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Offline XxRoByNxX78

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Inlove with Devils ! Niigaki and Ai teaser 30/03/12
« on: March 26, 2012, 12:43:38 PM »
inlove with devils
By XxRoByNxX78

Have you ever met the right person the one your sure your inlove with the one your postive wont do you wrong but they do they hurt you more than anything has in your entire life.

They cheated
They lied
They abused you
They used you

This is a story about 4 girls there 4 best friends and there boyfriends

What do you do you do when love is not all that it was cracked up to be ?

That is the question.

Staring:

Tanaka Renia-Taemin's girfriend

michishige Sayumi-Yoseob's girfriend

Kamie Eri-Renia's best friend

Takahashi Ai-Joon's girfriens

Niigaki Risa-Ai's best friend

Junjun-Sayumi's best friend

Yaguchi Mari-Kikwang's girfriend

Fujimoto Miki-Mari's besfriend

The Boyfriends:

Yang Yoseob

Lee Joon

Lee Kikwang

Lee Taemin

and what if you start fallin inlove with your best friend ?

end of teaser !!

yer well i wanna no if i should start this our not also if someone could tell me how to put in images that would be great i know you go on insert image but dont know wht to do after that.

Thanks


« Last Edit: March 30, 2012, 01:04:20 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Teaser
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2012, 12:50:22 PM »
Yer do its different to anything elese you've done  :)

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Teaser
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2012, 07:22:47 PM »


Miki and Yaguchi teaser

"He done it again Miki."

"Am gonna kick his ass!"

"Dont please!"

"But-"

"Dont i love him."

"You love him even after he done Yaguchi!"

"Yes!"

"You dont love him you fear him!"

"I dont!"

"You do!"

"If im your best friend you wont do anything."

Miki looked at the small girl infront of her trying not to raise her voice if she was going to speak again instead she clenched her fists so much that blood started to be visable.

She grabbed hold of the door and walked out slaming it behind her.

(Miki pov)

That bastrad he doesnt know what he has !

End of teaser!
can you gusse what Kikwang has done?
if someone done that to one of my friends i think i would do the same thing Miki is thinking
anyway please comment thanks for reading the teaser

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Miki and Yaguchi Teaser
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2012, 08:34:28 PM »
Wow lol u need to start it now :)

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Miki and Yaguchi Teaser
« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 08:13:54 PM »
Sayumi and Junjun teaser

"Sayu he is using you."

"He isnt."

"Then how come your the one how is always buying everything and not him?"

"I offer."

"I dont trust him."

"I do i have known him since we where 5 sure he has changed a little but i know him well enough that he woudnt use me."

"What ever Sayu am gettin tired of this lets just forget about it okay?"

Sayu nodded her head to her best friend knowing that this subject was going to be brought up again sooner or later she was getting tired of her best friend of her always accusing Yoseob of using her.

There was a knock on the door.

"Yo Sayu its your boyfriend!"

End of teaser

i think what Yoseob does it clear but then you can always gusse well i hope you will thanks for reading the teaser!
Oh comment !

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Sayu and Junjun Teaser 28/03/12
« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 08:21:53 PM »
It's coming together now and plz start writing it proper  :D

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Sayu and Junjun Teaser 28/03/12
« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2012, 05:32:24 PM »
Renia and Kamie teaser

The night was cold and the pair where sitting underneath the park's Sakura tree where they first met where they first became bestfriends.That was the happy occasion unfortenly this wasnt.

"Taemin said that your trying to break us up."

"Im not im trying to tell you the truth but you wont listen."

"Your not he would never do that!"

"How would you know?"

"Because i know and love him!"

"You just love the idea of love!"

"Kamie dont come near us again am not ruining the best relastionship i ever had just because you are making things up okay leave!"

These words ripped through Kamie tears formed but she coudnt let them fall she got to her feet never wanting to look back she lost the most important person in her life for telling the truth mabye it would have been better if she found it out herself.

end of teaser

so can you gusse what Taemin has done or is doing ??

in all honesty i love the 4 boys so am abit sad that im making them the bad guys anyway thanks for reading the teaser one more then the first chapter!

please comment

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Kamie and Renia Teaser 28/03/12
« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2012, 06:27:12 PM »
Aww that's mean because she told the truth but it broke up their friendship :cry:

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Re: Inlove with Devils ! Kamie and Renia Teaser 28/03/12
« Reply #8 on: March 30, 2012, 01:03:28 PM »
Niigaki and Ai teaser

Ai was thinking about the great day she had with her boyfriend and to finish that great day off her best friend was coming to see her after 2 years.

She tidyied her apartment up to look spotless when a knock at the door told her that Niigaki had arrived.She opened the door not looking at the girls face as she jumped into her arms snuggling her head into her shoulder.

"Ai i know you missed me but can you let go i need my breath."

"Okay yer sorry"

Niigaki dragged her bags into Ai's apartment opeing her mouth dropped to floor as she said "Since when have you ever had a clean place to live in?"

Earning a hit in the shoulder as the chuckled with each other after both learnt about what happaned over the two years and Ai told Niigaki about her boyfriend she seen a concorened face on the girl before her.

"Did you say his name was Lee Joon as in the the famous  Mblaq singer?"

"Yup he is so amazing her always has this affect on me that makes my knees wobble like jelly."

While Ai bragged about her boyfriend Niigaki's heart froze her ex was the boyfriend was going out with the girl she loved the one she broke up with him for did he want pay back he kept her secret but did he hate her?

End of teaser

so the next thing up will be the first ever chapter of the story

thanks for reading please comment

i hope that i gain more readers and more comments in the future

also writing these help me a hell of a lot to get rid of the pressure of school i have to go in to GCSE math early which means i have to revise alot thank god we break up today!
 

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