Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 41063 times)

Blizzard · « **Reply #20 on:** January 19, 2007, 04:00:09 AM »

Poor Yossi, she's really in for it now! I wonder what Miki all has planned and whose help she has enlisted. Does Miki know about Yossi and Rika? If she had Rika's help, the bet would be hers, me thinks!

Please keep up the good work! I look forward to the next chapter! :pen_clap:

JFC · « **Reply #21 on:** January 19, 2007, 05:05:08 AM »

Quote from: katatsumuri;286391

Now Miki's playing mind games..

Miki's mind games are gonna be awesome! :ONwahaha:

jenmoshka · « **Reply #22 on:** January 19, 2007, 05:27:25 AM »

Yuuyami · « **Reply #23 on:** January 19, 2007, 05:38:47 AM »

-takes over wedge space again, hoping no one else joins in-

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jenmoshka · « **Reply #24 on:** January 19, 2007, 05:50:40 AM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #25 on:** January 19, 2007, 05:55:42 AM »

JFC · « **Reply #26 on:** January 19, 2007, 07:34:29 AM »

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But why did you bring Nakazawa back from her vacation?! You know full well that she’s all-hands! More than you are even…if that’s humanly possible.” She added the last part under her breath.

“Ah, actually I had nothing to do with that

Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuure.

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“Look at me Yossui…” Yossui met Miki’s concerned eyes, “all fun and bet’s aside, I’m here if you need to talk about it, let it all out if you want.”

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's sweet.

coachie · « **Reply #27 on:** January 19, 2007, 08:53:55 AM »

Lol @ Yuko throwing a welcome back party for herself... in Kei-chan's room

And a big Y.A.Y. for Yuko

Kei lovin'!!!

Mikan · « **Reply #28 on:** January 19, 2007, 12:21:33 PM »

Wow...Yuko/Kei loving. We dont really have enough of that around here

Im really getting hooked on this. I had to jump on it straight as I came home. I totally couldnt believe you updated quickly.

Ok, now the things that made me go lol -

....I’m throwing myself a little welcome-back party tomorrow night in Kei’s room, she doesn’t know yet...

Somewhere above she heard a bang, which made her jump and slosh a bit of water down her chin...

Yeh that happens to me a lot. Im a terrible drinker. Say anything remotely funny and it comes out my nose.

Can you write up a formal set of the rules. Im pretty sure I get the outlines of the bet but I would like something I can go over so Im definately sure on how this game is played. Much appreciated ^^

_Hitomi_ · « **Reply #29 on:** January 19, 2007, 12:42:24 PM »

Hello, another lurker here!

I'm enjoying this fic a lot. A fic with Yossi is interesting for me

And Yuko is soooooo awsome!!!

jenmoshka · « **Reply #30 on:** January 19, 2007, 04:19:01 PM »

Mikan · « **Reply #31 on:** January 19, 2007, 04:29:34 PM »

Man, you lurk and post more than I do...

Do you have MSN? We could be lurking buddies ^^

jenmoshka · « **Reply #32 on:** January 19, 2007, 04:30:51 PM »

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jenmoshka · « **Reply #34 on:** January 19, 2007, 07:36:00 PM »

Yuuyami · « **Reply #35 on:** January 19, 2007, 08:47:10 PM »

-giggles at Takagaki-

My gahh I love how you portray Miki <3 Caring on the inside and spikey (that are shiny, representing her beauty? xD) on the outside xD

-wonders how the Yocharmikitty plot will come out-

Blizzard · « **Reply #36 on:** January 19, 2007, 09:16:03 PM »

Wow! Two new chapters already! Yes! :tfr9a7wg:

I loved the little bit in the cafeteria with Yossui and Miki. That was so sweet! Instant win! :ONluvluv2:

On an off note: I'm jealous, I want some snow dammit! There hasn't been enough snow to go snowmobiling for two years now! :ONfrustrated: I think I need to move.

katatsumuri · « **Reply #37 on:** January 19, 2007, 10:44:13 PM »

First the mind games,

then the little flirting and seducing..

Yossi's in deep shit!

Mikan · « **Reply #38 on:** January 20, 2007, 07:32:02 AM »

I'll try and satisfy your appetite for comments. Sometimes its better than flowers.

Ok I'll start of with how I feel about this story upon reading it the first time.

The title was catchy. Games. Play. Hmm, good words that'll definately insure some fun. The first chapter was a cool one. It outlined the direction of the story and the characters involved. It ran over their personalities and any other small details.

Its not something I feel a strong obsession over and I think thats a good thing because true obsessions are things that build up without you knowing. I've clicked on this thread a few times and read over your comments and the comments of others trying to get a feel for this story and the crowd it pulls. I've also done some rough work on who you are as a writer and what you like but because you're a lurker its a little harder to find stuff about you. One question: You like girls?

You writing shows you are educated and have a knack for creative things like this. There is no spelling errors or grammar errors that catch my attention. You space things well. The dialouge of the characters is believable.

Btw that "Yoshizawa you're drooling" comment made me laugh out loud ^^
I love the Miki/Yossui chemistry you have here. I also like the fact you have characters misinturpreting each others actions because that happens a lot in real like (because we dont know what others are thinking!) but in the fiction world a lot of writings skip over that common fact.

You update often. Do you know how awesome that is? Freaking awesome.

Catch you later
Stay warm

haidokun · « **Reply #39 on:** January 20, 2007, 08:12:39 AM »

yay! yomiki.... :ONwriggly:

risa and takahashi behind that door.... ooooh :ONwahaha:

nice story. i can't wait for the next chapters.

honestly i hope yossui would lose and become miki's slave.:ONkekeke: