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Title: Esmerelda [ C.15-Gateway (16/02) - On hold (Writer's note) ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 17, 2009, 06:54:42 PM
EDIT: Hello all, I have decided to make a content page for those who does not wanna read our crazy comments! LOL~ <- It's funny if you have been following it..  :lol:

Chapter 1: The Ice Palace
Chapter 2: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg639898#msg639898">New Guest</a>
Chapter 3: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg641419#msg641419">Banquet</a>
Chapter 4: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg642700#msg642700">Ice Princess</a>
Chapter 5: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg645365#msg645365">Night</a>
Chapter 6: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg647235#msg647235">The Chase</a>
Chapter 7: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg648980#msg648980">The Kitten</a>
Chapter 8: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg650110#msg650110">Royal Garden Walk</a>
Chapter 9: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg652552#msg652552">The Chase 2</a>
Side Story: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg653425#msg653425">A Kamei Eri Birthday Special</a>
Chapter 10: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg656958#msg656958">Promises</a>
Chapter 11: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg658622#msg658622">Resolve</a>
Chapter 12: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg661824#msg661824">Spellbound</a>
Chapter 13: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg666019#msg666019">Chase 3</a>
Chapter 14: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg671052#msg671052">Clean Ups</a>
Chapter 15: <a href="http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=22655.msg680775#msg680775">Gateway</a>

Hello everyone~!

This story basically have been in my mind for like forever.. but was never written out.. cause my language is really bad.. so i always have a hard time writing them.. and eventually gives up~

This chapter and another took me the whole day...  :err:

The original story was for Natsuki and Shizuru from Mai-hime but i did a little editing and here goes the M.M version...

Hope you people like this first chapter..It is mostly background for this chapter.. The story starts from here.. the characters will be coming in shortly.. 

Please tell me if it is worth to continue on before i crack my brain further to write the rest of the story.. XD

Enjoy


Esmerelda

Kumudini - The white night lotus


Chapter 1 - Esmerelda's The Ice Palace

“I would need some verification, Sir”
“Niigaki Reito, Commander of Kumudini”

Recognizing the full blossom white lotus on the man’s slash and the emerald ear stud on his left ear, the guards bowed as one of them led them through the forest beyond the gates.

“Amazing…”
The young lady right behind Niigaki Reito thought, as she takes in the fascinating sight of greenery around her. Yes, she had been to Esmerelda, the mystical land, a few times but never had she manage to step foot in the Ice Palace grounds. It is where the grand elves live and is considered the scarcest place in Esmerelda.

Esmerelda, the land of elves, is a dimension not known to most human. It is paradise to magically creatures and beings.

Once, human did co-exist with magically creatures and beings, such as dwarves, fairies, and nymphs. Some of them were taught of simple spells and were later known as druids or mages.

As time passes, the human population flourished and it was before long that some starts to have minds of their own.

“Why need them when we already have mastered their skills? Why use their magic when we made one that is more powerfully? Why not overthrow them and be kings? Why not have them serve us instead? It WAS their land but now it IS our EARTH. Why? Why not?”

The powerful magic that the foolish mages thought they have made up was nothing more than just dark magic. It is just the easiest magic to practice and perfected, if you have the right kind of heart. And who doesn’t?

Of course, many power-thirsted mage falls for it even as all the magically creatures along with minority of the mages opposed to the usage of such unknown magic.

The most popular spell? Summoning.

The catastrophe of war between the Light and Dark was inevitable.

Eventually, the land had become so distorted and instable that summoning portals were able to open and close by itself on freewill. Earth plunged into darkness as countless dark creature roams around out of control.

Needless to say, many lands were destroyed. The air no longer smells fresh, no longer emit the same type of energy like it used to. It was nothing but turning into a wasteland.

Retreating was the best option at the moment and let the dark mages have a taste of their own medicine. That was when they stumbled across Esmerelda. Many had thought Esmerelda, the land of elves, was just a legend. It was believe that Esmerelda is the birth land of all elves. It was a land filled with forests and rivers running across to every corner of the land. The air smelled sweet and the land was filled with magically energy. It was paradise.

They were welcomed by the elves that populated the land. From there, they learnt that a protection spell had been cast upon the land, but when and by whom or what, nobody knows. It had been like it had been all along. But what was known was that it is definitely connected to the ancient sycamore tree at the heart of the land for it was covered by unimaginable vast amount of forests and the lands’ magically energy seems to be emitting out from the tree and spreading throughout Esmerelda.

The place was then known as the forbidden scarce grounds of Esmerelda. Everyone knew better then to go into that area. Even though they could not see but they could feel this overpowering energy creating an invisible barrier around it.

It wasn’t long before the dark forces caught up with them. That was when a group of raven elves emerged from the forbidden land and wields so much power that the dark army was wiped out of the Esmerelda within a day.

They were believed to be the descendant of Grand Elves that people thought have vanished from the surface of Esmerelda, for they stands out from all the elves with their raven hair instead of golden. Grand elves were the pure blooded elf, not a single drip of blood in them is mixed with any.

Their powers were believed to be interconnected to the land of Esmerelda and were the “heart” of Esmerelda. Or rather, it was a particular elf. Leader of the pack, the Arch Elf, is marked with a tribal moon-shaped symbol on the side of her neck. Her presence itself was so overpowering, like she was a higher being but yet surprising serene.

As for Kumudini, it was put together later, led by the fearsome elven fighter, Niigaki, to wipe out the remaining dark forces on Earth and to secure the biggest portal that is directly linked to the dark world.

As for now, Earth is of what we see today. Elves, mages and magic were all but myths. Humans have long forgotten this unrecorded dark past.

That was what the blue-eyed lady had learnt in her “special” history lesson when she was young though.

The blue-eyed lady was so captivated by the surrounding that she almost knocked into her grandfather had she not reacted immediately when he stopped suddenly.

“Welcome to the Ice Palace” she heard a voice said.


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Lost anyone?  :on chew:

 :mon bat: *poof*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 1 18/11 ]
Post by: kuro808 on November 17, 2009, 07:38:25 PM
I want to read more, interesting background to the story, and i can follow the story so keep it up
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 1 18/11 ]
Post by: lil_hamz on November 20, 2009, 01:36:56 PM
Wow, this is good. And you say your language is bad? No way!

Now, on to the fic. I watched Mai-hime and I loved it. I can't remember the character's names but I'm sure I liked Natsuki. Holy, so Niigaki is a guy? Hawt :wub:

I wanna know who the girl is. TEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLL MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 1 18/11 ]
Post by: badsaints on November 20, 2009, 03:16:14 PM
Eh my little baby sticky has got her story up!

This is a good intro and who says your language is bad. A little different from the fics we have and I say you should continue this.

Take us into the journey of magical fantasy XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 1 18/11 ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 20, 2009, 04:52:34 PM
I started reading this, then Firefox got cut off and I forgot I didn't finish it. :doh: But now that I've finally finished it, I have to say I'm very interested! Also I'm impressed with your grammar, I didn't notice any typos, though there were a few cases of phrases that weren't quite right, but in a cute way.
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The catastrophe of war
I like that. I don't know why.


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The original story was for Natsuki and Shizuru from Mai-hime but i did a little editing and here goes the M.M version...
:lol: :lol: :lol: Mai Hime! OMG, I haven't seen that in forever!
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Niigaki Reito
Is that where that came from?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 1 18/11 ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 20, 2009, 05:52:53 PM
 :on gay: Just wanna tell you people that the comments really made my day and make me feel it is worth cracking my brains on the computer for the whole day on my off days.. =]

Oh.. I think my language is pretty bad cause it will take me really long to be able to get something out hence i'm grateful to the person that design and made Microsoft Word's word check.. should have seen it when i'm typing.. LOL.. I see red and green lines everywhere!
kurosawa87 : This is only the start~  :hee: I'm determined to finish this story..Hope you will like it as the story continues XD


lil_hamz: Thanks! Nah~ Risa is still a girl.. she is the young lady walking behind Reito which is her grandfather XD If you remembered Natsuki, you should remember Shizuru too.. Risa had replaced Shizuru~ AND Natsuki is..................................  :whistle: She will show up soon.. don't worry!


badsaints: XD Being a very delusion person.. all the stories i have in mind are all of magically theme... Are you ready?


rndmnwierd: OH! I must have twisted the sentence so much that Microsoft Words couldn't correct me  :frustrated:

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The catastrophe of war
-> got it from thesaurus XD

Haha.. yes..there is where Reito was from~ But this wasn't his orginial role.. Even though i had first few chapters out for the Mai hime version..but there was not much plot so i decided not to waste the intro story and make it into a MM version..so i seriously settled down to think through the plot.. Hope you like the rest!


Thanks people! Anywhere...Chapter 2 is on the way!

 :mon bat:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 2 21/11 ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 20, 2009, 06:33:14 PM
Anyway..even though the original story was for Mai Hime..but the plot was never out..so this story that you are currently reading just is still pretty original =]

Points to note:

Basically everything is very magically..so don't think of anything too modern..Clothings and buildings too..

Elves -Normal elves..usually have blue eyes and blonde hair

Grand Elves -Pure blood elves.. Black hair (or raven which is the description i use more often) and the eyes colour will come on shortly when the character is out XD


I don't wanna spoilt the fun..so i'll explain the more complicated stuffs about this chapter at the bottom..Enjoy!


Chapter 2
The Ice Palace’s New Guest


Esmerelda - Land of Elves

Esmereldans - residents in Esmerelda

Ice Palace - the scarcest place in Esmerelda where the grand elves live

Kumudini - means the white night lotus. A force formed by the Niigaki family, a long linage of elven fighters, that secure the portal on Earth that was linked to the dark world

Hakama - A type of Traditional Japanese clothing wore for Kendo training

Torii Gate - A traditional Japanese Gate.. just without those water XD

(http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/zz104/amethystosx/Miyajima_torii_gate_postcard-1.jpg)

Gaki - In case for people who didn't know.. it means brat in japanese

Aranrhod - means silver circle. Used by Esmereldans to enter the Ice palace.

The Keeper of Aranrhod - In charge the Aranrhod

Inukami - Direct translation would be Dog God but they are just dog spirit with magical powers. They are from Japanese Mythology known as 犬神, but minus all the horrible scary part if you read up from Wikipedia. They are just normal dog spirit found in forest.



“Welcome to the Ice Palace” she heard a voice said.

Stepping out from behind her grandfather, she saw the owner of the voice that greeted them. She was dressed in an ivory white elven robe put together by golden threads. From the material of her clothes, the blue-eyed lady knew she was no mere servant. Behind her was a torii gate. Not only was the land behind the torii gates surging with power but the greenery in there seems to be a little different from the ones outside.

“How to you do, Niigaki-san”
“Still alive. Matsuura-san?” Reito replied with a sloppy smile on his face.
“Usual. And who might be this fine lady be?”
“Niigaki Risa, 28th generation of the Niigaki family.”
“And soon to be Commander of Kumudini I supposed”
“I’m one of the worst in my family linage and the only reason being I’m fortune enough to inherit the title is that I’m the only heir” she replied humbly and gracefully.
“Nii..”
“Gaki, please, Niigaki is for my grandfather, Matsuura-san”
Brat?”
“I can be one if I tried now but it’s just a pet name the old man gave me during my younger days. He can handle a horde of demons then but not little me.” Risa said with a grin.

A loud sigh could be heard beside them, followed by some soft murmurs. Aya could not help but giggled when she saw the contrast of Risa’s gracefulness and the frown on Reito’s face. Apart from the similar family hakama they were both wearing, it was hard to imaging that they were even blood-related for Risa had chestnut brown hair with a little of dark blonde while Reito’s were all blonde. Even though both their eyes were blue in colour, but Risa’s were blue with a tint of purple in them while Reito’s were of clear crystal blue. Finally, it was their ears. Reito still had the trademark pointed elven ears but Risa just had normal ears. But, in Aya’s opinion, the mischief still runs in the line.

“Please call me Aya then, Gaki-san”
“Aya-san, please pardon my grandfather just now and for all other sins I believe he had committed here” afterall, her grandfather was known as the ever carefree commander of Kumudini, but no one complaints as they all knew he is the best and still is the best at what he does.

“Hey!” Giggles could be heard again from Aya.
“And this cute little one?” Aya squats down to scratch the little white furball behind its ear. It had the most beautiful sliver eyes Aya had even seen.
“Eri, my Inukami” Eri barks at the mention of her name
“Nice to meet you, Eri-chan.” With a final pat, Aya stood up and hands Risa a sliver bracelet.
“Anyway, please put this on.”
“So this is Aranrhod.”
“Yes, the silver circle of protection. We are blessed by this bracelet to be able to serve Her Majesty.”
“And a special one for the little one” Aya said as she puts on the sliver ring on Eri’s dog collar.

Aranrhod was made long ago by a loyal mage so that he and other willing Esmereldans were able to serve the grand elf. No any other bracelets will look much like the Aranrhod. Around the Aranrhod, were engravings of ancient writing and there is an unmistakable emerald, which can only be found in the palace land. This gem protects the servants of the land and allows them to pass through the invisible barrier. It was said that each and every of this bracelets were made by the mage and later, by his decedents. They were also known as the Keepers of the Aranrhod.

Needless to say, from Aya’s last name and the robe she wore, Risa had already figured out that Aya was the current Keeper of Aranrhod.

After Risa slipped the Aranrhod onto her right hand, magically, it seems to shrink until it fits the size of Risa’s wrist, making it hard to slip out again.

And then it hits her. Her powers had been contained. She felt as if her body was missing something familiar and she was saddened a little by the thought.

“How are you feeling, child?”
“Contained… so… to enter the Ice Palace is to contain your own power?”
“Yes, but not all. It just minimums the offensive power. The barrier forbids entry to anyone other then Her Majesty and Her Highness. With the Aranrhod, or more specify, the emerald, it hides your power and sends out a certain aura much similar to Her Majesty to gain access into the Ice Palace. “

“Reasonable exchange, it sort of made them protected from anyone that enters palace as well. Look~ Eri is as carefree as ever still.”
Eri was just bouncing and running around excitedly, fascinated by the new surroundings as if she was totally unaffected by the sudden containment.

“Shall we?”
Aya giggled, while stepping aside to allow them through the torii gate while introducing herself to Risa.
As for Reito, he does not the Aranrhod as loyal subjects like him that requires being in and out of the palace often is given the emerald as the form of an ear stud.

Upon entering the torii gate, Risa now knew why the Ice Palace was named that way. There was a significant change in temperature once they stepped passed the torii gate and as they walk further into the forest, Risa cannot help but be amazed the second time today by the greeneries. But these were different from the ones she had seen outside the palace grounds. The trees and flowers were all magically covered by a thin layer of ice, like crystals on them. The colour of the surrounding too seems to be a shade duller than it is to be due to the light mist covering the area.

As they proceed on, they pass through yet another torii gate and were now right in front of the palace. This place truly surprises Risa to no ends. The palace was much like the one they had during federal Japan. 

“This is the West Wing where all the guest quarters are. The East Wing over there is the Keep of Aranrhod, which is where chamber is too. And the North Wing is the where the grand hall is and the banquet will be hang there later on. Further North would be the royal chambers.”

“This will be your quarter for the next few days, Gaki-san. Your grandfather’s will be just down this corridor. I believe it had been a long day. Please do rest well and be at the grand hall later on in the evening.”
“Thank you, Aya-san. See you later at the banquet and if you will excuse me for now. Eri~ Come on in.” Risa smiled as Eri quickly made her way into the room and closed the door lightly. Aya then further escorts Reito to his quarters.

“What a day…” Risa sighed as she lay on the bed. Eri joined her on the bed and starts licking Risa’s face. Giggling, Risa pushes Eri away from her face and hugs her to her chest, stroking her soft fur. Eri finally settles down and snuggle into Risa’s neck. Before long, Eri was already sounded asleep. Closing her eyes too, Risa took in a deep breath and finally took the time to feel the palace. She was still not used to having part of herself contained. There was nothing she can do about it and a good rest seems more important now. Soon she too joined Eri in Lala Land.


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- I know..i know.. Eri is now a dog! but there is more to it! Continue reading on and you will see~! Anyway..i know Risa only calls Eri as Kame.. but she is no longer a Turtle..so........

- Basically..Risa is a half elven..she is of a elf dad and human mum

Feel free to ask me anything if you are lost.   :on gay:


 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 2 - 21/11 ]
Post by: kuro808 on November 20, 2009, 07:00:42 PM
Yeah Eri is a dog... :lol:

Nothing right now that i am confused about  :thumbup keep up the good work
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 2 - 21/11 ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 20, 2009, 07:11:05 PM
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“Eri, my Inukami”
:lol: :lol: :lol:
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- I know..i know.. Eri is now a dog!
:lol: :lol: XD

I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 2 - 21/11 ]
Post by: badsaints on November 21, 2009, 10:02:56 AM
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“Gaki, please, Niigaki is for my grandfather, Matsuura-san”
“Brat?”
“I can be one if I tried now but it’s just a pet name the old man gave me during my younger days.
I'd like to see her be one heck of a brat :lol:


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“Eri, my Inukami” Eri barks at the mention of her name
Why do I find this amusing? :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 2 - 21/11 ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 24, 2009, 03:25:51 PM
kurosawa87: Haha~ thanks ya... i thought i might be killed by Eri's fans LOL~

rndmnwierd:  :D Glad that my puppy Eri is loved.

badsaints: Haha.. Gaki-san will be pretty much a little brat now too actually.. Even me myself was amazed when i put Eri into this character.. It was never in the original story so it was made up especially for her. XD


Here is a picture i had in mind how how Pup Eri looks like.. Just that she had sliver eyes~

(http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/zz104/amethystosx/Wolf-White-Pup.jpg)


I have been doing much speed updating due to the story's magically themes, it requires alot of background, much so that my the other main character is not out yet.. Promise she will be out by this week XD Enjoy




Chapter 3
Esmerelda’s Banquet



As the sun began to set, Risa was already dressed in her ceremonial hakama. The one she had came with was a normal hakama, more for outing and fighting purposes but the one she is wearing now was entirely black except the blood red slash around her waist. It was the first time she was wearing it. On it was a half blossom white lotus, signifying she was the next heir of Kumudini. This was the reason why her grandfather had brought her to the banquet. To be introduced as the next commander of Kumudini.

While tying her hair up into a high ponytail, she called out “Eri~! Are you done? We are going to be late.”

“Mou~ Gaki-san, we still have thirty more minutes.” Risa looks up into the mirror and saw the sliver-eyed girl from the mirror reflection. She was too dressed in a hakama.

Inukami are able to transform into various forms such as human but they mainly prefers to go around in their primary form.

“And that is the reason why I’m always thirty minutes earlier.” Risa sighs as she stood up and walked towards her pup.

“Ears and tail.” Risa reminded her pup. Most of Eri had already been transformed to her human self apart from the mentioned two and some of her ash-white hair. Generally, most of her hair was dark brown in colour now.

“But I like them” Eri pouted

“Yes I think they are adorable too but you know we couldn’t have them at the banquet.” Risa replied softly as she scratched Eri’s ears

Nothing is better than a good scratch behind the ear for her pup to put the pout away. Eri was already hugging her and had her head attached to her neck, purring softly.

“Hey~ Stop. What did I say about licking?” Risa pushes Eri face away from her neck gently.

“No licking. Especially in human form.” Eri pouts again. Risa just giggled at how well her pup could actually put up that sad puppy look.

“Come on. I’ll brush your hair. Your hair is like a living disaster now.”

“Ok! I’ll go get the brush!” brushing was one of her pup favorite too.

After getting Eri ready, Risa checked her clothes one last time from head to toe in the full length mirror before she leaves the room with Eri close behind.

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With her grandfather now, they were outside the grand hall, at the waiting room along with many other descendants of well-known elven and mage families from all over Esmerelda. Reito was too dressed in his formal hakama that much resembles Risa’s but just that his slash was gold in colour with a full blossom white lotus. They waited as each of them was one by one announced into the grand hall by Aya.

“Reito Niigaki, 27th Generation of the Niigaki family, Commander of Kumudini.  Risa Niigaki, 28th Generation of the Niigaki family.” As Aya made the announcement, Risa and her grandfather entered the grand hall with much pride and grace. Following closely behind them was Eri.

Finally she was able to set her eyes on the famous raven elf linage. Yes, she had seen many elves but none had raven hair like the two at the far end of the hall. Most elves have blonde hair and blue eyes and even half elven like her, still inherits some of the lighter hair colour and her eyes are still in a considerable shade of blue.

But what really caught her attention was a particular pair of emerald eyes on her. The green almost resembles the leaves she had seen earlier this morning, beautifully covered in a thin layer of ice.

It was so clear and beautiful. She felt her heart tighten a little.

“Niigaki-san, welcome.” Yuko greeted them
“Your Majesty” Reito said as he bowed, Risa following wise.
“Your Highness” again he bowed but to the lady in front of Risa instead.

A few words were exchanged between the Queen and her grandfather, she cannot really make up what were saying as she was too drawn into the now staring game with the Princess which only ended when she heard questions directed to her. It was just some ceremonious question and remarks.

They were escorted towards their allocated table as more were being announced into the grand hall. Once seated, blue-eyes could not help but were immediately drawn back to the emerald eyes again.

When all the guests have been announced into the grand hall, the banquet began.
After a while, she noticed another pair of golden-eyes was staring at her. Or rather, more specifically at Eri who was behind her.
Throughout, both sapphire and emerald were taking small peeks at each other whenever possible while entertaining others with little chats.

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“Finally…”
Risa sighed as she walked out to the royal garden alone. Her grandfather knew she hated it but it was for her own good. So she just followed her grandfather around, greeting the different people she needed to bridge connection with if she were to take over her grandfather.

Currently, Eri is now in her place. She had Eri changed into her and magically made a dummy Eri. She even cast an aura protection barrier to prevent her grandfather from noticing.

She settled down in an empty pavilion, closed her eyes and took a deep breath, trying to smoothen the unsettling feeling that she had ever since she entered the Ice Palace. The air in the garden was cooler and much sweeter. Taking in a couple more deep breaths, she was finally able to relax.

“You smells”


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Don't bite me :on chew:

 :mon bat:





Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 3 - 24/11 ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 24, 2009, 04:09:04 PM
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“Hey~ Stop. What did I say about licking?” Risa pushes Eri face away from her neck gently.
XD That pic is soooo cute, too!

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But what really caught her attention was a particular pair of emerald eyes on her.
Ai-chan? :w00t: :w00t:

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After a while, she noticed another pair of golden-eyes was staring at her. Or rather, more specifically at Eri who was behind her.
Reina??  :w00t:

Ooo, can't wait for them all to meet!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 3 - 24/11 ]
Post by: badsaints on November 24, 2009, 04:26:11 PM
Gakikame kawaii! :w00t: Aww there's an Eri like the one in the pix and behaving like in the story, I'm bringing one home tomorrow :wub:

I'm thinking it's Aichan and Reina too XD But I'm wondering who had uttered the last line :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 3 - 24/11 ]
Post by: kuro808 on November 24, 2009, 08:44:54 PM
Yeah, the emerald and golden eyes caught my attention

well Eri must be a cute dog XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 3 - 24/11 ]
Post by: kRisZ on November 25, 2009, 03:03:29 AM
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“I can be one if I tried now but it’s just a pet name the old man gave me during my younger days. He can handle a horde of demons then but not little me.” Risa said with a grin.

 :lol: Oh Risa I so  :heart: you


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“Eri, my Inukami” Eri barks at the mention of her name

OMG  Eri's a dog  XD


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“Mou~ Gaki-san, we still have thirty more minutes.” Risa looks up into the mirror and saw the sliver-eyed girl from the mirror reflection. She was too dressed in a hakama.

She can transform  :w00t:  She's still Kame, the slow turtle  XD


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“Ears and tail.” Risa reminded her pup. Most of Eri had already been transformed to her human self apart from the mentioned two and some of her ash-white hair. Generally, most of her hair was dark brown in colour now.

“But I like them” Eri pouted

“Yes I think they are adorable too but you know we couldn’t have them at the banquet.” Risa replied softly as she scratched Eri’s ears

OMG Cute  :luvluv1:


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“Hey~ Stop. What did I say about licking?” Risa pushes Eri face away from her neck gently.

 :shocked  That's funny and so adorable at the time  :nya:


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“No licking. Especially in human form.” Eri pouts again.

Because that, dear, can produce electrifying sensation  :twisted: Lovely GakiKame  :wub:


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A few words were exchanged between the Queen and her grandfather, she cannot really make up what were saying as she was too drawn into the now staring game with the Princess which only ended when she heard questions directed to her. It was just some ceremonious question and remarks.

Takahashi.?.   :w00t:


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Currently, Eri is now in her place. She had Eri changed into her and magically made a dummy Eri. She even cast an aura protection barrier to prevent her grandfather from noticing.

Yay! Clever  XD


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“You smells”

Who could that be...  :prayers: Takahashi  :prayers:  Takahashi  :prayers:


Me loves it a lot   :thumbup  :gmon twirl:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 3 - 24/11 ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 27, 2009, 06:06:47 PM
@ All Readers: Hey people~ CONGRATS.. you had made it through the less interesting part of the story...things are definitely going to get more interesting from now on~ Enjoy~ :P Happy weekend!



@rndmnwierd: tempted to name my dog Eri if i get 1 in the future~ LOL   :w00t: :w00t: you will find out 1 of them today!

@Mum: whEre's the pic?  XD I wanna seeee~

@kurosawa87:XD Puppy Eri will get only cuter as the story continues~ One of the them is showing up today  :wub:

@kRisZ: New reader~ :D 
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Oh Risa I so :heart: you
->  :wub: me too~ but she is a little brat in this story~ but still~ :oops:
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OMG  Eri's a dog
for once she wun have to be referred as a turtle..
Eri is still an innocent pup~ XD don't dirty her mind....~ at least...not so soon! =X





Aranrhod - means silver circle. Used by Esmereldans to enter the Ice palace. It contains the user’s offensive power to the minimal.

Chapter 4
Esmerelda’s Ice Princess


“You smells”

Risa turned her head toward the husky voice and once again she was drawn into that same pair of emerald.

“Hmm…Well…I did remember…taking a bath before I leave my room though” Risa replied, pausing a few times to sniff her clothes before finishing her sentence

“N..no…what I meant was… you’re different from others”

“Racist joke?” Risa pouted

“NO no no… Ok… this alluring scent…around you……” Risa waited patiently but not yet losing the pout, which~ was really hard to keep up at this point of time. The other just had the most incredibly cute frown, trying to get the rest of the sentence out seriously even though it was obvious that Risa was just teasing.

“Which is…naturally occurring but it’s not supposedly natural…It’s like…it emits out from you and it’s in your aura as well” Complicated, isn’t it? But due to the fact that Risa knew what the girl was referring about, hence she was still able to make out what she is trying to say.

“Can’t I just smell nice?” Risa doubled up on her pout
 
 “Fine…your aura is special. Does that sound better?” the raven girl sighed and crossed her arms.

“Much better” Risa smirked as she noticed the cute pointed ears peeking out of the girl’s raven hair were turning redder. Even though she was half elven, she did not have the trademark pointed ears.

Once again, Risa realized just how reckless she had been again. For she knew this raven beauty that was leaning against the pine tree not far away, had a reputation of being the Ice Princess. Not just because she lives in the Ice Palace but is always as cold as an ice to anyone.

Moreover, the power that is radiating around her is just so imposing that it could easily make one trembles uncontrollably in her presence, but yet, highly respectable. Of course, Risa she herself is not just a random somebody. If not, how would she be able to withstand the overwhelming surge of invisible stress, which was not only amplified by a number of times but too, constantly pressurizing on her small body due to the Princess’s full attention on her during their staring games.

Although with her offensive powers contained to the minimal by the Aranrhod, Risa was sure if things got ugly, the girl will still definitely not get away unharmed… but… wouldn’t it be a waste to flaw something like this? Beautiful things have to be treated with extra care. Don’t you think so?

“Please pardon me for my rudeness, your Hig…”

“Ai”

Risa could not help but grinned as she moved into the pavilion, sitting across her.

“I believe this seat is not taken”

“Ai-chan can sit wherever she wants. It’s her palace” Ai just snorted at the comment and remained silent.

After several long minutes of yet another round of silent staring game, Risa finally decided to break the ice.

“What is Ai-chan looking at?”

“Your aura”

“What about it?”

“I don’t know. Aura doesn’t usually look cloudy too.” Ai frowned as she replied.

“Is it raining?” Ai frowned even more choosing to ignore the cheeky girl

With that, round three was commenced

Risa herself was checking out the Princess’s aura for a second. Ai’s aura was of a stunning pure white unlike hers which was red and like Ai had mentioned, a little shady as well. But she had returned to just observing the girl instead. The girl was just much more interesting.

Speaking of the devil, it started to drizzle a little.

“Have Ai-chan found her answers?” The only answer Risa got was a shake of head.

Even though Risa was really enjoying the attention but…something is amiss.

 Ai was looking at her aura not HER.

With that, she stood up and walked towards the raven girl. Ai just watched her as she moved closer to her.

“Hmm… maybe Ai-chan should take a closer look then” Risa whispered in a husky voice as she bends down and placed her hands at either side of Ai on the bench, trapping her.

Slowly, the predator inched closer and closer.

Being caught off guard, the prey was so stunned that she remained motionless, unable to react. When she finally registered what had happened, her trapper was so close that she had almost caught her…on the lip.

On instincts, she started to retreat but the predator just presses on and continues to close in further.

Eventually, the prey got into a dead end.

The back of Ai’s head had come in contact with a wooden pillar. That was the further she could go but the girl in front of her just kept on closing in.

As the beautiful sapphire got closer, Ai noticed that there was this playful purplish glow in it and something else that Ai could not really figured out, but nevertheless, gorgeous.

Ai was forced to turn her face to the side, hoping to put more distance between her and the brunette girl. She closed her eyes, hoping…she didn’t know what she was hoping for actually. Her heart was beating so fast that she knew her face must have been a few shades darker.

Risa on the other hand was finding all this pretty amazing. How twisted she can be sometime, enjoying the different kind of reactions she was getting from the cornered but not exactly helpless girl. Ai could have gotten away from her easily… if she wants to.

Currently, Ai had a side of her face turned to her. Her eyes… squeezed shut, cheeks… flushed… and lastly, Risa grinned unbelievably at how cute the overly red pointed ear was.

Ai gasped and immediately brought her hand up to cover her ear when she felt a stream of hot air being blown into it.

Risa could not help but giggled at how cute Ai looks now. Hand over ear, eyes widely opened and breathing irregularly. She giggled even louder when the still blushing Ai turned to glare at her.

“Ai-chan is too cute”

“I’M N…” Risa cut her off with a finger on her lip before moving back just enough to get back into standing position.

It was then, she realized the girl had stopped her from embarrassing herself further, especially in front of others.

As the two figures approached, Ai realized it was her guards.
“Your Highness, Her Majesty requires you back at the banquet.”
“I be there as soon as I finish my conversation with Niigaki-San

The guards left and as Ai was about to turn her head back to Risa to finish the sentence...

“I…”Again, she was interrupted. But this time, by a hot whisper to her ear.

“It’s Risa, Love.”

“Had a good evening, Ai-chan” the brunette said nonchalantly, as she walks out of the pavilion and into the rain.

But even before the raindrops could fall on her, they turned into Sakura petals, creating a breath-taking illusion of raining petals.

Risa decided to just return back to her quarter so she would not have to deal with a near eruption princess. All along way, Risa had a goofy smile on her face.

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Sorry~ i'm just a sucker for TakaGaki~  :P

Probably all the  :prayers: have been answered~ LOL~


One more mysterious left........ XD

So... probably there is still more :prayers:










Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 4 - 28/11 ]
Post by: kuro808 on November 27, 2009, 08:51:33 PM
The smell must have been interesting lol, well TakaGaki is fine I don't have too much issue with that :D

Good Job
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 4 - 28/11 ]
Post by: badsaints on November 28, 2009, 12:58:41 AM
Oh Gaki you little brat! How you have teased our poor Ai XD

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“It’s Risa, Love.”
She's quite a big flirt, isn't she :inlove:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 4 - 28/11 ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 28, 2009, 09:34:52 AM
Risa is awesome! :rockon: I love how she teases Ai.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Land of Elves - Chapter 4 - 28/11 ]
Post by: kRisZ on November 28, 2009, 11:16:11 AM
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“Racist joke?” Risa pouted

Oh-oww


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“Can’t I just smell nice?” Risa doubled up on her pout

Damn  :lol:


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“Fine…your aura is special. Does that sound better?” the raven girl sighed and crossed her arms.

 XD


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“Ai”

Yay :gmon twirl:


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“Is it raining?” Ai frowned even more choosing to ignore the cheeky girl

 :lol: I really find that funny


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“Hmm… maybe Ai-chan should take a closer look then” Risa whispered in a husky voice as she bends down and placed her hands at either side of Ai on the bench, trapping her.

 :w00t:  :mon fyeah:


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Currently, Ai had a side of her face turned to her. Her eyes… squeezed shut, cheeks… flushed… and lastly, Risa grinned unbelievably at how cute the overly red pointed ear was.

Ai gasped and immediately brought her hand up to cover her ear when she felt a stream of hot air being blown into it.

Cute  :nya:


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“It’s Risa, Love.”

Kakkoi  :wriggly:


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But even before the raindrops could fall on her, they turned into Sakura petals, creating a breath-taking illusion of raining petals.

Wow  :bow:

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Sorry~ i'm just a sucker for TakaGaki~

TAKAGAKI is THE LOVE in my  dictionary hiptionary


It's awesosmely awesome  :bow:   :bow:   :bow:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Princess - Chapter 4 (28/11) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on November 30, 2009, 09:26:18 AM
Gomene for the late commenting. I really hate exams you know :(

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Shizuru sounds familiar, but I can't remember which girl she was. I'm kinda lazy to google it atm :P KAWAII I was a Eri puppy too :wub: I love how you wrote the interaction between them. I can't help but wonder if Eri can turn into human form somehow. Ehhh, Aya? It's been forever since I read about her in a fic. GJ :twothumbs

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OMG!! I can't believe I got the Eri turning into human form part right! I swear, I didn't peep XD

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“Hey~ Stop. What did I say about licking?” Risa pushes Eri face away from her neck gently.

Damn, this imagery is sexy to the max :wub:

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“You smells”

This is Ai for sure!

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How did they achieve the raining illusion with Sakura petals effect? That just sounds so romantic~~! *turns into goo* I'm a sucker for romantism AND TakaGaki. So I say aye towards your  :heart: for the monkey and bean pairing :)

EDIT:

I'm such a whiz at getting a new page :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Princess - Chapter 4 (28/11) ]
Post by: amEthystx on November 30, 2009, 12:54:40 PM
Random Information!

I plucked my wisdom tooth yesterday......  :fainted: 



@kurosawa87: Yes~ Its a very interesting smell.. What i had in mind is a very seductive smell but then again.. It doesn't really fit sweet but flirty Risa..(and usually seductive perfume smells really heavy..which i hate) So I decided to make her smell like ME!  :P So i picked Moon Sparkle from Escada out of my many perfumes~ Really sweet smell...but yet a little mysterious.. not able to tell really what it is.. XD So far that is the best i can fit it in..but i'll go more perfume hunting someday


@badsaints: Ohhhh~ Yes~ Brat version of Risa is a really big flirt..Seldom we see an aggressive Risa with a passive Ai ya?  :P


@rndmnwierd: Always thought that Ai would be the cuter one to get teased at :P She does have all the sexy look.. but the actual fact is that she is actually a very shy girl  :D


@kRisZ: Haha~ I guess i have thrown all the serious and hardworking image of Risa out of everybody window in this fic.. but i find her cuter this way~ and in actual fact, Ai is actually more shy than Risa i believe.. =]


@lil_ham: Hello there!  :D Oh dear.. what exams you have? hmmm.. this time of the year......... Polytechnic?

(http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/zz104/amethystosx/shizuru2.jpg) <- Any bells ringing? XD

Aya just fits into the character well.. she is a rather graceful girl in H!P~ not that other are not >.< but you know.. the air around her is different.. oh wait.. is it only me or what? XD

U sure you didn't peek?! :P More cutey Doggy Eri is on the way~! I'm tempted to name my future dog Eri already =X

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This is Ai for sure!
-> y is that so?? LOL

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How did they achieve the raining illusion with Sakura petals effect?
- I never really thought of this question..but since you asked..it got me thinking of a logical way to explain it.. lol

So basically.. this is a kind of memory induced spell.. It will replicate what the caster had seen, smelt and felt at the moment of the memory and recreate the scene all over again..Even though those Sakura petals are illusions, but they would have just feel like a real one..And when the spell wears off.. those petals would just fade away..So in this case.. i guess i had Risa to set the spell to last until Ai left the place..

If i would have to classify it..i would say its a pretty hard spell to do.. cause usually making illusion as real as to be able to feel is not an easy job...  :D Anyway~ nice question! got me thinking~

Oh~ i did notice that you r always the 1 getting 2nd page.. LOL




 :mon bat:




Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Princess - Chapter 4 (28/11) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 02, 2009, 06:07:30 PM
I like stories with magical theme like this :D

Since The original story was for ShizNat from Mai-hime, could it be that originally Eri was supposed to be Duran? I was thinking Kiyohime first but she's a dog  :nervous
Eri is so cute!!  :heart:

The Ice Palace suddenly make me think of Natsuki (=Ice princess).

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Yuko greeted them
:w00t: Nakazawa Yuko as Her Majesty? Yay!

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“Racist joke?”
Somehow that made me go  :lol:

Having read lots of Mai-Hime ShizNat fics, I can see why this story was originally for them. There's some parts that just screamed ShizNat-ness, especially the teasing part, the characters behavior --> Risa is so Shizuru like and Ai is so Natsuki like XD

But I'm glad you made it M.M version, gotta love TakaGaki!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Princess - Chapter 4 (28/11) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 04, 2009, 09:50:25 AM
@All Readers: Anyway... Whenever Gaki-san refers Ai-chan as Love, she is basically calling her "Ai" without the honorific.. Double meaning word.. depending how you like it XD

I guess no one doesn't know that Ai = Love in Japanese RIGHT?!  ;)

And i pretty much drop a pretty huge hint who the golden eye feline is..

Lots of GakiKame Love today.. :wub:

Have a nice weekend!



@pretend_2besome1: Hello there! New reader~ Glad that you like the story! :D Yup~ Eri supposed to Duran..You know..when you say Kiyohime..then i thought of the octopus..then Eri.. I was like.. OMG... Doggy is still cuter..Even though i did got something as a pet for Ai-chan too  :P

Ice Palace was for Natsuki~ haha You're Right XD

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“It’s Risa, Love.”
- "It's Shizuru, Na-tsu-ki"  <-- Original for this part.. Its definitely screaming ShizNat-ness

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“Ai-chan is too cute”

“I’M N…” Risa cut her off with a finger on her lip

-The answer was..you should already know.. "I'm not cute!!" LOL



@The rest of the comment: replied at the last post already~ XD

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Semi-human form - Simply a form that is all human other than the ears and tail.. much like how they look like in Haromoni@ LOL~


Chapter 5
Esmerelda’s Night


Back in her chamber, Ai sighed as removed her heavy white ceremonially robe and enters her private open air hot spring. It was a long day.

Half way through the banquet, the younger Niigaki had excused herself to the somewhere. The moment she came back after her short disappearance, Ai noticed something different.

Although its aura had been cleverly covered up, Ai was still able to identify the slight changes in it. After all, she had been studying it for the past few hours.

But more importantly, it was those blue-eyes that confirmed her suspicion. They were no longer searching for hers.

Discovering that the girl was only an imitation, she immediately excused herself from whatever boring person she was entertaining and did what she had to before sneaking out after the brunette beauty. The imitation was able to fool all, but not her.

She knew she was busted when her mother had requested her presence back at the banquet to send the guests off. Her mother was not really upset by her actions but more at not informing her about it. Yuko is not the strictest mum around but definitely not one that you want to mess with though.


As Ai lowered herself down into the water, she let out yet another sigh. It felt so good to soak after a tiring day.

As she settled down into a more comfortable position, her thoughts eventually drifted to a certain cheeky girl. She snorted at the thought and finally gave ways to the smile that had been tugging on her lips ever since the girl left her back at the pavilion.

Ai had to admit that she did take a liking to that mischievous pair of bluish-purple eyes the moment she entered the grand hall. It was as if she was drowning in those eyes. Surprisingly, it was the first thing she noticed about the girl before she took an interest on her aura.

Throughout the banquet, she was highly aware of Risa’s quick looks and sometime, stares. Of course she herself had been doing the same thing, if not how could she had caught and get caught by the girl so many times.


In the end, she was still unable to find the answers to Risa’s odd aura. But that, is nothing compared to the now, ever growing bigger imagery question mark on Ai’s head. It was the control the girl had over her. Usually Ai’s pride would not allow her, moreover to be embarrassed by. Besides, with her power, no one really did dare to mess with her. But Risa just seems to throw every last bit of it she have out of the window and probably been rolled over by a truck as well, but strangely, the thought of that did not bother her as much. They both knew she could easily stopped Risa from cornering her, but she just did not have the heart to or rather, she secretly did not wish to.

A soft whining broke her thoughts on the half-elven girl.

“It’s okay Nana. It’s not your fault. Come here” Ai giggled at her still sad looking kitten as she holds her in front of her face and kissed her lightly.

Pulling back, she placed the golden-eyed feline onto her chest, stroking her soft fur until she purrs.

Leaning back against the edge, she looked up into the moonless sky and smiled. The darkness seems to have coaxed out the more shy stars and further enhance those that are usually there, magnificently decorating the dark night sky like thousands of tiny shimmering dust. Beautiful as it may be but nothing like graceful demonstration of power by a certain show-off.

Simple as it may seem, but such refined display actually requires a great deal of power to create, especially one with sure capacity and details. Not only were the petals visually defined, it smelt perfect and felt exactly like the real thing. Up until here, it is a common example of a perfect illusion but what the brunette girl had done was way beyond that. The trail of petals left behind by the girl was even timed to dispel. As Ai walks passed each and every of the petals, it would slowly disintegrate into pink dusts to circle up around her before hovering high up above. Up until when she finally past the last petal, the mass of glittering dust shattered and fell like tiny shimmering star all around her before vanishing into the thin air. To this extend, you can hardly even call this a display of power but an artistic illustration of precision and control.


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Somewhere down the west wing, in a private hot spring, a certain brunette girl sneezed. Rubbing her nose, she felt the body against her stirred. Straddled on her lap was her slumbering semi-human pup with her head nestled on her shoulder. Looking down affectionately, she tightens her hold and gently rubbed her forehead to soothe the frown that was forming with her thumb. Almost immediately, her pup snuggled even closer to her and falls yet again into deep slumber but not before subconsciously licking her a little.

Anyone can see that she dotes on her puppy greatly. Even after being together for such a long time, her random pup still never fails to amaze her. Looking at the trail of clothes from her room to the pool, she chuckled softly. Her pup was clearly exhausted when she got back. Nevertheless, upon finding her in the hot spring, undressed her way to the pool before diving straight into the water to her and falling asleep almost instantly on her lap. All done in a minute with not even a word exchanged. Risa knew that her pup loves to be close to her but a bed would have definitely been a more ideal choice when she is this wore out. Leaning back a little, she allows her pup to lean all her weight on her into a more comfortable position. Smiling adoringly, Risa kissed her lightly on the head and settles on stroking her softly on the back.


Gradually, her thoughts shifted to a certain raven beauty and smirked. The goofy smile she had on had already toned down to a slight smile when she got back. But once in awhile, just like now, she would still be amazed by the image of Ai’s stunned face whenever it comes back into her brain.

When she moved back enough to see Ai’s face, it was priceless. Ai was still almost in a daze when she left.

Speaking which, she wondered what the girl thinks about her spectacular exit. Her nose had already started to itch a little from the Sakura’s pollen. Although it was only an illusion, but since it was a memory induced spell, putting it in layman’s terms it means that the spell is actually a replication of the caster’s memory on what she had seen, smelt and felt at the moment, then using that memory as a template to recreate the scene all over again, hence it still affects her like the real thing.

Risa, smirked again but this time, at how stupid she was back there at the pavilion. She was actually JEALOUS of herself, but did not regret her reckless move on the princess though. She was sure if Ai did not want to, no one could force her and yet, Ai allowed her to.

Looking up into the cloudless darkness, she was mused by the amount of stars that have littered the sky. Independently, insignificant it may be, but together in this glittering mass, the stars seem to be able to radiate its light brighter and further, softly illuminating the intimidating darkness.

Risa then, started searching for the star with the most brilliant shine. With so much selection, it took her awhile to finally settle on one before closing her eyes.

“Star light, star bright. I wish I may, I wish I might… I wish the sweetest dream for them both tonight.”

With that she opened her eyes and kissed her pup lovingly on the head before gazing at the single lucky star, thinking of the other receiver of the wish.

“So much power yet submissive… Only me? My Princess?” 

The thought actually brought a shiver to her body. “Hmm...My Princess…My Love

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Am i that easy to figure out? XD you guys probably already got the right guess of my character from the start..  :P

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 04, 2009, 10:05:52 AM
that was fun  :lol:

A really interesting chapter with GakiKame

keep it up
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 04, 2009, 10:28:06 AM
*refuses to believe GakiKame is romantic in any way, shape, or form* Awww, Risa rabus her puppy dog/turtle. Eri is such a good pet.

Is that going to cause trouble for Takagaki later?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 04, 2009, 01:09:47 PM
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But more importantly, it was those blue-eyes that confirmed her suspicion. They were no longer searching for hers.

Disappointed.?.  :D


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Ai had to admit that she did take a liking to that mischievous pair of bluish-purple eyes the moment she entered the grand hall. It was as if she was drowning in those eyes. Surprisingly, it was the first thing she noticed about the girl before she took an interest on her aura.

Yay! It's not the power but the possessor  :wriggly:


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They both knew she could easily stopped Risa from cornering her, but she just did not have the heart to or rather, she secretly did not wish to.

 :nya:


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you can hardly even call this a display of power but an artistic illustration of precision and control.

That's very badass  :rockon:


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“It’s okay Nana. It’s not your fault. Come here”

Reina


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Somewhere down the west wing, in a private hot spring, a certain burette girl sneezed.

They're still connected  :lol:


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upon finding her in the hot spring, undressed her way to the pool before diving straight into the water to her and falling asleep almost instantly on her lap. All done in a minute with not even a word exchanged.

 :wub: and  :twisted: and  :drool:     :grin:


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“Star light, star bright. I wish I may, I wish I might… I wish the sweetest dream for them both tonight.”

Yay! wish for two


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“Hmm...My Princess…My Love”

Nice way to end the chapter



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 04, 2009, 07:31:04 PM
Yeah, sorry I'm a late reader  :nervous

You know..when you say Kiyohime..then i thought of the octopus..then Eri.. I was like.. OMG... Doggy is still cuter..Even though i did got something as a pet for Ai-chan too  :P
Eri as original Kiyohime would've been......scary LOL
I was wondering at first if Eri was really Duran, then will Ai get Kiyohime? Thank god she didn't!

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- "It's Shizuru, Na-tsu-ki"  <-- Original for this part.. Its definitely screaming ShizNat-ness
-The answer was..you should already know.. "I'm not cute!!" LOL
LOL You're making me miss reading ShizNat fanfics

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Yuko is not the strictest mum around but definitely not one that you want to mess with though.
Definitely!

Nana's been watching Eri in chap 3 (wasn't she?), so um.....
Eri = dog
Nana = cat
dog+cat = fight?

If the golden eye feline/Nana is who I think they are, then I hope not. Let there be love between between cat and dog in this universe instead!  :on lol:

Anyway cute chapter! :thumbsup
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 05, 2009, 02:49:44 PM
Nana? Are we talking about a certain 07 here? :monk gboy:


*refuses to believe GakiKame is romantic in any way, shape, or form*
Ditto here. No GakiKame :mon scare: or ReinAi :mon fire: right? This is purely TakaGaki/TanaKame right? Right? :mon misch:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 06, 2009, 05:32:19 AM
I plucked my wisdom tooth yesterday......  :fainted:

Yikes!! Did it hurt? Did it? I remember something someone said to me about wisdom teeth. "You have no wisdom but have wisdom teeth?" Poor Hammy, been treated unkindly by a fellow MM fan :(  


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@lil_ham: Hello there!  :D Oh dear.. what exams you have? hmmm.. this time of the year......... Polytechnic?

Bubuuuu~! Chigau. Wanna guess again?

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http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/zz104/amethystosx/shizuru2.jpg <- Any bells ringing? XD

Ahh yes! I remember her! I quite liked her :)

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Aya just fits into the character well.. she is a rather graceful girl in H!P~ not that other are not >.< but you know.. the air around her is different.. oh wait.. is it only me or what? XD

I think so too! Aya has always felt like a more elegant and mature character.

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U sure you didn't peek?! :P More cutey Doggy Eri is on the way~! I'm tempted to name my future dog Eri already =X

I didn't! I'm a good reader ;) I've gone through this myself before. Anko, Mame, NiiNii etc. I won't call my dog Gaki though. What if people thought I was scolding them when I was actually calling for the pup? XD

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This is Ai for sure! -> y is that so?? LOL

I dunno. It's a gut feeling. Maybe you could interview my gut :P

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So basically.. this is a kind of memory induced spell.. It will replicate what the caster had seen, smelt and felt at the moment of the memory and recreate the scene all over again..Even though those Sakura petals are illusions, but they would have just feel like a real one..And when the spell wears off.. those petals would just fade away..So in this case.. i guess i had Risa to set the spell to last until Ai left the place..

Hmmm, you know what, this image made me recall SakuraGumi's Ame Hare Nochi Suki PV. They had the falling petals effect didn't they?

Could I ask you a question? Why do you always end with :mon bat:?


C5

Ai must really have stared at Risa to be able to tell the one who reappeared wasn't the real Risa.

I'm certain the kitty is Reina. Let's say this ends with TakaGaki and TanaKamei. But the question is, will there be a TakaGakiKamei and ReinaAiRisa triangle in the process :?

Wow, TakaGaki sure are similar. They even thought of taking a soak at the same time :D

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Somewhere down the west wing, in a private hot spring, a certain burette girl sneezed. Rubbing her nose, she felt the body against her stirred. Straddled on her lap was her slumbering semi-human pup with her head nestled on her shoulder. Looking down affectionately, she tightens her hold and gently rubbed her forehead to soothe the frown that was forming with her thumb. Almost immediately, her pup snuggled even closer to her and falls yet again into deep slumber but not before subconsciously licking her a little.

Anyone can see that she dotes on her puppy greatly. Even after being together for such a long time, her random pup still never fails to amaze her. Looking at the trail of clothes from her room to the pool, she chuckled softly. Her pup was clearly exhausted when she got back. Nevertheless, upon finding her in the hot spring, undressed her way to the pool before diving straight into the water to her and falling asleep almost instantly on her lap. All done in a minute with not even a word exchanged. Risa knew that her pup loves to be close to her but a bed would have definitely been a more ideal choice when she is this wore out. Leaning back a little, she allows her pup to lean all her weight on her into a more comfortable position. Smiling adoringly, Risa kissed her lightly on the head and settles on stroking her softly on the back.

Although this isn't gonna be a KameMame fic *sigh* I'm still thankful for the interaction between them. This paragraph is too cute to not be quoted :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 07, 2009, 05:58:55 AM
Random Information:

This make my day~ It's an old video...but... It's a good remedy for Monday Blues LOL~




Touch My Body (Tuts My Barreh) / Karaoke Fail (English subtitles) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G7oGx2dImE8#normal)

oYeEeEeeEeEeeEeEeeEeEe~

If there's camel up the hill~

Let's Gong Li with me~


  :mon roll::mon dance: :mon roll:


@kurosawa87: I had fun writing the chapter too~ Haha.. Eri's part gave me a terrible headache but i manage to pull through~ LOL~



@ GreenTea Plant: <- Blames it on hammy~ LOL
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*refuses to believe GakiKame is romantic in any way, shape, or form*
- :frustrated: <- you~ But.......Ain't they cute? *Bright smile* The answer will come shortly~ :P



@kRisZ:
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Yay! It's not the power but the possessor

-  :wriggly: The power just adds more to the badass-ness~ haha.. Like what they say... Girls like bad... girls~? LOL~

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That's very badass  :rockon:
- I love that paragraph too.. killed some of my brain cells though.. but it's worth it~  :P

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“Star light, star bright. I wish I may, I wish I might… I wish the sweetest dream for them both tonight.”
- I still do this sometime~ LOL~

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Nice way to end the chapter

- I love it too... XD


@pretend_2besome1:
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Yeah, sorry I'm a late reader
- Late then never~ Thanks! :D

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Eri as original Kiyohime would've been......scary LOL
I was wondering at first if Eri was really Duran, then will Ai get Kiyohime? Thank god she didn't!
- Got me laughing.. LOL~ now the octopus keep coming into my brain.. Oh dear.. 

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Nana's been watching Eri in chap 3
- Yup~ she was.. *Sly smile~* *Whistle whistle*


@Mum~: What 07 who 07? Sounds very familiar... Is it Miki?? From Gatas izzit? I KNOW I HEARD IT SOMEWHERE BEFORE~~ :frustrated:

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This is purely TakaGaki/TanaKame right? Right?
-  :mon scare: :mon scare: :mon scare: *Whistle whistle* Ain't that monkey cute?


@lil_hamz:
Poor Hammy~ :monk gboy:  hmmmmm~ let me guess.... then i guess this time of the year, there is only left with private schools~ LOL

 
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"You have no wisdom but have wisdom teeth?"
- Who said that? Hulk? Oh.. anyway.. Hulk is Estrea~ =X

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What if people thought I was scolding them when I was actually calling for the pup?
- Unless you are going to live in Japan.. If somewhere else... then maybe you can use that as an excuse to scold some unaware innocent passer-by  :P

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SakuraGumi's Ame Hare Nochi Suki PV
- Oh~ i just Google it~ Very pretty Sakura falling effects they have~~

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Although this isn't gonna be a KameMame fic *sigh* I'm still thankful for the interaction between them. This paragraph is too cute to not be quoted :wub:
- LOL~ thank you for quoting the whole paragraph~ I love this part too~ Regarding the triangles...... *Whistle whistle*


AND finally!

 :mon bat: <- Don't everyone just think that this is cute? LOL~ *Give very very innocent look :mon cute:*



p.s: I think the next comment will get the next page..i was hoping to get it *sob*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 07, 2009, 11:24:09 AM
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p.s: I think the next comment will get the next page..i was hoping to get it *sob*

.  :P .  I didn't get page 3 damn  XD


Thanks for sharing that vid, the sub was purely WIN  :on lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Esmerelda's Night - Chapter 5 (04/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 08, 2009, 03:43:34 PM
EDIT: DAMN~ I thought for sure i'm going to get the 3rd page! LOL~

EDIT 2: Hey People~ I did a little editing to the story.. just a minor one..cause i thought the original one was a little misleading..~


IF you can read it before.. the correction is below~ IF NOT~ then it's as usual..~


@All Readers: I would say this might be the cutest chapter i ever wrote(for now).. LOL~ Enjoy!  :wub:

@kRisZ:
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Thanks for sharing that vid, the sub was purely WIN

-  :mon roll: Rape me in my thigh  :mon roll: LOL~ i always laugh at this part

@The rest of the comments~ Look up~  XD

Things to note:

Materializing of Weapons: Usually, Risa and others don't carry their weapons around. Hence, when needed, the weapon will just form or as i stated, materialize. <- Yes..no doubt.. came from Mai Hime.. LOL~


Chapter 6
The Chase


Risa woke up earlier than she uses to back at home. Some people just tend to rest lesser when they are not in their own bed. Hence, she took a morning walk in the garden rather than lazing in bed since it is unlikely for her to fall asleep again. Last night, she got Eri to bed but not before drying her up. Doing it as gently as possible, her pup was unconscious all the while. Not even bothering to put on any clothes, she joined her pup on the bed. Seriously, why bother anyway.


She walked aimlessly around the royal garden, stopping as and when an exotic plant or statues catches her attention. Most of the statues were of magical creatures like fairies, nymphs, dwarfs and of course elves which Risa suspects might be of the royals from the robes they wore. But what really caught her eyes surprising was no big, complex and fanciful-posing looking carvings but an outstandingly small, simple, graceful and… cute statue.

It was a little elven girl. In her hand was a lowered half drawn bow as if she was getting ready to raise it up for a full draw. What was really adorable about this statue was the slight frown on the girl face despite, which Risa thought, was a confidence pose. Leaning closer, she spotted an almost unnoticeable kitten hiding behind the girl’s leg. If she had not close in to take a look, she could have missed it easily.

She continued walking around the garden and unknowingly, wondered back to the same pavilion. She smiled as she recalls the previous night event and giggled a little as those red pointed ears came into her mind again.

Moving into the pavilion, she took the same seat as she had yesterday and closed her eyes, feeling the slight wind and enjoying the morning sun on her.

Her grandfather had told her that he would be busy with work for the whole day but not before telling her that she was busted for what she did yesterday at the banquet. The old man just wanted to tell her that he had found out. It was a pride and ego thing. She was sure her grandfather would have or had done the same thing back in his younger days. He even commented on how she could perfect it. Ouch.

Her eyes immediately snapped opened when she heard a rustling sound from the bushes nearby. Staring intensively at it, she was even ready to materialize her katana as rustling sound got louder and nearer.

Risa almost burst out laughing when she saw her “invaders”. It was Eri. She was whining and had her tail between her legs. Following closely behind was a ferocious… tiny…black feline. Eri was already not in the room when she woke up this morning. So there she is, must have been exploring her new playground before she encountered the enraged kitten.

Spotting her master, the puppy immediately dashed towards her, barking for help. Risa could only laugh at how desperate Eri was as she jumps into her arms and tried to squeeze in between the spaces underneath her arm to get behind her. Seeing the pursuer still charging in full speed, Risa snapped her fingers.

The next sound was a soft bang.

After a moment of silent, it was followed by loud sliding sound.

With that, the unique orchestra ended with a hysterical laughter.

Risa was already holding her tummy as the kitten slowly slips down the glass wall she had cast infront of her. The poor kitten was too engrossed to notice it at all.

A few minute passed and the unfortunate kitten was still lying there motionless on the ground. Recovering from her hectic chase, Eri now looked worryingly at the still kitten and whined a little. She barked a few times to test the water before hopping down from Risa’s lap to check the kitten out.

Risa watched delightfully as Eri slowly made its way to the kitten. First, lifting her paws and tapped the lifeless kitten cautiously from afar. Not getting a reaction, Eri walks up close to the feline. She started by sniffing her and eventually settles on licking the kitten’s injured nose.

Silently observing this exchange, Risa look pleased at how benevolent her pup is, but sometimes, to her opinion, up to the point of idiotic. The kitten was just only hunting her down like a hungry tigress a moment ago and here she is, risking her “life”, looking out for the hunter. Well, since it was Eri, who can blame her. She would just have to keep an extra eye on her pup’s well being then.

As the kitten slowly starts to regain conscious, she noticed a pair of sliver eyes carefully observing her. It caught her off guard and time seems to freeze as the kitten stares up at the pup. Confused, Eri slanted her head a little. The move snapped the kitten out of the daze and immediate flapped onto her side to stand up, but not before growling at Eri. Knowing better than to upset the cat again, Eri hops back onto Risa’s lap.

“Reina” the kitten turned instantly to the source of gentle voice and spring to her purring softly.

Taking Reina into her arms, Ai apologized “Sorry about that. Reina just have a thing about dogs”

Reina was rubbing her nose with her paw as Ai checks out her kitten’s nose but surprised to find that it was already perfectly healed.

“Eri’s saliva has a sort of healing ability.” Risa answered Ai’s silent question. Even though the Princess was dressed down in her normal white robe, she still looks as gorgeous.

Then without warning, it starts to drizzle lightly. Again.

But instead of raindrops, Ai felt something soft falling all around her. To her astonishment, the raindrops around her had turned into red rose petal and were gently drifting to the ground.

“Hope you like roses”
“Favorite” Ai beamed. Risa could not help but felt this familiar squeeze at her heart when she noticed the shine in those green eyes as they rests on hers for a moment before shifting back to the fine spectacle.

Putting both her hands together, the Princess catches as many of those falling petals before bringing it near her face. The raven girl took a deep breath and smiled sweetly as those light flora scent makes its way into her sense. Satisfied, she bends down to release the handful of petals on her kitten and giggled as Reina tries them shake them off. Standing up, Ai faces the sky and closed her eyes, just taking in the feel of the everlasting pouring petals as they falls all around her.

The whole while, Risa just watched silently as she marked each and every of the Princess’s expressions into her mind.

“I’m taking my daily walk.” Ai said casually as she opens her hand and watches a few petals settles on her palm before scattering them on the ground.


At last, when the emerald finally diverts her attention back on hers, Risa was so enthralled by the current setting and atmosphere that she held an unknowingly breath as she anticipates.

“Wanna join me?”

Relieved as she may be, Risa tried to show no signs of it which of course failed horribly seeing the smirk already on the Princess’s face.

Making a quick recovery, she walked out of the pavilion calmly and steps out into the rain. Of course, the raindrops never got a chance to get her. They turned into violet petals instead.

“Roses are red, violets are blue...” She recited as she moved closer to the Princess

“If this is the last walk, to eternal shall it be.” She finished before bowing slightly like a gentleman, holding her hand out for an invitation. Throughout, Ai just had this grin on her face. When will this person ever stop surprising her?

Once again, that mysterious sweetness makes it way to her, taking over her senses. She could feel her whole body relaxing to it and everything around her seems to have zoomed out. All she knows was that she is so hopelessly drawn into those charming bluish-purple, till the point she could no longer turn away from them. Slowly, she realized those charismatic orbs were closing in.

“Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards before the lip caught hers.

“And why do you always do that?” Risa challenged

“Wrong answer” Ai smirked as she grabbed Risa’s hand and practically dragging her off.

Damn

Risa spent the rest of the day with Ai as she showed her around the royal garden. Anyone that might have chance upon them would definitely think that they were seeing things. The magnitude of the setting was just too breath-taking, till the point of ridiculous. With the everlastingly falling petals, those two were like a pair of mystical character that had walked straight out from a “happily ever after” fairytale.

Ai was no ice princess at all. It’s not easy figuring out why people have that misconception. Ai does not talk much but certainly will reply if someone tries to strike a conversion with her. But the lengths of those replies were always kept minimal or sometime one that you would not even understand. You just have to keep prompting her and she will be slowly starts to hold a normal conversation with you. Moreover, she always has this straight face which looks a little intimidating whenever she is idling.


It was late noon when Risa retreated to her room after Ai has to attend to some matters.

“Why did they even call it a garden? It is so huge that there is even a freaking waterfall in it.” She murmured. Not that she did not like it and on top of that, Ai was the one showing her around, but really, they need to rename that place.

The day finally took its toll on Risa’s body. She once again found herself on the bed as she recalls the day’s event. It was endearing to see that Eri is making new friend. It looks like it though. Occasionally, her brave pup would poke the kitten with her paw and runs back to her. Reina, of course growled at her at first but as the poking get more frequent, she just ignores it. At least…she was not chasing the white fur ball around anymore.


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Who wants the Puppy now!  :mon beam:

 :gmon nya:


Sorry about the OLD pick up line.... referring to the roses are red and stuff... LOL~ cause it just fits in~


CORRECTIONS:

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Slowly, she realized those charismatic orbs were closing in.
- Original was -> Slowly, the distant between hers and those charismatic orbs were closing in.

-> Only Risa was leaning in..~ the original sounds like Ai was leaning in too.. LOL~


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“Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards before the lip caught hers.
-> Original "Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards

HENCE~ NO KISS HAVE OCCURRED!

Sorry for the misleading information if i had~ LOL~

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 08, 2009, 05:11:56 PM
:imdead: Out of cuteness!! That's my reaction after reading this chapter.

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Yes..no doubt.. came from Mai Hime..
LOL! You already answer even before I asked.

Eri the dog was chased by Reina the kitten?? Too Hilarious! :hiakhiakhiak:

THANK YOU!! you've made me really happy with all that TanaKamei scene! :nya:  :luvluv1: :mon lovelaff: :farofflook:

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“Sorry about that. Reina just have a thing about dogs”
Couldn't blame Reina on that one, Eri is just too cute to be ignored! :inlove:

Oh, and what surprises me is that TakaGaki was reversed this time. It's like you're combining both the shy (tsundere?) and charming/dashing Natsuki into one Ai! And I love it!  :wub:

I hope there'll be more TanaKamei in the future!  :mon prayer:

Edit: Damn, I didn't get the 3rd page either!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 08, 2009, 08:33:50 PM
that was cute and funny :lol:

Rubbing the nose  :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 08, 2009, 09:52:58 PM
I laughed so hard at the image of Reina sliding down a pane of glass. Takagaki=so cute, but Tanakamei= :imdead:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 09, 2009, 11:46:19 AM
Hey People~ I did a little editing to the story.. just a minor one..cause i thought the original one was a little misleading..~


EDITED:
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Slowly, she realized those charismatic orbs were closing in.

- Original was -> Slowly, the distant between hers and those charismatic orbs were closing in.

-> Only Risa was leaning in..~ the original sounds like Ai was leaning in too.. LOL~

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“Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards before the lip caught hers.

-> Original "Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards

HENCE~ NO KISS HAVE OCCURRED! :P

Sorry for the misleading information if i had~ LOL~


@pretend_2besome1:
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Oh, and what surprises me is that TakaGaki was reversed this time. It's like you're combining both the shy (tsundere?) and charming/dashing Natsuki into one Ai! And I love it!
-> I guess you thought Ai-chan lean in?? LOL~ SORRY!  XD

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Couldn't blame Reina on that one, Eri is just too cute to be ignored!
- Reina actually don't really like dogs~ I guess.. there was once they said in Haromoni@ she was bad with dogs~ LOL~


@ Happy TREE

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I laughed so hard at the image of Reina sliding down a pane of glass

I myself was laughing when i decided to write it out.. LOL~


@Kuro

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Rubbing the nose   :wub:
   :wub: :wub:



Since i posting so i just thought i would just reply the comment first..haha

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 09, 2009, 12:20:41 PM
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I guess you thought Ai-chan lean in?? LOL~ SORRY!
No, no. What I meant is that ShizNat fanfics usually have two typical Natsuki characters, one that is blush easily and keep being teased by Shizuru and the other who is dashing prince charming like.

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- “Wanna join me?”
Relieved as she may be, Risa tried to show no signs of it which of course failed horribly seeing the smirk already on the Princess’s face.
- “If this is the last walk, to eternal shall it be.” She finished before bowing slightly like a gentleman, holding her hand out for an invitation. Throughout, Ai just had this grin on her face. When will this person ever stop surprising her?
Those lead me to see think that this Ai-chan was a combination of both Natsukis. And also that's why I thought TakaGaki is reversed in this chapter, Ai can also play the game.

Am I wrong or confusing you?  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: badsaints on December 09, 2009, 12:21:41 PM
One word for this chap: KAWAIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:
 :luvluv1:

Yeah TakaGaki was pure fluff and cute to read (with Gaki living up to her name et al) but TanaKame was indescribeably cute. Seriously a kitty chasing a pup?! XD And the shy pup trying to befriend that kitty? XD You are so paying for my dentist visits if I overdosed on all the sweetness :lol:

Heehee the roses poem is a little old school and slightly corny but since you're the author and this is such a cute chapter, who cares :lol:


p.s. Gasp! How can you not know who 07 is?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 09, 2009, 07:05:07 PM
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barking for help

 :lol:


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Risa was already holding her tummy as the kitten slowly slips down the glass wall she had cast infront of her. The poor kitten was too engrossed to notice it at all.

Oh boy, battle of the masters is inevitable


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settles on licking the kitten’s injured nose.

 :nya:


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“Why do you always do that?” Ai asked as she leans slightly backwards before the lip caught hers.

“And why do you always do that?” Risa challenged

“Wrong answer” Ai smirked as she grabbed Risa’s hand and practically dragging her off.

 :wriggly:  :luvluv2:  :mon fyeah:


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Occasionally, her brave pup would poke the kitten with her paw and runs back to her. Reina, of course growled at her at first but as the poking get more frequent, she just ignores it.

 :nya:  :nya:  :nya:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 10, 2009, 03:40:16 AM
EDIT: HA! PAGE 3 GETS!


@Some1 <- decided to nickname you  :P

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No, no. What I meant is that ShizNat fanfics usually have two typical Natsuki characters, one that is blush easily and keep being teased by Shizuru and the other who is dashing prince charming like.
- Oh~ i got what you mean now..I made some adjustment to the character to fit in Ai-chan more sexy image... And so to tease Gaki too.. prefer my couple to be able to depend and tease each other rather then having one person solely supporting another~  :D

Nah~ you're not confusing me.. just that there is so many possibility to Shizuru/Natsuki relationship..that why there are so many fanfic about it..they are so fun to write about.. their interaction is what i love.. Alot of flirting but filled with uncertainty and insecure.. Just like how Gaki-san is here

Even though Gaki is the one always teasing Ai-chan.. but she is unsure of how Ai-chan feels toward her.. so naturally she will get nervous although she can be reckless at times.. Its like a little school boy bullying the girl he likes~ LOL~ and too.. just how like Shizuru always feels toward Natsuki.. even she teases her endlessly, she always refuse to believe that Natsuki might love her..

 XD

@Mum~

I thought it would be cute to have the kitten chasing the puppy instead.. anyway probably only Reina will hunt down Eri and not Eri hunting down Reina~ LOL~ But Eri is one brave puppy.. I might be giving her some bravery medal soon~

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with Gaki living up to her name et al)

- Confuse here.. any typo? LOL~ what is et al ???

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You are so paying for my dentist visits if I overdosed on all the sweetness
- *Brings mum to the Dentist Horror House that GakiKame went into for Hello Morning!*  :twisted:

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p.s. Gasp! How can you not know who 07 is?
- VERY FAMILIAR~~~~~~~~ WHO!!!! NANA? LOL~ i know nana is 7 is japanese but then i also remember some maybe sport festival or something..some1 was 07! *ROAR*

@kRisZ

 :nya: :nya: :nya: <- i am doing this even though it's my own character.. cannot be help LOL~


LETS PLAY!

Ai: Errrr.... Author-san
amEthystx: Ya?
Ai: Can you stop the petal raining now
amEthystx: Isn't it beautiful?
Ai: Errr... Ya... But i think Gaki-san is buried under those petals and probably already fainted from the pollen..... You and I are both covered 3/4 up with petals..

amEthystx:...................


 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: aussie on December 10, 2009, 03:49:34 AM
New reader!


Actually I've been lurking around this story for a while, and I couldn't help but say something about the cuteness overload with puppy Eri and kitten Reina :lol: Seems like the pup has taken a liking to the kitty cat, while their masters haven't failed to notice each other either. Perfect, that gives them ground to get along even better now  XD


(Wait, Reina was the 'pair of golden eyes' that was noticing Eri at the banquet, right? So I'm guessing that means she also can transform into human......hm :D)


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 10, 2009, 11:36:54 AM
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“Wrong answer” Ai smirked as she grabbed Risa’s hand and practically dragging her off.

Somehow this line made me think of Ai as an S character :P

I didn't quote too many lines this time or I will end up pasting the entire chapter :D

I love how you wrote the Puppy and Kitty. It's not easy to write animal interaction well but you managed to pull it off beautifully. Now I REALLY want a Eri puppy. What should I do now!?!?!? It's impossible to find such an adorable pup in real life :banghead: Especially one that can turn into human Eri :wub:

One question though, how did the piece of glass materalize? The one that Reina kitty smacked into. Did puppy Eri conjour it up? Why am I always asking such things? :P

So instead of a theme song, TakaGaki gets a theme effect? Looks like in their world, it's sakura season 365 days a year. Romanticu :heart:

*Growls* You should have let them kiss for real! Wait a sec...did I growl? Oh no am I turning into an animal too? XD

TakaGaki =  :heart: Did you see how Ai held Risa's hands and said in chinese "Li Sha wo ai ni?" It's my clip of the year!! :twothumbs

PS: Wrong again. Author-san isn't a very good guesser ne? And Essy is hulk? Doshite? It wasn't her though.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 10, 2009, 01:47:03 PM
Finally you got the 3rd page  :lol:

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@Some1 <- decided to nickname you
You're making me someone. Did that on purpose, didn't you?  XD
You know I was just about to tell you that you can call me Chloe, because I can feel the pain typing my screename every time I log into my accounts :sweatdrop:
but the nickname works too so feel free to use either one.

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I made some adjustment to the character to fit in Ai-chan more sexy image... And so to tease Gaki too.. prefer my couple to be able to depend and tease each other rather then having one person solely supporting another
Which all the better for me! This Ai-chan is :twothumbs

Nice Omake! Maybe you should put it at the end of the chapter.

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just how like Shizuru always feels toward Natsuki.. even she teases her endlessly, she always refuse to believe that Natsuki might love her..
Yeah, the part where Shizuru snapped in Mai-Hime coz she loves Natsuki so much (too much maybe) made me go  :cry:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase - Chapter 6 (08/12) *EDITED* ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 12, 2009, 07:29:23 AM
@All Readers: - My story can be all over place but i hope it is not causing any trouble.. LOL~ Anyway.. Enjoy the story.!


@aussie - Hello there!  Yes~ New Reader!  XD Kitty Reina + Puppy Eri = Killer Combo~ LOL~ Maybe i'll add a Rabbit somewhere too~  =X

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(Wait, Reina was the 'pair of golden eyes' that was noticing Eri at the banquet, right? So I'm guessing that means she also can transform into human......hm  :D)
- Anything is possible in my story~~  XD but you will get your answer today! Anyway~ Glad that you like the story! Thanks lot~


@Hammy -
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Somehow this line made me think of Ai as an S character
- What is a "S" character?? LOL~

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Now I REALLY want a Eri puppy. What should I do now!?!?!? It's impossible to find such an adorable pup in real life  :banghead: Especially one that can turn into human Eri  :wub:
- Even if it is just a normal puppy they can very disastrous sometimes.. LOL~ My friend's full grown golden retriever had to be carried around.. it's too lazy to walk.. what kinda dog is that?! LOL~ If you find one that can turn to Eri.. please please please call me! I'll snatch it away from you!  :P

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One question though, how did the piece of glass materalize? The one that Reina kitty smacked into. Did puppy Eri conjour it up? Why am I always asking such things?
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Risa snapped her fingers
- Nope~ it was from Risa..~ Don't worry~ i'm more than happy to answer them =]

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TakaGaki gets a theme effect?
- Cause it rains every time they got together... Ai + Risa = Ame onna (Rain Girl) LOL~ So....i have alot alot of raining effects that i need to change them~ XD

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*Growls* You should have let them kiss for real! Wait a sec...did I growl? Oh no am I turning into an animal too?  XD
- you are going to turn into a hamster!!! LOL.. *runs away*

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TakaGaki =   :heart: Did you see how Ai held Risa's hands and said in chinese "Li Sha wo ai ni?" It's my clip of the year!! 2 Thumbs Up  :twothumbs
- Where where! I wanna see it tooooo!

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PS: Wrong again. Author-san isn't a very good guesser ne? And Essy is hulk? Doshite? It wasn't her though.
- ehhhhh~ wrong again for which question? LOL~ cause... it just fits her! =X


@Chloe
- I know i have seen this nickname somewhere! on fanfic.net? VERY familiar~ LOL

Did you watch Mai Otome? There are actually hints that they are a couple in that series... XD




Chapter 7
The Kitten


Reina had been on her guard the moment the Niigakis stepped in with the puppy, hoping even if the puppy had noticed her, her wary stares would make the pup stay away from her as far as possible. On top of that, she would once in a while, glared at the much hated Niigaki that had been staring at her master ever since she entered the hall.

Fortunate enough for her, most of the time, the puppy was always so engrossed with whatever that caught her eyes that she did not notice Reina. But still, Reina tried to avoid her at all cost.

“Reina, it is possible for you to change into me for a moment?” Even though Ai could have just ordered her to do it, nevertheless, she never uses the authorities unless she has to.

Although she was rather confused by the request, Reina did as she was told to do without even questioning.

“Neat~” Ai commented in slight awe as she walks around Reina’s new form, checking her out. Not only was Reina a splitting image of hers, the kitten had even gone into details like removing the smell of her perfume and had the one that she usually wears on. Ai had never done anything like this before. She had just copied the idea from the younger Niigaki but it is sure going to come in handy for future uses.

“You’re welcome, my lady” Ai laughs as the imposture imitated the way she usually speaks for ceremonial affairs. It is just too rare to see Reina speaks like the way she does.

“I see you have a very adorable kitten with you.” Ai replied as she casted a Reina dummy.

“Very attractive one too, don’t you think so?” her copy did a Reina-style smirked, while putting an arm over the emotionless dummy’s shoulder, giving it a few pats.

“And a fairly intelligent one too.” Ai chuckled as she stepped up to her look alike, rewarding her with soft kiss on the lip. Moving back, she patted her grinning self on the head a few times before leaving.

“Oh… and Nana~” Ai paused a few seconds, using the pet name to make sure she had her kitten’s full attention.

“No biting~” Ai warned her kitten. The last thing she wanted was to be regard as a rabies infected.

As Ai sneaks out, Reina was still fixed at the same spot watching her master’s retreating form with a goofy grin. Not only had her master rewarded her but she actually secretly likes it when she gives her an order, especially, using her pet name.

“Don’t you think she’s hot when she orders other around?” she asked to nobody in particular as she circled her arms around the dummy’s waist and rested her head on its shoulder, watching her master until she was finally out of the line of her night vision.

“Hmm…” Reina let out a small shriek and released her grip on the doll, back stepping a little away from it. Did the doll just hmm her? Does the doll have a mind too? It should. Anyone with any mind would think that her master is hot. Right?

“Didn’t know you have such fetish.” the doll giggled as it turned and face her. Reina was really starting to freak out and was deciding on whether it was better to rip the doll up or just run.

The doll decided speaks out again after she had enough of the terrifying look from the kitten. The poor kitten looked almost as if she was ready to bolt, screaming.

“Thanks… Nana.” hearing the pet name, Reina just kneeled down, faced the wall and leaned her entire weight on the wall with only her head. Of course the doll will be linked to her master. She MADE it.

Even though she was relieved that after all she did not have a lunatic doll with her but she was sure she can live with one if she knew it was going to be like this.

“Will somebody please kill me?” Reina murmured as she bangs the wall lightly with her head. Ai was already laughing hysterically and this only made it doubled up.

“Sorry~” the apologies came in short breathy exhales. Ai was finally cooled down enough to at least say that one word. Reina still refuses to face her. She was so red that Ai fears that her kitten might faint from the blood rush to her little head.

“It’s not that I want to spy on you or something but I didn’t know I was linked to it until I hear you. I’m going to cut the link. Have fun. And…please refrain yourself from groping sexy me.”

Reina turned her head sharply to the doll, but before she could reply, the dummy was already back to it’s emotionless self again. She was sure Ai is currently having another fit of laughter

“Ya… laugh all you want.”  She thought to herself to play safe.
“If you do this, I can still hear you, you know?”
“Grrrr… go away!”


She sighed loudly as she banged her head harder onto the wall one more time. This link she had with her master is usually closed unless it was required. Ai said that she did not want her kitten’s thought of yarn balls or whatsoever to bother her the whole day. But that was just a nonchalant way her master express her love to her. That link must have opened up when she freaked out.

Finally, as she settled down, she smoothens out her robe and fixed her posture before moving out to the hall.

As she stepped into the hall, Reina took note of the addition person she needed to avoid at all cost. The Queen could easier spot the different and the last thing she wanted was for her master to get busted. So she chose to join the group of people that was standing around the corner farthest away from the pup and the Queen.

As she leisurely chatted with a few, Reina notice something strange about the current younger Niigaki. She is supposed to be peeking or even staring at her. She thought she could scare her off a little now that she is in her master’s place.

Further observation confirmed her suspicion. Just like her, the pup was now in her master’s place. It was not hard to find out since she was already observing them from the moment they stepped in. The imposture Niigaki looks like she is so amazed with every single person she is talking to which was very abnormal compared to the real one. Looks like the pup still have lots to learn. She could not help but have this dreadful feeling that her master must had sneaked out after the now, even more detestable Niigaki.

“So far so good.” Reina thought as she excused from a boring someone to herself to get a drink. In fact, everyone was boring. She was already starting to miss the presence of her master.

“Can you pass me one of that too?” a cheerful voice asked from behind

“Here you gooOOO!!!!! Get away from me!” Reina screeched hysterically, and jerked backwards, causing her to lose her balance when she turned and came face to face with a beaming fake Niigaki. Lucky for the glass, Eri got it before it slipped out from the startled girl’s hand.

“Are you okay? Sorry… I must have been too close.” The confused pup apologized in a concern voice before reaching out with her hand to pull the girl up.

“Get lost!” Reina slapped the pup’s hand away as she stood up, growling.

Looking at the fuming Princess, Eri noted the obvious change in her eye colour from before. They were of scary golden-yellow now. The owner of those was now scowling at her so much that she could as if feel herself getting smaller and smaller. Eri shifted uncomfortably under those watchful glares.

“Ai…Can I have a moment with you?” recognizing the voice, those intimidating eyes immediately widen in shock.

Eri could only make out one word from it. Busted.

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The next morning, the curious pup was exploring the huge royal garden, when she spotted the black feline resting on a branch of a tree. Eri felt really horrible for being the reason she was being caught yesterday and decided that she should at least apologize even though the kitten is probably still mad at her. She rather deals with a few more glare than having something on her conscience.

Not wanting to startle the kitten again when she wakes up, the pup chose to keep a distance from the tree and waited.

However, being a puppy as restless as Eri, within minutes, the pup was already chasing and barking at some fairies that had distracted her when they flew by. Eri was so out of it that she only realized she had woke the kitten up when she heard some seriously pissed off hissing.

Having been on so many demon-slaying expeditions with her master, Eri learnt that there are times whereby she needs to swallow her pride to retreat and run for her life. And now, it seems to be the perfect time.

Eri bolted from the spot even before she heard the loud threatening scream from the raging kitten.


TBC
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Omake for last chapter:

Ai: Errrr.... Author-san
amEthystx: Ya?
Ai: Can you stop the petal raining now
amEthystx: Isn't it beautiful?
Ai: Errr... Ya... But i think Gaki-san is buried under those petals and probably already fainted from the pollen..... You and I are both covered 3/4 up with petals..

amEthystx:...................


Continuesss......

amEthystx: Gaki-san... wake up..~ *taps Gaki's face*
Gaki: *whisper* Can you get Ai to do CPR for me?
amethystx:.........................Ai, can you come over here a minute
Ai: ya?
amethystx: bring me my defibrillator
Gaki:!!!!!!!!!

LOL~ TBC



*Steals Reina from Ai and does this to her~*

kitty surprise (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=haEhjSRmzVM#)

I think this video will get a larger response than my story  :cry: ~ but it is just sooooo cute! LOL

:mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 12, 2009, 07:55:14 AM
lol Reina turns into Ai and Eri gets busted classic  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 12, 2009, 12:41:01 PM
I mostly surf there before I stumbled here and yep I have an accounf on ff.net with the same name, how do you know? You have one there too?

I watched Mai Otome but I like Mai Hime better, Otome got too much fanservice for me but I do like that Chie got to be an Otome!

:O this chapter is.....surprisingly ReinAi? Though more on the kitten side.

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And…please refrain yourself from groping sexy me.
:rofl: WIN!!

Your Eri is too cute, you're gonna kill me with her  :sweatdrop:
 
The pup is persistent, isn't she? (if not suicidal) XD but I love it how even though Reina is the one chasing Eri and Eri is kinda scared of her yet she's still the one who approaches her.
Go get your kitten pup!!   :onioncheer:

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*Steals Reina from Ai and does this to her~*
Watch out, that's one feisty kitten!  :lol:

One cute video and another nice omake!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 12, 2009, 04:48:56 PM
Okay I have a confession...I LOVE Reina (especially in here :inlove:) How can you not fall for the multi-personality she has in this chapter alone?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 13, 2009, 02:29:04 AM
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On top of that, she would once in a while, glared at the much hated Niigaki that had been staring at her master ever since she entered the hall.

Yay! Jealous  XD


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She had just copied the idea from the younger Niigaki but it is sure going to come in handy for future uses.

Copycat  :on lol:


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“No biting~” Ai warned her kitten. The last thing she wanted was to be regard as a rabies infected.

 :rofl: She bites, Eri licks  :gmon twirl:


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“It’s not that I want to spy on you or something but I didn’t know I was linked to it until I hear you. I’m going to cut the link. Have fun. And…please refrain yourself from groping sexy me.”

 :wahaha:  :rockon:


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Eri could only make out one word from it. Busted.

 :lol:


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She rather deals with a few more glare than having something on her conscience.

 :wriggly:  Ain't that pure 


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Having been on so many demon-slaying expeditions with her master, Eri learnt that there are times whereby she needs to swallow her pride to retreat and run for her life. And now, it seems to be the perfect time.

OMG I so love imagining the scene  :lol:


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amethystx: bring me my defibrillator
Gaki:!!!!!!!!!

You're mean  :on lol:


OMG the kitten's cute  :gmon sing:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 13, 2009, 06:33:49 AM
Omg, this chapter is full of win. I think everyone else already commented on everything I wanted to mentions, so I'll just save the massive quoting I wanted to do and say, "Ditto."

Though the Renai and Gakikame definitely makes me a little edgy.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: aussie on December 13, 2009, 10:47:18 AM
Feisty kitten there, but getting all mushy over her 'hot' master XD Love the ReinAi interaction here, just like GakiKame's 'master and pet' scenes from before  :wub: Guess the pup can't help but be drawn to the kitten? :lol:


Wait, so Reina and Eri were able to recognise each other even though they weren't in their 'pet' forms? If Reina recognised human Eri as the pup and Eri knew the 'fake Ai' she got in trouble was the kitten  :? Would that mean the meaningful stares Reina's golden-eyes shooting at Eri wasn't the 'checking out' glances?  :sweatdrop:







Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 14, 2009, 11:23:11 AM
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- What is a "S" character?? LOL~

Ehhh, how do I explain this? *thinks* I can't. So let's leave it at that ^^;

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- you are going to turn into a hamster!!! LOL.. *runs away*

Do hamsters growl?

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- Where where! I wanna see it tooooo!

Sina 20091209 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IShEjDlFs_4#)

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- ehhhhh~ wrong again for which question? LOL~ cause... it just fits her! =X

To both questions actually ;)

C7

Even though I enjoy reading about the kitty and I definitely enjoy puppy Eri, I want more TakaGaki :P It's funny how Reina always over-reacts when Eri's around. Isn't that Gaki's job? XD I can't wait to see how Reina will start falling for the adorable pup :)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 14, 2009, 03:22:59 PM
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Aww that video :wub: I fall more and more in love with TakaGaki each time I watch that. Did you see the way Ai look at Risa when she said those words? :inlove:


Once upon a time, in a land of TakaGaki kingdom, Princess Ai held on Duchess Risa Li Sha's hand and said...

Ai: Li Sha wo ai ni
Risa: Xie xie Wo ye shi


 :lol: Look at what sleep deprivation can do to you :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 15, 2009, 09:37:38 AM
@ Kuro - Actually it is Reina that got busted XD Only the Queen addresses Ai with her name~ Which we all know that Risa had just gotten the privileged as well... :P

@ Chloe - With the exact same name with any numbers and anything? If you had comment on some of the story then i think i might have seen it there... I do used to lurk around that webby~ They really have some great writers there.

Otome was good in the coolness~  :P I like how they materializes their robe and stuff~

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Your Eri is too cute, you're gonna kill me with her  :sweatdrop:
- Eri is my secret weapon to turn you all into  :wub: ! LOL~

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The pup is persistent, isn't she? (if not suicidal) XD but I love it how even though Reina is the one chasing Eri and Eri is kinda scared of her yet she's still the one who approaches her.
- Sometime i fear for Eri too.. like you mentioned.. It's suicidal~ but.... don't worry..she is under good care~

@ Happy Tree:

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Though the Renai and Gakikame definitely makes me a little edgy.
- Awwwww... don't be so mean~ Don't take the little time they have from each other now.. soon they wouldn't be spending much time together already...  XD

@ Mum:  XD Anyway..i found out who is 07 already... don't snatch her away!

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Once upon a time, in a land of TakaGaki kingdom
- Lol.. you can write a one shot on it XD

@kRisZ:
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On top of that, she would once in a while, glared at the much hated Niigaki that had been staring at her master ever since she entered the hall.
- ya~ Pets always does that.. especially cats.. meow~

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Ain't that pure
- yup! the pure white fur ball! I'm using her to make you all go "awwwww...." LOL~

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You're mean
- It's just too cute~  XD I need to do something before Gaki finally seduce Ai! LOL i so wanna drag Ai-chan away from the teasing brat every time i write about them..

@Aussie:
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Love the ReinAi interaction here, just like GakiKame's 'master and pet' scenes from before  :wub:
- Yup~  XD I think there is a need to write about their special relationship.. and it's cute too~  :P

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Would that mean the meaningful stares Reina's golden-eyes shooting at Eri wasn't the 'checking out' glances?
- Nope, they were not... Reina is bad with dogs actually... I got that from one esp of Haromoni@ but i do not know how true is that but in the story, Reina is actually afraid of dogs, hence the reaction. Eri had not noticed her since Reina had been avoiding her and only knew she was a pet like her when Reina freaked out and off goes the things (aura, smell etc) to cover up her identity other than the change itself hence she was staring at Eri with her original golden eyes instead of Ai's emerald. Since Eri is a dog, she will have no problem finding Reina just with smell alone XD <- this got me cracking my brain to think of an explanation for it.. but good question anyway~


@Hammy:

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Ehhh, how do I explain this? *thinks* I can't. So let's leave it at that ^^;
- this is so gonna leave me hanging  :( I was thinking submissive? but it doesn't fit too~  XD

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Do hamsters growl?
- hmmm~ They do..but it is usually really soft.. My hamster did that to a cat before.. LOL~


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Isn't that Gaki's job?
- Gaki is very much a well-composed person here~ but there are reasons for it  ;)

To the Video - LOL~ it's a pity Risa replied xie xie only XD but it's cute.. it was a request from fan is it?



Chapter 8 will be on it's way~

 :mon bat:

 
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 15, 2009, 10:17:58 AM
@All Readers: Follow up on the previous character... Eri was able to recognize the kitten cause when she freaked her, she had revealed herself (Aura, smell etc)... Even though she did not change back to herself, but was close to hence her eyes were the first to show the signs of it. Hence the pup is able to recognize her in her pet form. (thanks to Aussie for the question~)

Risa is not longer the reaction queen we know~ she have her reasons in this story... you will know part of it soon~ (Thanks to Hammy)

I hope i have not lost anyone with the time line of the story~

I hope this is enough TakaGaki for now :P


@The Rest of the comments~: As usual~ Look up!  XD

Chapter 8
Royal Garden Walk



Back in the royal chamber, a certain exhausted raven girl too, was on her bed. Her Mother had call upon her to purify the sycamore tree again. Recently, dark shady spots had been appearing on the canopy area, causing a weird energy to disturb the tree life stream, hence affecting the barrier upon the Ice Palace.

As for now, the problem had yet to propagate out of the Palace but since the ancient tree was connected to the whole of Esmerelda, it could easily disrupt the balance of life in the utopia if the issue persisted. The purifying spell was just a temperately solution. That was why the older Niigaki had been busy since his arrival. Much is needed to find the root of the problem since this was the first time in the long history that ever the tree was affected by an external force. For the time being, it is still a hush-hush matter as not to affect the peacefulness of the kingdom.


Seating up lazily, Ai chuckled as she notices her slightly drenched kitten licking its paw near her basket. A smile gently graced her face as the kitten hopped onto the bed and lay on her lap. Stroking her black fur, she realized that it had been really long since she had sure a good time. She could not even remember when the last time she laughed her heart out was or when she sincerely smiled.

Remembering that the brunette gave her something before she left, she fished the small crystal ball out from her pocket. Even though it may look like a normal crystal ball, the Princess can faintly feel the energy binding the orb. Lying down on her back again, she examined the bluish-purple orb.


Actually, Ai had long heard about an alluring demon slayer from the Niigaki family, who alone with her Inukami cleared a colony of demons that several generation of Niigakis failed to put down. However, it was not for the usual pride and family name thingy. It was said to be that she went after an argument with her grandfather on her ability and so as to prove him wrong, the demons were the receiving end to the brat’s tantrum. A reckless brat though but she have her abilities. Rumor has it too that the girl is actually inhuman. But that was never proven anyway. As for Ai, she has always thought the girl was just an arrogant brat that happens to be so magically empowered. She was almost sure the girl only had raw brutal power but all that she had shown her up till now, only brat was true.

Ai was never one good around stranger. However, Risa was an exception. The girl seems to already have glided passed the word “stranger” swiftly in less than one day. Maybe it was because she felt as if there were no distant between her and the girl as she hardly even sees her as a Princess like everyone else do. She always thought they were nothing but wearing a smiling mask when dealing with the royalties. Being treated with uppermost respect is what the raven hates actually. If given a choice, she rather be a random nobody.


After the initial drag, Ai had released the slightly rougher hand as they proceeded to the inner part of the garden. Of course, she received some silent treatment plus a mighty pout. Even so, the silent around them was pretty comfortable.

Occasionally, the only sound that breaks the silent would be the growling from her kitten followed by the soft rustling sound from the pup’s escape. Seriously, you had to salute the pup. Her kitten was infamous for her behaviors. Other then she alone plus a few minority of the animal population, the kitten will practically claw anyone that goes near her. Tiny and cute she may be but a terrifying monster when agitated. Even so, the pup that was this close to being hunted down was still determined to befriend her nasty kitten.

Ai was sure, even though the puppy is very much capable of retaliating when her kitten had flared up but just chose to avoid it. The extremely adorable and curious baby just had zero intention in harming anything.

The rain had started out heavy but gradually lighten down to a small drizzle before stopping.

Suddenly, she felt her company stiffened and seems to be on guard.

“Hey…did you feel that?” the girl whispered. Those were the first words spoken from the brunette since the start of the walk.

“What?” she pretended

“It’s like something is following us…” the girl further lowering her voice before turning briefly to check.

But Ai just shrugged her shoulder and asked the girl to move on. After that, Risa seems back to her normal self but Ai could faintly feel the change in the energy around her. Risa had her senses magically heighten. It was quite entertaining to watch this new side of her company. It must have been the numerous escapes from death during expeditions that caused the girl to be so wary of any slight changes in the surrounding.

“What’s wrong?” she asked when the girl suddenly turns and walked up to check on a little tree.

“This thing shouldn’t be here. It was way back there just now.” Risa walks around to inspect it before leaning in to take a closer look.

Ai could only grin as Risa jerked a few steps back from the huge eyes that were staring back at hers when she closed in. Even though slightly taken aback, the girl still kept her cool.

The little one was the newest addition to the Dendroid guards. Dendroid guards are mystic creatures that look exactly like a tree in their resting state and existed only in the forest of Esmerelda. They are destined to guard the forests from any external force. It seems like the mischievous little tree tried playing some stalking game before exposing itself.

As expected, almost immediately, the curious pup dashed straight up to the newcomer to check it out. Risa just stood a distant away, watching the tree giggles as Eri brushes up against it before turning to her with a questioning look and continues the rubbing.

“Alright guys…Meet my new guest.”

With that, as if the parts of the forest came to life, the dendroid guards start to slowly emerge from their individual hiding spots. As the troop gathered infront of them, Ai could see the slightly amazed look from Risa’s face. Who can blame her? How often do you see such big cluster of trees moving in unison toward you?

As for Eri, the adoring pup was so amazed that she was bouncing around, brushing up on every guard before trying her best to climb the little tree…despite being a dog. At the side, the kitten just yawned as she looked at the stupidly hyperactive pup.

“This is Treena… leader of the pack.” Ai introduced as a human size tree turned stiffly to extend a branch towards the girl for a “hand shake”.

“Niigaki Risa” the girl introduced herself and reached out for the branch.

Seeing this friendly gesture, Ai presses her mouth into a thin line and anticipates for the show.

As expected, came the loud cracking sound. The raven girl could only watch delightfully as the younger Niigaki’s eyes widen in shock, staring back and fro from Treena to the broken branch in the hand. Then, those bluish-purple orbs shifted to her briefly, pleadingly. Ai just chose to give her an unreadable smile. It’s really too cute seeing the normally well composed girl finally losing her cool.

What came out next sends Ai into fits of laughter.

“Arr…I’m…I’m sorry about…your branch…arr… I mean your arm…” the girl that had practically mowed down thousands of demons is actually stuttering, moreover, about something like this.

Those shifty eyes then turned sharply to her, eyeing her to quieten down but of course the Princess ignored that silent pleading. The brunette was now eyeing her as if she was some lunatic before getting back to the task on hand.

“I… ar… I’ll try to fix it…don’t worry… I’ll put it in a cup of water before I find a way so that it wouldn’t dry up.” Risa was actually getting a little desperate.

“And you! Will you stop that…This is serious!” Turning her head from halfway on the tree trunk, Eri wigged her tail playfully at her master before giving up the attempt to conquer the little tree when her master persisted.

Ai was laughing so much that she had to turn away from the whole scene. Eri was now whining sadly and hiding behind her leg instead of Risa’s.

“And you… will you stop that too.” The girl hissed slightly at the Princess, who had her back facing her.

“Don’t worry about that. Take it as a souvenir. It will grow again.” Came a husky voice. Turning to her side, Risa smiled weakly to the speaking tree.

“Treena does that all the time.” Finally the raven girl was able to cool down enough to speak again while turning back.

“I guess we should be back on our duties. Nice to meet you child…oh! And you too!” Treena giggled as Eri brushes up against her and wigged her fluffy tail.

“And of course, blessings for my Princess as well.” With that, together with the whole troop, Treena hummed a smoothing tune. Noticing a golden glow slowly surrounding the raven girl, Risa realized that they were casting a blessing spell on her.

“Thanks” the girl smiled presently and gave the tree a hug. As sudden as they have appeared, the guards disappeared without a track back into the forest. The pup decided to tail the little one until she finally lost track of her in the vast amount of greenery.


“You did on that purpose, didn’t you?” Risa gave another mighty pout.

Giving her a mischievous grin, Ai continued her walk.

“Hey! What am I going to do with this?” Risa jogs up to Ai and waved the stick around.

Taking the branch from Risa’s hand, she threw it far ahead of them. And knowingly, a white fur ball was now doing her very own speedy dash toward the area that the still airborne stick might fall.

“There.” she answered the girl nonchalantly and Risa could only shakes her head slightly in amazement.


Then again, they fell into yet another serene silent. After a while, when Eri got tired of her fetching games, she settled again on poking the kitten, but this time with the stick in her mouth.


“That was a blessing spell right?”

“Hmm”

“She did that trick on you too?”

“Hmm”

“So…I suppose Treena and you are kinda close?”

“Why so?” Finally the Princess spoke instead of just answering her with acknowledgement sounds.

“Well, you seem more open up with her, giving her hugs and all.” Risa commented with a slight pout.

“She even addresses you as My Princess. What happened to My Highness?” For the third time, the mighty pout came out.

“What happened to yours too?” Ai raised an eye brown at her.

“You know… Remember……” Risa smirked knowing the Princess had just dug her own grave.

Ai…I believe this seat is not taken” She mockingly imitated the way the Princess speaks.

The Princess just rolled her eyes and ignored cheeky girl, choosing to hasten her steps.

“Don’t be so petty~ Look… even Reina is not that petty with all the harassment she already got from Eri.”

Reina only sneered at Risa at the comment and attempted to claw the pup that was trying to poke her again. But the pup still succeeded without any harm from the extra distances she gets from the stick.
 
Ai continues to ignore her and soon, she felt a few light tugs to her sleeves.

Turning, she came face to face to a pair of sad puppy dog eyes that will put Eri’s to shame.

“At this rate, we will never get to the waterfall.” Sighing, Ai took Risa’s hand into hers and pulled her along. Recovering from the sudden pull, Risa gingerly interweaved her fingers with the one that was grabbing onto hers, to prevent it from slipping out again like before.

Risa was slightly relieved that the girl did not try to pull away but the Princess was just looking down, finding the fallen leaves and branches more interesting as she attempt to step on every of them. Even though the younger girl could not see it but she was sure the older was smiling as she felt the hold on her hand tightens.


Before even arriving at their destination, Risa could already hear the low rumbling of water. Finally, stepping out into the clearing was she able to understand why the Princess would take such a long walk each day to this part of the garden. The sight alone was heart-stopping. The waterfall was of such staggering magnitude that the falling water from the cliff top causes a misty layer of droplets around the bottom. Lucky for her, since it was just after the rain, a rainbow beautifully graced the clear blue sky.

“Maybe I should bring you along more often to get a rainbow.” the Princess mused as she watched the slayer’s face turning into child-like one.

“Hey! Look! A second one is forming!” the younger girl exclaimed excitedly.

“You think there might be a bucket of gold at the end?” the naïve girl continued, finally turning away from the scenery to face her.

“Maybe we can go treasure hunting someday.” the raven girl replied softly as she gazed at those shining bluish purple orbs.

As expected, those orbs again attempted to get closer, but this time at a rate so fast that Ai was not able to avert it.

“Eh?” Ai blinked unbelievably as the girl embraced her. The girl went for her cheeks instead of her usual target.

“Thanks…” the brunette girl sighed in contentment as she rests her head on her shoulder. With that, Ai hesitantly wrapped her arms around the younger girl’s waist but tightened her hold when the girl nestled her head into her neck. 

They stayed in the position for a long moment, just enjoying the feel of being close to each other.

Gradually, Risa pulled back and smiled sweetly at her before bringing her to under the shade of a huge tree. As she sits down, leaning her back against the tree, she tugged for the Princess to sit in between her legs. Leaning back, the younger girl wrapped her arms around her waist from the back.

“Only when My Love is ready…” the girl whispered lovingly.

It was now the older girl’s turn to nestle her head under the crook of the younger’s neck.

As to why the kitten was slightly drenched, Reina decided to get a pay back for all the poking she received. Seeing that the pup was amazed by its own reflection in the water at the waterfall, she silently stalked to get behind her before screaming and pouncing onto the pup causing her to jolt and fell into the pool, hence Reina got a little wet from the splash

When Risa scooped her soaked pup up from the water, she was wigging her tail more than ever.  Foreseeing the pup reaction, the kitten was already up on the tallest tree while the pup tried in vain to scale it.

On their way back, as expected, the petals disintegrate into dust of their respective colours and hovered high above them. However, this time, instead of shattering the petal dust from the show like before, Risa had the blues and reds gathered up before crystallizing them into a single small marble-sized bluish-purple crystal ball, coincidently or not, resembling much of her own eye colour.


Upon receiving the gift, Ai gave her a questioning look but the girl just shrugged her shoulders, only giving her a mysterious grin.


TBC
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I got a cute voice in my mind each time i wrote about the adorable pup~
One that says in Reina's voice "Dumb Dog"

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As for Eri, the adoring pup was so amazed that she was bouncing around, brushing up on every guard before trying her best to climb the little tree…despite being a dog
- After writing this, i actually laugh and put a "LOL" behind.. before backspacing it away~ LOL~

Anyway.. Back to the story.. for the first two paragraph~ Just a gentle reminder that this story might not be all happy days *Evil Laughter*

 :mon bat:



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 15, 2009, 10:30:05 AM
well that part was funny and the Reina and Eri battle is heating up in a very funny way

Risa and Ai are just buffering with each other and I guess they have much more differences than similarities
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 15, 2009, 02:43:37 PM
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the demons were the receiving end to the brat’s tantrum

 :shocked  Remind everyone not to make her angry


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The girl seems to already have glided passed the word “stranger” swiftly in less than one day.

Mr Moonlight was the first thing that came into mind  XD


I love the kitten and pup interactions, very adorable and funny, will make you  :wriggly:    :luvluv1:  :on lol:


Risa showing her childlike side was cute  :gmon sing:

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Gradually, Risa pulled back and smiled sweetly at her before bringing her to under the shade of a huge tree. As she sits down, leaning her back against the tree, she tugged for the Princess to sit in between her legs. Leaning back, the younger girl wrapped her arms around her waist from the back.

“Only when My Love is ready…” the girl whispered lovingly.

It was now the older girl’s turn to nestle her head under the crook of the younger’s neck.

 :mon lovelaff:   :mon lovelaff:   :mon lovelaff:


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mall marble-sized bluish-purple crystal ball

Hmmm
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Kitten - Chapter 7 (12/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 15, 2009, 04:43:20 PM
Hmm...are we expecting some epic magical battle coming our way since there was some weird foreign element infiltrating the Palace? If' that's so, I want to see Gaki in action! :w00t:

TakaGaki :wub: Since they are so touchy here, wondering if they will take their "friendship" to the next level. But since the innocent you (:P) is the writer, let's just see :twisted:

As kitty Reina would say, revenge is sweet. Or in this case, wet :lol: Poor Eri XD


@ Mum:[/size][/b]  XD Anyway..i found out who is 07 already... don't snatch her away!
LOL took you long enough :lol:

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Once upon a time, in a land of TakaGaki kingdom
- Lol.. you can write a one shot on it XD
Hmm that's an idea :w00t:
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On the second thought, nah...too lazy to do so :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 16, 2009, 04:54:29 AM
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- Awwwww... don't be so mean~ Don't take the little time they have from each other now.. soon they wouldn't be spending much time together already...

The less time the better. *pout*

So, yay on Takagaki. I wonder what Risa's gift does. Eri is full of win, though I still see every scene with her as a green dog with a shell strapped to her back. I can't help it, but it makes everything she does even funnier. And a big lol at the guard tree's trick on Risa. So cute to imagine.

Aw, at least let them kiss once before you send them through the ringer. Then you can make the ringer twice as big.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 16, 2009, 07:08:22 PM
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If you had comment on some of the story then i think i might have seen it there... I do used to lurk around that webby~ They really have some great writers there.
I've commented on I dunno how many stories but some are Mai-Himes, so I'm not sure which one you've seen.
Yeah, they have many wonderful writers. I thought that maybe you're one of the author too and that I have reviewed your story somehow.

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Otome was good in the coolness~   I like how they materializes their robe and stuff~
The flying part is awesome too.

Gaki's mighty pout is dangerous but her puppy eyes is the ultimate weapon of all!  XD

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Even so, the pup that was this close to being hunted down was still determined to befriend her nasty kitten.
I told you, suicidal. Get friend or die trying  :lol: (hoping it could be more though coughTanaKameicough)

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At the side, the kitten just yawned as she looked at the stupidly hyperactive pup
C'mon kitten, how could that be not adorable?

LOL Reina's got her revenge, Poor pup.

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the pup was amazed by its own reflection in the water at the waterfall
Can she ever stop being so adorkable?  :heart:
:doh: Damn, your secret weapon might just work after all.

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I got a cute voice in my mind each time i wrote about the adorable pup~
One that says in Reina's voice "Dumb Dog"
:wub: awww, that could mean the pup already managed to get into the kitten's mind. Next is the heart  :hehehe:

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Just a gentle reminder that this story might not be all happy days *Evil Laughter*
With all the cuteness so far, I was already wondering when you will drop the bomb :depressed:

The TakaGaki characters are awesome, they tease each other back and forth like equally which makes it very enjoyable and sweet.

Eri is full of win, though I still see every scene with her as a green dog with a shell strapped to her back. I can't help it, but it makes everything she does even funnier.

Never thought about it before, that's certainly one cute image  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: aussie on December 18, 2009, 05:42:51 AM
The last time I read Eri as an animal character was when she was a turtle who can metamorphose into human form in the fic, Goddess of Fire. Now I don't know which I find to be cuter, turtle Eri trying to crawl across the beach with her stubby turtle legs until Reina  :wub: scoops her up into the water, or pup Eri trying to scale a tree despite being...a dog XD


I say reward the pup for her bravery by letting the feisty kitten open up a bit more. What do you say, author-san? XD
Though I'm not liking the ominous air threatening to ruin the TakaGaki moments as well as the pup-and-kitten 'battle'  :(


I just love the parts where the masters dote on their pets in this fic, as much as the respective pairings working their magic on each other  :D And I say GakiKame and ReinAi work those master-pet pairings very well  :thumbup



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on December 19, 2009, 05:17:52 PM
GAAAHHH~!!! Your story's so COOL!!!! I read it in one shot!!! ahahaha... Loving the TakaGaki and TanaKamei pairings here... Why didn't I read it earlier? ahahaha... more Cat and Dog fight on the next chapters!!!XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 20, 2009, 12:27:40 PM
Hey People~ Thanks for the comments! Really appreciate it~  XD

Reply Comment Time~

@kurosawa87: Hmmm... I like to take things slow XD sooo... while then.. the pup and kitten will do the entertaining first~  :P

@kRisZ:
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Mr Moonlight was the first thing that came into mind
-LOL~ now that sentence never looks the same to me.. each think i read it..Yossie glides into my mind as well

And no.. i'm still not sending brat Gaki-san to you~~   :P

@Mum:
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As kitty Reina would say, revenge is sweet. Or in this case, wet  Poor Eri
- but the pup love it nevertheless~ XD

Oh.. ya~ i can get the pain of writing now.. LOL~ sometime when i wrote something in previous chapter.. and realize it will contradict my future chapters... i need to crack my brain again and curse myself...but i still enjoys it..XD


@Happy Tree
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The less time the better. *pout*
-Need another kiss?  XD

OMG~ green dog...with a shell..haha.. it's hilarious... Makes me think of Grinch since x'mas is around the corner..  :D

@Chloe - Hmmm.... i didn't wrote any stories there.. but maybe i have seen you while i was going through other writer's review =X
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I told you, suicidal. Get friend or die trying  :lol:  (hoping it could be more though coughTanaKameicough)
- die trying *shocked* Reina is not that~ mean~ LOL~ even so...i'm not that mean! LOL..

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Can she ever stop being so adorkable?
- LOL~ This is why we love Eri don't we? the real her is pretty dorky as well.. i laugh every time when she do something really cold but funny.. she is just able to pull them off~

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:wub: awww, that could mean the pup already managed to get into the kitten's mind. Next is the heart
-  :D It's true though..you wun even bother if it's someone you don't care about..  ;)

@aussie: I didn't have so much pet and master interactions at first.. but it got added more of it halfway through somewhere... I'm glad that it is doing well.. it's fun to write about the different kinda love they shows to their pet..  :)

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Eri trying to crawl across the beach with her stubby turtle legs until Reina :wub: scoops her up into the water
- LOL stubby turtle legs... poor Eri.. but it seem quite sweet doesn't it? Is the story in H!P? i never read it before.. I always imaging the pup hugging the tree trunk only instead of scaling...cause she can't really climb~ LOL~

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I say reward the pup for her bravery by letting the feisty kitten open up a bit more. What do you say, author-san?  XD
- Maybe the next chapter might answer this a little~  :P

@cogi-yoshi: Hello there! New Reader~  :D Thanks lots! All comments mean a lot to me~ It's never too late! haha~ I read your Broken Destiny all 29 chapters in one shot too.. (and ran away crying because Maki is dead.. LOL) haha~ Hope you like the rest! Enjoy the magical ride~

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Chapter 9 is on the way  :wub:

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 20, 2009, 12:48:06 PM
@ All Readers: Regarding the "bomb" that i might drop that everyone is worrying about......... I'm still considering if i should drop a small one first...but i actually like to slowly "bake"  the cream puff in the oven.... until....the cream Explodes from the inside! LOL~  XD (Do they even bake cream puff in an oven??? I'm not a good cook~ LOL)

Anyway...thanks all for your comment and supports~ It makes my day~ =]


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Chapter 9
The Chase 2


Once again, Risa was at the pavilion. She had deliberately got up earlier this time round, hoping to catch the Princess on her daily walk again. Of course, she did not miss out that important piece of information.

And sure enough, the Princess came by but seems to be searching around for something. Gorgeous it may be with the morning sunlight on her, Risa decided to put up a protective barrier just right above to shield snow white from the heat and the damaging elements of the sun, only allowing the slightly dimmed filtered light to shine on her. It was not long before Ai noted the different and finally, those emeralds found her bluish purple orbs. The rewarding smile Risa got from her made all the waiting worth while.

“Have you seen Reina?” the princess asked casually.

Risa pouted. “I was just about to ask if Ai-chan had seen Eri too”

Ai just giggled at how easy the girl would switch from a perfect gentleman into a spoiled brat just within seconds. 


Then, there it was again. Rustling sounds from that same bunch of bushes. As the two eyed each other knowingly, they waited.

As Ai expected, this time, the white fur ball was after the black cotton ball instead.

Her kitten was so disorientated that she unconsciously had opened the link between them and was seeking help from her in despair unknowingly. The raven girl got this tingling feeling while on her way here but could not really convey what it really was since her kitten was actually bombarding her with nothing but desperate meowing subconsciously hence she was unable to get her exact position.

She was searching frantically for her at first but when she got into the garden ground and felt the air for her kitten’s presence. Almost immediately, she picked up her kitten’s purplish aura and was being pursued by nothing but a stunning slivery one. Knowing that it could be nothing serious, the raven girl carried on with the rest of the search in leisure and just constantly sends out her positioning to the kitten.

The black kitten ran straight up to her master, while transforming to her semi-human self and hid timidly behind her while the pup chose to hop onto Risa’s lap before changing.

Her kitten was shook up so bad that whatever she was trying to tell her came out in nothing but a babbling mess.

“Reina…slow down. You’re okay now. What’s wrong?” Ai hugged the trembling kitten tightly, stroking her back to calm her down.

“That bitch! She killed Aika! I saw it with my own eyes! Look at the blood dripping from her mouth! I knew she was up to no good at all…acting innocent and all…trying to get close to me!” Reina was sobbing uncontrollably and was depending solely on her master to hold her up.

Risa, unaffected by those senseless screaming, just gently wiped those red stains off the side of her pup’s mouth. Eri eyed her sadly and was about to say something but she cuts her off with a finger to her lip. Eri who is even incapable of harming a little fly had murdered something? She did not even need her pup to explain anything. Kissing her pup on the forehead, she smiled to reassure the pup.

“You are up to no good too!” Reina sneered at Risa

“Reina?” came a husky voice that broke the commotions.

Upon hearing that voice, the kitten turned her head swiftly towards it.

“AIKA! I thought you were…dead?” the kitten looked confusingly at her

With an equally confusing look, Aika replied “I was? I only remembered falling from the tree and…AH!” running toward Eri, she hugged the girl.

“Eri here stopped the bleeding and healed my leg.” Releasing Eri, Aika finished the rest of the sentence.



And that was it. Case closed.



“Reina…” Ai loosens her hold on the kitten to pull back enough to look her in the eye. She was not upset with the feline. She knew how harsh the feline can be to others but her kitten is actually nothing but a big meanie with a super jello heart. You just need to get pass the meanie part first though.

“I’m sorry, Ai-chan” Reina looked down as she apologized

“Nana...” Ai uses the pet name to get her kitten’s attention

“Not me…” she then tilts her head towards the two occupants in the pavilion.

Reina turned her head to the mentioned two and then back to her master with a pleading look. Ai just chose to smile encouragingly at her kitten. When it comes to Ai, there is really nothing much Reina can do about it. She just knew where all her soft spots are and uses it to coax her into anything. With that, Reina just entrusted her fate to her master as she circled her arms around Ai’s neck and buried her face in the crook of her neck.

Ai grinned as she shook her head slightly. Even though she had already resolved her kitten’s willfulness, she is still not going down without the last struggle. This is her kitten…her Reina. With that, she scoped Reina up, carrying her bridal style to the pavilion.



Up until now, three sets of eyes had been just enjoying the interesting little show.



Sitting across Risa, Ai pets the top of Reina’s head. “We’re ready whenever you are”

Still unable to face them, Reina murmured something desperately into Ai’s neck and tightens her hold on her.

“Hmm… Yes Reina…I know…I love you too.” Ai replied while kissing her kitten’s head lovingly and raised an eyebrow when she saw Risa pouted again.

With the final squeeze, Reina finally turns her head sharply to the other two and stood up.

“I’m…S…sorry!!” after managing to choked the apology out, she ran away like there is no tomorrow.


“What’s wrong with her?” Aika finally speaks up. She was lost, anyway…was she even found to begin with?

“It’s nothing… Go to Koharu-chan…She is probably wondering where you have been to by now.”

“Oh right! I’ll see you then your Highness.” And she left, looking for her master.



“Sorry… I might have spoilt Reina too much” Ai finally sighed.

“No worries…I understand how that feels” Risa replied as she stroke her pup’s hair. Eri currently had her face buried in the crook of her neck.

“You feeling okay?” the brunette girl scratches her pup on the back of her neck, under the collar.

Pulling back, her pup nodded sadly. Eri did not know why but even the words from her master could not lift her heavy heart.

“I’m going after Reina”

“Hmmm…Okay…Don’t get yourself hurt. You know how to get me when you need me.” Risa eyed her pup worryingly before agreeing. With that, the pup ran off in the direction where the kitten took off to.


The pair that was left behind watched the pup swiftly cut through the vast greenery and was soon out of their line of vision.

Turning their attention back into the pavilion, both coincidentally sighed in unison. Eying each other with a raised eyebrow, a grin slowly forms simultaneously and finally, both synchronically falls into a fit of laughter.

It felt good to finally loosen the tension. The morning had just started but it felt as if it was hit by a whirlwind of events.


“Her aura is really beautiful. The Sliver Glow of Cura isn’t it?” After letting a deep breath out, Ai commented.

“So mine is not?” Risa pouted and wiped the tear out of her eyes as if she was crying sadly.

“You know that is not what I have meant and you can’t really compare them this way.” Ai replied with an as a matter of fact tone and knows that the girl knew it.

“But definitely the most passionate yet mysterious Crimson Blaze of Fira” the raven continued and finish off with a smile.

“So…I’m hot?” Risa wriggled her eyebrow as she speaks

“You’re incorrigible.” the girl rolled her eyes

“You know… you might be doing that just a too much for a Princess~” the younger girl emphasized the word with a slightly higher pitch.

“And just. who might be the cause of it?” Ai chose to pause a short while at that word instead.

“Anyway, you have yet to answer me. Don’t change the topic!”

“Over my dead body”

“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

“WHATEVER” the girl sighed as she waved her hands frustratingly in the air once. The other just giggled at the cute reaction she had gotten from the girl.

With that, they fall into their usual silent again but this time with one grinning and the other frowning and looking away but Risa could faintly detect the corner of those lips were actually tilting slightly upwards.

After a short while, sighing again, Ai taps her own lap lightly before standing up to leave.

Risa just sat there stupidly, watching as the Princess walked further and further away, her grin, falling bit by bit.

“You coming or not?” Ai turned back with a smirked and a raised eyebrow at the girl’s dejected look.

She did not need to be told twice. Risa immediately jogs over and joined the Princess by the side.

“What’s up with you and rain?”

“Shouldn’t I be the one asking you that?” Risa mused

This time, it was Ai who was putting up the show. It was nothing fancifully like what brunette girl had, nevertheless, Risa was still grinning like a love-struck girl. Ai simply just had a barrier around the both of them.

“Sorry, nothing special”

“Your presence itself is more than enough.”

With that, Ai sweetly laced her fingers through Risa’s.

Together, they walked silently, listening to the light tapping of the rain on their, what Risa is currently naming it, Ai barrier.

Ai was pretty amazed that the younger girl was able to lead the way to the waterfall in this maze of greenery effortlessly only after being brought once. It once again shows how delicate the brunette was.

Sitting under the same tree again, the raven girl leans back comfortably and rested her hands on those that were gently wrapped around her waist from the back. Together, they just gazed at the water that was gushing down from the clifftop.

The rain was really pouring heavily and the wind was picking up at a rapid rate. Even though well protected by the barrier, Ai could still mildly feels the cold passing through a little and gave an involuntary shiver. After living in the Ice Palace for all her life, she was still unable to get use to the low temperature here.  Right away, she felt the arms around her tighten and held her closer to its owner body, instantly warming up hers a little. She smiled at how sweetly the girl was.

Not long after, she realized that the body holding onto her was actually burning at a considerably higher temperature than normal. Immediately, she turned around and placed a hand on the burning forehead while eyeing the girl worryingly.

“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

“Finally you admitted it.” the younger girl nonchalantly replied with a smirk as she removed the hand from her forehead and held it gently in hers.

“THAT IS NOT WHAT I MEANT~ You are having a high fever! Let get back.” The girl attempted to stand up but with a light tug, she landed right back on the brunette’s lap, facing her. Then, she felt a warm hand circled around her waist and the other around her neck, pulling her close again. Slightly taken aback, Ai was about to question the girl when she felt the sudden temperature change from the girl again. The temperature was now slightly below normal but was slowly creeping up to a higher temperature than earlier on before dropping back to normal again.

It was then that she finally realized that Risa had deliberately altered her body temperature to accommodate hers. How stupid of her to have not thought of that. Of course the girl was able to do so. She is the master of fire and heat.

Realizing how silly she might have seen to the girl, she just buried her blushing face softly into the girl’s shoulder.

“Thanks anyway…” the brunette say softly by her red pointed ear with a warm smile.

Again, the temperature starts to creep up and remains at a comfortable warmth. Mused by the fact that younger girl had gone to such length just to make her feel at ease, Ai snuggled contently into her new warm pack.

They were falling to yet another serene silent when a soft and sincere voice was whispered by the Princess’s pointed ears again.

My Love has the most angelic White Light of Purity I have ever seen.”

Even though the Princess did not reply her verbally, Risa could feel a smile forming on her neck as the pointed ear reddens again. Unable to resist, Risa gave a light peck to the flushing ear, causing the girl to shiver a little but definitely not due to the cold this time. Knowingly, the brunette lowered her temperature to allow the raven girl to cool down a little before rising back up once again.

Together with their eyes closed, they take in the pleasant natural orchestra playing around them in warmth.


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In a rush to work! OMG! BYE!

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 20, 2009, 01:52:09 PM
TakaGaki is sweet, as usual :wub:

But I wanna know what happened to TanaKame after Eri chased after Reina XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 20, 2009, 04:10:01 PM
I meant Eri is trying very, very hard to befriend Reina (she's willing to put herself in danger for that).

Yep, that's why we love Eri.

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:D It's true though..you wun even bother if it's someone you don't care about..  ;)
Oh, you make me want to chant 'TanaKamei' badly....  :nervous

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All Readers: Regarding the "bomb" that i might drop that everyone is worrying about......... I'm still considering if i should drop a small one first...but i actually like to slowly "bake" the cream puff in the oven.... until....the cream Explodes from the inside! LOL~   (Do they even bake cream puff in an oven??? I'm not a good cook~ LOL)
Somehow that translated to my brain as: "I'm gonna torture them first slowly then I'm gonna make them so very miserable! Mwahahaha!!  :mon evil:"
Sorry, that's just my brain :depressed:
I dunno about that, I'm bad at cook too.

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but her kitten is actually nothing but a big meanie with a super jello heart. You just need to get pass the meanie part first though.
Pup, hang on! You're getting there :mon olympic:

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Pulling back, her pup nodded sadly. Eri did not know why but even the words from her master could not lift her heavy heart.
“I’m going after Reina”
One step closer to TanaKamei  :ding:

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“You are hot!”
“Finally you admitted it.”
:rofl: I'll never get tired with all the teasing/banter/flirting.

:wub: Aww TakaGaki are very protective with each other, casting barrier for the other.
They're not officially a couple, yet they act like one  :grin:

Anyway:
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raised eye brown
Maybe you mean 'eyebrow'?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 20, 2009, 06:35:25 PM
TakaGaki at its best :wub:  The Reina/Eri saga just keeps continuing  :lol:

I like the Reina and Eri matching up with each other lol
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 20, 2009, 07:35:05 PM
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Together, they walked silently, listening to the light tapping of the rain on their, what Risa is currently naming it, Ai barrier.
Barrier of Love! I like it.

I'm not going to say anything that hasn't already been said, but it won't hurt to reiterate. Takagaki is awesome and Tanakame amusing. Can't wait to see how it turns out for them.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 21, 2009, 02:21:10 AM
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And sure enough, the Princess came by but seems to be searching around for something. Gorgeous it may be with the morning sunlight on her, Risa decided to put up a protective barrier just right above to shield snow white from the heat and the damaging elements of the sun, only allowing the slightly dimmed filtered light to shine on her.

OMG  :wriggly:  :gmon twirl:  :wriggly:


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“Have you seen Reina?” the princess asked casually.

Risa pouted. “I was just about to ask if Ai-chan had seen Eri too”

 XD maybe they're in there somewhere, cuddling  XD


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As Ai expected, this time, the white fur ball was after the black cotton ball instead.

Switched?  :w00t:


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she picked up her kitten’s purplish aura and was being pursued by nothing but a stunning slivery one.

Yay!  :mon fyeah:


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while transforming to her semi-human self and hid timidly behind her while the pup chose to hop onto Risa’s lap before changing.

 :mon blood:  I so love Eri's ummm  pureness..?


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Eri who is even incapable of harming a little fly had murdered something?

This made me laugh, I don't know why  XD


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And that was it. Case closed.

I bet Reina is  :shocked and  :nervous     :lol:


I so love the masters and pets interactions, so lovely, giggly and funny  :bow:  :bow: and  :bow:


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With that, she scoped Reina up, carrying her bridal style to the pavilion.


 :on bleed: I'm so dying from blood loss any second now


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“We’re ready whenever you are”

I want Ai for a master   :heart:


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“Hmm… Yes Reina…I know…I love you too.” Ai replied while kissing her kitten’s head lovingly

 :mon blood:


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and raised an eye brown when she saw Risa pouted again.

Jealous  XD


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“I’m…S…sorry!!” after managing to choked the apologize out, she ran away like there is no tomorrow.


 :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:


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“I’m going after Reina”

 :banana:  :pepper:  :leek:  :taco:


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“So mine is not?”

 :roll:


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“So…I’m hot?”

 :roll:


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“You’re incorrigible.”

 :lol:


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“Over my dead body”

OMG   :wriggly: to the max


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“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

 :imdead:  :imdead:  :imdead:


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“Sorry, nothing special”

“Your presence itself is more than enough.”

With that, Ai sweetly laced her fingers through Risa’s.

 :on bleed:  :on bleed:  :on bleed:


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“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

“Finally you admitted it.”

 :lol:


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Realizing how silly she might have seen to the girl, she just buried her blushing face softly into the girl’s shoulder.

 :mon lovelaff:


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“My Love has the most angelic White Light of Purity I have ever seen.”

 :mon lovelaff:  :mon lovelaff:  :mon lovelaff:


I was thinking ebil when her temp rose, but can you blame me? No, you can't


O.M.G.   G.R.E.A.T.   C.H.A.P.T.E.R.    :bow:  :bow:  :bow:
 


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Royal Garden Walk - Chapter 8 (15/12) ]
Post by: aussie on December 21, 2009, 01:02:01 PM
“I’m going after Reina”
I'm so dying to know what happened at the end of this third 'chase' XD

Kitten Reina has no chance against her master does she? Which I find to be adorable. It just sounds like something the kitten would do (from what has been said of her so far in this fic, especially around Eri), jump to conclusions as if wanting to prove herself right that the pup is up to no good. But hey, if it's going to be the ice breaker between the two pets so be it!


As for the 'bomb' you keep threatening to drop, as long as the grass remains green and the sky is blue at the end of it all, and the kitten stops jumping at the pup at every given opportunity XD


(Oh, the fic I was talking about that has turtle Eri in it is called Goddess of Fire. I think it's on the third page of the fanfics board)


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 22, 2009, 12:10:10 PM
@Mum: XD My poor kitten.. you'll know soon! but i have something more important today to update! IT's the puppy's birthday!

@Chloe:
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Pup, hang on! You're getting there :mon olympic:
- Somehow this cracks me up~ LOL~     :gmon nya:......................... :mon olympic:     ME: :mon yeah: *go Eri go!*

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Somehow that translated to my brain as: "I'm gonna torture them first slowly then I'm gonna make them so very miserable! Mwahahaha!!  :mon evil:
LOL~ The *MUHAHAHA* part was right though!

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Maybe you mean 'eyebrow'?
*SCREAM* OMG! LOL~ i wonder how many "eye brown" i have thrown inside there already..

@Happy Tree:
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Barrier of Love! I like it.
i'm lovin' it too~  :wub:

@kRisZ:
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maybe they're in there somewhere, cuddling
- LOL~ far from that.... XD

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:mon blood: I so love Eri's ummm  pureness..?
- YES! i manage to kill one with the puppy! LOL~

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This made me laugh, I don't know why
- I could almost imaging the pup trying to chase the fly instead..lol

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I want Ai for a master  :heart:
- NOPE! i'm not giving her to you too!!  :P I'm a greedy girl! LOL~

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I was thinking ebil when her temp rose, but can you blame me? No, you can't
- What's ebil?  :?

Count for the day.... Nose bleed: 6

@aussie:
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I'm so dying to know what happened at the end of this third 'chase' XD
- I didn't realize until you mention that the last part when Eri went after Reina was consider as another chase.. LOL!

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Kitten Reina has no chance against her master does she?

- No.. absolutely zero.. LOL~ She could not even bare to go against her.. XD

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wanting to prove herself right that the pup is up to no good
- Plus isn't it scary to see your friend being eaten up? LOL~ poor Reina~ she is going to have nightmares!



Special Chapter coming up soon!

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ The Chase 2 - Chapter 9 (20/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 22, 2009, 12:16:55 PM
Happy Birthday Kame-chan!

IT's the Puppy's Birthday! Even though i so want to update the story at 12am but i have work.. so i guess an early one is better than a late one.. It's a little rush but i manage to squeeze this out of me in 2 days! *Dying soon*



Side Story -
A Kamei Eri Birthday Special


“Gaki-san! Gaki-san! Look!” the girl shrieked excited as she ran to her master, holding something carefully close with both her hands. Risa smiled as her thrilled pup made her way to her from the sandy beach.

The pair was now on a private island for their well deserved holiday. For almost two weeks, they have been tracking a pack of demonic rogues. There had been sightings near a dense forest and when some scouts were sent to gather more information, they never came back. Heavily armed search squats were then formed to comb the forest but were ambushed and only a handful managed to escape the massacre.

Hence, Risa was sent down with direct orders from her grandfather to investigate and rectify if possible. Reito had insisted her to bring a small unit of elites but after assaying the demons’ strength and is confident that she is able to take them down alone, she denied the offer. If what the survivors said were true, then they were dealing with a pack of highly intelligence demons.

Demons are self-centered creatures and only live for themselves, therefore they do not live in pack unless they were under control of a demon lord which from what she heard, there was none. Individually, they are easy to handle but if they are smart enough to get over their natural instinct to get together, then it is something that should not be overlooked. Moreover, not only did they moved in a group but were also able to brilliantly camouflage themselves to blend into the surrounding. Since it was not easy to uncover them, then the best was to too remain unknown to the enemy as well. Hence, the lesser people, the better. There have to be times when the demons let their guard down.

And sure enough, her enduring wait was not in vain.

Casting a barrier around the area, Eri prepare herself on the outside to support her master. The moment she got her barrier up, the pup habitually continued with a protection spell to increase her master’s resistances, a regeneration spell to hasten wound and energy recovery and finishing off competently with a blessing for maximum damage.

Satisfied with her current extra boost from her pup, it was time to announce her presence, Gaki style. Holding her hand out, instantly a ball of inferno formed and hovers above her palm. With a slight swing of her arm, the fiery orb slowly circled around her creating a ring of fire before spreading out with her as the centre, in frenzy speed. Within seconds, Risa was covered in a sea of red. It was not hard to spot her prey when there was nothing left for them to hide in. The slayer materialized her katana as she charged towards the nearest one. Without delay, her pup cast a haste spell on her, increasing her agility significantly. The poor creature did not even have any time to assay what was happening when a katana came right down from the top of her head, perfectly splitting her into two parts. The very last thing she saw was just a pair of crimson eyes.

Turning swiftly, the slayer slashed a foolish one that was trying to sneak up on her from the back, clean across her mid section, halving her as well.

Enraged, the rest of the six charged towards her all at once while the remaining two far behind cast an ineffective fire bolt.

Imbuing her weapon with flames, Risa sliced the empty air in a “X” motion, sending two brisk sheered line of fiery wave out, successfully dividing the first two of the six diagonally before putting up a reflective barrier to deflect the two fire bolts back to its’ casters with twice its’ original speed, incinerating one while the other that manage to dodge in time to avoid a direct hit, screamed in agony as one side of her arm got blasted off by the force.

Entrusting her pup to take him out, Risa concentrated on to the four that were approaching her.

Raising her arms as if to draw a bow, a spiritual arrow took form as Eri swiftly pulled the imagery bow into a full draw. Pausing for a millisecond to take aim, she weaved a soul cleansing spell on it before releasing the spirit arrow, piercing the creature straight in the heart, ending its torment.

Turning her attention back to her master, Eri shot another arrow, hitting the only one that had managed to get away from the line of the speeding wall of fire that her master hurled towards them, right on the head, killing the last of the pack.

It was when the remains of the demons turned into talisman that Risa finally realized that whole plot was nothing but a test from her grandfather. Given that she gave an acceptable explanation to refuse the reinforcement her grandfather insisted plus not only had she used her past experiences along with the knowledge from the books but also able to look into details on the limited amount of information given to finally conclude on her strategic for the assignment, of course she cleared it with flying colours, hence the reward.


Sitting on her lap, her pup carefully showed her the content in her cupped hands. It was a new born baby sea turtle.

“I saved it from an eagle!” the girl declared proudly and looked expectantly at her.

“Hmmm…A brave puppy I have…” Risa chuckled as she pets her puppy and gave her a nice scratch behind the ear, bringing a wide smile to her pup’s face.

“Can I keep it??”

Knowing that was coming, Risa gave her pup an unreadable smile.

“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……” Before she even finish the question, her pup was already close to tears.

Motioning the girl to turn in her lap to face the sea, the older girl wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on the girl’s shoulder before continuing.

“It will feel the same, wouldn’t it? The big blue sea is where this little green turtle belongs to…”

“Hmm…” understanding where her master was getting to, the pup nodded and gave an acknowledging hum before turning to give a warm smile but Risa was still able to detect the slight disappointment in it.

“Don’t worry… she will definitely come back again… to this very same shore…to lay her eggs…beside, this little one have a birthmark on it shell… it wouldn’t be hard to find her when she is back.” pointing out the unique black patch on the turtle’s shell, Risa hope to cheer her little pup up.

“Come on… I’ll go with you.” Taking her pup’s hand, she led her to the shoreline.

“I’ll see you again…I hope… No… definitely…” bringing the little turtle close to her face, Eri hummed a blessing spell before delivering it with a peck on the little turtle’s head.

“Kyamei…remember your way back ok?” Risa smiled adoringly at how cute her pup was that she already named the turtle. With that, the girl bends down and returns the little reptile back to where it belongs.

Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The brunette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.


The following week…


“This is for me?!” Eri exclaimed excitedly as her master passed her a present.

Shaking the box a little to get a clue on what the present might be, the pup eventually gave up and settles on opening the wrapping carefully.

Risa watched delightfully as the pup let out an overjoyed shrieked when she opened the box.

Knowing that her pup really love that turtle a week ago back at the island, she had a dog tag custom made into a shape of a turtle with a black patch right where the little turtle had and had it engraved with her pup’s name.

“THANKS!” Eri was jumping around her before practically throwing herself at her, giving her a big bear hug.

“Come on… I’ll put it on for you.” Snapping the tag into place, she weaved a blessing on it and her pup started to tear up.

Smiling affectionately, Risa use her thumb to remove those happy tear from the stunning sliver orbs and scratches the spot behind her pup’s collar before placing a peck on her cheek.

“Happy Birthday…”


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Just a note... Eri does not have a surname in this fic.. because ar.. she is a puppy? So her surname is probably Niigaki now if she needs to have one~..XD

 :mon bat:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 22, 2009, 12:41:20 PM
nice side story for her b-day, I don't have anything on hand for her lol

ne ways, eri saves a turtle woo hoo her own kind in an ironic way well that makes sense on the surname though

good job
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 22, 2009, 01:32:16 PM
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Casting a barrier around the area, Eri prepare herself on the outside to support her master. The moment she got her barrier up, the pup habitually continued with a protection spell to increase her master’s resistances, a regeneration spell to hasten wound and energy recovery and finishing off competently with a blessing for maximum damage.

Whoa! That's the Tur.. erm.. Puppy in action Yay!  :pepper:  :pepper:  :pepper:


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Satisfied with her current extra boost from her pup, it was time to announce her presence, Gaki style.

So badass and I love the Gaki style thing  :rockon:


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With a slight swing of her arm, the fiery orb slowly circled around her creating a ring of fire before spreading out with her as the centre

Reminds me of KP Green Dance Version  :P


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Imbuing her weapon with flames, Risa sliced the empty air in a “X” motion, sending two brisk sheered line of fiery wave out, successfully dividing the first two of the six diagonally before putting up a reflective barrier to deflect the two fire bolts back to its’ casters with twice its’ original speed, incinerating one while the other that manage to dodge in time to avoid a direct hit, screamed in agony as one side of her arm got blasted off by the force.

Wow, it's like I'm watching a movie   :w00t:


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Sitting on her lap, her pup carefully showed her the content in her cupped hands. It was a new born baby sea turtle.

Yay


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“I saved it from an eagle!” the girl declared proudly and looked expectantly at her.

So innocent and pure  :love:


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“It will feel the same, wouldn’t it? The big blue sea is where this little green turtle belongs to…”

 :)


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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.

 :lol: It's like so Eri-like thing to do  :lol:


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“Happy Birthday…”

Happy Birthday!  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 22, 2009, 11:09:36 PM
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Gaki style.
Lols.
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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
More lols.

This is so cute! Really, a good birfday fic.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: Treykun on December 22, 2009, 11:15:55 PM
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Gaki style

Gaki style rocks! XD

Really good story for our Turtle-Puppy's birthday XD

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 22, 2009, 11:16:26 PM
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- Somehow this cracks me up~ LOL~    :gmon nya: .........................  :mon olympic:   ME:  *go Eri go!*
XD yeah, that's what I thought.

Eh?! What do you mean the *MUHAHAHA* part was right?? Coz that doesn't sound good.

No worries, typos happen  :thumbsup

Reading this update is like playing an RPG game, with Risa as the main chara and Eri as the support magic-type chara, and since I love RPG games this is so great!! :mon thumb:

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“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……”
A very effective method for explaining things to her pup. Both Eri and Reina have awesome masters, yay!

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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
:rofl: that would be very interesting to see!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 23, 2009, 08:09:36 AM
This is the best Eri's birthday story I read the whole day! :wub: My heart is melting into a puddle of mush :heart:


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Turning back to shore, her pup cast a haste spell on all the rest of baby turtles that were struggling to the sea. The burette could only laugh out loud at the scene of a bunch of baby sea turtles speeding into the sea comically.
I couldn't resist quoting this too  :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 23, 2009, 09:48:23 AM
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To the Video - LOL~ it's a pity Risa replied xie xie only  but it's cute.. it was a request from fan is it?

A fan actually asked JJ to teach Risa to say "wo ai ni" to Ai but there was a typo error so it came out as asking Ai to say it to Risa XD

C8

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Just a gentle reminder that this story might not be all happy days *Evil Laughter*

ooooh, exciting. I wanna see how tragic you are gonna make this :twothumbs

C9

Bake the cream puff in the oven sounds like "bun in the oven" which means someone's getting pregnant XD I don't think you mean it in this way though but I REALLY wanna read the bomb. I can't wait!

Aww, Risa is so observant and considerate to make that shield appear and protect Ai from the sun :wub:

OMgosh, Reina kitty apologizing is SOOOOOOOOO cute!!! I can't believe I'm at risk of turning into mush from someone other than Risa or Eri :P

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“So…I’m hot?” Risa wriggled her eyebrow as she speaks

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“You’re incorrigible.” the girl rolled her eyes

Flirty TakaGaki =  :heart:

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“Hmmmm…Sooo……I’ll be hot if I’m over your dead body?”

LOL! That was a good line :D

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“You are hot!” the older girl exclaimed concernedly

I knew what Risa was gonna reply the instant Ai let that slip :lol:

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Side Story - A Kamei Eri Birthday Special

MERRY XMAS!!! (in advance XD) and of course happy Kame day :wub:

I was all happy and enjoying myself reading about kakoii Risa but this (points to line below)... scared me.

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“If one day… some one were to take you away from me……” Before she even finish the question, her pup was already close to tears.

What does this mean huh? HUH!?!? Is this a clue to that bomb you were talking about? :panic:

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Motioning the girl to turn in her lap to face the sea, the older girl wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on the girl’s shoulder before continuing.

Is this action normal between master and pup? Or could it be something more?

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“This is for me?!” Eri exclaimed excitedly as her master passed her a present.

Shaking the box a little to get a clue on what the present might be, the pup eventually gave up and settles on opening the wrapping carefully.

Risa watched delightfully as the pup let out an overjoyed shrieked when she opened the box.

Knowing that her pup really love that turtle a week ago back at the island, she had a dog tag custom made into a shape of a turtle with a black patch right where the little turtle had and had it engraved with her pup’s name.

“THANKS!” Eri was jumping around her before practically throwing herself at her, giving her a big bear hug.

“Come on… I’ll put it on for you.” Snapping the tag into place, she weaved a blessing on it and her pup started to tear up.

Smiling affectionately, Risa use her thumb to remove those happy tear from the stunning sliver orbs and scratches the spot behind her pup’s collar before placing a peck on her cheek.

“Happy Birthday…”

Awwww, so kawaii. KameMame is the most adorable couple :oops:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 23, 2009, 07:21:30 PM
*SCREAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!*  :scared:

*PRAYING*

I hope none of you realized i misspelled Brunette as burette..........

Burette -a graduated glass tube, commonly having a stopcock at the bottom, used for accurately measuring or measuring out small quantities of liquid.


Have I been portraying Risa as a thin piece of glass all along!?!?!?  :mon scare:


Sigh...too much Science...........



 :mon POd: <- signing off with this instead.....
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 23, 2009, 08:07:51 PM
 :lol:   there's also a dynamic at YTTC  :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: Treykun on December 23, 2009, 09:09:43 PM
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there's also a dynamic at YTTC

True... XD
Hey, don't worry, it could be worse... Look at me; I always mix "history" with "story" XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 25, 2009, 08:53:02 PM
It's a little too late but................


 :mon santa2:


Merry Christmas to all! =]


 :mon santa4: <- signing off with this instead! XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 29, 2009, 05:09:36 AM
@ Kuro-kun <- i saw someone call you this somewhere~ LOL~
- I just think i have to connect her back to turtle somehow..haha.. so she is a puppy with turtle collar tag now XD

@kRisZ- KP green dance version? whats that?

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Wow, it's like I'm watching a movie :w00t:
- LOL~ Thanks! but most skills they used came up from games i have played~ XD

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It's like so Eri-like thing to do
- Yup~ the scene just pop naturally into my head.. so now we can link the pup to turtles again~ XD

@Baby Tree: I was practically grinning to myself when i wrote about the turtles XD

@Treykun: LOL~ considered new reader??? Thanks anyway! I kinda like cool Risa~  :wub:

@Chloe: Haha~ yup~ i played quite a number of RPG games.. but just the really old and classic ones like FF7, FF9, Diablo etc.~ Haven't been keeping up with the gaming world for a long time~

BUT~ recently i started playing Diablo 2 again... new Necromancer named Reix (Guess who i name him after? XD)

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that would be very interesting to see!
- Probably there is a mini sand storm at the beach when all the turtle flips their flippers so fast XD


as for the "MUhahaha part~ I just like to do evil laughter.. but i'm nothing but a harmless baby =X

@Mum:  I love the turtles too~ Imaging how panicky the eagles might be when they see it.. XD

@Hammy:
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A fan actually asked JJ to teach Risa to say "wo ai ni" to Ai but there was a typo error so it came out as asking Ai to say it to Risa
LOL~ must be a TakaGaki fan~

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Bake the cream puff in the oven sounds like "bun in the oven" which means someone's getting pregnant
- Technically...anything is possible in this kinda theme............ *smirks*

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OMgosh, Reina kitty apologizing is SOOOOOOOOO cute!!! I can't believe I'm at risk of turning into mush from someone other than Risa or Eri
-  :on hypto: :on hypto: *falls for kitten~ falls for kitten~* I always thought Reina is really cute especially when she smiles~ XD Her eyes just squeezes together into a thin line until you can barely see it~  :wub:

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I knew what Risa was gonna reply the instant Ai let that slip
- As expected from the cheeky girl~  :lol:

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What does this mean huh? HUH!?!? Is this a clue to that bomb you were talking about?
- LOL~ no...it's not~~~~ Eri is just like a loyal puppy... Her love for Risa is a different kind of love~

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Is this action normal between master and pup? Or could it be something more?
- hmmmm... isn't it normal? Risa just loves her pup too... but not in that way  ;) Anyway.. don't girls hug around too?  XD

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Awwww, so kawaii. KameMame is the most adorable couple
- Ohh~ i'm having fun writing them too.. knowing that i can just write them appropriately without having it be a affair or a triangle ~ XD



Chapter 10 is on the way!  :)


 :mon bat:



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ A Kamei Eri Birthday SP - Side Story (22/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 29, 2009, 05:21:40 AM
@All Readers: Once again~! Thanks all for loving the special turtle chapter!  :wub: Anyway..Sorry for the late update... just so much things to do recently...with all the holiday seasons~ Be sure to watch Sherlock Holmes!! It's really cool with all the mysteries and actions! Plus~ It's JUDE LAW and Robert Downey. Jr !

Oh...and not to forget~

Happy New Year!


Probably my next update will be next year~  XD


Celestia – Means divine


Chapter 10
Promises


“What do you want?” Reina asked impatiently as she continues her search around the bushes. She had initially chosen to ignore the pup, hoping she will just go away but it was far from that.

The pup just tried to get closer and closer to her, bit by bit cautiously and was now, just squatting right beside her, regarding her with those sad puppy eyes.

“What are you looking for?” Eri asked in a quiet tone.

“If I tell you, will you just go away and leave me alone?” the kitten sighed and finally turn to face those silver watery orbs.

The only answer that the golden eyed feline got was a sad pleading look.

This was it. The kitten could no longer take it.

“I’m looking for the bell that Ai-chan gave me. It must have detached from my collar when YOU were chasing after me. It’s all YOUR FAULT!” the kitten accused angrily.

“I’m…sorry”

“You know what.” Reina sneered while standing up

“If you are not leaving then I’m leaving.” She continued and walked away, leaving the tearing pup behind.

Now, the answers she was looking for was staring right in her face. The reason to why she felt low being the cause that got the kitten caught. The reason to why she had waited for her to have her forgiveness. The reason to why she felt this unexplainable happiness when she thought they were becoming closer. The reason to why she had went after her when she ran off suddenly. The reason to why she felt nausea when she was misunderstood. The reason to why her heart was so heavy. The reason to why it hurts so much. The reason to why she is crying now.

She might be falling for the kitten…who detests her.

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“After going into hiding for twenty years……just twenty years…she is able to…” Yuko sighs as she gently rubs a side of her forehead to smoothen the throbbing pain.

Since the first ominous appearance of the black patches, she already had this dread feeling that it was her. Indeed, she was right. The chipped piece of yellow soul stone that she and the older Niigaki had been studying for the past hour was more than enough to prove that.

After the confirmation, even though the old man seems composed but Yuko knew the man was actually crashed on the inside by the news. Although, they had been expecting it…but it was too soon…way too soon…she was not even supposed to regain enough power to weave the portal to Esmerelda in such short time, needless to say, to even infect the ancient tree. Revenge really is a formidable motivation.

“Don’t you think it’s time to tell her the truth?” the Queen regarded the Kumudini leader with a taint of sympathy in her eyes.


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As Risa enters the library, she stared in awe at the walls that were covered in shelves, cluttered with old leather-bound books, folded parchments and stacks of scrolls.


The library was a stand alone building by itself in the east wing, near to the Keep of Aranrhod. Like most of the structure in the Ice Palace, this place has a rather unique touch of aging feel to it too. The interior was spacious, airy and obviously designed to impress visitors but with an unmistakable lived-in feel to it. Lit by skylights, the chamber contained rows of books covering the walls of two stories, with ladders on wheels that ran along brass railings secured to the shelves. Tall windows were too installed accordingly at any possible places to provide maximum light exposure into the building.


“Help yourself.” Ai released her hold on hers and moved elegantly towards the towering shelf.

Already missing the contact, Risa watches as the Princess shifts the ladder to her desired spot before climbing to the top of it. Almost immediately, the raven girl locates the book she wanted out of the hundreds around and was making her way down. The brunette girl did nothing but gazed at how those perfectly toned muscles were peeking in and out of the high split on the Princess’s robe, gracefully working its way up and down. Within seconds, Ai was already seated at a table by the window, looking questionably at the brunette girl that was still standing at the same spot where she left her.

“Need any help?”  Ai teasingly pulled on her robe a little to reveal more of the content, smirking at the dreamy look that was directed at her thigh.

Risa was so out of it that she did not even realized she had been staring for some time and worst, caught red-handed.

Snapping out of it, she returned a shy smile and went in search of a book, taking the chance to calm her speeding heart. The sexy smirk that the raven had thrown her was just too much.

Although Risa found the book she was looking for after a short while, decided to lurk around long enough to settle those pacing beatings.

As she made her way back, Risa smiled sweetly when she found Ai was so focused on reading her book that the cute frown on her face was showing. More importantly, even so, her hand was subconsciously playing with the bluish purple crystal ball she had presented her yesterday.

The girl had not asked her anything about the crystal ball. It seems like she was determined to find out the secret on her own.

Deciding not to disturb the girl, Risa quietly joined the table, sitting across, facing her and started on hers.


An hour passed without a word exchanged.


“What book is that?” Risa asked, finally breaking the stillness. Even though they often fall into this silent state, but those were sweet moments mend to be romantically quiet. This was just as much she can take it. The silence is killing her.

“Binding spells” The raven replied with her eyes still on the book.

“What about it?” the girl asked, faking ignorant.

No answers came. Instead, the Princess just raised her hand, revealing the crystal ball.

“You know………just maybe……if you give me a kiss… I’ll drop you a hint…” Risa suggested cheekily.

“Fat hope” Ai snorted

Giving up, the brunette girl returned to her book but not before sighing aloud deliberately. She is suffering horribly from “Ai Deficiency”.


After a while, Ai realized the girl was more focused on her book than before suddenly.

“What are you reading?” the raven girl asked while closing her book.

“Grand Elf for dummies” The girl was still so engrossed in the content that she had yet to lift her eye to look at her.

“What about it?” Now, with the tables turned, Ai was the receiving end of the exact same treatment.

“Where do babies come from.”

“The last time I read it, I’m sure that wasn’t the title and subtitle but anyway…what’s so interesting?” the Princess was trying her best to uphold the conversation.
 
“So…Grand elves are born from flowers??” finally, those questioning blue eyes met hers.

“Hmm…It’s called Celestia

“How big exactly is it?” the brunette asked with a slight frown.

“About like this big…” Ai used her hands to show a length of about a metre.

“What’s up with that look?” putting her hand down, the Princess asked with an arched eyebrow at the girl’s disgusted look.

“Does it…smell like rotting corpse??”

“Do all flowers smell like that down there?” the raven girl was slightly amazed by the question.

“No… Only those that are” gesturing with her hands.

“What a shame…You guys have been missing out on the good things. I’ll show you sometime soon.”

“Promise?”

“Swear”


Smiling contently, Risa turns her attention back to the book again. She was glad that she had read on despite the lengthy and boring start on the history of the race.  Currently, she has a much interesting topic for her to work on.

As for the Princess, she just sat there with her book long forgotten as she quietly observing yet another new side of the girl. This was actually the first time the flirtatious girl had focused on something else to the point of neglecting her. As much as she yearned to nab the attention back, this rare display from the girl was just too annoyingly adorable.

The awe mighty slayer, just like a little girl, frowns when hindered, spaces out when thinking and lit up when she got the solution. At some point of time, the girl even mumbles some of the content to herself.


In order to conceive the baby, a drop of blood is required from each of the pair of soul mate on the Celestia….???” Risa wondered aloud with a frown.

The girl read the same content again and again before starting to flip the pages back and fro, searching for more on the related topic.

“That’s all?? Just a drop of blood?” putting the book down with a heavy thud, she regard Ai with an unbelieving look.

“Yup…What’s more?”  It was the raven girl’s turn to have a frown on her face.

Currently, the look on Risa’s was just unreadable. She was trying really hard to gauge if the Princess was just pulling her leg or being serious. No wonder the Grand Elves were on the verge of extinction.

Ai just got more confused from the looks she was getting from the girl. Tilting her head slightly, she questioned Risa silently.

Slowly a sly grin starts to grow on Risa’s face.

“What a shame…You guys have been missing out the good things” Risa copied.

“Which is?”

“I’ll show you sometime soon.”

“Promise?”

“Swear”

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LOL~! Who has a smirk on their face now!   :mon beam:

When i thought of the last few sentence.. i always smirks to myself stupidly~ XD

*Drags Ai-chan away from Gaki-san*
Ai-chan!!! Gaki-san is dangerous!

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 29, 2009, 05:59:54 AM
The Eri/Reina should be a story in itself  :lol:

AiGaki is just pure conflict between them, meaning they need to be more apart to realize their relationship

Also, people call me different things any way so kuro, kuro-kun, and even 22 lmao
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 29, 2009, 12:27:15 PM
Ai doesn't know about sex? :twisted:

The flower thing is kinda cool. :yep:

And kuro-kun's right about Tanakame being a whole other story. If they weren't pets, it would be like a completely different plotline.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 29, 2009, 01:04:43 PM
OMG!!! Now I know what you meant by anything can happen. Those 2 are gonna get a kid together aren't they??? With the help of that plant.

The more I read about Eri pup the more my heart goes out to her. You are making me hate Reina kitty and that can't be a good thing. Cuz I will say something mean and all Reina fans will kill me :panic: I'm falling in love with a non-human. Eri pup :heart:

But Gaki is so darn kakoii!! :wub: I love the part where Ai teased Risa with some skin :P

MOAR MOAR I SAY!! Don't update next year, update tomorrow :D

PS: Are you going to the Berryz concert in Bangkok?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on December 29, 2009, 02:32:32 PM
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@kRisZ- KP green dance version? whats that?

Kimagure Princess


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The pup just tried to get closer and closer to her, bit by bit cautiously and was now, just squatting right beside her, regarding her with those sad puppy eyes.

How cute   :nya:


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She might be falling for the kitten…who detests her.

 :shocked   :wriggly:  :wriggly:  :wriggly:

Sometimes there is only one answer for several questions.  :yep:


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The burette girl did nothing but gazed at how those perfectly toned muscles were peeking in and out of the high split on the Princess’s robe

 :mon blood:


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“Need any help?”  Ai teasingly pulled on her robe a little to reveal more of the content, smirking at the dreamy look that was directed at her thigh.

 :imdead:


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“You know………just maybe……if you give me a kiss… I’ll drop you a hint…” Risa suggested cheekily.

Oh-ho Damn  XD


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“Grand Elf for dummies

Why do I find that hilarious  :lol:


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“Where do babies come from.”

“The last time I read it, I’m sure that wasn’t the title and subtitle but anyway…what’s so interesting?” the Princess was trying her best to uphold the conversation.

 :on lol:  and  :luvluv1:


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“In order to conceive the baby, a drop of blood is required from each of the pair of soul mate on the Celestia….???”

Oh interesting... does that require two genders?  :P


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“What a shame…You guys have been missing out the good things” Risa copied.

“Which is?”

“I’ll show you sometime soon.”

“Promise?”

“Swear”

I'm thinking ebil (ebil=just to sound less evilly :P) right now  :twisted:


MOAR MOAR I SAY!! Don't update next year, update tomorrow :D

Seconded  :cow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on December 29, 2009, 05:07:32 PM
The Eri/Reina should be a story in itself  :lol:
Totally agreed :yep: There should be a spinoff on Tanakame itself. Apart from Takagaki, they are the next cutest couple in my opinion :wub: Eri pup is falling for Reina kitty! How cute is that? :lol:


I wonder what the elders are hiding. My guess is that it has something to do with Risa 8)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: Treykun on December 29, 2009, 09:49:08 PM
@Treykun: LOL~ considered new reader???
Nah, not really... I'm just way too lazy to comment :mon sweat:

The Eri/Reina should be a story in itself  :lol:
I agree too!! I want Tanakame! XD

The burette girl did nothing but gazed at how those perfectly toned muscles
:on bleed: I've lost a lot of blood here XD But I've also cracked up~~~ :grin:

Keep it up!!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: aussie on December 30, 2009, 10:15:59 AM
I concur with the general consensus that this chapter warrants a TanaKame spin-off  :lol:
Poor Eri pup, give the kitten some time...she'll come through in the end. If the latest 'two-shot' of them from Tsunku's blog is any indication  XD
Lol at Ai's curiosity and Risa's willingness to er, lure her into the dark side  :twisted:


I'm just curious, when the pup and kitten are talking to each other are they in their human form or are they able to speak in their human voice while in their animal form? In the story they're primarily in their animal form, is that right? I don't know why but I seem to find it cute to imagine them in their animal form, being showered with affection by their masters, and chasing each other through the bushes  :lol:



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 31, 2009, 01:44:39 PM
@Kuro-kun: Haha.. I have another story planned for Reina and Eri actually... the general plot is there..but not much story line yet..lets just see when i can put that up together.. cause this one is starting to cause so headaches already  :P

@Baby Tree:
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Ai doesn't know about sex?  :twisted:
She is innocently cute! XD For now...that is~  XD

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If they weren't pets, it would be like a completely different plotline.
- True~ but like you have mentioned, if they weren't pets... then my whole story would have been very different~ I enjoy them in pet form alot here.. XD but have plans on writing one story just for them.. plot is up but.....i'm so lazy to start!! Cause i still have this to continue~ LOL~ one at a time!

@Hammy:
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OMG!!! Now I know what you meant by anything can happen. Those 2 are gonna get a kid together aren't they???
- *Whistle whistle~~~*  ;) (Some readers might not have notice! *shhh.....* Now you know my big secret.....  :P)

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You are making me hate Reina kitty
- The previous time you said you were falling for her!  :P Soooo...i guess you are torn between loving and hating her now~

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I'm falling in love with a non-human. Eri pup :heart:
- Only the kitten is so blind~  :(

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MOAR MOAR I SAY!! Don't update next year, update tomorrow
- Today wasn't the tomorrow you mentioned.... BUT~ I'll update for you~ LOL (I'm sure a pushover sometime~  XD)

@ Little kRisZ: <- i just find this cuter~ LOL~

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Kimagure Princess
- Lol which parts reminds you of it??

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Oh interesting... does that require two genders?
- NOPE~! *Bright Smile!*

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I'm thinking ebil (ebil=just to sound less evilly  :P)
- OHhh~ so that is what ebil is~ I even tried to search for the meaning of that word the other time you used it.. LOL~

@Mum:
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There should be a spinoff on Tanakame itself
- Means~ a spinoff as in a story by itself? or does them being together in this story counts as well?  :?

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My guess is that it has something to do with Risa
- *Ding dong ding dong~* Correcto~

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Eri pup is falling for Reina kitty!
-  :mon olympic: <- my puppy running to the finishing line where the kitten might be~ XD

@Treykun:
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I agree too!! I want Tanakame!
- Soon! when i finish this story first! LOL~

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The burette girl did nothing but gazed at how those perfectly toned muscles
- this was written before i knew the mistake...~ I tried correcting some but i guess i missed out on that  :P HAHA~ but if you read it as it is..it's kinda funny! A glass tube gazing at Ai-chan's thigh~ LOL~

@aussie:
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I concur with the general consensus that this chapter warrants a TanaKame spin-off
- Yup! Pretty much you can see them in the next chapter!  XD

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If the latest 'two-shot' of them from Tsunku's blog is any indication
- Oh~ what thing? where? about what?  :wub:

Hmmmm... they do go around mostly in their pet form... but they only speak in their human forms~ Anyway...since...the two cuties are getting close more often now....so they might be in more human form than pet now XD



As requested... Chapter 11 is on the way!

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 10 - Promises (29/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on December 31, 2009, 01:55:58 PM
@All Readers: SOoooooooooooooo It's 3 more hours here to NEW YEAR! Definitely my last update for the year!

I didn't thought i will update again~ but then again~ I got requests..! (I'm a pushover sometimes~ like i have mentioned~  :P) It's a little short... sorry!

Everyone is  :wub: :wub: TanaKame~ Haha.. and just right...this chapter is all about them... XD (Sorry Ai-chan and Gaki-san) The kitten and puppy deserves some time by themselves don't they??  :P


Regarding the Celestia that everyone might be concern about..... Nope..no genders requirement... hence.... Ai-chan was not at all shocked by Gaki-san advance even though they were both girls...So....probably....... Gaki-san is the weird one! LOL!!!!  :lol:



Chapter 11
Resolve


“Can I…… have her?” a timid voice asked

“Why should I?” came the hissing reply that was practically dripping with venom.

The requester stiffened under those murderous glares. The usual mischief were replaced by cold bluish purple eyes, boring so intensively into hers that she almost wished she was never here.

However, determined, the kitten got a grip of herself and she looked straight into those angered eyes. Reina was never one that begs but…

“Please?” she tried again, almost pleading.


This morning, Risa got worried and went out looking for her pup when she realized she had not return for the night. The search got her to the pavilion again where she found her worn out semi-human pup slumbering in an uncomfortable position.

Not only did she found Eri tired to the point of exhaustion, she was covered with fresh looking scars. She knew her pup can be careless sometime but it was just too exaggerating this time round.

She bets the kitten have something to do with this but even so…

Standing up smoothly with Eri in her arms, Risa sighed deeply and passed the pup carefully to the kitten.

Once she got her hands on the pup, Reina held her firmly to her chest, all the while looking at her affectionately, almost to the point of tearing up.

“Listen kitty” Getting the kitten’s attention, the brunette girl continued while raising her hand.

“If I ever find Eri like this again…”  A mist of scorching vapor starts to form from her fingertip and slowly, it travels right up to level with Reina’s face before igniting instantly into a small raging ball of flame. Although the orb was barely bigger than the size of a marble, the kitten could already felt the intense heat from the inferno. Startled the girl may be but, kept her cool. 

“You better wish you were never born.” Came the low and threatening voice as the inferno changes from a fiery orange to an eerie translucent green causing the temperature to multiply instantly by a few folds before slowly closing in to those persistent golden eyes.

“I’ll be watching you…” With that, Risa clenched her fist on blazing ghostly flames, putting it out in a flash.


As Risa turned and made her way out of the pavilion, Reina shivered a little. That overpowering surge of energy direct to her at that instant was just too much for a body. Quite remarkable that she was able to hold it back until now. Sighing and losing a little tension, the kitten took a seat and placed Eri comfortably onto her lap.

Earlier on, when she was up on her tree, she found her bell pinned to the tree trunk at her spot. Nobody knew she lost her bell other then the pup that currently had her head nestled comfortably in her neck. And mind you, even though her tree is not one of the tallest in Emerelda, but definitely not short as well. She could not help but wondered how unwavering the pup was that she had managed to scale the tree despite her disability. 

Looking down adoringly, she stroked her hair softly before letting her finger gently glide across the wound on the cheek of that beautiful face. On further inspection, the kitten found her covered in quite a number of swelling redness, which she suspects were newly, healed wounds. The pup must have healed every possible wound herself other then those she have no way of reaching. Reina would have healed the wound on her face if she was able to but unlike Eri, healing was not her expertise.

Upon hearing a soft whimper, Reina immediately fixed her eyes on the cute frowning face of the awakening pup. As those eyes opened lazily, it revealed a pair of sleepy silver orbs which took awhile to focus before meeting the intense golden cat eyes. The kitten smiled as an adorable smile lazed its way onto the innocent face and blushed a little when those silvers softened to cast a dreamy look at her for a moment before sneaking back behind those heavy lids again.

“What a dream…” the pup murmured the bittersweet words into her neck as she nuzzled closer.


Tighten her hold, Reina smiled guilty as she gave a series of light kisses on the top of the pup’s head. The pup must have thought she hated her so much that it was impossible for her to be like this in her arms.

In fact, Reina never hated the pup. Yes, she fears her initially and when she tried to warm things up with her, the kitten just did the only thing she knew which was to put up a defensive wall. She was certain that the puppy was aware that her clawing was no joke but even so, the puppy still persisted. She could hardly believe how idiotically suicidal the girl was. She hates to admit it but indeed, the pup did manage to melt the wall she put up eventually at first. However, after the misunderstanding, she just did not know how to react around her anymore and naturally she puts up another wall which came crashing down this morning upon the discovery. The dorky yet adorable pup was just able to incredibly bash through each layer of wall she puts up and snaked into her heart miraculously.

Out of sudden, she felt the body against her froze. Slowly, the girl moved her head back from her neck until she was able to look her in the face

Without warning, the pup jolted and thrashed about to get away from her.

“I’m sorry…sorry…!! I was sleeping and I didn’t know how I got onto you…I’m sorry…sorry…” the pup desperately whimpered as she tries to break free from the now, increasing death grip from the kitten.

Eventually, the girl just stopped struggling when she realized the kitten is not letting her go anywhere.

Hesitantly, she looked up to those golden cat eyes. What she found there, was far from what she expected. Instead of the usual fierce glare, it was a complex of emotions. As if afraid that even a slight move might startled the kitten back to her usual defensive stance, the pup remained motionless, plainly just salvaging the rare moment.

They remain in that state, for how long, the pup did not know.

Just then, in a split of a second, those golden orbs sharpened into an unreadable expression and were shifting its attention back and fro from her eyes to her lip causing her heart to involuntarily skip a beat. Slowly, the kitten tightens her hold on her waist and closed in.

Confused as she may be but allured by the whole situation, the pup gradually close her eyes. Finally when those lip claimed hers, she let out a soft whimper to the surprisingly gentle one. At that moment, Eri just felt as if her whole body was not hers anymore. Her body was slightly trembling, her breath was getting shorter and there was this weird feeling that she could not explain at all. Putting her arms around the kitten’s neck, she found herself returning the kiss.

She almost passed out when she felt the kitten sucking softly on her bottom lip before grazing it tentatively with her tongue, begging for entrance. As the pup sighs, the kitten took the chance and tilted her head sideways, deepening the kiss.

A soft moan escaped Eri mouth when the soft intruder gingerly caressed hers. The pup was so out of it that she could not react at all, concentrating entirely on the pure softness of the kitten’s. Shyly, she started moving hers against the delicate softness as well.

Just as she was starting to enjoy it, the kitten suddenly pulls back. Eri whimpered and pouted when at the lost contact and looked confusingly at the kitten. Reina, now flushing remarkable, was looking at anywhere but her. Gradually, those shy golden orbs lifted up and only met hers briefly, before turning its attention to somewhere on her face.

Slowly, the kitten began to close in again, though still not meeting her eyes. Eri closes hers when the kitten got too close for her to keep them open and anticipated. It never came though. Instead, she felt something warm lapping on her cheek.

Then, it hits her like a hammer on her head. Eri froze and could practically feel the bloodrush to her head. The kitten was just trying to get restorative fluid to heal the wound on her face, hence the kiss. The pup was about to remove her arms from the kitten’s neck when one was stopped by a hand on her wrist. Swiftly, Reina places the arm back around her neck and automatically, the other of Eri’s followed back as well.

With the final long stroke across the whole span of the wound, Reina leans back slightly, inspecting the freshly healed wound if she had missed out any part. Smiling satisfyingly, she turned, only to find a tomato looking away.

Using her index finger to lift the blushing face, Reina urged the girl to look at her. As those embarrass silvery orbs meet hers, she smirked and finally moved in for the real thing.

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@Hammy & kRisZ: Manage to read this before New Year??

Oh well... Time to run! I'm late!!! Watching some fireworks soon!

Once again!

Happy New Year!

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: Treykun on December 31, 2009, 02:51:51 PM

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but if you read it as it is..it's kinda funny! A glass tube gazing at Ai-chan's thigh~ LOL~
WTF?! LOL!! :rofl:

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Confused as she may be but allured by the whole situation, the pup gradually close her eyes. Finally when those lip claimed hers, she let out a soft whimper to the surprisingly gentle one.
:ding: At last~~~ :grin:


Happy new year!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 31, 2009, 02:59:33 PM
Yay!
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Out of sudden, she felt the body against her froze. Slowly, the girl moved her head back from her neck until she was able to look her in the face

Without warning, the pup jolted and thrashed about to get away from her.
Can imagine, lol.
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Using her index finger to lift the blushing face, Reina urged the girl to look at her. As those embarrass silvery orbs meet hers, she smirked and finally moved in for the real thing.
Yes! We need a fist pump emote...
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: kuro808 on December 31, 2009, 05:15:35 PM
doggy/kitty love  :inlove:

that was a cute moment right there
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: aussie on January 01, 2010, 04:42:35 AM
The pets are making progress before their masters?  :O Not that I'm complaining  :D


Knew the kitten had it in her, it was just a matter of time  :lol: I love how it sounded like Reina was only trying to help Eri (while Eri just couldn't believe her luck  :sweatdrop:) with the kiss, only for her to move on to the real thing (ya go kitten~~). I also find it adorable how Reina has her own tree designated for her  XD


Now that all is well and fuzzy between the pup and kitten, no more clawing and scowling and menacing meowing from the kitty?  :P



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 01, 2010, 07:24:13 AM
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Regarding the Celestia that everyone might be concern about..... Nope..no genders requirement... hence.... Ai-chan was not at all shocked by Gaki-san advance even though they were both girls...So....probably....... Gaki-san is the weird one! LOL!!!

OMG  XD   :mon fyeah:


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However, determined, the kitten got a grip of herself and she looked straight into those angered eyes. Reina was never one that begs but…

“Please?” she tried again, almost pleading.

 :shocked


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This morning, Risa got worried and went out looking for her pup when she realized she had not return for the night.

Where did she go?  :shocked   to the kitten's haven?  :w00t:


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The search got her to the pavilion again where she found her worn out semi-human pup slumbering in an uncomfortable position.

Okay  XD


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Once she got her hands on the pup, Reina held her firmly to her chest, all the while looking at her affectionately, almost to the point of tearing up.

Ehhh?


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“If I ever find Eri like this again…”  A mist of scorching vapor starts to form from her fingertip and slowly, it travels right up to level with Reina’s face before igniting instantly into a small raging ball of flame.

Yay! The pet owner showed her protectiveness.


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“You better wish you were never born.”

Where's the kitten's master?  :D


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She could not help but wondered how unwavering the pup was that she had managed to scale the tree despite her disability. 

Yay!  :w00t:


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“What a dream…”

 :lol:


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The dorky yet adorable pup was just able to incredibly bash through each layer of wall she puts up and snaked into her heart miraculously.

That's the turtle power inside a pup  :D


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Confused as she may be but allured by the whole situation, the pup gradually close her eyes. Finally when those lip claimed hers, she let out a soft whimper to the surprisingly gentle one. At that moment, Eri just felt as if her whole body was not hers anymore. Her body was slightly trembling, her breath was getting shorter and there was this weird feeling that she could not explain at all. Putting her arms around the kitten’s neck, she found herself returning the kiss.

Wait, Eri's in her pup form right and Reina's in her human form? *Imagine a pup and a woman kissing* Ewww?  :P


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She almost passed out when she felt the kitten sucking softly on her bottom lip before grazing it tentatively with her tongue, begging for entrance. As the pup sighs, the kitten took the chance and tilted her head sideways, deepening the kiss.

 :on bleed:


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A soft moan escaped Eri mouth when the soft intruder gingerly caressed hers. The pup was so out of it that she could not react at all, concentrating entirely on the pure softness of the kitten’s. Shyly, she started moving hers against the delicate softness as well.

 :shocked   :mon blood:


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Then, it hits her like a hammer on her head. Eri froze and could practically feel the bloodrush to her head. The kitten was just trying to get restorative fluid to heal the wound on her face, hence the kiss.

OMG  :rofl: damn  :rofl:


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a tomato looking away.

 :wriggly:


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Using her index finger to lift the blushing face, Reina urged the girl to look at her. As those embarrass silvery orbs meet hers, she smirked and finally moved in for the real thing.

 :shocked  *Thinks*   :imdead:




My first read story/chapter for the year   :twothumbs  :twothumbs  :twothumbs  way awesome  :bow:  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 01, 2010, 09:23:57 AM
Random Information:

Been wanting to tell this for a long time...but i keep forgetting... Actually... when i was deciding for the characters....... I actually had Ai-chan in Risa's place.... AND~ Sayu in Ai-chan's place.. Sayu kinda suit the elf look doesn't she? And actually..she is somewhere in the story too... but i just dunno when to pop her in LOL

Anyway..if you are wondering why i'm replying comments... cause Little kRisZ gave me a very disturbing image~ LOL

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*Imagine a pup and a woman kissing* Ewww?
- Oh dear.... *faint*

@ Little kRisZ:
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Wait, Eri's in her pup form right and Reina's in her human form? *Imagine a pup and a woman kissing* Ewww?
- Just thought that i need to reply this asap! This horrifying image may cause some nightmares! LOL! NOPE! Eri was in Semi-human form~ soo... with the cute ears and tails~ XD

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Where's the kitten's master?
- Somewhere watching~ XD

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That's the turtle power inside a pup
- this will sound very strange to someone for sure~ but to us it's cute LOL



Since i'm replying one comment...might as well... reply it all now! XD


@aussie:
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The pets are making progress before their masters?
- Surprisingly~ Yes~  :wub:  but it wasn't meant to be that way... well..at least at first.... like you have mention~ Reina kitty was just trying to help...So she got all shy when Eri responded more than she expected  XD LOL..

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I also find it adorable how Reina has her own tree designated for her
- It is such a kitty thing to do..Probably she left some claw marks there too XD

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Now that all is well and fuzzy between the pup and kitten, no more clawing and scowling and menacing meowing from the kitty?
- might~ Reina is still a pretty much meow anything kitten~ but definitely not directed at the pup anymore XD The pup have just went passed the meanie part and is approaching jello heart kitten XD  :mon olympic:

@Kuro-kun:
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doggy/kitty love
- A very unusual love isn't it? XD but i have always wanted to raise a kitten and a puppy together~ They can be good friends if they grew up together..

@Baby Tree:
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Yes! We need a fist pump emote...
- yup! i agree! cause i so wanted to put it when u updated B&B!

@Treykun:
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:ding: At last~~~ :grin:
- YUP! after 11 chapters! but their masters is still on the way there only~ XD


cute puppy vs cat (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4UQFWq8f_yk#)

- HOW cute! XD

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 01, 2010, 09:50:42 AM
 :on lol:  :on lol:  :on lol:




@Vid

Yay! Kitty Reina and Pup Eri in visual aid  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 01, 2010, 10:56:38 AM
OMG, that cat was so chill until the end. :lol: :lol: :lol: So cute!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: badsaints on January 01, 2010, 05:36:11 PM
LOL looks like the masters have a lot to catch up to; if the pace the pets are moving at is of any indication :lol:

I love the way Reina looks and handle the sleeping injured Eri. So loving~ :wub: Not that she could do it any other way if she doesn't want to antagonise Gaki XD That inferno can really hurt :lol:


That video is really cute. I'm guessing the smaller pup wants a share of the meal too and tried to get the cat away from the dish. But after reading your story, I imagine this instead:

pup Eri: *whining* Stop eating and pay attention to me
kitty Reina: *ignores and continue eating*
pup Eri: *licking the cheek* Look at me
kitty Reina: *pushing Eri away* Go away
pup Eri: *pulled Reina's ears* Listen to me~
kitty Reina: Fine! *turns and gives Eri a deep kiss*

LOL look how disturbed your story is turning me into :lol:

p.s. did you catch the fireworks at Marina Bay?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 02, 2010, 12:09:41 AM
 :OMG: I hate it when I miss updates!!  :fainted:

I actually like the old FF ones, 7 to 9 more than the X-X2, (haven't played the XII yet, not keeping up with the game world either).

I never play Diablo. Um...you name it Gaki? (I can't think of one that fits a necromancer image, but Gaki came in mind for being a demon slayer).

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She might be falling for the kitten…who detests her.
It's not the right situation but I can't help to scream "yay!" inside  XD

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“Need any help?”  Ai teasingly pulled on her robe a little to reveal more of the content, smirking at the dreamy look that was directed at her thigh.
:lol: like it when Ai is doing the teasing

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-“Ai Deficiency”
- “Grand Elf for dummies”
:rofl: oh boy...

The whole thing with Yuko and Kumudini leader, one of "the bomb" hints?

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The kitten and puppy deserves some time by themselves don't they??
I couldn't agree more! 

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Haha.. I have another story planned for Reina and Eri actually... the general plot is there..but not much story line yet..lets just see when i can put that up together..
That sounded great, can't wait :D


I'm pretty sure I have something else to say but all I can say now is:

I'm one very happy TanaKame-ist for chapter 11,  I have died and gone to the TanaKamei heaven  :mon angel:
Thank you!  :bow:

I love your imagination badsaints  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on January 02, 2010, 12:07:47 PM
It took me so long to post a comment cuz I needed time to become human again. I was on the ground in a puddle of mush after reading this XD Can a kitty and pup get any cuter than this? :wub:

Their masters have to buck up. They can't be left too far behind :P Can we expect some hawt action between TakaGaki in the next update?

When Risa was telling Reina not to ever let Eri be hurt like that again, I found her so cool and hawt :P I need to see her in action soon! Someone as kakoii as her must get to show off her skills  :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 02, 2010, 05:34:17 PM
@ Little kRisZ: Indeed it is! The kitten (Okay...not really a kitten... cat... but anyway... Reina is not that big! LOL~) even gave it a few shoulder pat~ Right till the end.. when the kitten attempts to playfully bite the puppy throat..it whined but still have it's tail shaking~ LOL~ Much like Eri would do! Like the waterfall scene where Reina sneak up behind her and jump at her XD

@ Baby Tree: The pup is as suicidal as Eri to do that..The kitty is really great...Most will already be clawing the puppy!~  XD

@Mummy:
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I love the way Reina looks and handle the sleeping injured Eri
- Reina is the meanie with jello heart~ sooooo with the meanie part gone.. here comes a new jello kitten! Maybe she might turn out cuter than Eri in the end.. XD

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LOL look how disturbed your story is turning me into
- If the kitty would have been smaller..it would have been perfect.. Reina is not that huge but Eri might be that tiny XD With the pup being so suicidal....and the kitten ignoring it... until it finally get back at the pup.... but the pup is still shaking it's tail even though the kitten got it's throat! OK~ IT's Reina and ERI~!  :P I'm pretty much disturbed by my own story as well...... not to mention.... CAMELS too... *sweat*

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p.s. did you catch the fireworks at Marina Bay?
- Yup... I did! I was at the Flyer area...I teared up a little at the climax and hugged my friend! LOL such a baby  XD Were you watching it?

@Chloe: Happy new Year to you! I was waiting for you to pop by!  :P

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I never play Diablo. Um...you name it Gaki?
- Nope~ I named it Reix (reminds you of anyone? XD) ... And probably she will be starring at my new fic.. i started the character so i can be familiar with the neco's skills~  XD If i have a character for Gaki.. most likely i would have her as a Paladin~ I should! I had this idea to make a group of them to travel and kill Diablo in the end XD *Whoop! but that = to more headaches! I'm not good at action scenes~*

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It's not the right situation but I can't help to scream "yay!" inside
- Cause it actually confirms a TanaKame? LOL~ plus no triangle between them and TakaGaki...  XD

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The whole thing with Yuko and Kumudini leader, one of "the bomb" hints?
- *ding dong ding dong...* Correcto..

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I have died and gone to the TanaKamei heaven
- NOoooooooo! I still want you to pop by here! LOL~

@Hammy: LOL~ maybe i can add the puddle of mush (you) in the story somewhere XD sounds very magically as well.. and you transforms back to human too!  XD Thanks anyway!

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Can we expect some hawt action between TakaGaki in the next update?
- Soooon~ I guess~ XD It's already so unfortunate that their pet got ahead of them! LOL

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Someone as kakoii as her must get to show off her skills
- I have headache with action scene but i'll try my best ~  :D


Update might come tomorrow i guess... i haven't been writing this few days.... and too, there are a couple of things i need to think through about the storyline again... Because i still have so much fluff that i want to write about that i don't know when the story will be back on track again LOL~ I was even considering to make it a pure fluff story....but.........  :P *Sorry*  :mon hanky:

 :mon bat:



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 02, 2010, 10:23:23 PM
Thanks, Happy belated New Year to you too bishop!  XD
Sorry about the lateness. I wish I could be earlier but since I'm practically the only one left who has their internet connection alive at home, everyone hijacked it for some time (even days!). So if I disappeared for days or more in the future then it's likely the case (or real life).

Reix sounds familiar, but I don't know. Reix is a she? sounds like a cool character  :)
I can picture Gaki as a Paladin. Just add the idea to your list of ideas, who knows it may turn into a great story later.

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Cause it actually confirms a TanaKame? LOL~ plus no triangle between them and TakaGaki...
Exactly!

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*ding dong ding dong...* Correcto..
I don't like this correcto LOL

*back from TanaKamei heaven*
(I figured I should be back for more TanaKamei and TakaGaki).

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Because i still have so much fluff that i want to write about that i don't know when the story will be back on track again LOL~ I was even considering to make it a pure fluff story....but.........

I LOVE FLUFF!!  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: aussie on January 03, 2010, 02:12:09 AM
I don't mind a fluff story  :D It would be a nice break from the combination of emo/depressed/gory/doom'n'gloom collection of fics I've been reading lately :lol: But I'd just be glad if you continued your story and not put it on hold   :kneelbow:


I forgot to mention in my first comment - I'd love to see Ai in her fiercely hot, protective master mode for her little kitty too. Angry pup master Gaki was seriously too hot to handle (the kitty seems to agree  :lol:)



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 11 - Resolve (31/12) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 05, 2010, 05:34:04 PM
@ All Readers: Sorry.. the update came late.. I have been busy lately... *sighs* But then again..this chapter is much longer than those i have posted before... It's 9 pages of fluff..trying to test my limit of fluffs~  LOL~ (Probably i might have put in something that i might regret in the future) Happy reading~ Comments appreciated!  XD


@Chloe: LOL~ Happy belated New Year my dear member...I hated it when i cannot surf the net.. i will die and rot at home XD
Reix came from Reina =X It's a he in the game... because there is no choice for a she instead :(

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back from TanaKamei heaven
- I might send you to a different heaven today.. TakaGaki Heaven XD

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I LOVE FLUFF!!
-You are getting 9 pages of it today!  :D

@aussie: Actually..all the fluff is part of the story as well... part and parcel in strengthening my character to each other... The higher it goes... the deeper it will drop  *Prepare metal wok to protect myself* lol

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Ai in her fiercely hot, protective master mode for her little kitty too. Angry pup master Gaki was seriously too hot to handle (the kitty seems to agree  )
-I'll see where i can chuck that in.. cause Ai-chan is not very short tempered actually... only to Risa though.. LOL~ cause she is just too annoyingly cute.. XD


Chapter 12
Spellbound



“Looks like Reina got lucky.”  Came a pleasantly soft voice from behind her

Risa had noticed the Princess presence for awhile though but only acknowledged with a brief look. She has a more important task on hand now. When she said she will be watching, she meant it.

Unable to get the brunette’s attention for the time being, Ai wrapped her arms around the slender waist and rested her head on her shoulder to watch the pair as well.

“Will I lose my puppy?” Risa finally speaks up. Ai could already imaging seeing that cute pout forming.

“Why don’t you think it as you might gain a kitten and we become in-laws?”

“I rather not. In-laws can’t get married, can they?” Risa smirked. Without looking, she was sure she got the shy girl blushing already.

Choosing not to reply, Ai just shrugged.

“Why don’t we leave the two cuties alone?”

“Am I cute?”

“Why do you always ask this kind of weird questions?”

“I think you’re cute.”

The Princess like always, chose to ignore her but this was what Risa actually finds cute about her. Ai just brings a whole new meaning of teasing to her.

AND not forgetting the arms around her waist now. Risa had this goofy grin plastered on her face and pumped her fist into the air internally when the girl held her from the back for the first time. Important information… she was not the one who initiated it.

“I’m going to the library” the girl released her hold reluctantly and walks away. RELUCTANTLY! Risa pumped her fist into the air but this time actually really doing it since Ai was not facing her anyway.

Taking one final looking at the still intimate pair, Risa jogs up to the raven beauty before taking her hand into hers.

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Like the other time, upon reaching the library, the Princess leisurely walks over to the ladder but pulled her robe a little higher than needed to as she steps up the rung. Risa, of course did not miss the smirk the girl had, but this time she was not all stoned, admiring the girl.

As the girl climbs up the ladder, the brunette followed.

“What are you doing?” noticing the girl below her, Ai questioned.

“I’m getting a book too…I wouldn’t peek. I promise~” the girl threw her a cheeky wink.

The raven girl giggled before resuming her climb, which of course was followed closely behind by a certain brat.

When she was right at the top, the girl was a just a step lower than her. As she scans the row of books, she felt the girl circled her waist with one arm from behind while the other reaches out for a book that was right in front of her. That action had caused the whole of the girl front to be pressed up against her back and what drove her crazy was that hot breath on her nape.

She gasped as the sneaky girl nestled her face against the back of her neck while further tightening her hold on her waist, pretending to be leaning even closer to reach out for the book.

When the girl finally pulled out the book from the slot, Ai felt a smirk forming at her nape.

With a heavy thud, the book that Risa had, accidentally slipped from her hand and landed on the rung that Ai was on.

“Opps… Sorry…” the Princess shivered as the brunette girl breathes out the apology on her neck.

Ai pressed her lip into a thin line as she felt the teasing girl slipped her hand slightly into the slit of her robe, placing it on the side of her thigh. Together with her lip and body against her back, the seductress leisurely slides down the length of her body and leg, causing a soft whimper to escape. Stopping at her lower back, the girl lingered longer than needed to get the fallen book before sliding back up reluctantly and fondly placing a kiss at the nape of her neck.

“I’ve got your book.” With that simple sentence, Risa effortlessly led the half dazed girl down from the ladder.

Instead of the tables, the younger girl chose a more private spot at the back and sat under a window before gently pulling the older one to join her. It took Ai awhile to snap out of her current state to realize that the girl indeed had gotten the book she was looking for and even had it flipped open to where she had stopped at the day before.

Although it seems almost as though the girl had just casually picked the similar book for her from before but apparently, it actually discreetly hints that she was in fact was on the right track with her little research. Seriously, how the girl even manages to look into just about every single small detail was beyond her imagination. Leaning back comfortably into her personal warm couch, Ai started reading the book that was held open for her.

Ever so often, she will lightly tap one of her human book holder’s hands to get the page turned. After some time, she ends up just having a lazy hold on one of the girl’s wrist where simply a gentle rub with her thumb will be enough to get the job done instead.

Throughout, the brunette was just contented with merely observing the girl over her shoulder.

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As for the two cuties, they were pretty much in a similar position as their masters but just in reversal role with the kitten cuddling the pup from behind instead. Reina would have gotten them to rest in her basket if not for that Eri had passed out from the kiss in her semi-human form. She did panic a little when the girl blacked out but after making sure she was okay, given that she could not bear to attempt to wake the angel, she brought her to an empty guest room instead. Less comfy than her basket though, but will do for now.

At some point of time, the pup had turned in her arms and snuggled in the neck. Since then, the kitten was simply just gazing at the slumbering angel. This was, in fact, the first time she had actually settled down enough to really take a good look at the angelic face, studying every single detail and safe keeping them in mind.

For how long she had been staring, the kitten did not know or rather did not bother to care.

It might have been after several hours that the pup finally stirs a little from her sleep but not quite yet opening her eyes. Reina tightens her hold and watches affectionately as those lids that were heavy with sleep, unfolds to reveal a pair of unfocused sliver orbs for the second time of the day. As expected, the girl again, jolted, except this time she did not thrash around when the drowsiness dissipated enough for the pup to make out her current state. If it had not been for the steady hold Reina had on the girl, she might have fallen off the bed from the shock.

If she could, Reina really wish she could have kicked her own ass for bringing the girl down to this point.

For a few minutes, they just remained still, the pup with a startled look and the kitten with an almost remorseful smile. It was not long before the initial shock starts to wear off and Eri tenses up again as she recalled what had happened before and blushed.

Seeing that, Reina gingerly starts to lean closer to the recovering girl and planted a kiss tenderly on her forehead while mumbling words of console.

“It’s alright babe… It’s okay…… I’m not going to hurt you…” It was getting harder to convey what she intended to when she felt her throat tightens.

“This is not a dream…Not anymore……this is real………I’m here for you……” the kitten clenched her jaw tightly to calm herself down from the sudden surge of emotion.

“I’m…… sorry for being such an ass…… I’m…the worst……” she tried but ends up turning into a sobbing mess as she reproached herself.

As the kitten weeps, Eri realized the gentle grip that Reina previously had on her had turned into clinging hold, almost a desperate attempt to keep her close. On instinct, the pup just shifted their positioning to let the girl rest her weight fully atop her and holds on endearingly to kitten.

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Back at the library, the sun had almost set, casting an amber glow upon it. Even so, a certain pair of couple had yet to leave. Strings of vocabulary can be heard coming from the back of the library.

It seems that the Princess had discovered that the crystal ball was word bind.

“Release……Reveal……Disclose……Uncover……Unearth……Unveil…... Unwrap…Materialize…………………” Risa watched in awe as the Princess starts to verbalize randomly, probably banging on out of a hundred shots, she might get a bull’s eye by chance. She is stubborn isn’t she?

“Show……Appear…… Surface…… Emerge…….Come on……Come out…….Get Out… ……Hey……” Was that a “hey” she heard? The brunette could only laugh harder as she buries her face into the girl’s shoulder. Apparently, the raven had pretty much starting to run dry on ideas hence she was basically just throwing anything that came into her mind.

“AH! Abracadabra!” she exclaimed and observed the bluish purple orb closely for a reaction…but nope. Nothing happens. The Princess thought she got it this time. Thought.

Turning in her lap to face her, Ai pouted as she smacks the snickering girl playfully.

“Expose?” the girl attempted again.

“Okay!” Risa replied shamelessly as she does a suggestive gesture as if she was going to remove her clothing, which of course, got her a few harder smacks.

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Just as Eri had thought the girl atop of her had fallen asleep, Reina hesitantly pulled back from her neck.

“Sorry…I’m…I…” apologies again.

Deciding that there was just too much apology from the kitten, Eri switches the topic.

“Come on…Let’s start anew.” The pup said while she sits up, bringing the gloomy kitten into a sitting position on her lap. As the puppy look expectantly at her, Reina nods shyly.

With that, Reina closes her eye on the side that Eri had leaned forward to as she brushes her cheek softly up against hers. Reina purred as she leans into the friendly gesture from the puppy and giggled when Eri nudged her playfully with her nose.

“Eri of Niigaki” the pup pulled back with a bright smile but not too far away from the kitten before introducing herself.

“Reina of Ai” the kitten replied and returned the friendly gesture before nuzzling into the puppy’s neck.

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“Ouch…aw………No one told me a Princess packed a punch as well…” Risa whined and pouted as she rubbed her slightly sore arm, easing the pain away from the ruthless smacking by the blushing Princess.

“Serve you right!” crossing her arms, Ai just glared at the girl.

“Maybe you wanna try ‘Strip’ instead? It might have better results.” Risa immediately put her hands up, prepared to defend herself from another round of beating which…never came. Slowly, she peeked through her fingers cautiously. The girl was looking away as she murmurs something under her breath.

She’s lying… she’s lying… she’s lying…” Straining her ears to hear, Risa pressed her lip into a straight line to prevent from laughing out loud, amazed that the girl actually took her words into consideration.

“What are you doing!” the girl continued as she smacks Risa, who had her hands suspiciously behind herself.

“Ouch ouch! I’m just trying to tie up my sash…its loose!”

“Like REAL!”

“Oh…or you prefer me walking around later with the possibility that my sash might fall causing half my body exposed to the world? I’m okay with just showing you…but… i’m not sure about others…” Swinging one end of the loose sash, the mischievous girl smirked.

“Not interested!”

“Did you hear that?” the bluish-purple eyed girl suddenly alerted.

“What?” the pointed ears of the Princess twitched slightly as she heightens her senses.

“It’s so loud……”

“Here… you will hear it better.” The brunette continued as she pulls the girl closer until a side of her face is leaning against her chest. Ai finds it strange but compelled anyway.

“My heart is breaking…” Risa managed to deliver that part of the message as calm as possible before cracking up as she secures her arms around the struggling girl’s waist and shoulder to hold her tightly to her. Unable to get away, the scowling girl pounded her fist mercilessly on any possible spot she can get on the younger.

She only stopped when she realized the girl under her was motionless with her arms limply by her sides.

“Hey…! Hey……Stop pretending!” not getting a respond, Ai started to panic a little as she shakes the still body.

“Hey…Wake up……… Risa!” the distressed Princess taps the girl lightly on her face. With her hands glowing white, she was about to heal the girl from whatever internal injuries she might have gotten from her when a bluish-purple orb hovered right between hers and Risa’s face, halting her action.

Confused, she followed it with her eyes as it hovers to the side. She observed closely as the orb glows softly before intensifying. Without warning, it flashed out, so bright that she had to shield her eyes from the blinding light. Opening them gradually, the already dark library was now softly illuminated by a bluish-purple glow. Rays of light then, started to extend out from the orb before flattening out at the end as if it was shone on an invisible screen.

Her eyes widen in fascination as the orb starts to project something on the light screens. She gasped as the images became clearer. It was none other then she herself. Each screen showed a different expression of her smiling, blushing, smirking, grinning, glaring, astonished, shocked and even the scowling look just from minutes before. At the corner, new screens were forming rapidly, showing new images.

It did not take long to realize that it was probably her current expression and from the angle, the camera can only be one person.

Indeed, she found the previously “unconscious” girl observing her with a grin when she turned to face her. So many questions flooded her mind now but she only managed to voice out a word.

“How?”

“Finally Ai-chan said it.” the simple reply was all the brunette offered as she wraps her arms around her waist affectionately.

Frowning, the Princess recalls what she had said that might have dispelled the binding.

New images were forming at a faster rate as the realization dwelled into those emerald orbs before gazing into the pair of amethyst.

Not wanting to break the moment, Risa raised her hand slightly to allow the projecting orb to rest on her palm gently before bringing it up between them.

“Here…Look…this corner…” she pointed out with her other hand before placing it back at the girl waist again.

“It’s still empty…I hope one day it will fill up as well.” The girl said in such a sentimental tone that Ai was not sure if this was the flirtatious brat she came to knew. She was speechless.

“Will it?” the brunette’s voice sounded almost desperate when there was no respond from her after a long silent.

Damning her ability to speak, Ai wrapped her arms around the Risa’s neck and leaned in swiftly, pressing her lips onto the almost quivering one.

Risa gasped at the sudden turn of event and closed her eyes to enjoy the feel of those soft lips on hers. After a short moment, the lips were still pressed tightly against her…but…remained perfectly motionless. Risa was a little lost on what to do because she does not want to push the girl but she her senses tells her that something is amiss as the girl had snuggled even closer to her. Realizing that this was probably the girl’s first kiss, an instinct of possessiveness seems to kick in as she tighten her hold protectively around the girl. Slowly moving her lips, she led the inexperienced girl into the kiss. Ai whimpered softly but not quite yet moving her lips. Risa encouragingly nudged the unmoving lips tenderly and smirked into kiss as she felt Ai reciprocated experimentally.

The brunette was seriously considering whether she should add her tongue in since this was only the Princess’s first lesson but decided to let it slip for now. She might overload the girl plus she is so innocently cute that she does not want to corrupt the girl so fast yet. Anyway, it will be fun too to have a lesson two during some other time.

Sensing the rapid increment in the girl’s temperature, Risa pulled away reluctantly, ending the kiss with a soft smooch. She does not want her girl to pass out thus leaving some bad impression or something.

The raven beauty still had her eyes closed when she pulled away hence Risa moved a hand up to support as well as to stroke the cheek softly, hoping to gravitate her girl.

When those heavy lids finally unfold to reveal the hidden gems, Risa was sure the orb was probably popping out new images at a frenzy speed and was definite that the orb was overloaded with images when a lazy smile made its way onto the girl’s face before turning it into a sexy smirk. The brunette was not even sure now who was the inexperienced one. She so wanted to go on to lesson two but shook the idea off.

Pulling the girl back down her chest, she calmed herself down a little.

“It’s loud….” The Princess copied the younger Niigaki’s words from before

“Hmm…ya…of course…cause you were the one hitting it?” Risa smiled contently as her girl continues to lay on her, listening to her heartbeat.

She opens her palm a little when the older girl started digging into it for the bluish-purple orb. Still leaning against her, the Princess took the small orb between her thumb and forefinger, observing the new additions. Even as she was looking, new images were accumulating.

“May I?” with a nod from the girl, Risa closes her fingers over those that were still holding onto the orb and squeezed softly.

Noticing that the shape of the item between her fingers was no longer round like before, Ai observed closely as Risa slowly removed her hand. Holding in between her fingers in place of the orb now, was a gorgeous silver ring imbrued with an amethyst.

The girl then gently took the exquisite item from her fingers. She leaned back slightly to see what the girl was doing only to find that the distant was once again closed by Risa who was leaning forward to have her hands behind her neck and she felt something cool resting against her collarbone.  Looking down, she found the ring on a necklace

“It will be easier to carry it around this way.”

Taking a closer look at the ring, Ai found that the brunette’s name was elegantly engraved on the inner circle of the ring.
“Beautiful” the word was practically breathed out by the enthralled girl.

Using her hand to cup her girl’s face gently, Risa lifted it up to face her and this time, she moves in. It was slow and light as she pours her feeling into the kiss. Her heart soared when her girl returned those with equal affections.

Pulling back slowly, Risa sighed contently and presses their forehead together as she gazed at the girl who still had her eyes still shut.

When those emeralds emerged, she kissed her forehead and the girl naturally just nestled comfortably into the crook of her neck.

“These cuties are adorable…” Risa commented while she uses her finger to touch the pointed tip of the elven ear and chuckled when the girl twitches them playfully.

“You’re adorable too” 

“Say that again.” Risa could not believe her ear. She had to confirm she was not hearing things

“That again” 

“NO! Not that.” Ai giggled as the girl smacks her playfully

“You’re a brat.”

“But an adorable one…beware My Princess…I might abduct you someday.” Risa tried to sound as horrifying as possible and ended the sentence with a satanic laughter.

“I’ll be waiting.” came the casual reply from the unaffected Princess as she snuggled closer.

Risa was a little confused when she felt the hands that were around her neck moved to encircle her waist before fidgeting with something behind but only giggled as she realized the girl was tightening her sash for her.

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Have you all guessed the magic word? I'st kinda obvious.. :)

*Places 2 Pails*

Pail One : Collects Blood

Pail Two : Collects Mushes

*Digs graves* -> For those that are dead

LOL~ I'm tired.. Pardon me!

*Scrambles to bed.....* I'm on cough medicine now...  :mon wakey:

 :mon bat:

ps: My next update may come later than usual..  :(


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: kuro808 on January 05, 2010, 06:42:05 PM
^ Don't worry about updating so often, just make sure it is worth your time.  :D

Risa/Ai relationship works around toying with each other, just almost there most of the time

Reina and Eri :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 05, 2010, 07:40:15 PM
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I hated it when i cannot surf the net.. i will die and rot at home
That’s two of us.

Ah, you took the 'Rei' part from Reina and made it into Reix. No she? That’s odd, usually games these days have a she character by default.

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“Looks like Reina got lucky.”
Somehow that line cracks me up.

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“Why don’t you think it as you might gain a kitten and we become in-laws?”

I’m soooo looking forward to it! (if it's possible for The TanaKamei).

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“I rather not. In-laws can’t get married, can they?”
Very subtle, Gaki.

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Important information… she was not the one who initiated it.
Indeed.

I was going to ask you to elaborate what happened with the ‘still intimate pair’ that is the pup and the kitten, but you already did. Eri passed out LOL

Dear camel, you really are serious about making me go to TakaGaki heaven.
The whole 'expose', ‘strip’, and ‘My heart is breaking’ thing is hilarious! Gaki is such a big flirt! XD

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she does not want to corrupt the girl so fast yet.
Yet.

Speaking of amethyst, my mind always goes to Rei Hino from Sailormoon whenever I read the word.

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“That again”

I snorted loud at that.

The magic word is…uh, ‘Risa’?

All of that fluff…save one of the graves for me!! I’m now on TanaKamei high and dying --> most definitely NOT complaining.
But this time I’m going to the fluff heaven :D
(at this rate, I wouldn’t mind dying by overdose of fluff for real).

You, Bishop, just officially made my day, I :heart: this chapter very much!
And don’t worry about the update!

EDIT: almost forgot, get well soon!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 05, 2010, 11:40:14 PM
*chisels onto headstone: Here lies Happy Tree, killed by Baby Sticky. Hops in* :imdead:

And here's a few of my favorite lines:
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“Why don’t we leave the two cuties alone?”

“Am I cute?”

“Why do you always ask this kind of weird questions?”

“I think you’re cute.”
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“I’ve got your book.” With that simple sentence, Risa effortlessly led the half dazed girl down from the ladder.
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Ever so often, she will lightly tap one of her human book holder’s hands to get the page turned. After some time, she ends up just having a lazy hold on one of the girl’s wrist where simply a gentle rub with her thumb will be enough to get the job done instead.
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“Did you hear that?” the bluish-purple eyed girl suddenly alerted.

“What?” the pointed ears of the Princess twitched slightly as she heightens her senses.

“It’s so loud……”

“Here… you will hear it better.” The brunette continued as she pulls the girl closer until a side of her face is leaning against her chest. Ai finds it strange but compelled anyway.

“My heart is breaking…”
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Risa was a little confused when she felt the hands that were around her neck moved to encircle her waist before fidgeting with something behind but only giggled as she realized the girl was tightening her sash for her.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: badsaints on January 06, 2010, 07:40:37 AM
Aww my baby is sick :( Mummy will sing ya a lullaby :)

*chisels onto headstone: Here lies Happy Tree, killed by Baby Sticky. Hops in* :imdead:
Brings flowers for the fallen :mon angel:



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“Looks like Reina got lucky.”
I love this line :mon determined:

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With that, Reina closes her eye on the side that Eri had leaned forward to as she brushes her cheek softly up against hers. Reina purred as she leans into the friendly gesture from the puppy and giggled when Eri nudged her playfully with her nose.
Them in semi-human form doing this is damn cute :luvluv1:

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“……… Risa!”
Magic word? Smart! :on asmo:

LOL Risa finally scored Ai's kiss (the first one at that) :mon squee: Can't wait for lesson 2
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on January 06, 2010, 09:52:34 AM
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@Hammy: LOL~ maybe i can add the puddle of mush (you) in the story somewhere XD sounds very magically as well.. and you transforms back to human too!  XD

Woah, I get a cameo in the fic? YATTA!!! :otomerika: *does some dancing* :yossi:

I liked how you switched between the masters and their pets in this chapter. It kinda made me think that both sides were happening concurrently :)

Risa is such a flirt but then again, she's good doing it :P I can't say Ai is totally innocent since she knows how to get Risa more interested in her with all those little actions. How do you think of all these? Do you use them often? XD

Awww, the ring bit....I already told you I became mush again right? Previously I only turned once in one chapter. Now I run the risk of becoming nota solid human more than one time every update. This has got to be bad for my health :lol:

What exactly are you intending to write that will make you regret it in the future? :shocked

The magic word is Risa right?

PS: I almost forgot to say I loved the part where Ai threw out random words. So funny! *clutches tummy* :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 07, 2010, 10:26:16 AM
Random Information...: After much rest~ My cough is getting better!  :D I actually planned on having the kiss at the waterfall but i think the back of a library seems like a nice place too.. scandalous!  XD

Anyway... i have no idea why... but i always mess up my typing when i type "such" and "sure".. so don't be surprise that i drop afew of that mistake in already...sometime i miss it too when i re-read before posting..  :P



@All: *Ding dong ding dong* Correcto! The magic word is "Risa"

@kurosawa87: It's kinda fun to tease one another...but looks like player Gaki is gonna get nailed this time XD

@Chloe: *Tie string to Chloe's legs and fly her(You're a her right?  :? lol) like a kite* <- to pull you back down from heaven XD

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You, Bishop, just officially made my day, I  :heart: this chapter very much!
- Thanks! This made my day as well  :D

Hmmmm...as for the game... They have specific gender for different characters... Paladin, Druid, Barbarian and Necromancer are guys... Sorceress, Assassin and Amazon are female characters.. SO...... My Reix in the game is a white haired scary guy.. lol.. Poor Reina XD Anyway.. why Rei Hino? Oh... it's another Rei XD I don't watch Sailor Moon~ but i've seen that character before

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“Looks like Reina got lucky.”
- Well..she is lucky! Eri is an adorable pup.. plus only the suicidal can get to the kitten...and how many are as suicidal as the cute pup~ I count her more lucky than Eri.. XD

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if it's possible for The TanaKamei
- I already had plans for them  :D

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Very subtle, Gaki.
-As expected from the big flirt.. lol

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Eri passed out LOL
- isn't it cute? Such an Eri-thing.. and Reina wants to bring her to her basket.. LOL~

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Yet.
- Such a nice word..i wonder who made this word..LOL~

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“That again”

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I snorted loud at that.
- I did that once in lecture.. We were all silent when the lecturer ask some stuffs... then he say "Say something" Being soooo bored and not feeling very pleased that my time got wasted (he is not a good lecturer..) So i replied "Something" and got some hard smacking from my friend to shut me up.. LOL~

@Baby Tree:
*Covers graves and scatters some green tea leaves seed on the grave... places 3 cups of green tea on gravestone*
- *Praying*  May Baby Tree grow into a fine green tea plant........hummmmmmmmmmmmmm

XD thanks anyway! I personally like the tying sash part the most~  :D

@Mum: *listens to lullaby* Zzzzzzz.................*snoring*................ZZzzzz......

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“Looks like Reina got lucky.”
- Actually from our point of view..Eri should be the one that got lucky~ but since... Reina is sure a horrifying(?) kitten..and still manages to snag the such an adorable pup.... to Ai-chan... she is one lucky kitten~! XD

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Them in semi-human form doing this is damn cute  :luvluv1:
- I'm glad i had them as pet..so much fun to describe them this way... a little human mix with a little innocent animal interactions~ and Reina got a basket too... XD Probably.... Eri had a kennel back at the Niigaki house~

@Hammy:

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Woah, I get a cameo in the fic? YATTA!!!
- Yup~ i might be able to.. but it will be further back cause i have the next few characters planned out already XD

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I liked how you switched between the masters and their pets in this chapter. It kinda made me think that both sides were happening concurrently
- Actually..it's kinda like a bad(?) habit i have... i like things to be linked.. lol... Most probably we will be seeing alot of this... will you get sick of it? :(

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I can't say Ai is totally innocent since she knows how to get Risa more interested in her with all those little actions.
- Oh well.... cause she is up against a big flirt... she should be more carefully though... a lift of her robe got Risa up to did her little scandalous act on the ladder...Risa is so dangerous.. but then again... probably i'm the most dangerous~ XD

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How do you think of all these? Do you use them often? XD
- Conversation wise..Yup~ i thought of all of them up myself... Action wise...I thought of some of them up myself.. while some...i got rough ideas from something i've read before.. but twist(polish?) it totally to fit what i like better XD So i guess they are still pretty original?  :?

I'm not a big flirt.. wait..maybe i am.. LOL! Let me try..~ I wish i could rearrange the alphabets... why?? So that "I" and "U" can be together! Look at your keyboard... isn't it sweet that we have a star above of us? *Runs to hide* I'm too shy to pull something like this off! I'll be all red after that.. LOL! I do use them once in awhile... but just to humor my friends (esp the heart breaking thing) XD

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What exactly are you intending to write that will make you regret it in the future?  :shocked
- I was hoping something here would not contradict to my future plan of the story.. Tell you a secret... If you recall....this is actually not really Ai-chan first kiss.. remember she rewards Reina with a kiss back then... when i wrote this chapter i was like..oh crap~! but i manages to scrape my way through by reasoning that... it is just a brief kiss and we don't really consider the kiss from our parents or pets into our first kiss...sooo.... *Phew* Lucky no one have notice yet~




Off to write my next chapter XD

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 07, 2010, 11:52:12 AM
LOL yeah I still needs to come back from the heaven to finish reading your story and glad you're getting better.

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You're a her right?  :? lol
Awww wouldn't you wanna know?  :hehehe:
Kidding! Yes, yes, I'm a she. But I just don't act like one  :nervous

The game characters kinda reminds me of Heroes of Might and Magic Series, ever played that game?

Oh! I don't realize until you mentioned it, indeed another Rei. As to why Rei Hino is because in many Sailormoon fics I've read, described her eyes as amethyst or at least associated her with it.

I'd say both Eri and Reina are lucky  :yep:
Though I have to agree at Reina being luckier. Where will you find one very cute (yet suicidal) pup that would do that kind of things for you even when you treated them like Reina did? I kinda envy Reina for it :lol:

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- I already had plans for them
You do? Unless I know for sure those are happy plans, can't get my hopes high, yet.

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- isn't it cute? Such an Eri-thing.. and Reina wants to bring her to her basket.. LOL~
Adorable. The want to bring her to the basket thing got me XD
I wonder how big is her basket?  :?

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- Such a nice word..i wonder who made this word..LOL~
I wonder...LOL Yep, nice word and dangerous too.

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- I did that once in lecture.. We were all silent when the lecturer ask some stuffs... then he say "Say something" Being soooo bored and not feeling very pleased that my time got wasted (he is not a good lecturer..) So i replied "Something" and got some hard smacking from my friend to shut me up.. LOL~
I can imagine that LOL

- I was hoping something here would not contradict to my future plan of the story.. Tell you a secret... If you recall....this is actually not really Ai-chan first kiss.. remember she rewards Reina with a kiss back then... when i wrote this chapter i was like..oh crap~! but i manages to scrape my way through by reasoning that... it is just a brief kiss and we don't really consider the kiss from our parents or pets into our first kiss...sooo.... *Phew* Lucky no one have notice yet~
I don't think that counts either.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 08, 2010, 05:10:55 PM
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“Why don’t you think it as you might gain a kitten and we become in-laws?”

Damn  :lol:


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Important information… she was not the one who initiated it.

Noted  :D


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“I’m getting a book too…I wouldn’t peek. I promise~” the girl threw her a cheeky wink.

 :rofl:  Holy cow camel   :rofl:


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When she was right at the top, the girl was a just a step lower than her. As she scans the row of books, she felt the girl circled her waist with one arm from behind while the other reaches out for a book that was right in front of her. That action had caused the whole of the girl front to be pressed up against her back and what drove her crazy was that hot breath on her nape.

 :drool:


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Ai felt a smirk forming at her nape.

 XD


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“Opps… Sorry…” the Princess shivered as the brunette girl breathes out the apology on her neck.

Someone’s seducing someone  XD me likes  :D


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Ever so often, she will lightly tap one of her human book holder’s hands to get the page turned. After some time, she ends up just having a lazy hold on one of the girl’s wrist where simply a gentle rub with her thumb will be enough to get the job done instead.

Cute  :wriggly:


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Throughout, the brunette was just contented with merely observing the girl over her shoulder.

 :shocked   :mon blood:


“It’s alright babe… It’s okay…… I’m not going to hurt you…”

 :w00t:


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Risa watched in awe as the Princess starts to verbalize randomly, probably banging on out of a hundred shots, she might get a bull’s eye by chance. She is stubborn isn’t she?

 :lol:


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“Expose?” the girl attempted again.

“Okay!” Risa replied shamelessly as she does a suggestive gesture as if she was going to remove her clothing, which of course, got her a few harder smacks.

OMG  :lol: :lol: :lol:  I so love it


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Reina nods shyly.

 :wub:


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“How?”

The word Risa.?.


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first kiss

Lucky brat


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Using her hand to cup her girl’s face gently, Risa lifted it up to face her and this time, she moves in. It was slow and light as she pours her feeling into the kiss. Her heart soared when her girl returned those with equal affections.

 :on_hot:   :mon blood:   :imdead:


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*Digs graves* -> For those that are dead

*Climbs down and pulls Bishop in*   :P
 





Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 09, 2010, 05:56:42 AM
@ Little Chloe:
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Awww wouldn't you wanna know?  :hehehe:

- *spotted thunder clouds... release more string to fly Chloe into it* XD

ohhhhH~ Are you talking about the Mandate of Heaven?! or is it Hero III?! Both are my all time favorite classic games~  :wub:

Is it cause the Rei have purple hair or something? I threw my username into the story as well XD but..... it going accordingly to the story actually... you will soon know :)

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You do? Unless I know for sure those are happy plans, can't get my hopes high, yet.
- Lets just say there might be a slight twist...  :P

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I wonder how big is her basket?
- Standard size kitten basket... i guess with Eri in.. they have to snuggle up closer... but who is complaining~ XD

@ Little kRisZ: Ohhhhh~ you're back! XD

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Holy cow camel
<- LOL~ we need some camel emo as well!

I often felt soooooooo glad that i found out about the burette thingy......

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“Opps… Sorry…” the Princess shivered as the brunette girl breathes out the apology on her neck.
-Can you imaging we have a glass tube breathing out apology!? *faints*

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Throughout, the brunette was just contented with merely observing the girl over her shoulder.
-And then again... the glass tube observing Ai-chan *shivers*

And lastly...i wonder what is left of a glass tube to strip...LOL~

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*Climbs down and pulls Bishop in*
-Flying Chloe from Little kRisZ grave XD

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on January 09, 2010, 04:32:53 PM
That was cute!!!  :nya: :wriggly: :nya:TakaGaki watching some fluffy TanaKamei moments.  :luvluv1:


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Like the other time, upon reaching the library, the Princess leisurely walks over to the ladder but pulled her robe a little higher than needed to as she steps up the rung. Risa, of course did not miss the smirk the girl had, but this time she was not all stoned, admiring the girl.

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“Expose?” the girl attempted again.

I like how you made Ai the 'silent-but-deadly' type here... She's acting like it's nothing at all but she's 'silently' giving some hints to Risa... well, the other seemed that she didn't need it at all...coz she's TOO straight forward with Ai.. :on lol:

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“But an adorable one…beware My Princess…I might abduct you someday.” Risa tried to sound as horrifying as possible and ended the sentence with a satanic laughter.

“I’ll be waiting.” came the casual reply from the unaffected Princess as she snuggled closer.

Hey, where's my grave? I'm already dead.. :mon angel:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 09, 2010, 05:26:27 PM
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- *spotted thunder clouds... release more string to fly Chloe into it* XD
Hey, watch it! Are you trying to kill me?? lol

I don't know Hero III, but if you're talking about Might and Magic VI: The Mandate of Heaven then it's from the same developer, just different game.

I think it's like Rei's official color or something  :mon dunno:

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- Lets just say there might be a slight twist...  :p
I knew it.

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- Standard size kitten basket... i guess with Eri in.. they have to snuggle up closer... but who is complaining~ XD
You know I won't! :D in fact, I'm liking the idea already  :yep:

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*Climbs down and pulls Bishop in*
-Flying Chloe from Little kRisZ grave XD
Why am I dragged into this? XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 12 - Spellbound (05/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 13, 2010, 07:16:34 PM
@cogi_yoshi:
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'silent-but-deadly' type
- Indeed she is~! Sometimes.... I don't really know how to portrait Ai-chan... cause.... she can be anything.. lol.. Anything is possible to be thrown into her character... She just manages to pull off sexy + cute + innocent + shy all at the same time..  ;)

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Hey, where's my grave? I'm already dead..  :mon angel:
- Noooo! Don't fly away~! *Ties string to cogi's legs and flies her(you are also a her right?  :?) along with Chloe into the thunder cloud*

@ Chloe: You wouldn't die.. don't worry... ~  :twisted:

ohhh~ Which series of the game are you referring about?  :?

Does Rei have purple hair or something? i remember she had black hair.. Lol~

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I knew it.
- you sound so negative :(

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Why am I dragged into this?
- XD isn't it cute?! *say YES!*

@aussie: Here you go! This chapter is something close to what you asked for isn't it? :) Enjoy~

@The rest of the comments!: It's somewhere up there! I'm so sorry!


Chapter 13
Chase 3

If you happen to pass by the royal garden pavilion now, you will certainly not miss that sugary grin that was plastered on the sole occupant’s face. Maybe a little frightening as well with the occasional giggles seeing that it is only almost dawn.

Our lucky brat definitely did lose some sleep the previous night but is not showing even a single down syndromes to it. In fact, from that little sleep that she had, she is considerably energetic this morning.

Of course like the perfect date, if you considers them as dating just in the Princess very own backyard, she offered to walk the girl back and since they were already in the Princess’s residential area, inevitably the destination would her chamber.

A separated compound from the main palace ground, the royal chambers rather than a structure of its own, it is an extensive area that consists of several standalone houses for each individual. Unfenced it may be and only guarded by merely two guards at the Torii gate, the area is strictly out of bound. Protected magically, other then the resident, the area is only accessible to those invited or given special clearances.

No woo ha that she did not receive an invitation. It would be rather shocking if she had actually gotten one from her shy girl. Alright. Maybe not very shy. The ultimate surprise for the night happens to be that Ai was the one that stepped up to her for a goodnight kiss. Did anyone mention that there were guards?

“You’re sparkling.”

“Ya……” she basically replied without processing the information

“I mean… literally” her girl was eyeing at something on her shoulder amazingly

“Oh… that…” with a nervous chuckle, she waved off the tiny firework show over her shoulder.

“Sorry… can’t help it…” smiling sheepishly, she continued as Ai giggled.


Coincidentally, on her way back, she saw Reina making her way back to Ai. The air surrounding the kitten was charged up so high that they were cracking into tiny electrical sparks. Much like her own tiny firework show, they were just some insuppressible energy due to high emotional levels. Reina stopped in her track when she noticed her, maybe still a little shaken by the previous encounter. As she walks passed the unmoving kitten, she raised her hand to ruffle the girl’s hair a little before softly wishing her a good night with a grin. If the big meanie is reduced to a sparkling softie, her dorky puppy probably is glowing mad like a slivery sun. And…she was right. It was so bright that she had to cover her eyes when she got to her room the night before.

Talking about restlessness, apparently she is not the only one. Despite awakening even before daybreak, her pup was already not in the room.

Risa relaxes to the peaceful surrounding as she watches the first rays of sun appeared over a distant. Sunrise and sunset, everlasting cycles it may be, but it never ceases to take her breath away whenever she finds herself caught in the moment.

A soft smile made its way onto her face the instant a familiar flora scent filled her sense. It was not long before a pair of arm encircled her neck loosely and felt her captor leaned down to press the side of her cheek against hers, locking her in an endearing embrace from behind as they watched the orangey globes chase the darkness away slowly. Regrettably, their bodies were separated by the low wall of the pavilion.


“Beautiful…isn’t it?”

“Am I beautiful?”

“HA! I knew that was coming.”

“Not the reply I was looking for but at least you’re not ignoring me. Am I becoming too predictable or what?” the brunette pouted exaggeratedly.

“Maybe.” Ai grinned as she pats the little brat’s head like a kid.

“Come over here… you have been standing for some time now.”

Even though Risa is very much enjoying being trapped by the Princess but standing in that position for a prolong period can be pretty uncomfortable.

The Princess was making her way to her usual spot when the brat pouted cutely and invited her silently for a cuddle with open arms. Of course Risa is not going to exchange the previous closeness for something lesser.

Ai pretended to give a thought about the invitation while eyeing the growing frown on little kid’s face. She smirked as an idea came up. The raven girl shrugged and continued to her seat. Risa now pretty much had a face that looked like she was being abandoned. Deciding she had enough fun torturing the girl, Ai opened her arms with a warm smile and giggled as the previously dejected girl brightens up instantly and made her way swiftly into her arms.

“Meanie.” the brunette stuck her tongue out before snuggled back closer to the Princess.

“You still got what you want anyway.” Ai replied as she wraps an arm around the slender waist from behind and pulled the brat’s chubby cheek with her free hand.

“Actually…It’s even better.” her voice a little muffled by her stretched cheek.

“Why are you up so early anyway?” Risa continued, sounding more normal after Ai had released her hold on her now slightly redden cheek.

“Why are you up so early too?”

“I’m always earlier than you.”

“True…I’m already starting to think that maybe you camped here to wait.”

“You make me sound like a stalker…how about……fate brought us together?”

“I might need to rethink about my faith then.”

“Meanie.” even so, the girl was smiling into the Princess’s neck.

Ai pretty much still had the grin right from the start.


THEN…

There came that familiar rustling sound from those very same bushes again.

“Reina or Eri”

“I’m going for my kitten.”

“If my puppy comes out first you are going to owe me a kiss.”

“Deal.”

The bet is on.


Eyeing the bush intensively, both girls waited.

Three…Two…One……………

Two screaming and giggling semi-human cuties dashes out of the bushes almost at the same time followed by a polar bear cub and at last place, a black bear cub. Unexpectedly, they had four contestants and maybe a draw but if you looked closely, Reina was slightly in the lead.

“We have a winner!” Ai cheered.

Even though Risa was pretty disappointed by the results but was distracted by the current commotion.

The two girls had their hands linked and had a brush on their free hands as they ran around giggling hysterically. Chasing them was the polar bear. The black bear was basically just observing them interestingly from the pavilion too.

“You have a polar and a black bear here too?” Risa mused.

“Arr…actually… they are pandas… the agitated white one is probably Jun and this one is probably Lin…Reina kinda like to paint them up whenever they are hibernating” Ai smiled sheepishly as Risa laughed out loud.

It was not long that the two girls were forced to split up as the white panda gain on them. Unfortunately, Eri, being the slower one of the pair, got targeted. Seeing that the ferocious panda was gaining up on her fast, she screamed and rounded the corner sharply before running up toward where the kitten was.

“REINA!”

Dropping the brush, the kitten immediately charged up to the screaming pup, closing the distance in milliseconds with a trail of purple static behind. Hauling the pup up from the ground with just one arm around her waist, Reina brings her free arm up close to her chest.

“Legs up!” seeing that action, Ai yelled and Risa compelled without questioning. Even the black panda had jumped up on the seat frantically.

With a cool backswing, a bolt of purple lightning shot out and hits the ground before spreading out across the whole area.

Risa’s eyes widened a little as the strong electrical charges pass through the pavilion ground in a purplish flash. Not life threatening but you definitely would not like to get caught in it.

In an instant, the commotion died down.

Placing her legs back down only when she saw Ai doing so, Risa turned to where all the action had taken place.

1.   Reina is still frozen in her cool pose
2.   Eri is still hauled off the ground by Reina, directing an admiring look at her savior
3.   Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky

“Nana…” a displeased voice was all that broke the moment.

“Sorry!” a squeaky apology that broke number 1’s coolness and number 2’s attention. Number 3 remains.

The brunette got off the Princess lap obediently when she releases her hold on her to get up. Risa was just trailing compliantly behind Ai as she walks up to the trio.

As they approached them, Risa was sure she had a face that screams “You are in deep trouble! Haha!” for Reina was half between trying to scowl at her and cowering from her master’s stern glares.

“You can put her down now.” displeased voice still. Apparently, Reina was still holding onto Eri unknowingly all this while.

Reina shoved Eri gently behind her after she had placed her down carefully and turned to her disappointed master with her eyes downcast.

“Your Highness!” Reina’s eyes widen in shock as Eri suddenly stood up in between she and her master.

Eri knew it was inappropriate to meddle with the whole master and pet affair but…Reina was actually trembling which would have gone off unnoticed if not for that she had one of her hand linked with the kitten still. Eri could not help but squirmed under those watchful emeralds. However, her façade lifted significantly into a sincerely determined look after she saw her master had both her fists clenched near her chest with the “Go pup!” look.

“Pardon me, Your Highness. I know it’s unrefined of me to interfere but it would be unbecoming of me if I do not step up for the one that protects me.  I mean no disrespect but I’m willing to take the full responsibility.”

Eri squeezed her eyes shut preparing for whatever punishment when Ai swiftly raised her hand up.

“Eh?” her eyes shot open when she felt the hand scratching the back of her ear, surprised to find the Princess’s previously sternness replaced by the usual gentleness.

“Brave puppy……” the pup giggled as Ai ruffled up her hair.

Moving closer to the pup, the raven girl leans up to brush her lip lightly on her cheek.

“You can call me Ai” the girl said as she moved back.

As for Reina, she is currently really having a hard time deciding whether she should be more jealous of her master kissing her pup… or her pup receiving a kiss from her master. So much so that she had her cheeks puffed out cutely with a frown on her face.

“Awwww… don’t be sad… I’ll give you a kiss too” Risa teased as she holds Reina in a death grip and attempted to kiss her. The kitten screams as she tried to keep that mocking pervert’s lips away from hers.

Both Ai and Eri laughed at the hilarious scene. Reina now had both her hands pulling Risa cheeks as she leans back as far as possible from those lips that almost resembled the mouth of a goldfish out of water.

“How long more do you intend to stay like this? Determined, ain’t you?” Ai mused.

“You kissed my pup so…it’s only fair if I kiss your kitten too…don’t you think so?” came the muffled voice from the overly stretched mouth.

Catching the quick wink from Risa, Ai decided to play along.

“Hmmm………” the Princess pretended to take the suggestion into consideration causing her kitten to panic.

“True… and since she has been misbehaving………” The poor kitten was almost on the verge of tearing up. Once the order is out, she will have to oblige to it.

“Come on kitty…be good… it will be over in a second!” Risa said as she doubled up her effort to get the kitten.

“Gaki-san! Let go…Let go… Let go!” Eri palmed her master in the forehead so much so that Risa had to face upward as she tries to pry off her hands away from the kitten.

The raven girl almost laughed out loud seeing that Risa’s face was being distorted in a hilarious way from all the pulling and pushing. It was interesting to watch but Ai decided to step in when she picked up the incoherent meowing directed straight to her mind.

“Come on…break it up babies…” Risa pouts. She was having a lot of fun.

“Stop teasing her already. Come here Nana…” And so, the brunette reluctantly let go of her new toy. Almost immediately, her kitten hides into her embrace.

“I’m sorry Ai-chan…I will be more careful next time” Reina knew her master had no problem with her playing pranks and stuff but she just need to have better control over her power.

“I’ll get Risa to kiss you for real the next time you attempt to electrocute me.”

Reina nods vigorously.

After instructing the two cuties to clear the mess before joining them, the two masters went ahead for their morning walk.

“Is my kiss really THAT bad?” Risa nudged the Princess lightly with their linked hand

“Yup”

“HEY!”

The grin on the Princess’s face was totally swiped out when the brat abruptly pulled her to the off the main trail and moved in swiftly for a kiss, passionately. Bit by bit, Risa pushed gently until she found herself backed up against a tree.

Since the Princess declared her previous kisses as bad, then…it’s time for lesson two.

Risa nudged lightly on the innocent girl’s lips with hers before sucking tenderly at the bottom half of the slightly opened one and felt a wisp of hot air blew against her face as the girl exhaled deeply.

Gingerly, Risa brushes her tongue against the entrapped lip, drawing a shuddering deep breath from Ai before the girl granted entry unsteadily. Ai unconsciously pushes up against her captor and felt an odd whimper rising from her throat as the delicate softness passes through into her mouth and began to feel hers

Risa almost wanted to lose herself into the kiss when that sweet softness started to caress uncertainly against hers but this was not about her. It was about her girl. She patiently allowed the girl to get familiar and more confident to their unique dance before withdrawing her tongue little by little, seducing the other into her mouth.

The kiss was unhurried, undemanding, experimental even but utterly arousing.

Pulling apart, Risa presses their foreheads together and watches as her girl catches her breath. Risa smiled sweetly as the girl opened her eyes lazily.

“It wasn’t that bad…was it?” 

“That’s cheating you know” Ai pouts cutely, her voice still slightly unstable.

“What?” Risa like always, faked ignorant.

“I won~”

“Yaaaa……but you see… If I win, you owe me a kiss and it is only right that I owe you one too when you win…… I’m super fair… don’t you think so?”

“I hate you”

“You know you don’t mean that….” For your information, Ai’s hands are still tightly wrapped around her neck as she leans in again but not quite yet touching those lips, teasing the Princess. Risa smirked into the kiss when she successfully got Ai to bridge the distance and willingly submits herself to the sweet kiss the innocent Princess was giving her, which tells her a totally different story from the girl’s previous words.


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CHEERS! For once Reina is not being mentioned as the slowest runner ever.... LOL~ I guess many were like "EH?! the slower runner.. Eri!?!?" but since.... I had Reina's element as lightning..... She have to be fast! Isn't it cute that Reina manages to outrun Eri for once? :P


How come i'm starting to feel that my Ai-chan is getting so complicated? Even i'm getting a little confused by her actions.... <- The horrifying fact coming from a blur writer...

Probably Gaki-san had awaken something she might not be able to handle later on... Seeing that she is slowly losing her teasing battle already..... XD

I hope Ai-chan is not too weird for you guys~ XD

 :mon bat:

ps: I realized kissing scene is a pain in the ass to write... LOL!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 13, 2010, 08:27:43 PM
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You wouldn't die.. don't worry... ~  :twisted: 
That's sooo not reassuring!

The Heroes of Might and Magic one, it got similar name as Might and Magic but it's different.

In the anime her hair is black and in manga there's only so much color. I can't remember exactly what's with her tied with amethyst, it's been long.

LOL sorry. I didn't mean to sound so negative about it, but you're the author and I'm the reader. I don't know what will happen next, and seeing you haven't dropped the bomb....?

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-  isn't it cute?! *say YES!*
:roll: YES! Happy?

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Did anyone mention that there were guards?
Meh, guards mean nothing to TakaGaki love.

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her girl
So...her girl, eh?

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she waved off the tiny firework show over her shoulder.
XD

Panda Lin and Jun! So cute!

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Dropping the brush, the kitten immediately charged up to the screaming pup, closing the distance in milliseconds with a trail of purple static behind. Hauling the pup up from the ground with just one arm around her waist, Reina brings her free arm up close to her chest.
:wub:

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1.   Reina is still frozen in her cool pose
2.   Eri is still hauled off the ground by Reina, directing an admiring look at her savior
:wub: :wub:

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Number 3 remains
:lol:

I would end up quoting too much for the TanaKame moments but you know I :heart: it.

:rofl: The whole Risa wants to Kiss Reina fiasco is too hilarious!!

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Isn't it cute that Reina manages to outrun Eri for once?
:yep:

:grin: :grin: :grin: ---> is what I did after reading this.

Right now, I really envy your fluff writing skill.

ps: yeah
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: kuro808 on January 13, 2010, 08:58:16 PM
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Placing her legs back down only when she saw Ai doing so, Risa turned to where all the action had taken place.

1.   Reina is still frozen in her cool pose
2.   Eri is still hauled off the ground by Reina, directing an admiring look at her savior
3.   Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky

 :lol:

Oh well Pandas! Yay
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 14, 2010, 02:48:28 AM
Awesome as usual. I was kept in stitches throughout most, until the end, where I was totally :drool:

Now, some fav lines.
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“Oh… that…” with a nervous chuckle, she waved off the tiny firework show over her shoulder.

“Sorry… can’t help it…”
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“You have a polar and a black bear here too?” Risa mused.

“Arr…actually… they are pandas… the agitated white one is probably Jun and this one is probably Lin…Reina kinda like to paint them up whenever they are hibernating” Ai smiled sheepishly as Risa laughed out loud.
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3.   Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky
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“Brave puppy……” the pup giggled as Ai ruffled up her hair.

Moving closer to the pup, the raven girl leans up to brush her lip lightly on her cheek.
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“Awwww… don’t be sad… I’ll give you a kiss too” Risa teased as she holds Reina in a death grip and attempted to kiss her. The kitten screams as she tried to keep that mocking pervert’s lips away from hers.
The whole mini battle of Reina, Risa, and Eri made me giggle. :lol: :lol:

Takagaki is hot and I can't wait for another chapter!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 14, 2010, 12:20:41 PM
Update! Yay!  :cow:

Will read on Sat or Monday  :)  I don't want to rush read one of my most fave fanfic  :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: aussie on January 16, 2010, 04:15:29 AM
 :lol: at teasing Risa~ Poor kitty, at least Eri and her master intervened in time to avoid the impending 'disaster' XD
Also found it cute how the kitten was having trouble trying to distinguish who she was jealous of that much more, her pup or her master with that smooch XD I just find it amusing how jealousy is a common trait in fanfics as a part of Reina's personality :lol:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 16, 2010, 02:09:35 PM
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she offered to walk the girl back and since they were already in the Princess’s residential area, inevitably the destination would her chamber

 :twisted:


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“True…I’m already starting to think that maybe you camped here to wait.”

 :lol: Good one Ai  :lol:


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Unfortunately, Eri, being the slower one of the pair, got targeted.

Oh


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Legs up!” seeing that action, Ai yelled and Risa compelled without questioning.

I love this one, I don't know why


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With a cool backswing, a bolt of purple lightning shot out and hits the ground before spreading out across the whole area.

Whoa!


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Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky

Funny to imagine  XD


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“Sorry!” a squeaky apology that broke number 1’s coolness and number 2’s attention. Number 3 remains.

 :lol:  :twothumbs


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Reina shoved Eri gently behind her after she had placed her down carefully and turned to her disappointed master with her eyes downcast.

Protective girl  :heart:


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However, her façade lifted significantly into a sincerely determined look after she saw her master had both her fists clenched near her chest with the “Go pup!” look.

Yay!


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“Awwww… don’t be sad… I’ll give you a kiss too” Risa teased as she holds Reina in a death grip and attempted to kiss her. The kitten screams as she tried to keep that mocking pervert’s lips away from hers.

OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:


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“Gaki-san! Let go…Let go… Let go!” Eri palmed her master in the forehead so much so that Risa had to face upward as she tries to pry off her hands away from the kitten.

 :lol:  :lol:  :lol:


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“Is my kiss really THAT bad?” Risa nudged the Princess lightly with their linked hand

 XD


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The kiss was unhurried, undemanding, experimental even but utterly arousing.

Indeed  :drool:  :on bleed:


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“Yaaaa……but you see… If I win, you owe me a kiss and it is only right that I owe you one too when you win…… I’m super fair… don’t you think so?”

 :yep: Just like having tow heads on a single coin  :lol:  super fair  XD


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ps: I realized kissing scene is a pain in the ass to write... LOL!

 :lol:





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*Climbs down and pulls Bishop in*
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-Flying Chloe from Little kRisZ grave XD
Why am I dragged into this? XD

Because you are dragable just like you are flyable?    :D   :k-thrilled:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: Treykun on January 16, 2010, 03:59:55 PM
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1.   Reina is still frozen in her cool pose
2.   Eri is still hauled off the ground by Reina, directing an admiring look at her savior
3.   Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky

XD

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Reina shoved Eri gently behind her after she had placed her down carefully and turned to her disappointed master with her eyes downcast.

Protective Reina is cute :P
 
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For your information, Ai’s hands are still tightly wrapped around her neck as she leans in again but not quite yet touching those lips, teasing the Princess.

XD How mean~~~

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I hope Ai-chan is not too weird for you guys~ XD

Nah, not really, we all love Ai-chan in all the ways XD :on gay:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: ayase909 on January 17, 2010, 09:08:17 AM
ive seen this fic but doesnt have a chance to read hmm...... :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe:
actually, its been soooo long since ive read a fic here! glad i checked since i like this TaGaki fic.... :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

i just read all the chapters, were the characters base from  Mai-hime? Natsuki and Shizuru? Natsuki is Ai-chan and Shizuru is Gaki-san?  :dunno: though Shizuru has a crimson eyes not sapphire!

haha, normally, Ai-chan would suit as Shizuru since she's the older, but i like it when Gaki takes control! haha  :ding: :ding: :ding:

soooo mushy author-san.... :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

but i like it, keep it up.....update soon~ :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: badsaints on January 17, 2010, 05:28:34 PM
Sorry for the late comment. Finally can comment on this chapter :cow:

Now that TanaKame are together, we can expect all hell to break loose especially since kitty Reina is bringing pup Eri to the "dark side". Okay that was a huge exaggeration but Eri is now turning from a sweet pup to a mischievious one :twisted: But I'd say, I want more! XD

So we finally know what Reina's expertise is. I've always wonder about that :) But then again, she's always been electrifying cute (okay bad joke :lol:) The part where Gaki tried to kiss Reina totally crack me up :twothumbs

The pandas make an appearance here :cow: (shucks, no panda emote :lol:)

TakaGaki has gone on to lesson 2 :shakeit: It's only a matter of time that they will move on to the other important lessons? Risa did promise to teach Ai on how to make babies :twisted:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 22, 2010, 05:53:24 AM
@All: Been a busy busy week and a more busy busy week for next! I manage to fall and got myself a scar on the leg... and i'm down with cough again.... HOW WEAK! :( Have not finish my next chapter yet still  :( Working on it though..but i'll reply some comment first..~ XD

EDIT: AND YA..... yesterday..i could not get in to the whole JphIp site at all.. I can load any other single page but just this.. so i though maybe the site got shut down or something.... *ROAR* so i decided to comment~ XD

@Chloe:
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That's sooo not reassuring!
- Don't worry...wun bear to let you die XD *Release more string to fly Chloe into a Tornado*

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I don't know what will happen next, and seeing you haven't dropped the bomb....?
- Seriously..i'm wondering too when i'm gonna drop it.. cause i always does not want to spoil the fluff of the chapter... SOB *headache*

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So...her girl, eh?
- where where where? :)

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ps: yeah
-  :?

I was :D after reading the comments too... thanks lot!

@Kuro-kun: Haha.. all of them are somewhere in the story.. but i just can't seem to put them in somewhere in the main plot cause it will just be too complicated XD

@Baby-Tree:
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I was kept in stitches throughout most
-  :wub: Scrump..Scrump!

XD thanks!

@aussie:
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Also found it cute how the kitten was having trouble trying to distinguish who she was jealous of that much more, her pup or her master with that smooch
- the little kitten with her cute thoughts...~ :) Plus..no one was giving her any attention..so probably she felt jealous due to that too... Reina is a kitty afterall :D Like any other kitty...they always like to be close to someone..  :P

Reina just look cuter when she is jealous~ haha.... I don't know why.. but it seems to be hit into me by something~ Just a meanie with a jello heart...~ She is protective but not over protective~ so probably she looks all sweet and cute when she is jealous..plus her little height... makes is more.. adorable.. haha

@Little kRisZ:

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“Legs up!” seeing that action, Ai yelled and Risa compelled without questioning.
I love this one, I don't know why
- When i first thought of it.. i was grinning too~ by myself..how scary~ LOL~

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:yep: Just like having tow heads on a single coin   :lol:  super fair  XD
- yup! super fair.. cause! i'm the writer! LOL~ Gaki-san is sneaky! but Ai-chan is learn fast.........................  :P

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Because you are dragable just like you are flyable?
- LOL~ *pulls lil kRisZ dead body from the grave... ties some string to her legs... and fly her along with Chloe!* In case you are wondering where Chloe is heading... she is on the way to a tornado.. LOL!

@Trey-trey: Reina is cute even she just stands there XD With her height.. i just wanna go there and hug her! LOL~

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XD How mean~~~
- Anyway.... Ai-chan is a fast learner.............. *prays for Gaki-san*

@Mum~: Haha~ the puppy can be very very playful at times too~ Utterly sweet no doubt... but..... mischievous.. of course..look who have she been with all the time.. she probably pick up a thing or two.. LOL~

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electrifying cute
- her wonky eyes have her power.. LOL!

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It's only a matter of time that they will move on to the other important lessons?
- Oh god..... stresss.................................. :(


@ayase909: Hello there! :) A new reader! Thanks lots!

Hmmm... only two of them were base on Mai-hime character from the start.. the story was originally mend Natsuki and Shizuru but it have already gone away from what i have intended... Indeed Ai-chan is Natsuki and Gaki-san is Shizuru.. but :) They have grown into their own character already... they had stray pretty far away from them...don't you think so? :D

I first thought of Ai-chan for Shizuru too....... but after much thought.... i think she is more suitable for Natsuki..she is always quiet and doesn't express herself much... (not that we don't like it...) but... It kinda links that little to Natsuki... As for Gaki-san.... LOL~ i made her a pure big big big flirt~ Like you say~ i kinda like to see Gaki-san make fun of Ai-chan instead of the other way round XD

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soooo mushy author-san....
- LOL~ It's so embarrassing !

 :mon bat:



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on January 22, 2010, 07:21:08 AM
JunLin are bears? Somehow the image of 2 pandas lazing in their enclosure in the zoo came to my mind :D

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1.   Reina is still frozen in her cool pose
2.   Eri is still hauled off the ground by Reina, directing an admiring look at her savior
3.   Jun is stilled with her back flat on the ground and paws facing the sky

1. :twothumbs
2.  :lol:
3. XD

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“Nana…” a displeased voice was all that broke the moment.
“True… and since she has been misbehaving………” The poor kitten was almost on the verge of tearing up. Once the order is out, she will have to oblige to it.

It can’t be that bad kissing Gaki-san :wub:

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Pulling apart, Risa presses their foreheads together and watches as her girl catches her breath.

I needed to catch my breath too. woooo~  :oops: That was hawt, but in an ultra sweet way.

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“I hate you”

She doesn't really mean that *nudge*

Oh noes, you’re sick?? Again?? Bad germs, Bad! *scolds virus that are happily partying on Ame*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 22, 2010, 02:00:03 PM
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Been a busy busy week and a more busy busy week for next! I manage to fall and got myself a scar on the leg... and i'm down with cough again.... HOW WEAK! :(
scar on the leg, were you wearing a short skirt?  :twisted:  oh god I don't want to sound so ebil  XD  GET WELL BISHOP  :) why not use the pup to heal you  :D

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- LOL~ *pulls lil kRisZ dead body from the grave... ties some string to her legs... and fly her along with Chloe!* In case you are wondering where Chloe is heading... she is on the way to a tornado.. LOL!
Thanks god I'm dead in there I wont feel a thing  :lol:


Get well and take an extra care will you  :)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 22, 2010, 04:37:18 PM
Get better baby girl! :otomerika: :yossi:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 22, 2010, 06:47:45 PM
Oh dear!

Baby Tree! I replied your comment.. but i realized i accidentally colored your name in white.. LOL~ Did you find it?

@ Lil kRisZ: Nope...I was wearing jean :P so i fell and scrap my leg on something :( If only i had puppy Eri......~ LOL~

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Thanks god I'm dead in there I wont feel a thing :lol:
- Probably there is a camel or two inside and they will munch on your body!

@Hammy:
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I needed to catch my breath too. woooo~  :oops: That was hawt, but in an ultra sweet way.
- If you sees this and sees me tml... please don't mention it.. i will hide under the table cloth! LOL  XD

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*scolds virus that are happily partying on Ame*
- They have been partying in me for weeks... :( I need go get to the doc for a stronger medicine this time round  :(

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 23, 2010, 03:27:01 AM
I had to search the post a couple more times, but I found it. XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 25, 2010, 04:54:44 PM
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- Don't worry...wun bear to let you die XD *Release more string to fly Chloe into a Tornado*
:on blackhole:

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- Seriously..i'm wondering too when i'm gonna drop it.. cause i always does not want to spoil the fluff of the chapter... SOB *headache*
Let the fluff prevail then! XD

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-  :?

I was agreeing your ps comment.

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I was :D after reading the comments too... thanks lot!
Right back at ya!  ;)

Get well soon Bishop NI!!

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*Climbs down and pulls Bishop in*
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-Flying Chloe from Little kRisZ grave XD
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Why am I dragged into this? XD

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Because you are dragable just like you are flyable?    :D   :k-thrilled:
Now you too kRisZ :lol:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 13 - Chase 3 (13/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 25, 2010, 06:18:41 PM
@All: Hello People! I guess this is the longest time i go without posting an update... and I'm sure it wun be the the last.... :P Sorry!  Oh well...You might see alot alot alot of repeated words and vocab... weird sentences structure... I'm just bad at my languages~ I'm a Science person! If you ask me something like why does glass breaks and the cracks propagate, i could probably explain up to the molecules level....  XD and if i make a mistake somewhere that is weird or funny.. feel free to laugh.. I've been laughing at myself....others too.. LOL! Sorry! But there is where we learn!

@Reply comments: It's.........somewhere........................over the rainbow! XD Somewhere on top!


Chapter 14
Clean Ups


“Seriously…” Risa sighed

“You two were told to clear the mess……and ends up… you two became the mess…that we now have to clear.” the girl continued as she scoops more water up with her hand and scrubbed her puppy’s fur. Totally unaffected by her grumbling master, the pet-form puppy just lifted her head, requesting a scrub under her neck as well.

“You little brat…” Risa snorted and holds the puppy’s mouth close with her hand on her muzzle gently before she flicked her finger on the puppy’s head.

Upon release, the puppy immediate tried to snap her jaw on those fingers but only manage to get the air instead. The grinning girl had already knowingly withdrawn both her hands from the range of attack.

“Ya…ya… I’m the big brat…” Risa rolled her eyes and pulled her barking puppy to her and started scrubbing the underside of her neck. From beside, the Princess watches the whole exchange with slight amusement as she washes the paint away from her purring kitten’s paws.

Since Ai was quite use to washing her kitten up after each and every of her prank plays, so she was not as surprised as Risa when a Dalmatian and a white-spotted kitten manages to catch up with them at the waterfall.

Apparently, not only Reina was messy with her clean ups.

“Finally!” the brunette exhaled deeply as she held Eri by her fore legs before soaking her in the water as if like she was rinsing a piece of cloth.

“Nice and clean!” Risa chuckled at the sight of her totally drenched puppy.

“Hey! Stop that….!” the brunette shrieked as she held the puppy away as far as possible when Eri shakes off the water that was on her furry coat.

Satisfied with her current dryness, the puppy barked shamelessly for her now, slightly drenched master to brush her fuzzy coat which makes her look like a small polar bear cub.

“NO…! Dream on~” Risa glared and placed the puppy back on the dry grounds as she walks away from her barking pup.

It was only when Eri suddenly stop barking for some time that she finally turned back to check, finding the puppy eyeing her playfully with her tail swinging lazily from side to side.

Risa frowned when the puppy bowed her head till she was just only about an inch away from the ground before tilting a little to face it with the side of her cheek. The brunette scowled when her puppy teased her with a rubbing action as if attempting to brush her cleaned fur against the dirt ground.

As for the Princess, she was done with cleaning and brushing her kitten for quite some time since Reina is so much smaller than Eri in pet-form. Sitting under the shade of a tree, Ai hugged her kitten to her chest and rested her chin on top of kitty-Reina’s head as they enjoy the little show. Ai just smirked at how smart and monstrous the puppy actually is at bending her master’s will to comply with her request. Nevertheless, who can blame the puppy for being this way since her master was no way better anyway. The Princess was glad her Reina is quite an obedient kitten…in a way.

Risa clenched her fist when her puppy rubbed her face against the ground. Seeing that her master is still refusing to give in, Eri flipped to lay her back flat against the dust filled ground before tilting her head backwards to eye her master upside down, innocently or mischievously, it was really hard to tell unless you are Risa. The puppy is this good.

Ai could not help but laughed at the irony of the situation. Should the brunette be proud or regretful that her puppy, apparently had managed to master something that she herself is pretty good at and was now subjected to it.

After a short game of staring, Eri got tired of it when her persistent master still refuses to budge and resorted to use her triumph card. Much to Risa dismay, her puppy started to wriggle her whole back against the ground. That was the last straw. Risa clicked her tongue before storming forward and lifted Eri straight up.

“You little rascal…! I had just CLEANED you up! Feel lucky that there ain’t any washboard here or you’ll be sooooo dead.” the brunette almost growled as she dusted and patted her puppy like a floor mat, in a considerably gentle way though.

“Oh my……Reina…look what have you got for yourself.” Ai chuckled as she pats her wide-eyed kitten.

Risa was done with dusting her puppy when she sat beside the grinning Princess under the shade and was starting to brush her puppy’s fur.

But even as she does so, her puppy was still shifting and moving around restlessly as she tried to tap on Ai’s arm with her paw, asking for the kitten. As the Princess lowered her kitten to the puppy, Eri nuzzled up to the side of Reina’s face causing the kitten to close both her eyes and purred contently.

“Brushing or kitty. Choose one.” Risa stop brushing half-way through and folded her arms.

Without thinking, Eri picked Reina up with her mouth by the back of the kitten’s neck and trots away from her master. Ai grinned at the little black cotton ball that was dangling from the white fur ball’s mouth. This was the first time her kitten had ever submissively let anyone other than her to carry her around this way, except, of course she does not use her mouth like the puppy does but her hand instead. She had to admit that the helpless kitty look that always appear on Reina’s face when she is carried around this way is really adorable but had never mentioned it though…it will be a rather huge blow to the kitten’s ego.

“I’m gonna burn all your precious fur one of these days… I swear…” Risa mumbled the threat half-heartedly which only got a brief look from her pup before she continued to carry the kitten to another shady spot.

Upon reaching the going-to-be their spot, Eri placed Reina lightly on the ground before changing to semi-human form and squats down to poke the kitten.

“Reina…you are really so tiny…” Eri giggled as Reina tried to push her finger away gently with her little paw.

“How cute……..” the girl tried to scoop the kitty up but Reina managed to get away before bending her forelegs and pounded onto the girl while transforming into her semi-human form, successfully tackling the unwary girl flat on her back.

ROAR...” Risa too upset to think of anything else when the two cuties started to roll on the ground for their fun play.

“What was that about?” Ai mused at the brunette’s choice of word.

“Too pissed for any word…anyway…she wouldn’t listen too.” Risa sighed deeply and pouts cutely before resting her head sluggishly on the Princess’s shoulder.

“Ain’t they cute?”

“We probably look cuter.”

“Oh~ Someone even bypassed to question me now and just tagged me in on whatever she likes.”

“Why are you bullying me too?” Risa whined

“Because……you look cute this way?” Ai said as she runs her finger through the smooth brunette locks.

“HA! Did I hear you say I’m cute?” Risa lifted her head from the raven’s shoulder to look at her.

“Hmmm……Ya…… but probably you are like… 0.1% adorable and 99.9% ugly.”

“I think I’m gonna cry.” the girl pretended to sniff.

“You should. I can lend you this.” Ai chuckled as she taps her shoulder.

Risa rested her chin onto Ai’s shoulder and eyed her playfully before wrapping her arms around her slender waist.

“But it’s because you love me even though I look that ugly to you.”

“I love you?” Ai questioned in an obvious mocking tone

“Woooooo…...Is that a confession?”

“Isn’t it obviousssss……………..That it’s not?” the raven smiled as she speaks the first part of the sentence sweetly before dropping to monotone for the last part.

“Anyway… didn’t I tell you that I hate you?”

“Oh~ you know how that ended up right? Or…… you want to try that again?”

The only answer she got was an overly ebil (a cuter form of evil – came from little kRiSz) mysterious smile from the raven girl.

“Is this like some sort of psychological game or something?”

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“What are you looking at?” Reina tilts her head back to look upside down in the direction the puppy was distracted to. Currently, they were still on the ground… or rather…she is on the ground while Eri is on her.

“Gaki-san never let me do that…”

“Ai-chan never does that to me…”

Both cuties voiced out in unison as they continued to observe the activity that their masters are currently engaged in.

Dropping her attention from the pair, Eri gazed down at the essential “prop” for the stunt. Oblivious of the “threat”, Reina still had her head arched back to view their masters, leaving the so call “prop”, totally exposed at the mercy of the puppy. Leaning down, the puppy experimentally laps it, nabbing the kitten attention instantly.

In shock, the kitten first reaction was to hail the head that was attached to her neck. Lifting it with both hands cupping on the cute face, the puppy reluctantly complied and inched backward just enough for the kitten to see her face with the…….. BEST sad puppy look she can mustered and whines. It was only common for Reina to give in, who would not anyway.

“What have I got myself into…” Reina sighed

“I’ll stop” Eri said as she drops her puppy ears.

“NO! wait…” Reina pulled the withdrawing puppy back, trapping her back in her arms.

“It’s just that………” the kitten paused to make up her sentence while the puppy brightens up a little and raised her ears back up again to let the kitten know she had her full attention.

“I’m not used to having someone other then Ai-chan that is able to……how do I say it? I’m just not a pushover……”

Usually” Reina squeaked the confession out softly as she covers her eyes with a hand.

“This is so embarrassing…” the kitten murmured.

“Reina…you are too adorable.” Eri whispered as she affectionately uses her nose to nudge at the hand that was blocking her view on the golden orbs.

Eri smiled sweetly as the hand revealed the shy golden cat eyes.

“Don’t worry… I’ll chew on anyone that dares to make fun of you.”  Reina chuckled as Eri showed her a cute biting action.

“Even that big brat over there?”

“Oh… That’s an easy one… I don’t even need to bite her to get her to stop.” Eri assured her kitten with a confident smirk.

“Then how about Ai-chan?”

“Hmmm… She is a tough one… probably she understands why you are like this but does it really matter since she is your master?” the puppy gave her a thoughtful look before brushing against the kitten’s cheek.

“Anyway… she doesn’t do what she is doing to Gaki-san often right?… So she shouldn’t be in any position to make fun of you...even if she does…I’m sure I can get her to stop without biting.”

“Brave puppy indeed…” Reina whispered and hooked her arm around the puppy’s neck as the pup moved in for a kiss. Eri was just an inch away from her mouth when she stopped and eyed her playfully. Immediately, the kitten bridged the distance causing the puppy to grin into the kiss.

Reina tightens her hold when the puppy slowly withdrew her tongue from her mouth. She tried to follow it into hers but was shut off by a pair of closed lip. She wanted to protest but only purred when the puppy proceeded to kiss her jawbone and nuzzled into her neck.

For a long moment, the puppy was still nuzzling into her neck but was whining softly, with her ears slightly folded. It took the kitten some time to figure out that the puppy was actually silently asking for her permission to continue.

The downcast ears and whining were just too adorable to be ignored.

Eri shivered involuntary when Reina starts to rub her thumb against her sensitive ear in lazy circles to coax them back up which too, wordlessly granted her request.

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“Oh my” the Princess chuckled.

“What…?” Risa was not very pleased that the Princess had stopped, moreover, giggling into her neck. Risa was not very sure how it all happened but somehow or rather, the Princess managed to get her to straddle her lap and then, she was lost in hickey heaven. A tiny blow to her ego it might be but was overshadowed by the fact that she is the one that brings out this hidden inner self of Ai that she is still taking her time to unhurriedly uncover.

“Reina is so cute!”

Turning to the direction where the Princess was peeking from over her shoulder, Risa grinned. Indeed, the kitten looked so adorable that Risa was considering if she could adopt Reina as well.

Even though it was obvious from the fact that the kitten was enjoying it from all the purring but the look on the kitten was just priceless. She was red up from her neck with her eyes squeezed shut which forms a deep frown as if she was concentrating really hard. Plus, she had a death grip on the puppy’s ear.

“We should be careful on what we teach them.”

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“Where’re we heading to?”

“Somewhere”

“……hint?”

“Somewhere”

“……over the rainbow?”

“……way up high”


“OH! You’ve heard of it.”

“I’m not that outdated.”

Risa chuckled softly as the smiling Princess continues to lead the way.

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“How much is that doggy at the window.”

“Woof woof”

“The one with the wiggly tail”

Eri wigs her tail as Reina giggled.


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Okay! The last two part was totally random... but i thought it was cute... LOL~

I hope the chapter is not too much.... for the...... kids? But i'm the baby! <- haven't been very convincing lately......... hmmmmm~~~ It's just hickey~ LOL~ the pets are just too innocently cute~


Let me introduce! Cotton! I have been bugging my friend to get me one! LOL

cotton 1(scottish fold kitten - female) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D46r4uRCGbg#)

 :mon bat:


ps: I've seen a doctor and apparently...i got a throat infection! :( Take care people!

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 25, 2010, 06:36:10 PM
 :lol: :lol: This chapter was so cute!! *huggles and cuddles cuteness chapter and Baby Sticky* You're going to kill me with this, but I don't mind.
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“Gaki-san never let me do that…”

“Ai-chan never does that to me…”
I frickin' hope not! XD

I loved the last parts and the kitty vid at the end.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kuro808 on January 25, 2010, 07:27:52 PM
I love the kawaii parts in this story :wub:

TakaGaki has some competition still
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: Treykun on January 25, 2010, 09:06:27 PM
 :imdead: *Dies because of the cuteness overdose*

But I'll revive to make my comment :grin:

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“Don’t worry… I’ll chew on anyone that dares to make fun of you.”  Reina chuckled as Eri showed her a cute biting action.

:luvluv2: Awwwwwwww~~~ So cute...

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“Where’re we heading to?”

“Somewhere”

“……hint?”

“Somewhere”

“……over the rainbow?”

 XD I found myself singing :P

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*WATCHES VIDEO*

 :imdead: *Dies again XD*

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I'm just bad at my languages~ I'm a Science person! If you ask me something like why does glass breaks and the cracks propagate, i could probably explain up to the molecules level....  XD

That reminds me of someone... Oh, yes, me! XD I'm a genius of the chemical formulation... but I'll never understand the syntax :P

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ps: I've seen a doctor and apparently...i got a throat infection!

Ugh... Take care and get better soon!!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 26, 2010, 07:03:38 AM
TakaGaki has gone on to lesson 2 :shakeit: It's only a matter of time that they will move on to the other important lessons? Risa did promise to teach Ai on how to make babies :twisted:
She's so ebil  :roll: but I’ll support her this time.  :twisted:

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- Probably there is a camel or two inside and they will munch on your body!
:shocked  EeeeeeeeWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That made my body shiver!!!  :angry:

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@Hammy:
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I needed to catch my breath too. woooo~  :oops: That was hawt, but in an ultra sweet way.
- If you sees this and sees me tml... please don't mention it.. i will hide under the table cloth! LOL  XD
Sorry if I quoted this one but it's just too  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:  to pass up

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Now you too kRisZ :lol:
Yeah :(  I'll be double dead in there  XD




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“You two were told to clear the mess……and ends up… you two became the mess…that we now have to clear.” the girl continued as she scoops more water up with her hand and scrubbed her puppy’s fur.
:wriggly:


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he brunette scowled when her puppy teased her with a rubbing action as if attempting to brush her cleaned fur against the dirt ground.
XD


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Risa clenched her fist when her puppy rubbed her face against the ground. Seeing that her master is still refusing to give in, Eri flipped to lay her back flat against the dust filled ground before tilting her head backwards to eye her master upside down, innocently or mischievously, it was really hard to tell unless you are Risa. The puppy is this good.
OMG She's so like baddie, so ebil  :lol:


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“Oh my……Reina…look what have you got for yourself.” Ai chuckled as she pats her wide-eyed kitten.
:lol: she'll now have a pet peeve which happens to be a pet too  :lol:


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As the Princess lowered her kitten to the puppy, Eri nuzzled up to the side of Reina’s face causing the kitten to close both her eyes and purred contently.
Do they have to be that cute  :luvluv1:


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“Brushing or kitty. Choose one.”
:lol:


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This was the first time her kitten had ever submissively let anyone other than her to carry her around this way, except, of course she does not use her mouth like the puppy does but her hand instead.
:rockon:  why not try?  :D


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“I’m gonna burn all your precious fur one of these days… I swear…”
What jealous now?  XD


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“Ain’t they cute?”

“We probably look cuter.”
I so love TakaGaki to bits but hmmm, that question is hard to answer atm  :lol:


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“Why are you bullying me too?” Risa whined
:onioncheer: go Ai :onioncheer:


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“But it’s because you love me even though I look that ugly to you.”
Whoa!


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“Isn’t it obviousssss……………..That it’s not?” the raven smiled as she speaks the first part of the sentence sweetly before dropping to monotone for the last part.
:lol: Ai's  :twisted: too


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“Oh~ you know how that ended up right? Or…… you want to try that again?”
:w00t:


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The only answer she got was an overly ebil (a cuter form of evil – came from little kRiSz) mysterious smile from the raven girl.
lol, wait until my update is done  :twisted: I'm halfway through  :D like half page through  :lol:


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“Gaki-san never let me do that…”

“Ai-chan never does that to me…”
XD


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Dropping her attention from the pair, Eri gazed down at the essential “prop” for the stunt
:twisted:


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“What have I got myself into…”
She's  :inlove:


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“Even that big brat over there?”

“Oh… That’s an easy one… I don’t even need to bite her to get her to stop.” Eri assured her kitten with a confident smirk.
:lol:


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“Anyway… she doesn’t do what she is doing to Gaki-san often right?… So she shouldn’t be in any position to make fun of you...even if she does…I’m sure I can get her to stop without biting.”
Yay!  :rockon:
What did they do? :w00t:  :twisted:


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For a long moment, the puppy was still nuzzling into her neck but was whining softly, with her ears slightly folded. It took the kitten some time to figure out that the puppy was actually silently asking for her permission to continue.
OMG *melts*


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Eri shivered involuntary when Reina starts to rub her thumb against her sensitive ear in lazy circles to coax them back up which too, wordlessly granted her request.
How did you know these stuffs?  :twisted:


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A tiny blow to her ego it might be but was overshadowed by the fact that she is the one that brings out this hidden inner self of Ai that she is still taking her time to unhurriedly uncover.
Me: screw that ego, bring it  :inlove:  :grin:


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Indeed, the kitten looked so adorable that Risa was considering if she could adopt Reina as well.
:rofl:


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Even though it was obvious from the fact that the kitten was enjoying it from all the purring but the look on the kitten was just priceless. She was red up from her neck with her eyes squeezed shut which forms a deep frown as if she was concentrating really hard. Plus, she had a death grip on the puppy’s ear.
:drool:  :on bleed:  :imdead:


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“We should be careful on what we teach them.”
:lol:


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“OH! You’ve heard of it.”

“I’m not that outdated.”
XD


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Risa chuckled softly as the smiling Princess continues to lead the way.
OMG I think I knw where they are heading  :luvluv1:  :mon dance:   :mon fyeah:




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ps: I've seen a doctor and apparently...i got a throat infection! :( Take care people!
When I was little my mother would always kiss me where it hurts, so make someone kiss yours  XD
Get well sooner Buddy...  :) ... beautiful   XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: ayase909 on January 26, 2010, 07:52:09 AM
woooooooooooot! fuwa fuwa, id die in fluffiness!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
the neko and inu is overly cute too!  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol:

is this fic is general mushy and fluffy? no villains? no third party?  :dunno: if yes, then great! a happy story!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

though u make the yankii tanaka  :on cigar: a very cute and adorable neko here!  :nya:

haha, domo author-san! great as always!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: badsaints on January 26, 2010, 01:40:34 PM
Shouldn't you be resting? But can't complain since this is such a cute chapter and that I made you msg me when you're supposed to be sleeping :D


TakaGaki has gone on to lesson 2 :shakeit: It's only a matter of time that they will move on to the other important lessons? Risa did promise to teach Ai on how to make babies :twisted:
She's so ebil  :roll: but I’ll support her this time.  :twisted:
Oit! What's with everyone calling me ebil? But it's true though :twisted:


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Risa clenched her fist when her puppy rubbed her face against the ground. Seeing that her master is still refusing to give in, Eri flipped to lay her back flat against the dust filled ground before tilting her head backwards to eye her master upside down, innocently or mischievously, it was really hard to tell unless you are Risa. The puppy is this good.
OMG She's so like baddie, so ebil  :lol:
Does that mean I'm cute like pup Eri too? XD


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ps: I've seen a doctor and apparently...i got a throat infection! :( Take care people!
When I was little my mother would always kiss me where it hurts, so make someone kiss yours  XD
Any volunteers? :lol:


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“Where’re we heading to?”
“Somewhere”
“……hint?”
“Somewhere”
“……over the rainbow?”
XD I found myself singing :P
Me too! :lol:


Gah! I can never ever get tired of animal TanaKame. They are so cute :wub: TakaGaki too, of course. But the way Ai is going, she's gonna surpass the master soon. But there's no reason for Risa to complain haha :heart: Btw, a hickey does not count as lesson 3. Maybe a lesson 2.5?

That cotton ball is so cute :wub: How I wish my monster of a cat is half of that cuteness :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 26, 2010, 04:06:01 PM
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“You little brat…”
Brat Jr.  :P

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Ai just smirked at how smart and monstrous the puppy actually is at bending her master’s will to comply with her request.
 
It’s the innocent-looking one that you should be cautious of.

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as she tried to tap on Ai’s arm with her paw, asking for the kitten

*melts*

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it will be a rather huge blow to the kitten’s ego.
That’s sounded like her alright XD

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“ROAR...”
:lol: funny TakaGaki

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“What have I got myself into…”
A wonderful thing apparently  :grin:

Eri and the ear thing, so cute. I imagine Reina would be so whipped if she’s not careful with Eri.

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hickey heaven

Wut? LOL

:yep: the last two parts are cute, I like random.

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the pets are just too innocently cute
Which is why they’re dangerous.

ALERT! ALERT! Brain malfunction! Cuteness overload!!  :stunned:

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Yeah :(  I'll be double dead in there   XD
Yeah we're heading to tornado
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on January 27, 2010, 01:46:50 PM
Those 2 songs you included at the end...I sing them too. Though I usually sing "oh give me a home, where the buffaloes (?) roam" or "Frosty the snowman". GAH I DON'T KNOW WHY I DO IT!! Somebody get me a doc or a screwdriver XD

Okay, so I'm in such a horrible mushed up state that I can't think properly. Or type for that matter. This double whammy by you and rnd is too much! I need a potion to turn me back into human before I can write a good comment. Wait for it :P

And geez, what are you trying to say huh? You're a Science person and this level of English is supposed to be not good? Why you little.... :angry: THIS IS HECKA GOOD!!! Repeat after me please :D

And with this, I end. *does curtsey* Oh shoot, I am a nut. :shocked YABAIIIIII~~~!~! :panic:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 27, 2010, 05:18:35 PM
Hey People~~~  ;) <- i even started to wink.. oh my.......~

@Baby Tree:
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*huggles and cuddles cuteness chapter and Baby Sticky*
- Even i'm sticky you wanna hug me too?  :mon innocent:

@Kuro-kun:
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TakaGaki has some competition still
- like? XD

@Trey-trey:
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:imdead: *Dies because of the cuteness overdose*
*scratches Trey-trey butt for him* LOL~

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I found myself singing :P
- I was just singing it the other day along wit baddie and Essy~ Just that sentence~ So 'pop' it came into the fic.. but i found myself singing the "doggy" one more often recently~ XD

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I'm a genius of the chemical formulation... but I'll never understand the syntax  :P
- Hello friend! LOL~ I'm dealing with chemical everyday XD

@ Little kRisZ:
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Sorry if I quoted this one but it's just too     :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:     to pass up
- apparently i didn't have to hide under the table cloth! XD

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why not try?  :D
- How to?! Ai-chan to bite Reina? lol

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What jealous now?  XD
- Gaki-san is a soft meanie too ~ In a way XD

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I so love TakaGaki to bits but hmmm, that question is hard to answer atm   :lol:
- TanaKame turns out to be a surprising cute couple~  :P

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Ai's   :twisted: too
- She is learning fast!

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What did they do?  :w00t: :twisted:
hickey hickey~ don't get excited.... oh... and please clear your nose... it's bleeding.. LOL

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OMG I think I knw where they are heading
- Where? XD

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When I was little my mother would always kiss me where it hurts, so make someone kiss yours  XD
Get well sooner Buddy...  :) ... beautiful   XD
- Like granny says... who wanna volunteers? Maybe S!hu!? LOL~ but she is not here :(

@ayase909: wellllll.........technically there is a villain... but i just dunno when to drop her in.. i'm having fun writing my fluffs.. LOL~ <- Bad author.. XD  The brave (but suicidal) puppy with the mean (but actual softie) kitten~ :)  Thanks anyway!

@Granny!:
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Shouldn't you be resting? But can't complain since this is such a cute chapter and that I made you msg me when you're supposed to be sleeping 
I had enough rest for that day~ :) I slept 12 hours! *cheers* Nah~ It's ok.. you can drop me a msg anytime~

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Does that mean I'm cute like pup Eri too? XD
- omg... *taps Little kRisZ* Please explain..

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Any volunteers?
the girl that i got matchmake by kRisZ is not around this fic :(

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“Where’re we heading to?”
“Somewhere”
“……hint?”
“Somewhere”
“……over the rainbow?”
XD I found myself singing :P
Me too! :lol:
- we were just singing it the other day along with Essy~ XD

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Btw, a hickey does not count as lesson 3. Maybe a lesson 2.5?
- Oh..and btw.. It was Ai-chan teaching Risa? LOL~ doesn't Risa need the lesson?! hmmmmmmm~

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How I wish my monster of a cat is half of that cuteness
- YOU GOT A CAT!? I want one too :(

@ C:
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Brat Jr.  :P
- Ohhh~ I like that!

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It’s the innocent-looking one that you should be cautious of.
- Well~ that is what they always say don't they XD Next question. Am i dangerous?  XD

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That’s sounded like her alright XD
- I always find jealous and ego Reina cute! LOL~ a little girl with an attitude~

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A wonderful thing apparently  :grin:
- She got herself into a situation whereby many would wan to be in! :P

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Eri and the ear thing, so cute. I imagine Reina would be so whipped if she’s not careful with Eri.
  :yep: :yep:

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ALERT! ALERT! Brain malfunction! Cuteness overload!!   :stunned:
- *knock knock* "C?"
*KNOCK* "Hello?"
*Take black marker to colour eyes into cock eyes!* "AH! C! finally you are focusing"

XD

@Hammy:
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Somebody get me a doc or a screwdriver  XD
- *hands hammy screwdriver* Can you help me fix C too? :(

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Repeat after me please  :D
- "After me please" <- ok! i'm a big brat! sorry! *Hides in durian shell*

:) take your time~



Finally! i'm done with the comments!





 
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 27, 2010, 05:42:52 PM
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- Even i'm sticky you wanna hug me too?
Well, if you're sticky, doesn't that mean I can't let go? I'm stuck on you. :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 27, 2010, 06:23:01 PM
^ *melts*  :wub: apparently u're good at it too! (<- referring to flirting) XD you might be renamed Baby Sticky Tree~ LOL~  :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 27, 2010, 07:00:46 PM
*pops in with half brain malfunctioning and fake eyes Bihop drew*

OMG what's with everyone flirting?  :lol:

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Am i dangerous?
Isn't that obvious? XD

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She got herself into a situation whereby many would wan to be in!
:yep:


............


:stunned:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2010, 03:16:24 PM
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you might be renamed Baby Sticky Tree
:wub: Well, I do become a sap for you. :yossi:

Yeah, I'd never have the courage to use these lines in real life... :oops:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 04:21:22 PM
Comment to comments  XD It's not forbidden right?  :D

@baddie
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Does that mean I'm cute like pup Eri too? XD
:roll:

@C
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Brat Jr.  :P
:twothumbs

@Bishop NI
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*scratches Trey-trey butt for him* LOL~
:lol:

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- Like granny says... who wanna volunteers? Maybe S!hu!? LOL~ but she is not here :(
Let me see what I can do for this  :glasses:  :twisted:   though I have a very strong hunch she lurks in here  :yep:

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Does that mean I'm cute like pup Eri too? XD
- omg... *taps Little kRisZ* Please explain..
Ummm... next question please  XD

@C
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OMG what's with everyone flirting?  :lol:
Bishop NI's contagious  :lol:


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you might be renamed Baby Sticky Tree
:wub: Well, I do become a sap for you. :yossi:

Yeah, I'd never have the courage to use these lines in real life... :oops:
:whip:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on January 28, 2010, 04:39:03 PM
*hop in*

*hop out*

*hop in again*

i saw my name.. :P

@darling
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- Like granny says... who wanna volunteers? Maybe S!hu!? LOL~ but she is not here :(
me me!  :lol:
i'm always here since you first post.. :lol:
and did i just call you darling.. :lol: XD :D

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the girl that i got matchmake by kRisZ is not around this fic  :(
i feel bad not posting whenever you end your reply with  :(
i'm here..silently by ur side :wub:

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- Oh..and btw.. It was Ai-chan teaching Risa? LOL~ doesn't Risa need the lesson?! hmmmmmmm~
Aichan will need it more..XD

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Am i dangerous?
YES

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- Even i'm sticky you wanna hug me too?
Well, if you're sticky, doesn't that mean I can't let go? I'm stuck on you. :wub:
you know, i'm also dangerous..
get away from her!! :angry: :angry:

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- Like granny says... who wanna volunteers? Maybe S!hu!? LOL~ but she is not here :(
Let me see what I can do for this  :glasses:  :twisted:   though I have a very strong hunch she lurks in here  :yep:
you dont have to do anything..
Bishop NI's mushy mushy word from your thread, and her  :( icon after the reply, make me appear.. :lol:


darling, can i ask for more TakaGaki  :wub: :wub:
and pls take good care of urself..get well soon :heart:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 05:11:51 PM
Hey girl I wanna catch your wave
Hey girl I wanna drift away with you
Hey girl you gotta undertow
Hey girl, hey girl don't wanna let you go


OMG~ I was replying the comment half way when i saw her posted on my thread XD  oh my~

Sorry guys(or girls)~ Her first~ :P

Hey Girl, :oops:
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darling..
i'm here..silently by ur side
:wub: I'm sure i blushed~ >.<  *Hides under hands*

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i feel bad not posting whenever you end your reply with :(
<- you can kiss it away :P

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Am i dangerous?
YES
- I AM!?  :( Only for you~

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darling, can i ask for more TakaGaki  :wub: :wub:
i'll see what i can do about it :)


@C:
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OMG what's with everyone flirting?  :lol:
- apparently~ it's kinda fun~ harmless anyway XD

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Isn't that obvious?  XD
THAT~ I'm not! XD

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............

 :stunned:


*Taps C* Don't die on me now!

Noooooooooooooooo~ *Sad background music*

I guess this is it, the time has come,
walk away, walk away don't look back
Dry up your tears, put on a smile,
don't you know a new life is waiting for you

No matter how I cry,
no matter what I do or say,
I know I'll lose you anyway
No matter how I tried,
no matter if I beg you on my knees,
I know tomorrow's gonna take us apart



*Bishop reaches for the button at the back of her neck*

..........................

 :stunned: :stunned:


@Baby Sticky Tree: 
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:wub: Well, I do become a sap for you.

Nobody gonna love me better, I must stick wit u forever
Nobody gonna take me higher, I must stick wit u (come on)
You know how to appreciate me, I must stick wit u, my baby
Nobody ever made me feel this way, I must stick wit u


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Yeah, I'd never have the courage to use these lines in real life...  :oops:
- LOL~ oh dear.. i actually uses some in real life  XD selectively! Oh well.. she somehow started it so i continued    ;)

@K - feel free to comment on comments coz i sure did that alot for your.. lol~

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Let me see what I can do for this   :glasses:   :twisted:  though I have a very strong hunch she lurks in here  :yep:
- Guess i have to borrow baby sticky tree's delurking light stick.. Look at the bottom later XD <- I was typing this b4 i saw her posting XD I guess i'll use it sometime later~

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Bishop NI's contagious :lol:
  :roll:



PLEASE Find me under the same table cloth! Thank!

ps: multiple flirting power!

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 05:31:50 PM
DARLING!?!  :shocked  :ph43r:  XD

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 05:47:09 PM
*Bright smile*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 06:03:15 PM
This is riot  :lol: Oh jezzz  XD I can't even start to read lil_hamz's Midnight as I originally planned to at this very moment :lol:  too bad your darling went to bed already, i guess  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 28, 2010, 06:17:49 PM
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you know, i'm also dangerous..
get away from her!!  :angry: :angry:
Ah, kowaii~!! You're kinda cute when you're angry. ;) *is shameless*

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Nobody gonna love me better, I must stick wit u forever
Nobody gonna take me higher, I must stick wit u (come on)
You know how to appreciate me, I must stick wit u, my baby
Nobody ever made me feel this way, I must stick wit u
Nice, what song is that? XD

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- LOL~ oh dear.. i actually uses some in real life   selectively! Oh well.. she somehow started it so i continued
Hey, nothin' wrong with that. :otomerika:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 06:44:35 PM
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*Bishop reaches for the button at the back of her neck*
Warning! System will be restarted in 3,2,1....

*blinks back to life and read comments*

Why do I get a song too? LOL

@ K

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Bishop NI's contagious
Yeah,  she's dangerous.

@ alwaysYou
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you know, i'm also dangerous..
get away from her!!  :angry: :angry:
:O
You go girl! LOL

@ Bishop
Be careful now, your darling is here  :lol:

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- apparently~ it's kinda fun~ harmless anyway
:roll: big flirt.

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THAT~ I'm not!
THAT you ARE XD

Boy, your thread and K's are in total chaos lmao
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 07:03:24 PM
:( I wanted to finish up reading Baby Stick Tree's Blue and Black but i end up stuck playing this XD Sorry Baby Sticky Tree! :(

@K: Awwwwww~ Girl girl where are you~ :(

@Baby Sticky Tree: Stickwitu by pussycat dolls~ XD

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Hey, nothin' wrong with that. :otomerika:

- but it was all cleverly hidden and not too straight forward XD

@C:
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Why do I get a song too? LOL
- you dun like it? :(

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Yeah,  she's dangerous.
  :? :? :?

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Be careful now, your darling is here :lol:
- she is here to protect me! XD

YA~~ A mess just within this few hours! LOL~
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 28, 2010, 07:10:46 PM
Oh~ By the way.. i'll be out of the country for 2 days~ Short trip to somewhere over the rainbow! XD Feel free to thrash my thread when i'm not around XD


*Lifted Table cloth up*

Hey Girl, i'll read up your reply when i'm back

*Hides under table cloth again!*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 07:15:13 PM
a very funny mess  :rofl:


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*Lifted Table cloth up*

Hey Girl, i'll read up your reply when i'm back

*Hides under table cloth again!*
damn  :lol:


Yay! Have a safe trip cutie :wub:    wrong emoticon  :)  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: Treykun on January 28, 2010, 07:23:12 PM

GOD DAMNIT~~~

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: The flirting style is passing from thread to thread XD

*scratches Trey-trey butt for him* LOL~

:mon suspect: S!hu!!! Watch where your girl's hands are going!!!!! XD

DARLING!?!  :shocked  :ph43r:  XD

:rofl:

*Bright smile*

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

YA~~ A mess just within this few hours! LOL~

Indeed~~~ God, this and kRisZ's thread are going to explode at any moment XD

Oh~ By the way.. i'll be out of the country for 2 days~ Short trip to somewhere over the rainbow! XD Feel free to thrash my thread when i'm not around XD

XD We'll keep that in mind :P Have fun~


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 07:27:44 PM
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- you dun like it?  :(
Now, now, don't start with the face LOL

Quote
:? :? :?
You are dangerous because you're contagious --> the flirting

Have a nice trip!  :)

@ Treykun
Quote
Indeed~~~ God, this and kRisZ's thread are going to explode at any moment
It's too much fun though  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 28, 2010, 07:44:15 PM
Off to bed I go  :)

That was a blast people  :love:  XD  :lol:  :rofl:  :bow:

Take care everyone  :heart:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 28, 2010, 07:51:00 PM
Sweet dreams K!  :)

Yup, that was a total blast  :lol:

You too take care and everyone as well!

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: stefy on January 29, 2010, 06:17:58 AM
Weeeeeee~

Nice fic!! Tho I'm finding it mentally challenging to picture a half-dogged Eri (same goes for Reina), but yay for TanaKame!!! :heart: :heart: Why aren't THEY the main?!? XD

Btw.. (kinda random but..) If u have a throat infection, why do you ask others to take care? You should be the one taking care!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on January 29, 2010, 07:33:56 AM
Weeee... I'm posting from e resort.. Yes I'm on holiday!! Some where where there is nice beach..apparently I have e room to myself too :p I'm posting fromy iPhone so I'm gonna keep all short! Haha

Steffy!: hello there! Haha.. Just pic them like they r in haromoni :) thanks anyway.. Haha.. Apparently I'm bad at taking care of myself :( I drank even though I'm sick.. Haha.. They r main along side with takagaki! :)

bye!

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 02:37:40 PM
@C
 :heart:


@BB NI
Did you bring one of those overly huge sunglasses? You know, for sight seeing purposes  :twisted:  XD

Have fun Kiddo  :)   say hi to Nemo for me  :D

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on January 29, 2010, 03:36:41 PM
@darling
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Hey girl I wanna catch your wave
Hey girl I wanna drift away with you
Hey girl you gotta undertow
Hey girl, hey girl don't wanna let you go
*melt* and *faint*

Quote
you can kiss it away
can i kiss you rather then kissing an icon..  :oops: :oops:


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- I AM!?   Only for you~
yea you are..you can just kill me off with your words.. :wub: :oops:

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@Baby Sticky Tree:
Quote
Well, I do become a sap for you.

Nobody gonna love me better, I must stick wit u forever
Nobody gonna take me higher, I must stick wit u (come on)
You know how to appreciate me, I must stick wit u, my baby
Nobody ever made me feel this way, I must stick wit u
:cry:
*off to a corner to cry*
 :cry: :cry:

@Krisz:
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too bad your darling went to bed already,
clever..XD
whenever you all post, i'm sleeping and dreaming..XD


@rndmnwierd
Quote
you know, i'm also dangerous..
get away from her!!  :angry: :angry:
Quote
Ah, kowaii~!! You're kinda cute when you're angry. ;) *is shameless*
will i lost to you?  :cry:
seen my darling seem to be flirting so much with you..
now i cant get angry..
if she wants you, i will let go  :cry:  :mon whine:

@Trey-Kun
Quote
S!hu!!! Watch where your girl's hands are going!!!!!
i come here to get emo.. :cry:
why am i in love with a flirt !!! :mon cry:


yet, after i get  :cry: :cry: :cry:, i have to say, have fun and i *sob* love *sob* you :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 04:10:34 PM


OMG  :rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:


BB NI We'll start trashing your thread  XD


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can i kiss you rather then kissing an icon..  :oops: :oops:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:   Bishop NI! :mon blowhorn: hurry!

Quote
:cry:
*off to a corner to cry*
 :cry: :cry:

rnd-sama :whip:   XD


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whenever you all post, i'm sleeping and dreaming..XD
Sleeping beauty... preparing for Bishop NI?  :lol:

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will i lost to you?  :cry:
seen my darling seem to be flirting so much with you..
now i cant get angry..
if she wants you, i will let go  :cry:  :mon whine:
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You are shy but won’t easily back down
Just remember that always  XD

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i come here to get emo.. :cry:
why am i in love with a flirt !!! :mon cry:
:rofl:

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yet, after i get  :cry: :cry: :cry:, i have to say, have fun and i *sob* love *sob* you :cry: :cry:
:twothumbs  :lol:  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on January 29, 2010, 04:14:33 PM
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whenever you all post, i'm sleeping and dreaming..XD
Sleeping beauty... preparing for Bishop NI?  :lol:
yes, yet all i get is just an empty bed.. :cry:
she off to flirt with others on bed.. :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 04:18:25 PM
^
 :lol: we are so dead when she comes back  :lol:


*does some flexing to prepare for the arrival of Teh Bishop Ni*  :ptam-shit:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 04:22:55 PM
Oh boy, this is like watching a drama  :lol:

^
There's something wrong with that alien smiley  XD

Hey K, seems like rndmnwierd isn't going to kill you in your thread
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 04:42:53 PM
^

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Oh boy, this is like watching a drama  :lol:
Korean drama perhaps?  XD

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There's something wrong with that alien smiley  XD
That's body flexing, alien style  XD

Quote
Hey K, seems like rndmnwierd isn't going to kill you in your thread
edited    :D :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 05:19:55 PM
^
LOL yeah like Korean drama.
You know K, now I feel that your word 'dragable' is coming true because I got caught in this chaos somehow LOL
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 05:40:24 PM
 :lol:

And flyable, it flies from here to there   XD

Have you noticed K-dramas mostly revolve around four people?  XD   :twisted:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 05:52:54 PM
And flyable, it flies from here to there   XD
Damn, that's true  :lol:

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Have you noticed K-dramas mostly revolve around four people?  XD   :twisted:
:depressed: I don't feel lucky (see your thread)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:04:02 PM
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:depressed: I don't feel lucky (see your thread)

How about we'll find a way to make that unlucky feeling go away?  :)  That's a very big sweat-drop *looks for a huge towel* S!hu! can we borrow your towel for a minute?   :mon heh:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on January 29, 2010, 06:50:44 PM
^

You're not making me feel any better in your thread  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on January 29, 2010, 06:58:37 PM
 :lol:  sorry  :lol:  There are no others around so my attention is all yours  :nervous

EDIT
lol new page  XD   Sorry BB NI  :nervous
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on January 30, 2010, 01:03:03 PM
I was told that your thread was filled with flirting. No kidding :shocked

Drats, I forgot what I wanted to say about this chapter after going through all the rest  :nervous

Enjoy your trip and take care. Oh and no drinking :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 01, 2010, 07:42:02 PM
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Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 01, 2010, 11:50:01 PM
OMG    :gmon twirl:  BISHOP NI    :mon hi: WELCOME BACK   :mon money:

WOW! You DID flirt  :on lol:  Age doesn't matter Cute Kiddo  :D  so  :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:   :grin:



Short, I need to go...  (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/zr.gif) my welcome back Kiss  XD


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 02, 2010, 01:45:21 AM
Welcome back Baby Sticky! :otomerika: :yossi: :shakeit:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 02, 2010, 12:34:31 PM
Awww, so cute! :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 02, 2010, 01:21:20 PM
!!!!

OMG!


@HashirePomeranian (<- wow.. you have to type this everytime you login? lol):  :mon innocent: Thank you!! This is the first time i receive a fanart or thing from a reader!!!

It's really cute and not simple at all! I could have never done that..sad to say... I'm the worst artist...(But i think i'm not as bad as Eri......  XD ) It's very detailed too! I notice the little fang of Eri is there! XD Drawn by computer?

Glad that you like the story~ :) Puppy Eri turned out unexpectedly cute~ I'm glad i decided to integrate her into the story! But the next update is gonna be super late cause i'm super busy at the moment :( Promise i'll find time to write it  ;)

@K: Yes i did! XD Nah..not the age..but looks :(  My friends always say i'm of a 40 year old mental, living in a 17 year old body but is actually 22! LOL

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Short, I need to go...   my welcome back Kiss XD
<- NO!!!! Go away! Hey Girl... save me..  :mon curtain: [where did you get that kissing emotion anyway?? ]

@Baby Sticky Tree: Hello there! XD I see that you have been happily giving butt slaps..LOL~

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 01:48:04 PM
*Stares at the pic*
 :bow:  :bow:  :bow: The fang was the first I noticed  :yep:


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Yes i did! XD Nah..not the age..but looks :(  My friends always say i'm of a 40 year old mental, living in a 17 year old body but is actually 22! LOL
You really look young, somewhere around the teen age  :yep:  but Yummy  :drool:   :twisted:   :lol:


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<- NO!!!! Go away! Hey Girl... save me..  :mon curtain:
:lol:

The emoticon's from a friend, no idea where she got that  :D



rnd-sama = Teh BUTT Slap Master  XD



Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 02:27:01 PM
@ Bishop
Welcome back!  :D

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I'm a homey person..
Really? So do I! *high five*

I personally think older woman is great in their own way.


@ HashirePomeranian
Awesome fanart!  :thumbsup


@ K
Scaring another people with the 'kiss' thing, huh?

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rnd-sama = Teh BUTT Slap Master  XD
:rofl:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 02, 2010, 02:28:26 PM
HELP!!!!!!!!!!! GIRL!!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU!!!!!!!!


K Says SHE FINDS ME YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 :on freeze: :on freeze: :on freeze:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 02, 2010, 02:30:16 PM
@C: *waves!*

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I personally think older woman is great in their own way.
- I'm only that in mental thinking...but i drop back to 15 years old when i'm playful XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 02:36:38 PM
S!hu! come out come out wherever you are  :twisted:


I need to go for a while  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 02, 2010, 02:42:08 PM
HEY YOU K!!!! :angry:
trying to flirt with my girl now?????!!!!! :angry: :angry:

my darling is YUMMY, but is NOT for you to say so!!!
and how dare u kiss her infront of me!!!  :on voodoo: :on kimbo:
stay away from her!!! :scolding:
before i BOMB your area :angry: :angry:
you wanna this :gmon fry: to happen?!you lay a finger on her again, i make sure you being fried!!!! :pig realmad:



and darling, your post with that japanese girl, it make you look really FLIRT!!!  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 02:46:36 PM
@ Bishop

*waves back*

 :mon psst: be careful, K has turned really ebil after you left.

@ AA
Whoa! Nice  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 02, 2010, 03:19:07 PM
Hey Girl,  how i wish to quote your whole post! It's so adorable! Go Girl! Go get her!

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my darling is YUMMY, but is NOT for you to say so!!!
  :wub: :wub:

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before i BOMB your area
- HOW cute! XD

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and darling, your post with that japanese girl, it make you look really FLIRT!!!
- selectively! XD If you realized.. I just let thing flow on it own..it all happens not really on purpose.. My friends asked for something and complain hence i had the chance.. plus she reciprocate as well.. :P I don't force it on someone  ;) but like mention~ I'm not taken seriously always XD probably she was just entertaining me as a cute kiddy customer :(

Question: Are you taking me seriously? ;) <- LOL..oh god.. even this question itself is so flirty...


@C: Haha.. everyone turns a very much ebil after i left! LOL

You with the checking out Baby Sticky Tree from on top of her....

K's horn are growing so much that it's curling and curling on top of her head...

Baby Sticky Tree is giving random people BUTT SLAPS

Trey-trey is trying very hard to proclaim he is the most innocent GUY among all the girls.. LOL~

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 03:33:14 PM
@AABatt  XD I still laugh whenever I type that  XD
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HEY YOU K!!!! :angry:
Hey where's the R  XD

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my darling is YUMMY, but is NOT for you to say so!!!
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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and how dare u kiss her infront of me!!!  :on voodoo: :on kimbo:
:shocked Okay, here let me kiss you too  (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/zr.gif)  :lol:

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before i BOMB your area :angry: :angry:
:shocked

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you wanna this :gmon fry: to happen?!you lay a finger on her again, i make sure you being fried!!!! :pig realmad:
Deep fried please  XD

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and darling, your post with that japanese girl, it make you look really FLIRT!!!  :lol:
:yep:



@C
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:mon psst: be careful, K has turned really ebil after you left.
:mon nyah:  XD



Bishop Ni
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Hey Girl,  how i wish to quote your whole post! It's so adorable! Go Girl! Go get her!
S!hu! :on comhere:

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I'm not taken seriously always XD probably she was just entertaining me as a cute kiddy customer :(
You're not a hundred percent sure... maybe it was your eyes that got her  :yep:  they can Hypnotize  :yep:

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Question: Are you taking me seriously? ;) <- LOL..oh god.. even this question itself is so flirty...
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:


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You with the checking out Baby Sticky Tree from on top of her....
Which was  :drool:  :twisted:  :lol:


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K's horn are growing so much that it's curling and curling on top of her head...
Oh... I still can hold them good  :D

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Baby Sticky Tree is giving random people BUTT SLAPS
:yep:  :lol:


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Trey-trey is trying very hard to proclaim he is the most innocent GUY among all the girls.. LOL~
:lol: but very cute  :D




Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 03:40:21 PM
@ Bishop

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You with the checking out Baby Sticky Tree from on top of her....
I blame K on this one because I didn't purposely landed on baby tree, she's the one who wrote it.
As for the checking out part...well, I didn't mean to check her out that way but I guess I should apologize anyway, sorry rndm!  :kneelbow:

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K's horn are growing so much that it's curling and curling on top of her head...
:yep:


@ K

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Which was  :drool:  :twisted:  :lol:
It's nothing like that  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 04:06:42 PM
^
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I blame K on this one because I didn't purposely landed on baby tree, she's the one who wrote it.
:lol:

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As for the checking out part...well, I didn't mean to check her out that way but I guess I should apologize anyway, sorry rndm!  :kneelbow:
The story writer accepts no liability for the personal views of each character after the story was written or for the consequences of any actions taken on the basis of the story provided  :twisted:


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It's nothing like that  :lol:
You did give us some imaginations to  :drool: from  :yep:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 02, 2010, 04:27:12 PM
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@ AA
Whoa! Nice  :lol:

we must fight back our love!!! XD

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Question: Are you taking me seriously? ;)<- LOL..oh god.. even this question itself is so flirty...
should i?XD
the 2nd line,  :yep: :yep: it oso sound flirty..XD

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Hey where's the R XD
i ate it up, as a warning to you!!!! :angry:

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and how dare u kiss her infront of me!!!  :on voodoo: :on kimbo:
:shocked Okay, here let me kiss you too  (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e289/samsay123/cartoons/zr.gif)  :lol:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wipe away* ONLY MY DARLING CAN DO SO!!UNDERSTAND?!
darling, your job now.. :wub:

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Deep fried please XD
i will let ur wish come true soon  :P
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 04:34:17 PM
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we must fight back our love!!! XD
Damn  :lol:

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Question: Are you taking me seriously? ;)<- LOL..oh god.. even this question itself is so flirty...
should i?XD
the 2nd line,  :yep: :yep: it oso sound flirty..XD
Answer it with a yes or a no  :w00t:

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i ate it up, as a warning to you!!!! :angry:
:ptam-hbk:

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wipe away* ONLY MY DARLING CAN DO SO!!UNDERSTAND?!
:lol: wait wrong emoticon  :mon cry:

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darling, your job now.. :wub:
I think she's gone now, wait...  Bishop NI knock knock  :D

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i will let ur wish come true soon  :P
Be my guest AABatt  XD


EDIT
NEW Page GETZ  :lick:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 02, 2010, 04:39:50 PM
@ K

The story writer accepts no liability for the personal views of each character after the story was written or for the consequences of any actions taken on the basis of the story provided  :twisted:
:smhid

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You did give us some imaginations to  :drool: from  :yep:
It's just your imagination :roll:


@ AA
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we must fight back our love!!! XD
That's the spirit girl! :twothumbs

You're getting two new pages K!  :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 02, 2010, 04:48:09 PM
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The story writer accepts no liability for the personal views of each character after the story was written or for the consequences of any actions taken on the basis of the story provided  :twisted:
:smhid
If you'll read the story, it has no ebil scenario, the characters made it ebil hence making the writer ebil and so I'm now ebil and purely caused by the ebil characters
 :lol: 

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It's just your imagination :roll:
I won't imagine it if you didn't provoke my pure and clean mind  XD

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That's the spirit girl! :twothumbs
:smhid

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You're getting two new pages K!  :lol:
Yeah, I noticed  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: Treykun on February 02, 2010, 07:30:48 PM

Welcome back~!!

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*READS POST*

:rofl: OMG! That's flirting in the most cheeky way ever~! XD XD XD


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K's horn are growing so much that it's curling and curling on top of her head...

She isn't just turning evil... She's turning perv too... :yep: XD

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Baby Sticky Tree is giving random people BUTT SLAPS

Yup! My butt still hurts... :cry: :cry:

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Trey-trey is trying very hard to proclaim he is the most innocent GUY among all the girls.. LOL~

:mon wtf: WTF?!?!?! WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!?!?! :scolding:

Whatever, it's funny that you're the one saying that!! Because this is ALL your fault!! *pouts* Do you see kRisZ??? Now i don't puff my cheeks, now I pout...! XD :P

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Trey-trey is trying very hard to proclaim he is the most innocent GUY among all the girls.. LOL~
  :lol: but very cute    :D

At least kRisZ says it...! XD XD XD


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 03, 2010, 04:43:52 PM
EDIT: *pouts* I wanted to add a player to play a song for Girl but it can't :( Sighs.............

Hey Girl, why are you called AAbatt anyway??

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we must fight back our love!!!
- was there even a battle for it?

Nothing's gonna change my love for you

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should i? XD
- Yes? or No?  :mon huh2:

@Curly K:
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:shocked Okay, here let me kiss you too  :lol:
- *crack fingers...twists neck a little from side to side*

THOUSAND YEARS OF PAIN!!!

Sennen Goroshi ( a thousand years of pain ) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnJdGc5a98c#)

-In case those who are wondering~ XD Sennen Goroshi!

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Deep fried please
- How about i use Hydrofluoric acid as the medium? (You can ask Trey-trey about the effects of HF :) )

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You're not a hundred percent sure... maybe it was your eyes that got her :yep: they can Hypnotize  :yep:
- u've seen it!? LOL~

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K's horn are growing so much that it's curling and curling on top of her head...

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Oh... I still can hold them good
- I wondering is there anyone cursing me for bringing out the ebil-ness in you~ LOL~

@C:
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I blame K on this one because I didn't purposely landed on baby tree, she's the one who wrote it.
As for the checking out part...well, I didn't mean to check her out that way but I guess I should apologize anyway, sorry rndm!  :kneelbow:
- LOL~ I got myself a Girl :) soooo...i'm not complaining~ XD

@Trey-trey~:
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:grin:OMG! That's flirting in the most cheeky way ever~!
XD it was fun!

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:mon wtf:WTF?!?!?! WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!?!?! :scolding:
- LOL~ It means what it means! WHAT my fault?! LOL! Why me again?!!?

Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous? XD

@HP! (HashirePomeranian) <- Nicknamed! (Can I?  :mon innocent: ) XD I have a hard time typing it! lucky you are on autolog!

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Eri looks nakey nakey, but hey if she just changed from being a dog, no clothes makes sense right?
- Actually..It should be this way...and is what i had in mind too...... BUT Eri and Reina changes from form to form quite often and almost at anywhere~ I still want them decent XD

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this thread is uh...interesting to say the least
- It's going crazier and crazier! LOL.. I even forget the objective is to write the story! *Covers face with hands to protect myself!*

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oh btw, a bartender! NICE! was she cute?
- Hmmmm... Lets just say she is charmingly pretty..well..at least to me..~ XD With the slight mature lady look (since she is 26..it fits her) but retains her Japanese cuteness when she speaks.. LOL~ you know..with the funny expression and action~

AND! I'm like a kid! <- said a thousand times but still...............  :mon runcry:

LOL~!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 04, 2010, 02:26:31 AM
@Trey-trey
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:rofl: OMG! That's flirting in the most cheeky way ever~! XD XD XD
Should we consider that as Lesson Learned No. 1 or just as a teaser?  :dunno:

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She isn't just turning evil... She's turning perv too... :yep: XD
When did I become a perv?  :O

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Whatever, it's funny that you're the one saying that!! Because this is ALL your fault!! *pouts* Do you see kRisZ??? Now i don't puff my cheeks, now I pout...! XD :P
And we need another visual!  :twisted:  XD

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At least kRisZ says it...! XD XD XD
:roll:



oh btw, a bartender! NICE! was she cute?
I was wondering too... but I'm sure she is   :D



@Bishop NI
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Hey Girl, why are you called AAbatt anyway??
Let me answer this first before AABatt gets to  :twisted:  She's an AiButt shipper? Did it make any sense?  :lol:

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- was there even a battle for it?
Hmmm...

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should i? XD
- Yes? or No?  :mon huh2:
Actually that was directed to AABatt but you can answer it with a yes or a no as well  :gmon cny:

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- *crack fingers...twists neck a little from side to side*
:shocked

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THOUSAND YEARS OF PAIN!!!
:mon wtf:

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-In case those who are wondering~ XD Sennen Goroshi!
:mon curtain:

 XD

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- How about i use Hydrofluoric acid as the medium? (You can ask Trey-trey about the effects of HF :) )
I bet it will make me melt... Trey-trey *points at the above line*  :kneelbow:

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- u've seen it!? LOL~
I sneaked into NASA, was just trying to see if Trey-trey and I will be safe in there before the actual infiltration commences. And there I saw you, in pink bikini holding some drinks while winking at some girls  XD  :k-thrilled:

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I wondering is there anyone cursing me for bringing out the ebil-ness in you~ LOL~
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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- LOL~ I got myself a Girl :) soooo...i'm not complaining~ XD
@C were you complaining?  :shocked  :lol:

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- LOL~ It means what it means! WHAT my fault?! LOL! Why me again?!!?
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous? XD
Hmmm *on deep thinking mode* :mon dunno:

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- It's going crazier and crazier! LOL.. I even forget the objective is to write the story! *Covers face with hands to protect myself!*
XD

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AND! I'm like a kid! <- said a thousand times but still...............  :mon runcry:
Like checking out a big sis?  :twisted:




Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 01:23:07 PM
@ K

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Quote
If you'll read the story, it has no ebil scenario, the characters made it ebil hence making the writer ebil and so I'm now ebil and purely caused by the ebil characters
 :lol:
I won't imagine it if you didn't provoke my pure and clean mind  XD
Riiiight....LOL


@ Bishop
Thousand years of pain  XD

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- I wondering is there anyone cursing me for bringing out the ebil-ness in you~ LOL~
Maybe I should raise my hand?  :P

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- LOL~ I got myself a Girl :) soooo...i'm not complaining~ XD
You got it good, but that evil K is turning me into an antagonist  :smhid

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Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous?
K is more dangerous XD

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AND! I'm like a kid!
Don't worry you're not the only one, I don't look my age so people often mistook me as a high schooler or even younger.


@ K
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When did I become a perv?  :O
you didn't become a perv, you already are from the start  XD

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@C were you complaining?  :shocked  :lol:
Wasn't I in your thread like oh so many times but got ignored?  :mad:
LOL
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 04, 2010, 01:34:13 PM
@Trey-trey + K :
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  :rofl: OMG! That's flirting in the most cheeky way ever~!  XD XD XD
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Should we consider that as Lesson Learned No. 1 or just as a teaser?   :dunno:
- I was just trying to be a nice customer :)

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Whatever, it's funny that you're the one saying that!! Because this is ALL your fault!! *pouts* Do you see kRisZ??? Now i don't puff my cheeks, now I pout...! XD :P
And we need another visual! :twisted: XD
-  :on woohoo: pout...................with your hairy legs! LOL! <- i just can't seems to forget about the hairy leg comment~

@Curly K:
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When did I become a perv?
- Since your horns started curling

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Let me answer this first before AABatt gets to   :twisted:  She's an AiButt shipper? Did it make any sense?   :lol:
- Ohhhhh~ we have a common interest~  :wub: LOL~

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Quote
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should i?
- Yes? or No?  :mon huh2:
Actually that was directed to AABatt but you can answer it with a yes or a no as well  :gmon cny:
- Truth or Lie...which do you prefer?    :mon innocent:

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And there I saw you, in pink bikini holding some drinks while winking at some girls  XD
- I was wearing a brown one.. XD Nope~ i don't wink.. i give them a cute smile along with my killer slight dimples <- It is not very obvious unless i give you a really big smile *Bright smile*

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Like checking out a big sis?   :twisted:
- XD shhhh.... secret!

@C:
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- I wondering is there anyone cursing me for bringing out the ebil-ness in you~ LOL~
Maybe I should raise my hand? :P
- LOL..if you do.. many thousand will raise theirs' too for me making you ebil too... YOU are turning ebil too!!!

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You got it good, but that evil K is turning me into an antagonist
:rofl:

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Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous?
K is more dangerous XD
-  :on woohoo: AGREED!

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Don't worry you're not the only one, I don't look my age so people often mistook me as a high schooler or even younger.
^5!

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Wasn't I in your thread like oh so many times but got ignored?   :mad:
LOL
<- how cute!  :monk gboy: poor Little C~ XD

 :mon bat:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 04, 2010, 02:03:51 PM
I just realized i had 5 PAGES of wackiness!~ Soooooooo... I decided to make a content page for those who wanna skip reading our senseless but funny rubbish~ XD

AND~ Nope.. i have been so distracted that i have not started writing the next chapter XD *protects myself with durian shells*

 :mon innocent:

Cheers!

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on February 04, 2010, 02:37:10 PM
And u say u dun flirt in real life. Geez like Im gonna
believe that XD

Omg you guys/gals should just start a thread for flirting or merge this and the other one. I don't know what I'm reading anymore. It's too confusing!

PS: why didn't u get her phone number? Then u won't have to wait till June :P *pelts u with more durian shells. Go write a new chapter already. And stop tempting me with durians. I'm craving for them for too long.
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 04, 2010, 02:49:09 PM
@ Bishop
- LOL..if you do.. many thousand will raise theirs' too for me making you ebil too... YOU are turning ebil too!!!

*gasp* am I??

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-  :on woohoo: AGREED!
See that K?
 XD

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^5!
Is this a high 5? if it is then *high 5 back*

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<- how cute!  :monk gboy: poor Little C~ XD
Yeah, K is being evil to me

How do you make a content link?

Anyway sorry for wrecking your thread!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 04, 2010, 05:08:22 PM
@C
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You got it good, but that evil K is turning me into an antagonist  :smhid
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous?
K is more dangerous XD
OMG  :angry: I'm so not THAT dangerous... I say Bishop NI's more dangerous, reasons she has 2 girls. Or rnd-sama, she has 2 girls as well. Or baddie because she's the original ebil one.  Or S!hu! because she's the silent type. Or you're more dangerous because you're one of the antagonists  XD 

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Don't worry you're not the only one, I don't look my age so people often mistook me as a high schooler or even younger.
Really.?. How about visual  :w00t:

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you didn't become a perv, you already are from the start  XD
That is so not true  :yep: for the record  :D

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Wasn't I in your thread like oh so many times but got ignored?  :mad:
LOL
Oh  XD



@Bishop NI
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- I was just trying to be a nice customer :)
Okay  :roll:

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-  :on woohoo: pout...................with your hairy legs! LOL! <- i just can't seems to forget about the hairy leg comment~
Trey-trey! 2 is more... make that capture and post already  XD

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- Since your horns started curling
I trimmed them last night  :D

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- Ohhhhh~ we have a common interest~  :wub: LOL~
:yep: and you're flirting again  XD

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Truth or Lie...which do you prefer?    :mon innocent:
Your choice  :P

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- I was wearing a brown one.. XD Nope~ i don't wink.. i give them a cute smile along with my killer slight dimples <- It is not very obvious unless i give you a really big smile *Bright smile*
VISUAL   :pepper:   VISUAL   :pepper:   VISUAL    :P

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- XD shhhh.... secret!
:D

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- LOL..if you do.. many thousand will raise theirs' too for me making you ebil too... YOU are turning ebil too!!!
:yep:

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K is more dangerous XD
-  :on woohoo: AGREED!
:O

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<- how cute!  :monk gboy: poor Little C~ XD
Me likes the emoticon for C  XD

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*protects myself with durian shells*
Trivia: Did you know that one of the highest paid jobs is connected with Durian? You know what it is?



@lil_hamz
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Omg you guys/gals should just start a thread for flirting or merge this and the other one. I don't know what I'm reading anymore. It's too confusing!
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:



@C
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*gasp* am I??
:yep:

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-  :on woohoo: AGREED!
See that K?
 XD
:roll:

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Yeah, K is being evil to me
XD

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How do you make a content link?
Good question, I wanna know too  :)

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Anyway sorry for wrecking your thread!
Me too  :)  but I'm not THAT sorry  :twisted:   I'm just following C's   XD

Seriously  :kneelbow:  :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: Treykun on February 04, 2010, 08:12:18 PM
@bishop:

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- LOL~ It means what it means! WHAT my fault?! LOL! Why me again?!!?

I won't tell you why, not until you tell me what it means!! :mon annoy: :P

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Question: Is the one and only guy more dangerous or the many girls more dangerous?

*Raises an eyebrow* What do you think????????? :twisted: XD XD


@kRisZ:

@Trey-trey
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:rofl: OMG! That's flirting in the most cheeky way ever~! XD XD XD
Should we consider that as Lesson Learned No. 1 or just as a teaser?  :dunno:

Hmmmmm... We'll consider it as the first lesson... Then, we'll do a compilation of our new learnings to make the "bishop's bible" XD

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When did I become a perv?  :O

Some days ago... :mon dunno: XD

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Whatever, it's funny that you're the one saying that!! Because this is ALL your fault!! *pouts* Do you see kRisZ??? Now i don't puff my cheeks, now I pout...! XD :P
And we need another visual!  :twisted:  XD

NO!!!!!! NO MORE VISUALS!!!! XD XD

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I bet it will make me melt... Trey-trey *points at the above line*

It will... XD XD *clears throat* :

- Extremely corrosive... At the contact with the skin it produces conditions. In other words, it burns... and hurts a lot. At the contact with the eyes... you can end up blind. If you smell it... you won't be able to breath. And if you drink or try it... collapse.

So, if you want to end up deep fried... Yes, it works XD XD XD


@C:

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K is more dangerous XD

I AGREE TOO!!!!!! XD


@bishop:

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pout...................with your hairy legs! LOL! <- i just can't seems to forget about the hairy leg comment~

No, you don't forget... XD I'll say this again:

I DON'T HAVE HAIRY LEGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD


@kRisZ:

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I sneaked into NASA, was just trying to see if Trey-trey and I will be safe in there before the actual infiltration commences. And there I saw you, in pink bikini holding some drinks while winking at some girls

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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Trey-trey! 2 is more... make that capture and post already  XD

:mon annoy:

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- I was wearing a brown one.. XD Nope~ i don't wink.. i give them a cute smile along with my killer slight dimples <- It is not very obvious unless i give you a really big smile *Bright smile*
VISUAL   :pepper:   VISUAL   :pepper:   VISUAL    :P

I'll do a visual if the bishop does that one!!!!!! XD XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 05, 2010, 03:54:36 PM
@ Curly ebil K

OMG  :angry: I'm so not THAT dangerous... I say Bishop NI's more dangerous, reasons she has 2 girls. Or rnd-sama, she has 2 girls as well. Or baddie because she's the original ebil one.  Or S!hu! because she's the silent type. Or you're more dangerous because you're one of the antagonists  XD
I'm only antagonist because you're the on who said it, so yes you're that dangerous  XD

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Really.?. How about visual  :w00t:
LOL NO. What's with you and 'visual'?

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Me likes the emoticon for C  XD
Eh, what do you like about it?

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Trivia: Did you know that one of the highest paid jobs is connected with Durian? You know what it is?
No idea, what?

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*gasp* am I??
:yep:
Explain.


@ T-kun
Bishop's bible?  :lol:  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 05, 2010, 04:40:42 PM
@ darling:
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Question: Are you taking me seriously?  ;)
if i ans yes, will you take me seriously too? :oops:
actually i kinda forget the qns and i'm lazy to read up again, so many pages.. :lol:

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Nothing's gonna change my love for you
:wub: :wub: :wub:
*blush and hide*

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- Ohhhhh~ we have a common interest~  :wub:LOL~
shipping aibutt is our common interest  :lol: :lol: :lol:

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- Truth or Lie...which do you prefer?  
truth, yet i scare it's not the ans i wan  :cry:
but i trust my darling.. :heart:




@C:
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That's the spirit girl! :twothumbs
so snatch back what belong to you too..XD

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You got it good, but that evil K is turning me into an antagonist  :smhid
we have no choice, K is born evil  :lol:



@K:
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When did I become a perv?
arent you ALWAYS A PERV? XD
see even C also feel so..XD
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you didn't become a perv, you already are from the start

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Or S!hu! because she's the silent type
silent killer  :twisted: :twisted:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 05, 2010, 07:18:08 PM
I might be back at the resort sooner then expected  ;)

Hey Girl,

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if i ans yes, will you take me seriously too? :oops:
- If... this question was serious at all..

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truth, yet i scare it's not the ans i wan  :cry:
but i trust my darling.. :heart:
- It all depends on you~


@Hammy:
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And u say u dun flirt in real life.
- I did?! but the line between flirt and being nice is so blur... :(

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It's too confusing!
apparently... i'm getting confuse too XD lol

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why didn't u get her phone number?
- wouldn't that be too straight forward plus i might scare her off :( and anyway...she is like big sister and i'm kiddo (I complain about this like... 100th times?) LOL

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Then u won't have to wait till June
-Apparently.............i might be going back there with my family during March!!! Which is only a month from now! Wish me luck!

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*pelts u with more durian shells. Go write a new chapter already. And stop tempting me with durians. I'm craving for them for too long.
- Lets go eat some durians....Leave the ang mohs to wonder where Geylang might be and what a durian looks like.. XD

@C:
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- LOL..if you do.. many thousand will raise theirs' too for me making you ebil too... YOU are turning ebil too!!!

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*gasp* am I??
YES YOU'RE..! XD

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^5!
Is this a high 5? if it is then *high 5 back*
Yes it is :P

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How do you make a content link?
- add and change accordingly..remove the " " cause i cannot just put it in as it is as it will be read as a script. -> "<a href="url">Link text</a> "

@K:
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- Since your horns started curling
I trimmed them last night  :D
- The K i use to know will not say this... BUT~ it's too funny! LOL~

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and you're flirting again XD
I did!?

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Trivia: Did you know that one of the highest paid jobs is connected with Durian? You know what it is?
Is that a question for me or something? Durian are high paid jobs?? who told you that? lol.. Durian is a fruit that can be eaten... but it's shell is super thorny.. LOL~

ANYWAY! You still owe me something! remember!?

@Trey-trey:
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*Raises an eyebrow* What do you think?????????  :twisted: XD XD
- the many girls... cause we just have to cry.. LOL~

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- Extremely corrosive... At the contact with the skin it produces conditions. In other words, it burns... and hurts a lot. At the contact with the eyes... you can end up blind. If you smell it... you won't be able to breath. And if you drink or try it... collapse.
- I would like to add on something more for K...

HF interferes with nerve function, meaning that burns may not initially be painful - You might not even know what hits you at first....

More seriously, once absorbed into blood through the skin, it reacts with blood calcium and may cause cardiac arrest. - You don't even need to drink it... :)

^Above information extracted from Wikipedia (School old habit dies hard)

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I DON'T HAVE HAIRY LEGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- HOW ADORABLE! LOL

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 06, 2010, 12:45:29 PM
@ AA
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so snatch back what belong to you too..XD
LOL I don't think it belongs to me in the first place :)

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we have no choice, K is born evil  :lol:
see even C also feel so..XD
:yep:


@ Bishop
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YES YOU'RE..! XD
:O
Do explain  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 13, 2010, 09:02:32 AM
So, where's the new chapter :gmon nya:



Trey-trey
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It will... XD XD *clears throat* :

- Extremely corrosive... At the contact with the skin it produces conditions. In other words, it burns... and hurts a lot. At the contact with the eyes... you can end up blind. If you smell it... you won't be able to breath. And if you drink or try it... collapse.

So, if you want to end up deep fried... Yes, it works XD XD XD
Arg.

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K is more dangerous XD

I AGREE TOO!!!!!! XD
Arg 2x  XD

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I'll do a visual if the bishop does that one!!!!!! XD XD
:twothumbs  :twothumbs  :twothumbs


C
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I'm only antagonist because you're the on who said it, so yes you're that dangerous  XD
Arg 3x

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LOL NO. What's with you and 'visual'?
It's cool to imagine your buddies with their real images. Unless you want me to imagine you ebilly  :twisted:

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No idea, what?
All you have to do is go there during harvest and catch them barehanded  :rofl:   :twisted:   :rofl:   :twisted:  :rofl:


AABatt
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if i ans yes, will you take me seriously too? :oops:
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t: But why can't you answer a question with a good answer instead of asking a question back  :smhid

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Nothing's gonna change my love for you
:wub: :wub: :wub:
*blush and hide*
Jezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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You got it good, but that evil K is turning me into an antagonist  :smhid
we have no choice, K is born evil  :lol:
And you're spreading the good news outside this forum... should I start hunting you down honey?  :mon dunno:



Bishop NI
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-Apparently.............i might be going back there with my family during March!!! Which is only a month from now! Wish me luck!
A trick was involved nee  :twisted:  Like "mom and dad that place was really awesome, we should go there as a family too" Bishop NI's mind 'I should go there again before June'  :twisted:  XD  :k-thrilled:

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- The K i use to know will not say this... BUT~ it's too funny! LOL~
:D

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Is that a question for me or something? Durian are high paid jobs?? who told you that? lol.. Durian is a fruit that can be eaten... but it's shell is super thorny.. LOL~
Already answered above *points at C's*

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- I would like to add on something more for K...

HF interferes with nerve function, meaning that burns may not initially be painful - You might not even know what hits you at first....

More seriously, once absorbed into blood through the skin, it reacts with blood calcium and may cause cardiac arrest. - You don't even need to drink it... :)
Arg 4x



C
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we have no choice, K is born evil  :lol:
see even C also feel so..XD
:yep:
Arg 5x   :lol: damn  XD





*BUMPS*

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 13, 2010, 09:19:53 AM
LOL~ I'm surprise to see this topic pop up to the top of the list again!

 :kneelbow: Forgive me people! There is just too much distraction lately.. haha.. Both good and bad.. plus due to Chinese New Year is around the corner (actually... tomorrow..).. there is much that needed to be done! Even so..... i have yet to clean my room!! <- my mum had already give up bugging me XD

AND.... I'm still writing the chapter.. writing now actually! Promises it will be out soon!

Happy Chinese New Year!


OH! PLUS!


Happy Valentine Day!



@K:
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Like "mom and dad that place was really awesome, we should go there as a family too"
  :shock: How did you know?! LOL!

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All you have to do is go there during harvest and catch them barehanded
- LOL.. ya.. and after that.. you will barely have a hand anymore.. lol




Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 13, 2010, 10:05:34 AM
@ K

*pats K's head* sorry to make you go 'Arg'

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It's cool to imagine your buddies with their real images. Unless you want me to imagine you ebilly  :twisted:
Okay, I take back my sorry  XD

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All you have to do is go there during harvest and catch them barehanded  :rofl:   :twisted:   :rofl:   :twisted:  :rofl:
:lol:


@ Bishop
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Like "mom and dad that place was really awesome, we should go there as a family too"
 :shock: How did you know?! LOL!
She's ebil powered  XD

New page, gomen  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 13, 2010, 10:12:03 AM
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Like "mom and dad that place was really awesome, we should go there as a family too"
  :shock: How did you know?! LOL!
She's ebil powered  XD

- ^ LOL... Suddenly... energizer's adv pops into my mind.. and then there hops by the ebil Pink rabbit (K), introducing AAbatt to me.. LOL!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 13, 2010, 05:59:48 PM
HAPPY V Day darling  :heart: :heart: :wub: :wub:

Love ya forever  :heart: :heart: :heart:

 :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 13, 2010, 06:47:27 PM
Hey Girl,


Happy Valentine Day!


Never thought you would be the one wishing me first... :)

*Gives Girl a box of chocolate*

Will i receive one back on the 14th March?  ;)






Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 14 - Clean Ups (26/01) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 16, 2010, 04:13:01 PM
HELLO!!! *Kneels down*  :kneelbow:

I can't even remember if i had reply to all comments.... I guess i had!? Sorry! I know it's a pain in the ass to scroll through those pages... SO... for those who still do not know... I had a content page already XD

Yes~ It had been long....since the last update....and even longer since i last threaten to drop the.......wait... where is it?

*search around messy room.....*
*Throws shirts*
*Throws jeans*
*Throws underwear*
*Throws C, K and Trey-Trey*

AH! Baby Sticky Tree! Not what i'm looking for...but i haven't seen you for awhile :(

*Keeps AAbatt in pocket*

AH! The bomb! It's a bit rusty.. XD but.....

*Keeps bomb in drawer* <- Btw... Granny is in there as well.. don't ask how i fit her in  8)2

Not using it yet...  XD


That's all i guess! SOooooo....

*Drums Rolling....* Presenting! Chapter 15! (It's kinda short.. sorry!)



Chapter 15
Gateway


“Are we there yet?” the girl pouts as the other giggled at her childish behavior.

“Soon…”


“Are we there yet?”

“Soon…”

“But you said that just now too.”

“Ya… but you see…” Ai swirled around gracefully to face the toddler before taking both her hands gently into hers as she continues to lead the way in a backward manner.

“The ‘just now’ you were referring to…was only just a few seconds ago…” Ai smiled warmly as she tries to coax the restless child like how a nursery teacher does before giving her a pat on the head.

“But you said ‘soon’.” the brat whined. The Princess shakes her head in amusement at her companion’s willfulness.

“But I didn’t say how soon it might be.” the raven taps the tot’s nose with her finger and chuckled when the girl sneezes.

“Bless you…”

“But……you didn’t state how not soon it might be too.” the stubborn child was just being unreasonably cute at the moment as she countered back while rubbing her nose.

“Why so grumpy? Stop rubbing…” Ai scolded softly as she hold hostage of the hand that was rubbing the already redden nose excessively.

“You wouldn’t tell me where we’re heading to.” the younger girl accused half heartedly

“Brat…” the Princess pinches her nose.

“What?” yet to let go of her nose, Ai grinned at Risa’s slightly muffled voice.

“You know what it is……You’re making the walk much longer than it’s supposed to be…” she smacks Risa lightly across her arm and pouts.

Indeed, Risa knew what was going on but had just fake ignorant. As usual. But even so, Ai was playing along too.

The moment Ai had led her into the unknown part of the forest, she realized that the whole area was actually a huge dimension gateway.

Destination? It really depends on individual.

Gateway can be a very convenient form of “transport” from location to location that are within its’ channels covering miles within seconds but of course there are drawbacks to it.

Within the gateway, it is a big illusional dimension with neither appropriate route nor way to the destination. Every trail, pathways, bends or junctions are just random obstacles to hinder and confuse the traveler. Turning your head back to check might not guaranty that it will be the same scenery as before, hence backtracking is rather useless as well. Getting lost is just normal. One might even walk around in circles for days, even months or worst, never discover the way out if not careful.

Users had to be clear of the exact destination and so, their spiritual energy will eventually weave a way to the appropriate exit. Distances between the locations are very much dependence on the users’ energy and concentration level. Concentrate to focus on the desired end and energy would act as an unseen force to move towards the goal.

Save much precious time for the capable ones while those not, good luck and god bless it will be.

Question: Risa does not know where she is heading to, does she?

Even so with ones unsure of their way, the gateway is made such that as long as one member of the party is definite of the location, the rest would just have to follow.


Hence, in the cute couple situation,

1.   Energy - definitely was out of the question. So they should have been there pretty fast.
2.   Unclear Destination - how possibly could the Princess be even lost on her own grounds?

So…why the delay?

Thanks to a certain brat, they had been walking across the same area over and over again for nth time.

Following? Wasn’t the brat doing that all along? She was, but just on the physical level. Spiritually, she had been denying the lead, hence the drawback. Even though they were moving nearer and nearer to the "exit”, but at a turtle pace since one force was moving on while the other refuses to.


“Don’t you wanna spend more time with me?” the brunette pulls the raven in closer and drops a chaste kiss on those cute lips to remove the pout before sweetly touching her still slightly red nose against the other.

“I…wanna show you something though.” A soft cute whisper was all she needs to convey the message due to their proximity.

“So secretive?”

“Hmm” an adorable determined look from the Princess and Risa was sure the ring around the raven’s neck is currently doing a fine job capturing the cute sight.

“All the better for the surprise. I love surprises! Let’s go!” seizing the older girl’s hand, the younger made a dash ahead, causing the girl to shriek as she almost tripped over her own footing, trying to keep up with the brat.

Recovering from the initial shock, a second one sets in as she realized she was giggling and screaming like a little girl. She thought she had lost that part of her long ago. Growing up in the palace is just “out of the ordinary”.

Ai was sure she had the brightest smile plastered on her face as mused at how agile yet gracefully the girl was as she weaved through the maze of greens effortlessly, tugging her like an excited child, eager to usher the way towards the showcase with the toy she had her eyes on.

Question again: Risa still does not know where they are heading to, does she?

Nope, she doesn’t but as long as the Princess is there with her, no matter which direction she runs to or which path she takes at a crossroad, they will still eventually end up at the desired location of the one leading, spiritually.

In another words, the brat is just having senseless fun running around.


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“No………” one of the cuties not far behind the couple sighed, watching helplessly as her master moved swiftly through the vast greenery before she lost sight of her.

It’s not that she wasn’t fast enough and even in her current state, she was sure if she tried hard enough, she could catch up with them. But……
 
“Now, how am I gonna get out of here?” she whined as she tugged gingerly on the napping kit that she was piggybacking to secure her closer to her before she slips further.

Even though the kitten is considerably light but the puppy couldn’t help but start to feel the slight existent of her weight since she had been dutifully following her master, hence she herself had pretty much too covered miles of redundant road.

Apparently after the session back at the waterfall, the kitten was reduced to such a jello state that the puppy had to piggyback her when their masters started moving off. From the moment she was up on her back, the kitten was so self-conscious that she buries her head against the side of her neck and refuses to lift her head up even for the slightest moment.

Not even Ai could coax her into it this time round.

Of course, Risa would not miss the chance to poke fun of the seemingly nasty kitten.

“Oh my…~”

Upon hearing the mocking tone, Reina had cringed and her grasping hold on her was almost of a desperate one, so much so that she could almost feel the tip of those razor sharp claws pressing in onto her shoulder blades.

An overflowing surge of protectiveness engulfed the older girl when the distressed purring was made ever so lightly just for her ears as the younger burrowed deeper into the hiding place (aka her neck). Eri knew the quivering kitten was close to tear but had kept the little control left in place with her ego.

“Ar……ar……nevermind…let’s get going, shall we? Haha…~”

Indeed, the puppy was not exaggerating when she gave her words to the kitten. Just a glare, the brat had backed off with an awkward laughter, leaving the cute couple alone.

Risa is her master and her, being her pet, the above situation should have never been possible but Eri is just one fortunate puppy with a great master that not only takes good care of her but also taught her about her rights in being a person. Technically, she is not one but she was told too that she is not just a mere house pet as well. Never was there once she was forced to oblige into something that she wasn’t willing to and was grateful to have been given such privileges.

Sighing again, the puppy seeks for a shady spot. Afterall, more walking is not going to get them anywhere as well. Best option was to awaken the kitten but she rather go for the second best which was to wait for her to get up instead. The third choice, which is their masters, is totally out of the question.

While she was about to move to the selected spot, the kitten stirred. Stopping in her track, Eri turned her head to observe the slightly frowning face fondly before brushing her nose against the kitten’s forehead to smoothen out those frowns, hoping that she will fall back into yet another deep slumber, even, in their current situation.

But apparently, the kitten had had enough rest and the puppy grinned as she watches the adorable kitten sluggishly rubbed her eyes before letting out some endearingly short lazy purrs.

Yet to open her eyes, Eri nudged Reina’s cheek gently. Almost immediately, the kitten returned the affection too by brushing her cheek against hers and gradually, she attempted to open her eyes but only to squeeze them shut again and groans. It took the girl awhile before her cat-eyes adjusted to the brightness and finally focused to find a slivery one gazing into hers. Her vision loses focus again when the older leans in for a peck on her lips.

“Morning, Tigerrrrrr…”

The feline giggled at the puppy dorky-ness and yawned, revealing her short cute fangs before proceeding to raise both her hands up for a good stretch, seemingly forgotten that she now, was piggybacked by the girl. Reina let out a scream from the sudden lost of balance and Eri had jerked forward in a reflexive move to pull the girl back against her again.

Clearly now, the kitten is fully awake as she smacks the laughing girl.

“What are we doing in the gateway?” the girl had finally starts to notice the different in her surroundings.

 “No idea. I was just following… and then suddenly, Gaki-san started running along with Ai-chan and…… I lost them…” the puppy drops her ears and whines as she points to the spot where their masters had disappeared to.

“How long have you been wondering in circles?? And you didn’t wake me up for it?”

“No…no… It hasn’t been long…they just took off awhile ago…and you were so sounded asleep……so….I…ar…”

“Then, am I that heavy?” Reina pouts. She knew that it should take much more than short walks to wear that slightest bit out of the hyperactive puppy.

“No! Not at all…It’s just that…Gaki-san had been playing around and so, we have been walking around in here for more than an hour or so?”

“What?!” arching an eyebrow in surprise, Reina motioned for Eri to let her down.

“Nah…It’s okay…I……kinda like it like this.” the puppy smiled sheepishly.

“But……”

“Let’s get out of here… shall we? I’m getting sick of the same scenery over and over again.” the cute childish tone from Eri cuts her off and Reina screamed again from the sudden move as Eri turned them around swiftly before speeding off in the direction absolutely opposite from where their masters had been last seen heading to.

“Who do you think might arrive first? I’m a much better runner than Gaki-san! Plus, you’re definitely much lighter than Ai-chan to be moved around!” Reina giggled yet again at the irony of the adorkable puppy’s mischievousness. In normal circumstances, having to run in the totally opposite direction from the ones they are perusing and questioning the above, it would have been odd but since direction is the least of worries in this place, it only adds on to the humor.

Leaning forward with an arm around the puppy’s neck from behind, Reina points a finger straight out ahead with a determined look…

“CHARGE!”


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:mon innocent:

I hope....no one got lost in the gateway part too.. can be pretty confusing.. LOL~

Please Vote...for... the cutest couple in Esmerelda! <- *points at poll on the top*

[Trying the poll system] XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on February 16, 2010, 04:32:32 PM
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Please Vote...for... who is the cutest couple in Esmerelda!
me and you  :wub:
 :lol: :lol: :lol:

definitely aichan and gakisan!!!XD
i love how they tease each other..
TanaKame is cute too, but i prefer their owner..it's too much of teaser and rabu rabu..XD


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“Don’t you wanna spend more time with me?” the brunette pulls the raven in closer and drops a chaste kiss on those cute lips to remove the pout before sweetly touching her still slightly red nose against the other.
YES!I WANT I WANT!!  :lol:
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet :wub:

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Question again: Risa still does not know where they are heading to, does she?

Nope, she doesn’t but as long as the Princess is there with her, no matter which direction she runs to or which path she takes at a crossroad, they will still eventually end up at the desired location of the one leading, spiritually.
i really love this line..i dont know why.. :)


edit: after i reply, i saw the poll at the top..
and i laugh cause we have the same mindset..
i never expect u to include us inside..LOL
now, how should i vote..omg!
i will vote once i decide btw takagaki and we 2.. :nervous
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 16, 2010, 06:14:32 PM
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- ^ LOL... Suddenly... energizer's adv pops into my mind.. and then there hops by the ebil Pink rabbit (K), introducing AAbatt to me.. LOL!
I can so picture that! LOL

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*Throws C, K and Trey-Trey*
Aaaa....  :on blackhole:


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“Are we there yet?”
What an impatient brat  XD

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the raven taps the tot’s nose with her finger and chuckled when the girl sneezes.
That's just so cute!

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an adorable determined look from the Princess and Risa was sure the ring around the raven’s neck is currently doing a fine job capturing the cute sight.
I can't help but think the ring was something like that sphere thing in Final Fantasy X/X-2.

Eri piggybacking Reina  :heart:

Reina was adorable and it's like TanaKame role had been reversed in a way, with Eri being more aggressive and protective.

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“Morning, Tigerrrrrr…”
:D

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“CHARGE!”
Wooo!! Such and adorable couple they are  :nya:  *sighing contentedly*
Thanks, this update is just in time when I need some TanaKame awesomeness  :grin:

I’m sorry I didn’t vote you and and AA because there’s TanaKame and I can’t help it  :nervous
But let me say it again, you two are cute!  ;)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kuro808 on February 16, 2010, 06:16:16 PM
takagaki +1,000

The takagaki moments always get to me at a certain point and this was about it...  :lol: that's all for now

/me  thinks about updating stories but decides to wait for a better time
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 17, 2010, 12:31:20 AM
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*search around messy room.....*
:D
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*Throws shirts*
:grin:
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*Throws jeans*
XD
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*Throws underwear*
:twisted:  :lol:

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*Throws C, K and Trey-Trey*
:shocked

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AH! Baby Sticky Tree! Not what i'm looking for...but i haven't seen you for awhile :(
:lol:  rnd-sama, are you not fully charged yet?  :D

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*Keeps AAbatt in pocket*
:roll:




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“The ‘just now’ you were referring to…was only just a few seconds ago…”
Damn  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Indeed, Risa knew what was going on but had just fake ignorant. As usual. But even so, Ai was playing along too.
Perfect combination  :D

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One might even walk around in circles for days, even months or worst, never discover the way out if not careful.
Sounds scary

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Question: Risa does not know where she is heading to, does she?
:yep:  XD

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Even so with ones unsure of their way, the gateway is made such that as long as one member of the party is definite of the location, the rest would just have to follow.
Oh... but it would be nice if she gets lost and Ai would be frantically looking for her and gets lost too in the process  :twisted:

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So…why the delay?
I have a very wild guess  :twisted:

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Thanks to a certain brat, they had been walking across the same area over and over again for nth time.
Oh, my guess was wrong... Ai's lost too.?.  :grin:

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“Hmm” an adorable determined look from the Princess and Risa was sure the ring around the raven’s neck is currently doing a fine job capturing the cute sight.
I so want that thing  :whip:

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Recovering from the initial shock, a second one sets in as she realized she was giggling and screaming like a little girl.
I'd love to see them doing that irl  :heart:

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Question again: Risa still does not know where they are heading to, does she?
lolz

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In another words, the brat is just having senseless fun running around.
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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“No………” one of the cuties not far behind the couple sighed, watching helplessly as her master moved swiftly through the vast greenery before she lost sight of her.
Stalkers  :w00t:

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“Now, how am I gonna get out of here?”
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Not even Ai could coax her into it this time round.
Comfortable much  :D

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Upon hearing the mocking tone, Reina had cringed and her grasping hold on her was almost of a desperate one, so much so that she could almost feel the tip of those razor sharp claws pressing in onto her shoulder blades.
Ouches... poor shoulders  XD

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Indeed, the puppy was not exaggerating when she gave her words to the kitten. Just a glare, the brat had backed off with an awkward laughter, leaving the cute couple alone.
Knight in a shining fur  :yep:

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But apparently, the kitten had had enough rest and the puppy grinned as she watches the adorable kitten sluggishly rubbed her eyes before letting out some endearingly short lazy purrs.
:wub:  :wub:  :wub:

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Clearly now, the kitten is fully awake as she smacks the laughing girl.
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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Leaning forward with an arm around the puppy’s neck from behind, Reina points a finger straight out ahead with a determined look…

“CHARGE!”
:shocked  :shocked  :shocked
 :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:
 :mon fyeah:  :mon fyeah:  :mon fyeah:

Me wanna read more  :cow:  :cow:  :cow:   like in not so many days and nights  :cow:  :cow:  :cow: like tonight or tomorrow maybe  :mon pray2:  :D




I exercised my right to vote... guess who?  :twisted:  XD



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Bishop NI
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:shock: How did you know?! LOL!
Been there, done that kind of thing  :D

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- LOL.. ya.. and after that.. you will barely have a hand anymore.. lol
XD



C
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*pats K's head* sorry to make you go 'Arg'
:(  :D  :P

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Okay, I take back my sorry  XD
Arg. You are so hard to crack  :smhid but I'm not surrendering  :twisted:

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She's ebil powered  XD
:shocked   :w00t:   :mon fyeah:  me likes the sound of it    :mon mischief:

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New page, gomen  :mon sweat:
Tsk tsk tsk   :P



BB NI
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- ^ LOL... Suddenly... energizer's adv pops into my mind.. and then there hops by the ebil Pink rabbit (K), introducing AAbatt to me.. LOL!
lol me too when I read C's comment  XD lol ebil Pink rabbit  XD


HAPPY V Day darling  :heart: :heart: :wub: :wub:

Love ya forever  :heart: :heart: :heart:

 :lol: :lol: :lol:
Did you know that you're the only one she greeted on V Day?   :roll:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 17, 2010, 05:08:06 PM
@ Ebil Powered K
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Knight in a shining fur  :yep:
XD

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I exercised my right to vote... guess who?  :twisted:  XD
Did you vote for Bishop and AA?

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Arg. You are so hard to crack  :smhid but I'm not surrendering  :twisted:
Is this about the visual thing? Then I'm sorry I'm stubborn LOL

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She's ebil powered  XD
:shocked   :w00t:   :mon fyeah:  me likes the sound of it    :mon mischief:
:lol:

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Tsk tsk tsk   :P
:nervous  what can I say? It just kinda happen   :sweatdrop:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 17, 2010, 05:23:12 PM
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Ebil Powered K
XD

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Knight in a shining fur  :yep:
XD
:yep: Nice eh?  XD

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Did you vote for Bishop and AA?
Who else  :lol: I love TakaGaki and TanaKame but I love GirlFriends more  :D wait let me think of a good name for them  :mon dunno:

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Is this about the visual thing? Then I'm sorry I'm stubborn LOL
I'm stubbornER  :twisted:

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She's ebil powered  XD
:shocked   :w00t:   :mon fyeah:  me likes the sound of it    :mon mischief:
:lol:
:P

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:nervous  what can I say? It just kinda happen   :sweatdrop:
:yep:  :lol:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 17, 2010, 06:47:52 PM
Hey Girl,

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“Don’t you wanna spend more time with me?” the brunette pulls the raven in closer and drops a chaste kiss on those cute lips to remove the pout before sweetly touching her still slightly red nose against the other.
YES!I WANT I WANT!! :lol:
- Don't you wanna spend more time with me?  :P

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Question again: Risa still does not know where they are heading to, does she?

Nope, she doesn’t but as long as the Princess is there with her, no matter which direction she runs to or which path she takes at a crossroad, they will still eventually end up at the desired location of the one leading, spiritually.
i really love this line..i dont know why..  :)
- Hmmm... After you mentioned it, I realized it's quite meaning in a way... I just wrote it unknowingly  :oops:

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edit: after i reply, i saw the poll at the top..
and i laugh cause we have the same mindset..
i never expect u to include us inside..LOL
now, how should i vote..omg!
i will vote once i decide btw takagaki and we 2.. :nervous
- Glad that it made you laugh~ XD At first when you commented, i thought you already had seen it..hence the reply.. Haha... So..the edit you made, made me laugh too.. LOL~ I'll sing for you if you vote correctly :P

@C:
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- ^ LOL... Suddenly... energizer's adv pops into my mind.. and then there hops by the ebil Pink rabbit (K), introducing AAbatt to me.. LOL!
I can so picture that! LOL
- The pink rabbit have already looked ebil to me! Now i know why! It was hiding a pair of curving horns!  :lol:

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an adorable determined look from the Princess and Risa was sure the ring around the raven’s neck is currently doing a fine job capturing the cute sight.
I can't help but think the ring was something like that sphere thing in Final Fantasy X/X-2.
- What sphere? i have not been playing FF since FF9 :( lol I'm so outdated with my fav game...

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Eri piggybacking Reina :heart:
- i thought it was cute too... XD

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Reina was adorable and it's like TanaKame role had been reversed in a way, with Eri being more aggressive and protective.
- LOL~ it seems like so... I just always see Reina as a cute individual that puts up a strong front to everyone but turns into a adorable little girl when there is someone she can rely on.. I saw on their Aloha DVD 3(I think so).. she was so afraid to swim in the deep pool (she said that she can't swim very well but they had safety vest on) with the dolphins that she needed Aika and Risa to accompany to swim across the pool...and apparently was afraid to touch the dolphins as well.. haha.. As for Eri...dorky people are usually very unpredictable.. LOL! And anyway.. Eri had came out of her shell long ago..not much of the shy turtle like before...she's full of confident now... XD

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I’m sorry I didn’t vote you and and AA because there’s TanaKame and I can’t help it  :nervous
But let me say it again, you two are cute!  ;)
- LOL~ Thanks? XD

@Kuro-kun: You didn't like TakaGaki??  :? Lol

@Ebil powered K:
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Indeed, Risa knew what was going on but had just fake ignorant. As usual. But even so, Ai was playing along too.
Perfect combination  :D
- Indeed they are! XD

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One might even walk around in circles for days, even months or worst, never discover the way out if not careful.
Sounds scary
- Maybe i should throw you in there someday!  :P

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Oh... but it would be nice if she gets lost and Ai would be frantically looking for her and gets lost too in the process 
- Seems like a nice idea for a chapter.... :huhuh LOL~

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So…why the delay?
I have a very wild guess  :twisted:
- Told you i was innocent!  XD

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Thanks to a certain brat, they had been walking across the same area over and over again for nth time.
Oh, my guess was wrong... Ai's lost too.?.  :grin:
- Nope, she's just playing along~ XD

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Indeed, the puppy was not exaggerating when she gave her words to the kitten. Just a glare, the brat had backed off with an awkward laughter, leaving the cute couple alone.
Knight in a shining fur :yep:
  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

I'll try to write faster~ :P I've been very lazy and busy lately... Haha~

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I exercised my right to vote... guess who? :twisted: XD
- ME? lol

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Quote from: alwaysYou on February 14, 2010, 12:59:48 AM
HAPPY V Day darling   :heart: :heart: :wub: :wub:

Love ya forever  :heart: :heart: :heart:

 :lol: :lol: :lol:
 
Did you know that you're the only one she greeted on V Day?   :roll:
- Really?! How did you know?  XD

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Who else  :lol:  I love TakaGaki and TanaKame but I love GirlFriends more  :D  wait let me think of a good name for them  :mon dunno:
- LOL~ What?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on February 18, 2010, 04:10:12 PM
^
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- The pink rabbit have already looked ebil to me! Now i know why! It was hiding a pair of curving horns!  :lol:
:shocked

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@Ebil powered K
:mon mischief:

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- Maybe i should throw you in there someday!  :P
Arg

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I'll try to write faster~ :P I've been very lazy and busy lately... Haha~
I was kidding when I wrote that... but I won't complain if there's an update, say in an hour or so  :twisted:   :P

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I exercised my right to vote... guess who? :twisted: XD
- ME? lol
:yep:  XD

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- Really?! How did you know?  XD
Instinct  XD

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Who else  :lol:  I love TakaGaki and TanaKame but I love GirlFriends more  :D  wait let me think of a good name for them  :mon dunno:
- LOL~ What?
Your Girl mentioned something about dark and mysterious…and the first thing that popped in my head was Sunako Nakahara  XD  so let me ask you, do you like strawberries?  :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 18, 2010, 04:26:26 PM
@ K
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:yep: Nice eh?  XD

:yep: it's funny

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Who else :lol: I love TakaGaki and TanaKame but I love GirlFriends more :D wait let me think of a good name for them :mon dunno:
Really? Go GirlFriends! :cow: :lol:

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I'm stubbornER :twisted:
LOL okay  :monk gboy: --> coz somehow I just thought that your stubbornness was kinda cute XD


@ Bishop
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- The pink rabbit have already looked ebil to me! Now i know why! It was hiding a pair of curving horns!  :lol:
:lol: anyway I noticed you've been giving K different color  XD

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- What sphere? i have not been playing FF since FF9 :( lol I'm so outdated with my fav game...
I don't really remember but If I recall correctly the sphere can be used to record and then play it like a movie. Same, I lost my interest in FF after X2.

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- LOL~ Thanks? XD
You’re welcome?  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: Hart on February 19, 2010, 04:47:05 AM
Wow. I can't believe I haven't read this fic yet.

Gomennasai.  :kneelbow:

I'll comment later once I speed-read thru the chapters (and comments) that are up so far.

:on study:

EDIT: *Phew* I'm all caught up now.

I gotta say this: this is way too sugary for me. I was fine with TakaGaki, but once you added TanaKame into the mix (especially since they're extremely cute shapshifting animals) I was getting light-headed with all this fluff. :dizzy:

I'll patiently wait until you finally drop that bomb you've been holding onto, 'cuz that's when all the fun begins. :twisted:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on February 19, 2010, 01:05:38 PM
YES!!

You updated. I was beginning to think you had abandoned this fic. I'll R&R soon! And the poll was a great idea. I couldn't decide for quite some time. Both or should I say all 3 couples :P were so cute!! :wub:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: badsaints on February 21, 2010, 06:15:46 PM
I wanted to vote for you Sticky. Really! But then, TanaKame tops all other couplings :wub:

Cute chapter. The gateway idea wasn't confusing at all. But where is their destination?

Can't wait for next chapter. But I want more TanaKame!!!!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 28, 2010, 03:38:48 PM
Hello there... I have been happily in lurking mode recently... XD I'm just getting really lazy... Half of me is already in the process of decomposing...releasing some sort of stinky VOCs... along with maggots craw..... Oh well... you got the idea right?  :(

@Ebil powered K::

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Your Girl mentioned something about dark and mysterious…and the first thing that popped in my head was Sunako Nakahara  XD  so let me ask you, do you like strawberries?
I only like them coated with chocolate!  who is Sunako Nakahara???  :?

@C:
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anyway I noticed you've been giving K different color
- YUP~ the one n only pink rabbit~ lol

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I don't really remember but If I recall correctly the sphere can be used to record and then play it like a movie. Same, I lost my interest in FF after X2.
- I still pretty got myself stuck at FF7.. LOL~ OLD but Classic~

@Hart: :D Hello~ NEW reader i have!

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this is way too sugary for me
- XD too sugary in a bad way or good way?

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I was fine with TakaGaki, but once you added TanaKame into the mix (especially since they're extremely cute shapshifting animals) I was getting light-headed with all this fluff.
- *ties string to Hart's leg and flies him along with Kite K and C* XD Anyway..they were heading to a tornado the last time... this time... it shall be a hail storm.  XD

@Hammy: Nope~~ Have not abandon it.. but i'm getting lazy! XD <- Not a good thing...

@Granny: So you voted for the pet in the end? LOL~ I'm having one of those moment in life where you just wanna rot..  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on February 28, 2010, 03:55:50 PM
For e first few lines I got a little confused。Wondering where a toddler appeared from XD

Ahh so it's gonna be a race now eh? Eri is a better runner but Risa got a head start so it's still early to tell who will win. And e puppy carrying the lazy + sleepy kitty on her back the entire time was so sweet! I want a Kame puppy!!! *begs*

What will Risa do to Ai after pulling her along? Something naughty I hope :P

Nooooooo don't get lazy. The readers need you! Go sing more MM songs at the KTV place to get motivation :D
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 28, 2010, 04:06:29 PM
^ LOL~ so.. you have heard of it! come come..lets go sing... I need to start learning my songs~~~~~~ XD

We gonna have dinner soon... hmmm...not very soon... but soon... LOL but anyway... were you informed?

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And e puppy carrying the lazy + sleepy kitty on her back the entire time was so sweet!
- LOL.. Reina being a kitten, laziness is essential~! XD and Eri, the knight in shiny white fur! (LOL... i kinda like how K puts it this way)

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I want a Kame puppy!!! *begs*
- :( If you find one.. please remember to call me!

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What will Risa do to Ai after pulling her along? Something naughty I hope  :P
*gasped* I'm innocent! LOL

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Nooooooo don't get lazy
:( :( I'll tryyyyyyyyyyyyy~!! XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: lil_hamz on February 28, 2010, 04:21:18 PM
I heard about dinner but it's still so far away! I don't even know what I will do the coming week, much less
on that day. I will try to make it.

Learn songs? But you can read the lyrics much better than I can so the singing part will be fine. Just learn the dance XD

Edit: OMG! New page gets!
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: Treykun on March 02, 2010, 07:50:22 PM

Already having time to reply... :mon heh:

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Please Vote...for... the cutest couple in Esmerelda! <- *points at poll on the top*

:mon dunno:

...... Well TakaGaki.....

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Nope, she doesn’t but as long as the Princess is there with her, no matter which direction she runs to or which path she takes at a crossroad, they will still eventually end up at the desired location of the one leading, spiritually.

POINT FOR THEM!!!!! XD XD :P

........ But TanaKame.....

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“Morning, Tigerrrrrr…”

XD XD XD Two points....

....... And you two.......

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*Keeps AAbatt in pocket*

:lol: Adorable... XD Three points!

BUT!!

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*Throws C, K and Trey-Trey*

Oh yeah?! Minus FOUR points!!

So TanaKame wins my vote! :mon blblbl:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on March 06, 2010, 08:11:20 AM
 :mon hi:

:byebye:

 :P



PS: Update  :pleeease:   XD  XD  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on March 11, 2010, 04:05:20 PM
 :gmon ringu:

HELLO~

Nope, I have not abandoned the fic...Just~ Too busy.... :(

*prayingPayincrementpayIncrementpraying* LOL!


@Hammy: NOW~ one more week to dinner! XD Well~....I can read the lyrics....if only they were not jumping that fast! Lol~ I've been trying to kill myself recently with Ayumi's song.. XD

@Trey-trey!  :monk gboy: <- I miss doing this to you! :( :

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So TanaKame wins my vote!  :mon blblbl:
   - I already expected this from the start :P you're a extreme Tanakame-ist~ XD but...i'm not complaining.. I think they are cute too~ :P

@Ebil-powered K:  :mon hi: Sorry :(


*PULL on KITE K*

K~ U're heading towards a vortex!



:mon dive:


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: cogi_yoshi on March 14, 2010, 12:42:09 AM
YEEE!YY!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:
my vote made TanaKAme in the lead!!! WOOT!!!!

ahahahaha..anyways...gaaahH!!!!all the previous talk about Nakazawa and something big going to happen in Esmeralda...was being forgotten by the Takagaki and Tanakame fluffiness,!!!! more more MORE!!!!:twothumbs
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on March 27, 2010, 11:20:26 AM
BISHOP NI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Was there, by any chance, a hidden camera during the Girlfriends first encounter.?. I so wanna see  :pleeease:  :pleeease:  :pleeease: I'd even kill a poor cockroach for a moving visual!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   :farofflook:  :farofflook:  :farofflook:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: stefy on March 27, 2010, 03:22:41 PM
^Krisz, sad to say.. No visuals.. Maybe I can scheme up a plan for tt next time, but you'll have to do better then killing a lousy cockroach! XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on March 27, 2010, 03:34:32 PM
How about killing a magnificent flying cockroach  :grin:  :grin:  :grin:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on March 27, 2010, 04:56:57 PM
OH~ It popped to the top again! LOL~

Ebil powered K: MY GOD~ where did you even get the information from?! were you stalking us or something?

AND NO! Dead or alive...I don't want a cockroach near me! You can keep them.. LOL~

OHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh well... I became like the target paper of the day or something? Got teased endlessly.. :( SHY OK! XD

Stefy!: o.O what are you gonna do to me?
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: alwaysYou on March 27, 2010, 05:18:36 PM
OHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh well... I became like the target paper of the day or something? Got teased endlessly.. :( SHY OK! XD
before you reach, they start it already :lol:
the tease just go on before you reach and after i go.. :lol:

and after the meeting yesterday, i finally decide which pair to choose in this poll..sorry AiGaki  :lol:

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: badsaints on March 27, 2010, 06:28:48 PM
LOL Girl, have to admit you were fun to tease :lol:

Hey k, next time we'll give you a damn good visual :twisted:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: stefy on March 27, 2010, 07:23:31 PM
Yea we teased your girl quite horridly, I almost feel very bad about it.. Hmm what to do to you? duno yet.. Haven't thought much about it. Well you'll find out next time we meet I guess? Baddie and me will think of something, don't worry (right baddie?) :)
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on March 27, 2010, 08:45:56 PM
Bishop NI
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MY GOD~ where did you even get the information from?! were you stalking us or something?
I'm not telling lol

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AND NO! Dead or alive...I don't want a cockroach near me! You can keep them.. LOL~
*Gathers a lot of roaches* <-- for future usage  XD  never know when they're useful  :twisted:

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OHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh well... I became like the target paper of the day or something? Got teased endlessly.. :( SHY OK! XD
I so wanna see!!!!!!! so that I can laugh more  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted:  I'm sure it's fun to watch the awkward atmosphere  XD


AABatt
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and after the meeting yesterday, i finally decide which pair to choose in this poll..sorry AiGaki  :lol:
No wonder it has now 4 votes  :D but a little while ago it had only 2, so who's the other one... Stefy.?. baddie.?.  :D


baddie
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Hey k, next time we'll give you a damn good visual :twisted:
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t: Can't wait!!!!  Please let them not know if possible  :twisted:  oh dear  XD


Stefy
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Well you'll find out next time we meet I guess? Baddie and me will think of something, don't worry (right baddie?) :)
I sense something good from this one  :twisted:  XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on March 28, 2010, 09:44:34 AM
Hey Girl,

LOL~ I won myself a vote! YOU gave up on AI~!

I realized i asked if the atmosphere was weird...the weird i was referring to was like... maybe really silent or awkward..but it seems to be the teasing type of weird atmosphere and it only got worst when i joined~ LOL~ XD Oh well.. At least I saved you from being the main target..~ I was like a small(in terms of size..XD) red bull's eye..

Mum~: LOL~ What had you girls done to her?

Stefy: o.O ^Look at above question. LOL.. Why does it that i had a feeling that the next meeting is gonna be like one big set up?

Ebil Powered K:
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I'm not telling lol
- It's obvious! It only can be one person!

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*Gathers a lot of roaches* <-- for future usage XD
*Holds slipper in hand and wears heavy duty safety boots* BRING IT ON! LOL~

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I'm sure it's fun to watch the awkward atmosphere XD
:( You're so ebil~

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No wonder it has now 4 votes
There were 2 before that? who was it? You and?

 :mon bat:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kawaii beam on March 28, 2010, 10:24:48 PM
*pops out of lurker rock*when will u upudate~XD*realy wants to know what happens next*
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kRisZ on March 29, 2010, 04:38:36 AM
Bishop NI
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It's obvious! It only can be one person!
Hmmm...  :mon dunno:  Who could that be?  :P

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*Holds slipper in hand and wears heavy duty safety boots* BRING IT ON! LOL~
*Takes bazooka and loads the crawling roaches*  :twisted:  :twisted:  :twisted: okay that was ewww  :D

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:( You're so ebil~
I know  :grin:

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There were 2 before that? who was it? You and?
One’s mine, the other... no idea... you now have four wotas  XD
 
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: amEthystx on March 29, 2010, 10:10:52 AM
@ kawaii beam: AR HA! I managed to lure one lurker out from my inactiveness in updating. XD I'm currently really busy now :( but i'll find time if i can.. to write again..

A little confession to make... I almost forgot what the next part of the story was.. SERIOUS. LOL. I was hmmmm.... oh ya... where are they heading to?? ar.... waterfall? no..they just left there.. then i panic~ haha...

LUCKY I manage to dig that little notepad with some notes out XD

But anyway~~ thanks for reading! haha :)

@ ebil powered K:
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Who could that be?
lalalalalala~

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*Takes bazooka and loads the crawling roaches*
You wouldn't even dare to load it.. they will be crawling around..... down your arms... and....  :on freeze:

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One’s mine, the other... no idea... you now have four wotas 
- I don't think i cast my vote yet.. lol.. i wonder...  :mon dunno:
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: kawaii beam on March 29, 2010, 03:54:29 PM
aww dont worry! X3 take ur time^^ that happens to me alot too....and i dont take notes! XDD i just store it in my brain XD and that's how i loose half of them XD
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ Chapter 15 - Gateway (16/02) ]
Post by: aussie on June 21, 2010, 04:58:18 AM
I'm guessing this story is on hiatus for now?  :( I miss the kitty and puppy interactions.


Title: Re: Esmerelda [ C.15-Gateway (16/02) - On hold (Writer's note) ]
Post by: amEthystx on June 22, 2010, 08:44:18 AM
Hey all,

Yup~ i think it's positive this story is on hold.. sorry :(

Previously was due to tight working schedules, but now, a certain black kitten is taking up most of my time~  XD Haha.. My friend found her injured and i'd adopted it.

anyway~ can anyone tell me what went wrong with my content page? o.O <- IT idiot
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ C.15-Gateway (16/02) - On hold (Writer's note) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 16, 2011, 08:36:30 PM
Bump!

So...I was planning to re-read this fic of yours but ended reading the whole thread just because the comment were too fun to pass  :lol:
You still busy with work and the SuperLunchBoy? Is there any hope for update?  :prayers: (say yes, say yes)
XD
No pressure btw, I had fun re-reading this.
 :mon bye:

Edit: Oh, wow. Getz? lol
Title: Re: Esmerelda [ C.15-Gateway (16/02) - On hold (Writer's note) ]
Post by: amEthystx on February 18, 2011, 05:34:39 PM
XD

Re-reading!? Haha. Oh man~ It's so embarrassing! I don't know why.. haha.. but it is~

Oh my~ I need to go dig the notebook that i had. hmmmmmmmmmmm... might take some time though.. haha. I don't promise anything~ yet~ THOUGH. you made me start writing a one shot for the time being. but it probably might take some time before it's up. I write in turtle speed. haha

Title: Re: Esmerelda [ C.15-Gateway (16/02) - On hold (Writer's note) ]
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on February 18, 2011, 05:44:31 PM
^ Hey, you're fic is great so I couldn't resist rereading it.

Wooo! I'm excited to hear that you're writing a 1-shot. Don't worry about the speed of writing, like I said no pressure ;)