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All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #20 on: March 24, 2007, 04:46:15 AM »
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Courtesy, from da 'Bon and Non'.
That's just perfect! :ROTFLMAO:

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #21 on: April 10, 2007, 01:20:16 PM »
Next up, it came slightly unplanned, frankly. Maybe a little prematurely too. But I guess it had to be done.

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Side Story 5: Smile

I am always smiling. Everyone says that of me, many more have complimented me on it. Such a beautiful smile, they said. It almost puts the sun to shame.

Your eyes were red-rimmed when you came to me. I smiled for you, asking what was wrong, even as my heart twisted at your distress. Why are you crying inside? Why do you hide your tears even in front of me? It hurts to see you so.

But I keep smiling, holding my arms out for you, knowing that you needed me simply to be there like always. Your embrace was rough, desperate, and needy. I keep forgetting how much taller than me you are. Your childlike face makes me forget all that.

Your grip is firm, strong, almost painful. If it were someone else, I would be frightened. But it is just you. I have nothing to fear. You would never hurt me, not intentionally. I trust you.

I smile again, chuckling a little and scolding you for being like a big baby. Like I always do. Like I always would. But then you look up, and it makes me stop in my tracks. Your eyes are different. It feels different. Something feels wrong.

My heart leaps within my chest. Different. Uncertainty, excitement, and a kind of wariness filled up within me, but I kept my smiling face. I didn't want to betray my emotions in front of you. In front of anyone. But especially not in front of you. I couldn't expose myself that way, not for you. You didn't need to see my vulnerability, not when you are so vulnerable yourself.

I couldn't be selfish and worry you as well. I am supposed to be the older, the more responsible, the strong one for your sake. You didn't need to see the small, weak, uncertain me. You wanted, needed, the steadiness of my companionship. That much I could I give you. No matter how much it broke me up inside, I will keep smiling for you.

You surprised me, you really did. I never thought you would reach for me this way. I never thought you would do that, because I knew you had your eyes elsewhere. I was just your older sister, in a way. I was ready to accept it that way. Better some closeness than none, right?

Your lips were softer than I imagined, but you tasted of tears. I thought that it would be sweeter, but all I discovered was the sharp tang of pain and bitterness. You were so hurt inside, even your kisses reflected that. I wanted to be closer, stroke that injury away, ease that pain I felt resonating within you. I wanted to do something for you.

You were so desperate, so needy. But even then you still hesitated before you touched me, your eyes silently pleading for permission. For forgiveness. I couldn't resist you. I could never turn you away. Not now, not ever.

You were shaking inside from all your repressed emotions, your movements jerky and almost forceful. Yet your hands on me were gentle to the last. Even in your frenzy you never deigned to hurt me. At least, never intentionally.

It was over so very quickly. I lay on my back gasping, still reeling from the experience. You were crouched over me, panting hard, your hair falling a wavy curtain down on either side of your face, leaving it in shadow. Even as the heat of the moment started to fade, I could see the horror starting to form in your eyes as they raked over the marks you left on my body. Horror at what you had done to me.

I reached up with one trembling hand to touch your face, but you pull away as if shocked. I saw the fear in your eyes, and the guilt as you refused to meet my gaze. You made to get up, wanting to leave, run away from me, from what you had done to me.

But I couldn't let you go. I embraced you from behind, heedless of my state of undress. I didn't want you to blame yourself. It wasn't your fault. I didn't stop you, after all. Whatever you took, I gave it freely to you. You had to understand that. That I didn't blame you for anything. That it wasn't your fault.

You begin to weep bitterly, for yourself, for what you had done to me. Your helplessness moved me to take you back into my arms, and you sobbed into my bare chest like a lost child. You were so afraid, so very afraid. Afraid that I would hate you and abandon you, after what you had done. Silly one, I could never do that. I cared too much for you to hate you. I could never hate you, no matter what you did. Don't you understand?

"Why?" You asked, the confusion evident in your voice. "Why don't you hate me? I hurt you..."

I shushed you then, pressing a finger against your lips. I didn't want to explain to her. I couldn't. Or I didn't dare to. So I cut off all further conversation by sealing my lips against yours. You were surprised at first, but you responded, almost shyly at first, before growing in heat and passion as the kiss intensified.

We didn't talk anymore that night.

You had finally fallen asleep, your tear-stained face calm in repose. I said nothing, just watched you wordlessly. Watched your peaceful, innocent expression, clinging to me like a child. You were still so young. It almost felt like I was taking advantage of you, when the reverse was true. It still hurt, you know, knowing that tonight was probably just an aberration. I knew that you were just confused and lonely, and desperate for comfort. But I had let it happen anyway. Maybe I really was taking advantage of you after all.

Brushing your hair away from your face, I pondered the question you posed to me. Why did I not hate you? The answer was so simple that I was surprised that you didn't think of it yourself. But that was you I guess. You could be so remarkably dense at times, it was exasperating. But despite that, I still loved you. Which was why I could never hate you, no matter what you did.

And I could never tell you. Not now. You're not ready to know. I didn't want to take advantage of you more than I already have. When you're ready, I promised myself. When you're ready to love again, I'll tell you.

"Sleep well Gocchin." I whispered, pressing a soft kiss to your forehead. You stir lightly and pull me closer, trapping me against you. Your throat rumbles softly as you mumble sleepily, one eye cracking halfway open.

"G'night Nacchi..."

I smile again, but you didn't see it, your eyes fluttering shut again. Nor did you see the tears glistening behind my smile, unshed and hidden away. You never could see them anyway, even when fully awake.

Because I loved you too much to hurt you, and it's killing me inside instead. Knowing that you didn't love me the way I loved you.

But for you, I'll endure. For you, I'll smile even if each one twists another knife inside my heart. Because you needed me that way, and I loved you too much to disappoint you.

I will always be here for you Gocchin. Even if you never realise it, I'll be there.

Because I love you.

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I blame listening to Amasugita Kajitsu while typing this. >_>

It's a bit premature to post this, but oh well. Little insight into how this pairing works. And the angst behind it. >_> Gah. I feel bad. =X
« Last Edit: April 10, 2007, 06:34:53 PM by Estrea »

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #22 on: April 10, 2007, 03:18:22 PM »
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I am always smiling.

just with that 4 words I knew that she was Nacchi. And, of course, if it was Nacchi, the other girl had to be Gocchin XD But por Nacchi... Maki's probably in love with Aya and that's why both are so sad. Gocchin because Aya would never fall for her and Nacchi 'cause she thinks that Maki would never forget Aya XDD *crazy thoughts, you know? XDD*

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #23 on: April 10, 2007, 03:45:44 PM »
TELL HER NACCHI! TELL HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!!!   :pleeease:

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #24 on: April 10, 2007, 07:09:22 PM »
Waaaaaaaaaaaaa, I feel loved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Umh, well, ... yeah ^^

Anyway, Nacchi/Gocchin FTWMFW!!!! This was so sweet. A little sad, but I foresee a brighter future for these two :heart:

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #25 on: April 10, 2007, 07:24:57 PM »
Aww! ;_;

I like how poetic this chapter feels. The words flowed together really well <3!!! It must be the first person view which made the chapter have a smooth flow xD!

Oh Maki and Nacchi... xD

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #26 on: April 11, 2007, 01:28:46 AM »
*sigh* That was beautiful. Definitely a master piece. I LOVE Nacchi/Gocchin and that was so well written. I just had to compliment you on it. Now, back to lurking!!

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #27 on: April 11, 2007, 01:32:05 AM »
Oh, man . . . That was really beautiful. We knew that they had a special night together, but we didn't know if it was fun or what. That's pretty deep.

Nacchi, you should tell Maki! >.<

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #28 on: April 11, 2007, 02:00:13 AM »
Why....why is Gotou so broken? Why is she like that... don't tell me she had unrequited feelings for Aya!

I tried to pin point my favorite part...but I couldnt find it. It was probably the post-love scene part.
I dunno, like Yuu said, this chapter did give me a poetic vibe... and I likey.

Hmmm new obsessing pairing for me? I think so :D

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #29 on: April 11, 2007, 02:15:39 AM »
I've been so depressed this weekend and to come back and read my feelings down here. It's uncomfortable but wonderfully written.

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #30 on: April 11, 2007, 10:16:07 AM »
that was so beautiful
poor Nacchi *sobs*

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #31 on: April 11, 2007, 11:11:00 AM »
Damn right! Lol!
I was sitting at my desk thinking "there isnt enough NachiGoto love...".

I came up with nothing but it seems you did.

Wow, its so sweet...XD
You could kinda tell right from the start it was them...ahhhhh
But I wonder whats the story behind the story?....

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files
« Reply #32 on: April 18, 2007, 05:05:30 PM »
Haha thanks everyone for the comments. Yeah Nacchi and Maki started off in a very screwed up way. Whether that will fix itself in the future....well, who knows? XD

Next side story coming up! coachie wanted to know what happened with Koharu in Chapter 18, so here it is. XD

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Side Story 6: When Enough Is Enough


She had just had about enough of this. As if it wasn't already bad enough to have his wolf's eyes mentally undressing her (oh how she cursed her early physical maturity!) while she danced with her partner, now he was getting a little too close for comfort, on the pretext of "guiding" her in the proper steps of the waltz. Waltz her ass, he was watching her butt move more than the way her feet were moving to the beat. Perverted old man.

Now her partner was called to stand aside so that the instructor himself, in all his full perverted glory, could personally lead her in the complex steps of the new dance that he himself had created. New dance her foot. All he probably wanted to do was the horizontal mambo with her. She couldn't stand him. He was almost 3 times her age! Old enough to be her father. Her grandfather even, if he had knocked someone up early enough!

There were limits to her patience. Limits to her ability to endure his lecherous gazes and less-than-innocent touches when they were dancing, either with him as a partner or him just standing on the sidelines. Any and all time spent within 10 feet of him, within seeing distance of him, was an arduous and repulsive task. The several hours of being in the same room with him was sheer torture. The man was a pedophile. How he ever got away with all that for so long was beyond her. Maybe all his previous victims were pushovers. Well, she certainly wasn't going to roll over for someone like him.

Gritting her teeth, and it didn't help that it was that time of the month, she endured...for all of 30 seconds.

There was no need, she knew, absolutely NO NEED, for his hand to start stroking her bottom. At first, she tried to shift away from that wandering hand, but the only option away from it was to move even closer to the old man's body, and she had no intention whatsoever of doing that. She would sooner drown herself than do that.

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Maasa, one of her usual dance partners during these lessons, give her an encouraging look that told her to endure it for just a while longer. Just a bit longer, and then she could tear herself away from this disgusting proximity to her perverted dance instructor, and return to more amiable company with a far more dignified Maasa. The older girl might only be a servant, but she had way more honor than this so-called gentleman who was currently discreetly touching her butt.

She could do this. She had done it many times before. She could just stand his loathed presence for a couple minutes more...until the man decided to give up on subtlety and just pinch her bottom while leering at her.

That was IT. Absolutely IT. She had enough. More than enough. She wasn't going to put up with this sorry excuse of a pedophilic lecher anymore.

Maasa winced reflexively when Koharu unceremoniously brought her knee up with great force to come in contact with a sensitive part of the male anatomy, doubling the man over with a pained howl. The tall girl then resisted the urge to cheer out loud (since she despised the man as well) when Koharu, clearly not satisfied with simply kneeing her long-time tormentor in the balls, drew back her fist, soundly nailing the middle-aged dance instructor in the face with a punch worthy of Maasa herself.

And that was something, coming from someone who specialised in close combat herself. Clearly, Koharu had been paying attention to the self defense lessons Maasa had given her on a whim during lazy afternoons cooped up indoors. The poor man had one hand covering his lower half and the other hand clutching at his bruised face, writhing painfully on the floor. Koharu stepped back, an uncharacteristically vicious look on her usually cheerful face, and kicked the man once more for good measure. Maasa hid a chuckle at that.

When Koharu walked back to face her, Maasa put on her most professionally detached expression, but the younger girl only grinned impishly.

"Well, now that he's out, I guess lesson's over." Koharu said off-handedly. "Thanks for being here Maasa." The taller girl shrugged it off, and watched as Koharu flounced off with a distinct bounce in her step. Casting one last glance at the pitiful creature curled up on the carpet in the middle of the room, Maasa briefly pondered if she should call a doctor to help. The man groaned. She decided to leave him to his own fate.

He deserved it anyway.

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XD XD XD

And that's what happened. XD Yay for Koharu, and yay for Maasa. XD

Edit: And yeah, only Miki is allowed to grope people without fear. XD Anyone else just deserves what Koharu did to that man. XD
« Last Edit: April 18, 2007, 05:40:30 PM by Estrea »

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #33 on: April 18, 2007, 05:35:57 PM »
Ah, pulling Miki-esque moves on Koharu? Pfft! Only Miki can get away with that... :D

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #34 on: April 18, 2007, 09:50:12 PM »
whooooooooopies, this was fun!!! Go Koha, yay!  ;D

now that she's tasted some ass (ball)kicking blood, hope she goes all out in the main story as well

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #35 on: April 18, 2007, 10:38:15 PM »
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Well, she certainly wasn't going to roll over for someone like him.
I love the way that in this story, this line can both be taen in a figuative and literal sense.


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Maasa winced reflexively when Koharu unceremoniously brought her knee up with great force to come in contact with a sensitive part of the male anatomy, doubling the man over with a pained howl. The tall girl then resisted the urge to cheer out loud (since she despised the man as well) when Koharu, clearly not satisfied with simply kneeing her long-time tormentor in the balls, drew back her fist, soundly nailing the middle-aged dance instructor in the face with a punch worthy of Maasa herself.
WOOT! YOU GO GIRL!!!  :cool1:


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Edit: And yeah, only Miki is allowed to grope people without fear. XD Anyone else just deserves what Koharu did to that man. XD
Damn right!  :kekeke:

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #36 on: April 19, 2007, 06:49:18 AM »
Koharu is official coolness!

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #37 on: April 19, 2007, 10:57:03 AM »
Story #5 Nice, I'm gonna assume along with everyone else that Goto is pining for Aya. If that is the case, wasn't it implied somewhere in the main story that Aya and Goto got it on one night?

Story #6 LOL

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #38 on: April 19, 2007, 11:27:38 AM »
Hahah HA!

Yeah I was wondering as well......well, its nice to know! hahahahha

Poor teacher...(sorry, I had a lengthy discussion today with my friend about being hit in the koala berries...) you still have to feel for the man...despite is heavy perversion..

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Re: All Aboard!: The Hidden Files [#6: When Enough Is Enough]
« Reply #39 on: April 21, 2007, 08:39:14 AM »
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I didn't think its Nacchi O_O. She deserves some more loving from Gocchin >_<~

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Koha knows to kick some ass even if she's the daughter of a renowned family! Miracle indeed :D! Too bad she still had to taste some groping XD I bet Miki can grope better than that leecherous pedo guy XD.


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