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Problems For 1 month [11/23] Chapter 8 - HIATUS
« on: July 23, 2012, 12:56:26 PM »
LIST OF CHAPTERS:

Chapter 1 - Double Idol
Chapter 2 part 1- Small Talk
Chapter 2 part 2 - Why did I forget?
Chapter 3- Idiot...
Chapter 4-The Rival
Chapter 5-The Announcement
Chapter 6- The First Kiss
Chapter 7 part 1- Preview
Chapter 7 part 2- Sudden Return
Chapter 8 part 1- A Seek to their past
Chapter 8 part 2- An Incoming Surprise



HIATUS




UWAH~!!! 2nd fan fiction and still! it's atsumina again haha I ship them so hard XDD  :wub:

Anyways~! the fan fiction will update every monday~! :D (I hope OTL still a High School student D:)

So hope you'll enjoy reading it~!!!


The Problems for 1 Month Chapter 1- Double Idol

It was passed midnight when the AKB48 concert in Shibuya AX finished.
all of the fans all leave the concert location after the encore performance finished, and at the AKB dressing room
some of the AKB members are preparing to go home and some members wants to go somewhere else,including...




"Yosh I'm all set!"said by Takahashi with all her might.but when she is going to open the
 door to leave the dressing room suddenly,someone hugs her at her back.and Takahashi was shocked
 and looked straight at her back and as she sees the person that hugged her back she smiled.
 
It was just the person that she expected to do that to her and it was...
 
"Why did you do that to me again Acchan?"yes it was the ace and center of AKB48,Maeda Atsuko a.k.a. Acchan.

"It's my "Surprise Goodbye hug attack!" as acchan said with a big smile on her face.

"Surprise Goodbye hug attack?" Takamina wondered.

"Where are you heading?let's go walk outside together~!" acchan said.

"A-aahhh I can't walk with you right now sorry.." Takamina said to acchan with a worrying face.

"eh~? But--"

"UWAH!I'M LATE!sorry acchan I really have to go!"Takamina said so nervously.

Takamina rushed to go outside the dressing room leaving acchan behind.

"what's wrong with her all of a sudden..." acchan said with a lonely face.

 
And after 10 minutes...
 
"I'm sorry that I'm late!" said by Takamina to someone.

"no it's ok your just in time,here's your mic. and thank you for not
 letting Persona down."said by the person she was talking to.

"no problem and thanks,Riku." said by Takamina with a smile.
 
"HERE'S WHAT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!!!HERE'S PERSONA!!!"said by the MC with all his might.

"are you ready?" Riku questioned Takamina.

"Yeah."


*NOTE:The Persona group in this fan fiction are true guys and has no relation to the Mendol Drama. P.S. sorry for my lame writting skills OTL

FLASHBACK:
 
"I REALLY BEG YOU PLEASE!!!!"said by Riku kneeling down infront of Takamina.

"Stop that kneeling and sit down!"Takamina said with a worrying face.

"ok then...but please I beg you!Just 1 month and it's all over!"Riku repeats begging Takamina to help him.

"hmm....but is my height ok to be Kai?" Takamina said.

"That's why I'm begging you!your face is like a guy and your height is perfect!"Riku said.

"really?a guy that is in your group and has the same height as mine?" said by Takamina with a shocked face.

"YEAH!....well actually he's 150 cm but it's not that obvious right?"Riku said.

"Ok well since your a close friend of mine..."Takamina said.

"OHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!"Riku said repeatedly.

"calm down will you?"Takamina said.

 
END OF FLASHBACK:

"OK~ so that was Persona!" said by the MC.
 
@Persona dressing room:
 
"FINALLY~!It's over~" said by Takamina with full of relief.

"still you have 1 month of being Kai"said by Kuu(one of the members in Persona)

"Yeah...I can Handle it don't worry!"said by Takamina with a smile.

"Takamina" Riku said.

"yes?"Takamina questioned.


 "Thanks again" said by Riku with a wink.

"no problem!"Takamina smiled.

"Well I have to go..."said by Takamina while removing her wig.

"woah,woah,woah!what are you doing?" Kuu said all of a sudden.
 
"I'm going to dress up as myself duh!" Takamina said.

"Are you stupid?you need to dress as Kai until you reach home!" said by Riku with a large tone.

"huh?"Takamina wondered.

"I believe Riku is right." Kuu said.

"The media is always waiting in every exit in this building just to get an interview with us,especially
 Kai,that means you."Riku said with a serious face to Takamina.

"and even if you remove that wig..." Riku added.



 
"You do have a point..."Takamina said with her tension down.
 
"Well! we have to go!"Riku said with a smiling face.

"Good Luck at the media!"Kuu added.

"ah Yeah...."Takamina said.
 
and so after that Takamina dressed up as Kai's formal wear given by Riku.
 
AFTER 5 Minutes: At a certain exit door...
 
"the security guard said that this exit is where medias are just a few and not that many...
so...here we go."Takamina said while holding the door knob.
 
as she opens the door she saw the media interviewing another person although she can't see on who the medias are interviewing.
 
"ah...that must be Riku and Kuu there...hehehe this is my chance to escape"Takamina said with a grin on her face.
 
as Takamina attempts to escape some of the media notices her escaping the scene.
 
"KAI!!!May I have an interview with you?"a random media approch her.

"Y-yeah..."Takamina said with a dissapointment tone because she didn't escaped.

"No!me first!"a random media appeared.

"No me!"and another one.

"ME!"and more media camed to get an interview with her.
 
but then takamina looses her patience to the crowded media and said:
 
"SHUT THE F**K UP!!!!!!!!!"Takamina said with full of anger.
 
after on what she said the whole media didn't said a word...and after that silence Takamina said:
 
"Just interview Riku and Kuu like earlier!I have to go home!"Takamina said straigt to the media.
 
after she said that one of the media answered her and said,"But we are not interviewing Riku and Kuu earlier"
Takamina was shocked that it's not the two that the media are interviewing earlier and so takamina questioned
the media on who are they interviewing earlier and as Takamina's question was done the media pointed the person
 that they were interviewing to....and as Takamina turned her head to the person the media was pointing to...she was
 shocked because what she saw is really not Riku and Kuu but...








......It was Acchan.

TO BE CONTINUED~!!!

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yey~ done with Chapter 1~ thanks for those who read this fan fiction~!

See you on Chapter 2 minna-san~!!  :byebye:
 
« Last Edit: April 07, 2013, 07:27:25 AM by Mai-chan »
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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2012, 01:51:02 PM »
Hmmm.... I like the twist of this story. What happened to Kai btw? and why is acchan in there?!
Guess, I have to wait for the next chapter. -sigh- and the drawings' cool also. keep it up!
Update soon pls!
Ja~

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2012, 02:05:10 PM »
ohohoho  :wub: finally you've posted it in here.. I want the next chapteeerrrsssss  :heart: :heart: :heart:
good luck yedz!  :thumbsup

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #3 on: July 23, 2012, 04:44:24 PM »
Omg! I love this!

Did you drew the pictures? It's damn nice!

I look forward to your updates!


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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2012, 10:02:56 PM »
JAJA now takamina crossdress like kai.. awesome.. she gonna have a lot of troubles.. but what happen if acchan fall for "him" :O... nice fics and nice images :D congratualtions :D

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2012, 11:07:45 PM »
LOL Maichan finally you post it here  :cow:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 05:45:04 AM »
The drawing, did you drew it yourself? nice drawing..  :on lol:

The fic seems like the typical AKBxMendol cross fic at first.. but the twist at the end really got me curious..  :hehehe:

I'm guessing.. Acchan must be Persona's fan..  :bingo: she went there to watch their performance..  or maybe Acchan already know Taka disguising as Kai..  :ding: that would be really interesting..  :glasses:

Need to know what happen!! waiting for the next update..  :on comhere:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 07:11:17 AM »
It was really nice!! XD
Got me so interested in it~
Made me really curious in what will happen next!! ><

I was wondering if Acchan follows Takamina all the way there?
Really wonders whether Acchan will found out that Takamina is Kai there~

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Re: Problems For 1 month [ATSUMINA~ <3] Chapter 1- Double Idol
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2012, 08:51:11 PM »
So cool! The drawing and everything!
It's like reading a manga  :thumbsup

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Have tumblr have twitter. Just ask ^^

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WOAH~!!! :shocked: HOLLY SHERLOCK HOLMES~! So many replies~!

For those who questioned if I'm the one who drew it then the answer is~

Yes~! I'm the one who drew it :D Just want to make some drawings and such XD

other questions that is related to the story cannot be answered of course~!I don't
want to release some SPOILERS and such.

well  right now I'm kinda bored so I'll update this fan fic earlier than it's original update~!

this is only the 1st half of Chapter 2 so you all might feel that the update is too short but yeah after
the 1st half I might update it tomorrow :DD





The Problems for 1 Month CHAPTER 2 PART 1/2

 Takamina was so shock as she knows that acchan was the one being interviewed by the medias.

as Takamina looks at acchan's eyes, acchan looks away to her.

Takamina didn't understand why Acchan is afraid to look at her straightly ,until she realizes that right now she is Kai.

Curiosity came to Takamina when she notices that, what does Kai have to do with Acchan? and what is their relationship

 to each other? As Takamina finishes thinking about that she remembers that she has to go home and because of that she

 acted mad and said "Then interview her and not me!" then leaves the scene,but suddenly...
 
"AWW COMMON!you always act like that Kai!just 1 Question and we will leave!" one of the medias bravely shouted that to Kai/Takamina.

"OK but just 1 Question" Takamina said with a sigh in the end.The media becamed furious and raises their hands of which Takamina will pick

 for that 1 Question.
 
"You,the one with the red cap."Takamina said.

"Alright!"The media guy was so happy that he was the one who Kai/Takamina picked.

"Ok so what is your question so we can get over with this thing."Takamina said.

"What's your opinion....through Maeda Atsuko?"the media guy Questioned Kai with a serious look in his face.
 
As Takamina hears the question the media guy said,she hears alot of whispering going on saying:
 
Random media1:What is that guys problem?

Random media 2:Don't know,Don't care.

Random media 3:That question again?

Random media 4:He just wants to hurt Acchan's feelings....poor acchan...
 

Takamina is really getting curious of what kind of person Kai really was and so she answers the question by saying...


I don't really know her well but I think she's a person that is very motivated, and is very good ace of AKB48!"
 
After Takamina said that with a smile the whole media even Acchan was shocked by her answer and silence was covered by the whole scene,but Takamina didn't noticed that and just left the scene without knowing...
 
After that thing that happened earlier,Takamina goes straight home but suddenly she feels some weird presence near her, and as she looks back she saw Acchan! Acchan ran but Takamina hold her hand.
 
"Why are you following me Acc-- er...Maeda-san?"Takamina almost called Maeda's nickname "Acchan" while dressed up as Kai but the good thing is she remembered it quickly.and as Takamina questioned acchan....
Acchan said without hesitation "Can I have a small talk with you?"
"Uh sure..." Takamina wondered why acchan wants to talk to her.
"So let's go to the park?" Takamina question acchan.
"Yeah" Acchan agreed.
 
And after that they walk straight to the park with a bit of awkward silence and a bit of distance between them.
 
END of Chapter 2 part 1

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Thank you for all the people that read this fan fiction!!! pls. wait for Chapter 2 part 2~!!!
Sorry if I only drew Kai and not Acchan too >.<
this is my situation so that's why I only drew a few stuffs  T______T



Sorry if the Update is too short but please tune in for the Part 2 of Chapter 2! this time I'll make the Part 2 longer~  :ding:
« Last Edit: November 23, 2012, 11:35:31 AM by Mai-chan »
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I don't really know her well but I think she's a person that is very motivated, and is very good ace of AKB48!"
 
After Takamina said that with a smile the whole media even Acchan was shocked by her answer and silence was covered by the whole scene,but Takamina didn't noticed that and just left the scene without knowing...

The smile from Takamina, I guess Acchan realize that smile is Takamina. So Acchan follow Kai/Takamina. ^^

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Just started reading this..

The pictures are so nice~ :wub:
I like the idea of pictures!  :D

The story line is really good.
I wonder whats the relationship between Kai & Aachan....

Yes, it would be great if it was longer!!  :cow:

Update Soon
I'll be waiting~  :roll:

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I like yours drawings  :twothumbs
And the story is interesting ^^

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Oho... I think Acchan stalked Takamina. or Acchan knows Takamina's pretending to be Kai?
need the next update.
ja~

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omg!! that smile :D

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WOAH~!!!

 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

i don't have much thing to say~ i already said it!  :doh:

btw~ thanks for the..... THAT! you know wait I mean~

and oh~ this is me! if you don't know~ Ram.....bu....tan~ xDDDD

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Hmm... I feel that Kai always bad-mouthing Acchan and suddenly Minami as Kai said Acchan is motivated makes them suspicious?  :?
Hahahaha... agree with Sydney W
The smile from Takamina, I guess Acchan realize that smile is Takamina. So Acchan follow Kai/Takamina. ^^

Hope it'll be like that~ and interesting will happen~  XD XD

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Uwah~~!! thank you for the ones who still reads this fan fiction!!!!because of your comments I strive to make this fiction a good one~!

@sydney W nice way of thingking it~!thanks for reading :DD

@Popsicle Thank you~!!hm...kai's relationship to acchan?let's wait and see~!

@aoi sora hahaha nice meeting you here XD



Ok~!so This is the problems for 1 month Chapter 2 part 2~!

Enjoy :D

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The Problems for 1 Month CHAPTER 2 PART 2/2 -Why did I forget?




"Urghhhh....This is getting so awkward...." Takamina said inside her head.
 
At that awkward moment Takamina is thinking of a good joke to Break the ice and so she thought
of something that she thinks acchan will laugh at,and she said:

"T-The wind is so cold right now I want to use a lion as my coat~!"with an awkward smile on her face.
 
"pffft....wahahaha!*doyoukoto?(what do you mean?)said by acchan while laughing so hard.

"It's nothing.I just wanna see you smile!"Takamina said with a relief face because her joke didn't fail
 
"Ehh?...uhm...thanks"Acchan said while blushing so hard *like a tomato

"Good thing that joke did well~!"Takamina said directly to acchan.

"I didn't go well."Acchan answered back.

"Huh?But the why did you laugh so hard?"Takamina wondered.

"It's because you remind me of a person that is a close friend of mine that also fails at joke like that~!"
Acchan said while smiling.

"Who?"Takamina asked while pretending to not know the answer.

"It's Taka--"Suddenly before Acchan completes the name that she was about to question,acchan felt so
sad without any reason by Taka's view.

"Acc-- I mean Maeda-san?What's wrong?"Takamina almost mentioned Acchan's nickname while disguising
as Kai.

"Unn" Acchan shooked her head by the form of saying no "I'm alright I just remembered something."Acchan said
while not looking straightly to *Kai*.

"What's wrong?I'm here to listen don't worry"Takamina said to Acchan while showing some deep understading
to show that he is a responsible guy.

"No,It's nothing.If your wondering who's that person it's Takahashi Minami"Acchan answered straightly to *Kai*
to end their talk about Takamina herself.

But Takamina didn't want to end their discussion so she asked Acchan
About who's that "Takahashi Minami" that Acchan was talking about and Acchan replied back and said:
 
"She's AKB48's Team A Captain" Acchan said with a smile on her face.
 
Takamina wasn't comfortable on that reply of acchan to her question,So she question acchan again, but this time
it's more specific and so Takamina asked acchan and said:
 
"Ah I see then...how will you describe her as...a friend?"as she asked that question her heart started to pump so hard.

Her emotions at that time was full of excitement and also nervousness on what is acchan's description about her as a
friend over this passed 6 years, and so Acchan said with a smile:
 
"She's A Good Friend...."
 
"ah.."Takamina can't reply properly.It's like her thoughts about their friendship with each other changed
because of what acchan said just now.

"Just A Good Friend?" she said inside her head.for all those years that's it?"A Good Friend"  those words that acchan said
just now can't get out of Takamina's head. Iit's like she can't accept it nomatter what, but even if she can't accept it that it,
that's what acchan's description about her over those 6 years of friendship,Takamina don't want to continue questioning acchan
about her anymore even though she wants to now more about herself & what acchan thinks.
 
Suddenly...
 
Acchan's phone ranged.
 
"Ah!uhm,wait a sec. Kai." Acchan said to Takamina.

"Ah..sure."Takamina replied.
 
*Acchan talking to someone to the phone...
 
Hello?Ah!Yuko~!
.
.
.
Ah!yeah!I almost forgot!Yes,I'll be there.
.
.
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Ah,By the way is Takamina there?
.
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Oh..I see,I'll see you there.Bye.

 
Takamina got curioused on why Yuko called acchan and why her name got mentioned.
 
"I'm really sorry Kai,I really want to talk with you but I have an appointment to attend"
Acchan said with a sense of dissapointment on her face.

"No It's ok.By the way where are you going?"Takamina asked.

"Oh, well...It's my Birthday today"Acchan said with a piece of nervouseness in her sentence.

"Ah~ well Otanjoubi Omedettou~!!(Happy Birthday)"Takamina greeted her.

"Thank you~!well I got to go,thanks for being with me tonight"acchan said to *Kai*

"No problem!"Takamina answered back
 
*As acchan left the scene...



 
"Why did I forget.....
 
 
 
 
 
"ACCHAN'S BIRTHDAY???!!!!!!!!!!"

 
T.B.C.

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« Last Edit: November 23, 2012, 11:36:08 AM by Mai-chan »
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takabaka!! you forgot acchan birthday!!!!

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