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THE EXCHANGE - S2 CH.9 (4/05/2015)
« on: September 24, 2011, 07:55:47 PM »
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!!

hello everyone..well let me say that i was reading kuroi tenshi (i fell in love with that fic) and well this came to my head "is not the same but it's with angels and it's mayuki"
NOTE: all the comments of yuki about humans are part of the show don't feel offended okay! the first chapter is heavy but the next will get better :)

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why we have to take care of them? i'm tired of being like this! are they special or something? no,they're just patetic,rude,stupid things that were created to..i don't know but they're useless an they're always cousing us troubles!
"stop saying those things,someone can hear you!"
i don't care!!! (shouting)
"you know what you're doing it's not okay..why you hate them so bad?"
hate...they're not worth of my hate! (shouting)
"hello!you shouldn't think like that,you can hate a book by its cover!" the light says
who are you?
i think it's time for you to learn things! the light says
what are you talking about?
~~~~~~~~~~~~>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hmmm..why everything is so blurry!
what the hell..?
where am i?
what are this things conected to me?
the girl gets up of bed and disconect all the things that were conecting to her body
machines i saw them before but..this can't be real! where am i?
the girl looks at the window and see the traffic the cars,the people!
no way? this can't be..THIS IS EARTH! i'm here..
the girl sees a mirror and looks at her reflex
what..i'm a..i'm a...HUMAN!
the girl touches her lips,her nose,her eyes,her cheeks!
i'm a human!
she sits on the edge of the bed and accidentally presses a buttom..
inmediately a nurse appears..
kashiwagi san! kashiwagi san..you're up!
kashiwagi san?
the nurse calls the doctor..
the doctor arrives to the room and starts examinating her!
why you're touching me? let go! keep your dirty human hands off me! the girl says mad
the nurse wraps her arms around the girl to keep her calm
let go! where are my wings? the girl shouts
did you say wings? the doctor asks
"no" the girl says remembering she's a human too
well it seems like everything is okay,we already called your parents! the doctor says
you need to rest! the nurse says
i don't think she needs to rest.. i mean she's been in coma for 3 years! why you don't take look around the hospital?while wait for your parents!
okay! the girl says calmed
the girl gets out of the room and walks around the hospital..
so this is an hospital..smells awful..and i can feel death around what a boring place! the girl says while sits next to another girl who was covering her face to stop crying
hmmm..why are you crying? the girl asks
my..my..father..the girl says between sobs
what's with your father? the girl asks
why..god.. wants to.. taking.. him.. away..from.. me? the crying girl asks between sobs still covering her face
god? what god has to do with this? the girl asks pouting
well..he controls our lives! the girl answers
hahahha what stupid thought people have ! the girl says laughing
huh? why are you laughing?this is not time for that!
god doesn't have anything to do with this,maybe your dad deserves everything that's happening to him! the girl says laughing
what? the crying girl reacts while gets up and looks at the girl laughing
"you..you're nobady to say who desrves what!" the girl shouts and all the sudden she slaps the laughing girl
the girl was stunned "what's this feeling? why i'm feeling this? this hurts! i feel like my face is burning! who she think she is to touch me? "the girl thouhgt while gets up and looks at the crying girl in the eyes with a hate look
"now i can say that you deserve that!" tge crying girl says
the other girl puts her hand where the other slapped her and says "don't you ever touch me again!"
who's watanabe mayu? the doctor asks
me! the crying girl says rising her hand and more tears wanted to show
the other girl turns around and walks away (from the distance she could hear)
i'm sorry,we did everything we could! the doctor says
mayu knelts and covers her face to cry..
"maybe you deserve it too" the girl murmures while keeps walking without looking back
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
parents? seems like your parents doesn't really take care of you before that's why you tried to kill yourself and now that they have a second chance they're trying to make it up to you,trying to buy you with silly stuff..GREAT JOB PARENTS!
why i have to go the school,i'm not from here anyways!
i hate walking,give me back my wings! yuki says while looks up
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~At school~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
mayu chan we're really sorry! a girl says
we heard about your dad! a guy says
you can count on us if you need something! a girl says
thanks mayu says while sits..
good morning class! the teacher says
good morning teacher! the class answers
well let me tell today is a special day i have a surprise! the teacher says
mmmm..! some students says
what's going on? the teacher asks
another student tell the teacher what happen..
mayu chan i'm sorry! the teacher says
don't worry miss,why you don't tell us the surprise? mayj says faking a smile ( she doesn't really care,she just want to cry,shout,destroy everything around her)
well we have a new student..please come in!
the girl walks into the classroom.
"you" mayu murmures
my name is kashiwagi yuki,i hope we can be really good friends! she says smiling and looking fixedly to mayu
she's hot! a guy says
why she's looking to mayu chan like that! a girl murmures
it seems like a killer look but with a smile! another guy murmures
kashiwagi san there's an empty chair next to me! a guy says smiling
yuki ignore him and sitted next to mayu...
hello mayu chan! yuki says smiling extending her hand
(what are you planning you told me to not touch you ever again..) mayu thought
mayu extended her hand and yuki aqueeze it hard
the class started and really fast get to the lunch time
yuki san! a guy says and takes her by her shoulder
mayu took that as a sign and left the classroom
why you didn't sit next to me? that made me sad!
sorry about that! yuki says faking a smile
i'm ikki by the way
great!
i'm koji!
fantastic  but i have to go see you! yuki says
now where did she go? god men are so annoying.. yuki murmures while walks
stairs hmmm..yuki thought
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<
in all the schools that there's in japan,she has to go to this one! mayu shouts while scratches her head and looks to everyone from the terrace!
so here you are..what are you planning to suicide? yuki asks
what? mayu reacts
i was joking! yuki says
do i look like i want i joke? mayu asks irritated
yuki got closer to mayu and takes her by her uniform "you hit me...you owe me big time"
i don't owe you anything! now let me go,i have things to do! mayu says while tries to remove yuki's hands off her uniform
yeah like feel sorry for yourself! yuki says
why are you so cold?you can say that he deserve it but what about me? what about my mom?do i deserved lose both? am i that bad? do i deserve to be alone?mayu says crying
yuki let go her uniform and relized that she doesn't have those answers and also she doesn't know why mayu's pain maker her sad now
yuki turned around and walked away...
« Last Edit: November 29, 2017, 01:39:16 AM by sophcaro »

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 12:09:49 AM »
I hope they can get along soon~  :nervous


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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
« Reply #2 on: September 25, 2011, 10:54:00 PM »
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                2.GOOD ANGELS /FALLEN ANGELS 

(Saturday) 
why i couldn't answer her questions? lose,win,love,hate what are those things? why am i supposed to learn about this? yuki wonders while looks to her hands (she was sitting in a park wacthing the people pass)
it was true..an angel turned into a human! a guy says 
yuki looks back and sees a skinny,tall guy (nerd type)
who are you? yuki asks surprised by his word 
i dreamt about you! the guy says 
about me? are you crazy? 
i know who you are! the guy says 
i'm kashiwagi yuki! she says while gets up and extend her hand to greet him 
nice try but you're an angel! the guy says 
i'm an angel too and my mortal name is eiji ! the guy says 
you're an angel too! what are you doing here? 
i wanted to be a human! eiji says smiling 
why? yuki asks pouting 
because i wanted to feel! eiji says 
what? yuki asks 
hate,good,bad,happy,sad and all the sensations that comes with it even love! eiji answers while starts walking through the park 
yuki follows him and murmure "love"  what's so special about it? 
you'll see! eiji says and keeps walking 
hey,if you are a human..how did you know i was an angel?
well..i still have some of my abilities! eiji says smiling
abilities? yuki says
yes,we're not as strong as we were as angels but we're stronger than humans,we still have the perception of things.. an example is when you got up in that hospital ypu could smelled death right? eiji asks 
you're totally right! yuki says 
look! eiji says while points a mother with her son :
what are you crying? the mother asks while the kid is hugging her
because.. i.. fell..my knee hurts! the kid answers between sobs  
aww my baby..it's okay! the mother says while makes him sits next to her,wipes his tears and kisses his knee 
now do you feel better? the mother asks smiling with a sweet look
yes! the kid answers smiling and goes back to play
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 is not always like that! yuki says looking at her wrists 
yes,i know that! do you feel bad about it?eiji asks sad 
sort of! yuki answers 
you know i hated humans because they had all this! eiji says looking around 
i guess,it's not that bad seeing the sunset from here! yuki says serious
(phone ringing) 
oh sorry it's my mother,she worries! eiji says smiling 
it's okay go home,it's late anyways! yuki says 
see you,yuki chan! eiji says 
"love" yuki murmures while walks and remember everything that happened yesterday 
Help! a girl shouts
 shut up whore! a man shouts 
yuki stops walking,she was about to turn around but somehow the voice was familiar; she walked closer and what saw she couldn't believe that man has his hands on mayu! 
yuki clenched her fist (she couldn't believe it how many bad things has to happen to mayu for very firt time she was feeling anger ) 
yuki runs to the man dirction and tackled him (yuki is stronger than humans..in case you forgot it) the man was knock out..
mayu was shocked and crying.."yuki chan" 
all the sudden appeared 2 more men...
so the girls likes to play rude! one man says
let's play rude then! the other man says 
yuki smirked " why i always has to cross way with the garbage" 
what did you just say? one the man says while throws a punch 
yuki stops the punch with her left hand 
huh? the man say 
how? the other man says
yuki smirked again and use her right fistto punch him on his stomach 
ugggh! the man says before faint
what? the one man standing says afraid
you..should..go! yuki says smiling while kick the one on the floor and walks her way to the man standing 
i'm..really..mad..you should go! yuki says serious 
the man was about to run! "too late" yuki says while grabs him by his shirt from the back and throws him to the floor and kicks him till he faint 
mayu was there watching she couldn't believe "how a person like yuki could beat 3 to men like nothing" 
are you okay mayu chan? yuki asks while walks to her 
another man appeared behind mayu! 
mayu chan! yuki shouts and runs to them 
the man does on mayu and puts her to sleep 
huh? yuki says 
so a girl who can beat three guys.. that's exciting..for humans! the man says 
who are you? and what you did to mayu chan? yuki says 
i'm surprised! is she your friend? the guy asks pouting 
"no" yuki says 
i'm alexander an angel! the man says smiling while puts his arm around yuki's neck 
c'mon you're sister don't be shy! he says smilling 
sister! yuki repeats 
i must admit,i never thought that i'll find you this fast! he says smiling
why you wanted to find me? yuki asks
well..i want you by my side,i need angels like you..who hates human race to join me and help me lead A WORLD OF FALLEN ANGELS!! alexander says excited 
what is in the newspaper that i'm an angel? wait a minute
that means you want to destroy human race? yuki asks 
yup! alexander says smiling
i'm not interest! yuki says and removes alexander's arm off her 
if you're not with me,you're against me! alexander says serious 
i guess i am! yuki says while walks to mayu
alexander snaps his fingers and appear six fallen angels 
you can beat human but angels..i don't think so! alexander says smiling 
all yours guys! alexander says while leaves 
the six angels beat yuki at the same time..
don't be cowards come one by one and i'm sure i can take you down! yuki says while cleans blood on the corner of her mouth while gets up
leave to me,i'll finish her! the girl says 
the girl attacks fast,yuki can't barely see the punches but she feels the pain 
yuki was on the floor... breathing fast,she was trying to get up but she was a human so her body doesn't respond 
the girl puts her foot on yuki's stomach and starts pressing down hard 
ahhhhhh..! ahhhhhh..! yuki shouts 
don't be loud! the girl says 
yuki closes her eyes 
LET HER GO! mayu shouts while beats her with a stick 
 "mayu chan now i get it!" yuki's eyes opened 
you little bitch! the girl says while takes mayu by her neck and lift her up and throws her against the wall leaveing her unconsciousness 
WE'RE GUARDIAN ANGELS!!  yuki shouts while gives the girl a combo of punches till she knock her out
the other 5 angels were about to fight yuki but two of them were confused " that girl was about to sacrifice her own life just to save you!" the fallen angel says while looks at yuki
"we're guardian angels!" the other angel repeats 
what's wrong with you? leonard? atsuko? one of the fallen angels asks while looks at both fallen angels
we don't want to fight you? the other 3 fallen angels said serious 
i guess we have to fight for what we believe! atsuko says smiling
yuki take that girl and go away! leonard says smiling
..but i want to help you! yuki says sad
no,go away! atsuko says smiling 
you guys are not going to win! yuki says sad
thank you yuki..you show us the way "never forget  we're guardian angels" leonard and atsuko says smiling 
yuki touches her cheek with her fingers and feels a liquid she looks to her fingers and see that it looked like water 
"i guess these are the famous tears" yuki murmures and then goes to take mayu she putted mayu on her back and carried her to her home..
still feeling sad about the other angels that sacrifice for them
sorry i'll finish this later i gotta go to work! 

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
« Reply #3 on: September 26, 2011, 07:29:38 AM »
Is that Acchan?!

So curious about MaYuki~  XD

Please update soon~  :bow:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2011, 05:21:33 AM »
I missed so much =(

Well at least I'm here now, thanks for your updates!

I just have to love MaYuki!  :heart:

please update soon!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI,ATSUMINA,KOJIYUU)
« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2011, 08:36:57 PM »
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.GUARDIAN ANGELS?

well.. like you know me i just can't write about just one pair so i decided to put more...Hope you like it!!! xD

please let me help her! 
why? 
its my friend,maybe is alone and not knowing what to do
it's not that easy send an angel to earth it takes human life sacrifice!
i didn't know that! 
yes,everytime an angel goes down a sacrifice is made! 
please..
i can't i'm sorry we can't sacrifice more lives 
(sighs)
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minami please moves those boxes to the garage! minami's mom says 
why me? minami says 
because i'm busy! minami's mom replies 
ok,ok,stupid boxes! minami says growling while carries them to the garage 
i guess it's here where i have to put them! minami says while leaves them on an old desk...
for some reason the paint jars fell  from the shelf scaring the hell out of minami who hide behind an old chair..
what the hell? my garage is possesed! now that i think about this..this  is the scenary of every horror movie "a girl alone in her garage" minami thought 
c'mon minami let's see what it is..maybe is just the wind so don't freak out! minami says to herself
minami gets up and slowly walked to the shelf and she couldn't believe what she saw..
why is a girl in my garage? 
minami kneels and reaches to remove the girl hair from her face..
wow she's really pretty..wait a minute what with these wounds? did somebody hurt her? 
minami took the girl who was unconsciousness and carried her to her room..
her mother didn't notice because she was reading some papers! 
minami puts the good looking girl on her bed and then went to get some things to clean her wounds..
after cleaning a little her wounds minami decided to sleep on the floor (she didn't want to hurt the girl if they sleep together) 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yuki carried mayu to her house as usual her parents weren't at home..
sorry yuki san! yuki says to herself while walks upstairs 
she puts mayu on her bed and then notices that mayu has a cut on her forhead..
yuki slowly traces her fingers on mayu face (she couldn't deny mayu was pretty) 
why am i touching her? yuki thought then she turned red and walked to the bathroom,she washed her face and stare herself in the mirror.. 
"for very first time in my life i felt...i felt different.. i felt weak.. is this part of being human?" yuki thought while sees her fist..it's totally red and hurts 
yuki takes a washcloth  damps it and gets out of the bathroom she sits next to mayu on bed and starts cleaning her 
why did i save you? it's not like i care what happen with you? but of i didn't save you those men.. yuki though while squeezes the washcloth which make drops fall on mayu's face waking her up..
"yuki chan" mayu says while sits 
are you okay? yuki asks 
thank you! mayu says while hugs her and cries 
yuki blushes and clears her throat but then relaxed and was able to smell mayu's scent..(yuki didn't know what to say or do so just let her hug her even though she hates being touch by humans "i guess mayu is that special!)
you can stay here the night if you want! yuki says 
thank you yuki chan! mayu says still hugging yuki tighly
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
stop playing ikki we're going to hit a bush or something! 
don't worry nyan nyan he's a good driver! 
yeah right miichan! 
stop playing while you're driving! nyan nyan says 
what's that? stop stop! nyan nyan and miichan shouts 
we hit something! miichan says 
go and see what was! ikki says 
nyan nyan and miichan got off car and went what was
ikki turns on the car and drives away leaving the two alone and ...
you son of...! miichan shouts
what a jerk he hit her! nyan nyan says 
OMG! we hit a person a girl,we're killers! miichan says 
is she okay? nyan nyan asks 
no,nyan nyan we just hit her with a car! remember?miichan answers
what we should do? miichan says 
we have to take her to a hospital! nyan nyan says 
let's call an ambulance! miichan says while dials the number nervous 
the ambulance came..
miichan and nyan nyan explained everything
<In the hospital>
i'm going to stay here the night! nyan nyan says sitting next to the unconsciousness girl
okay you stay here and i'll come tomorrow! miichan says
okay see you tomorrow! nyan nyan says
see you tomorrow! miichan says 
nyan nyan stares at the girl and says "i'm sorry" while puts the palm of her hand on her cheek
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
did you heard what happened? 
what happened? 
i heard that leonard and atsuko are dead they revealed to those fallen angels but..they didn't make it 
you mean they're physically dead but spiritually they are alive right? 
i don't know they turned they back to humans but then regret..i just don't know 
those fallen angels!!! 
they're trying to dissappear humans race to avoid us to go down! 
yes,now i know we need humans if want to go down! 
hey you! do remmebered that you wanted go down? a light asks 
yes,totally! 
well you will go down! 
seriuosly?? both asks 
yes,so prepare but your mission is to watch the fallen angels and be our spy can you do that? the light asks 
of course,we need to take them down! 
okay go! 
<on earth> 
where am i? the girl murmures while opens her eyes then gets up of bed but she didn't notice she step on a hand 
OUCH!!  a girl says 
She removes her foot and look at the other suspiciously
who are you? the girl says 
i'm glad your up! the tiny girl says smiling 
i said who are you? the taller girl asks 
my name is takahashi minami my friends call me takamina! the tiny girl says while gets up 
takamina? the girl repeats 
what's your name? takamina asks 
i don't have a name! she says sad and starts walking 
where your going you're really hurt! takamina says 
i'm okay! she says while walks with her hand on her stomach 
stop! takamina says while wraps her arms from the back of the taller girl 
don't go! takamina murmures 
sorry! the sad girl says 
she tries to keep walking but takamina don't let her..
the girl feels dizzy and loses her balance making her fall on the tiny girl who was hugging her from behind (both were sitting on the floor) 
are you okay? takamina asks 
takamina you are tiny but strong! the girl says with a little smirk on her face 
i'm not that strong! takamina says blushing and scratching the back of her head
the girl let her body leans on takamina and fell sleep 
takamina didn't move,she will stay that way till the other wakes up! 
MEANWHILE 
yuki wakes up and notices that mayu has her arms round her body..
when this happen? i won't kill just because you had enough already! yuki thought 
good morning yuki chan! a sleepy mayu says while removes her arms off yuki's body and gets up 
yuki  sits on bed..
mayu crawls on bed to  yuki and then stare her 
what's wrong? yuki asks 
mayu puts the palm of her hand on yuki's cheek 
yuki blushes again but this time she turned her head 
mayu kisses her on her cheek
yuki is surprised by mayu's action she didn't react or said anything..
thank you yuki chan! mayu says while gets up and goes to pick up her clothes and puts it on..
yuki tured around and looks mayu walk away 
"she kissed me!" yuki murmures while rubs sofly where mayu kissed her 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•••••~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
nyan nyan was sleeping holding the hand of the unconsciousness girl when she fell a lighy squeeze she wakes up and sees the girl with her eyes open..
she couldn't believe "she was in a really bad hurt she shouldn't wake up yet" 
the girl looked at nyan nyan and smiled "you're a pretty human the girl says smiling" and hugs her not caring all the machines that were conecting to her body 
nyan nyan was in shock but didn't break the hug "somehow that girl was adorable with those dimples" 
nyan nyan hugs her back and cries,she was feeling terrible for the accident! 
miichan opens the door and see nyan nyan hugging the girl and the girl was awake..
nyan nyan told her to call the doctor 
the doctor arrived to the room fast and checked the girl
"unbelieveble this girl is completely healthy..is like the car never hit her" 
do you remember your name? the doctor says 
name! do i have a name?  the girl asks  smiling 
your name is oshima yuko! the nurse says 
oshima yuko..i like it! the girl says still smiling 
i think you need to rest! the doctor says
i want her! yuko says smiling and pointing to nyan nyan 
me?huh? nyan nyan reacts
according to the information,yuko is an orphan..she works in a clothing store! the nurse says 
you shoukd take care of her,is the last thing you could do! the doctor says to nyan nyan and miichan 
sorry times up,i gotta go yo work! 

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI)
« Reply #6 on: September 29, 2011, 09:27:34 PM »
Your stories are really awesome a tear appeared in my eye lol

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
« Reply #7 on: October 01, 2011, 08:07:35 AM »
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.5 GUARDIAN ANGELS?
                             (ATSUMINA'S FRAGMENT) 

"i..fell..i..fell sleep" the sleepy girl says while opens slowly her eyes and strecthes herself
hmm..what? the girl says when notices that she had been sleeping on the tiny girl
"takamina..takamina" the girl says while turns her head and shakes the tiny girl
"hmmm i'm up.." the tiny girl says with her eyes close
you're not up! the girl says while puts the palm of her hand on takamina's face rubbing it softly 
"humans surprise me..sometimes,you slept like this just to have me a little longer!" the girl says murmuring
(still rubbing takamina's face)
KNOCK! KNOCK! (takamina's door) 
(the girl stops rubbing takamina's face)
takamina opened her eyes when she heard the first one
minami i'll go to the office ok? minami's mom says 
yes,it's fine! takamina replies rubbing her eyes with her hands while the other girl stares her
there's food on the fridge i'll try to come early if i don't you know what to do lock the doors! 
ok..! takamina replies 
the girl gets up and looks throught the window while takamina hears her mother walking the stairs and then closing the front door..
hey..you..girl with no name,let's go to eat! takamina says 
eat? the girl replies 
takamina takes her hand and guides her to the kitchen 
the girl feels takamina's warm hand "even your hand is warm" the girl thought
what do you like? takamina asks
"mmm.. i'm not hungry" the girl answers 
so you want ramen! takamina says 
i said i'm not hungry! the girl replies rising her voice 
takamina puts on her shoes..
where are you going? the girl asks 
i'm going to get you your ramen! takamina answers smiling to the girl
i don't want it! the girl replies
 ok i'll hurry! takamina says while opens the door and closes it fast to not hear the objection of the girl
i..never..said that! is she crazy? she don't even know me! i can a thief maybe she's too naive to think bad things about humans! the girl thought while watches a picture of takamina with her mom..
where is her dad? the girl murmures
<15 mins later>
i'm back! takamina shouts while enters and goes right straight to the kitchen to set everything up
the girl sees takamina set the table,(she wanted to help but she didn't know how)
let's sit! takamina says happy 
the girl sits and sighs 
eat! takamina says smirking 
the girl tastes it and her face changed "this taste so good" 
"i know right!" takamina says 
the girl keeps eating 
what about if i give you a name? takamina says 
(Humans giving names to angels what am i your pet!) the girl thought 
i don't need a name! the girl says while gets up 
i didn't mean to make you upset! takamina says 
i have to go! the girl says 
no,don't go! takamina says while gets up
sorry but i have to..THANK YOU TAKAMINA! the girl says giving her a smile
takamin sitted and washed the girl while leaves
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<A week later>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
takamina was walking to her home after school but she felt someone is following her so she turns around
are you takahashi minami? a girl asks
yes,i'm! who are you? 
i'm akicha my friends call me aki! the girl says smiling
and? takamina says 
i'm friend of atsuko! aki says 
atsuko? who's atsuko? takamina says 
according to your neighbor he saw a girl with the same caracteristics of my friend getting out of your house! aki says smiling 
i don't have a friend called atsuko! takamina replies
aki sighs and says "you really want it in the bad way!"
huh? takamina reacts
aki pushes takamina to an alley and beats her till let her nock out then she carries her to somewhere else
what she we do now? yoshiro asks 
wait till atsuko wants to contac her or wait till she wants to wake up and beat her again till she'll tell where atsuko is! akicha says 
what's your obsession with atsuko? yoshiro asks
not obsession i hate her,i can't believe she's alive!a aki says while clenches her fist 
yes,you're right i feel kinda offended too but if the others find out! yoshiro says
you're not going to tell them besides there's another girl i want to beat! aki says while remembers yuki..
look,look! she's waking up! yoshiro says 
rise and shine takamina! aki says 
takamina was pretty bad damage..
now tell how can i get to atsuko? aki asks 
even if i knew i would never tell you! takamina shouts and spits her in her face making aki  mad and slaps her
bitch! aki says 
Ring! Ring! 
it's yoshiro's phone..
yes! really..it's perfect..okay thank you bye! you're not going to believe this! yoshiro says smiling 
what? aki asks ready to punch again to takamina
atsuko  is a couple streets from here "this girl was a waste of timw!" yoshiro says 
ha..this is my present to atsuko! aki says smiling 
let's go get her! yoshiro says 
<after 10 min Atsuko's location>
 atsuko was walking home from the supermarket but a man gets in her way
yoshiroo! atsuko says in shock 
 look the present we brought! yoshiro says pointing 
atsuko turns around and her supermarket's bags fell on the floor..
ta...ta..ka..mi..na! a sttutering atsuko says 
do you like it? akicha says with her hands on takamina's uniform and winking to atsuko 
hey it's a little damage but the intention is what counts!yoshiro says 
yes,she made us work..she didn't wanted to tell us where ypu where so..mmm well you're seeing what haplen next!aki says smiling
i'm not..i'm not.. atsuko says murmuring 
what did you say? yoshiro says
I'M NOT GOING TO FORGIVE YOU! atsuko shouts 
and beats yoshiro on his face 
HOW COULD YOU? atsuko shouts with tears in her eyes while kicks him 
aki throwed takamina aside and run after atsuko 
aki grabbed her from behind trying to stop her to move but atsuko was so mad that she didn't care she bent down and throwed akicha to the floor then she pick her up and starts punching her like there's no tomorrow 
HOW COULD YOU? I DON'T FORGIVE YOU! I DON'T FORGIVE YOU!  atsuko shouts while punches her 
but somehow there were another arms around her back..
don't do it! a girl murmures  
atsuko knows the voice,she would never forget that voice..
atsuko stopped and helped takamina to walk home leaving yoshiro and aki really mess up on the floor
<At home atsuko's home>
atsuko sitted takamina on her bed..
what persons huh? takamina says grinning 
minami i was so worried about you! atsuko says while hugs her tighly 
i'm ok! takamina says 
not you're not! look what they've done to you! atsuko says with the palm of her hand on takamina's cheek
i miised you! takamina says 
i missed you too! atsuko says 
don't leave again! takamina says
i won't! atsuko says pushing softly to takamina on bed
takamina closed her eyes and atsuko stares while she's sleeping..
"i won't leave you again..i'll stay here to protect you!"
WHY I DID IT ATSUMINA? i don't know it came to my mind like that! but don't worry working on kojiyuu and mayuki...

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
« Reply #8 on: October 05, 2011, 08:42:51 AM »
Wow mad Acchan is scaring lol I like the Takacchan interaction

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (MAYUKI) (ATSUMINA) (KOJIYUU)
« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2011, 12:31:06 PM »
                                   THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                               3.5 GUARDIAN ANGELS?
                             (KOJIYUU'S FRAGMENT) 

This could get any better? nyan nyan says then sighs
i don't think so! miichan says between laughs 
what's wrong nyan nyan? yuko asks smiling,eyes shinning and with her arms wrapped around nyan nyan's waist 
nyan nyan looks at yuko smiling with her shinny eyes  and sighs again..
the three girls waited for the elevator's doors to open..
let's go! nyan nyan says while tries to walk with a squirrel clinging on her through the hall
they stopped  in one door 
miichan pulled out some keys of her puse and opened the door of the dept..
home sweet home! nyan nyan says while breaks the hug and goes to sit on the couch.. once there she closed her eyes to relax
yuko smiled and went to sit on the couch next to nyan nyan..
what are those? yuko thought while her hands acts by itself and grabs nyan nyan breast
miichan covered her mouth to not laugh so hard
WTF? nyan nyan opened her eyes and sees yuko smiling grabbing her boobs "they're so soft" 
nyan nyan didn't thought it twice and slapped the little squirrel 
hey don't be mean with the freaky midget stalker! miichan says laughing
yuko putted the palm of her hand on the swollen cheek and started to pout 
you're not going to cry? nyan nyan asked 
yuko started crying like a baby..
shut her up! miichan shouts 
what should i do! nyan nyan shouts back 
i don't know! miichan shouts covering her ears 
yuko stop! stop! nyan nyan says while shakes her 
AHHH! NYAN NYAN SLAAPPEDDDD MEE! yuko shouts crying while gets up and runs around the dept
nyan nyan do something! miichan says
i just tried,you do something! nyan nyan says 
why me? you were the one who slapped her! miichan says
i didn't know she would act like this! nyan nyan answers
AHHHH NYAN NYAN SLAPPED ME! yuko shouts still running around the dept 
nyan nyan takes a deep breath and puts her arm in the way to stop yuko..when yuko stopped nyan nyan says "i'm sorry,i'm sorry!" then leaned and gave her a kiss on the swollen cheek 
yuko was blushing and so was nyan nyan 
omg this seems a cute scene of an anime! miichan says 
nyan nyan looked at the shocked squirrel who wasn't even moving for the surprise
is she okay? nyan nyan asks to miichan 
i don't know,i think she's traumatized first your car hit her then you slap her and then you kiss her! what kind of love is that? miichan asks then moves her head side to side
nyan nyan grabs miichan by her shirt "no more jokes"
you should look back! miichan says poiting 
yuko blinked her eyes 
i'm sorry! i'm sorry yuko! nyan nyan says while let go miichan's shirt (she was feeling very sorry,somehow the squirrel's smile makes her feel good and now knowing that she hurt yuko kills her) 
yuko showed her a big smile then run to her direction and jumped on her 
ouch!! nyan nyan says while yuko was completely hugging her chest and rubbing her head against it "they're really soft nyan nyan" 
nyan nyan just sighed and smirked (she was feeling better now..yuko is not crying anymore)
(noise of yuko's stomach)
huh? there's is monster here! yuko says freaking out and pointing to her stomach
yuuchan you're hungry! nyan nyan says laughing (somehow yuko is adorable) nyan nyan thought 
hungry? yuko reapeats while gets up 
let's eat out! miichan says clapping her hands 
(At the restaurant) 
wow what a cute place! yuko says stunned 
well is a really expensive place and i don't know why we're here! miichan says 
tonight is a special night! nyan nyan 
why? yuko and miichan says at the same time 
well..yuko..is..with..us! nyan nyan says shyly 
yes,who knows what would happened if... (miichan for you sake just shut up) nyan nyan completes 
enjoy your food the waiter says 
yuko saw nyan nyan and miichan eating and imitated them..
"food" this tastes great! yuko says smiling while devoures everything on her plate 
wow she was hungry! nyan nyan says 
yuko ended with her plate and tooks miichan's 
hey that's my food! miichan says 
yuko kept eating...
oh! don't worry i don't mind not eating! miichan says 
yuko ended with miichan's food and tooks kojiharu's 
is it me or she's really hungry! nyan nyan says 
i think she's a goku' relative! miichan says 
goku doesn't exist! nyan nyan says 
explain me then why she's eating like that! miichan says
yuko ended with kojiharu's food and said smiling " this tastes great,i want more" 
MORE? everyone on the restaurant repeated 
wow everyone was watching us! miichan says 
yuko ordered more food...
you sure you can finish all that? nyan nyan asks 
you're going to get fat! miichan says 
yes,i can finish all this! yuko says smiling and looking to the food with shinny eyes..  (a table full of food) 
my wallet hurts! nyan nyan murmured pouting 
i don't think your wallet would recover fast! miichan says
all the sudden yuko got up...
yuko what's wrong? nyan nyan asks worried ( she noticed that yuko's eyes had changed and she wasn't smiling) 
what's wrong with her? miichan asks 
yuko run away from the restaurant...
yuko wait up! nyan nyan run away after her 
miichan was about to run after the girls but the waiter stopped her and showed her the bill..
what?!?!? now surely my wallet won't recover after this!  miichan says with a sigh while pays the bill 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yuko stops running after a couple blocks 
yuko! nyan nyan says while tries to catch her breath 
nyan nyan puts her hand on yuko's shoulder and notices that yuko was looking to a building 
(they were on the back of the building)
what's wrong yuko? nyan nyan murmures sad
yuko clenches her fist and with her other hand points to the sky...
i have to do something! yuko murmures mad 
what are you talking about? nyan nyan asks worry while hugs her from behind 
yuko breaks the hug and uses the other building to reach the top of the building that she pointed before (she was jumping) 
what? nyan nyan stared stunned 
that's imposible! nyan nyan says while sees yuko making her way up to the building..
nyan nyan sees yuko's shadow and what she saw she couldn't believe it...
are-are tho- those wi-wings? nyan nyan stutters but then she shook her head and run to the building front door and used the elevator to get to the terrace..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the terrace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
they were three men standing,one was covering a girl's mouth,another was laughing and the other was punching a guy..
give up already! a man says while punches the guy's stomach..
now tell us where is she? the man asks 
i don't know,please let her go.. she doesn't have anything to do with this! the guy answers 
you gave up being an angel just beacuse you fell in love with a pathetic and weak human..i feel disguted and that's why i'm going to kill you! the man says mad
mmmmmbbbb! 
shut up bitch! the man who was covering her mouth says 
say good bye! the man shouts with his fist about to punch the guy
ouch!!! what was that? the man says and looks at the stone that fell on the floor 
three against one! what a jerks! yuko says mad
who are you? the three man asks 
go away! the damage guy shouts 
shut up! the man says to the guy and beats him
yuko holds back her hair.."let's start the party" yuko eays while runs to the man that was laughing 
the man sees her coming but somehow yuko dessapeared and appeared on next to him
huh? the man says 
hello! yuko says while beats his stomach with her elbow
the man throwed himself on the floor.. the pain that he was feeling was terrible (he couldn't breath properly and he was spiting blood) 
who's next? yuko asks still mad 
so another angel! don't feel proud he was an useless human! the man that has the girl says 
koji sama! the man on the floor says 
the man throws the girl aside and walked to yuko "let's fight little angel" 
the man runs to yuko's direction..
yuko also runs to him..
yuko tried to kick him but the other man stopped her and made lose balance while the other beats her
the man punched yuko on her face and all over her body
what a weak angel! the man says while lift up yuko and beats her on he stomach several times and throws her away..
nyan nyan opened the door,she saw yuko on the floor and  inmediately went to her rescue
no way another human! the man says smiling 
the other man takes nyan nyan by her arm..
what a pretty girl,we have here! the man says touching her all over her body
let go off me! nyan nyan shouts and punches him on his ...
the guy slaps nyan nyan causing her to slip..
nyan nyan crawls to yuko says  "yuko" with tears on her eyes one tear fell on yuko's forhead..waking her up
"nyan nyan" yuko says 
nyan nyan putted her hand on yuko's cheek "My little squirrel" 
yuko smiled then got up and gave a step forward to cover nyan nyan 
why are you smiling? the man asks and runs to yuko's direction again 
yuko waits for him and sees the perfect timing to hit him 
this time she hitted him "just weak" 
yuko takes him by his hair and smashes his face on the floor several times to leave him knock out tthen took the one who wanted to touch nyan nyan "Don't you ever touch her again" yuko shouted and punched him on his face till she fell that she broke his nose  then kicked him several times till he couldn't get up..then she stopped
what is this? nyan nyan thought while looks the view
thank you! the guy and the girl says 
it's okay! yuko says while looks at the shocked nyan nyan..
yuko..we'll talk later! the guy says while leaves with her girlfriend 
yuko takes a deep breath and walks to nyan nyan 
let's get out of here nyan nyan! yuko says 
both girls walks home..
it was really ackward..
so this is an akcward silence! yuko thought 
Chocolate! yuko says while runs to the machine 
nyan nyan follows her and stared at yuko who was fighting with chocolate machine 
you bitch give me my chocolate! yuko says while shakes her hard 
yuko scratches her head and says  "please" 
c'mom i'm being nice! yuko says pouting 
"yuko" nyan nyan murmures 
then give me back my dollar! yuko says
do you want a piece of me? yuko shouts to the machine
"yuko" nyan nyan says 
you thief! yuko shouts 
"YUKO" nyan nyan says rising her voice 
ok,ok,what's wrong nyan nyan? yuko asks 
am i the only one who's wooried! those man almost kill you! nyan nyan shouts 
mmmm..!yuko looks down 
nyan nyan hugs yuko tighly "sorry yuko,i'm just worried!"
yuko hugs her back "thank you..nyan nyan" 

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Re: THE EXCHANGE (KOJIYUU)
« Reply #10 on: October 05, 2011, 07:15:20 PM »
Yay Yuko!!! The power of love made you save everyone lol

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #11 on: October 18, 2011, 01:33:31 AM »
                                  THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                        4.TEARS
                             
(At school)
Poor Mayu chan..i heard some men tried to rape her but someone save her! a girl in the back says 
really? first her dad now this poor her! a guy says 
Yuki sighs and stares the guys commenting with a look "shut the hell up"
Mayu wasn't even listening she was looking through her window 
(The ring bells)
finally lunch time! ikki says stretching his arms 
yes finally! i'm hungry and my head hurts for many maths! another guy says also streching 
hey Yuki san..i was thinking maybe we could go on a date! ikki while gets up and goes to Yuki's seat
(Mayu gets up and leaves the room) 
"no" Yuki answers not even looking at him and also gets up and leaves the room 
Yuki walks the hall looking for some place far from everyone but it seems there are humans everywhere then she remembered the terrace of the school 
Yuki went up and luckyly for her there was nobody..she decided to jump and eat in the rooftop of the entrance door of the terrace if anyone comes they will never see her up there..
she started eating even though she doesn't need it then she looked the view.. she was enjoying it..everything was so peaceful "earth is not as awful i thought" that came to her mind
the entrance door opens..Yuki can't see who is and she doesn't really care till she saw a familiar figure
"Mayu chan" Yuki murmured as she saw her staring the view 
Yuki didn't move she didn't wanted to disturb her so she decided stay there staring her...
Yuki fell something inside of her..but what is it? is not happiness for sure this feeling was familiar she felt it before..yes,she did when she saw Leaonard and Atsuko for last time..
Yuki saw them again..tears again they were Mayu's tears but why they are in her eyes too? why her chest hurts? and she keeps staring at her? 
Yuki couldn't take it anymore she hates the feeling! 
she needs to get hell out of there...but somehow she couldn't! she needs to know if Mayu...if Mayu is..going..to..be..fine. (that was the way she thought it she couldn't believe she was actually worry about that weak,useless and pathetic human) 
(The ring bells) (End of the lunch time)
Mayu turns and leaves the terrace..
Yuki is about to go the classroom but then her phone ringed 
hello"
Yuki san,i'm Eiji do you remember me? 
yes,i do! 
we need to talk..can you meet me now? 
okay! where? 
Akiba coffee!
okay i'm on my way! 
bye...
Yuki hanged the phone call and jumped on the floor
then went downstairs without anybody notices..
(sure she can jump from the building and get faster but she has a human body and it's hard to know if it going to get damage! so she rather do it in tge human way..) 
                            <Akiba coffee>
what the hell happened to you? Yuki asks while sits
mmm some fallen angels! Eiji answers smiling 
those son of..! Yuki says looking other way 
don't worry we're fine other angel saved us! Eiji says
we? who's we? and what angel? what they wanted with you?  Yuki asks 
easy girl! me and my girlfriend..the angel was a little girl who looked like a squirrel to be honest but still good looking and strong! what they wanted? me! 
what's that mean? Yuki asks while puts her fist on her chin (thinking about the other angel) 
they wanted to know when another angel is coming to earth! Eijji says and then drinks his coffee
another angel..Yuki murmures then sighs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kojima san! Kojima san! the assistant says 
huh? what is it? Nyan Nyan answers 
i'm going home it's late! the assistant says 
okay good night! Nyan Nyan says 
good night Kojima san! the assistant says while closes the door of the office 
Nyan nyan gets up and gather her things and also goes home...
but on her way she passes the building where everything happen..
where for very first time she saw Yuko acting mad and where she saw... Wings? 
Wings? i can swear i saw them besides no human being can jump that high..it looked like she was flying 
Nyan Nyan couldn't believe all the things that were running her mind..
Apart from the though of losing Yuko..somehow she has very big feeling for that girl who acts like a little kid the feeling was indiscriptible she always felt alone but when Yuko is around it makes her happy but still it doesn't change the face that she saw her take down those men..
Nyan Nyan keeps walking and sees a chocolate store 
"Yuko is still Yuko" she thought then smiled and entered to store and bought many different chocolates for her squirrel..
<At Home> 
I wanna see cartoons! Give me the remote! Yuko shouts while tries to snatch the rekote from Micchan
"no" watch the top 10 is better! Micchan says 
give me the remote,I was watching first! Yuko shouts 
"no" i don't care at hours i always watch the top 10 stop bothering me! Miichan says 
Yuko tries to snatch it again!
ha! too midget! hahahhahah! Miichan says laughing
Yuko sitted then pouted and crossed her arms and said "i'm not midget..i'm just a little short"
totally a kid! Miichan said and gave her the remote 
someone opens the door! 
i'm home! Nyan nyan shouts while puts the keys on her purse and closes the door with her foot while the other hand had the bag with chocolates and candies for Yuko! 
Yuko heard Nyan Nyan and run to her then threw the remote which accidentally hit Micchan in her head 
ouch! Miichan shouts while rubs her head
Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouts happy while jumps on her
(both fell on the floor)
i missed you Nyan Nyan! Yuko says with her head buried in Nyan Nyan's chest sniffing her 
"Yukooooooo!" Nyan nyan shouted 
sorry! sorry! i just can't help it..you smell so good Nyan Nyan i love you! Yuko answers smiling 
you..you're just a perverted old man trapped in a young girl's body! Nyan Nyan says and then sighs even though the "i love you part it's ringing on her head!" 
"here" Nyan Nyan says while gets up and gives her the bag  
this is mine? Yuko asks 
yes,all yours! Nyan Nyan answers 
Chocolates! Yuko shouts and jumps of joy and then runs around the house 
look! look Miichan! My Nyan Nyan bought me chocolates! Yuko says happy while eats them 
give me one! Miichan says 
"no" Yuko says while eats 
give me one! Miichan says 
"no" these are all mine! Yuko says and puts the bag behind her 
whatever i'm on diet anyways! Miichan says then gets up and goes to the bathroom 
Nyan Nyan stares Yuko..
what is it Nyan Nyan? do you want some! Yuko says while offers her the bag 
you have a scar! Nyan Nyan says while puts her finger on Yuko's eyebrow
scar?! Yuko murmures 
please don't fight again! Nyan Nyan says then bites he lower lip and looks down
Nyan Nyan...Yuko says 
i don't want..i don't want you to get hurt! Nyan Nyan says then looks Yuko in the eyes..
what is this? Yuko asks then touches to what it seems water on Nyan Nyan's cheek and tastes it
they're are tears Yuko! Nyan Nyan answers 
it's salty! Yuko answers  then wipes Nyan Nyan's tears and hugs Her..."sorry if i made you worry!" 
Nyan Nyan closes her eyes and hugs Yuko tighly 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ouch! Atsuko it hurts! Takamina says complainig
i have to clean you up! Atsuko says 
no! Takamina moves and fall of bed 
Takamina! are you okay? Atsuko asks worry 
yeah yeah! that hurt too! Takamina says while climbs up to bed
sorry Takamina! Atsuko says sad 
hahhaha it was my fault i was the one who moved! Takamina says smiling
i'm not talking about that! Atsuko says while turns around abd tries to avoid tears
what? no,it's not your fault! Takamina says 
look what they did to you..i had to be there! Atsuko says and bites her lip to avoid to cry 
Atsuko... Takamina says with he arms wrapped around Atsuko's body "i wanted to see you again and if this the price that i have to pay..I WOULD DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN!"Takamina answers  
why? Atsuko asks 
honestly? i don't know! Takamina answers smiling
i should had kill....no,shouldn't you're not a killer! Takamina completes
you don't know me! Atsuko says 
i don't have to and you promise that you would never leave me again! Takamina says and hold her tigher 
run doesn't seem an option right now and yes,i know what i promised! Atsuko says 
i'm glad you know that so Atsuko is your name! Takamina says smiling while let go Atsuko
yes but i don't like it anymore! Atsuko answers
why? Takamina answers 
i don't want to remember my past! Atsuko says sad
Takamina looks at Atsuko with a sweet look...
Atsuko looks down sad..
got it! Takamina shouts smiling 
you got what? Atsuko asks 
why you don't change your name? Takamina answers smiling feom ear to ear 
change ny name? Atsuko repeats 
yesssss! Takamina says looking at Atsuko 
okay! Atsuko says looking another way and blushing 
(Takamina was looking at her and that outs her nervous)
what about Emi? Takamina asks 
no,if you change one word it would be Emo! Atsuko says moving her head side to side 
what about Chika? Takamina asks 
mmmm not feeling it! Atsuko says 
what about Cho? Takamina asks 
do you like the Ch don't you? Atsuko answers 
mmm i don't like it's just that those are the first names to come to my head! Takamina answers smiling and scratching her head! 
mmmm i don't know what name to use! Atsuko says and sighs 
hmmm hmmm! Takamina thinking with her finger on her chin
Takamiba it doesn't matter! Atsuko says 
shhhh! i'm thinking! Takamina says 
Atsuko stretches her arms and sighs 
what about Acchan? Takamina asks smiling 
Acchan? mmm maybe! Atsuko answer
okay Acchan is then right Acchan? Takamina asks 
"Acchan is Acchan then!" Acchan says smiling 
both laughs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki san what are you thinking? i mean you haven't said anything in the hole afternoon! Eijii says 
nothing! Yuki answers 
you're not the sociable angel aren't you? Eiji asks
i don't like to talk! Yuki answers 
okay ackward! Eiji says 
look! a girl in that tall building is going to jump! Eiji says worry 
and? Yuki asks while keeps walking 
she's going to jump and kill herself! Eiji shouts 
and? Yuki answers still walking 
we gotta help her! Eijii says 
i'm tired..i'll go home! Yuki says and keeps walking with her eyes closed to not see 
look it's Mayu chan! Ikki shouts 
Yuki's eyes open she turns around and see if its true.. and yes it was Mayu from the school building
OMG! she jumped! a girl shouts 
no way! yuki shouts while runs and tosses her bag..
meanwhile Eiji do something to ikki and the girl who were there to make them forget...
Mayuuuu! Yuki shouts while runs up the building like if it was the floor..
Mayu heard someone calling her name while she falls but she didn't wanted to open her eyes 
"if you think i'm going to let you die that easy you're wrong!" Yuki shouted then hugged her and used her body as a buffer while they fell on a car which was parked there (obviusly the car was destroyed for the impact the school building was really high) 
Mayu opened her eyes! 
Eiji made Ikki and that girl fall sleep "are you guys okay?"
Mayu was in shock.. Eiji helped he to get up while Yuki also got up 
Mayu was staring at Yuki..
Yuki was trying to stay up but it was hard..her human body was really damage it haven't recover from the last time 
Eiji could you leave as alone? Yuki asked 
are you going to be okay? Eiji asks 
yes! Yuki answers 
ok i'll call you later! Eiji said 
Mayu looked down...ashamed for what she just did
"are you okay Yuki chan?" 
Yuki got closer to Mayu and looked at her in the eyes  and then hugged her "Don't do it again! Just..don't do it again!" Yuki said with her last breath before faint
i won't Yuki chan! Mayu cried out then took her to her home...

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #12 on: October 18, 2011, 09:15:26 AM »
Yeeee Mayu scared me Yuki is GTO lol

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 4.TEARS (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #13 on: October 18, 2011, 10:12:33 AM »
Poor Mayuyu~  :cry:

I'm glad Yuki saved her~  XD

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #14 on: October 23, 2011, 12:32:32 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 5.A new angel
                             
Mayu took Yuki to her house and put her on her bed..
she went to bring things to clean her up..but she couldn't help to think..
"how a normal person can move that fast or survive to that fall?" 
Mayu looked at Yuki who was unconsciousness
"wow you're really beatiful and strong...you look so different like this..  so kind and friendly" Mayu thought while unbuttons Yuki's shirt to clean her wounds.. she puts the wet towel softly on Yuki's wounds!              "in real life you're really cold and distant you look at me like if you hate me! but i know you don't when i'm in trouble your look changes to a caring one! yes,you care..you care about me! who are you Kashiwagi Yuki?" Mayu thought
Yuki slowly opened her eyes and stared at Mayu 
that look again that means that you were worried about me! Mayu thought while both girls stared eachother for a while without saying a word 
Mayu leaned and gave her a kiss on her forhead..Yuki closed her eyes anf fell sleep.Mayu noticed so she layed next to Yuki and also fell sleep
       ~~~~~<<<<<The next day>>>>>>~~~~~~~
Tomomi san 10 min for your performance! an assitant says knocking the door 
okay! Tomochin says smiling 
Chiyuu stay here please! Tomochin talks to her friend
but i wanna hear Tomochin's cute voice! Chiyuu says pouting and crossing her arms
i'm sorry *sigh* ok you can watch it from the distance okay? Tomochin says with her hands on Chiyuu's cheeks 
Thank you Tomochin! Chiyuu says smiling
remember stay out of trouble! Tomochin says while leaves the room 
welcome everyone! Tomochin says to her fans 
Tomochin! Tomochin! Tomochin! the crowd shouts 
wow Tomochin fanclub has grown like crazy the latest months! Chiyuu thought while sees the crowd from behind the curtains..
i still can remember the day we met...
FLASHBACK ( 4 years ago)
I opened my eyes and saw you...i couldn't believe everything was so new to me and i only heard bad things about you..i mean humans..
are you okay? you asked me with your face a few inches away from mine..i swear i thought you were going to move but you didn't and i ended up hitting you with my forhead! (clumsy me!)
ouch! you said while rubs your forhead
for me it didn't hurt! who are you? where am i? 
(i didn't know this was earth! Chyuu says looking the crowd singing Tomochin's song )
i'm Itano nice to meet you! you said smiling to me
what's your name? you asked me.I didn't know what to answer and i just looked at you 
you don't know your name! you said and looked at me with those bright eyes 
do you remember your family or something? or don't tell me you're a mermaid! you said looking to my legs 
if they change for a tail
what? i said confuse..i didn'tknow what you were talking about! 
well i saw you came from the water! what you want me to think? you said
don't tell me that you don't have a family like me! you said to me in a sad tone 
now i understant it must been sad being alone and being an orphan lucky for me you run away from that 
orphanage and found me..
we walked through the beach and you told everything about you..
"you told me you wanted to be a singer that that was all that matters to you! you sang for me and from that moment i became Tomomi Itano number one fan!" 
you told me that i can come with you and that's what i did.. i followed you and i don't regret! 
"An angel serving to a human...i don't care..i'll be next to her as long she wants me to..she's my family!"
<END OF THE FLASHBACK>
wow tomochin is so cool! Chiyuu says while looks at her siging and dancing on the stage 
Eiji what's wrong? his girlfriend asks 
nothing is just too much noise! Eiji answers while tries to go to the first row
where you're going? his girlfriend asks 
it can be true the more closer i get to Tomochin the more i feel it! Eiji thought
Eiji wait! his girlfriend says 
hey watch out! a mad guy says to Eiji's girlfriend
hey don't touch her! Eiji says and push the guy 
Tomochin i love your voice! Chiyuu shouts but she got tangled with some cables and end up making a mess..Tomochin mc doesn't work and the lighs where moving like if they're going to explote! 
everyone in the crowd starts fighting (because of Eiji)
"take Tomochin and let's get out of here!"  a bodyguard shouts while shows them the exit 
(Outside!!!)
Tomochin i'm sorry! Chiyuu says 
Tomochin looks at her and makes a sign "don't talk to me!"  
let's go Tomochin you have an interview! her manage says while puts her arm around Tomochin's neck and guides her to the car..
Tomochin..Chiyuu murmures while walks to their dept
MEANWHILE....
beeep! beeep! beeep! 
Yuki wakes up and sees Mayu sleeping next to her..
she looks at her for bit till she heard the next beep..
hello! 
Yuki chan! it's Eijji
hey! what is it? 
i found out sonething please meet me at the Akiba coffee! 
ok i'm on my way there! 
thank you! 
you're leaving? Mayu asks with her eyes closed
Yuki sighs "yes!" 
but you gotta go eating first! Mayu says while gets up and stretches her arms 
why did you wanted to...Yuki couln't finish her sentence! 
because i was tired of feeling lonely and sad! Mayu answers murmuring 
Yuki looked other way! 
let's make breakfast! Mayu says smiling 
it's 15:00 pm this is not tine for breakfast! Yuki says 
for  me it is! Mayu says while takes a bowl and cereal
Yuki smirked and sitted next to Mayu to eat their breakfast!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuko stop eating you're going to get sick! Miichan says laughing looking at her
these are a sign of love from my Nyan Nyan this woukd never hurt me! Yuko says smiling 
whatever! Miichan says while turns her attention to the tv! 
i'm home! Nyan Nyan says 
Nyan Nyan! Yuko says while leaves the chocolates and goes running to jump on her.. 
(both fell on the floor) 
wow you been eating chocolates huh? Nyan Nyan says smiling because Yuko has a chocolate mustache
(Takamina was laughing like crazy)
who she is? Yuko asks mad pointing at Takamina
easy Yuuchan..she's Takahashi Minami or how we call her Takamina! Nyan Nyan says laughing
stay away from my Nyan Nyan! Yuko says 
ohh Takamina you don't want to mess with her! Miichan says laughing 
Yuko gets up and looks at Takamina..
you're so short! Takamina says laughing at Yuko
whaaaaaaat? i'm 4 inches taller than you! how you can call me short! Yuko shouts 
look war of the midgets! Micchan says laughing
Nyan Nyan is mine! Yuko says and throws herself on Takamina and starts fighting 
girls! girls! stop! Nyan Nyan and Micchan says at the same time
Miichan took Takamina and Nyan Nyan took Yuko..
Takamina and Yuko looked eachother and started laughing 
what? did i miss something? Kojiharu asks with her airhead expression
we were playing! Takamina says smiling
great now midgets have codes! Miichan says moving her head side to side 
don't call us midgets! Yuko and Takamina says while points to Micchan and throw themselves to Miichan 
now apologize or you'll pay for this! Yuko says 
yeah,whatever she said! Takamina replies 
"never!" Miichan shouts 
Yuko's secret weapon! Yuko shouts 
what's that? Takamina and Miichan asks
Tickling! Yuko shouts while tickles Miichan with Takamina's help
stop! stop! Miichan shouts
Yuko stops tickling Miichan and gets up her face totally changed 
"that face!" Nyan Nyan thought 
Yuko what's wrong? Takamina asks..
Yuko looks side to side and then turned around to the door..she run and got out of the dept..
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouts and runs after her 
Miichan and Takamina also run after Yuko
"Yuko wait up!" Nyan Nyan shouts hey Yuko wait up! Miichan and Takamina shouts while run after her 
what.. is that? Acchan! Takamina shouts waving while runs 
who's that? Miichan asks also running 
A friend i told her to come! Takamina says running 
Acchan also runs..
Atsuko! Takamina shouts 
"Atsuko!" Yuko murmures while runs after her 
watch out! there's a bridge! Takamina,Miichan and Nyan Nyan shouts while run after Yuko who is running after Acchan! 
Acchan jumped the bridge and also Yuko..
what the F! Takamina says worry for the girls (mostly Acchan)
they just Killed themselves! Miichan says 
they just jumped of a bridge! "Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmures her eyes getting wet
look there they are! Takamina says while points to the two girls standing in the roof of a moving trailer
oh my god i thought those you can do it only in action movies! who the hell are they? Miichan says 
i have no idea! Nyan Nyan says sad
<<<<<<<<<<<<<At akiba coffee>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
what happened? Yuki asks 
i knkw who's the angel that they're looking for! Eiji says while pulls out a cd of Tomomi Itano from his bag and puts it on the table
are you kidding me right? a singer! Yuki says smiling
yes,she is! Eiji says 
yeah right! Yuki says laughing 
it's the truth i felt it..today at her concert..it was her because the closer i got the feeling got stronger when she left..the feeling also left! Eiki says serious
okay then what you want me to do? Yuki asks with a bore expression
don't act cool like you don't care..because you do! i saw you saving the life of a girl! Eiji says smiling
shut up! Yuki says red looking other way
well i heard on the radio that she'll give a concert tomorrow..we can tell her that he life is in danger! Eiji says happy
okay we'll tell her tomorrow! Yuki says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~The trailer moving~~~~~~~~~~~~
you betrayed us! Yuko says 
i know! Acchan says looking down 
(they jumped to the ground...)
so you understant that my duty is to make you get back! Yuko says while runs and beats Acchan on her face... Acchan gets up,cleans the blood on the corner of her mouth and says "sorry i can't let you take me..at least not yet!" 
why? Yuko asks and beats her again
beacuse i have to make sure that Takamina it's going to be okay! Acchan shouts while is on the floor
Not good enough answer! Yuko says and kicks Acchan on her stomach 
ugh...i know..i made a mistake..i thought humans were useless and stupid garbage but know *tears* everything had changed! Acchan says crying 
you killed a lot of our brothers and sisters! Yuko says mad with tears on her yes while punches Acchan's face several times.. Yuko stops beating her and says "i'm not a killer like you!" while walks away but Acchn grabs her foot...
c'mon beat me up! i deserve it.. i'm your older sister i can take it! Acchan shouts crying in knees
Yuko gave her a final punch then helped her to get up and walk
what are going to tell them? Acchan asks
we had an drenaline rush! Yuko answers 
what's that? Acchan asks 
someting that make you do strange things! Yuko answers 
how do you know? Acchan asks while stops walking and looks at Yuko
well there is this owesome thing called google! Yuko answers smiling 
google? sounds fun! Acchan says smiling 
(At home)
Nyan Nyan,Takamina and Miichan were looking to the door waiting for the girls 
*knock**knock* 
Acchan! Takamina says while gets up to open the door 
Yuko! Nyan Nyan says and also runs to see who is!
girls! Miichan says 
what happened to you? Takamina says while pushes Yuko and takes Acchan to the couch
ouch! Yuko says while rubs her butt,Nyan Nyan helps her to get up
what happened? Takamina asks while cleans Acchan's blood
more to ask important how you survived to jump of a bridge! Miichan asks 
a rush of adrenaline! Acchan says smirking 
okay! Takamina and Nyan Nyan says 
yes they bought it! Yuko thought
is that's it? no more questions? Miichan asks 
can't you see they're hurt whatever we'll ask later! Nyan Nyan says also analyzing if Yuko is hurt
great! Miichan says 
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chiyuu got to their dept and found Tomochin's manager and a bag..
hello Chiyuu! the manager says 
what do you want? Chiyuu asks 
to thank you finally Tomochin relized that you're hindrance in her career so she finally asked me to tell you good bye..here's your money! the manager says 
that's not true she would never do that! Chiyuu says
you don't believe me! whatever here! the manager says while gives her the papers of the dept 
she said that "you should have the dept..she doesn't need it anyway and take the money beacuse you don't have money by yourself and don't look for her ever again!" 
Chiyuu throwed the money and run away...
the manager smirked 
(At night)
Chiyuu i'm home! Tomochin shouts 
hello Tomochin! the manager says 
what are you doing here? where's Chiyuu? Tomochin asks looking for Chiyuu in the dept
she's not here! the manager said
what? where she went? Tomochin asks
she asked me for money and left! the manager says 
what? she would never leave me! Tomochin says mad  and looking for Chiyuu's things
there's nothing! Tomochin says 
she took all her things and left! the manager says
leave me alone! Tomochin says 
sorry Tomochin! the manager says 
just leave me alone! Tomochin shouts 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~The next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
great we're here waiting for this concert! Yuki says mad looking to the posters of Tomochin 
you can pass now! the bodyguard said 
let's go..let's find that popstar and finish it! Yuki says 
okay! Eiji says 
they entered and found their way to Tomochin's dressing room..
they opened the door and got in..
who are you? Tomochin asks mad (she's mad because she haven't heard from Chiyuu since yesterday and that kills her) 
we're here to help you! Eiji says trying to calm her 
i don't feel anything! Yuki says 
go away! Tomochin says 
listen you ego bitch we're trying to help you ok? so cooperate! Yuki says 
Eiji putted his hand on Tomochin's head..
what's that? Yuki asks 
to feel better! Eiji says 
nothing! i can't believe i paid for get in!  Yuki says mad looking at Eiji
stop go away! Tomochin shouts 
Tomochin 5 min! an assistant says knocking the door
let's go! Yuki says 
MEANWHILE...
Chiyuu was watching the view from a tall building..
"i can't believe it..Tomochin left me..naybe humans are how they're described after all"
hey sweetie are you okay! Alexander asks
how you got up here without me to notice! Chiyuu asks while looks at him 
well you're not the only special on earth! Alexander says smiling 
what's with tbe face? Alexander asks 
 let me guess a human betrayed you! Alexander says 
yes! Chiyuu says sad 
humans are disgusting that's why i want to destroy them and i want to make a world full of angels..
you can trust angels we have a honor code! join us and see for yourself! Alexander says looking at Chiyuu 
i just..just can't,i could never hurt Tomochin! Chiyuu answers pouting to not cry 
i wnated to make things easy! Alexander says snapping his fingers 
2 fallen angels appeared.. 
kill her! Alexander says while he jumps of the building
wow! look what we have here! a fallen angel said while the other moved fast and took Immobilized Chiyuu from behind...
we're going to have fun! the fallen angel behind Chiyuu says
~~~~~~~~~~~~<<~<<<<<<>>>>>>~>>>~~~~~~~
hey we paid we can watch a littke bit of the show! Eiji says smiling 
unbelieveble! Yuki thought 
the crowd starts shouting "Tomochin! Tomochin! Tomochin!" 
Tomochin present herself and looks to everyone looking for the only person she wante to see...
"Chiyuu!" Tomochin murmures while puts her hand on her heart 
the music starts it was dear j...
i'm sorry! Tomochin says while leaves the stage 
what are you doing? get back there and sing to them! the manager says 
sing to them..i only want to sing to one person! Tomochin says while gets out from the back door
we should go after her! Eiji says 
i think your doing all this because you're a crazy fan of her! Yuki says 
shut up let's follow her! Eiji says 
where are you Chiyuu? something tells me that you're not okay! Tomochin thought 
Tomochin covered her eyes with her hands and calmed...then she remembered that there's a place that Chiyuu likes beacause is high..
Tomochin went running to that place...Eiji and Yuki also followed her 
she runs fast for someone that it's small! Eiji says 
(At the building) 
take this! a punch on her stomach "if you're not with us you're agains us!" 
the other guy took Chiyuu by her hair to pull her up
let's finish her already! the other fallen angel said
god this is not fun..i want to find that girl and kill her with my hands! the fallen angel said while throws Chiyuu to the floor
what the tall hot one with big boobs? the other angel replied 
yes, that one! 
(door opening)
Chiyuu! Tomochin shouts while runs to her to help her.. 
who are you? one of the fallen angel asks 
what the hell? why did you do this to her? Tomochin asks crying and beating the fallen angel 
ha! look at this! a poor human trying to beat me! the fallen angels laughs 
he slapped Tomochin..."you don't have to be here go away rat let me finish her!" 
"no!" Tomochin says while gets up and puts hetself in the way
if you want to finish her..YOU HAVE TO FINISH ME! Tomochin shouts 
Chiyuu opened her eyes when she heard Tomochin's voice
done! the angel says and throws a punch to Tomochin who covered herself
huh? the angel said
Tomochin opened her eyes...
 Chiyuu was stopping the punch with her fist too..
"don't you dare to touch Tomochin" Chiyuu says mad
wow two against one! those fallen angels are really coward suckers! 
everyone turns their heads 
Yuki i think you were too specific with your words! Eiji says facepalming himself
"you!" the two fallen angels says 
run away before i'll kill you! Yuki says with smirk
what's with the clothes all black? the other angel ask
it's called having a sense of style! Yuki says 
i'll kill you bitch! one of the fallen angel shouts while runs to beat her  
Yuki dodge it but she's still weak and the fallen angel use his other fist and beat her 
ha! i though you were going to kill me! the f.a says 
she's on her limits! Eiji thought 
what a weak angel! the other f.a said 
shut up! Chiyuu says while beats the hell out of him
"angel!" Tomochin mutmured 
let's go! Yuki says looking at Chiyuu both against the f.a! 
c'mon show me what you got! the f.a says 
Yuki throws a combo but he's fast and grabs her leg and throws her against the wall 
Yuki chan! Eiji said and went to her rescue 
first i'll kill you then i'll make suffer that bitch! the f.a says while points at Yuki 
did you heard me? the f.a shouts while beats Chiyuu 
wtf? someone don't let him move! 
ohh this bitch is going to make you work hard! Yuki says smiling 
Chiyuu got up and gave him a combo of punches "this is for Tomochin,This is for me,this is for her, this is for him..
the last one! Yuki says 
and this is because you're our bitch! Chiyuu shouts
the guy is k.o.
Yuki let her body fall on the floor and also Chiyuu 
"Chiyuu!" 
"Tomochin!" 
are you okay Tomochin? that hurts? Chiyuu says while examinates Tomochin's lip 
i'm fine but why you left me? Tomochin says crying 
what? you said that you didn't want to see me again!
what? i never! Tomochin says hugging Chiyuu
your manager said so! Chiyuu says 
that bitch..!Tomochin says 
that mean that i'm not a hindrance to you! Chiyuu asks looking at Tomochin
of course not...you're my family! Tomochin says hugging tigher to Chiyuu
let's go home! Tomochin says 
thank you guys! Tomochin says while carries Chiyuu to the door
thank you! Chiyuu says 
wow those two love each other! Yuki says 
what? you don't love anyone like that Yuki chan! 
"no!" Yuki says blushing.. remebering that she spended yesterday the whole day with Mayu! 
(At Chiyuu and Tomochin's dept) 
Tomochin i came as soon as you called! the manager says smiling 
great you're fire! Tomochin says 
what? why? the manager asks
bting back my clothes! Chiyuu says 
"you!" the maneger says 
now go away i don't want to see you again! Tomochin says smiling 
Chiyuu let's go shopping! are you sure you're not a memaid? Tomochin says while puts her head on Chiyuu's lap 
as you wish Tomochin and no i'm not a memaid i'm sure!  Chiyuu says smiling  
that woukd be so cool! Tomochin says 
okay this was long i don't knkw why but WHATEVER! hahahaha! why i did it TomoTomo beacuse i fell in love with them recently! xD sorry i won't be able to update for 2 weeks! :(

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #15 on: October 23, 2011, 01:50:43 PM »
I love the fighting scene~  :twothumbs

Yuki look so cool~  XD

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #16 on: October 23, 2011, 02:23:49 PM »
YAY Tomotomo!!!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 5.A new Angel (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #17 on: November 13, 2011, 01:45:42 AM »
Mermaid?! :lol: hahhah lol.... this fic was pure awesome... waiting for your next update  :bow:
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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #18 on: November 13, 2011, 07:07:35 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                     6.Promises

(2 Days later)                             
so you're an angel who came down 4 years ago and this girl found you! Yuki repeats everything that Chiyuu told her 
how did they know that you were an angel? Eiji says while drinks his coffee
i don't know..Tomochin didn't know and she has no family or close friends! Chiyuu says looking at Tomochin who was sleeping couse Eijii put her to sleep with some weird power 
you can't stay here with her! Yuki says serious 
why not? Chiyuu asks a little mad
because you put her in danger! Yuki says smiling 
i'm going to protect her! Chiyuu says rising her tone of voice 
yeah yeah wonder woman! Yuki says while gets up
girls this is not time for this! Eiji says 
whatever it's not my business..i don't care! Yuki says and starts walking to the door
i promised her! Chiyuu shouts 
Yuki stops walking 
i want to protect her..don't you ever made a promise to the one you love? Chiyuu asks 
me....?Yuki murmured 
FLASHBACK
I'm so tired of this! Yuki thought while hides inside othe classroom because Ikki and Koji were looking for her..she opens the classroom door a little and sees  Mayu entering to other classroom with a bunch of papers in her hands 
"Do you look for her in the terrace? Koji said 
(Yuki slowly closes the door) 
no! Ikki answers 
let's go there! Koji says and runs away with Ikki 
Yuki sighs in relief then opens the door and goes to the other classroom 
she slowly opens the door and entered (Mayu didn't notice because she was focused on reading those papers!) 
Hello Mayu chan! Yuki says 
Mayu jumped "What?!?" and fast tried to hide the papers 
what's this? Yuki says with a airhead expression and fast snacthes a paper from Mayu 
"Nothing! Nothing!" Mayu shouts and tries to snatch it from Yuki but Yuki is taller so she can't 
Yuki.. Kashiwagi! Yuki read loud 
is this my file? Yuki's face turned into a mad one 
you stole my papers! Yuki says while intimadates Mayu by getting closer to her 
evrytime Yuki got closer,Mayu gave a step back till she found the wall and she has nowhere to go
what do you want to know? Yuki shouts irritated 
Mayu looked other way 
hey look at me! what do you want to know? huh! tell me! Yuki shouts 
Mayu just looked other way
unbelieveble can't you be happy that i saved your life? huh? Yuki says while puts her hands on Mayu's shoulders 
you're not normal! Mayu says looking at Yuki in the eyes 
Normal? Yuki repeated 
you beated three guys and then you were a buffer and fell on a car..and you're here like nothing you're not normal! Mayu says scared but she didn't wanted to show it 
yes,i'm not normal so you know that i can hurt you really bad do you? Yuki says with a smirk 
you..hurt me..you would never!! Mayu says 
Yuki rised and eyebrow "are you sure?" 
yes! Mayu answers but before she cleared her throat
why? Yuki said in Mayu's ear 
Mayu took one Yuki's hand that was on her shoulder and looked at it..her thumb traced that line on Yuki's wrist (Yuki's face change totally) 
did it hurt? Mayu asked 
i don't remember! Yuki answered looking other way (from the moment that an angel takes a human body they have their memories and feel the emotions they felt and still can sense the other person soul!) 
you feel alone just like me! Mayu says sad 
Yuki just looked other way 
Mayu hugged Yuki "i don't care if you're not a human..i just want you to be with me please don't you ever leave me!" 
Yuki fell on her shirt Mayu's tears and somehow Mayu's tears always get her..Yuki sighed and hugged Mayu tigher..
I guess i promise! Yuki thought
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuki chan! Yuki chan! Eiji says snapping his fingers
what?Yuki asks 
i'm going to stay with Tomochin! Chiyuu says looking at Tomochin 
i guess i promise..it's a promise! Yuki says while exit herself
Yuki chan wait for me! Eijji says while goes after her 
Chiyuu closes the door and sits next to Tomochin 
"i'll always protect you! Chiyuu says while removes hair from Tomochin's face
~~~~~~~<<$>>>><<<<<$>>>>><<<<$>>>>~~~~~~
Ha! weren't you right hand hurt Acchan? Miichan says while sees Acchan use her right hand to catch the cereal
uhhh..Ouch! Acchan says while leaves the cereal 
*POP* 
Ouchhhhh! Miichan shouts "why you hit me Takamina?! i hate you!" 
stol bothering Acchan! Takamina says while sits
Acchan smiles 
Takamina blushes..
so..so manly from you Takamina! Miichan says laughing 
*POP* OUchhh! Miichan shouts "what was that for?!" 
for interrupting "girl love!" Yuko says smiling while sits next to her 
you pervert squirrel!! Miichan says 
(Yuko smiles)
Miichan fast covers her head preventing that someone hit her
Good morning! Nyan Nyan says smiling while sits
Good morning! everyone says 
Nyan Nyan sit next to me! next to me! next to me! please,please,please! Yuko shouts while takes the chair were Micchan is sitting and moves it making Miichan fall on the floor 
okay Yuuchan! Nyan Nyan says while sits 
okay now everyone is ignoring me! Miichan says 
here! Acchan says pointing to the chair next to her
Miichan gets up and sits next to Acchan 
so Nyan Nyan i really apreciate that you let Acchan stay here! Thank u! Takamina says 
don't worry what are friends for? Nyan Nyan says smiling 
Yuko sighs "My Nyan Nyan always so cool and kind!"
By the way now that everyone is free today we can go shopping..we need to buy Yuko and Acchan some clothing! Nyan Nyan says 
you don't have to! Acchan says 
don't worry..it's fine so eat up and let's get you some clothes! Nyan Nyan says 
unbelieveble am i the only one who thinks this girl are not normal? Miichan thought while sees them eat
*POP* what?!? why?! Ouch! Miichan shouts
because you're thinking it! Takamina says 
how you know? Miichan replies brushing her head
because you never shut up! Takamina answers 
(everyone laugh)
*SHOPPING* 
They walked everywhere and buyed clothes for Yuko..Acchan didn't like what she saw in the others stores...(she didn't like people in the other store,she could feel their bad intentions) 
Except for Yuko who has the same taste of clothing as Takamina!
Yuko your clothes are...mmm so Takamina! Miichan says laughing 
What's wrong with my clothing? Takamina shouts 
nothing! Nyan Nyan says looking other way 
Acchan you're not going to choose anything? Takamina asked
mmm yes! Acchan says 
they entered to tye last shop...
it felt totally diffrent..it was calmed and peaceful 
hello can i help you? an older girl said smiling 
yes,we came to buy a lot clothing and that you help them to find their sense of style! Miichan says pointing to Yuko and Takamina 
hey!!! Both shouts 
i guess Yuko is too young to feel! Acchan thought while sees the dresses 
that dress is so cute! Nyan Nyan said 
yes,it is! It would totally suit you! the older girl and owner of the store said 
wow all tge clothing here is so cool! Miichan said
where you got it? Takamina asked 
feom heaven! The older girl answered
(Acchan chose a lot clothes and went to try it!)
and you're so cute too! Yuko said looking closely to the girl
ouch ouch! Kojima san it hurts! Yuko shouted while is being dragged away from the older girl 
what's your name? Miichan asked 
Shinoda Mariko! she answered smiling 
Takamina..Takamina! Acchan called 
what?!? Takamina said all red because she imagined that Acchan was behind that door probably in underwear..
help me please! Acchan said opening the door and taking her hand to drag her in.
please button the shirt! Acchan said shyly
Takamina was all red..she was seeing Acchan's back and those f-ing buttons didn't help..
so you know i'm not normal! Acchan said 
what are you talking about? you're normal to me! Takamina said nervous (for the buttons) 
i just..i just..(it's okay- Takamina interupted Acchan)
look i don't care if you are a vampire a wolf or whatever as long you're by my side..it doesn't matter! Takamina hugged Acchan from the back (Takamina finished with the buttons) 
when you feel ready to tell me..you will! Takamina said with a smile 
Acchan smiled too
you look beatiful! Takamina said 
Acchan blushes 
(Outside)
i think Takamina just raped Acchan! Miichan says laughing 
what's rape? Yuko asked to Nyan Nyan 
you don't know what's that word mean? Nyan Nyan
"nop" Yuko answered
is when someone make you do sonething against your will! Nyan Nyan answered 
mmmm got it..got it but she's not being rape because she loves Takamina! Yuko said 
what? really Acchan is Takamina's girlfriend! I knew it! told you..you owe me $20.00! Micchan said to Nyan Nyan
Takamina and Accahn appeared 
hey you too! Miichan says with a weird tone of voice 
wow you look amazing Acchan *LEGS* Yuko said 
Ouuuuchhhh! Nyan Nyan stop it hurts! Yuko shouted
stop doing those things! Nyan Nyan says with one hand pinching Yuko's cheek and the other on he waist..
i think i'm going to buy all this! Acchan says while gives the clothes to Mariko 
Mariko registered everything and Nyan Nyan payed woth credit car 
thank you very much! Mariko said 
thank you! the girls said 
the girls were walking to the exit  
See you soon Atsuko! Mariko said 
Yuko, Acchan and Takamina turned around at the same time 
Mariko smirked..
Takamina took Acchan's hand and walked out of the store with Yuko..
what was that? Takamina asks 
how did she know you're old name? Yuko asked serious 
i don't know! Acchan said looking down 
Takamina squeezes Acchan hand a little..Acchan looked at her and Takamina smiled "Everything is going to be fine!"
girls c'mon i'm hungry! Miichan shouts 
let's go i'm hungry too! Yuko shouts while runs after Nyan Nyan 
~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so we have Yuko the playful one, Acchan the older and strongest one,Chiyuu the peaceful one And Yuki impulsive one! Alexander says smiling 
i think we should take Acchan or Yuko! a voice says
it wouldn't work on them! Alexander says serious 
why? the voice asks 
Yuko is a baby and she always will the "right thing"
Acchan got away and it's strong to control herself! 
i know who you should take! another voice in the dark says 
she will be perfect! other voice in the dark says 
everyone laughs...

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 6.Promises (MaYuki) (KojiYuu) (AtsuMina) (TomoTomo)
« Reply #19 on: November 13, 2011, 09:43:37 PM »
I want more MaYuki~ Please~  XD

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