Ah ah ah!!!!!!!!
Waiwai, gomen ne, I've been silently following all your stories since the beginning of the month... I don't know when and how but I lost a bit of my motivation to post comments and then got a little busy with life and work
Got a few to go through now, but first off, just wanted to say
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TAKAGAKI FLUFF! I am seriously uber happy to have you, rndm and ada spreading the TakaGaki
It means a lot, seriously, and I bet a lot of lurkers are thinking the same
.... so don't worry too much about getting comments?
I got the impression that you may have been calling out to me and ropychan when you've been saying things like:
i'll wait for more comments
Well, as a fellow TakaGaki enthusiast, I do feel the obligation to read and respond, so here I am
Let's backtrack a bit!~
yay for long coment~ X3 i love long comments but suck at making them^^;
Glad you enjoy!
Lol, everybody loves long comments but there aren't enough of them going around, hey? They don't have to be long, just insightful/meaningful, though mine lean dangerously towards the mindless fangirly side xD I'm naturally a deep thinker and I have too much going on in my head when I read something, I feel it would be nice to show my gratitude to writers by sharing some of this.
Everybody keeps talking about being sucky at comments. Should ropychan and I write up a guide?
the closest thing that i can write to make gaki irresponsinble is like her not giving a crap on missing a metting(and even then it'll probably be in the back of her head spazzing out about how she should really go and whatnot
) risa reminds me of myself alot mostly cus we're both responsible and do what people ask of them and such^^; or well atleast i think so. like if there was a meeting for my church group, eventhough like i hate it i'd go, and if i didnt eventhough i'd be happy that i stayed at home and stalked this place all night, it'd still nag at me that i didnt go
^^; did that make sense?
Haiiiiiii! waiwai so cute.
It's like an ingrained sense of responsibility, isn't it? Gaki-san's not the type to be able to shed herself of responsibility. Even if she consciously rebels against something, she'll be bothered by it.
lol about those bits....i'll leve them all to your imagination^^; its still hard for me to realy try to write pervs yet... eventhough i have started one and havent touched it in like what 4 months? rndy should know its just feels weird expessialy if the person's writing hasnt even been in a relationship let alone well that.
I'm going through writing some right now, despite my lack of experience in that area as well
I don't think you need to have experience anyway. Reading enough pervs will do the trick.
Anyway, that said: I want to read a TakaGaki perv from you?
i'll try to write longer eventhough i think i'll never write as long as you essy or rndy and you update soon too k~?
Please don't feel like you need to write longer or anything - sometimes the shortness makes it all the sweeter.
I'm a bit too wordy, it's a problem I've been trying to fix. You can tell not only with my story, but with all my fanfic comments too
I like essy and rndy's wordiness though, never feels redundant. Anyhow, sorry I haven't updated my own, I'm in the process of writing (and being wordy xD). Hopefully can update in about a week? Thanks for the encouragement though!
Love Jump.AKB-song inspired? . . . . . . . . . . .
She sat up deciding that she wasn’t going to get anymore sleep with the four legged alarm clock on her bed
Ouji + Ai!
I'm such a sucker for animals, and whenever one of the girls go kya kyaaa over one (Miki and Ai, noticeably :3), it makes me kinda melt.
Four-legged alarm clock is such a cute way to describe her Ouji...
I could read a whole fic on Ai and her dog and still be satisfied. Hope this doggy can make future appearances?
As she glanced at the date a smile came to her face. It was Sunday; the day that she had been waiting for the past month was finally here! Ai silently squealed to herself
Awwwwww~
excited Ai-chan is so endearing. I wonder if Gaki-san had a similar morning of giddy preparation? I could definitely imagine that
And a first date at that...
"Must be your ‘Rain girl’ luck again…It’d suck now after all of this waiting for your lovely Gaki-san to just cancel because of your crappy luck ne~?"
Hahhaaaa.... the younger Takahashi has a bit of sharp tongue there, huh? Teasing her older sister even though it's so obvious this is something huge for her (I mean, it took her over TWO hours to pick that outfit???
).
Sounds kinda like a little brat sibling you would throw pillows at. I'm glad Ai-chan did that. ^__^
Ai felt her body stiffen at the beans question. She slightly bit her bottom lip and quickly touched the brown frames with one hand as she gripped onto the handle of her umbrella with the other. She did need the glasses for reading, but it was also a way to hide her-self, since she wasn’t the most confident girl
Shy Ai-chan is one of my favourite kind of Ai-chans. For somebody so talented and good-looking, I'm always awed by her modesty and shyness.
“C’mon Ai-chan~! You don’t need your umbrella! It’s snowing!”
What happened next to Ai’s surprise was that the bean took her hand and started running, and jumping again, which sooner made her jump and run along with her. The two feeling more insensitive to the cold with each jump.
‘She’s actually holding my hand! Please Kami-sama make this moment last forever!’
OH MY FLUFF! In generous amounts!
Cute, innocent, high-school teenagey TakaGaki is fluffy win.
I have a thing for reading about Ai-chan admiring and crushing on Gaki-san. It's usually the other way around, but it's so damn cute when it's Ai doing all that.
“I think that Ai-chan looks cuter without her glasses and should only use them when she needs to!”
Hmmmm....
Ai-chan is cute with or without glasses, but I like the novelty of her wearing glasses. Especially as a sensei
dear lord
But I think the thing that's oh so adorable about this is that Gaki-san probably realises that Ai wears her glasses more to hide behind them than anything...
She smirked to herself and for the first time in a long time put the glasses into their case and into her school bag as she turned to her sister.
“Its nothing…Lets go.”
Gaki-san's words are like some kind of gospel for Ai... hehe.
WHAT A CUTE ONE-SHOT!!!!!
You're so good at writing these, waiwai. >_______<
Denwa de ne. I think of the three one-shots you've updated since my last comment, this one was possibly my favourite. Not a clear cut one 'coz they're just all so damned cute, but this one really left an impression on me because of the dialogue and the interaction over the phone. It's so... simple, warm, and realistic? The kind of conversation I can totally imagine the two having. And demanding Ai-chan coupled with a tired Gaki-san is is is is is is just just
“There…it’s opened and I’m looking…Now can you please tell me why you called me so late?”
“Its not that late, you’re only an hour behind me Risa-chan.”
“Still it’s late…”
She tried to suppress a yawn.
Is Gaki-san getting annoyed with a romantic Ai here? LOL.
Still, her 'annoyed' is cute.
“So are you looking?”
“Yes Ai-chan, I’m looking up at the sky.”
Ai-chan's so demanding, ne? Hahahaha... I laughed at this, it's so adorable and puppy-like.
Gyyyyaaaaaa...
“Good, cus you know I want to look at the same things you do even if we’re apart, and the skys the best thing cus its so big and all…”
I knew she was shaking her head after I said my reason, but it was true; I wanted it to feel like she was right next to me on the hotel bed with the both of us snuggled together looking out of the window.
"And the sky's the best thing cus its so big and all..." Clever!Ai-chan ftw!
SO SWEET.
“Fine~ we can just look with the window closed then. It won’t really be the same though you know…”
“It won’t be the end of the world…How much longer do I have to stay up with you?”
Gaki-san's sounding really ticked off here!
You know, I just noticed that throughout this one-shot there isn't really anything sweet out of Gaki-san's mouth besides: I love you. And somehow, this still manages to be so warm and endearing. I love it!
“Just for a little longer ok?”
‘I just want to stay like this… I want to feel like you’re right here with me…’
I wish Ai-chan had said that out loud. *sigh*
“Ai-chan?”
“Yeah?”
“Are you still upset at me almost falling asleep earlier?”
“…Maybe…why?”
“Cus..I’m really getting tierd…”
Awwww. Sweet dialogue, I love, I love.
What's Gaki-san been doing that's caused her such exhaustion though? xDDDD Thinking too much about Ai-chan, I hope.
Hehehee..
“I love you…”
I heard the line click and I brought the phone away from my ear and looked at the wallpaper of the two of us together. I softly kissed the screen, a habit I usually do when Risa’s not around to actually kiss, and put the phone on the bedside dresser.
‘I love you too Risa-chan…’
*Bee melts into a puddle of goo*Ahjandishdsadsjddbbgff!!!!
I melted the first time I read this and with this second viewing, result is still the same. Goodness me.......
Goodbye Memories. This was such a sweet, nostalgic read...
It kind of reminded me of Proposal Daisakusen (I obsessed over this drama for almost 2 years), where one of my favourite scenes was the two leads going back to their highschool. They walked about, sat in their old classroom and then in the playground, just reminiscing about times gone by, about what's happened since. It was so beautiful, so hauntingly beautiful. I can say that this one-shot definitely roused similar emotions in me
a truly beautiful piece...
It's nice to see you swapping around the roles a little, with this one being Gaki's POV and is all about her love for Ai.
The flashbacks and the sakura blossoms... Risa's constant aching over the fact that she was never able to confess to Ai because of one thing or another...
Risa looked up to the sky and noticed the shade of blue slowly changing to end the day. As she noticed this, a wave of sadness swept over her and the tears she had held back.
“Goodbye… I don’t want to say goodbye yet…”
Awwwww...
I know how that feels... I've been through all that. Primary school, highschool, uni. ;_____________; it's so hard to let go, and even more so when it's got to do with somebody you've fallen for so hard.
Risa couldn’t keep her eyes off of Ai. She loved everything about her; the way she laughed when they joked around, how she looked at her with those big doe eyes when she finally got her attention away from her videogames, everything.
‘It seems like I’m falling in love with you Ai-chan…’
Yes! Ai's (awesomely natural) laughter! Doe eyes! Just a few things about her that are so distinctive.
And you get extra points for mentioning Ai and videogaming.
“I… you…”
“Me?”
“You always….”
“Always what Risa?”
Ai took a few steps forward to figure out just what the bean was trying to say, which made Risa look away for a brief moment.
‘No; no backing out this time, you have to say it Risa, even if she doesn’t love you back, just saying it is enough.’
“Ever since the beginning Ai-chan… I’ve…I’ve always…”
She took one last deep breath and closed her eyes shut as the words she had been holding for years finally came out of her mouth.
“I’ve always loved you!”
Sorry this is such a big quote, but this stumbling confession is too much love!
MY GAH, we
HAVE to find out what Ai's response will be!!!!!! ;________________; You're writing right now, aren't you??? =P but yeah, do take your time. Agree with grac's above comment. Oh, and the fact that you are Queen of Fluff
you earned the title! xDDDD
Anyways, thank you for the fluff, waiwai!
I've enjoyed it all so much and hope it shows through this comment?
Please update soon. Can't wait for MORE! ---
Here, some links for 'research'. Bee and Ropy are well-acquainted with my famous links (Bee secretly fears them, I think)
EHHHHH???
Since when have I secretly feared them? Sorry, but what makes you think that? >_____> lol