MY EVER LONGEST UPDATE!!!!! GOD... I wrote this with such an inspiration I'm afraid I will loose it later...
I hope not, and I hope you like what I wrote. If you have any questions feel free to ask, I will try to answer them in any way possible.
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haru9210: yes, Sae was a player of some computer game, and Acchan was the character. But somehow she came to life, and it appears everything that Sae was playing about, happened for real to Acchan. And yes, an ending is sad but sweet. That's what I intended to write, and I'm happy you liked it.
You were right, the girl in the story is Rena-sama!! I thought about making Yuki the one who has to marry that old geezer, but Rena fitted the category more. Ah, Yuki has a special way of appearing in the story, that I can promise
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Megumi: you're very close, except that Rena-sama is the heroine here
thanks for reading the teaser, please read the story and tell me what you think, your opinion really matters to me
(as so does everyone's)
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yukofan: well, your imagination might start imagining things after you read this update, and you'll like it, as someone certain appears in it
Well, it's not only the parents at fault...
*points at herself*
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Sieka: ah, I got Sieka-sama curious, nee? *happy dance*
, you are right, Yuki fits the cold daughter image more, and Rena-sama fits the one who has to marry the geezer...
I became like you, making Rena-sama suffer..
So even if you don't want that... Just look at your story, Geki stabbing Black with a knife, and nearly killing her off..
Not that I'm against it, if to be honest
You know I love your angst stories, so mhm... Keep reading
Yes, I intended this speculation of yours
Is it bad? The purpose for those children... The age of those children... I gave a few hints in my answers, so... Keep reading
This is YukiRena fic, so Yuki will appear in the story, that's the thing you don't have to worry about.
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bunny_rabbit: yes, the teasers are meant to tease
And about your question, it will be answered in this update, so please read it and tell me what you think.
Minna, really thank you for reading.. This is really my longest update so far, and I fixed it and added a few details, then inspiration hit me, and I wrote more... It appears the fate of Sieka-sama finally reached me too, and this story will no longer is an OS.. Here I present to you the first (one of more than two) part of YukiRena story. Look for the title some time later. Or you can give me some ideas, feel free to write whatever you want.
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1st Place. Matsui Rena and Kashiwagi Yuki Part I
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4821One by one little rays of sun found their way through not so tightly closed curtains into the dark room, making things in it cast small shadows, when passing them by, then stopped near the bed on the other side from the window. On that bed was sleeping a raven haired, fair skinned beauty, breathing calmly, steadily and deeply. Her eyelids closed, eyelashes fluttered a bit, as the sun rays continued their journey, caressing the raven’s skin on her face with warmth and gentleness. She slowly opened her eyes, suddenly closed them again and shut them tight, trying to ignore one of the rays that shone her straight in the eye. But as another and then another one sun rays started massaging her eyelids, she couldn’t bear it any longer and grumpily sat up. Her burdened, half opened eyes’ gaze went to the small narrow opening between the curtains, from a bit above the ceiling down to the end of one tenth of the window, letting the rays come and explore the room in any way they want, without being disturbed. What was the most important and the most unbearable thing, it let the rays wake her up!!
She rubbed her eyes with knuckles and slowly stood up, feeling morning sick; NOT THAT morning sickness, for god’s sake, really NOT THAT. She always was bad at waking up early in the morning, at eating raw meat, at doing sports or at playing luck games, like JAN-KEN-PON; that’s why she hated mornings, meat, sports or luck games. She raised her hands up in the air and stretched, until all of her muscles and bones woke up, especially her neck bone, which she awakened by throwing her head back and rotating it from one side to another, hearing her neck bone making a cracking sound. For her it was like a morning’s greeting, and she smiled gently, then turned around and made her bed, while stifling a yawn. She had her own way of making bed – dusting the pillow first, then fixing neatly the sheets, and then also neatly folding the blanket, placing it perfectly on the bed near the pillow.
Why am I telling you all of this in details? I have no idea, I just felt like this. But I bet you have other important questions in your minds, “Who are you?’ being one of them, right? Well then, let me introduce myself properly. Hajimemashite, Akimoto Rena desu. Sixteen desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu. It’s now the end of the third month of the year 3142, or to be more precise, it’s the 30th of March. Why am I telling you this kind of information again? It shouldn’t be important, now should it? Indeed it is. It’s for one simple reason, I have to say. I live in a galaxy of Juuzaku, which has three planets and forty meteorites counted inside. I’m not sure about the number of stars though, but this galaxy has its own sun, and even its own moon, dividing twenty four hours into parts like day, night, evening, morning, and etc. The planet I live in is called Zetsukuro, which has three ruling lands. One of them, the smallest one, is Sei Ja Su, another, the middle one, is Ueka Ma, and the last one, the biggest one, that I live in, is Ebi Kachu. Sei Ja Su has no capital city, as it consists only of villages and has very little people living in it, only one million; Ueka Ma has ten hundred million people, so it has a capital, named Chan Jun, with fifty million people living in it; Ebi Kachu has exactly billion people, and its capital, the city where I live in, is called Kata Fai, and has a population of five hundred million people living in it. Yes, the city is huge, and I love it very much. But, on to the point of why I’m telling you this. On this very day the sun rays woke me up, our land has a celebration to commemorate the one hundred forty second year of the grand Oshima family ruling this land. The celebration is called Hebirote, and the day is called National Oshima Day. Because it is a national day, we don’t have to attend schools, go to jobs or dates, or sleep in our beds, or have vacations. Our ruler is such a kind and generous person, we love him so much, we all together celebrate it in avenues of each city. Our city has an avenue, called Oshi, that is where this feast is taking place. I am really looking forward to it, and even more than my birthday... For one reason I am not going to tell, at least now.
I live in a huge house with my family, and I have to say, well, more like to admit, that we are rich, and also very well known. In the family there is me, then my red kingyo that I love to death. She’s really cute, so I named her Amepia. I had once a little shitsu, her name was also Amepia, but when I was seven, a truck ran her over...... Well, she was really cute, and now my kingyo is also cute, so I named her after the R.I.P. shitsu. Then there is my papa, Akimoto Yasushi, a person I’m very fond of. He is the best father one could have, always so gentle, so kind, but being strict when needed, only to help me to move on. He always listens to my problems, always tries to understand me and my needs, but is rarely at home... He is a well known song writer and producer of idol group Family 48, that I am a fan of. Papa said I like them because he is the producer, but I also like them because there is a certain member who is so cute I could squeeze her to death. Her name is Fukumoto Aina.. So CUTE!!! Ahem, anyway... Where was I?.. Ah.. Next in my family is my mama, Akimoto Nana, a seductive lady at an honorable age, who is gentle and funny as can be a basket of fluffy feathers and the best in the world comedian, when you mix them up. Mama is a doctor, to be more exact, a gynecologist, and she is well known for her very great reputation among her patients. She is very respected, and I understand that point very well.. Mama was always clingy and attentive towards women, so no wonder she has this acknowledgment. I’m proud to be their daughter, I love papa and mama so much..
And last, but really not the least member of our family is my cousin, Akimoto Sayaka. She has lost her parents at the very young age and since then is living with us. I call her neechan, because she’s like a sister to me. Neechan looks tomboyish and even ikemen on the outside, but on the inside... She’s a total crybaby!! Her heart is soft like fuzzy fluff ball, and she helps anyone anytime. Also, she has a very strong sense of responsibility, and I respect her for that.
We have lots of servants, too many in my honest opinion, so I’m not going to name them one by one. I am just going to mention my own personal maid, Hiramatsu Kanako, shortly Kanakana. She’s very cute and helpful, also a good friend. I am really glad I have her by my side.
There you have it, my family, plus huge amount of servants. I think we should move on with the story, but let’s pass all the morning stuff, and skip it to the more interesting part.
No, actually, before that, I have to introduce you to a few more characters, so you do not freak out when you meet them. They might be a little bit odd..
I have a best friend and a childhood friend, which both are very clingy and need lots of attention..which I can’t provide sometimes... One of them, my best friend, is Furukawa Airi, a total klutz, also an avid 2D lover. I myself am 2D lover, I guess, it’s one of the reasons why we get along so well. But she... She’s into it too much... Sometimes I think she believes she’s living in this 2D world of hers.. I can’t explain it properly, you have to see it yourselves.. Though I do not recommend that, if you are very sensitive about certain topics... Another one, my childhood friend, is Watanabe Miyuki, who can talk all day long about milk, so her nickname is Milky.. No, actually, her nickname is like that because of her name Miyuki sounding similar to Milky...But it’s the truth she loves milk and everything that comes with it...or of it...or like it... Ahem, anyway, she also is crazy about health, having only half-body baths, sleeping a lot anywhere, drinking lots of Vitamin C energy drinks, eating strange healthy foods, but not forgetting the sweets. She is also bad at sports, so this is one of the reasons we get along, I think. What’s creepy about those two? You’ll see, you’ll see. Now, on with the story.She peeked over the narrow opening and smiled. They were waiting for her while chatting and were in their special made outfits. Like every year on this day, a Sakushio was a must wear – a special summery costume, that consists of two layers of dresses and a huge bow on the waist, tied on the back. The bottom layer is white or baby blue, and the top layer is of any color and fabric, decorated by anything; the bow can be only pink, red, gold or black. Girls have to design them themselves, then go to a special Sakushio maker for him to make it. Airin was wearing a white-orange one, with a black bow; the top orange layer decorated with her favorite manga characters. Milky was wearing a white-light pink one, with a gold bow; the top white layer decorated with cute little cows making silly faces.
“Nee nee, Airin, have you seen that huge little cloud while going here? It totally looked like glass of milk!!”
“Mhm, for me it looked more like Char.”
“Mou, can you come out of your anime world for once and look at the real world around us!?”
“Then can you stop seeing milk or cows everywhere we go?”
The raven haired chuckled silently and showed herself to the girls. They squealed and hugged her tightly, making it hard to breath. All of their friendly bickering was now of no importance.
“Girls!.. I...can’t...breath...!”
They released the hug, though kept locking their gazes on the raven. She herself thought she doesn’t look better than them, wearing a baby blue-ivory one, with a red bow; the top ivory layer decorated with melon pans. Her hair let loose, wearing red sandals and light pink lipstick, her perfume that of jasmines.
“We should go, girls..” she stated.
“Demo...” started Airin.
“Rena-chan is so cute!” shouted the sentence Milky and hugged the raven haired again. Rena tried to shake the girl from herself, but that was an impossible task, so she left her home, dragging Milky, clinging onto her, and having Airin following behind, while looking at Rena and drooling.
The avenue was a long, nicely paved path, surrounded by the magnificent park, full of ever growing evergreen overhanging trees, blooming flowers, miraculous bushes, clear orient ponds with different types of fishes and insects, soft mellow grass, and lots of benches for people to relax. The avenue had a few fountains here and there, and usually was a place for people to take rest, or to have fun with friends or family, riding bicycles, or having picnics. But today, on this special day, Oshi was decorated with flowers, all kinds of lanterns, was crammed with people, a loud and fun music fulfilling the air around. In some places and spots there were set buffets with cakes, one-bite sandwiches and lots of juices and water. People, when noticing Rena and her friends, gave them way, because Rena was well known here, hence her famous parents. They bowed slightly to her and gave their greetings, she smiled back and answered the greetings, going forwards, dragging her friends with her, as now not only Milky, but also Airin was clinging onto Rena, afraid to loose each other in such overcrowded place. After half an hour the three reached their destination – a huge stage, constructed for today’s celebration. For those standing further from it, there were lots of super plasma screen TVs, others had furagees. Rena checked her furagee and smiled widely.
“Airin, Milky, take your seats, and if parents come, tell them I’m meeting my classmates. And if you see Kanakana, tell her to text me, when parents are somewhere around.”
“Is it..?” asked curiously and with a smirk Airin, while Milky was still clinging onto Rena, not wanting to let go. They were in front of stage, on special platform with seats for all the V.I.P. people. Raven haired shook lightly her hand and Milky let it go, making a pout and hugging Airin.
“Yes, but not a word for them, okay? And Milky, I’ll be right back, okay?” asked she in a sweet voice and her friend smiled a bit, then continued hugging Airin. Both older girls sighed, watching the younger one snuggling into Airi’s neck, then Rena went through the crowd, making her way deeper into the park, where were no people. She was going faster and faster with each step she took, until she was running like crazy – and she did look crazy, as she was bad at running. She reached a hole between two enormous trees and went inside. The place was hidden well from others’ eyes, as it was a nice room, having ten vast trees as its walls, and the branches with leaves as its ceiling. The sun shone a bit inside from a few openings in the dense foliage, making that room look enchanted, with dust and strong smell of nature hovering in the air.
Rena looked around and noticed a figure, a man’s figure. He was smaller than her, though older, his fashionably messy hair fitted with his squirrel like expression, his smile showing his crooked teeth and cute dimples on his cheeks. But even though he was smaller, he was very well built and was wearing a very nice suit, making Rena’s heart flutter and get warmer with every second. She latched herself on the midget and snuggled in his neck.
“Yuu-san...”
“Rena..” the midget hugged her and closed his eyes. “I see you missed me.”
“Of course I did. The last time I saw you was two months ago. How could you go on that trip and tell me nothing?”
“I had to, Rena. It was my dad’s wish to go there. But I myself did not want to go. I was depressed to leave you, and you know how I hate goodbyes, so I left without a word.”
“Oshima-sama is a respected man, and I like him a lot, but he shouldn’t make you go to trips you don’t want. You have an older brother, he should be the one leading the country. Why did Oshima-sama has chosen you?”
“Because he thinks I’m more fitting for that, as people love me more, and I’m better at math, leading, and looks. And..”
“Yes, you’re better at attracting women..” frowned and pouted Rena and backed away.
“Rena.. You know I love you...” he sighed and hugged the girl again, making her relax in his hands. “But I cannot fail at this task. These people, they need me. Mizuto won’t be able to rule this land with his problem growing.”
“So Yuka really is pregnant, right?”
“Un. And because they aren’t married, dad disagrees with him ruling the country even more.”
“So Oshima-sama will be sending them to some other place, to live away from others?”
“You know my dad well, Rena. I wonder why..”
“Because you told me a lot about him.” smiled raven haired and leaned onto the tree-wall. “Nee... If you’re going to be the heir to the crown, you will need a wife in the future, right?”
“Yes...”
“So...”
She couldn’t continue, as she felt his lips conquering her lips, and she lost track of time, with his tongue exploring her mouth, his hands fondling her breasts and thighs under her costume. They parted their lips to inhale some air, then their lips collided again, continuing the dance of their tongues, the mixing of their saliva, the non-verbal understanding of their feelings and situation. She let him untie the bow on her waist, her fingers were in his hair, letting him undress her, knowing he still won’t be content in the end, as she’s underage, so he can’t get her fully. He can only make her feel alive, yet he himself will have to suffer the passion and inability to relieve his... Her furagee made a sound, yet she was at the highest peek of satisfaction. His furagee also made a sound, but they were too engrossed in their actions to notice or pay any attention.
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Sayaka looked around and saw Rena coming onto the platform, flustered red cheeks and a bit messy hair, yet her clothes in a perfect condition. She knew what’s going on, yet she pretended not to notice, as Rena would freak out and feel unsafe. She was worried, but kept silent, and just always tried to delay parents, so Rena could come on time.
“Gomennasai, I was with my classmates..” panted Rena. Knowing her inability to do well at sports, it wasn’t surprising she was panting. “And I lost track of time.”
“It’s okay, parents will be here in a few minutes. Why don’t we take a seat?” asked Sayaka, maintaining her voice calm as usual, yet her mind thinking about what Rena and prince Yuu were doing and where, as just now she noticed a bit swollen Rena’s lips and a red mark on her neck, showing a little of itself from beneath the side of her costume. She was about to do something, but Airin was faster and fixed Rena’s costume. Sayaka smiled and sighed. Yes, her sister had really good friends. Too good, but it wasn’t bad. She noticed Kanakana sighing also, and thought about how hard it must be for that girl to keep all Rena’s secrets and to worry about her all the time. To cover Rena up was one of the biggest and hardest jobs the maid had to do, and though she looked cute and fragile, Sayaka knew that girl was strong willed and a trustful secret keeper.
She looked around and waved to their parents, coming on the platform and taking their respective places in the seats. They smiled at Rena and Sayaka and then continued discussing something, ignoring the cameras flashing, taking their pictures.
Then the crowd cheered, as other famous people approached the platform.
Here I think I should interrupt the story again, as many things should be explained. From where to begin? I can’t reveal the story plot, as it will be unveiled further on, but some things should be explained properly. For example, why men are wearing suits while women wear costumes? Women are everything about beauty, and when you can show it the most? By dressing up. Men always look good, with or without clothes, but women, they need make up, and also different clothes to change themselves. Not that a change is a must, but it is a variation, a showing of fashion and creativity.
What is furagee? Furagee is a device, that people on Earth call iphone, just in our galaxy they are more advanced, like little computers plus TV, and radio, and even video game system options in it. When you touch it, the transparent screen becomes visible in the air, and you can watch the view in 5D graphics, from simple message to some action movie or even best quality video game. It also has a GPS system in it, so you never loose track of where you are. The best thing about furagee is that it has such a system, which charges itself with solar energy OR by flying. Yes, you heard me right, flying. If you activate a special option on your phone, you can send it flying like a kite or a paper plane. You choose the starting destination, the route, and the finishing point. The longer it flies, the more it charges itself, and the more you can use it without the need to charge it. It’s the best option to use when there is no sun in the sky, especially at night, or in winters, when snow falls, though that happens only for one month in the year. Yes, we have little snow here, but our winters have very strong winds, so that ‘compensates’ the lack of snow.
Another thing you might wanna know, is how there can be a room made out of trees in the park. It’s not that hard really. It’s called Mirakaji, a special kind of tree, made of lots of trees, that has a room inside. It’s hard to explain this phenomenon, and this tree is even harder to distinguish from other kind of tree, Namiusho, that looks the same, just doesn’t have the room inside. These trees are a common growth in our land, but Mirakaji is a special kind, and each planet has only one in it. It is given as a secret to keep for a certain family from generation to generation. This tree is entrusted to Oshima family, that’s how I know about it.
I cannot tell you more about Yuu, as it would ruin the plot, so I might tell you about him later. But you should probably know one other thing, which is vital to this story. It is a rule here everyone follows and obeys.
Every girl in a family, when she reaches an age of twelve, is promised to a man, whose father gets a ‘yes’ from a girl’s mother. They are engaged, yet they know nothing about each other, not even names. They just know that such a person, his fiancée or her fiancé exists. When the girl is nearing her seventeenth birthday, her parents announce the name of the person, and one week later they get married. Without any objections. The man can be of any age, any region. The most important factor is, he has to be at least of the same or higher status in the society, because in this land, even though women do have good and important jobs, there are always men, who maintain and preserve the family. Women have more free days, but men have longer holidays.
Every, even the most poor family has maids, not necessarily paid by money. You can pay them by food, generosity, or they can work for you for free, out of their own kindness and will. But I will repeat again, that no matter the reasons, EVERY family has AT LEAST one maid. I guess this is to even at least a bit the difference between the statuses.
A personal maid always goes with her master, if a master changes home, goes abroad or on a vacation. That is, if a girl has a personal maid, and marries to a man, when she leaves her home to live with a man, the maid travels with her, and lives there, where her master lives, having her own room, being provided with food and some money for expenses. So you can only imagine how desired this maid job is for girls. You get to see the world, to know people, to earn more, even to meet a destined one. That is, if you work for a rich family. Poor families still go on trips, but they do not get all the amenities the rich and famous get. Well, my maid Kanakana is a lucky girl, as I am very good to her, and we’re friends, so she gets even more than a normal personal maid. She gets to sleep with me at cold or stormy nights in the same bed, she gets to go to onsens with me, she gets massages whenever I get one, she eats with me and my friends at restaurants, and even is having dinner together with my family at the same table. I call it generosity, good manners, or simply one word, as in my case, - friendship.After all the people took seats in their appropriate places, the music went quieter and the announcer announced The Great Oshima Family. They went up to the stage and slightly bowed to the whole crowd, making the whole crowd stand up and bow fully to them, then an applause followed. Oshima family had lots of members, but now present were these: Oshima Natsuki the king, Oshima Mai the queen, Oshima Mizuto the prince, Oshima Yuu the prince, Oshima Ryoka the princess. They all sat down in their respective thrones and everyone hushed. Then the king suddenly stood up, took the microphone and started energetically communicating with everyone, making the atmosphere become more and more entertaining. At the end of his speech people were crying from laughing too much, their hearts filled with easiness and joy. Then the king sat down and the queen stood up. She sang a song with her beautiful voice, then thanked everyone for all the support for their family. Everyone then shed a tear, as they were touched by the warm words of their queen. Then the queen was replaced by Mizuto, who told so many jokes, people were holding their stomaches, pained from unstoppable laughing. Then little Ryoka – a five year old princess – said a poem and told a story about how good it is to live in a castle with her funny brothers, good mother and a father she’s proud of. A clever five year old impressed the crowd and they listened to her in awe. The poem sounded like this:
I am a princess,
My name is Ryoka,
I have a daddy,
Who is just awesome.
I have a mother,
Her voice is sugar,
My brothers two,
Who ever knew.
They make you laugh
To tears and belly pain,
I am so proud
Of this huge family.Then Yuu came forward and nearly all ladies died from just his smile. Only Rena saw sadness in his eyes, only she knew what burden he has, and what he’s going to say. She fidgeted in her seat and closed her eyes, calmed herself down, then locked her gaze with Yuu’s.
“Today I, Oshima Yuu, found out who my fiancée is.”
The crowd gasped and started looking at all the ladies in the V.I.P area. Everyone started guessing which one is the lucky one. Then silence came as Yuu started walking towards the special platform. Rena lost his gaze, as he now had to look to other direction. She tried hard to keep tears from coming down her cheeks. Yuu reached other side of platform, but did not look specifically at any of them. He looked at the crowd.
“Her name is Kojima Haruna.”
The crowd cheered and chanted their names, while Haruna cried and shook her head. She couldn’t believe her happiness and looked thankfully at her mother. Then Yuu gave his hand to Haruna and Haruna took it gladly, glancing shyly at the prince through her eyelashes. Yuu smiled at her and lead the taller girl to the stage, where a microphone stand was prepared to say a speech. She fidgeted a bit, nervously tucked her loose hair behind her ear, then looked around the crowd.
“Everyone, good day. I’m Kojima Haruna, the actress, I’m twenty. Thank you for this warm applause and all the greetings. You know, always being on stage or on screen, it is a good experience. But this.. Even though I am an actress, I’m all shy now and at loss of words... I always admired Oshima family, especially the king and the queen. I always smiled, watching prince Yuu interacting with princess Ryoka, or laughed at prince Mizuto’s jokes. To think I will be a part of this family... It’s like my biggest dream came true. Everyone, really thank you for your support through all these years of my acting. I hope I will become a good princess, one for you to be proud of having.”
Now Rena let herself cry, letting others think she’s crying from happiness, though her heart was full of black holes, and all she wanted was to hug a pillow while laying on bed, and cry her heart out. Her love was marrying another woman. It was a truth. A hurting truth. And things will never be the same.
EDIT: found some mistakes, fixed them. It has to be Akimoto Rena, gomennasai everyone
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