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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: cocos_milos on November 10, 2011, 09:29:32 AM
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Hai minna!!! I just want to post a story since I have read a lot fanfic and it give me a little motivation to write this story.. most of the story relate to my own experience.. I hope you like it.. I just try my best and I hope can produce more idea in this fanfic..
before that sorry for my English I'm not good in it, especially grammar and spelling.. :nervous :panic: :nervous
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This is because of you father, you want a son but I’m the only daughter that you have got after my twin brother died because of illness.
“Takamina, why are you so, angry and upset with your father?"
" I can see in your eyes since past 2 years, it full with hate and depressed, is it about Kai ” Mom ask me one day before my flight.
With tears that appears to come out from my eyes finally I have courage to share my feeling with my beloved mother..
“He’s not around anymore"
"Kai went away because of that stupid! decease.." I try to hold my anger.
"He’d get two shot everyday but he never cried..It because Father tell him that if he cried he won’t get better and make me feeling sad if I heard him… and so Kai never cried.. not even once..but he wouldn’t get better..Why my father be like that? When he can’t take care of Kai.. Why would he tell him not to cry? When it’s ok to cry, when he was just a child.. Couldn’t take care of him..”
“Your father probably crying to himself my dear.. he went a different way, you can see his eyes during the funeral day remember? ” my mom try to convince me..
“I cries a lot, when I saw him get shot.. afraid when grandma get angry..” I try to smile while wiped the tears.
“When a ten year old boy or girl cries and you’re trying to have them to stop crying, do you know what they need most mom....? ”
“A hug and ice cream”
that’s why I want to leave Japan for a while to treating my emotional, my feeling and most important my soul.. I put my last cloth in the beg…and zip it…
“Good night mom!!” I than walk to my bad after prepared myself to sleep, before I close my eye I touch my necklace and hold the locket.
[Flashback]
Kai give it to me on my 7th birthday and the card says it is by generation to a generation and only one in this world. If you see the locket its perfect but my brother told me it is a couple locket. I ask Kai where is the other part of the locket he said it was a destiny that I {Takahashi Minami} had been chosen to engage to someone since before I were born. It is our ancestors prophecy and the name on the ring locket is my fiance name and Kai hope that I can find her/him one day. Scine I got the necklace before sleep I would say...
“Good Night ATSUKO, where ever you are, sleep tight.. (^_^) ZZZZZzzzzzzzzz...”
The next day..
“Ok Mom I’ll follow Dad’s order after I graduate and get my Master degree there…
give me 5 years and I promise ! I’ll become your good and loyal son after I come back to Japan.. give me 5 years so that I can be myself and feel my freedom for a moment as a girl,” Takahashi Minami say to his father by not making an eye contact and grab her luggage from the car and put on the trolley at the airport. They walk in together and Takamine recheck her passport and ticket.
Suddenly an announcement “ flight to USA.. Passenger please enter gate 48”
“Hai!! That’s my call bye mom dad” Takamina hug her mother tight and shake hand with her father.
“Take care Takamina.. If you need anything call us or your cousin or best friends ..be safe ok!!”
I than walk slowly to the departure’s gate while waving bye to my beloved mom and I shout “ I forgive you dad..”
Takamina = has a twin brother that name Kai but he died because of illness, Takamina blame her father that he can't treat the decease and Kai feel the pain every time he get his medicine by injection. She is a genius kid, went to USA to study at age 13years old and treating her soul because of his brother died..
Kai = know about the Prophecy that make by their ancestor because he heard the story from his granddad and assume his sister is
"the chosen one" by looking at the sign that only he, his dad and granddad know about it.
Please give me a good comment and reply so that I can motivate my self.. Thanks a lot...
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Eh?? :dunno: I kinda lost here... Kai already died right?? and Takamina was mad at her dad??
How old is she now?? I got confused by her 7th birthday, that Kai gave her a locket?? :dizzy:
So, the locket actually belonged to Kai, and the other ring locket belonged to Atsuko... :mon dunno: the one that destined to be engaged to Kai??
So, she's going to replace her brother??? :mon star: And engage to Atsuko??
Gah!!! I'm getting excited already!!!! :mon lovelaff: update soon~~~ :mon dance:
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HOhoho~~ Nice Intro~~~ :lol:
Yea!! I can feel Atsumina~~~ XD
:w00t: So Acchan and Takamina are destined to be together~~ :)
:bow: Please update soon :thumbsup
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( CHAPTER 1 )
It’s been 5 years..
United State become my second home..
yesterday is my graduation day… thank god finally I got my Phd. Instated of Master degree that I promise my Mom and guest what... through the years I spending my life here, I manage to improve my relationship with my Father. Thank God, that open my heart and forgiveness.
The youngest candidate.. I guest!! Today I just want to get rest from the books and open my laptop suddenly after activate my SKYPE…
“Moshi..moshi..O..hai yo?? Takamina congratulate on your graduation.. Dad have a surprise for.. but guest what you need to come back to Japan ASAP [as soon as possible… please!! ]”
Here we go again… he used “please” I can’t say No if some want used “please” I don’t know why.. just I can’t stand to hurt people feeling ..
“But dad you know that I don’t want to go back to Japan.. If I’m in Japan I need to attend high school senior .. because of my age, although I’m a genius…” “ come on dad don’t do this to me…” “Mom.. help me come on..” Takamina suddenly ask her mother with pity voice.
“Don’t be like that remember what you promise your dad 5 years ago?? We have did our job this time it’s your turn Takamina and don’t worry about that, you’ll past it with flying colors”
“Come back soon!! It’s about your granddad will.. it’s important! and Of course your graduation present… Mom and dad will send Meetan as your personal guide to turn you to a boy 100%… for a week but I bet you will be in Japan in 3 days because you are genius kid, as you know you act like a boy, you think like them most of the situation, it just your hair need to be change or fix.. because inside you 90% is boy ahahha.. the 3 of them laugh..”
“See you tomorrow TAKAHASHI MINAMI Your Highness!"” say Meetan
“ooohoi..!! mmm.. Hey, don't call me that."
Hei Takamiget !!! come back soon!! Suddenly I heard the back ground sound… that’s right all your cousin are here you know… Miichan, Sae, yuko, mayu ,Tomomi and rena..
“get back soon we have a lot to chat about, you will be in the same school with us but..” Miichan say while take the IPAD from my mother..
“ok girls.. be careful using the IPAD its new” I can hear dad say while mom give the thing to Miichan..
“We will surprise her .” say Rena and Yuko to the other girls
“eh..?? not her.. but him.. remember she promise to become a boy Yuko, Rena..” say Sae, mayu and Tomomi together…”hahaha.. Ta-ka-boy”
“ come on you guys.. Miichan, Yuko any good news?”
“ Yes, of course! There are twin tower love is going on here, say Miichan while pointing at blushing Sae and all the girls start to have a big smile”
“Twin tower..??? like KLCC, Malaysia?? what is it um…” Takamina say wonder about Miichan statement.
“Miichan don’t say more about the school stuff, it won’t be surprise anymore if she new all !!” All the girls say loudly suddenly…
“ok..ok.. my bad, see you soon takaboy” say Miichan waving at here with all her best friends aka her cousin.
“Ok, take care Mom,Dad, Miichan, Sae, Mayu, Rena , Chiyuu<Tomomi> and my squirrel Yuko.. Bye” I than close my laptop and walking to get ready to go to gym for the last kickboxing class and say good bye to my colleague..
The next day, Meetan arrived at the airport I grab my mini cooper keys and speed to the airport..
Like mom say I manage to turn myself to a boy character in 3 days but my hair.. Meetan suggest I wear a wig. I try it not only ones but twice, it look fake to me not real and I feel uncomfortable. So, I make up my mind with a hard decision. That is to cut my precious hair near the airport before I take the flight, when I go out from the shop Meatan approach me and her eye was bright and her hand cover her mouth avoid her from screaming..
“Takahashi-san!! What you do to your hair?? ”
“nanni..?what.. you want it short and look like a boy right..?? am I get a wrong cut? Is it honorable..? ” I widen my eyes and see my face at the shop mirror.
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Thank you for the update :bow:
Its interesting XD
Hehe.. I wonder what will happen next :P
Update soon XD
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Oh! Update :heart:
I wonder what Takamina looks like now XD
Update soon :bow:
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her parent want her to be a boy?? can I ask why?? (sorry for asking... I'm always confused... :sweatdrop:)
When Meetan call her your highness, means that she comes from royal family?? :nervous
I wanna know what happened to her hair~~ XD
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I completely like it!!!!!
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Please update the next chapter. Like your fic :P2
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I got a little confuse at the beginning :dunno:
but for sure this will be interesting
but how did she try to be a boy in the first place?
Is she replacing her brother or something? :dunno: :dunno:
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:shy2: I like it! Waiting for your next update!
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Hai.. you guys and girls.. sorry to make you all confuse.. :bow: I just came up with the idea and write what that just come in my mind.. sorry with my English.. thanks for the comment... 8) So, Sorry if the story is kind of boring.. :sweatdrop: :nervous
CHAPTER 2
.......Flashback.......
I slept all the time during the trip. After arrived, I and Meetan went straight to the castle to hear the will. My father and my mother was very happy with my look and appearance.
“ To my beloved granddaughter:
I want to tell you a story, our ancestor have make a prophecy that among the 7th generation in our blood line there will be a young prince that have a good and very kind soul. He will be bring a good prosperous, peaceful and will make the country become great and harmony. He also will be married a young princess with have a good heart that’s make the all our people love her. At first, I thought it is your brother because among my grandchild he is the only boy. So, I give him the necklace.
But its turn out that is you TAKAHASHI MINAMI because you have the two sign that our ancestor predict. The first sign is the birthmark on your chest like a crown shape. The second is the most important sign, you are the only one know the lyric of “the song”. The song was created by our first generation. The past generation, your cousin and your brother only know the melody of the song. I heard you sing accidentally when you are playing with your brother on your 7th birthday. That’s why after I told the story to Kai and he give you the necklace. The necklace that have your fiance name “ATSUKO”. When the necklace attached together you will turn to a prince physically and you will use your brother’s name. so, that is why you need to be a boy because the magical will happen and to avoid people from confuse.
[once our heir to the throne is a girl but suddenly its turn to a boy this statement will bring confuse to public and not many that believed there is a magic].”
After I heard the will I feel shock and scared because I will be the king. Its have many responsible to the people and country. Mother calm me down with a hug and say to me “you will make it don’t worry...you will make it don’t worry”.
Father told me that I will be in study at the “ Royal Academy”, the boarding school with that a royal blood, rich and clever kid. Most of their family support their studies. but I will went there as the royal scholarship holders. So that, no one will recognize me as the crown prince, I will be more independent and careful with my money although I have my private account. Beside that, dad ask me to be the advisory board of national audit as my first jobs as a prince. He told me to audit all the tax money to see the money was use properly or there are people that take the money as their own profit.
.......End of flashback.......
I went to the school to check out and see the place, but I cant enter the school with my outfit but Finally I manage to enter the school. At first I was surprised it was girls’ school but from the inside there are student that wearing a gakuran. What is happening here??
I walk by the corridor, there is a pool, gym, basket ball court there are many facilities. While I’m walking and taking picture of the place suddenly I saw a girl on a bench… reading a book under the large sakura tree. She is so diligently read the book.. I looked at her. She had a beautiful eyes that very captivating. Her shoulder length hair swayed with the wind.. she so, focus with the book not aware there is eyes watching her. I took some picture of her..
Suddenly the beauty eyes turned a gaze towards me with fierce look. “ ya bai!! She see me. I’m in big trouble” she than scream “Intruder!! Help…Kidnapper !!” the scream make my heart beat faster. I ran towards the bushes near the school fence. I heard many footsteps. It might be the guards. Damn, they are going to find me here.. Out of the blue, I saw a girl walking to my direction and she is …"Yuko". I jumped out from my hiding place and grab her to the bushes while cover her mouth to stop her from yelping.
“mmmmm….”
“hey… stop moving its me… OUCH!! You bit me.. hey its me TAKAMINA” I turn her face to see me so that he recognize me.
“TAKAMINA!!” she than hug me with a smile
“shu..p.., silent... be quiet..”
“why are we whispering …”
Footsteps… Footsteps..
Suddenly, one of the guard saw Yuko school uniform. “Hey you back there what are you doing?”.
Yuko get up and face the guard while her eyes see my hand sign (Takamina) “ don’t tell I’m here” I than put my index finger to my lips.“ Nothing… I just pick up my pin. It just drop here why?”
the guard say “oo.. be careful there is an intruder.. if you see him Scream loudly so that we can hear you… ok” then the guard walk away.
Yuko than face takamina “ what are you doing here, I almost did not recognize you?”
“I just came to see the school, tomorrow I will register in.”
"How did you get in here with the outfit?"
I show the fence..
"you climb up the fence how genius takamina.."
I make a peace sign with wide smile. "so can you help to lift me up to the fence know.. hehehe.., so that I can leave know before the guard find me.."
Over the fence Takamina say thanks to Yuko..
Suddenly there are an announcement. " Ding.. dong.. bell… To All student of the Royal Academy you are required to assemble in the great hall right now because there is intruders. We need to check the school safety. Thank you".
You better go know Takamina say Yuko while waving hands and wink eyes, " thanks for helping me I owe you one… see you tomorrow.. bye.."
Yuko Pov….
While I’m walking to the great hall, I think of what just happen I can’t imagine to see Takamina today.. How she doing that.. for the first time our school safety have been brake down.. how genius she is… the paparazzi and the photography can’t even enter the school to take the picture but he manage to make it… I need to ask her how… I need to tell "them" there is not intruders but our genius Takamina crazy action that never change.. I than smile as I walk..
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i need to says that im a little confused.. I think that takamina gonna be a boy but its a girl who turn to a boy but she gonna be in woman`s high school so she dont need to be a man right?.. but with the spell or something gonna be a real man when the necklace are togheter? its right? jajaja sorry im confused a lot
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Hahaha Takamina is a genius ^^
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hahaha... now I understand.. Great flashback... but now I'm confused about the school... she'll enter the girl's school as a boy??
update soon... :twothumbs
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omg this is so interesting!! pls update soon xD
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CHAPTER 3
.......AFTER STAY AROUND 30 MINUTE AT THE GREAT HALL TO ENSURE THE SCHOOL SAFETY YUKO GET AROUND TOGETHER WITH ALL HER COUSIN AT THE SCHOOL CANTEEN AND HAVING A TEATIME.......
“Our school safety have been break down.. I couldn’t imagine who do it..” Sae say to break the ice [start a conversation]
“That’s mean we need to be more careful.. It’s very scary.. the person could be a rapists or a criminal..” Tomo~mi gives her own thought while put her plates with a strawberry cake on the table and sit on a chair next to Sae.
“Hai.. hai.., that even disturb my good time..”
“ I’m watching anime and chatting with my friends that time” Mayu make a face that she is not satisfied that they need to go to the great hall 30 minutes ago.
“Mayu… don’t be like that It is about our safety.. we will be in great danger , someone attempt to hurt us maybe…” Rena say with a worried mode..
“But.. the guy is s-u-p-e-r.. genius to break the school safety.. don’t you think yuko?” Miichan say while facing Yuko having a big smile and ate her ice-cream that she bought.
With a calm and simile face Yuko say “I know the person... the person that make this things happen..”
“Nanni..!! who??” they asks together facing Yuko with a shock and wide eyes, Miichan and Sae almost sprayed out their food from their mouth..
“It’s Our Takamiget.. She come to school to look around” yuko said
“What!!!” together the spill the words..
“when did she come back?” Miichan ask
“Yesterday..”
“ but you girls should see her look.. her hair even shorter than Sae.. Such Kawaii!!!” Yuko say and make a lovely dovely look
“What her hair is shorter than me… I can’t wait to see her” Sae said with a huge smile in her face..
“ When she will register and come to this school?” Miichan ask
“She will register tomorrow, she said to me before she leave…” Yuko reply
“Guest what, the school will become more exciting and much interesting matter will be happen” Mayu say after took a sip of her tea
“with her crazy idea and thought, our Student Committee will have a lot of trouble..” Rena add the fact to the conversation.
“Yes… that’s right…”
“But remember We need to hide her identity as the Crown Prince to protect her. We just to introduce her to the other student as our cousin or our best childhood friends..” Tomo~mi remind the promise that they make to Takamina’s parents.
“Yea!! I really want to see her tomorrow, Thanks Yuko for the info.. I need to go practice now.. bye girls” Sae than get up from her sit and walk away to change her cloth. She had basketball training.
After that, all the girls move to their own way, with their own planning program for that day.
At one corner of the canteen...
“Acchan, why they sit together?” Yukirin say to Acchan while pointing at Sae, Yuko, Mayuyu, Rena, Tomo~mi and Miichan.
“mmm, I dont know, it’s very rare to see the cousins sit together” Maeda Atsuko say to Yukirin
“But you can see.. their eyes were shining and their face with smile.. I never see Chiyuu look so happy” Itano Tomomi say to her bestfriend to make the topic become more hotter.
“What are they discussing, I’m dying to know...” Jurina say curiously..
“ara... ara.. they have finish, Acchan go and ask Miichan you close to her..” Sayaka give an idea. She see Sae leave the group behind to go to her room.
Acchan waving her hand to Miichan, and ask Miichan to come to where they are sit.
“Hai.. my wify,miss me..” Miichan wink her eyes..
“Miichan, I want to ask you something... can I?” Acchan start the conversation
“Yes, anything you can ask me.. my wify” Miichan make a chu mouth..
“mmm, what are you cousins discuss together?, It very rare to see you all sit together... If you don’t mind to answer my question” Acchan ask with her eyes watching Miichan face.
“ooh... about that ...the school will be more interesting.. our master planning and genius best friend will register in tomorrow, I wonder the school will be more exciting..” Miichan say with happy face. Then, Miichan leave because she has something to do…
“Acchan, somehow I have a bad feeling about this person” Mariko-san say suddenly and finishing her cake.
The next day..
The Principals took Takamina to her room…
Principals say to Takamina:
“Takahashi-san your room number is 48, In the room there is bathroom, a computer with internet access, this is phone that you can only mesej, e-mail or call the students in the school and your parents only. This school give chance to student to wear a boy or girl school uniform as their outfit although this is a girl’s school.”
Takamina put her things in the room and then walk together with the principals to her office.
“The gakuran you wear is really suit you but you look like a yankee a little bit with the plaster on your head”. The principals say to Takamina
“Thanks, I take it as a compliment. Oh, the plaster I hurt myself while I wake up this morning . Principle you also look great” Takamina say to the principals with smile.
At the principals office:
“Takahashi-san, for this moment you will stay in class 2-C. But after the mid-exam if you get a good result you will change class. As you know in there is 3 class in this school A, B and C. Class C is the lowest and most of the student have an average marks in exam but excellent with their curriculum. I know you are genius that’s why I put you in that class so that you will motivate the student to aim higher. I know you can do it. One of your cousin is in that class her name is...”
“Oshima Yuko” Takamina finish the principals last word.
“How to you know?” principle ask.
“I know her very much, she hate math.. that’s why her result is average” Takamina answer.
Principle holding Takamina both hand and say “ I really need you to improve the class result..”
“Hai!! Got it” takamina say with responsible.
The President of Student Committee will take you to your class..
Knock… Knock..
"there she is, come in.."
Takamina POV:
When the door open I saw a girls taller than me appear but she look familiar. Yes, that the girls she saw yesterday but she don’t ware her glasses today... I point my finger at her and say....
Atsuko POV:
Principals ask me to go to her office. Maybe it’s the new student that Miichan’s bestfriend. I need to take her to her class. When I enter the room, I see such a Kawaii!! Boy but she look like a yankee with a plaster on her head. Then why she looks so familiar, are we have meet before?.. then my mind gathered the information. The boy that I see yesterday... she is the intruders.. I point at her and say...
Suddenly the words coming out from both mouth...
“YOU..”
“YOU..”
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TAKAHASHI MINAMI HAS 2 ROLE:
1. AS herself, A GIRL WHEN ENTER THE SCHOOL, BUT SHE ALREADY CUT HER HAIR. Besides that’s , she will live on her own in the bungalow near the boarding school during school holidays to be independent and have an experience how the ordinary citizen live.
2. AS A BOY (KAI) WHEN HE NEED TO DO A JOB AS A CROWN PRINCE such as sign a memorandum of understanding (MOU) between the countries, matter that relate to international relationship.
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So sorry.. I late to post my chapter... :depressed: hope you all like it... I don't have any idea any more... :dizzy:
Need to take a rest and think more... :dunno:
See yea again...bye :byebye:
Thanks for the reading :onioncheer:
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ahhh ok i got it!! jajaj master mind.. its gonna be interesting. Jajaj maeda and takahashi ..fight gonna be epic too I can wait.. thnax for upload soon
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it's awesome so far xD i even clicked on the notify button so that if there are any updates from u i will definitely shoot here and read! keep it upxD but don't stress yourself ^^ looking forward to the next update (Y) :twothumbs
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Mean minami is a girl when around Maeda ? And maeda suppose to marry Kai (minami bro) but turn out minami (kai form). Is it right ?
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Wow!!! :w00t: Awesome Update!!! XD
Finally Takamina going to the school!!! :peace:
:wub: Takamina a kawaii :inlove:
XD I want to read more~~ :heart:
:panic: Please Update Soon :thumbsup
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Taka playing 2 roles~~~ :on lol: nice2... now I understand... somehow its sounds really complicated later... being a girl and being a boy at the same time... :hehehe:
Update soon.... :kneelbow:
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CHAPTER 4
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You girls know each other…? The Principals ask..
Quickly Takamina answer the question “No, we just meet yesterday coincidentally”
Anyway, my Name Is TAKAHASHI MINAMI, you can call me Takamina, yoroshiku onegaishimasu”
“Oh.., My name is MAEDA ATSUKO usually known as Acchan, yoroshiku onegaishimasu”
“Mmmm… Before we go to my class, If you don’t mind I would like to take a picture with you and the principals because we maybe not see each other, if we don’t have any matter. This is just for my diary photo collection shows that I have an opportunity to know the most important person in this school” Takamina ask shyly
Takamina walk and stand next to the principals “ 1..2…3.. flash..” atsuko take the picture using Takamina phone.
Then, Takamina walk to stand next Atsuko because of the height the principals ask Acchan to sit on her chair and Takamina standing behind her. “can you put your hand on Maeda’s shoulder like you hug her from behind? The picture will look great. The principals suggest to Takamina and Atsuko .
“It’s Ok ? Atsuko.. ops.. sorry, Acchan?” takamina ask Maeda because she look a little bit blushing.
“mmmm.. yes it’s ok principals” we even look like a fiancé in this position Acchan say in her heart.
“1…2…3… flash.!!” Nice the principals say. Before they leave the room Acchan Bluetooth the picture with Takamina’s phone and say to Takamina
“I hope this picture we keep it safe and careful. If this picture spread at the school there will be a hot gossip about me and you.” Acchan speaking with firm tone voice.
As they start walking together at the corridor, they arrived in front of 2-A class room. “This is my class” Acchan say to takamina with a proud voice.
Suddenly , they came across the 2-C class teacher Kajiura Hisako.
“This is Kajiura Hisako sensei, she will be your class room teacher ” Maeda Atsuko introduce the teacher to Takamina.
“ Thank you Maeda-san, I will take Takahashi to the class room. You can get back to your class” Maeda than turn right to get into her class..
“My..!! My! My! My! So cute!!” the teacher look at Takamina and pinch her cheeks.
“Ummm, sensei ?”
“I’m sorry. It’s because you’re so cute. If there’s any trouble, please consult or see me”
“Thank you, nice to meet you. yoroshiku onegaishimasu”
“It’s okay. You’re welcome. Nice to meet you to Takahashi- Kun”
“You’ll be in class 2-C”
“ Don’t worry, they are all a nice girls. You’ll become friends with them quickly”
“Umm.. but.. miss Kajiura…”
“HI-SA-KO”
“E..h..??”
“Please call me miss Hisako”
“I understand miss Hisako…” Takamina bowed her head.
“Very good. Here. A reward for you” the teacher hand is close. She open and put the thing on Takamina palm.
“Candy?..Don’t you think this is really okay?...what if they don’t like me?”
“hmmm.. well..It’ll be alright. Everyone will envy you.”
“Do you think so.”
“Come on, a negative attitude like that is never good”
“you say that, but…”
“Just be confident!”
They walk in the class together, the teacher introduce takamina to the class.
“She is a new student just came back from America. She will wearing a gakuran so it will look good with her appearance. The Principals insist to improve this class result, that’s why she will be studying with us from now on, Takahashi-san”
“My name is Takahashi Minami, yo..yo.roshiku onegaishimasu. Everyone is staring at me.. yappari (I knew it) that dressing like a boy..wouldn’t work..”
“So, Cute”
“Huh..”
“She’s so cute” everyone say
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“Her cool eyes are wonderful !”
Suddenly the class monitor Oshima Yuko run towards Takamina. Jump and hug her tight.. “Welcome back Takamina!”
“Huh… Yuko do you know her?” the student ask and shock with Yuko sudden action
“Yes indeed, she is my cousin and my best friend” Yuko said with happy smile.
Then Takamina take a place next to Yuko. The place she sit is on the right of the class room blackboard near a window that she can see a Sakura tree spot [one id Sakura tree in the center and there are six Sakura tree that surround it] there are a bench, chair and table. So that, student can review their study, have a study group or even have a teatime together because it’s locate beside the canteen. At that time Takamina didn’t realize that she become the hot topic among the student.
“Did you hear? A new student in Class 2-C”
“She is so cute that everyone’s falling in love with her”
“Not only that, she pass the entrance exam with the highest scores”
“Wow! Cute and good grades”
“I’m dying to know her”
At the moment: Mariko, Atsuko and Tomochin walk in to the canteen/ cafeteria
“Acchan, don’t you think everybody seemed a little noise at the cafeteria/canteen today?” Mariko say with unsatisfied voice.
“Yes, it seems that way” Yukirin added
“May be it’s about the new student that transfer today TAKAHASHI MINAMI” Acchan reply to them.
“ She is the fist one that call me "Atsuko" that make my heart feel uneasy and I really hope she keep the picture safely” Acchan thought at the time at make her face look a little worry.
"Are you okay Acchan?" Tomochin ask looking and holding Acchan hand.
"Hum.. ye.. yes.. Let's go eat.." they walk together to buy the food.
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So, sorry don't have an idea... :panic: Need to think more best moment.. :nervous Sorry for my English.. :bow: :sweatdrop:
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Taka cute!!! and popular.. LOL... :lol: somehow this reminded me of an anime that I watched... XD
update soon.. :bow:
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Yes!!!! Update!! :thumbsup
Takamina cute, smart and popular!!!!! :w00t:
:inlove: I LOVE :heart: this setting~~~ :inlove:
Can't wait to read more :banghead:
Thanks for the Update XD :peace:
:bow: Please Update Soon :twothumbs
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I'm with Flean and Yagami.Rai.
Taka's awsome.
I like how Atsuko said we even look like a fiancé in this position
Can't wait for your next update.
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its ok.. i wanna have that picture :d like a fiance :D
jajaj why acchan going mad about "atsuko" name I think is a pretty name :D
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Takamina is in da place!
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CHAPTER 5
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After the school session I walk to my room that is locate last in the 2nd floor of the building. On the right of the room is an open space. The student can hang out with their friends to release their tension but it full of bushes. I think it needs to remake the landscape. Maybe I will make a proposal to the principal to rebuild the landscape as I don’t have any activity in the evening. To go to the library we need to walk through the bushes. From my room I can see there are a building with the Student Committee on the 2nd floor and a library on the ground floor.
“Good evening Takahashi-san”
“Good evening” Wow, everyone is greeting me.. since this morning when I enter the class. Maybe because I’m a new student. They want to be polite I guest . I then place my school beg on my table in my room. I was smiling so much today that my face hurts now. I kinda feel exhausted. I look at the mirror and wonder myself Atsuko was right, now I’m the most intention of the school bulletin and magazine. Why my tongue can’t speak “Acchan” Maeda Atsuko nickname? why?. Is She the one that prophecy said…I murmured myself while change my school uniform to a T-shirt and gin pants. Suddenly a knock on my door… I open it and..
“Hey, Takamina welcome back!” Six of them hug me tight.
“Hey.. yo.you.. guys..en.. enough.. I can’t breathe! I need Oxygen” they then let me go.
“Are you okay?”
“Finally I can breathe freely. I fine but just a little tired smiling today as everyone greeting me.”
“You are very lucky to have this big room. Even 30 people can stay in this place. Our room 3/4 smaller than your room. Actually this is a warden apartment but since the student committee take the job to take care of us then there are no warden now.” Yuko said with a bit jealous.
“Ara..ara don’t be like that. My door is open to you guys. You all can stay and study with me anytime...”
But guys can you tell me about who are in the Student Committee I just want to know ” Takamina point at the opposite side of her room that is student committee room. There are four people in there. Takamina notice Atsuko in the room.
“ Tell me about Maeda Atsuko aka Ac…chan..” I then roll up my tongue in my mouth. Her nickname make me very difficult to say.
“Why do you want to know my wify??” say Miichan
“Wify.. Who wify..”
“Takamina, Miichan called Acchan as her wife/wify because they are close since the first day they meet when enter the school.” Sae explain
“MAEDA ATSUKO: also known as Acchan. Class 2-A. She’s the President of Student Committee. She’s been the President since fresh man year. She is a princess from a wealthy family but already have a fiancé since she was born. I don’t know who.. She’s very pretty girl with a slender body along side with her eye glasses she gave off a strict, scary and chic aura. She consistently achieving high score in the exam but never get all subject a perfect marks. She’s the most popular girls along with her best friend Itano Tomomi. Your cute and clever appearance may threaten her popularity. You need to be careful Takamina” Sae said.
“Who is beside her? Do you know her Miichan” Takamina point at the person beside Acchan.
“ She is Shinoda Mariko. Class 3-A. She is repeating year student because of sickness, she stay in the hospital for a very long time last year. A tall, cool girl who models part-time for fashion magazines. She is mature for her age and is good at giving advice. At times, She Seems to have a perfect aura around her, often tells a lame jokes and she is very strict on the school rule. At school she always wears a boy uniform. She is decent to everyone, but she does like picking fights with a certain people such as ME. I not agree with her most of the time and we even quarreled sometime since we first met” Miichan continue telling Takamina about Shinoda Mariko.
FLASHBACK HOW MINEGISHI MINAMI MEET SHINODA MARIKO
On the day I walk to School to register as the 2 grade in high school. I saw a tall boy walk slowly on the same side of the road.. He didn’t aware that the zebra crossing light just flush to red and I Grab him…
“Aaaah! What the hell are you..” he say to me
Suddenly a Taxi brake with emergency next us. “Are you trying to kill yourself?!” with an angry voice the taxi driver said to the tall boy.
“you could be have been hurt, you need to be careful, you dumb moron” with a gentle eyes and my hand still on her stomach I said to her.
He stare at me not satisfied “Huh..”
“I said…you almost just got yourself killed, you stupid boy!! Geez!!” with a loud voice I said and I turn away from facing her to walk towards the school.
“ You Stupid midget…!!!!” he yell at me.
“What? “he just make me to lose my temper I thought and turn to see her.
But then I saw he run to the same direction that I want to go and disappear...
“Who does he think he is? Whatever… but It pisses me off. I hope I never met him again. Miichan say in anger voice in her heart.
After register at the school class. The student need to attend a speech at the great hall. After that, I realize he the boy that I safe his life this morning is the vice president of school committee Shinoda Mariko and is “ a Girl”. Start from that, I hate Shinoda Mariko- sempai.. She didn’t even thank me..although we coincidently see each other at the school that’s why I’m very upset.
END OF FLASHBACK
“You must forgive her Miichan, otherwise you will feel tension” Takamina give an opinion.
“Who is the secretary and treasurer?”
“The secretary is Kojima Haruna nicknames as Koji-haru or Harunyan but I call her Nyaan-nyaan.. She class is 2-A and has a nice beautiful body. Born into a wealthy, politically connected with royal blood family. She always sought to find her own way. However, she always kept a professional business-like attitude towards her priorities and I’m warning you, don’t even think about to flirt with her.” Yuko warning Takamina.
“ha..ha.. ha.. I never think about that Yuko. Don’t worry but You seriously in love with her it’s shows on your face..hahaha” Takamina laugh and say to Yuko that make her cheek turn pink blushing.
“you...! Takamina stop teasing me…” Yuko said and run toward Takamina and pinch her cheek.
“The treasurer is my bestfriend Kashiwagi Yuki known as Yukirin. She also a trombone player in the school band. Very popular among the other boys school band and quite few girls. She has an insanely funny reactions that make people call her Reaction Queen.” Mayu said like a cyborg.
“So, in school what you girls involve in?” Takamina ask them
Miyazawa Sae: Class 2-B, Basketball Ace. Also known as The Genking Prince.
Minegishi Minami: Class 2- A. Editor of bulletin and school magazine. If you have any hot news please contacts me.
Kasai Tomomi: Class 2-B. Captain of Volleyball team.
Watanabe Mayu: Class 1-A, President of Anime invention club.
Matsui Rena: Class 1-B, President of Kyudo [the Japanese art of archery]
Oshima Yuko: Class 2-C, the captain of the lacrosse club, she brought her team to 2nd place national championship last year and aim 1st place this year.
And ME is just new brilliant student with a cute face because I cut my hair, I murmured myself that make them all laugh loudly with my reaction..
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THANKS YOU FOR READING Y FANFIC.. :heart:
kahem, Haruko, Sok, Yagami.Rai, Flean and all 8)
Maybe next chapter will be more hot of moment and action.. :w00t:
Sorry, for my English language.. :bow: Have a nice day
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XD Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
So Takamina is getting to know more about Acchan and others in this chapter :oops:
Haha.. MariMii.. always fighting with each other 8)
:w00t: Next chapter will be more hot of moment and action??!!!! :thumbup
I can't wait to read what will happen next chapter!!! :peace:
Please Update Soon XD :bow:
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Taka seems to be interested in Acchan already!!!! :luvluv1: Go and fall in love taka!!!! :mon lovelaff:
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:w00t: UPDATE~~~ Thanks!!!! XD
Takamina is interested in Acchan XD :thumbsup
I can't wait to know what will happen later in the story XD like you said there will be more hot of moments and action!!!! (excited!!)
I wonder if Takamina will do something interesting like what their cousins have been waiting for when they knew that Takamina is coming to the school~!! XD
From what I read about the cousins' description about Takamina it seems like that Takamina loves to do something surprising which will make things more interesting 8) (Hope I'm right in the interpretation :P)
I really love the setting~!! XD Takamina a cute and smart transfer student!!!! :wub:
Please Update Soon :twothumbs :twothumbs
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New update! :on gay:
Miichan and Shinoda san first meeting...I smell tsundere love :mon lol:
The last part :rofl: : And ME is just new brilliant student with a cute face because I cut my hair, I murmured myself that make them all laugh loudly with my reaction..
Thank you for your update! :kneelbow:
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good one :D its gonna be awesome... but why takamina can`t say atsuko`snickname Z_Z
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Can't wait for some drama and action ^^
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CHAPTER 6
One night, I have a slow talk with Yuko. I tell her why the Principals put me in her class although I got perfect marks in the entrance school exam. I convince her to help me to make all the student in the class get all A’s in their exam before the summer holiday. If we didn’t make it we need to attend the extra class during the holiday and I told her that I will help her with her study to move to class A with me for the 2nd term. So, that she will have more opportunity to win Koji-haru’s heart and I said “ If you wait too long, later she will taken away by someone else”. She finally agree to help me. The next day I sent my proposal about the landscape that I want to remake it to the Student Committee Office and the Principals Office..
After eat a morning tea at the cafeteria…
“Ding.. dong.. bell”
“Attention to this student you are all need to attend a meeting with the teachers and the principal at the principal office as soon as possible:
1. Maeda Atsuko
2. Shinoda Mariko
3. Kojima Haruna
4. Kashiwagi Yuki
And the last is TAKAHASHI MINAMI… that’s all for now thank you for your attention..”
“Do you break any part of the school law?” Yuko ask with worry eyes
“No.. ! Not yet.. It’s may be my Proposal that I sent to them” Takamina said and get up from her sit to go to the principal’s office.
“what proposal.. Are you trying to get married during high school?”
“What?? No!! It’s not a marriage proposal.. You will found out later..Okay bye.. I need to leave now..”
At the principal’s office
“We here to discuss the proposal that Takahashi-san give to us.. ”
“Why are you tried to do to this place actually? Are you insane?” Maeda Atsuko ask directly at the first place
“The Student Committee also capable to renovate that place.. you can just let us do it” Shinoda Mariko add
“And who are you a new student that came to teach us how we should work and decorate the school?” Kashiwagi Yuki add with her black aura.
“ why are you girls attacking me?” Takamina try to calm her voice although her ears is hot hear their question
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“Listen to my idea first then is up to you all to decide it.. Okey?”
“First time I sit in my room I saw the other opposite building trough the window and I see this yard place. The place is so messy with bushes and it hurt my eyes seeing it like that. So, I draw a landscape planning to renovate that place.”
Takamina start to tell them. Then, she show them her drawing plan and explain it.
“I plan to put a mini fountain and a fish pond. The path to the opposite building will be covered with tick glass. So that, the student can see the fish under them during the walking to the library or the Student Committee room. Hearing to the water fountain sound will refresh them and have a peace of mind. Besides that, I will put a lamp in the pond so that we can see the fish during the dark and a small Christmas lamp on the top roof to light up that place at night as a fake star. Moreover, that will encourage more students to go to the library which is located on the same level by putting a couple tables with chair and two hammock beaches, the student can hang out there with their books and friends. Thus, according to logic the student grade will increase if they always read books for example our own President Student Committee she always loves books. It shows when she carried and reading if she has a time. Indeed, I will use my own money to rebuild that place.. okay? I won’t ask or take any cent’s of the school or the student’s committee money… and I promise it will done in a week.. How about that?” Takamina say confidently with bright eyes and heart with hope they agree to her idea.
After my presentation and explanation the teachers, principal and the Student Committee sit together for a little discussion and I wait outside of the room..
After 15 minute…
“Takahashi-san your proposal has been approved by all with majority vote but you must keep your promise that the work must be done by the end of the week.. I’m looking through it..” Maeda Atsuko announce to me with a laser strict eye.
“ I feel ghost bum looking at her… So, scary…but her eyes is fascinating..” Takamina sayto herself while walking towards the principals, the teachers and the Student Committee to shake hand with them. When I shake my hand with Atsuko she ask me..
“What might you be thinking about? What are you trying to do?”
I then grip our hand firm and lean my mouth close to her ears and say “Do I make you nervous? It’s just a beginning” I can see her face change to a little bit pale that make me want to laugh.
As I thought my proposal was approve by the principal, teachers and the Student Committee although at the first place they disagree with me.
I thank them once more and bow. Then walk back happily to my class.
“Are you okay.. Acchan? You look pale a little? Are you stress?” Yukirin said
“here.. take this water..and drink it..” Koji-haru give Ancchan a bottle of water.
“We need to be careful with her next time” Shinoda Mariko said
“I don’t know what she think about next… but we better be ready” Maeda Atsuko said to her friends as they walk together and see Takamina walking with smile of winner and disappear from their sight to go to her class.
“If you want to start a war you better know your enemy, I need to know more about her…” Acchan say to them as she plans to see Miichan and ask about Takamina. After the school session finish, in the evening Maeda Atsuko have a teatime with Miichan..
“So, Miichan what is Takamina character actually?”
“Why do you want to know about her?” Miichan throw back a question to Acchan
“She also want to know about you at the first place when she arrived here..”Miichan continue but she can see Acchan eyes widen with a little shock..
“Are you guys have affair or something?.. this will make a hot scoop for our school bulletin and magazine” Then Miichan press a flash button from her camera to take Acchan picture.
“No!.. we don.. don’t have affair..but.. we almost have fight at the principal’s office this morning.. and Miichan..! I just want to know her better” Acchan glance her eyes and say to Miichan.
“What is she crazy idea that she want to do now?” Miichan ask indirectly about the matter that make them almost fight..
“I don’t want to say anything…You may ask her or you will find out later.. Is she always like that…? Come on Miichan tell me about her..?” Acchan put a stress on her words that show’s she really one to know about Takamina.
“TAKAHASHI MINAMI: as you know she also known as Takamina. A short young girl with cute face. Actually her hair is longer then you but of some reason she cut her hair. A pure royal blood. Independent, brash and brilliant, Takamina has long been tomboyish since the decease of her twin brother. Stay in USA for about 4-5 years. Often make trouble if her crazy idea comes but very careful and loving to people who close to her. Who is always full of energy, love learning and studying new things. Like to dance, playing guitar and make a song. she also have a beautiful voice but never sing in public because too shy and nervous. She love and excellent in playing sport especially basketball although she is short. Miyazawa Sae the ace basketball of our school have lost to her. During the basketball game she always win although she just play 50% from her effort and never take the game serious but if someone mention about her height and push her down to the floor she will take the game seriously. Very sensitive, pure at heart and she will stand for any things, that she thing is right. Finally, she has common factor like you Acchan she is already have a fiancé since she was born but she need to find it according to the prophecy. For your extra info she can’t say your nickname Acchan that’s why she keep calling you Maeda Atsuko or Atsuko. I hope you don’t get mad at her. She even try to pull out her tongue with her hand and force to say your nickname while looking at the mirror.. you should see when she do it..it’s so funny..hehehe” Miichan laughing remember the moment she saw Takamina try to say Acchan name in her room when she came to see her with their cousin a few days ago.. Then, they change to other topic to gossiping around until the sunset…
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During the weekends, I went out to buy things that I needs to renovate that place and I start it as soon as possible and try not making too much voice because it will make the student angry especially Maeda Atsuko. The time goes by... finally the last touch of the landscape...
After my final work on the 6th day of my project in the evening I take a rest. I just need to see whether the lights are work tonight. After I take my bath and have a diner I invite my class mate and my cousins to see my work done. They all gather at the place. I can see from below Atsuko and her student committee friends are looking towards us from the Student Committee room.. I wave my hand at them and make a peace hand mark “V” and can see all the other student looking at the place through their room’s balcony and window.
“1…2…3..click and Surprise!!! ” I open the switch and the lamp is light up the place.
“It’s look wonderful” Acchan murmured herself.
“It’s look great! Acchan our vote for her crazy idea is worth it” Mariko say with a smile in her face.
“Look at them {the student} there all look happy and cheerful, Miichan was right Takamina present make the school more exciting” Nyaan-nyaan said she can see Yuko smiling wide and wave her hand at her...
“Hai! That’s right!” Yukirin add..
"She really catch my attention this time.. " Acchan murmured herself and put her hand on her chest feeling her heart bit faster and holing to locket on her necklace that has her fiance name "KAI".
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It’s been a 2 weeks since I turn the school and the class upside down. We have only one month to sit for the exam. I remake all students in class 2-C personal time table, to make sure they have time for review their subject every day. I make a study group for them. I gave a motivation talk before the class started, if I’m late Yuko will replace me and I can see their perspective and thinking also have improved to be more..and more positive and full of guts (high spirit). They are possible to get at all A’s like principals ask me to do looking to their effort and willingness. All is in good planning that I thought until I found out about this matter….
..... We will see again Meada Atsuko…!!
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Awesome chapter once again :w00t:
Looking forward to your next chapter!!!
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OMG! :w00t: Thank you so much for the Update XD
:thumbsup Takamina did a good job in renovating the place XD
I think the Student Committee is giving more respect to Takamina now :lol:
I can't wait for more of Takamina's crazy ideas :P
:w00t: Oh~ Is Acchan starting to feel something for Takamina??!!!!
Thank you for the Update :thumbsup
Hope you would Update Soon :bow:
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Yea!! Update!!!! An it's so fun!!! XD
Takamina did a great job in making those Student Committee shock!!! :thumbsup
I agree with Yagami, I can't wait to read more about Takamina's crazy ideas!!!! XD
I wonder what Takamina found out... :?
:w00t: Acchan starting to fall for Takamina!!!!!!! XD
Thanks a lot for this Update!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
Please update soon :) :bow:
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Im also want to know that are takamina thinking mmm..
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I can't wait for more Takamina's action hehehhe ^^
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Takamina is a genius!!!! :mon thumb: and Acchan already falling for her... yeay!!! :mon inluv: I can't wait until she become Kai and met Acchan... muahaha... :mon determined:
need more Taka-genius ideas~~~ :mon fyeah:
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First of All I'm sorry about the age timeline...can we just Assume that:
1) Sae, Acchan and Takamina is (17)
2) Miichan, Yuko, Haruna, Tomomi, and Tomochin (16 1/2)
3) Mariko (19)
4) Sayaka (17 1/2)
5) Mayuyu (15 1/2)
6) Yukirin, Jurina and Rena (16)
Sorry for my English... :nervous Thanks for comment... :twothumbs Hope you like it... :wub:
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CHAPTER 7
It happened when I ask Yuko to borrow me a math book from the library but it turn out all the 20 copy of the same book has been borrow by other people 6 books student from class 2-B and the remain 14 books from class 2-A. I directly walk to the principal office to ask the explanation about this matter. I found out that….
The student need to rush to get the book especially academic books as First-come, first-served (FCFS) terms and they can borrow for 2 weeks. I then rush to the see the principal..
“I suggest for academic book please divided into 3 classes for example 6 books for each class and remain 2 books is for the Student Committee as their privilege, because we in class 2-C also want to use the same book for our extra revision. For the other type of book we can follow the Student Committee suggestion..If principal really want our class break the record I really hope that my idea take into consideration.” Takamina said seriouslly
“Okay, Takamina consider this matter is done.. I will tell Maeda Atsuko… talking about her, she is on her way to the office.”
Knock.. knock..
“M.principals, the teacher said that you want to see me…?” Acchan say when she see the principal
“and why are you here?” Acchan say to takamina with a glance.
“Oh, Takamina here to tell me a big matter related to the library..” then the principal explain to Acchan about my idea and suggestion.
And she has to agree as the principal already like my idea.
We walking out together from the room and start to chat… that turn into a small fight..
“I would like to speak with you..” Achan said to me while we are walking on the corridor.
“what are you trying to do? Can you just make a proposal and sent to me… Why directly go to the principal??” Acchan ask
“I just want it done as soon as possible. If I give the idea to the Student Committee it would take a long time. Besides the principal like my idea and we can just start right away… shall we” Takamina say.
“Why your actions seem focus on to attack the Student Committee..?”
“I don’t attack you guys.. I just want my right.. as a student from class 2-C. we also need to revise the same book as you all from class 2-A and 2-B”
“can you please stop asking me a question…I don’t have a mood…to answer..” takamina say uncomfortable..
“Are you always like this…? Like to mess around…”
“Look I respect you and the Student Committee but basically I just want to do thing that I think is right and can bring benefit to other people and encourage them to have their own opinion” Takamina said
“Why I can help thinking that you are trying get your eyes of me? ” Acchan ask sharp questions
“and why would I wanna do that” Takamina say and glance to Acchan
“Perhaps to get an attention?” Acchan ask a trap question
“No!!! I don’t need your attention.. What For? Can you just stop it..”
Their chat is very loud that make all the student come out from their class to see what is going on.. and they both don’t realize it.
“So, I’m right you want an attention.. especially from me.. right?” Acchan say another trap question and wink her eye…
“No!!” I said although I my face feel hot {Takamina}..
“Yes!!”
"No!!"
"Yes!!"
“I said No!! Atsuko.. Please stop it!!”
“ Or what? ” Acchan say to challenge Takamina.
Takamina push Acchan to the wall… and closing the distance between them, Acchan felt Takamina moved her hands to the back of Acchan neck pulling her closer. Then, she sealed Acchan lips with kiss and grab her hand to lock it from moving…
ATSUKO POV
As moments pass by, What!!! She is kissing me.. How dare she take my fist kiss that I protect and keep it for my fiance. I tried to push her..but.. the kiss became more intense and much more passionate making my mind became a bit hazy as I felt myself drifting into the sweet taste of her mouth. It was a soft and passionate kiss, which make my heart beat like crazy. I could feel my breathing was uneven; I couldn't help myself as my lips began to let the kiss, completely...
TAKAMINA POV
She seem trying to push me away and trying to catch her breath when she open her mouth I took this an opportunity to softly sucked her lower lip more intense and much more passionate. I pressing my lips more forcefully. I can see her eyes grow larger and she finally just let me doing what I’m doing now. She is defenseless and I even feel that she kiss me back. I can see my locket is shining.. I wonder why…
Then…Takamina’s eyes shot open as a sudden realization hit her. “What am I doing!!!” her mind screamed. “This is not right…”Slowly Takamina break the kiss.
“Chu~u!!” All the student make a noice when they eyes focus on Takamina and Acchan
What!!! They are kissing!! Miichan say with a loud voice she even take their picture during the fight and the kiss scene.
Slowly Acchan opens eyes, she was in shock and confuse as she tried to process what had just happened. When her hand is free..
“Pap! BAKA!!” quickly she slap Takamina face.. she feel her whole body is shivering…
“Aw…It hurt..”I deserved that slap. It will leave a bruise.. Takamina said to herself. when she see Acchan is shivering with tears in her eyes… Takamina walk close to Acchan and hug her tight..
“Atsuko…”
“Gomen…”
“I’m sorry.. I lost my control..”
“I’m really… really sorry Atsuko” Takamina then walk away and she surprise and shock to see everyone see the drama..
Miichan and KojiHaru and Acchan’s class mate run towards Acchan to get her…
Miichan then yell at me… with anger..
“How dare you take my wify first kiss?”
“I’m sorry…She make do that!!”
“She make me give her my precious fist kiss…Besides, She also took my first kiss from me…!!” I yell back at Michan..
Miichan look at Acchan that her face start to blushing…
Yuko grab my shoulder and ask me.. “Why are you doing that…”
“Oh… that.. I just follow my father’s tips… He said if a women talking too much and you want to make her silent kiss her passionately.. and it works but I got a strong slap..”
“Woo..wo.. woo..! where you think you’re going?” Yuko said to Takamina when she saw Takamina take her school bag from her chair..
“Yuko, I’m sleepy last night I sleep late because of my prince work… So, today… I skip the class.. Okay?.. just figure an excuse for me….” Takamina walk to her room leave Yuko in confounded..
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At the café Miichan, Yuko and Acchan sit together at the table while Sae and Koji-Haru buy the food..
“Acchan... So, before anything else, here’s is your favorite water for you” Miichan give Acchan a glass of apple juice.
“After that little stunt this morning… It was just incredibly embarrassing.. I have absolutely no idea how this could happen..” Acchan sit on the chair and take out her compact mirror..
“She kiss you because you ask too many question while Takamina don’t have mood to answer” yuko said giggling..
“mm.. How do you know?” Acchan ask Yuko back while looking at her compact mirror.. her lips has a small cut due to the kissing moment…
“She told me before she skip the class today.. she said it’s a way to make you stop talking..”Said Yuko with laugh and see Koji-haru walking with plate of cakes in her both hand…
“Nyaan..nyaan.. come sit next to me…”
“Okay, but promise.. no skin-ship..”
“Mo~U” Yuko pout her mouth..
“Now, you haven’t been able to stop thinking about Takamina for days” Koji-Haru to teasing Acchan..
“Fortunately, the case is… how a version can become affection..” Yuko said to make Acchan more blushing..
“I witnessed a “live” demonstration today.. How Takamina kissed you” Miichan said and face Acchan..
“Ah!!! And now you all want to hear the dirty details?” Acchan say
“Well let me put this way……, YES I’m curious” Yuko give a smile with a dimple in her face with sparkling eyes..
“Well then, what would you like to know?” Acchan ask
“What the kiss was like, for example….” Sae ask…
“What is was like….Hmmmm… to discover that you’ll have to kiss her yourself.. I’d rather keep that to myself…” Acchan say and get up from her sit and walk back to her class blushing…
“Acchan… Acchan..” Miichan try to chase Acchan but suddenly she hit someone… its Mariko
“Hey… watch out…” Miichan then just walk leave Mariko..
“Hey! You’re just going to leave?... Can’t you at least say SORRY..?” Mariko said to Miichan
““SORRY” is not in my dictionary, especially when the person is You…”
“If you want o hear it, change your name to “SORRY””
“Then, I’ll call you “SORRY”” Miichan say to the tall Mariko-sempai..
“That, Gachapin!! Really make me piss off” Mariko said and show Miishan her hand punch…
“They always fight when they see each other…” Sae said looking at the scene..
“Maybe it’s the way to show there are care and love each other.. Nyaan..nyaan..” Yuko said and try to hug Koji-Haru..
“Yuko..! get your hand off me…” Koji-haru say
“Come and join us Mariko…” Sae said and waving her hand to signal Mariko..
Mariko sit with them.. they told Mariko about the incident that happen between Acchan and Takamina.. and continue gossiping about them…
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:hehehe: Hoho... Takamina kiss Acchan to stop her from asking questions :wub: :inlove:
Good Job! :on GJ: Takamina papa, giving Takamina that advice
But Takamina.. Don't dare to do that on other girls!!! :smoke:
Hehe.. I think Acchan is starting to fall for Takamina :k-inlove:
I so love this Chapter :shy2:
Thank you so much for the Update :peace:
Hope/Please you Update Soon :mon cute:
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OMG!!! I was shocked at first... :shock: I didn't expect Takamina to do that :w00t:
:luvluv1: But I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! :on GJ: Good Job Takamina!!! What a good way to stop Acchan from asking you questions XD :inlove:
I have to Thank Takamina papa for giving that advice to Takamina :farofflook: Because of that it makes my day :nya:
This chapter is soooo awesome!!!!!!! :luvluv2:
I can't wait for more :mon whine: I want more :tantrum:
Thanks so much for the update! Really!!! :kneelbow:
Please Update Soon!!! I need more!!! :mon inluv:
Please :mon innocent:
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way to go Takamina...... she kiss Acchan just to silent her from asking further questions.......... please continue on next storyline.. thanks
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“Oh… that.. I just follow my father’s tips… He said if a women talking too much and you want to make her silent kiss her passionately.. and it works but I got a strong slap..”
Muahahaha I can't stop laughing(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/emo%20soldier/47.gif) BAKAMINA!!!(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/emo%20soldier/4_100805145503_1.gif)
Interesting Stories :mon XD:
Thanks so much :mon innocent:
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Oh my! :mon crazyinlove:
LoL! The kiss! Infront of everyone too!
Hahah Takaminas cousins was like WTF?!
Hilarious!
Thank you for your update. :kneelbow:
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the kiss scene.. yeah takaboy take you wifey first kiss like a boss:D
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Woh!!! Way to go Taka!!! :on lol: You've becoming a man!!!! Yosha!!! :on GJ:
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Kiss!!!! And eveyone saw it!!! GG Takamina!
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Omg! This fic's awesome! No more update?
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plssssssssssss.
update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!
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So, sorry my leptop brake down and can't be use anymore b'coz of that I stop writing this fanfic...
Further more, I went back to study on weekends and working on weekday... very busy... :panic:
If I have time I will update this fanfic... SO, SORRY....
HONTONI GOMENNE! :bow: :nervous
THANKS FOR READING! :wub:
........................................................................................CHAPTER 8...
At night in the Library after 2 weeks
TAKAMINA POV
It’s been a while since the “HOT INCIDENT”, I have been teasing by my cousin and my classmate almost a week.. I think she also be in that situation… I really hope she is okay.. We try to avoid each other and see together..
but I….
miss her…
LIPs..
TAKAHASHI MINAMI! What are you thinking! You need to focus… Takamina slap her face to keep on focus… THE EXAM is tomorrow… That is what you need to worry about.. Takamina get up from her sit and walk to the book shelf to search for a book.
MAEDA ATSUKO POV
I almost stress out... Get teasing By Mariko, Miichan and others almost every day because of the kiss incident..
Hummm… I really hope her chick is okay… I hit her very hard last time…
Where is the book….. {TAKAMINA}
Where is the book…..{ATSUKO}
A… ha Yes, I found it…! {BOTH ATSUKO & TAKAMINA}
Suddenly I feel someone hand on top of my hand….
I turn to my face to left and see… ATSUKO and she also turn her face… TAKAMINA…
The KISS scene start to appears recall their memory and their face start turn blush..
MARIKO is a LIBRARIAN duty on that day saw the incident and take out her phone and snap a Picture but she forgot to shut the sound and flash….. MARIKO then quickly went to the counter place and watch both of them from far.
“Klick & light from the flash” make both atsuko and takamina awake from their world..
“ A…HA! I found it first ” Takamina say with a smile
“lucky me”
“I can read it, for my 7 times record” Takamina murmured
MAEDA ATSUKO POV
Maeda Atsuko feel sad because Takamina first grab the book,
but exam is Tomorrow, I really need the book badly
when Atsuko hear Takamina was already read the book 6 times she got an idea…
then she grab Takamina shoulder and turn to face her as Takamina is already walk to her chair.
With her kitten eye Atsuko try to seduce Takamina…
“Hey, what…” oh my god her eyes.................. so, beautiful…
“Mmmmm… can we share?”
“Share? What?”
“I mean… can I read the book with you…together... please! Please!”
“I really need to look on that chapter… the 48 chapter on that book…”
“Please!”
“ I will do anything for you”
Takamina at the same time is hungry… she really wants to eat Katsudon…
“Alright.. Alright..”
“but promise me you’ll cook a homemade Katsudon for me at my home after this 3 days exam”
“Okey.. I promise…”
“Thanks”
“Let’s sit between the book shelves..”
They both sit side by side…
“Thank you…” Takamina say to Atsuko
“For what? I should Thank you.. for share the book with me”
“No… it’s not about the book..”
“It’s about the slap that I got and yet you pass the medicine through Sae, she told me..”
Atsuko sit with a little bit blush …
Takamina open the book on chapter 48
on the half way reading it she feel very sleepy, but she saw Atsuko still focus reading. She just let her read the book and Takamana in her dream…
After finish reading the book Atsuko close the book and the turn to thank Takamina..
“Thank..Y-o-u…” but she saw Takamina sleep beside her..
She sleep… it almost close time!
Suddenly an announcement by Mariko ; “The Library will close in 5 minute, please pack your things and go back & rest at your room, good night and sleep tight, GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR EXAM & Thank You”
“Takamina…. Takamina wake up… go sleep at your room..”
Atsuko went near Takamina and say it again “wake up Takamina the library is closing” but Takamina still remain silent with her own dream…
Atsuko go near to Takamina ears and the saw Takamina chick that she slap 2 weeks ago… her face was very near…
Meanwhile Mariko is searching for Maeda
Acchan… Acchan… where are you… the library is close…
“ACCHAN!”
Shock with the Mariko shout, Atsuko for the first time kiss Takamina chick…
“Acchan what are you doing…!”
Takamina who hear Mariko voice and feel her chick like get an electrical contact open her eyes slowly… but she don't realize that Atsuko kiss her..
“Oh! Is time for bed already…! Thanks wake me up… good night Atsuko” with drowsy Takamina walk pass Mariko and she ask Mariko why her phone camera is on..
“Why is the camera mode on?”
“Nothing, I just take the picture of the book shelves” Mariko lying
“Oh.. good night.. bye..”
“..bye…” fuh! Safe my top secret..
“Acchan what going on.. you kiss her….”
“No, it was accidentally happen…” blushing Atsuko face in red luckily Takamina is already walk away...
“Mariko sempai you shout my name and I was shock and kiss her” Maeda Atsuko trying to make Mariko understand what is happening..
“And our picture, did you take it…”
“Umm Humm….” Mariko knock her head
“It was PERFECT! And NICE! And ADORABLE!” say Mariko with happy face…
“I bet the whole school will love it” Mariko teasing Acchan…
“Please, don’t !”
“Takamina also don’t know that I kiss her..”
“Yup… Just kidding!” I will keep the picture save until It need to be uncovered...
"PROMISE!"
"PROMISE!"
They both walk towards their room after finish lock the library...
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wah nice story.. haha aachan secretly kiss takamina..
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Huaaaaaa !!
i Love your story :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
please update if u can :bow:
and Good Luck for your study n work :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:
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i Love your story :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
please update if u can :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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Mariko is always at the right time and at the right place ^^
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Ohoh~ Sasuga Mariko sama!!! XD
Just got the right timing every time with her camera~~ :D
Takamina and Acchan is getting closer to one another~ ^_^
And Acchan kissed Takamina on the cheek although it's an accident~
Can't wait to know what will happen next!
I really love this fic! Please update soon!! :mon cute:
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Lovelies scene between Atsuko and Minami ~~
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i love your story!!omg,
:twothumbs :twothumbs
I cant wait for the next chapter..
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Hehe good job Mariko-sama ^^
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i read this fic so many times and lost caunting!!!
I just love this story!!pls update this...!i cant wait for the next chapter,!tnx :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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please update!!!!!!
co co san I wait for next chapter :cry:
I just read it and It awesome :inlove: :inlove:
perphecy of Atsumina :deco: :deco:
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eh..so is that u wont ever update this story again :cry:
i hope u can buy new laptop and update its..
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can i wish this fic being update even though already long :sweatdrop:
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i love this... :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
author-san....is there any possibility to update this fanfic?
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I beg u olz continue this story I love it :heart:
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Please continue this fic. :bow:
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Atsuko kiss minami :twothumbs
Please continue^^