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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: moekare on August 02, 2011, 07:15:02 AM
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Hello all............ I read all of your fics and they are all great! :farofflook: I feel like I want to make one, and of course it is about my fav pairing, AtsuMina :shy2: :shy2:
But I wonder if my fic is good or not :mon cry:
and I am sorry if my english is not good.. :mon pick:
Please enjoy :mon whimper:
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Chapter 1
‘That Atsuko, just don’t get too close to her. She’s too perfect and I don’t think she needs a friend too.’
‘Why does she always be the center? Is she that good? I don’t think so.’
‘Atsuko again? Why do we always have her as the top news?’
‘Euh… I don’t ever once think about to be her friend.’
‘Just leave her alone.’
Well. I have been used to something like that. Everyday, everytime, same topics even new topics, I always be the main topic here. From that day when Akip announced I was the center girl, every girls started to ignore my existence. Pretend not seeing me. Pretend I am not there, practicing with them. But I’ve been used to it. I keep practicing myself, I’ll do my best. I don’t want to make fans disappointed with my performance. So that I am not gonna lose to something like this. I am not weak.
But she is different. She is so different… She cares with me. If I am making a mistake in dancing, she always helps me. She also gives me some advices as well, and she doesn’t mind to accompany me practice until late at night. She is good person.
“Acchan…..” Yeah. She is the only one who calls me ‘Acchan’. I am happy.
“Yes?” I turn around and put my towel back into my bag.
“Do you have free time after this?”she asked.
“Yes I do. Hmm… Asking for a date?” I am giggling.
“Ow… how come you know?”
“Just guessing.” I smile.
“Nice guessing there…”she smiles. “…would you like to have dinner with me? I am very hungry right now.” said her.
“Fine.” Uwa! I am happy she asks me to go out with her tonight for dinner!
“Okay… I’ll be waiting for you in the front building.” She walked away and left me alone. I smile. Happy! Ouu… Why my heart is beating so fast? I closed my eyes and tried to concentrate with my dancing practice. Yosh~ I continue my practice and finish right at 7 pm. I went to dressing room and changed my cloth. Then I walked outside and she’s already there. Waiting for me… She looked at me and she gave me her bright smile. I smiled and approached her.
“Ready to go now?” She asked.
“Yep. What are we going to have tonight?” We started walking.
“Hmm… whatever you want.”
“No way. You asked me to accompany you coz you were hungry, but why I am the one who have to decide what we are going to eat?”
“Haha… you are funny!”
“What is funny?” Yea~ I am confused here.
“Never mind.” Still smiling.
“So?”
“So?”she repeated.
“What are we going to have tonight?”
“Like I said… Whatever you want Acchan…” She shaked my head then ran away.
“Marichaaaaaaaaan……..!!” I chased her, but couldn’t reach her. She is good runner. Fiuhh…. Its tiring enough.
Yes. She is Mariko Shinoda, but I call her Marichan. She’s the oldest member of AKB48, she’s tall, pretty, and funny. I love her characters. She always makes me smile whenever I feel bad and frustrated. She always be beside me and cheer me up. I can’t imagine my life when she is not around, coz I need her. I need her so much. I can’t be alone here, and I don’t want to be alone.
In the morning…
I wake up at 6 am in the morning. I have photo shoot today and have to be ready at 8 am. When I reach my handphone, there’s email. Quickly I open it.
Hello princess good morning.
Have you woken up? Not yet (^_^)
Haha… Do your best for today
photoshooting okay?
Marichan
I am happy I receive her message now… It is like my energy to run my day. And then I reply it.
(>.<) I just woke up you know.
I am going to prepare now.
Thanks Marichan. Have a nice day.
Acchan
I decide to walk to the studio, since its not so far from my house.
“Good morning.” I greet the staffs there.
“Good morning Acchan…” I heard everybody replies it. I smile and I walk to the chair and put my bag on the table.
“Please change your cloth now. We are going to start the photo shooting.”
“Alright.” I am heading to the dressing room and change my cloth. Well, the cloth is very beautiful. It’s a wedding dress. Ow I love it very much. So beautiful. I go out and have my hair fixed.
“Where is she?” asked one staff.
“She is still not coming.” Answer the other one.
“What? This is her first time to come late!!”
Eh? So I am not alone now? Hmm… I wonder with whom I will do photo shoot today.
“I am sorry I come late!” A sound comes from the entrance. Here she is.
“You are late! Quickly change your cloth now!” She nodded and quickly heading to the dressing room and she changed her dress just like mine. She sits beside me and has her hair fixed.
Hmm… I think I know her. I can’t see her face clearly. Maybe she heard it, then she looked at me. Okay. Surprised.
“Atsuko?”said her.
“Minami?”
“W-why are you here?” Asked her.
“Photo shooting of course.” I said it coldly.
“Oh… right..” She hit her forehead slowly. “…so you are my partner today huh?!” She smiled. But I just stay quite. I don’t look at her, I read fashion magazine there and try to not talk with her.
“Ow… You hate to talk?”
“Not really.”
“So why you don’t answer?”
“I feel I don’t need to.” Silent.
“You are weird.”
“Yeah… everyone knows it.”
“Ehmm…..” She tries to find another topic. “…you know why I come late? Well on the way here, I met obachan. She carried a super big box on her back and then I helped her to carry it. I wondered what was inside coz it was so heavy! After arriving in front of her house, she asked me if I wanted to know what was inside of the box. I said yes, then she opened it, and you know what was inside of the box?? It was just an ordinary rock that she took from somewhere near gas station! She said this rock could change her life and became rich! Uwahahahahahah!!!! Do you believe that? Hahaha” She laughed so hard for some seconds, and I didn’t give her any response. I keep reading the magazine and looks like she’s frustrated. I heard she sighed.
“Don’t you ever smile for once?” Asked her.
“I don’t know.”
“How come you don’t know?”
“I don’t know.”
“Why do you keep saying ‘I don’t know’?”
“Could you please be quite? I am reading here. Tsk…” I higher my tone.
“Okay…okay. Sorry.” Said her with small voice.
The photo shooting is ready to be started. I have to work with this girl, Takahashi Minami. I call her Minami. She is Team A’s captain. Well… She is responsible, a very good person. She is friendly and all members like her. We are in the same team, but we are so rare to talk to each other. She is busy with her dancing practice and other things. She never comes late, I know she’s diligent person, she is very discipline. Actually when she told me about why she came late, I listened to her story. I was impressed. She is kind person same with Marichan. One thing that I don’t like about her. She is really annoying.
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how how how?? :mon whimper: :mon whimper:
I need your comment guys! :hee:
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atsumari first?? :shocked:
but you will make it for atsumina right?
please continue~ :mon inluv:
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atsumari? noooooooooooo! :thumbdown:marichan is only for miichan! and atsuko is only for minami!
she said minami is annoying? am i seeing it right? :shocked :shocked
please continue! :thumbsup
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Thank you for your comments guys :nya: :nya:
Oo... calm down. Atsumari is just the beginning. :tama-heart: you have to follow my fic so that you know what will happen next! :wahaha: :wahaha:
next chapter will be great!! :on GJ:
I am still working for it guys.... so please wait! :mon dance: :mon dance:
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This is AtsuMina right??? :dunno:
Takamina is annoying?? this gonna be interesting... :glasses:
please update soon... :hee:
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We'll be waiting for your next update! :on GJ:
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:shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked something in teresting here~
hurry updateeeeee~ :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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Wooww a good fic! Atsumari? where's the Atsumina kekeke, waiting for your update :roll:
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MoeKare is here :cow: :cow: this is _jakkechan btw!! XD
and your story is Interesting. I'll be waiting for your future updates!!
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@crazywota : I know its you. :ptam-shy: I am glad you enjoy reading my fics :hee:
Hee?? Where is AtsuMina ?? :err: Hmm.... ok guys I don't want to expose it here :stuffed: read and you will find. :wahaha:
Btw thank you so much for commenting guys. Here I finished making the 2nd chapter :sweat:. I hope you enjoy it :thumbsup
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Chapter 2
Today’s photo shoot has finished. I change my cloth and have to go to practice now. I send Marichan message.
Marichan, I’ve done my photo shoot
for today. I am heading to theater now.
Acchan
When I am about to walk, someone grab my hand.
“A~tsuko.” I know this voice. I turn back and get this little captain there. What is she doing?
“Let go.” I swing my hand.
“Wow… Easy, easy! I am not doing anything.”
“Why are you grabbing my hand?”
“I know you are going to theater now. Why we don’t go together? It is better than going alone.” She said.
“No thanks.”
“Why? I am going to the theater too…”
“I said thanks. I am going alone, and you are going alone as well.” I start walking. I heard some foot steps. She’s following me.
“Didn’t I tell you I am going alone?”
“Yes you did.”
“So why did you keep following me?”
“I didn’t follow you Atsuko.”
“So what are you doing then? You walked behind me and you say you are not following me… Then what is that?” Okay. She is really annoying.
“I am going to theater as well and this is the only way to get there.” oh my head’s spinning.
“Whatever! Don’t follow me!” I run away. She looks confused and starts walking again.
“Why should I follow you? Hmm…”
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Today we have intensive practice until….late at night. We will have our concert in 3 weeks. So we have to be seriously in practicing, no joking. I am sweat, from head through my body then legs. Honestly speaking, I am very tired. I have danced for some hours without resting but I keep dancing in order to make it perfect. I feel that my foots can’t move well. It hurts. I can’t move freely because of it. Ugh… I also see Marichan is doing her best in dancing. She looks amazing. With her sweat on her body, she looks sexy. Wait! What am I thinking?! Okay, practice, practice, and practice!! Then my eyes come to that little captain. She is also good in dancing. She’s fast and her memory is amazing. She can memorize all of the steps and apply it perfectly. I know she’s tired, I can see it but she still keeps dancing with full energy. It is not only her who does that, but everyone does. But I don’t understand why she is the only one who looks shining? I am shaking my head. What am I thinking about? I am in the middle of practice!!
‘Look at her. She is really annoying. Can you see that how she looks Takamina in that way? What the hell she wants? Does she think she is the best here?’
Okay, here it comes again. But I try to ignore them, even though it’s hurt me much. I just keep dancing and don’t want to be looked as a loser. They don’t know how much I try my best to learn, I don’t even once seeing someone as rival or I am better than them. Because I know, I can’t do anything, and I don’t have any special ability. I don’t even know why that person chose me as the center? Was he blind?
“Well guys. It seems like we’ve not taken any rest yet. Okay, I will give you some times to rest.” said the leader. Everyone starts to spread away. They are all tired and don’t want to miss this precious time. I walk away and sit on the corner. Alone. I see Marichan went with some members, Kojima and Minegishi. Huff… She didn’t greet me even once from the beginning of our practice. I know we are all here don’t have any time to talk but I need her right now. I miss my Marichan. I close my eyes try to remember the time we spent together. At least this could make me feel relax. I smile when I remembered that funny time. When I opened my eyes, I am surprised I see this person right in front of my eyes!
“What are you doing?! You surprised me!” I said with high tone.
“O-ouh…sorry. I didn’t mean to.”
“And then….you are too close!” I push her away. She sits right in front of me.
“Are you sleeping?” asked her.
“None of your business.”
“Hmm…. You should take some rests. I think you should go home now.”
“What do you mean? And why should I? I am fine!” I don’t understand why she asked me to go home.
“I don’t think so. You can still practice tomorrow morning. Today I’ll let you go home and rest.”
“You are so annoying! I said, I am going to stay!” She stays quite and she looks at me. I can tell her eyes show me a care. Somehow I feel she really concerns about me. I look at her but I am not showing my friendly face. She is really annoying.
“Why do you always push yourself so hard? I know you are not okay. You must take a rest. You have to follow my order, I am the one who take responsibility here.” She said with a firm voice. I look away and rub my foot.
“See? Your foot.” DEG! I look at her. Why she knows? “I know your foot is in pain. I noticed it in the middle of our practice.” She moves closer.
“Wh-what are you going to do?” I still confuse. This person, why this person really concern about me that much? Everybody hates me. Why she….why is she so gentle to me? That little captain rubs my foot. She does it gently. I can feel her warm hands touch my skin.
“Your foot is spraining. You have to rest and don’t move so often or it will be more severe.” said her still rubbing my foot. Quickly I pull my foot from her.
“How rude! I don’t even ask you to touch my foot!” said me in high tone. She sighs.
“Well…. I am sorry if I annoy you so much. But I don’t mean to, I do it coz I care. Our concert will be started in some days forward, and I just don’t want you to have any single pain on your body.” DEG! DEG! Arrgghh! What is it? Why my heart is beating so fast? This little captain, I hate her so much!
“Don’t talk anymore!” I get up and walk away. I leave that little captain alone. Who are you by the way? Why do you so concern about me? This is my foot, and the pain, it’s me who feel it. Why should she waste her time just to take care of me? Don’t try to be kind in front of me! I know I can do nothing and everyone praises you every time. I feel embarrass since I am the center girl not her. Why it is not her as the center? So that everybody won’t hate me like what they do know.
After some minutes the practice continue. She directly comes to the front and lead the dance. I am in the middle and my sprain feels hurt even more. Ugh, what should I do? I can’t move with my foot right now. I see Marichan, she’s looking at me. She smiles. Oh finally! Okay, I give her my best smile since we have not greeted each other from the beginning. I see her whisper, “ganbatte” I laugh and smile again. “Thank you. You too.”. She smiles and she turns her gaze. She concentrates and waits for the little captain’s command. Yosh! I feel better now! Thanks Marichan, your smile is enough to me. I will not lose to this small pain I have.
Here it goes. The little captain starts clapping her hands and that is the sign our practice will begin. She starts dancing and all members follow her. I can’t move freely since my foot is in pain. But I try to not give up, I have to not feel the pain. I have to move and show Marichan I can do something! I won’t give up!
And then…. ‘BRUK!’ I fall. I hold my foot and I am moaning in pain. Everybody looks at me. It is the end. I have ruined our practice today.
‘Geezz… what is she doing? Does she look for attention? She should not be here at first. She is just a burden.’
Okay. I heard it again. Ugh, don’t they even know I am really in a pain? Guys, I don’t do it in a purpose. Please, just for once you trust me guys. I am about to cry but someone holds me.
“Are you okay?” I heard this gentle voice. “…you should just go home for resting. Should I walk you home?” she added. I stay quite. I stare at Marichan, and I can she is really worry about me. I shake my head.
“You can’t continue practice with this pain. Okay, I will walk you home now. No more ‘No’.” she said. She helps me get up and embrace me. She helps me take my bag and leave the room.
“Sorry Marichan… I...I’ve ruined your practice.” I said as we sit on the couch.
“No problem. I can continue at home instead.” Ah, since she is good in dancing, I think there should be no problem then. I nod slowly.
“Would you like me to make you a cup of tea?”
“Ah, don’t need. I have to go back to theater now.” You will go now? Please don’t go Marichan. I want you to stay.
“B-but… You’ve just arrived. At least let me make you something to drink.”
“It’s fine Acchan. You should take much rest, okay? I am going now.” She gets up and head to the door. She smiles at me, and then she closes the door. Right. I am alone now.
When I get up and walk to the kitchen, I kinda remind something. Ah, that little captain. Right after I fell, I saw her. Her look was so flat. She didn’t even come to me and helped me up. What was that? Didn’t she just say she cared me? She didn’t want me to have any single pain, right? Well, she was just the same as the other. She just wasted her time and energy to tell something that bullshit. She was totally a liar. Chotto! Why do I keep thinking about her? Did I want her to help me? No! Never! Marichan is enough, I don’t need the other.
Tomorrow morning….
Yes. I feel better now. Hup…hup…hup! I jump for some seconds to make sure my foot is okay. And I ready to go to theater!
“Good morning…” Marichan comes and puts her bag on the table. Everybody replies her greeting. I smile at her as she looks at me. She smiles also, then she approaches me and sit beside me.
“How is your foot?” asked her.
“It’s better now. Thank you.”
“Yokatta…” She smiles again. Alright, my energy bar is getting full! Thanks Marichan you have given me your courage.
“If you still in pain, just don’t push yourself too hard. We don’t have much time for the concert, and if you get injury you will need much time to recover it.” I nod. Then she walks away and talks to the other members. Yosh, I don’t want to trouble Marichan and the other. I have to do my best today and show them I am alright!
Hm? I see the little captain there, alone. When she walks to the front (to start practice) our eyes meet each other. She stops walking. I look at her coldly, I feel little peevish about yesterday. She didn’t even help me at that time. She looks down and avoids me. Then she starts walking again. Huh? What is that just now? How dare she avoid me like that? Without any words? Ugh, Okay then! You succeed to make me hate you more! I get up and ready to start practice.
“Minna otsukaresama deshita!” the leader bows her head. Everybody does the same. And then they all spread away and go home. I walk to the table and take my bag. Then I go to the dressing room and change my cloth. I wonder where is Marichan? I start looking for her and still can’t be found. After some minutes I heard voice from a room. It’s Marichan’s voice. She is talking with…..errr… who is it? I can’t see her face clearly. It is just the two of them, I wonder what they are talking about.
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How? :on freeze: :on freeze:
If it is not good, I...... :mon cry:
Note : Wak! Didn't I write too much AtsuMari? :tantrum:
I RUINED MY OWN FICS! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :mon runcry: :mon runcry:
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Don't tell me that Mariko is a bad person and will talk bad things about Atsuko to her back?
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Oh, I smell something bad will happen between Mariko and Atsuko sooner/later.
And no, you didn't wrote too much Atsumari. Actually more Takacchan scene in here. (I guess.)
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Nooooooo, u doing fine really..... :D
I wanna the next chapter.... Yeeeeaaaaay..... Its really getting interesting. Please continuuuuuueeee~ :)
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Thanks for your comments :heart:
:wahaha: :wahaha:
please don't be mad if I ruin everything :on gay:
@freyatn : :mon huh2:
@AAAice : Fiuh... glad to hear it :mon inluv:
@sorakamiya-san : Thank you..... :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:
Okay, I will do my best to write the next chapter! :mon yeah: :mon yeah:
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Hey moekare XD
things are getting more and more interesting :)
I wonder who Mariko-sama is talking? maybe Takamina?
Update soon
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Where did I've seen you before moekara-san... :dunno:
anyway... your story is really making me curious~~ :hehehe:
update soon~~ :cow:
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You're story is interesting
Poor acchan she has to suffer
Can't wait for next chapter Update soon
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updateeeeeeeeeeeee! :inlove: why is taka avoiding acchan? :cry: :cry: why? :cry:
i need an update again! :thumbsup please update soon!
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Acchan, did you inherit tsundere powers from haruna? LOL. xDDDDD And now Takaminya--na is avoiding you. What is this ;___; I hope you update soon! :3
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@blughise : Hello! Haha.. I decide to write one :on GJ: Please please enjoy my fics :bow:
@flean : wow... did we meet somewhere? :shy2:
@Ninjatigerdemon : thank you! :on lol: I'll try my best to update it as soon as posibble :thumbsup
@khryz0421 & arisa03 : Hmm.. I don't know why :wahaha:
Yosh guys here I am now... sorry for taking so long :mon innocent: Here is the 3rd chapter. Hope you guys will enjoy it :mon dance:
Sorry for my bad english :mon whimper:
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Chapter 3
Who is the person? I am curious…. I move closer to the door and then….
TAP…TAP…TAP…
I have to hide coz I heard voices are approaching me. I hide myself behind the trash bin. It is quite big so I can hide my body behind it. Well, they are Oshima and Kojima. Hmm…. recently they always go home together. I wonder what relationship they have. Sometime I saw them were hugging each other and ^#&%. And now they are holding hands, that Oshima seems so happy. Well, forget it. I have to know with whom Marichan talks inside that room. When I am about to walk, someone calls me. I turn around quickly.
“Could you please to not even once make me surprise!” I said. She is frozen.
“I surprised you? Ow… sorry.” she covered her mouth. “Should I call you once again? So you won’t be surprised?”
“No! Just what is it?” I shout to her as I pull her away. Here we are. Far away from the room. I hope Marichan didn’t hear my shouting. Tsk…
“Ow… you sure are strong. Look, my arms gotten red.” She holds her arms.
“So, why were you calling me?” I ignore that ‘red arm’ part.
“Oh….ehm… what were you doing there? Hmm…. Hiding behind trash bin? Were you playing hide and seek?”
“Just answer my question!” My eyes widen.
“Okay, okay… Sorry. Well…ehm… Can we have something to drink outside?” asked her. I take long breathe. This is my first time meeting someone like her. Okay, be patient.
“I am busy.” I coldly answer.
“Why? What are you going to do? Didn’t we just finish our practice?”
“I said no! Can you leave me alone? I am feeling dizzy!” I rub my head. Then that little captain quickly put her hand on my forehead.
“Are you sick?” asked her with her soft voice. She is so gentle to me. I can feel it from her hands. It is so warm. “Come with me.” she grabs my hand and forces me to follow her. I say I don’t want to go but she is still forcing me. I can’t against her strength. I know she is smaller than me, but she is too strong. I can do nothing except following her.
Okay here we are. At café near theater. She said she would treat me ice cream. We sit on the corner.
“You have to enjoy your time, enjoy the meal, enjoy the ice cream. So that you will feel fresh, that’s why you feel dizzy. You never go out and having conversation like this lately.”
Yap, she’s right. Since our practice for concert I rarely go with Marichan together like before. Ah! Speaking of her, I still don’t know with whom she was in that room?! It is because this annoying person who forcibly take me here. I have to go back now! I get up and want to go back to theater.
“Hey where are you going?” asked her as she also gets up.
“Not your business.”
“Can you at least finish your ice cream? We have not even started our conversation yet.” she sounds disappointed.
“What would you like to talk to me? We are not even friends, aren’t we? I am Maeda Atsuko, the girl without something special, I can do nothing, I am such a fail, not like you! You are good in dancing, you are always being praised by everybody around you, you are leader, you are captain, no one can be like you, you are just too perfect! Why do you waste your time to talk with me? Okay, maybe I am the ace, but no one likes me!! Everybody hates me! Now, just leave me alone!! Do your own business and don’t ever involve in my life again!” when I am about to leave, she holds my hand.
“Just…. LET ME GO!!” I shout to her.
“ATSUKO!!” she shouts me back. I stay quite. “…you are wrong Atsuko.” she lower her tone. I look at her. I am about to cry now. I can’t hold it anymore. Then, I could feel my tears fall. I look down, I don’t want her to see me crying. She approaches me and then she says,
“You are wrong Atsuko. I am not that perfect, I am not that good. I still lack of something. And I still…can’t be a good leader.” I just cry, can not give any response.
“You….you are talented. You surely can do something, Atsuko. Your dancing, your singing, it’s even better than me. I am sad when you said that you were such a fail, and could not do anything. You are totally wrong Atsuko.” I look at her. She smiles.
”Remember yesterday when your foot sprained? You still did your best to dance, you tried to not feel the pain, you kept dancing, didn’t you? What you will call yourself then? A fail? No. It is not a fail. You are doing great. That is your own victory Atsuko. You are such a true idol. I don’t know if I can do the same like what you did. That is awesome you know.” She smiles and strokes my hair. I can feel my tears stop falling. I feel relieve after hearing it.
“W-why are you so kind to me?” I asked as I didn’t see her face. I still look down.
“Is that a question?” she chuckled.
“I don’t know.”
“Haha… Yeah, I am such kind person, right? I don’t know why everybody keeps saying that, though I feel normal.” After hearing that, somehow I don’t want her to say ‘I am kind to anyone’. At that time I just want her to be kind just to me. Just me.
“Yeah since entering AKB we don’t even talk once, though we are in same team.” said her. Well, she’s right. After what everybody thinks about me, I assume all of them are like that except Marichan…
“Hey, please sit.” then I follow what her asks me to do. I sit back.
“How is your foot?” she asked.
“It’s better.” I eat my ice cream. Ehm… delicious.
“When I asked you to go home, why you stayed? And after Mariko-sama told you to, then you easily did it? I don’t get it.” she looks at me so sharp. Looking for a good answer. I feel awkward.
“Y-yeah.. I was falling at that time, I-I didn’t have any choice! So I decided to go home.” she sighs.
“Huff… you know, at that time I wanted to help you, but I don’t want to make you angry. So I think its better if I didn’t make any movement.” so it was like that. I am feeling more relieve now.. I think she was lying, saying she cared but actually it was all lie. But I am happy that she is saying the truth.
“How come I will be mad?” I chuckle.
“Wah!” she looks surprised. I look at her as I eat my ice cream. “Hm?”
“This is the first time I see you smile. Hehe…” she laughs.
“Oh really? I am gonna miss it then…”
“Eh? Why? You don’t want to smile again? or laugh?”
“Kind of….” she finishes her last piece. “…aaaaa!! It is so delicious!” I smile again, and then I see her, she smiles too.
“Why are you smiling?” I asked
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“No. Just…. I am happy when I see your happy face.” she still looks at me and I know my face blushed at the same time. Waa… what I am gonna do?! What is it feeling? Shouldn’t I hate her already? Why…..why I sit here eating ice cream together with this annoying person? Uwaa…!
“….ya know, you look cuter when you smile. I like it.” DEG! I don’t know how to react! She is really straight forward! I feel like wanting to hide my face inside of my bag now!
“W-what are you talking about? Don’t talk about nonsense!” I can’t control my tone. Maybe she knows that I am nervous.
“What? I didn’t talk about nonsense. That is the truth.” oh please stop right now! I don’t want to hear anything from you or I am gonna melted here right now!
“H-hey its hot here! I want to walk outside.” I get up and walk as fast as I can.
“Hoi, wait for me!” she gets up and runs towards me.
“Didn’t you just finish your ice cream? How could you feel hot?”
“So-so what? I just feel hot… Am I wrong?” I walk even faster. She tries to walk beside me.
“Could you walk slower? I want to walk together with you…” she tries to have the same step as mine.
“No way!” I run and leave her behind.
“Hey! Why are you running? You said it’s hot, didn’t you? Hoi!!” she chases after me. I turn back and laugh when I see she runs to me. I keep running as fast as possible so that she can’t reach me. Well that is fun. That is my first time I feel joy. Thanks Minami.
Day by day I pass in theater, practicing for our upcoming concert, and it is the day after tomorrow. Everybody does their best even in practicing. They are sure if they are serious in practicing, their performance will be much better. I do the same. I don’t want to lose here. I don’t want to make fans disappointed, Marichan, and…..Minami. I will show them I could do something, I am not weak, I am not a loser. I am Maeda Atsuko, AKB’s ace and this is what an ace should do right? Even though everybody never looks at me and pretend I am not around, I don’t care. That is not a reason for me to give up, I am strong and I want to be stronger, more and more than this.
We finished our practice so late, and everybody seems tired. They take their bags and then head straightly to the exit. I also take my bag and change my cloth. I see Marichan, I greet her.
“Marichan.” I said as I approach her. She turns back and smiles.
“Oh, hi Acchan…”
“Ehm…. You’re going home now?” asked me. She nods. “Yeah, of course. Why? Do you have something to ask me or what?”
“Ehm….ano…” Actually I want to ask about last day when I heard her voice in a room with someone. I really want to know about it, with whom and what they talked about.
“Marichan…. About last-” I’ve not done my words yet then Minegishi approaches her.
“Mariko, you are so slow. What are you doing?” she holds her hands. DEG! What is she doing with my Marichan? She holds her hands? What? I see their hands are holding each other, I feel my heart ache. I don’t know what to do. Minegishi looks at me with…. hate looking.
“Nee, Why do you talk with that perfect-center-girl, Mariko?” She stays quite.
“I have been waiting for you, but you are too long. I think you have something to do with Takamina, so I decide to look for you, but…. you are wasting your time with her.” I can’t look at them both. I look away as my heart is so hurt. I can’t take any of these kind of words.
“Miichan...” whispered Marichan. I know she is feeling uneasy by her saying something bad about me.
“Okay, we are going now.” said her to Minegishi. Then Marichan looks at me. “I am sorry Acchan. I have to go. We continue it later, okay?” They are leaving now, I heard Minegishi said, ‘What? Acchan? Since when you call her like that?’ ‘Fine, just walk’ Marichan said.
I just only can see her leave with other girl. Marichan… I miss you. I miss you when you walk me home. We never go out since this intensive practice that we have. Once I see you with other girls, I feel a pain in my chest. I can’t cry here! I must hold it! I am not weak! She is Marichan. She is kind to anyone, it doesn’t mean they have special relationship or what. Okay! No more tears.
“Why are you still here?” I heard a voice from my back. I turn back.
“Oh, It’s you…” I heard my voice is…..so weak.
“Let’s go home. Tomorrow morning we have rehearsal for our concert. We must go bed early.” the leader said.
“It is almost 12 am and you said it is early?”
“Wahaa…” she rubs her neck “… okay forget it. Let’s go home together.”
That is my first time I go home with somebody else beside Marichan. On the way home we take mostly same direction, so we walk together and she always tells me the joke, but actually it is a fail joke. But I enjoy it. Looking at her telling me the story still with full energy, I envy her. I want to be someone like her, but I can’t. I don’t have any courage. and also I guess I and Marichan are slowly getting a part. I know she can’t talk to me so easily if the members are around. Maybe she feels uneasy with me if the situation is like that. I am sad when that is true. It means that she wants to talk with me if there is not somebody around. I am alone since very beginning. I don’t have friends, even one.
“From now on, everyday I will walk you home.” said Minami. I look at her. Somehow I feel she could read my mind.
“Huh?” I am raising my eyebrow, confused.
”Isn’t it clear? Everyday I will walk you home like what we do now.” She smiles.
“W-why… It’s so sudden?”
“Sudden? Hmm….. I want to for a long time ago, but at that time you always go home with Mariko-sama.” I still look at her. What did she say just now? She wants to walk me home everyday? Can I trust her? I trust Marichan, but she breaks it. And now this little captain, can I trust her? Or she maybe is just the same with Marichan?
“Don’t trouble yourself. I am not a kid anymore, I can go home myself.”
“Why? I think it will be more interesting if we are going home together? We take same direction, and you won’t be bored when you go home just by yourself. Trust me, two is better than alone.” she keeps talking. I lose my energy to argue with her. Okay, I agree.
“Do what you like.”
“Yatta~” she is so happy with my simple-short words. And then she holds my hand.
DEG! DEG! DEG! My heart is beating so fast, and I blush at the same time.
“Is it okay if I do this to you every time we go home?” she looks at me. I look away, I can’t show her my face gotten pink like peach. I nod. Right after that I feel she holds my hand tightly, like she doesn’t want to lose me.
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Chapter 4
I don’t know why I can’t be mad at her just like what I always do to her before. I feel relax, I feel easy, I can feel no burden on me anymore. Minami helps me to feel it. Her warmness always helps me and never fail. She knows I need someone, she knows when I am in pain, she knows how to cheer me up even it annoys me little, she knows everything. I don’t know if she could read through people’s mind, but I don’t care. I slowly look at her, her face is so happy. Is she happy when she holds my hand? She holds my hand gently and it’s warm. I get blushed again.
“We’ve arrived.” said her as she looks at me. I look at her. She smiles and I reply it with a smile too.
“Thank you… Minami.” she holds my hand tighter and I look at my hand. Then I look at her as our eyes meet. She releases her hand and the situation feels awkward.
DEG! DEG! DEG! I can clearly hear my heart’s beating. Ow… what am I gonna do? Why my heart is beating so fast?! She’s Takahashi Minami, she’s AKB’s leader! What is it feeling? Ugh… eh wait! What If she also hears my heart beating? Oh no! What should I do now?
“O-okay… I am going in.” when I start to walk she calls me. I turn around.
“May I… May I know your phone number?” I look at her with a strange looking.
“Ah! Never mind! I just feel it is easier to communicate with you by phone if we are away. Hahaha… It’s okay.” she forces her self to smile. Then I approach her and take my handphone out of my bag.
“It’s fine.” She is surprised. Then she takes her phone out too, and I can see she is happy.
“Thank you, Atsuko.” she smiles.
“No problem Minami. I am going in. Be careful.” I said as I walk and open the door. I can feel she is still there until I go inside my house. I close the door and I walk to my room. I turn on the lamp and I put my bag on my table. I look at my handphone, wishing someone’s mail. Then I come closer to the window and slowly open the curtain. She’s not there. Somehow I feel…. I don’t know how to tell my feeling right now. I don’t want her to go, I want her to stay with me a bit longer, and now she’s already gone. It is mid night, will she be alright on the way home? She’s small, maybe she’s strong but she’s still a girl. She’s weak if it is with boys. It might be some bad guys out there. I close my curtain and my mind is full of her. My worries, my uneasy feeling, its mixed. I just can hope she’ll be alright, and safe until she reaches her house. And then, my hand phone is ringing, quickly I open the mail.
Acchan, are you home?
I am sorry for today I can’t walk
you home. Have a nice dream.
Marichan
It’s Marichan. I am glad she sends me message. But… why I am not happy? It’s strange. I always be happy whenever she sends me messages, but now? Her message is not the one I want right now. Then it is ringing again. I open it.
Atsuko, don’t worry I’m fine.
I am used to walk alone in the mid night.
Trust me, I am strong! Gyahahaha
\(^o^)/
Good night.
I quickly open the curtain, and she’s right there! I can see her pink ribbon starts walking away! I close the curtain and run as fast as possible to catch her.
What are you Minami? Why do you know I am worrying you? Why do you know when I am thinking about you? And where are you hiding? Do you know that I am gonna open the curtain and looking for you then you hide your self? What for, Minami? I open the gate and start running again. I can’t see her shadow along the street.
Where are you Minami? Where are you?
I can’t run anymore. It has been so far from my house. Maybe she has gone to the station already. I need breathe, I need air since I am running so fast and never stop. I give up, then I go back to my house still thinking about her. Will she be okay? On my way home I always think about you. This person has been successful to make me thinking about her every time, every second, every minute.
I wake up at 5 am this morning. We have rehearsal at 7 am and I am not feeling good right now. Should I email Minami and ask if she’s alright? But I am afraid to do so…
I have to believe her, she’s alright. Maybe Minami just woke up and get herself ready for today’s rehearsal. Okay, I’ll meet her there.
I have arrived, looks like all members just arrive as well. I see Marichan over there with Minegishi, Kojima, and Oshima. They are talking about something, then laughing at the same time. And then Marichan looks at me. Frozen. Then she looks away and continue talking with them. Huh? So it is right you abandoned me if somebody is around? Okay Marichan, I am wrong. I should know I never get any friends here. I am alone since the beginning, since he announced me as the center girl. Everybody starts ignoring me. But I am fine. I am okay with all of this. As long as…. Minami is beside me. Cheering me up. I think, she is the most person I need. I don’t know why I can trust her. Her gaze through me, her caring, her warmness, her touching, I can trust that all.
Speaking of her, where is she? Has she arrived or not? I walk to the table near me and put my bag there. My eyes are looking for her shadow, but couldn’t find it. Everybody is here, why is she coming late? As I know, she has never come late even for practicing. Was there something bad happened last night? Arrgghh!! I have to think positive, maybe she gets traffic jam or she wakes up late? Oh come on, she’s human, she’s not perfect, she might be waking up late this morning. I nod slowly, yosh! She’s okay! I won’t worry her since she would gonna be alright. I come to the stage since everybody gathers there. We are warming up for some minutes and then I could see Aki-p walks toward us.
“Good morning!” said him loudly and all members reply it.
“For today’s rehearsal, please do your best. Even it is just a rehearsal, you should put a full effort on it. So that tomorrow concert must be better even best. You got me?” Everybody replies ‘YES!’. He walks away and go inside a room. BLAM. He closes the door. I am still thinking about Minami. Where is she? Even in briefing she has not appeared yet. I worry about her right now. So worry. Should I email her? Okay, I should. Then I walk toward my bag and reach my handphone. And then I hear somebody approaches me.
“Acchan….” I turn back and it’s Marichan. She walks to the same table and takes her bag. She doesn’t seem to look for something. I know that is her reason to talk with me right now.
“I worry about you, since last night you didn’t reply my message.” she doesn’t look at me. She still busy with her bag, pretending looking for something inside of it.
“I am sorry Marichan. I fell asleep.” I answered.
“At least you can reply it in the next morning. But you didn’t.”
“I am sorry. This morning I wake up late, so I was such in a hurry to be ready and come here on time. I am sorry.” I lied to her. She sighs.
“That’s okay. There is something I’d like to tell you Acchan…” then she looks at me with serious looking. I look at her as well. I’ve never seen Marichan is like this before. Is it a very important thing that she’d like to tell me about? What is it? Or maybe it is about last day that she was with someone in a room? Okay, I will listen to it.
“Acchan… Acchan… I…” She has not done with her words yet but she is being called by Oshima. We will start our rehearsal.
“Later I will tell you Acchan.” she runs away and come to the stage. I am curious. What is it about? And then my phone is ringing. A message.
Good morning Acchan. (^.^)/
Has the rehearsal been started?
I guess I’ll come late…
There’s something I’ve to do first.
Jaa nee..
Fiuh… I feel relieve when I received her message. Thanks god she’s alright. Then I reply it.
Yes. It has been just started.
Be careful Minami.
How come you always give me an answer whenever I worry about you? Do you know what I feel right now? Nee… Minami… What are you actually? Is it true that you can read through people’s mind? Do you have sixth sense?
I put back my hand phone and walk to the stage and ready for our rehearsal.
Some minutes later, Minami comes. Seems she is running since she is sweat. I smile at her. I am glad she comes, I am glad she doesn’t change, she still likes yesterday, I am glad she is okay, I am so glad. She walks to the stage and bows her head.
“I am sorry guys, I am late.”
“It’s okay captain! Let’s practice!” said Team K’s captain, Akimoto Sayaka. Minami smiles at her as she nods. She looks at me then she smiles. Her smile is different with the one she gives Akimoto. I reply her smile, and I give her my best smile.
The rehearsal ends in the evening. Everyone seems tired. Some of them are half sleeping on the floor, on the stage, on the chairs. I also feel so tired. I am hungry, I need rest too, so I decide to sit not far from the stage. And then Minami walks toward me.
“Hi Atsuko… How’s today?” she sits beside me.
“It is tiring.” I wipe my sweat on my forehead and my neck.
“Here…” she gives me mineral water.
“For me?” I asked. She nods. “Where’s yours?”
“Don’t worry about me.”
“No thanks.” I don’t want to take her water as I know she only brings one. I take my wet towel and put it on my eyes. It’s cold.
“Why?”
“I don’t want you to sacrifice yourself just only for me. I will take it if you have the other one with you.”
“We don’t need two, one is enough. We can share.” she answered. What? Share? A mineral water and we share each other? Does it mean…. I keep looking at her.
“What? You don’t need to look at me like that. Is it wrong if we share mineral water?” You know Minami, it means that we……………indirect ki-
“Ah! Don’t tell me you think about indirect kiss??????” she teases me. DEG! H-how could she know what I am thinking? Then she chuckles.
“N-n-no way! W-why should I think about that? Ugh…” I am nervous and my heart is beating so fast. Oh god! How could she know? Urgghh…..
“Haha… It is okay Atsuko. I just can’t believe you still thinking about that. Hehe…” She chuckles.
“I said no! No! Don’t you hear me? I said, NO!” Now I feel little embarrass.
“Here… just drink then.” she gives me her mineral water. Without thinking, I take it and open it. I drink as much as I can’t drink it anymore. Actually, I am also thirsty. I give it to her and she drinks it as well. I look at her, she drinks it slowly not like me. Here it is. The indirect kiss. My full attention is on……………..her lips. It is attracted me, so I can’t look away at that time. When she finishes, I quickly look away. I play with my towel and sing a song.
“Uwaaa!! I feel alive!” she is shouting. I look at her. How come she becomes that happy? Is it just a normal water, isn’t it? She is weird.
“I don’t know why I can be this happy after drinking this normal water. Or maybe it’s because of you who had drunk it first?” she looks confused as she stares at the bottle. OMG! Why could she know again what I am thinking? I should be careful then….
“Takamina?” calls someone, and she is Kojima. “Oh yo!” Greets Takamina. I see Kojima looks at me with….. the same looking as Minegishi’s. Yeah, I am sure I will hear about something that irritates me again.
“What are you doing here with…… this person?” asked Kojima.
“This person?” Minami raises her eyebrow.
“Yeah… this perfect-looking girl.” she crosses her hands in front of her chest.
“You mean Atsuko?” said Minami.
“Oh yes… Atsuko Maeda. Our lovely perfect-center-girl.”
“Could you just say Atsuko instead? That was too long.” said Minami. I look at her, I know she is different with Marichan. At that time when Minegishi said something bad about me, she remained quite. So different with Minami. I feel she is protecting me right now.
“What’s wrong with you Takamina? Are you her friend now?”
“Yes. Is that wrong?”
Minami…..
“You are kidding right? How come you are being friend to someone like her?” Every member’s attention is now on us.
“… she thinks she is the best here, she ruined our practice some weeks ago, and then she always be the center! No one likes her, everybody hates her! I know you want to be center, Takamina….” I shock, then I look at Minami. She still keeps looking at Kojima. I look down. Is it right she always wants to be center? I feel guilty now. I know my self is not suitable to be one. Minami is. I ruin everything.
“Listen Haruna….” I look at Minami, she begins to talk now. “… Do you ever think that Atsuko has much burden on her? Do you ever once thinking about how if she actually doesn’t want to be center girl? Do you ever think how much she learns to become better? She keeps dancing and singing even though you guys ignore her. If you were her, could you be like what she had done? Could you still be able to practice? Could you be able to smile? Laugh? She never looks someone as her rival, she doesn’t even say that she is the best. Do you know she always says she is nothing? She is such a fail? She doesn’t deserve the center girl position? You don’t even know about it right?? So that she tried her best to become suitable for center girl position, even though she was in pain, she still kept dancing, she kept practicing, don’t you ever think about that for once? Could you guys be like her If you were her?” Kojima stays quite. I can’t believe what Minami said about me. I am surprised. I want to cry now, but I have to hold it.
“Everyone wants to be center I know, and I want to. But I know I still lack of something. And I realize something. Maybe being center is a pride for some of you, but center girl is just a person who stands in the middle. It doesn’t mean that you guys don’t have any role in it, sure you do. Now what do you think if it just the center girl who is standing on the stage? Will we be success? No. We fail. You guys are also shining on the stage, not only the center girl. You all are important, not only the center girl. She just stands in the middle to make our formation balance, it doesn’t mean all the attentions are fully for her. You are totally wrong if you ever think like that.” Everyone starts to whisper. I can see Kojima can’t say anything. She just looks down and can’t face her captain.
“Let’s go Atsuko.” She grabs my hand and takes our bag and goes out immediately. All attentions are still on us.
On the way home, we are still in quite. I still can’t believe what she said about me. I am so grateful.
“Minami…” I start talking.
“Hm?” She responses.
“Thank you…”
“What for?” She looks at me. I look at her.
“Thank you for your long speech. It’s cool.” I smile. She smiles too.
“What? Speech?” she chuckles.
“Yeah… I can’t believe you will say something like that. Thank you Minami.” then she holds my hand. Her hand is warm. My heart starts beating, and I blush at that time.
“You don’t need to thank me.” she smiles as she holds my hand tighter.
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Takamina speech is beautiful
I was so happy that minami defend acchan
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I almost cry because of Takamina speech... :farofflook:
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wohoho that moved me :lol:
yup 1 can't shine alone w/o the others.
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this chap make me :mon cry: :mon cry:
takamina thanks for defending acchan :mon kissy: :mon kissy:
takamina you are acchan's knight in shining armor now! :mon determined: please take good care of acchan. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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Takamina is protecting Acchan ow, so cool!!!! Her speech completely shut kojiiharu's mouth up lol
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things are getting more and more interesting :grin:
In your face!!! The member are quite harsh towards, so when Takamina said that long speech! Everyone Froze and don't know what to say
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Taka n acchan will soon be closer right...right...right....
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Taka speech totally rock.
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You may be mini but you are forever epic Takamina! <3 Update soon moekare! :3333
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Chapter 5 part 1
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Today is our concert. We all are ready for it and I keep supported by Minami, and I support her too. She’s so kind. I walk slowly to the stage, and I can hear the fans’s chants. I am full of energy!! Yosh! I won’t make them disappointed! Then I walk behind Minami, I could see her back. Her small back, small but looks strong. I smile somehow I get more energy. Then, somebody blocks my way. They are Minegishi and Kojima. They both are looking at me.
“Yo there…” Greet Minegishi.
“Are you feeling not good?” asked Kojima. I am shaking my head. What do they want? At this time, they still want to yell at me? Nice.
“Forgive me.” said Minegishi.
Eh?
“I had said something bad about you. I don’t know if you’d like to forgive me or not.” I stay quite. What did I just hear? She apologized? Really??
“Me too… Please forgive us.” Kojima adds. I look at them both still can’t believe all of this things.
“Minegishi… Kojima…” I don’t know what I should say.
“You can’t forgive us?” said Minegishi.
“No! It’s not like that!” I see Minami right there. She smiles at me. Yosh!! Minami, it is all because of you. I am so grateful. Thanks Minami.
“I never mad at you guys.” I smile. Then they smile at the same time.
“Yokatta~” said Kojima.
“Right. From now on, please call me Miichan.”
“Yes. Call me Harunyan or Nyan.” said Haruna as Yuko comes toward her.
“No way! It is only me who can call you Nyan! Hey Acchan, call her Kojiharu. It’s okay.” she giggles. “…Ah! call me Yuko!” said her as I nod and smile.
“Hey! Yuko! Don’t cut our conversation! You ruin my mood!” said Kojiharu.
“Don’t you want to talk softly to me? I love you Nyan~” she hugs Kojiharu. Seems Kojiharu doesn’t want to be hugged at that time. She defends her self from Yuko. I laugh. I don’t doubt about what relationship they have anymore and then I smile at them.
“What a lovely couple.” said Miichan as she helps Kojiharu to separate Yuko from her. But Yuko is too strong, they can’t push her that easily.
All members start talking with me and call me Acchan. I am happy. It’s because of Minami. Thank you Minami. Thanks for everything.
In the middle of concert something unexpected is happened. Marichan announces her graduation. Everybody seems surprised even me. Seems her fan also surprised with her announcement. She wants to continue her career as model. I am crying. The song “Koko ni Itta Koto” is played and everybody starts singing. One by one hugs Marichan and I can’t hug her. I am hurt. Marichan, the first friend I made here has announced her graduation. Even though I know she is not like Minami, but I can’t forget the time we’ve spent together. I stand in the back, I don’t want everybody sees I am in pain. I sob.
The concert has finished. We meet all in the back stage. Aki-p gives some words for Marichan he wishes all the best for her, and good luck. I stay quite and can’t talk. Why she didn’t tell me before? Is it true that she doesn’t recognize me as her friend anymore? How could she do this to me? After what we spent before?
The members are going to dressing room. They prepare themselves to go home coz we are tired. I want to meet Marichan. I want to ask her why she didn’t tell me earlier. I start walking and looking for her. She is not here, she is not there.
Where is she? Her bag is still in the dressing room though.
I arrive in the last place. The park behind the stadium. I am looking for Marichan but still not find her. I rub my neck, I am really tired and I ran when I looked for her. I walk around and I hear some voices, and its hers. I come closer she’s with someone. Okay, the same person as I see in the room some days ago. Who is she?
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cliff hanging ending!
please, upload the next part!!! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!
I want to know who Mariko-sama secretly talking to? Is it Miichan? Or Takamina this time?
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Mariko graduates. o A o. I hope you can post Part 2 soon. I wonder who is this mystery person. o A o.
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Who is this mysterious person
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noooo mariko graduated :pleeease:
yeah me too wanna know mysti person is.
hwaiting!
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Minaaaa arigatoooo :nya: :nya: :nya:
@khryz0421 : sorry to make you feel like that :nervous
Glad you all like my story :hee: Please follow my fict until end :thumbsup
it's okay. :mon sweat: i change my mind i won't :mon slapself: haruna and miichan cuz they are acchan's friend now. :mon noprob: :mon noprob: heheXD i'll follow it till the end! :mon determined:
anyway why? why mariko need to grad? :mon waterworks:
Who is this mysterious person
i want to know too! :mon huh2:
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wooooo mariko grads??? :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
i'll be waiting for the next update...
u are a great writer.... :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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I am sorry about Mariko :nervous
@sorakamiya : Still early to say so, but thanks.... You are my master :bingo:
And thanks you guys still waiting until my next update :cow: :cow: ---> Full of energy :rockon:
Here guys the next part.... :ding:
A lot AtsuMina's moments :wahaha: :wahaha:
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Forgive my bad english :grin:
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Chapter 5 part 2
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I move closer and slowly so that she couldn’t hear me. I hide myself to a big tree.
“Why you didn’t tell me you are going to graduate?”said the girl as she is crying.
“I am sorry, I didn’t mean to. I wanted to, but I am afraid that you’d be sad.” said Marichan. Who is the girl? They are backing me, so I couldn’t see her face.
“I….I don’t know if I can survive without you here, Mariko. I need you…” she hugs Marichan. DEG! What is she doing? My heart is beating so fast. I bite my lower lip, hoping there won’t be unwanted scene there. Marichan strokes that girl’s long hair… She looks so gentle, somehow I feel jealous. I miss Marichan’s touch, I miss Marichan’s care, I miss Marichan’s soft voice, I miss all about her. I know I will be more hurt if I stay there, but my body won’t move. I want to know with whom Marichan is.
“Should I graduate and be with you, Mariko?” said the girl still sobbing. What the heck is the girl saying????
“No… You have to stay here Miichan…” What? That girl is…..Minegishi? “…you still have to learn here. AKB will help you to achieve your dreams.”said Marichan.
I can’t believe that’s Miichan… I cover my mouth. I can’t believe what I just heard. Are Marichan and Miichan that close? I never know until now. They are hugging each other with tears.
“You know, when we were in that room some days ago, I wanted to tell you…. But you kept talking and laughing. I think that was not the best time to tell you about this.” said Marichan. Ah, sou ka… So the girl on that day was Miichan?!
Miichan releases her hugging and move closer to Marichan and kisses her on lips. DEG! I see it all… I see it. Marichan replies Miichan’s kiss and put her hands around Miichan’s neck. I can feel my tears are falling, and I am still covering my mouth with my hands. They are in a deep kiss and full of passion. I can’t be here anymore, I don’t want to see it anymore! This is enough! I decide to leave that place. I run as fast as possible. How come Marichan and Miichan?! My Marichan, she never told me about this. I feel my chest is in pain, and it is really hurt.
I stop somewhere and little bit dark here. I still cover my mouth and I don’t want to cry here, I can’t cry freely here. I wanna go home, but my feet won’t follow my order. They feel so weak, so weak until I can’t manage to stand. I sit on the ground, covering my face with both my hands and I am crying so much. I try to hold it so it won’t come out. I am alone here in the darkness, feeling betrayed. But then someone hugs me from behind. I am surprised as I put down my hands from my face but I feel like don’t have much energy to turn around. Someone has found me here.
“Let it out, Atsuko…”
Minami?
“Mi-Minami?” I’m still sobbing. Her hands now are moving up to my neck. I can feel her breathe around my neck. She hugs me tight.
Why does she know I am here? Why? Why does she always come every time I am alone? Every time I need someone?
“Sorry I kept following you when you went out from dressing room.” I could hear her voice clearly. Her mouth is so close with my ear. “…. I saw everything.” said her.
In some seconds, I start crying. I am crying loudly as she hugs me tighter. I could feel her warmness in every part of my body.
“Just cry as much as you want. I’ll be right here with you…”
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“Thanks Minami…” I said as we have arrived in front of my house.
“Are you okay, Atsuko?” asked her. She still worries about me.
“Un, I am okay Minami. Thanks.” I force myself to smile since I am very shocked about what just happened. She still looks at me. I guess she won’t leave me like this.
“Are you sure? Are your parents at home?”
“No. They are at my grandma’s house for 3 days. They will come back the day after tomorrow.” then Minami comes closer to me and holds my hand.
“Sorry Atsuko. I can’t leave you alone.” she looks at me. She looks at my eyes. I know she’s really worried about me…
“And then?”
“I will sleep over…” Huh? Sleep over? Are you sure, Minami? I am little bit surprised. I can’t believe I will spend a whole night with Minami.
“A-are you serious?” I blink.
“Yes of course… I don’t want to leave you like this. I’ll stay here tonight.”
In the living room………
“Here is my living room. Have a seat please.” she sits on the long couch as I go to the kitchen and make her a cup of tea.
“I am sorry Minami if my house is not comfortable.” I said as I stir the tea.
“Ah, not at all… Your house is quite big and it’s really comfortable.” she smiles. I walk toward her and give her the sweet tea.
“Thanks…” she drinks it. “…delicious.”she said.
“Every tea has the same taste you know.” I chuckle. “You want to watch TV?”I sit beside her and I give her the remote. She is shaking her head. I nod then put it back on the table.
Silent. We don’t even have any topic to be talked. I see her just look down to the floor and have nothing to say. I could feel the beating of my heart and thinking about what had just happened before. I remembered her hug, her voice, her breathe, and when I think about it, my heart can’t stop beating.
Does Minami hear it? Since the room is very quite and I only can hear my clock’s sound, ‘TIK…TIK…TIK…’
Should I start something? But I….
“Nee Atsuko….” Minami starts talking as she looks at me.
“Eh yes?”
“What is your relationship with Mariko-sama?” what a straight question. She is looking at me so serious.
“Huh? W-what do you mean?” I look away, I can’t see her eyes.
“Just answer me.” I look at her. Why is it so sudden? Why Minami asks this question? It’s not the usual her.
“What is that question?” She doesn’t response. She keeps looking at me, waiting for my answer.
“We are just friend that’s all. She is my first friend in AKB. Happy?” I asked her. She looks away.
“Your first friend huh, and you like her? You love her?” I look her strangely. Why does she ask me about it? But…. Maybe she is right. I like Marichan, but I don’t know can it be called a love?
“So you like her…” she sighs.
Ugh…she reads my mind again!
“Could you please stop asking nonsense things?”
“I don’t know Mariko-sama could make you cry like that…”
“Minami….could you please stop?” Just for today I don’t want to think about Marichan. I am still shocked… She looks at me. She puts her hands on my shoulder.
“I am sorry, Atsuko…” I am shaking my head.
“No, it is not your fault Minami… Today you help me a lot.” I smile to her. Then she hugs me. DEG! DEG! DEG! My heart is beating and I also can feel hers. Minami’s heart is beating too?
I can feel her hand on my hair. She strokes it. I feel relax so I close my eyes. It’s so comfort. Minami’s hugging is so warm and I hug her back. We are hugging each other.
“Do you promise me you won’t cry anymore?” said Minami. I nod.
“In any situation you won’t cry, promise me?” I nod again.
“Good…” she strokes my hair again… “…your hair smells good.” she chuckles.
“I wash it once per 2 days.”
“Nee, Atsuko….”
“Hm?”
“Could we be like this…..forever?” asked her.
“Of course…. what do you mean by that question? Would you leave me?” I release my hug and see her right on her eyes. She smiles.
“I am not going anywhere Atsuko. I will always be next to you. I will always be with you.” she holds my hand. Her question stuck on my head. What does she mean by that question? But….as she said she wasn’t going anywhere, I think I don’t need to think about it anymore. I smile to her and nod.
“I won’t forgive you if you leave me alone, Minami….”
“You have my words.” said her.
We are looking to each other for some minutes without looking away. I can see her sincere through her eyes, her softness, her kindness, now I am sure I don’t want to lose this person. This person is so important to me, I don’t need the other, I just need her to be by my side.
She moves her right hand and she touches my cheek, then comes to my hair and she strokes it. Her hand continues to move down to my nose, she touches it softly and after that it comes to my lips.
DEG! DEG! DEG! My heart is beating so fast. I know what will happen next, but I can’t move my body.
She touches my lips for some seconds…………..And she moves her body closer until our face are just only one centimeter. Our nose are touching each other, she stops for a sec, then she moves her head to left and she kisses my lips. I feel my heart will be blowing up now, I am surprised. But my body doesn’t reject her, I kiss her back. She does it gently. I can feel the softness of her lips when it touches mine. Her lips are so sweet like strawberry. I know it’s her lip gloss’s taste, but I feel like I want to eat her lips. I move my hand and hug her tightly as we are still kissing in passion. She also moves her hand and put it around my waist. I can’t stop kissing her, I want more….. I think Minami thinks the same as mine. She won’t stop kissing me, then we can feel our warm breathe touch our face. We break our kiss and we are looking to each other with our face are still in very close distance. (It’s time to breathe) And I make my move, I kiss her. She kisses me back then our kiss turn into a french kiss.
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Did I ruin something? :on_plug:
note : Sorry I can't make a romantic moment :mon pray2:
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Gah!!! You've killed me with your takacchan moment~~ :imdead:
update soon!!! :on woohoo:
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That was so romantic! o A o. What will happen now? I hope Acchan realizes her feelings for Takamina soon. <3 Update soon. ;3
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Thanks Minnaa :shy2:
Glad you like my story...
Okay, I have finished the last part of this chapter... enjoy :grin:
ALERT : STILL ATSUMINA'S MOMENT :deco:
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Chapter 5 part 3
Last night felt so long…. We just kept kissing each other and we didn’t want to break it or stop it. We were in a passion last night and I was happy. It’s her I want right now and she’s already mine now. I won’t forgive her if she will dump me in the future. Okay, I am possessive and I also get easily to be jealous. I won’t let her go, whatever will be happened, I won’t let her go. This is your fault for making me falling for you this deep. Now you have to be always beside me no matter what.
I slowly open my eyes and it is already morning. I am in my room, right on my bed. What happened? I didn’t remember the very last moment yesterday night. I get up and….where’s Minami? I walk to the door and open it. I am heading to the kitchen and yep…there she is. She is……preparing breakfast? Breakfast? Is it what you call…..a breakfast? I am surprised. Minami knows I am there then she greets me.
“Good morning, Atsuko…” she smiles. What a bright smile. But that’s not the point here. I’m looking on what she just made. What is it?
“Are you hungry? Here I have prepared our breakfast…” she shows me the foods.
GLEK!
“Minami, what is it?” said me with a surprised tone.
“Hm? Our breakfast of course. Why you still ask?”
“But….but….it can’t be called a breakfast.” I point to the bread. It is not looked as a toast anymore, it is so……dark! The eggs, it doesn’t look like eggs anymore. I can’t tell the texture!
“It’s good though! You have to try it.” she giggles.
“And……….what is it?” I take one of the other dark’s foods. It is long and so thin.
“Oh, I took that in your refrigerator. That is bacon.”
“BACON?” I widen my eyes. Okay, Minami could be a good dancer, good in singing, but she is not good in cooking!
“Minami…” I slowly look at her, she’s there with her smile. Face palm.
I can’t stay here just looking at her fail foods. I take my apron and make some easy dishes.
“What? Ramen?” Minami is surprised when I give her ramen. I sit beside her.
“Yeah, since you have taken all the ingredients out. I have nothing. Itadakimasu.” I eat the ramen, ugh!! It’s really tasty!
She looks at me with are-you-serious face. Then she doesn’t have any choice beside eat that ramen.
“Gochisou sama deshita….” we finish at the same time.
“Although it is just ramen, but I enjoy eating it…………aaaaa thanks Atsuko.” said her as she rubs her stomach. I look at her. This person is sitting next to me, she slept with me, we even had kissed each other. Now I want her. I want her right now……. Then I hug her.
“Ng? Atsuko?” I know she is confused I am hugging her so sudden. Then I just close my eyes.
“Minami….. please don’t leave me alone.” I said. Not long, I feel she is hugging me. She hugs me tightly.
“I won’t Atsuko…. I will be here, always be here with you. You don’t need to worry.” she releases her hug, then she kisses my forehead. I feel comfortable by then. I keep looking at her, wanting more. She looks at me, confused.
“Hm? What?” she raises her eyebrow.
Ugh Minami…. How could you don’t get me? Usually you know what I am thinking, and quickly act on it, but now? You do it on purpose, huh?
Suddenly, her hand touches my eyes….
“I really like your eyes….” said her.
“My eyes?” I asked. Then her hand slowly touches my neck.
“Atsuko….” she still looks at it.
“Hm?” My short response.
“Is it okay….. If I mark you right here?”
“Mark?”
“Yes….. I’ll make a kiss mark here, it will show that you are belong to me. You are mine….”
I won’t say no, coz I don’t mind if she makes some marks on my body. I will give it to her….
“It’s okay, Minami.” then she moves closer to it, and makes a mark there.
“Now you are mine, Atsuko…. I won’t hand you to anyone. I won’t let you go even you cry, even you beg me to let you go, I won’t. You are destined to be mine, not somebody else.” I like her serious face…. She looks cool with it. I smile….
“I don’t want to be separated with you, Minami… I will always be by your side. I promise.” I said as I kiss her on her lips.
I suppose it is a short kiss, but when I break it, she pulls me and kisses me. I put my hands around her neck and move my head to the right to make her easier to kiss me. I feel that last night’s moment happened again…..and I won’t stop. Until Minami’s phone is ringing. We both are surprised and quickly break our kiss.
Ugh..... That email isn’t coming on the right time. I cross my hands in front of my chest.
After Minami reads the message, she quickly gets up….
“I am sorry Atsuko, I have to go…” She takes her bag and walks to the door.
“Eh? What is that email about? From who? Where will you go?” I ask as I follow her.
“From my mom… I’m going home now. See you later~” BLAM. She closes the door.
Ukh…. Minami baka! She has not even kissed me before she left. What~
JDAM! The door opened, Minami is there and she runs to me. She is kissing me on the lips. It’s a short one.
“Forgot something. Hehe… See you later Atsuko…” BLAM. The door closed.
I touch my lips….. then I smile. Minami…..she always makes me feel happy. Now I understand about my feeling toward her. It’s a love. I love her. I love Minami, and I love her more and more. But I want her to say it first……
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How? :mon wind:
Yappari~ I can't make a romantic moment after all........ :mon sweat: :mon surr:
Please leave comments :grin:
Working on the next chapter :mon dance:
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Awww... This is so sweet... They are together now!!!! :wriggly:
minami can't cook...LOL... :on lol: and Acchan is possessive~~ :onionwhip:
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This is just too sweet.. :wub:
Wonder what's installed in Minami's head, always able to detect what's in Acchan's mind.. :twothumbs
Waiting for the next update.. XD
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:shocked: :shocked: :shocked: nice chaaaaaaaaap~ I have just finish read part 2 and u already post part 3 niiiice..... :cow: :cow: :cow:
please make a really romantic atsumina momen again~ :bow: :bow:
i'll be waiting for your update :D :grin: :grin:
anyway, i'm your master??? :shocked
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Atsumina moments :inlove: XD They are so cute together!!!
I so love it XD
what will happen to Mariko-sama and Acchan's friendship?
update soon XD
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The Atsumina moments were so sweet
They finally got together
Please update soon
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I am back guys :mon fu:
Hmm... before I post chapter 6, I'd like to post this one...
A preface or an insert story or whatever you call it :cool2:
Dozo!!
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Those times were so fun… We were so happy..
We played together…
We ate together…
We….. kissed each other…
We hugged each other..
Those were good moments I had with you…
But….
I didn’t expect that this day would come….. I realized that you were wrong, we were not destined to be together and forever….
We were destined to be separated….
But one thing you have to know….
I won’t forget you….
I won’t forget our moments…
They are too precious to be forgotten.
I will treasure it deep in my heart….
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Why it turn out like this!!!!!!! :on voodoo: :on voodoo:
Forgive me minna-san :on cloudeye:
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Huh!!!! :shock: Noooo!!!!!! :pleeease: why so sad~~~ :fainted:
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It's so sad.........
It's breaking my heart :cry:
update soon
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Sorry guys :banghead: :banghead:
But I don't know too, I can change everything since I am the writer :grin: :grin:
Here is the next chapter.... :cow:
Pardon my bad english.... ENJOY!
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Chapter 6
Today I have photo shooting with these 2 persons, Yuko and Kojiharu. We all dress as a bride. Yuko and Kojiharu looks so beautiful. I love the dress that we wear.
In the middle of break, we have a small conversation.
“Do you know about Mariko?” said Kojiharu. Marichan….. I wonder what you are doing right now. I keep thinking about her, it is not because I love her, it is because I see her as my sister….. The day after that night, I know that my feeling was not a love…. I cried because I was little surprised yet she didn’t tell me about her relationship with Miichan and her graduation..
“No… Do you know something?” asked Yuko. Kojiharu nods.
“I heard that she is a great model now. Many companies want to cooperate with her…. Hmm… Mariko is really amazing… Should I become like her?” Kojiharu said. Then Yuko hugs her.
“Noo…. Nyan nyan, I won’t allow you if you want to graduate from AKB! I need you…..” Kojiharu starts pushing Yuko away..
“Gezz Yuko, I won’t…. AKB is very important right now, I don’t even think about graduation yet….” Yuko is so happy when she hears it.
“You do it for me right? Aaa~ I am so in love with you~” she keeps hugging her. Kojiharu is struggling right now. I laugh… What a lovely couple. Then it reminds me of Minami. It has been some hours…. but I have already missed her so much. What is she doing right now? Should I email her?
“Nee Acchan what do you think?” asked Yuko.
“About what?”
“About me and Nyan of course~ We look like a perfect couple right?”
“Yuko, please stop it!!”
“I won’t……” she giggles as she pokes that long haired girl beside her.
“Yeah, you two are so perfect….” I smile.
“Hora! Do you hear it? Well Acchan, I’ll invite you to my wedding party in the future~”
“Yuko! What are you talking about?” I know Kojiharu is actually happy on every moves Yuko does…. She just doesn’t want to admit it…. How lovely.
“Don’t worry… I’ll definitely come.” I laugh.
I stop laughing as I remember Minami…. Okay, I’ll send her message, I miss her so much.
Minami, where are you?
I miss you Minami….
Sent.
I am waiting for some minutes, but she doesn’t reply my message. I am worried now. What is she doing right now? And where is she? Okay, I remembered she said she went home coz her mom’s mail, but could she just reply my message? Doesn’t she know how much I miss her? How much I want to see her right now??
Our photo shooting has finished. I have changed my cloth and go outside. There, I meet Yuko and Kojiharu, they are waiting for me.
“Hey Acchan, we are going to have dinner together. Would you like to join?” asked Kojiharu.
“Ah, Is it okay if I come?”
“Of course not! We are in date actually~”said Yuko as Kojiharu covers her mouth. I laugh. I know Yuko is joking, and I know she wants to be just alone with Kojiharu.
“I am not going….I won’t disturb you two.” I chuckle.
“Ah, please don’t listen to what this person said…. We are not even dating, come and join, okay?”
“Yeah I was joking…. I hope you’d like to join us today.” added Yuko.
“Thank you guys for your invitation, but I am not hungry right now… I am sorry. Maybe next time?” They look disappointed…
“Okay. Next time, you promise?” asked Kojiharu. I nod.
“Yea, promise I will come next time..” I smile.
“Oh… May I have your number Acchan?” asked Kojiharu. I said “Yes” as I take my handphone.
“Thanks Acchan” I smile as I said “You are welcome”.
They smile and then start to leave. Yuko holds Kojiharu’s hand and she lets her does it. They look like a perfect couple.
I walk slowly as my mind is full with Minami…. I don’t even know where her house is. On the way home, my phone is ringing. One message.
Atsuko sorry I just reply your
message. I was sleeping.
I am not feeling well today.
Take care.. I miss you too.
Is she sick?? I panic. What should I do now? Minami is sick, and I don’t know where her house is? I run so fast to the store, I buy medicines, water, and vitamins. Then run to the station. Where should I go now? What should I do now? Ah! I will call this person maybe she can help me….
Minami’s house……….
YOSH! I have arrived. Her house is quite big too… Then I come in as it’s not locked. Now I am in living room, no one here. So quite. Where are their parents? Is she alone now? Then I go upstairs and head to the door in the corner.
I open the door and yes there she is. Minami is there. She is sleeping…. I close the door and walk slowly to her…I sit beside her… Oh god she is so pale and she’s sweating. I look around, no medicine, no wet towel, and I am sure she is alone at home. I put my hand on her forehead. DAMN! She’s hot! No, she’s burning!! I can’t see Minami in this condition… She looks so weak. I keep looking at her… Then she opens her eyes.
“A-Atsuko?” she is surprised when she sees me here, right in front of her.
“Did I wake you?” I can hear my voice is full of care. She’s shaking her head.
“How could you know my house?”
“I called Kojiharu right after you messaged me. I asked your address and she told me… She will visit you later…”
“Ahh~ She doesn’t need to be worry… I will recover soon.”
“You are alone? Where are your parents?” asked me…
“They went to London this morning…. My mom sent me message to say good bye. They will come back in a week…” Oh god… Right, she is alone now. How could I don’t know she is sick? She is laying on the bed this weak without someone look after her… I feel more guilty right now… I am useless.
“I am sorry Atsuko I didn’t tell you before… I won’t wake you worry about me.”
“What is that? I am angry right now you know! I don’t know you are sick, and you are alone, no medicine, no somebody here takes care of you, do you understand what I feel after seeing your condition now?” I shout at her. Then I realize that I was wrong shouting at her…
“I-I’am sorry Minami….I didn’t mean to…” then she holds my hand.
“Fine.. You don’t need to apologize.” I look at her. She is so pale… Then I take out the medicine I just bought.
“Here I have bought you medicines and vitamins.” I placed it on the bed side table.
“Now I will take care of you… You have to follow what I say.” she nods.
“Good. I am going downstairs to take wet towel and make tea. Don’t make any single move. Just sleep.” I go downstairs and take towel and put it on a bowl. I add ice cube on it and little bit water. Then I make tea and heading to Minami’s room.
I place the wet towel on her forehead.
“Wow… It feels so good.”said Minami. I smile.
“Here, drink this medicine. Here is the tea….” I help her to get up and she drinks the medicine then she lay again.
“Sorry Atsuko…. I troubled you.”
“Don’t say it. You never trouble me. I am glad I am here for you…” I hold her hand. I could feel her body’s temperature. She is so hot…. Really, I can’t see her like this.
I move my hand to her face, I rub her cheek…. I want to feel her body’s temp more, then my hand touches her lips. I move closer and Minami covers her lips with her hand.
“Don’t!” said her.
“What’s wrong Minami?” I sound disappointed. Doesn’t she want to be kissed? Don’t you know I want you right now?
“Please don’t do this Atsuko….” I stay quite, still look at her. “… I-I don’t want you to be sick also… I got flu and you will get infected if you do that…” You are so lovely Minami. Then I smile.
“I don’t mind if I get sick because of you. If that is one condition which could make you healthy, I don’t mind Minami…. Because.. I can’t see you in this condition. You look so weak, and I hate it…” We are looking to each other. A small smile appears on her face. Then I slowly take her hands from her lips and I hold it. I continue to move closer and kiss her lips. We both are closing our eyes, trying to feel the sensation. The wet towel is disturbing me, so I throw it away.... I could feel her lips, it’s hot but still warm. I love to kiss her soft lips, Minami’s lips…
After some minutes, she is suddenly pushing me…. we break our kiss.
“What’s wrong Minami?” no answer. She is still looking at me. “You…you don’t like it?” I added.
“No, it’s not like that….”
“And then what is it? Why do you push me, Minami?”
“I-I just… don’t want you to get sick… I also can’t see you sick, sick is the worst thing ever. Being healthy is sure so expensive….”
Minami…
“I said, I don’t care… I don’t mind if I get sick for the sake of for your health. I don’t mind Minami….”
“But….”
“No but… I am the one who take care of you, you agreed that you would follow what I said, didn’t you?” she nods slowly.
“I want you right now....” I look at her as she can’t say anything. I kiss her again as my hand rubs her cheek and the other one is holding her hand. I feel she replies my kiss, we are in passion but our kiss is not rough, we do it slowly as Minami is sick and she doesn’t have that much energy. We both need air but actually we won’t stop our kissing so we are kissing and breathing at the same time………. I could feel her hot breathe, it makes me won’t stop kissing her……. I want to feel it more, and I want more……. After some minutes I break the kiss and look at her… Our faces are in close distance, I could see her face, her eyes, nose, and lips. And then I feel Minami’s hand on my back head, she pulls me and kisses me again. Now she makes her move…. I reply her kiss, a passionate one. She kisses me so gently…..
I guess, I fell asleep. Sun has not risen yet, it is still dark. Maybe it is around mid night. I open my eyes and here I am, on Minami’s bed. I feel something warm around my body, she is hugging me… It feels like a dream, but I am happy it’s not. I am sleeping with her now… I smile as I look at her kawaii face. Her face when she is sleeping is really cute… I can’t hold my self to not touch her…. I slowly move my hand on her face, I touch it. Her eyes….her lips.
Minami…. Do you know how happy I am now? Having you by my side, like now you are sleeping right beside me, I am so happy. I can touch you, I can feel you…… How come I am not feeling happy? I wish there is no tomorrow, I wish we can stay like this forever…. Then, I kiss the sleeping Minami. She is like sleeping beauty who waits for her prince to save her…. She’s really cute.
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Really nice chapter :)
Takamina get well soon!!!
Acchan will definitely make you feel better and you'll be back in no time! XD
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moekara-san~~~ your fic is amazing~~ :farofflook:
please write more AtsuMina~~ :bow: :bow:
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and thanks for reading my fict... :love: :love: :love: and i hope it could inspire u more....
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That was kinda sweet.
I thought Haruna is visiting her ? XD HAHA.
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That was so sweet
Acchan willing to get sick for takamina no matter how much
Takamina disagree
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This is the new chapter :grin:
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Chapter 7
Today Team A will perform at theater. I put on my costume and sit on the chair. I memorize all the dances and songs. Everybody seems busy too. Put on their costume, make up, and so on… I look around then find my Minami over there. She is busy with her hair. I chuckle. She is so cute… I get up and approach her.
“Need a help?” asked me, she turns around.
“Ah, Atsuko…. No thanks. I am done.” said her as she finishes her hair make.
“Are you sure you want to perform today?” I am worrying her…
“Yea~ I never feel this better.” she smiles. I hope she is not lying.
“You don’t need push yourself too hard…. You may rest if you feel not good.”
“Un, thanks Atsuko….” we remain quite until this person approaches us.
“Hey both of you! Looks like we have another couple here.” she chuckles…
“Haruna…..” said Minami.
“I am sorry Takamina I didn’t visit you yesterday. I plan I do it today, but looks like you have…..recovered. Sasuga our captain.” she smiles.
“Sorry to make you worried, but I am fine… It is just a flu.”
“Ara….” she looks at me with a naughty looking. I tilt my head. “….looks like someone had taken care of you already, huh?” said her as she pokes me….
“W-what are you talking about?” said me as I look away… Uwahh she got me now! It’s embarrassing.
“Heee…. Did you call me yesterday and ask Takamina’s address right? You sounded panic yesterday. Try to hide it now?” She keeps teasing me…
“Am I wrong if I worried about her? S-she always helps me, a-and I just wanted to visit her, that’s all…..” I couldn’t see Kojiharu’s face now, I keep looking away.
“Well…well… Stop you guys, don’t fight over me…” said Minami.
“Who fight over you? Huh….” I cross my hand in front of my chest… I hear Kojiharu is laughing.
“You two are so funny! Well, we have to be ready…. The performance will be started in a moment. Okay, I leave you two then. See you on the stage….” she walks away.
Minami approaches me. “Hey, are you mad?” said her as she grabs my arm.
“Yea~” I am backing her…
“Why? I didn’t do anything wrong? Why you got mad I don’t understand.” she tries to explain.
“Maybe, but you are annoying…” I keep teasing her.
“Omg, here it comes again…. Okay, I am sorry If I made you mad. Forgive me now?” I stay quite. Cute Minami…. You know, I will forgive if you kiss me here right now. Haha… I am such a perverted, aren’t I?
“Atsuko….. Come on…” I don’t response. “Please Atsuko… I can’t give you ‘that’ here. Not here. That is private.” Hora…. she reads my mind again. I turn back.
“What are you talking about? What do you mean by ‘that’ and ‘private’ and what is it? Huh, you sure are annoying…” I walk away and leave her there…. She sighs. Wow… It’s so fun teasing her like that…. I am sorry Minami, you are so cute when I see your reaction like that… I can’t stop teasing you. I chuckle myself.
Today’s performance is great… We got one kenkyuusei to fill Mariko’s place, because there is no any promotion yet… Maybe next time.
I come to the dressing room and change my cloth. Everybody is there and looking so tired.
“Hi guys…. What a great performance.” a voice come from a door. We all look at the same direction, and there is Mariko. She stands there with Miichan. I hear everyone calls her name and says, “Hisashiburi” to her. I smile as I could see is doing fine. She is here it means she watched our performance… I am glad, she still thinks about AKB in the middle of her tight schedule as a model. She looks at me then walks toward me.
“Hi, Acchan…. Genki?” asked her. I smile.
“Hi, Marichan… Un genki.”
“Yokatta~” she responses as she smiles at me. “….Acchan, gomen ne. I didn’t tell you about my graduation…”
“It’s fine Marichan….”
“You know, I wanted to tell you right at rehearsal but.... but the timing was not good. Then after finished, I looked for you but seemed like you went home earlier and yet I didn’t have any chance to tell you…”
“What a long explanation…” I chuckle, she does too… “….it is okay, Marichan. Knowing you are doing great now as model, I relieve. I wish for your success.”
“Thank you, Acchan….” said her as we are hugging each other. I am hugging Marichan now. I miss Marichan…
“Enough you two, enough…..” Miichan’s there and she is breaking our hug.
“Nee Acchan, Mariko is mine, don’t dare to touch her, got me?” she points at me, I laugh.
“I won’t Miichan… she is fully yours.” I smile. Mariko then walks away meets the other members, she seems miss all of us. She was one of us after all… Glad to see her doesn’t change a bit.
Today Minami walks me home again…. Since she had declared that she would always walk me home everyday. We are holding hands as usual. The wind is so cold, Minami knows I feel cold then she gives me her coat.
“How about you?” said me as she puts it on my body.
“It is not cold after all… I can manage it.” I put off her coat and put it on her.
“You just recover from flu, you want to be sick again?”
“It’s okay since you will be beside me and take care of me….” she giggles.
“Nani sore?” I poke her and then smile…
We have arrived at my house. We are in front of the door.
“You won’t come in?” She is shaking her head.
“It’s already late, I won’t disturb you…. You must sleep well tonight.”
“Are you okay going home alone, Minami?”
“Don’t worry… I am used to it. Trust me….I am gonna be okay.” When she said ‘trust me’ I relieve. I know I can trust her….
“Don’t forget to email me when you reach home…”
“Sure I will…….. I will email you right after I arrive home.”
we stay quite.
“Seems you look happy when you meet Mariko-sama today….” she doesn’t look happy.
“What’s wrong Minami?”
“Never mind… Okay, good night…” when she turns back, I grab her arm.
“You have not answered me yet…. Did you feel uneasy with that?” no response. “Minami…” I call her, she still quite. I walk to in front of her so I can clearly see her face. “Just tell me if you don’t like it…. I….I don’t want you to be like this. I know you dislike it…” she looks at me.
“Yes, I don’t like it… I don’t want to see you with other girls. If I see you with them, I…..got jealous.” what a honest girl. I hug her.
“Stupid. Didn’t you have marked me as yours? I belong to you right? You don’t need to be jealous, coz I am yours.” I release my hug and she is smiling there….
“Okay, no more doubt. You are mine and I am yours. Clear?” She nods. “Good…. Okay be careful Minami. Remember email me when you reach home.” she holds my hand.
“Thank you, Atsuko…. You are so important and glad that I have you…” said her as she kisses me on forehead. Then it comes down slowly and reaches my lips. We are kissing…. But we quickly end it.
“You know Minami, I want more….” I said… She smiles.
“I know, but we can’t continue here… Okay, get in…” I nod then I leave her and get in to my house. I walk to my room, turn on the lamp and open the curtain… She is there in front of my house. She is waving at me then slowly walking away. I can’t see her shadow anymore. Then I close the curtain and change my cloth. I lay on my bed and waiting for her message. For some minutes my phone is ringing.
Atsuko… I’m on my bed now.
Huaahem… I am so sleepy. So
you have to sleep right now too.
Have a nice dream, Atsuko.
I love you.
I pay full attention on that ‘I love you’ words. This is the first time she said I love you. I am happy but I need her to say it properly in front of me, not in a message. I reply it.
Glad that you safely reach home.
I am going to sleep now
I love you too Minami.
I love you so much.
Sent.
After that day, you’ve never showed up in theater… You always absent in every events and performances. I can’t fully concentrate with my jobs when I am still thinking about you…
I have asked permission to Aki-p and glad he understands. She lets me skips some events and performances so that I can take care of you…
Today I bring so many fruits to your house and some medicines.
You are there, sleeping on a bed, you look so pale, so weak… Really I hate seeing you like this. I sit beside as I place them on the table. I put my hand on your forehead, you still got high fever. I don’t know what should I do since you don’t want me to take you to the hospital…
Your parents are still overseas, they will be back tomorrow.... I worry about you, you have got fever for 5 days and that’s weird.
“It is because you were stubborn.” I said.
“Oh not again…”
“I know you are not okay on the day we performed but you still pushed your self. You have to concern about your own health once, Minami….” I change her wet towel.
“Yeah I am sorry, I just don’t want you worry about me.”
“By sacrificing yourself? I can’t take that reason…” I place a new wet towel on her forehead. She chuckles.
“There is nothing funny.” she is coughing. Then I quickly give her mineral water. She drinks it.
“I am sorry, I…”
“Don’t apologize… I hate it when you always say sorry for something that you have not even done anything wrong at.” she gives me the water. I place it on the table.
“Okay… No more talk. You have to rest….” she tries to close her eyes.
“Nee Atsuko….” said her still closing her eyes.
“Hm?”
“I can’t sleep…. I am tired of sleeping.”
“You don’t have any choice… You are sick and you have to sleep more so that you will be better and can do your activities.” I said as I fix her blanket.
“I try…”
I don’t know why Minami is this weak. She is never being sick before, but once she is sick, it takes so long. I hope she will be better soon and we can be together again…
“Why are you here? I think you will take care of Takamina at her house?” asked Kojiharu. Today I come to the theater and have dance practice.
“I will after I finish the practice.”
“I will come to her place tomorrow… I have something to do after this.”
“Okay, I will tell her….”
In the middle of practice Aki-p appears. He doesn’t look happy. He walks in front of us.
“Good evening everyone….” he greets as everyone replies.
“Well…..today I got bad news and I think I have to tell you all here…” I don’t know why my heart is beating so fast… I hope it is not about Minami. I look at him seriously.
“Your team mate has just taken to the hospital because of her serious illness.” Everyone makes some noises, they are curious whom he talks about. I keep praying as it is not my Minami….
“Who are you talking about?” asked Harugon.
“Well….actually… she is our beloved captain, Takahashi Minami.”
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What did I just write? :mon cry:
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:shock: cliffhanger!!!!!!!! :imdead:
Hope to read your next update! :on GJ:
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what??!!! :mon wtf: minami...?! is she'll be okay?? :panic:
more interesting.. :mon determined:
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eh? minami's condition got worse :stoned:
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Yappari!
I knew it!!!
MAN!!!
NO TAKAMINA!!!! :cry:PLEASE BE OK!!! I hope its nothing SERIOUS!!! :(
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Minami !!! Her condition got worse :shocked
Minami please be ok
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Noooooo!!! You can't do it!!! Don't make Takamina die!!!! Please!!!!
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Final Chapter
DEG! Did I hear Minami’s name? Is it true? Omg what happened to her? is her illness that serious? Yesterday she looked okay… I feel my body is shaking. I feel my feet so weak… Then Kojiharu holds me so that I can’t fall. Aki-p looks at me..
“Well, Atsuko… You may go first.” He gives me permission to visit Minami in hospital. Without thinking, I take my bag and run as fast as possible. I take train so that I could arrive there faster.
Minami…..Minami….
I keep running as I look for your room. I can’t find it. I panic so I just keep running. Then I meet a doctor there.
“Ex-excuse me… Do-do you know patient her name is Takahashi Minami?”
“Oh, Takahashi-san… Yes. The room is over there.” The doctor points the room at the corner. I bow to him as I said thanks. I run again and I see two persons there. They must be Minami’s parents. They are talking to the doctor… Her mother is crying, then her father is holding her… I don’t know what happened? Why is she crying? Is something bad happened to Minami? I cover my mouth, I feel my hands are shaking… My tears are falling down and it makes me more scared about Minami’s condition.
The doctor walks away, and Minami’s parents sit on the bench. With my full effort I walk toward them… They realize I am there and her father stands up.
“You must be Atsuko right?” Why does he know about me? This family is so weird. I am sure they have 6th senses…..
“Yes…” I answer… I try to hold my tears, but I am still sobbing.
“H-how is Minami, Uncle?” I ask him as her mother is crying louder. I look at her, I know the answer…. I know Minami’s condition is not good…. I am scared to hear about her condition…
“Atsuko…. Thank you very much you have taken care of my daughter Minami when we were not around.” he bows his head. I am shaking my head, then he looks at me again.
“We…..we are sorry if Minami had mistakes or she did something that made you mad. We are very sorry…” What the hell is he saying? Why this person said sorry to me? What happened actually?? I don’t like this conversation. I have to see Minami right now.
I open the door, and ignore that old man stupid story, and I see Minami’s there. I cover my mouth, and tears are falling…. Her condition even worst! I can tell it by just looking at her. I approach her and sit on the chair beside the bed. She even looks paler. I am crying so much now, I know she is suffering… Minami… I will be your power, I will support you, please wake up…….
Her dad comes in and puts his hand on my shoulder.
“Minami……. she has problem with her heart.” WHAT? HER HEART?? I look at him with are-you-serious-face…
“What do you mean, Uncle?” I can’t believe this old man story. How come she has this kind of sickness? She was fine lately… She could dance, she could move even faster than a monkey. And now he is saying what? Problem with her heart? Oh please I can’t believe it.
“Doctor said, 2 months ago she had come to this hospital to check up… She asked the doctor if she could dance this time because she will have a concert and stage performance. Then the doctor said Minami should be more careful with her steps, don’t move too often… The doctor was also surprised when she knew how healthy Minami was. He allowed her to dance then….” That must be the day when she came late to the rehearsal.
“Minami has this problem before she entered AKB48. At first we didn’t agree about her decision to get in this group, but she is the only daughter we have. At least she could be happy and can sing on the stage. Being a singer is her vision. We can’t say ‘no’ when it is related to her hobbies.”
Is that true Minami? Is that….true you have problem with your heart? Why Minami? Why you didn’t tell me about this? Why Minami, why? I’m crying so much as I hold her hand.
“Minami can be saved if there is someone who wants to transplant their hearts to her.” said him then he leaves us alone.
I am still crying…. How could you do this to me Minami? I won’t let you go! As what our promise that night, I won’t let you go, Minami! You can’t leave me alone!!
“Minami… Hiks….Minami…. please Minami…. Open your eyes…. Hiks.” I wipe my tears as I keep calling her name. “…Minami, you said you won’t go anywhere… You said you won’t leave me alone. You will always be with me…. I trusted your words. Minami! Wake up, Minami! Open your eyes!! I won’t forgive you if you leave me alone!!” I shout at her as I am still crying. No response from her.
“Minamiii….. hiks…. please open your eyes…. I don’t know I can live without you….Minami…” I am tired of calling her name. She won’t open her eyes….
She has not said she loves me yet, and now she wants to leave me alone? Minami… I need you. I don’t want you to leave me alone….
I fell asleep. I still on my position, on the chair with my head on the bed. I feel my eyes have already dried, I didn’t stop crying last night until I fell asleep. Then something warm touches my hand so that I open my eyes….It’s Minami’s hand. I am surprised as I call her name.
“Minami?!”
“Ohayou gozaimasu…”she smiles. Is it a dream? It is not. She is my Minami, right in front my eyes… She….wakes up! She opens her eyes! Thanks god, thanks!
“Ho-how are you feeling Minami? Are you feeling good? Which part of your body is in pain? I will call doctor!” Yes, I heard so panic. As I get up from the chair, she grabs my hand.
“Wow Atsuko… Easy!” she giggles. She is giggling. It means she is fine right? I am glad to see her like this.
“Why are you here anyway?” she asked.
“I was so panicked when I heard you were in hospital yesterday… So I decided to go here…” she touches my eyes.
“Wow… your eyes. Were you….crying?” Minami’s hand touches my eyes and it feels so warm… I nod. “You must be crying so much…. I am sorry Atsuko.”
“Why do you always say sorry, Minami? You don’t need to say it… I am glad you are okay now. You know, I am afraid if I lose you… “She strokes my hair as she smiles.
“I won’t go anywhere, I will always be with you…Always.”
Then she gets up and warms up. I try to pull her back on the bed.
“What are you doing Minami? You are still sick, you should not move too much. You have to rest…” I said as I grab her arm.
“I am okay Atsuko… Let me loosen up my body. It feels so good.”
“No, you have to sleep! Now!”
“Wow easy… You are like doctor now. Haha…”she laughs. Then she grabs my hand,
“Nee Atsuko… Let’s go somewhere!”
“Hah? No! You have to~”I have not finished yet as she pulls my hand outside.
“Wait here, I am gonna change my cloth. Okay?” BLAM. she closed the door.
“Mi…” Arrghh…… What is she thinking now? She is sick but she wants to go outside? I sit on the bench. Hmm…where are uncle and aunt? Maybe they went home?
JDAM. Minami’s there. She has changed her cloth.
“Okay let’s go!” she grabs my hand and pulls me.
“Minami! Where are we going?”
“Amusement park.”
“Hah?”
She keeps pulling me, I can’t against her strength. Even in that condition, Minami is still strong. I just can keep following her…….. Wait? We are going to amusement park? It means…..Our first date? First date with Minami? When I am thinking about it, my face gotten pink and blushed along the way.
<They have disguised themselves with hats and masker>
At amusement park
“Huaaaaaaaaaa I am here right now!” she looks so happy. She runs over there and over here. She doesn’t look like a patient. My Minami is back.
“What are you doing there? Come here, hurry!” She shouts at me as I am so far behind her. Then I run toward her and she holds my hand.
“Let’s have fun…” she said. I nod as I give her my smile.
We had ice cream, we had takoyaki, we rode rollercoaster, and many more. She keeps holding my hand and so tight. And then we head to the small park inside of the amusement park. We sit on the bench.
“Wait here, I’ll buy you something to drink.” she runs.. I wait for her and then after some minutes she appears with 2 cokes.
“Take it…” she said as she gave the coke. She sat next to me. I said, “Thanks..” I drink it as she did it too…
“I know Papa had told you about me…”she started talking. I look at her.
“I am sorry, Atsuko… I didn’t tell you earlier about this.” she bowed her head.
“You always treat me like this, Minami… What am I to you? Don’t you know how shocked I was when I heard that you have problem with your heart? It is too sudden!”
“I know I was wrong. Forgive me Atsuko… Please.”
“Fine… I won’t be mad at you as you are sick now… But please… Tell me if there is something happened to you.” she nods. Then she smiles again.
“Let’s go to have another ride!” she gets up and grabs my hand. She pulls me and looks for another play zone.
Here we are… In the spinning wheel ride.
“Woaaa takai!” she said as she looks the view from the window. Baka Minami… She seems so happy with this kiddy playing… We are already 20 but she seems so interested with this kind.
“Thanks Atsuko… You have accompanied me here. You know I’ve never been here.” she still looks at the view. Oh… I see. So that she is so happy right now. I smile at her. I am happy seeing her face right now....
GREK…GREK… This thing is stopping. Ehm? What happened? We are at top right now.
“Waaa!!!” Minami is shouting. What is it again??
“Look Atsuko! So beautiful!” Seems like she doesn’t realize that the wheel is stopping. I still sit and cross my hand in front of my chest.
“I am not interested….”
“Just look at this! Our city is so pretty at night!” she is still impressed. Ckk… Minami…. From the beginning that is all you do, seeing the view. Huff…It is just the two of us and you just see at that nothing-special view? Oh come on! I don’t give her any response. Then she turns around and finds me with boring face. Then she sits next to me…
“Are you not happy?” she asked. I just give her short answer, “Hm..”
“Are you mad?”
“Hm…”
She looks around and realize that we are at top and this ride is stopping right now.
“Oo…Why is this thing stopping?” Oh god this person….
“How could you didn’t know what is happening? Just continue seeing that view and forget about my existence here….” I look away. We stay quite.
Then her hands pull my face and now I am facing Minami.
“So you are mad?”
“I am not…” I try to look away, but she pulls my face again.
“Yes you are… Are you not happy? Sorry if I made you bore this time. I don’t know you don’t like going to amusement park…” Now her face looks so sad. Oh god I feel guilty now. She asked me to accompany her and she had to be happy but I made her sad. What have I done?
“I am sorry Minami… It is not because I don’t like going here. I do, but I hate it all you did were seeing that city view. You even forgot about me….” she looks at me.
“Really?” I nod. Then she hugs me…
“I am sorry then… I didn’t mean it Atsuko.” I close my eyes, try to feel her warm hugging. I reply her hug, and we are hugging each other. After some seconds she releases her hug and look into my eyes. She moves closer and kisses my neck. She marks it.
“Looks like the mark has already disappeared. I decide to make one…” she smiles at me.
“Just do whatever you like, Minami…”
“From now on, you are mine….” she said as she kissed me on the lips. Her kissing is different now, so rough. She puts her hands on my waist and she often moves her head left to right. Minami is different, but I like it. I hug her as I reply her rough kiss. Her hand is slowly moving to my cheek and rubbing it. I love it when she does that……. And then she breaks the kiss and looks at me… (Still in close distance)
“Atsuko….I love you.”
Finally she says it. I know she takes so much effort in saying that. I am really happy when I hear it.
“I love you too, Minami… I love you so much.” and then I kiss her with passionate way as she does the same. She pushes me so hard until I reach at the corner, I can’t move. She keeps pushing me so hard…… I can’t feel the air, I can’t breathe as she keeps kissing me roughly. I am enjoying this sensation, then I put my hands on her neck and pulls her so that she will kiss me with more passion. We do it so long until this ride is moving again…….
She breaks the kiss….
“Atsuko, are you happy now?” she asked.
“I am very happy, Minami……”
“Promise me you won’t cry again?”
“Yes Minami… I won’t cry again….” I said as she gave me her last hug.
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PLAK! That hand landed on my left cheek….
“How dare you take Minami outside?” She is shouting at me… I rub my cheek.
Yes…. I got slapped by her mom.
“Don’t you know she is in critic condition? How if something happened with her!” She sounds so angry. I can’t face her. I look down and regret everything.
“Okay mom… It’s okay… Let’s sit and wait for the doctor.” Uncle asked aunt to sit. They sit on the bench. I walk slowly to the window, I can see doctors and nurses are trying to help her. It is so sudden…. What happened to you Minami? Just now you were smiling at me, we were holding hands together, eating together, and….. kissing each other. I’ve got bad feeling about it.
Minami collapsed right after we rode that spinning wheel. I called ambulance quickly and took her to the hospital. Now she is in coma.
I keep prying to the god, I beg him to save Minami’s life.
Not long, one of the doctors comes out as uncle and aunt approach him.
“How is Minami?” asked aunt. I can hear doctor is sighing.
“Who is Atsuko?” asked the doctor. I walk toward him, my body is shaking.
“I…..am Atsuko.” I said.
“Minami keeps calling your name.” DEG! I can feel my heart is beating so fast. My tears will fall in some seconds but I have to hold it. I don’t want to cry. The doctor gives me the sign to go inside the room, then I start walking. I approach the weak Minami. She is sleeping on the bed… I sit on the chair beside her. Then I can’t hold my tears anymore. I am crying there….. I am crying so much…
“Minami…. I am sorry….Minami, I am sorry…..” I keep crying as I cover my face with my hands. It is all my fault. It’s all my fault. I can’t say ‘no’ to her… I know she is sick, but…. I let her to go out. I am sorry Minami….
“At….suko.” I hear that weak voice… She opens her eyes.
“Don’t……apologize.” she said.
“Minami…..” I hold her hand. “Minami…. I am sorry. I make your condition worst. It is all my faults.”
“Don’t say sorry….I said…..” she can’t talk much, I know she is so weak….
“I am……the one…..who asked you to….”
“Minami… hang in there… I don’t want to lose you, I don’t want lose you. You promised me!” My tears are falling even much.
“I am…..sorry Atsuko…. Looks like I can’t keep it….”
“NO! No Minami! No! You are strong, please don’t say it! Please!!!” I hold her hand tighter…
“Atsuko…. You have….promised me, right? You….you won’t cry…anymore. Remember?” I nod.
“Yea… I remember Minami….”
“Now, please….. don’t cry.”
“No Minami….No…..Please Minami, don’t leave me alone. I can’t live without you…”
“You can…. I’ll be always with you… Inside your heart. I’ll be there always….” her voice is weaker.
“Minami?” I call her……
“I…..love you Atsuko…” she said as she closes her eyes…
“Minami? Minami? Minami!!! Minami wake up! Please open your eyes!! Minami!! Don’t leave me alone!!! Please Minami!!!” I am crying louder now. I am shaking her body but no response…. I hear uncle and aunt come in and both of them are shouting Minami’s name… But still no response.
She had passed away………… Today is her funeral and every members come even her fans…. Most of them are crying and they never expected something like this will be happened to Minami…Our strong leader… Aki-p is there too and he looks so sad. He’s crying but he holds it… He has lost his precious leader forever.. Everybody wants to send her off.
I am going to the sea…. I can’t see Minami’s face, I can’t send her off…. Or I am going to cry again…
I walk slowly on the bridge as I bring a flower along with me…. I play with it…
I look at the sky and it’s shining… I assume Minami is smiling right now, seeing me from up there… Honestly I can’t smile right now. I am still in a deep sorrow and deep inside my heart I am still hoping for Minami…. But I know it is impossible… She had passed away. I can’t see her smile, can’t hear her laugh, can’t feel her warmness, can’t feel her soft lips again…… Then I start crying again…
“Minami…. I can’t. Living without you is impossible. It’s hard….. I can’t Minami….” I walk to the end of the bridge…. I throw away the flower….. I step forward until I reach the end of the bridge. All I can see it’s sea. So large and………looks so deep.
I am thinking to jump…. Leaving this world. The world without Minami… I close my eyes…. But I hear a voice and make me stop my action…
Don’t!
I open my eyes…. I feel like hearing Minami’s voice… I look around, but no one there. No Minami…. I step backward and wipe my tears…
“Minami….. Sorry I am this weak….” I look at the sky…..
“Minami…. I won’t cry anymore, I promise you…. I will never forget our moments, I will treasure it inside my heart…. Thanks Minami for everything you have given me….. Thank you so much, Minami….. You will always be in my heart and you can’t be replaced…” I smile and then I walk away and decide to send you off, of course with a smile.
END~
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:on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:
I never thought my fic will be like this :mon ghost:
note : Minna-san forgive me :mon runcry:
:mon POd: I will update my one-shot
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OMG!!!!!! :fainted: You killed Minami~~~~ NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! :pleeease:
Acchan... ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!! :mon waterworks: I'm crying!!!! waaaaaaa.... :on speedy:
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:stoned:
oh noooo she died isk..isk... :mon cry:
untill the last moment ... :mon waterworks:
thank you :fainted:
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eh ??? :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked
whuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
this story to saaaaaad~ :cry: :cry: :cry:
but i like it. please make another atsumina~ :bow: :bow: :bow:
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haw dare you killed my minami~~~~~~~~ :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease:
i want to die too.. :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:
anyway like sora-nee said make another one! you're good! :on GJ: but please don't make manami die in you're another fic
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YOU :shocked!!!!!!!!!!
No.No.No.No!!!!!! It can't be!!!!
WHY!!!!
how dare you kill TAKAMINA!!!!!
what happened to my ATSUMINA!!!!! :banghead:
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Ok, Im about to cry. Takamina die :( . Aww. Torturing for acchan to be alone now :( .
It's a pretty good fic, first time reading this. But it's so heartwrenching! T.T. Otsukare
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i don't like sappie ending.. but your fics are really good~ :mon thumb:
this chapter reminds me with one of j-movie... but i like it XD
oh yes, you're success for make me cry too.. :mon cry: :pleeease:
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Minami might have died
But their love for each other will never die
I hope you can make another Atsumina story again
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You dared! Nooooo!!! Takamina!!!! T_T but the dtory is great but takaminaT_T
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And yesh! I will make another story....
anyway like sora-nee said make another one! you're good! :on GJ: but please don't make manami die in you're another fic
Un! I won't :yep:
yehey! thanks! :)
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:cry: NO!!!!!!!!! Minami Died!!!!!!!! :cry:
Why!!!!!! :( It was sooo sad :OMG:
But nevertheless it was a good story :oops:
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I love your story but YOU KILL HER!!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Thank for your fic :fainted:
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uwaaa you are one of my favorite author moekare!! I love how you make stories with full expression of the characters' feelings.
GAAH I knew it when TakaMina got sick for the second time that the ending would be like that.. It's so sad though... GAAAH
After all those sweet moments they still ended up being separated.. :gyaaah:
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Nande!?!?!?!? :gyaaah: :OMG:
You know I was reading this in the middle of the class (when i read i forget about my surroundings o.o) and I freakin' cried... And my classmates were lookin' at me....gahh that was so embarrassing..... :frustrated:
Also During the scene starting from the hospital where Takamina suggest to go out that kind of reminded me of "majisuka gakuen" when Yuko was also about to die. And when they were in the amusement park I thought...."awwww....Takamina wanted to spend her last day at least happy" :farofflook: (I kinda knew the ending will be like this) *i will not get over this...* :tantrum: :err:
but good story...good story...and at first I didn't get what "DEG" meant until later...lolololol.... :on lol:
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OMG you made me cry
I can not believe you killed Takamini
anyway ... great story
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why the hell did you kill Minami!!! :fainted:
it was sooo cute and beautiful but then you have to end it with tragic :gyaaah:
you are sooo cruel :tantrum: but I really like the story. Nice job :farofflook:
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i love ur story... :thumbsup
but why u have to kill takamina? :cry:
WHY? :banghead:
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Glad I didn't read all your chapter, author san
I hate angst. :smhid
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Why? Why? Why? :cry: