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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #20 on: November 08, 2012, 05:10:19 PM »
This is fun to read  XD Ah... I am jealous for Maikeatoot... I wish I could meet my beloved Reina-san (or My No.1 H!P person, Airi-chan  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: )

Thanks for this fic  ;) :bow:
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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #21 on: November 08, 2012, 08:50:15 PM »
Maikea it's so lucky!  :D

this is so funny!  :rofl:

I reallly like this!!  :twisted:

please Maikae don't mess with my TakaGaki!!  :nervous

Yellow please don't let her do that!!  :oops:


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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #22 on: November 08, 2012, 11:08:19 PM »
hahaha my gosh .! Sayu introduced herself to me !! but she was so pretty i cant speak.. haha..and that introduction in front of the class,to be honest,that was the last thing i wanna do.hehe i mean im so shy to do that :)

 but anyway.. hahaha!when will i can meet my Aichan? Yay !!


 DON'T MESS UP WITH TAKAGAKI <3 !

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #23 on: November 09, 2012, 02:05:36 AM »
@kuro:
yup sure... because someone here hope that i don't mess thing around with our beloved TakaGaki  :nervous

@sakura_drop_:
sure, you want Reina or Airi huh... ok I will let you meet either of them soon but I have to think of the setting first :thumbsup
and one thing I have to be frank to you is that I'm not quite a fan towards the H!P kids so the possibility for you to meet Airi is quite low  :nervous but I will try my best to have the appearance of Airi.  :nervous :nervous :nervous

and how do you want me to address you in the story? Sakura?? if alternative, please give me suggestion  :thumbsup

@cmze:
no worries... i won't let  her mess around with our beloved TakaGaki... but she still have to meet her Aichan first  :pimp:

@maikea:
soon... very soon i hope :roll:

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thank god, it is still readable and understandable because when I write this chapter, I was totally quite drained...
and to be frank to you guys i also do not know what I have written even after posting it up...
and thank god, you guys still like it  :heart:

thanks for reading  :heart: :heart: :heart: i am quite motivated now  :lol:

if I am free tonight, I will do another chapter  :P stay tuned XD

and lastly,
DON'T MESS UP WITH TAKAGAKI  :rock: !!!  :peace: :peace: :peace:
« Last Edit: November 09, 2012, 02:17:16 AM by yellow »

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #24 on: November 09, 2012, 02:15:06 AM »
me want peace here ! please dont be mad at me i wont and NEVER MESS UP WITH TAKAGAKI !!!

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #25 on: November 09, 2012, 02:22:46 AM »
@maikea:
can you update for me today  :ptam-aww: because i won't make you a sinner for that... no worries... even if you would, i also will have someone else to accompany you to be the sinner for that. :cow:

so can you please give me an update of one of your fiction today, please :tama-yeeaah:

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #26 on: November 09, 2012, 02:40:13 AM »
i cant !! i cant update today !! im here at school .. i am sorry yellow.. :'(

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #27 on: November 09, 2012, 02:52:23 AM »
thanks to you, i'm from heaven fall back to the earth :thumbsup
ok i understand, can you at least give me an update this weekend, please? :ptam-aww:

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter3: The New Exchange student [8-Nov-2012]
« Reply #28 on: November 09, 2012, 02:54:21 AM »
oh sure ! hehe :) i just had to finish this ah .. damn clearance.

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Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #29 on: November 09, 2012, 08:08:07 AM »

because i can't get the content out of my mind so i update now  :yep: so that i can now with my mind at ease and be back on my revision mode  :thumbup
today is longer but i think it is still quite a short chapter for you guys :nervous

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Chapter4: Misunderstanding

After the GakiKame have reached their class. Risa, before the class started, send a message to her lover.

Aichan… I’m really sorry about last night.

I really didn’t mean what I mean.

Can you please forgive me?

Please~~  :gmon tears:
                                                                  -Risa


This is the 50th message in the row that she has sent to her lover this morning ever since their quarrel over some misunderstanding about Risa and Yui last night.

~Last night~
Risa and Yui are classmates while Yui is Ai’s younger sister. So Risa came to Ai’s house for dinner since her parents were out attending her younger sister’s performance at the musical in their school theater hall.

Moreover, Risa was also living nearby so other than TakaGaki being couple which something beyond their parents’ knowledge, they are also family friends. So, to their parents’ knowledge, TakaGaki are just very close friends. Yui also like Risa, which is something quite bothering Ai as Yui has once confessed that to her during their sisters’ talk one night.

So after dinner, both Yui and Risa got settled down in the study room to do their homework. Then Yui has some Maths problem sum that she is quite caught up with so she asked her class representative, Risa, who is quite good in her Maths. So, Risa sat nearer to Yui to guide her.

Maybe is because of the close distance between Yui and Risa leading to the just return home Ai to have misunderstanding of the situation. Upon seeing this, without going into the room to clarify, Ai immediately threw her tantrum and got upstairs and locked her room, skipping her dinner and excused herself with reason that she has eaten outside before returning home.

Then later in the night, when Risa was going home, Mama Takahashi called Ai down to escort Risa home. So, Ai came down and pretended nothing has happened and followed her mama’s instruction to walk the younger girl home while greeting Risa politely and chatting with the younger girl happily as they walked out of her house.

Then, when they are outside, Ai 180 degree mode change and totally ignored Risa so Risa requested Ai for a talk so they walked into the park and got settled down on a bench. Then Risa asked Ai for the reason of her unreasonable tantrum as the younger girl remembered she has not trigger the elder’s button.

So Ai was still in her foul mood, unreasonably impatiently shouted at her younger girl about her frustrations and  Risa feeling quite ridiculous, got mad and shouted backed to her angry girlfriend and stated that Yui is a better girlfriend than Ai to her as she is not that unreasonable as the older.

Upon hearing that, Ai stood up from her sitting position while Risa followed soon after and both of them headed towards the opposite direction of each other and headed home.

When Risa reached home that night after a shower just before she went to bed, while at the same time, she have calmed down, she started to recall the content of the fiery conversation of her with her lover at the park an hour ago. And realized she has said something forbidden to her lover that further trigger the eruption of her volcano.

So as usual, she gave the lover her good night text before turning in, but tonight was appended with content of apology for the quarrel.

However, that night, her message was ignored…

to be continued...

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i am really sorry for the bean but i have said she is really so "lucky" to have such an interesting lover...
and TakaGaki is still TakaGaki... i won't break them up and not intended to break them up   :mon prayer:

anyway, hope you guys like it.  :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: November 23, 2012, 11:49:26 AM by weird »

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #30 on: November 09, 2012, 08:41:21 AM »
awww Risa never got forgiven but time will heal wounds
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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #31 on: November 09, 2012, 08:49:05 AM »
this is my last update for the time being. I have to restrain myself for my exam. I will give an update straight after my exams are over.
:kneelbow: sorry for that, if you want more  :nervous

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@kuro:
she will get forgiven one of these days... as you know aichan is an unpredictable being. moreover, she really love her bean... so, when her anger is appeased... she will be back to the nice tempered person everyone has known her for.

btw, it is aichan's fault first for being unreasonable... but seem that gaki is always the one giving in first.

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #32 on: November 09, 2012, 08:50:34 AM »
Ah, Ai-chan so tsundere  XD And now she's mad... Gaki, make your move  :twisted:

Sakura is okay  ;)
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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #33 on: November 09, 2012, 08:53:11 AM »
ah ah so many drama in love .. no one could ever break our takagaki..not Eripon,not me and not that misunderstanding !

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #34 on: November 09, 2012, 08:56:20 AM »
@sakura:
yup... that is the reason why she just walked away when she saw Gaki in Chapter 1... she is really mad.

@maikea:
of course, no you, no eripon, no that misunderstanding and no Yuichan to break them up.

do you want Yuichan if I want to give her to you? :lol:
you know she is a sweet girl and looks like ai XD

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #35 on: November 09, 2012, 08:58:03 AM »
eh ? haha .. its up to you yellow .. you are the writer :))))

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #36 on: November 09, 2012, 08:59:00 AM »
no if you don't want her... i will find someone for her... you know, you can reject my offer  :nervous since you are involve... i have to ask you

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #37 on: November 09, 2012, 09:03:49 AM »
haha this is so funny !!! :D  okay !! let's see ..

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Re: Morning Elite High- Chapter4: Misunderstanding [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #38 on: November 09, 2012, 09:06:47 AM »
okay... we'll see about it  :grin:
but you have meet aichan first... that's top of my list for this fiction  :lol:

i will come back once my exams are over to address it... as for you and yuichan, i will see about it huh...

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Morning Elite High- Chapter5: Caught up in an Awkward situation [9-Nov-2012]
« Reply #39 on: November 09, 2012, 04:22:40 PM »

the idea just strikes my mind so I just update again :nervous

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Chapter5: Caught up in an Awkward situation

~After school time, outside Class Haru~

The school president waited outside for the new girl to show her around the school. The students saw the school president and greeted politely as they exited their class. Finally Maikea and Sayumi was walked out of the class chatting away.

When Sayumi saw Ai, she immediately switched to her fangirl mode.

"Aichan, are you waiting for Sayumin today?"

"Ehh... no, Sayumin, I am waiting for hmm..." pointing at Maikea.

"Maikea?!" Sayumi looked towards the direction where Ai was pointing, at Maikea while Maikea was smiling bashing away.

"Yup." Ai smiled shyly too.

"For?!" Sayumi was totally confused over how their beloved school president or her idol to know the new girl as she was newly transferred here.

"Wells.. to show her around the school"  :D

"Oh I see... Can I join?"  :?

"Yup sure, right Maikea?" Ai looked at Maikea.

"Certainly :D"  Maikea smiled brightly as she replied but deeply down feeling a bit uneven because her alone time with her crush was a bit interrupted by her new classmate.

Gaining the approval to join her idol to show her new classmate around the school, Sayumi immediately texted her lover.

"Eririn~
Sayumin has something on after class.
No need to come fetch me~
love you  :ptam-kiss:
                                                          -Sayu"

~Meanwhile~
Eririn felt the vibration of her phone on her pocket, she lazily sliced her hand into her pocket and reached for the vibrating device and move it under the table to read her text message with one of her eyes slightly opened from her napping position on the table.

After finished reading the short message from her lover, she quickly texted her confirmation and went back to sleep as there is still an hour before her class ended.

~back to AiSayuMaikea's side~
Before the trio explored the school, the trio decided to go the chinese restaurant in the school run by their chinese friends, JunLin  to have their lunch together. On their way to the restaurant, they met their classmate Tanaka Reina walking to the restaurant to meet her choir mates, Suzuki Airi and Sakura to have her lunch too.

So they walked together and chatting happily away along the way to the restaurant.

When Reina entered the restaurant, she immediately walked to the kitchen to find her girlfriend while the other girls was attended and served by one of the waitresses to a table.

Seeing this, Maikea feel a bit puzzled over Reina's abrupt action to enter people's kitchen without permission so she asked her other two companions. So, Sayumi patiently explained Reina's abrupt action to her classmate while Ai looking at the menu trying to make the orders for their lunch.

After finish making the order and waiting for their food, Ai looked blankly at her phone, seemed like waiting for someone to text her which in fact, she is just dazing away while Sayumi was chatting happily with Maikea and as and when, messaging and returning message on her phone.

~Meanwhile~
After receiving the message from Sayumi about Ai and her is with a new girl, Risa totally lost her concentration in class and keep texting with Sayumi about their whereabouts so that she can bring the turtle along straight after class to locate them.

When the class was finally over, the sleeping turtle woke up from her 2nd round short nap in her natural mode and before she can stood up to give herself a good stretch, she was dragged by the VP and at the same time, the class rep out of the class, down the corridor, with her bag hanging around her neck, to the Chinese restaurant while Yui followed close behind to ask Risa for lunch.

~At the Chinese restaurant~
So the trio headed to the Chinese restaurant towards AiGakiMaikea were and got seated down with the turtle and the bean stationed themselves in between AiSayu, besides their own girlfriends while Yui having no choice to sit besides Maikea.

When they reached, they came settled down around the table when the food was served.

Since Sayumi knowing about GakiKameYui joining them has made the last minute order for the new arriving trio. And one by one (i.e. GakiKameYui) introduced themselves to the new girl.

After finish their introductions, they all started to have their lunch together, with Gaki trying her best to appease her still angry girlfriend by picking food towards to Ai’s plate and her own while KameShige feeding each other and Ai picking the food for her sis and Maikea.

Being new, Maikea felt quite awkward over the situation as she somehow sense the relationships between the two couples with the one of the pairs doing a live mushy show in front of her.

After their lunch, the six of them explored the school together.


to be continued...

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sorry, Maikea i have make you so awkward :kneelbow:
and Sakura, sorry for the short appearance :sweatdrop:
sorry~~~ :sweatdrop:

anyway, hope you guys like it.  :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: December 14, 2012, 07:52:49 AM by weird »

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