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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: anakpanti on September 24, 2013, 12:06:31 PM
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PROLOGUE
"Don't walk from that street."
"Don't go to school by your bicycle, tomorrow."
"Keep your eyes open."
"Don't sleep in a train on next Thursday."
"Stay away from all red light."
"No! No!! I don't want to. Who are you?! Stay away from me!!" I'm breathless, I can't control my heartbeats, and my voice didn't come out. "Kyaaaaa....!!!!"
"Matsui!!! Matsui!!! Wake-up!"
I open my eyes, my body sweating too much. "Mom?" I get up and hug my mother.
"Honey.. what's going on? You startled me. Nightmare?"
"Yes..." I cry.
"Don't worry.. you'll be fine. I will sleep with you here."
Bad dreams again. I always hear a strange voice almost every night. Voice and dark. Who is it?
That voice always say some warning that can't be refused.
One day, I try to not obey one of those words.. but something bad happened. Even if I didn't do it because I'm forget, that voice will came to my mind in the daylight too.
I need sleep, but If I sleep.. that voice can be heard over and over again.
I'm afraid... I'm scared..
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"Why don't you obey me?!" A big voice came from nothing.
"I am sorry. My fault." She knelt.
"Are you falling in love with that girl?!"
".........."
"You will get your punishment."
Then.. that big voice gone.
"Forgive me."
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Is this worthy to continued? I'm confused.. This suddenly came to my mind. Thanks.
As usual, I will make this in 4 shots. :)
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wow this sounds cool!
I'm curious! Please continue o/
which Matsui is that?!!! ><
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wow this sounds cool!
I'm curious! Please continue o/
which Matsui is that?!!! ><
the same question and o.o sound interesting and weird?(? XD contii :bow:
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This sounds interesting. :w00t:
You rock. (All your stories are...........wow).
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Original, it looks so original! ;) ;)
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This is creepy and interesting at the same time. :twothumbs
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I am excited for this! Waiting patiently for the rest of the history ^.^
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This sounds interesting. :w00t:
You rock. (All your stories are...........wow).
Hi. Zita-san..
Thanks for reading my fanfics.
Btw.. I just look a tumblr link in your signature.
Your sketch are so cool.
I can't drawing. I have no talent there.
I always imagine.. It'll be nice to make a cover picture for my fanfics, but... I can't!!
:frustrated:
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Thanks for your support..
I will give my best to write this.
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I'm not sure which Matsui is that (yet)... actually, in my prologue.. there're 2 person there.
I have to decide it today. :D
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Thank you. :grin:
If you want I can draw some for you.
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Thank you. :grin:
If you want I can draw some for you.
I want. I want. I really want it. :pleeease:
Thanks for your kindness.. :mon lovelaff:
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OK, what you want. :grin:
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noooo
what is happening??
continue soon!!
thanks
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OK, what you want. :grin:
"Promise Me" is my favorite... Jurina as a street fighter and Rena as an actress/singer.
I'm really glad if you decide to make it one. XD
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When I finish it I'll let you know.
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PART 1
Someone touched my shoulder. “Jurina.. Jurina.. Jurina!”
"Hm?"
"What are you looking at? Let’s go home."
I pointed a girl. “Who is that?” She’s so white… no, that’s too white, she looks pale. Wow.. such a black hair, too contrast compared to her skin.
"Ughh.. I told you, Jurina.. please do not sleeping in the class! She is Rena, she just transferred here today."
"So, why she didn’t introduced herself in front of our class?" I still looking at her. So beautiful, I can’t believe there’s kind of human like that. I smiled.
I feel a book thrown to my head, “Owh!! It’s hurt, Churi!!” I looks back, then I staring Churi.
"I told you to not sleep! She already introduced herself 2 hours ago. Tsk." Churi shook her head.
I rolled my eyeballs. “Are you jealous at me? I always sleep in the class and unfortunately my grades were better than you?” I grinned.
I tidied up my book and then I went out from my class. I glanced the new girl one more time, she still sit there and reading a book.
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"Mom, I’m home!" I climbed the stairs, and then I laying on my bed. "Ahh… my bed."
Why my friends keep teasing me about my sleep habit? I know that I often sleep in the class, but there’s a reason behind it. I sighed.
*FLASHBACK*
"Don’t walk from that street."
"Don’t go to school by your bicycle, tomorrow."
"Keep your eyes open."
"Don’t sleep in a train on next Thursday."
"Stay away from all red light."
"No! No!! I don’t want to. Who are you?! Stay away from me!!" I’m breathless, I can’t control my heartbeats, and my voice didn’t come out. "Kyaaaaa….!!!!"
"Matsui!!! Matsui!!! Wake-up!"
I open my eyes, my body sweating too much. “Mom?” I get up and hug my mother.
"Honey.. what’s going on? You startled me. Nightmare?"
"Yes…" I cry.
"Don’t worry.. you’ll be fine. I will sleep with you here."
Bad dreams again. I always hear a strange voice almost every night. Voice and dark. Who is it?
That voice always say some warning that can’t be refused.
One day, I try to not obey one of those words.. but something bad happened. Even if I didn’t do it because I’m forget, that voice will came to my mind in the daylight too.
I need sleep, but If I sleep.. that voice can be heard over and over again.
I’m afraid… I’m scared..
*END OF FLASHBACK*
I hear it since I was 5, it keep happened for 10 years. I keep lack of sleep back then, I’m afraid of sleep.
Now, I’m 17. It’s been 2 years I never hear that voice, scary voices… I don’t ever wanna know why it’s gone.
I wish that I never hear it again, forever.
"Jurina!! Come and eat your lunch." My mom called me from the kitchen.
"I’m sleepy, mom. I will eat it later." After few minutes, I fell sleep.
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“Jurina… Jurina……..”
I open my eyes immediately, then I stand up, “Yes sir!!”
They shocked and look at me.
"I didn’t call you, Jurina." My teacher and my classmates laugh at me.
I’m blushing. Oh, this is embarrassing. I looked back, “Churi, don’t ever wake me up except for important thing!!”
Churi stop laughed, “I didn’t wake you up. You must be dreaming." Then.. they laugh again.
I’m not dreaming! I hear it clearly. Ahh.. someone must be joking with me.
I saw everyone laugh, except.. Rena. She smiled without look at me, she still staring her book. I remember that it’s been a month she entered this classroom, but I never talk to her. Hell yeah.. I’m too busy with my ‘sleeping’.
DING DONG!
Finally, lunch time. I Iooked around, everybody taking out their bento. I forgot my bento. I sighed. Ah, maybe I can eat Tonkatsu in a small restaurant behind this school.
I look at Rena, she didn’t eat anything yet. So, she forget her bento too. I grinned then I walk to Rena’s desk, “Hi, wanna eat together?”
"No."
What?! “Why?” She still silent, “Urgh.. Fine! Then.. I’m going first.” I turn and walk away.
"Because I don’t like meat."
I stopped. How can she kn-
"Why don’t we just go to convenience store? I wanna eat salad." She smiled.
She smile.. She smile to me!! Sooooo… beautiful, I love it. Why Churi didn’t have a smile like that? Maybe if she has, She didn’t need to put too much effort to wake me up.. because I will stand up immediately when she call me.
She chuckled, “Why do you just stand there? Let’s go.. I’m hungry.”
I run toward her. We walk together to a convenience store, not too far. “So.. why you transferred here, Rena? Wait.. what’s you family name? I feel uncomfortable to directly calling your nickname.”
"My name is Rena, just Rena. Did you sleep in a class at that time?"
I scratch my head, “yeahh.. sorry. I always feel sleepy in a class.”
She open her salad, “I know.”
I stop eating my curry rice, “Eh? Are you stalking me?”
She laugh, “Not really. I often see you because you look cute when you’re sleeping”
I’m blushed, but I look away quickly. “Well.. Thanks.”
"Hahahahaha.. Are you just shy?! I can’t believe someone like you can shy."
"Someone like me?" I’m offended.
"Ahhh…. I’m full!! Let’s go back to school. Break time will over soon."
"Don’t worry, I just received a message from Churi. She said Mr. Tanaka can’t teach today because he’s sick."
She shook her head, “He’s on the way.”
"……"
We go back to the school.
"Rena.. you go to the class first. I ‘wanna go to the bathroom."
She look at me, no.. she more look like.. observing me.
"Okay. But you’ll regret if you do it." She walk away.
What’s she thinking? I can’t go to the toilet?! She’s so weird.
I go to the toilet. I wanna back to the class, but someone called me. “Matsui-san, let’s play to the music room. You can sing, right?”
Is that mean.. she ask me to skip my class? …… No. I’m forget. Mr. Tanaka still sick. "Right. Let’s go then."
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"Jurina… I’m watching you."
I feel someone whispering to me, then I gasped. I open my eyes. I-I’m afraid.. Why?Why? "Aaaaaaaaaa!!!!! NO! NO NO! That voice come back. WHY??!! No.. That was only my imagination."
I close my eyes and try to sleep again.
"I’m back."
I clenched my teeth, “Go away!!”
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"Matsui-san. Why you skip my class last week?"
"I.. I think you you’re still sick, Mr.. Tanaka." I look to the ground.
"Matsui, me and other teachers in this school always concern about you. We let you often sleep in the class because you grades was great. But, it seems you became didn’t respect to us anymore.”
"No sir. That’s not the case."
"Tell your mom to come tomorrow."
"But Sir… I didn’t mean to do it."
"I have a class." He walk away.
I’m so stressful. I enter my class.
"Jurina. What’s Mr. Tanaka said? Sorry, I can’t tell you right away because he suddenly came." Churi and my friends seems worried about me.
"I’m okay, Churi. Thanks for your help."
I wanna go back to my desk, but I look Rena smirked at me. I became so angry and come to her, “What are you looking at?! Do you think it’s funny?” I grabbed her collar, “What are you laughing at?!”
Her smile gone. “I already told you before.”
*FLASHBACK*
Rena shook her head, “He’s on the way.”
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"Okay. But you’ll regret if you do it." Rena walk away.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
How… How she know that? Even Churi, a prefect, she didn’t know about that.
Suddenly I feel dizzy. "Jurina.. Let her go!!"
I release her collar. Damn voice! If I meet you, I will kick your butt!! I don’t care who you are.
I calmly back to my desk, and I swear that I saw Rena’s smirked at me again.
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It’s been 2 months since that voice came back. I never sleep in a class, I even lack of sleep! My eyelids and below my eyes became so darker. I even can’t open my eyes widely… I’m a half sleep - half awake.
My friends, teachers, and my mom became so worried about me. Mr. Tanaka even keep asking is this his fault or not. He feels guilty.
I walked home because this morning the voice say so. Last time I ignore it, a bus that I ride.. hit the tree and almost fall in to the cliff. Even if I’m so tired, I keep walking.
"Jurina!!"
I looked back lazily. Rena??!!
"Hi. Are you okay? You act strange lately."
"Are you stalking me?! Ohh.. do you wanna said that I’m crazy?"
"No. I wanna walk with you." She look to the front.
"Hm?"
"I said.. I wanna walk with you. I wanna walk with you everyday if it needed. I always love your lively, friendly, cool, and lovely side. But lately.. it’s all suddenly gone."
"Rena.. are you sick or something?" Actually.. I don’t have anything to say. This's too shocking me.
"I know that you will not tell your problem because I’m not your friend yet. But I will try harder to become your friend until you feel comfortably to tell your problem. Can we be friends?" She look at me.
That… that… that shy, that blushing check, that sad smile.. then.. her tears drops. Now I’m sure that she really care about me.
"Sure, Rena." I smiled, the I hugged her. Suddenly.. I feel that I’m not alone in this world. Although I can’t tell her about that voice this time, at least… From now on, I can see her beautiful smile. I’m not sure about what I feel, but.. I feel relieved every time I saw her smile.
"Thanks Jurina. Let’s face it together." She hug me back. "Ehm.. Jurina. You can release your hug now, everybody looking us."
I look around. Opss… I’m forget that we’re still on the street.
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Cool fic
Rena know everything is going to happen cool :lol:
what will happen next :?
please continue :bow:
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:twothumbs
voices... I love it! wmatsui~ ♥
rena is strange...maybe she's related with the voice that hunt jurina...?
can't wait for the next update! :twothumbs
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:twothumbs
voices... I love it! wmatsui~ ♥
rena is strange...maybe she's related with the voice that hunt jurina...?
can't wait for the next update! :twothumbs
exactly what passed through my mind!
Thank you for the update. I'm eagerly waiting the update! You are getting better and better *.*
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I think rena has the same voice like jurina but maybe its different
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Rena is interesting person there.
That voice what Jurina hears, is it Rena?
Btw I have half of picture done. :grin:
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Cool fic
Rena know everything is going to happen cool :lol:
what will happen next :?
please continue :bow:
I'm sure that I will continue this. I will upload the next part by tomorrow.
Thanks for reading. :)
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:twothumbs
voices... I love it! wmatsui~ ♥
rena is strange...maybe she's related with the voice that hunt jurina...?
can't wait for the next update! :twothumbs
exactly what passed through my mind!
Thank you for the update. I'm eagerly waiting the update! You are getting better and better *.*
I think both of you can read my mind. :shocked
I'll let reader's imagination flew. It's the exciting part of writing fan fiction.
@BbSis : Wow... I'm happy if you think I'm getting better. :D
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I think rena has the same voice like jurina but maybe its different
Well.. in Part 3, I'm going to write Rena P.O.V.. Let's see if our imagination will same or not about Rena. :P
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Rena is interesting person there.
That voice what Jurina hears, is it Rena?
Btw I have half of picture done. :grin:
It'll be revealed tomorrow in next chapter. :D
wow, cool... you're fast. I can't wait to see it. :on woohoo:
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wooow!!
its rare that rena can predict the future!
I think maybe she also hears the voice, like Jurina, but it does not affect you the same way.
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PART 2
"Rena chaaaannn…" I’m clinging to her.
"Hm?!" She still focus on her book.
So.. this is a proper time to give surprise attack. *CHU*
"Jurina-san…!! Why do you kiss me?! People will misunderstood." She put down her book, then she look at me. She angry at me, but unfortunately.. she can’t hide her blushing cheek.
This is always works. I grinned. “If you didn’t wanna kissed by me, then look at me when I talk.”
"I know what you wanna talking about…. my answer is still ‘NO’. I already said it for 10th times, Jurina. Get over it."
She about to hold her book again, but I grab it and put it to another table behind me. Rena wanna take it but I hold her hand, “Rena… please. Next week is a school holiday for 3 days, we can’t waste it!”
"No. Give my book back, NOW.."
Last week, Churi invite me and other classmates to stay in her villa. She said that her parents offered us to enjoy our vacation there.
Actually, that’s not the case. I don’t mind if I must spend my holiday in home and stuck in it .. but it’s because this’s the first time that damn voice didn’t show itself when I planned to do a fun stuff. I can’t waste this chance!
I gave her book. “OK, then I’ll go.”
"No, you can’t."
Urgh. This’s the real problem. I didn’t push her to come with us, but she drag me to don’t go too. "You don’t have the right to preventing me."
"Jurina…" She sighed. "Okay… I’m in." She look away.
I see her worried face. What happen, Rena? Why you look down? Sorry if I troubling you.
"Nothing Jurina.. I’m okay. I just thinking to buy extra medicine because I get cold easily." She said it without look at me.
*doki doki* My heart beat faster and I feel my hand become so cold. But I try hard to not thinking about it, I think about happy thing randomly.
Rena touch my hand, “Jurina, are you okay?”
"I’m okay. I just too happy because you change your mind." I smile. "Sorry.. I need to go home first. My mom ask me to accompany her to the market." I carry my bag. "Churi, we both will come."
"Nice." Churi smile.
I walk faster until I passed the school’s gate. Then a girl suddenly appear beside me. I’m totally shocked.
"So, you did it?" She smirked.
I’m confuse, “who are you?”
“This is me. I already give you my protection, you can think freely now. Don’t act too much, other people will suspicious.”
I try to act natural. “Oh, you? You’re not as scary as your voice.” I grinned.
"Don’t change the subject." She staring me.
I’m scared, her eyes looks different. “Yes, I did it.”
"Good. I can’t protect you too long. So, In your mind… I will show up as your childhood friend, called Mayuyu. Remember.. 23.50." Then she’s disappeared.
She told me to act naturally but she dissapear in front of many people. I looked around, they didn’t realize anything.
"I will go. Don’t thinking any suspicious thing!"
Okay. I take a deep breath. I’m ready. Go.
After that, I feel like…. normal.
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I’m laying on my bed. I make sure that my mom already slept. I look my watch over and over again. Ahh… 23:50:05. "Mayu, you can come out."
She appear in front of me. “Waaaa!!!!!” Sh-she’s not look like cute girl with 2 ponytails in her hair that I saw this afternoon. After she saw I’m frightened, she transform to ‘Mayuyu’.
"Sorry for surprise you. I forgot." She laugh. A scary laugh.
I can’t blink, I’m trembling. ”Who-who are you?!! No….. Wh-WHAT ARE YOU??!!!” I grab a vase and throw it to her, but she catch it easily. She make that vase flying then it placed to my desk again.
"I’m the voice. Now you can see me." She laugh.
I’m scared. My body sweating too much. But I realize it, “You’re lying. I know exactly that voice. It haunts me for 10 years. Do you think I’m too stupid to forget it?!”
She laugh again. “You’re smart. We only have 20 minutes. Now, take your book and pretend to read. I will dissapear, you can talk with your mind.”
I did as she said, I’m too afraid to refuse it. What is it?
"You already know that she can read your mind."
*FLASHBACK*
I see her worried face. What happen, Rena? Why you look down? Sorry if I troubling you.
"Nothing Jurina.. I’m okay. I just thinking to buy extra medicine because I get cold easily." She said it without look at me.
*doki doki* My heart beat faster and I feel my hand become so cold. But I try hard to not thinking about it, I think about happy thing randomly.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
I sighed. Yes.
"And you already know that she can see what will happen too."
Yes.
"Now walk to the window and pretend to close your curtain. Do you see something above that house?"
I obey her because I’m too curious about what’s that mean. Re-RENA?!! She sit on my neighbor’s roof. Her eyes….. gold?! Her eyes glowing like a lamp.
"Yes, she comes here every night to watch you. She’s become more weaker at 23.50 until 00.10. So she can’t watch you from afar."
Do you mean that…. she really stalking me?! You’re lying.
"We both in the same side. I’m really sure that you’re curious about her. I will not tell you the truth…. but I will show it to you." She smirked.
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"Rena, let me help you." I carried her bag. "Why do you bring a lot? We just stay here for 3 days, not run away from home forever."
She laughed. “Just in case we need all of it. Sorry for troubling you.”
Rena… who are you?? You didn’t looks like a bad person. But why that ‘Mayuyu’ seems to hate you? I sighed.
"What’s wrong, Jurina? Is my bag too heavy?"
"No." I smiled at her.
"Jurina… I can hear you."
Ugh.. Mayu!! Can you give me some privacy? This is my own mind.
"OK, as you wish." then her voice is gone.
Mayu give me some of her ‘protection’, I don’t know what it means. But right now… I know Rena can’t read my mind, she can’t see anything about me. Mayu manipulate my memory.
I think Rena confuse about it too, but she didn’t dare to ask me. But I’m really thankful about it.. because Rena wouldn’t know that I always thinking about her. Is this a love?
"Jurina, I still can hear you."
"Mayu!!!!!" Everybody look at me, then I just smiled at them. Mayu, don’t bothering me or I won’t do our plan.
"Okay-okay. I really leave now." her voice changed, "Don’t ever threatening me again. I can kill you now if I want."
I forgot that she’s (maybe) not a human. I think I’m wrong to think that we can be friends. My head feels dizzy and I’m about to fall.
Rena holds me. “Are you really okay?”
"Yes, sure." I can stand with my feet again.
"Guys…. let’s make a camp fire tonight!!" Churi looks excited.
All my friends cheering.
Actually.. I never know that Churi’s family is so rich. This place is not only big, but very luxurious. There’re 2 swimming pools and a large gardens in it.
I have a same room with Rena and with 2 other friends. I’m not really want to mention it but…. Rena and I will sleep in a same bed too. Right, how stressful!
All of us already finished bath, we go to the back side of this villa. Some housekeepers and guards help us to make a camp fire. After the fire is big enough, they left us.
Churi stand, “I’m really happy that 20 of us wanna spent our holiday in my place. I’m really glad.” Churi stopped for a while because some of our friends claps and cheering. “Tomorrow, we will go to the beach. But now, I know all of you already hungry.. so let’s start our barbecue party. Yeaahhh!!!”
Music played. We talk to each other and have fun. I didn’t know that Churi will prepare so many portion of meat. We became so full and then one by one my friend ‘dying’ on the bed. They fall asleep.
Rena and I was the last who ‘life’. We still sit near the camp fire.
"Jurina, let’s go inside. Everybody already tired, we need a rest too." She going to stand up but I reach her hand.
"I’m still wanna sit here with you." I look at her eyes.
She smile and sit again, “Okay. But, we didn’t really talked too much since morning.”
"I wanna know you better." I avoiding her eyes, I’m afraid that she’ll notice my nervousness. "It’s been months you moved here, but I didn’t know anything about you except your name is Rena."
"No one ask me, so I think I don’t need to expose myself." She chuckled. "Well.. what’s you want to know?"
I put a big wood in to the fire because it became too small, we will catch a cold. “Where do you come from? I mean.. your house before you moved here.”
"I live in a rural place, far from this town.”
"Oh. How about your parents? I think that I never saw them."
"I don’t have parents. I life alone since I was born."
"Really?!" How can she still life anyway. I’m dumbfounded. “Where’s your house? You never ask me to play there.” I pouted.
"You never ask me to play in your house too." She grinned.
Because you’ll see my nervousness if you come to my home, I’m not gonna say it. “Then.. why you can enter our school easily in the middle of year? No one can’t do that before.”
"Really? Maybe it’s because our principal thinks that I’m special. You know…. I’m smart." She laughed.
"You’re so full about yourself." I laugh too. "when’s your birthd-"
She peck my lips. I don’t believe it.
"Jurina.. you really curious about many things." She smiled. "I’m curious about something too. Is there something happened to you lately?"
As I thought, she already aware about it. "Not really, why?"
"Nothing." She’s silent for a while. "Let’s go inside, it’s already too cold."
"Okay." I stand up.
"Jurina, our plan!! She just try to change the subject!" Mayu seems so angry.
I don’t know where I got this courage. I don’t care anymore. I don’t care who is she. Because all I need to know is I really love her.
"You will regret this!!" That words echoed in my head.
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We already awake in the early morning to go to the beach. In the middle of the way, Mayu whisper to me.
"Back to the villa and you will see the truth. Don’t let Rena see you."
I look around, Rena isn’t here. ”Sorry guys, I forgot something. You can go first.” I run back to the villa.
I saw Rena and Mayu talking behind the villa. Did-did they know each other?? They’re fooled me?! I walk more closer so I can hear what are they talking about. I walk slowly and hiding behind the wall.
I can hear them, but…. I don’t understand what they’re talking about. They speak in a different language.
I watch them carefully. I can’t trust anyone. I saw Mayu got angrier, then she transformed in to another form. I’ve seen this before, Mayu changed her appearance became a scary one. The one that I saw in my room few days ago.
I close my eyes and my mouth because I’m going to scream. I frightened. I feel my neck grabbed by someone. I feel…. flying! I open my eyes. I’m shocked.
I glanced down. It’s…. it’s.. a cliff. I’m hovering on it. I’m panicked and afraid. I can’t breath. Mayu’s hand hold my neck too tight.
"Re-re-rena.. he-help me............" I cried. Rena still look at me in a blank stare. She didn’t do anything. I hear Mayu laughing.
"If you don’t wanna say the truth, then… I will kill her." After Mayu said that, she release her hand from my neck. I’m falling to the cliff. At the moment, I saw Rena look at me in a strange way. My tears drops, then I close my eyes. They’re really going to kill me. I’ll die. Goodbye mom… Goodbye world.
The gravitation pulling me faster. I can feel that I’m going to hit the ground. But.. I feel something grab my body and I fly away from the ground.
I open my eyes…… I can’t blinked. What is it??!!
It has the gold eyes. All over it’s body seems black. It has a pair of black wings. Half of it’s head just skull and didn’t covered by skin or flesh. The another side of it’s head seems normal….. No way!!!
I know who is it!! This looks similar with Mayu, when Mayu is in her ‘scary form’ too. Rena….. isn’t a human too? who exactly are they?! I cried hardly. Why everything became so scary and confusing?
Rena’s put me down on the floor.
"Rena… No. Shino, finally.. you show yourself!!!" Mayu flying inside and laugh.
I can’t move, then I look around. Everybody in this villa didn’t move too… They became stones. I struggled hard to move but it’s useless.
"Shut up, Zen!! I’ll fight with you later." Rena staring Mayu in a scary way.
Tha-That voice……………. My eyes closed and everything become dark. I heard Rena whispering in a different voice, “I’m sorry Jurina………………”
I haven’t knew all yet, but most of it became more clear. I can open my eyes again. I saw my friends already back from the beach. I look outside, it’s already dark.
Churi help me to get up, “Why you didn’t come? We’re so worried! You’re fainting. Are you sick?”
"Where is Rena?"
They looks confuse. Churi frowning ”Who is Rena?”
No way! It’s just happened a few second ago.
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This is my first fantasy-fanfic. I’m afraid to disappoint you. :’(
Rena P.O.V. will be written in the next part.
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Okay i really need the next part
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Parte 3 go! Yeah i read this and wonder what so special about jurina?
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wahh...Jurina saw Rena's real identity...what is she?
and Mayu too...
Then.... NEXT PART!!!!! :twothumbs
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PART 3
And again.. I must go to the human world to do my duty. It’s quite funny… I never like my job, but I was born as Shinigami. Really funny.
Although that I’m not kill them because I want it, but it’s always tickle me when I saw their sad face and plead me to not bring them. I can’t do anything… It’s their destiny to die, it’s already writen by God.
I always feel envious when I saw the angel did their job. They bring a peace to the human world. Human always praise them. Human always smile when they saw them.
I can’t understand. Angel and Shinigami have a same job.. do everything that ordered by God, but in different situation. Human always cursing us. They’re so afraid of us.
I’m flapping my wings and down to the earth. I open my list. There’re 2 name who will die today. I must take their life as soon as I can. Death is not as scary as human thought.
Usually, human can’t see us. Only dying people who can see us. I stopped on the top of a building. I look around. Human became so smarter lately, they can create anything that they need. I’ve been life for over a thousand years (based on human calendar), so I know how hard they develop this place.
BRAAAKKKK!!!
There’s a sound of car accident. I fly down quickly. I landed right beside the crushed car. There are 3 people in it. I take my list again to make sure that I’m not taking the wrong person.
Jurina Matsui (Female - 4 years old) and Kenta Matsui (Male - 32 years old).. I leave a woman and then I take a men, he just obey me. I hold his hand and help him to take off his body.
After he completely die, I hold a child.
That man said, “Please don’t take my daughter. She must life, her journey still long enough.”
I look at him, “This is God’s order. I must obey it.” I really wanna smile and speak softly, but I’m not designed to do it. So, my words became so cold and scary.
I look back to this little girl. I want to take her soul slowly so she won’t feel any pain. But before I do that, she's awake!! She look straight to my eyes.
I feel hypnotized, It’s the first time for me to see a human didn’t afraid of me. She raise her little hand and touch my face. Wh-What is this?! I can’t move. That little girl give me a big smile.
She look at her father, “Otosan…” She said it in a very cute way.
That man answered her, “Don’t worry Jurina. You must be happy with mom.”
It’s not like my plan. Wh-Why?!
I release her hand, “Go. Life long.” I grab her father soul and I fly away. That men said to me, “Thanks. I always believe that shinigami is not evil.”
When I go back to our kingdom. I keep thinking about that little girl. No one of us realize that I leave 1 soul on earth. From now on, I won’t look human eyes again when I take their life. It’s to avoid this thing happened again.
I keep watching her. When I have my job on the earth, I go early so I can watch her from closer. She grow up very well. But after a year, I became so over protective to her.
I don’t know it’ll turned like this. If shinigami failed to bring someone soul, the death will follows them until they died.
I always come when she sleep and whispering some warning. I have a power to know the future. Without I realize it, I’m abusing my powers.
After 10 years, God knows what I’ve done. He's really angry.
"Why you didn’t take her life?"
"But.. she grow up well. She became a really good person. How can you tell me to take her life?"
"Are you doubt my decision? I do that to create a balance in their world! They’re my creature, no one love them as much as I do!!"
"But-"
"Why don’t you obey me?!" A big voice came from nothing.
"I am sorry. My fault." I knelt.
"Are you falling in love with that girl?!"
"………."
"You will get your punishment."
Then.. that big voice gone.
"Forgive me."
A demon grab my hand and drag me, “You will dropped to the hell for 300 years.”
I gasped. “How long it will be in the human world?”
"2 years." He laughed.
Jurina, please be save. God, please don’t ordering other shinigami to take her life…. I-I will do it by myself.
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It’s been 2 years. I got my freedom. The first thing that I do is flying to her house. I looking for her, I see her sleeping. Ohh.. thankfully you’re okay. I want to cry and smile, but I can’t do that. God, thanks.
I got another punishment, I can’t do Shinigami job for 75 years.. it’s mean 6 month in human world. So, I use my ‘free time’ to observe her. I transformed myself became a human, I’m not fully became a human.. I just change my appearance seems like them.
I entered her school and I even have a same class with her. I know everything, so school stuff is too easy for me.
When the first time she talked to me, my lips became so stiff. I always answer her in a bad way.
One night, I came to her house and whisper to her. “Jurina… Jurina… I’m back.”
I try to say it as nice as I can, but she still afraid of me. It’s hurtful.
After that, I learn to talk nicely and smile. One day.. I saw her walking into her home, I whispering her to do so. I call her name, “Jurina!! I wanna walk with you.” I smile. She smile at me back!! I did it!!
I always laugh when I read her mind. She’s so funny. I know she have an interest to me.
Yeahh.. It’s seems ridiculous. A Shinigami learn how to smile?! Silly.
After that our relationship become more and more better.
But one day, there’s a strange thing. Suddenly, I can’t read her mind anymore. It’s make me so worried.
I know something will happen in Churi’s place if I and Jurina go there. I kept resist her to not going, but she’s too stubborn. I gave up.
This is really happened. I meet Zen, we talked using our language.
"Zen. So, you’re a root of all problem here. You’re ‘Mayuyu’ in her memory? I know that’s was fake. I know her since she still a child." She’s Zen and she’s really bad Shinigami.
"You are the problem! Why do you talk with a human?! I will tell this to God, so it’ll my job to take that girl’s life." She laughed.
"Are you stupid or what? God must be know this. He didn’t angry at me maybe because God has another plan to Jurina’s life."
She became so angry, she transformed to Shinigami form. I want to change too. I want to fight with her, but I saw Jurina stalking us. I can’t do that.
I saw Zen grab Jurina’s neck and then she about to throw her in to that cliff. “Show yourself in front of her. Let’s see.. She still love you or not!” She laugh.
I can’t do that. I’m afraid if Jurina will hate me. I already tried hard for hundreds years to became her friend. I can’t ruin it in a few second just because I wanna fight with Zen.
"If you don’t wanna say the truth, then… I will kill her."
After that, I saw Jurina falling. She almost hit the ground. I don’t care if she turn out to hate me. I don’t wanna see her die.
I transform myself into my original form and I fly quickly to catch her. I look into her eyes, she’s totally frightened. Jurina.. I’m sorry to see me like this.
I put her back in to the villa. I move very fast so nobody will see us.
"Rena… No. Shino, finally.. you show yourself!!!" Mayu flying inside and laugh.
"Shut up, Zen!! I’ll fight with you later."
Now, I can read her mind again. She already realized that I’m the voice. I’m that scary voice. “I’m sorry Jurina………………”
I saw Zen already disappear, She must be going to God to report about this. I know that I will get a punishment again, maybe this time is forever. If Shinigami seen by a human, there’re only 2 choice: that Shinigami will be destroyed or that human will be die.
I can’t let myself to give that suffer to her. I will give up myself.
I hear Jurina’s mind, “Please.. Don’t leave me.”
Before I go, I erase all human memory about me. Goodbye Jurina. I love you. We will meet again in another life.
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I’m crying while I wrote this. I imagine how huge Rena’s love to Jurina.
I cry alone in this cafe. Everyone here is look at me strangely. hahaha.
Please don’t take this fanfic too serious.. This is just my imagination.
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Rena really loves Jurina..
Arrrggghhh..I hope they will be together at the end..
Update soon, please..
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God! What kind of shinigami rena?love human
Hope for happy ending
As for mayuyu,i think she need fall with human too kekeke with yukirin~
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Ha you are quick, aren't you.
Poor Rena, be in hell for 300 years. :O
I have done the picture, I have to bring it to my friend, because I don't have a scanner. :nervous
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ERGH!!!~~ One more~ Please update the next chapt :3
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God! What kind of shinigami rena?love human
Hope for happy ending
As for mayuyu,i think she need fall with human too kekeke with yukirin~
Yukirin?? Nice idea.. :twothumbs
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Ha you are quick, aren't you.
Poor Rena, be in hell for 300 years. :O
I have done the picture, I have to bring it to my friend, because I don't have a scanner. :nervous
Yeah.. I can't leave a fanfic too long. I always finish it in a week. :D
Waaa... I really wanna see it. I just realize how important a scanner is.
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me too! i almost cry as well T_T
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After read this I'm able to study in peace >__<
but pls! update the part 4 soon ;__;
and JURINA!! GO FOR RENA! ...u love her..she loves you ;O;
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Picture is finished. :grin:
Where I should send it. :)
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After read this I'm able to study in peace >__<
but pls! update the part 4 soon ;__;
and JURINA!! GO FOR RENA! ...u love her..she loves you ;O;
I don't think Jurina can go for Rena... I mean, she's a human.
I can't imagine a human tried to looking for Shinigami.
If they want to live together.. I think, the one who should put a more effort is Rena. :cry:
But.. let's see later in last chapter.
I'm working on it today
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Picture is finished. :grin:
Where I should send it. :)
Thanks... Oh, I'm so excited now. :wriggly:
I already wrote my email to your Personal Message.
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shinigami rena is dark and cool I love it :ding:
Please update soon :onioncheer:
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aw!!
continue soon this is interesting
thanks
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PART 4
Jurina P.O.V
Where did she go? I asked my teacher and my friends, but they said they didn't know about it. I have no clue, I don't know where's her house. Mayuyu never came back too. God, I really want to meet her.
I didn't realize that I break through the traffic light. I want to walk back but it's too late.... AAaakkkkhhh... This is so hurt. I feels like... burning.
But after a few seconds, that pain is gone. I feel someone wake me up. She hold my hand to help me get up. "Mayuyu?!"
"Yes."
"Where is Rena?" I want to hug her but.. a memory about how she grab my neck and throw me to the cliff come to my mind.
"You will met her soon. Let's fly." She flapping her wings.
"Mayu! I'm a human, not a bird." I rolled my eyeballs.
"You're not a human anymore.. I came here to bring your soul."
Wh-what's that mean? I look to the ground, I saw bloods through my foot. I’m about to look back but….
"Don't look back!! You're died."
I gasped. Wait.. I can't feel the air. I can't feel my heartbeat. I can't breath!! I feel something arise at my back, "Wings?!! I have a wings?!"
"Calm down Jurina.. Now, flap your wings. Hurry up. I have more things to do!"
I tried to flap it, I fail for 3 times. After that.. I can fly normally, It's just like walking. "So, who are you? I mean.. both of you."
"Shino and I are Shinigami. How can she became so stupid to falling in love with you?!" She groaned.
"Sh-She love me?? We have a same feeling??"
"Arrgghh.. I hate human! They always overreacting about every thing. She loved you since you're 4 years old, she was supposed to take your father and your soul. But she let you alive. When you're 15, she punished for 300 years in the hell because of that."
"Th-three hundred years??!! Am I that old?"
"We have so much difference between our time."
"So.. that's the reason why that voice's gone for 2 years back then. Rena love me for thousand years???!!!!"
Mayuyu grab my hand. "You're so slow. We still far enough."
She flying like a jet, so fast. I looked down. Earth became so small.
End of Jurina P.O.V
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Rena P.O.V
For Jurina... it's only 2 months since I'm gone, but for me.... I already wait for 25 years!! But God still didn't do anything to me. How frustrating! I feel so guilty.
I standing on the edge of our kingdom, I looked down to the earth. Although there are huge amount of human there.. I know exactly where is Jurina.
Lately, I just sit here everyday to watch her. I saw her go to school. I saw how she's sleeping in her class. I saw whether she walking or running. But I'm too far from earth, my eyes can not see her face. I really miss her, but I still remember how she looks like.
Keyra, Shinigami's leader, took my power away. Now, I can not hear someone's mind anymore.. I can not see a future anymore. Keyra became so angry when Zen told him about everything that I did. I'm not allowed to go to earth until God determine my punishment.
Yeahh... at least Jurina didn't feel any suffer like me because her memory about me already erased. It's OK if I'm the only one who suffered. I will fine if Jurina feel happy.
I wait for another 25 years, but God still didn't call me. Is He already forget about me? He didn't care about me anymore.. I'm not His child anymore.
This is crazy, but I decide to meet Him. I can't life like this forever.
"Why do you come here?"
A big voice startled me. I never saw His face, I only can hear His voice. So it's make all of this more scarier. "I know You didn't care about me anymore. But, I can't life forever with guilty. I already decided my punishment by myself." I knelt.
"Destroyed or become a human." Then.. I just silent. He knows everything, so I'm sure He already know this from long time ago, long before I said this.
"A human? So.. you can be with that girl."
"No. Even if I want it, I can't. This is a punishment for me, so... You can erase my memory. I will totally forget all of this place and..... forget that girl too. I will do everything for her."
"Everything? Even if I decide to destroy you?"
I'm shocked, but.. "Yes, I will accept everything."
Then....... I heard something. I fly to the edge of our kingdom quickly. I saw Jurina........ dead. I knelt, "AAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKHHHH!!!!!" No-no-no... this is not real. It can't be happened. I try to fly to the earth, but there's a transparent wall. I can't passed it.
I see a water drops to my hand. Did I just crying? I can cry?! I touch my face.. It's wet.
I fly back to talk with God. "Why?! WHY!!!!!!"
I see something appear in front of me. It's so big.. no, it's so huge. It's very tall and white. God?
"Yes.. my child." He smile at me. I can not do anything except knelt. Then He help me to stand up.
"Why? Why You did this to me? Did You really hate me? Then.. you can kill me and let Jurina alive." I cried.
"Shino... I didn't hate you. I love you. But my decision is absolute, you already know about this since you're born. That girl must die. Do you believe in me?"
"Yes...."
"I will give you more than you asked for."
Then He disappeared. I feel my body become warm.. warmer... more warmer.. too warm.. hot.... This is too hot. Will I throwed to the hell forever?
I saw my body and wings become....... white?! I touch my face. Perfect! I'm not as scary as before. God, Is this means-
"You're fired as Shinigami. That job didn't match for you. You're full of love... from now on, do your job as an Angel. Don't make a mistake again."
"Th-thank you." Amazing.
"Rena-chan!!!"
I looked back. I don't believe it, "Jurina?!"
I'm too confuse, "Do-do you remember me??"
She smile. "Of course! I wait you for months but you didn't show up. Are you too shy to meet me?" She laugh.
Okay, I still don't get it. "I-I'm not shy!!"
I saw a Shinigami behind Jurina. "Zen??!"
"Yes. I already told you that I'm the one who will take her life. You will never able to do it." She smirked.
I really want to punch her face, but Jurina holding me. "It's okay Rena. I'm fine. You can't angry forever. Remember.. It's God order."
Her smile calm me. "Zen, what happened? I already wipe her memory away.."
"God. He didn't let her memory erased. He knew that this girl really love you. I must go, I have another job."
Zen flying away. "I'm sure that you're suffered a lot there. I'm sorry, I can't protect you." I hugged her.
"I'm happy to see you again. You already protect me for almost 14 years. I know how long you take care of me. Mayu told me about how different human time with your time. I can't believe there's someone who love me that much."
She release me. "Wow... you look different."
"Yeah.. I'm an Angel now." I grinned.
She laugh, "Cool. My girlfriend is an Angel. Shinigami is awesome too. Ahh.. I don't care about your looks, as long as it's you."
"At least you didn't afraid of me anymore." I look down.
Jurina hold my face, "I'm not afraid of you. I just confuse. How can I'm not shocked when 2 Shinigami fighting in front of my face and one of them wanna kill me?!" She laugh again.
"I don't believe you." I change my body into 'Shinigami form'. I think she joking with me because she didn't want to see me feel sad. But... she's true.
She smile at me, she touch my scary face. For a moment, my memory back to that time, the time when I saw her for the first time. Little Jurina didn't change, she still not afraid of me.
I kiss her. I cried.
"Shino, you cry so often today."
Jurina broke the kiss, "Dad????" She running to her dad.
That men hug his daughter. "Are you really here? Mom must be so sad." Then he look at me, "Sorry about that day. I persuade you to save her, I know it's wrong. But.. thank you for keeping my daughter safe until now."
He grab my hand, "Let's go to the heaven."
Heaven?! I never go there before. Ahh yeah.. I'm forget that I'm an Angel now. I transform myself back into my 'new look'. "Yes, Let's go." I hold Jurina's hand.
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"Where is Jurina??" I fly around and ask any soul that I meet. But no one know where is she. I search her from above. Even on earth, Matsui Jurina's name didn't exist. She's.... gone?
"I know where is she."
"Where is she, Zen? If you put her in dangerous again, I swear I will destroy you!!"
"She's okay. But, I won't tell you until you help me."
"You asked for a help?! Zen, I think you're lost your mind. Don't joke with me."
"I'm not joking!!! I need your help!! Come with me.."
I follow her. We flying down to the earth. We landed on a school yard. So, she's not joking.
"Why we're here, Zen?"
"How did you feel when the first time you saw Jurina?"
I almost laugh when she ask me about that. "I feels like being hypnotized. I'm not a human, but I can feel a happy feeling for the first time. And then......"
"You think she will be the only one. You didn't care about our rules, you even want to spent your whole life in the hell because of her."
Her answer make me want to falling to the hell for a second time. "How can you know that?"
She just silent and she walk into that school. I didn't have any choice except following her. We entered a class, then we stop in front of 1 student. I try to read her nametag, "Kashiwagi Yuki."
"I feel it too. I feel all of the things that you said before." She look away.
NO WAY! I laugh hard, I can't hold it anymore. "You love her?? HAAHAAHHA.... You have a great taste, my friend."
She hit my head, "We're not friend. Don't tell anyone!"
"Easy boy.. easy. I will help you. So, where is Jurina."
We flying around and then we landed in front of a house.
"Go inside and you'll know. I go first." She silent for a while, "Sorry and thank you, Shino." After that, she fly away.
I entered that house. Everyone is sleep. I entered every room, but Jurina wasn't there. Afterwards, I hear a baby crying.
I see a woman wake up and then she carry her baby. I look at it nearer. I smile, So, Jurina.. after 896 years, you life again as this baby. I can't wait to see you grow up, then I will make you fall in love with me again. I will make you love me in every your life.
I feel relieved when I know she will not die too young like old-Jurina. See you, Jurina. I love you. I kiss her forehead, then that baby stop crying. You can feel my presence, huh?
I fly back to the heaven.
I will life for thousands years more, so I can meet you and falling in love with you over and over again. Our love will life forever.
End of Rena P.O.V
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Yeahh.. Jurina must die. But death is not an ending. Life still goes on.
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Love the ending~ :heart:
Thanks for the story!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
make more mwatsui OS!!! :thumbsup
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that's greaat :twothumbs
arigato anak panti-sama :thumbup
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Love the ending~ :heart:
Thanks for the story!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
make more mwatsui OS!!! :thumbsup
I will make it more.. I hope you will like my other fanfics too. :D
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wow.. you copy-paste this too much. :nya:
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wow you Fic start get more and more interesting
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wow you Fic start get more and more interesting
thanks for thinking like that.. :mon fyeah:
But my idea for next fanfic almost run out because I keep writing everyday. Actually, I'm not really a creative person. :banghead:
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Sorry for the late comment >< it's just that I couldn't find the right words to describe how awesome was this fic !
I liked the whole conception of this! And most importantly how you wrote it :)
In the end I was glad that Mayu wasn't actually a bad shininigami :p I also got curious about how mayuki would develop hahah but never mind me xD
In the end, Jurina would rebirth anyways and all the punishment Rena had only made her realize she was in love. It would happen even it wasn't 'that' Jurina.
Thanks, I really liked it o/ thank you for this awesome story o/
Btw, I saw you commented on my os thread >< I'm glad that my os inspired you :3 thank you for liking it o/
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I love this <3 wmatsui forever!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3
While reading this, it reminded me of a certain game called The World Ends With You because of the title
and the anime Death Note because of the Shinigami :D :D (Rem loves for Misa, if you know.)
Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! I love the ending!!!!!! :nya: :nya: :shy2: :shy2: :farofflook: :farofflook:
MORE wmatsui please :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:
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This is another late comment. I’ve finished reading this for quite some time and I forgot to comment
As I am working on commenting now, why not doing so on this one as well
This is one of the work that I love from you
The story was once and well packed if I should say
It keep you curious, cause I keep on wondering what will happen next
I love how it ended up, with Rena turns into an angel and she could see Jurina through all the lifetime and for me it was kinda a bittersweet ending