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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: TakaminaBG on May 18, 2012, 02:53:52 PM
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Chapter One
Atsuko’s POV
It’s been 6 years since AKB48 was formed. I got close to many of the members. Practically they are all my friends. But then of course there is someone that pisses me of. There is someone I hate. I can't stand her. She thinks she is the leader. But she is an idiot. How can an idiot be the leader of the most popular idol group in Japan. Really!!!! I can NOT stand THAT “girl”. She has no sense in fashion. She acts like a boy. She never baths with us. She is a weirdo.
Takamina’s POV
She is really beautiful, but has an awful character. She really pisses me of. She is the center and honestly I do NOT know why. Was is it about her. Is she really that good. No! I don’t think. She gets everything because she is pretty. But still there is something about her. But I don’t know what.
We have a recording today for AKBINGO! God I don’t want to see her. Anyway here are we trying to avoid each other. But then suddenly Sata – san told us to gather around. We were surprised. Akimoto Yasushi – san came for the first time to a recording for AKBINGO!.
“It’s seems there is a problem between two members in Team A..”
And of course everyone look at me and Maeda Atsuko…
“And we have to solve that problem because those people are causing trouble for the other members. So I have decided…
That was the moment my life change upside down. My life was over so as I thought. I couldn’t believe my ears. I thought I had become deaf. The members were surprised but not as surprised as we were.
“You are going to live together! Starting tonight!” he starts to walk away but we went towards him shouting.
“I’m am not living with HER” we sad in one voice.
“Yeah, you are. I have work to do, so…”
“But wait..”
“No, but’s. You have to work this out. Your things are already in your new apartment. So good luck!”
Our eyes met and we immediately looked away pisses of. We were about to scream at each other but Akimoto – san was not done…
“Oh, I almost forgot. There is only one bed.” He said smirking. What the HELL is he thinking?!?!
“WHAT?!!?!” we said in once voice again.
“Are you serious?” I asked him shouthing.
“You have to live together and sleep in one bed for 4 months. After that you decide.”
“Here are your keys. Oh, so is this late. Well you don’t have any work left so go home. And I hope you like your new home.”
We both sign. We both knew there was nothing we could do. So we both got in a cab together without saying a word because we knew it would turn into a fight. I used my key and opened the door. We were surprised it was a really nice apartment. The atmosphere was dark. Suddenly she broke the silence.
“I’ going to take a bath. You do whatever you like to do….” She said with annoyed voice.
“ Fine…” I said as I sat on the couch and turned on the television. I turned around and I saw her taking her clothes of
“What the hell are you doing?!” I said surprised by her actions.
“Don’t turn around you idiot!” she said as she threw a pillow in my face.
“Can’t you take your clothes of in the BEDROOM?”
“The room is on the second floor and the bathroom is right next to the kitchen and the kitchen is here!”
“Then take your clothes of in the BATHROOM!” I said as I walk to her trying to go to the kitchen witch is behind her. ”Why are you getting so angry? Do you like me or something?
“You are kidding me right? There is no way I could fall for someone like you.”
“What do you mean by that?’’
“I can not fall for someone that gets everything because she is cute.
I could see a tear falling down her cheek. I felt bad but I am not going to apologize because it’s the truth.
But then I had to fail like I always do. I slipped and fell on top of her she was surprised. I could see her collarbone I kept staring at her face. So beautiful. I slowly wiped away her tear and said in a quiet voice “I’m sorry Atsuko.”
She was stunned as I called her by her first name. I don’t know why I did that but she just looked so sad and beautiful. There is something about her. My heart is beating like it’s going to explode any minute. I slowly moved my head closer she closed her eyes like she knew what was about to happened, but she didn’t really mind it. I closed my eyes as our lips touched. They are so soft. I tilt my head. I deepened the kiss. I feel it she is responding the kiss. I suck her upper and lower lip she lets a little moan. She slowly opens her mouth and our tongues met for the first time. She wraps her hands around my neck and out kiss is getting rough. My hands start to wonder around her stomach and go up and up, until I touched her breast. She suddenly broke the kiss, slapped my face and ran towards the bathroom. I was so shocked from what just happened that I couldn’t even move. I finished my bath after her and got upstairs. I am in front of the door and slowly open it. I can see her. She is lying in the bed with her face against the wall with her back facing the door. I slowly walked towards the bed, laid in the bed with my back facing at her. There was a silence between us until she broke it.
“I hate you!”
“Yeah, I hate you too..”
TBC
New fanfic from me. Hope you like it. Enjoy! :)
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Oh~ really interesting. I never saw things like that hehe can't wait for the next chapter
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Wow!! :inlove:
i love these kind of stories!!!
Please continue!! onegaishimasu :bow:
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aww am i am already loving this i cant wait till they say i love you lol
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Yay a new fic XD
I'm already in love with the story
I wonder what will happen during the time they ar living together :?
Please continue :kneelbow:
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Happy happy happy
thought that atsuminas ... were all (or many) stopped, I'm glad there's a new story.
I imagined Takamina sleeping on the couch when Akimoto said that had only one bed.
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Yesh! A New Fic!
Here it is, Again... hating each other. They're just Decline each other feeling [maybe?] and, Bakamina, you shouldn't make a girl Cry. When Takamina apologize to Atsuko, I though Takamina doen't really hate Atsuko and She just has something she love from Atsuko... so Does Atsuko...
About the s*x part, It's like you just reverse it from your previous Fic [Why can't you love me back?] I mean, this one, Takamina attack first... and the one who hate it is Atsuko...
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Wow, they are arguing and hating each others. Well, at least for beginning, later on become sweet.. :p
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owww takaboy.. you let atsuko sleep in bed..
good story a little diferent because they hate each other.. :D
Love it!! make them fight :D and jelousy and.. i wanna know what goona happen this 4 months :D
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CHAPTER TWO
Takamina’s POV
The night was long, too long if you ask me. After what happened last night I’m still shocked. I don’t know why I did that. She was lying on the floor with me on top of her. She just looked so sexy, I couldn’t resist. She is so beautiful. She has a perfect, sweet voice, but I don’t know why I just hate her…
Great! Now the right side of my body hurts. That is what I get for sleeping on that side the whole night. And I couldn’t really sleep. I slowly got up, trying not to wake her up, but failed. WHAT?!?! It was just a whisper, but I swear I heard her say “Minami”. Maybe I am day dreaming again.
“Get up. We have work to do…”
“Mmmmmmm..” she says as she yawns.
Oh My god. So beautiful. She looks like a angel. I want to kiss her again. WHAT?!? Takahashi Minami. What the hell are you thinking?! I hate her for making me fell like this..
:Get up, damn it!” I said yelling at her.
“Don’t yell at me, I’m awake idiot.”
“I’m not an idiot, idiot. I’m gonna take a bath..”
“Fine… Like I care.”
I walked out of the room and took a bath. I put on my clothes and make up and prepared to live this house as fast as I can. I got out from the bathroom and didn’t see her downstairs. Don’t tell me she is still sleeping. She is going to be late for rehearsal.
I opened the door and saw her lying on the bed with her eyes closed. I think she is sleeping. I have to wake her so I lightly pushed her and I was stunned as she wrapped her arms around my neck pulling me closer.
“Oi, wake up. Do you hear me..”
Now our faces are inches away… “Wake up, idiot!” She opened her eyes and stared right into mine. She pushed me away, hard. I fell on the ground.
“Idiot, what are you doing. You tried to kiss me again, didn’t you?
“No, you pulled me closer to you and tried to kiss me.”
“I’m sorry… I was half – sleeping.” She said as she walked out of the room.
Why did she try to kiss me. Is she messing around. Last night after we kissed she slapped me and now she is trying to kiss me. What is wrong with her? Is she messing with me. I really hate her. She is an awful person. I can’t forgive her.
Atsuko’s POV
What the hell am I doing? Thank God I woke up. If I didn’t what would’ve happen. Would’ve she kissed me if I didn’t wake up. But her face was so close and she looked really cute. What am I thinking? I have to prepare for rehearsal or I’ll be late.
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At the studio
“Hey, Takamina. What’s up?” asked Miichan as she approached me.
“Hey, Miichan. I’m fine..”
“Well, you don’t look fine. Your eyes are red. What did you two did last night?” she said teasing me.
“Nothing! I just couldn’t sleep well on only one side!”
“Heee. If you say so.”
We started rehearsal and every time I look at her she lookes away. She always does, but this time is different. I don’t know why, it just is…. We dance and then a guy with water came and bummed into Maeda. Now she is all wet. I went to her with a towel. She is all wet and her T – shirt is wet. Now I can see her bra. She saw me looking at her breasts and looked away blushing. Why the heck is she blushing.
“What are you looking at?”
“O, I’m sorry. I didn’t intend to see..” I said looking away from her.
“Thank you.”
“For what.”
“The towel, idiot.”
“Don’t call me an idiot and you are welcome” I said as I smile. But this time was not a forced smile it was a smle from the heart.
“Watch out. Go change or you will catch a cold.”
“Yeah, you are right..”
Atsuko’s POV
I went to the dressing room to change my clothes. She is really kind and mature. I have to thank her properly later when we get home. I’ll cook a dinner for her.
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Takamina’s POV
I went home before her. I took a bath, changed into my pajamas and sat on the couch to watch TV. It wasn’t long before she got home.
“Hey” I said not looking at her.
“Hey. Are you hungry?”
“Yeah. But we don’t have nothing to eat. I’ll go to the store to get us something. What do you want?”
“No. No need to. I’ll cook dinner.” She said as she walked in the kitchen.
“Fine. What are we going to eat?” I said sounding excited.
She looked at me and smiled brightly with her beautiful smile and said:
“Your favorite.” And meanwhile blushing.
“And, do you know what my favorite is?”
“Yeah, Katsudon, right?”
“Yeah” I said as I smiled.
I sat on the couch again and waited for her to get the dinner ready.
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“It’s ready.” She said while putting it on the table.
“Ahhh, I’m starving”
“Well hope you like it.”
“It’s delicious. But why are you doing this. Is it for me?”
“I’m happy you like it. I wanted to thank you for earlier and apologize.”
“Well, you are welcome but why are you apologizing?”
“I’m sorry for saying I hated you. I was just angry. I don’t hate you.”
“It’s ok. I’m sorry for saying I hated you too.”
“Do you think we can be friends?”
“Yeah, of course. As long as we both want to.”
“I’m happy.” She said blushing cutely.
TBC
hope you like it. :) And sorry for my bad english. :D
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yay there fianlly friends heheh i wonder when they will be a couple
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:heart: Lovely.... :yep:
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You Update! But, If they already become friends, Then doesn't it look like that this fic is gonna end soon? LOL. Btw, Great one! :thumbup
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yeah, i like that they gonna be friends.. but we need more troubles :D jelousy and.. that kinds of things :D drama more drama :D
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH~ <3 It's been a long time since I read fan fic again ..I'm glad I read your fan fic!~ :mon squee:
They're so cute~ <3 :mon mischief:
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Oh~ They are now friends~ ^^
Sweet~
Wonder when they will start to step in a relationship that is more than a friend~~ XD
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Wo! Cute fanfic! I can't imagine Atsuko and Minami hating each other,but it's pretty interesting!
Continue it soon please
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Good fan fiction.. But i still need need the continue !! is Takamina and Acchan will be friend..or be enemy again..? Is still mistery :D
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Hehehe slowly slowly they started to like each other ^^
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If you can't take AtsuMina apart. Do NOT read it!!!
Chapter Three
Atsuko’s POV
She said we can we friends, but does she really think that, does she really want that. I think she hates me more than I hate her. No, I don’t hate her any more. But it’s still awkward between us because of the things that happened the past days. Yesterday I almost kiss her and the other day she kissed me and I responded the kiss. And almost did it. I’m sure I don’t like her that way. There is something wrong with me. But the big question is can we be friends?
I’m cooking dinner tonight. I’m like the wife and she is the husband. We are just like a couple. What am I saying? Well anyway, we are going to eat omlet tonight. I hope she likes it. I don’t why but every time I cook I get so nervous. Because I know that she is going to eat it and I hope she likes it. I don’t know why I really hope that she likes everything that I cook. Like said something is wrong with me. I am like a girl that is in love. And I’m cooking for my boyfriend. Ah, if only I could get a boyfriend and get rid of this feeling! Suddenly I stopped thinking and felt someone behind me. I turned around and saw her. She was standing right behind me. And now she is in front of me. Our bodies only inches away. I looked in her eyes, so captivating. She looked down..
“What are you cooking tonight?” she asked curiously.
“Ah.. Omelette.” I said as I turned around avoiding her eyes.
“What is wrong?”
“Ah, nothing..”
"Come on, you can tell me."
“I told you it’s nothing!” I said raising my voice.
“Fine, don’t yell at me. I was just trying to be polite. “
“I’m sorry.”
“Everything I say you turn into a fight. You really do hate me, huh?”
“No…. I don’t think I hate you…”
“You don’t think… So you don’t know.. Just forget it. Is it ready? I’m hungry…”
“Go change your clothes and come down. It will be ready by then.”
“Ok..” she said annoyed.
I can’t believe I just yelled at her. Why did I do it. She was just asking me politely and I just yelled at her. I’m an awful person. I want to rip my head of and just bleed to death right here. And now I really start to think that we can’t be friends.
We ate the dinner in full silence. Non of us said a word. I started to clean the dishes and she suddenly …
“I will sleep on the couch from now on.”
“Why. You don’t have to. If you are so against sleeping on one bed with me I’ll sleep on the couch.”
“No, you can’t. You are the ace. I can’t let you sleep on the couch.”
“Well, you are the leader. I can’t let you sleep on the couch either.”
“Please, I’m begging you. Don’t turn this into a fight. Let me sleep on the couch.” She said half – crying.
The moment I saw her crying face I knew there was something behind them. I feel awful. She really does want us to be friends. What the hell am I doing?
“Okay. But let me give you a massage in the morning.”
“Okay” she said smiling.
A month past and now we are best friends. I can’t believe it. We were like the biggest enemies. We hated each other. Now I feel like I can tell her everything. But THAT feeling is growing bigger and I still don’t know what that is.
“Ne, Minami..”
“Hm, what is it Acchan?”
“Let’s invite some of the members over for dinner tonight.”
“Okay, that would be great. Let’s show them what great friends we are. “ she said smiling brightly.
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“Minami, could you open the door?”
“Yeah.”
“Ah, Takamina. What’s up, midget?”
“Hi, Miichan, KojiHaru, Yuko, Tomochin.”
“Ah great apartment. It’s nicer than mine. I envy you guys.”
“What are you saying, Tomochin?” I said as I pushed her lightly as she blushed.
“Hey, everyone, dinner is ready.”
“Ah, Accha. You are the wife and Takamina is the husband, huh?”
“Ah, Miichan, don’t tease us.” Acchan said blushing cutely.
After we ate everything and nothing was left something happened. At the beginning I didn’t know that this would’ve changed my life.
“Hey, let’s play spin the bottle.” Miichan said smirking.
“What is this game.” I asked.
“You haven’t played?” asked Tomochin, surprised.
“Un..”
“Well, this is going to be interesting..” said Yuko teasingly.
“Okay, here are the rules. If I spin the bottle I have to kiss the person that the bottle points to.”
“WHAT?!” Me at Takamina said in one voice.
“Why are you so nervous? It’s not like you are dating, righ?”
“No!” in one voice again.
“Okay lets spin it. Oh, Yuko.” Said Miichan as she leaned down and kissed her. They kissed, oh my God. It’s a real kiss between girl. Ah, now I’m excited.
“Tomochin, it’s your turn.” She spins the bottle an I’m shocked t see the person that she has to kiss. It’s, Minami. I don’t want to see this scene. I can see, Minami is nervous. She has already kissed a girl in Mendol. I don’t know, but for some reason she always ends up kissing girls. Then Tomochin smiles and leans down and seals, Minami’s lips. My heart hurts. But this kiss is different. It’s a real kiss. Minami wraps her arms around her neck and Tomochin tilts her head to the right and opens her mouth and her tongues ask for permission. I can’t believe it, Minami grants that permission and their kiss is becoming hotter until the atmosphere got weird…”
“Oi, oi. Don’t get all axcited. It’s only a game, so… “said Miichan.
Both of them parted and blushed like crazy. They looked at each other and smiled.
“Acchan, it’s your turn.” I spin the bottle and it stopped in fron of Minami. I smile. I’m so happy I get to kiss her. Will she kiss me like she did to Tomochin. I hope she does….. I lean down and press our lips together. We both closed our eyes. But that was it. We parted and she looked at Tomochin and asked her…
“Can we talk in my room?”
“Un..” said Tomochin cutely.
The both got up and went into the room. I want to know what is going to happen, so I followed them without anyone noticing.
Both of them are just standing in the middle of the room, staring at each other…
“Tomochin, why did you kiss me that way?”
“Because, I…….” she couldn’t finish, because, Minami sealed her lip, but it was a short kiss.
“I like you, Tomochin.”
“I like you too, Takamina.” She said as she leaned down to kiss her. This time with passion. A tear rolls down my cheek, but suddenly someone pushed me against the wall and kissed me with passion. She sliped her tongue, meeting mine. But I pulled away….
“I love you, Acchan..”
“Go out with me.”
TBC
GOD, I HATE THIS STORY!. I want to finish it quickly. Hope you like it. I'll update as soon as possible and sorry for my bad english. :banghead:
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OMG! Not TakaTomo again. When I thought everything is fixed, THIS appear again. :doh: Why must it be a Love Polygons again? Ugh... I'm just gettin' sick of it. Especially when Acchan is the one who hurt. I can't stand it. But, I can't blame Takamina nor Tomochin, cause' Acchan and Takamina weren't an Official Couple yet. They haven't confessed to each other. So, Maybe It's alright. Also, I wonder who kissed Acchan, all of sudden.
[It's not like I hate Drama. I like it. Jealousy, Misunderstanding, That's something that makes fics a bit fun to read. I'm sure whoever who read a fics with Drama, will never missed an update, Because they want to know what will happen next. ;) So, It's sorta good to add some Drama. LOL]
- Some Grammar Correction: Midjet = Midget and Omlet = Omelette.
Okay, I'm sorry if the Grammar correction is a bit rough. But, Just want to correct it. I don't mean anything bad, eh.
But, If that's how you said it usually, Then I won't interfere. ;)
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This is going to be a short fic. And TakaTomo won't last. They will be together like always. And this is probably going to be my last AtsuMina fic.... Well, my last AtsuMina work. The end is very close. My idea was just too long for a one-shot... :)
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OMG! Taka and Tomo confessed to one another!!!
The kissing was really hot!! >//<
But poor Acchan.. QAQ She is really heartbroken now..
I wonder who is the one who kissed Acchan and confessed to Acchan??
Either Miichan or Yuko..
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Nooooooooo!!!! :cry: :cry:
fix it immediately!!! :angry:
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as much as i ship atsumina i have to say i ship takatomo so im okay in how the fic ends either way and i sort of think i know who kissed atsuko mabye miichan??
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I like it but...you're not going to write Atsumina anymore :(?
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aww your last atsumina fic.. well.. :D its ok.. just mke a great final episode.. :D
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//faceplam takatomo noooooooo.... :doh:
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no!!!! :banghead: :banghead:
i want atsumina!!!! :inlove: :inlove:
ithink its miichan kiss acchan..plss update soon.. :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Whoah! I never saw that coming! OMG I'm so heart broken! :mon cry:
heart broken at Acchan who see that kiss scene.. FUUU! TAKAMINA what are you doing tomo is not for you!! TURN AROUND!!!
There is Acchan FOR YOU!!! Dammit!! :mon slapself:
anyways.. I wonder who's that person who confessed to her.. hmmm.. I wish they could help so that TakaMina will realize her true feelings towards Acchan!!
I hope to see updates from this fic! PLease update!!! :heart:
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What happen after that?? :o OMG!! :frustrated:
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whoah it's been a while.. i hope you'll update this fic too :pleeease:
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T_T Atsumina!!!!!
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atsuko only belongs to minami.... :(
Please Update... :thumbup
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I hope you'll update this soon :thumbup
really curious what'll happen next after this XD
and the others are right you gotta bring Atsumina back :smhid
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Chapter Four
“I love you, Acchan..”
“Go out with me.”
This kiss took me by surprise but not as much as the confession.
I can’t believe the person kissing me is her. My best friend.
What do you do when your best friend kisses you?
I was so surprised at first and I just froze. No words were coming out of my mouth. We just stood there looking at each other.
I saw tears in her eyes. She was serious. But I know what I have to do.
As much as I don’t want to hurt I can’t respond to her feelings either.
“I’m sorry, but I’m in love with someone else. I’m sorry….. Miichan.”
I feel awful. I know I’m hurting her. But I don’t love her.
“It’s okay. I know you love, Takamina. And what I did know is unforgivable. I’m sorry, Acchan.”
We both cried for a couple of minutes. We were both hurt. Both of us had someone they loved. And both of our loves are one – sided.
After we cried, we heard the door open. I saw them looking all happy. She is happy. I wiped away my tears stood up and all I could do us congratulate them.
I can’t ruin their happiness. I’m going to wait. I’m going to wait for her. Years if I have to, because I love her..
Three mouth later….
It’s been three years since they started dating each other. I watched how happy they were all the time. Sometimes Tomochin would come to visit us.
She had dinner with us.
Everytime I looked at them, I smiled. It was a fake smile, but I had to smile. Because if I didn’t I felt like I was going to cry.
One month left. After this month is over they are going to live together. My heart hurts. I feel dizzy.
The day is over. It was a strange day. Tomochin and Takamina didn’t really speak to each other. They were avoiding each other.
The night is here. I’m home alone. They are together right now, aren’t they? Tears rolling down my cheeks. I sit on the couch hugging my legs and crying alone.
Suddenly I heard the door opening. I lift my head and I see her….. crying…
“Minami, what’s wrong?”
“She……. She….” She starts sobbing.
I hug her, hug her tight. I don’t want to let her go. My heart hurts seeing her like this.
“Tell me what happened?”
“She broke up with me……” She said between sobs. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing.
“Why?” I know I shouldn’t ask, but I want to know why did she hurt the person that I love so much.
“She said that she loved someone else….”
I release the hug and looked her in the eyes. “I’m sorry”. I slowly reached up and cupped her cheek. Without realizing it I was kissing her.
She pushed me away…
“What are you doing, Atsuko?”
“I’m sorry. I want you to know something. If it was me, I would never hurt you like this.”
Finally I told her my feelings. I know she is going to reject me, but I can’t see her like this.
“There is one other reason that we broke up.”
I looked down at the ground and just listened to her. I was afraid to look up.
“I couldn’t forget the kisses we shared. I couldn’t forget about you!”
I was shocked. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. She is responding my feelings.
“I love you, Minami. I love you so much.” I said sobbing.
She stroked my hair and lifted my chin.. “I love you, too. With all my heart.”
I slowly leaned down. I pressed my lips against her soft lips. It was a short full of love kiss. I wrapped my arms around her neck pulling her closer deepening the kiss. I suck her lower lip while she sucked my upper lip. Out tongues met, battling inside our mouths. She pushed me back slowly until we fell on the couch, without breaking the kiss. No need for air. We breathed in each other’s mouths. Her hands went in my shirt. I shivered when I felt her hands on my body. She started kissing my neck. Biting it, licking it. I let out moan after moan. Finally I’m with the person I love.
She started making butterfly kisses on my collar bone. Her hand went up until she reached my breast, slowly cupping it as her other free hand went down between my thighs slowly rubbing the tip of my clit.
My hands took of her shirt as we returned to kiss with full passion.
Tongues battling, hands traveling, legs twisted around each other.
We took all of our clothes. Both of us blushing as we saw each other beautiful bodies that became one.
The morning came. There was only a blanket covering our naked bodies. I opened my eyes and saw a pair of eyes looking at me.
She slowly cupped my cheek and smiled.
“I love you.”
“I love you too."
Then we shared a kiss and ended up doing what we did last night.
END
Finally!!!!!!! I hate this sory, but I love the ending. :D
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:wriggly: this fic was AWESOME!
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YAY! Awesome ending!!!
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I'm glad they're back! XD
Awesome ending!! :twothumbs
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why did I saw this update just now? augh.. what am I doing...
okay back to your story... hnnnnnggggggggggggggg
I love the ending! Finally ATSUMINA!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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woooooo!!!! AWESOME!!! :mon determined:
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Love it :heart:
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I love this fic...
Great story there....
Thank you for the fic...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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i like acchan called takamina "minami"
sounds cute :inlove:
please make more hehe XD
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すごい！（≧∇≦）love the ending!
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Great Fic!
I love it! :heart:
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A great fanfic. Nice one author san.