wall out of nowhere appeared in front of us,like...magic.There,like Mary said, is 3 doors that we are going to chose.
"These 3 Doors is the key on your next goal to the number of chips that you wanted to accomplish!Per door holds different Chip Amounts or so we call it CP's!You might get lucky to get the door with the highest chip amount!"Marry said with a teasing voice.
"Anyways!Once you get in to the door that you choose from those 3 doors in front of you,both you and your partner will see another set of doors!but don't worry!they are all the same,it's for the other players that chose that same number of door that you also chose!So that we can escape that waiting in line process,right?"
"Now you all have an hour to choose the door you would like!Timer starts.....NOW!!!"
A large timer suddenly appeared on the giant monitor that Mary was on earlier.
I looked at Maeda-san as a signal that we should go and choose but suddenly she spoke and said,
"Let's rest for a bit Takahashi-san....I'm really getting tired from all the stress that I am getting from this game..."
"Uh...Okay...."
We went to a near vacant area to rest on.We can still see the gigantic television so there is no problem with the time.
"So Takahashi-san....What made you play this game?you know...PROTO."
"Oh...uhm...actually I wanted to play it at first but as I know it further I decided to back out."
"then why are you here?"
"Nezumi pushed me to play this game....." I said in a gloomy aura.
"I..I see....I'm really sorry about that...."
"No it's okay."
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The atmosphere between us suddenly got really awkward.Both of us are just watching the gigantic TV,looking at the timer until we are prepared to chose a door that we would like to get into.Bit by bit,we can see that per team mates are going in different doors.There is no biased door but just random choices as we can see in our point of view.
"Atsuko....can I call you Atsuko?"
"E...EH?!Wh-Why is that???"
"It sounds perfect for you."
"N-No....I decline...."
"Why is that?"
"I just don't want to be an easy girl that's all!"she said with a pout.
"What are you talking about....I'm a girl..."
"Like I said I decl- WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!!! YOU'RE A GIRL?!!!"Maeda-san said with full of shock on her face.
"You mean...all this time you thought I was....a boy?!"
"Apparently yes....ahehehe..."Maeda-san said while scratching her head.
"What makes you think that I'm a guy?It hurts a lot when I say this but my height is not suitable for a guy!!"
"Well that is true....(Minami:OUCH :cry:)....but I thought you're a guy because you have no chest!"
*STABBED TO THE HEART*
"H-HEY!!!!!!!!I AM NOT FLAT!!!!!THIS IS AN -A CUP SIZE!!!!IT A VERY SHORT SIZE!!!!" *she said the "very short" part in english*
"-A cup??I've never heard of that~ you just wont admit that you're flat~~"
"M-Maeda-san PLEASE STOP THAT!!!"I said while blushing.
"Ahahaha!I'm just kidding! and! it's Atsuko!right,Minami?"
"Uh....y-yeah...yeah"I said with a smile.
It has been awhile since I've smiled to myself.....Atsuko is not a bad ally after all.
Both me and Atsuko go to the door that we both wanted to choose,What's that door you asked?Door number 3 of course...a random choice because this is our 3rd puzzle.Just what kind of trickery will happen to us as we face this new challenge that is going ahead of us?
I don't know but I'm burning with curiousity to know what it is.
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Hi everyone!I would just like to inform you that I might be absent for awhile in JPH!P because of my school work.I want to take my college life seriously and that's it :D Hopefully I can still update and I hope that when I come back here,there are still some people that will read my stories DX
Until next time! :byebye:
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Atsumina moment! :lol: Acchan really thought Takamina was a guy! :lol: Ahaha Acchan really teases Takamina for being.flat and her height as well! Ahaha.. Poor Takamina :twisted: Ahaha..I'm.so evil im laughing at her.. :lol: Back to the PROTO world.. Atsumina need to prepare for the.next round.. Gambatte ne~ :fap Aww.. I really miss Nezumi.. :cry: Takamina take a revenge for Nezumi!
Tuloy ang laban ni lola~! :nervous Hehe
What will happen next? Ahh! Can't wait what kind of puzzle they will going to solve.. What surprises PROTO brings for the players?
Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup
THRILLED ~ :twothumbs
Goodluck on your studies! Gambatte~ :fap We'll be waiting for your return! :twothumbs
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NEZUMI!!!!! D': Man....I thought that if I waited many weeks I might get a great marathon of PROTO but it turns out I got more tense on what is going to happen next! XD
Good Luck on your Studies Mai-chan! and great art as always :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Finally I have time to read your fic.
The storyline is getting interesting!I can't wait for it's progress :D
and by the way Mai-Chan,how is Hisashiburi doing? I hope chapter 2 is going to be published soon :(
Looking forward to your stories and as always take your time! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Finally I have time to read your fic.
The storyline is getting interesting!I can't wait for it's progress :D
and by the way Mai-Chan,how is Hisashiburi doing? I hope chapter 2 is going to be published soon :(
Looking forward to your stories and as always take your time! :twothumbs :twothumbs
Here is a preview.
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ALSO! I'm having a hard time in this manga. Please answer below if you want the manga to be a FULL COLORED MANGA( meaning no black and white) or a BLACK AND WHITE MANGA.
or if you want to. A half Colored and a black and white manga ( ex. page 1,2,3 is colored and the rest of the pages is black and white.)
PLEASE VOTE!!!!
This will help the progress of the manga more faster! Just say what you think is the best for HISASHIBURI to keep on going! :D
Just reply to this topic and I will go for the majority. :)
That's all~ :byebye:
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Colored Version and Black and White Version of Hisashiburi Please~ :on cny1: :mon inluv:
Gambatte Mai-chan!!! :mon yeah:
Arigatou~ :on gay:
This is the longest comment I've done (so far) :tama-piss:
ahahaha :lol:
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for me half colored manga is okay :grin:
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I vote for the one that will put less hard time for you which is black&white I guess...but if you're up for challenge then go ahead with full color :on GJ:
either way I'll wait for the update...take your time to finish the manga :on GJ:
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just read through all of proto...
nooo... Nezumi...
lol? acchan though taka was a boy, -A cup~~
ah, so you drew ears... oops sorry for no noticing~
I find that the style of doing color pages as the first one or two pages and black and white for the rest is the best~
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I don't want to be demanding.. Well it's fine half-colored :thumbsup.. meet halfway? :nervous
Anyway.. Gambatte ne~ :fap Heehee :oops:
Going to wait for your next up.. And take your time :thumbup No need to rush.. :peace:
Thank you for the sneak peek of Hisashiburi! :bow: :twothumbs
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PROTO CH 9
bwahahahaha...ahocchan thought that bakamina is a guy :hiakhiakhiak:
A cup?! that's a lame excuse...just admit it bakamina,you are FLAT :hiakhiakhiak:
anyway, I saw few similiarities between PROTO and SAO...did you inspired by SAO :dunno: just curious
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PROTO CH 9
bwahahahaha...ahocchan thought that bakamina is a guy :hiakhiakhiak:
A cup?! that's a lame excuse...just admit it bakamina,you are FLAT :hiakhiakhiak:
anyway, I saw few similiarities between PROTO and SAO...did you inspired by SAO :dunno: just curious
Nope some people say it's like SAO but the ending has a twist :D
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B&W becuase I don't want you tire XD
Ok guy!! I will wait for your manga :yep: :jerk:
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Actually I just found this thing on my old file and I decided to share it to you guys!because I haven't updated for a loooooooooooooong time DX
Don't worry PROTO readers I'll update PROTO soon XD I just reaaaally need to have the enough time to write it :D
Anyways
DRABBLE#2 - The Deal
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To make it understandable. Acchan made a dare for takamina and the dare is to not call her by her nickname which is,"Acchan" and If she fails Takamina needs to kiss her INSIDE the restaurant.
Thus after that they got the front page of Shuukan Bunshun(joke)
And I know,I know that my drawing is so half-assed back then but I have now improved after 1 year DX but still it's hard to improve because we have no art class even though I'm learning in a non-sectarian University DX
So for the people who wants to draw just go for it~! You'll improve someday too :D
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Then Takamina you should always call Atsuko by her nickname~! :twisted:
That was so entertaining.. :w00t: Lovey-dovey moments :wub: :wub:
KISSU~! :ptam-kiss:
Will be waiting for your update :fap
Thank you for the drabble you shared :bow: :twothumbs
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DAYUUUM!Can't wait for the release of chapter 2 for Hisashiburi! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Also~!This drabble is perfect!Since today is acchan's birthday :w00t:
Awesome as always! Thanks for the share :twothumbs
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Unrequired Love [ATSUMINA]
Takamina POV
Why do we fall in love?
Even though we have an assurance that the one that we love, wont give back the amount of love that you gave to her?
Is it because it gives us strength? but why is it that even though it gives us strength, it's on a limited time only?
Why can't it last forever?
I have so many questions for this thing called "love", maybe it's because this is the first time I felt this way in my entire life.
And I'm going to be honest.
It hurts a lot, So hurtful that I can't take it anymore, knowing that she wont love me back. But why is it that I can't just let her go? Is it the fact that when I see her smile everyday that says "I'm glad to see you" gives me a great mood to star my day? or am I just really addicted to her attractive aura?
Mannnnn I really hate this feeling but I can't let it go,
I want to but there is this rope that she has in me that can't be cut by just some ordinary scissor.
I really hate it....it makes me go crazy, even while typing this! it makes my heart throb because I kept seeing her image inside my head even though what I know is that I have a low esteem towards imagining things.
She actually has my everything....well...mostly.
My strength,
my joy,
my happiness,
My heart,
My emotions.
What's left in me is my pride.....pride of not showing her my true feelings....and it hurts a lot that it made me cry one night on just thinking about it...
Long story short....I'm a weak person and I can never show my true feelings to her anymore because now....she is taken.
End of POV
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Long time no post everyone! First and fore most I am really really really sorry for having a long absence here in jphip without even informing you guys that I will be on hiatus mode for a long time...
I am taking my college course seriously and that is why I can't focus on making stories anymore and for that I am superbly sorry.....I really want to continue my stories and Someday I wish I could finish them all even if it means that no one would read it I will still continue it :))
Anyways this short story is actually based on what I'm feeling right now.I just chose my favorite OTP to portray my character and my "crush's" character which is acchan.
Somehow the god of Love chose to stab an arrow to me and I felt this somewhat you all guys call, "love", Apparently my love is unrequired and my crush is actually not taken though I know I have no chance on getting her heart, instead she got mine... </3
Anyways thank you for reading and have a nice life! :D
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Unrequired Love. . . .
That feeling :mon hanky: