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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Katouryuken on May 14, 2012, 08:20:12 AM
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Actually do this to 'celebrate' released of Nagiichi. I think this will be short but not. Inspiring by aruka-san's Anata wa Only Kurokami Shoujo (although I haven't see it. Aruka-san if you see this can you send to me too? XD)
Let the story begin....
My Ichiban Kawaii GIRL!!
“Hey, wake up we’ll arrive soon.”
“Arrive? Arrive where?”
“Hey, are you forget it. We are going to the beach for our holiday. Maybe too much sleeping make you amnesia. ”
“Yes, I’m amnesia and I forget who I am. Who are you, stranger?” I asked her jokingly.
“Stop it, concentrating when you are driving.” other girl said.
“Yes, I’m stupid because I only a band guitarist. If I was clever I will be the doctor.” I said to her.
“But you are the greatest stupid guitarist I ever know. Hahaha….” she said while laughing.
Such was my friends, they are pleasant person although sometimes annoying. Before I forget it, I’ll introduce myself. My name is Sayaka Yamamoto . I’m the guitarist from the Mad Catz band . Our band is very famous and made us to be busy despite our age still young. The other members are Jo Eriko as drummer and Nana Yamada as bass.
First, I’ll tell you about Eriko, she is 13 years old. So young? But don't underestimate her capacity playing drum. She arrange the rhythm of our song so that not messy. Her status is still single. Next, Nana, she is 20 years old and rich because she is the one who proposed and financed the production of this band 2 years ago. She is oldest and smartest between us but she’s very annoying too. Her status is mysterious. And me myself is 18 years old. My father is a doctor even so my mother. You think I must be doctor to, right? As their only child, they definitely hoped I also a doctor. But whether my power, I was not as clever as them. Fortunately, they can understand, but I’m sure to they disappointed with me.
" Here we are. That’s the beach . " said Nana
" Wow, so beautiful. " said Eriko
" Will there many ‘fresh thing’? " Nana said
" Nana, you stupid. " I said to her
" Sayanee-san , what did Nana-san means ? " Eriko asked me
I forget here there is still a kid who knows nothing. I won’t let her polluted by Nana
" Ah , it’s nothing. Let’s preparing for go down. " I said
Finally we arrive at the hotel . Seems crowded but I thought there’s still a place for us.
" Hah , finally gets too. My body are painful too much sitting . " said Nana while go down of the car
"Who tell you to turning your body too much. " I said to her
Hotel where we will sleepover big enough. There are many the paintings and hangings of the sea.
After a while looked around .I realized if Eriko is not here.
" Nana, where is Eriko? "
" Oh , she was in the car a minute. "
I looked at the entrance. Eriko bring much stuff in her hand.
" What are you doing ? " I asked
" Bring down partly our stuff. What number is our room? I want to go directly there.”
" You don’t need to. I’ll call trolley officer to bring everything . " I explain to her
" Hi Eriko. What are you doing? " ask Nana after finished check-in
" She bring our stuff. " I said tersely . "Have you check-in ? " I asked
" Sayanee-san, my hands are tight. " Eriko said
" Put it there. I’ll call the officer first. " I said
" Okay, I’ll go back to the car again to take that left . " Eriko said , then she ran out again
I saw the trolley officer were walking over there.I ran into there but suddenly there was a girl walks in front of me. I yelled but it seems she didn’t know.
" Brukk ... " the voice of her and me collide
I and she thrown aside. My head hurts seems tray what she brought hit my head.
" Sayaka ! ! " Nana shout toward me
“Sorry , i ' m accidentally hit you.” I told her
“…….”
“Sayaka , are you ok ?” Nana enquiring my condition
“Sayanee-san?” Eriko come running toward me
“I 'm fine. Only hurt a little.” I said while standing up
I give my hands on the girl to help her up. She only quiet, maybe confused. I grab her hands to help her up. After help her standing, once again I apologize to her but she stay silent. Then she bow at me, take her tray and go.
“Strange girl.” I said
“Are you alright?” check-in officer toward me
“Ah, yes. But I want to call trolley officer to carry our stuff.”
“Let us hand it over. All of you, please go to your room.” she said
“Thank you, Ogasawara-san.” I said while see her name tag
“You’re welcome.” she smiles at me. Nice smile
I, Eriko and Nana head to our room. I in room no.37, Nana no.38 and Eriko in no.39. I open the door of my room and go in. Pretty cozy. From the window you can immediately see the beach. I check my watch , already 12.53 pm. My stomach is hungry
“Tok.tok.tok.” sounds of knocked door
How is it? Should I continue it? It's up to you.
Is anybody here know how to send email for JKT48 first theater. I'm still a bit confused. :huhuh
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of course you should continue..
i wanna know what happen next..
btw,i'm curious with jkt48 debut theater.but i live in a town that far far from jakarta.so i can't go.
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do you need help with your jkt48 mail??
I can help... :lol:
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I think I won't come too althrough I'm in holiday now. That place is far from mine. How can I'll go home? So maybe will send mail just for 'trying' :lol:
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Are you more biased to NMB? Because when you said it's to celebrate Nagiichi's release, it made me think like that. :P
Cool! It's specifically Mad Catz-based. :thumbsup
On another note, would this become a 'triangle' story between the three charas you mentioned on the title?
By the way, I'm curious at the quiet girl that accidentally crashed onto Sayanee.
Is she what I think she is? Because I still think it's kinda unlikely if she portrayed a quiet girl. :grin: I bet you know who I meant.. :roll:
And I'm a bit confused with the conversation at the very start. Who's sleeping... who's driving ? :?
Please continue this, Katouryuken-san... this forum needs more NMB fics. :yep:
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@yukofan I want to see them too. But, you know that I can't. :(
@s34l How if you tell me about the theater if you come there? :lol:
@aruka Bias? What's that :?. I only now oshi. 48family's song released is the moment I like to celebrate. Isn't it strange?
So you know the girl who crashed Sayaka? :lol: Maybe changing a little bit of her personality won't be bad. But don't worry I'll make her 'bad' sometime :P
Sorry :banghead: for make you confused Driver=Nana, Sleeping=Sayaka
Of course, NMB48 is great too :grin:
So let it continue.........
Part 2
"Excuse me, I deliver your things."
"Ah, OK. Wait.” I said.
I opened the door. "I put it there." He said.
"Yes, Thank you." I gave few tips to him.
"Thank you." He said.
"Nearby here, is there any eating place?" I asked him.
"There was the restaurant. It’s located near the coast there.” He said.
"Close to the coast. Not frightened will drowned” I think.
"Okay then. Thank you.” I said.
"You’re welcome." He said while going out.
I have been hungry, I’ll clear up my things later. My stomach is the most important. Next I go to Eriko’s room and Nana to ask them to eat together. I left my room, without changing my clothes. I knock on the door of Nana’s room. There’s no answer. Where’s she? Then I knock on the Eriko’s room.
"Wait for a moment, I’m clearing up my things." she said from inside room.
“ Diligent kid" I thought.
A few moments later, she goes out from her room. "Yes. Sayanee-san, what’s going on? she asked.
"I only wanted to ask you to eat. But apparently Nana isn’t here.” I said.
"Ah. Nana-san is bathing.”
"Bathe? At 1 PM?” I thought.
"Krik ….” Sound of opened door.
"Hey, what's up?" Asked Nana while holding a towel on her hands.
"I wanted to ask you to eat." Answered me shortly.
"Eat? What time is it now?” she asked.
“ 1 o’clock.”
"Okay then, wait for a moment. I’ll change my clothes.” She said while entering again her room.
"Nee.., where we will eat?" Asked Eriko to me.
" I heard there’s a restaurant near the coast."I answered.
"Finish, Let’s go!!!!" said Nana while opening the door.
"What the…. She wear a black colored shirt. Isn’t it will make you heat and make you sweaty again?” I thought.
"He, let’s go. Why you just standing here? You said we wanted to eat.” Nana said.
"Ah, yes. Let’s go.” I said.
The three of us walk toward the hotel’s door. I see Ogasawara-san is serving the guest that will check-in. without realizing, I gaze at her for quite a long time, until….
"Hey, why you just standing again?" Nana said to me.
"Ah, nope." I said.
"Are you gazing at Mayu?" Asked Nana with teasing tone.
"Sayanee-san, if you like her just say it." Added Eriko.
"My goodness this kid too." I said in my heart. "Let’s go. It’s nothing"
"Hi, wanted to go out?" The voice of a person that I know called.
Ogasawara-san? , did she heard our conversation. Immediately I feel nervous.
"Yes, we want to eat. Want to go with us? Nana said to her.
"Already at 1 o'clock. Break time. I’m going too.” Answered Mayu.
What? She’s going with the us too? My face immediately hotter.
"Together will be fun, right?" Added Eriko.
For you it’s fun. But, how about me. I’m happy but nervous too. While my trip, I haven’t say anything. Want to ask her but I’m shy.
"Hi!!" Mayu’s voice startled me.
"Hi.. too." I answered nervously.
"How was your head? Still painful?" she asked.
"My head? Oh, it’s fine. Thank you Ogasawara-san.” I said to her.
Honestly I want to say that by seeing you, all my pain is lost. How can I say that to her?
"Yamamoto-san, what are three of you doing here? Are you have the schedule singing here?” Asked Mayu.
Wow, she knows that I’m singer. Our band actually very famous :roll:
"There’s no schedule here, we are on holiday. Refreshing. Btw, don’t use –san, I feel old. I think our age isn’t has a far difference. I’m 18 years old. How about you? "I said it to her.
" I’m 17 years old. " She said.
Oh, you’re younger than me. So, what will I call you with?
"My friends call me Maachun. How if I call you Sayamoto?”
"Sayamoto? Thats good, but heard not familiar. Just call me Sayaka instead.”
"Okay, Sayaka. So being artist is tiring, right? But previously in fact I had a dream to be an idol that could sing and dance in front of many people and entertain them.” she said.
Maachun as idol, I’ll be your wota, really. I don’t lie.
"Tired is the risk being artist. But why you don’t continue your dream?” I asked her.
"Hei, we already arrived. What are you discussing, so absorbed it? Ask Nana annoy our moment.
So is this good? Let me know it. Thx :)
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@aruka Bias? What's that :?. I only now oshi. 48family's song released is the moment I like to celebrate. Isn't it strange?
Well, actually oshi = bias.
And nothing's strange at all. I thought you only celebrate singles from NMB, thus the 'bias' question.
So you know the girl who crashed Sayaka? :lol: Maybe changing a little bit of her personality won't be bad. But don't worry I'll make her 'bad' sometime :P
I was just guessing it actually. :P But it seems like you confirmed it?
Okay then, there's no problem with a slight change of personality. It can make the character more interesting. :yep:
Sorry :banghead: for make you confused Driver=Nana, Sleeping=Sayaka
Not at all. :D Thanks for clearing that up.
Moving on to the story..
Wow.. Sayanee, that's fast for you to get hotter in front of Maachun not long after your arrival.
Nana and Jou are aware of it.. so I guess more teasing is in line for later. :lol:
So is this good? Let me know it. Thx :)
The only complaint from me is... the update's too short! And the more selfish side in me said he wants a longer one. :lol:
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Happy release day of Aishiteraburu :cow:
@aruka Thx for explain it to me, now I know if oshi=bias. You want the longer chapter, is it too short? It's 2.5 pages of Ms. Word. Maybe I must make 3.5 pages to make it longer.
Anyway, I make some 'surprise' in this chapter. Tell me what you think.
Let it continue...........
Part 3
"Oh, there is much food." Said Eriko.
"It’s restaurant, place for eating. Of course has much food to choose. Chose want you want to eat, my treat today.” I said avoided Nana’s question.
Then all of us sit in the seat. Nana sat most right, on the left Eriko then I and Maachun.
"Are you on ‘good’ mood today?" Said Nana with teasing tone.
"If like that I want sushi and ice cream sundae." Pay it, ok? She continued.
"Yes, I will." I said.
Then I see around, not like restaurant but rather similar to canteen but the canteen close to sea just the first time saw by me. Not many visitors in the coast, who want to swim at hot weather? I won’t want that will make my skin darker.
"Excuse me, we want to order food." Nana called waitress. The waitress gives the menu to us. I still seeing to around not pay attention to.
"I wanted sushi and ice cream sundae. How about you all?” Nana words while placing the menu.
"I wanted chicken karaage and lemon tea." Said Eriko. "How about Saya-san?"
"Me?" I just realize and fast choose and I chose burger. "I want burger and soda." Maachun, what will you choose?
"Same with you." Burger and I’ll drink mineral water.” Said her.
"Ck...Ck... Have same choose, you?" The teaser Nana said.
"That’s up to us want to eat what." I explained to her.
"Are you mad, Saya-chan?" Continued Nana.
The waitress writes our orders and take the menus. I speak to Nana again. "Nope, Mad with you just make me hungrier, so please shut up." I said.
Several minutes afterwards food came. I ready to eat but there’s no ketchup, so I call the waitress. She approaches and I saw her face because while ago I had not paid attention to her. Her face, I feel ever see her, where? When she approaches then I realize if she’s the one I crashed in the hotel. So, she’s working in here. When she gives a ketchup bottle to me. I ask her.
“ Are you still mad at me?”
“………” She’s startled but stay silent.
Then, she goes back to kitchen. Make me more confused.
“ Maybe still mad.” I said while bite my burger.
“ Who’s mad?” said Maachun after drink the water.
“ That waitress. She’s who I crashed a while ago in hotel. When I asked her, she didn’t answer me.” I explained to her.
“ You mean Mirukii? I’m sure she already forgive you.”
So her name is Mirukii.”But, why she doesn’t say anything to me?”
“ Because she is….”
“She is?”
“She’s mute”
“ Hah?!?” I’m shocked heard it.
“ What’s happen??” Eriko and Nana said together.
At there, there’re only four of us. So, my voice heard loud.
“ Ah. Nothing. You can continue your lunch.” I said to them.
Ok, actually I’m shocked in fact very shocked. That’s why she stay quiet when I asked her.
After almost 20 minutes, we finish our meal.
“I’m full.” Nana said. “Hey you, pay it all.”
“ Yes, I know it.” I said to her. Why I feel a bit regret for treating her.
We stand up and ready to go. When I want to walk, I feel someone pull my T-shirt. I look back and there’s her. I turn to her and she gives me marker and paper. What’s she want?
“ I know what’s her meaning. She asks for your autograph.” Maachun finally said it to me.
“ Wow, You’re popular Ms. Guitarist.” Nana said.
“ Oh, I know, I know.” I take the marker and paper and then give my autograph. I write something on bottom edge of paper, ‘For Mirukii.’
After finishing it, I give it to her. She seems surprised but she smiles at me. So sweet… hey what the hell I think. Then she bow at me and going back to kitchen. Maachun just smile but seem Nana and Eriko feel a bit confused.
“ Isn’t she the girl you crashed a while ago?” Nana asked me.
“ Yes, is there any problem?” I asked back. At least, she doesn’t still mad at me. “Let’s go back to hotel.”
During our walk to go back, I ask about Mirukii to Maachun. Seem Maachun know about her. I get some information about her. She’s 18 years old, same with me. Her father was die when she was little. She has 2 younger sisters. Stop her school when she was 16 because she wants to help her mother. I think maybe hard for her to get a job because not many places will employ, you know, mute girl. But, finally she got job here a year ago.
After arrive at hotel, we say goodbye to Maachun and I say thanks to her for telling about Mirukii. I go back to my room and lie down to bed. I close my eyes and…… wake up again. I haven’t clearing up my things. I wake up and start clear it.
“First, clothes, put in cupboard. Finish.”
“Next, towel hanged on bathroom. Toothpaste and toothbrush on basin. Soap and eh, dipper? I bring a dipper? When I put it into my bag? People at home will use what?”
I walk to bathroom, hanged on towel then go to basin. There’re toothpaste and toothbrush too. But I’ll use mine. My toothpaste has much fluoride to keep my teeth stay white. I don’t want my teeth yellow when I sing. That will be an embarrassed thing to me.
Dipper? I’ll use this not mine. All dippers are same, right?
“ Complete, now remain….. my books and guitar.”
Books I put on table. Although not smart, I’ll still read book. Study until you old, right? No, I don’t read porn magazine, I just don’t have interesting on it. Just don’t have it….
Guitar, I still think why I bring it. We don’t have schedule to sing here. But, I’ve brought it so I‘ll put it beside my bed. I bring classic guitar not electric like I always played. I put it beside my bed so I can play it before and after sleep. Heard so melancholy am I? After finish that, again I lie down on my bed and plug my ears with earphone.
Kimi no koto ga suki dakara
Boku wa itsumo koko ni iru yo
Hitogomi ni magirete
Kizukanakute mo ii
Kimi no koto ga suki dakara
Kimi to aeta sono koto dake de
Atatakai kimochi de
Ippai ni naru
English:
Because I love you
I will always be here
among the crowd
It's OK even if you don't notice me
Because I love you
Only by meeting you,
Warm feeling completely
filled my heart
Kimi no Koto ga Suki Dakara, the song that I still can’t play that lead guitar well. That song make me think. Am I in love with her, Maachun? My head dizzy think it. But I’m too lazy to take aspirin from my bag. First song finish and soon I feel sleepy although the song has an upbeat rhythm. I remove my earphone and then sleeping…….
So are you feel surprise? Let me know it :lol:
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“ Hah?!?” I’m shocked heard it.
I was literally copy-pasting this reaction when I read the 'mute' Mirukii. :yep: In a lower voice though.
Eh~?! Seriously?! Mirukii?! ... But I also thought, a mute Mirukii would be so kawaii and innocent. :love:
Her interaction with Sayanee, it was so sweet. :oops:
One surprise again for me, was Sayanee's dipper. I smirked at this one. :grin:
@arukaYou want the longer chapter, is it too short? It's 2.5 pages of Ms. Word. Maybe I must make 3.5 pages to make it longer.
I usually set myself to write at least four Word pages for a short story. But it's a very personal setting I made.
So you don't have to follow my setting either :grin: , just write as many as you think it's comfortable for you, I won't push you. :yep:
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i didn't expect the "mute miruki" O_o
i want more sayamilky <3
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something new "milky is mute"..
I cant imaging milky is mute..
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Wow mute Milky...I tough she was pissed that's why she didn't answer.
THank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Need long time to me to update. Have no confident to post it :nervous
@aruka I'll try make longer then :glasses: I think she'll kawaii and sweet too XD
@yukofan Actually I didn't expect too, it's just flow. Just wait it :)
@msst28 I can't imagine too 8)
@Megumi Dou itamashite :kneelbow:
Part 4
I’m walking in edge of beach. Then I see a girl is squatting while playing with sea water. Her hair hangs loosely so I can’t see her face clearly. Curious, I walk closer to her.
When distance between us around 7 meters, suddenly she opens her dress button. When she reaches 3rd button she turn and look at me. Feel panic, I close my eyes immediately and want to run off but my body can’t move. I just freezing here while close my eyes.
“Calm yourself, calm yourself.”
Some minutes past, I encourage myself to open my eyes and….. she isn’t longer here.
“Yokatta” I said.
But when I want to stride my right leg, I feel someone hold me from behind. I turn my head, a girl? Isn’t she a girl from before? Then turn and now she’s in front of me. ” lub-dub-lub-dub...” my heart start beating fast. Now she only wears bikini. Panic, I close my eyes again.
Suddenly I feel hands on my shoulder. “lub-dub-lub-dub...” sound of my heart beat faster and faster. Then, her hands move to my face and hold my cheeks. Shocked, I open my eyes and OMG, her face only some centimeters from mine. 5….4….3…2….1…
“ Sayaka, Oi Sayaka.”
I’m awaken from my sleep heard that voice. Nana called me.
“Have you take a bath ? We want see the sunset.”
Sunset ? What time is it now ? I look my watch. 5.10 pm. Am I sleeping that long ?
“ N..No I haven’t. Just wait for me at hall. I’ll come afterward.” I shout from room.
“If you say so, don’t make me wait too long.”
Immediately, I jump from bed. Take clothes from cupboard. I choose red shirt and knee-long jeans. I’ll bring jacket too because I think will cold outside. I run too bathroom “ Splash..splash…” I pour water to my body. Suddenly, that girl crossed again in my mind. I didn’t remember her face because I’m too panic. My face become hot and hotter think that. “lub-dub-lub-dub-lub-dub ...” my heart start beating faster. “Bang…” sound of fall dipper shocking and make me aware again.
“Why I think that again that’s just a dream.”
I continue my bath again, hurried wear my clothes and take my jacket then run to door. “ My phone and wallet.” I return to take it. After it, I come out from my room, lock it and run to hall.
“Hosh..hosh…” I’m tired after running.
“Take your breath first, Sayanee-san”
“Hey, you are fast enough. I think I can sleep while waiting for you.” Nana started teasing me again.
“You think I’m an celebrity which need long time for dress up ?”
“You’re celebrity, aren’t you ?”
Oh yes, I forget it.
“So, ready to go now??” Nana said enthusiastically.
Why this one is full of energy? Did she eat wrong food?
Then we come out and walk to beach.
“ OMG, that’s Sayaka from Mad Catz !!” first girl said.
“Nana and Eriko are there too!!” other said.
“I feel heard something just now.” I said while scratch my head.
Suddenly, “SAYAKA !!!” said the girls.
“Eh?” I turn my head. 2 girls walk to us.
“Once again, I must say that you’re popular, bro” Nana said while hit my back.
“That’s right, Nana-san.” Eriko added.
Okay, anything you want to say I don’t care. As celebrity we must professional and kind to fans.
“Sayaka-san, can I get your autograph?” first girl said.
“Sure.”
“Sayaka-san, can I have photo with you?” the second girl said.
“Sure, why not.”
“Sayaka-san, can I have you ?” the first girl said.
“Sur….Eh? What?”
“HAHAHAHA……” Eriko and Nana laughed at me.
“What did you say just now?” I asked those girls.
“Have you.” She answered.
“Ano… your request is very hard. I can’t. I just….I just…”
“It’s okay if you can’t. We still your fans after all.” She said.
“Eriko-chan, you’re cuter than I saw on TV.”
“Eh? It’s that true.” Eriko said shyly.
“Oww..our Eriko has fans too…” Nana said in teasing tone.
“Of course you are Eri-chan.”
“Nana-san you are really teaser? I think it’s just on TV.”
“Of course I am. I was born to be teaser.” She said in proud tone.
What? She said proud being teaser? What’s wrong with her?
“Photo time.” They said
Then, they take a photo with three of us. After that, they say goodbye and thanks to us. Suddenly I heard someone’s voice.
“I wait for you all for some minutes, apparently you all here.”
I think I know who’s the owner of this voice. Ah, there she is. She’s here too?
“While ago there’re fans so we serve them first.”
“Oh, Okay let’s go.” Maachun said.
They walk while I still stand here. I don’t know why I want confess to her now. Suddenly that idea comes to my mind. Yes..No..Yes..No..Yes…..
“Hey, come here.”
“Y..Yes.” I walk to them.
“Come, sit. Sun will set soon.”
I sit and oh my… beside her. I see many people here too. But, suddenly I feel thirsty. Maybe because I’m groggy.
“Hey, do you all want drink something?” I asked them.
“I want cappuccino.” said Nana.
“I want…….soda.” said Eriko.
“How about you?” I asked her.
“Anything.” said her.
Heard ‘anything’ make me a bit confused. But, who care. Then I go to buy drinks in place nothing but there.
“Excuse me, I want buy some drinks”
No answer for a minute. Finally, someone appears. Oh, that’s her. I’m not surprised if she didn’t answer me.
“Hi…”
She gives me smile.
“I want 1 cappuccino, 1 soda and 2 lime squash.”
Quickly, she fills the cups with drink. Without any serious purpose I ask her
“Only work yourself ?”
She turns and shakes her head.
“Where’s the other ?”
She shakes her head. I think that’s mean she doesn’t now.
She gives my orders, I pay it (my treat again?). There’re 4 cups of drink, my hands only two. Must I walk 2 times to bring it. So lazy. Finally, with ashamed feel I ask her to help.
“Can I ask for your help ?”
Her face says “What do you want me to help?”
“Can you help me bring these cups to there?”
She nods.
Then I and she walk to them.
“Hey, these are the drinks.”
“Only two?”
“Wait.”
Behind me, she brings two other drinks.
“Here, yours and mine.”
“Isn’t she…? Already make peace are you?” Nana asked.
“Of course we are. Now Mirukii and I are friends, you know?”
“Great. Let’s wait sunset together. Mirukii, do you want join us?”
She nods. Nana and Eriko confuse.
“Why you make confuse face ?” I asked them.
“Why I never heard her voice from some time ago.” Nana said.
“Me too.” Eriko said.
I startled, why they asked it. Finally, Maachun says something
“Why you don’t ask it yourselves to her?”
Ask it yourselves? I turn my head to her. What does she think? Of course she won’t answer. I mean don’t say any word.
“Okay, I’ll ask it myself.” Nana said
Okay....what are you thinking now? I think I fail make the dream part :frustrated:
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Wew, its my first time commenting on this fic.. Even though i've read this when you posted the first chapter XD
The girl in the dream.... Is she milky? Oh i think so...
Nah, i'll let your next update answer my question :)
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Ehh?
Okey now I'm more curious...
Thank you for your update
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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i wonder who's the girl in sayaka's dream..but, i hope it's milky..
continue pliz..jphip need more nmb fanfic..
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Ano Katouryuken ... Please continue this fic :pleeease: :pleeease:
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I think I discover new side of warukiii. Mute Milky is very very cute. :inlove: Please update next chapter soon. :panic:
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Logging in just to beg...
PLEASE UPDATE.
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Thank you for your time to read this (fail) fic XD
I ever thought I should delete this thread. It's been a year since my last update :D
But I see some of you want an update. So....
I will continue this fic. But...
I don't know when
So can you please wait ? I promise soon :thumbsup
NB: I already learnt more about grammar. My grammar a year ago was so bad :nervous
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Thank you for your time to read this (fail) fic XD
I ever thought I should delete this thread. It's been a year since my last update :D
But I see some of you want an update. So....
I will continue this fic. But...
I don't know when
So can you please wait ? I promise soon :thumbsup
NB: I already learnt more about grammar. My grammar a year ago was so bad :nervous
I really happy to see you come back to promise us like that. I'll waiting forward to read the next chapter. :welcome
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This funny duo ╭(^▽^)╯
Update please (∩_∩)
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Nyahanyahanyaha PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! :pleeease: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Hehe :sweatdrop:
Teehee
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hello.
it's have been a long time sice you update.
please update, i want to know how this story will go.
such an interesting story. :)
please update,,, :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: