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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 12
« Reply #200 on: August 06, 2012, 12:18:19 PM »
yatta!! an other update  :on woohoo:
 Jurina as a maid  :on bleed:
iina I want to take Yuko's place  :shy2:
Rena-chan sexy  :luvluv1:
I can sleep now  :sleep:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 11
« Reply #201 on: August 06, 2012, 12:33:45 PM »

@ElleOranji: Thank you for loving the chapter. Also I saw what you crossed out. WHAT? Soon to be 14? And you've been reading my pervy scenes? Ahh maybe I should start monitering what I write now that I know I have an underage viewer. Or not just make sure you don't tell your parents ok?  :P


don't worry they wont know    :on crazygran:


Chapter 11

mud pool wrestling Brawl.....
we used to do that on camping except we catch chickens and we dont wear bikinis XD

they won !
Yay ! 1million and a new house ! !  :mon money:
 
picture of jurina? with her top off ?  :mon wtf:

Chapter 12

Gakuran Choukoku and Center as maids  :mon lovelaff:
"Rock a by Nyannyan on the tree top. When you say no, Yuko won't stop. If Nyannyan falls asleep, Yuko will quietly start to peep."
cool lyrics....wait...yuko will quietly start to peep...:mon spit:

Rena made jurina her personal maid  :mon lmao:

YAY ! Choukoku's Mother's operation is a success  :pen_whirl:

i think i can't read more because im so busy at school now  :pen_cry:
but dont worry i'll try my best to use the computer  :temper:
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 12
« Reply #202 on: August 06, 2012, 01:24:45 PM »
Miyumiiiiiii~saaaaa-n!!

Chapter 11 and 12 its georgeous!! Bravo!!

Ja ja ja every Wmatsui moment!!
Its so..ahh i have nosebleed!! But no! Im never had a nosebleed so im just imagine that i have..LOL

Thank for the update...
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #203 on: August 06, 2012, 05:40:47 PM »
@Sasshii: Yes Sayaka's mom lived all because of Gakuran and Jurina's work. Keep it up you two!  :twothumbs:

@Haruko: You want more hot scenes? Very well then! I will give you hot scenes.  :lol:

@mo-chan: I would want to take Yuko's place as well. Ahh good night mo-chan! Sweet dreams my littler fangirl you.  :oops:

@ElleOranji: That's good to hear. You actually did mud pool wrestling with chicken? Well done. Haha the lyrics I kinda just made up. When looking back at them they kinda don't make sense. Ahh you're going to be busy with school? Well gambate! Work hard!  :twothumbs

@kurogumi: I'm glad you liked both the chapters. Ok so you don't have a nosebleed so you imagine yourself with one. That works! Haha point is there's going to be more cute Wmastui moments like that so be on the look out!  :D

Chapter 12 was a success! Everyone seems to like my maid idea. I'm glad everyone found it nice. Haha and Rena's sexy pajamas will surly put anyone over the edge. Ahh the beauty... Anyways heres chapter 13 I hope you enjoy! It envolves something sweet.
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Chapter 13

"Hey Center!"

"Yeah?"

"You wanna come to my house and bake cakes?" Acchan asked.

"Uhhh why?" Jurina said.

"I wanna make one for Minami. She's been feeling down lately so I thought I'd make her one."

"Ok let's go."

"Yay!"

Jurina walked into the house and to the kitchen where there were a bunch of groceries.

"Atsuko do you know how to make a cake?"

"No. That's why I called you. I thought you knew how." Acchan said.

"No I don't." Jurina said.

"Oh.. well I guess this will be our first time togethere."

"Great. So where do we start?"

"Well the book said that first we need flour, eggs and water."

"Ok how much flour?"

"Uhhh 230mg."

"You sure?"

"Yes."

"Ok."

Jurina dumped the correct amount of flour into the bowl.

"Now crack four eggs and put them into the bowl."

"Four eggs."

Jurina cracked four eggs and then threw away the shells.

"Ok next is to add one cup of water."

"Alright."

"Once that's done take a balloon whisk and mix until flour is yellow.

"Right."

Jurina mixed everything and so far everything was good.

"Now we need to add some baking soda and sugar." Atsuko said.

"How much?" Jurina said.

"For baking soda we only need a little. Like 20 mg. And for sugar it said 200mg but I think we should use more."

"Like what 250?"

"I think 300."

"Atsuko we're trying to give Minami a feel better cake not diabetes."

"Hey I like my cakes sweet!"

"Ok 300 it is."

Jurina dumped basically almost the entire back of sugar into the bowl and mixed it. So far everything looked good.

"Last step is to put it into a bowl and put it in the oven."

"For how long?"

"Bake at 350 degrees for one hour."

"Isn't that kind of long?"

"That's what the book says."

"Ok."

"Wait before you put it in!"

"What?"

"Let me put something extra in it."

Atsuko pulled out a small purple bottle with a heart cap on it. She dumped all the contenets into the cake batter.

"Ok now you can put it in."

"What was that?"

"Something a little special."

Jurina placed the cake into the oven and set it.

"Ok then in one hour we'll decorate it!"

"I hope you read the book right."

"I know I did."

An hour later the cake was done and to Jruina's surprise it actually looked good.

"Now all that's left is to decorate it."

"So let's start by adding the frosting."

Jurina took a knife and spreaded out the frosting all over the cake in a nice even layer.

"Let's add strawberries!"

Acchan took a bunch a bunch of strawberries and made a heart out of them in the middle.

"Very cute Atsuko."

"Thanks."

Just then the door opened and Minami came in.

"I'm home!"

"Minami!"

Atsuko ran over and hugged her.

"Jurina what are you doing here?"

"I was helping Atsuko make you a cake." Jurina said.

"Oh you didn't have to do that."

"But we wanted to!" Atsuko said.

"Well where is it?"

"Over here."

Jurina showed Minami the cake and her eyes widened at the sight.

"It looks really good."

"Then let's eat!"

"Yay! Ittatakimas!"

*Nom Nom Nom*

"Oh! Oishi!"

"I know right! Center we did good." Atsuko said.

"I'm surprised. But yeah it is good." Jurina said.

"Hey you guys I feeling kinda funny."

"What's wrond Minami?"

"I don't know but my body feels really hot for some reason."

"Maybe you should lay down."

Atsuko tried to sit her down but once she touched her, Minami threw her on the couch and started making out with her.

"Minami what's wrong with you?" Jurina said.

"I don't know but I suddenly really want to kiss Acchan. EVERYWHERE!"

Minami tore off Atsuko's shirt and started attacking her neck.

"Atsuko what did you put in the cake?"

"Nothing. Just a little love potion I got off the internet. Looks like it works."

"Oh no don't tell me I'm going to become like Minami."

"Who knows? But for now you might one to leave. Minami is trying to tear away my skirt."

"Bye!!"

Jurina stormed out of the house before she saw anything too bad. Just then she got a text from Rena saying it was almost time for another fight. Jurina went down to the fight club and hoped that the drug wouldn't effect her fighting.

"Today we have Center versus the Sanshou Sisters! FIGHT!

"3 on 1 huh? Bring it."

"We won't beat you lightly."

The Sanshou sisters were a bunch of lolitas. What could they possibly do?

Jurina tried to attack the one on the right but the other two stopped her and threw her to the side. Then one in the middle kicked her while the other two punched. This continued until Jurina eventually couldn't stand anymore. Her nose was bleeding and her insides felt like they were all messed up.

"Stupid lolitas."

Jurina had to do something. Otherwise they were going to finish her off. That's when she remembered something from watching the movie "Kamikaze Girls." Jurina gathered as much blood as she could in her mouth. Then when the one on the left was about to kick her, Jurina spat the blood all over her clothes.

"Noooo!"

The other two gahtered around her and tried to clean her off.

"Don't worry it's just strawberry jam."

"Or juice."

"Hey lolitas."

The three turned around and Jurina spat more blood at them. They all panicked which gave Jurina the chance to take them all out. Jurina took the one in the middle and puched her in the face. Then while she went down Jurina kicked the one on the left and finished the one on the right with a punch to the gut.

"Winner Center!"

"Finally."

Jurina and Rena got home and Rena bandaged Jurina's face.

"You took quite a beating out there." Rena said.

"Well 3 against 1 is kinda hard." Jurina said.

"Well at least you won and that's all that matters. Now let me go get you some water and pain killers."

Rena got up and Jurina watched her walk away.

"Man my face hurts!"

"Ahhhh!" THUD!

"Rena!"

Jurina ran in and saw Rena on the ground.

"What happened?"

"I fell and spilled water. Grab me a towel."

"Sure."

Jurina grabbed a towel and handed it to Rena. But when she did, something happend to Jurina. Her body started to feel hot like Minami's and she had the sudden urge to kiss Rena. Jurina was trying to supress the urge but Rena only made things worse by taking off her shirt revealing a black lace bra.

"Re-Rena!"

"What? I gotta dry myself off."

Jurina's eyes followed everywhere Rena's hand moved. She imagined touching that smooth skin and feel every curve of her beautiful body. There was a weird throbbing between Jurina's legs and her chest felt like it was tightening. Eventually Jurina couldn't take it and attacked. She pinned Rena's arms to the ground and got on top of her.

"Jurina what are you doing?"

"I'm sorry Rena but I can't hold it back any longer!"

Jurina started kissing Rena everywhere she could. While doing that Jurina grabbed Rena's bra and started to pull it down.

"Ahh Jurina STOP!"

"No!"

Rena's bra was pulled down and now Jurina was fondling with her new toys.

"Ju-Jurina! Mmmm stop it!"

"Yada!"

Jurina wanted more so her hands started to travel down towards Jurina's skirt. She was able to pull Rena's skirt off and was about to reach her goal. But then something heavy whacked her in the head and Jurina was out. Meanwhile, Rena changed into pajamas and dragged Jurina to bed.

"Jeez what got into you?" Rena said as she stroked Jurina's head.

"Maybe it's hormones."

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Chapter 13 is done! I hope you all enjoy it and I don't get reported! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #204 on: August 06, 2012, 06:19:09 PM »
Chapter 11
Rena got the picture of Jurina naked.
Chapter 12
Yuko making them her maid and Rena took pictures of Haurna when she was asleep and gave it to Yuko.
Yuko gave them the money just because of the picture.
Jurina became Renas maid.
Chapter 13
Acchan asking Jurina to help make a cake for Minami was all so she could make out with Minami.
Jurina when she saw Rena shirtless she lossed all control but Rena had to knocked her out.
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #205 on: August 06, 2012, 06:37:10 PM »
at first I wanted to eat that cake but I chaged my mind after what happened to Minami and Jurina  :hiakhiakhiak:
Jurina got knocked by Rena  :on lol:
poor Jurina if she really do it without that love potion will be Rena's reaction the same  :dunno:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #206 on: August 06, 2012, 11:53:11 PM »
Please Continued

Acchan is so bad putting a love potion in the ca then ask takamina to eat it

Poor Jurina becoming one like takamina....and the knocked out

I wonder what did Rena use to knock Jurina in one hit :bored:
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #207 on: August 07, 2012, 03:57:51 AM »
Poor Jurina, she got knocked out lol. Haha, but wow that's a lot of sugar Acchan is putting in that cake.

Lol, anyways, please continue, I'll wait for your next update :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #208 on: August 07, 2012, 04:43:27 AM »
Yeah! I thought that I wanna try this recipe but now its too dangerous for me...

wow sexadicchan atack again.. poor minami you need to give her more love.

and wmatsui hilarious ....

THANX FOR THIS SCENES!!! LOVE IT!!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 13
« Reply #209 on: August 07, 2012, 05:25:18 AM »

@ElleOranji: That's good to hear. You actually did mud pool wrestling with chicken? Well done. Haha the lyrics I kinda just made up. When looking back at them they kinda don't make sense. Ahh you're going to be busy with school? Well gambate! Work hard!  :twothumbs


we have no classes today :temper:
but i have no allowance  :on hobo:

Cakes with potions  ! !
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good thing i dont eat cakes i only eat candies and ice cream :stuffed:

jurina almost raped rena   :mon wtf:

but still rena defended herself  :depressed:

this story is getting better and better  :pen_whirl:

is a signature a biography ??
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #210 on: August 07, 2012, 06:20:29 AM »
@blackstar: Glad you liked the chapter. Look forward to more!  :)

@mo-chan: Abunai! That cake is dangerous so stay away from it! I to wonder what whould happen if Jurina acted that way without the drug? Who knows?  :?

@xxx220: Acchan is so bad when it comes to Minami. And who knows what knocked Jurina? Let's just say Rena found a way.  :twisted:

@Sasshii: Yeah sadly Jurina did get knocked out. But if she continued then I would've been flagged. I hope you enjoy this chapter as well!  XD

@Haruko: The cake is a weapon of mass love making! And your are welcome for the scene. I made is especially for you.  :wub:


It appears everyone liked chapter 13. Haha the cake is dangerous so always check your food before eating it. Anyways, here's chapter 14. I hope you all enjoy it. You will all finally see the wrath of a pissed of Black! Enjoy!
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Chapter 14

It was another boring day for Jurina. She had no fights scedualed for today because all her oppenents chickened out on her so the club is busy finding her someone else to fight. Usually most girls her age would be in school but Jurina didn't go to school so she was basically bored to death. But then she got a call from Nezumi.

"What's up?"

"I need your help with something. Meet me at the playground with the huge play ground and stuff."

"On my way."

Jurina hung up the phone and wondered why a playground? When Jurina arrived, she saw a bunch of kids playing and running aroumd. Sitting on a bench to the side was Nezumi holding Black's son.

"Where's Black?" Jurina asked.

"She's at work and couldn't bring him with so she's making me watch him." Nezumi said.

"So why did you call me?"

"I need help watching him."

"Why? He's a baby he's not going anywhere."

"Yeah but still. I'm not good with kids."

"Ok I'll help. How about you set him down first."

"Good idea. My arms are getting tired.'

Nezumi set the baby down and Jurina watched him crawl around for a little bit.

"See? Now he's getting some exercise."

"Good. I don't want no fat baby." Nezumi said.

"I thought you didn't care." Jurina said.

"I don't. It's just if Black is still with me and that kid grows up to be a fatty he'll eat me out of house and home!"

"You're horrible you know that."

"I know and do you think I care?"

"True. So how long is Black going to be gone?"

"For a couple of hours."

"Ok then in the meantime we'll just watch him until she gets back."

"Uh Jurina we have a problem."

"What?"

"He's gone."

"Eh?"

Jurina turned around and saw the baby was missing.

"Crap!"

Jurina started looking around but didn't see him anywhere.

"I thought you were watching him!"

"As soon as I put him down I no longer cared."

"Help me look for him!"

"No way. He's not my problem anymore."

"No but Black will be when she finds out YOU lost her kid."

"Holy crap you're right! Black is a friken nightmare when she's pissed."

"Well if you don't want that then help me look for him."

Jurina and Nezumi started searching all over the park for the baby but so far couldn't find him.

"What's his name?"

"I don't know!"

"You don't know his name?"

"I never took the time to learn it."

"Nezumi a word of advice, NEVER hacve kids."

"Not planning on it!'

Jurina and Nezumi kept searching and still couldn't find him. But then out of the corner of Jurina's eye hse saw him. He was on top of the jungle gym heading towards the edge.

"Ah Nezumi there he is!"

Jurina started running to the baby but wasn't going to make it in time. The baby crawled right off the edge and was now falling. Jurina coulnd't make it but then she felt something rush past her. Right before the baby hit the ground, Nezumi caught him midair and rolled a little.

"Itai!"

"You ok?"

"Yeah I'm fine. Stupid kid. Always causing nothing but trouble. If your mommy wasn't so hot you'd be out of my hair for good."

"Don't tell him that."

"It's the truth. Black is hot and a good worker which is why I keep her. But if I get rid of the kid then Black leaves too."

"Nezumi just stop I don't want to hear anymore."

Just then a woman walked over to Jurina.

"Excuse me young lady but is that your child?"

"Uh no he's not. He's hers." Jurina said pointing at Nezumi.

"No he's not mine!"

"Well my little Toji was wondering if he could play with him for a little bit."

"Um sure that's fine."

The woman brought her son over and set him next to Blacks. The two just stared at each other and did nothing.

"So how old is he?" the woman asked.

"I don't konw." Nezumi said.

"How do you not know? He is your son isn't he?"

"No. He's my friend's who I'm watching."

"Ahh I see. Oh look."

Jurina watched Black's son pick up a pebble and throw it at the other boy. He started crying and the mother got mad.

"Apologize to my Toji!"

"Hey not my problem."

"Aplogize now."

"Screw you!"

"What was that?"

"Get out of here before I kick your kid and send him flying across this park."

The woman grabbed her son and quickly ran away.

"You didn't have to do that." Jurina said.

"She was getting on my nerves." Nezumi said.

"Still. She'll probably be back."

"And if she comes back I'll be happy to beat her to a pulp."

"There's something wrong with you."

"So?"

Just then that same woman came back and she brought other moms with her.

"Look we don't want any trouble. But this isn't a place for violence." the woman said.

"Hey you're the one who started it." Nezumi said.

"We have no choice but to ask you to leave."

"I'm sorry but I can't."

"Well then we'll have to use force."

"Touch me or the kid and I'll rip your arms off."

Nezumi had a serious tone in her voice. Jurina could tell because of the look in her eyes. The look that said "I will kill you." The moms got scared and ran off saying they'd be back.

"We should probably leave now."

"No way. I want to see what they'll do."

A couple minutes later the moms came back and this time they had their huge husbands.

"Is this the brat honey?"

"Yeah that's her."

"Oh look who brought company? Too afraid to fight me for real so you called your husbands?"

"Listen here you!"

The man grabbed Nezumi by her hood and pulled her up.

"You apologize right now and we'll let you go."

"God you stink. Take a bath."

"Why you!"

The man was about to punch Nezumi but then she kicked him a place where the sun don't shine. The man collapsed and started screaming in pain.

"Honey!"

"Haha nut shot! That's ten points!"                                         

"You pay for that!"

The other guys started to come at Nezumi and during the mix up Jurina grabbed the baby and stepped back.

"Son watch your father at work!"

Nezumi grabbed one guy and broke his arm while breaking another guys leg. She took out two of them by stiking the backs of their knees and then bashing the face of another guy. Jurina thought Nezumi was going to when but then she noticed the moms sneaking up on Jurina.

"Nezumi help!"

"Uhh kinda busy here!"

Jurina couldn't fight while holding a baby. There's just no way. One of the moms was about to grab Jurina but then something threw her back. No one saw what happened but within seconds all the moms were knocked out. Standing before Jurina was Black and boy did she look mad.

"Yukirin!"

"Mayuyu what did you do!"

"I did nothing! These guys wanted to start a fight so I gave it to them!"

"You are in so much trouble when we get home."

"Yeah yeah just help!"

One of the men was about to hit Yukirin but she quickly moved out of the way and took him out.

"Uh I've had enough of this!"

Black walked over and and grabbed the bench that Nezumi had been sitting on. Black ripped it out from the ground and threw it at the men. They were all knocked back and Black took this chance and told Jurina and Rena to run. They ran all the way back to Nezumi's place.

"Care to explain to me what happened at the park?" Black said.

"I was just watching your kid when this mom got all pissy and started a fight." Nezumi said.

"Ok and why were you fighting while Jurina was holding my son. The one you were supposed to be watching!"

"I was busy defending them."

"Jurina almost got attacked by crazy moms!"

"But she didn't."

"Yeah because I showed up."

"Thank you for showing up when you did. But I could've handled it myself."

"That's it. I'm putting you in time out."

"Come on Black seriously? Well good luck trying because I'm not going-"

Before Nezumi could finish her sentence, Black used her super speed to handcuff Nezumi to her chair.

"Hey no fair!"

"This is punishment. Jurina you may want to leave. Things are about to get rough."

"You don't have to tell me twice."

On the way out, Jurina could of swore she heard the sound of a whip.

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Ahh I'm sorru this chapter is kinda short! I've been busy with work so spare me for a little ok? I'll be back as soon as I can. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chatper!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #211 on: August 07, 2012, 06:44:57 AM »
Oh God lord do I not want to be Mayuyu right now lol. Black really is scary when she's mad, haha. But Mayuyu and Jurina are so funny together, haha Mayuyu would be a pretty bad parent though, I don't think she should ever have kids either lol. It was hilarious when all the moms and the husbands tried to fight Jurina and Mayuyu though, luckily Black came just in time and saved them, otherwise who knows what could've happened to Jurina.

Well, I'll be waiting for the next update :D Also, don't worry take your time, I understand how time consuming work could be, so I will be waiting patiently :)

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #212 on: August 07, 2012, 10:50:48 AM »
wahhh~! I kinda missed a lot!

Rena become a perv, Atsuko baked a poisoned cake.........


and now Nezumi is punished~!!!! amusing~!
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #213 on: August 07, 2012, 03:32:31 PM »
"Son watch your father at work!"
Nezumi is the father of Yuki's kid  :on lol:
Nezumi is not a good father for her son  :hiakhiakhiak:
then she is punished by black poor Nezumi  :kekeke:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #214 on: August 07, 2012, 04:13:45 PM »
Nezumi should learn the boys name. The boy throws a rock at the kid and then everyone starts to fight Nezumi.
I wonder how Black knew that her son was in trouble or was it that she knew Nezumi won't be able to watch the kid.
Black is really scary when she is mad poor Nezumi getting punished. If Black knew that her son almost got hurt for falling off the jungle gym I wonder what would happen to Nezumi?
Jurina must be happy that she wasn't the one that got Black mad.

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #215 on: August 07, 2012, 05:02:44 PM »
I can't stop laugh  :hiakhiakhiak: Nezumi is really funny.

Nezumi have a punishment by Black. Black is really scary :OMG:, poor Nezumi  :gyaaah: .

It is really a interesting couple BlackNezu :luvluv1: in your fic XD

Update soon please  :peace:
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 14
« Reply #216 on: August 07, 2012, 06:15:15 PM »
@Sasshii: Indeed Black is very scary when she is mad. Nezumi is really in for it. She would not make a good parent in the future. That's why Black takes care of her son while Nezumi takes care of Black.  :wub:

@yuukimoko: Ahh Acchan's cooking is dangerous. And yes Nezumi got punished by Black for screwing up. But in the end I'm sure they still love each other.  :oops:

@mo-chan: Yes Nezumi is the father and although she isn't a good one, she's still the father.  :rofl:

@blackstar: Black has lke a mother's instinct where she knows when her child is in danger. Black is very scary when she is mad and I'm sure Black found out the earlier incident which would make her even more mad. Ahh poor Nezumi.  :(

@Pwety:Thank you for liking the chapter. Black is very scary which is why you don't mess with her. And don't worry, I'm sure Nezumi's punishment wasn't that bad.   :P

Well it appears everyone agrees with me when it comes to parenting, Nezumi is not good at it. I'm just glad the baby didn't get hurt. Anyways, here's chapter 15. This one shows a more softer side of Yuko that no one sees because she's always being a perv to Haurna. Enjoy!
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Chapter 15

"Nyannyan come back!"

"No I'm done with you! Mariko I quit."

"Torigoya you can't!"

"I'm sick and tired of that pervert always trying to make a move on me. I'm quitting and finding another job. Goodbye!"

Torigoya stormed out the building as Jurina walked in.

"What happened?" Jurina asked.

"Torigoya got tired of Yuko so she quit." Sado said.

"No way. Did you relally go that far with her?"

"I didn't mean to!" Yuko said.

"Well now I just lost one of my best girls. I'm probably gonna lose a ton of business now."

"Let me go talk to her. Yuko do you want to come with?"

"No I think I'm going to go cry in a corner now."

Yuko walked away with her head down.

"I'll go try to calm her. You go find Torigoya and get her back here."

"I will."

Jurina ran out the building after Torigoya. She found her sitting on a bench in front of a Takoyaki shop. Jurina walked over and sat next to her. They were silent at first but then Torigoya broke the silence.

"I'm not going back."

"But you have to. Yuko is a mess without you." Jurina said.

"And do you think I care?"

"Come on Torigoya. Where else are you going to go? Hosting was the only thing you were good at."

"I'll find another job. But I know I'm not going back there to that pervert."

"Just think about it Torigoya. You'll really be breaking Yuko's heart if you leave her."

"Good. I hope I do. That pervert needs to learn a couple things."

"But-"

"I'm leaving. Touch me and I'll send your brain into a suicide crash."

Torigoya got up and walked away leaving Jurina speechless. Jurina went back to the club where she found Yuko curled up into a ball facing the corner crying.

"How is she?"

"Not good. She's been like that for five hours." Sado said.

"Have you tried talking to her?" Jurina said.

"I have and she still won't come out. It's as if she's shut off or something."

"This is bad. Torigoya said she wasn't coming back and she sounded serious."

"Great. Well how about you try talking to her."

Sado walked away while Jurina walked over to Yuko.

"Hey."

Yuko was silent.

"I talked to Torigoya and she said she wasn't going to come back. I'm going to go back out to talk to her again. Is there anything you want me to tell her?"

"Tell her I'm sorry." Yuko said.

"Is that all?"

"No."

Yuko grabbed Jurina's face and held it close to hers.

"Tell her that I love her and would never do anything to hurt her. Tell her I'm sorry for everything and it won't happen again. Tell her I'll die without her."

"Got it."

Jurina ran out the building off to find Torigoya again. Jurina found Torigoya working at a grocery store at the register.

"What do you want?" Torigoya said.

"I came to deliver a message from Yuko." Jurina said,

"What does that pervert has to say now?"

"She says she sorry."

"Is that all?"

"She also says she loves you and would never hurt you and is sorry and that she'll die without you."

"I don't believe it."

"Well then take a look and see for yourself."

Jurina took Torigoya's hand and placed it on her head. Then Torigoya looked into Jurina's memories. She replayed the entire conversation with Yuko. Torigoya could see and hear everything Yuko was seeing. She could hear her desperate tone in her voice and the tears that werer pouring out. When Torigoya was finished, she let go and stepped back a little.

"Oh God she really is sorry."

"Yeah which is why we need to get back there and help her before she does anything crazy."

"Let's go."

Torigoya and Jurina started running to the door but then four men in ski masks came running in with guns.

"This is a robbery! Everyone get down!"

He shot some rounds in the air making everyone get down.

"Who the hell are these guys?"

"I don't know but we gotta get past them."

"How?"

"You!"

One of the men pointed at Torigoya.

"Open the cash register and fill this bag with all the money."

The man tossed a bag at Torigoya and she did what she was told. Then she tossed the bag back and the man checked it. Once he saw all the money was there, he looked back at Torigoya.

"Strip."

"What?"

"Strip. Or I blow her head off." the man said as he held the gun up to Jurina's head.

Torigoya had no choice but to do what she was told. She took off her shirt and pants and stopped at the bra.

"All of it!"

Torigoya was about to take off her bra when suddenly something crashed in through the window. It rolled over to the man aiming the gun at Jurnina and knocked him out. When the man fell down, Jurina saw it was Yuko standing next to her.

"Yuko!"

"Nyannyan get down!"

As Torigoya ducked down, Yuko pulled out a knife and threw it at one of the guys who was about to shoot Yuko.

"What are you going here?" Torigoya asked.

"I saw your store was under attack so I came to help."

"You idiot! You're gonna get killed!"

"Well at least I'll die protecting the one I love."

Yuko jumped in the air and attacked another guy. She easily broke his neck and then started to run for cover. But the last guy shot at Yuko and managed to hit her leg. Yuko fell and cried in pain.

"Got you now bitch!"

"Hands off!"

The man turned around and right when he did, Torigoya grabbed his face and sent him in a trance. Jurina saw what Torigoya meant by putting your brain in a suicide crash as she watched the man start screaming and hitting his head with random things. Then he finally took his gun and shot himself in the head.

"What did you do to him?"

"I made him think there were rats in his brain and they were eating it."

"That's scary." Jurina said.

"I know."

"Nyannyan are you ok?" Yuko asked.

"I'm fine. I'm more worried about you. You got shot in the leg."

"Oh it's nothing. Nothing a little stiches and some bandages won't fix."

"You're crazy you know."

"Yeah I'm crazy for you."

"Come here you pervert."

Torigoya leaned in and kissed Yuko holding her close. Even though Yuko's leg was bad, her arms still moved and Jurina saw Yuko starting to unhook Torigoya's bra.

"Hey not here. Wait until we get home."

"Ok!"

Torigoya picked Yuko up and carried her out the store. Meanwhile Jurina herself left and started to walk back home. On the way, she ran into Gakuran who seemed a little scared.

"Hey Gakuran what's wrong?"

"You gotta help me man." Gakuran said.

"What did you do?" Jurina said.

"I was hitting on this girl when her boyfriend showed up and got really mad. I'm running from him now."

"Gakuran you really need to stop hitting on any girl you see."

"Yeah yeah but for now help! He's right behind me."

"Where did you go!"

Jurina looked past Gakuran and saw a very very large man heading straight for them.

"Crap Gakuran you really did it. Run!"

The two started running as fast as they could with a walking Rhino coming after them.

"I thought you were going to fight him!"

"Hell no!"

"So what do we do?"

"Just keep running!"

"Come here you!"

"AHHHHH!"

Jurina and Gakuran kept running until they were about to reach a dead end. But then suddenly Choukoku got in the way and they ended up crashing into her.

"What the hell? Gakuran? Jurina? What are you running from?"

"THAT!"

Gakuran pointed at the man who was charging full speed at them.

"What did you do!"

"We'll tell you later just help us!"

"Fine."

Choukoku stood up and readied herself for a huge hit. The man came straight at Choukoku rammed right into her. But instead of flying back, Choukoku held and was only pushed back a little. The man tried to shove Choukoku out of the way but she held on. Then Choukoku picked the man up high into the air and threw him all the way across the street. He landed on top of a car making a huge indent.

"UHO!"

"Yay Akigori wins!"

"Shut up Gakuran!"

"Thanks for helping us out." Jurina said.

"No problem. I'm usually the one that has to bail Gakuran out of trouble."

"Thank you Choukoku!"

Gakuran ran up and kissed Choukoku on the cheek.

"Mou you really know how sway a girl."

"Haha Choukoku will always be a girl!"

"Whoever said I wasn't?"

Gakuran and Jurina just laughed while Choukoku looked mad. But then out of nowhere the same man from before walked over to Choukoku.

"What you still wanna fight?"

The man was silent.

"Well?"

He looked like he was about swing at her but instead her reached over to the flower bed next to her and ripped them up. He held them up to Choukoku and said,

"I like you."

"Uh oh."

"Aww look Choukoku he likes you!"

"Shut up Gakuran."

"I like you!"

He tried to hug Choukoku but Choukoku ran as fast as she could away.

"Have fun you two!"

"I'm gonna kill you Gakuran!"

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Chapter 15 done! I hopw everyone enjoyed it and please tell me what you think. Ahh Yuko really does care for Nyannyan. And Choukoku always has Gakuran's back no matter what happenes. Now that's what I call friendship.

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 15
« Reply #217 on: August 07, 2012, 07:38:33 PM »
Torigoya is really scary.  :OMG:
Jurina got to see what would have happen to her if she touch Torigoya when she told her not to.
Poor Jurina, Gakuran wanted her to help fight but she ended up being chased.
Gakuran is lucky to always have Choukoku backing her up.
lol The guy ended up liking Choukou and now she is the one getting chased.  :mon tantrum2:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 15
« Reply #218 on: August 07, 2012, 08:49:59 PM »
WOW, Haruna found a new job super fast lol did she just walk into the grocery store and the manager was like 'YOU'RE HIRED', I wish I could find jobs like she can haha.
But, good thing Yuko came to the rescue! Without her Torigoya and Jurina would've definitely gotten in some big trouble.
The part with Sae and Sayaka was hilarious though, poor Sayaka, the guy ended up liking her instead haha, it was kind of cute.
Anyways, update soon :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 15
« Reply #219 on: August 07, 2012, 09:43:53 PM »
Yuko is cool  :cool1:
Torigoya was so scary  :scared:
Jurina is always in trouble  :on lol:
you didn't talk about Rena in these two chapters  :dunno:

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