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Chapter 1-C-ute's crazy days
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Mai: Hey, hey Saki!
Saki:.......
Mai: Hey hey Saki!
Saki: What?! -.-
Mai: Knife....
Saki: *screams and looks around* You need to stop watching that damn orange :/
Mai: But he's funny :)
Saki: No, Kathy Griffin is funny. That orange is just filled with stupid puns.
Mai: Kathy who?
Saki:.......
Chisato: Hey guys!
Mai: Wazaaaaaaaaaaaap! hahahahahahaha
Chisato: -.-
Mai: What?
Chisato: Nothing. Im bored.How about you guys?
Saki: Im constantly being bothered by this bugger -.-
Mai: Oi! Shut up or i'll knife ya! >:(
Chisato: Ok lets not get violent.......
Airi: Who's getting violent?
Chisato: Mai...
Maimi: Can we go one day without death threats?
Saki: Apparently not.....
Mai: You guys suck *leaves the room*
Maimi: I need a smoke and a beer -.- *leaves the room*
Airi: You guys wanna play sims 3?
Saki and Chisato: sure :)
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End of chapter 1
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this is very interesting... I have very few words to mention this
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Well it certainly was random! :lol:
Wondering where Mai and her knife have gone off to though!
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Chapter 2- Berry madness
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Saki: Maasa!!!
Maasa: What?
Saki: Have you seen my candy?
Maasa: Some one ate it XD
Saki: WHAT?! HOW DARE THEY!
Chinami: cheeze chill out, your turning to a muenster lol
Maasa: Now is not the time for cheese jokes :/
Saki: yeah, someone ate my candy ;(
Chinami: oh, it was momoko.
Saki: IM GOING TO SUCKERPUNCH THAT BETCH
Miyabi: Betch?
Yurina: Who's getting suckerpunched?
Maasa: Momoko
Risako: Oh shit! Something bout to go down!
Miyabi: You guys are nuts XD
Momoko: You looking for me captian?
Saki:YOU STOLE MY CANDY >:(
Momoko: And it was delicous >:)
Miyabi: Uh-oh. She is so dead....
Saki: Oh hell no *knocks momo out*
Risako: Whos turn is it to drive to the hospital?
Chinami: Its yurina's turn
Yurina: Aw crap -.-
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End of chapter 2
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this one was pretty amusing with the cheese jokes and what not
Poor Yurina!
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She never saw that one coming XD
Update news- Ill start chapter 3 in awhile I need a nap lol
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Chapter 3- Erina and Yuu's somewhat average day
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Erina: whats up yuu?
Yuu: Nothing just chillin
Erina: True....true....
*phone rings*
Erina: Ill get it
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Erina: Hello?
?: WHERES MY CHOCOLATE??
Erina: wtf?
?: WHERE IS IT?
Erina: Up your bum and round the corner
?:OKAY *hangs up*
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Erina: Whachu doin yuu?
Yuu: nothin just chillin
Erina: True....true
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Sorry for the super short chapters, i couldnt think of anything else XD
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:? no clue what the reference is XD
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I got inspired by this beer commercial and twisted it XD
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Chapter 4- Morning Mania
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Ai: Risa?
Risa: yes?
Ai: i have a secret
Risa: what is it?
Ai: hi tee hee!
Risa: Dude grow up your almost 25 for gods sake
Ai: DONT YOU DARE MENTION THAT >:(
Aika: can you guys get any louder?
Sayumi: yeah, i need my beauty sleep
Ai and Risa: -.-
Sayumi: what. i do.....
Reina: whats all that gibber jabber?
Aika: idk and wheres 9th gen?
Reina: there playing chess
*sounds from the other room*
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Riho: Erina, you cant move there its total bullshit
Erina: YOU KNOW WHAT? THIS GAMES BULLSHIT* knocks over the chessboard and storms out*
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Ai,Risa,Aika,Reina, and Sayumi: 0_0
Reina: such colorful vocabulary
Aika: Her parents must be so proud XD
Sayumi: Who wants to play mario kart?
The rest: I DO!!!
Ai: The last one in the living room is a rotten squid.
*everyone runs to the living room*
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The end.......
Jk its not over yet :)
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I love the randomness :w00t:
and yay for colourful vocab :twothumbs
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Ai is old :lol:
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I would like to thank everyone for reading, including my silent readers :)
Chapter 5- Buono day
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Miyabi: What are you listening to momoko?
Momoko: Perfume :)
Airi: What is so good about them? -.-
Miyabi: Yea, their just three pretty girls and auto-tune
Airi: Their like the three nin version of kesha!
Miyabi: Except they dont look like taylor swift on crack
Momoko: Shut up! Airi i dont flame you for liking lordi, and they dress up like freaking monsters. Miyabi, i dont tease you for liking justin beiber and hes probably a fag!
Miyabi and Airi:.........
Momoko: yeah thats what i thought. who wants to go to cafe buono?
Miyabi and Airi: I do!
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I need to come up with longer chapters.....
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You are very quick with updating new chapters :D
and yeah longer chapters would be nice :thumbsup
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Chapter 5- C-ute busted
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Chisato: Hey saki, did you hear bout momo getting suckerpunched?
Saki: Yeah i should of been there! I wouldve put that shit on youtube, facebook, and myspace.
Chisato: lol
Saki: what?
Chisato: myspace is dead you noob XD
Saki: -.-
Maimi: I have bad news......
Saki: what?
Maimi: Mai got arrested :/
Airi: for what?
Maimi: assault with a weapon
Chisato: What are we gonna tell everyone else?
Saki: nothing......
Maimi, Airi, and Chisato: eh?
Saki: We are gonna break her out :)
Airi: how?
*saki tells the plan*
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Meanwhile in jail
Mai: I guess im your new cellmate
?:yeah i guess.......
Mai: so who are you?
?: Im mika
Mai: As in mika todd?
Mika: yep
Mai: why are you here?
Mika: i stole the presidents cookie -.-
Mai: When are you getting out?
Mika: tomorrow. what are you in for?
Mai: assault with a weapon.
Mika: 0_0 oh ok
BANG
Mai: whats that?
Mika: i dont know....
Guard: Mai your getting out on bail
Mai: yay! bye mika
Mika: bye! stay away from gangs :)
Saki: Mai! :)
Mai: heyy! how did you afford bail?
Airi: you dont wanna know 0_0
Mai:0_0 ok
Maimi: Lets go to KFC :)
the rest: yay!!!
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Meanwhile at kfc
Mai: Atleast no one else found out
Chisato: oh crap -.-
Mai: what?
Chisato: *shows mai the magazine*
Saki: Lets get rid of the articles :)
the rest of c-ute: yeah!
and they got rid of all of tge articles with success
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I like this chapter :)
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interesting chapters you have :lol:
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Now its that special time when ill answer questions from my readers :D
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chapter 6 will be up in awhile be patient :D
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Chapter 6- Morning Coffee
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Ai: I love coffee
Kanon: Can i have some? :)
Ai: No -.-
Kanon: Why? :(
Ai: YOU CANT HANDLE THE COFFEE
Kanon: *slowly backs away, then runs away*
Aika: Must you insist on scaring kids? -.-
Ai: Yep :)
Sayumi: What did I tell you about my beauty sleep?
Ai: Yeah, and what are you gonna do? Usa-chan peace me to death? XD
Sayumi: *pulls out a pistol* Ask me again bitch, I dare you!
Ai: Oh shit......
Reina: Risa, she got another one -.-
Risa: Sayumi really? Violence is not the answer, now give me the weapon.
Sayumi: NEVER MWAHAHAHA *runs out of the house*
Ai: Should we go after her? 0_0
Aika: Nah, she'll probably get drunk and spend the night at miki's place :/
*the rest agree*
Little did they know, they were far from wrong
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Sorry i took so long, i was busy with school.
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Ai-chan is scary ... :cry:
and Sayu... I've always knew she was dark character :sweatdrop:
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Announcement:
If nobody votes by friday I'll post chapter 8, then the short story. So, that way everyone wins. If you still want to ask question concerning the update or etc, just message me or something.
Rant: It's spring in st.louis and it's snowing -.-. I swear global warming is take over :/
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Chapter 8- Morning Adventure
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Ai: Guess who got arrested?
Risa: What did Sayumi do?!
Ai: Use of a illegal firearm
Aika: WTF? Since when Sayumi got all gansta and shit?
Reina: It wasnt involvement with a gang dumbass
Aika: Bitch, shut the fuck up -.-
Risa: Ummm where's 9th gen?
Aika: Dude, They left a week ago. They said something about going to St.louis :)
Reina: There aint shit in St.louis XD
Risa: What about six flags, the mills, and the bread company?
Aika: She's got a point.
Reina: Shut up -.-
Ai: Umm how are we gonna get Sayumi out of prison?
Reina: prostitution?
Risa: Hell, no.
Reina: Well, do you have a better idea?
Risa: I don't, but Aika does :D
Aika: My plan involves shotguns and dynamite
Ai: I like it :)
Reina: My idea was better :twothumbs
Aika: No one cares :thumbdown:
Reina: -.-
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At prison
Sayumi: I should've shot him through the brain :/
* An explosion is heard*
Ai: heyy
Sayumi: umm where's everyone else?
*Screams, gun shots, and broken technology are heard*
Ai: Does that answer your question?
Sayumi: Yea 0_0
Risa: So Sayumi, what happened?
Reina: Yeah, Im curious
Sayumi: Okay this is what happened......
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Flashback
Sayumi: *drinking like theres no tomorrow*
Perv: Hey babe
Sayumi: What do you want? -.-
Perv: Wanna go somewhere private?
Sayumi: Go to hell bitch :/
Perv: Come on *throws himself on her*
Sayumi: uh-uh bitch *shoots him in the leg*
*Screaming is heard and the police arrived*
Police: Sayumi your under arrest
Sayumi: Aww crap -.-
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Risa:0_0
Ai: eh lets go get something to eat
The rest: mmk
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End of chapter 8 :)
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Update news and what not-
I will get started on chapter 9 asap, cause im getting my hair done atm.
Random Question- did u like chapter 8 or the short story better? ( posting an answer is recommended)
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You guys have commenting to do :)
Should I continue my comedy or write a new story
It's for you to decide and yes, you are required to comment
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hmmm it seems like no one is really interested in my story. Ill just take alittle break from this story
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Chapter 10- 9th generation's adventures in St.Louis
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Mizuki: Where should we go first?
Riho: Lets go to the cheesecake factory! I want some full racked ribs and a new york cheesecake :)
Erina: Dude, you are officially a certified fatass -.-
Riho: Shat up :(
Kanon: Lets go to the Galleria
Mizuki: And what? Get ripped off?! Lets just go to the Mills
*Everyone else agrees*
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*At the Mills"
Kanon: Im going go-carting :p
Mizuki: I'll be at Hot Topic
Riho: Im going to gamestop
Erina: I'll be with Kanon
Mizuki: Everyone meet here in 3 hours
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*3 hours*
Mizuki: Where's Chayla?
Riho: Hell If I know -.-
Erina: Whats wrong with you?
Riho: Im tired and these bags are heavy :(
Kanon: Well, at least you didn't have some heterosexual in a pink polo shirt bumping your go-cart >:(
Chayla: Hey dudes, I ish here :D
Erina: Well then, lets get the hell outta here :)
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*Hour and half later*
Mizuki: The hilton......really?
Chayla: Dude! We're leaving tomorrow anyways, so suck it up and shut the hell up :/
Erina : Good night everyone
Kanon: Good night
Riho:Night
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*Back at Japan*
Riho: So Chayla, Are you staying at japan?
Chayla: Nah, I think im going back to Misouri
Erina,Mizuki,Kanon&Riho: Bye Chayla :D
Chayla: Byeee ^_^
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Im back and My birthday is in 9 days :D
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Chapter 11- News Update
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Yurina: Hello, this is the news update with Kumai Yurina
Risako: And Sugaya Risako -.-
Yurina: What's your deal? :/
Risako: I'll tell you later.
Yurina: ok. So, we've noticed that Chayla has a mild case of writer's block
Risako: And she's trying to not go to summer school nor repeat the eighth grade.
Yurina: Yeah, I wish her luck :)
Risako: Me too. Due to those circumstances, updates will come every weekend or so.
Yurina: Yep and that's the news update with Kumai Yurina and Sugaya Risako. By the way, Risako what's wrong???
Risako: Our last 2 singles. That's whats wrong with me ;(
Yurina: Aww, its okay. We all can't be the lead forever.
Risako: But it's not fair ;(
Yurina: Wanna watch Hot Fuzz? It'll make you feel better :)
Risako: Sure :D
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A lot of POV's in this story, interesting plot around all the characters :thumbsup
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Yep, I'm trying to get the characters as involved as possible :)
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you updated :lol:
well as a small suggestion, can u please spread the story out a little, reading the whole thing as a paragraph is a little to restraining :nervous
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you updated :lol:
well as a small suggestion, can u please spread the story out a little, reading the whole thing as a paragraph is a little to restraining :nervous
Sure, no problem. :D
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By the way, sorry for not updating any sooner. I done ALOT of thinking in my chapter and I wanted to make sure everything was A+ material (If you know what I mean).
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^ sorry to hear about that
my best advice for your fic is to also proof read before posting :thumbsup
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so much cliffhanging :lol:
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well well well, i guess its time for me to stop lurking and come out into the light..................
OH. MY. GAWD.....this story.....its.....its....AWESOME XD !!!!! OMG and im so glad ur bakk :cry:
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@darkacex99
Thanks, I'm glad I decided to finish the story :thumbsup. Chapter 8 will be up around 8:30am CST.
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darn it...voting is closed huh...well i think sayumi is the killer...but then again airi could be the one too.... :huhuh ugh idk!!! :doh:
maasa in chapter 7: DANNNNNG sadistic much?
thanks for another update :thumbsup i cant wait to see what happens next XD
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I just posted chapter 8. I hope you can see it :lol:
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opp...mustve missed it somehow XD
wonder wat's gunna happen to reina :(