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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #80 on: October 30, 2013, 11:37:35 AM »
parte 5

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #81 on: October 30, 2013, 12:09:23 PM »
Wanted
Chapter 3 and 4

Hi (:
I love this fan fiction of yours..  :heart:
It's very interesting...  :deco:
I hope it's WMatsui and MaYuki pairing...

Anyway, Rena's character here is unique,
she's so bitch but smart.. :twisted:
I also laughed when Rena and Jurina is
fighting over the damn guitar...  :inlove:
I love this WMatsui moments...  :wub:

MAYuki moments is kind a sad...
Yuki is just playing with Mayu's heart...
Poor Mayuyu...

I also curious what's the past of
Acchan,Yuko,Sayaka,Sae,Rena and Yuki..
I hope takamin's team can catch Acchan's
group just once.

Please update soon...
Thank You  :deco:




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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #82 on: October 30, 2013, 12:53:05 PM »
hello,it's my first time commenting in your Fanfic
i  already read all your Fic but this is the first time i commenting it

the plot is intesting
the police and the thief
but this type of story never end up happy
there were always a victims from both sides or one...

i sense it from yuko past (whatever her past but it seem hurt her so much)
and from the mayuki fake couple, yeah yuki is a spy,like the others said,yuki played with mayu,it never end well if mayu know it,
if i was mayu, i never forgive yuki...but love is like a magic right?even you got hurt you keep crazily in love and can lead you to do something unreasonable...
just hope mayu's gonna fine~
as for yuki i really hope she loved mayu back
is this not fair for sae?well i'm not saeyuki shipper but in this kind situation i can't help to support mayuki LOL

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wmatsui hmmm,will rena give her name to jurina? it's their 3rd meeting LOL
wonder if the 4th meeting is in chaos situation LOL
rena seem enjoying jurina presence too
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can't wait to read the next update until it end




thank for the update
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #83 on: October 30, 2013, 01:14:27 PM »
I so want to know what will happen next... :banghead: :banghead: Update!! :drool:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #84 on: October 30, 2013, 05:31:20 PM »
@edogawa4869 : Last week.. you asked SaeYuki moment to me, and I already wrote it. I hope you like it.  :)

like it?

c'mon... u gotta be kidding me..  :smh

I LOVE IT ....  :luvluv1:

thank you so much...  :farofflook:

keep going author-san..  :twothumbs

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #85 on: October 31, 2013, 05:53:29 PM »
I got to say this. I feel feel terrible for mayuyu.. :panic:
So yuki with sae huh??? :doh:
Waiting for next update ^-^  :cow:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #86 on: October 31, 2013, 09:12:29 PM »
@BbSis " Granny.....  Hi.  :D

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Saeyuki was rather cute~ nothing against the couple, but I prefer saeyaka :p I just hope that Sae don't end up heartbroken that badly... considering her behavior...

What do you mean about Sae behavior?  :P

Ano... I never wrote SaeYaka before. Because both of them so tomboyish, I kinda confuse to write them. I think that I need your advice again. :p

I only saw your reply now, sorry ><

What I mean is that when Sae was with Yuki she was super jealous, and when they had their intimate moment, that was an atittude of a possessive person. Even when Rena said that about Yuki, that reaction of hers was really something. I dont know, Yuki have a past 'thing' that Sae dont like and that make her act like a possessive person.

Sayaka is not that tomboyish. She does sports, sometimes she wears sports clothes but she is very feminine ;)

Feel free to ask anything you want^^

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #87 on: November 02, 2013, 04:22:08 AM »


PART 5

= WMatsui : 3rd Meeting =

Rena woke up from that bench. It sounds not far from here. She tried to looking for that voice.

She turned her head to her left because she heard that voice came from there. She stood up and walked slowly. Rena saw someone’s foot seen behind a tree. Ah, maybe that people is the one who singing.

Rena walked closer, she saw that person from behind. That person just sat on the ground. She didn’t know exactly about the reason why she want to see that person closer.

Maybe she’s a little bit envy to that person because that person can play it really well. Even though she already tried to learn to play her guitar in these past weeks, she still can’t do it properly.

She feels annoyed to herself because usually she can learn everything within 2 days. But now, when it comes to music… she can’t do anything. So frustrating!

The more closer she walked to that person, that voice became more and more beautiful to be heard too.

After she close enough to that person, she stopped. A girl? How can a girl playing a guitar that well? Rena closed her eyes. She’s totally hypnotized by that voice and by that song. Now, she can hear it, clearly. She smiled.

It feels like she never really smile like this since a long ago. I never know before, that music can bring this kind of happy and peaceful feeling to me.

But suddenly… that peace gone. Her phone ringing, she gasped. She wanna pick her phone before that person can realize her presence. YUKO?! WHY THAT BRAT ALWAYS BOTHERING ME IN A WRONG TIME!!

Rena quickly rejected the call. But it’s too late…. that person stopped playing her guitar, she stood up and turned her head. That person shocked, but then she smiled.

Rena dumbfounded. NO…. WAY. HELL-to-the-NO! Rena wanna run away as soon as she can, but that person grabbed her hand first.

"I’ve told you before…. there will be a third meeting for us." She grinned. "Now… Can I know your name?"

"No. Now, let me go." Rena tried to release her hand.

Jurina glared at Rena, “but you’ve promised me.” She pouted.

Rena raised her right eyebrow. “I never promised anything to a stranger.”

Jurina sighed and then she release Rena’s hand. “Okay. I’m sure there will be our 4th meeting anyway.” She grinned. “You can tell your name later.”

Rena surprised because that girl easily release her, she thought there will be another fight between them.

Rena saw that girl turned and sat again on a same spot. Rena turned her body to the opposite side, she wanna go away. But… she heard Jurina singing again. Somehow…. that beautiful voice resist her to go away.

Rena sighed. What happened with my head?! She turned back. She walked closer to Jurina and sat beside her. Jurina didn’t bother her presence, she keep busy with her guitar.

"Rena."

Jurina stopped playing. “huh?”

"My name is Rena."

Jurina smiled. “Thank you, Rena-chan.”

"No need to thank you. Keep playing it, I need to calm my mind "

"This?" Jurina lifted her guitar.

Rena nodded. She took a lollipop from her pocket, she unwrapping it. She layed her body on the ground, she closed her eyes. “Continue what you did before. I won’t bothering you, let’s just say I’m not here.” She ate her lollipop.

Jurina smiled. She gazed a girl who laying in front of her. Raven hair… white skin… beautiful face…. her nose… those lips…. She’s so gorgeous.

Rena put her hands below her head, she use her hands to become her pillow. It makes her shirt lifted. Jurina can saw Rena’s perfect waist, she saw a piercing in Rena’s belly button. I didn’t want to say this but…. she’s sexy too.

Jurina turned her head, she looked back to her guitar. Before she singing again, she said… “But you’re here, with me… let’s be friend.”

Rena opened her eyes, she surprised with those warm words. But she can't said anything again, because Jurina already singing again. She didn’t want to bothering her.

Rena closed her eyes again and enjoy the song. She’s not really sure about… she’s enjoying the song or… enjoying Jurina’s voice. Both of it are so beautiful. Those peacefully feelings came back to her again.

After some minutes, without she realized it… she fell asleep.

Jurina stopped. She put her guitar. Did she fell asleep? She chuckled. She keep staring Rena.

*2 hours later*

Rena opened her eyes. She surprised because the park already too quiet. She looked at her watch. “10 PM?! What the hell that I’m doing here?”

She woke up. She saw a jacket fell from her body to the ground. Rena frowned. “Jurina’s?” She quickly pick that jacket and clean it. Is she already went home?? Why she leave me alone?! She can wake me up instead of covered me with her jacket. Did she wanna act like a hero? Urgh!

"Yes, it’s mine."

Rena shocked. She turned her head.

"Oh, you already woke up. It’s really cold out here, I can’t believe you can slept that comfortable. It even made me didn’t want to wake a Snow White." She giggled. "Here."

Rena saw Jurina offered a cup. She took it from Jurina’s hand.

"I bought a hot chocolate for you. Just in case you feel cold." She smiled.

"I thought you already went home and leave me here. I’m just thinking about to kill you later, on our 4th meeting." Rena said it in cold way.

Jurina laughed. “Can you stop trying to kill me?? I’m not that bad.” Jurina walked closer to Rena. She whispered. “Hmm… you know….. rather than trying to kill me, maybe ‘thank you’ is more proper this time.

Rena stepped back. “Don’t get too close to me.” She glared at Jurina.

Jurina shrugged, “okay.” She smirked. “I didn’t know that you can easily embarrassed like this, I mean…. your poker face is so cold all the time. Kinda scary.”

"I’m not shy!"

"Really?" Jurina took her phone from her pocket. "I hope you don’t shy after you see this picture."

Jurina showed her a picture from Jurina’s phone. Rena shocked. “You!!! Bastard!” Rena blushed. She tried to catch Jurina’s phone but Jurina's reaction was too fast. “Delete it!”

"See? You easily embarrassed." Jurina laughed. She gave her phone to Rena. "Here, you can delete it by yourself… you won’t trust me if I’m the one who do it."

Rena grabbed it. She saw that picture again. Now.. she can saw it more clearly. She saw herself fell asleep, her mouth opened widely with a lollipop still in it. Her face looks so idiot in that picture.

Jurina giggled. “I’m sorry. Your face was so funny, I can’t hold myself to not tease you.”

"I will delete it. Don’t ever try to do something like this again or-"

"Or you will kill me? I know." She smiled.

What happened to her brain?! Rena sighed. She looked at Jurina’s phone again and she deleted her picture.

"Ano….."

Rena lifted her head. “What?!”

"After you delete it, you can add you phone number in it too…. If you don’t mind." Jurina looked away.

Huh? Rena surprised.

"Ahh… forget it." Jurina pointed a grey car."That’s my car, you can gave my phone back there. I’m going first." She walked away and leave Rena.

Jurina opened her car and get in. She smacked her head. “What I’m just saying?! Asked her phone number?! Stupid.”

Jurina hit her head to the steering wheel over and over again.

She heard someone knocked her window, she opened it. Rena.

"What are you doing?" Rena looks confused.

"Nothing. I’m just feel dizzy." She gave Rena an awkward smile.

"So… your dizzy will gone if you hit your head? Well… next time if you feel dizzy again, you can call me to hit you. I’m glad to hit it REALLY hard." Rena laughed.

She laughed?! Jurina shocked. A laugh that she saw is not a ‘tease laugh’… it’s Rena’s ‘real laugh’.

"Here, your phone."

Jurina took it from Rena. “Thank you.”

"See you around." Rena turned back and then she walked to her own car.

Jurina opened her phone contact quickly. She type ‘rena’, but no result appeared. She sighed. “I know… She won’t gave her number to a stranger easily, I would do the same.”

Jurina started her engine. She’s about to drive, but her phone ringing. She got a message.

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Guitar girl,
I know that you’re very dumb to find it. Σ(゚∀´(┗┐ヽ(・∀・ )ノ
So, this is my number.
Rena.


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Jurina saw Rena’s contact name. “Lollipop girl?!” Jurina laughed out loud.

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Thank you, Rena-chan. O(≧∇≦)O

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Jurina smiled. She continue driving.

====================== 3 Days Later ======================

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To: Lollipop Girl

Ahayou Rena-chan. ヽ(^Д^)ノ

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From: Lollipop Girl

(`へ´*)ノ
What do you want?


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To: Lollipop Girl

Why you're so cold towards me all the time? (#+_+)

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From: Lollipop Girl

Well… I don’t have any reason to be nice towards you.
Give me 1 good reason.


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To: Lollipop Girl

I’ll give some very nice reasons Rena-chan. ←~(o `▽´ )oΨ
If you keep trying to kill me, I will print these pictures and hanging it on every door that I saw.

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From: Lollipop Girl

Whaaattt??!!! But I’ve delete it before!!!!!!
ლ(ಠ益ಠ)ლ

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To: Lollipop Girl

Oops… I took more than 1 picture.
I think you forgot to delete the other.
That’s not my fault after all. ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ

Oh, I forgot to tell you that I took a video too.


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From: Lollipop Girl

o(╥﹏╥)o
Fine!! I’ll be nice to you. Geez!


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To: Lollipop Girl

Good girl. (¬‿¬)
Rena-chan, let’s go to amusement park this weekend.
(*≧▽≦)ノシ))


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From: Lollipop Girl

Huft… what can I say?
You seems won’t accept ‘NO’ though.
\(-___________-;)/


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"Jurina….. Jurina…. Jurina!!"

Jurina lift up her head. “What is it, Mayu?” She smiled.

"Jurina, It’s been 10 times I called you. You smiling by yourself like a crazy."

Jurina looked at her phone again. Yeahh… I think I’m crazy. She smirked.

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= AtsuMina : First Heartbeat =

*FLASHBACK*

Takamina sat in front of her computer, she’s making some reports. But her concentration get a little disturbance. She glanced at 2 girl who sat across her table.

"Hey… both of you." Takamina pointed at Mayu and Yuki. "Are you both already dating?" She looked at them in suspicious way.

Jurina seems didn’t care about that ‘lovey dovey’ thing, Jurina’s eyes still focus to read a file of abduction case.

Mayu surprised because of Takamina’s sudden statement. She sliding her stool quickly and go away from Yuki’s desk. Mayu back to her own desk. “N-no!”

"Really? Because I always saw your face blushed like red pepper while you talk with Yuki." Takamina smirked.

Mayu’s eyes opened widely. She shook her head furiously. “N-no!! It’s not like that.” She’s start panicked.

Jurina put that file onto her desk. “Oh, and also…. the most tangible evidence…” She pointed at a clock. “4.47PM… These past weeks, you always skipped to watch your favorite anime. You never leaving this office before Yuki leave too.”

Mayu blushed so badly. “T-that’s not like that!! I’m just got bored about that anime! besides… I still can download it anytime!” She said it in incredible speed, she’s really panicked.

Yuki laughed. “No need to panic, Mayuyu. You’re so cute when you’re like that.” She stood and walked slowly to Mayu desk. She put her hand on Mayu’s shoulder. “Yes, we are officially dating now.”

Both of Takamina and Jurina shocked. Their mouth and eyes opened widely.

Mayu startled too. “Si-since when? I… I think we never talked about this before.”

Yuki smiled. She kissed Mayu’s forehead, “since now.” And then… Yuki kissed Mayu’s lips.

Jurina closed the curtain quickly before other staff can see them.

Takamina gasped. She stood up and quickly forced them to separate that kiss. “Wow! Whow… Don’t forget, we’re still in the office right now. No Sexual Harrasment!!”

Mayu and Yuki stopped and then they laughed together.

Mayu looked at Takamina, “gomenasai.” She grinned. Afterwards, She turned her head back to Yuki. She whispered. “Thank you. I love you.

Yuki just gave Mayu her smile without saying anything again.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

That scene keep repeated in Takamina’s head. How can Mayu can get Yuki easily?! Maybe not too easy, I didn’t know. But…. at least it easier than my case.

*FLASHBACK*

"Th-that’s not a joke… I… I li-like y-you." Takamina avoid Acchan’s eyes.

"Are you trying to tease me again? I won’t fall for it."

"Is it not clear enough for you? I said…. it’s not a joke!"

Acchan stood up, she grabbed a glass of water from a table. Without any warning, she spilling it to Takamina’s head. “I think you're still sleeping. Wake up! It’s not in your dream.”

Takamina is very angry about that action. Her head and her clothes became wet. “You don’t need to do that!”

Acchan put that glass back to the table. “I need to do that because you need to wake up from your daydreaming. Did you want me to be your girlfriend in that short time?! I even didn’t know you, and worse… I even hate you.”

Takamina sighed, “I like you… but it doesn’t mean I want you to became my lover. I mean… let’s be friend! That’s not a love confession or something!”

"Tsk." Acchan opened the door again. "I think I’ll just go home, you seems angry at me."

"Yes! Definitely yes!!"

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Takamina took her phone. She dial someone.

“Moshi moshi.”

"Maeda, it’s me… Takamina."

“I know. You forced me to added your name into my contact list, remember?”

Takamina didn’t answer Acchan’s question. “I’m so sorry about what happened last week.”

“No worries. It’s my fault too. Sorry for my cruel action. Let’s have dinner together.. my treat. It’s for my apology.”

Takamina surprised. “Dd-ddi-dinner? Really?! Am I misheard something?”

Acchan laughed. “No, you’re not, baka! 7 PM… I’ll pick you up at 7 PM. You’d better don’t late or I will cancel it.”

"T-tonight?" Takamina feels extremely nervous.

“Yup. See you later." Acchan ended the call.

Am I dreaming? Takamina slapped her own face. It’s hurt! Oh my God… I’m not dreaming!!!!

======================== 8 PM ========================

"What makes you so long?!" Acchan asked Takamina when she opened the door.

Takamina get in to Acchan’s car. “I’m sorry. Lucky me because you didn’t leave me.”

"Yeah… I’m about to leave you, but after I thinking about it again….. I thought you won’t make me wait  just because a simply reason." Acchan start to drive.

"You’re right, I have some troubles with my work. Thank you for waiting me."

"No problem… so stop saying ‘thank you’ and ‘sorry’."

Takamina smiled. “Okay.”

Long silence after that.

The situation in that car became more awkward, so Takamina thought she must say something. “C-can I turn on the radio?”

"Sure."

Takamina turn it on and raise the volume. The channel played a love song.. that’s very romantic and slow song. Both of them became extremely awkward than before.

Takamina wanna change the channel quickly, she pressed a random button. But suddenly the sound became extremely loud.

Acchan shocked, she braked her car quickly before she hit an old woman who crossing the street. “Hey!! What are you doing?? You almost make me hit someone!” She turn off the radio.

"Ss-sso-sorry.. I thought it’s a button to change the channel." She panicked too.

"Can you read it before you press it? It’s a button to turn on another speaker in my car!"

"Hontou ni gomenasai. Please don’t cancel our dinner." She pleaded and then she folded her hands. "Pleaseee."

Acchan sighed. “Okay.” She continue driving again.

They stopped in a restaurant. Acchan parked her car. They went in.

Takamina dumbfounded. “Are you always eat in a place like this???” She looked around that luxurious place.

"Not really." Acchan give Takamina a simple answer.

A waitress came and asked them to choose a table. Acchan pointed a table at the corner, the waitress nodded. They followed the waitress.

After they sat, the waitress smiled and gave them a menu list. Takamina’s eyes opened widely. She’s panicked.

Takamina slowly kick Acchan’s feet. She whispered. “I don’t know what the hell all of this meal. Their name looks weird for me.

Acchan rolled her eyes, “Just tell the waitress anything you want.”

Takamina looked at the waitress, she smiled. “Takoyaki, please.”

Acchan smacked her head. She looked at the waitress, that waitress looks confused. “Sorry, can you please leave us alone? We will call you if we already decide the meal.” Acchan said it in English.

The waitress nodded and leave them.

Acchan sighed. “Even if you totally have no idea about the menu, at least you read the cover. It’s French Restaurant, baka.”

"But, I really didn’t know what is this!" She looks desperate. "I’m so sorry.. for that shame."

Acchan shrugged. “It’s okay.”

Takamina gave Acchan a smirk. “Let’s go, I have a better place.” She stood up and then she grabbed Acchan’s hand.

"B-but.. hey!" Acchan didn’t have a choice, she just followed Takamina. "My car."

"Just leave it here, it’s not too far from here. Let’s just walking." Takamina smiled.

"Okay. Now you can let go of my hand."

"Ah, yeah. okay, you’re right." She release Acchan’s hand.

Awkward moment…. again.

"We’re here." Takamina pointed a place.

"This?! This is more like a slum rather than a restaurant."

"Don’t worry, you will have a different sight from behind this place."

Acchan followed Takamina carefully. Acchan frowned. She’s right, this place isn’t like what I imagined. It’s clean and no drunk people. She relieved.

"Tadaaa… this is my favorite place!"

Acchan dumbfounded. “Th-this… this is beautiful.” Acchan saw the dark river, the lights make it became so beautiful.

Takamina chuckled. “I know. I always came here when I need a place to relaxed my mind, feel the wind and saw the river… so relaxed. It’s an outdoor dining restaurant.”

Acchan looks excited, she run onto 1 table, “Come on. I wanna sit there. I think we can get the best view from there.”

Takamina smiled. She relieved because she can make Maeda enjoy their time together. “Let’s order something.”

Acchan nodded. ”Umm… Thank you… to bring me here.”

"I’ve told you that I’m more better than your first impression." She grinned and then she called a waitress.

*2 hours later*

"Hey Maeda, stop taking the pictures. Let’s go home, you can come back to this place anytime.."

Acchan grinned. “Okay. But….” She grabbed Takamina’s hand. “Before we go home, let’s take a picture together!!” Acchan looks excited.

Takamina surprised, she blushed. “W-well… y-ye-yeahh… o-okk-okay.”

Acchan asked help to a waitress to do it. After take some pictures, they decided to go home.

"Bakamina…. I’ve told you to bring my car here, now… thanks to you, we must walk back to that French Restaurant." Acchan rolled her eyes.

"Bakamina?! Hey, you can’t change my name like that!"

Acchan giggled. She’s not a bad person as I thought before. Altough she’s baka sometimes, but… she’s nice. It’s been a long time since I have a friend outside my team.

Acchan looked at Takamina who walked beside her. “Umm… Bakamina.”

"Stop calling me Bak-"

"Let’s be friends.." Acchan smiled.

Takamina looks confused. “I don’t understand.”

Acchan frowned. “I know you’re a baka girl… but I think my words are clear enough… Let’s-be-friends.”

"I know the meaning of that and I’m not stupid." She rolled her eyes.

Takamina explained. “I mean…. I don’t understand about… Usually, you’re so cold, gloomy, and harsh to me… you even said that you hate me.
But today, you became extremely nice towards me. If you do that to show your guilty, well… I accept your apology.
You can stop act like today. I still wanna be your friends even if you act like the first time we met.” She smiled.

I thought she’ll hate me after what I did to her last week. She smiled. ”I didn’t do it to get your forgiveness. I change because you’ve changed before. Usually, you always made me angry by doing something stupid to me.
But today…. you didn’t show me that. You act like a nice girl too.”

"Hey, I’m really a nice girl… it’s not just acting!"

Acchan giggled. “Well.. I’m a good girl too.” She grinned.

"So, sometimes… first impression is not always right."

Acchan nodded.

They continue walking. They knew that they almost arrive, because they can saw the restaurant’s roof. But…

"Hey!! Both of you, give your money to us!!"

They shocked because suddenly… they surrounded by 5 man.

"Come on… We won’t hurt you if you give it to us nicely!!" A men laughed.

Acchan whispered. “Baka!! I’ve told you to bring my car!!!

Don’t worry… everything is still under control." Takamina dragged Acchan to stand behind her, she didn’t want Acchan get hurt. I must protect her.

Acchan took her money from her wallet and she took her phone too. “Let’s just give our stuff, I’m afraid that they will hurt us.

Acchan wanna threw it to them, but Takamina held her hand. She looked at those man. “Hey, I’m police!!! Don’t mess up with me or tomorrow… you’ll dragged to the prison. I’ll forgive you once if you didn’t bothering us tonight.”

Acchan gasped.

Those man startled too. But, there’s a men.. “Liar!! Don’t try to trick us, show your badge!!!”

Takamina wanna took it from her pockets, but she didn’t find it. Sh*t!! I leave my badge and my gun in my office!! F*ck! ”I’m forgot to bring it.”

Those man laughed. “See? She’s lying!! Give your money now, or we promise to kill you without any pain.” A men smirked.

Acchan relieved because she thought that Takamina just saying that to threaten those man. “Just give it!!" Acchan still hiding behind Takamina.

Takamina shook her head.”Never.I’ll lose my pride as a sergeant if I surrender to these villains. I must protect Maeda too. Takamina walked slowly, she stopped until Acchan can touch the wall. “I’ll protect you, stay close to me. Keep hiding behind me.

Wait… wait… "Don’t do it, Takamina! Just give what they want!!"

They laughed. “Hey… fake police, you better hear your friend or…..” They took some baseball bat, “we will use this.” He smirked.

Takamina saw an iron stick on the ground, she took it. “I will give you this!” Takamina hit a men with that iron stick. The fight started.

Acchan looks worried because the situation became uncontrolled. Takamina got hit several times, but Takamina still tried to protect her from some hit and ended with hurting Takamina herself. Wh-what should I do?

Actually… Acchan didn’t afraid of them, she knew that she can easily defeat them. She’s just didn’t want Takamina knew too much about her.

"Maeda, run!! Call the police!"

"I can’t leave you alone!!" Acchan panicked.

Takamina got hit on her arm, she groaned in pain. ”Go!! Now!! I can’t hold them to lo-“

A hit ended in Takamina’s head, it’s a strong hit. Takamina fainted. Those man keep hitting Takamina’s body even if she’s already fainted.

"Stop!!!" Acchan yell at them. "If you don’t go right now, I guarantee that all of you can’t see a sun tomorrow!!" Acchan is so angry.

Those man laughed. “Just die with your friend!!” A men tried to hit Acchan’s stomach, she hold that men’s hand before he can hit her. She kick his ‘main part’. That men groaned.

The other man shocked, they want to attack Acchan. But Acchan suddenly took out her gun and pointed it to a men’s forehead. “Go, or I’ll blow up you and your useless brain.” That men looks afraid.

Another men laughed. “Don’t play with us!! It’s a fake gun…. you’ll end like your ‘fake police’ friend!!” He wanna kick Acchan.

Acchan got very angry because those man didn’t hear her warning. She took another gun from her pocket with another hand and finally…. she shot his left leg with that gun. No one can hear the sound because Maeda Team always using the silencer for their guns.

He groaned in pain, his leg bleeding.

Acchan glared at a men who still standing in front of her, “Do you still want to fight me and then you’ll die or…. you can go and bring your friend get out of my way!!” She put her gun into that men mouth, she’s ready to pulled the trigger.

That men lifted his hands, he looks surrender. They carried their friend who still bleeding and then they run away.

Acchan put her guns back to her handbag. She held Takamina’s body. “Baka!! You didn’t need to do that, I can protect myself. I’ve told you to give it to them… you didn’t listen me." She shed her tears.

Acchan looked at Takamina’s face and Takamina’s hands… all swollen. Her foot was bleeding but her injury didn’t looks too serious. Acchan carried her and brought her into Acchan’s car.

*Thump…Thump..Thump.Thump-Thump-Thump-Thump* Acchan felt her heart beating so fast because of Takamina…. for the first time. She smiled, a bitter smile.

================== TO BE CONTINUED =================

Sorry guys… this chapter is about WMatsui, AtsuMina, and a little part for MaYuki.

I’ve decided that ‘Takamina Team : Diversion’ will be put on next chapter. Sorry…  :kneelbow:

Spoiler for next chapter:

  • Takamina Team : Diversion
  • Shinyuu Trio and The Old Friend : Betrayer (Sae x Yuki x Mayu will be here too)
  • WMatsui and Atsumina moment will be added too.

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 4]
« Reply #88 on: November 02, 2013, 04:35:09 AM »
@BbSis : I will considering about Sae. :) Thank you for your advice and suggestion too.

@Wmatsui22 :
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Anyway, Rena's character here is unique,
she's so bitch but smart.. :twisted:

I agree with you about this  :lol:
Hmm... that guitar will help them to develop their relationship, so... don't hate the guitar.  :w00t:

About Maeda Team past story... don't worry. There will be a chapter who explain about it.

@kurogumi : Woww... thanks for your first comment.  :inlove: I hope there will be a 2nd, 3rd, 4th,......  XD
MaYuki fake couple is really hurt me too. I'll decided about them quickly (chapter 6.. maybe :p).

@edogawa4869 : I'm really glad that you love it. Thank you. But in the next chapter, something big will happened between them.  :cry:

@gek geki and @fausto : I already posted the 5th part, I hope you reading it too.  XD

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #89 on: November 02, 2013, 05:39:25 AM »
*steal Rena's lollipop and put it in mouth*
hmmm... good progress for Wmatsui... can't wait to see their friendship grows into love~ ♥
oh... Mayuki~~ but it just one sided love since Yuki still haven't love Mayu yet...
aaaandd Atsuminaaa! :D ♥ first heartbeat~ :) what will happen when Atsuko found out that Takamina is really a police...and vice versa... :O
sweet moments of them~ ♥
cant wait for the next chapter!  :twothumbs  :twothumbs
the betrayer!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #90 on: November 02, 2013, 06:18:42 AM »
updaaaateeee  :inlove: :inlove:

i dont really ship wmatsui, but i love wmatsui scene  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

and atsuminaaaaa  :luvluv1:
as expected from takamina, she will protect acchan with her life, good job takamina  :on GJ:

i hope takamina will be okay
i hope acchan will fall in love with takamina soon and goes to *censored* scene  :on bleed: :on bleed:

i hope you will update ASAP anak panti - san XD

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #91 on: November 02, 2013, 06:22:55 AM »
Nice update..  :twothumbs

Nice Juju for blackmailing Rena to go on a date with her..  :grin: :twothumbs

But, Rena finally warmed up to Jurina..

And Atsumina..

Acchan warmed up to Takamina too...

Poor Mayu.. :cry:

What will happen to WMatsui and Atsumina's relationship if Rena and Acchan found out that Juju and Takamina are police officer??

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon.. :bow:

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #92 on: November 02, 2013, 07:02:21 AM »
wmatsui scene was so funny LOL  :lol:

next week they had a date kyaaaaa~  :cow: good job jurina! make rena melt!

but you said the next update something big will happened between them ,who?? atsumina?wmatsui? or mayuki?  :cathappy:

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i pity mayuyu here  :banghead:
yuki was so mean,they officially couple but it's sad  :cry: , because i know yuki just faking it all
please make yuki loving mayu....loving her to the point she will be crazy if she lost her or not being around her,and can't life without her..... :bow:

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takamina was so stupid LOL she forgot her badge and her gun LOL LOL LOL  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
but it's safe her too,if acchan know takamina identity now,all their friendship will be built in fake like mayuki,
i know even right now atsumina and wmatsui are start being friendly but in the future they will be enemy,but they built their friendship at least in pure innocent,mean if they know the truth there is still a possibility to forgive,it's just destiny was so cruel.  :catglare:

rena very obedient to Jurina, could this be a sign in the future she will follow Jurina?
and decided to leave her old job and choose with Jurina? hope it LOL  :bow:  :cathappy:

But for mayuki, i don't know it's hard,they built their relationship with fake from the start,well just yuki,mayu is trully in love from the start,if she knowing it, i doubt she will forgive yukirin that easy,worse maybe she will take revenge...it will be dangerous for herself but she had pride right?
but let see...what gonna happend between them and we had sae too,she will protect yuki.  :sweatdrop:
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thank for the update
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #93 on: November 02, 2013, 07:14:54 AM »
I see big developments on WMatsui and Atsumina. :luvluv1:

Rena and Acchan are warming up on Jurina and Takamina. Thank you for the sweet moments. :twothumbs

I am really looking forward to the break up of Saeyuki. :mon evillaff:
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #94 on: November 02, 2013, 08:10:43 AM »
mayu is really love yuki huh? she even skiping her favorite anime kekeke
bad bad yuki
yuki made a mayu cyborg system change huhuhuhu,she like a virus
but if the virus is bad,the system gonna be broken soon and can't fix anymore,just delete it KHU KHU KHU (EVIL LAUGH)
NO!!! I'M SAD!!!
IT'S A CONFESSION OF LOVE THAT MAKE ME SAD THIS BADLY!! BECAUSE IS FAKE!!!
TO THINK HOW MAKE YUKI FALL IN LOVE WITH MAYU MAKE ME FRUSTRATED, HOW!!!? HOW COME THAT HAPPEN IF YUKI LOVE SOMEONE ELSE AND MAYU HOBBY IS NOT HELP TO MAKE YUKI FALL GWAAAAD!!
IS THERE SOMETHING THAT COULD TOUCH YUKI HEART?

RENA AND JURINA IS ON THE RIGHT WAY GOOD, I LOVE RENA SAMA

ATSUMINA ALMOST ALMOST







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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #95 on: November 02, 2013, 08:47:15 AM »
......................

it's sad indeed  :cry:

but let's face it  :lol:


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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #96 on: November 02, 2013, 09:05:10 AM »
Thanks for the udpate!! :)

Waah~ WMatsui moment is so sweet :wub:
Finally Rena can be nice to Jurina, hehe, thanks to those photos :lol:
Nice move Jurina! XD

But,, Mayuki,, :cry:
Yuki you shouldn't give hope to Mayuyu if you love Sae :angry:
Poor Mayu...
Eh, but it's okay~ Later you'll fall in love with Mayu~

Atsumina is so sweet too~  XD

Can't wait for the next update :twothumbs

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #97 on: November 02, 2013, 12:54:24 PM »
THAT WMATSUI  :inlove:

MY WMATSUI FEEL  :inlove:

AND THAT ATSUMINA  :inlove:


Update ASAP  :twothumbs
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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #98 on: November 02, 2013, 01:14:03 PM »
Jurina playing with a guitar~~~ I want to hear J's voice too  :cathappy: :deco:
Jurina was too sweet.   :wub: She could stop all her fights with Rena so easly   :grin:
even if Rena is not easy to deal with.  :nervous
It was funny reading Wmatsui's messages  :rofl: :rofl:
Jurina should blackmail Rena more hahahah   :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Poor Mayu   :O
I was really happy when Mayu said it to Yuki  :inlove:
but then  :doh: I remmebered that Yuki won't really reply to Mayu's love for her cause she was using her...  :(  :catglare:
Next chapter Will find out about it!? They are official yet Mayu will know the truth really fast!  :shocked
wait ?  :? Shinyuu Trio and The Old Friend??? is this aboout the mysterious person who betray the Maeda team in the past?  :?
or is Mayu or Sae are friends in the past?? NO way~~~  :roll:
I'm confused  :panic:
Thanks for the update I'm waiting for your next one~~~ :cathappy: :cathappy:  XD

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Re: [10 Shots] (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) - Wanted! [PART 5]
« Reply #99 on: November 02, 2013, 01:24:30 PM »
@chiqinna : actually... Jurina is the one who steal Rena's lollipop... I'll put it on next chapter. :D
Yup... WMatsui and Atsumina looks fine (so far), Mayuki dan SaeYuki are my problem now. LOL

@blakwhite : thanks for loving those pairing's scene. :D
Ahh... *that* scene? Just relax, I already prepared it.... Almira-san will help me in that scene. *spoiler*

@olive29 : It's already chapter 5 after all, they'll found out about it soon. :)
Let's see, they will betray their team, or..... they'll stick with their original team.

@kurogumi : ahh.... kurogumi-san.
Thanks for your comment. I'm really glad when I received your comment. XD
Something big will happened between Sae x Yuki x Mayu.
About Mayuki and SaeYuki.... I'll decide about them soon. :p

Takamina.... such a careless police.  :lol:

WMatsui.... hmm... you know, Rena is a 'bitch' person sometimes, she's really harsh and rude towards people. I'm not sure about it.. LOL

@Konoe : SaeYuki... about break-up... Sae is a 'possessive' girl, it isn't easy to make her break-up with Yuki.

@gek geki : that confession will be sweet if you didn't know about Yuki, right? :p
Mayu haven't think about it because she didn't know about Yuki, if she knows that Yuki loves Sae.... I'm sure that she'll burn all of her manga comics and threw her anime just to clinging with Yuki.  :lol:

@Terragen : sad? Who? Mayuki?

@White Hawk : WMatsui... Guitar and photo will help them clinging with each other. :P
Yuki want something from Mayu, so it makes Yuki must do it even if it will hurt someone that she love (Sae).

@FairyNyan : I love WMatsui too...  :inlove:

@mo-chan : I want to hear it too... LOL.
Rena can easier to deal with, because of Jurina's voice... thanks for that guitar. :P
I like those blackmails too... Jurina is a truly evil. :D

About Shinyuu Trio and the betrayer, this is could be called as a spoiler, but.... It's okay.
Shinyuu Trio will meet the betrayer (Maeda Team's old friend). They will confront her... and accidentally MaYuki will be there too while those things happened.

Thank for reading and your comment.  :mon fyeah:

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