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Re: MAI's Short Stories:[UPDATED! 12/7]My Pet Lover part 5[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #80 on: December 08, 2012, 06:10:10 PM »
Interesting story.. please update soon.. :heart:
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Re: MAI's Short Stories:[UPDATED! 12/15]My Pet Lover part 6[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #81 on: December 15, 2012, 02:36:22 AM »
Hmmmm Right now I don't have any clue if I should make one but we don't know until we try I guess? although should I still call that fic. a S.S.?  :lol: andddd I'm sorry about your tissue box :sweat:
 

OHOHOHOHO~~~~ I like the sound of that~  :wub:

"....Yuko....How can I tell my true feeling for you?"

Woahhhhhh HOW???WHEN~?!! I want to see chapter 7 now....  :fainted:

and btw THAT OST!!!!I LOVE IT!!! :luvluv1: I suddenly felt a weird feeling as I click it and continued on reading!It suits the timing :D and what are you saying Mai-chan? your fic. ain't boring!!It great!  :on GJ:

Please keep updating :)
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Re: MAI's Short Stories:[UPDATED! 12/15]My Pet Lover part 6[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #82 on: December 15, 2012, 02:56:46 AM »
kojiharu likes yuko!!

yes, now all yuko has to do is forget about takamina...

kojiyuu!?  :deco:

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Re: MAI's Short Stories:[UPDATED! 12/15]My Pet Lover part 6[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #83 on: December 15, 2012, 11:37:34 AM »
Kojiharu likes yuko!??? Howw!????? They dont talk much on the other chapters?? Oh well its okay!
Atleast in the end this will be a KOJIYUU!!!!  :inlove: :wub:
Yuko just forget about takamina. She's not the one for you :) nyannyan is THE ONE!!  XD



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Re: MAI's Short Stories:[UPDATED! 12/15]My Pet Lover part 6[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #84 on: December 16, 2012, 04:32:08 AM »
i wonder what feeling that is... please update soon! :grin: :grin: :grin:

kojiyuu hearts unite! :otomerika:
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #85 on: December 18, 2012, 11:20:09 AM »
You and Me against the world [ONESHOT]


Kids....Parents....Classmates....Everyone....I hate them all....Why are they helping each other?I can't even understand them at all....I'm Takahashi Minami...and...everyday as I do my daily routine I kept seeing different kinds of emotions that passes by through me...some are happy,sad,angry and some doesn't do anything....just....plain faces with no emotions.I'm one of those people....except,I'm different to all of them...well that is what my mind is set but let me get to my point on why I hate the world....OUR world for exact.For example...people do bad things and good things but for what?You'll die someday what's the use of stealing or helping someone if your going to die anyways?Life is just so useless...you help someone but then you'll die and someday that person will also die too....you steal something and did something so bad,you'll be put in jail and yet you'll die too and with that opinion of mine that I said on class when I was a 1st year High School student everyone called me "DarkEye" they said that it means "a person that has no feelings for others and with no understanding at all" but many people say the most reason of it all is because of the scar on my right eye,where did I get it?Long story and because of that nickname I didn't mind them at all I just do what I always do at my whole daily life.I'm going to wake up then go to the bathroom and shower,wear my same uniform,cook then eat my food and then wear my shoes and go straight to my school and enter the classroom and after that I'll study then if recess I will always go straight to the rooftop and eat alone after that I go back to the classroom,wait until dismissal ends and go home and after doing the things that is needed to be done I will go straight to bed and the next day I will do the same thing over and over again.

I have been doing this routine for the past 3 years and I thought this is going to be my 4 years straight but then one day as I go straightly to school,opened my shoe locker I saw....A letter.

I looked and inspect it properly to know if it was misplaced or any other excuse but at the back of the letter it has a handwritten mark that says,

"To Takahashi Minami"

I tilted my head slowly because of confusion.Knowing if the letter that I'm holding is normal or.....a love letter.

The coloration of the letter was pink but I suddenly thought that I'm just jumping to conclusions and just decided to read the content of the letter.

I slowly opened the letter,my palms were sweating,my heart was beating so fast.I was so anxious on what does the letter contain,"Is my hunch right?","is this a love letter?"those were the questions that I'm saying inside my head as I ripped the letter slowly to get the paper inside of it but I suddenly wondered "Why am I so anxious about this?yeah sure if this is a love letter I appreciate it but the one that loves me is going to die too so why should I be anxious?"there it is again,my lame long quote that I said in front of the class 3 years ago.

When I opened the letter with my normal mode again that is not anxious,palms not sweating and heart that is not beating so fast,My time suddenly stopped a bit.

"Memory Tree 4:00 p.m."

My head tilted a bit, "That's it?that's the content of this letter?"

After that,While my teacher was discussing a lesson I didn't listen to him but words about,"4:00 p.m.,Memory Tree" kept repeating inside my head.I can't handle but wait for 4 pm to arrive and that's when I realize that if you wait something it's like time slows 10 times than it originally was it was actually weird though.

Finally dismissal arrived and I quickly ran towards the Memory Tree of the school backyard.

As I approach the tree in a much closer angle I saw a silhouette of a girl.Her body was slim and the curves of her body was...sexy,she contains a shoulder length hair that I never usually see on other girls in my class.
She suddenly looked at me and rapidly approached me.

I was so shock of her sudden approach.Her lips were attached to mine,She suddenly entered her tongue through my mouth which made me push her away from me but her strength was superbly strong which made me quit.
Her tongue kept swishing through my mouth while my tongue was moving on its own,my tongue entwined to the girl that kiss me and forcefully suck it to feel her whole body."Hrmm..."She let out a soft moan,her eyebrows furrowed and her cheek were so red.At that time I have my chance to let go of her but then I turned to be aggressive and craved for more and kept on kissing the girl that I just met right now,finally as we catch some air she suddenly spoke and said...

"...My name is....Maeda Atsuko....and....I love you....Takahashi....Minami..."The girl said slowly as she grabs some air.

"that was the most weirdest confession I ever got..."I said to her straightly.

"Do you...love me too?"she questioned.

"Are you sure?For a girl like me?A girl that is known as the "DarkEye"?"I questioned the girl named "Atsuko" but then she just smiled on what I've said and stood up on where she is sitting upon.

"So?Even if you are an Assassin,a serial killer or anything much badass than that I don't care!As long as you are the Takahashi Minami I love then I will still love you even if you think that my love for you will just be wasted because I'm just going to die soon"

At that time those words made my heart jump it's so weird it's just a simple sentence!but this feeling in my heart is so new to me that I can't even understand it's own meaning!

I quickly stood up and stand in front of Maeda and said,

"Since when?Since when did you fell inlove?to a person like....me?"

"1st year,Christmas Midnight and two tugs tried to rape me but suddenly a girl with a midget height showed in front of me and protected me and after she beat the two tugs up she looked at me,lend her hand and said "Are you alright?did they hurt you?"I quickly hugged her and cry through her shoulders,she patted my back and said "It's ok...your safe because....I'm here to protect you..."I looked at her face and saw her right eye clearly shut while having a long slash with her blood flowing non-stop.

I quickly hold her hand and said to go to the hospital but she declined and said it's just small scratch from one of the tug's knife but I kept on begging her to go to the hospital to aid her bruise but then she carried me in a princess kind of way and ran away to the scene where the tugs are still unconscious.It's weird that she doesn't care much about her life.She escort me to my home as I show to that direction,she drop me and said "Well,See you next time,Kawaii-san!" My face suddenly blushed a bit on that time and I questioned her on why she chose that nickname and she said as she runs away from me,

"SIMPLE!!Because!You are CUTE!" on that time I just noticed that I fell inlove to you but then after that day as I pass on some students from a certain school the said a rumor about a girl that known as the "DarkEye" and said that she had a large scar on her face.My eyes actually sparkle on that time and have the chance to enroll at your school but I have no chance to approach you and Finally yesterday as you forgot to lock your locker I have the chance to put my letter for you and that's how I fell inlove to you...Minami!"

"So you are.....Kawaii....-san?"

"Yes!"

I can't believe it she is the "Kawaii-san" that my heart fell against too!

"I actually....love you....back then..."

"Back then?How about now Minami?Do you still love me?"

"NO"

"Eh????"

"Because I love you ten times more than I loved you back then."I said to her with a big smile.

"Mi...MINAMI!!"

Atsuko hugged me tightly and I answered her hug too she kissed me like we did earlier but this time it wasn't a forceful kiss,but it was a passionate kiss that contains our pure love with each other.As the time we let go of the kiss to grab some air I said to her,

"....A relationship to me...is it reall-"

before I even finish my word she softly put her finger through my lips and said to me,

"Like I said...I will love you no matter what and even if it's You and Me Against the World...."

After that We made a soft kiss to each other and attached our foreheads with each other and there I noticed that this is really the reason on why we are living,the reason why god gave us only one life and that is to cherish this life and find that person that will always love you no matter who you are...

"I love you Atsuko....I will protect you..."

"Un....I know you will....I also love you too Minami....100 times more than we first met..."

"Atsuko..."

"Minami..."

We once again did a passionate under the Memory Tree which will also be our Tree on where we finally meet each other again and were we love each other much more back then.



THE END



WOOOOOOOOOT Never wrote that kind of thing before that kissing scene was too much for me though ^^, I MUST REGAIN MY BLOOD~!!!  :on bleed:

I hope you all like this oneshot though... :err:  :prayers:


AND~!!!By the way Don't worry~ "My Pet Lover" will still be updated~ I just missed writing a Atsumina Fic. that's all~  :hehehe:

Anyways see you all again soon~!!

Byebye~ :byebye:
« Last Edit: December 18, 2012, 02:15:05 PM by Mai-chan »
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #87 on: December 18, 2012, 11:50:48 AM »
Well.......ermm......this is...awkward? :mon mischief: :mon sweat:

The timing of this fiction is really weird through my nickname and it makes me laugh though  :lol:

anyways I like the fiction though Minami is being hatred at her school I slightly agree through her opinion wait your the writer here so I agree to your opinion! XD

The kissing scene was so..... :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy1: :on bleed: :imdead:

seriously! I blushed so hard!!!!

thanks for the fiction! and for the weird coincidence :sweat:

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #88 on: December 18, 2012, 12:29:16 PM »
I like your story Mai-chan  :hee:
And I like how cool Takamina is in your story  :luvluv1:

The kiss is just hot~  :on bleed:

Please do continue updating your fics  :on gay:
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #89 on: December 18, 2012, 02:07:22 PM »
I need to go to the hospital now. I loss too much blood  :on bleed:

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #90 on: December 19, 2012, 05:23:27 AM »
Yeah! atsumina!! :B

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #91 on: December 19, 2012, 12:41:57 PM »
OMAYGAH~!!!!!! :on bleed: MY HEART~!!! :luvluv1: ohohohoho~~~~ the details is too much for me~~~ :wub:

I like the story btw  :on GJ:

but I have a question Mai-chan,I have noticed that you're still not drawing something in "My Pet Lover",Why is that?(....just asking :sweat:)
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #92 on: December 21, 2012, 06:48:29 AM »
Hello.

Mai-chan ! :)

I really like your OS about AtsuMina!!! :)

It's really GOOD!!!

I hope you make MORE!!!

Thank You
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/18]You and me Against the WORLD [ATSUMINA ONESHOT]
« Reply #93 on: December 21, 2012, 08:39:14 PM »
so muuuch details
ahhgggggg  ngggggggg  :on bleed: :on bleed:

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #94 on: December 23, 2012, 10:21:44 AM »
WHHHAAAAAT?!!!  :shock: :on blackhole: Well in that case please don't draw so that it wont end :kneelbow: JOKE~! :P

 
ahahaha  :lol: don't worry M.P.L. have a lot to go until it ends,maybe it will have 12 or 10 parts only plus I will also ad some alter endings to M.P.L. :D
 
 
Thanks for those who tune in for M.P.L.! and also for those who read "You and Me against the WORLD"! I know I'm not that good at writing but I hope my stories brings you a bit of joy atleast ^^, I hope someday I'll improve in writing stories and in my grammar too :)
 
 


 
My Pet Lover part 7
 
 
After what happened last night between the two girls,Haruna made breakfast for the both of them while Yuko is still asleep.
 
 
"Yukooooooo,Wake up!it's 9 a.m.!" Haruna kept shaking Yuko while she repeats on saying those words.
 
 
Finally Yuko woke up,raised her upper body and stared at Haruna quietly.
 
 
"Wha-What is it?"
 
 
"Ohayou!"Yuko said with a bright smile.
 
 
"Uh.....S-Stop fooling around!Breakfast is ready!"Haruna said while hiding her blushed face on Yuko.
 
 
"Did I said something wrong?"Yuko said with a worried face.
 
 
"Mou!just go to the dining room and eat breakfast!"Haruna said while her face is still blushing and looking away from Yuko.
 
 
"Err....Ok....(Jeez I thought that thing that I did might change the atmosphere on what happened last night but I guess she took it seriously...)"Yuko said in her head while going down to the stairs.
 
 
*Sound of the door close*
 
 
Haruna's POV
 
 
*sigh this feeling of mine started when we first met,the time where she stole my first kiss.On that time I was ready to punch her in the face,so hard that it would bleed but as I feel her lips I was about to grab some more but good thing I didn't let my guard down and after that I just instantly let her leave to my house and why is that?because when I look at her face my heart thumps 10 times faster than before and my face starts to get red all of a sudden and of course I still don't believe that she's my dog I'm just listening to her on that time so that she would just shut up.
 
 
But still...I don't know this kind of feeling inside me,it's really new actually,I tried to question my friend,Mariko, and after I explain that weird feeling,she just said,
 
 
"Well if you just met her and you have that kind of feeling it a thing called "Love at First Sight""
 
 
But still is that thing possible?I though love is blind?I really can't understand things clearly,maybe this is the reason they call me "air-head" but then yesterday as I saw Yuko once again her emotion dragged me to come close to her I want to help her and resolver her problem,I felt a bit of regret when I saw her cry,her tears pierced my heart on that time,I really blamed myself seeing her cry and right now I hope I did the right decision on letting her live in my house once again.

END OF POV

After a minute passes,Haruna go to the dining room to eat her breakfast but as she arrived at the dining room Yuko wasn't there.

Haruna left a sigh and thought that Yuko might be angry at her because of her cold greetings through Yuko this morning.



@A small park

"Hrmm....How can I make it up to her?" Yuko said quietly while her body is leaning at the Big tree of the small park.

"*sigh...Maybe I'll just say sorry to her but...."

"It's not that easy"

*sigh* Yuko suddenly remembered her last word through Haruna yesterday.Now that she think about it,she's at the same place were she met Minami and this is also the same place where she leave her alone.Truly this Tree is such a bad luck for Yuko but then she remembered that this is also the tree where Haruna rescued her from her rejection against love.

Finally Yuko thought on what to do and stood up to where she is sitting upon and face in front of the big tree and there she said,

Play it here  ;)


"Thank you...you might just be a tree but still you gave me time to think a decision that is worth useful,I will....(.............)I promise."Yuko whispered her promise to the tree and after that Yuko ran so fast to reach Haruna's house.



After some minutes passes Yuko finally reached Haruna's house and as she reaches for the door it suddenly opened and there she saw once again the girl that has a curly hazelnut hair,the girl let her out of her house but that doesn't matter to Yuko,most importantly she saw the girl that rescued her before her heart breaks.

As that girl looks at her,she gave Yuko a big smile and said,



"Okaeri(Welcome Home)"

And there Yuko approach that girl and gave her a hug saying,"Un....I'm glad I'm home....Haruna"

Instead of Haruna pushing Yuko away from her,she answered back Yuko's hug and tightens it.

"Sorry for what I did last night..."Yuko whispered on Haruna's ear.

"Un...*shakes head horizontally*....I'm the one who should be sorry..."

"Well...I have something to say to you,Haruna"

"What is it?"

Yuko let's go of their hug and stares at Haruna.

"I will forget about her....just like you said,I will do it bit by bit...but...I will be needing your help."

"Help?What kind?"Haruna questioned as she tilted her head.

"I want you to replace Minami and be the one in my heart,I will learn on loving you Haruna....in short....can I be your Lover?"

Haruna's face suddenly turned red ad was speechless on what Yuko said.

"Hey.....is it oka--"

Before Yuko finishes her words Haruna interrupt it with a hug which is so tight and there she said,"U....Un..."with a shaky voice.

"Yokatta...(That's good...)"Yuko closed her eyes and answers Haruna's hug.

Earlier at the Big tree...

"Thank you...you might just be a tree but still you gave me time to think a decision that is worth useful,I will forget about Minami and I will start it from here,I promise."

"This is a good start...."Yuko said inside her mind.

T.B.C.



I have no other OST's in mind!This OST is just frickin' awesome!

well thanks for reading~ ^^

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« Last Edit: December 25, 2012, 03:46:43 AM by Mai-chan »
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #95 on: December 23, 2012, 12:13:46 PM »
Yey!!! Thanks so much for the nice update!! :thumbsup

Keep writing~~ i love the story... :inlove: :inlove:
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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #96 on: December 23, 2012, 12:50:33 PM »
Awwww ~
That's so sweet ~
I do love it (>_<)
Wait for the next chapter ne ~

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #97 on: December 23, 2012, 12:53:11 PM »
Thank you so much for the update!  So now they're official! Ureshiii~ KOJIYUU <3

Update soon!

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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #98 on: December 23, 2012, 01:14:36 PM »
I knew it!!! This will really be a kojiyuu!!!! Yeyyy!! <3
Now they're official!! Im so happy :) hope they will not break! :)
More updates pleasee :) :wub: :wub:



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Re: MAI's S.S.[UPDATED! 12/23]My Pet Lover part 7[Kojiyuu]
« Reply #99 on: December 23, 2012, 05:28:05 PM »
my heart knows it all
it will be kojiyuu!   :heart:

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