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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [about the upcoming Chapter 3A and replies]
« Reply #20 on: October 12, 2012, 04:46:22 PM »
yeaaay~~!! finally! *jump like crazy*
eh? b-but? sae and sayaka ? e-eh?! they are bestfriend right? </3
i'll standby here~ ganbatte (^o^)/ waiting waiting waiting
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [about the upcoming Chapter 3A and replies]
« Reply #21 on: October 26, 2012, 03:23:23 AM »
update soon :bow: :kneelbow:

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [about the upcoming Chapter 3A and replies]
« Reply #22 on: October 28, 2012, 11:15:15 PM »
saeyuki!!!!!!!! where are you? u need to update before sae leave for shaghai  :err:
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The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (new update!)
« Reply #23 on: October 29, 2012, 09:00:27 PM »
@fuu_kun: It's just a slight SaeYaka since it was before SaeYuki met  :) Don't worry  :deco:
@anzai48: Finally someone noticed DIVA.. I was waiting for someone to realise it hahas   :cow:
@saeyukilover: Coming right up!  :)


Im sorry for the super long update. I know this is a lame excuse but I got lost of what I wanted to write and I find it hard to manage my time with my games and writing.. Hontoni gomenasai!  :bow:
I hope you don't get bored of the story because Im not really confident about this but I did my best! :bow:

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Profiles:

Matsui Rena: Matsui Jurina's girlfriend.

Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Has a lot of pride and boyish. Boyfriend of Matsui Rena.

Mayu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin.

Akimoto Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Tour leader of Team D.

Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. Best friends with Sayaka. Treats Sayaka as her sister. Tour leader of Team I.

Umeda Ayaka: Tour leader of Team V.

Masuda Yuka: Tour leader of Team A.

Kitahara Rie(Kitarie): Mayuyu's friend. Has feeling for Yuihan.

Yokoyama Yui(Yuihan): Mayuyu's friend. Close to Kitarie. Hates being harassed by Kitarie but has feelings for her.

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Chapter 3A (Mayuyu's School Trip: Love at First Sight)


Day 1

   

      Today is the start of Mayuyu’s school trip. Fortunately, she was chosen as the team leader for Team I by the tour leader of Team I, Miyazawa Sae, which Mayuyu admires as she thinks that Sae is very ikemen..  Her best friend, Matsui Jurina who dislikes Sae a lot because she thinks that she is cooler than Sae and because Sae gets more attention than her, unfortunately became the vice leader for Team I. Being the team leader and vice leader of a team means that person will get more attention from the others as the teacher's asked the tour leaders to teach them something that will help them in life.  (CheesyBits: re-read chapter 2 flashback if you forgot)

   They were still inside the bus as the way to the location of the school trip was long. The bus was quite noisy as Mayuyu’s classmates were discussing about the trip. Mayu was staring at Sae ever since Sae came inside the bus.. The older girl did not notice as she was sleeping with her head on the shoulders of Sayaka, the tour leader of Team D, who was asleep too.

  *Beep! Beep!* a phone vibrated in the hands of a girl.  Jurina, who is sitting beside Mayuyu, just got a text message from her girlfriend, Matsui Rena. She switched on her phone to read the message and replied.

[Rena-chan:  Jurina-chan, don’t run away from your school trip or I won’t let you kiss or cuddle me anymore! You can still text me during your break.. Take care~ I love you~!]

[Jurina-chan: I won’t! I promise! Just please let me kiss and cuddle you when I come back home~! I love you more~! P.S. Aren’t you supposed to be in class right now? It’s rare to get a message from you during school hours, did you go to school today? Im worried.]

[Rena-chan: Yes, Im in class right now. Im using my bag to cover my phone to text you so that it won’t get confiscated. Im only doing this because I won’t be able to see you in 2 nights]
 
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  Jurina kept texting Rena and Mayuyu stared at Sae until they reached the hotel that they are going to stay at..

“Everyone, We are already reached the hotel, please get ready to go down the bus. Once you go down the bus please make group that consists of 4 people each to sleep with.” Sayaka announced.

Mayuyu and Jurina were the last one to get down of the bus with their luggage. Suddenly, someone hugged Mayuyu from behind and is trying to harass her.
“Nee! Mayuyu, is it okay if Lovetan and I be your sleepmates?” The person who hugged Mayuyu from behind asked.

“Kitarie~! Stop harassing me! I will let the two of you be my sleepmates if you stop harassing me!” Mayuyu complained as she blush.

“Mayuyu! Don’t forget me~!” Jurina said as she wants to be in Mayuyu’s group too.

Once every made their group, they went to their rooms. Mayuyu and group’s room was just beside the tour leader’s room. The room was small and has 4 pink sleeping futons on the floor, a storage room and a small window. Mayuyu and group put their luggage in the storage room of their room and once their done, Sasshi looked outside the window.

 “Huwaa~!! Look there’s a beach nearby! The water is so crystal blue!!” Kitarie told the others.

“Luckily I brought my swimming suit with me.” Yuihan said.

“Me too!” said the 3 other girls

While the 4 girls were talking, someone knocked on their door. Jurina walked to the door and opened it. The person outside was Sae.

“Hey girls, today is a free day as we are going to the beach nearby to relax so please bring your swimsuits along! Oh, and don’t forget to be back here by dawn!” Sae-chan told the girls and winked at Jurina which made Jurina annoyed because of her dislike with Sae-chan.

The girls took out their luggage to take their swimsuits from the storage room and wore their swimsuits in the nearby toilet. Kitarie, Yuihan and Jurina were on their bikinis except for Mayuyu.

“We’re going to the beach first! See you later, Mayuyu!” Jurina said and ditched Mayuyu with the other 2 girls.

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Once Mayuyu was done, she headed to the beach and searched for the 3 girls.

While searching for the 3 girls, someone hugged Mayuyu from behind. Mayuyu blushed as she felt a soft chest press onto her.

“K-Ki-Kitarie! Let go off me! I can fe-fe-feel your ch-ch-chest!” Mayuyu stuttered.

As soon as Kitarie let go of Mayuyu, Mayuyu turned around to face her. Jurina and Yuihan are tagging along with Kitarie.

Jurina was holding a volleyball ball and dropped it when she saw Mayuyu’s chest the other 2 girls stared at it with their jaws dropped. Kitarie took the volleyball ball and threw it at Mayuyu’s face lightly and playfully and said “That’s what you get for having a humongous chest!”

All the 4 girls broke into laughter.

They stopped laughing once Jurina ran towards to ball and picked it up. “Hey girls, wanna play beach volleyball?” she asked while bouncing the ball in the air with her hands.

The 4 girls were playing beach volleyball. It was Mayuyu and Jurina against Kitarie and Yuihan. While the girls were playing, Mayuyu and Jurina saw the tour leaders, Sae, Sayaka, Umechan and Yuka, walking towards them. Sae is wearing a boyish attire, Sayaka is wearing a normal and plain t-shirt with jeans while Umechan and Yuka is wearing bikinis. Seeing Sae in boyish attire made Sashihara, Lovetan and Mayuyu squeal in excitement.

“Hey ladies, can we join you?” Sae asked the girls who were playing volleyball.

“Sure! Why not?” said the 3 girls who were still squealing in excitement.

Sae and Yuka joined Mayuyu and Jurina’s team while Umechan and Sayaka joined Kitarie and Yuihan’s team in beach volleyball.

Since Sae was in Jurina's team, Jurina is in competitive mode even if Sae is in her team. She wants to score more than Sae in the game.

While playing beach volleyball, the competitive Jurina accidentally knocked on Mayuyu which caused her to trip and was about to hit a rock. Mayuyu had her eyes closed as she was scared of the upcoming pain. Luckily, someone caught her but the saviour hit the rock instead. The tour leaders and Mayuyu's friend ran to them and asked "Are the two of you okay?"

Mayuyu opened her eyes and saw that Sae saved her. Sae looked like she was in pain but she is enduring it. "Yes, im okay." Sae replied. Mayuyu was speechless and felt guilty that she fell as she didn't want Sae hurt. Sayaka went to Sae and squat beside her and tried to peek at Sae's back by taking off Sae's clothes but Sae stopped her. Fortunately, Sayaka got a peek at Sae's back saw a bruise because of the fall.

"Not much of a damage there.. But do you want it to be treated, Sae?" Sayaka asked in a serious yet worried tone. "No thanks. Im fine. I really am." Sae replied and smiled. This made the other 2 tour leaders and Kitarie and Yuihan sigh in relief. Jurina remained emotionless.

Mayuyu stood up and offered a hand to Sae to help her stand up. Fortunately, Sae took her hand and stood up.

*Omg! Her hands are soft! I don't wanna let go!* Mayuyu thought while tightening her grip. Mayuyu can feel blood gushing up to her cheeks when she looked at Sae and at the fact that she was holding hands with Sae.

"Umm.. Mayu-san? Are you okay? Are you having a fever?" Sae asked and cupped Mayuyu's cheeks with her free hand to check her temperature. This action made Mayuyu's ears pinkish and face red.

"I-Im fi-fine.. Thank you.." Mayuyu said and took Sae's hand off her face gently as she thinks that she might have a nosebleed if this continues further.

"Ghuuu!! Im sooo jealousss!!" Kitarie and Yuihan said the same time.

"Thanks for the time girls, but we have to go to the hotel right now. Please be back by dawn." Sayaka told the girls. The tour leaders went to the hotel and left the girls in the beach.

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Jurina's POV

Jurina was imagining a mini version of her in devil which was on her right and angel in her left.

*Hah! Serves Sae right for taking away your popularity! Good job!* says the Devil.

*Don't listen to that devil. You should apologize. That's how your mom taught you right?* says the Angel.

*You live your own life! This angel is lame! Being lame will lose your popularity more!* the Devil laughed.

*If Rena-chan was here, she will tell you to apologize to Sae. You love Rena-chan right? So go and do it! Even if she's not here, just do the right thing!* the Angel reassured her.

*But Rena-chan isn't here! Muahahaha!* the Devil laughed more.

*Jurina, if you don't apologize, you will lose the trust of your friend. Im quite sure that you won't like that..* the Angel told her. This sentence made the Devil vanish.

*Yosh!! I will apologize to Sae later! I will also apologize for underestimating her too!* Jurina thought and pumped her fist in the air causing her 3 friends to look at her in a weird way. As Jurina looked at Mayuyu, Jurina remembered that Mayuyu was the one she knocked which caused the accident to happen.

"Mayuyu.. Im sorry for knocking you. I didn't mean to..." Jurina apologized. "Forgiven but say sorry to Sae later if not I'll take my forgiveness back." Mayuyu replied and Kitarie and Yuihan nodded.

"Don't worry.. I will.. Let's go swimming, shall we? We have been in the sun for too long - might as well cool down." Jurina told her friends. The four of them swam in the sea until dawn and gave the ball to a classmate nearby as they asked for it.

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It was dawn. Everyone was gathered in the cafeteria. The cafeteria was big and there were 4 tables that were long and fits all the members of each teams. Everyone sat at the tables were their team was.

Sae was at the end of the table. She looks like the boss that is in a meeting because of where she sat. Sae was also at the center of Mayuyu and Jurina. Mayuyu on her left and Jurina on her right.

Sayaka stood up and asked "Did all of you had fun just now?" .. "HAI~" everyone replied to her. "Alright! At the count of 3, I want everyone to say "itadakimasu"!"
"3...! 2...! 1..!" .. "ITADAKIMASU~~!" everyone said at the same time including the tour leaders. Everyone started to eat their dinner and a lot of people made a noise as they were talking about how the food is delicious.

"Sae-san.. Sorry for the accident just now.. If I wasn't being competitive with you, I wouldn't have knocked down Mayuyu and you didn't have to save her.. Im also sorry for judging you just now in the bus.." Jurina apologised to Sae while they were eating. Mayuyu heard it and smiled secretively.

"Apology accepted. I hope you learn a lot because of that. Thank you for being honest too." Sae forgave Jurina and winked at her. This time, Jurina just smiled cooly and continued to eat.

End of Jurina's POV

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After dinner, Sae's fans got Sae's number as promised including Mayuyu and now, everyone is back to their rooms. The four girls wore their pajamas and is already preparing to sleep.

Jurina is beside Mayuyu while Kitarie and Yuihan was beside each other. Jurina was texting her girlfriend while Mayuyu was thinking about the incident just now where she and Sae were holding hands.

*skip*

Jurina, Kitarie and Yuihan were already asleep except for Mayuyu. Mayuyu is planning to take a peek in the tour leader's room since their room is just beside their room. Mayuyu stood up from her futon and looked at her friends. Jurina is asleep with her hands tucked under her head which makes her look like an ikemen and Kitarie and Yuihan was cuddling. Yuihan is on top of Kitarie and Kitarie is hugging Yuihan in the waist.

*Since when did they become a couple? Did they do some "hot stuff" while I was thinking about me and Sae?* Mayuyu was having odd thoughts about Kitarie and Yuihan.. Mayuyu just shrugged her thoughts off when she remembered about peeking inside the tour leader's room.

Mayuyu went out of her room and look at the tour leader's room door. "kyaaa!" she screamed lightly as she saw a bright scary figure beside the door.

"Chillax! It's just me. Beside, why are you still awake? Do you need to go to the toilet?" The scary figured shown her flashlight somewhere else, revealing Sae.

"Umm.. No.. I just wanted to take a fresh air.." Mayuyu replied to Sae's question..

Sae patted Mayuyu's head and said "All right.. but since it's already late, I will give you 30 seconds to take a fresh air."

-After 30 seconds of silence-

"Times up! Go to sleep alright? Tomorrow will be one heck of a day." Sae said as she checks her watch. Mayuyu went to her room and lay down on her sleeping futon. She giggled until she fell asleep.

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Day 2

In the morning, they went to a temple to learn more about the temple's history. Right now, they were facing a cow statue and Sae is giving them information about the cow. "This cow is known to give you more knowledge. They said that if you touch it, you will gain more knowledge and do well for your exams.. Yada yada yada yada."

After giving the information, Kitarie, Yuihan and Jurina rushed to the cow statue and rubbed it like as if they were competing on who is the fastest to polish it(CheesyBits: Idk how to explain it so I used this reference. I hope you get it). The other girls from Team I who were Jurina's fans took a picture of them rubbing the cow statue.

Mayuyu walked to the cow statue and pet it's head and prayed *I hope you'll help me in my exams..*.

"Okay girls.. Stop rubbing it like there's no tomorrow. You all look childish right now." Mayuyu told her friends.

"But we want to get more knowledge~!" Yuihan said.

"Yea~ I don't want to fail in my exams too!" Kitarie said.

"Im also tired of getting A's in my exams! I want A+s!!" Jurina said.

"Baka~ You don't have to rub it like that." Mayuyu teased.

Sae, who was watching the scene since the beginning was chuckling on how the girls were cute specially at Mayuyu as she finds a serious Mayuyu very cute. Sae was beside a store which sells cards to write your wishes in it.

"Hey girls, come here!" Sae called the girls. Everyone in Team I went to Sae. "So this part of the temple is where you asks for your wish. Whether it's about health, love or wealth. Anything, just anything. Everything's fine as long as you don't write it in a bad way. Ohh.. and after writing down your wishes, don't forget to tie it to this tree!" Sae pointed a tree were lots of cards was hanged in it.

Everyone bought a card from the store and wrote down their wishes.

Mayuyu wrote down: [I wish to get that person to be my boyfriend]. "that person" refers to Sae. Mayuyu tied it to the tree and Sae saw her tie it.

Sae, also bought a card and wrote down: [I wish to remember and meet the person who gave the creamy white scarf to me in my childhood days.]. After that, Sae tied it to the tree. Sae looked at Mayuyu's card and read it. *that person, huh? I hope she gets him.* Sae smiled at the thought.

After that, Kitarie, Jurina and Yuihan tied their cards to the tree. Sae read their cards since she was curious about the girls in her team.

Jurina's card read out: [I want a healthy and good future with Rena-chan.] *Rena-chan? Must be her sister..* Sae thought.

Kitarie's card read out: [I want to harass and cuddle her more like last night.] *harass!? Didn't I tell them to write it properly? Sigh..* Sae facepalmed.

Yuihan's card read out: [I wish she stops pimping and cuddle me more like last night.] *She!? Pimping!? Cuddle.. like last night!? Wait.. Kitarie's card says the same thing about cuddling and they are in the same room.. Could it be!? I have one heck of a team indeed!* Sae thought and blushed.

After that, girls from Team I started to tie their card to the tree. Sae read it out and she finds most of the cards weird as they were mostly about girl relationships but she didn't judge them as her mom used to tell her that she fell inlove with a childhood friend which is a girl once but Sae can't remember who that girl is.

*skip*

After having a tour in the temple and had their lunch in a restaurant in the city, they are now shopping in a famous shopping mall. Sae told her team that they could all roam around the shopping mall and separate. Mayuyu and her friends, Jurina, Kitarie and Yuihan stayed with Sae. To be honest, Sae was just following them as Mayuyu and her gang kept dragging her inside the stores.

Mayuyu will buy the same thing as Sae and kept getting Sae's attention. Jurina is buying souvenirs for Rena-chan and her family while Yuihan and Kitarie were holding hands and were choosing what to buy for themselves. Mayuyu and Sae also took a picture while shopping including the 3 girls too.

The day ended fast as the girls were enjoying their shopping spree.

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Day 3 (Last Day of Mayuyu's School Trip)

*Last door..* Sae thought as she faces Mayuyu and friend's door. Sae opened the door and saw Kitarie and Yuihan cuddling, Jurina hugging her messed up blanket and Mayuyu is asleep with a camera with her hands.

*As I thought.. Those 2 are really a couple...* Sae thought when she looked at Kitarie and Yuihan.

"Wake up, girls! Get ready to go home. Im sure you miss your family." Sae wakes them up by shaking them gently which worked as they slowly woke up.

"Aughhh.. frwgfdsjafeuiewaf#^!$#*#.." Those were the noises that were made when Kitarie and Jurina tried to stand up. Since Jurina is a heavy sleeper, Jurina fell mid-way and fell asleep again. This movements from the girls made Sae giggle.

"Come on, Matsui-san. Wake up. Im sure you want to see Rena-chan." Sae said as she remembered the name in the card. Hearing Rena-chan's name, Jurina became awake fully.

"Dress up everyone.. Meet us in the cafeteria for breakfast. After that, we will leave. Oh.. and pack your bags and bring it down too." Sae announced. "Hai~" the 4 girls responded.

The four girls packed their bags first and bought their bags to the toilet to dress up. After that, they went to the cafeteria.

Their sitting arrangement are the same as Day 1. Mayuyu on Sae's left and Jurina on Sae's right.

"Okay.. Everyone, did everyone have fun in this two days!?" Sayaka asked the students as she stood up. "HAI~" The students responded and some of the students said it with their fist pumped up in the air.

"This is the last time we are going to say this so let's say it energeticly! On the count of 3! 3..! 2..! 1..!" "ITADAKIMASU~~~!!" The students cheered and starts to eat.

"Sae-chan.. Is it okay if I text you?" Mayuyu asked Sae. "Sure. Why not? We can also meet up if you want." Sae said.

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They were now far away from the hotel as they were now in school. They were already dismissed. The tour leaders were already gone.

"I have to go now.. Cya guys tomorrow! Rena-chan is waiting for me at her house." Jurina said as she rushed to her girlfriend's house. The 3 other girls waved her goodbye until she was out of their sight.

"I guess we have to go now too." Yuihan told Mayuyu.

"But I thought your house goes to the direction of where my house is?" Mayuyu asked.

"I promised to walk Kitarie home.. So ya.. Hehe.. Cya tomorrow!" Yuihan said and Kitarie waved to Mayuyu. Once Kitarie and Yuihan turned to the other direction, Mayuyu walked home.

*skip*

"Tadaima!!" Mayuyu said as she opened the door of her house. "Okaeeriii~" someone said in a ghostly tone. Right now, a zombie was infront of Mayuyu which made her scream.

"Chillax! It's just me.. Your Father." Her father took off her mask. "Shinoda Maritroll Success!" cheered her father. "Mouu! Otousan! That wasn't funny!" Mayuyu pouted.

"Ignore him, Mayuyu." Her sister, Yukirin said.

"Geez! The two of you are like your mothers.. Yukirin like Nyaro and Mayuyu like Miichan." Shinoda Mario said happily as he is happy about his daughters.

End of Chapter 3A

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Who is the girl who Sae fell inlove with and gave her the creamy white scarf??

What happened to Yukirin and Mayuyu's mothers and what were their relationship like with their father, Shinoda Mario??

Standby for the next Chapter 3B!

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Im sorry if it's too boring. I did my best.  :bow:
I will post chapter 3B soon. I would also want to hear your opinions as it might give me ideas for the next chapter.  :cow:

« Last Edit: March 19, 2013, 07:14:20 AM by CheesyBits »

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #24 on: October 30, 2012, 02:30:07 AM »
jurina sleeping like an ikemen. Lol i want to see it  :cathappy:

eh? Mayu and yuki have a different mother?

It's not boring, it's really great chapter. Thank you for update  :thumbsup
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #25 on: October 30, 2012, 01:40:30 PM »
yayyy finaly you update ^-^ thankyou :bow:
i think jurina is cool ikement too XD wonder to see her in danso :grin:
saemayu moment are soooo sweeet :3
mayu?? why don't you write "her" not "him" let sae know :3
girl who gift whitescarf huh? i wonder it's yuki :3 but i hope no~~ how about that girl is kasai? or yuka? XD XD will be more interesting~
so mayu and yuki is sister with different mother? XD i'm shock xo maritroll such a playboyy xd

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #26 on: October 31, 2012, 05:42:28 AM »
It's not MariHaru or MariMii but  Mario marry both of them??!!
And it will be 3-angle Love SaeMaYuki
Please update soon
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #27 on: October 31, 2012, 04:38:04 PM »
Thank you for the update and the chapter.
I read this chapter from your tumblr but i don't have tumblr so i'll give comment from here lol.

Soo Mario have 2 wifes?
Please don't tell me you are going to make Sae marry Yuki and Mayu,because that would be...awesome lol jkjk

Nice updates btw,update soon :D
Shipping MariHaru = Kojiharu moved to team B
Shipping SaeYuki = Sae moved to Shang Hai
Shipping MayuAika = Rabutan moved to HKT
Acchan fans = Acchan graduated
 2012 is so funny :|

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #28 on: November 01, 2012, 05:47:28 PM »
LOL Sae is so nosy, reading everybody's wishes!

Can I ship Saemayuki! Ok fine, if polygamy not allowed ><, SAEMAYU then! I don't want to see cute mayuyu's heart broken  :heart: :heart:!

Thanks for this sweet story! I prefer this over to making one of the love-triangle characters trivial or evil. I'll be waiting!!

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3A: Love at first sight] (30/10)
« Reply #29 on: November 03, 2012, 02:58:15 PM »
whoaa where's the author? :? can't wait for the next~ please continue :bow:
sorry for demanding ^-^

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeeting?] (12/11)
« Reply #30 on: November 12, 2012, 08:50:04 PM »
@fuu_kun: I'm here.. It's just that I lost the paper that has chapter 3b in it.. Truly sorry for the long update  :bow: :bow: :bow:  :deco:
@saeyu: Thanks for waiting~!  :deco: Sorry for the long update  :bow: :bow: :bow:
@zeelbulb:: Thx for reading it on tumblr and taking your time to comment here  :deco: wahahaha XD I had a great laugh there.. Too bad Mayu is for someone else~ sorry for the long update  :bow: :bow: :bow:
@fael_c00l: You'll know about their relationship soon ^_^  :deco:
@matsuri: Oh heck.. Even I want to see Jurina sleeping like an ikemen xD

Some ppl want me to dump this fic but heck.. I won't.. even if my SaeYuki heart is fading away because of Sae going to SNH48.. SaeYuki fics r now the only way to make my SaeYuki heart stong so ima continue this :D
P.S Please prepare some tissues. I apologise if I make you cry in this chapter. You can hate me too. Hontoni gomenasai!  :bow:

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Chapter 3B: Second Meeting



    "YOU!??"  Sae and Yukirin said at the same time.

“You’re the person who took the puppy right?” “You’re the person who were looking at the puppy right?” Sae and Yuki said at the same time. Both of the girls giggled at the same time too.

“The two of you kn-“ Mayuyu said but was interrupted.

“YO~! Say OKAERI to your otousan! TADAIMA! YO! YO! YO!” Mario, the father of Yukirin and Mayuyu, is imitating a rapper after entering the house all of a sudden.

“Shut up otousan! We have guest!” Mayuyu shouted to the living room despite Sae presence.

“Dear diary, today is the 1,069,039 times my daughters told me to shut up.” Mario said while writing in an imaginary diary.

“Like I said, we have guests!” Mayuyu shouted to Mario again.

“Oh we have guests? HOHOHO~!”  Mario mimicked Santa Clause’s laugh. Mario went to the kitchen to look at the guest. Mario found Yuki and Sae staring at each other. Mario went beside Yukirin and stared at Sae.

“HOHOHOHO~! You must be Yukirin’s boyfriend! I heard so much about you~! HOHOHO!” Mario said to Sae. Sae and Yuki blushed while Mayuyu got jealoused.

“Otou-san!”  Yukirin slapped Mario’s back while blushing.

“Onee-chan , otou-san.. This is Miyazawa Sae. She is the person who took care of me in my previous school trip.” Mayuyu said.

*He’s a She??!! You’ve got to be kidding me~! Just when I thought I found the father of my future babies!* Yukirin thought and cried a little mentally.

“Miyazawa Sae desu!” Sae introduced herself and bowed.

“Konnichiwa… Kojima Yuki desu.. If you’re wondering why Mayuyu’s last name is Minegishi Mayu that’s because we have different mother and we took our last name from our mother.”  Yukirin blushed and bowed.

“Shinoda Mario desu! Please take care of us more~.” Mario said and reached a hand to Sae to shake hands with her. Sae agreed to shake hands with him but…

*BZZZ!* Sae was electric shocked.

“HOHOHO~! You fell for it!” Shinoda Mario grinned. Yukirin and Mayuyu  facepalmed  themselves.

“Awesome! What was that!?” Sae asked.

“Secret~!” Mario said and put his a finger in his lips like how an idol does.

“Jaa~ I guess we should eat now..” Yukirin said as she breaks the playful tension. The four of them get to their sits. Sae in between of Mayuyu and Yukirin , and Mario, beside Yukirin.

"Ja.. ITADAKIMASU!" Mario and the 3 girls said.

"Umm.. Sae and onee-chan, the two of you know each other?" Mayuyu asked jealously.

"We just happened to meet each other yesterday by coincidence.. But.. we just knew each other's names today." Sae said while munching on her food.

*Things really changed a lot, huh?* Mario thought.

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Shinoda Mario Flashback [CheesyBits: This was before Mayuyu was born.]


That day was the day the Shinoda family and Miyazawa family were going for a holiday together. The Shinoda and Miyazawa family are close as they went to the same high school and they were best friend since then.

"Otousan~! Okasan~! Let's go to Sae-chan's house now! We're going to be late!" chibi Yuki said excitedly while tugging her mother's one piece's skirt. Even though it is hot as it is summer, chibi Yuki is wearing a creamy white scarf in her neck.

"Please be patient Yuki-chan.. Papa has to help the butlers put the luggage in the car." Kojima Haruna, Yukirin's mom said. Mario and the butler were putting the luggages inside the limousine car.

"Alright! We're done! We can go now my lovely babies~!" Mario called the both of them.

"Yayyy~!! I'm coming Sae-chan!" chibi Yuki squealed in excitement! Chibi Yuki, Haruna and Mario sat inside the car. The driver drove away from their house and the maids closed the mansion's main gate. They are now going to the Miyazawa Mansion.

Once they reached the Miyazawa Mansion, they were greeted by the Miyazawa butlers and maids. They even saw the Miyazawa's limousine car parked in the garage. They were supposed to use that car but they decided it on Janken instead and Mario lost so they are now using their own limousine to go to their holiday location. The driver stopped driving then went out of the car to open the door beside Mario to let them go out. Mario and family got out of the car and saw the Miyazawa family, the king of the family, Miyazawa Kai, his queen, Miyazawa Atsuko, and their boyish daughter who were jumping around childishly, Miyazawa Sae, beside their own luggages.

"Osu! Mario and family! Good to see your limousine with you." Kai greeted them.

"Osu! Midget and family! Bad to see your limousine parked in your garage." Mario joked.

"Don't call me Midget!!" Kai half-shouted irritably. After that, Mario and Kai were chasing each other around while the butlers put their luggages inside Mario's limousine. [CheesyBits: WTF? How big is their limousine!?]

Haruna and chibi Yuki walked to Atsuko and chibi Sae. Haruna and Atsuko were having a chat while chibi Yuki and Sae went inside the house. [Cheesybits: What happened to Yuki and Sae inside the house is unknown since this just what Mario saw and heard.]

"Acchan~! It's been a long time! It's good to see you again." Haruna said.

"Ohh yes indeed! Ohh just look at our kids! They seems so close! If Sae was a boy, I'm pretty sure she and Yuki-chan will be a great couple." Acchan said while looking at the kids.

"Tell me about it. Hahaha~" Haruna giggled.

"You know.. Sae is really boyish. If she's still boyish in the future and falls inlove with Yuki-chan, are you fine with that? Because I would totally be fine with that." Acchan pointed out.

"Oh~ I would totally be fine with that. Just look at them. They look like a couple already. Hahaha~" Haruna giggled again.

*skip*

The adults were chatting with each other and the kids got out of the house. Chibi Sae is carrying a light brown puppy soft toy and is playing with it with chibi Yuki.

"Goshujinsama, all the luggages are inside the limousine already." a Miyazawa butler told Kai.

"Yosh! Ladies and gentleman! We're ready to go!" Kai announced. The kids rushed to the limousine and sat behind the driver's sit as they wanted to have a view of what's outside the front window. Kai and Acchan sat behind the kids while Mario and Haruna sat behind them. The Shinoda butler were already inside the car and drove off safely.

"Put on your seatbelt kids!" Kai told the kids.

"It's already on!" chibi Sae and Yuki said the same time then snickered to each other as they actually didn't put it on.

-In the middle of the road-

"Here Sae! I'm giving this to you. It's my favourite so keep it safely!" chibi Yuki said. Chibi Yuki took off her creamy white scarf and put it on Sae then kissed her in the cheek.

"Awww~ How sweet!" Mario, Haruna, Kai and Acchan said at the same time.

"I'll treasure it! Here Yukirin! You can take my puppy! This is my favourite too!" chibi Sae said and gave it to Yukirin then chibi Sae cupped Yukirin's face and gave her a peck in the lips. Yuki blushed and giggled then hugged the puppy tightly.

"Wow those moves! She's just like you Kai!" Haruna joked to Kai while Mario laughed at Kai to tease him. "HOHOHOHO~!"

Kai and Mario were teasing each other while the two mothers were chatting with each other. The kids were still playing until...

*SCREECHHH!!!* a truck is speeding towards them.

Acchan and Kai jumped to protect chibi Yuki and Sae. Haruna and Mario tried to protect all of them too but it was too late. The truck hit directly where the children were.

Mario blacked out.

-In the Hospital-

"Arghh..." Mario squeaked in pain as he tried to stand up from lying down in a bed. He kept still but realised that his inside a hostpital right now because of the hospital smell. Suddenly, Mario remembered the incident.

"OH SHIT!" Mario shouted and got out the bed fast ignoring the pain. Haruna's bed was beside his bed. Haruna is already awake and is crying.

"HARUNA! ARE YOU OKAY?! WHERE'S YUKI-CHAN? AND KAI, ACCHAN AND SAE!?" Mario half-shouted in worry.

"Yuki-chan and Sae-chan is in a coma. Acchan and Kai are dead!" Haruna exclaimed and cried more. Mario sat onto Haruna's bed and hugged her.

"No way.... Where's the kids?" Mario asked and shed tears.

"Their having an operation now...." Haruna cried then hugged Mario back. Mario hugged her more tightly.

Suddenly, a doctor went to their room.

"How's the kids?" Mario asked the doctor.

"Bad news first.. Both of the kids suffered a brain damage and there's a possibility that they might have amnesia. Good news is, they're not dead." The doctor said.

The doctor took a chair and put it beside Haruna's bed and sat on the chair.

"Kai and Acchan are dead too... Kai was like a brother to me and Acchan was like a sister to me.." the doctor said and shed a tear.

"I know how you feel Sayuu.." Mario greived. The doctor also went to the same high school as the Miyazawa and Shinoda family. He is in the Akimoto family.

"Oh.. By the way.. the kids will be awake in a week. I'll take my leave now." Sayuu said and left the room, leaving Mario to comfort Haruna.

-After a week-

Mario and Haruna were already discharged from the hospital as their injuries were not that bad. Now, they are still at the hospital, outside Sae and Yuki's room. They are looking at the window to see what's going on inside.

"Auuughhh.. My head it hurts." chibi Sae groaned in pain. She saw girl lying down in a bed while hugging a puppy soft toy that looks similar to hers and doctor Sayuu talking to each other.

"You're finally awake huh?" Sayuu said.

"Where am I? Where's Papa and Mama?" chibi Sae asked.

"They died in a car crash. Im sorry." Sayuu told Sae as tears came out of his eyes. Sae cried loudly. The girl who is hugging a soft toy cried too.

"Im sorry to hear that.." the girl cried.

Sae looked at the girl and calmed down a little as she felt very safe when she saw the girl. "I have that kind of puppy soft toy too and it's my favourite." Sae sniffed and pointed at the puppy.

"I have that kind of scarf too and it's my favourite too." the girl sniffed and smiled a little bit at Sae to calm her down.

Mario and Haruna are now crying and hugging each other. "I wonder if Yuki-chan and Sae-chan still remembers us." Mario cried.

"My name is Miyazawa Sae! What's yours?" Sae asked and smiled too to show that she has calmed down a little bit.

"My name is Kojima Yuki. Nice to meet you." Yukirin introduced herself.

Sayuu went out of the room to talk to Mario and Haruna.

"Looks like they still remembers their names but they don't remember each other. You can come in now if you want to." Sayuu told them. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna went inside the room. Sae was giving them a sad and confused look while Yukirin smiled and called them. "Otousan! Okasan!"

Mario and Haruna smiled a Yuki and went to her and hug her. While Sae became sad again as she wants her parents to hug her too.

"Your parents..?" Sae asked. After hearing this. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna's smile became a frown again even Yukirin frowned out of sympathy.

"Yes.." Yuki said.

"You're lucky.." Sae said and smiled a little.

"Yuki-chan, I will talk to your parents outside for awhile." Sayuu told chibi Yuki. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna went out of the room.

"I'll keep Sae.. It will be bad for both of them if you raise Yuki with Sae." Sayuu told Mario and Haruna.

"Wait.. But what will happen to Kai and Acchan's money?" Haruna asked.

"It will go to Sae and Sae only." Sayuu told them.

"That's good.." Mario and Haruna exclaimed.

"Sayaka is older than Sae. She's quite close to Sae but not as close as Sae is close to Yuki." Sayuu told them.

"Ja.. I'll leave Sae's health to you but let's meet up every month since I want to see how Sae's health is improving and I want her to remember Yuki again." Mario told Sayuu.

"That's a deal." Sayuu agreed.

End of Mario's Flashback

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Mario continued eating while thinking of ways to let Sae and Yuki remember each other's past again. Mayuyu, Sae and Yukirin were having a conversation.

"So.. was it the puppy outside that you picked up yesterday?" Mayuyu asked Sae. "Yup!"

"EEHHH!!?? The puppy is outside!? I want to see it! Can I look at it after we eat?" Yukirin asked with a shocked yet excited look at her face.

"Suree." Sae said.

The three girls hurriedly ate their lunch successfully without choking but Mario finished eating first. After that, the three girls went outside to take a look at the puppy while Mario do the dishes.

"Huwaa~!! Kawaiii~!" Yukirin said then pet the puppy. Mayuyu also pet the puppy.

"FLUFFEH~!" Mayuyu said and snuggled the puppy.

"Hahaha.." Sae laughed awkwardly.

The two girls were still petting the dog. Sae looked at her watch to check the time. It is already late in the afternoon.

"Anoo.. It's already late in the afternoon so I should go now." Sae said. The two girls stopped petting the puppy.

"AHH! GOMEN! Sorry for keeping you late!" Yukirin apologised.

"Gomen Sae-chan." Mayuyu apologised then bowed.

"Etoo.. Ano.. Can I have your phone number?" Yukirin asked Sae. Mayuyu shot a jealous glare at Yukirin.

"Sure.. Why not? It's xxxxxxx" Sae said.

"Arigato~" Yukirin thanked Sae.

Mayuyu just watched the scene jealously then went to Sae and hold her hand. This scene made Yukirin jealous too. Sae noticed the tension.

"Ahahaha.. Calm down. The two of you look like you want to eat each other up. I guess I should take my leave then." Sae said.

"Ahh~ Thank you for coming Sae-chan!" Mayuyu said then kissed Sae in the cheeks. Yukirin wanted to do it but she is not that close to Sae so she refrained herself to. After that, Sae put the leash on the puppy and walked towards the gate.

"Thanks for the lunch, Yukirin-san and Mayuyu-san!" Sae thanked them then walked off while Yukirin and Mayuyu waved her goodbye. Once Sae was out of their sight, the two girls went inside the house without talking to each other.

Since Mario is already done with the dishes, he's already in the living room. He noticed a tension between Mayuyu and Yukirin when they entered the house.

"Wooow! Chillax there! Have some kitkat!" Mario said. Mayuyu and Yukirin went to their room.

Mario went to Yukirin's room to talk to her. He found Yukirin hugging the puppy that chibi Sae gave her.

"Nee.. Don't you think think the puppy outside and that puppy look alike?" Mario said.

"Must be pure coincidence, Otousan." Yukirin said.

"You won't know. Maybe it's because of destiny." Mario said and winked at Yukirin then left the room to watch some Dora the Explorer.

Yukirin looked at the puppy that she was hugging.

"Destiny..?" she thought.

End of Chapter 3B

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Profile:

Kojima Yuki: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu but she took her mother's last name. Sae's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.

Minegishi Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin but she took her mother's last name. Likes Sae.

Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Akimoto Sayuu's daughter.

Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka. Both parents are dead. Yukirin's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.

Mayuki-mama: Hates animals.

Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Boyish person and has a lot of pride.

Matsui Rena: Jurina's girlfriend.

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Sorry if I made anyone cry~  :bow: :bow:
I myself cried to.  :cry:
I put the Dora the Explorer there to release the tension and also because of those cheesy trolls [x
It's now 3am something in my area so if there's any mistake then im really really sorry  :bow:
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #31 on: November 13, 2012, 05:42:27 AM »
hohohooo yes you updateeee >o<)/
mario troll is success agaiin to make me laugh hard XD XD
and the flashback :cry: :cry: kai and acchan dead T^T
and whats with the dora the explorer?? XD i tear in joy XD
battle between yuki and mayu will be bad for themself XD


in reply to @zeelbulb you said than mayu is for someone else?? who is it????? i'm curious xd
thankyou for the update :bow:
update soon :grin:

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #32 on: November 13, 2012, 10:18:29 AM »
what the f*ck!
Of all people you will kill why its kai and acchan!my god cheesy!haha

Wait?where's haruna from the story?is she dead now thas why mario meet mayu's mom (miichan)
My god so maaannnnyyyy mystery!
Pls update soon cheesy!

I really love ur fic!haha
I want more!!

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #33 on: November 13, 2012, 10:29:34 AM »
Wow! This is funny! But you kill kaixacchan(chichay is on rage  :lol: ). That's so sad!  :cry:
Yuki watched Dora huh!  :rofl: I hope her favorite character is the map.  :rofl:


This is the only chapter i read. Gomene~ Promise i will read everything~  :deco:
I guess it's safe for me to read, since you don't make Mayu as a 3rd wheel right?!  :twisted:

Please update soon~  :bow:

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #34 on: November 13, 2012, 10:46:44 AM »
yah of all character why kai and acchan!
Why not rhin_rhin or kuchi!
Or just u cheesy but not my otp!

 My god cheesy u know i love u right but now my love for die to like kaixacchan!
haha

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #35 on: November 13, 2012, 01:02:40 PM »
Dafuq,, Kai Acchan is dead?? Yeah so the story focus SaeMaYuki only,, good job for killing KaiAcchan (Maybe after this KaiAcchan fans will kill me)
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #36 on: November 13, 2012, 01:23:02 PM »
@Chichay: Chi~ Hontoni gomensasai~!  :bow: :bow: :bow:
@rhin_rhin: Si Mario yun  XD I guess you'll kill me too  :bleed eyes:
@fael_c00l: They will appear in some chapters though :P
@fuu_kun: Ohh you better be curious  :lol: You'll know soon :P
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #37 on: November 13, 2012, 04:58:20 PM »
thank u for the saemayuyuki fanfics its really interesting and im curious about sae and yuki's past  :) :? but im very worried what will happen to mayu if sae and yuki like each other i dont want mayu to be alone please  :cry:
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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #38 on: November 13, 2012, 05:01:07 PM »
to everyone that doesn't want Mayu to be sad and stuff: Mayu will have a happy ending ^_^ No worries!

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Re: The puppy that gave me my love [Chapter 3B: Second Meeting?] (13/11)
« Reply #39 on: November 13, 2012, 05:02:28 PM »
yeah.. i'm superrr curious here.. xd
you better not losing your paper and update soon then xp hohohooo (~"-")~

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