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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.3
« Reply #20 on: October 25, 2012, 03:00:27 PM »
Guys i don't think i'm kinda good on those things  :catglare:

it takes a lot work because english is not my first language :nervous


like that never mind  :nervous
just write what you can  :)
but from what i have read from your fics so far, i can see you have that potential to ... i am serious
and you seem to have the flow in writing that in "Don't judge by the covers"  (and that's why i am requesting you to write that in that fic...)

sometimes, something as long as it is simple, readable and understandable, it will be enjoyable... anyway, just write what you can :)
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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #21 on: October 27, 2012, 02:21:00 AM »
                            One sided love?
                                        4

The same day afternoon..

Risa got back to the room and entered to the bathroom to shower

Aichan pouted but still she got up and entered to the shower with Risa 

"Aichan.." Risa murmured then looked other way

Aichan just kissed her but Risa bit her causing Her to bleed 

Risa looked at Aichan who had her hand on her lip 

"This is last time.." The ex subleader murmured sad

Aichan just nodded while Risa touched her lip softly with her finger then without a warning she kissed her roughly 

~Half an hour later~ 

Risa went to the kitchen while Aichan putted Risa's clothes on, they got out of the room and watched her best friend cutting some fruits 

Aichan hugged her from behind 

"Aichan.." Risa whispered and looked 

Aichan inhaled Risa scent "my clothes are still wet once they get dry i'll go home and this will be over but please let me enjoy every second of it!" she says sad while presses Risa aganst her body 

Risa closed her eyes while the older girl's hands were climbing up under her shirt touching everything on their way while she kisses her neck 

Risa turned and kissed Aichan passionately while she's still with her hands under Risa's shirt 

~Doorbell ringing~

The two girls stopped kissing and looked at the door 

Aichan sighed while Risa scratched her head and went to open the door 

"Niigaki san!" Someone shouts and jumps on Risa making both fall on the floor 

"Ouuch Eripon.." Risa says complaing while tries to get up but she couldn't cause the younger girl was hugging her waist "I missed you so much!" she says smiling holding tigher on Gaki's waist

Aichan pouted then left her eyebrow and took a deep breath "ahemm"  

Eripon looked at the other girl in the room "Takahashi san!" she says faking a smile 

Gaki san took this an opportunity and got up "so good to ses you!" she say as she helps the older girl to get up then closed the door 

Aichan sitted on the couch next to Gakipon while Risa went to her fridge to get something to drink for the younger girl 

Aichan smiled ackwardly "is still this weird atmosphere between us" she thought

Erina pouted a bit "no way.. i love ex leader but I love Niigaki san more!" she thought 

"so how's everything going?" Aichan asked with a smile 

"well humm Michishige san is a really good leader,Tanaka san is really cool but her singing live is not the same as before,Mizuki singing is really great but spend more of her time thinking how it would be if  Kamei san was our leader?,Yasshi and Daishi have an ackward relantionship and it's even more ackward than ever,they never hug unless it would be in front of a camera,Zukki *Aichan interrupts the younger girl* 

i wasn't asking about morning..i was asking about you!" Aichan says

"well i'm going to turn 16 so it's only 2 years and i can.. *She stops talking and looks at Risa then smiles*

Aichan rubbed the back of her neck "She always knew about Erina's feelings towards Gakisan and how strange once she graduate it became bigger  *She knew because she read the blogs of the girls*"

"here orange juice!" Risa says with a smile 

"so Takahashi san it's kinda weird seeing you here due the fact that you haven't talk to Niigaki san long while ago,i stiil remember Niigaki san waiting for your call" Eripon says then drinks her juice 

Risa looked down 

Aichan putted her hand on her forhead "i wanted to see her.." she whispered sad

"I will always keep contact with Niigaki san beacuse i love her.." The younger girl says smiling 

Aichan got up "she could imagine how painful it was for Gaki san and all the s%# she put her through ..all the times she said she would visit Gaki san or go to a concer of MM to see her and she didn't.All the fake promises of being together forever!"

"Takahashi san.." Erina says 

Risa looked at the older girl 

Aichan wiped the little tear on the corner of her left eye "I have to go,my clothes are already dry!" she says as she goes to Gaki's room then changed her clothes and saved Gaki's shirt on her purse 

Risa sighed while Eripon was emotionless watching as Ai leaves 

Aichan walked the streets once she was far from Risa's dept she sighed "i want you to be happy.." she murmured 

After walking for a while she got to a restaurant,she sitted and waited till someone take her order

"Aichan!" Someone says happy 

"Eri..." Aichan says with a smirk 

"what are you going to order?" Eri asked

"Same as always.." Aichan replies with a sigh

"The sigh means Gakisan.." Eri says while sits next to her friend

"How can you do it? it's not hard not to see Sayumi everyday?" Aichan asked 

"ouchhh! of course it's hard,i was so tempted to get back to Morning and have our KameShige time!"Eri replies pouting 

"Why you didn't return?" Aichan asked 

"It's her time to shine.." Eri replied with a smile 

"That's nice Eri.." Aichan says as she pats her friend's head softly 

"you should get Gakisan back,you guys are soul mates!" The younger girl says with a smile 

"we can't.." Aichan replies sad and looking other way

"It's because you don't want it!" Eri says 

Aichan gets up "i don't want it.. Are you saying that i don't want it? you don't know anything! what are you going to do when Sayumi graduates and decide to still be a tv personality? could you live thinking that someone might steal her from you?because they don't know she's yours!" she says mad then leaves the restaurant 

Eri sighed "even though we can spend our time together like before it doesn't change a thing i love her and i will treasure every little second that she have free and when she graduates i still going to love her so i will stay by her side even if i can't tell the world that i love her.. we're KameShige!" she thought

*phone vibrating*
<new message>

Finally the radio show it's over ^^ 

i'm so tired!! x_X;

But still there wasn't anyone cuter than me so i'm happy! :D 

remember that i love you and i miss ok! <3 <3 

see you on saturday I REALLY LOVE YOU ERI!! ;D

Eri smiled "it's worth it!" she murmures then replies to the message

To be continued 

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #22 on: October 27, 2012, 02:58:12 AM »
aww Aichan :'( !! gaki why ?! hm u knw sometimes i wanna write a story of gaki and eripon :) but i always thought 'oh ! TakaGaki is a legendary couple' ! so better not.. anyway .. my beloved KameShige ! of course .. if you want it, you'll get it .. :)) love and love and love no matter how it hurts Aichan ! its the meaning of love !! oh sh*t ! hehehe :peace:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #23 on: October 27, 2012, 03:06:06 AM »
hahaha... i like the mentality of eririn... she is quite firm and certain of her situation with shige-san  :grin:
i think our aigaki should engage with some counselling sessions with the kameshige  individually  :pimp:

cmze... i think there is some typo here, can you edit   :) :
Aichan sitted on the couch next to Gakipon while Risa went to her fridge to get something to drink for the younger girl
as i read this one, i just wonder how can gakipon be there when gakipon is opening her fridge to get drink :?

aww Aichan :'( !! gaki why ?! hm u knw sometimes i wanna write a story of gaki and eripon :) but i always thought 'oh ! TakaGaki is a legendary couple' ! so better not.. anyway .. my beloved KameShige ! of course .. if you want it, you'll get it .. :)) love and love and love no matter how it hurts Aichan ! its the meaning of love !! oh sh*t ! hehehe :peace:
i think you should write what you have thought... mindless whether it is legendary or not  :P... like can add more spices to your fiction  :)

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #24 on: October 27, 2012, 03:15:35 AM »
oh yellow ! why you gave me idea to my story ?! :D oh i will gve u gakipon alrigHt ! (the dEvil's kiss)

cmze how about soMe kameshiGe ahem ? wohoo !! maikea just kidding !

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #25 on: October 27, 2012, 03:27:39 AM »
oh yellow ! why you gave me idea to my story ?! :D oh i will gve u gakipon alrigHt ! (the dEvil's kiss)

cmze how about soMe kameshiGe ahem ? wohoo !! maikea just kidding !
are you hinting you are starting another new fiction?  :P

as for the devil's kiss,
*sigh* to be frank, i hope you can drag it longer as you know... you are making her to disappear in it... thinking about that, i am already quite emo  :cry:
but i also cannot be so selfish, right? so please update sooner... as i believe your other readers is also very forward-looking to that chapter :)

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #26 on: October 27, 2012, 03:34:50 AM »
yes of course !! hehe but first , i hope cmze will gve me at least 1 kameshige ahem !! bwahahaha!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #27 on: October 27, 2012, 03:47:08 AM »
Yeah i'm silly :lol:

i told you i'll give you some of "that!" but not today  :catglare:

xD if u like Gakipon you should do it!  :cow:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #28 on: October 27, 2012, 03:54:32 AM »
ah kowaii :'( !! are u mad ? im sorry :'( :'( !

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #29 on: October 27, 2012, 04:07:53 AM »
 :lol: no!

maybe cause you ask me to upadate and you haven't update! xD

so please update the 2 fics that i commented that were yours!  :grin:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #30 on: October 27, 2012, 04:16:50 AM »
hmp ! don't want !!  you know .. i cant update because im sick :( !!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #31 on: October 27, 2012, 05:01:12 AM »
then if u don't update i wont give the KameShige part!  :lol:


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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #32 on: October 27, 2012, 05:04:24 AM »
eeeh ?!!! blackmail !!! hmp ! okay ! challenge accepted!

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #33 on: October 27, 2012, 05:18:22 AM »
then if u don't update i wont give the KameShige part!  :lol:
eeeh ?!!! blackmail !!! hmp ! okay ! challenge accepted!
:lol: :lol: you two are funny...
like that, cmze... please give me more aigaki ruburabu... XD to make up the loss i have on devil's kiss :P

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #34 on: October 27, 2012, 06:53:18 AM »
maikeatoot made me do it!  XD

and yellow should start writting fanfics too!  :shakeit:

so i could request those parts to u too!  :lol:



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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #35 on: October 27, 2012, 06:59:02 AM »
cmze i really cAnt update !! please gve me kameshige first :) i thnk after 2 weeks before i update :))) so please be kind with us !

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #36 on: October 27, 2012, 07:02:33 AM »
maikeatoot made me do it!  XD

and yellow should start writting fanfics too!  :shakeit:

so i could request those parts to u too!  :lol:



but i am not a good writer... :lol:
those parts... you don't need request i also will give you if i would to ever write and have to :lol:

maybe you appease me with more aigaki raburabu first XD

anyways, see my mood... as you know i also need that time to draft the plots and setting out XD
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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #37 on: October 27, 2012, 07:17:35 AM »
how about let's write a story ? with me,yellow and cmze are the writers ! lol

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #38 on: October 27, 2012, 07:19:57 AM »
how about let's write a story ? with me,yellow and cmze are the writers ! lol
:lol: please count me out, i really not a good writer... because i am quite wishy-washy towards many things... and often, my idea runs...
why not you two  :lol:

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Re: ~One sided love~ AiGaki CH.4
« Reply #39 on: October 27, 2012, 07:29:01 AM »
wishy-washy ? hahaha you never fail to make me laugh ! :D well that was just an idea.

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