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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: umichan on March 24, 2013, 02:03:00 AM

Title: umichan's OS Collection 2 | AtsuMina, SaeYuki & others
Post by: umichan on March 24, 2013, 02:03:00 AM
hello I know that I have a shot to finish, but I have a write's block.
I took the decency to write this. I usually don't prefer this paring. I like Takaharu better. I guess it was time time to wirte one.
you guys probably going to hate me.

go this linked. the one-shot was inspired by this song, and I think you guys should listen to this song. I didn't use any lyrics.


TVXQ - Before You Go (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGYG9Em9JsI#)


enjoy


Before U Go


Glass shatter, the table flip over, picture taken from it’s frame are now torn apart, and crying from two people.  What happen?

What happen to us? We used to be so in love. We were always together, we were always happy. I guess things change when we got different jobs. We moved in together in my apartment. Those months, our loved flourish. Time passed and we were still in love, yet they were some difficulties. The money was short, we could barely make it to pay rent, food, and other stuff, but we barely make it to give gifts to each other. We were still in love even if we didn’t find time to see each other in the morning, but every night we knew that we would see each other.  One day I was in my office and my co-worker, Ray, came to get some files. I walked to her, but I tripped. Before I could fall hard on the floor, she caught me, but lost her balance. I was on top of her. Magically you came in. I was frozen in place; I saw how your cheerful eyes turned into sad ones. I heard Ray say, “Get off me, your girlfriend is running away”. I got off her, and run to you. That time I told you everything that happen, and you forgave me, but you still had that idea that I cheated on you.

Time passed and we were living a little happier. Once again you suspected of me cheating on you when I got home really late; I came late some other times. I know that you suspected me, but I was working extra hours just to buy you an engagement ring. I didn’t want you to know, that’s why I came late those days.
One day I decided to go to your job. You started to act weird for a week or so before I came to your office. When I went to your office, you were there with your co-worker, Yuko, you guys were looking at each other passionately, but you came back to your senses when you saw me. Why didn’t I notice? I started to have problems, problems with my work efficiency and money. My work efficiency dropped since I saw you with you with Yuko that time. I was jealous, insecure. That was the way we used to see each other. Money was low even if I worked extra hours, I still had not enough money to get your engagement ring and pay the rent.  Yet I got the chance to buy the ring. One night Ray and my co-workers told me if I wanted to join them in a party. That night I got drunk, and I went to our apartment. I was a little conscious of what I was doing, but you couldn't see that. You told me why was I drunken and I don’t remember what I said but you slapped me. 

I was getting tiered, I was stress with my work and with the fight we had later. One day I decided to talk to you, to come early to our house. I knew you were going to be there because that was your day off. I bought you some flowers and when I got to our apartment you weren’t in the living room. I went to our room but, but I stop when I near it. Surprise to hear noise. Those noises that were only mines and yours. I heard how two people were having sex. I heard as you moan her name, “Yuko”. How stupid was I not to open the door and stop you two, but I didn’t wanted to see the reality. I run away from there I ended up in the bar where my co-workers took me. When I return, I saw you sitting on the couch. I was angry at you. I was drunk; my sense only gathered my anger at you. That night I tried to take you by force; those lips that were saying “no….stop” were the most unlikeable thing I have ever taste, yet they were the most intoxicating pleasure. The way I stripped you, only to hear you say, “No please Minami. Stop”. It was only lust, but then I got tired of it, it made me sick afterward. I still had you under me, and I kissed you roughly, then I made my way down your neck and that’s when you stop me. With all the strength you had, you push me away and told me to get out of there.  My smart mouth and my unconscious mind had to answer you. “This is my apartment. You go to your Yuko, and then fuck her. You can’t even look at me after what you did, isn’t that true?” a hard slap came across my face and you left. I was crying there in the corner of my room. I didn’t know what had gotten into me, but I just had to let it out. I felt terrible for what I did. Then I remember that I had you engagement ring on my pocket. I reach for it and I cried even more. Why did this have to happen? Why did I stop myself? Is love not enough?

Days passed then yesterday you came. I didn’t know how to greet you after what happen, but I kept my head down. I saw you as you went to my room. I followed you and saw you getting your thing out of the closet. I tried to stop you, but you pushed me away. I started to talk and we went on, even we came out of my room. Talk, let me rephrase that, we yelled at each other. I was angry and so were you. I didn’t want to hit you so I flipped the table and out of range I throw the vase that had flower in it. And you out of rage you took out the picture, our memories, and torn them apart. My heart sink as each passing minute we were hurting each other; not physically, but emotionally. We both were crying our hearts out. Our final fight lasted until the sun was rising.

Now I’m here sitting at a corner of the living room, crying.  I’m waiting for you to finish packing your things. Our memories of when I first met you run thru me, memories when we declare our love to each other, when we said our first” I will always love you forever”, I guess forever isn’t always forever. Memories when we made love, when we were happy, and when I bought your ring. Its sad isn’t it? To let go of a person that you thought you will always love and protect.
I see walk out of my room. I stand up and you walk towards the door; I went to you. I’m silent.

“I’m sorry that things didn’t work out between us……I…really thought you were the one…” you say as tears come down your cheeks.

“I’m sorry for everything that I didn’t, for loving you more than my own life” I try to stable my tears as I don’t want you to think I’m weak, but in reality I am.

You turn around and grab your bag. You take step down the two stairs that leads to the living room, but before you take another step, I back hug you. I this moment
I’m a little taller than.

“I’m sorry that I couldn’t do anything to stop this. I really wanted you to be happy with me.” I said as I buried my face to your shoulders. That perfume, I will miss.
I feel you put you face down.

“I wanted to be yours forever, but I couldn’t. That time it was just lust, and I didn’t know what to do. I’m sorry for cheating on you” you cry.

“Its okay. I will remember you not for that event, but or the precious moments we had.” I say as I start to rub her upper arms. I turned her around and search for her eyes. Those eyes that are now red, I want to see them like they were always were; cheerful. I close the gap that is between us. Lips clashed and I could feel how our feelings were in that kiss. That delicate, yet passionate kiss. I hear how your bags dropped, but I pay no attention to it. I still want to taste those delicious lips. I feel your hands go around my neck and I want to be like this a little more. I break off the kiss and I put my face near your cheeks.

“I guess love isn’t enough” I push you off lightly and I remember that I have her ring. I take the box out and you look at me with confusion.

“Before you go, I want to tell you that those years were…I mean are the best years of my life. Since we met in high school, and all the way here. I wish it could have gone another way. I sincerely love you, and I don’t know what I will do after this, but I’ll carry on. I love you” I give you a hug.

“This is why I was coming late does day. Keep it. It will do me no good because it’s for you” I give the box and I see you take it such care. You turn around and open the door. Before you took a step I heard you say, “I love you, but it wasn’t enough”.

I stand here looking at the close door, my emotions fill over me. “Thank you” I whisper

“I love you”

I will have to move on and look at the future that is upon me. It will take time to heal, but I will always have in mind that you were my first love and my first heartbreak.

“I love you”




I hope you guys like it.

don't hate me please.



........until the day comes.......
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: Sydney W on March 24, 2013, 02:44:54 AM
Wow, opening story with the sappy ending. It's heartbreaking
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: saeyukilover on March 24, 2013, 02:50:50 AM
okay I know I'm stupid for asking this question but the girl could be any girl right? its already atsumina but still.. I mean in my head it could be acchan but I don't want acchan to cheat on takamina specially with yuko... also it could be haruna but don't want nyan nyan to cheat on takamina with yuko and say that night is just for lust.....noooo!!! but anyway you have great story here  :)

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: chichay12 on March 24, 2013, 02:53:32 AM
this was SO......
 :cry: :cry: :cry:
i cant take it...
ATSUMINA  :banghead:
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: cisda83 on March 24, 2013, 06:11:02 AM
Ah... is it Atsumina fic? if it is... ah... so sad that Atsumina is no more

I feel sad for Minami... for not doing anything wrong but being accuse of cheating... while she just wanted to buy an engagement ring for her

And also Atsuko should not have cheated on Minami with Yuko...

She should have done what Minami had done.. by trying to make their relationship work again...

She could have gone to Minami's company to see if Minami was really working or cheating on her... before accusing and cheating...

Also Minami should have just told Atsuko...the truth or the half truth i.e. needing the money to pay rent and saving some money for rainy days... or needing money to buy stuff.. or needing money to give you a better life... without telling Atsuko... needing the money to buy engagement ring

Great OS there....

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the lovely OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: Hii_chan on March 24, 2013, 09:51:20 AM
thanks for update :thumbsup
your fic is so great
it seem like the truth cause I always see more picture of Yuko and Acchan and they seem happy :(
you like Takaharu  :shocked I like too :w00t:
so why dont you make one more fic about this pairing
I'll looking forward to it :bow:
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: TakaminaBG on March 24, 2013, 10:30:46 AM
What the heck did I just read!?!?!
It's early in the morning and I just woke up and you got me crying!!
I was hoping for a  happy ending, but it's still good although it's a bad one.
Thank you for this update!
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot
Post by: Kazan on March 24, 2013, 11:06:06 AM
I don't hate you :D
I like it and i would prefer if you continue the story of sae's key  XD
I like takaharu too and i agree with hii_chan why don't you make fic about them.
About this fic is so sad although i don't like sad ending but it's great the storyline is good.
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: umichan on March 24, 2013, 03:57:25 PM
hello people
hey I think people are saying that I should write another shot of this paring.
I might do it, but you guys I prefer TakaHaru.
so I put this poll. I also thought of doing updates of Atsumina shots here because I don't want them to go to my other topic where I put my shots of random parings.
well I guess is your choice now and up next my update of Sae's key(probably on Tuesday)


thank you

.......until the day comes.....
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: Hii_chan on March 24, 2013, 05:17:41 PM
If you like Takaharu then let make more fic about this pairing
I want to read more fic about Takaharu
please..please . :bow:
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: bimbo on March 24, 2013, 06:40:34 PM
I'm not voting because my option is not there  :P
I won't mind another Atsumina shot but I think rather than going with majority, why don't you write what you want to? I'm sure there are many people out there wanna read other than mainstream pairings. I'm rooting for TakaTomo actually lol. But Takamina X Anyone is fine  XD
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: Haruko on March 24, 2013, 08:42:33 PM
Awww my atsumina feeling.. T_T why takaboy why..
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: Kazan on March 25, 2013, 01:06:21 AM
 :w00t: yeah takaharu
Hoho you would update sae'key  :thumbup
Ya right why you dont wrote what you want to?
I like your anyone pairing
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: Tanchan on March 25, 2013, 03:12:10 AM
Well that's sad but Takamina may find another person who won't cheat on her. Ray seems nice in this by the way so may be she could be the right person for her? This is probably the first time I don't hate Ray.

About the poll, Atsumina or Takatomo, I would have voted both if Takatomo was an option but since there's only Atsumina, I'll go with Atsumina of course XD
Title: Re: Before U Go (AtsuMina) one- shot+Announcement+poll
Post by: Wmatsui22 on March 25, 2013, 11:49:04 PM
Hi. Umichan-san :)

This is a good One-Shot of AtsuMina although it's a sad one :(

I thought Minami and Acchan will be okay in the end but it turns

out that they are not meant to each other :(

This story is good.

Please make  more with a good ending :D

Thanks for making this :D
Title: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki) - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on June 20, 2013, 11:26:24 PM
hi...its been a long time since i updated something....i'm sorry.

I just remember this story that I had in my flash drive.....so i'm posting it here.
I think the story is confusing.
Enjoy.




Why I love you
The other day my friend asked me why I love you, I didn’t respond to her that day. I guess I don’t know, but at the same time I know why I love you. It’s a feeling that I never thought I would experience and that I never desire; however, when we started to be friends I knew there was something different about you that fascinated me. Fascination is not the answer, but I know you captivate me. I look at you like if you are the most valuable treasure in the world, yet you don’t notice. Its feels like if I’m a vampire searching for its pray, for its lover. I feel like I need to protect you at any cost, even from your friends.

Why I love you? I love you smile. That smile, that keeps me up at night when I feel lonely makes me feel warm. Sometimes I wish you could only smile for me because to me it’s like if you were always happy with everything. When we see each other you smile, and I tried to smile at you but I can’t. I don’t want you to notice me smiling. You don’t know that I love you because I’m afraid that it will end our friendship. Even if you don’t love, I still want to see your smile, that smile that I love.

Why I love you? I guess it’s your laugh. That laugh that makes my heart skip a beat, makes me smile like an idiot, and makes me happy. Your life is like a melody that even the angles would like to hear when they wake up from their slumber. Infinite sound of the G chord that plays over and over again makes my heart beat fast.

Why I love you? Your reactions and the way you act. I love when you miss a question or when people tell you something shocking. The way you react is like of a goddess .your over reactions make me laugh and your shocking reactions make my heart flutter. I’m smitten by that, I blush a little.  The way you pled so I can help you with your homework, make me want to say no, so you can pled even more.

Why I love you?  I love your eyes, those eyes that I love staring at. A mysterious look takes upon me and it fascinates me.  Those eyes that see with a different point of view and see life with another color are what I love. Those pure eyes that haven’t seen evil like I have are the yearning of my soul.

Why I love you? I love you because you fit perfectly in my arms when we hug.  The way our hands fit perfectly when we hold hands. Mines are cold and yours are warm. I love you just like the way you are, with your flaws and with your doubts.  I love you because you are you and no one can take that from you. I love you because you are the only person that I believe in, the only person that I will tell my deepest secret, and because I know that no matter where you are I’ll miss you more than own soul.

I love you yet you don’t know, it hurt to see you with another person that is not even your lover. I know I have no right to tell you where are you or what were were you doing with that person. I feel jealous every time you are with you friend and when you put your arm over her shoulder. Its just that I love you and I can’t help it to think the worst.
Now I know how to respond to Sayaka without any fear or without any pauses. I know now why I love you and what to say to her.


-Sae’s room-

“That’s why I love her, and I will always feel about her the same way.” Sae told the person in front of her.

“How can you love her after what you did to those people” Sayaka asked

“Those people deserve it; they killed my family. Even if I’m not pure anymore, I have the right to love someone.” Sae walk to her window.

“Love can kill you too, why did you have to fell in love with her if you know that our agency doesn’t allow that” Sayaka walk towards Sae.

“plus I told you that day when we both…..i told you not to fall in love from any one from our school that it will hurt if you know what kind of families they were into”
Sayaka blush a little before continuing.

“Yes I remember, but now I want to retired from the agency and I want to have a normal high school life” Sae told Sayaka with an upset tone.

“You are crazy, if you knew what kind of family Yuki is in you’ll regret loving her” Sayaka sounded angry.

“You are just upset that I love her and not you” Sae push Sayaka aside and left the room. Sae was a top agent in a secret agency where you have to kill people for the
bad thing they have done. She wondered around the agency until she saw her boss, Takamina, walking towards her.

“Good morning boss-sama” Sae vowed.

“Sae I already told you to drop the Sama” Takamina said to her and then smile.

“Well here are the papers you have to fill out in order to approve your retirement” Takamina handed the paper and then left without any other words. Afterwards Sae
got out of the building and drove her Lamborghini Aventador. She had this card since she enter the last year of her high school, Takamina gave it to her because she
had pass her AP class.

She decided that she needed to drive in the city and in the hallway, so she can figure out what she needed to do. She knew from the first day that retirement meant
she would lose any opportunity from doing what they were doing and from losing money, but what she fear the most was that retirement meant to do one of the
riskiest mission of their live. She remembered what happen to Kumi and she did her mission, she never saw her again.

After some minutes she stopped her car without noticing where she ended up. Then she looked around and she found a person that her heart beat for.

“Hey Yuki, what are you doing here” Sae got out from her car, but Yuki didn’t notice her because she was staring at her phone.

“Hey Yuki are you okay” she waved her hand in front of Yuki and Yuki notice.

“Aahh, Sae you scare me. What are you doing here?”  Yuki looked at Sae with questioning eyes.

“That’s what I’m wondering about you. Where you waiting for someone” Sae said as she sat next to her.

“Oh no I was just lost and my cell phone doesn’t have any signal” Yuki told Sae with a smile. Sae’s heart skipped a beat.

“I haven’t seen you for a long time, where are you hiding” Yuki asked

“I have gone to school, is just that I have to leave early for the past couple of weeks because I had to do something” Sae rubbed the back of neck look to the other
side. She knew she couldn’t tell the truth to Yuki, no one actually.

“I miss you” Yuki said as she looked at her shoes.

“I miss you too” Sae tried not to blush but it was impossible.

“Oh, hey do you want me to take you home” Sae asked as she got up.

“But you don’t have a car” Yuki answer.

“I actually do” Sae turn around and pointed to her car. Yuki was shocked by the beautiful car.

“That’s…..your…?” Yuki starrer.

“Yeah, it was a gift from my……yeah it was a gift” Sae awkwardly smile.

“So do you want me to drive you home” Sae once again asked. Yuki nodded and now they were in their way to Yuki’s house. They were talking and laughing, Sae
really enjoyed it and she knew that Yuki was the girl that she needed to confess to. When they got to Yuki’s house, Sae got out so she could open the door for Yuki.

“Thank you” Yuki blushed. Sae walked her to the entrance of her looking-like-a-mansion-house.

“Well good-bye” Yuki told Sae, and before she walked away Sae grab her wrist and turn her and hug her. Yuki was a little surprise by this action, but she respond to it. What Sae didn’t know was that Yuki was actually in love with her, but both of them where scare to say it. Sae was intoxicated by Yuki’s perfume and the sense of her’s. It was minutes later that Sae decided to talk.

“Yuki, I miss you. I want us to go to Disney land like we used to” Sae told Yuki.

“I miss you too, and yes we should go, but you know that my family has problems right now” Yuki hold Sae tighter. She enjoyed it.  Then she pushed gently Sae.

“I got to go now talk to you some other time” Yuki turned around and enter her house.


-Someday later-


“We have your last mission, and if you survive it we will make you the right honors and I personal will make recommendation to any University you want” Takamina
said as she look to Sae. They were in Takamina’s office.

“Here is the person you have to killed, they say that there branch president has done some trades with the Russian, Italian, and German mafia. Sae I have to tell you something, but first you have to open the file” Takamina threw a folder full of paper. When Sae open it her eyes widen. No it couldn’t be possible what she was seeing.
It was Yuki’s step-father. The step-father whom Yuki learn to like after her real father died when she was 8.

“Takamina, I….can’t do this.” Sae said as she closed her file.

“If you want to retired, do this last mission then you will be free” Takamina serious.

“No I can’t, I can’t kill her father” Sae got up and she shouted at Takamina.

“Step-father. I have a strong reason for you to kill him. Remember when your parents were killed.” Takamina got closer to Sae.

“Yeah, I killed them” Sae looked at Minami with questioning eyes.

“Well, he was the one who planned it all”

By hearing this she was shock. The Father figure of the person that she loved the most was the one that killed her family, her dad, her mom, and his little brother. She didn’t knew what to do.

“You have to do this in order to retired, if not you have to stay here.” Takamina warn Sae.

She had no other choice, she was tiered of seeing how people die, even if they were bad people, they still had the decency to pled and beg for their lives. She had to do it.

“Okay I’ll leave, but how do you expect me to kill my friend’s step farther.” Sae turn around.

“You will have to plan it; this is your last mission. And don’t mix personal feeling with working ethics” Takamina said as she sat on her chair.

“Okay, I’ll try” Sae open the door and left.


- Sometime later-


Sae was now in her apartment, she was crying. She couldn’t believe what Minami had told her. How can she kill the father figure of the person that she loves the most? It pains her that he was the one who plan the killing of their family, but she had avenged them when she killed those monsters. Now it would become a full revenge killing the person.


-The day had come-


The day for her had come; she had to do this in order to get out. All was planned she help from her friend Sayaka which she told her to tell Yuki they would meet at a park. This was because Sae didn’t wanted Yuki to hear anything that day. She knew it would hurt her, but Yuki’s mom would be hurt even more, so she also told Sayaka to invite Yuki’s mom too.

The stage was set, now all she had to do was to begin with the master plan. She knew Yunho, Yuki’s step father, was with the Russian, Italian mafia, so she had to be
careful with what she did. They were in a big building hidden in the woods.


-Somewhere in a park-


[Step dad]: hey some of my man will pick you up and bring you to me, so be ready

[Yuki]: I’m in the park

Yuki closed her cell phone and looked around, and then she saw Sayaka and told her that she had to do something very important and left. Yuki knew that Sayaka and Sae were in some kind of organization because they were always leaving early from school and because Yunho told her. She also knew that Yunho was participating with the mafia in order to protect his organization because It was her fault that all the three mafias were threating his step dad’s agency.


-Somewhere in the woods-


‘If you survive you will be free’

Takamina’s word hunted Sae; she knows that this will be her last mission.

There were guards everywhere but she notice that they took if one left to go inside on form the same section will replace that person. So that’s how it started, she had a sniper with a silencer and she on the floor. She shot down 4 people and then she run to the other side where they had only guards, she shot them both. Then she went to another side shot down 3 guards, now three sides had no guards, only the front had guards. Then out no where she received a call.

“Sayaka what do you want” Sae sounded irritated. She had no time to answer calls she was on a mission.

“Yuki walked away from me and I saw her getting in to a black GMC” Sayaka sounded worried.

“Why didn’t you stop her?” Sae yell luckily no one heard her.

“She said she had something important to do and her mom is with me, but she just receives a message and left” Sayaka said.

“Oh god….well call me if something happens, I’m depending on you. You know if something happens to me; get the letter that is in my locker” with that Sae hanged
up. She moved closer to the building and stop when she heard a car coming. She hided, it was a black GMC. Then she remembered what Sayaka told her.

When one of the doors open she saw Yuki coming out with something wrapped around her eyes. She knew that she couldn’t stand there and see how Yuki was dragged to the door of the building. She changed her plan and went with another one. 

After Yuki was forced to enter the building, Sae shot the man in the front door, with a gun that had a silencer. After that she waited for a couple of minutes until she saw the men who were dragging Yuki got out, and in that moment she shot them.


-Inside the building-


 “So I see that you will give us your step daughter as a apologetic gift.” The one who has in charge of the Italian mafia, talk as he was staring lustfully at Yuki.

“Yep, she is the price so you guys will let me trade and as for you.” Yunho said and then pointed to the person who was in charge of the Russian Mafia.

“You will forgive what she did to your highest in command” Yunho said in a cold way.

“Yeah, what she did was unforgettable. Killing the wrong person” The Russian guy said.

Yunho walked closer to Yuki and said he was sorry and that he will make it up to her after all was finish, and he kissed her cheeks.

“Take her to the room on the right” Yunho told one of his men, but before the man got to her, Sae sent flying the door.

“You bastard, what are you doing. Get him” Yunho order his man to attack Sae. Yuki still had her eyes cover, didn’t know who that person was until…

“Let her go, and I will spare your life” Sae said as she pointed her gun towards Yunho.

“Sae?” Yuki said worried. She knew she was that Sae was in some kind of agency, but she never thought that she would be there.

“Let her go” Sae shouted. Then one of the men of Yunho tried to punch Sae, but she dodged it and ended up hitting him the back sending him off to the wall.

“Come on, you guys wouldn’t let her go well, I’ll fight for her” Sae started to run where the other man where. She beat them up rally easily because to knock out 2
and shot 1. While all of this was happening the Russian guy and the Italian guy were getting closer to Yuki.

“Hey lets go to the other room shall we” the Italian guy told Yuki.

“No, she will come with me” the Russian guy got hold of Yuki’s arm and forced her to his side.

“No she will come with me, I had an arrangement with Yunho” the Italian guy pointed to Yunho.

“No she is with me and no one else” Sae shouted as she threw a body away from her. Sae was an expert on doing this kind of job. She was actually a sergeant, and
soon to be Capitan, but she wanted to retired.

The Russian guy got his gun out and she pointed it to Yuki.

“If you want her to leave, you will have to let her go, so I can play with her” the Russian guy threatened Sae. By hearing this Sae didn’t knew how to react. She had
never had one of her teammate be taken as a hostage.

“Drop the gun and leave her with me” Russian guy said.

“Ivan, that’s not on what we deal on, Miguel, would get her first” Yunho step in to the conversation

“Shut up Yunho” the guy named Ivan pointed to Yunho. Sae saw this as an opportunity to tackle Ivan and get Yuki out of his hands. Sae grab Yuki’s hand and run to
the entrance door but Miguel run to them and punch Sae on the back making her fall.

“She is my price” Miguel shouted as she grabbed Yuki hand and took the blindfold of her.

“Don’t touch her she is mine” Sae got up clumsily and punch Miguel sending him of the ground.

“Yuki are you okay” Sae said in a worried voice. She checked her before they heard a loud explosion. Then Sae’s cell phone rang.

“Sayaka was that you”

“Yes, I’m not going to let you die, not like Kumi”

“I need to hung up one of the guys are standing up”

“Bitch, how there you hit me” Ivan shouted, then run towards Sae. Sae was fast enough to throw him another punch, sending him again to the ground. Then Sae
came in front of Yuki and pointed her gun towards Yunho.

“You…..you were the one who planned my parent’s death. Why? Why did you did it” Sae shouted

“Because they owned me money, do you wonder how you got the school you are now.” Yunho chuckle

“They said they were working really hard for it” Sae looked to her side.

“Well, they asked me for money so their little daughter would have a great future, but I guess that didn’t work.” Yunho laugh

“Shut up, you are lying. Even if they did ask you for the money, you had no necessity for killing them” Sae shouted. She didn’t know what to do. She had her revenge
a year ago, but she thought she was finish.

Yunho started to laugh and Sae was getting annoyed by that and shot him in the knee, that shut him up. Sae and Yuki got out of the room and walked towards the main exit door until they heard a shot. It hit Sae in her knee cap. She fell down.

“Sae are you okay?” Yuki asked worriedly. She was about to cry, but Sae’s words stopped her from doing do so.

“Please don’t cry I’m fine” Sae got up and grabbed Yuki’s hand and run. Miguel who was still conscious shot Sae, and also started to run.

“Her girl, leave her to me. She is my pay” he shot again, he missed. Then Sae got her gun and shot back, but she also missed. Then when they were only few meter
away from the main exist, Sae trip and she yell out in pain.

“Yuki run” she shouted. Yuki just stood there looking at her like she was crazy. Yuki didn’t wanted to leave her in this state, so she help Sae to get up and know both
of them turn around to see Miguel walking towards them.

“Pathetic. Hey you do you love her?” Miguel shouted as she got hold of Sae’s hair. Sae was surprise at the question the man had just given. Of course she loves her.

“Yes…..” Sae whispered. When she said she did the man threw her of and walked where she had landed. Yuki had heard what Sae had responded she could not believe that the person she loves her too. She stood there, but something brought her to reality.

“Aaaahhh” Sae yell. Miguel had stomped on the knee cap he shoot. It hurt like hell. Sae had experience that kind of pain when she just started her missions.
Yuki try to run to her but Miguel pointed his gun towards her.

“Yuki….run…..away..” Sae said weakly.

“Don’t even dare to move, you are going to be mine” Miguel walked closer and started to rip Yuki’s cloth, Yuki struggled to take the man of her, he was to strong. Sae seeing this made a powerful will and run to the guy. She pushed him of her and now Miguel pull out his gun and before he could shoot, Sae grabbed his hand where the gun was and they trying to get out of the situation

Bang……Bang…

Miguel fell to the ground and Sae turn around and smiled to Yuki. She started to walk, but fell. Yuki ran to her and grab her head before it could actually hit the floor.

“Sae, are you okay. Some body help” Yuki yell. She didn’t knew what to do, she panic.

“It’s okay, hey….i…love….you..”Sae said while she started to cry. She had to say it before anything else would occur. Yuki at this point started to cry, but it weren’t
tears of pain or sadness, they were of happiness.

“I love you too” Yuki wiped out the tears that were travelling down her cheeks. Then she notice some blood was slowly dropping from Sae’s torso.

“Yuki…. call…. Sayaka” Sae slowly reach for her pocket and gave her cell phone to Yuki. Then Yuki called Sayaka, she told her that help was on the way and that she will be there any second now.

“Hey…..do you really love me?” Yuki looked at Sae with such tenderness that it made her look even more gorgeous.

“Yes, of course I really don’t care if you step father planned my parent’s death, I already got my revenge on the people who actually did it.” Sae chuckle even though it hurt her side.

“I love you too, I don’t know when was when I realize that I loved you, but I can’t hide it from you” Yuki said as she cress Sae’s cheek. Then Sae cough and it was blood.

“Promise me that whatever happens you will move on, I know….that….we never became girlfriends, but I love you more than my own life” Sae said as she touched with her hand Yuki’s cheek. Then she slightly brought her face closer to her. The rays of sunshine went thru a window nearby, it was wonderful. Lips clash into each other, the feelings that both had were there with the kiss.

“Thank you….i….love….you..” that was the last thing that Sae said before everything went black.


-2 days after: Hospital-


“Hey why don’t you go to sleep, I take care of her while she is still sleeping” Takamina said to Yuki.

“Okay thank you” Yuki vowed and left the room with such pain.

She was in the hospital since Sae was shot and brought to the hospital. Takamina’s people had clean up the place and Yuki’s mom actually killed Yunho for cheating on her with some girl. Yuki also got to know who was Sae working with, they were nice people. Even though they were still in the last year of their High school, she never thought they were more mature than her, but more fun too.

As she is walking down the hall, she notice someone coming her way, it was Sayaka.

“Here, Sae wanted me to give it to you if something happen.” Sayaka handed her a envelope.

“I knew for a long time that both of you were in love with each other, but I just wanted you guys to say it to each other.” Sayaka walked away with a smile on her
face”

-Yuki's room-

Dear, Yuki

I have to tell that over the past years I have admired you. I know you are friend, and I like being your friend. I have to tell you that I love you. I love you more than a friend. I don’t know when it happen but one day I was just thinking about you the whole time, and without realizing it I was falling for you.
Now you might want to ask yourself why you? Why do I love you.

The other day my friend asked me why I love you, I didn’t respond to her that day. I guess I don’t know, but at the same time I know why I love you. It’s a feeling that I never thought I would experience and that I never desire; however, when we started to be friends I knew there was something different about you that fascinated me. Fascination is not the answer, but I know you captivate me. I look at you like if you are the most valuable treasure in the world, yet you don’t notice. Its feels like if I’m a vampire searching for its pray, for its lover. I feel like I need to protect you at any cost, even from your friends.
Why I love you? I love your smile. That smile that keeps me up at night when I feel lonely makes me feel warm. Sometimes I wish you could only smile for me because to me it’s like if you were always happy with everything. When we see each other you smile, and I tried to smile at you but I can’t. I don’t want you to notice me smiling. You don’t know that I love you because I’m afraid that it will end our friendship. Even if you don’t love, I still want to see your smile, that smile that I love…………………(the rest is the fist thing of this fanfic)

Yuki was now crying. She never knew of this feeling that Sae felt towards her, it was like if she was filled with joy but at the same time she was sad. Did all this had to happen for both of them to say “I love you” to each other.


-The next day-


‘Please Sae wake up. I need you’ Yuki though as she is softly touching Sae’s cheeks.

“Sae wake up, I need to tell you more times that I love you” Yuki was crying. She never felt this frustrating feeling; she was really in love with her. The minutes pass
and nothing; she was still awake. Sayaka came in without knocking or anything, she just barged in and sat in the empty chair that was in the room. Sayaka knew that
right now her friend was sleeping, she needed it.

“Hey” Sayaka said as she cross her legs. Yuki looked at her and she seem very sad.

“So how long have you known” Sayaka asked flatly.

“What are you talking about” Yuki seem confused, but then she remember.

“…a long time ago. Yunho told me” Yuki look to her side and then at Sae. Sayaka didn’t seem surprise at all, she already knew everything.

“Ah…okay. You want to know something” Sayaka giggled. Yuki looked at her and then she nodded.  Yuki didn’t notice but Sae was opening her eyes, but Sayaka did.

“Me and Sae once had se-“Sayaka said but was stop by Sae mumbling

“Yu…ki” Sae said softly. The pain was there and her eyes were adjusting to the light. Yuki quickly turn around and saw how Sae was forcing herself to talk.

“Don’t tried, you are much tiered” Yuki said as she took hold of Sae’s cheeks. Sae was very happy that the person she loves was there with her.

“Hey…before I fell more tired, I want you to ask something” Sae said as she took hold of Yuki’s hand. They both felt warm, the warmth that both of them having
waiting for.

“Can…you…be my girlfriend” Sae asked shyly. Yuki was taken aback by that question, but then she smiled and nodded. Sayaka was there watching them and she had a bright smile on her face.

“So….i guess…..i’ll be leaving now” Sayaka walked to the door and before she could step out she said, “be happy, I’ll see at the agency” Sayaka smirk, then leave.

Sae and Yuki were now alone in the hospital room. They both felt really happy, yet Sae still felt pain. Sae took hold of Yuki’s cheeks and brought her to her face. Their foreheads were touching; they didn’t want this moment to end. Then they close the gap that was between them; the beautiful feeling that was inside of them flourished. Both wanted to do this a really long time ago, but I as you read, they were scared.

They separate slowly and then….

“Oh yeah, by the way….me and her had sex a really long time ago. She did moan your name, but that didn’t bother me. Okay, bye” Sayaka had come in to tell Yuki what a couple of minutes ago wanted to say. She grinned and quickly closed the door. As she was walking she laughed. The truth was that she did love Sae once but now she had met a new trainee.

Back in the hospital room; it was very awkward for Sae and Yuki. Sae at this moment is regretting ever sleeping with Sayaka. Yuki was kind of shock by what Sayaka had said, she never thought that Sae had done that and moa-

“Hey…you can go home now” Sae smiled awkwardly. She didn’t know what to say or how to react. Yuki look at her and she did look kind of hurt.

“Hey don’t say that to not when I know you and her…”Yuki slightly punch Sae on her torso, making Sae yell in pain. Yuki had her black aura.

“aahhh….that hurt. Why are you so aggressive?” Sae try to control the pain in her torso, but then she saw Yuki getting on top of her.

“What are you doing” Sae seem surprise. Then suddenly Yuki started to kiss Sae and parted away.

“Can’t I kiss my girlfriend” Yuki kiss Sae again. They both were getting intoxicating with each other smell. Then Sae push Yuki and that movement made Sae yelp in pain.

“Are you jealous?” Sae asked in a teasing tone. Yuki just rolled her eyes and look to her side.

“See, that’s why I love you” Sae said as she hold Yuki check and kiss her roughly.

Sometime later, Sae got discharged of the hospital. She got the permission to retire; she graduated with the highest honors the school could ever give. Takamina had given her the recommendation for the school she wanted to go. Yuki got accepted to the same school Sae was going to go in. The agency was still running, Sayaka being the Capitan, was running very well. Sae and Yuki live a happy live after all that.
 



I think its pretty long.......

well now, i'm off to be lazy and get my mind on and star updating the fanfics I have to update.

..........until the day comes.....
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: Shinoki on June 20, 2013, 11:51:58 PM
That was pretty interesting
and... lol?... yuki's mom killed Yunho for cheating on her... wow...
sob... Kumi is dead in your one-shot? sad...
the awkwardness~ TwinTowers had sex, but Sae moaned Yuki's name? meh~
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: kuro808 on June 20, 2013, 11:55:12 PM
That was a sad story to what happened to Sae to save Yuki from the mafia.  Although Sayaka set the record straight before she left :nervous
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: DiVAGal2458 on June 21, 2013, 12:37:40 AM
I really enjoyed that story :twothumbs...i just wish it wasn't a one shot and more detailed about the saeyuki relationship after the hospital thing  :D
Sayakas line about the sex really took me by suprise and made me laugh  :cathappy:  O0
I hope you write more saeyuki fics!  :wub:
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: Kazan on June 21, 2013, 11:34:19 AM
 :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: it was amazing umichan. thank you for this amazing story.
btw when you will update tale of spider and butterfly. I'm really looking forward to it  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: fuu_kun on June 21, 2013, 11:46:38 AM
Superb saeyuki oneshoot! I love iit so much :heart: much much.. Too long? Yap, but not boring and I  love how the story goin.. Kyaaa~ I hope you find another saeyuki at your flashdish and post it in here :3 thankyou so much for this one shoot :bow:
Title: Re: Why I love you [one-shot] (SaeYuki)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on June 23, 2013, 01:02:33 PM
You can actually feel the awkwardness XD
It's been a really long time since I last read a saeyuki fic ♥
Title: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS) - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on August 09, 2013, 07:10:29 PM
hi people. I know that I have other fics that are not finish but give more time. i'm too lazy sometimes or I have stuff in life that keep me away.

enjoy this fic!!!

don't hate me!!


A person was walking towards a café where she would meet the person that she loves the most. She was happy and she had her energetic smile from ear to ear. Without her noticing two people were following her; they were worried about her friend. When they got there, the woman went to her usual sit and the other two went to the back so they would spy on her and her companion.

“Yuki, you look pretty today” the woman complemented the person that was in front of her.

“You too Sae” Sae look down from the embarrassment that she felt. It was like that most of the time.

“How you been?” Sae asked with a smile. From the corner of the room the two women were starting to get upset.

“When is she going to stop?”

“Calm down Yuko”

“How can I calm down, doesn’t she know? Sayaka we need to stop her” the girl named Yuko was about to walk towards the couple, but Sayaka block her way.

“Leave her alone she will realize one day” Sayaka unblock Yuko’s way and decided to leave before seen her friend Sae smiling. Yuko did the same thing.


Sae was walking in the subway remembering how she met Yuki. That day was raining and Yuki had forgotten her umbrella but Sae had seen this and even though Yuki was a stranger back then, she told her they could share her umbrella.

“oi….Sae-chan” two girls were running towards Sae.

“Takamina. Acchan” Sae stop walking so her friends would be able to catch up.

“Where are you guys going?”

“We are going to Mariko’s house. You want to come?” Takamina asked. Mariko will be happy to see them because ever since she got to collage she hasn’t seen them that much, unlike Haruna.

“Yeah everybody is going to be there” Acchan insisted.

“No thank you” Sae told them with a sad tone. Then she looked at her watch.

“Sorry guys, but I have to go. See you tomorrow at school” with this said she walked faster and before any of the two could say something, she run.

“She run away again”

“We have to stop her one day”

“We will”


Three girls were in the music room of their school. Sae was playing the piano and the other two were talking.

“She plays like angel”

“Kasai, you idiot. She started since she was six years old”

“You are just jealous that I’m paying more attention to her than to you”

“Me. Jealous? What do I have to jealous of her?”

Where Sae was, she fell happy that finally sensei let her play the piano with her girlfriend.

“So these are the some keys that I learn from this song”

“You play really well” Yuki smile and Sae return the smile.

“You play like an expert” Yuki chuckled.

“Maybe when we live together, I could play for you every day” Sae surprise Yuki with a kiss on the cheek, this made Yuki blush.

“Well I’ll teach you some more” Sae took hold of Yuki’s right hand with her left hand. She place them in the piano keys and with her hand over Yuki’s hand, she guided her to play the piano.

 “Did she just do that?” Itano sounded upset. How dare her to do that. And in school.

“Just leave her alone”


“Sae-san, let’s go buy candy!” a girl shorter than Sae asked.

“Mayuyu, I already told you that candy is bad for you” Sae pated Mayu’s head. They were in a street that didn’t have many people. It was a sunny day and there were
no clouds. Suddenly Sae stop walking and Mayu a few feet from her notice this.

“Sae, are you okay?”

“Yuki’s over there” Sae with a smile said as she pointed where Yuki was. Without thinking Sae run towards Yuki.

“Why is she always interrupting?”


Apparently, Sae had in the last minute accepted to come to the reunion. All of them expect for Mariko and Haruna were in high school.

“I’m sorry, I’m a little late” Sae came thru the door with an apologetic smile.

“it’s okay” Mariko’s girlfriend, Miichan, welcome her. Mariko, Minami, Haruna, Atsuko, Yuko, Itano, Kasai, Sayaka, and Mayu were there already. The music was loud but not loud enough for the neighbors to call the police.

Time had pass and they were playing game like the pocky game. Everybody was having fun, but Sae was getting bored. She asked Mariko if she could use her pone. Mariko said yes and went back to playing that silly game. Sae went to Mariko’s office that was in the living room but it was separate by a glass wall. Mariko being all classy had one of those public phones you see in the streets as phone, but with this one you didn’t need to put coins in.
She called the number.

“Hello, Yuki?”

“I miss you too”

“Too bad you had to go”

“Yeah me too, I wish you could be here”

“Hey guess what?”

“We were playing the pocky game and Takamina almost chocked on a piece”

“Right!, and Acchan got angry because the Nyanmina couple kiss”

“Hahaha”

Sae too busy talking to Yuki didn’t notice that the other girls stop playing.

“urgh. She is talking to her again” Mariko rolled her eyes

“We need to stop her” Mainami said worriedly

“Its sweet but..” Miichan said

“Sick” Kasai finish Miichan’s sentence

Yuko got up and walked towards Mariko’s office, but Haruna got up and grabbed her hand.

“Leave her alone, she has to realize one day by herself”

“Let go of me. I’ll put an end to this” Yuko said angrily. Yuko’s attitude made Haruna let go off her. Yuko approached Sae with a not so happy face.

“Give it!” Yuko said with a dominating tone. Sae just look away ignoring Yuko. Yuko got tiered and she snatched the phone and hang up.

“Yuko, what the…”

“I’m tired of seen you like this”

“We are tiered of this” Minami came in and one by one, all of them came inside. Sayaka came besides Sae and placed her hand in Sae’s shoulder.

“We don’t like how you are acting”

“What I was only talking to Yuki” Sae pushed off Sayaka’s hand and took a step forward.

“No you weren’t” Mayu step in. this was very uncomfortable for Sae, It was like an investigation.

“Yuki is dead” Itano said flat out.

Your mind can do tricks to you and this is why your brain is your worst enemy. Living a normal life but in reality you are living a phony one. Don’t deny your destiny and the destiny of others. Let go of the things you love the most so you can look towards the future and not the past.
It was two months since Yuki had died; everyone was devastated but mostly her girlfriend Sae. Sae got depress because of Yuki’s death and well she imagine Yuki giving her advice on how to move on but her mind played her tricks. Every single time she said she was with Yuki, talking to Yuki, or that she saw Yuki was only a trick a lie from her mind.

Internally she wanted to cry and yell in frustration but she didn’t want her friends to worry about her. Her friends notice this abnormal behavior but didn’t give importance because it was obvious that she missed her, but her behavior became more frequent and that’s when they begin to worry. They follow her and asked her if she wanted to go somewhere she would forget Yuki but everything was in vain.
Sae was crying; she remembered when she went to Yuki’s funeral and how she didn’t want to let go. Those painful memories that burn her heart. She really loves Yuki even if she is not there with her. She couldn’t let go of Yuki.

“”it’s okay Sae, we will help you forget her” Yuko took a step forward.

“Remember that we are there for you” Sayaka said, tears in her eyes.

“Because we are all friends” Mariko stated

“We won’t let you down” Minami said with a hopeful tone.

“That’s right” Haruna said

“Don’t deny it any more” Itano said

“You need to let her go” Kasai said

“Yuki, will live in our hearts, so you don’t need to worry” Miichan walked closer to Sae.

“We won’t let you down” Mayu repeated the words of Minami. Sae stopped crying and look at them.

“Thank you for”

“We are your friends, aren’t we” Sayaka ruffled Sae’s hair.

“Can I go now? I’m tiered” Sae asked. They all agreed that they will let her go and they will talk to her tomorrow.

“Hey guys, what time is it?” Yuko asked

“Its…8:13”

A loud …….was heard from outside Mariko’s house. Everybody inside the house froze; their heart beat decrease by the thought of …..
Their eyes widen when they got outside to see what happen. It was an accident; a car in the middle of the street and a body laying the pavement cover with blood.
Two people are sitting in front of a piano. One playing with passion as the other one was smiling. In this live you need to let go of certain things before they do you bad. These two people will live happily ever after. Their future is unknown and so they will have their life time to enjoy it. For them time will stop because there is no tomorrow. For them time stopped at 08:13.


.....until the day comes....
Title: Re: Denial 08:13
Post by: cisda83 on August 09, 2013, 07:20:29 PM
Like a horror story somehow.

So scary somewhat.

Great OS there

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Denial 08:13
Post by: kuro808 on August 09, 2013, 07:28:06 PM
Interesting story!

I wonder if there is a continuation...
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: Kazan on August 11, 2013, 05:10:23 AM
 :O OMG
I like this story although this is sad :(
Till death do us part
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: fuu_kun on August 11, 2013, 08:44:55 AM
Why?? Whaey yuki died? TxT ugh.. I hope u make another saeyuki umichan.. !
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: CheesyBits on August 11, 2013, 06:42:10 PM
This is sad  :( :(
Make more SaeYuki OS \(^o^)/
Title: Separation (SaeYuki OS) & Reunion (SaeYuki OS) - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on August 14, 2013, 03:53:45 AM
hello. I bring you this one OS

Enjoy!!1


“How much money do you want?”

“I don’t want your money”

“Everybody needs money. I know of the situation your parents are living”

“I do have problems, but I rather win my money the honest way”

“Not everything needs to be honest”

“Well…too bad. I don’t want your stinking money. You can keep it”

“Stay away from my daughter then”

“I love her and you won’t separate us. If you excuse me, I have to go”


A dream is what we desire isn’t it? How long has it been since I last saw? Will I ever see you again? Will it be only in my dreams? Tell me, please…..

“My parents are sending me to Europe to study, but I don’t want to go away from you. The only reason they are sending me there is so they could separate me from you”

“I wouldn’t let that happen. I will do my best to keep you with me and if that doesn’t work; we will run away far away where people don’t know us”

“Please don’t leave me”

“I won’t…I promise”


Was everything a lie? They told you so many lies about me. I know you know the truth, but why are you not here with me? To tell you the truth, your parents never like me, even as your friends, they never like me.

“What is this, huh?”

“…”

“Say something”

“…”

“My parents were right”

“Wait, please let me explain you”

“What are you going to explain to me? That you cheated on me with Sayaka?”

“That’s not true. I was very drunk that day…and…”

“And you cheated on me. That’s the only explanation.” Yuki slapped Sae

“Yuki, that’s not true, I never cheated on you. Those photos might have been modified”

“Modified? You are lying in a bed almost naked and you have that stupid smile like if you were enjoying it. And Sayaka is also naked” she slapped her hard. Sae was in pain but not that Yuki slapped her hard but because she didn’t know what to say to Yuki.

“I….I don’t know how I got there. I don’t remember anything that happen”

“Shut up, you are lying to me. Sae Miyazawa we are over” she left with tears in her eyes, Sae broke down and cried. She didn’t knew what had just happen, it all happen so fast.


That day I remember I cried like I never did, and I couldn’t believe what happen. Did you really believe that? I to this day don’t remember anything of that night, but thankfully Sayaka explain to you that she did it because of the money your parents offer her.  They separate us with a lie. We were such fools back then.

The day you went off I search for you and I still remember our sad separation.

“Yuki”

“Yuki” Sae had gone to the airport. She wasn’t going to let go off the love of her live. She will fight until the last step.

“Sae, what are you doing here” Yuki said as she saw that Sae was in front of her. Her heart raised; it was a long time since she saw her, but it also hurt her.

“Please forgive me” Sae pled. The last time she pled was when the landlady came to get her money.

“No, please forgive me. I believe in such lie. Sayaka herself told me about the photos”

“Please stay with me”

“I can’t. My parents are here and if then see you they will kill you”

“I don’t care. I want you to stay here with me.” Sae hugged her like she never would let her go.

“I can’t”

“Why? Is my love for you not enough?”

“I have a fiancé “ at that moment Sae’s heart drop to the ground. Did she heard right? She pulled away from her and looked at her in the eyes.

“What?”

“I’m sorry Sae but at that time when we were apart, my parents had me an arrange marriage with some guy”

“Please don’t go”

“I have to. I’m sorry” Yuki started to cry. Sae could only do the same as she came in to hug her again.

“Didn’t I tell you to stay away from my daughter?” Yuki’s fathers said angrily. He didn’t want her daughter to be with another woman; for him that was against his
believes.

“I won’t. I love her more than my own life” Sae faced Yuki’s father with such bravery that no one had seen before.

“Sae, just go…” Yuki plead as she cried.

“Yuki, don’t say that” Sae turn around to see Yuki. She had a expression of hurt that only Yuki could understand why.

“Didn’t you listen to my daughter? Go.” Her father said.

“No, you won’t separate us.”

“Just go”

“….Yuki”

“Get her” her father command his bodyguards to get hold of Sae.

“Get your dirty hands away from me!”

“Yuki” the bodyguards were trying to get a hold of her but she was too quickly that she got out of their clutches and run towards Yuki.

“Yuki”

“I..have…to”

“Wait….”

“If you go there, I won’t know what to do anymore. If you leave me I would only want to die, you are my happiness and if I can’t have it….”

“Sae, please don’t talk like that.”

“Yuki, please promise me that one day, even if we are old, we will see each other one more time”

“I promise” Sae pulled in Yuki for a kiss. The kiss was sweet but full of emotion, emotions that both of them didn’t know they had. Before the kiss became more
intense Sae parted from Yuki.

“I love you, Yuki”

“I love you, Sae”


It’s been 8 years since I last saw you and I still love you even more than before. I wish that we could see each other one more time, but the last time I got news from you was that you were pregnant and that was a three years ago. I guess you have forgotten about me. Don’t you remember me? Was I only another love? Did you ever think about me?

Now that I’m older, I own my own company. I have my own mark of cloths, me and my friend Mariko have open one. That’s my company; we export our cloth to other countries of the world. I have been waiting for you than even I declined many girls’ offers to become my girlfriend. The only person that I want is you. Don’t they say a true love always comes back? That’s what I hope every day.

And one day maybe we can see each other and……

“You have to meet our new customer”

“Can’t you do that?”

“No, I have to take Nyanya somewhere. She said she is buying something for Minami for their anniversary”

“Oh yeah. By the way when are you going to pop up the question to Acchan?”

“I…..soon”

“It better be. I have been waiting for that wedding Yuko”

“Well you better hurry up, you might like her”

“Yuko that’s what you always say”

“Well maybe this time you will”

As Sae enter her office she saw a person facing the wall, she was sitting in a chair.

“Excuse me but are you the new customer?” Sae asked.

“Yes” the customer turned around to face Sae. Sae’s eyes widen when she saw who that person was. She could not believe it. Her heart beat rise like if it would do some time ago.

“Yu…Ki”



...until the day comes.....
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: kuro808 on August 14, 2013, 04:14:36 AM
Nice OS  :twothumbs

Time heals many wounds :thumbsup
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: Kochiki on August 14, 2013, 05:28:49 AM
Oh...Is this an OS?? Well maybe~
-But i think the door is still open for another sequel~ Heheh~
-No worry, i like it~ But Yuki? Pregnant??
-That need an explanation i think?? Oh..Another part??
-Or just this?? Well if it is...I still like it!!~

>Hope to see more!!~ Though i'll end up lurking around here again~~ Huhuh~
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: fuu_kun on August 14, 2013, 10:51:04 AM
Uaaaaaaaghh.. Umichaaaan.. You must do a continuation of thissssss. T w T pleeeasssseeee.. /Im dying hereee/

thanks for your saeyuki os :bow: thankyouuuuuuu :bow:
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: umichan on August 15, 2013, 03:36:43 AM
somebody wanted a continuation I heard, so I give you the continuation.



Enjoy!!!


Reunion



“I want to visit my parents, so they could meet their granddaughter”

“But I have some business over here. Maybe next time”

“I will only visit my parents and that’s it, and I’ll come back in two months”

“Ok honey, you can go”


It’s been so long since I last saw you. Eight years, right? I still remember that promise that I made to you. Every day I remember you, and I still love you. I wish I could turn back time and do something about our situation, but it’s too late for that.


“So that’s the company she owns.”

“Yes, ma’am”

“Do you know if I can buy something from there”

“You can”

“Ok, thank you”


I have a daughter now, her name is Mayu. A lot of things have change but not my love for you. This will sound sick, but I that one time I was thinking of you but I later regret it. Then I knew I was pregnant and a little happiness came into my life. Will you still think of me as pure? Will you still love me after I tell you?

“Yu..ki”

“Sae”

“What are you doing here?”

“I just want to buy some of your cloth”

“So…how you been?”

“I’m doing fine, but I’m not happy”

“After all this time, I thought you’ll be happy by now”

“I’m not”

“I heard you were pregnant”

“I was. She is three years old now”

“what’s her name?”

“I named her Mayu like what we wanted our daughter to be named”

“That’s a beautiful name”

“Sae, I’m sorry that for eight years I didn’t talk to you”

“You don’t have to apologize. It was your obligation anyways”

“I still love you”


After our reunion, everything was like if we never knew each other. I was hurt that you didn’t replied me, I know that it’s been a long time since that day, but I haven’t forget you.

I kept on visiting you forgetting that I have a husband, I call you to have lunch and stuff. You did change one bit; you are still a gentleman and charming. My parents no they are more old and they have no control over me anymore and I have been wandering if we could be still?

I presented you my daughter and you were more than okay,  you played with her and I thought about if we could live together but what about my husband, my daughter will miss her father. I’m still falling in love with you but this cannot be. Even now I’m attaching to something that I don’t want.


“Mayuyu, you want to go to the swings?” they were near a park and Sae decided it would be fun to play with Mayuyu.

“Yes”

“Go head, I will go there in a minute” Mayuyu run towards the swings leaving Sae and her mother behind.

“You know, Mayuyu could have been the daughter we never had” Sae said as she look over at Mayuyu who was now trying to get in the swing.

“She could still be our daughter” Yuki said with a hopeful tone.

“What?”

“We can still love each other, I’ll divorce my husband and I can move here” she said as she turn to look at a confused Sae. Sae didn’t understand what Yuki had said;
she didn’t want Mayuyu to miss her father like she did.

“No”

“Why not?”

“She needs her father. I don’t want her to grow up without a father like i did. I just grew up with a step-father and my mother. I never knew my father”

“Sae…” Yuki whispered

“Look if you are going to divorce him, think about what Mayuyu wants too.”


I know that this is going to be difficult but I have to do it. Mayuyu will still see her father and I will live without regret like I used to.

When I came back, I told my husband to get divorce but he did want to. He said I cheated on him, and maybe he was right. I was spending more time with you than my parents.

What I thought was going to be an easy divorce turn into a living hell. He started to hit me and told me things that were hurtful. I called you and as fast as the other day you were there to support me and my daughter that knew nothing but I could see that she was also hurt. At this time I knew that from the started I should have never go with what my parents told me, but if not what my heart told me. I was foolish back then but not anymore. I know what I want that’s my happiness.

“Look at me. I would do anything for you and Mayuyu; I will give my life you. I waited many years for us to see each other again and this time I will fight for you”
Sae took Yuki’s hand and kiss them gently like if they were never been kiss. This pain Sae, she had never seen Yuki this hurt and she wanted to do something about it.
This made her cry but she didn’t bother to wipe her tears.

“I know you will Sae” with her thumb, Yuki wipe the tears that were coming out of Sae. She knew that she will make them both happy.

“I want you and Mayuyu to go back to japan with me. We will star fresh and nothing not even your parents and your ex-husband will stop us”

“What about Mayuyu? She will miss her father”

“I’ll be her new father. Her father can visit her anytime he wants, its his right as her father” Sae chuckled at the first part but her expression became serious after that.

“You’ll be the best father ever”

“i love you” Their lips meet and like an explosion, her emotion came running down. They will never be separated anymore.



My parents disown me, but I didn’t care. For the first time I felt free and I was not going to give it up. Mayuyu and Sae are everything I have and what I need.
You know, if I could turn back and stop time, I would go back to the time when we first knew each other. In that café; where I was with my friends and you were with your friends, Sayaka and Yuko. That first look into each other eyes was everything I needed to know that we were meant for each other. That day was the happiest day of my life so far until right now.

Time has pass and now Mayuyu is 7 and we are still happy than ever. I don’t regret our reunion and my decision.

“Well she did go to school, now what?” Sae and Yuki were in front of their door looking at their daughter leave for school alone for the first time.

“I don’t know” Yuki shrugged. Without any notice, Sae got Yuki in her arms bride style. They got inside their house and she walked in to their bedroom.

“Hey what are you doing?”  She lay Yuki in the bad and now Sae was on top of Yuki. Yuki blush when she felt Sae’s hand cares her cheek.

“Something that I miss doing” Sae whispered as she got close to Yuki’s face. But then she climbed off her and lay next to her and hugged her.

“This?”

“Yeah, it’s been a long time since we cuddle” she brought her to her even more closer than they were now.

“Sae, we cuddle like an hour ago”

“It still feels like a long time” Sae shrugged

“Baka” Yuki slapped Sae’s arm. This made Sae smile.

“But I love you…I just don’t want to let go of you. I’m afraid you will leave me”

“I won’t. I promise that nothing will separate us this time” Yuki gave Sae a peck on the lips. They smile from ear to ear, and went back to embracing each other.

“I love you, Yuki”

“I love you, Sae”



......until the day comes......
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS) and now Reunion (SaeYuki OS) update!!!
Post by: kuro808 on August 15, 2013, 03:55:42 AM
Sweet ending and happy time for Sae and Yukirin with little Mayu
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS) and now Reunion (SaeYuki OS) update!!!
Post by: fuu_kun on August 15, 2013, 04:35:42 AM
Can i contiune the last sentence?
I love you yuki !
I love you sae ! And
I love you umichaaaan :heart: thanks ! Thankyu so muchhh >w<)/

My heart so fluffy right now~ thanks for you..

I hope you will always write saeyuki fanfic :bow:
Title: Re: Separation (SaeYuki OS) and now Reunion (SaeYuki OS) update!!!
Post by: uchaayuki on August 15, 2013, 02:13:29 PM
AH. SAEYUKI  :inlove:
I hope you always write a saeyuki fanfic  XD
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on August 18, 2013, 12:00:56 AM
Wait, wait, wait, wait... wait... Did Sae just Die too? o.o
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: uchaayuki on August 18, 2013, 04:09:31 AM
Very interesting  ^-^
But, why yuki.....  :cry:
I can't wait to see the next  :twothumbs
Thanks for the OS!   :D
Title: Re: Denial 08:13 (SaeYuki OS)
Post by: p-o-p-e-y-oppa on August 20, 2013, 10:50:39 AM
Well...  :cry: That escalated quickly. To be honest, I thought Sae was in an asylum and the other girls were her doctors. Yukirin was someone she loves before going to the asylum and blah blah. The foreshadowing was already there but you managed to get me more curious in each scene. Good plot! I hope you create an epilogue for this though.
Title: Just You...(SaeYuki) One Shot - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on November 10, 2013, 07:36:23 PM
hello there, its been a long time since I updated so.....yeah.
AP classes are something that I don't recommend. they have you doing homework everyday......but finally
I got time...so yeah.....

enjoy...

Just you…

Walking without a path; just going to the streets heading somewhere unknown. Where my feet would take me, where every noise of the busy street would be forgotten, and where everyone disappears.

I’ll let myself be free, even if in reality I’m trap in a cage. I’ll let my memories run wild. I’ll let my heart go with you, for which I have given up on getting it back.
I keep walking north; just the star up above when night hits. The breeze of the cold air makes my shiver but I make no noticeable reaction. I see people laughing and talking in the street and some that for some reason are unhappy.  I keep looking ahead not looking back. I’m sure this is the beginning of the end, but….i want you to stay….darling…

The sunshine hits my face as I’m about to step away from the city….

Memories of those times when we were together flowing in like water. Your eyes, your smiles, your lips, all plastered in my mind. I can’t take them away and throw them down.  My arms swing as I walk and I can feel the breeze come in between my fingers and I feel more than alive. My first time in a long while.

I look up and the sky is clear, no clouds at all. Yet I feel like there is a thunderstorm. I pick up dust as I go through the grassless terrain. The city is long-lost forgotten and with it she goes. My head up high, and my hopes for a new start, low in the ground.

I feel a new sensation building up, but I don’t know what it is. Maybe it’s a ray of happiness that I  have waited for so long.
I keep walking without looking back. The breeze plays with my short light brown hair like if it were a little curious kid. I can’t take this anymore. I have to let go….but I can’t say good-bye.

It’s been two years now, do you still remember me? Do you still call my name below the moonlight? Everything has change since you left, yet I have stay in the same time period of when you broke the crystal clock. I still whisper your name when I feel lonely, when I’m cold, when I’m walking in the streets at night. I let the rhythm flow but I just get back to the nosy of the past.

I told you once that I’ll give you my heart if I could have yours, but that didn’t work. You took my heart and I kept nothing but dust.

Once I told myself that you were just another one…I was wrong, you were the one.

“I never thought that I would meet a person like you” a whisper scape from the lips of the older girl.

“I never thought I would fall in love” the younger girl caressed the older girl’s check with such affection that anyone would have mistaken them for a newlywed couple.

Walking as the minutes pass without me worrying what time is. Nor do I care if I come back late or leave without a note.

I still remember the day we meet, it was like any other day, but something made it special. I don’t know what it was but….I keep glimpsing at you and every time you moved I moved. We were in a library searching for the same book…well at that time we didn’t know until our hands reach for that book, Infinity. I smiles and let you have it, yet I told you that I also needed that book for my class. I still remember what we negotiated after that, you told me that when you were finish you will give it to me, so we exchange numbers and the day after that, at night, I texted you. That’s how all the magic started, just because of the book.

You know, I never actually wanted to read that book, it wasn’t my thing.

Days passed and we kept on talking to one another, and then weeks; were we just ended up together. We were both together and I was happy and at least you…seemed happy as well. We started like any other couple. I still had the idea that you were just another girl but after that time…I knew we were meant for each other.
Unfortunately, my parents sent me to China to study for four years… I should have opposed, but I couldn’t. They didn’t know about us, so they would have question me further if I did opposed. I knew you were sad but you demonstrate otherwise. I wanted to tell you that it was for a short time but I knew that it was impossible.
My fist months in China we talked every day no matter what, and if I had homework or had a project due the next day we still talked. Then I began to notice about two years later that you began to drift away. I didn’t know why but I know it hurt me. I had no right to tell you about why you began to drift away if I was in another place. Very far from you.

About my third year there I graduated early because of my high grades and my skills.

I still remember that day like if it was yesterday; which brings tears to my eyes.

I’m still waking in no apparent direction, the sun still beating in my skin but I find comfort in it. I guess tear have form in my eyes and they also have fallen down because I feel something wet in my cheeks. I look up I head and I see nothing but desert.

The day I return I went to our favorite park; I was planning how to surprise you. The sun was almost down and it made beautiful scenery like the ones from dramas and what not. I was smiling while I was there sitting maybe some people thought I was crazy for smiling so much. 
I saw someone coming my way with another person, they seem happy. Like a newlywed couple. As they got closer I could see that they were holding hands like I did with you, that thought gave me a grin, but soon it would have disappeared. As that couple got closer I thought it was you, that person looked like you but probably from my urge to see you I began to see things.

I could not believe my eyes when I saw you with him. It was YOU. I wanted to hide somewhere or run away. I didn’t want to believe my eyes. My heart stop beating for a second or too; I felt so much pain. I wanted my body to move from that bench but I couldn’t. I was paralyzed.

I saw you walked pass by me. ME. I saw you too being happy and all. I wanted to punch him for holding your hand; that hand that I used to hold with such affection. 
You pass by me like if I wasn’t there. I know you saw me for a second. I felt your eyes on mine.

I knew who that man was; he was that doctor that you always went to. Dr. Watanabe, I hate that man from the bottom of my heart.

Sometime passed and well, I went to look for you and your parents told me you weren’t leaving with them anymore that you were leaving with him. I cried that night, I didn’t knew if I did something wrong or something; I just felt impotent.  I search for you and when that day came, you told me that you didn’t love me anymore, but I could see in your eyes the contrary. You also told me that you guys were going to get married. I didn’t care…I kissed you anyways. i knew from that kiss that you still loved me.

Later days, my friend Sayaka told me that your parents engage you with that Doctor.

The day before you got married, I talked to you. I wanted to change your mind, to run away with me, but I guess that didn’t work because you slapped me. That hurt me, not physically but emotionally. I had never had some hit me or slapped me. It hurt even more because it was from you. That day, I regretted everything, my love for you, my thoughts, my actions, and my life.

Now, I’m here walking without direction. Just walking and letting the wind pass thru my finger. Letting the rhythm flow. 

“I guess nothing last forever…I might as well keep on walking until my legs can do no more” the girl looks up ahead. The sun hits hard on her skin now. Her hair all
ruffled up and her tears are the only ones that cool off her skin.

“Maybe she is just another girl but….she was the one I truly love and she will forever be.”

Her phone rings and it’s an unknown number, she picks up…and…

“Hello, Sae?” that voice, the one that hurt that girls heart. She froze in spot, she didn’t knew what to do; should she answer or hang up.

“I know it’s you….Yuko gave me your number. I just wanted to say I’m sorry. I regret everything that I did. My decision was a mistake….i’m sorry.” The girl in the other line was sobbing.

“I know it’s too late but I still love you. I just love you…..Sae” 

Sae was crying now, she couldn’t believe it. After 2 years she calls her and asks for her forgiveness.

“Sae….I love you”

The girl name Sae wiped her tears and slowly looked at her phone and dropped it.

I walked without destination and never looking back.

If only she could have done it earlier….I would have accepted…just for you….just you….but its too late already.

I love you...just you…


yeah don't hate me....i'm tiered now...

.....until the day comes.....
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: kuro808 on November 10, 2013, 07:53:53 PM
Awesome OS

Kinda sad and yet happiness for Sae to just accept it :)
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: Haruko on November 10, 2013, 08:31:18 PM
sae!! stay with me :3
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on November 11, 2013, 12:27:58 AM
Oh the feels... so many feels~!!
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 11, 2013, 06:18:53 PM
I'm crying...  :cry:...

why should u make it sad...  :cry:

please... make some SaeYuki happy fic...  :bow:

btw, this is a good fic..

keep going..  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: uchaayuki on November 12, 2013, 09:54:17 AM
I really could feel this fic  :cry:

keep going :twothumbs
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: Ai Ichi on November 12, 2013, 03:24:04 PM
my saeyuki   :gyaaah:
nice fic  :twothumbs
wait for the next
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki)
Post by: love angel on November 12, 2013, 04:39:09 PM
yuki why  :gyaaah:

please don`t hurt sae

btw, nice fic  :on GJ:

wait for the next  :hee:
Title: Re: Just You...(SaeYuki) One Shot
Post by: fuu_kun on November 13, 2013, 04:50:52 AM
umichaaaaaaaaaan long time no see ; w ;
anaother saeyuki... but but but :cry: :cry: :cry:

I want happy ending :cry: please :cow: :bow:

; w ;)/
Title: I should have treated you better (SaeYuki one-shot) - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on April 18, 2014, 02:28:16 AM
HELLO!!!
yes, i'm kind of back!!!
i have seen less Saeyuki so here you go!! some lovely Saeyuki!!!
not really, don't hate me after this! Please listen to Bruno Mars' when i was your man. That song got to me and inspiered me to do this fic. Italics are flashbacks.

enjoy!!


“Are you ready?” a person came into the room where Sae was. She nodded and the person who came left. She stood up and made sure that her white suit with a black shirt wasn’t wrinkled. She checked that her that her hair was neatly put. She looked perfect to the occasion, but deep inside she wanted to go away from that place. This was the last time she was going to play for the person she loved the most.

A bright sunny day shine upon her and her piano she was composing some majestic notes which her girlfriend could hear.

“What are you playing?” her girlfriend asked and Sae stopped playing.

“I call it Yuki, just like your name” she gave her a warm smile which Yuki responded to as well.

She walked to the middle of the hall; she smiled politely to the people who greeted her. When she got to the piano, someone name Hiroshi introduced her to the people that were around.

“Miyazawa Sae, one of Japan’s best pianists, my friend, will play a song for us. Please give her a round of applause.” And as they were told the people applauded.

“But Sae, you promise that today we will go to the movies!” Yuki said as she grabbed Sae’s hand.

“I have a concert to attend to. I’m sorry…I will take you next week” Yuki let go of her feeling disappointed, sad, and even upset. She couldn’t believe Sae said that to her again. Always the same promise and it was always broken.

“I will make it up for you tomorrow” she pecked Yuki’s lips and left their apartment.

She sat in the bench of the piano, she cleared her throat, and lean in towards the microphone.

“Thank you for inviting me. It’s a pleasure been here.” She lied.

The place became dark, but after a second a spotlight was put upon Sae and two people.  Two people whom she recognize. It pained her seeing her again with a smile that disappeared once they meet. She wished that she could see that again.

“Aren’t you afraid you manager will find out about us?” Yuki asked as they went to the private Party for Sae’s new single sells. Their hands were intertwined.

“It’s okay; we were breaking the rules a long time ago.” Sae looked over her shoulders only to wink at her lovely girlfriend.

“Plus…” she continued.

 “I think he’ll be happy that I found someone and my friends like you already” she chuckled.

They went about talking to Sae’s friends. Almost everyone was there.

As time passed Sae and Yuki were having a good time eating, drinking, talking and dancing. Dancing was the one thing that Yuki love to do.

“Sae come on! Let’s dance!” Yuki tried to drag Sae into the dance floor but Sae was going against it.

“But I’m tiered…” Sae gave her puppy eyes, but once Yuki heard a slow song she immediately smiled.

“Come on, this song wouldn’t tiered you” Yuki said as she dragged Sae to the dance floor. Sae chuckled and hear her friends chuckled as well. Well her girlfriend is very important to her so she had no other choice. Some of her friends also danced with them like the Tomotomo, Marimii, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui pair.

The slow song played. Sae’s hands on Yuki’s waist and Yuki’s arms around her neck. They looked at each other and it was like if they only existed there. Like if time froze, they stayed there moving slowly. Warmth overflowed their hearts with happiness.

“I just want to stay with you all my life…” Sae whispered.

“I want to be with you until infinity…” Yuki smiled.

“I wish time could freeze so we can stay like this” Sae said.

“Wouldn’t that hurt? My arms will be numb after a while.” Yuki chuckled.

“Yeah you are right….what about if we just get married instead? That’s not hurtful” Sae raised her eyebrow.

She took a deep breath and sigh. Sae knew that this was going to very hard; however, she knew that she caused that smiled to disappear. Disappeared forever; she would never again see that warm smile that Yuki always gave her.

“So, who is this beautiful lady over here?” one of the many business man said to Sae. Sae looked at Yuki for a few seconds and said the most hurtful thing that Yuki had heard.

“She is my friend…” Sae Said. She knew that if people besides her friends and manager know that she dating another woman, her career was over. Yuki on the other hand felt her heart been stabbed so painfully that any moment she was going to cry, but she had to keep her posture.

“Nice to meet you, I’m K-Kashiwagi Yuki…” Yuki said.

She slowly placed her fingers on the piano keys. Once her hands where there, she remembered the warm hand that used to held it. She was wrong on what she had done. She was the one at fault. If she didn’t did all of those things. Keeping her hope up only to destroy them.

“What do you mean I’m your friend?” Yuki yell at Sae. After the event ended, Sae and Yuki returned to their house. Yuki was furious that Sae said that. How come she didn’t say the truth?

“Because I cannot take the chance of my career going down!” Sae yelled back.

“So you career is more important me? So, this is what you thing right?”

“Of course not; you are more important than my own life” Sae held Yuki’s hand for a moment but Yuki pushed them away.

“So why didn’t you said that I was your girlfriend? I thought that this time you wouldn’t be afraid to say it.”

“I…” Sae looked down trying to find a good reason.

“Yeah, that’s right! You are afraid that the public will know that you dating another woman! That’s why!” Yuki yelled as loud as her lungs could give. Sae kept looking down.


She began to stroke the keys and she lean forward to sing.

[Bruno Mars- When I was your man. Listen to it like right now. Now!]

As she played the song with all her might, memories of her and Yuki began to play in her mind. Those times when they smiled to each other, when they held hands, when they kissed, when the talk in the mist of the sunlight, when they stare at each other knowing what was wrong with them without saying anything, when they made love and said how much they loved each other, and  when their last fight caused their break up.

Tears started to blur Sae’s vision and so were Yuki’s, yet Sae kept on playing. Did she regret her actions, her decisions? She deplored them. If time could go back where they were happy, she would change many things. She would give more attention to her, give her all her hours, take her out more, praise her, but it’s too late now.

The person who she loves was now married to one her best friends. The man who she married to her was her friend; the friend that invited her to play at his wedding.

As she played the final notes, she looked up to see Yuki in her eyes. She couldn’t bear to see the hand of another person in hers, so she just looked at Yuki. Many feelings were said with just a look. The last note was played and Sae whipped the tears that were falling from her eyes.

“Congrats on your wedding Hiroshi and…Yuki” she hesitated saying her name.

“I wish you two the best and take care of her because a woman like her  doesn’t come around often” and with that said, she got up and left the stage. She could hear the crowed applause but she didn’t care for them. She just wanted to run away but instead she would drink her tears away.



....until the day comes.....
Title: Re: I should have treated you better (SaeYuki one-shot)
Post by: mgxx on April 18, 2014, 03:40:45 AM
OMG... I miss my saeyuki >,<
But why this story makes my heart hurt...
I want happy ending... Ohhh maybe, this is just a dream ?
>,<
Title: Re: I should have treated you better (SaeYuki one-shot)
Post by: Haruko on April 18, 2014, 05:10:53 AM
T_T
Title: Re: I should have treated you better (SaeYuki one-shot)
Post by: edogawa4869 on April 18, 2014, 12:04:00 PM
really... it's like almost 90% SaeYuki OS I read were sad ending...  :mon cry: :fainted:

I miss the cute-sweet-happy ending SaeYuki story...

and I hope u can write it...  :kneelbow:

but it's really good OS...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: I should have treated you better (SaeYuki one-shot)
Post by: Kazan on April 18, 2014, 01:45:27 PM
i'm glad you're back
 :cry: oh this fic so sad. but I like story like this.  :thumbsup
Title: Untitled (Nyanmina oneshot) - COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on June 08, 2014, 03:57:01 PM
Just enjoy......



Enjoy!!


The cold breeze of the night hits my face, and I actually don’t mind it. My face is warm but I really need this cold breeze. Walking in the noisy streets of Akihabara, I know where I’m heading yet I don’t really want to go there. I don’t want to get my heart broken again. Ever since that day, I left that place; although, it is my apartment which I’m heading to. I have been living with my other best friend, Miichan; at least she did betray me like the other one.

My arms shiver at the contact of the breeze. My medium short hair flows back with the direction of the wind. I really don’t to go back there, but it’s been a week since I left my apartment so I would not see her.  And as I’m walking I’m thinking of what I did wrong. I know that I’m a baka but not so much of it. The only answer that I can find is that I was too busy to realize that with my actions, I wasn’t paying attention at her. Or maybe….she just needed someone that could fill up the space that I was leaving in her heart. I really don’t know but Yuko shouldn’t have done what she did. She knew what she and I were going through and she took advantage of it.
Remembering what happen outside our apartment hurts me. I wish that I could have got there a few minute early or a few minutes late, so I wouldn’t have seen it. Really, I’m still wondering if she really did stayed there or went away with her. It doesn’t really matter right now; however, that’s what I told my heart a couple of minutes ago. Each step I take makes my heart beats faster and I can’t control it, I want to see her again but at the same time I want to avoid her.  By the time I get in front of the building, my hands sweat and so I take a deep breath to control myself.

I feel like if it was our first night. All nervous and stuff, and even though this is different, I know that I really want to see her. Talking about that, I still remember that night and day.

I pushed her slightly, not breaking the kiss we were sharing. I was ready for anything that night I bet she was too because that night was very special to us. Well, that’s what I think. I was on top of her, never breaking the passionate kiss until we were both breathless.

“Mina…mi…” were the only words that escaped her lips before she caressed my cheeks. I, on the other hand, was looking at her tenderly and lovingly. I knew that we both wanted it. To feel each other, to kiss each other, to express our feelings like the human body only knows.

We were breathing hard but that didn’t stop us from kissing again. This time I brought her up in a sitting position. I was well aware that this would be our first time and of course I had no knowledge, not even the tip Yuko told me could help me. But I was wrong. She looked at me, I felt nervous, her hands on the ends of my shirt. I felt like any moment knew I could have exploded from that feeling I felt. She grabbed the ends of my shirt and pulled my shirt up. I blushed madly and looked away. I was well aware of my body, so I was embarrassed of showing her.

“It’s okay Minami…I love your body, you don’t have to be embarrass” her finger traced my body; shivers get down my spine. The nervous feeling went away. With just one touch.

After that, I did the same she did to me. It was only fair. Her skin was pale. It was smooth and delicate. To this night I still remember her skin. Our lips clashed again and again. The temperature was getting hotter. Kissing her lips, her jawline, her neck, her collar bone, her valley, was everything that I dreamt of before and what I
still dream about. Traces which emitted moans from her lips. A wonderful sound which my ears wanted to hear more and more. Our lips meet once again, they moved
back and forth like if they dependent on it. Her fingernails marked my back for almost a week; it was funny how she kept apologizing to me but I told her that it was
alright and deep inside I liked it.

Smooth hands messed with my hair making it messier that it already was. Her hair was also messy, well, I made it messy. Articles of cloths lay on the floor, I was on top of her, kissing her, she was kissing me, but then she turn me over. Now she was on top of me. Her long brown her lay in my breast.

“I want you to feel what I’m feeling as well….” She lean in and gave me a kiss. I was surprise at what she did and yes, I did felt what she felt. She was there, making
love to me. Her hands traveled dangerously down to my lower area, and any moment I would have exploded from the ecstasies that she was giving me. Our rhythm
synchronized her name left my lips with each motion. My desire was growing more and more and I couldn’t think of anything else after I release my juice. Of course at that time I felt like I was the luckiest person on the face of the planet. After that, I made her mine again and again until the sun rise and knocked on our window.

Of course that is one of the memories I hold within me, even if she betrayed me.

 
My keys turn the door knob to open the door.

“I-Is anyone here?” I call out to see if she is here or not but I don’t hear anything. I guess she really did went with her. Deep inside I knew that they had something
going on. Was I too blind? Or something? I make my way inside the apartment, but something caught my eyes. The house was like when I left a week ago.

I made my way to the living room, still….it was intact. Well, that’s what I thought until I got to the sofa and discover a bottle of alcohol. I stood there looking at it, it was empty. I felt strange for a second like if someone was looking over me.

“You know….alcohol is not good for your health” I didn’t even bother to look back because I knew that it was her.

“What do you care?” her voice sounded calmed.

“I still do…” and it was the truth that I wanted to keep to myself.

“I thought you would have gone to her” I continue. “But looking at how you look, you seem not to sleep. Is it your conscience?” I sarcastically state. She has dark circles under her eyes and her smile that I missed disappeared.

“Why would I? I don’t love her. Nor do did I did anything with her.” She snapped back. But how can I believe her? I didn’t go away like people in dramas do. I stayed there until they both got inside my apartment.

“Don’t you dare lie to me! I saw it. I saw how you and Yuko were kissing and how you two went inside here. “I yelled at her. She was speechless.

“We did nothing! After that I pushed her back and slap her. She went away.” Tears were falling from her eyes.

“Then why didn’t you told me anything? You kept normal for two days. Like if nothing happen. I was waiting for you to say it to me. If we had the much trust then why did you told me that so I would think that you a slu-“a sting was mark across my face. I regret what I said.

I looked back at her with tears in my eyes. I grabbed my keys and headed my way to the door until she grabbed my wrist.

“Couldn’t you see it that I needed you? Couldn’t you just have a bit more time for me? After you inherited your father’s business you barely took me out to dates or
even sleep besides me.  I needed you. She gave me attention but I never thought that she would end up confessing to me. Nor did I expect that kiss.” She explained and it was like if knife cut through my heart. It was true. I didn’t even bother to take time for her.  She let go of my wrist. I didn’t look back, my eyes were filled with.

“I’m sorry…” was the only thing I could say.

“I’m sorry….” She said as well. It was our fault. I turn around when I heard she turn around and hugged her from behind. My arms were circling her waist. She was crying and so was I but I don’t care.  Her warmth sooth me a bit, and so her hands on mine’s. 






sorry, im gonna try to update now that i'm in summer vacations.


.....until the day comes.....
Title: Untitled (Nyanmina oneshot)
Post by: ainivel on June 08, 2014, 04:33:59 PM
ahh... one word: beautiful~

it moved me... is there a next chapter?
it's still untitled so i assume you'll come up with a title on your next update?

thank you very much for posting this :)


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Title: She couldn't believe it (Saeyuki OS) | COMPLETED
Post by: umichan on June 22, 2014, 02:46:55 AM
helloo!!!!!

A HAPPY SAEYUKI AT LAST!!!!!

enjoy!!!


She couldn't believe it

“Huh?... No gifts today” Sae look around the locker room wondering why there wasn’t a gift in the bench like usual maybe her fan got tires maybe her fan forgot but
something was certain Sae felt weird.

It’s been almost a month since her secret fan (stalker) had put small little gifts when she did not notice. It wasn’t weird at first because Sae has a fanclub, so it was normal for her to receive gifts but the gifts that she had been receiving were different from the rest of her fangirls.

“Sae, what are you looking for?” asked Sayaka. Sae turned around to look at her tall friend.

“Nothing really. I was just looking for my…. bag” Sae nervously looked for a bag, it wasn’t her bag but a bag, so Sayaka wouldn’t think she was actually looking for something.

“If you say so, we will be waiting for you outside, ok?” Sayaka waved off her friend feeling a bit confused but she will eventually know what’s wrong with her friend.

After she left the locker room she went to her friends, Yuko and Sayaka. They decided to hang out in Yuko’s house. It was like any other hang out in her house, they played games and talked about perverted stuff sometimes and they did they’re homework. After a couple of hours of doing “stuff”, Sae decided to leave Yuko’s house because it was her curfew to comeback at nine. She went to her usual train station to catch the train. There sitting in a bench nobody beside her, the slightly cold breeze caressed her face making her short light brown hair flow with the wind. There was a girl sitting in the next two benches from her she had long raven hair. The girl from time to time stole glances of Sae, she was timid and a bit intimidated by Sae.

“excuse me miss, would you tell me what train station is this?” an old lad asked, Sae turned to see the old lady giving all her attention to her, the raven girl took this
chance to get near Sae’s bench. Once she was closed enough, Sae still looking at the old lady, she took an origami heart off her pocket she carefully placed it next to Sae and hurry back to her bench. Once Sae told what station it was she turned to her previous position, at first she didn’t notice the origami but when she was about to get her cellphone she notice the red origami heart she picked it up and looked at it questioning “who the hell place this origami heart besides me?” she looked around the place and the only person there was the raven girl.

Noticing that Sae looked at her, the raven girl looked at the side blushing. Sae stood up from her bench and walked over to the girl. Hearing Sae steps made the raven girl nervous and scared, she didn’t know what to do, will she get up and run away, will she stay and confront Sae, will she leave and walk home instead of going by train to her house. All those questions popped in the raven girl’s mind but too late Sae was already in front of her.

“Yu-Yuki…?” Sae looked at Yuki with a confused look. What was Yuki doing here? Was she the girl who placed the origami heart besides her?

“…S-Sae…” Yuki looked in front of her, Sae was there with the origami heart she had made. She was scared that Sae might yell at her or reclaim why she had put the heart besides her. Instead Sae sat beside her and asked her the question she has been anticipating.

“Did you put this besides me?” she asked as she turn to see Yuki holding the origami heart in front of her. Yuki blushed and nodded slightly.

“So…you are the girl who has been putting gifts?”

“Yes…” was the only thing that Yuki whispered before turning her head to the side. Sae couldn’t really believe it, well she had a slight suspicion that it was her, but to fully know that she is her “little stalker” she felt kind of happy.

“You know….if you wanted to confess, you should have done it. Maybe I would return your feelings.”

By hearing this, Yuki turn to see the person besides her. Did she just? Did she? She couldn’t believe it.




I LOVE SAEYUKI!!!!!!

......until the day comes....
Title: Re: She couldn't believe it (Saeyuki Oneshot)
Post by: syworld on June 22, 2014, 06:04:37 AM
YEAY. Thank you for SaeYuki OS :bow:
You make me happy in the morning lol :lol:
I've guess that Yuki is the Sae's stalker :inlove:
Title: Re: She couldn't believe it (Saeyuki Oneshot)
Post by: Haruko on June 22, 2014, 07:25:02 AM
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeees saeyukiiiiiiiiiiiiii ;3 THANX A LOT
Title: Re: She couldn't believe it (Saeyuki Oneshot)
Post by: arawche079 on December 03, 2014, 05:56:44 AM
saeyuki!!!!!!!! thanks i wish they have more interaction..thanks