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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #120 on: January 17, 2013, 11:16:02 AM »
oh :3 Another cute Takacchan fic from Mai-chan  :luvluv1:  :hee:

I hope they both have a happy ending  :mon inluv:

Please do continue this fic Mai-chan  :mon cute:

Ill wait for your updates  :mon inluv:

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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #121 on: January 17, 2013, 11:46:23 AM »
Yay! New AtsuMina fanfic!!  :mon XD:

Please update soon! :mon pray2:
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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #122 on: January 17, 2013, 12:08:47 PM »
thanks for the fic! Seems really awesome! Loved the intro chapter :D Can't wait to find out what happens!

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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #123 on: January 17, 2013, 02:10:06 PM »
Atsumina fanfic  :cow:

Atsumina  :deco:
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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #124 on: January 17, 2013, 03:07:19 PM »
Atsumina  :heart: My favourite pairing
I wonder what happened with their promise :roll: :roll:
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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #125 on: January 18, 2013, 04:26:28 AM »
aww my atsumina..

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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear[Atsumina]
« Reply #126 on: January 18, 2013, 01:27:21 PM »
nice!I thought you will ship takayuu!phew!good thing I was wrong XD

I like that pinky promise ritual!

A pinky can be broken but the promise wont,Pinky Swear to us both and so is our friendship that we love the most."

DEMN FEELS :farofflook:

Do I really have to wait until M.PL. ends????Don't worry!We wont get confused!<---i think???

just update it!I DON'T WANNA WAIT!!!  :tantrum:

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Re: MAI'S STORY COLLECTION[UPDATED! 01/17]Pinky Swear Prologue[Atsumina]
« Reply #127 on: January 19, 2013, 05:37:59 AM »
LOL I forgot to leave a comment 2 days ago XD

How many chapter or parts is this??? :?


Good luck on My Pet Lover and this story too!  :D
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Re:MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #128 on: January 19, 2013, 08:00:15 AM »
UWAHHH Ididn't know that this prologue will have a high audience demand!  :shocked:

well because of that I will update this next chapter

@TK.Yuu hrmm up to chapter 5 or more I guess?

I suggest you all use the soundtracks for every scene :D





Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust







"I Swear...for the sake of us both,for the bond that we made, this promise wont
be broken nor our friendship will be,On this promise that we made,until it lasts,
we will have no hardships with each other but will love each other as the day pass by.

A pinky can be broken but the promise wont,Pinky Swear to us both and so is our friendship that we love the most."


Those were the words of the young two girls made when they were still young but what happened on their relationship after many years as they reach High School and got their mind a bit matured?

After that day,the two young girls are still fine with no awkward feelings with each other,they are sharing their fun laughter and giggles with each other,it's like they are really born to unite with each other from the start and to be together until the end of their life,a two young cute twins we might say!

As those two girls grew up, Acchan did her best on training in her track and field team,although she failed many times Takamina was there behind her back saying that "there is always a second chance!" and Acchan never gave up and train as hard as she can to grab that gold medal and to show Takamina that she is worth of being her lover,Takamina do appreciate that and she kept cheering Acchan on.

Many years passed by Acchan got to stay abroad for 2 years and the two girls didn't see each other for so long but Acchan did that for Takamina,she really wanted to earn that golden medal and to be Takamina's lover,it's not a proof to shove it on her face and say "bow down to me and be my lover!*evil laugh*" but a proof that her love for Takamina is that big that she will do anything to get her love from her and finally when the competition finally finished Acchan Finally won her gold medal.

"Finally!We can be together forever!"

Acchan said in her mind as she wave her golden medal in front of thousands of audiences at an Arena in America.

After that many days later and Acchan came back to Japan,she was so excited to show Takamina the golden medal that was in their promise,she was excited to show it to her and more importantly she was so excited to see Takamina.

Acchan rapidly knock on Takamina's house and wanted to surprise her and as the door open she saw Takamina in front of her,she can't hold her tears and ended up crying on her shoulder.

"T-Takamina!!!"

"Acchan!Are you okay?"

"I miss you so much...*crying moan*"

"Ah...me too...it has been awhile,huh?"

"Ah!Takamina!*grabs golden medal from her bag*....HERE!Do you know what this means?*shows medal to Takamina*"

"I can see that it's a medal."

"and?"

"its round."

"aaaannndd??"

"annnnnnndddd golden!"

"That's all?"

"come on Acchan!Enough of that charades!come in!Mom will be surprised to see you!*smiles* here let me wipe your tears off *gets handkerchief "

"Takamina?Are you alright?*worried + gloomy face*

"Yep!*smiles brightly*Come on Acchan~!*grabs hand*



@Living Room

"uhm I'm going to buy some food on the store!I'm coming back okay?"

"Ok Minami,my daughter!have a safe trip!"

"Okay~"

*Closes door*

"Ne Atsuko-chan~!It has been awhile! 2 years right?*smiles*"

"Ah yes Mom!(the way Acchan calls Takamina's mom).....uhm about Takamina she's acting a bit str-"

"strange?"

"Ah....yeah..."

"You figured out that so fast?I don't need to hide this from you Atsuko so I might just tell you the truth...you are her best friend after all."



"Truth?"

Acchan and Minami's mom discussed a very serious conversation.Bit by bit as Minami's mom continue her story about what happened for the past 2 years she was gone her eyes started to furrow and tears rolled through her eyes and she began to cry,she can't believe on what happened to Minami as she was away with her,she felt a regretful feeling inside her chest...even Minami's mother can't hold her tears anymore,she wants to continue the story but her  hic-ing stops her from doing it and after the whole story was finished Acchan's face is still full of tears.

"I can't believe that Minami suffered that much and to think that......*cries more*"

"So please....Atsuko-chan please don't tell that you know this to Minami....it's for her own good....I want you to not let her remind her past....that incident is still fresh in her mind..please Atsuko-chan....."

"It's okay Mom,I wont tell her or remind her anything.....*sad aura*"

"Thank you Atsuko-chan..."


*suddenly the door opens*

"I'm back~!I bought katsuD-D-D........DON~!!!!*victory pose+happy smile*"

"Ah....Takamina....sorry but I must go..."

"Eh?Acchan?you look pale!I just returned why not--"

"Minami!Let her be!"

"But Mom!--"

"*mom glare*"

"okay...urhmmm........Acchan!"grabs hand*"

"Eh?"



"Have a safe trip!"

"Uh.....Yeah.*forced smile*"

*closes door*

"Mom is anything oka-"

"Let's eat your katsudon Minami.*slight smile*"

"Okay.....did I did another failed joke?"

"Let's just eat."



@Maeda Residence

Acchan entered their house and her mother showed in front of her saying,

"Atsuko!Welcome back and congratul--"

Her mother's words didn't got completed because she just ignored her presence and walked straight to her bedroom while her mom kept calling her name but she didn't answered nor looked back.

*closes door*

As Acchan entered her room she dropped her bag freely and looked at her golden medal that she worked hard for but then.....she threw away her golden medal like she doesn't care or work hard for it...



she ended up crying so loud at her room....knowing Minami's situation for the past 2 years of her non-existence was a pain.She regret and blamed herself for what happened to Minami. Seeing her smile in such a critical condition hurts her heart because later on....as the time flies by...
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Minami's death is near....





T.B.C.




To the Moon OST's are the OST's I am going to use in this fiction :) because it's emotional.....


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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #129 on: January 19, 2013, 08:25:49 AM »
what no again.. minami is gonna died.. why always.. argh.. .-_________-

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #130 on: January 19, 2013, 09:15:34 AM »
Woaahh!!! Cool!!
I enjoy the music while reading.. and the drawing  :twothumbs
But... Minami is going to die???!!!  :cry: :cry:
Waiting for your next chapter  :cry: :cry:

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #131 on: January 19, 2013, 01:16:26 PM »
Minami's going to die...  :on speedy:

poor Acchan...  :mon runcry:

btw, nice fanfic Mai-Chan  :thumbsup as always  :twothumbs
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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #132 on: January 19, 2013, 02:27:11 PM »
Thanks for the update :D Wow, awesome chapter, loved the pictures, the music and the words! Acchan worked really hard! But a sad revelation in the end :( I wonder what exactly is wrong with Minami. Hopefully she and Acchan can get through this tough situation!
Thanks again, looking forward to finding out what happens next :D

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #133 on: January 20, 2013, 05:00:32 AM »
Death?!Again?!Why don't you write happy stories? ;_________;

on My Pet Lover yuko's gonna die and here takamina?NOOOOOO my takayuuuu T______T

@TK.Yuu hrmm up to chapter 5 or more I guess?

ah so this one is a short fic huh?anyways I like the OST and please let this be a good ending  :( 

waiting for the next chapter again OTL
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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/19]Pinky Swear Chapter 1 - Golden Dust [Atsumina]
« Reply #134 on: January 20, 2013, 05:17:30 AM »
 :cry: Why does everybody want to kill atsumina by killing one of them .. WHY!!!!!  :gyaaah:

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Re:MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/20]Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings[Atsumina]
« Reply #135 on: January 20, 2013, 09:00:07 AM »
@saeyukilover W-Wait! I am not killing my OTP!!! D:

@TK.Yuu hmm....I don't know it's in my soul I guess :p just kidding~

Well I will update this fic because it's a thank you gift for the 6,000 views~!!! :cow: :cow: :cow: Thank you guysssssss :deco: :farofflook:


Well enjoy this fast update



Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings

After many weeks passed Atsuko entered Minami's school and their friendship finally unites once more.Everyday is like a routine to them!When it's recess they are going to eat their lunch together,when they are going to go home they are together and when they are in class they are even seatmates!the two twins are finally back and ready to have some fun and laughs and even though Acchan knows Takamina hiding her true condition from her...



 she needs to stay strong and to look happy in front of the girl she loves the most.


@The School near front gate

"Uwah~~~~this tamagoyaki is so deliciousssss*closed eyes+tempting the flavor and savory of the tamagoyaki*"

"I'm glad you like this *godly smile*"

"Uwah Acchan~ you have a godly smile there~!Kawaii~"

"E-Eh?!M..MOU!Eat your tamagoyaki!*puts the food directly to takamina's mouth fastly*"

"HRMP!!!W......WATER!!!!!!I'm choking!!!!!!*violet face*"

"Ah! here!!drink this water!*puts bottled water gently on Takamina's mouth*"

*gulp,gulp,gulp*

"UWAHHHHH!!!What was that for Acchan?!*mad+pouting face*"

"because your so talkative!"

"Eh????"

"*laughs*"

"Yeah this is good....as long as she is alive I need to make her happy to make her last memories worth remembering for..."Acchan said in her mind as she clenched her hand hidden from Minami's point of view.Indeed it's painful for Atsuko but it's the only way to make Minami's last moments not troublesome and just positive memories to outcome from.

"Spring finally came right?*smiles*"

"Ah!y-yeah!"

"Hey Acchan are you alright?"

"U-Un!"

"Really?I think you're not tho--"



"SHOOT!We need to go Acchan!*grabs wrist*"

"Hey wait Minami!our lunch!"

"Forget about that we're late!"

"okay then...*furrowed eyebrows+smile*"

Yeah this is Atsuko's wish when she was abroad.To feel this sensation once more,to hear the school bell rang and to enjoy it with Minami but then she didn't even expect that this chance is in a limited time only.

After that they went to class just in time and both of the girls slack off once again,they are really the same even when it comes to attitude and after many hours passed dismissal arrived and both of the two girls went straight home and as they walk through their home,

"Hey Acchan~!"

"You know you should call me by my first name....*blushed face*"

"Eh?Okay then....Hey Atsuko....do you remember our promise?"

"Huh?what promise?"

"that's the problem I can't even remember it well!*laughs*"

"Stupid*bops head*"

"O-OW!what was that for?!*pouts*"

"nothing~!*crossed arms*"

"well???you should know that right?after all we do have the same brain!mine is dumber though! *laughs with a smile*"

"Well if you could remember...when we were kids we made a promise,that if I win a gold medal you will....
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.buy me an ice cream,right?"


"Hrmmm...*thinks hard on remembering it* I can't really picture it clearly but I think your right!But what is this feeling that I'm having?....somehow its like I need to clear something up everytime I see you Acchan!Well do I have anything to do?You could say it to me Acchan!*smiles*"

This is actually Acchan's chance to let Minami remind of their promise 2 years ago before she went to states but as she thinks deeply that thing wont be enough it will just make Minami more confused and wants to remember the whole thing.

"No there's nothing *smiles*"

"Hm~?Okay then! *holds hand*"

"Huh?What is it Minami?*shocked face*"

"I missed you Atsuko...So much that I really waited for your arrival...*tears suddenly rolled through her cheek*"



"*smiles....Me too....*hugs Minami + cries*

FLASHBACK

"What?"

"Minami is suffering a Brain Cancer......."

"What?!W-why?!When?!"

"She hides that thing when you went to the states....right now she is on stage 4.....she's in a critical condition and the doctor said...her life is going to end soon...."

"No....NO!This can't happen!!!I-I can't accept this!Why???Why now?*cries*"

"Bit by bit....her childhood and anything that happened from her pass can be erased.....that includes your promise with her..."

"Huh?Our promise?"

"After you got to the states,Minami talk that about your promise....actually she is really excited of you winning that golden medal but then.....after many months a car crashed her....causing her brain to malfunction....we did anything to heal it but it just became worst....and we have no choice but to use a medicine that can longer her life but there was a side effect...............an effect of loosing her memories...."

"I can't believe that Minami suffered that much and to think that......*cries more*"

"So please....Atsuko-chan please don't tell that you know this to Minami....it's for her own good....I want you to not let her remind her past....that incident is still fresh in her mind..please Atsuko-chan....."

"I-It's okay Mom,I wont tell her or remind her anything.....*sad aura*"

"Thank you Atsuko-chan..."



END OF FLASHBACK

Those small talk with Minami's mom flashed back through Acchan's mind while hugging Minami and it caused her to cry too...

Both of the two girls cried with each other on the downhill road and the sun started to fade and night covers the sky,stars started to show up and there Minami raised her arm,pointing at those stars in the sky...

"Can you see that,Atsuko??"



"Huh?Where?"

"That yellow glowing thing!It looks like a.....

"medal."

"Oh~!We said it at the same time!High five!*raises hand*"

"Don't you think were a bit to old for that,Minami?

"Nope!*smiles*"

"*sigh*If you say so....*high fives*"

"Hehehehe!I missed doing that!*smiles*"

"*slight smile*"

"Hey Atsuko....I want say something important to you...."

"Huh?What is it Minami?"

"I.....*holds Atsuko's hand tightly* I love you..."

"Eh?"

Atsuko was shocked by Minami's words,she thought Minami would confess her real condition but what she got is a love confession but then....knowing Minami's condition really hurt Acchan,she really blamed herself for what happened and what she did is that she run away from that confession leaving Minami under a tree,alone and rejected....

She knew that she was so cold-hearted on doing that but if she loves Minami more than she loves her back from her past then she would accept her death....yes, she needs to become strong but still this is too much for a young girls heart...

"Atsuko.....*leans under the tree*....but that was our promise right?.....once you win we are going to be lovers....."




T.B.C.



Honestly I cried while reading the flashback  :farofflook:


See you all on the next update :byebye:
« Last Edit: January 20, 2013, 09:39:26 AM by Mai-chan »
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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/20]Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings[Atsumina]
« Reply #136 on: January 20, 2013, 09:38:05 AM »
talk about LUCKY!!!! log in and 2 chapters are updated :wahaha: happy 6000+ views :D

Minami????why?!! aw man.....stage 4 brain cancer is..... :'(


Waiting for the next update.... OTL

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/20]Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings[Atsumina]
« Reply #137 on: January 20, 2013, 10:16:44 AM »
So Minami still remembers their promise. Guess the brain cancer couldn't manage to to make her forget the most important thing.

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/20]Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings[Atsumina]
« Reply #138 on: January 20, 2013, 12:54:35 PM »
now this is really interesting Mai-chan.. I really like dramatic stories, although hopefully some complications will be easily managed. And yes I'm looking forward if there are any miracles to happen on this story (Pinky Swear)...

I'm not ready to read another dying character esp. one from my OTP.. But.. the ending still is in your hands.. I shall wait how everything will work out.. Ganbare!  :thumbsup

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Re: MAI'S S.C.[UPDATE! 01/20]Pinky Swear Chapter 2 - Mask of Feelings[Atsumina]
« Reply #139 on: January 20, 2013, 01:21:01 PM »
brain cancer?  :O
but minami can remember the promise
maybe is a good thing, and
she feel better.  :wub:
thanks for udpate  :twothumbs

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