Different Dimension (MayuXyukiXjurina) Chapter 1 part 1 update

[kokoiscute]

This is my first time posting these kind of things, and my english grammar are not so good.
All I have now is these... Please tell me what you think about this prologue.

Prologue:
 Watanabe Mayu's childhood friend Matsui Jurina has a secret crush on Mayu,but they're both girls. Mayu also had a fiancé call Kashiwagi Yuki who's very perfect and he is also Mayu's childhood friend (even though they met each other during 3 so both has no memory). But what if Mayu suddenly goes into a different dimension world? And her best friend Jurina turned into a handsome boy while Yuki remains as a boy? Who will Mayu choose? Her best friend or her fiancé?

[kuro808]

Mayu choosing between the two.

Sounds interesting

[mayuki_daisuki]

continue please!!

[Yagami.Rai]

Sounds interesting, wonder what will happen next!

[ryeangryu]

Interesting Prologue,

Mayu have to choose which one she loves,

looking forward for your next chapter!

d^.^b

 

[cisda83]

interesting prologue

I can't wait to see the story

Love triangle.....

Thank you for the great prologue

 

[leEwẬy]

Your prologue is interesting
Love triangle Yuki-Mayu-Jurina
Wonder who will Mayu choose
Hope it's Yuki  and Jurina with Rena
Anyway, update soon, please

[kokoiscute]

Thanks for your supporting everyone! I hope I'll not dissapoint everyone! 
 
Chapter 1 part one
 Standing under a cherry blossom tree, I was waiting for my best friend Jurina to come. It was the school opening ceremony the season when cherry blossom tree blooms rapidly. A lot of cherry blossom's petals were falling then I heard a voice shouting my nickname. I turned my head and saw Jurina running toward here shouting"Mayuyu" which was very embarrassing. Many students are laughing watching us, but I was a little used of these kind of things. Since Jurina is my childhood friend who already embarrass me from young. I walk toward Jurina then suddenly I was falling, then I notice that I tripped over my leg. I saw Jurina running toward me shouting something, I couldn't hear her but I can read her mouth saying "watch out".  My face got very close to the ground until my nose can feel the ground a little bit, but after I blink I don't have any memory of it.


I hope there's no grammar mistakes!
Hope everyone likes it... Thank you very much for reading~~~

[cisda83]

Ara... Mayu hit the road....

Jurina is not fast enough to rescue her....

What's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 

[kuro808]

Poor Mayuyu falling to the ground.

[leEwẬy]

Mayu hit the road 
Maybe that the way she come to other dimesion
Wonder what'll happen next
Update soon, please