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INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2] (Chapter 10)
« on: June 17, 2007, 08:04:27 AM »
This fic is the sequel to Hitori Janai found here (fic journal). This will be pretty understandable without having to read the first installment, but to get it most things entirely, you might have to (sorry about this). When I finally thought of putting the first installment up on this section, it was too late (imo).


Chapter 0: Prologue

“Gaki-san, Gaki-san! I remember this place!” Eri shouted excitedly as she pulled Risa towards the vaguely familiar park. “The grass, the trees, the pond…I remember them!” She continued to shout. Risa laughed.
“Glad to see you’re remembering things. I guess begging your parents to let us take a visit to your hometown wasn’t a bad idea after all, huh?”

Eri closed her eyes and took a deep breath. The air was refreshing and empowering.

“This place is beautiful!” She sighed, spinning herself around and around until her sight followed a similar pattern as well.
“Kame, watch out!” Risa cried. It was too late. Eri found herself crashing forward towards the grass, pushing another girl down with her. Taking a short moment to gather herself together, she lifted her dizzy head up from the ground just enough to see who she had crashed into. The girl glanced up at her with bewildered eyes.

“I’m so sorry!” Eri apologized, scrabbling to stand up.
“It’s-- it’s okay…,” Reina replied, barely able to move from the shock.
“Are you alright?” Risa asked as she quickly made her way to Eri’s side. Eri nodded. “Sorry about that!” She apologized again, extending a hand forward to assist Reina. Reina took her hand and allowed herself to be pulled up from the ground.
“I’m fine. You should be more careful next time,” She said, avoiding eye contact with Eri. Brushing her self off, she grabbed her bag from the ground and made her way towards the opposite direction away from the duo.
“Hey, I think you dropped this!” Eri called out after her. Reina stopped in her tracks and closed her eyes, releasing a frustrated sigh, as Eri approached her. “Here,” she said kindly, handing over a watermelon scented chap stick. Reina spun around and grabbed it, giving a quick thanks before taking off.

Her heart beat quickened as she absorbed what had just went on, what she had seen. It’s been nearly two years since everything had happened. Reina never thought this day would come, no matter how much she had hoped for it. She came back…
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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2007, 09:19:14 AM »
So is this the same Reina from Hitori Janai? Or is this some separate, completely different Reina?  And for that matter, is this a direct sequel to Hitori Janai or is this some kind of AU type thing with the same characters and such?

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2007, 09:38:37 AM »
I've read the first installment and I liked it quite a lot.

This prologue here just leaves me witha truckload of questions though  :?
Is it a few years into the future type of sequel from when the first one ended?

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2007, 09:45:06 AM »
I know, I know!!! *jumps up and down* Eri lost her memories!!!!!!!!!!!
She can't remember Reina and what they shared :(

I bet something big happened within those 2 years and you're gonna have to explain things with your fast updating won't you :P Heh, yep I'm pressurizing you for quick updates.

My guess is, Risa is Eri's new best friend in the new town after her family moved away. So now that she's back, they are gonna be tangled in a 3 way relationship. Oohhh interesting!

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« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2007, 11:42:52 AM »
Hmm, interesting. XD I was wondering when you were gunna start on number two, but luckily you already have! :D So Eri moved away and Reina stayed with Yuko? o-o That's my guess, and now Eri can't even reconize her!? FTW??  :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: D: Why? And are Eri and Risa a couple? O_O?

Wait, did something happen before Eri moved away? D:? Meh, I'm trying to fill in the missing peices but it'd be better if you just wrote more. XD
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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2007, 12:52:13 PM »
Alright!~ There's a continuation!
So Eri lost her memory.. Poor Reina, they finally got to be together and something happens.. Did that guy, Ishi, do something to break them apart again?
Please please post e next chapter soon

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« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2007, 07:28:36 PM »
Dang, what happened?

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #7 on: June 19, 2007, 05:01:08 AM »
Chapter 01: Two Years Ago prt.1

   The room was spinning and so was her head, but it was barely noticeable as she could hardly feel any part of it. How did she end up here? She couldn’t remember.   

“Wake up, wake up~!” She heard a muffled voice calling out to her. Not only her sight, but her hearing was acting up as well. But even though the voice was slightly twisted, she had a strong idea who it was. She attempted to raise her arms, but only to realized that they were being held back by someone.

“Let me go!!” She shouted.
“Shut up, Tanaka!!” Ishi barked. A burst of freezing wetness soaked Reina’s entire body as Ishi took the liberty in dumping a bucket of iced water over her. The ice cubes fell, pelting her above the head, each uneven piece leaving a light echo inside her dazed mind as they bounced off. In a way she was more awake now, but where ever they seemed to be, the chilling air was able to reach her causing her teeth to clatter. Using whatever strength she could gather, she pulled forward. The results were pointless. Ishi gave a nod and the hold on her disappeared in an instant causing her to fly forward, her body sliding harshly across the smooth concrete floor.

“I let you go, are you happy now? Huh? Huh?” Ishi said in a sarcastic baby tone. He then crouched down and began thumping his fist repeatedly over her head, like an act in teasing a weak animal. During this time, Reina was slowly recovering. She began to use her arms to push her upper torso up from the floor. Reaching out and grabbing Ishi’s arm towards herself, she bit hard into it, drawing blood. He let out a yelp and pulled away. Just as she had expected, he tasted foul. Reina spit out the excess blood that had leaked inside her mouth and attempted to get the rest of her body off the floor.

“Yamamoto, grab her!” Ishi ordered. In a matter of a second, Reina was held back by her arms again. “Let us see how hard you bite after drinking this!” He snarled. Pulling out a small clear bottle from his pocket, he began to force the liquid content into Reina’s mouth, with his partner pulling her chin back and forcing her to swallow. Ishi gave her cheek a few playful slaps, “Isn’t that yummy?”

Reina choked and coughed, breathing heavily as the drug began to flow through her system. She threw her weight backwards and shoved, throwing Yamamoto and herself against the wall. He released her from the impact, allowing Reina a chance at Ishi. She threw herself at him, elbow in place as she drove it heavily across his nose.  Her body was weakening more and more, landing a little ways behind him in a pained slouch.  Locating the exist, she ran for it. Yamamoto rubbed the back of his head angrily and proceeded after Reina, but not before Ishi stopped him. Holding his now bloody nose, he held a hand in front of his friend.

“Let her go, she won’t get far. let’s move on and pay Eri-chan a visit.”


   Eri wander out of Yuko’s shop with a look of disappointment. Reina had left their date to grab something back at the shop, but never returned. When an hour had passed, Eri decided to go look for her. But with no luck as Yuko had told her, Reina had left the shop ages ago. Eri sighed. She was to return to the park in hopes that Reina would be waiting for her there.

Taking a turn towards an empty street, she came to a stop when she saw that she had been stepping on her own shoelaces. As she bent over to retie them, a dense pain sprung from the back of her head causing her to fall forward towards the pavement. Barely conscious, she laid helplessly still, her eyes blinking in and out of focus. Ishi stood by, studying the fallen girl as he held a steel bat in hand.

“Still awake, I see.” Swinging the bat left and right, he held it high and swung it down on Eri.
“Hey, man! You’re gonna kill her!” Yamamoto warned, driving up along the road behind them. An inch away from nearly splitting Eri’s head, Ishi halted and sighed.
“Yeah right. She didn’t die last time, did she? I was just going to knock her out. Stop being such a pussy,” he said. Yamamoto shook his head.
“Whatever man, just go light.”

Ishi grunted in annoyance as he watched Eri make an attempt to crawl away.

“Pathetic,” he croaked. Loosening his shoulders, he took a third swing, this time knocking Eri out instantly.  “Look, there’s not even that much blood,” He laughed, throwing the bat through the car window at Yamamoto. Making his way over to Eri, he picked her up in his arms and carried her back to the car.

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2007, 07:28:32 AM »
OMG that psycho!!  :shocked: Lemme at him!! Lemme split open that Ishi's skull!!!
He hurt Eri bad :cry: No wonder she lost her memory. It's a miracle she didn't die. Sobs, wails, bawls. POOR ERIRIN  :'(

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« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2007, 07:31:26 AM »
Jerk!!! friggin jerk! Hope Reina take revenge once she gets better! Major revenge!

Btw... does Reina even know Eri lost her memory?

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« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2007, 09:40:38 PM »
Wow, I don't think I've ever wanted to kill a fictional character before... :angry:

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« Reply #11 on: June 21, 2007, 09:58:06 AM »
...I so want to beg to make a character in the fic and make it a bounty hunter to kill Ishi and his gangs. :angry:

So Eri really lost her memory and their family had to move away because they thought it was a bad idea to stay there and let their daughter be bullied by Ishi? And what kind of drug he made Reina swallows? AAH :cry:

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« Reply #12 on: June 21, 2007, 10:11:33 AM »
Wow. . . that was a heck of a lot more violent than I was expecting it to be.

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« Reply #13 on: June 25, 2007, 10:56:56 PM »
Damn that Ishi! He just never gives up, does he? But it's an amazing tale you told with Hitori Janai *just read it all last night*. I really hope I can expect more on this. Continue please!
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« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2007, 12:25:35 PM »
I loved Hitori Janai and I think I gonna love this too, beacause your a great writer.

I HATE ISHI  :angry: :angry: you can't hurt Eri and Reina once more :cry:.

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2007, 02:22:24 PM »
Gah, long time no post :(. I apologize for this. I wanted to keep the whole flashback deal within part 1 and 2, but part 2 turned out a lot, lot longer than part 1. I think there will at least be a part 3.

So in conclusion, bare with my uncreative chapter titles for the next 1-2 (or more) chapters! Thank you!

Btw, I thank everyone for reading this ^_^!
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« Reply #16 on: August 11, 2007, 02:27:23 PM »
Chapter 02: Two Years Ago prt.2

   Her steps slowed and her body lowered towards the ground. She shook her head repeatedly, but it was useless. Giving herself a hard slap across the face, she tried her best to straightened her posture. Get it together, Reina! Even with a strong will and determination, her body gave way and she finally collapsed.


“How-- how did this happened?!” Mrs. Kamei cried with Mr. Kamei by her side as they stared through the wide glass window into the hospital room where Eri rested. She laid unconscious, her entire head was bandaged up, leaving only the areas of her face open for oxygen. Ishi gave a convincingly sad sigh. He was the one who had checked Eri into the hospital and contacted her parents shortly after, informing them that their daughter had been assaulted.

He began to explain the happenings from the past few months. Everything had been Reina’s doing. Eri’s first head injury was caused by her. They were and still am in a lover’s relationship. Mr. Kamei was furious as he had allowed Reina into their home many times with open arms.

“I can’t believe we trusted her…and-- and our little girl, they-- a relationship?” Mrs. Kamei sobbed. Ishi tried hard not to smirk as he watched Eri’s parents become more and more emotional over the stories he told.


   Slowly opening her eyes, she found herself in a familiar room. She was back  at Yuko’s shop.

“How is it that I’m always the lucky one to find you stranded in the middle of where ever?” Yuko asked as she appeared with a glass of water. “What was it this time, anyways?”
“Don’t ask,” Reina mumbled.
“Suit yourself-- by the way, Kamei-chan came by today looking for you,” she mentioned, handing the glass over to Reina.
“I have to go see her,” Reina said with concern as she attempted to stand. Although she stood quite easily, her stance resembled one of a drunk man.
“How about we close up early and I’ll give you a ride over there, alright?” Yuko suggested.

Parking just across the street  from Eri’s home, Yuko waited as Reina made her way towards the front door. From what she could see, Eri’s younger sister had answered. Not a moment later, Reina came rushing back towards the car.

“We have to get to the hospital! Eri‘s hurt!!”


   Running through the front entrance,  Reina rushed for the front desk with Yuko following behind.
“We are here to see Kamei Eri!” She said quickly. The receptionist punched in a few keys on her keyboard and examined the content displayed on the computer monitor with care.

“May I ask in what relations are you to the patient?”
“I’m her friend.”
“I’m sorry, but only family members are allowed to visit as ordered.”
“But I really need to see her! Please!” Reina begged.

“Leave now!” Mr. Kamei shouted. He had decided to wonder the hospital in means to relieve stress, but here he was, face to face with Reina. “Haven’t you done enough?!” He snapped, storming in her direction.
“Kamei-san, I--”
“Leave now, before I call the police!”
“Kamei-san, why are you--”
“I know about you and Eri, I know everything! I don’t know what she did to you to deserve this, but I suggest you leave her alone!”

Seeing that Reina was stunned until the point where she was unable to speak nor move, Yuko stepped forward and gently escorted Mr. Kamei back a couple of steps.
“Calm down. I think you should get your facts straight, Kamei-san. Tanaka-chan would never do anything to harm your daughter,” she reassured. Backing off completely, Mr. Kamei turned on his heels and left. Reina shook her head slowly. He knows about our relationship? But even that couldn’t of caused this much tension.
“Come on, relax. We’ll try again tomorrow,” Yuko comforted, wrapping an arm around Reina’s shoulder.


   Day after day, Reina was repeatedly denied from visiting Eri. The only information she was able to collect was the fact that Eri had suffered a severe head injury and has yet to awaken. Reina knew that must of been why Mr. Kamei was angry with her. He had mistaken her for the culprit. She knew right away that this must be Ishi’s doing. It was too obvious. 

“Tanaka-san, is that you?” Asked a nurse who caught a glimpse of Reina standing outside the hospital.
“Good evening, Abe-san,” Reina said politely. Abe Natsumi worked as a nurse at the hospital. She had seen Reina almost everyday since her first visit and noticed her troubles at the front desk. Trusting that she was an honest girl, Natsumi had decided to help her, giving her updates on Eri’s situation whenever they had met. Once she had even attempted to sneak the girl in, but it had became too risky.

“Why are you not waiting inside?” Natsumi asked. Reina flashed a tired smile.
“I just needed some fresh air,” she answered. Natsumi nodded understandingly.
“How’s Eri today?”
“She’s…still in a coma. I’m sorry. But the doctor predicted that she will wake up soon as her wound is healing fairly quickly. Maybe in a week or so? Or less?”
“I hope so…,” Reina said solemnly.
“If you don’t mind me asking, do you perhaps know what happened? Kamei-san’s parents don’t seem very friendly towards you.” Natsumi’s tone was careful, yet filled with curiosity.
“Her parents-- are angry that we’re in a relationship. But it also appears that they think I was the one who put Eri in a coma…but I-- I didn’t. I would never hurt Eri,” Reina explained to the best of her abilities. Natsumi gave yet another nod.
"I believe the truth will surface soon, Tanaka-san. Everything will be okay," she reassured.


   Reina was on her way to the hospital again when she saw Natsumi running down the street towards her.

"Tanaka-san!"
"Abe-san, what is it? Did something happen to Eri?!" She asked in a panic.
"Sh-- She's awake!" Natsumi answered urgently.


Reina begged and pleaded to the receptionist, until the point where anger was clearly heard in her voice. Natsumi stood by her side and calmly put in a word or two, as that was the only way to help without risking her own job. But it was the same as always; she was denied. Reina took a deep breath and asked one last time, "May I PLEASE see Eri? Please?" The receptionist paused for a moment and sighed.
"Okay, you may on in. But only for five minutes."

Reina gasped for joy as she thanked the woman. Grabbing Natsumi by the arm, they began to jog their way into the hall behind the front counter.

"Don't you dare go near her room!"

Mr. Kamei and Mrs. Kamei had just arrived after receiving the news regarding Eri.

"You should be fired for letting her through like that!" Mr. Kamei barked at the receptionist. Reina shook her head.
"Please let me see Eri!" She begged. The couple refused, glaring stressfully at Reina as they stormed pass her. It was not fair. She didn’t do anything to harm Eri, but obviously they were too ignorant to see that.
“Tanaka-san, I’m sorry,” Natsumi apologized.
“No Abe-san, it’s fine. I’m just glad that Eri is awake now…all that matters is that she’s okay. Thank you for everything.”

Waving farewell to Natsumi, Reina made her way out of the hospital. Now that Eri was awake, she felt relieved again, but nothing could of prepared her for what happened next. Ishi came strolling towards her, arms wide open.

“Tanaka! How are you?” He greeted her cheerfully.
“What the hell are you doing here?” She asked sternly, her fists clutched down by her side and ready to strike at any given time.
“Come on, what’s with the attitude?”

He knew that with the public around them, Reina wouldn’t dare lay a finger on him.

“I know it was you who did everything. You put Eri in a coma!” Reina cried. It was all too clear now. Why else would he be here.
“Don’t forget manipulating her parents into thinking that YOU did it. But you know what, Tanaka? It was your fault. If you hadn’t pranced off like that, I wouldn’t of even thought about Eri-chan. Ever thought about that? No, because you only cared about your own safety. You’re selfish, Tanaka. Selfish,” Ishi confessed, while pushing the blame on Reina. He was right. If she hadn’t left, Eri would have been unharmed. But knowing Ishi, he would’ve taken any chance possible to make their lives miserable. Reina was unfazed by his words. With her fists raised, she took a firm step towards him.
“I think you’re making a big mistake,” Ishi spat, pointing to the cops standing close by, two of which had already taken notice of their conflict.

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Re: INDIGO BLUE LOVE [Hitori Janai 2]
« Reply #17 on: August 11, 2007, 02:46:07 PM »
First..  :angry:
I'd pay you to create a hitman and send him after Ishi XD or at least kill him off through cruel and unsual methods by the end of the series  :twisted:

Aw man, Eri's parents rather believe some jerk they probably don't know well than their daughter's best friend/girlfriend. I'm not that big on TanaKamei but I love this fic! I wonder what Reina's gonna do now.

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« Reply #18 on: August 12, 2007, 09:20:00 AM »
First..  :angry:
I'd pay you to create a hitman and send him after Ishi XD or at least kill him off through cruel and unsual methods by the end of the series  :twisted:

I think the same, HE HAVE TO DIE  :angry:

I feel so sorry for Reina, she haven't done anything  :cry: and I love TanaKamei because of this fan fic XD

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« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2007, 05:29:01 PM »
man what is this guy's problem?

soo... Eri's parents shifted house to separate Eri and Reina right? And did that Ishi guy hurt still continue to try to Reina after Eri left?

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