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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 9 (08/02/2017)
« Reply #80 on: March 04, 2017, 02:44:00 PM »
Yep that's what i mean, from reading the prologue or maybe the first chap, well i forgot, and don't know why usually if a story with "time" as the genre, there's somehow something bad or sad happening.

Probably because in relationship "time" is the worst enemy

Somehow reading this comment, then I can't help to think something bad really is going to happen.
And then the chapter's contains are about Rena's losing her dream of making the time machine and Jurina reading Natsuki a bedtime story halfway and promise to continue next time. It makes me think something bad is going to happen to Jurina that makes her can't continue tha story and that something will make Rena continue the time machine project  to reverse it.

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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 9 (08/02/2017)
« Reply #81 on: March 04, 2017, 07:05:48 PM »
Yep that's what i mean, from reading the prologue or maybe the first chap, well i forgot, and don't know why usually if a story with "time" as the genre, there's somehow something bad or sad happening.

Probably because in relationship "time" is the worst enemy

Somehow reading this comment, then I can't help to think something bad really is going to happen.
And then the chapter's contains are about Rena's losing her dream of making the time machine and Jurina reading Natsuki a bedtime story halfway and promise to continue next time. It makes me think something bad is going to happen to Jurina that makes her can't continue tha story and that something will make Rena continue the time machine project  to reverse it.



Sorry for making you think it as well
well right from before don't know why i feel Jurina is the one that going to get hurt
and as your theory say, i do agree with it

Now i'm just preparing my heart for it.... :banghead: :bow:

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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 10 (04/03/2017)
« Reply #82 on: March 07, 2017, 06:00:36 AM »
Natsuki is such a cutie  XD
I want to see her interaction with furuyanagi's daughter more :3

For some reason i don't feel really worried about this fic after 'kids' appeared. It makes the story less tense, yet add adorable point haha

Why rena is so easy to let go that dream??
So after married her priority has changed as well?
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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 10 (04/03/2017)
« Reply #83 on: March 08, 2017, 12:03:42 AM »
Thank you very much for the new chapter.
It's a shame that Rena has given up on her dream. But I understand herdecision.

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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 10 (04/03/2017)
« Reply #84 on: March 11, 2017, 03:21:41 AM »
I'm starting lo love this Natsukid!  :cry:
Why does she have to be this cute it's not fair!  XD XD XD XD

In this chapter I can feel that Rena is dominating the family like the figure of a father while Jurina is a very submissive wife :hehehe:
I'm still have no idea about the continuity of their time machine project though. I don't know why but I think Jurina couldn't just let Rena canceled the project easily.
Is Jurina been plotting something??  :dunno:  I'll leave the answer to author-san xD
Please update soon author-san!
Thank you!

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Re: Back in Time [WMatsui] - Chapter 10 (04/03/2017)
« Reply #85 on: March 11, 2017, 05:06:54 PM »
“[...] What good reasons would I have to go back in time, when I already possess everything I desire in the present?”

I think I can understand Rena's reason that she's not interested to build the time machine anymore. There should be something really HUGE to change her mind about that.

“No!” Natsuki immediately protested vehemently. “Mama hasn’t finished the story! I want to know what happens to the prince and the princess!”

Natsuki’s disappointment was manifest [....]

The temptation to sneak out of bed and read the rest of the story was very strong. However, she soon gave up [...]

I FEEL YOU, NATSUKI-CHAN! I also want to know what happens next!  :frustrated:

Anyway, author-san, I thought in this chapter you would write about the dinner between both families (Furuyanagi and WMAtsui).
I wonder how Shizuru and Natsui would interact after the "embarrassing" moment. :hee:

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