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Title: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: bochang on May 22, 2012, 01:25:12 PM

Hey guys, because i think i will write not only Infinity and Akhihabara Syndrome, so i think i need this new thread, for my scribble collection such as OS and multiple shots. So i will move my OS to this thread later and this is the index. :3

hope you guys like it~ :D

ONE
Prologue: Bellow this post
ACT ONE:  Death  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1044551#msg1044551)
ACT TWO:  Life  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1048185#msg1048185)
ACT THREE:  I will always be with you  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1051806#msg1051806)

10 Wishes
Prologue:  Prologue  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1048262#msg1048262)
ACT ONE:  Lie  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1053851#msg1053851)

死神の愛
Teaser:  Teaser~  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1054484#new)
Prologue:  Prologue  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1056334#msg1056334)
ACT ONE:  Friend?  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32981.msg1061498#msg1061498)

Title: [ONE prologue, 22 May 2012]
Post by: bochang on May 22, 2012, 01:27:51 PM

This story is inspired by a manga.. I forgot what the manga is.. but i remember the storyline. :3
The manga is so good, so i think i will make the AKB’s version. Hohoho
I hope you guys like it, and this is only the prologue, please keep it in mind. LOL

i writing this in the middle of exam weeks. LOL


without further adieu~

ONE

Prologue

[Yuki’s POV]

Today is the first day of college after a long holiday. I feel so lazy to get up and preparing myself to go to campus.

Oh right, My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. I’m a sophomore in Literature dept at Tokyo U. I’m also a newbie writer, i’m writing fanfic about AKB in Jphip.com. I love AKB so much, and my  oshimen is Matsui Rena. She’s so pretty, eventhough she’s only a trainee, but i really fell in love with her at the first sight when i saw her at the kenkyuusei first theater debut. Oh, what time is it? I’m gonna late, Ciao!

After preparing all my needs, i get out from my apartement and start walking to the bus stop.

Aitakatta! Aitakatta! Aitakatta! Kimi ni!!

I sing along in my thought. It’s my habit to listened music anytime and anywhere, and of course, the song i listened to are AKB’s songs.

I wait for the traffic light turns to red, at the intersection near my rent, still listening to my ipod, until i recognize someone.

Could it be?

I glace at the person next to me.

R-Rena?! MATSUI RENA-SAN! Uwah! She’s so pretty! What is she doing on this place? Don’t tell me she’s living around here? OMG! Why I didn’t know about this before!! Uwah! Eh? Why she looks so sad? Is she troubled or something?

I lost in my thought as i keep staring at her until she starts to cross the road.

Eh?! Oh, it’s already green i think.

When i start to cross the road following my oshimen, and then i heard something.

A car’s honk?

I turned my head and look at the source of the sounds. I saw a bus moves so fast towards me. I can’t react and the last thing i felt is pain all over my body.. and my eyes filled with darkness.


==================================================================================


[Rena’s POV]

I woke up and found myself lying on the floor in my room.

“Aish.. Why i keep fainting these days..”, i grumbled as i trying to stand up, but my legs giving me up.

“ahhh... Hiahh!!”, i tried with all my power to stand up and the result is i stand for about three seconds before i wobbly fell again to the hard cold floor.

Is my time’s already up?

I tried to sat up and leaning to the bed next to me.

“Once again! Hiah!!”, this time i successfully stand up and sat on my bed.

So, what time is this?

I turn my head to look at the clock on the desk beside my bed. It only a few seconds until i realized that it’s already 8.AM

“UWAHHH!!! I’M LATE! I’M LATE!!!” I rushed into the bathroom and took a quick shower and brush my teeth. Not long after it, i prepared all my books, change clothes, everything for my class and this afternoon training.

I hope it’s not that late... Katherine sensei is so scary..

I close my room’s door and locked it before i rushed all the way down to the ground floor using the stairs. I’m wondering too, why i can run as fast as that, but earlier, i can’t even properly stand up. Ah, whatever, all in my mind right now is arrive at my class as soon as possible. Katherine sensei is a sadist, i won’t get out alive from her class if i'm late.

After a few minutes i’m already arrived at the intersection near my apartement, but the traffic light still green. I’m so panicked that before it turns to red, i already cross the roads.

When i’m in the middle of the road, i can heard a car’s honk.

Eh?!

Before i can turn my head to the sound’s direction, i felt pain all over my body.

Prologue End~

So, what do you think? :3
And, please don’t kill me. LOL

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE prologue, 22 May 2012]
Post by: karomuwi on May 22, 2012, 02:43:55 PM

oppa, I just had to comment even though I'm busy. YukiRena is the pairing after all. I'll comment more later, when I switch on my laptop.


and one more thing....

Katherine-sensei?

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE prologue, 22 May 2012]
Post by: Spicy Sapphire on May 22, 2012, 04:56:23 PM

Lol, Yukirin's a fan and Rena is the idol.  :P

Let see...judging from the end...are they going to switch bodies?  :? That could be interesting to read. Whatever it is, I'm waiting for the first chapter  :thumbsup

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE prologue, 22 May 2012]
Post by: kahem on May 22, 2012, 06:36:42 PM

^
I think like you a body switch would be interesting ^^

By the way, It is from which manga?

Title: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: bochang on May 24, 2012, 05:09:37 AM

Ahahaha eventhough i'm in the middle of exams week, but i can't control the urge to write this fic. LOL so i ended up finished the first Act of this story. :3

I forgot the title of the manga, i will searched it later, and tell you guys at the end of this story, so there won't be any spoiler. hohoho

Replies~:

@Muwi: Ah, thank you for dropping by eventhough you're busy. and YukiRena fic is the perfect bait to make you, Min-chan, and Sieka-san to come out. :p Sorry for using your name. :3 is it okay? if not, i will change it. :) Hope you enjoy this fic. and I haven't finished the latest T.A.F. chapter since it's too long! LOL Thank you for the update hime-sama  :bow:

@spicy sapphire: Yup. :3 Well, the character won't be the same i modify their personality a little bit (?). LOL really? switch body? Just read this chapter then Spicy-san. It'll answer your curiousity. =3 enjoy! and thank you for the comment.

@kahem: switch body? :3 It'll be interesting if one of them is a guy, but since it's girl x girl pairing, i think this is better. :3 I kinda forgot the title.. and the author too.. It's already too old i think, and it's a one shot. :3
i hope you enjoy this chapter, and hank you for the comment kahem-san

so without further adieu

---

ONE

Act One


DEATH

[Yuki POV]

Hmmmm?

I started to open my eyes and stare into the sky. The sky’s color is not blue. It’s grey and there aren’t any clouds in the sky. I tried to sat up and as far as i can see, there’s nothing. Simply nothing.  Only a vast blank void.

Where am i...

“Hey”, i heard an angelic voice near me. “What is this place?”

“Eh?”, I said, surprised to hear the voice.

I turn around and found my angel sitting on the ground behind me. She looks worried and confused.

“A-ah! R-Rena sama!”, i shocked in disbelief

“Rena sama?”, she said before she giggled

I can feel the blood start to rush into my cheeks as i embarrasing myself in front of her.

Nice job Yuki..

“How do you know my name?”, she said with a smile

“Ah.. Ano... I’m.. I’m your fan.”, i said with a shy smile

“Really? I never thought i would have any fan.”, she said. “Thank you. Hmmm.. What’s your name?”

“My name is Y-AH!”, i said before i saw something moves towards us from the edge of the void

“KYA! What is that!!”, Rena panicked as she saw it too

That ‘something’ wore a torn black cape that concealed it’s body and face. It also brought a big scythe with blood dropping from it’s sharp edge. It moves very fast and before i know it, this thing already stood in front of us.

“Who are you!”, i tried to defend the scared Rena behind me.

“Easy ladies.”, a calm man voice speaks towards us

The ‘thing’ open his hood and show his perfect handsome face. I froze in awe as i stare into him, observing. His face looks so perfect, he looks like Lee Min Ho in City Hunter drama, his long black hair is tied it into a pony tail. His ears are long, not like humans, maybe like Legolas, the elf-prince in the Lord of The Ring Movie. His eyes is so calm, so soothing, but at the same time, it’s showing rage, fear, and ruthless.

“Ahem”, he tried to gain our attention. “Sorry if i disturbing your observation ladies, but i have something to-“

“Who are you?”, said Rena behind me, cutting his talks

“Me?”, he said with a smirk. "I have many names, for many cultures address me as such."

His voice was different now, his voice become more serious.

"I am neither the Light nor the Shadow. I am sometimes called a God, or maybe a messenger of the Devil.."

He started to move his arms in graceful movements as he spoke.

"The scared and weak fear me, while the brave and strong welcome me. I am the Chooser, the Decider, the Judge.”

He bow to us and with a magnificent smile.”Welcome to the Void.”

“Oh, you guys can call me, Death.”

His last sentence struck me down as i remember what happened before. I get crushed by a bus at the intersection before.

So... I’m dead?

“NO! You must be kidding me!!!”, Rena yelled at him

“So.. w-we a-re d-.. dead?”, i stuttered as i tried to asked him

“Yes, the two of you are simply dead.”, he said with another smile.

How can he speak such a serious matter with a smile?

“NO!!!!! I STILL HAVE MANY THINGS TO DO!!” yelled Rena

“ME TOO! I HAVE READERS TO WRITE FOR!", I joined Rena and yelled to him

“Sorry, but that’s the fact.”, he said with his usual calm tone.

“Actually..” he started. “There’s something wrong that you guys sent here.”

“This place is the Void. The place that exist between Heaven and Hell. Usually, you will be sent into either Heaven or Hell, but since you ended up here, there must be something wrong.”, he explained

“I don’t get it”, i said to him, Rena keeps holding my hands and i can felt that she is shivering. I gripped her hand tighter to reassure her that i’m with her. I turn around and saw her worried looks. Her face became so pale and i can see the tears accumulate in her beautiful eyes.”

“Ah..”, he exclaimed. “so that is the problem.”, he start to nodded his head up and down as he understand the problem

“I..”, he started, “Will give you guys another chance to live.”

“Eh?”, i exclaimed

“Yes, but only One of you that can live.“

“What?! I don’t understand!”, I said to him with anger in my voice

“So basically this is a game.”, he smiled before he continued, “You will have another 7 days to live..”

I speechless when i heard his last word

“So we will still dead after 7 days?”, Rena said with a worried tone

“No.”, he smirked

“So?”, i wondering what is in his thought.

“Only one of you that can continue to live after 7 days.”

“WHAT!?” both of us shocked in disbelief.

“and both of you have to decide, 'who shall live' in those 7 days i gave.”, he said.

“Isn’t it interesting?”, he said with a big grin that plastered on his face.

"CUT IT OUT!" yelled Rena. "WHAT GIVES YOU THE RIGHT? YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS!"

The area we were standing on suddenly started to get brighter, blinding both of us with a bright white light.

"Ah, so the game already started. Until that day. your entire Life will be shared." said him. "Make sure not to leave each other's side. And HAVE FUN!", he said with a smile before light consumed us.


======================================================================================================


Light... all I saw was light...


"Huh?"

"Are we at a park?" asked a familiar voice.

I looked around to find Rena sitting next to me again.

Sure enough, we were at a park.

"Yeah..." I nodded. "This is the one that's next to my apartment..."

From where I sat on the floor, I could see the apartment complex I lived at.

I slowly got up, feeling both confused and angry, worried and annoyed.

"Who was that Man?" asked the Rena as I helped her up. "Was it God?"

"Who knows," I answered. "Whatever the case, seems like we are alive."

I took out my cell phone and checked the time. My only class for the day was almost over.

I started to move away, angry that I have to retake all those steps to the campus and hopefully be able to get some notes from a classmate.

"It’s nice to meet you, Rena, I will continue to support you. But now I'm really late for class. So, i think i will leave first.", I said after i bow to her and turn around and walks away from her.

"Hey!", she yelled. "Wait a sec - AAGH!"

"GAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!", I shouted.

Pain. All I felt was pain. It was like my chest was being ripped open and shred into tiny pieces... tearing the flesh from the inside...

I was dying?

"My... heart...", I coughed.

And then nothing.

All I felt was her standing next to me.

"The pain...", I started, feeling exhausted. "It... It stopped..."

"It worked...", said angelic voice behind me. "I guess... we really can't leave each other's side..."

"You mean... like that Man said?", I said, turning to face her.

She gave me a nod.

"So... are lives are really shared then?", I said, remembering what the Man said. "We've become two halves of one life?"

"If that's the case...", started Rena, looking rather scared. "Does that mean... we really have 7 days to decide...?"

"Yeah... One of us will have to die?"

"Then... Then... Then just go and die! I have lots of things to do!"

"No... NO WAY!" I responded. "I have work to do!"

"JUST DIE ALREADY YOU DUMMY!!!", Rena lifted up her right arm, her hand in a fist. And with great strength, slammed her fist into my left shoulder, causing my arm to feel numb.

"OOWW!!!", I shouted.

What was weird was what happened that same exact instant.

"OOWWW!!!", she shouted, rubbing her left shoulder.

"Wh - What's wrong?", I said, feeling confused and worried.

"I think... if you feel it, I feel it too."

"I - I see.", rubbing my shoulder. "This is to prevent us from not trying to kill each other off... probably."

Murderous. I was feeling murderous.

What is she thinking?


[Rena POV]


I guess I just can't kill her off then.

"Just now..." started the pretty girl with her cold voice. "You were feeling 'murderous' weren't you?"

"Wh - Huh?" I responded, blushing while I tried to look innocent. "I... How did you know?"

"I guess we can share emotions too?"

"EW~!" I shrieked, feeling grossed out. "THAT'S CREEPY!"

The pretty girl suddenly looked grossed out too with a big reaction.

"I don't want this either!"

We stood there silently, unsure what to do next.

"Hey... stop feeling awkward, BLACK!!" I said coldly.

"Bla - Black?" She stuttered, pointing her index finger to her face. "I have you know my name is Yuki, Kashiwagi Yuki."

"Oh..." I said.

Yuki... That's pretty! Just like her! But she's very cold! Hmmm... I know! Hehehehe~!

"Well, Black Yuki," I started, giving her my bright smile. "For now, I'm in your care for the week!"


=============================================================================


"WOW!", I exclaimed once I entered Yuki's apartment. "Black.. Why do you have so many books?"

Actually, the term "so many books" was an understatement.

The apartment was fairly small, typical for a college student. It felt even more cramped with the entire sky scraper like piles of books towering over my 162 cm body! The piles all neatly lined one side of an entire wall, reaching almost to ceiling. On the opposite wall was a single twin size bed, covered in black sheets. In the center was a short table with a couple of cushions. On top of this table were a cute laptop, some stacks of paper, and a container holding lots of pens and pencils. Off to the side at the foot of the bed were a small kitchen that looked rarely used and a small restroom.

"Hey, I told you to stop calling me Black," she said with her usual cold voice. "As for the books... Um... I like reading..."

"I can see that!" I smiled, fully impressed by her collection and organization.

"Anyway..." started Yuki as she sat on her bed. "Since we can't be apart, I guess we have to stay here... Are you okay with that?"

I started to blush as she said that? Not because I was embarrassed... but because she was!

"Hehehehe!" I giggled. "No worries! It will be like a vacation for me!"



[Yuki’s POV]


Guilt? Why is she feeling guilty?

"It would be weird if I brought you to my house and told my father that you had to stay with me for a week?" Rena explained. "I'll tell him that I'm staying over at a friend's or something like that."

Oh, so she lives with her father.. That's why she was feeling guilty...

"I see.. You're lying."

"You know, it's rude to read everything I feel!", Rena said, sounding angry. "That's like sexual harassment!"

"Se - Sexual harassment?", I stuttered. "Even if you say that.. I can't help it, I feel everything you feel."

"Hahaha~!", she laughed as she sat on my bed to the right of me and wrapped one of her arms around mine. "I'm kidding! Lighten up!"

I started to blush by the sudden body contact but she was too excited to notice my embarrassment.

"We have to make best of the situation!", she said as she smiled brightly.

"Hmmm,", I nodded, slightly smiling.

"Oh! That feels kind of weird," Rena said, rubbing her right arm. "That reminds me."

Rena used her free hand to grab hold of my right hand, turning her body to face me. And out of nowhere, started to rub her soft chest against my shoulder.

"If we really share what we feel.", Rena started, her breaths becoming heavier. "What will happen if I do this? Hehehe!"

Parts of my chest started to become stimulated, within the space in between my cleavage; I can feel MY own hard shoulder! It was so... so perverted.

What's worst. I could feel how much Rena was enjoying herself teasing me.

"AH~! Uh - H - HEY~!", I barely said, my voice wavering. "Wh - Wh - What are... you doing!?"

"HAHAHAHA!" laughed Rena, as she stopped and rubbed her shoulder. "I thought so! Wow... and I felt my own pair on my shoulder too~!"

"You dummy!", I yelled, pushing her away, making her fall off the bed still laughing. "Stop messing around like that!"

I felt so embarrassed.

"Hey, hey, don't be embarrassed!", she smiled. "I'm sorry, alright? I'm just trying to lighting up the mood! We have to share everything now!"

Everything. Oh great.

"Sigh... Anyway, Rena... I'm tired..." I said, letting my body fall to its natural position of sleeping. "Night~..."

"OO~!" went Rena... As she jumped onto my bed right next to me! "Night night~!"

I glared at the smiling girl lying next to me.

"Why can't you sleep on the floor?" I asked coldly.

"Mmmm!" she pouted, doing a shiver motion. "That black heart of yours is crazy!"

"Black h-heart?"

"Yeah! It like... ruthless, cruel, etc! Hehehehe!"

Oh... that...

"Ever since I was young, I've had a problem talking to people...", I told her.

"I see. But hey! You have me now, so let's work on that!"

"Joy..." I said, taking full advantage of my black heart. "So... why can't you sleep on the floor, again?"

"Oh! I can't sleep without hugging something!" she said, hugging my arm again. "Also... I get scared of the dark..."

From today. This girl and my peculiar life style began.

ACT ONE END

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: yukofan on May 24, 2012, 10:37:28 AM

the game is so interesting~
i wonder how will the story go..
but,i don't want either rena or yuki to die..

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: Kiri-el on May 24, 2012, 01:40:17 PM

This is interesting, I like it  :thumbsup ...and YukiRena one of my favorites pairing :)

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: kurogumi on May 24, 2012, 02:42:37 PM

So rena and yuki need to share soul in 7 day to decide who to live and die...ok what the right solution if i want
This two people still alive?

Or..maybe i prefer to become sadistic..i hope its yuki who die,why?because Rena is my oshimen...so i dont want my oshimen die...

LoL

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: Sieka on May 24, 2012, 02:48:47 PM

I think I know the name of this manga. I've read it, and to be frank, its really good. :)

Anyways, lol, Yukirin changed from fangirl to Black, I thought she likes Rena? She should just die for her if she's Rena's fan! But anyways, I smell that love will happen between them. Though just in 7 days, its kind of rushed... :roll:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: bochang on May 24, 2012, 03:48:44 PM

Uwah! There's so many comments.. TT.TT #cryinginjoy

since i don't really have something to do, i will give replies. :p

@Yukofan: in fact, there's no human that want to die. since they haven't experienced all the world's can offer
(am i right? felt so wrong with my grammar. ==")
Me too, i don't want anyone to die, but.. it's kinda impossible. well yeah, except one of them actually a vampire and live forever.. :D

@Kiri-el: uwah! Thank you for dropping by. me too, (i think) since there's so many yukirena fanfic in this forum
*glancing at rin-chan, min-chan, and sieka-san
hope you enjoyed reading this story. :D

@kurogumi: Yes~ hmmm the right solution? go back in time and convince me to change the plot. :D
and yes.. you're kinda cruel kuro-san. LOL so you want yuki to die for rena? :3 let me think about it.
and enjoy your stay in this thread. :D

@sieka-sensei: Really? wooow.. never thought that there will be someone who knows about this manga. even i forgot the title.. =="
well yeah, you can't deny the matter of life and death can change a person behavior, way of thinking and even personality. :3
I need to read more books about psychology of death. =3
yeah, it should be, so the ending will be more heartbreaking and tearjerking. *evillaugh
i know.. but i don't think i can prolonge the story any longer. hoho and since it's only a multiple shot and i'm a newbie.. TT.TT
#waitingforchinmoku,willyukidied?orrenadied?orbothofthemdied?squealing

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: kahem on May 24, 2012, 05:38:17 PM

I'm sure that Death is a S because it's a crual choice. But it wouldn't be funny without the choice lol Ehh!! Am I a S?!!! O_O

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: bochang on May 30, 2012, 11:06:20 AM

@kahem: really? I'm an M though LOL is it funny? LOL ahhaha yeah, teaser rena is fun to write. :3


Actually, i want to add a poll about this..
I'm actually already write the act two, but it has a se* scene. So it's kinda impossible to update here.
And i should choose whether i change the plot or post the update at perv section. :3
I want to write about it though. I alread,y asked mode107 permission if i can post it in here or not, but i havn't get the reply. So please vote guys. :3

Gomawo~

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: karomuwi on May 30, 2012, 12:38:18 PM

oppa! can you please send me the perv chappie?

please???? I promise that I'll update and comment most of the time!!!!

*will comment later*

Hahaha. That's true. It's the PERFECT bait to lure us out from the darkness.
And its actually great of you to use it!
I mean...  :shy2: I'm deeply honoured to be in the same fic as my oshi and current fav OTP.
So... :kneelbow: Thank you!!! And don't change it!

Anyway, onto the comments!
I really REALLY love the part when Yukirin woke up next to Rena-sama AND called her 'Rena-sama'
It's like how I'm going to be like when I finally meet her!

And :hiakhiakhiak: Rena-sama trying to kill Yukirin! That was just epic! I could imagine what you had written on that scene!
And lol. Rena-sama being all pouty and accusing her of sexual harrassment! That was really epic! The best trait I've read about my oshi! :on GJ:
Oppa! Jjang! You just made me a complete fan of this fic! That's why every update, I SHALL try my best to comment! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!

And god.... :on bleed: THAT scene with Rena-sama teasing Black Yukirin.
I was in total shock as I have never read a fic with her being so....Agressive and...such.
It left me in complete mess. Mess how?
Well... :glasses:

Let me use the emoticons.

:grr: R...Re..Rena-sama?
:err: H-how can this be?
:on spit: She teased her by pressing her chest against Yukirin!
:shock: OH GOD!
:on bleed: Oh dear me....This is heaven.
:mon blood: I can't take it anymore!

See? That was near to how I was. I was really drinking soya milk while reading it. And I spitted it out the moment I read her place her chest against Yukirin's back.
Fortunately, I spitted it out of the window and not onto my screen.
*sigh* You are so...You made me....gah!

You just made me crave for more!!! RAWR! I WANT MOAR!!!!  :frustrated: :scolding:
And then....You said that there'll be a smut. Wow...
Please!!! Send it to meeeeeee~! :kneelbow: I beg of you!
I beseech you!

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: yukofan on May 30, 2012, 02:00:00 PM

if you think you should write the se* scene, then go ahead..you can put it on pervfic section.for the readers who can't access it, you can offer them to share the story via PM.

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: kurogumi on May 30, 2012, 02:16:36 PM

Vote? Im vote for the original (that mean the perv one hahaha)

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 31, 2012, 07:18:46 PM

Pervy pervy version, here I come to read you!!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: Flean on May 31, 2012, 08:01:39 PM

Hahaha.. It was enjoying to read this.. Yuki x Rena pairing with interesting plot..  :twothumbs and Rena.. omg!! never knew she can be that type of curiosity person..  :lol:

I really like the idea they're sharing emotions..lol.. XD but then I was wondering if they're having their own thought and feelings yet they can feels the others' as well.. Then how? how they manage to know which belongs to whom? man! somehow I think that's kinda complicated.. hahaha..  :lol: but then again, really interesting..  :yep:

about the ehem2 scene.. just like yukofan said, you can just post it on perv section if you wanna write it.. and PM to anyone that don't have access to perv section..  :nervous

Title: Replies and Announcement.
Post by: bochang on June 01, 2012, 05:16:18 PM

@muwi: you're still a minor! LOL yep, but i haven't seen either min or sieka. Hmm what should i do next so they will show up? LOL
ah, okay then. :3 i will keep it as it is.

and rena will be more aggresive in this story. and why i remember when rena is hypnotized. LOL
'AAAIIIINNN!!' LOL

LOL I never thought that this story will leave a big impression to you muwi.
and that true story of yours is epic. LOL

I wonder what would you do when you read the next part. LOL

@yukofan: Yes~ I have thought about it, but yes.. i still want to try to post it in this thread. :3 that's why i asked mode107-ssi. :3 because i know not all the readers already 18+. :)

@kurogumi: i think your wish will be fulfilled. LOL

@sakura_drop_: LOL but yeah, i'm waiting for another pervy fanfic of yours sakura-san. LOL

@flean: Uwah! I never thought that you would showed up in this shabby thread story of mine. TT.TT #cryinginjoy
ah yes. It's kinda complicated, so that's why i write it using first person POV. kekeke nad they can't read other thought. #hint
they only shared feelings, emotions, and physical conditions. :3 'ehem2' scene? LOL never thught that you would using that term. hahaha

to ALL: I already have mode107 approval to post the next chapter in this thread!!! YEY!!! so i didn't have to post it in perv section~ Thank you mode107-san! :D
but, i still had to change a little part of the story. so, i think i will post the next chapter at sunday. since i have something to deal with at saturday. :)
thank you for all of you that already read, vote, commented in this thread. :D I LOVE YOU GUYS!

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act 1, 23 May 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 02, 2012, 04:32:17 AM

I already change some part of it's and this is it~

YEY! mode107 approved this fanfic is safe to post in the normal fanfic section!

but i still warned you that this chapter contains some a PG scene. so i hope the readers that under 18 accompanied by their parents when they read this chapter, that's kinda impossible. LOL the main focus in this chapter is not the 'scene', but the thoughts. :3

feel free to comment and give me some critics. :3

without further adieu~


OH! i forgot about something.
try to listen to at the beginning from richard marx and donna lewis.
YukiRena will sing this together in the middle part of the story. :3



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ONE
ACT TWO
LIFE

[Rena POV]

Mommy.. why do we have to eat Steamed Pork Buns again?

I grabbed the warm, round food in my hand, full of disgust.

I'm tired of it... I want a Melon-pan!

I let go of the Pork Bun and grabbed the Melon-pan next to it.

I peeled the outer layer of plastic and found another layer of it..

Strange..

I peeled another layer of plastic. Satisfied with it, I put my favorite bread in my mouth..

I’m trying to bite it, but it’s so bouncy..

Hmmm?

Hey! Why does my chest feel funny?

"Unnn—Nyahh.. Mmmmhhnnn." exclaimed Yuki’s weak voice.

"Huh?" I started, still half asleep.

I tried to open my eyes and trying to gain focus about something that i bite.

It turns out.. the “Melon-pan” is....

“Nyahhh... Hmmm? Y-YAH!”, exclaimed the cute voice.

“J-just.. w-what are you doing!!!”, she blushed as she tried to covered her “melon-pans” with her hands, safely from the reach of my hands and my hungry mouth.

"I want a Melon-pan.."I mumbled, still half asleep.

“Aishhh.. I still want to sleep..”, she shook her head in disbeliefs, staring at the clock that hanging on the wall.

"Anyway...", she continued, "I'm going to go to bookstore later... and I- "

"YAWN! Okay... Go ahead..." I said, closing my eyes. "Just bring me back a melon-pan!"

As I continued to lie there, I heard Yuki take a couple of steps away and walks into the kitchen.

She cooks? But it didn't look like it was used much? Is she going to make me a Melon-pan? Ah it’s impossible, but an instant ramen would be nice! YAY~!

"YAH! WAKE UP!" shouted Yuki as she dumped a bucket of water into my face.

"WH - WHAT WAS THAT?" I shouted as I looked over my wet clothes. "Now my clothes are all wet."

"Stupid, I didn't think that through. Now I feel wet." Yuki started, talking to herself. "Anyway, I have some work to do and we can't separate, remember? So, I need you to come to bookstore with me."

Oh yeah... we can't separate..

"Okay...Fine..." I reluctantly agreed before getting out of bed. "But you have to promise to buy me a Melon-pan! Two!"

As Yuki nodded, I grabbed her hand and led her to the bathroom.

"Wh - What are you doing?" asked Yuki.

"Like you said, we can't separate!" I responded. "Now I’m going to take a shower."

I took off my shirt and shorts and left them to dry in the sink.

Why do I feel... embarrassed...

"R - RENA!" yelled Yuki blushing. "WHY AREN'T YOU WEARING A BRA?"

"Huh?"

I looked down to my chest and saw that my... "Melon-pans" were happily staring back at me.

Oh yeah! Hmm... guess I forgot...

"Why are you so embarrassed about?" I said, trying to change the subject. "Were both girls, aren't we? Nothing to freak out about!”

“B-but! But! It’s em- YAH!” she said before i pulled her into the bathroom and trying to strip her off from her clothes.

“YAH!!! W-what are you doing!!! D-don’t try t-to do anything w-wierd! Or i will scream!!”, she tried to push me away from her

It’s futile Yuki~

“What? Don’t you want this?”, i asked her, grab her melon-pans with my hands and bit my lips seductively.

“Y-YAH!”, she pushed me away as she strom out of the bathroom with a red face.

You’re so cute.hihihi

“Where are you going? Let’s take a shower together!” I shouted from the bathroom

“NOOOO!!!!”

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After this hectic morning, we finally made it to the "nearby" Times bookstore. It’s so far from her apartement and she didn’t want to take a bus or anything. She forced me to walks with her.

Does she walk everywhere? No wonder she's so fit...

"Do you have to walk like this? Why don’t we took a bus or something?" I said to her as we entered the store, that only recieved a nod from her.

Aish..

Yuki didn't browse through the bookstore like I thought she would. Instead, she went straight to the cafe and started to randomly jot down random lines and words on her notebook. And since we couldn't separate, I couldn't go off on my own to grab anything to read.

Also... it felt kind of awkward that I was wearing this one piece dress Yuki lent me. I mean.. She wore this too, right?

Mmm... It smells like her... Ah... what am I thinking?

"Hmmm?" went Yuki, making a cute face as she stuck out her tongue while she concentrated.

"What are you writing anyway?" I asked, actually curious as I took a peek at her notebook.

"Hey!" she exclaimed, hiding her notebook from me and blushing. "What are you doing?"

"I'm just curious about what you're doing..."

"Yah! Don't do that! I don't like it when people read my work before it's done.. Um.. Well.. I'm writing a story."

"Writing a story?" I asked

"Yeah." she nodded as she handed me a piece of paper.

The paper was a flyer for a writing contest that was hold for local amateur writers. People had to write a short story, essay, or poem about something important to them. The top writers will get published in a collection of books that well be sold at a bunch of other bookstores. Also, the grand prize winner will get a chance to publish their own book.

"Wow!" I smiled. "That's pretty cool! You don't just love books,  you like writing too?"

"Yeah!" Yuki happily exclaimed. "It's nothing special, but I write stories and post them online. I have quite a bit of readers."

I couldn't help but be amazed as I watched her write sentences, eventually making paragraph after paragraph covering page after page.

How can she just do that? Just keep writing and writing.

Yuki’s eyes never left her notebook as she wrote, fully concentrating on her writing. But the feeling I was getting from her, it was confusing.
Even though it is hard, it seems like she really is enjoying herself. She seems a bit impatient as she started scratching out some lines or whole paragraphs. But, she seems happy.

Ah! I get it~

"You really love this," I said. "Writing, I mean."

"Yup!" she nodded.

"When did you get interested in writing?"

"Um... well... since I won an essay contest in junior school," she explained. "I don't know why? but it's fun! That's why I'm at Literature Dept! My Dream is to become a famous writer and publish lots of books... Like all the authors of the books in my room, I want to make people feel something with my writing!"

Ah... that's why she's entering the contest... HAHAHA! Now she's embarrassed because she revealed so much about herself!


[Yuki POV]

Aish... now I feel embarrassed... I hope she doesn't feel that... Why the hell did God make us share feelings anyway?

"Rena..." I started, trying to change the subject. "Um... Do you have anything you want to do? Any dreams?"

I suddenly felt happy and excited.

"I want to be a singer!" Rena happily exclaimed.

Ah! Of course! Why i asked this question?

"Ah! Yes! I just realized that you’re actually an AKB trainee." I  stated. “Oh, and don’t you have any training today?” I asked

"No, I already contact Togasaki-san and Akimoto-san.” She paused for a moment. “I will graduating this week. And this week, it will be my last performance.”, She answered as she stared at the white floor, but she can’t hide her sad expression.

I suddenly felt different... What is this a mixture of guilt, regrets and sorry.

But just like that. The feeling left.

 “Why?”, i asked. “Why did you decide to graduate?”

“Hmmm..”, she sighed before she continued. “I have something.. that i can’t share to anyone now.. even you..”

She looks down again.. Why?

“Hmmm.. Okay..” I felt another emotions, it’s sadness and guilt.

"Oh," She started. "The day after tomorrow, i will have a solo stage as my goodbye stage. Will you sing with me as a duet?"

"Um... Eh?? But.. Bu-“

“Your voice is pretty, Yuki. I’m sure that you can do it.”, she begged me with an irresistible puppy eyes.

“ Ah... Emmm.. Well yeah... I used to sing that song too when I was younger, but I stopped my voice lessons during high school and concentrated on writing.."

"AH! Then... Then... It’s fixed!!! Let's sing together then!"

"Huh?"

NO WAY!

But... I couldn't possibly say that. She felt so... so... excited... energized... when she heard me say I can sing. I knew she would get sad if I said no, which would make me sad too!

"Um... sure..." I nodded. "But... let's get you that Melon-pan now."

"Never mind that Melon-pan! I can always get that while I sleep~"

"HUH!?! Wh - While you sleep?"

Wh - What does she mean by that? Grope me again?

"Let's go home~" exclaimed the happy Rena, totally ignoring me. "Practice, practice, practice~"

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"At the beginning with you~" I sang.

And with the music, I finished singing the song.

"How was that?" I asked, feeling nervous.

Rena let her mouth hang open in a big "O" and clapped.

"I don't know why you feel nervous!" she said. "That was amazing!"

"Really? I've never sung in front of anybody before..."

"No worries!" Rena said as she patted her hand on my shoulder. "Hey, I can feel that! HAHAHAHA! Anyway, we will do wonders at my goodbye stage!"

She got up from my bed and started walking around the room, deep in thought.

"You and I~ Yuki and Rena~ Yuna~!" she shouted randomly, getting really excited. "We will be Yuna! Two beautiful women conquering the stage! It's perfect! You, the Blackhearted Yuki and I, The spice lover Gekikara Rena~!"

I raised an eyebrow and stared at her, unimpressed.

"Yuna? Gekikara? And what’s with the ‘black’?"

"YEAH!" she nodded. "What you think?"

"You concentrate on singing... I'll work on the names..."

"Okay~! I'll practice th -!"

Rena got cut out mid sentence by the soft rumbling sound that came out from her stomach.

Great... now that she's hungry, I'm feeling hungry too!

"Do you hungry?"

“Yeah”, she whined sadly because of her stomach

“I’ll cook you my speciality dish then.”, i said with a smile on my face.

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[Rena POV]

"Umm... are you sure this is okay to be eaten?" I asked with horror written all over my face.

"Of course! It’s MY SPECIALITY!" She said proudly.

"Really?"

"You see..." She started, making me feel confident as she explained. "I thought it looked kind of plain, so I thought about giving it some color to make it look more appetizing by adding green peppers and mushrooms."

"and why you cook the outer layer of eggs seperated?"

“It’s because i’m not too good in making the eggs too wrap the rice, so i have to cook it separated."

I stared at her cooking method and watching it in horror.

"Here you go~"

I looked at the plate of the omelet rice that she set on the table.

"Yuki..." I started, feeling confused.

"Hmm?" She nodded, smiling.

"Why... is the rice kinda sticky and squishy?", I wondering the thing that she called food in my plate as i nudge it with my spoon.

"It’s okay! Trust me!"

Slightly nervous, I open my mouth and the ‘food’ entering her mouth.

Please don’t let me die now..

I slowly chewed.

Hmmm?

"See? It's not that bad!" She smiled. "I can't tell you like it!"

"Um... I think you are confused Yuki... You're right, it's not bad... Bu... It's just that... I can't taste anything? And why are you so hyper, different from the usual blackheart Yuki?"

"Huh?" went Yuki, tilting her cute head to the side
.
"and there's no flavor at all... I can't even taste the eggs... and it’s kinda sticky.. it felt like i’m eating pudding with rice.. How is that even possible?"

I traded glances at Yuki, who was currently feeling how confused I was, and the omelet rice on my plate.

"Well..." Yuki started, somehow smiling. "The important thing is that it doesn't taste bad!”

“Hmm, do you have any tabasco, or chili sauce?”

“No.”

“Why? And why are you turned into the black Yuki again?”, I whined

“I don’t like spicy things.”, she coldly replied

“so you prefer it plain like this ermm.. food?”

“Yah! That’s not nice!”, she said as she slap my hand lightly.

“I’m just kidding!”, I started. “I prefer something spicy though..”

“Is it not spicy? I thought i already added so much green peppers on it.”

“No....”, i shove another spoonful of ‘food’ into my mouth.

“Here, try this.” I lifted up my spoon with a spoonful of omelet rice and held if to her mouth.

"Say AAHHH~"



[Yuki POV]

Ehhh?

I didn't know why, but I couldn't help but happily accept it when she fed me like that. Made it seem like the taste of my speciality dish come out and pull me into a dream land. It taste fantastic.

Her feeding me... Rena sitting here with me at my table in my apartment... It's like...

"You know..." Rena started, looking embarrassed. "Sitting like this... And feeding you..."

"It's like we're a lesbians..." I said without thinking.

Wh - what! Why did I say that!

I suddenly felt my face get hot as I started to blush.

"Hahahaha!" she laughed. "I had a feeling you were thinking that, since you’re a cold black person!"

"H - HEY! You... This is sexual harassment!" I said, still blushing as i tried to argued with her.

"Who cares... I would find out sooner or later anyway," she smiled back," Being lesbian is not that weird."

"Sigh..."

"Now here~!" Rena said cutely, putting another portion of my omelete rice near my mouth. "Say 'AH~!'"

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[Rena POV]

"Hurry up!" I shouted as I held Yuki hand as I pulled her to the AKB’s theater. "We don't have any time to waste. Literally!"

"Ah! Wait!" said Yuki, full of embarrassment by the fact that we were holding hands. "Slow down! And stop making jokes about us dying!"

"Oh, come on! Lighten up~" I smiled to her as we ran. "I know you like it when I hold your hand! Hehehe~"

Yuki’s face only got redder.

Hehehe~ I'm enjoying it too, Yuki...

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"HEY~! I'm Gekikara Rena!" I yelled out to the mike, feeling confident as I used the title Yuki worked on last night.

Of course... I gave them my usual bright smile!

The crowd happily cheered with applause making me feel ever happier.

"And... Um..." Yuki mumbled.

The whole crowd went quiet with Yuki’s secret attack... the “Blackhearted Comment."

Unfortunately, that made Yuki more nervous!

"Come on, Yuki~" I cheered her on. "You can do it! Fighting!"

I suddenly felt a wave of stress release from my body, no more anxiety...

Hehehe~! Yay~! I made Yuki more relaxed!

"Hello, I'm the Blackhearted, Yuki," she said prettily with a small smile.

"And together..." We started at the same time. "We're YukiRena~"

A roaring applause of excitement rang through the theather, cheering both of... No, not both of us... cheering YukiRena on!

“Ah! Before i forget!”, I started. “I want to thank you to all my fans.”

“I know this is so sudden, but i will graduated after this performance. I have an urgent proplem that need to be done.”, as i said that, i can felt my tears start to trickled down from my eyes. I felt a hand holding my hand so tight and giving me strength. I knew it’s her hand..

“It’s really nice to be in AKB, eventhough i’m only a kenkyuusei and i hope you will cheers my friends so they could get a promotion into the main team.... and please enjoy this last stage of mine.”, i said with a genuine smile as i felt sadness, regret, gratitude, and relieved at the same time.

She must be felt the same..

So we sang...

I almost lost myself when I heard her sing next to me. It was so strong, so confident, so different than the usual Yuki. Even that part in the chorus that I can't sing quite right... It was so beautifully done when I heard it with her voice.

And it was because I was cheering her on. She wasn't nervous anymore. Standing there right next to her to support her.

I knew, that right then. I was feeling it..

The happiest feeling I've ever felt.

A feeling I only get when I'm with the pretty Yuki.

Of course, I couldn't hide it.

She already knew how I felt.

Because I know, she was feeling it too.

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The days rolled by like that...

She would drag me off somewhere to write, working on her story for the contest while I silently watched over her, making suggestion... That she never listened to! Then the next day, we go for a date at tokyo disneyland, just the two of us. It’s so full of fun. The day after that, we go to aquarium, i just realized the fact that she had a phobia with deep water..  It was so fun and i hope it’ll rest forever!

It went by so fast...

We became one person so fast...

But...

It's funny...

We...

Nearly forgot it was eventually going to end...

Until it was too late...

Even though God told us to talk and decided which one of us would live...

We never did...

We didn't want to...

But, it was okay...

I made my decision...


[Yuki POV]

Even though the two of us were supposed to decide who dies...

We never talked about it...

I didn't want to... And I knew...

She felt the same way...

My life was never this crazy...

This hectic...

This...

Exciting...

More importantly... in the last few days I have... Um... It's just that the time I'm with Rena.. Gekikara Rena who loves to tease me.. It's fun!

It became clockwork for us... always being together... always sharing...

She became my inspiration when I wrote... Her hair, her eyes, her lips, everything!

Well... Except for her suggestions... she's not meant to be a writer...

But it was still cute that she tried! And then I'd get all embarrassed as she dragged me along, seeing places that even i haven’t visited yet.

I loved it...

I loved every moment of it...

Maybe it was kind of embarrassing that we looked like a lesbian couple...

But...

I didn't care! I was happy with her...

I think I just went lesbian for Rena..

I could never stop taking glances at Rena as we walked around holding hands or sitting down at the bookstore so I could write... I couldn't help my feelings anymore...

And... I'm sure that I've already been found out...

Even like this... in this crazy situation... in the face of Death... I have fallen in love with her...

But I didn't care...

I didn't want it to end...

I didn't want her to stop smiling...

So... I already decided...

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Tomorrow... is the 7th day... Once I finish this story about the most important thing to me... I can give it to her... So she can remember me by it...
We sat in my room, snacking on some of my Omelet rice. As always she repeatedly fed me as I wrote with my right hand. I would have gladly taken the work load off of her by eating with my left hand.

Also... Rena never let's go of my hand... Not ever once...

Everywhere we went, she would always be holding my hand in the same manner... When we walked, when we talked, when we slept... she wanted to hold my hand...

It was so cute...
"Say 'AH~'" pleaded Rena as she rose another spoonful to my mouth.

"Ah~" I responded, opening my mouth to take in the food.

"What are you writing about anyway?" she asked, probably the hundredth time already. "You never told me."

I was really surprised with the question.

"Isn't... Isn't it obvious??" I blushed. "Why do you have to ask."

"Because..." Rena smiled, her face turning red too. "I want to hear you say it..."

I tried to look away from that pleading smile that made me, the Blackheart, soften... But I was already change, I’m not the infamous Blackhearted Yuki anymore...

"I'm writing... about you..."

"Ah~" she smiled before picking up another spoonful. "I guess I'm you're most important thing, huh?"

As she fed me, Rena started to look over my shoulder and read some of the lines I was writing.

"H - HEY!" I shouted, feeling embarrassed as I tried to hide my work. "Y - You can't read it yet! It's not done!"

"Hahaha~" she laughed. "What are you so embarrassed about? We have nothing to hide..."

But still!!! It's embarrassing...

I ignored her comment and, while still feeling my cheeks were red, continued to write.

And I wrote... Line after line... Paragraph after paragraph... All about her... I felt like Leonardo Da Vinci painting the "Mona Lisa" when I wrote about Rena...
A smile that giving a single ray of light for this black heart of mine...

There is more I still have to say... Why... does it have to be over...

And then, I felt something. It was so weird. I was all worried, anxious, annoyed, excited, happy, embarrassed..

passionate.

all at the same time..

I didn't know what it was.

Until, Rena started nibbling on my ear.

"R - RENA!"

But she wasn't listening anymore. She wasn't thinking anymore. She was just feeling. Just riding on her feelings, and I didn't want her to stop.

I understood now, I understood why God let us feel every emotion.

I turned my head and kissed her softly on her lips.

The sudden surprise I felt from her. It felt so good. I barely kept sane as I was feeling what she was feeling too.

Rena wasn't just hugging me anymore, she was embracing me, holding me, exploring me. I felt her hands lift up my dress, revealing my undergarments, and her fingers crawl up and down the spine of my back, teasing me, and in the process, exciting herself as well. One of her hands quickly found the hook for my bra and undid it. The other one just went lower... and lower... eventually finding its way down my body...

"Ahh... Nyahh...." we moaned in harmony.

With one swift motion, my clothes were gone, and with amazing strength and adrenaline, she lifted me up, still kissing me, and we landed on my bed with her on top of me.

Rena started to go deeper.. Her kiss wasn't soft any more.. It was harder... stronger... She didn't stop at my lips.. She continued... going into my mouth, eventually finding my tongue...

It was so weird... so good... We shared everything... I could feel her kissing me and at the same time... I could feel myself kissing her...

And now I wanted more... I wanted to be on top...

Off went her shirt... her shorts... her panties...

I was sweating... she was sweating... both of us were so bothered.. so hot..

I was becoming mesmerized... hypnotized... intoxicated with the sight of her bare body... And... she was feeling my fascination too...

Now I was the one exploring... Not missing a single inch of her body with my mouth... Her jaw... her neck... her collar bone... and lower I went... Eventually reaching her flat stomach...

I felt everything she was feeling... Every tingling sensation... Every pleasure I was giving her came right back at me... My lips along her neck... her chest... her stomach... I felt it all on my own body!

There were no more words... only cute little moans... We didn't need to talk anyway...

We could already feel what each other wanted...

We got hotter... Burning passionately...

And at the same time, we felt a need. We both wanted more, hungered for more...

So, we gave it. We let our feelings loose and fed on one another's desires.

It was so... amazing... euphoric... I could barely describe it... Every kiss... every lick... every taste... We both enjoyed it... Getting off at the excitement both of us were experiencing at the same time...

And her emotions... She was so happy, so excited, so crazy, so... so many other words that I could never find the time to write it all!

We were one... Feeling everything... Everything was shared... Every kiss... we shared... Every moan... we shared... Every tingling stimulation and sensation... we shared... Every worried, anxious, annoyed, excited, happy, embarrassed, passionate feeling we ever felt... We shared it...

For the first time of my life... I felt it...

This is it...

This is what I was missing...

This is love...

"Say it!" Rena moaned. "Say it, Yuki! Please."

"I love you..." I smiled, breathlessly. "I love you so much... Rena..."

"Hehehehe~" she giggled, red in the face. "I love you too... Yuki..."

I was so enlightened... so up lifted... And I knew she was feeling it too...

I was so in love... so deeply in love...

So much in love... that I didn't want it to end... I didn't want the feeling to stop... It was too painful to stop...

But it had too...

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I let her sleep...

When I went away... I didn't want her to see me... I didn't want her to live on with the sad memory of seeing my leave... I wanted to leave her smiling in her dreams...

I somehow got out of her groping that hold on me and found a shirt on the floor to wear.

There was something I needed to finish... I had to write... I had to finish my story...

My story of my most important thing...

My thoughts... those were the only things I was able to keep from her... Not that she couldn't tell what I was thinking sometimes depending on how I felt...

But..

I wanted to tell her... I wanted to tell her my thoughts...

All my thoughts about her smile.. her laugh... her presence... I wanted to tell her...

so that when I die...

My memory stays with her...

These past 7 days...

That's what I wrote about...

What do you think of Fate...

Do you think your Destiny is already set out for you by God...

Why would God be so cruel...

So cruel to have your Life set in stone...

No, wait... Not cruel...

I got it now... I fully understand...

Fate brought me to Rena...

Destiny wanted me to fall in love with her...

God... God gave me the gift of an opportunity...

God wasn't cruel... He was kind...

Because for the past 7 days...

I loved...

I lived...

"Keep singing... For the both of us... Good bye... Rena... I love you..."

ACT TWO END

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act Two, June 2, 2012]
Post by: Flean on June 02, 2012, 05:08:09 AM

This is really nice bochang!!  :mon fire:  :mon fire: :mon fire: [I can't really describe how I felt..lol]

I never really this excited reading a non-atsumina fic before..  :mon misch: and I love they way you describe their thoughts..  :mon thumb:

you made me almost cry oso.. reading the last part.. :mon hanky: and I like story that can make me cry..  :mon fyeah:

I'm looking forward to the next Act.!!!  :mon blowhorn:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~ [ONE, Act Two, June 2, 2012]
Post by: Maria-chan on June 02, 2012, 05:14:14 AM

I started to cry at the end  :gyaaah:
why must god be so cruel
Please contine your stories :kneelbow:

Title: 10 Wishes
Post by: bochang on June 02, 2012, 09:02:48 AM

Replies:

@Flean: UWAAAHHH!! You commented on my fic again! TT.TT I can die peacefully now. LOL
I'm glad that you love it. :3 The next part will be the last act. :3 I don't know how should i ended it. :D
I'm also glad that you almost cry! :D I also love a tearjerking stories. :3
So i know how you felt flean-san. :D
I will, as soon as possible. :D

@Maria-chan: Yey! I made another reader cry! :3 Because God loves her. :3 I will update as soon as possible. :D


and for the mean time, i will post this. It will be a two/three shots stories, i think. :D

and here's the prologue.


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10 Wishes

Prologue

[Yuki POV]

“YAHHHH!!!!”, as i shouting, running, trailing behind a girl that stole my purse.

“Stop right there you little brat!!!”

I can’t believe that my body cannot keep up with her speed. It’s so frustated that i can’t caught her. The distance between us became wider and wider. After a long chase, I stop on my tracks. I felt my chase is futile. I can’t keep up with her super human speed. Before i knew it, I can’t saw her figure, even her shadow anymore.

“Aishh!”, I kicked the wall next to me. Only recieving a sting sensation of pain all over my leg.

“AGGGHHHH!!!”, I screamed frustatedly. “I will get you someday!!”

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Flashback

“Oh! She’s cute!” I squealing when i saw a girl profile picture in my facebook. Her skin is so white and she’s so cute beyond my imagination.

“Ah.. I wonder if she will accept me as her friends.”, I said as i click the send request icon that showed in my laptop screen.

“Watanabe Mayu? Ah.. i think tonight i will have a sweet dream about you.”, still browsing at her photos gallery in her facebook account.

“OH! She’s online! and she accepted my request!!”

Should i sent a message to her?

“Ah! It wont hurt to try it right?”

I started to type some words in my keyboard nervously.

[The bold one is the conversation in facebook message]

Me: Hello, Watanabe-san. :D

Will she replied? Ahhhh!! I’m so nervous.

Ah!! IT came!!

Mayu: Hello, Matsui Jurina-san. It’s nice to know you. :)

Me: No, the pleasure is all mine. :D

Mayu: Ahahaha You’re cute Matsui-san.

Me: Really? Thank you Watanabe-san, and you looks so cute too! I just fell in love at the first sight.

What did i write!? OMG! She will freaked out and delete me from her friend list!

Mayu: Ahahaha Really? I’m flattered. :3 Say. Can we meet? I want to know you better Matsui-san.

.... She didn’t freaked out! And she asked me for a stroll in a park! Well idk where, but the point is she asked me out!

Me: OF COURSE!

Damn! Why i type with capslock on?!! Stupid Yuki!

Mayu: Ahahaha you’re so funny Matsui-san. Erm.. Can I call you Jurina-san? :$

Me: OF COURSE!

I hit my head at the desk, after i notice that i haven’t press the capslock off.

Stupid..

Stupid..

Stupid..

Mayu: Ahahaha Okay then JURINA-SAN!

Me: What do you want to do in this winter Mayu-san? Can i call you that? :3

Mayu: Me.. I want to eat ice cream! Of course you can, you can call me Mayuyu if you want. :D

Me: Ice cream? In this kind of weather? Okay ,Mayuyu :3

Mayu: Yes! It will be more delicious! Say, can we met tomorrow?

Me: Yes! I live near Akihabara, where do you live Mayuyu?

Mayu: Ah! It’s not too far from where i live.

Me: Really?

Mayu: Yes! :D

Me: Ah, I need to go now Mayuyu. Let’s continue in email then. :D

Mayu: Okay, what is your email?

Me: My email is crossbible@yahoo.jp

Mayu: I promise to send you an email :D

Me: Okay. :D Uh-Oh! Gotta go now! Bye2 Mayuyu~

Mayu: Hai! Bye Jurina~ :*

“A DATE!!!!”, I squealed in happiness when i saw the line of words that written in my laptop's monitor before i saw someone entering the lounge room.

“Yuki, it’s practice time.”, Jurina said with her usual bright smile

“Hai! I will join you after i log out!”, I said to her before she backs to the training room.

A date with Mayuyu.. AAAAAHHHH!! She’s so cute!! I can’t wait for tomorrow.

Prologue End

I kinda change something in the prologue. :3 only a small part. :3

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, Act Two; 10 Wishes, Prologue, June 2, 2012]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 02, 2012, 11:14:44 AM

I'm not at home, and I have lots to say, so...

*leaves a spot for thoughts*

EDIT:

OH MY DEAREST AND GRACIOUS GOD!!!!!!!!! I so love what you write!!! I mean who can not love YukiRena?!!! They are awesome!!!! All those authors who write about them, I LOVE you ALL!!! (though sorry, but Sieka-san is still the BEST of the BEST!!)

Oppa, you have no idea how I love this all storry  :deco: :deco: :deco:

I just hope no one dies!!!!!

Well, I said I have lots to say, but my mind is still jumbled up, so um... (in a good way) ... I can't put my thoughts into words!

And another story... I wonder why Yuki is using Jurina's name....

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, Act Two; 10 Wishes, Prologue, June 2, 2012]
Post by: RJay on June 02, 2012, 12:19:19 PM

Interesting, though I wonder if it's a MaYuki fic or a JuriMayu fic.
Is Yuki setting up for Jurina? Or is she just using her name or something?

Please update soon!

Title: comment
Post by: yukofan on June 03, 2012, 11:51:28 AM

why yuki used jurina's name to chat with mayu??

update please XD

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, Act Two; 10 Wishes, Prologue, June 2, 2012]
Post by: kahem on June 03, 2012, 07:56:27 PM

Interesting, I wonder why Yukirin is using Jurina's name.

Title: ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012
Post by: bochang on June 10, 2012, 12:57:41 PM

Sorry for not being update all of my fics.  :prayers:

It's just that.. I'm on my holiday.. so i'm became lazier than ever. LOL :p

and at last, i can bring myself to write this last chapter of one.  :wahaha:

and i haven't finished the chapter 14 of infinty, chapter 3 of akihabara syndrome, and the first chapter of 10 wishes. :sweat:

idk if this ending is good enough. :3 i hope you enjoy this story. :3

The updates will be delayed again i think. :p I will update after i watch the JKT48 Theater perf!!! :farofflook:  :on gay:
at last.. yesterday i got the tickets to watch them on stage!!! YEAH!! I'm so happy that my college and dept start the holiday earlier than other college and dept. 
 :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
btw i want to know if the readers who also an indonesian will watch the theater on 14 june. :3 maybe we can meet up!! :3 :whistle:
the more is merrier~ :3  :on GJ:

can't wait to see sanju, ghaida, kinal, and ve singing and dancing on the stage!!  :wriggly: :nya: :luvluv2: :luvluv1: :farofflook: :onioncheer: :on woohoo: :on bleed: :on gay:

replies:

@sakura_drop: i will wait you to come back sakura-san...  :cool2:

@RJay: Ohohoho, it will be revealed.. later.. if i feel like i want to write..  :wahaha:

@yukofan: Why? Idk.. I will ask her if i met her.  :on gay: I will revealed it later. :3

@kahem: Ohohoho.. everybody seems like wondering why yuki using jurina's name.. :3


All: Thank you commenting and reading my stories. :3 I hope i can update faster! :3

without further babbling from this crappy author...



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ONE

ACT THREE

I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU

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[Rena POV]


Waves... That's what I heard first. The rhythmic sound of the water crashing into some unseen shoreline. It’s so relaxing... so calming... I think my heart beat was in sync with the waves’ beat.

Next thing that i noticed was the sand and the breeze... The soft, cool sand I could feel under my body while the wind cooled every inch of the curves of my exposed stomach and legs. So comfortable... So refreshing... It feels like I could sleep here forever under the shade.

And when I opened my eyes..

I could see it, I saw everything. The crystal clear water... The beautiful white sand... The tall palm trees I was laying under... The Sun was even out... Greeting me up there in the cloudless blue sky...

It was so perfect... It looks like a perfectly painted picture..

But all of that... everything... couldn't compare... to the girl I was laying on...

"You awake Rena?" she said, almost singing it. "Have a nice dream?"

I looked up to her pretty face from where I rested my head on her warm soft thigh.

Her voice... That's the rhythmic sound my heart beats to...

Her body... That’s the comfortable bed I could sleep in forever...

And... the sight of her... That's the picture that's perfectly painted...

"Yeah~" I happily nodded. "The best dream ever..."

Yuki smiled at me... I could feel it... she was feeling happy too...

Silently, we watched the waves... Letting time fly on by... Like we had an eternity to spend together...

The both of us just stayed there, her body resting against the trunk of the tall palm tree while I laid there on her thigh. I felt her fingers trace my shoulder, down my arm, and eventually finding its way to my right hand. Our hands fit perfectly as she laid her hand on top of mine. Her fingers fills the gap between my fingers perfectly. Her other hand carefully ran through my hair as she started to play with the individual strands.

This was nice... But I didn't feel like staying like that all day...

That would be boring! I wanted to have some fun!

"You want to take a dip?" Yuki asked, smiling like an Angel from up above.

"Hehehehe~" I giggled. "Am I that easy to read?"

"Let's just say... I had a feeling..."

I got up first, though I never let go of her hand in the process. It's kind of childish of me... but once she held my hand, I didn't feel like letting go... I didn't want to let go... I was scared to let go... Because I felt like she was going to leave me once I let go...

But I had to...

"Let go for a second," she said as she unbuttoned her white sundress. "I don't want to get this wet."

I had to let go in order to help her change.

Once I did, her arm fell to her side. As she did that, I couldn't help but watch as her dress fell, revealing her fit body under it. Underneath, she wore a stylish bikini that was red with a black cross pattern across it.

"H – Hey!" she exclaimed, feeling embarrassed. "Stop staring..."

"Hehehe~" I giggled as I followed her actions. "I've been caught~"

I took of my shorts, to reveal my sporty, pink bikini bottoms. It was all I needed to take off since I wasn't wearing a shirt and instead just wore the matching pink bikini top to cover my torso.

"LET'S GO~" I shouted as I retook her right hand with my left, leading her to ocean water.

In this bright Sun, nice breeze, we both didn’t expect the water to be so cold.

"AH~" we screamed in harmony, then laughing as we found the experience fun and exciting.

We just continued laughing as we walked deeper and deep. The water felt like a soft silk to the skin as we let it pass our legs, then our waists, eventually letting the sea level pass our navels and then our entire bodies.

It was amazing how clearly we could see through the water as we swam through. Actually... calling it "swimming..." it didn't do really describe the experience...

We feel like we were flying, flying through the water like it was the sky. The current became the wind beneath our wings. The beautifully colored fish became the people far below us. The rainbow tinted coral reefs became the land we flew over.

Too bad we weren't mermaids... We could have stayed there as long as we wanted to. Unfortunately, our lungs couldn't support our needs.

"WAH!" we shouted at the same time as we surfaced.

"That was so pretty!" I shouted, happily. "And the cute little fish~"

"Hmm... yeah~" she nodded, before turning to the beach. "Hey, let's go back; I got a surprise for you."

"S- Surprised?" I blushed. "What kind of surprise?"

"Come on, follow me!"

"Not if I reach the beach first~"

I raced her, letting the water flow past my body. Unlucky for me, Yuki's body was more fit for this sort of thing!

"I win!" Yuki exclaimed as we reached the beach.

"Aww!" I pouted. "No fair... you're so skinny!"

As I said that, I went ahead and let my fingers tickle her sides. But that just made me laugh too!

"Hahaha! Not very - Hahaha! Smart..." she laughed, trying to calm down.

"Yeah~ Hehehe! Forgot!"

"Anyway, it's over here, come on!"

With her right hand cupping my left, she led the way this time, leading me to my surprise.

Her glistening body looked so nice as the Sun started to fall to the horizon. I liked how her long, black hair stuck the small of her wet back.

"Here we are!" she announced.

I had spent the walk staring at her that I failed to notice surprise.

For the first time since I've been with her... I was speechless...

In front of me was a small low table, set with some lit candles in the middle. There was a set of plates on one side with a tempting melon-pan on top! And to top it all off... In the sand... carefully shaped in her handwriting... was a perfect heart... Inside was 4 letters...

"YukiRena?" I read before turning to her, teary eyed.

I hugged her... hugged her so tightly... That just made me happier... So happy... I cried...

"How - How did you do this?" I asked, not letting her go.

"Simple?" she started, whispering into my ear as she held me. "I made a wish on a Genie~"

"A Genie?" I asked, confused. "And you wished for a melon-pan?"

She let go of me with a smile on her face and a small tear falling from her left eye and led me to the table.

"Nope?" she started slowly, blushing. "I wished for your Dream to come true~!"

"My Dream...?"

"Yeah... This is your Dream was to be with me right? Because just having you lie in my arms... doesn't it feel like you're in Heaven?"

"Awww! Yuki~!", i hugged her tightly, blushed from her cheesy romantic line.

The whole thing... the whole set up... It was so corny... so cute... so romantic...

We ate happily by candle light, watching the sky turn all shades of red, orange, and yellow as the Sun set in front of us.

As I lay in her arms... lovingly hugging my body... I didn't let go of her the whole time... I always held her hand... Because as this day slowly started to end... I felt like this happiness will end with it... I didn't want it to end...

"I got one more surprise for you..." Yuki started slowly.

I felt sadness come over me...

I looked up to her still wet face, confused.

"Another... surprise...?" I asked slowly, slightly scared.

"Yeah..." Yuki nodded, smiling prettily.

"What... is it...?"

"Close your eyes!"

"Huh?"

"Come on... Just close your eyes... and count to three~!"

"You... you aren't going to leave me right...? You aren't going away...?"

"Nope~" she said as she pulled me towards her. "I'll always be here."

One kiss... One small kiss... One loving kiss...

Just enough to calm me down... To comfort me... To promise me...

"Okay..." I nodded. "One... Two... Three..."

And I opened my eyes... expecting her to be sitting there right in front of me... But she wasn't...

Alone... That's how I woke up from that dream...

Yuki wasn't lying next to me on the bed anymore...

Using a thin bed sheet to cover my body, I rose from the bed and looked out the window.

"It's still night time..." I said to myself before calling out her name. "Yuki?"

Don't tell me... Don't tell me she left me!

I turned my head to the table where Yuki usually was... and of course... Yuki was still there, hunched over a pile of papers as she slept sitting up.

"Mou~! You dummy..." I said relieved to see her as I got up from the bed. "You're going to hurt your back if you sleep like that..."

As I got up, I took that thin bed sheet with me and wrapped it around Yuki's half naked body. Sure... it left me without anything to cover myself.. but I didn't care... It was only Yuki...

And... why is Yuki wearing MY shirt? Oh well... it looks cute on her~!

I lifted her up onto her bed, being careful not to wake her up.

I just watched her... watched her sleep so deeply... so peacefully... Probably Dreaming about me...

I get it... why Yuki loved to look at me when she writes... when we walk around holding hands... I inspired her... Like she was inspiring me right now...

Hehehehe~ I feel... like writing! Hahahaha! Wow, Yuki... You really rub off on me...

"Oh?" I said as I sat down on the spot I found her in. "Hehehehe~ You finished..."

I looked over the cover page... On top, the title "One" was neatly written...

I get it~ ........ We're one...

I didn't have time to put my clothes back on... I wanted to read. I flipped open the book and read everything... Every single thought... every single detail... Starting from the time we first met at the intersection... to the amazing time we had last night...

She wrote it so beautifully... So honestly... So intelligently...

I loved every bit of it... I loved it so much... that I cried... So many tears fell from my eyes...

I've never been so moved by someone's writing... She made me feel so happy... so loved...

It was perfect... So perfect...

This... this will win you the contest... Yuki... Except... the ending, Yuki... its wrong...

So... I grabbed another piece of paper... and I wrote... and I wrote...

Line after line...

Paragraph after paragraph...

Eventually... changing the ending... changing the outcome... changing her destiny...

As I finished... I noticed her laptop was still on. I don't know why I never noticed it before... but it had a built in web-cam inside.

I should tell her.. She should know the truth..

I turned on the program and started recording. It took a while... but I eventually let it out...

As I finished recording the video, I walked over to Yuki's side.

"Make sure... that your Dream comes true..." I said, tears running down my face. "Well... our Dream I guess..."

But I smiled... Yuki would want me to smile... Even if I was crying... she would want me to smile...

One kiss... One last kiss... One long and loving kiss...

"I love you... Yuki... I always will..."

And I was gone...


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[Yuki POV]


"RENA!" I suddenly shouted as I woke up.

Only silence... only silence and the morning Sun greeted me...

"R-Rena!" I called out, getting worried. "RENA?"

Nothing...

"H - HEY~!" I called out again. "You - you better not be teasing me... You can't go too far away from me or you'll - you'll!!!"

No one... was home....

R –Rena.....

It was then that I noticed that I was on my bed...

No sign of Rena... besides her clothes on the floor, her shirt I'm wearing...

NO! NO SHE DIDN'T! Rena... But I was supposed to die! I was the one at the end of the story... She doesn't deserve to die! I wanted her... to keep singing...

I got up and slowly walked to my table. My laptop had a little piece of paper on it with Rena’s handwriting.

"Press play?" I read and followed the instruction.

"Hey, Yuki~" rang Yuki's voice from my laptop.

There she was, smiling back at me...

"RENA!" I shouted into the screen. "WHERE ARE YOU? RENA, I - !"

"If you're watching this..." Rena interrupted. "That means I gave up my Soul for you~"

I sat there, struck dumb by her words... Of course she couldn't hear me...

It... really happened...

"I'm sorry... sorry I didn't tell you..."

Rena tried to smile... her beautiful eyes holding back her tears...

"There's something that I haven't told you... Something I've been hiding from you..."

"Remember... the first time we went to Times... The first time I watched you write... You asked me about my Dream and why i decided to graduate?"

The events of that time replayed in my head.

"The reason is...”

“Sooner or later..”

“I’m going to die..”

WHAT?!

I hung on her words... but she sudden stopped talking. She looked so hurt... So much in pain as she tried to find the courage to continue... She didn't even look into the camera anymore...

"WHY?" I talking to the screen without thinking.

"You see..." she continued. "I’m battling with a cancer that corrupting my brains right now. I should have done many therapies, but i didn’t want it.. I want to enjoy my.. this short life of mine.."

Rena took a moment then to wipe her tears and went on to smile weakly.

"I know that i didn’t have a long life.."

Rena paused again... taking her time...

"So i’m going to enjoy this finite life of mine..”

With her face full of tears... She tried to speak another words..

"At first..." started Rena. "I hated it... Being connected with you... Always sharing... I didn't have time to deal with you... I wanted to kill you! I already had a short life time, and it became shorter because of you!”, her finger pointed at me.

It’s my fault...

My eyes became wet and small droplet of tears start to trickled down from my eyes.

“Just Kidding!”, she stuck out her tounge playfully, but her eyes was wet. She’s forcing herself to smile.. to withold the pain. The sadness that she felt.

Suddenly... she became so quiet as she thought to herself.

"Eventhough i thought like that... But... I didn’t noticed that.. How quickly... How easily... I felt so connected with you... How quickly... I fell in love with you... Your pretty face... Your shyness... Your warmth..."

The more she talked about me... the more she cried...

"And when I heard you sing... our very first time together on stage... I never heard anything so beautiful..."

The more she cried... the more I cried...

"I knew then... Right then and there... I knew that this short life of mine became a beautiful memories.. It’s all because of you.. Because i met you.."

And... the more I cried...

"I wanted to be with you... stay with you! Be by your side! To be loved by you!”

The more... she seemed to smile at me through the recording...

"These 7 days... Through these 7 days... I felt so alive! Sitting at Times just to watch you write... Singing with you at the club... Feeding you your 'Special Dish'... Sleeping in the same bed with you... Always... feeling your warmth..."

Rena unconsciously started to rub one of her hands... I... too... started doing the same thing...

"And when I held you... Held your hand... How comforting it was... How it fit so perfectly into mine... I think I'm going to miss that the most..."

Her tears started to fall onto her hands...

"Don't get me wrong Yuki... I don't regret leaving you... Dying for you... Yeah, if i keep living.. i think i only have another six months.. And... in the end... I think It was worthed.. to sacrifice my life.. to help you realize your Dream~"

"My... Dream...?"

Rena started smiling happily to herself...

"I loved it by the way~ You wrote it so well... So full of love...”

She wiped away all the remaining tears she had on her face... and smiled brightly...

"I'm not leaving you really... I mean... In your writing... In your thoughts... In your Dream... I'll live on...”

"And... As long as you live, I won't leave your side! I'll always be up here in Heaven, to watch over you while you write, to sing with you whenever you hear our song, to hold your hand as you walk... It's like... I never left you right...”

"So don't cry you dummy! I want you to smile! Smile and make your Dream - No wait... Our Dream of publishing our own book comes true! It's our Dream now! Just like your book said... we're one!”

“Right now... As you watch this... I'm by your side... I never left you... I'll never leave you... As long as you feel the same thing I am... I'll always be with you...”

"And right now... I love you... I love you so much, Yuki...”

"Forever... and ever..."

She didn't say good-bye... Instead... the last thing she did... The very last thing she did for me... Before the recording stopped... Was smile... That bright smile... That beautiful bright smile that she always wore in front of me...

And I tried it on...

"You - You dummy!" I smiled with a weak voice... as tears still falling from my eyes. "Who's crying? I'm not! See, Rena? I'm smiling!"

I probably hit the replay button a hundred times... Each time... I couldn't hold it back... But I still smiled...

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Days... Weeks roll by... Eventually it was a month later...

As I sit here at Times, writing like this, I can feel Rena sometimes.

Always... together... Never leaving one another... It really felt like that now...

We both aim for the same Dream now, trying to publish a book.

After that contest, however, I think I'll be pretty close to realizing that Dream.

"In the end I wanna be standing~ " I sang quietly to myself. " At the beginning with you!"

A tap to my shoulder suddenly caught my attention.

I quickly turned off my iPod and turned to face a girl with a black hair. By the looks of her clothing, I could see she was a Times’ cafe employee.

"Can I help you?" I asked.

Usually... people would just go silent as I said that... Not anymore I guess...

"Hey, aren't you the writer? Kashiwagi Yuki?" asked the Times’ employee. "The writer of this story?"

The cute girl held up a copy of the Times’ published book that was filled with all the contest winners inside. She opened up the book to the grand prize winning story.

There... starring back at me... was a small picture of Rena and me next to a short story called 'ONE'.

Well... okay... Other people couldn't see Rena in the picture like I could... It was only a picture of me after all...

"Yes." I smiled. "Did you like it?"

"Oh my god! I knew it was you! Yes, I loved it!" she squealed. "It was genius! I was so moved... I swear, I used up a whole box of tissues when I read that story. Um... Anyway... I was wondering..."

"Yes?"

"Well you don't have to... but... Will you sign it... for me?"

Hahaha! An autograph? Hehehe... This is embarrassing...

It was then that I noticed that other people at the cafe had overheard our conversation. Of course... each one of them had a copy of the book of short stories. Like mad paparazzi, the flooded over to my table and asked for an autograph too!

"Well okay!" I smiled. "But you all have to get in line."

I signed each book that was handed to me. They started talking to me, the people, telling me how they loved my story and wished to tell people back home of my work. I asked and a lot of people here seemed to be visiting from out of town for a vacation and some were ever from out of the country, like England, France, Spain, Korea, and USA!

I'm become a popular writer now, Rena. Did you see that? I even have many fans.

"Sorry, I didn't catch your name and you don't have a name tag," I asked the Times’ employee girl with the black hair. "Who do I make this autograph to?"

Unfortunately, in the mad rush of other people wanting an autograph, the poor girl got pushed to the back of the line.

"Oh!" she blushed and smiling. "I'm a new worker here. The name's Watanabe Mayu!"

"Okay, Watanabe Mayu~" I smiled as I signed her book. "Sorry about that!"

"It's fine! Thank you so much! Anyway... I'll see you around," Mayu nodded before hugging her copy of the book and walking away.

From that day on, whenever someone asked me to sign one of my books, I autographed each book with my new Pen Name:

YukiRena

ACT THREE END

TBC?

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Yeah! at last i finished!! :3 I felt so happy to finished one of my fanfic.. the burden is gone.. LOL

hope you enjoy this last ACT of ONE. :3

see you again at other update. :3

:byebye:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 10, 2012, 01:26:42 PM

nooo...renaaa :pleeease:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 10, 2012, 02:22:56 PM

Yeah.. Rena.. i'm gonna get killed bymuwi and min.. and thank you for reading skyle-san.

Just wondering.. since there are so many indonesian fanfic writers... should we met up? LOL

And will you go to watch jkt48 theater, skyle-san?

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: Maria-chan on June 10, 2012, 02:35:09 PM

Once again you have made me cry, Bochang-san  :gyaaah:
But i really liked the ending tho :farofflook:
Thank You fo the updating btw :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: pen-pen-chii on June 10, 2012, 02:37:03 PM

10 wishes~

Quote

I kinda change something in the prologue. :3 only a small part. :3

Ehhh??~~ Why did you change it?~
Oh well, I know what part you changed~
But now i'm confused which pairing it will be~~  :mon ko:
If you didn't changed it, then it will be Yuki***** pairing~ But you changed it so i was confused if it will be a Yuki***** or a Mayuki fic~  :dizzy:
I'll just wait for the next update~


ONE Act three~
Renaaa~~~ :pleeease: :pleeease:
This made me cry~

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 10, 2012, 02:51:55 PM

You forgot how I LOVE Rena-sama too!!!!! *goes after bochang-oppa with a killing knife*

Rena-sama!!!!!!  :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :fainted: :pleeease: :pleeease: :on blackhole: :on speedy: :on speedy: :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks: :gmon tears: :gmon tears: :pig cry: :pig cry:

*mourns*

And now Yuki is sooo popular as a writer! Please, sign for me, YukiRena!!  :mon pray2: :mon inluv: :mon innocent: :wriggly: :ptam-aww:

Rena-sama!!!! *mourns more*

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: kurogumi on June 10, 2012, 03:22:16 PM

san i said dont killed my Rena,but you killed her in this fic! T.T aaah...

Please continue...well you owe me because you killed my rena! (Just kidding LOL)

And I love Mayuki hahaha so its okay if you killed Rena,but at least Yuki got new Love, MAYuuuuuuuuu....

Ah thank for the Update

Obligado,Terima Kasih sama sama,arigatou,LOL im copying Yuko...

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 10, 2012, 03:30:59 PM

Quote from: bochang on June 10, 2012, 02:22:56 PM

Yeah.. Rena.. i'm gonna get killed bymuwi and min.. and thank you for reading skyle-san.

Just wondering.. since there are so many indonesian fanfic writers... should we met up? LOL

And will you go to watch jkt48 theater, skyle-san?

some kind mini-gath (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-lemot.gif)

that sounds good to me...as long as it still on jabodetabek area I'm in... :kekeke:

jkt48 theater... (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-hmm.gif)

where can I get the ticket :dunno:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 10, 2012, 04:28:39 PM

uwogh, kinda shocked that once i goes online after went to have a dinner, there's so much reply #exaggerated LOL

yeah, a mini gath. LOL since i'm not a member from kaskus or idws fanbase.. i didn't know any wota fans in indonesia (in the real life). LOL

@maria-chan: really? yeah, i made another person cried~ #happy and thank you for reading and commenting maria-chan.  :on gay:

@pen-pen-chii: I wonder why your username is that.  :dunno: LOL sorry for the random thoughts that came up in my head.  :sweat:
hehehe because i want to tease the reader.  :kekeke: and i almost get caught! or already got caught by you pen-chii-san(?). LOL
yeah, it's too obvious in the prologue. so i decide to change it, and make the reader confused~  :ding:

Renaaaa~ TT.TT Me too.. I'm kinda sad.. #theidiotwriter

@sakura_drop_:Eh? EH?! EH!! I f-forgot... damn..

yeah, i also want to have a YukiRena siggy. :3  :nya:

@kurogumi: Rena has too much fans in jphip.. LOL now i'm gonna get killed by many rena's fans. LOL
i don't think i will continue this fic kuro-san. :3 Kinda lazy. LOL and if i continue using the same concept, either mayuyu or yuki will be die in the end. MUHAHAHA
 :on cigar: #sorry #forgetaboutwhatisaid

and are you and indonesian too kuro-san? since you use the term of 'terima kasih' and 'sama-sama'. LOL
or you just copy and paste? LOL

@skyle: i live in jabodetabek area. LOL you didn't know that?? Hmmm.. here's so information. JKT48 THEATER! (http://www.facebook.com/notes/jkt48/jkt48theater/409740895735626)

actually, yesterday and today, they sell the tickets in advance.. but only 25 tickets for each show.. and yesterday i already bought two. for me and my friend. later, i found out that some of jkt48 members came to the ticket selling place today..   :tantrum: WHY! WHY TODAY!! WHY NOT YESTERDAY TOO!! I WANT TO MEET SANJU!!

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 10, 2012, 04:56:45 PM

oh damn...gonna missed this one again i guess... :err:

looking at the schedule i was :err: :depressed: :on cloudeye:

the dates not friendly enough for me...got something important on tjose day (again) :depressed:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: aruka on June 10, 2012, 06:10:40 PM

Love the ending.. :yep:
Rena-chan died in a sweet and beautiful cause, which in turn makes her death also beautiful. Ironic, isn't it?
So in the end for me, still.. why the worries about 'killing' Rena-chan, bochang-san?

Hehe~ I know you've told the reason in your reply to kurogumi-san (hi, kuro-san!), but the 'freedom to write' is yours, man! :grin:


Anyway, congrats for being able of getting the tickets! :D
I've tried online since day one until today without avail. :doh:
I couldn't even buy the tickets on spot yesterday and today since I'm currently not residing in Jabodetabek. :doh:

Perhaps I would try for the waiting list tickets, but I would only be able to go at 16th or 17th of June. We can't meet then.. :(

Btw, the idea for a mini-gath? Yes~ please!! :yep: I'll definitely go if I have my time clicked with yours, later.

@bunny_rabbit: Argh~ zannen de! :banghead: But don't lose hope, pal!

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[ONE, ACT THREE, June, 10th, 2012]
Post by: Spicy Sapphire on June 10, 2012, 06:19:43 PM

Wait...... Wait...... RENAAAAAAA!!! My sweetheart! Y U Killed Rena???  :OMG: :OMG: AAAAAAAAAA!!   :gyaaah: 
 :shifty: Well at least she's still alive in Yuki's heart and that video of her was bittersweet. :D It's a good thing I'm reading this alone with no one around. Lol.

I forgive you for killing Rena in this since I'm also currently writing with an ending that Rena...  :on drink:

Title: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 15, 2012, 12:49:53 PM

Replies:

@skyle: Is that so? ah that's too bad. :3 Sanju really sweet.. I... love her.. I'm in love.. Literally LOL

@aruka: Yes, ironic.. I love those kind of ending.. more realistic.. I mean life is not as sweet as it seems. :3

eh? where do you live aruka-san?

if there will be a mini-gath.. i should brought my hdd.. i will "steal" others files. LOL

@Spicy Sapphire: Yes~ :3 well, i killed both of them.. actually. :3 eh? why? were you screaming when you read that chapter? LOL
Errr.... Feel the wrath of gumi, muwi, min, and sieka then.. LOL

and actually i've finished.. i think the first chapter of 10 wishes.. and it will be confusing.. :3

i hope you guys can understand the story. :3

so here's it!


=======================================================================================================

10 Wishes

ACT ONE

LIE

[Yuki POV]

“JURINA!!!” I wailed at my teammate when i barged into her bedroom that scared her at the process. She’s lying on her bed reading a novel.

“Eh?”, She blinked several times, confused about what happened to me

“Wh-EH?”, She said before i hugged her and cried at her shoulder

“What happened, Yuki?”, she said still oblivious about what happened, but she tried to comfort me by stroking my long black hair.

“I.. *hiks* Lost.. *hiks* my purse.. *hiks*”, i said between my cry.

“Eh?! AH! ITAI!” She pushed me from the top of her bed.

“Yah!! Why did you push me to the floor?!”, I said, shocked at my best friend action.

“Well.. It’s your fault that you lost your purse! I thought that something bad happened to you!”, She annoyed at my sudden barge. “You’re disturbing my peaceful time!! and where's my melon-pan?! You already promised!”

“Yah! IT’S BAD! You’re so cruel Jurina!!!”, I stared at the book that she held. It says ‘Infinity’ on it’s cover. It looks interesting, but this is not the time for me to wasting time.

I. Need. To. Get. My. Purse. Back.

“Okay-okay~ It’s bad.”, she said playfully that makes me more annoyed

“YAHH!!!! Jurina! Help me to get my purse back!”, I whined at her.

“I promise i will do anything you want!”, I continued

“Really?”, My teammate said as she heard my offer.

“So.. If i get your purse back.. you will do anything i want?”, she smirked that makes me regret what i said, but i can’t do anything. I need her help.

“Yes..”, I nodded helplessly.

“YEAH!”, She exclaimed. “I will help you then!”

“Wait! One condition!”, i said before she continued

“What is it?”

“It’s ONLY if YOU the one GET my purse back.”, I said

“Yah! It’s unfair!”, she annoyed. “Well, at least you will do one of my request then. Deal?”

“Okay, as the token of my gratitude for helping me, i will only do ONE of your request.”, I offer her a handshake to close the deal. She smiled happily as she took my hand.

“It’s a promise Yuki.”, she smirked, "and now, bring me my melon-pan."

I hate her smirk!

=======================================================================================================

[FLASHBACK]

I was sitting on my bed when i heard my phone’s ringtone. It’s a new email, an IM request.

Who is this? Mayuyu?

I accepted her request, because i know, i must have knowed the one who sent me the request since i didn’t share my email to everbody.

Mayuyu: Good Morning Jurina~ :3 –Mayuyu

It’s HER!!! KYA~

I squealed in happiness, and in no time, i already typed my reply and sent it to her.

Me: Good morning Mayuyu :D Do you sleep well yesterday?

Mayuyu: Yes! I dreamt about you last night. :$

Me: Really? Me too! I dreamt about you to last night! Tell me your dream! :3

Mayuyu: Nah! You first! ;)

Me: Okay.. I dreamt about us..

Mayuyu: yes? Continue..

I tried to recall my dream last night and typed it without thinking and sent it.

Me: I dreamt about us..

Me: on my bed..

Me:I’m on the top..

Me: and you’re at the bottom..

Mayuyu: EH?!

Me: screaming my name..

Mayuyu: YAH!! What kind of dream was that!!

Me: It felt so good..

Mayuyu: PING!

Mayuyu: HAHAHAHA You PERV!!!

I just realized what i write and felt so embarrassed. My cheeks became so red and i felt so hot.

DAMN IT!!! I just destroyed my image.. TT.TT

I just sat there.. I didn’t know what to say or how to explained it all.

Mayuyu: Jurina? Are you still there?

Mayuyu: PING!

The vibration that comes out from my phone sent my thoughts back to my body.

Me: Yes..

Mayuyu: Did i say something wrong?

Me: No..

Mayuyu: Then.. Why?

Me: I...

Me: I’m a fool..

Mayuyu: Why?

Me: Because i told you my pervy dream..

Mayuyu: AHAHAH Don’t worry Jurina. :3

Mayuyu: I don’t blame you. I know that i’m so tempting. :3

Me: ... Yah!

Mayuyu: Just kidding. :3

Me: Huff.. Okay..

Mayuyu: Can we meet today, Jurina? :)

Me: I didn’t think that you still want to meet this pervert girl again..

Mayuyu: NO! Of course i want to know you more. :3

Me: Really? You’re serious right? You’re not gonna leave me alone right?’’

Mayuyu: Yes, I won’t! :D

Me: Promise?

Mayuyu: YES JURINA! YES!

Me: Ahaha Okay then. :3 Let’s meet up at the AKB’s Theater. I know a great cafe near that place. :3

Mayuyu: Okay. See you Jurina. I will contact you when i’m arrived. :D

Mayuyu signed off

“Uwah! I’m so happy! Hmmm.. What should i we-AI! ITAI!!!”, i said before i felt pain all over my head.

“Hello Yuki~”, i heard a murderous tone from the younger girl behind me. Her fist squeezing my head from the both sides. IT’S SO PAINFUL! I didn’t noticed that she’s peeking at the conversation. I must be too focus on Mayuyu so i didn’t notice the younger girl’s presence.

“JUJU! ITAI! STOP!”, I whined and begged her to stop her cruelity

“What are you doing with my photo~? Are you using it to hit up a girl~?”

“N-no I w-woul- ITAI!!!!”, she pressed her fist harder againts my head

“Trying to lie, eh?”

“JUJU!! STOP IT!! I PROMISE! I WON’T DO THIS AGAIN!!”

“I WILL BUY YOU A MELON PAN! TWO! THREE! FOUR! FOR A WEEK!!”, I tried to negotiate with her, and everytime she’s not satisfied, she would squeezed my head harder.

“ANYTHING YOU WANT!!!”, I begged her, i can’t withstand this pain anymore, it’s too painful.

“Promise~?”, she said from behind me

“YES! YES! ANYTHING!!”, I cried because of the pain

“Okay~”, she stopped squeezing my head and turn my chair, facing her.

“Now, Strip!”

“WHAT!?”, i shocked in disbelief

“Do as i said or... should i tell this girl? The real you?”, she said with a devilish smirk

“Okay..”, i said.. hopeless..

ACT ONE END

OH!? What would Juju do to Yuki?! LOL


sorry for this crappy chapter~ :3

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 15, 2012, 01:12:00 PM

ow...ow...ow...jurina you ask yuki to strip before you... :hehehe:

i want to see that :tantrum: :on bleed:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: pen-pen-chii on June 15, 2012, 03:07:23 PM

Quote

@pen-pen-chii: I wonder why your username is that.   LOL sorry for the random thoughts that came up in my head. 
hehehe because i want to tease the reader.   and i almost get caught! or already got caught by you pen-chii-san(?). LOL
yeah, it's too obvious in the prologue. so i decide to change it, and make the reader confused~ 

Renaaaa~ TT.TT Me too.. I'm kinda sad.. #theidiotwriter

because "pen-pen" is my nickname~  :lol: you can just call me "Pen-chii" or "Pen-san"~ (well, it actually depends on you on what you want to call me) LOL
"almost got caught?" Sorry, but you actually got caught~ *inserts evil laugh* :twisted:

10 wishes act one~
I don't know why, but when I was reading this I thought that this was going to be a JuriYuki fic~ OTL
But~ this fic is going to be about that pairing, right?~ :twisted:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: yukofan on June 15, 2012, 03:24:41 PM

ehhh,i've just known that you had update the last chapter of ONE...rena T_T she had cancer and sacriface her soul for yuki T_T but,at least she had met the love of her life before she died..

is yuki really going to strip? LOL..

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 15, 2012, 03:29:29 PM

@Skyle: Bro... LOL Your imagination was too.. er.. yeah.. LOL

@pen-chiin~: Ah.. souka.. hahaha Yeah! aaaaaaahhhh i lost.. Hmmm.. maybe.. *inserts evil laugh*

JuriYuki~ :3 It would be great.. :3 so yuki actually have many options in this fic. :3

well, if you read the prologue carefully.. #hint LOL

I haven't decided it yet. :3 Let's see what would happen later~

@Yukofan: It's okay yukofan-san~ :3 yeah~ I also have met my love yesterday.. sanju-yah~

I'm still spazzing over sanju.. I wish she noticed me yesterday.. and follow my twitter.. and read this fic.. and i'm gonna write a fic for her.. and she reads it.. it would be so great.. sanju.. why are you so cute? I want to meet you again.. #inlove #don'tmindthis #sanjuism

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 15, 2012, 03:41:54 PM

Quote from: bochang on June 15, 2012, 03:29:29 PM

@Skyle: Bro... LOL Your imagination was too.. er.. yeah.. LOL

I'm still spazzing over sanju.. I wish she noticed me yesterday.. and follow my twitter.. and read this fic.. and i'm gonna write a fic for her.. and she reads it.. it would be so great.. sanju.. why are you so cute? I want to meet you again.. #inlove #don'tmindthis #sanjuism

well...some old friend of mine was said "never hold your imagination back..." :luvluv2:

lolicon detected :kekeke:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: yukofan on June 16, 2012, 01:22:21 AM

so your jkt48 oshi is sanju...
i'm waiting for the sanju fic..i gues the pairing is BochangSanju..LOL..

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 16, 2012, 08:51:26 AM

@skyle: Well, yeah.. 6 years differences is okay.. i think. LOL so i'm not a total lolicon. LOL

@yukofan: Yeah! but all of them are so sweet! Gya~ I also love stella.. and ghaida.. and kinal.. and cleo.. and rena.. and.. ALL OF THEM. LOL

oh, btw i just create a hebirote JKT48 ver. cover. :3

<iframe width="420" height="315" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/Tl4fnAbAKuk" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>

eh? why can't i embed this video? =="

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[10 Wishes, ACT ONE update, June, 15th, 2012]
Post by: kahem on June 16, 2012, 05:32:19 PM

Rena!!!!!!!! T_T

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[JKT48 fanfic teaser, June, 17th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 17, 2012, 06:48:48 AM

@Kahem: err.. well yeah.. i think you can expect that.. since i'm usually involving the death in all my fanfic. LOL


AND


I had the urge to write a JKT48 fanfic and to make them TRENDING IN JPHIP!!! :D

just a little teaser.
it's not a prologue yet. :3


I haven't made the title yet~ so here you are:

TEASER (A JKT48 FANFIC)

Life is fun..

and..

Death is scary..

Human will always searching for life and despise the death..

That's why it's fun to torture them..

Make them hopeless..

Their expression when they know they will died is too priceless.

*giggle*

"I hope this person that Hyung give me, can amuse me.", i said, smiling when i looking at the data that i recieved from the God of life and death.



see you later at the prologue.

JKT 48! JKT 48!

J! J! J! WASSHOI!!

#doingawotagei

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[JKT48 fanfic teaser, June, 17th, 2012]
Post by: aruka on June 17, 2012, 08:08:30 AM

Woohoo~ \^o^/
is this the teaser for the Ghaida-Stella fanfic you've mentioned before?

But, it's dark again? With the mention of life and death...
anyway, it seems like you yourself would be there again. Oppa~ :lol:

Quote from: bochang on June 17, 2012, 06:48:48 AM

I had the urge to write a JKT48 fanfic and to make them TRENDING IN JPHIP!!! :D

This makes me want to write another JKT-based fic too!

Okay, I've decided... I'll write one. :yep:
Only not now... :doh: Still haven't got the proper time. :banghead:

Quote from: bochang on June 15, 2012, 12:49:53 PM

@aruka: Yes, ironic.. I love those kind of ending.. more realistic.. I mean life is not as sweet as it seems. :3

eh? where do you live aruka-san?

if there will be a mini-gath.. i should brought my hdd.. i will "steal" others files. LOL

I'm currently a BDG guy. Not that far from JKT. :D
Seems I should bring mine too. Kita steal2-an.. :lol:


Meanwhile on another note, concerning this...

Quote from: yukofan on June 16, 2012, 01:22:21 AM

i gues the pairing is BochangSanju..LOL..

The pairing name for Bochang-Sanju -> BoSan ? XD


#youcandowotagei?

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[JKT48 fanfic teaser, June, 17th, 2012]
Post by: epiclulz on June 17, 2012, 09:26:31 AM

Hi! I'm new here. I love your fics. AWESOME PERVY JURINA LOLI POWER lulz. I was imagining CenterxNezumi instead of Mayuki because I just finished watching Majisuka Gakuen 2. Can't wait to see what Jurina will do to Yuki. I hope Yuki becomes Black and refuses to strip and probably raep Jurina. Me and my hentai mind :smhid

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[JKT48 fanfic teaser, June, 17th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 17, 2012, 03:38:51 PM

@aruka: Hmmm.. i'm still contemplating.. whether i want to write a stella-ghaida or.. something. fufufu this two girls really brighten my day~ :D

Yes, i think it will be dark again.. :3 but don't worry. I won't kill anyone.. I think.. LOL

fufufu as expected from the veteran writer. Yeah i will showed up again.. almost in every fic that i write. LOL I'm too narsis. LOL

WRITE IT THEN! LOL I will waiting for it! hahaha

Oh, i'm gonna sharing something epic from theater day 1.

This event happened after their performance (before the encore). Stella become the MC(?)

Stella: Ghaida, what is your fav song that we've performed until now?
Ghaida: Me? Hmmm.. Inochi no Tsukaimichi! *with her usual genking attitude
Stella: Why?
Ghaida: Well, it's reflected what i felt.
Stella: eh?
Ghaida: Yes, I want to be loved!
Stella: *giggle* by who?
Ghaida: BY YOU!!! *Shouting to the audience
Stella: *embarrassed* GHAIDA!!!!!! (Annoyed tone)
Ghaida: *happy* STELLAAA~!! (happy tone)

It's a true story bro. It makes me want to write about them. LOL

and for those who didn't know stella and ghaida here's the picture!

STELLA
(http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-tOCoOfcYfhk/T2FoHvITWeI/AAAAAAAAArA/BYTfE5rFLxY/s1600/Stella+Cornelia.jpg)

GHAIDA
(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m34ts5V7Vw1qf2dtso2_1280.jpg)

Ghaida is SAE's SON! LOL KAKKOI!! GYA GYA~

@epiclulz: Hello! Enjoy your stay in JPHIP! Wooohooo! and thank you! I'm glad that you love it! :3

I haven't watch the majijyo 2!! TT.TT I've downloaded it, but the quality is a crap.. so i delete it again. LOL Gonna find the better version. LOL

Err.. I don't think so. LOL That's just too hentai LOL I can't write hentai fic.. I'm not good with that. LOL

Hohoho, let's see.. what would jurina do to yuki. :3

Title: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛, JKT48, prologue, June, 21th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 21, 2012, 04:24:55 PM

and.. actually GHAIDA is a PLAYBOY(?) (s)he went for a date with Beby (Another member of JKT48) Even she take a pic, doing a lovey-dovey stare to beby at a restaurant!! gah!! You can't have stella! I won't let you hurt her!

#don't mind my fanboying attitude~

I change the teaser a little bit, only a small terms. :3 But, it has great effect on this story~. hohoho


so here's the prologue.

=======================================================================================================

死神の愛

Prologue

[? POV]

"It's been so boring these days..", i was dozing off, laying on the red couch in my boss' sanctuary. From this place, i can see the outside scenery from the big window at the other side of the couch. There's nothing. Only an abyss of darkness that surrounding this sanctuary. Even i wonder what's the purpose of this window. The scenery is always the same. Black. Well, i can't helped it, since there's nothing outside. but, the designer of this place surely an idiot. Eventhough he's already know that there's nothing outside, he/she built this place like that.

and where is he? He told me to show up at 3 o'clock in his place.. and he hasn't come out yet from his chamber..

The grandfather clock keeps ticking second after seconds.. After waiting for my boss for about 30 minutes, at last he came out from his chamber.

"Seriously, Hyung.", I got up from the couch, walking towards him. "You said that i should came at 3 o'clock and now, you're late for 30 minutes..", i shook my head, dissapointed from my boss behavior.

"Easy tiger.", he said showing his usual warm smile. "I need to takes my time you know?", he slowly walking gracefully and with a swift motion, he's already sitting at the couch that i'm laying at before.

"For what? Trying to picking out clothes?", i said with annoyed tone

"Eh?! How did you know that?!" He shocked, looking at me with an idiotic looks.

...

OMG why is this person(?) became my boss..

no..

HOW THIS PERSON CAN BECAME THE CHIEF OF SHINIGAMI?!

"It's really hard you know, to mix-and-match this outfit.", he pointed at his outfit. His medium length red hair really matched with his outfit. A long black coat, and underneath he wear a white shirt with a grey vest on top of it. He also wore straight-fit black jeans with a pairs of dark brown boots that makes him more fashionable.

Well, yeah.. he's fashionable..

but still..

you didn't have to dressed up for ME!

"and look at yourself.. why are you wearing that plaing old black cape.", he pointed at my outfit. "and it's already full of holes."

"...", i can't replied at him

THIS IS WHAT A SHINIGAMI LOOKS LIKE YOU RETARD!

I can't said it infront of him, even if i'm so annoyed at his actions.

"Oh well, so, what are you doing in my sanctuary?", he asked me

DAFUQ! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO TOLD ME TO COME!! ARGH!! MY PATIENCE IS RUNNING OUT!!

"... you... the one.. who called me..", I'm trying my best not to angry at my boss. I didn't want to be punished by Him.

"Ah! Yes! Of course! I'm too excited, so that i forgot what i want to said.", he got up and walked towards me.

"Here.", he gave me a paper.

"This is your assignment.", he placed his hands on my shoulders and tap it lightly, "good luck", he said with his usual smile.

"a girl?", i look at the information that's written on the paper. "She's quite young.. are you sure about this?"

"Of course, I am.", He smiled proudly, "That's why i'm the chief!"

"Yeyeyeh~ anything you said. See you again boss.", i walked to the door, wanting to get out from this place.

"Wait!"

"Eh? What?"

"Change your clothes with this.", he gave me some of his clothes.

"I don't need it, thank you, hyung."

"You should! This outfit will gives you a little bit of my power.. and it's more fashionable than this old cape", he said, trying to assuring me

"Really? Your power?"

"Yes, believe in me."

"Are you serious?"

"Of course."

"Okay then~", I'm happily recevied the clothes that he gave me. "I will use them in this assignment"

At last~ a job~ I hope she can amuses me. *evil laugh*

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So this is the prologue~ :3

please give me some feedback~ :3

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT8, prologue, June, 21th, 2012]
Post by: yukofan on June 22, 2012, 05:42:02 AM

are you obsessed with the death or what?

I wanna what 'you' will do to the girl? or who is the girl that you want to kill..LOL..

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT8, prologue, June, 21th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 22, 2012, 11:45:00 AM

another death-theme fic huh :hehehe:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT8, prologue, June, 21th, 2012]
Post by: bochang on June 22, 2012, 02:36:36 PM

LOL

@yukofan: me? i'm obsessed with life, because through the fear of the death, someone can knew the purpose of his/her life. :3

"?" will do something unique to the girl :3 LOL #hint and the girl i want to kill is... #tobecontinued

@skyle-san: i think so. LOL

Idk why i always write something like this. :3 Life and death.. Eros and Thanatos.. It's soo interesting! Surely, i will take clinical and education major. LOL

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT8, prologue, June, 21th, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 22, 2012, 05:29:53 PM

clinical psychology for major :hehehe:

welcome to da club then :kekeke:

Title: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: bochang on July 03, 2012, 02:07:32 PM

死神の愛

ACT ONE

Friend?

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[? POV]


(http://static.panoramio.com/photos/original/6686873.jpg)

"Uwah!! So this is Jakarta.." My mind wandering as i arrived at the most... polluted city, full of trafic jam, but, it's the biggest city in the world maybe. From this building, i can see Jakarta as a metropolitan city, but it still has many slum areas behind those buildings, typical of a developing country. Oh yeah, currently, i'm standing near the fire sclupture that made from bronze and gold. Yeah, i'm at the top of National Monument in the center of Jakarta. I can see many peoples down there looking at me with scaried looks.

Hmm? is there something wrong with me? I think this outfit is quite good.. I wonder why they are all looking at me..

Well, the sight-seeing is over, now, I'm gonna found you. *evil laugh*

Within a seconds, i jump down from the top of the monument, and on my way down(?) i heard many people screaming.

Seriously, what are they screaming for?

It only takes 10 seconds since i jumped from the top to arrived at the land. I landed gracefully, like floating slowly to the ground that made these people in front of me screaming harder and running all over the place.

...

Dafuq..

These people must be crazy.. Indonesian people are crazy..

Without any time to waste, i open my backpack and took out my Samsung Galaxy Tab 2. I input all the information that my Boss gave me to the "Shinigami's Tools for Dummies Free" App, and press enter. Almost instantly, all the information, about the location, name, age, etc showed up on the screen.

Hmmm Stella Cornelia.. 18 years old.. She's quite young.. the location is.. Jl. Raya Pejuangan Kav.8, Kebon Jeruk, Jakarta..

"Aish! That's kinda far.. Oh, whatever, no time to waste."

I input the address to my GPS app and start walking to my destination.



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"AT LAST!!! I'M ARRIVED!!!", I screamed in joy when i arrived at the destination.. I knew that people looking at me with a confused expression, but i don't care. It's a hell to walk from the National Monument to this place..

It's too tiring!! even for a death God! I wonder why we can't fly in this place.. It's easier..

Now, I'm standing in front of a big building, with a sign " Siloam Hospital" at the top of the building.

Hospital? She must be lying on her deathbed..

I walks towards the hospital and ask the nurse in the reception desk.

"Good Evening, Mam.", i said

"Eh iya? Oh.. Eh, Hello mister.", she said, stuttered

"Do you know where's Stella Cornelia's room?", i asked her

"ehh.. ahhh.. eh.. can.. you.. speak slowly?", she replied

"Do. you. know. where. is. stella. cornelia's. room?", I repeat my question again, this time, slowly.

"Stella Cornelia? Wait a minute sir."

"Ok."

She's wierd.. She looks so nervous when she's talking to me.. Don't tell me.. she is not fluent in english..

I was dozed off, wandering in my mind, until i felt a light tap on my shoulder.

"Emmm.. Mister.. Room.. Stella.. J48.", the nurse said.

bingo.. she's not fluent..

"ah.. Terima Kasih.", i bowed to her, and starts walking until i felt someone's hand hold me.

"emm.. the time.. for visiting is over.. today.. come again. tomorrow.", the same nurse, who giving me the information held me.

"Ah.. is that so? Okay then. Terima kasih lagi." I bowed to her again before i left the hospital. Smirked.

Sorry, but i don't have any time to waste..

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[Stella POV]

(http://i1076.photobucket.com/albums/w455/Hans_Aditya/stella.jpg)


Zzzz....

Zzzz....

*Creak*

Zzzz..

*Tap*

*Tap*

Zzzz..

*Tap*

Enghh..

What’s that? Disturbing my beauty sleep..

I opened my eyes and trying to get up, but i kept hearing something.

“Oh, it’s just the window..”, i saw the window opened..

“Hold on..”, i tried to recall, whether i close the window or not before i sleep.

“I remember that i already closed that window..”, suddenly i felt a chilling aura inside this room that giving me a gossebumps.

“....”

“Hello.. Nurse? Is that you?”, i gather all my courage to find the source of the noise.

“Hel....”, I saw a big shadow at the opposite of me. Standing at the end of the bed that i slept.

“GYAA-mmmmppphhh!!!”, my mouth was shut with his hands, and i can saw his eyes. It’s different. His left eye’s color is shiny red-blood and his right eye’s color is shiny sky blue. I’m so scared. I can’t move even a single inch. It’s like fear already conquered all my senses. I just sat at my bed and froze like that. I only closed my eyes and accepting my fate. 

Is this my end?

Mommy..

Dad..

Friends..

I’m sorry..

I gonna leave faster than the prediction..

“Ehem.”, the figure

Eh?

“If i release you, will you not screaming.”, asked the figure with a polite tone.

EH?!

I just bobbing my head up and down eagerly so he will release me. After saw my respond, he released me.

“...”

“NU-mmmmpppfhhh”, I tried to call for help, but that’s futile. With a swift motion, he already shut my mouth again, and now,  i can’t do anything.

No!! Why!!

“You. Already. Promised. But. You. Broke. It.”, the figure said that with a chilling tone. I can feel my tears already swelled up in my eyes.

“You. Will. Pay. For. It.”

“Hmmmpphh!! MHPPHH!!! “, I tried to scream, but it’s futile.

No.. Please.. God..

“HMMMMPPPHH!!”, The dark figure suddenly pinched my ear so hard.

“There.”, He continued, “Now, will you promise not to scream?”

Eh? Just that?

I just nodding eagerly, this time, i won’t do anything.

“Okay”, he said as he move his hand from my mouth.

“...”

“mm.. who are you?”, i tried to asked him

“Me? I’m.. Shinigami.”

I just frozed at the spot when i heard the answer..

S-sh-shinigami..is... that.. so..

“So, is my time already up now?”, i asked him, the dark figure.

“Oh? How Interesting..”, he said. I can’t saw his face, because i haven’t turn on the lights yet.

“Never thought that i would met someone who accepting me like you do.”, he said with a cheerful tone.

“Mind if i turned on the lights?”, i said, “I can’t see you.”

“Are you seriously want to see a Shinigami’s figure?”

...

Never thought about that.

Heck, why should i scared.. It’s not that i’m gonna live longer..

“Y-yes. I want to see the one who will take my soul.”, i replied.

“How brave.. Well, i want to see my victim too.”, he said before he clapped his hands and the lights turned on.

Woooow.. Is that magic?

Now the lights already on, and i can see a.. handsome.. tall.. shinigami.. Seriously, he looks so handsome. I never thought that a Shinigami will be looks like this. He just look like F4, Goo Jun Pyo!! Even more handsome than him.  If a Shinigami looks like this, i won’t mind if he gonna take my soul. It’s worthed.

“Hello? That’s kinda awkward when you staring at me with that kind of face.”, He said.

“Oh! I’m sorry. I’m St-“

“Stella Cornelia, 18 years old, graduated from Notre Dame Catholic High School, and etc.”

“...Ummm.. Yes.. and who are you?”

“Me? I’m  just a lowly Shinigami that ordered to take your soul.”, he said that so easily, as if there’s no  burden about taking someone’s life.

“Name?”

“I don’t have a name. You can call me Shinigami #1.”

“Pfft”, i lauged a bit. “Seriously you didn’t have any name?”

“Yes, just the same as all other Shinigami. #1, #2, #3, etc.”, he said cheerfully. “We’re only a supporting charachter in this world . So we didn’t have any name.”

“Okay, I will call you Jun Pyo then.”

“Jun Pyo? Well, as you wish miss.”

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[Jun Pyo POV]

This girl is so wierd, she’s so interesting, not to forget that she’s cute. But is she really 18 years old girl?

“Ano.. Are you really already 18 years old?” I asked with a doubtful looks. Well, i mean she’s so SHORT. A CHIBI.

“Yes, i’m 18 years old. Why?”, she asked me with a shy smile.

“Well, you looks like a junior high student. Pfft.”, I hold my laugh.

“Yah! That’s rude! Eventhough i’m short, but i have a great figure.”

After she said that, my eyes starts to observing her figure.

Damn. She’s a hottie..

WAIT! I FORGET MY MISSION!!

I slap my cheeks many times that makes her bewildered with my action. Her confused stare is really cute.

STOP THINKING THAT SHE’S CUTE!

“Ah, Stella, you already know right, what is my purpose to came here?”

She just nodded weakly.

“I know..”, she weakly replied

“but..”

“with one condition.”

“say it.”, I said.

“Be my friend.”

EH?!

-ACT ONE END-

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At last i have the motivation to write something~ LOL

being so lazy in this holiday~ and for Infinity and 10Wishes, please be patient. fufu I already writed about 15-20%. you can expect me to update one of them at the weekend. :3

so please enjoy this story. :3

hope you will support JKT48 too. :3

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on July 03, 2012, 03:45:08 PM

jump down from monas on a daylight,in front of many people and expecting them not to freaked out?! :shock:

what the heck are you thinking of :sweat:

will there any romance between the shinigami and stella :hehehe:

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: veforveranda on July 23, 2012, 05:31:57 AM

it's nice  :thumbsup so it will be forbidenlove between stella and Shinigami  :? :?

jun pyo ---> bochang  :lol: :lol: :lol:

and stella.. oh.. stella.. is she gone be died?? it will be so sad moment  :( :cry:

Quote

Hmmm Stella Cornelia.. 18 years old.. She's quite young.. the location is.. Jl. Raya Pejuangan Kav.8, Kebon Jeruk, Jakarta..

seriously.. how you get this anyway..  :? :?

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: bunny_rabbit on July 23, 2012, 11:51:16 AM

Quote from: veforveranda on July 23, 2012, 05:31:57 AM

it's nice  :thumbsup so it will be forbidenlove between stella and Shinigami  :? :?

jun pyo ---> bochang  :lol: :lol: :lol:

and stella.. oh.. stella.. is she gone be died?? it will be so sad moment  :( :cry:

Quote

Hmmm Stella Cornelia.. 18 years old.. She's quite young.. the location is.. Jl. Raya Pejuangan Kav.8, Kebon Jeruk, Jakarta..

seriously.. how you get this anyway..  :? :?

he's a stalker you know (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-bisik.gif)


j/k (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-ngebut.gif)

Title: Re: Bochang's scribble collections~[死神の愛 JKT48, ACT ONE, July, 3rd, 2012]
Post by: bochang on July 24, 2012, 10:34:22 AM

Quote from: veforveranda on July 23, 2012, 05:31:57 AM

it's nice  :thumbsup so it will be forbidenlove between stella and Shinigami  :? :?

jun pyo ---> bochang  :lol: :lol: :lol:

and stella.. oh.. stella.. is she gone be died?? it will be so sad moment  :( :cry:

Quote

Hmmm Stella Cornelia.. 18 years old.. She's quite young.. the location is.. Jl. Raya Pejuangan Kav.8, Kebon Jeruk, Jakarta..

seriously.. how you get this anyway..  :? :?

yup2.. a love line between stella and her shinigami. :3

no, if i want to use myself, i will write hae jin in the story. :3
XD

i'm so scared that she will read this, so i won't use my name. XD

hmmm.. that's the hospital address. not her address. LOL

Quote from: bunny_rabbit on July 23, 2012, 11:51:16 AM

Quote from: veforveranda on July 23, 2012, 05:31:57 AM

it's nice  :thumbsup so it will be forbidenlove between stella and Shinigami  :? :?

jun pyo ---> bochang  :lol: :lol: :lol:

and stella.. oh.. stella.. is she gone be died?? it will be so sad moment  :( :cry:

Quote

Hmmm Stella Cornelia.. 18 years old.. She's quite young.. the location is.. Jl. Raya Pejuangan Kav.8, Kebon Jeruk, Jakarta..

seriously.. how you get this anyway..  :? :?

he's a stalker you know (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-bisik.gif)


j/k (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-ngebut.gif)

LOL if i'm a stalker, i won't give her house address.. LOL i will come alone. XD