Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 41064 times)

stefy · « **Reply #40 on:** January 20, 2007, 03:30:10 PM »

wowz... 5 chapters in 2 days! awesome~

cool story line! Miki seems to begin to have some feelings for Yossi?? so whoever wins..... Its all good! :ONhee:
Looking forward to what Miki has up her sleves, and how Yossi would avoid em

jenmoshka · « **Reply #41 on:** January 20, 2007, 06:44:34 PM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #42 on:** January 20, 2007, 07:26:41 PM »

Yuuyami · « **Reply #43 on:** January 20, 2007, 08:18:41 PM »

Aww! Nice Miki :]

Yossie's embarassment was cute too, roffle xD

Wonder how Yossie's going to react when she sees the cellphone xD But somehow, I get the feeling that Rika will see to that first and BAM. Love triangle angst D:!

I look forward to your next chapter <3

-gives you a hardhat to protect from writer's block-

len.chan · « **Reply #44 on:** January 20, 2007, 08:35:55 PM »

Rika's thinking too muuuch~ and someone else's going to stole her giiirl~ XDXD
aah.. keep it up, I love what you're doing ^^

*Yuu-chan, I'll take one of that hardhats too if you don't mind

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JFC · « **Reply #45 on:** January 21, 2007, 12:52:36 AM »

Miki's little stunt with Yossi's cell phone is gonna cause some dramatics! I just know it!

What if Rika sees it?

Dun Dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!

Blizzard · « **Reply #46 on:** January 21, 2007, 02:23:12 AM »

Yossui is so in for it! 29 days to go, and she's already frustrated. That definately makes for a good read imo! And now Rika's having second thoughts. It'll be interesting to see how that plays into the bet. I doubt it'll be in Yossui's favor though.

Please keep up the great writing! :ONluvluv2:

PS. You're right about the nick. Unfortunately, the last couple years we just haven't gotten much snow. If only I had a fleet of trucks, I'd take all the snow you don't want!

Mikan · « **Reply #47 on:** January 21, 2007, 07:46:17 AM »

I god!! MIKI IS THE BEST!! i just love what she is doing

She is such a groovy character here.

Ah, I dont think Yossui is cracking quite yet. I think she's more worried about failing. Personally, I wouldnt last long

Wait,...so self servicing is ok? Cause if that was still in the 'ok' I would definately abuse it.

Thanks for your really really long reply. I appreciated it. I can understand your sensitivity in regards to your work and what you think should be published. I think everyone feels like this (god knows I do!) but the step to getting over it is rationalising. Whats so bad about it? Is it just lame and embarrassing? Well maybe to you but I bet some sappy romantist or lonely fool out there would appreciate it.

Oh and the sprinkler thing...wow..I didnt know those things happened. How awful. Yet...rather amusing. Was the water ice cold?

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #48 on:** January 21, 2007, 08:33:11 AM »

I made it a thing to never eat a whole meal or drink a lot around friends... because i tend to choke a lot, especially when something funny or amusing happens.

It was nice reading your story whil its 2:30 am. i havnt done this in so long

And yeah, your story gave me some slight inspiration

(and please, just sLaVe).

-Owaranai_sLaVe

MyDearYossi · « **Reply #49 on:** January 21, 2007, 07:13:21 PM »

Finally I was able to read more this...

And I have to say, the more I read this the more I love it:panda_love:

C60533 · « **Reply #50 on:** January 21, 2007, 07:29:30 PM »

Ah.....there are only a couple things that would make this perfect for me...but since they don't matter I would have to say this is one of the BEST I've read. You've got to keep this up.
Random: Ya know, if you want to get away from the snow just go around Florida, Georgia, or somewhere in SouthEastern U.S. Couple of days ago it was SPRING Literally,flowers blooming and all...but now it's cold, but no snow.

Gomaki · « **Reply #51 on:** January 21, 2007, 08:23:56 PM »

This is awesome!!!!!!
Haaahhhhh~
I wonder what's on Miki's mind ^^^^^^

freya86 · « **Reply #52 on:** January 21, 2007, 10:09:36 PM »

Wow, I'm gone one weekend and what do I miss? Three new chapters!!! I'm mightly impressed ... and happy

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Chapter Four
“Seriously…how much is Miki paying you to come back from your vacation so soon? I’ll double whatever it is…triple it even! Just name your price for the love of God, just don’t make my life hell right now please!!” Yossui pleaded.

*hehe* LOL at suspicious!Yossi ...

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Chapter Four
Besides, I for one, am willing to show-case my love for you every chance I get, and if it happens to help Yossui, what’s wrong with a bit of attention thrown at us?” Risa smiled warmly and leaned in for a gentle kiss.

Bless Risa for her logic ... ^^

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Chapter Five

Damn that Ishikawa… Miki thought to herself as her gaze shifted to the singers that had gotten up to leave. Being so careless with Yossui’s feelings…

Miki sounds just a TAD jealous, but really, just a TAD ^^

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Chapter Five

Makoto walked by Yossui as cheerful as ever giving an “Ohayou!” as she was passing. However, she paused a moment as the noises coming from Risa’s room hit her ears and with a sigh said, “I miss KonKon, we used to have so much fun together…” and continued merrily on her way.

Mako/Konkon reference FTW!!!!!

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Chapter Five

Wow… Yossui thought to herself as she caught Miki’s reflection in the full wall mirror in front of them. That Fujimoto sure can stretch…and bend…and flex…and…

I bet Yossi wasn't the only one drooling over that image

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Chapter Six

“We looked so happy together…why did you have to ruin what we had…why did I ruin it?” She sighed and shut the phone leaning back against the cold wall. Because I was scared? What kind of excuse is that…Because I was worried about the attention we would get? How could I be so petty...

Poor Rika ... I sort of feel bad for her ...

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Chapter Six
Flipping open the phone, she struck a cute pose and hit the camera button. Giggling to herself, she went about setting it as the background display, skillfully tapped a few more buttons and placed it back on the table before sauntering out the door. “Ah, this should be fun.” Miki smiled and shut the door behind her.

*rofl* Evil Miki, evil evil Miki!!!

To sum it all up, loved it

Oh, and a big yay yay for all the Yuko/Kei parts *fangirls*

jenmoshka · « **Reply #53 on:** January 22, 2007, 06:05:00 AM »

Yuuyami · « **Reply #54 on:** January 22, 2007, 06:14:08 AM »

-wedges again- And of course you can decorate the hardhat!

<3

jenmoshka · « **Reply #55 on:** January 22, 2007, 06:24:45 AM »

Blizzard · « **Reply #56 on:** January 22, 2007, 06:56:05 AM »

I so like the drama. Well paced, with a little bit of humor interlaced. And the timely interruptions (by Tsuji and Erika/Yui in this case) keeps things from moving along too fast. I like it when writers take time to tell their stories. Most of the writers whose fics I've read here are really good at that, and you don't disappoint either. Keep up the great work! Hope that hardhat comes in handy. :MKgrin:

freya86 · « **Reply #57 on:** January 22, 2007, 07:44:26 AM »

*hehe* I was half expecting the bubbly characters to be Aibon and Nono, just because

I love Erika and Yui, but in Rika's stead I'd smacked them silly ^^ Hope Rika and Yossi get a second chance to talk!!!

I was already wondering why no one has yet commented on Mako/Konkon, I thought they were quite popular around here. Hmm, weird!

MyDearYossi · « **Reply #58 on:** January 22, 2007, 03:59:55 PM »

Wonder what happened between Yossi and RikaXD

And of course I still reading this:ONxD: I will sit here and wait the next chapter:ONwhistle:

Mikan · « **Reply #59 on:** January 22, 2007, 04:14:08 PM »

The chapters are long, Drama packed/angsty and funny. I thought I saw a hint of predictable plot line but it seems to have vanished meaning that I was wrong. Goodo.

Love a bit o' drama trauma. Rika/Yossui stuff is good. I started to feel a little of Yossui's pain. (Im rather empathetic?..or just pathetic? I dont know anymore!!) You have me hanging anxiously, waiting to find out more on 'their story'.

Miki sounds a lot like Miki. Thats cool. Your characters have stuck to their traits so far.

Waiting for number 8~

[Edit] Just out of curiousty...ever thought of perv writing...