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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
« Reply #40 on: October 11, 2012, 01:47:38 PM »
hey mou~~~  dont get it wrong ! i really LOVELOVE daishi x riho !! i mean ~DIES~ .. im dying becuz of their cuteness !!!!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
« Reply #41 on: October 11, 2012, 01:54:26 PM »
yellow your comment is fun! i love the way u give me ideas!  :thumbsup
oh really :nervous... i am just stating what i am feeling at that time straight after reading the content... hope it will help you in your idea generation :P
you are making me so excited in commenting your future fiction now  :grin:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #42 on: October 13, 2012, 10:01:49 AM »
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                      6
 
(Monday) 
In the classroom everyone was chatting about their weekends 
Ishida Ayumi president of the school council was in fist row studying for no reason 
Haruna and Misaki looked at their friend 
"Daishi are you okay? You been acting weird since saturday!" Haruna asked 
Ayumi closed her book "why wouldn't i be okay!" she asked looking at their friends 
Misaki sighed "if you say so but it's kinda strange you're sitting in first row with us, i thought you like it next to the window!" she says scratching her head 
Soon somebody entered to the classroom fast "little crazy girls!" she murmured 
Konon started laughing "little girls harrasing you that's interesting!"
Riho turned to look at her friends then notice that Ayumi is sitting in first row 
"But it's not fun!" Riho murmured while Ayumi looked other way
"Almost late!" Erina says 
"I think she doesn't know how to use her watch,she's always late!" Ayumi says out of the blue 
*Everyone laughs* 
Riho was shocked "what's wrong with her?" she thought 
Ayumi gets up of her seat "don't worry Riho i can show you how to use a watch" she says while takes Riho's wrist hard "ohh digital" she says smirking 
"What's wrong with you?" Riho asks sad and irritated then releases her wrist and goes to her seat 
Ayumi smirks and then sits ignoring the girls in the back while Riho was staring at her 
Kanon and Erina didn't understant a thing but they didn't care..
How was your date? Kanon asked 
Riho still was staring Ayumi but when Kanon asked that *Ayumi's shoulders tense up* 
He was really hot! Erina says 
*Ayumi puts her hand on her neck*
Riho saw the whole thing "Could it be.." she thought
Ohhh he was really nice and charming not COLD AS SOME PEOPLE AROUND! She shouted the last part
*The trues it was the worst date ever,the guy told Riho that he didn't want  to see her again "nobody mess with his dog's death"* 
Ayumi got up of her seat "Shut up i'm trying to study!" she shouted irritated then turned to face the girls on the back 
Riho got up "what's wrong? the nerd didn't study much last night?" she asked smirking 
"Ooooohhhh" everyone says 
"cat fight!" A girl says 
Kanon looked at Erina "i was waiting for this!" she says smirking 
Soon the teacher entered so Ayumi got back to her seat while Riho just pouted 
The class started..
~Meanwhile~
Risa was sitting on the couch watching the tv but she wasn't really watching it,she was paying more attention to  Aichan who's preparing breakfast for the two of them while she sings 
Risa could do nothing but stare the older girl "her voice is so good,i could spend my whole day watching and listening her"  she thought 
Ai looked at Risa and smirked
The model blushed and got back to watch the tv but she kept changing channel by channel,she couldn't find anything interesting as Ai cooking..
The model sighed and stole a glance at the older girl 
again then fast looked at the tv
*On the movie the lover were stuck in a elevator* 
That reminded Risa what happened yesterday..
~Flashback~ 
"Hey wait up!" Risa shouts running and enters to the elevator 
"Risa.." The only person in the elevator says 
Risa looked at the person "Aichan..hi..." she says as she tries to catch her breath 
Ai smirked "don't tell me you were following me!" 
Risa pouted "why would i do that? you're annoying and you better press the button.i don't wanna be stuck here with you!" she says while leans 
Ai smile faded and pressed the button "this is not working.." she says looking up 
Risa pouted "i know loving together is not a good idea!" 
Ai looked at Risa and smirked "i'm not talking about us..i'm talking about the elevator!"  
Risa reacted fast "what?" she asked while presses the buttons 
Ai tried to stop her "I don't think it's a good idea pressing all of them!" 
Risa panicked "Let me go.. i can't be in a small place like this!" she shouted while kicks the doors "oouuucchh my foot!" 
Ai just looked at the girl " are you okay?" she asked while puts her hand on the model's shoulder 
Risa sits "i can't breathe!" she murmures 
Ai looks at her "you're all sweat! what's going on? there's much air here..breathe! she says while fans Risa 
Risa got pale and unbuttoned 3 buttons of her shirt  "it's really hot here!" she murmures all sweat
Ai looked at Risa "you're asthmatic!" she murmured then registered Risa's purse
Risa looks at Ai "it's at my dept!" she murmures trying to breathe 
Ai  knealed in front of Risa then cupped Risa's face "please close your eyes.." she says worried
Risa blushed and then closed her eyes 
Ai looked at Risa she has never been this close to the model's face "you're really pretty!" Ai thought 
"takes deep breaths and calm down,trust me everything is going to be fine.I'm not going to anything bad happen to you!" Ai says while sits next to Risa who opened her eyes 
"Let's wait a little..ok!" Ai says with a smile 
Risa smirked softly and putted her head on Ai's shoulder 
"Maybe singing might be good to cheer you up!" Ai says smirking then starts singing 
Risa smirks "i like your voice.." she murmures and closes her eyes again 
*After a few minutes*
Ai noticed that Risa is holding her arm tight so she took that hand and interwine their fingers 
"Don't stop...sing for me please!" Risa murmures 
"ok.." Ai replies and keeps singing 
~~~~~ End of the flashback~~~~~
Risa turned off the tv "i like your voice.." she says feeling embarrased 
Ai smirked while sets the table "i like that pink bra that you have!" she says smilinv and then stuck her tongue out
Risa got red "why you were watching my bra? pervert Aichan!"
Ai looked at Risa "i wasn't looking your bra..you showed to me when unbuttoned your shirt!" 
*Doorbell ringing*
Risa went to open the door 
Hi there my love! A guy shouts and tries to hug Risa but this one reject him and punches him on his face
"i don't being touched!" she says mad
*Ai blushed because she remembered that lately she's been sleeping close to Risa and she doesn't react that way and also yestarday they held hands very long time*
The guy got up fast "i'm not going to give up!" he says determinated 
Risa pouted "you freak me out!" she says coldly and slams the door on his face 
Ai sitted and started eating 
Risa sitted also "i can't believe that idiot was your boyfriend! what were you thinking?" she says mad 
Ai was shocked "you sound like a boyfriend..where were you? why you haven't call? who's that guy?"  she says imitating the voice of a guy 
Risa almost chokes 
Ai smirked "you're funny Risa,i like you!" she murmures 
Risa didn't heard her 
~Meanwhile~
Kamei Eri entered to a cafetery,she sitted on the first table she saw then she ordered and reread JunJun's Note: 
"I love you Eri but you're BLOCKING ME!!! Reina it's been in good mood lately (if you know what i mean!)
and it's really tired being your maid and my girlfriend sex salve!! so fix your shit now and take a coffee
so here's free cuppons for good coffee!! :) 
Btw:maybe you can get your tummy rubbed if you do things right.. behave it cost me a lot!! 
(End of the note)
Kamei Eri putted her head on the table feeling depressed "You don't have to write your sex life!" she murmured 
"Eri.."Somebody murmured
To Eri that voice was familiar so she opened her eyes and looked at the girl "what are you doing here?" 
Sayumi pulls out an envelope from her pocket and gives it to Eri 
Note 2: 
If i told you that i was setting you up with the bunny you wouldn't get out of your house so i fooled you with those fake cuppons! xD
Now fight for your love my friend!!  :D even if you steal the bride is love my friend! 
Eri smirked then putted the letter on her jacket 
Sayumi smiled "JunJun gave me these free cuppons and she also told me i'll find you here so she asked me to gave you that envelope!" 
Eri laughed "these cuppons are fake,have a sit i'll buy you coffee!" 
After a few hours of chatting the two girls got out of the cafe 
The two girl were walking 
Eri stops walking"Sayumi there's something i wanted to ask.." 
Sayumi looks at Eri "what's that?" she asked 
"Why are you not wearing your ring?" Eri asked 
Sayumi looked at her finger embarrased "uhh..well..i forgot,i washed dishes and forgot!" 
Eri smirked "oh..right!" she says while walks ahead 
Sayumi follows her "i said the truth!" she says while walks behind her 
suddenly Sayumi's high heel breaks And she slips
Eri laughs first and then helps the bunny 
Sayumi pouts "it's not funny!" 
Eri takes the broken heel 
Sayumi took off her other heel "people is goinh to think that i'm crazy for not wearing shoes!" 
Eri took off her shoes "let them think what they want!" she says smiling then takes the bunny's hand and keeps walking 
Sayumi blushes 
~Observing from a distance in other shop~
they are so cute! Reina says smiling 
Finally at least they're holding hands! JunJun says still looking at the bunny and the turtle 
Rena smiled "JunJun.." she called 
what? JunJun asked and looked at her girlfriend 
Reina evil smile "i want you know!" she says 
"here.. now?" JunJun asked shocked 
"yeah.." Reina replies while walks to the bathroom 
JunJun sighed "this is going to be the third place that we're going to be kicked out!" she thought bit then smirked and followed her girlfriend to the bathroom 
TO BE CONTINUED!! sorry Maikeatoot is just you never comment about it i thought you didn't like them xD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #43 on: October 13, 2012, 10:24:20 AM »
the ending of the chapter :lol:
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #44 on: October 13, 2012, 10:42:58 AM »
mou~~~ im present as a reader today ! yay ! my gosh ! our daishi was jealous yay !! you riho please keep on doing that until our daishi confess ! bwahaha!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #45 on: October 13, 2012, 10:59:36 AM »
hohoho.... you are making aigaki pair interaction so interesting :thumbsup
but isn't aichan feel any sense of jealousy over her bf's crazy reaction towards the model.
reina... you are really so hyper yay :rofl:
haha... isn't reina feel any sense of guilt to create such an opportunity for kameshige... though it did save her jun from being borrowed by the turtle
haha... i am agreeable with maikeatoot on riho continue to spur jealous daishi into confession... because jealous daishi is cute  XD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #46 on: October 13, 2012, 11:06:27 AM »
hohoho i can imagine daishi's face !!!  yay !  maikea wants more daishi x riho sweetness ! please? *puppy eyes*

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #47 on: October 13, 2012, 11:18:26 AM »
I'll try my best on giving you a good moment of all the pairings! :D

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #48 on: October 13, 2012, 11:20:50 AM »
yay YATTA !!  hohoho im such a brat today haha!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
« Reply #49 on: October 13, 2012, 11:42:43 AM »
coool!  8)

i like to spoil my readers!  :grin:

please updateeeeee ur fic!  :bow:

now i have to sleep..Good night! :)

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
« Reply #50 on: October 15, 2012, 05:47:13 AM »
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~   
                           7. Magic Brownies 

Three girls were laying on a bed..
Tanaka Reina couldn't help to ask to her best friend "Why aren't you jealous? i mean he's was your boyfriend and now he's drooling over that model?" 
Takahashi Ai looked at her friend "don't tell me about it..i get jealous whenever he's trying to get close to Risa but.." Ai sighed 
Sayumi and Tanaka looked at their friend "but.." both says in unision 
Ai sitted "i don't care if he dates anyother girl,i don't want him close to Risa.I mean i don't want anybody close to Risa!" she says the last part mad 
Reina and Sayumi sitted also "what?" both reacted the same way 
*Ai sighed again*
Sayumi pointed Aichan "You like her!"  
Aichan pointed at Sayumi "You don't point me,you're about to marry and you're thinking about..."
Reina looked at Ai "don't!" she murmures 
Ai smirked "Kamei Eri!" she says grinning 
Sayumi sitted on bed "now i'm depressed! why Eri is acting so kind?" she says with a black aura
Reina throws a pillow at Aichan 
Aichan gets up "okay i have to go..i have to cook for my guest!" 
Reina smiled "So now you're playing hubby and wifey huh?" 
"Shut up.." Ai says while walks out the room then she noticed some chocolates cakes on the table "what are these?" she asked shouted 
Sayumi pouted "really expesive brownies.. if you want you can take some!" she shouted 
Ai smirked "thanks" she says while takes 3 brownies and leaves 
Reina gets up and went to the kitchen but on her way there she saw the brownies "This looks delicious!" she shouted then she was eating the browning 
Sayumi got out of the room "hey!" she says and takes a brownie and eat it 
The two girls looked at eachother
 "there's one left!" Reina says 
"That Aichan.." Sayumi murmures 
<Meanwhile> <At a cafe shop> 
Niigaki Risa looked at her friends then sighed "so that crazy man is stalking me.." 
Eri laughed like crazy "ironic don't you think?her boyfriend likes you more than her..CRAZY LOVE!" 
Risa pouted "Shut up Eri,you love someone who's going to marry somebody else!" 
JunJun sighed "not again!" she says as she looks at Eri who is with a depressed aura 
Risa putted her hand on Eri's shoulder "sorry it slipped!" 
Eri sighed "so you like Aichan!" 
Risa panicked "what? who said that? shut up!" 
JunJun smirked "easy tiger don't panic!" 
Risa looked at her friends "it's not easy tell myself not fall for that jerk,she's smart,hot,annoying,sings like an angel! she says with a" in love" face
Eri and JunJun looked at eachother 
"uh! oh! you got that unique dork face..you're in love already!" Eri says 
Risa pouted "unique..what?" she asked 
JunJun smirks "unique dork face..that what you have everytime you looked at Ai" 
not truth! Risa replied 
*Phone ringing*
The three girls checks their phone 
JunJun smirks "It's mine..my cat!" She says while hugs her phone 
Risa looked at Eri "and i'm the dork!" 
*Eri facepalmed herself*
~Phone call~Reina (R) JunJun (J) Sayumi (S) 
where are you? i miss you now! (R)
where are you? what are you talking like that? (J) 
ehhhh why you are treating me like this? i'm going to cry now because of you! (R) 
What? why? i'm just used to the wild you that almost never admits that love me! why are you acting like this? (JunJun asked pacnicking) 
Risa and Eri looked at JunJun who was actually acting really weird 
i just love youuuuuuuuuu! Reina shouts 
Eri rised and eyebrown 
Jun! Eri is with ya? A voice asked 
get off Sayumi i'm talking to my JunJun! Reina shouts 
Eriiiiii!!! Sayumi shouts 
Eri heard and snatched the phone "Sayumi..Are you ok?" 
Hey it's my phone! Reina shouts and smacks Sayumi
Eri,JunJun and Risa didn't know what's going on? 
Reina look at those lights! Sayumi says pointing to the lamp 
Wow it's so amazing! Reina says and goes to the lamp then takes it and starts playing with it 
JunJun snacthed the phone "what's going on?" 
Sayumi laughed "everything is so cool..wait a minute! you're not Eri give me back my Eri you beast!" she says arguing with Reina's  phone 
The three girls looked at the phone "ehhhh" 
*Soon the call ended*
Junjun was trying to call back but it was useless 
<At Sayumi's dept> 
Look you're phone is swimming in my fishbowl! Sayumi says amazed 
wow it's amazingg! Reina shouts 
<Back to the girls> 
JunJun was still trying to call and pressing the button with passion 
Eri looked at her friend"i don't think they're going to..*Mad JunJun looking at them* forget it" she says and takes her phone and calls to Sayumi's cellphone
<At Sayumi's dept> 
Reina looked at Sayumi "so much noise turn it off!" she says mad 
Sayumi pulled her phone out her pocket "Eririn is calling me!!" she shouts happy 
~Phone call~ (S) Sayumi (E) Eri 
where are you? (E) 
my dept..are you going to pick me up? (S) 
Eri gets red "is Reina with you?" she asked 
"yep.." (S) 
Okay we're going there now! (E) 
~end of the phone call~
Eri's coming! Sayumi says happy 
<Back to the girls> 
JunJun looked at her phone "why is she acting weird?" 
Let's go! Eri says 
Risa looked at the two "i should go home..you two save your ladies!" she says while gets up 
"ok.." The two girls says
<At Sayumi's dept> 
The girls were having a party on their own they turned the volume up and started dancing and singing song of a group called Morning Musume 
Renai hunter rocks! Reina says smiling and spinning around 
Sayumi heard the doorbell so she openned the door 
"Eri.." She says and jumps on her 
*Kameshige couple was on the floor*
JunJun enters sees Reina dancing so she got close and took her by her arm 
"JunJun.." Reina says then puts her arms around her neck and pulls her down for a kiss *a long one* 
Eri helps Sayumi to get up "what's going on here?" she asked 
JunJun broke the kiss "even though i'm loving this,i also love grumpy Reina!" she says as she carries Reina bridal style "sorry guys i don't know how to be the.. third.. party.." she says confuses while walks away with Reina on her arms 
woo hoo JunJun is so strong! Reina shouts laughing
*Door closed* 
Eri turn off the stereo and looked at Sayumi who  pouted
 "What's going on with you?" Eri asked 
Sayumi smiled then grabbed Eri's hand "you know i never told you but i like everything about you..your mouth,your nose,your thighs.."
Eri was hypnotized and red looking at reckles Sayumi. then she gulped the black haired girl was getting closer and closer 
"I think it was love at first sight.." she murmures a few inches away from Eri's lips 
<Meanwhile> 
Risa got home or Ai's home.She looked around for the owner of the dept 
Risa chan! Ai says smiling and hugging her 
Risa smile but her pride echoed "stop hugging me!" she says mad and pushing Aichan to the sofa 
Ai pouted then started crying "why are you so mean to me?" she shouts mad 
Risa turned around and looked at the girl who seems to be acting like 15 years teenege girl 
"now i'm the bad one!" She murmured and putted herself in front of Aichan 
Aichan looked at Risa and pouted cutely 
"You been hanging the morning with Reina and Sayumi don't you?" Risa asked 
"Yes.." Aichan replies while gets up and looks at the girl in the eyes 
Risa freaked "wha.wha.. what are..you..lo-looking at me-me like that?wee weren't yo..you...cry-ing?" she asks stuttering
Ai smirked "do i put you nervous?" she asked then she cupped Risa's cheek 
Risa was more nervous and red the more Ai gets close to her the more she steps back but unlucky for her there was another couch,Risa fell on it while Ai took advantage and putted herself on top and pinned her arms up 
"what are you doing? Get..." Before Risa could finish her statement Ai lips were on hers 
Risa was trying to break the kiss but somehow Ai was  stronger so she finally gave in 
Once Ai broke the kiss for the lack of air,she smirked "Risa chan lips are so sweet!" 
Risa was trying catch her breath "you're tongue just raped me.." she murmures.Ai chan kiss her again 
but this time once Aichan set her arms free,she cupped Ai's cheeks and respond the kiss with the same passion 
*Phone ringing*
Aichan had her hands under Risa's shirt "Don't pick up!" she says between kisses 
Risa fast grabbed her phone but Ai didn't stopped kissing her and groping her 
<Phone call> JunJun (J) Risa (R) 
"Risa please check on Ai these girls just ate magic brownies..if you know what i mean"
(Ouuuch) Risa shouted becouse Ai bit her neck 
what's wrong with you? (J) 
"Nothing..magic brownies?" Risa repleated then looked at Ai and then looked at the table where is a brownie on it 
yes,if she's all crazy then give her a lot water or make throw up like i'm doing with Reina! (J) 
(Noise of someone throwing up) 
"Gross!" Risa says and tries to avoid Aichan kissing her on her body 
"And you're not holding her hair.." (J) 
"Risa you're body is so hot!" Aichan shouts 
"wait a minute! is a monkey clinging on you?" (J) 
"no,it's not!" Risa fast says and hangs up 
~End of the phone call~
<At JunRei's dept> 
JunJun was holding her hair while she throws up 
"I'm going to kill Sayumi" she says while keeps throwing up on the sink 
JunJun smiled "now you're starting to sound like my cold cat!" 
Reina smirks "so you like me treating you bad?" 
JunJun looks at her girlfriend "maybe" she answers winking 
Reina looked at her girlfriend "you're masochistic" 
"Only yours.." JunJun replies 
<Meanwhile> 
Risa looked at Ai "According to Eri and Sayumi you took 3 brownies and here's only one so that means you ate two.." 
The monkey girl smiled widely  
Risa took a deep breath "you're an idiot!" she says 
Ai smirks "maybe if i shower.." she says as she takes off her clothes in front of Risa
Risa opened her mouth "what?" she asked looked at the hot naked Aichan entering to the bathroom 
"I need help Risa chan everything is confusing and has so many bright colors.." Aichan shouts 
Risa sighed "i can't fall for you Aichan.." she says while she enters to the bathroom resign 
Aichan looked at Risa Then smirked 
<2 hours earlier> Before Gaki gets home
Aichan entered to her dept,she putted the three brownies on the table,She was preparing herself to cook when her doorbell ranged,She openned the door
"Where's my love?" Aichan ex asks looking around for Risa 
Aichan pouted "She's not home and nobody invited you in so go away!"
The guy so the brownies and ate one 
Ai looked at him "hey those are my brownies!" she shouted mad 
The guy ate another one so Aichan got mad and started throwing him her shoes
"Are you crazy?" He asked while Ai keeps throwing him her shoes 
Ai shouted like a man and the guy freaked out and left the dept running
*Phone ringing* *Before calling JunJun*
Ai (A) Reina (R) Sayumi (S) 
Aichan!! those brownies are the best! (R)
Look at me i'm so cute! (S) 
what's wrong with you two? (A with accent) 
Don't talk to me like that? why aren't you happy? this brownies makes you happyyyyyyh! (R)
Ai looked at only brownie on her table"Sayumi where did you get these brownies?" 
Sayumi laughs "shhhhhh from some man he said that it was special!" she says smiling 
*then the two hanged up*
"Crazy girls.." Ai thought 
Then something came to her mind "maybe if she gives it to Risa but not she asmathic so it would be really dangerous" 
~Meanwhile~ 
Eri looked at Sayumi sleeping "you grope me too much..i will never be same.." she murmured then notice the picture of Sayumi's fiance
"This dude..i have seen him before" Eri murmures then thinks "Wait a sec he's Miki's husband..."  
TO BE CONTINUED!!! SORRY I'M SLEEPY I OWE YOU RIHO X AYUMI!! 

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
« Reply #51 on: October 15, 2012, 06:02:41 AM »
takagaki !!!! its the best yay !! RIHO AND DAISHI where are they ?!! yay ! please update soon ! ah lab yuh !

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
« Reply #52 on: October 16, 2012, 03:30:10 AM »
hoho... i like the magic brownie... :rofl:

eririn should quickly tell mikitty about the affair of sayu and her husband... then both mikitty and sayu ditched that trash for their girlfriends.
now, i see why aichan not jealous when her ex's crazy reaction with risa...  :lol: aichan quickly conquer the model... and live elsewhere until the crazy guy not able to find you two XD

but i wonder how is she going to trick the poor model into eating that remaining magic brownie and then, the model suddenly go hyper over her and then, the confession, and formation of the couple thing :lol:... as i suppose that she will not have to plan to eat it herself when she "supposedly" have eaten it... but to think twice on the model's asthmatic health, will she just eaten it or just fake it all the way and she does that confession  (i really wonder :?)

for the magic brownie chapter, maybe you should have a sequel one with either riho accidentally eaten it and confess to daishi, or the other way round... i feel really fun when i picture that in my mind  XD

btw, i just wonder what will happen to the crazy guy when he have eaten 2 of the magic brownie and who will be his victim when he has gone so hyper... heehheee... i am really excited to know (why i have that feeling that i kinda like the appearance of the crazy guy being so idiotic over risa  :?)

*EDIT*
forget to comment on junrei, reina is so damn abnormal after consuming the magic brownie... like jun, i also prefer that cold cat... because she is more lovable that way...
« Last Edit: October 16, 2012, 03:50:35 AM by yellow »

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
« Reply #53 on: October 16, 2012, 01:33:13 PM »
how about an update today ! hehe just kidding cmze !!  rihoxdaishi !!  ah ~DIES~ !!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
« Reply #54 on: October 17, 2012, 07:27:08 AM »
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~   
                       8. Magic Brownies sequel

Well i guess you convince me!! :) 

Sayashi Riho spended the whole morning staring at the back the girl in the first row "why she's been ignoring me? this is not funny! why she wants to fight with me? i miss her!" She thought then sighed 
*Soon the bell ringing*
Kanon stretches "finally..this day was so boring!" 
Riho was still staring at council president
Misaki smiled "Ayumi chan is so cute!" she says and hugs her friend 
Riho pouted and clenched her fist 
Erina and Kanon looked at Riho..
"Are you okay Riho?" Erina asked 
Riho got from her seat "Yeah why wouldn't i be?" she asked as she walks away mad 
Ayumi looked at girl walking mad with a "don't talk to me!" aura
After a few blocks from school Riho stopped walking "she's mean.." she thought then stopped in a park sp she sitted in the swing,she sighed and pulled out her phone,she was looking at the pictures going one by one till she found and old picture of her and her captain 
Riho looked to the sky and remembered what her senpai told her after graduating "If you feel bad and need someone to talk or not talk,I'm good at it!" 
Riho searched for the her phone number "hope she's still using the same phone.." she murmured and used gps to find her 
Riho was surprised "Ehh! she's few blocks from here"
she got up and walked to the address
*Which lead her to Aichan's dept*
"Aichan and Risa relationship is weird.Risa thinks that Ai doesn't remember a think about their french kissing  last night while Ai just want to Risa confess or give her a sign at least but unlucky for Ai.."Risa is acting like nothing happened"
~AiGaki's kitchen~ 
Risa was cooking while Ai just entered to the kitchen to get a glass of water 
*Risa was all tense up couse her presence* 
Aichan looked at Risa who got nervous "wha..what's wrong?" she asked 
Aichan smirked 
Risa got red "stop loooking at me like that!" she says trying to avoid Aichan's gaze 
Ai touched Risa's neck with the tip of her finger 
Risa reacted and slips
Aichan laughed while Risa gets up "Are you crazy?" she asked annoyed by the monkey
Aichan looked at the model "you have a big hickey on your neck! Risa chan it's been doing reckles things?" she asked teasing the model 
Risa reacts "Ehhh where?" she says while runs to the bathroom 
Aichan smiles wide 
"ahhhhh it's hugeeeee!" Risa shouts 
*Doorbell rings*
Aichan smirks "i'll get that!" she says while walks to opens the door 
Riho looked at her senpai "hi!" she says nervous 
Aichan was kinda shocked buy let her in 
Riho sitted on the couch while Aichan brought her orange juice then sitted next to her 
"How you been?" Aichan asked with a smile 
Riho smiled weakly "well i'm feeling bad and sorry for coming like this but i really don't know who else talk about this!"
Aichan got serious "what's wrong?" she asked  
Riho looked down "i think i love someone.." 
Aichan smiled "that's good!" 
Riho putter her hand on her neck "a girl" she says looking at her senpai 
Ai smiled faded "does she likes you?" she asked 
Riho looked "i don't know and that's the problem i don't know if i should confess!" she replied still looking down 
Ai putted her hand on Riho's shoulder "go for it!" she says with a smile 
Risa got out of the bathroom "What? she asking for a advice and you tell her.. go for it! what if it is one sided? she would be hurt!" 
Riho was speechless "who's this girl? wait a sec..she's Niigaki Risa the model!" she thought 
Aichan got up "what is better tell what you feel and if you got hurt well 50\50%!"
Risa looked at Ai "You have no idea how it feels to be rejected for the one you love! like you always had everyone on the palm of yohr hand!" 
Ai pouted "i'm not the model that everyone likes and of course i know how it feels to be rejected!" 
Risa got mad "she doesn't remember what she did to me in highschool for confessing to her" she thought and then left mad 
Ai sighed "what's wrong with her?" she thought 
Riho looked at her senpai "You know if Erina finds out that i was in the same room with Niigaki san,i think she would kill me..she's obsessed with Niigaki san!" 
Aichan pouted "not another one..." She thought "don't tell her anything about Niigaki san!" she says with creepy smile 
The two girls talked for a while till..
*Phone ringing* 
(A) Aichan (R) Reina 
What's wrong? (A) 
You have to come to Sayu's place..it's important really important! (R) 
*When Reina says it's important,it must be important she's not type of person who jokes around..* 
Okay i understand! (A) 
*End of the phonecall*
Ai looked to the younger girl and sighed "Sorry Riho chan i have to go..something happened.." 
Riho smiled "Don't worry Takahashi san,you helped me a lot today!" 
*Riho's stomach makes a noise* 
Riho was embarrased while Acchan was smirking "take anything you want from the fridge!" she says while gets up and goes to her room to change her clothes 
Riho openned the fridege,there were a lot candies there but what catched her attention was a brownie
She took it and examinated it first then eat it 
When Aichan got out of the room,Riho already ate the entire brownie 
The two girls said goodbye and walked opposites directions 
Riho couldn't help to fell different,her body was so light and the lighs were sparkling more 
"what the hell?" She thought while walks seeing her hands to be exact her fingers,she was looking at her fingers like if it was the greatest thing ever then also came to her mind her school coucil president "she had gotten prettier *sighs* i like everything about her"
Riho heard poeple talking,she looked around and saw a girl that seemed her beloved Ayumi holdings hands with another guy 
Riho run to the guy and jumped to him "stay away from her!" she shouts
"Ehhh are you cheating on me?" The girl asked looking at her boyfriend who seems really happy with Riho on top of him 
Riho looked at the girl's face "Uppsss.." she says while gets up 
The girl was mad "are you cheating on me?" she asked slapping the guy several times not letting him answer
Riho looked at the scene "ouch.." she murmured feeling bad for the guy then run away without them notice 
After a few minutes of running she got the place where she wanted to go in first place..
Riho looked to the house "if i use the door,you'll make them say that you're not home but if i use the window you can't.." she murmures then chooses the window
 *Note:A tree was next to the house so that's why she could get into Ayumi's room *the window was open btw*
Riho entered to the room,Ayumi was sleeping on her bed 
Riho sitted next to her and watches while she's sleeping "i wanna kiss you now!"  she murmures and removes a string of hair from her face 
Ayumi opens her eyes slowly,when she saw Riho she fell of bed 
"You're up!!" Riho says happy and hugs the older girl
Ayumi was shocked "let me go! go back with your boyfriend!" she shouted and tries to remove Riho's arms from her waist 
Riho looked at the red Ayumi in the eyes "i don't have a boyfriend, i only want Ayumi chan!" 
Ayumi was even redder "your eyes are red and also your cheeks..Are you okay?" she asked looking at the happy Riho that was hugging her 
*Knock** Knock* 
Ayumi looked at the door 
Honey is everything alright? Her mother asks
Ye---> Ayumi covers Riho's mouth "yeah mom don't worry..is just the tv!" she answers  
Ayumi sighed 
Riho gets up "i feel so weird Ayumi chan and all that is because of you!" she says smiling looking at Ayumi
"Okay now you started to freak me out.." she murmures blinking a few times 
Riho grabs her hand "let's dance!" she says pulling her close to her body *their faces a few inches from eachother's" 
Ayumi step back "okay.. enough!" she says and turns around to avoid Riho
Riho hugged Ayumi from behind then putted her chin on Ayumi's shoulder who blushed for the sudden act
"loving you since always..i just.. i know we're really different but i don't think there's anybody else that know me better in this world but maybe is just one sided" She says while slowly removes her arms from Ayumi's body
Riho sighed while Ayumi turned around and looked at her blinking a few times 
Riho puts her hand on her forhead "i should heard Niigaki san!" 
Ayumi got closer 
(Inner Riho: Oh no she's going to slap me!)
Riho closes her eyes 
(Inner Riho: eh no slapping?)
a few seconds later soft lips were on hers 
Riho opened her eyes..
(Inner Riho: Daishi is kisiing me..YAY!!!) 
*Meanwhile*
Niigaki Risa opened her eyes "where am i?" she asked looking around 
A girl was next to her looking at her with face she has seen before "Aichan's x!" she says 
The girls jumps on Risa "Niigaki san I love you!" 
Risa pouted "What?why? what am i doing here?" 
"I'm Ikuta Erina my friends call me Eripon and i'm your biggest fan..my bother hit you in the head with his basketball ball when you were walking so we brought you here to take care of you!"
Risa pouted again "i'm feeling bad..really bad!" 
Eripon smiled "Don't worry my love is going to heal you!"
Niigaki Risa=X_x; 
~Extra something~ The dude after eating the brownies!! 
He was walking when suddenly he fell like everyone were lookig at him "why are you looking at me? do you like me?" he asked to a man that was passing next to him with his kids 
The dude kept walking "why everything is so shiny?why am i all sweat?" he shouted paranoid 
"All you want a piece of me!" He shouted while takes off his shirt 
*people were looking at him beacuse he was acting like a crazy man*
The dude even took his pants off then he notice a magazine where is Risa in the cover 
He takes it "My wife!" he says to the seller and starts kissing the magazine 
*Everyone was disgusted abd covering their kids eyes!" 
"He's raping the magazine!" Another man shouted 
soon the police came and took him 
"What? let me go! she's my wife!" He shouts while tries to run away but the police man grabbed him hard 
"yeah yeah crazy man!" The police man says smirking
"no!no! i have to take care of her!" He shouts while he gets inside the car 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
« Reply #55 on: October 17, 2012, 08:49:41 AM »
geez... what's a dangerous man... stripping freak  :shocked but i really like that part on raping the magazine and get caught... because that shows that the magic brownie is invincible :pimp:

i would say thanks god that the hit was not so harsh.... or else, our beloved model gonna bad concussion and forget about aichan   :doh:

to be frank, i thought aichan will go all the way through that last night... but after thinking twice about them only to ended up like that hanging on with their ambiguous relationship also not that bad... the model can continue pretending but first, aichan really have to save her out from eripon... but how? (i really wonder....)

for the serious matter, is it about eri telling sayu about her fiance being mikitty's husband...

but, no matter what... the location aichan living is really dangerous, filled with so many risa's crazy fans... i  really feel quite worry for risa... :smhid

for riho and daishi, finally the couple thing form...  XD

i wonder when will be aigaki's turn...  :wth
« Last Edit: October 17, 2012, 09:05:43 AM by yellow »

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
« Reply #56 on: October 17, 2012, 02:01:04 PM »
 lol that crazy man huh ! and daishi and riho are so .. oh my gosh cmze i love you !!! ~DIES~ !!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
« Reply #57 on: October 20, 2012, 09:41:13 PM »
those magic brownies :lol:
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
« Reply #58 on: October 22, 2012, 10:13:09 AM »
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
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(The next day) 
Risa didn't understand anything "why Aichan is kissing me? why am i enjoying it?" she wondered while The older girl pushed her against the wall "Aichan.." she murmured trying to stop the older girl to get closer to her but it was imposible Aichan was somehow stronger and end up sucking,licking and biting her neck 
Risa moaned while her fingers strokes Aichan's hair
"Can't you see? i want you!" The older girl says then looked at her in the eyes 
Risa cupped Aichan's cheeks and kissed her softly while the older girl hold on her waist 
Their kiss was a sweet but soon Ai's and Risa hunger for eachother showed up 
"Hurry,i want you too!" Risa says between kisses while Aichan lift her up spreading her legs both sides 
Risa encircled her legs around the older girl while she's determinate to take off Aichan's shirt without breaking their passionate kiss
Aichan in other hand was unbuttoning her shirt "shit! so many buttons!" she says mad and broke them all,she broke the kiss and looked at the yourger girl chest "pink.." she murmures with a smirk 
Risa blushed 
~~Alarm clock ringing~|~
Risa woke up fast then looked around and turned off the alarm "it was a dream.." she murmures while gets up,on her way to the bathroom she saw Ai laughing watching the tv 
Risa entered to the bathroom "i'm..." she murmures then she putted her hand on her "wet.." she says not so happy remembering that was Ai who caused this strange feeling on her
*Risa sighed and started to get undress to get in the tub*
Knock! Knock! 
Risa pouted "What?" she shouted 
"I prepared you breakfast.." Ai shouted 
"Ok.." Risa replied 
~Meanwhile~ At JunRei's
The two girls were packing ..
JunJun sighed "so you want me to invite Eri so she'll hook up with Sayumi and she'll happy instead of being depressed because her boyfriend was a married pig!" She says looking at her tiny girlfriend 
Tanaka Reina smiled "yeah!" 
JunJun facepalmed herserlf "i think we should give them time besides Sayumi has feelings for that guy and i don't want Eri to get hurt again.." 
Reina pouted "JunJun you're going to invite her and that's it..depressed Sayumi is not fun besides she's my friend i want her to be happy!" she says cutely tugging JunJun shirt to convince her 
JunJun looked other way "Don't that cute cat face,it get me nervous! she says trying to avoid her little girlfriend 
Reina grabned JunJun by her shirt "btw  if Sayumi keeps being depressed will not be JunRei smexy time in a while and i'll be moody!" she says making JunJun lean and look at her in the eyes 
JunJun felt shivers "okay..okay we'll have smexy time!" she says resign 
~Meanwhile~
Ishida Ayumi woke up,she tried to stretch but somehow she couldn't so she looked at the girl next to her who's has her arm and leg on Ayumi (in some sort of way to preventing her to go)
Ayumi smiled cause her girlfriend antics "Riho chan wake up.." she murmured while tugs her hair behind her ear 
Riho moved cause the sudden touch and slowly opened her eyes 
Ayumi smiles "Good morning.." 
Riho looked at Ayumi in the eyes "good morning.." she says not breaking eye contact and not removing her arm or leg off Daishi 
Both looked at eachother for a few minutes (Maybe cause they were happy that they were a couple..teens who gets them?xD) 
Knock! Knock! <The door> 
*The two girls fast sitted*
"Ayumin time to go to school!" Her mom shouts then walks downstairs 
Riho looked at Ayumi "my parents must be worried" she says and fast gets up from bed 
Ayumi gets up also "don't worry i called and told them you were going to spend the night here because we studied a lot and lost track of time!" 
Riho smiled "you're such a liar!" she say while she is going to get out from the window 
Ayumi looked at Riho with a sad expression 
Riho looked Ayumi back "Aren't you going to kiss me? she asked with a cute expresion 
Ayumi smiled and walked to her girlfriend then kissed her softly *Forheads connecting*
Riho smiles "I'm going home to change,i'll pick you up in a half an hour!" then steal another kiss from Ayumi but this time bolder 
<Back to Aigaki> 
Ai was changing channels she wants to Risa get out of the bathroom to invite her to a trip with her friends!
~Flashback~
Two girls were trying to cheer their best friend up 
Aichan walked around the room in circles "i can't believe the son of a bitch was married!" she says mad
Sayumi cries more "Eri was right and treated her so bad!" she says while Reina rubs her back 
Ai looked at her bunny friend "c'mon he's not the only man in this world.." she says trying to cheer Sayumi 
Reina sighed "yeah but they're like public phones if it's not already taken,it's damage!" 
Sayumi cries loud 
Ai pouted "thanks Reina!" 
Reina looked other "hey! i have an idea what about vacations,payed for my family kinda obvious!" she sahs looking at her two friends with a smile 
Ai frowned but followed the flow "Yeah it might be a good idea.. just girls!" she says with a smile looking at her depressed friend 
Sayumi wiped her tears "can we get massages?" she asked looking at Reina 
Reina laughed "my parents are the owner of the hotel and i'm rich so of course we can!" 
Sayumi smiled 
Aichan smirked "that's my girl!" she says and hugs Sayumi then kisses her on her forhead
Reina gets up from bed "i'm thirsty.." she says and goes to the kitchen 
"I'm also thirsty.." Ai says and followed Reina to the kitchen 
Reina grabbed a glass of water while Ai looks at her
"do i have something on my face?" she asked 
Ai smirked "you invited us because..." 
Reina pouted "i'm a good friend!" 
Aichan laughed hard "now tell me the truth!" 
Reina sighed "well it was like killing two birds in one shot..my parents want to see me but i don't wanna go alone with JunJun,it might be strange and i'm not ready to tell my parents about our relantionship or being without her!" 
Aichan looked at her friend "i don't wanna leave Risa!" she says with a smirk 
Reina frowned "okay bring her too,i don't mind" she says while walks to Sayumi's room 
~End of the flashback~ 
Aichan looked at Risa who's sitting eating her breakfast "Risa.." she called 
Risa looked at her "don't tell me she saw me on bed a while ago?!" she thought all red "wha..what?" she asked nervous 
Ai got up from the couch "The girls and i are going to take vacations don't you wanna come with us? Reina's parents pay everything!" 
Risa looked other "i don't know Reina..i'm not her friend!" 
Ai sitted next to Risa "it doesn't matter Eri and JunJun are also coming,c'mon Risa! Reina's parents have an hotel next to this beatiful beach..it's like paradise!" she says excited 
*Risa almost chokes,she just imagined Aichan in bikini*
Risa drank her glass of juice fast while Aichan grabbed her hand and looked at her in the eyes "Are you okay? she asked worried
Risa got red and soon the same heat that she felt this morning was there..She got up "i have to work,i'll tell you later!" she says while leaves 
"We are leaving tomorrow!" Ai shouted then sighe she really wants Risa to come 
<At Eri's place>
JunJun sitted next to her friend on the couch 
Eri facepalmed herself "i shouldn't told her about it" 
JunJun putted her hand on her shoulder "Are you crazy? he was a pig..thanks god you find out!" 
Eri sighed "now she hates me.." she says leaning her back on the couch 
JunJun smirked "don't worry she'll thank you later!" 
Eri looked up 
"Hey let have vacations..i know a good place beasides is free!"JunJun says 
what? Eri asked 
yeah no more drama! JunJun says smirking 
Eri frowned "What about Reina?"
JunJun laughed "don't worry about her..i have her under control!" 
whatever.." Eri says 
"Yeah!" JunJun says happy 
~Meanwhile~ 
The two highschoolers walked hand in hand to school but they had to separate a few blocks after..
Riho was already in the classroom sitting on her spot while Ayumi told her that she need to get some copies..
Riho sighed she wanted her girlfriend to cross that door and ahead of her like always 
Erina and Kanon got closer to Riho,Kanon sitted on Ayumi's seat 
Riho looker at Kanon then pouted "i really wanted her to seat there!" she thought 
Kanon smiled "what's wrong Riho chan?" she asked 
Riho looked other way "nothing!" she answered 
Erina also sitted next to her "you're not going to believe what happened to me last night?!" she says excited and shouting 
Everyone was paying full attention to Eripon
Riho couldn't care less but she asked anyway "what? what happened?" 
Eripon got up "Niigaki Risa was at my house last night!" she shouted excited 
*everyone laughed*
"why she would be at your home? she's a supermodel!" 
Eripon got mad "My brother hit her with a ball in the park and knock her so we took her home.." she shouted
"Don't tell me she brought you here on her car?" another guy says smiling 
Eripon pouted "No,she got away last night" she murmured
somebody entered to the classroom so everyone were quiet
Riho smirked "Finally" she murmured 
Haruna and Misaki smile "Daishi.." they say smiling 
Ayumi smiled "hi!" she says while walks straight to the seat where Kanon was 
Kanon turned to look Ayumi "don't tell me you want to sit here princess!" she says a little irritated 
Ayumi just looked at her 
Kanon was kinda mad "why we always have to do what you want? Riho chan doesn't like you,i don't like you,Eripon doesn't like you also,you should go and sit in the first row with the rest of the nerds!" 
Riho pouted "Kanon she always sit here.." 
Ayumi sighed "i'm the coucil president!" she says in a bossy tone 
Kanon looked at Riho "what? i thought you don't like her..why you always get by her side? she said you were stupid a few days ago." 
Riho looked other way "and i called her nerd so we're even so please move!" 
Kanon got up and sitted in the last in a corner,Eri followed her 
Ayumi sitted while Riho sighed "this is not going to be easy.." she thought 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
« Reply #59 on: October 22, 2012, 10:22:30 AM »
JunRei smexy time :lol:
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