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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Flean on July 31, 2011, 03:50:11 AM

Title: ♥ The Random Song Fics
Post by: Flean on July 31, 2011, 03:50:11 AM
Feel free to share your own songfic in here~  :whistle:

Index :


##### AtsuMina Pairing #####

by anoni2


by arisa03


by sorakamiya




by creamcracker


by Rukaeru




##### KojiYuu Pairing #####

by AAAice



by arisa03




##### Random/Mixed Pairing #####

by AAAice


by AFLynx


Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: anoni2 on July 31, 2011, 04:13:48 AM
muahahah me first!!!

this is going great !!! I'll post mine later XD!!!

argh Takamina being held 1 more year in the same class.

Stay!!!!

tbc  :banghead:
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: Fiftyen3 on July 31, 2011, 04:16:55 AM
I really like this!
I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! ^-^
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: kaizoku_gal on July 31, 2011, 04:40:50 AM
Evil sensei.  :smhid

The guy... Acchan's boyfriend?
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: Nyanoha on July 31, 2011, 05:36:28 AM
TBC  :banghead:

Update soon...I want to see good Acchan and Takamina moments!  :on asmo:
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: blughise on July 31, 2011, 03:17:42 PM
takamina XD
I really love atsumina moments
Damn that stupid guys, interrupting them! :angry:
Who is he?Is he Acchan's 'boyfriend'?
I wanna know more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPdate soon
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics
Post by: AAAice on July 31, 2011, 03:32:46 PM
Waaaaa how come I cried?!  :cry:

Acchan's... boyfrined.  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: Y U RUIN THE MOMENT BSTRD?!?! GO AWAY!!!

Hehe, you got me on her daydream.  :banghead:
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: anoni2 on July 31, 2011, 07:06:20 PM
full blast!! awesome

yeah yeah!! she stopped the wedding I mean they run away!!

 :rofl:

great job daddie  :lol:
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: blughise on July 31, 2011, 07:21:22 PM
Acchan and Takamina are going to elope :grin:
is this the end or are you still going to write more?
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: AAAice on July 31, 2011, 07:55:03 PM
YOU MADE ME CRY!!!  :cry: :banghead:

MY HEART... SHATTERED.

BUT I'M HAPPY NOW ON THE LAST SCENE.  :heart:
Title: Re: The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: Nyanoha on July 31, 2011, 08:09:35 PM
Leave him in the dust, yosh!  :hiakhiakhiak:

Takamina, I know you don't have a plan..but hotels always work  :inlove:

I loved the last scene  :heart:

Will there be another part? :3

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: anoni2 on August 01, 2011, 01:16:19 AM
osu nonichan here!  this one is kinda short sorry   :sweat:

Between Fear and Love


Fearing to fall in love
I do not want to get hurt no more.

It's been 4 years since the last time I saw her.

She left me after our graduation day.She didnt even let me know the reasons why she left.

We made a promise never to part but with just two words she broke my heart.

"I'm sorry"

The previous failure
I want to forget.

Since then I only focused on studying.I have finished my studies with flying colors and right now I'm running my own company.

I enjoyed my solitude.

Many had tried to win my cold heart but in vain.

I couldn't or let's just say my heart didn't let them.

Your memories are enough
I won't love no more.

Or so I thought.

It was a sunday morning,the sky was clear and refreshing wind blew.i was walking near the park when you appeared in front of me.

Smiling.

We looked at each other,eyes meeting.Then I heard your voice for the first time in 4 years.The voice I've been longing to hear.

"Ne,Minami...Am I too late?"

I couldn't bring myself to answer back.My heart was going crazy inside my ribcage.

But they say actions talks more than words.

I kissed you on the lips leaving you breathless.

Then I knew,my heart only belongs to you.

I love you Acchan.

-----------

i can't find the song  :kneelbow:

I only put the lyrics I heard eheheh
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Can't Get Next To You] - Part 2
Post by: AAAice on August 01, 2011, 01:26:32 AM
Short yet it is sweet/heartwarming.

God 4 years too long. :/

Acchan's 'I'm sorry' broke my heart too. How could she?! :[[

Need a continuation of this. :]
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Between Fear and Love]
Post by: cmze on August 01, 2011, 02:58:23 AM
SO SWEET....! :heart:

it Nice to see something new...! :cow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Between Fear and Love]
Post by: blughise on August 01, 2011, 12:35:34 PM
sweet.....Takamina must really love Acchan to even wait for her for 4 damn long years :)
Write more please! XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: AAAice on August 01, 2011, 01:04:47 PM
A's Note: I suggest to click the link given so you'll know the meaning of the story while playing it in the background. :]


Secrets 
 Click To Listen  (http://youtu.be/O_Zwqc_XeZg)
--

I permanently pasted my eyes on the girl across me; laughing with the other members, her dimples are deepening on her cheeks, a petite body that fit perfectly into my tall body, those hands that roams around my body as she declare it as ‘Skinship’, the face that present me silly faces no one can ever compete, those eyes that always melt my heart and my whole-self in to so much affection that I am receiving, her mouth, those mouth that declare all her love to me. All the love of Yuko Oshima. All about Yuko Oshima. My Perverted Squirrel. My Everything.

Haruna Kojima’s life.

Here is my story. Another story that something to get off my chest. A secret that wanting to be release.

I looked at the calendar on my phone. December 8, 2014.

9 years now huh? Nine years of keeping my secret from Yuko, from them, from everyone and my own secret that I kept on hiding behind those flashy camera, to the intrigued members, all the waiting fans of the Kojiyuu. The funny thing is that our Kojiyuu fans had dropped last year as they lost their hope that nothing will happen to Yuko’s one-sided love. They can drift away whenever they want. To me, in my heart Kojiyuu is still alive… even if Yuko is slowly losing her interest on our pairing.

My secret… I Love Yuko Oshima.

That secret is something I can’t confess to Yuko.

My reasons are so weak enough why I can’t.

“Haruna!” Yuko called my name out while gesturing me to join them. It hurts my heart that she stopped calling me Nyan Nyan. Her tone isn’t the same tender I keep hearing. The tone is now a friendly like.

“What is it Yuko?” I asked yet I know why she called me. I’ve been sitting alone on the couch from the last 20 minutes without interacting to some graduated members of AKB48. I snaked my arms around her but she quickly moved away.

Broken. Hurt.

“Hmm, Sae-chan wanted to update her blog and her topic is to tell a little something to the fans about the past pairings of AKB. Therefore, she wanted to take us two a picture for Kojiyuu’s sake.” Second, her tone is not giving an excitement. The Yuko I know would take this opportunity to get so touchy to me yet it’s different now.

Past. We are now past huh?

“Ne~ Harunyan please.” Sae pleaded, batting her lashes to vision my self to her cuteness so I’ll approve on her request. I nodded.

“Yosh. Kojiyuu do your lovey-dovey.”

As to being known as the Perverted Squirrel, Yuko clinged herself in front of me and snuggle her head on to my neck. Of course, I have to pretend again. Pretend that I am still the Tsundere Haruna. How I much want to hug back and kiss Yuko but I can’t. We are here in front of the camera again. Acting our fake Kojiyuu moment.

I heard Sae told us that she already captured a perfect shot for Kojiyuu and will now head to the Atsumina pair. I stood there… waiting for Yuko to set her feet back on the floor but that wait is false. She looked at me straight in the eyes. Eyes that cured my broken feeling. Eyes of the real Oshima Yuko.

“Hi Nyan Nyan.” She softly said.

Inside me, I sobbed real hard. Yuko is breaking me into pieces. I want to confess to her right now. Tell Yuko how much I love her. How my heart only beats for her. How I want to scream to the world of my love.

Distancing my face close to her, she gave me a smile and separated her body to mine, leaving me in to the darkness abyss all by myself again.

“Yuko.” I called out when she was about to approach Sayaka. I’ve planned something for you. For us.

“Yeah?” She then walked her way towards me. I caressed her cheeks for a moment before saying something.

“Can you come with me?” I asked. Hoping to the fullest she’ll accept.

“For my Nyan Nyan, I’ll go anywhere only for her.”

--

“Remember this place?” I asked when we finally arrived at the place.

The place where Yuko took me on our very first date. Her date. One-sided date. I was still playing the cold-hearted Kojima Haruna that time so it didn’t give her a happy memory to keep. To me, it was the most happiest memory I had ever experienced.

Yuko’s secret revealed in front of Kojima Haruna.

A serious declaration of love. Sweet perfect line. Passionate one-sided kiss. A hug that protected me forever. Heart vowed to beat only for me. Her own self. Oshima Yuko.

“First date… with you.” Yuko shed a tear as it stream down her cheek as if remembering the same flashback. “The same day you rejected me.”

The same day you rejected me.

I’m sorry, I broke your heart that day.

Hey, Yuko, you know I wanted to confess my love to you on our first date. To tell you how much I want you to repeat your confession of love to me. To ask you why I am the person you love and what did I done to have someone so precious like you in my side. How so happy I am on your ‘I love you Haruna Kojima.’ However, my insincere tsundere side are blocking my way. The consequences in the future that our relationship will fade and disappear. The critics we’ll receive from our family and to the public. I was scared. A weakling. I chose what my mind was telling me instead of my heart. My heart for you, Yuko.

This pretending not to love you is making my life gets boring. It’s killing me that I died Nine years ago. I’m in a brink of broken heart.

Yuko… I’m ready to confess the truth.

“It’s now our ninth year of knowing each other. For me, I call it our ninth year anniversary. Yuko I’m tired of all my insincere. In all those nine years, I’m going to give all my secrets to you...” I was crying so hard now which I stopped midsentence.

“I gave up… Eight years of loving someone that the girl I love doesn’t love me back. My hope, faith and strength are tired of waiting. Gone.”

I fell down on my knees. My ears deafen on her hurt and painful words. I heard my heart shattered into pieces, not caring the loud noise it made. Next thing I want to happen is to die from this heartache. I’m here again in the lone world of unknown.

How stupid of me not to notice that! I placed her into a queue of nothingness, waiting for nothing, waiting for the stupid girl who let her fear block her way. I let her wait for me for all those years. How stupid of me. How stupid.

“What do you want from my mouth that your heart and ear loves to hear?” I grasped on her hand after I stand myself in front of her. Not caring if my eyes are stained with redness.

“I LOVE YOU! I AM DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH YUKO OSHIMA! I WILL GIVE MY LIFE JUST TO BE WITH YOU! DON’T YOU KNOW HOW AMAZING IT IS THAT WE GOT THIS FAR? I ALWAYS THANK GOD THAT YOU AND I MET. OSHIMA YUKO, I LOVE YOU.”

“My secret is that I love you.”

“I love you Yuko Oshima.”

I finally gave my secret away.

Haruna Kojima’s secret finally escaped inside her.

Haruna Kojima’s secret is now over.


A's Note: So how was it? I actually picked the song to fit Haruna and her situation.

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: anoni2 on August 01, 2011, 01:18:39 PM
im lost at my words   :mon waterworks:

it's so sad   :gmon tears:

what happened next o.o
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: AFLynx on August 01, 2011, 01:22:18 PM
AAAice! You just made me cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy  :on speedy: Good job!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: blughise on August 01, 2011, 02:00:06 PM
The story, the song, its so sad!!!!  :mon runcry:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write more please
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: goddamnlian on August 01, 2011, 02:56:59 PM
Dude AA! You let a guy cry!  :fainted: I agree your story and song fit well. Secret && regret for my oshimen. She is thick for keeping her love for nine years && acting her false role in front of Yuko & to everyone! now it's all too late.

atsumina pair are amazing too.

this thread is interesting btw.

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: kaizoku_gal on August 01, 2011, 03:26:21 PM
Sad kojiyuu  :mon waterworks:
The Atsumina works were quite good too!

I wonder if I should contribute to this thread as well...  :mon dunno: But I can hardly update mine. :mon sweat: LOL How'd you guys write so fast???  :mon huh:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: arisa03 on August 03, 2011, 04:07:04 AM
Noooo Yuko. ;_______; That is so sad. ;_____; The rest of the fics are awesome too! And now I have so many jumbled memories I can't comment to all of them. ;___; I might write a songfic too! (it's my first time though) ;___; I hope you guys won't mind xDDDDDDDDD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: Nyanoha on August 03, 2011, 05:02:20 AM
asfdsgfasdgf  :on cloudeye:

That was simply amazing, my emotions are going haywire  :farofflook:

I think there should be a part two ;___; I want to know what Yuko does.

Also, I love the song  :heart:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: kahem on August 03, 2011, 06:33:21 AM
T_T sad and emo but it touched me
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: anoni2 on August 04, 2011, 03:05:16 PM
isk isk  :fainted:

nooo not graduate   :cry:

the song is so nice  :cry: and the lyrics :farofflook:

waiting for the next part  while crying  :on cloudeye:

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: blughise on August 04, 2011, 03:10:51 PM
OHH MY GOD!!! It's making me cry :cry:
NOO ACCHAN DON'T LEAVE!!! DON'T LEAVE TAKAMINA!!!!
I DON'T WANT MY ATSUMINA APART!!! I CAN"T TAKE IT!!!! I WILL NOT APPROVE OF IT!!!!
I'm looking forward to tomorrow's next update  XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: AAAice on August 04, 2011, 03:13:21 PM
Oh fck. My heart stopped for awhile at the last sentence. I'm crying right now.  :bleed eyes:  :(

Ahhh, Aki-P should stop this Senbatsu thingy. It hurts me. I mean it can break the confidence of the members ya know. Though, Acchan is a like on my list but still... GOD, I HATE GRADUATION OF A CERTAIN MEMBER. ONE OF MY FEARS.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: moekare on August 04, 2011, 03:44:42 PM
ugh Acchan grad  :banghead:

That 7gatsu 9ka song is just  :farofflook:
it is a graduation actually right?

Ugh, I am crying  :on speedy:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Secrets]
Post by: kahem on August 04, 2011, 04:18:01 PM
No!!!! Don't leave Acchan!!!
Aki-p order her to stay!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I’m Sorry] - Part 1
Post by: bou-j525 on August 04, 2011, 11:25:25 PM
 :shocked Acchan... why  :banghead: You can't leave them  :shocked
I don't want a graduation fic   :panic: XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I’m Sorry] - Part 1
Post by: Nyanoha on August 05, 2011, 03:52:51 AM
I...I....ACCHAAAAAAAN  :pleeease:

I'm going....to be in a corner now, till the next update ;___;

Update soon Riri-chan, I need to know what happens  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I’m Sorry] - Part 2
Post by: Nyanoha on August 05, 2011, 07:40:03 AM
Tears of joy!!!  :gyaaah:

Omg, ;___; happy ending was happy! Oh Acchan, your Minami will always be there for you! *hugs Riri-chan* You're the best when it comes to making me cry to making me so happy that I'm nya'ing in each sentence.

The song really went with it too, oh Nana and AKB combo  :heart:

I shall be awaiting anything else from you, more hearts for you!  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:

Btw, First comment~  XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I’m Sorry] - Part 2
Post by: khryz0421 on August 05, 2011, 08:06:44 AM
whuhuhua!   :gmon tears: :gmon tears: :gmon sweet: (tears of joy) i'm happy for them.  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:

nice story!   :on GJ: :on GJ: you make us cry!  :on GJ:

btw all stories here were great!  :on GJ: :on GJ:  please write more!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I’m Sorry] - Part 2
Post by: sorakamiya on August 05, 2011, 09:32:56 AM
whooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ alll have a goooood fanfict song~  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

i like it  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

and anyway, i try to make one too.... but i dont know it is right or not, since i never know how to write a song fict  :on freeze: :on freeze:

please forgive me~  :mon cry: :mon cry:

==============================================================================


here is the song : Rikki - Suteki Da Ne (Final Fantasy X) with translation. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hVLUunGB3g#)


Promise


I’ll be there for you….
Always….
Believe me…..[/b]

Its been 6 years since we met
Time pass really fast isn’t it
Each day, Each time that we spend together it will always keep secure in my memory

The wind, like a heart that swam in the accumulated words

I stand in front of the theater gate waiting for you
Night wind blow to my face

Cold…..

I close my eyes and feel the breeze

The clouds, a voice that was shot into the holding future
 
Then…..

“Minami…”

I hear your voice.
A voice that I always want to hear
A voice that resemble to an angel

“yoo, acchan….”

I wave my hand to you and you come approach me, give me your gentle smile

Then….

“gomen ne minami, I make you wait so long”

Your worry face, your gentle expression
How could I left you alone.

“it’s okay acchan.”

I smile at you and soon you grab my hand and hold it.

“Ne~ Let’s go now!!”

I nod and Let u guide me

The moon, a shaking heart in an unsteady mirror
The stars, gentle tears in an overflowing stream
Isn't it beautiful,
To walk together in each others hands

That night
Under the moon light
Holding a hand with you side by side
Make my heart beating so fast
There only silence

I lift up my face and look at the full moon

 Beautiful…

But you are more beautiful

Suddenly, hold your step and look at me with a serious confuse

“uhm… minami~”

I look at you and smile

“yeah? What is it acchan?”

You lower your head and speak stutter

“Wou…wou….would you like to stay over at me place?”

I give you my confuse look

“we…we…well, my parents isn’t at home now and I…. I…”

I do so want to go,
To your city, your house, into your arms

I hold your hand and smile

“Sure, I’ll accompany you.”

You lift up your face and give me your happy expression

“Hontou??”

“Hontou da yo~”

I said as wink to you

You smile and now we are heading to your house.
As we arrive, you guide me to your room.
You open the door and since the light still turn off it just shine with a moon light.
You let me come in and you sit at the edge of your bed.
Somehow your expression change and there is an awkward silence between us.

“Minami….”

I come closer and sit right beside you

Suddenly ,

“a…a…acchan…??”

You hug me tightly
I could feel the warm of your body

That heart,
held within your body
In those confusing nights
I dream
 

What this?
My heart beating so fast as you hug me
I feel I wanna be like this forever
Hug by you
In each other embrace

Is the feeling I feel towards you right?
 Are you feel the same?

I wonder…

Am I Dream?

You pull out from the hug and look at me.
All I could do just keep silence and waiting for you to speak

“Minami…… actually…… there is something I wanna to tell you.”

The wind, its halting words are a gentle illusion
The clouds, the broken future like a distant voice
The moon, a heart flowing in the clouded mirror
The stars, broken and swaying, like tears unable to be hidden

Still focusing to your eyes
I could look a pain

“acchan, whats wrong?” I asked her

“please don’t hate me after I said it.”

I frowned at what she has said. What’s wrong?

“acchan, what happen? Please tell me.”

She begin to cry and hug me

“I’m sorry minami, I’m sorry I love you.”

Did I heard right? You love me?

Since when?

“I couldn’t hide it anymore minami, I’m sorry. I love you.”

“acchan….”

“please don’t hate me, please don’t leave me.”

Am I dream? Is this right?

I slowly wrap my hand to your body and hug u tighly

“Acchan… I wont hate you and I wont leave you.”

You look up to me and finally you begin to stop crying

“really?”

“yeah, coz… I also feel the same.”

“minami…”

Isn't it beautiful,
To walk together in each others hands
I do so want to go,
To your city, your house, into your arms
 

I look at you and start to speak

“listen atsuko, I will always be with you.”

“I’ll always beside you”

“I wont leave you”

“I will always walk beside you, holding your hand, and protect you.”

“everywhere you go, I’ll be following you.”


Then words aren’t needed anymore
I go closer to you and feel the sweet of your lips
A gentle kiss
A symbol of my vow to you

That night you belongs to me


That face,
A soft touch,
Dissolving into morning,
I dream
 


Next day, I woke up and find you beside me
Your sleeping face is an angel
I bring my hand to your cheek
Feel the soft and the smooth of your skin
What happen last night I wont forget it
even if it a dream

I’ll always be beside you..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: anoni2 on August 05, 2011, 10:02:42 AM
 :luvluv1:  just sweet  :mon inluv:

see you did it ma daughter   :mon thumb:

the last part is  :mon XD:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: khryz0421 on August 05, 2011, 10:21:06 AM
good job sora-neechan!  :on GJ: :on GJ:  mom is proud of you. :monk gboy: :monk gboy:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: moekare on August 05, 2011, 11:03:31 AM
ow I love these stories  :wub:

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: blughise on August 05, 2011, 01:41:46 PM
This is a bit late...but Acchan finally decided that she won't graduate phew*
Takamina and everyone's support, love, and friendship for her, save Acchan from graduating!
It's really nice...it sort of made me cry :(
And best of all, its a happy ending!!!

The oneshot Atsumina is pretty nice and romantic too!!!
The song fits so well  XD
I'm looking forward to more of you FF
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: anoni2 on August 05, 2011, 02:15:05 PM
no graduate  :farofflook:

me so happy   :on gay:

hope to read more of ur song fics   :)
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: kahem on August 05, 2011, 03:47:37 PM
Yeah! Acchan won't grauate! And her mother accepted Takamina

@Sora: is so sweat!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: kaizoku_gal on August 06, 2011, 06:36:24 AM
OMG so many good songfics!  :farofflook: ME GUSTA  :ding:

Good job!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: TakahashiJ on August 06, 2011, 07:57:12 PM
“HEY! You guys made her cry again!” Takamina told them as she scowled at them. She raised her arms above her head in a rawr position and started growling at them. “I won’t forgive anyone who makes MY Acchan cry!”

I like it when takamina is being protective :P .
And when everyone went to her house ~ :)
The Ace ! Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Promise]
Post by: AAAice on August 07, 2011, 12:27:14 AM
Waaaaa, I'm drowning in full of raining hearts with all of these Takacchan scenes.  :inlove:

At Arisa's Song Shot. I'm happy you are not evil by making Acchan graduate. xD Shizzuz!!! My heart goes SUPER BASS!!! I cried when Takamina was getting all hysterical and Acchan saying hurtful words to herself andddd til the end. :[[[

At Sora-sora-soraaaaa's Song Shot. Takamina's wordssssss,  :wub: Confessions and promises. I lalalove it!

Daaaammmn, I was just too shizz lately and this what I got... LOTSA UPDATES!!! LOTSA TAKACCHAN TOO!!!

PERFECT PAIR IN AKB. (Of course my Kojiyuu is perfect too. xD)

-

Ne~ I'm too lazy to update my next Song Shot. Tsk, might be update tomorrow, might be not. But... since I'm hurt for some reason(LOL weird), I'll write tomorrow then and update. xDD Somehow, I feel lost cause the thread is full of Takacchan
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I'm Missing You]
Post by: blughise on August 07, 2011, 04:20:06 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!......... Please dont tell me that's the end!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I'm Missing You]
Post by: moekare on August 07, 2011, 07:20:15 AM
omg I love this story  :wub: :inlove:
Takamina, please come back!!  :banghead: :banghead: Acchan is waiting~  :cry:

please continue,.  :panic:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I'm Missing You]
Post by: kahem on August 07, 2011, 07:48:04 AM
They are so cute missing each other ^^
I think kinjirareta futari is a good song but maybe a bit sad
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I'm Missing You]
Post by: anoni2 on August 07, 2011, 10:47:49 AM
hehe daddy u really made it!!

 mommy happy  :nya:

for a few months D: that's way too long ahuhu  :err:

takacchan moments are just  :luvluv2:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: AAAice on August 08, 2011, 03:59:33 PM
I Miss You Like Crazy
 Click to Listen  (http://youtu.be/WnM2qP15koM)
--

A tall beautiful girl that has long hair who is clad in a red and white varsity jacket and a dark blue uniform underneath are staring in front of a grave while reminiscing again her shared warm memories with the former Rappappa President, Oshima Yuko. It’s been 4 months now. 4 months that the person she respect entirely in her life had went up to the eternal home. Her fourth time of wearing her Majijo uniform and her signature Queen red jacket every time she visits Yuko’s grave. Four months of asking ‘Why does it have to be you?’ in front of the grave that she knew it won’t answer her question. Four months of regretting one thing she haven’t said to the precious person she kept in her heart – ‘I love you Yuko.’ Torigoya’s whole four months of missing the love and presence of Oshima Yuko.

“When will I see you again? I can’t cope the heartbreak and pain you put me in to. Gee Yuko, I miss you. Torigoya miss you like crazy. You are the only love I ever had. Yuko… I love you.” Torigoya let out a hurt tear in her eye as it trickles down her face.

The prick of sign whispered in Torigoya’s ear as if she is hearing the voice she had been missing. A sign of… objection? It is the first time she found a sign coming from Yuko from all her visits in Yuko’s grave, yet Torigoya is not expecting to receive a sign of opposition from Yuko. To her low I.Q, Torigoya could not fathom what it meant by Yuko’s against sign. Did she said something wrong in her statement earlier? Torigoya knew her words being said are still the same and only added the ‘You are the only love I ever had.’

What does Oshima Yuko meant by her portent?

--

Walking in the dark underground passageway, the peripheral vision of Torigoya caught a glimpse of a person weeping. She turned her head towards the person and walked her way close and knelt down to place the upper body of the person in her arms. A faint lightning of the passageway is blocking Torigoya’s vision to scrutinize the person’s face properly. Torigoya knew the person in her arms is a girl wearing a blue and the poor damsel has a few blue and white highlights on her hair. A weak trembling hand caressed Torigoya’s face and mouthed a words that Torigoya did not catch what the girl is mouthing. Torigoya felt a sudden panic when the girl went unconscious, therefore Torigoya carried the girl through her apartment since it’s only near on where they are now.

After cleaning the blood, covering the wounds and bruises to the still unconscious girl, Torigoya is unstoppable to remove her eyes to the girl’s face as she is like the spitting image of her beloved Oshima Yuko. Though, there is something behind the girl’s face that Torigoya is positive she saw this person before yet it is a vague memory.

Curiosity is killing Torigoya inside. Without thinking, she transformed herself into her inner Torigoya. Though, her change is not vicious at all, only red highlights appeared in her hair and placed her hand on top of the girl’s head to hunt her fear and past.

The sorrowful reel began rolling.

[ A short young girl was fighting to struggle free from the grasped of two tall people who were also crying. To her small body and height, all she can do is to shout as her tears are shouting along with her. The person she love decided to leave her. Leave everything that had shared with all their joyful memories build inside their heart. Reasons, reasons, reasons are ringing in her ears from the person she love. The reasons that put her into damnation of lone.

“I PROMISE NOT TO FIGHT BACK!!! DON’T LEAVE ME NYAN NYAN!!! I AM GOING TO MISS YOU!!! I LOVE YOU NYAN NYAN!!! US TWO ARE FOREVER!!!”

The short girl cried in hysterics, she slumped on the ground as her heart is swallowing her whole. The precious person in her world is now drifting away. ]

Torigoya’s head are bursting due to the traumatizing vision she saw to the girl’s past. Her innerself are going insane and so is herself; shouting along to the girl. It seems the past is holding her hand tightly and not letting her go. The throbbing she is receiving are just that Maeda Atsuko did to her when she let Atsuko illusion her sorrow past.

Each shout of words are stabbing Torigoya’s heart.

[ The same girl is wandering around the streets until her feet dragged her in to this underground passageway and bumped into a schools girls that surely around her age. However, these girls in front of her shows a fierce expression but that did not stop the short girl to ask them on her real reason why she is here in this urban.

“Errr… pardon me, but do yo—“ She was trailed off when one of the girl approached her.

“Wah look at her outfit! Yow~ are you from a circus by any chance? Entertain us, we’re bored here.” The girl snickered and grabbed the helpless girl’s collar.

“Sorry but… I’m searching for Torigoya. Does her name ring a bell to you?” She asked, giving the girls a pleading look, earning a roar of laughter to the group of school girls. The girl gripped her collar and thug her forehead.

“Torigoya huh? Rappappa Queen.” She scoffed. “People are connected to Rappappa should die along to their club and President.” The girl nodded to her friends as if giving a special signal.

In blink of an eye. The damsel is now drowned in bruises and blood.

‘Sorry if I took long. I, too escaped from our village. Living my four years without your presence is making me crazy. I do not know what to do in every seconds when you are not around. When will I see you again, love?’

Weeping, attempting herself to stand up and gave up at the end. 20 minutes had passed she felt a warm arms wrapped around her. The girl open a one good eye and weakly looked up to her savior. A hundred smiles exploded to her wrecked face. She stroked her shaking hand to the girl and mouthed four words.

“I miss you Torigoya.” ]

Torigoya screamed in pain until she collapsed.

--

A feather-like touch in the cheeks awaken Torigoya. She adjusted her blurry vision into clear before pasting her eyes to the already smiling girl. That smile brought up an affectionate smile to Torigoya. Last night may be a pain to her, now it’s the opposite as her own past came back now. Her past she shared with to the girl in front of her. The girl whom she left four years ago. Leaving the girl as Torigoya had chosen the path to live in a modern city instead of living her whole life in a village. How could she had forgotten the girl? The girl she misses the moment she left her, her lover, her friend, her everything. Torigoya’s first love and first heart break. Perhaps, last love too?

“I miss you Yuzei.”


A's note: Yuzei? Now where did that Yuzei came from? LOL, saw the Koi no Onawa by Team Z? That's where I got Yuzei from. I made that name up because I don't know what to call Yuko on that one, so I mixed Yu and Z(Zei sound) then boom Yuzei existed! :]] And I got the idea from this picture PICTURE  (http://i56.tinypic.com/34jbo2a.jpg) (IGNORE RAPPAPPA YUKO IN THE PICTURE.). Random huh? xD And yeah, the song is so random too. I didn't take it seriously when I wrote this few days ago so it doesn't give much highlights or something you expect highly. :]]

LOOOL TOTAL FAIL. -.-
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I'm Missing You]
Post by: anoni2 on August 08, 2011, 04:06:44 PM
isk isk sad torigoya    :fainted:

but then she found Yuzei her first love   :shocked

gah the song is sweet and sad fits the fic  :ptam-cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Jealous]
Post by: AFLynx on August 12, 2011, 06:17:37 AM
   JEALOUS
==========
Author: AFLynx

I have a secret… I have kept it locked safely in my heart, throwing away the key. The moment I saw you I knew… no, I felt you are someone special.

Takahashi Minami.

I’ve been too afraid to tell you how I feel until I realized I am too late. You have fallen in love to one of our team members.

          "I have something to tell you. Since you're special to me, I want you to be the first to know."

          Everyone is special to you Takamina...

          "So, tell me about it."  I asked, shrugging the feeling of fear of what I'm gonna hear.

          "I've fallen in love... With her."
 
What did you see in her Takamina?

I’ve always wondered why not me? I should’ve been in your arms right now. But then again, she always had the upper hand. She has always been honest to her feelings towards you… I on the other hand have been too afraid of telling you how I feel.

I am jealous to the one who caught your eye.

          "They look so happy, so much in love."  I overheard Haruna looking at the two of you as we practice a choreography for our new music video. I see you laughing with her as she hugged you from behind.

          "They are a perfect match... Just like the two of us NyanNyan." I heard Yuko agree.

For me, she is the lucky one to have you Takamina.

I remember the Danso a few months back. You look cute fidgeting at the white cloth that you were tying on your head.

          "How do I look?" you shyly asked.

          "You'll do fine. Even without the wig, you could still pass as a boy Takamina. Lose that white cloth, you're already kawaii without it." I teased. As I look into your eyes, I saw a certain tinge of sadness.

          "Nevermind the cloth... I wish she's here to cheer me on..." you sighed. As you heard your phone ring, your eyes sparkled when you saw the caller ID. "Excuse me, I have to take this call. Please help me with my lines after I talk to her."

I knew from the way you spoke over the phone, you were talking to her. When you came back, you were hyped up in doing your best as we rehearsed your Danso dialogue.

While rehearsing, are you really looking at me... Or are you imagining that it's her that you're talking to?

When you answered the phone, did you whisper sweet nothings to her? I wish I was the one you were talking to.

Yes, I was so jealous that I feel vulnerable because of what I feel whenever I see you with her.

          “Do your best, okay?” I overheard you talking to her as you caress her hand, not minding all the people bustling about backstage during one of our concerts.

          “Hai, hai Takamina. You’ll watch my performance here in the backstage, won’t you?” she said, creeping her arms around your neck.

          “Of course I will… I love you… Call me a sappy one but I just want you to know.” You said. I wished those words to be directed to me.

          “You are my sappy one Takamina and I’m not complaining. I love you too.” She said, as you placed a gentle kiss on her lips.

Ugh, I hate getting flashbacks of things I don't want to remember.

All I could do is imagine what might have been if I am her...

*****

A lone teardrop made it's way down my cheek. I find it ironic that of all the members gathered around waiting for our cue for AKBingo, it's you who noticed me in my misery.

"Are you okay? You don't look so good.. Well, it doesn't seem that you have a fever." you asked, sitting beside me as you placed your palm over my forehead.

Just by that small sweet gesture, you made me blush. If you only knew how you affect me Takamina!

"I'm okay... I didn't have enough sleep that's all..." I lied. "Are you happy with her?" I boldly asked, pointing at her taking pictures with Miichan and Mariko.

You  smiled that dimpled smile that seemed reserved only for the one that you love. "Yes, she makes me happy. I am glad I make her happy too."

"If she doesn't make you happy, there are a lot of girls lining up for you. I'm sure I'll be one of those who will fight to be the first in line." I teased. To be honest, I know I will fight for it, and I will fight a good fight.

Laughing at you thought was a joke coming from me, you hugged me using one arm over my shoulder. "You don't have to worry, there are a lot of girls who are lining up for you. If things were different, I'll be the first in line too."

It seems automatic that I placed my head on your shoulder. I sighed as you gently squeezed my arm, savoring the moment that you are solely mine.

"Minami, let me take a picture of you with Miichan and Mariko!" she waved at us, pointing at the duo.

My moment with Takamina ended too soon...

"Okay, I'll be there in a second Atsuko." you yelled back, releasing your arm as you wave at them. Without a thought you hugged me then gave me a reassuring smile.

"Tomochin, I wish that you'll also find the love that I share with Atsuko. I know that you've been busy so always take care of yourself. If you need someone to talk to, you know I'm always here to listen." you said as you made your way to Acchan.

I know you're always there... And everytime, I feel jealous that I'm not the one who holds your heart.



Song: Jealous by Nina (http://youtu.be/xvs256MME-8)

Sorry if it's a short one  :mon sweat: this is one of my favorite songs ever and I thought I'll make a songfic.
I'll be getting my laptop on Monday, that's why I haven't updated Love in the Fast Lane (please don't kill me...  :mon cheek:) I'll try to post a new chapter as soon as I can.

Hope you'll like my songfic!  :mon bye:
 
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: kahem on August 12, 2011, 09:35:07 AM
Poor Tomochin T_T but I like Takacchan more lol
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: arisa03 on August 12, 2011, 10:48:41 AM
Awww. Tomochin =/ Don't worry, Tomo~mi is there to heal your heart. <3 She will chiyuu you to death. >_> That was nice AFlynx! <3 So sweet although sad. =/
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: blughise on August 12, 2011, 02:18:53 PM
I miss that song Jealous!!!.........SUch a  really nice song!

I thought at first it'll be Mochi but then, as I read I got the feeling that it was Tomochin

Tomochin...........Takamina isn't the  one for you, it's CHIYUUU!!!

Really nice fic
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: immortal_K on August 12, 2011, 06:09:50 PM
Wow this is a very good collection of song fics  :luvluv1:

It's a combination of getting to listen to some really nice songs that we all miss and reading lovely fanfics at the same time.

 :nya:

hmm how do you post a link to the song without having the vid show up for yt? The last time I tried the vid popped up too.  :depressed:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: anoni2 on August 13, 2011, 02:55:29 AM


I'll update mine soon !!  :bow:

yeah tomochin you should fall for tomomi-chan   :yep:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Miss You Like Crazy]
Post by: AFLynx on August 13, 2011, 01:39:29 PM
kahem: I'm a secret TakaTomo fan lol but it's AtsuMina/Takacchan forever for me!  XD
arisa03:  :mon hi: thanks for the comment! Yeah you're right, Tomo-mi is there for Tomochin... although I think Tomochin haven't figured it out yet in my songfic  :nervous
blughise: thanks blughise! yes it is really a nice song, I like the artist as well.  :) I'm glad to hear that somehow it gave an impression that it really was Tomochin who was narrating the story  :)
immortal_K: regarding your question about the link posting...
      1. click the icon below the italics icon (the one with the globe/paper)
      2. paste the link inside... so it will look like this [ url=*the link of the song*]put title of the song here[/ url] (without the spaces of course)
   I hope that helps!
anoni2: thanks for reading my songfic! Speaking of updates... I should be updating my fanfic anytime soon  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Jealous]
Post by: AAAice on August 13, 2011, 04:35:37 PM
As what the other people commented about Tomochin... Tomochin, Tomochiyuu is there for you, waiting to give you a chuuu~ xDD

Nahh, I don't actually see TakaTomo as a real pair. -.- Soo, Takamina is only one for Atsuko. No, TakaTomo. No, TakaHaru (Grr.) :]]
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: anoni2 on August 13, 2011, 10:56:43 PM
 :fainted:

using sign language  how nicee  :ptam-cry:

but kame is crying atm   :mon waterworks:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: blughise on August 13, 2011, 11:34:28 PM
NO way :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

that really sad........takamina  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Stupid Acchan...but can't really blame her, after what she saw!

Please update soon!!!
I wanna know what will happen to my ATSUMINA
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: Haruko on August 14, 2011, 02:25:25 AM
aww bad atsuko T_T..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: sorakamiya on August 14, 2011, 03:20:22 AM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: i hope a good ending in here :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: moekare on August 14, 2011, 03:47:30 AM
huaaaa so sad!!! :OMG: :OMG:
I'd like to kill the girl who dumps Minami  :scolding: :scolding:
And Atsuko... How cruel!!  :on speedy: :on speedy:
I like it! I love it! PLease continue  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on August 14, 2011, 04:12:01 AM
i love it :wub:

"As we leaving the café, I felt a small hand grab my arm. I turn around and there she was, smiling brightly at me. How can she be this happy when she broke my heart? A suffocating pain I had never felt before was spreading slowly over my chest.. It was really hurts.. I quickly took a deep breath, holding back my tears.

“You came..” she said looking slightly embarrass.

Why are you doing this to me Minami? Do you even know how I feel about you? I don’t understand.. Why did you sleep with me the other night if you already have someone else?

“Do you read the letter that I gave you??” she asked.

Letter? What letter? I didn’t remember receiving any letter from her..

Oh, wait! Maybe there’s a letter in the paper bag.. I didn’t even looked what were inside the paper bag after I throw it away yesterday..

Then I just nodded to her; pretend that I’ve read the letter.

She took my right hand and holds it in both of her hands.. She looked at me with the happiest smile I ever seen..

But as the pain stroke my heart again, I pulled my hand away from her and she looked surprise by my sudden action.

“Acchan..” Ren suddenly stand right next to me.

Without I realized it, I already grabbed his arms, clinging tightly to him. “Let me introduce to you, this is my boyfriend..” I said to her.

“Eh??” Ren was surprise by what I said.

Suddenly, shock and realization took over every expression on her face. “Your boyfriend??” her eyes went wide in disbelief.

“Yup.. He just came back from America..” I smiled at her.

“Why did you come here today??” she asked again.

“Owh.. Ren want to come here.. So, I just accompany him..” I said happily even my heart is hurting.
---
I could see her eyes started to swell with tears. She was looking so hurt right now.

Did I hurt her? Why would she feel hurt when she’s the one playing with my feeling.. She the one who’s hurting me!

Suddenly, a guilty feeling surround me when I looked how hard she’s trying to holding in her tears by forcing a fake smile on her face.

I quickly dragged Ren out of the café and get into the car. As I can’t hold my tears anymore, I let my tears running down my face. Ren asked me what’s wrong but I just keep crying. My heart was in pain right now. It's really hurt me to hurt her feeling but I can’t forgive her for playing with my feeling. Ren hug me and I cried into his chest.

A single, silent tear cascades down my cheek, remembering the hurt expression on her face, my heart was in pain.

What have I done? I shouldn’t make my own conclusion before asking her what happened. How could I hurt her after what she has gone through?

I take the square box out and opened it. Inside, there’s a broken heart shaped glass.

I broke the glass, just like I broke her heart.. She gave it to me and I throw it away.. What is wrong with me!! When I thought I was going to make her happy, I end up hurting even her more..

My tears keep flowed down my face.. Feeling guilty for hurting her..

Minami.. I’m sorry.."



this totally broke my heart  :(
hopefully this whole misunderstanding can be resolved
please continue...
astumina ftw
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: khryz0421 on August 14, 2011, 07:49:25 AM
taka~  :fainted: :fainted:
mina! let's kill the one who rejected her!  :mon mad: :mon mad: :mon mad:

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: YumePouk on August 14, 2011, 08:05:14 AM
:inlove: :inlove:
To all the writers you are SO GREAT  :heart:
Thank for all the song fics I love to read them all
Reading your work...we can really feel every emotions
Again thank you And I Hope we wanna read more of your fics :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: kahem on August 14, 2011, 08:54:52 AM
@AFLynx: For me is also Takacchan forever and I don't think Takatomo would be a good pair lol

@flean: Who is that stupid girl who dumped Takamina because she's deaf??!!! Acchan run to fix all this mess!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You]
Post by: TakahashiJ on August 14, 2011, 12:48:43 PM
I can't forgive the person who dump minami bcos she is deaf. Screw you -.-
Dammit Atsuko, quick run to minami! You shattered her heart!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: anoni2 on August 14, 2011, 03:46:17 PM
 :fainted:

i think i know what u mean by not happy ending   :pleeease:


nooo not another sappy sappy isk isk...

make it happy ending   :banghead:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: sorakamiya on August 14, 2011, 03:51:10 PM
 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: make it happy ending.... make acchan come to take care of her  :panic: :panic: :panic:

dadddiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie~  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: blughise on August 14, 2011, 03:58:14 PM
NO!!!!!!!!!! TAKAMINA :cry: :cry: :cry:
This is really sad!!!!
I don't want a sad ending for them!!!
I want Acchan to know the truth behind the misunderstanding!!!
Ray is the one who should die!!!! :angry: How dare her to suddenly show up tell Takamina that she still loves her like nothing happen!!! :banghead: 
How dare her to ruin my ATSUMINA!!!!!

Don't even try to attempt a suicide Takamina!!!!! Please
I don't want that for my ATSUMINA!!!!
Please try to give my ATSUMINA a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE! PLEASE ! PLEASE!!!! I can't bear to see them not together!!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: moekare on August 14, 2011, 04:16:15 PM
so saaaaaaaaaaaaad  :gyaaah: :gyaaah:

Please make it happy ending  :bow: :frustrated:

update soon!!

wew I think I like Ray in this fic  :mon suspect:
but prefer AtsuMina  :mon star:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: kahem on August 15, 2011, 07:21:19 PM
Please not a Takamina dead again!!! T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: bou-j525 on August 16, 2011, 03:56:52 AM
Weaver's song from Sunao ni narenakute drama is awesome.
I was bored and tried to sub this video without logo/black banner and it didn't work -.-
But still -->  http://youtu.be/Ia77qZLH4rM (http://youtu.be/Ia77qZLH4rM)

And Flean... HOW DARE YOU  :angry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: Haruko on August 17, 2011, 07:19:43 AM
two words.. happy ending ¬_¬
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: douya08 on August 17, 2011, 05:39:53 PM
i love your idea in this story~  :wub: :twothumbs takamina is a deaf person...  :fainted:

and please don't make it a sappie ending... i beg you... :mon pray2:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I love You] - Part 2
Post by: luckymmsg on August 18, 2011, 03:54:49 AM
oh please, happie ending,
dun let takamina suffer in your hand again. :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : Kiss Me
Post by: AAAice on August 18, 2011, 08:40:05 PM
Waaa, I can't even say the words I have when I read all of the Takacchan SongFics posted in here.

I told myself not to cry in front of some people, but I did. :]]] LOL, total embarrassing.

All this Takacchan fics... IDK what to do now. :]] So sad. :/

Anyway, here's mine. xD


Kiss Me
-  Click to Listen  (http://youtu.be/539J7pWgHzE) - The video is my inspiration. >:]] So check it out later.

Recording for the scene in the second season of Majisuka Gakuen where the Kabuki Sisters raided the rival school of Majijo namely Yabakune. All girls who participated on the said scene are given a break time. However, a girl who doesn’t give up her ‘Chiyuu’ word is now skipping her way to the girl she share a name with, Itano Tomomi. The other girl named Kasai Tomomi frowned when she realizes that Tomochin is still carrying the spunky Shibuya attitude as the girl distance herself to Tomomi while the scripts are in hands. That attitude annoys the Chiyuu girl but that never stop Kasai Tomomi to change the attention of Itano Tomomi.

“Ne~  Tomochin, I miss youuu.” She cooed and linked her arms to Tomochin’s left arm.

Kasai Tomomi’s frown deepens and pouted angrily with a mixture of lone the moment Itano Tomomi nodded once, her world still stuck on those damn scripts.

Pretending she didn’t mind what attitude Tomochin gave her, Kasai Tomomi continues to get Itano Tomomi’s world to hers.

“You are working hard that you could not even lay an attention to me.”

The girl who is reading her lines to say for the scenes and hearing her Tomomi twin is creating a prick of annoyance to her ears. Kasai Tomomi is being a nuisance. Of course, Tomochin is moving on to Kasai’s trademark ‘Chiyuu’ but this time the girl herself is irritating which Tomochin could not concentrate at all on memorizing her lines and actions for later. Instead, the cold girl stood up, startling Tomomi.

“If you don’t like seeing me working hard then go away, this is my work and I have to give my best to perfect it. Waste someone else’s attention not mine. Stay. Away. From. Me. You. Are. Annoying. Kasai.” She said in a rude tone to Tomochiyuu.

Surprising Kasai Tomomi on her sudden outburst, the girl who had been told slapped Itano Tomomi on the face, Tomochiyuu then left Tomochin alone whom has a anger plastered in her face.  It hurts her that the person she most likely to have affection to had said hurtful words to her, though she knew it is her fault to annoy Itano Tomomi in her time of memorizing the scripts and whatnots. 

After recording the whole episode, the two girls are not yet back to their usual pairing as Kasai Tomomi is scared to talk to Tomochin whilst the same to Itano Tomomi. Usually, it is Kasai whom will apologize if ever they had a little fight but this time she is not taking the initiative. When Itano Tomomi finished changing into her personal attire she reaches for her phone on her bag and created an email to Kasai Tomomi even though the girl is just a few feet away from her.

Tomochin glanced at the corner of her eyes after sending the email and went her way upstairs. Tomochiyuu on the other hand jolted awake when she heard her phone vibrated inside her shorts pocket.

‘When you’re finish, please meet me on the rooftop. I’ll be waiting chiyuu~ <3 <3’

The email she had received formed a smile on her lips. Tomochin never put a ‘Chiyuu’ on her emails for Tomomi but she could not help but feel nervous on the intention of Tomochin why she wanted to meet at the rooftop. Yet, Kasai Tomomi went to the said place.

“Tomochin?” She called out after she opened the door that leads outside the rooftop. Without hearing any voice, Tomochiyuu walked more and finally saw Tomochin sitting in one of those abandoned table staring at the clear blue sky.

As she is getting nearer to Tomochin, she could hear the girl humming a song but stopped when Itano Tomomi felt a presence of someone getting closer to her. She then gestured her hand to Kasai Tomomi to get close. Tomochiyuu locate herself in front of Tomochin and now the girl is looking up straight into her eyes that brushed her anxious away and replaced it with fondness as the butterflies in her stomach are rapidly growing. She does not know why this feeling she has right now were more far different whenever she’s is alone with Tomochin.

 Itano Tomomi extended her arm and entwined her fingers to Kasai Tomomi.

“Tomomi… kiss me.”

One kiss they share with so much love made their hearts grow more on love to each other.

-

Kiss Me

Watanabe Mayu and Kojima Haruna were the members who’d been picked to be the players for Shoujiki Shougi. As to Haruna’s current Shoujiki Question she did not get a score therefore it is now Watanabe Mayu’s turn to ask but this time she had picked the number which to Minegishi Minami’s point of view, the next question will be Mayu’s victory kill as the score as of the moment is 2-1 and it would probably hit one particular AKB member. With that comment from Miichan, the whole studio went serious once again yet an indescribable aura is roaming around the room while waiting for Mayu’s question for Haruna.

“Shoujiki, you do not love Oshima Yuko as you are only playing her feelings of love towards you.”

With that said, a single noise could not be heard in the studio. All the AKB members became quiet and so are the staffs but to break off the ice, Sata-san appointed if that is even an appropriate question which his sudden call bring back the girls trance and they all whispered amongst selves on what the lie detector would do. However, that one particular person named Oshima Yuko felt her body is breaking down slowly. Her Shiriri sister’s question surprised her which her heart also had gone mental inside as she does not know what the outcome will be. Now and then, she’s waiting. Oshima Yuko is expecting highly.

While the girls permanently set their attention to Kojima Haruna. As much to Watanabe Mayu’s question that hit her off guard, Haruna stared down on her hands that lay on her legs and quietly said…

“No.”

Sadness and shock arises on each soul in the studio after the needle goes over the line. Meaning, Kojima Haruna is lying. The girl doesn’t love Oshima Yuko whom also plays at the girl’s feelings at all. Much to Haruna’s words of denies; the girls were so speechless to even believe at Haruna’s perspectives. They set their eyes to Yuko who is staring at her love – Kojima Haruna. Those eyes of Yuko is not the same when the before Shoujiki Shougi game they had played where Watanabe Mayu is the opponent and that question regarding to Yuko again which Haruna failed. Everyone can tell that this time had really put Yuko into a real heartbreak.

The truth killed Yuko into so much heartbreak and now is eating her alive into the very end of the downfall. She felt her whole body exploded into a tiny bit of pieces, tears were forming inside her that wanting to escape but Yuko is restraining those sad tears.

Why?

Is the only question she wanted to ask.

After the Shoujiki Shougi, the Director gave them their break time. Haruna is searching for Yuko as the person she broke a heart disappeared the seconds after they had announced they will have a break. She looked around the places where most girls where eating or the make-up artists were retouching them but there is no sign of Yuko. Haruna wanted to scream Yuko’s name as the pain inside her is murdering Haruna too. She does not understand why, why the lie detector itself is lying if the truth is… true. Do the truths that evolve around Haruna have to be a lie too? When…

“Yuko is in that room.” Pointed the person in front of Haruna. Akimoto Sayaka. One of Yuko’s close friend.

“Thank you Sayaka.” Haruna bowed her head for respect and headed to the room where Yuko is at.

Haruna’s heart sank down to the abyss to see the figure of Yuko crying alone at the corner and the painful sound of her weeping made it worst for Haruna. Tears escaped through hers. Haruna clenched tight on her chest and make her way towards Yuko.

The small heartbroken girl in front of Haruna is giving her a silent treatment therefore to ruin the aura, Haruna spoke first.

“I’m sorry Yuko. It surprised me too that it turned out to be a lie but… Yuko I love you and I’m not playing around on your feelings.”

Yuko stare down. “Stop lying.” She paused for a while before speaking up again. “Expecting too much turns out to be a big heartbreak. I shouldn’t have expected. You know how much pain that leads me to death? To find… I guess, that answer is a sign for me to give up my love.”

Inside Haruna, she screamed for ‘NO!’ Yuko should not be the one who’ll give up. Not Oshima Yuko.

Haruna cupped Yuko’s cheeks with her trembling hands and wipe the tears away. It is fine for her to cry by herself but she cannot stand seeing Yuko crying because of Haruna’s stupid self or better yet, her Tsundere character that leads Yuko into so much pain. She stared through her blurry vision into Yuko’s teary eyes but to her she can see properly as her heart is giving that strength.

“Yuko listen. My heart is speaking the truth. Honestly, Kojima Haruna loves Oshima Yuko… very much. I love you.”

A passionate kiss from your love speaks truthfully.

-

Kiss Me

Takahashi Minami did not expect to be invited by Maeda Atsuko to be in her set for another Hana Kimi episode recording. Surely, the girl never asked her before to be with her while filming the set. Atsuko is lucky that Takamina has her day-off today.

Watching the number one girl of AKB48 attach a smile into the leader of AKB48. Though, there is a slight feeling that irritates her whenever she studies the scenario. That feeling was confirmed the moment Takahashi Minami overheard the Director of the drama which Takamina’s question might soon will have its answer.

“The kiss Sano will do for Mizuki should last for forty seconds. We have to make it different this time, not with full of shock, but full of passion.” He said while reviewing the scripts once again.

The heart of Takamina pumped rapidly, her whole body is going to crash. She felt broken. Is this the reason why Maeda Atsuko begged her to be here? To make the small sized Takahashi Minami see with her own brown eyes that she is kissing a guy? Worst, to make Takamina jealous so therefore Takamina will confess to her love later? Isn’t a little bit immature for Atsuko to do such scheme? She could do better than that.

But… It did work.

‘I’ve given you a chance but not this time.’ She said inside her while glaring at Nakamura Aoi whom plays the character of Ashiya Mizuki’s love interest in the drama, Sano Izumi.

Takahashi Minami waited for the kissing scene to appear in front of her. Waiting. Waiting. After getting annoyed to those cuts, review and commentary of the Director, the most awaited scene finally had started. Slowly, distancing his face to Atsuko, Takamina too slowly making herself ready.

Instead of Sano or Nakamura Aoi who’ll get the chance to taste Atsuko’s lips once more, it is the small girl – Takahashi Minami who captured the longing lips of Atsuko for her. Not caring if the Director cursed loudly or the gasped of the staffs and the shocked face of Nakamura Aoi. The kiss is rough with a mixture of passion that made Atsuko cling her arms to Takamina’s neck and respond to the kiss.

“You won for making me jealous again. Now I’m giving you the top price.”

-

Kiss Me

The Team K concert was successfully finish and now the whole Team K members are inside the airport to get back to Akihabara. From all those hard work, smiles they had given to every one really had paid off as it gives them strength and happiness again. However, one certain Team K member heard somewhere far away a hateful comment which made the strong, kind-hearted member put her down.

“Gorilla!”
“Banana! Gimme some Banana!”
“Uh-uh-ah-ah!”

Usually people call her a Gorilla or any types of things that related to that animal and in the end she would just shrug it off or even play along with them. This one is different; it hurts her ears by hearing that. She just came from a success performance and good vibes, now this is what she is getting after? Hurtful comments because of her blood? Little did the Captain of Team K know that she had shed a tear. She heard Yuko and Umechan saying to her to ignore them as they are just a bunch of stupid fools that say stuffs that hurt a person’s feelings.

A warm embrace washed away the awful feeling of Sayaka.

“Sayaka you’re a Goddess!”

Akimoto Sayaka wiped her tears away and locked an eye to her other half, her Twin, the always so Genking – Miyazawa Sae.

Sae pressed her lips onto Sayaka and also her heart sat closer beside Sayaka’s own heart.

“You are the most beautiful person. The most beautiful person I love with all my heart.”

-

Kiss Me

Ever since Ikemen Desu Ne had started airing and the moment she saw with her own brown eyes the kissing scene of Nana or known as Kojima Haruna and Tamamori Yuta who plays the role of Ren whom always got to kiss her Nyan Nyan a lot of time. Oshima Yuko is overly jealous.

Yuko even watched the Korean version and absolutely found that there is no single kissing scene in the drama, only to that fake kissing in front of the cameras. What more interesting for her is when she searched Ikemen Desu Ne on Google Images and saw something that caught her eyes. A picture of Ren and Nana on the scene where they had faked kiss whilst on that picture, there is… Yuko, in the middle of them looking weirdly at the guy. After clicking that picture to a better view, it directed her into a site written in English writing called Tumblr. Her smile and laugh grew on the posts of the users and to that gif where Yuko was aiming a gun in front of the camera along with Itano Tomomi. Of course, one picture surely melted Yuko’s heart and at the same time put her into amusement. It is that edited picture of Yuko and Haruna kissing whilst they had change Ren into her own face. Yuko quickly saved the picture as it is to show Kojima Haruna in the future. Well, that is if she can show it to the Tsundere girl.

All in all, Yuko told herself there is nothing to worry about as it is only a drama but she can’t control her feelings at all.

After they finish performing at A-nation in Nagoya. Yuko was happy to know that the sub-unit of AKB48 called No Sleeves are in Nagoya too and their dressing room are just next to Not Yet. From being loud with Takamina and Miichan and the two double Hara’s. The two groups are going home together as they will be drop off in the theatre.

On the ride, it is only Yuko, Haruna and Miichan who were wide awake while the others are asleep. Therefore the perverted princess is trying to steal a kiss to the tsundere princess. Her excuse? People have been stealing Kojima Haruna’s lips lately so Oshima Yuko is stealing back the treasure she has. When Yuko got the idea of to take a picture together with Haruna whom she wanted the two of them have their lips press together, unfortunately, the moment Miichan shot the two, the image turns out to be Haruna being her usual tsundere character that she is looking away (more likely attempting to escape from Yuko’s lips) while Yuko’s expression were affectionate. Kojima Haruna scolded Yuko afterwards as she hasn’t given her approval if she wanted to do Yuko’s idea or not.

Haruna could tell Yuko was hurt on her harsh tone and on the 20 minutes of ride, Haruna glance over at the sleeping Yuko. Her head was resting uncomfortably on the car window. Haruna then shifted herself sideways, facing Yuko. She pulled the small girl close to her which Yuko’s face is also facing Haruna.

Staring intently to Yuko. The tsundere Haruna is now filled with love again, all her stress and tiredness faded. She closes the gap between their faces until she reaches Yuko’s cherry lips. For the second time, she took a picture of herself kissing Oshima Yuko.

“My lips are still yours and my heart belongs to you, Yuko.”



A’s Note: So yeah, I got the idea from that video of the song. :]]] And to Saeyaka’s part, I got it from this fanart  Click for Picture  (http://[url=http://i53.tinypic.com/o6yand.jpg) then to Kojiyuu, it’s that Yuko’s blog about her wanting to steal Kojima Haruna’s lips back from… ehem you know who. Also to this picture, I made a continuation haha. Well, the continuation I did probably happened in real life. :]]  Click for Picture  (http://[url=http://i51.tinypic.com/23i72x1.jpg)
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: blughise on August 19, 2011, 12:43:13 AM
YABBE!!! SO DAMN CUTE!!!!!!!!!
When I was reading it, I thought It was only TomoTomo fic but as I finish their part, their's another couple next.
AWESOME!!! ONESHOT with lots of PAIRINGS!!!
I LOVE EVERYTHING!!! Though its short... who cares.... I love everything!
ATSUMINA's KISS ME is so over the TOP! TAKAMINA JEALOUS is so cute!  THE BEST PAIRING EVER!!!
NYANNYANand YUKO first scene is really sad but the next one is really cute! Haruna so tsundere!
I'm not really a fan of Saeyaka much but I quite like it :P

update soon
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: anoni2 on August 19, 2011, 01:05:12 AM
 :luvluv1:

yay 4 couples in total !!!! :on GJ:

and I like the vid song  :luvluv2:

more song fic to go    :mon crazyinlove:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: immortal_K on August 19, 2011, 03:21:55 AM
DAWWWWW  :luvluv1:

Thanks AAAice!!!!

LOVE THIS 4 in 1 OS!!!!!!

Not only do we get the Kisses we get 4!!!!!

and jealous Takamina hahahahahah  :twothumbs

Please writing more!!!!  :nya:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: moekare on August 19, 2011, 05:44:43 AM
 :shy1: :shy1: uwaa TomoTomo  :nya:  :nya:
and the jealous Takamina   :wahaha: :wahaha: I can imagine how Sano's expression is  :twisted: eat that SANO!  :twisted: :twisted:
these are all great!!  :on GJ: :on GJ:
please continue  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: Haruko on August 19, 2011, 07:42:43 AM
kojiyuuuuu atsumino.. the best :D i prefer saeyuki sorry :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: jehovachiabi on August 19, 2011, 09:52:00 AM
Quote from: Haruko on August 19, 2011, 07:42:43 AM
kojiyuuuuu atsumino.. the best :D i prefer saeyuki sorry :D

yea! atsumina and kojiyuu is  :heart:
but!!!
i Also prefer SAEYUKI <3
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Kiss Me]
Post by: sorakamiya on August 19, 2011, 05:50:14 PM
okaaaaaay, i try to make this  :panic: :panic: :panic:

hope u like it guys  :panic: :panic: :panic:

here is the song : POTRET - I JUST WANNA SAY I LOVE YOU (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeFoYhG2ADc#)   :grin: :grin:

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I Just Wanna Say I Love You
========================

“Okay, guys! We will have a break for 2 hours now. Lets rest now.”

“Yeeeaaaaaaaah!!!! Reeest!!”


Atsumina Part
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 takamina POV
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Today we are having practice. I look at everyone, they getting tired so I decided that we will have a break for 2 hours since we all have been practicing for about 5 hours nonstop.

 “Okay, guys! We will have a break for 2 hours now. Lets rest now.” I turn around as saying to the member.

“Yeeeaaaaaaaah!!!! Reeest!!” they all cheers and start to take a rest.

Now I got 2 hours free time. I look around, my mind keep thinking about her during the practice since I look she is so pale today and she seems a bit avoided me recently. Then my eyes lock on at the short hair girl. Yups , there she is my very great friend “Maeda Atsuko.” Every time I see her smile my heart beating so fast and if she is move closer to me I would get easily get blush. At first I think it something common but as time pass away now I realize that something grow inside my heart, I started want her more than a best friend.

Now I just look at her. she is cute yes I admit that and I bet everyone like her. but one thing that sometimes bothering me. I could get jealous when she is close to someone specially when she is in her dorama recording. First when she play as Q10 , there is a kissu scene with her co, and as I see that its irritate me. really annoyed me and second in hanakimi. She is surround by all guys and got another kissu scene and its lasted a bit long and with that hugging. Gaaaarh, I totally extreamly jealous. but what can I do. I cant do anything. I wanna confess to her about my feeling but, its so difficult for me to say that. Its just a simple sentence but I gotta put all effort in saying that.


I just wanna say I love you



atsuko POV
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Right, today as usual we are having our practice for the next performance. Each practice is so exhausted but all my tiredness are disappear as I look at her. Yups, that’s her, my very best friend and also my secret love “Takahashi Minami”. I don’t know since when my feeling towards her is growing. I like her, yet not only as a friend but more than that. I love her. I love my own best friend Takahashi Minami.

Well, she is so caring and nice maybe that’s make me like her. I kind a feel jealous if she is so close with other member. I wanna always beside her and together with her. I confuse with my feeling. I wanna confess to her but I’m just to scared, scared that she’ll hate me when I confess to her. Oh God! What should I do?! Its so difficult And complicated.


I just wanna say I love you


After 2 hours practice minami call all of us to continue our practice. During the practice one thing that occupied my mind is her, minami. During the break I could see all the member being near at her, clinging to her , hugging her etc. Its make my blood boil but all I can do is just look at her. I couldn’t hold it anymore, I gotta tell her. So I have decided. I’ll talk to her after the practice. I’ll tell her my feeling towards her. now is the only chance or forever not.

Finally the practice is finished for today. All the member hurry get all their stuff and be ready to go home. Grab my bag and then approach her.

“Ne minami!”

“owgh acchan. Whats up?” she said as grabbing all her stuff into the bag.

“uhm….hmm… can I talk to u for a moment?” I smile at her

“Sure, I’ll go get my stuff and we could have a talk then.”

“okay.”


As minami grab all her things we both go to the dressing room. There only me and her now. All the member have already gone home.

“so, what u wanna talk about acchan?” she ask me worriedly

I keep silent and then gathering all my strength to confess to her.
“okay minami what I wanna talk to you could make u shock but please, as I said this u wont hate me?” I said as look down at my feet, to scare to face her

She keeps silent and then grab my hand “How could I hate u? I would never hate u acchan. Believe me.”

I exhale and inhale then begin to speak “okay minami, I think I could hold it anymore.”

As I said that I hurry grab her shirt and then make her move closer to me then I kiss her. I kiss her short and deep. After that quick attack to her lips I said

“What I wanna talk to you is….” She still stunned in her place

“I just wanna say I love you. I love you Takahashi Minami.”

I close my eyes and waiting for her respone but what I feel next is she already grab me kiss me roughly as pushing me to the wall. Now I’m the one that surprise with her sudden action. She kiss me roughly and full of passion. Then after a couple of second I begin to kiss her back roughly. We kiss with all we got. But soon the kiss become more gently and smooth. I could taste her sweet lips. Her hand now warp around my waist and mine on her neck. We enjoy the kiss until we have to broke it coz need air. We look at each other breathe heavily then she begin to speak

“I also wanna say something atsuko” I look at her as breathe heavily

“I wanna say that love you. I love u to atsuko.”


I begin wanna cry as I hear what she has said and then I hug her.

“Really???”

“yeah atsuko. I love you. I love u so much.”

We keep hugging and then after we break from the hug we go home as walk in hand.



Kojiyu Part
-------------------

“whoooaaaaaaaa, nyanyaaaaaan~ I’m sooo tired.” Yuko now resting her head in nyan nyan laps.

“geez yukooooo~ get off of me.” nyan nyan struggle

“noooooo, I wanna rest my head her in nyan nyan laps.” She said as grab tightly around the tall girl waist

“tsk…. Fine… just don’t do a perv things.” Nyan nyan said as trying to calm her self.


After get silent a couple of minutes nyan nyan start to speak

“ne yuko”

“yeah?” yuko answer as closing her eyes enjoying her time

“uhm... why u are here now? its kind un usual u wanna stay over.”

Yuko open her eyes and then wake up as wrap her hand around nyan nyan neck.

“hehehehe…. Actually I wanna say something to you.” Yuko grinning to nyan nyan

“eeehhh???”


Suddenly yuko pushed nyan nyan down and now she landing on her bad. Yuko just chuckling.

“heee??? Why are you laughing? And why u pushing me.?” Nyan nyan asked

“nothing I just wanna say something to you….” Yuko move closer and whispered something in nyan nyan ears

“the reason I stay over today is …… ”


I just wanna say I love you.


FIN~

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douuuuu???  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: and sorry for the short kojiyu part  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: i'll do better next time  :panic: :panic: :panic:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Just Wanna Say I Love You]
Post by: anoni2 on August 19, 2011, 07:15:55 PM
oh confession confessions!!!  :luvluv1:

nice one sora   :mon thumb:

I'll write one soon ,just waiting for him to come back   :sweat:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Just Wanna Say I Love You]
Post by: Haruko on August 20, 2011, 08:03:48 AM
and ..and cut the kojiyyu scene awww!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [I Just Wanna Say I Love You]
Post by: moekare on August 20, 2011, 03:01:55 PM
uwaa neechan I love the AtsuMina's part  :nya:
confession is really a sweet thing  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:

short KojiYuu's story  :on lol:

you forgot one pairing, SaeYuki. LOL  :on gay: :on gay:
keep writing  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: izumi on September 03, 2011, 08:53:40 PM
Ending 1..  :banghead:  Must be happy ending..   :yep:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: anoni2 on September 03, 2011, 09:28:13 PM
whyyyy  :OMG:

kame dunno which one to choose  :fainted: i bet i'll probably chose the sappy sappy one rofl

getting married~ :mon inluv:

let me think first  :dizzy:  about 1-2-3

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: kahem on September 03, 2011, 09:47:10 PM
I want the happy one I don't care about the number I just want the happy one
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: sorakamiya on September 04, 2011, 04:13:05 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT????????  :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

WHY U ASK US TO CHOOOOSEEEEE???? :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

I cant choose, i just wanna choose the happy ending... no sappy sappy  :smhid :smhid :smhid

@mom : why u say about married thing in here. dad already propose you yesterday  XD XD XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: moekare on September 04, 2011, 08:46:33 AM
uwaaa I need happy ending!!  :panic: :panic: please don't make sad one, coz from the beginning it's already sad  :bleed eyes:
let them live happily  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: Haruko on September 04, 2011, 09:02:55 AM
i need a ending... jaja :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: blughise on September 04, 2011, 02:50:25 PM
choose the best ending option Flean!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: sorakamiya on September 13, 2011, 08:55:32 PM
okaaaay this is my next song fic i hope u like it guys  :panic: :panic: :panic:

red color for acchan

blue color for takamina

please enjoyyy~

click this for background sound~
Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat - Lucky (Video) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acvIVA9-FMQ#noexternalembed)



Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend
==============================

 Do you hear me? I'm talking to you
Across the water across the deep blue ocean
Under the open sky, oh my, baby I'm trying

I walk around at the practice place and then I look a figure across the room. Alone and rest her head in her hand with both of her feet touching her chest. I know that figure and I come approach her.

“ne acchan.” no answer then I try to call her again.

“acchan are u alright?” I now sit beside you , try to know what happen to you and why u alone in here room. I don’t know since when I feel this kind of feeling to you but I cant stand it everytime I see you sad. I wanna be there to cheer u up and to comfort you. That’s what a best friend suppose to do right.Then slowly u lift up your head and looking to me.

“uhnm… minami…? iie I’m okay.” That what you said to me. but I know something wrong.

“are u sure? U could talk to me if there is something wrong.” I said as trying hug her. “its okay if u don’t wanna tell me now, I could wait.” Suddenly she hug me tightly like there is nothing tomorrow then she begin to cry. “*hiks…hiks...u wont leave me right takamina?” I smile and try to calm her down “ssshhh… no I wont leave u. now if u wanna cry just cry. I’ll be here for you.” She then begin cry as hard as she could. Release all the weigh in her mind.

 Boy I hear you in my dreams
I feel your whisper across the sea
I keep you with me in my heart
You make it easier when life gets hard

There I sitting alone in one of the room at the practice place. Remembering what akimoto sensei have ever said to me “from now on u are the face of the AKB48.” first I think could I do that. It’s a pressure to me. but I just nod and agreeing with that. During the time I feel that many haters that tease me etc. but the support of a fan make me could bare with it. But there is a time I wanna let it out all that pressure right.

I suddenly heard a foot step approaching me and call me. at the first I just ignore that voice but yappari I cant. I lift up my head and see the figure beside me. its her, the one that always be beside me and the only one that could understand me.

Minami…

“acchan are u alright?” she ask me with a concern tone. She really caring to me.

“uhnm… minami…? iie I’m okay.”

I just said that to her. looking her concern eyes I begin sobbing. I always making her worry about me. what if she is not there anymore to support me. I’m afraid. Afraid of loosing the presence of this person. I hug her tightly and begin sobbing in her embrace. I lift up my face as say “*hiks…hiks...u wont leave me right takamina?” I could see her smile and she try to calm me down as whispered to me “ssshhh… no I wont leave u. now if u wanna cry just cry. I’ll be here for you.” I then begin cry as hard as she could. Release all the weigh in my mind. Only she can make me feel really comfortable.

 I'm lucky I'm in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again

They don't know how long it takes
Waiting for a love like this
Every time we say goodbye
I wish we had one more kiss
I'll wait for you I promise you, I will

I don’t know since when this feeling start. But now I know why she could make me feel like that. It coz she means everything to me. she is my pilar that always support me, she is my heart beat she is my breathe, she is my everything and the most of all she is the one I love. Yes, I love her. I fell for my own bestfriend and I lucky I’m in love with my best friend.

After that minami accompany me to go back to her aparto. I starts living alone now. to be honest I feel lonely since I start living alone.

“well here we go. take a good rest okay acchan.” minami said to me as holding my hand

“yeah, u too minami.”

“if u need anything just call me okay.” I could see her concern eyes again and I just smile to her.

“its okay minami. See you tomorrow.” I wave to her

“bye acchan.”

All I can do is just starring until her figure disappear from my sight. I got into my aparto then laying my back on my door. She has just leave me not more than 5 minutes and I already miss her. I miss her presence. How I wish I could be in her embrace each time we say good bye. I wonder how is she feel towards me. I promise I will wait for you no matter how long it takes minami.

 I'm lucky I'm in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again

Lucky we're in love in every way
Lucky to have stayed where we have stayed
Lucky to be coming home someday

And so I'm sailing through the sea
To an island where we'll meet
You'll hear the music fill the air
I'll put a flower in your hair

Though the breezes through trees
Move so pretty you're all I see
As the world keeps spinning 'round
You hold me right here, right now

After I accompany acchan to her aparto I go back to my home. All I feel now Is loneliness. I wanna accompany her longer. I wanna beside her. I wanna always there for her. I don’t know since when I got this is feeling. But without realize I already fall for her. yes I love her. I love my own best friend and I lucky I’m in love with my best friend.

Each time that we spend together really meaning full to me. she always said that I mean a lot to her and o also said that I will always there for her. we always share our love everyday, everytime but I wonder what kind of love that u have gave to me all this long coz the love that I give to u aren’t not a best friend toward a best friend anymore. I wonder how u feel toward me. for that I decided to confess to you, I’ll take all the risk that could happen.

The next day I ask u to go out with me. and u nod. After the practice we both go to the place that I usually go to get some time for relax. I bring her to my favourite beach.

“waaaaa, this is so beautiful minami .” she said

“u like it??”

“sure, come on minami lets enjoy this.” She said as grab my hand

I really happy look at your cheer expression, your pretty face, your smile, everything about u. we holding a hand as walking to the beach. Enjoy each other presence then without realize it almost sunset.

“ne, acchan, there is something I wanna to tell you.” I said to her as give a serious expression

“uhm? what is it minami.” Acchan look at me confuse me

“the truth is….”

“uhm???”

“the truth is I like you acchan. I …. I …. Have fall for you. I love you.” Finally I confess to her.

She then move closer and then cup both of my cheek “you know, finally u said that. U don’t know how long that I waiting for that word.”

“acchan…”

“I love you too minami….”

With then she move closer to me and press her lips to mine. We kiss slowly and full of passion. We enjoy each other taste, enjoy the kiss of love that we share under the sunset.

“I love you minami.”

“love you too acchan.”

I'm lucky I'm in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again

I'm lucky we're in love in every way
Lucky to have stayed where we have stayed
Lucky to be coming home someday



FIN

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doooouuuuu????  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: blughise on September 13, 2011, 09:04:30 PM
Hey sorachan!

Nice atsumina fic!!!

So cute XD

I'll be looking forward to your next update
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You - Part???]
Post by: anoni2 on September 13, 2011, 09:34:12 PM
i'm in love with my bestfriend~ bring back bitter/sweet memories for me  :farofflook: sigh*

nice one there ma daughter  ,sniff oh no  :badluck:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: sorakamiya on September 14, 2011, 02:22:25 AM
@blu : nyahahaha thank you...  :grin: :grin: i'm waiting for your update too  :grin: :grin:

mom : huh? u have gone through this mom? :shocked :shocked

dad : dont be so sad dad, mom already yours  :grin: :grin: :grin:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: immortal_K on September 14, 2011, 03:48:08 AM
THanks Sora! I really like the song, and the AtsuMina moments  :inlove:

Please update more lol,  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: AFLynx on September 14, 2011, 05:29:04 AM
nice fic sora!  :on GJ: the song fits Takamina and Acchan's relationship :P
btw, who's mom and dad?  :dunno:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: sorakamiya on September 14, 2011, 05:42:19 AM
@immortalK : hehehe, glad u like it  :grin: :grin:

@AFLynx : u think the same too  :grin: :grin: it really fits them XD owgh mom is anoni and dad is flean  :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: moekare on September 14, 2011, 03:11:27 PM
I love the title  :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

write more neechan  :nya:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Lucky I’m in Love with My Bestfriend] - sorakamiya
Post by: kahem on September 14, 2011, 08:24:21 PM
Nice one Sora yeah!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: moekare on October 01, 2011, 11:01:41 AM
Good job Acchan  :thumbup
Meet parents --> Engage --> Marry  :heart: :thumbup
hehe.. nice story flean! More!  :wub:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: Sydney W on October 01, 2011, 11:15:22 AM
Splendid story... love the Atsu + Kai development... please update soon.. thanks
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: Haruko on October 01, 2011, 05:43:36 PM
just say yes kai.. we know that atsuko is the boss :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: immortal_K on October 01, 2011, 06:26:20 PM
Kai and Acchan  :heart:

awwww Acchan wants to meet her in-laws!!!!

Acchan forever in control!

Pleas continue Flean I want the wedding!!!! LOL
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: blughise on October 01, 2011, 07:07:33 PM
VERY NICE update Flean

is this oneshot flean????

Please say no... I want more.... this sound so interesting!!!
And Kai you the man!!!!

update soon
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination]
Post by: douya08 on October 02, 2011, 06:13:53 AM
more KaixAcchan fics lately..  :luvluv1:

please continue this Flean-san  :kneelbow: *coughIstillwantyoutoupdateHowtoSayILoveYoucough*
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: eSsIe21 on October 02, 2011, 02:55:54 PM
please continue!!! :hip drool:

it's getting better!!!! :on GJ:



go!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: blughise on October 02, 2011, 03:17:12 PM
FLEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KaixAcchan so HOT :drool: :heart: :drool:

Really why why why...why did you have to end there!!!!!!

please update the next part ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on October 02, 2011, 04:40:08 PM
hohoho~ brave acchan making her move on kai  :P
am sensing someone gonna interrupt their action~

do update wanna know wat happed  :lol:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: haruhi16 on October 02, 2011, 05:26:12 PM
nice chapter! please update soon!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: kahem on October 02, 2011, 11:57:12 PM
WOW Kay and Acchan
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: Arakawa on October 03, 2011, 09:57:49 AM
Need smut >:o
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: cocos_milos on October 03, 2011, 02:42:17 PM
Fuh!!! wow!! :twothumbs :twothumbs..... Flean Good Job Nice Chapter.... :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 2
Post by: moekare on October 04, 2011, 09:48:33 AM
 :twothumbs :twothumbs omg nice story flean  :wub:

and Why did you stop at good parts???  :banghead: :banghead:

I need the next part so bad  :drool:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: eSsIe21 on October 08, 2011, 05:58:08 PM
WHERE'S THE JUICY THING!!!!

 :gyaaah:


i want the juicy stuff!!!!


but i luv this story!!! :luvluv2:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: Sydney W on October 08, 2011, 06:11:52 PM
hahaha... kai mum sure a sporting person..... please continue on next update.....
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: haruhi16 on October 08, 2011, 07:28:50 PM
LOL use some protection Kai!! hahahaha. nice chapter, please update soon <333
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: kahem on October 08, 2011, 08:00:08 PM
His mom is awesome hahahahahah!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: cocos_milos on October 09, 2011, 02:35:48 PM
WOW...WOW!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: HIS MOM VERY UNDERSTANDING AND SPORTING TOO!!!! :twothumbs
 NICE CHAPTER!!!!  :hee: :shy1:IT MAKE ME FEEL SHY TOO!!! :shy2: :luvluv1: UPDATE SOON!! GOOD JOB!!
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: Haruko on October 09, 2011, 10:16:16 PM
Jaja kais mom hilarios but the hot scenes i want more
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on October 10, 2011, 02:16:11 AM
Sweet kai for wanting to meet acchan's daddy first before *ahem*  :roll:
btw I literally LOL'ed at the end KAI'S MUM FTW HAHAHAHA  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: moekare on October 10, 2011, 04:42:20 PM
huahahahahaa funny! I think his mom would be so mad at kai!  but she tells kai to use protection! OMG!!  :rofl: :rofl:
what?? There will be part 4?? I AM WAITING!!!  :yossi:
I have finished my tbc yesterday, and some parts are same. LOL bikkurista!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 3
Post by: kiniki on October 17, 2011, 05:30:49 PM
It's hot :shy2: Kai mom LOL :hiakhiakhiak: I like Kai mom :wahaha:
update soon :on lol: I'm waiting you~~ :pleeease: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: douya08 on November 27, 2011, 08:50:06 AM
FINALLY YOU UPDATE.....!!  :mon fyeah: :on lol:

Omg, I'm too happy~~ :mon hanky: :mon XD:

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Uuuugghhh........ okay, once again you're success for made me cry...  :mon cry:
haah~ I feel so depressed right now.... :on cloudeye:

Quote
“AAHHHH!!!” she screamed as if she was trying to tell me something. “AAHHH!!!” again she screamed with tears flooding down her face. She then wiped the warm liquid coming out of my nose and her hand was shaking looking at the blood.

atsukooooo......!! :gyaaah:


anyway, thank you for update this ultra sad fic..  :on cny1:  :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on November 27, 2011, 09:36:58 AM
you are cruel for killing atsuko  :OMG:
this is depressing :cry: hope u update soon lol :tama-mad:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: sorakamiya on November 27, 2011, 09:38:59 AM
wahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat~ :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

daddiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u make it hanging~  :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:

i think this song of mine fits it well????

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5adb8f772dngxd5 (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5adb8f772dngxd5)  :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: Sydney W on November 27, 2011, 10:36:32 AM
omg...... what happened to Atsuko.....
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: Loveforever on November 27, 2011, 07:59:18 PM
You killed my Atsuko?!!?  :angry:  I'm gna go kill off minami now!! Lol Jk please dnt let her die  :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: Haruko on November 27, 2011, 11:19:19 PM
officially Im san T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: anoni2 on November 28, 2011, 12:52:38 AM
ohhhhhh  nani nani!!   :stoned:

i'm gonna prepare myself for the next update--(goes to look for something)

ok these will do

- tissue
- a bucket
- and snacks with water

uff what was the bucket for again? beh nvm  :mon rush:

Wee i did read  :badluck:

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Gah and sorry for not updating  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: moekare on November 28, 2011, 09:28:06 AM
 :cry: :cry: :on speedy: so saaad ..
it was so tragic,
Atsuko...  :mon cry: can't leave any comments. My heart.........  :mon runcry:

and.......WHERE THE FUCK IS THE AMBULANCE!!! SOMEONE IS DYING!!! F***  :on voodoo: :on voodoo:

well forget it  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: haruhi16 on November 28, 2011, 09:45:36 AM
what have you done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: skytsuna on November 28, 2011, 02:37:37 PM
No!!!!!! Acchan!!!!! :cry:
Please don't let Acchan die or any bad :cry:

Thanks for the Update.. although it was really sad..
Please Update Soon :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: Tanchan on November 29, 2011, 02:57:51 AM
Flean-san pls make a miracle happen such as a god appearing to save Acchan's life XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: Megumi on November 29, 2011, 11:09:16 AM
*Sob *sob what a sad story  :cry:

Thank you for your update  :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2011, 08:27:52 AM
Flean!!!!! You killed Acchan!!!!
I almost cry and my poor heart is broken T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Hard To Say I Love You] - Part 3
Post by: creamcracker on November 30, 2011, 12:31:39 PM
ohhlalala well i tried my best to make this fic but i don't know if i'm on the right track when writing this one lol.

Simple Plan - Save You (Official Video) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScfQDcFYUvQ#)
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Have you experienced or felt that you are useless? That you can’t do anything about it and just stared at someone dealing her or his pain? Have you ever know someone who dealt hardships in life and it’s breaking your heart just by seeing it?

Save You

*Flash Back* Kai’s POV

Knock Knock

I knocked at the door as a polite way before entering someone’s room. I’m nervous; I’m damn scared, my heart beats faster than normal. I don’t know what to do.

“come in” a guy’s voice said

“good afternoon Dr. Yamashita” I said

“oh good afternoon Kai” he responded

“how was her test results?” I asked with a shaking voice

“that is why I called you, here let me explain about her condition” the doctor said while putting the MRI result on x-ray illuminator.

The doctor explains it with detailed and straight forward. It seems like he’s already used to it giving bad news to his clients.

I closed my eyes feeling the pain deep down inside my heart while tears flowed down in my face. I bent down my head feeling disappointed, terrified and upset.
 
“why is this happening to us?” I asked knowing that the happiness that we might have experience is now shattering in front me.

“I’m sorry” the doctor replied

“you are supposed to be a doctor and all  you have to say is sorry?” I shouted with anger and walk towards him and hold his collar.

“you, you must be the one who have the ability to save her, please save her please” I begged while letting go of his collar and sat down to the ground crying.

“I know I’m a doctor but we have limits. I’m not God I’m a human being. I’m sorry, I promise you to do my best but I can’t guarantee you if I can save her. We can just prolong her life span. You know that brain tumour is a life threatening illness and the worse is it’s a malignant and stage 4” he responded while kneeling down and gave his handkerchief.

“do you want me to tell her about her condition?” he asked

“how can you be so calm in asking that question, do you have no emotions?” I said

“I have, but I already killed it long before as I know this career of mine will face a lot of sadness, a lot of tears and a lot of pain. If I will not do it, I’ll be the one who will be suffering. As a doctor, I have to be strong for the patients who needs me and trust in me” he answered

“I’ll tell her about her condition” I said while standing up

I walk towards the location of her room with Dr. Yamashita on my side. My hands are cold; I don’t know how to tell her the truth. I don’t want to make her dreams broken. I, I don’t know what to do now. I saw her room just few steps away from my location. My heart beats faster and faster. I bite my lips and inhale for some air.

Take a breath
I pull myself together
Just another step till I reach the door
You’ll never know the way it tears me up inside to see you

I stopped at the door with a name written “Maeda Atsuko” and took a deep breath before opening it.

“hey Kai, take a look” she said with a big smile when she saw me entering her room

“what is that?” I asked while walking nearer to her bed

“this will be the place where we can get married. I want to settle down in here too, living a peaceful life” she said happily while pointing to a beautiful place on the laptop’s screen

“that’s beautiful” I said  faking a smile, hiding my true emotion. I can’t tell her the unbearable truth. I don’t want to see her smile fading away. I don’t want her to suffer.

“Kai, what’s wrong?” she asked the question that I’m afraid to answer

I look up to Dr. Yamashita whilst slightly moving my head from left to write indicating that I can’t tell her the truth.

“Kai, tell me what is going on” she said looking in my eyes

“Kai if you can’t do it, then I’ll do it” the doctor suggested

“No sensie not now, please” I shouted

“she has the right to know Kai” the doctor calmly said

“to know what? What is going on here, Kai?” she exclaimed while standing and looking at me confused.

I can’t tell her. I can’t even dare to look her in the eyes.

“I’m sorry Kai but I have to tell her. Maeda-chan, we already have your MRI results. We found out that you have brain tumour stage 4 and it’s malignant. To tell you honestly we can’t guarantee if we can save you but one thing is for sure we can prolong your life span but you must prepare for the worst case scenario” Dr. Yamashita straight forwardly said

It’s like the time stopped for a moment revealing the truth. I saw Aachan’s shock face and then kneeled down to the ground. She punched the floor which made my heart breaks.

“stop it Aachan, please stop it” I said hugging her

“why must it me, why do I have to suffer like this? Why?” she continue crying while now punching my chest.

I hugged her tightly as this is the only thing that I can do. I let her punch my chest as I don’t know the right words to ease her pain.  I can’t hold my tears anymore as it already running down my face before I know it.

I wish that I could tell you something
To take it all away

I went home and immediately went to my bedroom. I saw my helpless, useless and messed-up reflection in the mirror. I can’t help but looked at myself, touching it while crying remembering Aachan being doomed, broken and weak.

“why should it be her?” I thought

“WHY SHOULD IT BE HER?” I screamed while throwing a punch to the mirror.

My hand is bleeding, blood is flowing but physical pain is easy to handle than emotional pain. I sat down besides the pieces of the broken mirror, pieces of our shattered dreams while hugging my knees weeping. The light of the moon passing through my window is revealing my deserted shadow.

Days had passed, still the same routine I’m taking, going to the hospital in the morning until night watching Aachan enduring her own pain and sorrow.  Every night at my home I’m searching in my laptop about her illness, a hospital that can make her feel better, doctor who is expert about brain tumour. I was like searching a light at the end of the horizon. I’m wishing to find an answer but at the end still I got none but I’m still trying coz giving up is the last thing I will do.

Sometimes I wish I could save you
And there're so many things that I want you to know
I won't give up till it's over
If it takes you forever I want you to know

The sun is now up and it’s time for me to visit her in the hospital. I was about to open the door of her room until I heard a loud scream coming from her.

“aachan are you ok?” I shouted as I saw her in the corner of her room sitting on the ground while lean-ing to the wall. She is holding her head, banging it to the other wall.

“stop it” I put my hands on her head to stop her from banging it and pressed the emergency button.

“Kai, it hurts, ahhhhhh” she said

“just shout it out loud, I’m here and the doctor will be here soon” I said hugging her. I can feel her hands holding tightly to my shirt. I heard the door opened and the doctor with nurses came inside.

“Kai sorry but can you please step outside first” the doctor told me

I stand up but a warm hand holds mine. I looked back and found the owner of it. It was Aachan’s hand.

“you’ll be fine” I told her “ just believe”

I walked away letting the doctor and nurses do the necessary things to Aachan. I closed the door and leaned on it sliding my body to the ground. I cried non-stop, putting my hands on my ears trying to prevent myself from hearing Aachan’s scream because of pain and also shouting for my name.

Few minutes later the doctor and nurses came out telling me that she is fine now and I can get inside to the room.

I saw her sleeping. I wiped hear tears and kissed her forehead and said “you did your best” I hold her hand and saw the mark where the doctor injected the medicine.

“sigh, if only I can take your pain away” I whispered while touching her cheeks softly and my other hand holding her right hand firmly.

When I hear your voice
It’s drowning in a whisper
It's just skin and bones
There's nothing left to take
And no matter what I do I can't make you feel better
If only I could find the answer
To help me understand

I saw a notebook on the table beside her. I took it and read what is written.

“Aachan’s Wishes”

I open it and read it.

My wishes are simple like other girls. I want to meet my destiny and be with that person until death does us apart. I want my wedding to be a simple one and I want to live in a peaceful place. I want to live long, to see my grandchildren someday and tell them my love story.

I close the notebook as it is so painful to continue reading it. After few minutes, an idea pops out in my mind. A tear fall down in my smiling face while whispering

“I think this will make her happy even though we are in the midst of distress”

I call her parents about my plan and luckily they agreed. I also informed my parents about it and they are excited. I book the place where we can hold the event. I contacted every person that might be helpful for us to make this one a success. I went also to the Dr. Yamashita to get his approval about it and he said he will allow us if he will be invited too. Now the plan is all set and it will be happening as soon as possible.

Sometimes I wish I could save you
And there're so many things that I want you to know
I won’t give up till it's over
If it takes you forever I want you to know

The next day I woke up Aachan who is now weaker than before.

“what is it Kai? And why is your smile so big?” She asked

“I’m just happy” I respond

“happy? Why?”

“you will find it out later but first wear this dress” her mom gets inside to her room

“mom?what are you planning?”

“nothing, and Kai you can go now and see you later” her dad who is beside her mom said

I walked out leaving Aachan with her mom and dad helping her to get dress up.



*Few Hours Later*

I’m waiting near the altar. Waiting the door to open, wanting to see my bride. Just few blinks the door opens and reveals a beautiful angel wearing a white dress holding a bouquet of her favorite flower. She was assisted with her mom and dad walking through the isle. I saw her crying not because of pain but because of happiness. Her father shake my hand and gives Aachan’s hand telling me that Aachan will be now in my care, that he is giving now her one and only daughter to me.

I hold her hands and walk slowly to where the priest is waiting until she falls. I was shocked and knelt down to assist her.

“I’m sorry Kai for making you worry, it’s just my body is getting weaker and weaker” she whispered

“shh, it’s fine, no need to apologize. I don’t care how many times you will fall to the ground as I’m al-ways here who will help you to stand up or carry you if it’s needed” I said with a smile.

I carry her with my arms and stands up. I walk towards the 2 chairs waiting for us while the people around us are clapping their hands. The ceremony started and it went smoothly. People are waiting for the priest to say the best line ever that a couple wanted to hear.

“I pronounced you husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride”

I smiled at her and she smiled back. I step forward and kiss her lips softly and she responded. It was a long passionate kiss, a kiss of a lifetime as I described.

That if you fall, stumble down
I'll pick you up off the ground
If you lose faith in you
I'll give you strength to pull through
Tell me you won't give up cause I'll be waiting if you fall
Oh you know I'll be there for you
If only I could find the answer
To take it all away

Her illness gotten worse and the doctor suggested letting her live the life that she wanted for her re-maining days or months. I’m now brave enough to face this reality as I know this time will come.

It’s been a month now living in a simple house near the beach. Fresh air will help her and the peaceful surroundings too.

“good morning Aachan” I said giving her a kiss in the forehead

“good morning Kai” she responded with a low voice

“happy  1st monthsary” I stated

“ohh it’s been a month already” she said

“so what do you want to do my princess?” I asked her with a smile

“I want to go to the beach” she answered

“ok, I will carry you now and let’s go to the beach”

“wait, can you give me that letter near the lampshade”

“oh sure, here”

We went to the beach and sat down on the sand. I put my arms around her and she puts her head on my shoulder.

“Kai, can you read this for me?” she asked giving the letter she is holding

I took a deep breath as it might break my heart reading it.

“ok” I took the letter and opened it

Sometimes I wish I could save you
And there're so many things that I want you to know
I won’t give up till it's over
If it takes you forever I want you to know

My prince and I

Once upon a time, I fell in love with a short prince.
We always argue on something but at the end of the day the prince always gives me my favorite flower as a peace offering.
We spent our days full of happiness until that day when I got hospitalized and found out I’m sick
It’s hard to accept but watching my prince who is also suffering the same pain I’m going through even if it’s not in physical but emotional, I tried my best to fight it.
I’m lucky I was never left alone instead we end up being married.
I know some of my wishes will not be granted but being with that person is enough.

To the person who is reading this letter right now, thank you always for being there with me. Thank you for not giving up especially with my stubborn attitude. Thank you for fighting with me and lastly thank you for granting my final wish, to be sitting right next to you in the beach. Please don’t be sad if I’m gone as I’m watching you from far away, guiding you to the right path. Don’t worry because someday we will meet again and live in the light of eternity.

My tears fall down in my face after reading the letter and hearing the last 3 words that Aachan muttered

“I love you”

And then she stopped breathing. I can feel no heartbeat.

I kissed her forehead saying “sorry if I can’t save you, sorry if I was useless. Aachan you did your best, a job well done. Good night for now and we’ll meet again someday. I love you from the bottom of my heart.


I wish I could save you
I want you to know
I wish I could save you

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uncle Flean: i know i failed about this one especially i killed again somebody in the story  :kneeldown: lol hahaha but thanks to that deal i was able to make this fic ^_^

and to the readers hope it doesn't breaks your heart  :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: Megumi on November 30, 2011, 03:14:27 PM
 :scared: You killed Acchan twice!

But still it was a good story  :farofflook:
Ah I think I've got something in my eyes  :mon cry: *be right back *sob sob

thank you for your update :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 30, 2011, 03:51:04 PM
It was so sad... :cry:
Minami and Acchan finally solve their misunderstanding :(
Please don't let anything happen to Acchan.. :cry:

And Acchan died!!!! It was so sad!!! :cry:
Poor Kai... :cry:

Thanks for the Update Flean and creamcracker
Please Update Soon :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: skytsuna on November 30, 2011, 04:04:33 PM
OMG!!! This is soo sad!!!! :cry:
Please don't let Acchan die!!!! Flean!!!! :cry:
I feel so sad for them... if Acchan die then there will only be Takamina left :cry:

Please update soon :bow: :bow:

creamcracker!!!! Why did you kill Acchan??!!!! :angry:
It was just sad... :cry: :banghead:
But Thank You for the Update...
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: creamcracker on November 30, 2011, 04:09:30 PM
oh my oh my hahahahahaahahahaha. i'm laughing

uncle flean: i failed but i'm happy that you like the letter part LOL

haru9210: yeah it's sad ^_^

Megum: hahahaha sorry for killing Aachan twice. i will never do that again (wait i'm thinking) LOL

Yagami: your welcome :)

Sky: don't kill me, please calm down bwhahaha.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: iloveakb48 on November 30, 2011, 04:23:15 PM
you made me cry!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:  :cry: I LOVE ALL JPHIP AUTHORS!!!!!!! :jphip: :jphip: :jphip: :jphip: :jphip: :jphip: :jphip:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: Sydney W on November 30, 2011, 04:24:39 PM
omg.. i'm really heart broken now... Acchan die at the end.... so sad ending for Kai.....
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: moekare on November 30, 2011, 04:28:35 PM
ee?  :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked what is it? am I reading it right??
WTH, YOU KILLED MY OSHI !!  :banghead: :banghead:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: creamcracker on November 30, 2011, 04:31:35 PM
Moekare: gomen gomen, it's just that i have to do it in this fic.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2011, 07:07:08 PM
Seriously, what do you have against Acchan? T_T
So sad...
I wanna read a happy fic because I'm so sad
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: creamcracker on November 30, 2011, 07:29:05 PM
kahem: i'm aachan's fan but i have to do it in this fic. gaahhh -i feel guilty now-

gonna update the sci-fi fic for a peace offering T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: Megumi on November 30, 2011, 07:31:10 PM
First Flean killing Acchan with such a good and touching story. It was really touching with Takamina deaf and all
and then came the misunderstanding and Acchan  BAM! ---> :bleed eyes:


And the came dreamcracker
This kind of story happens in real life....so sad Acchan again is the victim...poor Kai

Waiting for your next update "hopefully" not a sad one  :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: anoni2 on November 30, 2011, 07:49:49 PM
oh nice one there cream :)

Agreed to the real life part,coz I myself witnessed one of these.
Was still a kid so didn't understand much of the things happening,just stood there watchign them all cry.

-------
I'm finally back! s2pid exams  :temper:

I'll update some later  :kekeke:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: haruhi16 on December 01, 2011, 09:04:22 AM
The last part is like stairway to heaven kdrama T_T , it was sooooo sad T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: luckymmsg on December 01, 2011, 11:42:19 AM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:


It's so sad.
But seeing that Kai has made Acchan's wishes come true partially and lived one month together as husband and wife.
The love between them is felt as strong.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Save You] - creamcracker
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 10, 2012, 03:39:20 PM
Woah! You're My Destination is :wub:
Don't know why I've never read about it!!
Thank god I read it :D
Please update that soon :mon cute:
Thank you :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 11, 2012, 03:05:00 AM
Yea!!! Thank you so much for the update XD
Kai's family are so funny :rofl:

I like Kai's mom and dad :twothumbs
I was laughing when Kai's mom said “Yes.. I know.. I can’t believe it myself when I found them already at making our grandchildren!!” :hiakhiakhiak:
Hoho~ I wonder if later it's Kai's turn to meet Atsuko's parents~ :hehehe:

Thanks again for the Update, Flean :kneelbow:
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: Haruko on January 11, 2012, 05:44:00 AM
thanx for the chapter make my day

i laught so much....they think that kai is gay!!! jajaajaj

about grand children and that stuff :D aww i want that kind of mother and father inlaw :D
jajaj kai´s parents so hilarious...
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on January 11, 2012, 06:02:36 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! wait let me read again
Quote
“Ka-san..” he call out to his mother with his girlfriend just right behind him.

“Owh! Kai..” his mother turn to him. “That was fast!!” her eyes widened, smirking.

“Ka-san!! We’re not doing anything!!!” he said in almost shout as he blushed.

“Hontou??”

“Ka-san!!”
and
Quote
“Yes.. I know.. I can’t believe it myself when I found them already at making our grandchildren!!”

“Making our grandchildren??” he asked feeling so happy.

“What!! No! We’re not!!” Kai denied before he look over his tomato looking girlfriend again.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA OMG~ kai's mum & dad are awesome  :hiakhiakhiak:
that was one epic update you had, was laughing so hard from the beginning till the end  XD
will be looking forward on your next update for others works also  :thumbup
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: Sydney W on January 11, 2012, 03:51:37 PM
Kai's mum and dad is hilarious and great....... i just cant stop laughing at your fics........ is amazing...... ^^
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: kahem on January 15, 2012, 08:51:06 PM
Hahahahah poor Kai, what a family!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: animi on January 15, 2012, 08:55:33 PM
haha i'm in love with kai's mum and dad right now
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [You're My Destination] - Part 4
Post by: Prataz on January 16, 2012, 12:11:31 AM
This makes a happy ending right? Kai's parents are the bomb!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 31, 2012, 07:25:23 PM
What?!!! No!! How come Acchan is not interested in Takamina anymore!!! :cry:
Takamina... TT^TT I bet she will be so sad hearing it... :panic:

Thanks for the Update :twothumbs
Please Update Soon :mon cute: m(_ _)m
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: ichikawa on January 31, 2012, 07:30:38 PM
You have me as your loyal reader here~  :on cigar:
 :on speedy: Why is Acchan keep avoiding Takamina? Or is she just planning something for Takamina?  :dunno:
Poor Takamina hearing Acchan said she is not interested...   :cool2:
Waiting for your update  :on drink:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Kamen Knight on January 31, 2012, 07:41:20 PM
What happened with Acchan and Takamina.. Arghhh!! And I have to wait for 2 weeks to see the next update?!? You are such a sadist..

Don't say that! I believe you have loyal readers out there.. And I think I'm loyal enough to curse at you if you dare not continuing this fic.. (or maybe forcing you to write myself.. ho ho ho)
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: creamcracker on January 31, 2012, 07:50:12 PM
woah uncle flean, thanks for writing this one using the song that i recommended hahaha. i though u forgot it already. THANK YOU VERY MUCH. :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: iloveakb48 on January 31, 2012, 08:32:02 PM
I'm a loyal reader of yours!!!!! i may not be commenting always but  i always reaad your fics!!!! :cow: :cow: :cow:

update!! :w00t:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Loveforever on February 01, 2012, 12:21:12 AM
cliffhanger!!! bye now, i'm gonna go cry in the corner...  :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Haruko on February 01, 2012, 05:16:21 AM
OMG!! my atsuminaaaaaaaaaaa noooo T_T

kojiyuu awww so cute :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Sydney W on February 01, 2012, 05:16:30 AM
It's not over yet and it never been over... I'm one of your loyal readers as well... ^^
Do continue the next UPDATE ! Thanks ~~
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: immortal_K on February 01, 2012, 07:24:55 AM
Bro!!!! I might be slow at commenting your fics but I love them!!!!!!!!!!!

but but why leaving me on a cliff =( what if I fall down   :panic:

We need more of this~! I'm sure everyone will agree with me  :twothumbs

Please update!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Nakamii on February 01, 2012, 08:10:55 AM
YOU UPDATE, FLEAN!!! :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo: And, It's AtsuMina!!! :deco: But, What Happen?! Please, Update Soon! :bow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: ruka_4581 on February 01, 2012, 04:03:39 PM
Uwaa~~ :cry: :cry:

So sad, so emotional and somehow the story seems so true~!  :lol:
Due to the work the girls had recently, there's more Atsuyuu than Atsumina these days! (lol, I think so... :nervous)
But let's hope Acchan's feelings for Takamina will return soon!

I will be waiting for your next update!  XD  Wonder how Takamina gonna react!   :w00t: Aah~ I'm so curious!  :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: kahem on February 01, 2012, 05:33:10 PM
Noooo!!!! Acchan how could you do that to Takamina!!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Kiiz on February 01, 2012, 07:47:38 PM
What!? TBC . . .
You can't do that! Acchan!! :panic: :panic:

Thx and update soon :lol: :lol: XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: Megumi on February 02, 2012, 01:17:06 AM
Fleansan is this angst?  :on blackhole:
If it's not happy ending my favourite AtsuMina...waa I can't take it  :on cloudeye:

Waiting for V-Day...
Thank you for your update Fleansan
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: benz on February 02, 2012, 01:46:21 PM
poor little Takamina  :OMG: I hope everything right for her!

Please update soon  :mon cute: and Thank You for updating.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: douya08 on February 04, 2012, 09:34:46 AM
I'm one of your loyal reader, right..?  :mon innocent: :on lol:

====

err... excuse me, what are you doing with atsumina here??  :shifty:
I'm too curious about the next part..  :mon hanky: it's too long to wait until valentine's day...  :frustrated:

please give me a happy ending~ :mon yeah:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: crazywota on February 04, 2012, 05:11:47 PM
FLEAN-SAMA.  :bow:
One of your loyal reader here!! I rarely post comment but i do love all of your fics  :thumbup
remember my pm?  :nervous forget about it, it's embarrassing.

----
anyways hoooray for your new update!!
such a cliffhanger, i so so so want the next chappie. gonna wait patiently here.

thankyou for the atsumina update btw.  :cow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Is It Over?
Post by: iloveakb48 on February 05, 2012, 03:54:32 AM
yey!!!
i'll be waiting!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: douya08 on February 05, 2012, 09:24:29 AM
Quote
“The small cut are just nothing compared to what I felt inside..”

ouch... my heart...  :err:

=================

mm... 7?  :?
Idk, if "How Do I Tell You're The One" and "Tell me you're the one" count as 1, then it will be 6 in total...  :roll:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: okiedokie on February 05, 2012, 09:38:08 AM
Haizz... Poor takamina! The love should be doesn't matter how far they are ! Hope u'll create a background to resolve their problems ! Or make another girl 4 takamina ( i luv Takachin ) lol  <3
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: YumePouk on February 05, 2012, 10:01:13 AM
T_T poor Takamina
Why does they have to break up Y_Y
and Atsuko why do you let that happened ヽ(￣д￣)ノ
Go back together (  ´Д｀)
I want my AtsuMina couple >___<

Keep ur great work and can't wait to read more of ur fanfic
Wanna allways support u événement if I didn't comment often σ(^_^;)

And about How many fanfic u wrote....
Well I think it's around 20 or a bit more maybe sorry I was wrong
I didn't really understand ur question at first^^""
the rigth number around 5-6 ^ㅈ^
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: crazywota on February 05, 2012, 11:12:49 AM
Quote from: Flean on February 05, 2012, 07:38:54 AM
“The small cut are just nothing compared to what I felt inside..”

ohgawd  :fainted:
my atsumina hatto can't take this...

thank you for the update.. gonna wait for the part where they'll get back together.  :P
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: Kiiz on February 05, 2012, 12:45:12 PM
Flean-kun, u make me cry TT^TT . . .

Takamina... plz don't go :fainted:


thx for update :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: iloveakb48 on February 05, 2012, 01:03:39 PM
Nooooooo!!!! :cry:
 :cry:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: Kamen Knight on February 05, 2012, 03:48:58 PM
Oh my God.. What have you done to Takamina and Acchan.. There's a hollow feeling in my chest after reading your fic...   :on speedy:

The Break up itself is so complicated.. Confusion, anger, love, sadness, loneliness... so many feeling included in this... I haven't tried reading while listening to the song... I wonder how much the angstiness increase if I do so..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: ichikawa on February 05, 2012, 05:46:04 PM
Wah!!!   :mon runcry:  my poor Takamina ...
Cheer up Takamina! Get back your Atsuko's heart !!  :mon blowhorn:

 :mon huh:  hmmm... about your fic... maybe 7? (if How do I tell you're the one and tell me you're the one count as 2)
I love the most of 'How do I tell you're the one'~
and till now you add the 'Dancing Butterfly'

It's SEVEN, right ???   :mon sweat:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: Yagami.Rai on February 05, 2012, 07:05:40 PM
Thanks for the Update, Flean XD
But.. It is so sad.. :cry: No!! My Atsumina!!! :panic:

Flean, you must update this as soon as possible!! :banghead:
Please~! :mon cute: Thanks again for the Update!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Like A Knife
Post by: Haruko on February 06, 2012, 04:23:26 PM
my atsumina no!! i felt a empty in my stomache T_T why!! why!! come on atsuko you love your takaboy fight for her... because later gonna be late you know what i mean
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: ichikawa on February 06, 2012, 06:30:59 PM
Flean~! You're such a tease...  :OMG:
You made me though it was just a dream that they broke up...  :on lol:
And then it was true that they broke up...  :gyaaah:

But no matter what, Takamina still loves Acchan~  :luvluv1: Acchan still loves Takamina~  :luvluv1:
Can't wait for next update  :P
Hope you update soon  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Haruko on February 06, 2012, 07:40:21 PM
teaser!!!! teaser!! dont play with me!! awww you make feel relieb with the story but suddely you broke my heart twice in once T_T awww but yuko appear so my heart is a little happy :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: kahem on February 06, 2012, 07:54:14 PM
T_T so sad!!!!!!
Someone has to do something!!! T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Sydney W on February 07, 2012, 01:51:58 AM
Quote
I was wondering.. How our children gonna looks like if we were to do it..” the ace’s face was somehow slowly getting red as well.“
Eh!!” the captain almost shouted in shock to hear what the ace was saying. “B-But.. How can we..”“
Will you be responsible for it??”“
Eh?? What do you mean by being responsible??”“
Well.. If we really going to do it.. who knows what will be the consequences.. I might get pregnant..”“
Like I said, how can we!!” 
“You might be a guy after all..” the ace said teasing the small captain by moving her eyes down to her... but before she could do that the captain interrupted her.“
Oi!! There’s nothing down there..” the captain said before narrowing her eyes. “I hate you when you do that..”
“And I love teasing you..” the ace let out a chuckle.“
Mou~” the captain pouted.“You’re not really that cute with a pout.. do you know that??” the ace teased the her captain again.

It's hillarious. ^^ 

BUT it sad/hurt when the break up for real at the end
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on February 07, 2012, 02:27:06 AM
and here i thought that everything was a bad dream but it turn out everything was real  :cry:
will be waiting for the next update  :thumbup
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Kamen Knight on February 07, 2012, 07:42:15 AM
Honestly.. you got me there... ypu are a true sadist, Flean.. You better update soon, I'm dying from curiousity here..  :imdead:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Kiiz on February 07, 2012, 02:10:08 PM
Arigatou... feel hurt :fainted:

flean-kun....
you and your fic very troll............ but I love it  XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Megumi on February 07, 2012, 03:29:19 PM
Flean-san  :frustrated:

First I tough that all was a dream until Acchan woke up  :doh:
Even tough I don't know how many song fic you wrote but I'm guessing 7?! or 8 maybe?!


THank you for you update!
Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: douya08 on February 07, 2012, 05:53:20 PM
hidooooi......!!  :OMG: :on voodoo: :fainted:
I really thought that it's all just a dream... but you ruined it once again...!  :banghead:  :mon whine:
plz update this, ASAP..  :mon pray2:

about your fic.. if it's not 7 then it will be 8  :mon determined: I'm not sure though~  :on drink:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Yagami.Rai on February 07, 2012, 07:51:12 PM
TT^TT Atsumina.. :cry:
They both still love each other.. :(
I hope they will get back together soon.. :)

Thanks for the Update XD
Please Update SOon :mon cute:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 07, 2012, 08:50:56 PM
So sad...

*waits patiently for update* :gmon milk:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Nakamii on February 08, 2012, 05:28:52 AM
COOL! UPDATEEEEEE! I'm Sooooo Happy!
It's sooo sad to see my AtsuMina broke up! But still.. They love each other! :love: Please Update Soon! :bow:

~ About The Question, I just thought it was about 9 Fics... :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: moekare on February 08, 2012, 11:25:27 AM
urgghhhh they actually broke up!  :angry: I thought it was only Acchan's dream, but....ADJKDJALSLJDKJHKS  :angry: :angry:
but yeeyy I love their moments on bed nyahaha :drool:
its hilarious  :lol:
ughh....whats wrong with Acchan?  :? she just doesn't want to try to be honest  :panic:
but I know Fleany won't make them break up  :twisted:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: anoni2 on February 09, 2012, 03:05:18 PM
now now that's something i wanna see/read(especially their reaction)  :kekeke:

being a silent reader ftw (well not atm ) (^_^)/

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: JinMario on February 12, 2012, 05:07:14 AM
Awesome!
Do you mind if I translated Secrets and I Miss You Like Crazy to Vietnamese?
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: JinMario on February 12, 2012, 05:39:06 AM
Quote from: Flean on February 12, 2012, 05:32:10 AM
Quote from: JinMario on February 12, 2012, 05:07:14 AM
Awesome!
Do you mind if I translated Secrets and I Miss You Like Crazy to Vietnamese?
You need to ask AAAice for that.. since both are her songfics.. XD but she has been in hiatus for a while now..LOL.. :lol:
I really miss her mafia fic..  :banghead:
That's so sad
Whatever, thank you for telling me :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: JinMario on February 12, 2012, 06:03:49 AM
Quote from: Flean on February 12, 2012, 06:00:29 AM
^ I'll try to ask her for you if she's online..  :nervous
Oh, It's happy for me! :roll:
Thank you!  XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Nyanoha on March 03, 2012, 06:39:45 AM
.....Omg...Omg....Omg....Riri-chan...I'm about to cry. This is so sad...my heart hurts. ;______; I loved it, but my heeeeart....it needs a band aid.  Nyan-nyan....Yuko....they both went through so much paaaaain. OTL I'm going to the hospital now, so they can fix my heart.

Still wuv you ;___;

P.S THE SONGS MADE ME WANT TO CRY MORE OLZ
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: Haruko on March 03, 2012, 07:23:01 AM
awww one of the most sad fanfic ever T_T you broke my heart and that song so touching.. i dont know if i canrequest that but... maybe a happy ending could be possible -_-...
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Suppose
Post by: kahem on March 03, 2012, 09:57:19 AM
T_T so sad!!! Nyan Nyan!!! Why?!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: ichikawa on March 03, 2012, 05:47:59 PM
 :pleeease: Nyaan Nyaan...   :pleeease: Yuko...
I am listening the song while reading your fic and it's so :OMG: I was crying
It fits the song very much  :mon hanky:
Thanks for the update  :heart: :heart: :luvluv2:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: yukofan on March 04, 2012, 01:09:33 AM
sooooo saaaaadddddddd  :cry:

this fic needs sequel..kojiyuu should meet and re-united..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: arisa03 on March 04, 2012, 04:52:44 PM
I'm sorry but I'm not planning on any. ^^;;;
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: immortal_K on March 05, 2012, 05:24:51 AM

OMG BOSS  :bow: :bow: I'm so happy to read your work again but at the same time you make me wanna  :fainted:
So sad, why did it have to end this way. Shouldn't a person want to spend the limited amount of time they have left happily, but
instead KojiHaru put herself through so much pain to disappear from Yuko's life. I guess it's her way of trying to get Yuko to
forget her so that when she passes on, she won't be missed but this is Yuko we are talking about... she can never let you go.
It was all a mistake!!!! Because you still love each other! sigh... Life....  :(

I hope one day they will be able to meet each other again  :mon angel:

Thanks Boss for the lovely read, even though it is a bit sad... still love it  :)  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Don't think I will ever get enough of your stories, please write more whenever you are up for it!
I'll continue to wait for them  :wub:

Thanks for the fic, thanks for the lovely song
 :bow: :bow: :bow:

~imo-k

Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: oist on March 05, 2012, 02:07:58 PM
DID SHE DIE??????



Haruna, did she die?
 :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: haruhi16 on March 05, 2012, 02:33:11 PM
You're killing me~ YOU'RE KILLING ME!! OMG MY HEARTTTTTTTTTTTTT  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: arisa03 on March 05, 2012, 10:04:37 PM
Yes. They both died, lmao.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: haruhi16 on March 06, 2012, 03:13:33 AM
wait, Risa-san! Yuko committed suicide?!!?!?!!? OMG MY OTP  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:

I'll follow you soon my OTP~  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:

Risa-san my heart </3  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: arisa03 on March 06, 2012, 05:20:40 AM
I think... that's the point? xD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: oist on March 07, 2012, 01:52:56 PM
I don't know why, but I laughed when you said both of them died.
Maybe I'm turning twisted..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: pamela89 on March 09, 2012, 02:07:35 PM
Omg.. Yuko and Haruna experienced ALOT of pain..

I wish it was all just a nightmare..  :on freeze:

this is the most sad fan fic I've ever read ..  :on cloudeye:

when I read :
Quote from: arisa03 on March 03, 2012, 05:53:43 AM
Your parents told me… for two years, you cried all night. Was that all because of me, Nyan-nyan?

I stand up from the bench and face the green horizon once more. I open the urn and quickly scatter your ashes around this spot, in this green horizon.

I tilt the jar until it’s empty as I see gray little pieces of you flutter away and get taken by the wind.

I cry as I smile, “You can finally be free now… I hope.” I sniff as I look around at all your ashes being taken by the wind.



I was like  :on shady:  :on blackhole: :on polter: :imdead: :stunned: :scared: :gyaaah: :err: :frustrated:


I'm happy for the Atsumina couple..  :ding:

You stabbed my heart and my hypothalamus.. with a very big knife..
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [Life] - arisa03
Post by: straawbeeryy on March 10, 2012, 09:43:28 PM
I really enjoy reading all these songs fics. They're wonderful! <3 I would love to see updates on You're My Destination and the Valentine Special. I really want to know what's going to happen! XD
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Tanchan on May 28, 2012, 01:50:16 AM
I like it  :inlove:. So how did Atsuko end up in Taka's house and even taking a shower there? Or is it not her own house that Takamina's in? Did Mariko troll her again by telling the taxi driver to take her to Acchan's home :lol:?
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Nakamii on May 28, 2012, 01:58:39 AM
Owh, So... Takamina Regret it? [that she broke up with Atsuko?] or She just missed Atsuko? And, How can Atsuko take a Bath in Taka's Bathroom? LOL. I was thinking the same... [as Tanchan] that maybe It's Atsuko's house... [Thinking that they already break up, There's no way she can be in Taka's bathroom.] :smhid
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Haruko on May 28, 2012, 02:55:15 AM
yeah we have two options..

one.. again its a dream..

the second and funny one.. takamina made a mistake and enter to acchan´s house because we all know that  she have the atsuko´s house keys...

of ocourse the second part .. perv section!! :D

a like this tsundere mode.. now sexaddichan dont wanna but takaboy gonna to seduce her.. go takaboy make your wifey happy :d
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: blughise on May 28, 2012, 03:55:05 AM
Wow, I totally missed out al ot of things in here :)
I really need to catch up

anyways this fic is quite crazy... first the dreams inside the dreams and now this  :lol:

So crazy :D

I bet Mariko-sama sent Takamina to Acchan's house. She's such a troll :twisted:

Or maybe this is another dream again  :D

I just hope Takamina and Acchan stop lying to themselves and just be truthfully honest with their feelings to each other.

I'm looking forward to the next update XD
UPDATE SOON FLEAN!!!
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Tanchan on May 28, 2012, 04:03:29 AM
 I say Takamina should just settle everything right there in the bathroom and of course, in the right way  :mon mischief:. Acchan's probably just shocked because Takamina suddenly appeared there after they had broken up. Plus, Takamina was drunk so may be Acchan thought she was acting out of her character. I mean if you're gonna do it, you must be consciously aware of what you're doing, right? It's not that Acchan doesn't like it (We all know she does :mon evillaff:), but she also wants Takamina to do it out of love, not lust, and to take responsibility for what she does :mon noprob: because who can guarantee that she's not really a guy  :mon lol:. And Flean-san please update quickly and don't make it a dream or I'm gonna  :mon worklate:
and don't worry there's no kids here :mon psst:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: smarty0821 on May 28, 2012, 07:24:51 AM
OH GOSH !! I've been waiting for you to update!!  :bow: :bow:

I still don't know what will happen to AtsuMina...

So please update...hope that it won't take long for you to update :smhid
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Kiiz on May 28, 2012, 11:06:48 AM
thx for update :twothumbs
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: moekare on May 29, 2012, 03:29:33 AM
Thanks Fleany for your updates  XD
Finally I could leave comments  :mon noprob: btw I wonder how Acchan can take a shower there , or wrong apartment :mon evillaff:
And now they are alone in the bathroom khukhukhu~ :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:
You must finish it as soon as possible!  :mon geek: Coz you have so many stories to be updated!  :mon tantrum2:
don't forget to make me bleeding as well  :mon lol:

My salad fic  :mon nyah:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: Minami-chan on June 07, 2012, 11:28:24 PM
oh! plis continue this fic! (V special)

I think that or... takamina is dreaming.... or.... is acchans house.

But i can wait to read is behaving as being drunk and the hangover is going to have next day.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: miayaka on October 04, 2012, 06:16:26 PM
 :on woohoo: finally i finish reading all the song fics..

all of it was awesome..
I cant comment in each fic hehe too many
but!!
I Love it!
 :kneelbow: Thank you!
 :dunno: can I write here too flean?
I dont know when but im planning..  :hee:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : [V-Special] - Stay Away
Post by: kahem on October 13, 2012, 12:33:01 AM
When I read this topic I really wanna cry T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: Haruko on October 13, 2012, 05:30:57 AM
OMG love it!! when i saw the bunshun episode.. i think in different scenes about that.. and this one was so.. omg.. yeah minami can be mad BUT she loves acchan... come on maeda you need to fix this mess quickly
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: chichay12 on October 13, 2012, 06:55:20 AM
my god!!

I miss acchan!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: Pdpond on October 13, 2012, 08:46:31 AM
Really good story I love it!
It's me too missing Atsumina moment.
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: miayaka on October 14, 2012, 05:37:39 PM
fufufufufufufufu
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
flooding you my with emotions..
cant explain my feelings with your fic..
thats how i describe it  :heart:
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: Haruko on October 20, 2012, 09:43:14 PM
aww cutie fic.. but what about a sweet kiss too :D
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: kahem on October 20, 2012, 11:41:23 PM
Finally~
Astumina~
It's so beautiful T_T
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: saeyukilover on October 22, 2012, 03:06:11 AM
Just a wii simple hug .....  :lol: docs from all my otp makes my day :)

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: ♫ The Random Song Fics : IT’S ME!!! - Rukaeru
Post by: Haruko on April 14, 2013, 05:57:36 PM
but you love her, haruna :B
Title: Re: ♥ The Random Song Fics
Post by: rightsaver143 on November 22, 2016, 07:56:35 AM
Why can't I read some of the fics in here?? :? :cry:

It's so frustrating :banghead: :angry: