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Offline DC2805

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Hi, peeps! I am back with a longer fanfic.  :heart:

Had "disappeared" from this forum for a while in Oct as I was busy going to and fro hospital most of the times, and that's why I had used the "hospital" as for the 1st scene here! haha!  ;)

Unlike my other previous lovey/mushy FFs, this one is going to be "darker" and more "complicated" - a bit more twisted characters, conflicts and dark side of our protagonists...but then, these will make the stories spicier, right?  :lol:

As for the pairing, apart from my fav Wmatsui who will only be playing cameo roles, it will be featuring a new pair as well. Please read on to find out more!

 :monster: Please enjoy the short prologue!



My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!


Prologue

Tears trickled down the cheeks of the young man as he hugged the near-lifeless body of his beloved Big Sister close to his body.

"Onee-chan…please hang on!!!" The young man's voice was trembling as he shook the body of the badly injured girl in his embrace.

"Mayu…finally, you are calling me Onee-chan again…" The Big Sister, Watanabe Miyuki, whispered in a weak voice.

She was smiling.

Watanabe Mayu could feel his heart, which was once cold and hard, shattered into pieces upon hearing the voice of his Onee-chan. Sirens of ambulance could be heard coming from afar. The medics had arrived and took swift action immediately to transport the poor girl to the hospital.

In a daze, Mayu could feel somebody glaring hard at him. As he turned around, he was shocked to realize that the boyfriend of his Onee-chan was inside the ambulance too. When their eyes met, Mayu felt a strong sense of guilt engulfing him as the sharp gaze of Yamamoto Sayaka pierce through his body, his big eyes full of angst and sorrows.

"You!!!" Sayaka gritted his teeth and clenched his fist tightly, trying his best not to bash up that "piece of trash" that had caused his girlfriend to be badly injured.

Mayu turned his head away instantly from Sayaka, attempting to avoid the death glare and shifted his eyes on the pale face of his Onee-chan, fitted with tubes on the stretcher, her eyes tightly closed and her bangs hanging in a mess. Fear suddenly came into Mayu's mind as he was struck by the cruel reality that he might not be able to see the beautiful pair of eyes of Miyuki again.

"Onee-chan..."


---Arriving at the hospital---

Miyuki was rushed into the operating threatre and the 2 young men were left waiting outside the threatre in silence.

Sayaka was looking out from the window, trying to calm himself down by staring blankly at the tall trees surrounding the hospital. Mayu was sitting at the sofa at the waiting lounge, burying his face in his hands.

"Mayu! What happened?" Mayu's head shot up immediately when he heard the panic voice of his girlfriend.

A panting Kashiwagi Yuki stopped running as she reached the entrance of the A&E unit and called out to her boyfriend.

"Yuki!" Mayu cried as he rushed towards Yuki, giving the raven hair beauty a tight hug. His tears started to pour once again.

Yuki gave Sayaka a nod and hold the trembling Mayu tight in her embrace.

"Mayu-kun, calm down…let's take a seat". Yuki pulled Mayu down to the sofa without breaking the hug.

Sobbing quietly, Mayu buried his face deep into Yuki's soft chest. Usually, the young man would not feel comfortable when his girlfriend got too close to him, but not this time as the comforting smell and warm touch of his girlfriend was what he needed most at this moment, while his poor fragile heart was clenching in pain from witnessing the critical state of his Onee-chan.

Yuki gently stroke the soft hair of Mayu and let the guy cried out as much as he wanted.

Raindrops started to pour onto the roof and splashed on the windows of the hospital.

The atmosphere was cold, dark and heavy. The 3 of them just waited in silence as occasionally the nurses and doctors on duties were seen passing by in a hurry. You could even hear the ticking of the big, old wall clock and the humming sounds of some medic devices at certain times.

"Rain…it reminds me of that fateful day when my relationship with Onee-chan went sour..." Mayu thought bitterly as he recalled that incident that had destroyed the trust, bonding and love that he once had with Miyuki.


TBC: Chapter 1 The Watanabes
« Last Edit: March 31, 2014, 01:51:45 PM by DC2805 »
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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2013, 10:52:22 AM »
Below are the preview of the upcoming Chapters (under construction)...stay tuned!  ;)

Chapter 1: The Watanabes

Part 1: The Present
Part 2: The Past

Chapter 2: The Airhead who "never say die"

Chapter 3: Boys Love???

Chapter 4: The Mysterious Prodigy

Part 1: Crossing the path
Part 2: The Past of the Playboy
Part 3: Battle of the Wmatsui

Chapter 5: Secrets of Yamamoto

Chapter 6: You Have Stolen My Heart (without me knowing it)

Chapter 7: Tragedy Strikes

Chapter 8: Forgive and Forget

Chapter 9: Love Will Find A Way

Part 1: Mayuki
Part 2: SayaMilky
Part 3: Wmatsui

(Final) Chapter 10: My Little Brother Will Always Be This Cute!
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[Short OS] "Puppy" Love (Pairings: JR + YH)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36408.0

My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Derailed - OS featuring Aya x Nao
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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2013, 11:10:37 AM »
very interesting... prologue...

Can't wait to know about the reason as to why the Watanabe siblings were suddenly not closed anymore

And to why was Miyuki injured?

What Mayu's part in this incident?

I like the outlines of the story...

The one that I'm curious about was 'Chapter 5: Secrets of Yamamoto'

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the prologue

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2013, 11:39:02 AM »
You back with interesting fic!wow can't wait till end

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2013, 12:19:42 PM »
cisda83: The Wwatanabe used to be very close until that "unfortunate" incident happens... it will be revealed very soon in Chapter 1 Part 2  8) As for the secrets of Yamamoto Sayaka, it is meant to be a surprise for readers, hope it is a pleasant one though haha. Thanks for liking the outlines!

geki geki: Thanks for the support  :)
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My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2013, 09:01:25 PM »
really interesting want to know  what happen with his onnechan  :cry:

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2014, 10:40:51 AM »
Please update  :cry:

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #7 on: January 16, 2014, 02:06:53 PM »
Mayu stay strong... I winder what make their relationship sour

Please updatesoon

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #8 on: January 17, 2014, 10:44:46 AM »
mayuki  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
mayuyu and rena is <3


mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #9 on: January 19, 2014, 12:13:24 PM »
MAYUKI !! Look foward for this fic  :twothumbs
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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #10 on: March 28, 2014, 08:45:33 AM »
This prolog is so interesting !!!!!  XD

Please update soon  :thumbsup

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #11 on: March 28, 2014, 10:20:42 AM »
Been a while...

Hope you are updating it soon...

Can't wait to see your 1st chapter until the end

Thank you

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #12 on: March 28, 2014, 11:46:12 AM »
Poor Mayu~ Miyuki was hoping that he would call her 'oneechan' again but not in this type of situation. Yukirin will comfort you Mayu :D Please don't cry~

Wonder what's going to happen to wWatanabe now :( After MaYuki, KojiYuu and the Oshiri Sisters, their one of my favorite pairs~





Good luck!  :w00t: :shocked



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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #13 on: March 28, 2014, 10:53:51 PM »
YAH~ This is awesome! Mayu don't be sad! :err:  Yukirin will be there for you!  :bigdeal:
Jee~ What will happen! :dunno:
Please Update soon! :stuffed: :on gay: :on GJ:

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Re: My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute! - Prologue (4/11/2013)
« Reply #14 on: March 31, 2014, 04:34:23 AM »
 :panic: Apologies to all for the lateness in updating this FF. Had done some draft but wasn't satisfied enough to post it yet. Well, I guess I will try my best to pose it during my coming vacation, away from work and stress.  8)2

Plotting to pose an OS today. Don't know why I am more inspired when I am sick. Since today I'll be on medical leave, will squeeze out this OS that has been casted in my mind into words before I go take my medication and fight the bad virus!  :lol:
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http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36408.0

My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Derailed - OS featuring Aya x Nao
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Author-san please update this story..... :bow: :bow:

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it's been two years  :(

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Author-san...please update :cry: :cry:
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