WOOOOT~~~~~
Finally !
Exactly one year after the launch of the awesome Detonator M , here we go again with Detonator M shuffle !!!!
Detonator M
« on: October 24, 2006 »
Detonator M Shuffle
« on: October 24, 2007»
Concidering this new season seems to be focusing on Hs, IT'S GOING TO BE EVEN BETTER then the first story !!!! HOY !!!! imo
I'm so happy to see H in action yeye~~~
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
i was just simply so happy when wordy decided to write a new season
So happy that we decided to make a little surprise...
Thanks JFC for your kind comment on my doujins, i'm trying my best to do something as good as wordy's fic, and hope you guys don't mind if i only focus on H and berryz >< H is really my fav character so...
But, don't worry, i'm planning to make other comic strips with the other guardians too
Now on the comments...
Seriously, wordy is the funniest guy i ever read, he can turn ecchi things into such funny sentence, and it's not even gross
ok, i don't read perv fics so maybe there are others funny writers but who cares i just love wordy's works !!!
About the charaters profiles, it's like a preview of wordy's sense of humour...
M(Mitsui) -
He is a Tokusatsu and Anime fan and gets his moves from most of the shows, except moves from hentai shows.(He attempted to use one before but it backfired, don't ask which technique.)
K(Kyo) -
He is also the author of the book "Ultimate PuyoPuyo Mastery" which only has two copies. He still has one of them but the other was bought in ebay by a certain 'ebiRur154k0+'.
S(Shingo) -He Miki'd Miki. Damn!
D(Domon) -
One of his specialties is being able to do the Usa-chan peace without looking like a complete idiot. Auditioned for Johnny's but was disqualified for looking too "girly".
H(Hikaru) - He is also the official taste-tester of Chinami's cooking. He lost consciousness (and a lot of blood due to nosebleed) once, after Saki joked that she was the next one to get an Alo-Hello. Like the others, he also has no idea about his past, but he was flabbergasted once it was revealed to him[..]. (Un)Fortunately, he has yet to be Miki'd.
H2(Higure) - Almost drowned when he attempted to teach Airi to swim but in fact(?), did it on purpose to get mouth to mouth resuscitation from her.
Ichiro - He was destroyed by Miki's Death Glare.
rofl...
R(Retsuya) - Miki'd? Uncomfirmed. Ai'd? Most likely.
Now that makes me wonder what's the real definition about Miki'd and Ai'd
"Title+Rebirth" and "Title+Revolution"(except Kirarin Revolution) gives me ecchi ideas.
Graft - a drug that enhances the capabilities of a person, mainly wotas, to the point that he or she can combat Guardians. Ingredients are mushrooms, power pellets, scooby snacks, energon cubes, spinach and hunny. No, seriously...
On the show !
Oh, there were(...)empty potato chip bags lying around too
Ichiro's place
Oh, and perfect teeth.
why am i laughing ?
She saw herself in mirror and couldn't believe it, because there was an uncanny resemblance between her and one of the girls in the photobooks.
whohohohoho
large vats,filled with some kind of liquid,someone stepped out, and now the resemblance ? hu hu hu hu
She tried to scurry for any piece of cloth she could find but there were none. The owner of the lab probably planned this from the start.
what do you expect from Ichiro-sama himself
I'm probably dead. Don't be afraid, the one talking to you right now isn't a ghost. I won't be climbing out of a wall.This is a pre-recorded video, not a cursed one.
Rofl...
"Not really. I'm worried because there's one more vial missing in the box, Tezuka-san..."
"Really?"
"Really."
So that's it...CLONE WAR !!!
At the hotel's lobby, a certain girl was waiting for someone. She was still wearing her concert outfit and she was still a bit sweaty but she didn't care. The main door opened and it was the person she was waiting for came in. She ran to meet him, and then held him in her arms.
Hikaru-chan! You didn't tell me that you were gonna watch! I saw you in the crowd!" The petite captain said as she tugged on the taller boy's sleeve.
awwww...i'm loving their relationship...
"Huh? What are you talking about, Shimi-chan?"
"Come on. Don't pretend like you don't know anything."
"But I..."
H didn't have the courage to tell her that he was in the backstage during the entire concert after he saw how happy Saki was.
uh oh...
"Liar!"
"Miya-chan?"
"That wasn't you, was it Akabaka?" (Akai=red, Baka=stupid)
"How'd you know?"
"I saw someone in the crowd. He looked like you, with red hair and stuff. But I knew it wasn't you."
"Why?"
"Because he was with a girl. And that girl was pretty. It's impossible for someone like you to snag a girl as cute as that! Hnnn."
"Eh?"
"It's a joke, dumbass. Plus, I know that the only girl you need is..."
and i'm also loving this
I wanted to make the 3rd special chapter before wordy would post his chapters but he posted them so fast i just didn't have the time...You guys could have some hint about their relationship but Oh well...
"I can go with you two, if you like. In case Tokunaga-san decides to scare her again."
"Nah. We'll be fine. And you already have Captain, don't you? Why don't you let me keep Rii-chan for myself? I can take care of her."
"With your magic?"
"I will count to ten and I want you to disappear in front of me or else I'll...one...four...."
"Okay. I'm gone."
"But it looks like nothing's changed. I still top you all in looks."
So, to celebrate the success of their concert, let's head to the nearest red light district kukuku! Who's with me? Raise your hand!"
"Umm...aniki. Why is S-san raising his hand?"
Maimi greeted her with a killer glare
let's the drama continue....
"What happened to you? It looks like you haven't even slept yet. And what's that? Were you crying, Maimi-chan?"
"..."
"Your hair is a mess." Risako said as she giggled.
"Like your hair isn't. Haha." Maasa told her.
"Don't look at me. It's not my fault." said Miyabi.
Before H could finish talking, Maimi grabbed his shirt, and then slapped him before giving him a straight, making him fall on the floor.
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DANGER DANGER WOY !!! HOW CAN YOU LET THIS END LIKE THAT ?! MOAAAAR next chapter already !!!
^ this is what i would say if i came at time
Maimi attempted to kick him while he was still on the floor, but Airi, Erika, and the other members of C-ute were able to hold her back, making her miss.
i can't imagine what would happen to H if Maimi ever land a penaltykick on him
she trembled before she broke out into tears.
"Hikaru-chan. What's the meaning of this?"
"I don't know." H said as he wiped the blood that flowed from his nose with his hankie.
"So it's the innocent act huh. Alright. If you don't want to talk, I will. " said Maimi. "What were you doing in our room last night, Hikaru?"
NO (MY)CAPTAIN LITTLE H CAN'T DO THAT !!
"Oh. I get it now. Maybe you girls are just used to him watching you while you take a bath..."
"You're going too far!" Miyabi said as she shoved Maimi.
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Good thing Risa, Eri, Sayu and Koharu were able to pacify the younger girls.
funny cause it's like the lastest girls i would think of to pacify them
"Don't worry, Higure-chan. I'm not mad at you." Maimi told him.
well why would she be mad at him ?
"ARE THOSE SKULLS PRINTED ON YOUR PYJAMAS?!" Miyabi's eyes widened. "I MUST HAVE...T…THAT..."
"No way! I already gave you my other set before Miya."
"Are you going to ask me what I was doing in Yajima-san's room?"
"Nope."
"Whew. Well that's a relie..."
"I'm gonna ask you what you were doing in the other girls' rooms."
But as the boss said, I'll have to cut your abilities, meaning some of them will be disabled for a while."
awwww
what's going to happen if he needs to fight ? but well no more wild fan so no worry but....
"Why? Because the in-house doctor's got a hot nurse! That's why. You should let her check you while you check her out hehehe."
"..."
"What?"
"If I'm gonna grow up to be someone like you or M, I wish that you had never revived me before."
"I'm just kidding. But you should go let them check your nose. So Shimizu-san won't get worried. She likes your nose, you know."
"I don't like that guy with the red scarf. That stare he has makes me feel like he's undressing me. I should kill him." said Miki.
Hisoka reminds me HxH
Jirou are like H and H2, aren't they? They're also modeled using Yossi's DNA.
he he he
if you read carefully again :
"suddenly, the LCD monitors that covered the walls of the room turned on and began to broadcast something. A man holding a bag of chips appeared on the screen and started to talk.
"Ummm. H-hello world! I am Ichiro. "
"The third vat finally opened. A boy stepped out. The boy and the girl were aghast. Not because he looked like the man on the screen"
"What's wrong M? Not satisfied last night?"
"Of course not! Why should I be satisfied? I lost a lot of money from those pachinko machines. Now I'm broke."
So instead of a nudie bar, they went to a pachinko joint?
lol that must be why S raised his hand earlier, he knew that they weren't going to any durty place ?
And we aren't in the perv fic section....so i guess wordy would be censored if he writes anything like that ?
"Why'd you want to gamble anyway? Did you get someone pregnant?"
"NO! Of course not! Why the hell did that enter your mind S?."
rofl...are you sure S isn't perv too ?
"I think she'd appreciate it if you paid more attention to her when she talks instead of looking at Ms. Li Chun."
"WTF? Are you saying that I check her out?"
"You don't?"
"Do you?"
"I bought Isshun, S. And I'm also going to buy MAPLE."
"MAPLE? What's that? Wait..." S said as he searched the internet.
"Hehe. I'm surprised you don't know about it. Of all people. Shame on you!"
"Damn.You. M."
YEAH SHAME ON YOU !
"You can vent your frustrations on your Photoshop and 10 yen masterpeices when we get home."
"Nevermind."
I was wondering where those were all coming from.
i second that
Saki is taller than her, if ever you're wondering.
rofl...you had to ad height and saki in the same sentence huh xD
"Are you two already...having a lover's quarrel?"
"What? No! We're just friends."
yeah yeah, just a friend
She's taller than Saki, if ever you're wondering.
"I know you. You're a member of Berryz Koubou. You're famous."
"I'm not really that famous." Saki said as she blushed.
"I'm Miki. Fujimoto Miki. But I'm not the idol. We just have similar names but I think I have a more pleasing personality."
well if she knows captain, that means she should know that captains knows it's not THE miki fujimoto from h!p (does my line makes sense ? xD)
And Fujimoto-san is quite a good person once you know her. But if you like to touch like her, I won't mind. Hey! What are you doing?"
"You said you won't mind?"
oh god
"Hmm. You seem to have a lot of Snoopy accessories." Saki said as she noticed the phone strap and Miki's bag and her socks.
"Yes I do. I'm even wearing Snoopy panties. Wanna see?"
i wonder where this idea of snoopy comes from
"You're funny. I think we can get along well...Hey! Your hands!"
yet she said she wasn't like her ?
In one girl's forgotten memory (Happened probably before one of the concerts)
hu hu hu hu hu
A stock room isn't exactly the most romantic place where someone confesses love but...
"Do you have feelings for me?"
"What? Are you out of your mind? Me? Fall for you? That's crazy!"
WHO WHAT WHEN @ksjgkrjg# HUH ?!
"I know you like me too but you're afraid to show it because of Saki-chan. I like her but I think I like you more. No. I always liked you, ever since the time we first met.[...]
"Since when did you start calling her Saki-chan? You always called her Shimi-chan. And why do you smell like cigarettes? When did you start to smoke? And those earrings. You said that you won't wear them anymore. Also, you always said that I should change my shampoo since it stinks. You're not him aren't you?" the girl said as she tried to free herself from his grasp. She gave him a hard slap so he'd let her go. "Who are you?"
oh...i see i get it now...well i really should have done the 3rd special chapter before T_T
what make me angry was
"I'm sorry. I can do things with you right now, things that you never imagined, and I'd just erase it from your memory but unfortunately, you're just not my type..."
Miki handed her an envelope. Saki opened it. The envelope contained a picture. And there was silence. Saki dropped te picture but she picked it up, after she recovered from the shock.
"I think that was meant for you, but somehow it ended up in my locker..."
It was a picture of Miyabi. And a boy with dyed red hair. Kissing. Even if the boy's back was turned, Saki knew who it was.
Her world stopped. She felt like she didn't want to breathe anymore. She wanted to cry, but she didn't.
"That was easy. Too easy..." Miki said as she grinned.
"Umm, I'd just like to ask if you know what's going on between Miya and Captain."
oh uh....
"Come on, Captain. You can tell us." added Chinami. "That's what friends are for right?"
(...)
Saki didn't answer them. She took out something from her bag and handed it to Miyabi. The other girls gathered around her as she opened the envelope and took out the picture it contained.
The silence was terrifying. Only Saki was brave enough to break it.
"Is that what friends are for?"
"The picture can't lie. But you can, Miya."
Photoshop, anyone ?
this chapter was just so heart breaking, esp for a Miya&Captain wota like me...
i read it like 5 times already and i'm still touched
"I'm sorry. Sorry if I had to tell you this. I hope this doesn't affect our friendship in any way. I'm still your friend right?"
"Of course." H said as he embraced her. "Thanks for understanding..."
There was noise coming from the door. They could hear the others saying "don't go inside Captain...", "but I forgot something..". It was already too late before they were free from each other.
"Shimi-chan..." H said as he let go. "I was just..."
"It's not what you think Captain."
"..."
That was HELLA lousy timing.
second that
"H...Hika... I...I...I love you...Hikaru...Hikaru..."
"Y...Yajima-san?"
Too Young's PrettyBoy syndrome lol
Tsss. Miyabi's punch was a lot stronger than that. But I have to tell you this. She was a good kisser. Too bad she forgot about it hehe. Come to think of it, after I kill you, maybe I'll go kiss her again."
i should get mad because of what he did, but just because he added "good" im not...
"Any last words?"
"Heh. I should be the one asking you that."
"Is that a joke? I thought you didn't have a sense of humor. You're pretty stupid to still have the courage to say something like that. "
"It's not a joke. Of course I'm serious." H said as he grinned.
"Huh?"
"Because Dan-san gave me the password to override the limiter, asshole!"
GET HIM H !!!!!!!!!!!