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Title: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina fanfic] - COMPLETED
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 28, 2012, 10:38:47 PM
Hi. I'm new here. I've been reading the fanfics here. And now I decided to post my story. This is my first story. It could be boring and sorry for that. Well here it is, hope you like it. And sorry for my bad english. :D

Why can’t you love me back?
                                                               Chapter  One
We’ve been together for 6 years.  We’ve become very close throughout the years. You are the Leader and I’m the Ace. We always hug and joke around. You are so funny and kind hearted. You are the perfect “boyfriend”. You are so beautiful and you have e perfect small and thin body. Every time I hug you I can feel the warmth of your body and every time I do it, I don’t want to let you go. Everyone in the group teases you for your boyish style and that inside you are a boy. And in front of them I act like I agree with them, but inside I think you are a very attractive young lady. “I want you all for myself”. Both of us live alone and sometimes you come to sleepover at my apartment or I come to sleepover at yours. At my apartment you have your own pajamas and clothes. You come and I cook for you. You eat my dishes with pleasure and every time with a smile on your face you say: “It’s delicious. Thank you Atsuko.” When you call me, “Atsuko” I feel like my heart skips a beat. And every time you are around me I want to kiss you so much. But I’m so scared that you will reject me. I love you. Minami can you love me back? Do you love me?
Today we have a recording for AKBINGO! We will be playing dogball. And we’re on the same team. I am so happy I could be so close to you. The first Mechaburi is “Getemono Ryori”. Right after the game starts you have been hit by the gorilla… Oh I’m sorry by Akimoto Sayaka. She is such a monster. Hehe. I’m so disappointed I wanted to play with you more. The you sit to eat and you are so scared. I’m so worried about you. After you ate it you looked so pale. I got close to you and asked:
“Minami, are you ok?” I said with a worried face.
“Yeah don’t worry, Acchan”?  you said with a smile.
My heart skips a beat again and I look at the ground.
“Acchan, are you ok? Minami asked me with a worried face. “Yeah, I’m ok. Don’t worry about me.”
After we were done recording for the day I went to change in the dressing room with everyone else. But I was so tired for the whole day that I couldn’t stay on my feet. Then I sat on the chair next to me and laid my head on the table right next in front of me. Then you came and asked me with a worried face and half – shouted: “Atsuko, Atsuko, Atsuko, are you ok? Atsuko? I lift my head and I look at you. You look like you are about to cry. I was so shocked and I couldn’t answer you. I was so happy that you were so worried about me. Then I saw a tear coming from your eye. You came closer and kissed my forehead and said: “You don’t have temperature, so you not sick. But you look so pale. Are you tired? After the kiss I was even more shocked, but then I came back to reality and got the courage to answer.
“M – M – Minami. Don’t worry I am ok.” I answered you while blushing.
“I’m so glad you are ok. You really scared me you know? She said while smiling and holding my hand.
 “I – I’m sorry, Minami” I said and look right down at the ground. “Don’t be so nice, Minami
“Ok, let’s go to your apartment. I’ll stay over tonight” she said smiling.
“You don’t need to. I’m fine”.
“I know I don’t need to, Atsuko. But I want to.” She said still holding my hand tight.
Please stop
We took a taxi to my apartment. And Minami is still holding my hand.” Please, Minami. Let go of my hand.” We reached my front door and she let my hand go so I could take out my keys. We got in and Minami sat on the couch. She looks tired..
“Do you want something to eat? Are you hungry? “
“Yeah, I’m starving. Make me something delicious.”
“What do you want me to make for you.”
“Everything you make is delicious, so everything is fine, Atsuko.”
A smile formed on my face. She is really kind. I’m so in love with this girl. I want to tell her, but I’m so scared she will reject me. I love you, Minami. I want to be with you until the end of my life.
“Okay, then I’ll will make you favorite.”
“Okay. In the mean time I will go take a shower”. “Okay, well you know where your clothes are.”
“Un”. She is so shy. I thought to myself and my face got really red. I would really love to go in with her. I am such a perverted. Hehe.
“Minami, the dinner is ready.” I said while my face is bright red.
“Okay, coming.”
 She then walks down the stairs with her pink pajamas and her wet hair. She looks so beautiful, especially with her hair down. She should be with her hair down more often.
“Mmm smells good”
“Here you go, your favorite Katsudon”
“Omg, I love you so much, Acchan.” She says and kissing me on the cheek.
I look away so she couldn’t see my red cheeks.  My heart hurts when I hear those words, because she doesn’t feel the same love I feel for her. Don’t say that, Minami. You don’t know how much it hurts.
“How is it, Minami”
“Ah, oshii, Atsuko. You are a great cooker. You will be a great girlfriend”
“Don’t lie. I’m not that great of a cooker”
“No. It’s true. Whoever you date, will be a lucky guy.”
Right after I heard those words a tears falls from my eye. I try to hide it because I will only make her worry and I really don’t want her to worry about me.
“Atsuko. Are you ok?”
“Yes, Minami.  I’m ok, eat your food.”
 “No, you are not okay, you are crying. Did I do something wrong?” she said while whipping my tears from my cheek.
“No, no. You didn’t I just can’t hold it anymore.”
“What’s wrong. You know you can tell me everything. We are best friends, remember?”
No don’t say that. I don’t want to be your friend, Minami. I want to be more than you friend. I want to be you lover. I started to cry. I just couldn’t keep it in me anymore. I want to tell her how I feel. I want to tell her I want to be more than her friend. I know she will probably reject me. But keeping this feeling  in me hurts more..
“Minami. I’ve been keeping a secret from you.”
“What is it, Atsuko.”
“I’m such a coward. And you might hate me for what I’m about to say.”
“Atsuko, you are not a coward and I will not hate you. I couldn’t hate you. You know that”
“We’ve been together for 6 years now. And I’ve always……” I started to cry even more. I couldn’t speak I was so nervous and scared.
“Calm down, Atsuko. You don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to.”
“No I have to. It’s tearing me apart. I have to tell you what I feel”
“I don’t understand. What are you talking about?”
“Minami, I have always loved you. Since the day I saw you at the audition. I love you. I love you more than a friend. I want to be your lover. I want to with you forever.” tears rolling down my eyes.
“Eh, Atsuko. Are you serious? Don’t joke around with stuff like this.”
“No. I’m not kidding. I love you, Minami. Please believe me.”
She looks so shocked. She looks down and looks like she is going to say something. My heat is beating so fast. I feel like I’m going to die if she rejects me.
“Atsuko……” she said with a sad face . Now I really regret telling her, she is going to hate me.
“Atsuko, I’m sorry. I can’t accept your feelings. I love you too, but only as a friend and nothing more."
“Why, Minami? Why can’t you love my back?
Something snapped in me. I just couldn’t accept her rejection. I love her so much and I want her. I want her mine…
“I’m sorry, Atsuko. I’m really sorry.”
“Minami..”
I start to move closer to her. “I love you, Minami”. Then I move close and closer and now our lips are only inch away. “No, Atsuko. Don’t”. She steps back, but I wrap my arms around her waist. She couldn’t move anymore. “Atsuko..Don..” She couldn’t finish her sentence because I sealed her lips. I kiss her. I can feel her warm, soft lips. But she doesn’t respond my kiss. Then turn my head to the right so I could kiss her easier. I play with her lips. I suck her upper lip then I slowly open my mouth and I try to put my tongue in her mouth. But she still doesn’t respond the kiss. She closes her mouth so I couldn’t put my tongue in her mouth. Then I break the kiss and look in her eyes but she looks away. I turned her face to face me. And then I forced her to open her mouth so I could kiss her passionately. I don’t want to do this. I know she will hate me but I want her to become mine. I push her down and now I’m lying on top of her. I kiss her again and break it and look in her eyes  again. She is crying. “Please, Atsuko. Stop. I don’t love you” I couldn’t bare it. It hurts like hell. “I’m sorry, Minami. I can’t stop. I love you and I want you mine. I said as I star to kiss her again. She still doesn’t respond the kiss. She tries to escape but I push her really hard to the ground. I kiss her chin and then move down to her neck. I lick it, kiss it. “Stop, Atsuko. Please..”  I hold both of her hands so she couldn’t escape. With my other free hand I start to unbutton her top. I touch her stomach and move my hand up and squeeze her breast. Although they are small I could feel their warmth. It’s so nice. “I love you.” I say as I star to undo her pink bra. ”Atsuko. Please stop. I don’t love you. There is someone else I love.” I stopped all of my movements and looked her in the eyes. She looks so sad and scared. I started to understand what big mistake I have made. “ I’m really sorry, Minami. Please forgive me.” I’m such an idiot. I’ve hurt her so much. What did I do?
“Please, Minami. Don’t hate me.”
“I told you I could not possibly hate you. But I won’t ever forgive you.
“Minami. Don’t say that. You don’t mean it, right?”
“I do mean it. I don’t want to see you again.”
She got up and changed her clothes. She put on her shoes and left. And I’m just sitting on the floor and crying. She loves someone else…..
“Minami. I’m sorry.”   


TBC
Hope you liked it. :P Tell me what do you think. And tell me should i continue the story. If it's too boring I'll stop. :P
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on April 28, 2012, 11:18:00 PM
Nooooo!!!! My atsumina :cry:
This is good, you shouldn't stop its really interesting :twothumbs
But the big questions are, who is the person that minami loves? What will become of atsuko and minami?
The story's piqued me interest, please continue, and i can't wait for your next update :cow:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: Flean on April 29, 2012, 12:27:09 AM
What happened to my Atsumina??  :mon scare:  Taka!!! How can you be in love with someone else!!! :angry:

and Acchan.. why did you stopped?  :mon mischief: You should just make Taka as yours instead of regretting later on..  :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: Nakamii on April 29, 2012, 03:30:16 AM
Bakamina, Can't you just stop bein' Dense? :yawn:
I don't even know The Reason why Takamina Love someone else when she just care about Acchan... :smhid
I knew it... This is gonna be a Love Polygons Between AtsukoxMinamix...Tomochin? :bleed eyes:
But, You will end it with AtsuMina, anyway... Because, The Title Explains Everything... :P

Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: hara on April 29, 2012, 03:44:13 AM
Hueeeeeeeee...
What's happen to my AtsuMina ?   :cry: :cry: :cry:
Minami~  Acchan loved you !!  :cry:


it's so interesting !! waiting for next chapter...   :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: bochang on April 29, 2012, 06:46:31 AM
*jawdropped*
one sided atsumina? it'll be interesting..

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,,,, update please!! :D
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: Haruko on April 29, 2012, 07:49:41 AM
OMG!! Sexaddichan ATTACK!!.. come takaboy we know you love this girl...

Minama dont say that SHE IS IN LOVE.. just she says that doesnt love atsuko.. but i have hopes of course..

interesting fics... please keep going..

and make takabaka be jealousy for make our atsuko suffer ..
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 29, 2012, 02:38:40 PM
                                                       Why Can’t You Love Me Back?
                                                                    CHAPTER TWO
I couldn’t sleep well last night. All I could think about was you and what I did to you. I cried all night. Today we have a recording for “Puccho”. We have to pass a gum mouth to mouth. I hope I can do it with you. But you probably don’t want to do it with me. I got to the recording studio and went to the dressing room to change and do my make - up. When I got there you had already changed and now you were doing your make – up. I slowly walked to you and stopped behind. I wanted to talk to you and apologize for last night. You realized I was standing behind you and turned back to face me. Then our eyes met and you quickly looked away.
“Minami, can I talk to you?”
You quickly got up and walked away from me. “Minami. Please.” Then you stopped and looked me and with a cold voice said: “No. I don’t want to see you or talk to you.”. “Minami.”
Then we met with the director and the staff and they explained us what we are going to do and with who. I was really disappointed to find out I was not your partner. It was Tomochin. But you looked happy. We started recording and first was your turn. I watched carefully. Here it is. Tomochin passes the gum to your mouth and your lips touched. I felt so jealous. But for some reason you felt so embarrassed and happy. Your face was all red. The moment Tomochin saw how shy you were she smirked. Why is she smirking. She likes when you are all shy.
“Acchan, what’s wrong.” Suddenly a familiar voice approached me.
“Ah, Micchan. I’m fine.” I force a smile on my face.
“Come on, Acchan. It’s me. I know you. Tell me what is going and why are your eyes so red and swollen.
I burst in tears. “I did something horrible to Minami. She hates me.”
“Wait. What did you do. And Takamina would never hate you.”
“Last night I confessed to her and she rejected me…”
“Wait, you did WHAT?”
“And I just couldn’t accept her rejection and I did something I can’t forgive myself for.”
“I knew you two were close, but I didn’t know you loved her.”
“After that I snapped and kissed her forcefully. She didn’t respond it but I didn’t stop.”
“Oh my God. What did you do, Acchan.” Said Micchan with a shoked face.
“I know. I’m so sorry.”
“But she rejcted you. I didn’t knew about you but I was sure she liked you. But she is just so dense, so I thought she just didn’t realize her feelings for you.”
“I thought she liked me too, Micchan..”
“I know, I know. Calm down everything  will be okay. Just go and talk to her.”
“I tried she said she won’t ever forgive me and that she doesn’t want to see me.”
“She really said that. I can’t believe that Takamina could say something like that.”
“No.  It’s my fault.”
“It’s ok. Just go and try to talk to her again.”
“But she doesn’t want to.”
“Then make her.”
“Un, I’ll try.”
“Yoshii. Let’s record that CM.”
After the recording was over I went to find you. But you were nowhere to be found. Then I saw Sayaka in the dressing room.
“Sayaka, have you seen Takamina?”
“Ah, Takamina went home.”
“Alone at this time?”
“No. She went with Tomochin.”
“Oh… Okay, thanks Sayaka.”
I took my phone from my bag and called you. But no answer . I try again and again but still no answer. “Minami.”. Then I decided to email you.
Minami. Where are you I want to talk to you
Right after that I took a cab and went to her apartment. I rang the doorbell but no answer. Then I remembered that I had a key in case something happened. I took out the key and slowly opened the door. I searched for you on the living room but you weren’t there so I went to your bedroom. The door was lightly open and I heard your voice from outside the room. The light was on and you weren’t alone. Are you with her, Minami. I slowly picked and saw you on the bed with her. You had a serious  look on your face while she was smirking.
“Are you serious, Takamina?” she said while laughing.
“I’m serious, Tomochin.”
She slowly moved closer to you. And then..
“Okay, then say it again, Takamina.” She is still moving closer.
Minami is so nervous. But she got the courage to speak.
“Tomochin…” A short pause.
“Yes, Takamina?” Now their faces are only inches away.
“I love you. Please be my girlfriend…”
“I’m so happy, Minami.”
And finally they are kissing. I’m standing and just watching. I can’t believe, Minami is kissing her with so much passion. A tear rolls down my chick. Then, Tomochin pushes, Minami down on the bed and now she is on top of her. Minami wraps her arm around, Tomochin’s waist. Tomochin continue to kiss her as she moves her hands up and she touches, Minami’s breast. Minami let’s out a little moan as, Tomochin squeeze her little warm breast the I could still feel with my arm. She then moves down and kiss her neck. She starts to bite it and mark it. After that she start to lick it as Minami let’s out a little moan again. Tomochin smirkes again and moves to give Minami a short kiss on the lips and then kisses her nose, then her chin, then her eyes. Minami moves her arm around Tomochin’s neck…
“I love you, Tomomi…”
“I love you too, Minami. I’ve always loved you.”
Then she kisses her lips again but this time with passion. I could see their tongues battling inside Minami’s mouth. Tomochin moves her hand up and starts to undutton the cute pink shirt of Minami. She unbuttons the first, then the second, then the third as Minami’s cute bra covering her small, cute breast is exposed. I bursted  in tears. I couldn’t take it anymore. I tried to run away but tripped and fell on the floor right in the room. They were shocked I was there.
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.
“I’m sorry for the interrupting..” I ran away. I wanted to get out of there as soon as possible.
“Acchan, wait…”
“Don’t, Tomomi..”
“But…”
“No. All I want now is YOU. I love YOU”
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”
Minami smiles and answers..
“I’m sure. I don’t love HER!”

TBC 


AAAAAAAh, I'm full with ideas. Hope you like it. I'm fast right?!?! :D
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: Nakamii on April 29, 2012, 02:51:52 PM
Okay, Just because of this Fics, I'm starting to Hate TakaTomo... :P
What did you do to Acchan, eh? :bleed eyes: I already knew it... Love Polygons is just not right... :smhid Takamina, I'm sure you'll Love Acchan, someday... :yep:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: Flean on April 29, 2012, 02:59:26 PM
What!! Why must you make Acchan saw all those things!!!  :banghead: OMG!!! My heart so hurt for Acchan!!  :bleed eyes:

Taka!!! How dare you do this to Acchan!!!  :angry: I'm so furious right now!!! argh!!!  :banghead:

I need to cool myself down with some AtsuMinaness!!!  :panic:  I need to update to calm myself down!!!  :catglare:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: bochang on April 29, 2012, 04:52:58 PM
TakaTomo is hawt! LOL
poor Acchan..

but...

I'm kinda confused why Tomochin care for Acchan?
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.

i mean.. Takamina loves Tomochin. Tomochin loves Takamina.
Yet in the middle of their hot moments, Acchan interupted them.
but Tomochin asked Takamina if she loves Acchan?
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”

is Tomochin loves Acchan? LOL

and thx for the update~!
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: Haruko on April 29, 2012, 08:19:20 PM
TakaTomo is hawt! LOL
poor Acchan..

but...

I'm kinda confused why Tomochin care for Acchan?
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.

i mean.. Takamina loves Tomochin. Tomochin loves Takamina.
Yet in the middle of their hot moments, Acchan interupted them.
but Tomochin asked Takamina if she loves Acchan?
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”

is Tomochin loves Acchan? LOL

and thx for the update~!

Wow could be?... I dont think about it but with your comment could be and now all have a explanation.. if Tomochin are in love for acchan.. and know that acchan love takamina but takamina lover her.. so she can take revenge for acchan with takamina.. or god.. could be...

We know you love acchan minami but you are so confused.. maybe you need to make takamina jelousy with a big rival..
she need to figured that she is in love for acchan..

Sorry for all takatomo fans.. but I ship atsumina so much.. gomen ne
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 29, 2012, 09:14:31 PM
Oh, God. You will hate me for the next chapter. Which by the way I wll update tommorow. :)
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: RJay on April 30, 2012, 01:53:30 AM
Oooh this is getting really interesting now.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
But poor Acchan that she had to see that.
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
Post by: Flean on April 30, 2012, 02:47:25 AM
Oh, God. You will hate me for the next chapter. Which by the way I wll update tommorow. :)

Nani!!!  :mon wtf:  NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! :mon scare:   omg!!! I need to ran away from all these miseries!!!  :mon runcry:

my atsumina!!!  :mon ref:  please don't torture us!!!  :mon cry:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 30, 2012, 04:35:28 PM
                                                                           CHAPTER THREE
I still couldn’t forget what happened last night. The picture of Minami and Tomochin doing it was still fresh in my memory. It’s already morning and I still haven’t fallen asleep. Then suddenly my alarm rang. I have to get up and go to the theater. Today we have a practice. I don’t what do go. They will be there. I don’t want to see them. I got up from the bed took a shower and changed. I looked in the mirror and I saw myself. I look like a ghost because I haven’t slept. I will make Miichan worry again. It’s already 10 o’clock. I have to hurry or I will be late. Now I am in front of the dressing room and I can hear Minami’s voice. She sounds happy. Of course she is with the person she loves. The moment I opened the door and went into the room Miichan saw me. She then ran to me worried.
“Acchan, are you ok?”
“Yeah. I’m fine. Don’t worry.”
“No. You are not fine. I can see it.
“I told you. I’m fine.”
“Come on. You honestly think you can lie to me?”
“I’m sorry but really I’m fine.”
“Your eyes are red. You haven’t slept right? What happened?”
I started crying. When she asked me I remembered last night. I couldn’t help but cry. The person I love is in love with someone else. I lost my best friend.
“I saw them, Miichan…”
 “Saw who?”
“Minami and her…”
“Who? I don’t understand.”
“Minami and Tomochin..”
“What were they doing. Tell me what exactly happened.”
“Minami confessed to Tomochin..”
“WHAT?”
“She love her, Micchan.”
“Did Tomochin reject her?
“No. She loves her too.”
“I can’t believe it. Tomochin is in love with Takamina. And then what happened?”
“They started doing it. I watched. I just couldn’t move. I was too shoked.”
“Oh my God. You saw all of that. I’m sorry, Acchan..”
Then Miichan hugs me tightly. I can feel her warm body. I hug her back and continue to cry. I hide my face so they couldn’t  see me. When we were done changing, Minami gathered us..
“Everyone. I want to tell you something important.”
Then Tomochin moves to stand next to her.
“Are they going to…” said Miichan with a shocked face.
“I’m sure you will be shocked from what I’m about to say.” Everyone seems surprised.
“Me, Takahashi Minami and Itano Tomomi are dating.”
Everyone is thrown in shock. All start to whisper. I’m even more shocked then them. I can’t believe what I’m seeing and hearing.
“So, yoroshiku onegaishimasu.”  Said Tomochin as they both bow.
“Now, let’s start practice.” Said Minami with a very happy voice.
I didn’t want to practice at all. I didn’t want to see them.  But then suddenly SHE runs to Minami and slaps her. Everyone stopped all of their movements and looked at them. When I turned around and saw the person who was slapping Minami. I couldn’t believe my eyes. Like me she is also Minami’s best friend. Then she started crying and was barely speaking, but  she found the courage to do so. Everyone trembles in anticipation of what she is about to say.
“Takamina...” She said with a trembling voice.
“What are you doing?” Minami was very angry with her.
“Minami, calm down.” Tomochin tries to calm her down.
“How can I calm down. She just slapped me. Tell me why did you do it. Did I do something wrong?”
“Why her, Takamina. WHY? She shouted and then ran away.
“Haruna, wait.” A curtain person then tried to stop her.
“Don’t , Yuko. Just let me go.”
“Let me come with you.”
“No, Yuko. I don’t need you. I need HER.”
Well now everything is messed up because of those two. They should’ve kept their relationship to them self. Haruna never came back to rehearsal with us. And Minami didn’t even try to chase her. You’ve changed Minami. What happened to you. What happened to the person I loved and still love.
“Acchan, let’s go somewhere.”
“Miichan.. Where are we going.”
“To the rooftop.”
“Eh. Why are we going there?”
“I want to talk to you.”
“About what?”
“You will see..”
Right now I really needed a good friend and place to go without them. But when I looked at the clear blue sky I couldn’t help but to cry. It reminded me of Minami. I love her so much. But why can’t she love me back. Why, Minami. What happened to you.
“Acchan..”
“What is it, Miichan?”
She then moves her right hand up and wipes my tears. She has so sad eyes and looks like she is about to cry. But I don’t understand why. Then she moves closer and kisses me. It was a short kiss full with emotions. Then she looks straight in my eyes and said something I didn’t expect.
“Can’t it be me, Acchan. Can’t I be the person you love.”
“Eh, what are you saying, Miichan?”
She looks so serious. But I don’t get it. But the next thing that she said..
“I love you, Acchan. Why can’t you love me back?”
“But, Miichan. I love…..”
“I know but can you try to love me. Can you try to forget her. I can’t watch you crying over her. My heart hurt, Acchan.” Then she kisses me on the lips again. For some reason I respond. Somehow I didn’t want to lose her too. But at the same time I imagine it’s Minami.
“I’m sorry, Miichan. I…”
“At least try. Please.”
“But all I will do is hurt you.”
“I know. I’m prepared for that. But my love for you is stronger than my fear. I’m ready.”

TBC

I'm ready you can kill me now. :D
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: Haruko on April 30, 2012, 05:03:23 PM
OMG what did you do? Takamina its a idiot for that its the first tima that i hate her so much

But if its not enough you meanie destroy my favorite otp ...  My kojiyuu noooooo! Why... You can destroy any other couple but mu kojiyuu aww god

And last but nit lest miichan and her suddenly confession but in this case i dont blame if the Person that i love is so heat broken im gonna do something for make her feel better

Aww acchan your so confused

Minami you are an idiot need to fix all this mess right now

Ok now im mOre calm so i can say this... Amazing chapter and amazing fic just please please fix it
 
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: Flean on April 30, 2012, 05:09:32 PM
Just what happened here..  :angry: I can't continue this..  :smhid  just not good for me and my psychological health..  :banghead: 

I shall do something for my AtsuMina!!  :twisted: justice will prevail!! LOL  :lol:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: Nakamii on April 30, 2012, 05:58:29 PM
Woah, It's just getting Complicated... :yawn:
A rival has appeared... again... Now, Haruna love Takamina too? :shocked Takamina sure is lucky... being loved by many pretty girls... XD
I know she had to choose over them... and Takamina already decided to go with Tomochin... and left the others... :catglare:
Poor Acchan... Crying all night without even slept... If I'm Acchan, I'll definitely gave up in Love Thingy... Because, It just so hurts... When we confessed, And got rejected... That's just sooo... Embarassing! :bleed eyes:
Hm, You add some rivals again... :O2 i don't know if you will add some later, But please Just let it be AtsuMina... I really want to read AtsuMina's Fanfics right now...
Taka is just for Atsuko... No one else... AtsuMina is just so... Perfect! like Kojiyuu too.
I'm kinda happy there's Yuko... I'm sure KojiYuu would happen sooner or later... :thumbup
No, no, no... No AtsuMii... Things just gettin' out of control (in your fic)... :panic: You add a unofficial pairing... LOL. Ugh, I'm just getting sick...
I'm sure Acchan won't Accepted Miichan's confession... or maybe she will?
Maybe, Acchan doen't accepted Miichan's confession but just tried to love her? LOL. And then, Takamina will get jealous? Nah... It won't happen... :peace: That's just my instinct...
Hey, I'm not complaining, okay... just some emotion impingement... :P 
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 30, 2012, 06:39:41 PM
I know that now you might be angry with me I know this is AtsuMina, but it's also something knew. I know everything is messed up.....Now, but in the end everyone will be with the person they should be. But this is going to be big. The next chapter it will become even more complicated but in the end remember that this is an AtsuMina fanfic. And when the last chapter is on you will feel hot and I'm sure  most of you will love it. Now we have many couples, AtsuMina, KojiYuu, TomoTomo and e.t.c. but before, when the just got in it wasn't like that. My Fic is like the begining of everything. Just bare it with me. Because I get angry everytime I write a new chapter. But it has to be this way. You will love in the end. :P
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: hara on April 30, 2012, 07:09:44 PM
Oh My God !!   

it's so complicated..   :cry:
And please~ AtsuMina~ you make me have a broken heart..  :(

Good story !!  :thumbup

Can't waiting for next chapter.. please update soon..   :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: Flean on April 30, 2012, 07:37:08 PM
I know that now you might be angry with me I know this is AtsuMina, but it's also something knew. I know everything is messed up.....Now, but in the end everyone will be with the person they should be. But this is going to be big. The next chapter it will become even more complicated but in the end remember that this is an AtsuMina fanfic. And when the last chapter is on you will feel hot and I'm sure  most of you will love it. Now we have many couples, AtsuMina, KojiYuu, TomoTomo and e.t.c. but before, when the just got in it wasn't like that. My Fic is like the begining of everything. Just bare it with me. Because I get angry everytime I write a new chapter. But it has to be this way. You will love in the end. :P

LOL.. I can understand what you're trying to do with your fanfic..  :yep: and you're trying to do something new as well.. it's a good thing I guess.. as a writer, I always thinking of making or adding something new to my fanfics as well..  :twothumbs

but I'm just one of those boring hardcore AtsuMina fans which cannot read any fanfics where AtsuMina are being paired to someone else..LOL..  :lol:  just what I'm trying to say here..LOLOL.. :P  oh yeah!! hardcore AtsuMina fans..   :heart:

But still!! this fanfic is interesting!! keep up the good work!! :thumbup I'm just gonna wait for last chapter since you said we will like it..LOL..  XD  waiting for AtsuMinaness in action!!  8)
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: RJay on April 30, 2012, 08:13:43 PM
OMG this is getting really complicated. :OMG:
Don't tell me that Haruna is also in love with Takamina? And Miichan confess to Acchan? :frustrated:
Wow can't wait for the next chapter :hehehe:

please update soon
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 30, 2012, 09:27:02 PM
                                                                         CHAPTER  FOUR
“I know. I’m prepared for that. But my love for you is stronger than my fear. I’m ready.”
“No. You are my friend. I can’t hurt you like this. “
“All I want is to try. Can you do that.”
“No. I’m sorry. I want to be with her, so I will try to win her.”
“But she doesn’t love you.”
“I know she doesn’t. I will make her love me.”
“I’m sorry, Miichan.”
“It’s ok. Go win your girl.”
I have to win her from Tomochin. But I don’t know how. She doesn’t even want to talk to me. She doesn’t want to see me.
////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
“Haruna. Are you ok.”
“Go home, Yuko. I don’t want to see you.”
“No. I won’t. Can I come in.”
“I told you to go home. I don’t need you.”
“I know you don’t. I just want to be here next to you even if you don’t need me.”
“I’m coming in.  Are you ok?”
“Why is she with her?” said Haruna with a crying face.
“I don’t know. But I’m sure they won’t last long. They are not for each other.”
“I know they are not. But it hurts me to see them.”
“I know” says Yuko while hugging Haruna and taping her head.
“Let me go.”
“No.”
“Let me go.” Says Haruna half – shouting.
“I told you. I won’t let you go.”
“Why, Yuko. Why are you so kind?”
“Don’t you understand? Do you really not understand?
“What? I don’t understand.”
“With risk that  I might lose you. I just  can’t take it. Why do you love someone that makes you feel like this?”
“I just love her, Yuko.”
“I know. But can’t you love me?”
“Eh. What do you think  this is. Some kind of a sick joke?”
“No. I’m fully aware that this is not a joke, but I wish it was. I wish you weren’t in love with her.”
“But I’m, so can you stop pretending to care.”
“No. I’m not pretending. I know you are in love with her. But I want you to love me the way I love you. You are my everything  Haruna. I will hold that hand until I die. Even when I’m an old lady I won’t let your hand go. Please look at me the way I look at you.”
“I can’t look at you this way. I love her, only her.”
“Well, yeah. Now you love her but someday you will love me. But for that you have to try.”
“Yuko, you know you are a real pain in the ass” I said while laughing
“Hehe. And don’t forget I love you my sunshine.”
“But I still can’t answer your feelings but I’m going to try.”
“Are you serious. Will you go out with me?”
“Yes, Yuko. I will go out with you, my little pervert.”
“Yatta. Well it seems that tonight will be a very long and romantic evening.”
“Mhm, well where will you take me, pervert.”
“You will see my sunshine.”
I picked her up at 8 o’clock. And I was stunned by the way she looked. She was perfect, just like a princess. With that red dress and those shoes. And the hair was up in pony style.
“Shall we go, my beautiful princess.”
“Yes, my perfect prince.”
“Don’t call me a prince, I’m not a man.” I said with a little irritated voice.
“I’m sorry, my bad, my “handsome” girl.”
“Hehe, so you are saying I’m beautiful “ I said smirking.
“Yes, Yuko. You are beautiful. And I’m seriously falling in love with you.” I said while moving closer.
“Thank you, Nyan Nyan.” I then wraped my arms around her neck.“You are so warm. Your skin is soft. I want to touch it so bad.”
“Not so fast Yuko. First kiss me.”
“Are you sure you are ready?”
“Yes, I’m sure Yuko. Right now I seriously want to kiss you.”
Then I move even closer until our lips are only an inch away. Then we finally kiss. Her lips are so soft. I could kiss them all day. Then I move my head to the right so I could kiss her easily . Now we are kissing with passion.  Then my tongue asks for permission to enter. She slowly open’s her mouth to grand me permission. Now it is getting even hotter. Our tongues are battling for domination.
“Well if we continue, we will end up doing it.”
“Isn’t that what you want, Yuko. Or you don’t want to do it with me?”
“Oh God. Are you kidding me. All I want now is you.  But let’s go step by step. So now where do you want to go?”
“Hmm, let’s go to the restaurant I love”
“Okay.”
Then we went to the restaurant hand by hand. I’m so happy. I finally won her from that chibi captain. Takamina, thank you for helping me. You risked, Haruna to hate you. Just to help me be with her. Now is my turm…..

TBC
Here you go. Haruna and Yuko are together, but hmmmmmm what will happen next. And we will see another person soon who loves HER. Who is that peson and who is the person she loves. We will se.... Hope you like it. :P
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FOUR
Post by: Nakamii on April 30, 2012, 11:44:55 PM
Wow, KojiYuu... So fast... They're already making out... :twothumbs
Now, This is what I want... Yuko confessed and Haruna accepted... Congratz, Haruna~ You finally found your Prince... XD
Now, I'm waiting for my AtsuMina and TomoTomo... :thumbup
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FOUR
Post by: bochang on May 01, 2012, 12:44:15 AM
Uwah!! You're so fast! ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Chapter 3:
*Le gasp!
Miichan loves Acchan? Haruna love takamina?
At first I thought Haruna love tomochin. :p
And yuko must be hurt.. (TT.TT)
"I don't need you, I NEED HER"
For any normal people, they'll crumble.
But yuko is not normal people. LOL

Chapter 4:
And somehow miichan can let acchan go?
Why don't you try to win acchan, miichan?
It'll be interesting to see them together. :p

Uwah.. KojiYuu is so fast!! :">
As I said before, Yuko is not normal person!! LOL
KojiYuu's moment is so sweet. *squealing*

Thx for the fast update. :D
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FOUR
Post by: Haruko on May 01, 2012, 06:35:51 AM
aww kojiyuu together im fine with that... but.. atsumina have a dificult moment..
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FOUR
Post by: kahem on May 01, 2012, 01:56:09 PM
OMFG!!!!!! Polygone!!!!
Takamina is such popular with girls lol
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FOUR
Post by: TakaminaBG on May 01, 2012, 06:00:41 PM
CHAPTER FIVE
I have to win her from Tomochin. But I don’t know how. She doesn’t even want to talk to me. She doesn’t want to see me. Does she really not love me? I really thought she felt the same towards me. I think she loves me. But then why is she with her. There has got to be some kind of a reason. I don’t think she really loves her. Anyway in the next 2 weeks I can’t do anything to win her back. I have to go to Bulgaria to meet my fans. And I have to leave tomorrow. I have to make her fall in love with me because I’m scared that after I get back it will be too late. If I tell here I’ll be gone for two weeks will she be sad. Will she be sad that I’m leaving.  Will she miss me. Minami…. I love you so much. I can’t leave without you. Come back to me…
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I open the magazine and see her in those cute red bikini. She looks so sexy. Her white beautiful legs. Her cute flat belly. And those breats. I want to squeeze them. I want to touch her whole body.
“What are you looking?”
“Oh.. Y – You scared me. No it’s nothing..”
“Show me!”
“No!”
“Oh, why are you looking at her?”
“I’m just…” I can’t think of any excuse. I’m so sorry..
“Why do you keep lying  to yourself..” said half – shouting, half – crying.
“What are you talking about?”
“You love her. And you want to be with her.”
“No. I was j…..”
“Just admit it. From the beginning you we were not meant to be. “
“I………..”
///////////////////////////////////////////
I have to help Acchan get Takamina midget back. I have a great idea. And I will need her to help me. I’ll try calling her…
“Moshi – moshi”
“Ah, Yuko”
“Miichan, what is it.”
“What happened with you and Haruna?”
“We are together. And it’s all thanks to Takamina.”
“Eh, what are you talking  about”
“She is the reason I’m with Haruna now. She helped me.”
“I don’t understand. How?”
“Well we had a little fight over Haruna. I told her that Haruna is in love with her. And she offered to help. She told me to bring Haruna in that practice room exactly at 11 o’clock. I didn’t know what she was up to. But I had to take that chance, so I did it.”
“So, all of this was Takamina’s idea.”
“Yep.”
“I’m going to kill her….”
“Huh, Miichan….. Moshi – Moshi? Ah, she hang up. “
What the hell is she thinking? What is all of this? You are really and idiot. You don’t know what you did. Do you know how hurts is Atsuko right now?
/////////////////////////////////////////////////////
“I love her. Do you think she will love me back?”
“I’m sure she will. I saw the way she looked at you. “
“But she is with her.”
“ I know she is. But I don’t think she loves her. I think she is just confused.”
“Maybe. But I’m too scared to tell her what I feel.”
“No, you have to tell her. But first wait 2 days…”
“Why 2 days…?”
“You will see. After 2 days she will be all yours.”

TBC
Yey, he fifth chapter is up. Hope you like it. And don't hate me.. :P
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: douya08 on May 01, 2012, 06:44:01 PM
first, I just want to say: so many Atsumina's fics lately~~  :mon lovelaff:

*ehm* BTT,
I wonder the second paragraph is from Takamina's POV..  :hehehe:
but I still don't understand why she keep lying to herself when she love Acchan so much..? even Tomochin knows about that :?

can't wait for the next chapter~
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: Haruko on May 01, 2012, 09:32:29 PM
Eh?!?! you updated so fast.. love it!! :D

but but eh?!?! what happend there... takamina you are so... kind damn it!! you are so kind person that only thing in the others people hapinnes instand of yours.. but you make suffer atsuko.. and she is gonna fly to bulgaria!! why are you gonna do..

so many questions.... i understand the dresroom scene.. BUT takamina´s house scene.. nobody know that their gonna be together and acchan finally arrive there but she doesnt know nothing.. so.. awwww im thinking so much...

ok.. Im wait for the next chapter..
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: Nakamii on May 01, 2012, 11:47:34 PM
You're such a Good Author... :thumbsup You update so fast...
Hm, TakaTomo is about to Broken up already? Yay! AtsuMina's Relationship will Developing sooner or later! XD
Takamina, You shouldn't lying to your self, eh... I know... You'll be Happy with Atsuko instead of Tomochin... That's obvious... LOL. :peace:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: Pwoper48 on May 02, 2012, 02:57:04 AM
Wow, that was fast :twothumbs i've read the fourth chapter yesterday, and this chapter come 1 day after

Well, the progress is so fast. And i can feel that atsumina will come after this..

I'm looking forward for the next chapter :lol:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: bochang on May 02, 2012, 04:34:39 AM
What what what??!!
So TakaTomo was fake?????
Takamina just use Tomochin to help Yuko?!
*angry*
I don't mind if Taka Tomo was fake. But only if TakaTomo agreed to help Yuko!! TT.TT
My Tomochin TT.TT
And Acchan also hurt because of Takamina
...
Takamina why you're soooooo..
Argh..
바보..

And thx for the update. :p
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER FIVE
Post by: TakaminaBG on May 02, 2012, 01:13:59 PM
                                                                           CHAPTER  SIX
I open the magazine and see her in those cute red bikini. She looks so sexy. Her white beautiful legs. Her cute flat belly. And those breats. I want to squeeze them. I want to touch her whole body.
“What are you looking?”
“Oh.. Y – You scared me. No it’s nothing..”
“Show me!”
“No!”
“Oh, why are you looking at her?”
“I’m just…” I can’t think of any excuse. I’m so sorry..
“Why do you keep lying  to yourself..” said half – shouting, half – crying.
“What are you talking about?”
“You love her. And you want to be with her.”
“No. I was j…..”
“Just admit it. From the beginning you we were not meant to be. “
“I………..”
Tomochin’s POV
I just stand there and I can’t get my eyes of her. She is just so sexy and beautiful. Despite her childish behavior. We are so close but yet so distant. She thinks I’m her friend. And I am… but I want to be more than her friend. She is always playing around and kissing me. And every time she does it I feel like I’m melting inside. But at the same time it hurts me because I know she is just playing with me. But I’m so in love with this girl. She always plays around with other girls. She is kissing them all the time and every time I see her to it I get so jealous. I just can’t help it. I want her to kiss me. And after I see her kissing another girl I always start to act cold towards her. Then she gets so sad. She must hate me.  Kasai Tomomi, why can’t you love me back?
Tomo~mi’s OPV
I love you… Every magazine I open you are always in there. You have a perfect style. You are the fashion queen and I’m just your friend. I’m the cite girl who always acts childish. When they seem they always say: “Eroii..”. But all I want is to look beautiful for you. We are so close but yet so distant.  You always act so cold around me. Do you hate me. Am I a bother to you. Itano Tomomi, why can’t you love me back?
“Sae – chan?”
“Ah, Tomo~mi. What is it?”
“Can we talk in private?”
“Yeah, sure.”
“Well there is someone I like.”
“EH?! Are you kidding? Who is it?”
“It’s Tomochin”
“Tomochin? Did you confess?”
“No, not yet. I think she might reject me.”
“Why?”
“Well she always acts cold towards me. I think she hates me…”
“Are you kidding me? She doesn’t hate you. Have you seen the way she lookes at you? She is a different person when she is with you. I can see that.”
“I’m not sure..”
“Well I am. Are you going to confess?”
“Yeah, I’ll confess tonight.”
“That was what I wanted to hear. Now go”
“Before that I want to aks for you help…”
“Ok. I’ll do anything..”
Tomochin’s POV
I just got a message from Kasai. I’m so happy.
“Hey, Tomochin… Can we meet tonight….?”
She wants to meet me. It’s been a while since we went out. We are very busy with our schedules.
“Ok. Can we meet around 9 o’clock?”
“Ok. Meet me at my house. You have keys so….”
I just got over with my photo shoot for my 3-rd single “To you after 10 years”.  It’s already 9 o’clock and I’m late. I took a cab and now I’m in front of her apartment. Well she told me to use the keys, so…. I took the keys and opened the door slowly. The living is dark. She is probably in her bedroom. I hope she is not asleep. I slowly walk to the door  and I see the lights are on. I think she is awake.
“Tomo~mi”
I couldn’t believe my eyes. She did it again. She is kissing a girl again. But this time is different. They are kissing with passion. I want to run away. Why is she doing this to me.
“TOMOCHIN!!! WAIT!”
I ran away. I couldn’t stop. I ran and ran and ran until my feet started to hurt so bad that I couldn’t even walk anymore. I slipped and fell. It’s raining. It’s night and I’m scared and……. Alone.
“Tomochin?” a familiar voice approached me.
“Takamina….”
“Tomochin, are you ok?”
“I…… I……” I bursted in tears. But she then hugged me and with a warm voice said: “It’s ok. I’m here for you. I’ll always be here for you….”. I let her embarrass me. I hug her back. I hug her so tight. I don’t want to let this girl. Then I break the hug and look right into her eyes. She blushed and looked away. I slowly lean down and seal her lips. She is surprised but she responds it.
“Takamina…”
“I know. You are confused but if by doing this I can help you. Then I will. Besides by doing this I might figure out what I feel for Atsuko..”
“I’m sorry…” Then we kiss again and again ……

TBC
We are almost there... :P
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: kahem on May 02, 2012, 01:33:30 PM
Tomotomo!!! YAY!!!
People relationships are so complicate lol
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: Nakamii on May 02, 2012, 03:39:17 PM
OMG, A Misunderstanding? Why can't you people get together already? like KojiYuu... :bleed eyes:
Tomo~MI! You wanna confessed, but yet you kissed other girl? Who's that girl, anyway? Sae? LOL. But, I'm kinda glad TomoTomo appeared... :)2
Next is AtsuMina's turn~ I can't wait to see My AtsuMina get together~ :cathappy:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: saeyukilover on May 02, 2012, 08:27:42 PM
What Takatomo ohhhh!! Now I know why takamina reject acchan.. :twisted:   

 :on GJ: :usagiii: :on GJ: nOw now :smhid continue updating and fix atsumina :)

:)
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: Pwoper48 on May 03, 2012, 04:05:12 AM
OMG! you update so fast! And.... The story become more complicated. But I like it :twothumbs

So, that's Takamina's reason.....  :? Hum, I'm curious how can Takamina and Acchan will get together

Tomo~! you want to confess but you kiss other girl?  :banghead:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: bochang on May 03, 2012, 08:08:34 AM
eeeeeeehhhhh.....

i can't process the information.
Terminate the program..
Re-boot in.. 3.. 2.. 1...


Still can't process the information..
LOL
So.. the relationship is..
AtsuMina.. KojiYuu.. and TomoTomo? Right?
but it's so hella complicated! LOL
girls.. always make a simple matters into a complicated one.. LOL

and thx for the update! :D
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SIX
Post by: TakaminaBG on May 03, 2012, 09:33:37 PM
                                                                        CHAPTER SEVEN
Flashback
 I open the magazine and see her in those cute red bikini. She looks so sexy. Her white beautiful legs. Her cute flat belly. And those breats. I want to squeeze them. I want to touch her whole body.
“What are you looking?”
“Oh.. Y – You scared me. No it’s nothing..”
“Show me!”
“No!”
“Oh, why are you looking at her?”
“I’m just…” I can’t think of any excuse. I’m so sorry..
“Why do you keep lying  to yourself..” said half – shouting, half – crying.
“What are you talking about?”
“You love her. And you want to be with her.”
“No. I was j…..”
“Just admit it. From the beginning you we were not meant to be. “
“I………..”
“I’m not the person you love, Minami. It’s her..”
“No, I do love you….”
“Yeah I know, but as a friend. You love her for real. And you know I’m right..”
“Tomochin… I love her so much.. I realize it now, but it’s too late now she hates me…”
“No she doesn’t. I know it. I’m her friend too. I’ll talk to her..”
“But…”
“No, but’s.”
Miichan’s POV
Is she crazy?? I don’t understand her. What is she thinking. Does she really not love, Acchan? I have to talk to that chibi. NOW!
“TAKAMINA!”
“M – Miichan? What is it?”
“Come with me!”
“But we are in the middle of practice.”
“Just come!!”
“What are you thinking?”
“What are talking about?”
“Yuko, told me everything.”
“Oh…”
“You are not really in love with Tomochin, are you?”
“No, I do, but..”
“But only as a friend.”
“Yes.”
“Ok, then I’ll ask you this. Do you love, Acchan?”
“I don’t know…”
“You don’t know?”
“……”
“Fine, then I’ll tell you this. Me and Acchan are dating.”
“Eh?”
“Yeah, we are dating, but that is ok with you right? You don’t love her so…”
“…..”
Takamina’s POV
I freezed. I don’t know what just happened. Miichan and Atsuko are dating????? I can’t believe it. She said she loves me. My heart is in pane. My feet are shaking. I just fell. The ground is so cold, just like me. What have I done? Now I know. I DO NOT want to lose this girl. Atsuko!
Tomomi’s POV
 “Tomochin?”
“Don’t!”
“Please. I want to talk to you.”
“What is it? Why don’t you go and kiss another girl?”
“No. Let me explain.”
“What is there to explain? You kissed another girl. And that girl WAS NOT me…”
“Eh..”
“Just leave me alone..”
“No, I can’t leave alone the girl I love..”
“Hmmmm… EH?!”
“I love you, Itano Tomomi.” Then I lean and kiss her on the lips. She responds it. She really loves me.
“If you love me, then why did you kiss, Sae that night when we were supposed to meet?”
“I….”
“No excuse, huh?
“No… I kissed her because I didn’t want to disappoint you…” I blushed like crazy. My heart beats so fast.
“You.. What are you saying?”
“I love you and I wanted to become a good kisser. Not like the other kisses. A kiss with passion..” my checks are so red. I feel like I’m burning inside.
“Are you an idiot. You could never disappoint me. I love you.”
“I love you too..”
Then we kiss. Her lips are so soft. It’s definitely not like the kisses with the other girls. I could kiss this lips forever. I move my head to the right. I want to kiss her with passion. Then she slowly opens her mouth and asking for permission to kiss me with passion. I grand her permission and our tongues start to battle in our mouth’s. I’m surprised. She is a real good kisser. But then she suddenly breaks the kiss and looks right in my eyes..
“Let’s go to your house.”
“Eh, why?”
“So we could do what I’ve wanted like.. forever..”
TBC
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SEVEN
Post by: Nakamii on May 03, 2012, 11:50:56 PM
Once again, You solved another Couple Problem... TomoTomo! :P
Miichan, Why you have to say that You and Acchan are Dating? Or, Miichan just want to make Takamina Jealous? :smhid
Let's see, Takamina... You'll feel the same as Acchan felt when you broke her heart too... But, I want Takamina confessed to Acchan... :peace:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SEVEN
Post by: Haruko on May 04, 2012, 05:09:15 AM
Takaboy now for your bad manners.. need to fix it... fight for your wifey and make her happy ok?
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SEVEN
Post by: kahem on May 06, 2012, 02:22:02 AM
YAY Tomotomo!!!!!
Miichan made her move aye!
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SEVEN
Post by: saeyukilover on May 11, 2012, 08:00:24 PM
and that's done for tomoto now :scolding: start Writing and fix my atsumina pretty please  :bow:

:)
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER SEVEN
Post by: TakaminaBG on May 12, 2012, 10:08:14 PM
Chapter EIGHT FINAL
Takamina’s POV
I can’t believe they are dating. She said she loves me but after just 5 days she started to date Miichan. I don’t understand. She said she loves me and almost raped me. Why is she doing this? There must be some kind of an explanation. Are they really dating? I have to talk to her. I will make her fall in love with me all over again..
“Takamina?”
“Ah, Yuko. Hi.”
“Can we talk?”
“Yeah, sure. What is it?”
“Me and Haruna are dating.”
“Really. That is great.”
“Yeah, and it’s all thanks to you.”
“No. It’s all thanks to your love.”
“Yeah and thanks to your help. Are you still with Tomochin?”
“No, we broke up..”
“Why?”
“Because I realized I love her only as a friend.”
“Yeah I know it.”
“How do you know it?”
“Because you are in love with Acchan. Am I wrong?”
“No. You are not wrong.”
“Then tell her. Tell her how you feel.”
“It’s too late know, Yuko.”
“Why?”
“She is with someone else.”
“What? Who?”
“Miichan…”
“What? Who told you that?”
“She did.”
“Oh…. So that is her plan..”
“Eh?”
“We all want to help you.”
”How?”
“We will get you two to talk in private.”
“I don’t think she would want to talk with me. Or see me.”
“I know, but I have a plan.”
“What plan?”
“Be at Acchan’s house tonight.”
“You want me to break into her house?”
“Yeah, idiot. You have keys right?”
“Yeah…”
“Ok, it’s decided.”
Acchan’s POV
Tonight is my last night in Tokyo. Tomorrow I leave for Bulgaria. I guess it’s too late. I lost her forever. She is qwith her know and there is nothing I can do. I finished recording my second single and now I’m heading home. I’m so tired. I want to cry but I don’t want to worry the staff. I took a cab and know I’m standing in front of my apartment. I open the door and light the lights on. And I saw a figure standing in front of me. I can’t believe my eyes. It’s her, the girl I love. She has a serious look on her face. What is going on here?
“Atsuko.”
“What are you doing here, Minami?”
“I wanted to talk to you..”
“Oh, so now you want to talk to me. You avoided me right?”
“Yeah, I’m sorry..”
“Does she know you are here?”
“Who?”
“Your girlfriend..”
“No..”
“You should’ve told her. I don’t want her to get the wrong idea.”
“There is no need to tell her..” She look sad. Why?
“We broke up..”
“Heee, is that so? Please can you go, I am tired..”
“No.”
“Huh?”
“I told you I want to talk to you and I’m not going until you hear what I have to say.”
“Fine, can you make it fast? What is it?”
She starts to talk and I listen to her carefully. I want to know what she has to say. I sat on the couch and she sat next to me. She holds my hand tightly. Why is she holding my hand?
“First I want to ask you something.” She said with a worried face.
“Are you and Miichan dating?”
“What?!? No! You told you that?”
“She did.”
“Why the hell did she tell you this?”
“She probably wanted to make me jealous..”
“Like that can happen. You made it clear that you don’t feel the same. I pull my hand aaway but she grabs it again.
“Do you know the reason I started dating, Tomochin?”
“No. And I don’t want to know…”
“I wanted to know what my true feelings for you are. And she was hear broken, and it just happened. But it help me realize. The person who I love it’s not her. That night when you confessed to me I didn’t know how to respond to you. I didn’t know my feelings towards you were, so I said I liked someone else, but that was a lie. And what you did after that. It took me by surprise but to tell you the truth I liked it.” She blushed like crazy, but WAIT. WHAT?
“You… Then why didn’t you just tell me. I would’ve wait for you. Until you know how you felt.”
“I don’t know. Probably because I’m an idiot. Do you still love me?”
“Of course I still love you, Minami.  I can’t stop loving you.”
“I’m happy..”
“Why?”
“Because the person I love is you, Atsuko.”
“Eh? Don’t joke around.”
“I’m not joking. I love you.” She starts to move closer and our lips touched. It’s a smooth and soft kiss. She break the kiss and looks into my eyes..
“I love you, Atsuko. I want to be with you forever.”
“I love you too, Minami. I love you so much..” Then I lean down and kiss her this time with passion. I feel she is responding the kiss. And the kiss becomes wild. I tilt my head to the right. I suck her upper lip then her lower lip and slowly open my mouth and I lick her lips. They are so soft. My tongue is asking for permission to enter. She grand’s permission and out tongue meet. They star to dance and play around. She sucks my tongue and I let a moan. She smirked. I feel dizzy. I still can’t believe this is happening. She pulls me back and she is on top of me while we are still kissing. I warp my arm around her neck. Her hands start to travel around my body. She kisses my chin and moves down to my neck. She sucks and lick it, kiss it. She slips her hand up my shirt and know her hand is touching my stomach while she kisses me with passion. She break the kiss and looks in my eyes and says:
“Your skin is so soft. You look so beautiful, Atsuko”
Her hand starts to move up until she reached her goal meanwhile her other free hand slid down my pants. A tear rolled down my cheek. She then stopped all of her movements.
“What wrong? Why are crying?”
“I’m happy, Minami. I’m so happy. I could die right now.”
“No, don’t. I need you in my life. I can’t leave without you.”
“I love you, Minami”
“I love you too. Always will..”
Then we kiss again and again. The night is going to be long and I don’t want it to end.

I'm sorry I'm late guys Here it is the Final. Hope you like it. And sorry that the "you know what scene" is unfinished but I don't want the admin to move it to the perv section....... again so. Hope you like it.
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: hara on May 12, 2012, 11:52:50 PM
Finally, it's update !! 
and Finally, Takamina with Acchan..   :wub:
i'm so happy like crazy~ *lol*

Thanks for your story..  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Sydney W on May 13, 2012, 03:03:11 AM
They get together at the end. HaPpY ending. ^.^
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Haruko on May 13, 2012, 04:17:35 AM
YEAH!! ATsumina... :D.. meybe you can do a special for the perv section  :twisted:

thanx for this fic
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Pwoper48 on May 13, 2012, 07:33:38 AM
Yeyeye Happy Ending. Me Gusta Happy Ending :lol:

It's good to see Atsumina together again~ :wub:

And then Acchan can leave to Bulgaria peacefully :twothumbs
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: kahem on May 13, 2012, 09:34:01 AM
Great end! Hehehe Takamina is really activ here ^^
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: XD_Monster_XD on May 13, 2012, 01:16:53 PM
That was an awesome series :wub:
I hope you write more from now on :wub:
(I know ur Tumblr & S48 usernames =p)
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Yagami.Rai on May 13, 2012, 03:35:37 PM
Yeah~~ Happy Ending~ ^^
Glad that Takamina realize her true feeling and didn't give up on Acchan! ^^
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Keisthename on June 14, 2012, 05:08:15 PM
OMG! This is really nice although the whole story was a bit complicated.
I can't imagine TakaMina kissing other girl than Acchan.. it's like she kissed other girls and turned to Acchan as not that clean anymore. wahahah lol
Sorry but that was my real reaction towards this.. but all in all your story was really greaaaat~~ <3  :thumbup
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: miayaka on June 14, 2012, 05:24:18 PM
Happy together atsumina~~ :heart:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 06, 2013, 04:42:42 AM
I was kinda confuse at chapter 6 but got it once I did some thinking lol but overall suge!!!!  :farofflook:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Takahashi Atsuko on September 27, 2013, 07:18:23 PM
It's the second time i read this fanfic and i love it!
Thank you for finish it  :lol:
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: cisda83 on September 27, 2013, 09:37:44 PM
Oh... Came across this story...

And it's finished already...

I enjoyed reading it..

Thank you for the interesting story...

Atsumina together at last...

Can't wait to see your other creations

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Mina on October 22, 2013, 08:01:51 AM
Congratulations for the fanfic, have just read. I hope he/she makes more fanfiction atsumina.
Title: Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER EIGHT FINAL
Post by: Dianalrs on April 04, 2015, 09:02:32 PM
Love it!
Really do!
Great story  :wub:  :twothumbs  :heart: