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Hello everyone
This my first time post my fanfic there
And it's my first fanfic I ever post at my blog
Hope you will like it


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## CHAPTER 1 ##


#in the morning#

"Mayu chan... Can you make it fast!! I don't want to be late!!!" Sae shouted while knock Mayu's room. "Shigh, she just ingrone me?" Sae thought then went to the kitchen to prepare bento for both of them. After prepare that bento, she start to impatien because Mayu never appear, "what the hell make her so long?" Sae murmured. "Mayu chan, if you never come, I'm sure you will walk at school by yourself!!" Sae shout with a little anger at her voice ,"SAE CHAN WAIIIT!!!" Mayu shouted and run from her room who still manage her tie.


---- suddenly ----


****BRUUKK BRUUUKK BRUUKK****

"Ittaai..."
"Mayu chan what happen?" Sae run to Mayu who rubb her but.
Then Sae realized Mayu was fall from the stair and start laughing because she think Mayu face is really funny.
"Happy now? Huh" Mayu said pouting while hold her tear.
"Gomen.. Gomen... Mayu chan you should see where you walk" Sae help Mayu to stand up. Then she realized Mayu's tie still mess. "There.. There Mayu, let me help you to tying that" Sae start to tying Mayu's tie while Mayu still pouting at Sae.
"Okay,, that perfect, let's go to the school!!" Sae say happily while prepare her bicylcle.
"Why she really exited?" Mayu whispered to herself but Sae still can heard that, she just smirk because Mayu's action. Then Sae tell to Mayu to sit at the back sit of her bicycle and start bike as fast as she can because they both almost to late.


#At School#

"Here we are" Sae still manage her breath. Her sweat flowing like a waterfall.
"What that for? You want we die?" Mayu glare to Sae because she bike like crazy.
"That your fault! If you don't take so long to tying that, I don't have did that" Sae shout at Mayu. Then she realized Mayu face who change and she feel guilty.
"......."
"Mayu, gomen.. I didn't mean like that" Sae try to calm Mayu.
"No need to  sorry, because what you say is true" Sae was surprise because suddenly Mayu say and hug her.
"Hey,, why you hug me?" Sae still rub Mayu back.
"Nothink, I just want to hug you"

--- DONG DING DONG ----


"Psst.. Yukirin" Mayu try to hold her voice as low she can.
"Nani?" Yuki said with low voice to, because she doesn't want her teacher aware they were talking during of the lesson.
"Did you have a candy, I haven't get breakfast before. Sae don't want we late because of me." Mayu explain to Yuki as short as possible.
"I'm sorry Mayu, but I don't have candy or something that can you eat" Yuki say sorry to her bestfriend.
"I see.." Mayu take her head down then she sleep.
"How can she just sleep like this" Yuki look at Mayu whit a suprise.



**KNOCK KNOCK**




"Hontou ni gomenasai, I'm late" the girl said to the teacher.
"Oh you must be the ten ko sai, come in. And please introduce yourself" the teacher ask to the girl.
"HII!! My Name Jurina Matsui. I'm from Nagoya and move here because my father business. Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu!!" Jurina say happily.

"Kyaaa.. Kakkoi" a girl say
"She's really ikemen" another girl added

"It's look like she will be next player" the teacher thought then tell Jurina sit beside Mayu.

While Jurina walk to her seat, she look at the girl who sleep like a princess.
"Kawaii...." She thought. Then she want to wake that girl up, but Yuki touch Jurina hand and whispered something whit low voice.
"Don't wake she up" Jurina just nodded and smile to Yuki who sit ahead Mayu.
"Hey, my name is Yuki Kashiwagi. But my friend call me Yukirin. Yuki try to be friendly to the tenkousai.
"You're really beautiful, I felt very lucky can be transferred at school who full of princess , oh.. My name is.." Before Jurina has to finish her word. Someone yelled at her.
"URUSAIII!!! Mayu yelled at the person beside her.
"What that Watanabe? Are you sleep at my class again?" The teacher say whit anger on her face.

"It's not like that Shinoda Sensei"
"I don't need your explain" Mayu try to explain but she just punished to stand out at the corridor.

Mayu sigh and walk away from her seat. But before Mayu goes to the door, she just fainted. But Jurina so fast and she grab Mayu waist at the great time.

Everyone was shocked about that scene.
"I will take her to nursery" Jurina take Mayu whit bridal style.

"Kyaa.. She's really gentle" the girls of the class say like crazy.

"Mayu chan!!" Yuki stand up from her seat and run after Mayu and Jurina.

"Who they thing am I?" The teacher say toherself.



-TO BE CONTINUED-



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I think it's really short, sorry for my bad grammar
I still study hard fo make my english be better..

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2016, 04:42:45 PM »
Oh.... Is this going to be saeyuki or mayuki
Saejuri or jurimayu?
What is sae relationship with mayu? sisters? I'm sorry if i missed it...
Too short I want to read more.... I will be following this fic... :cool1:

Good job author-san...welcome to jphip....

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2016, 05:07:18 PM »
Oh.... Is this going to be saeyuki or mayuki
Saejuri or jurimayu?
What is sae relationship with mayu? sisters? I'm sorry if i missed it...
Too short I want to read more.... I will be following this fic... :cool1:

Good job author-san...welcome to jphip....

I still thinking about this story.. And I'll try to update that fast..
About SaeMayu relationship I will tell at next chap
Thanks for coment

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2016, 10:01:30 PM »
mmmm

It may be interesting story.

please continue.

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2016, 04:07:05 AM »
Yeaaahh there are Sae and Yuki :3

I hope it will be saeyuki and jurimayu in end

oh yeah welcome to jphip ,and nice ff btw :D
but I think you should proofread or something because I noticed that there are few of mistake in grammar, but thats okay its still read-able

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2016, 04:46:14 PM »
I was curious what will be the pairing, and i also curious about how will this story continued from this. I will follow this story, please continue
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Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2016, 03:29:29 PM »
Hello everyone I back xD

@Minami-chan : thanks for comment,
but I can't promise to update that fast
@buciq : do you want SaeYuki and JuriMayu?
I don't know but I still wonder who pair  I must to choose at the end.
@yocelin17 : Thanks, I will try my best to make this fic will be better.

I don't know if this fic will be interesting or be dissapointed you,
Especially about my grammar, I not really good write story in english.
So I can't make long fic, because I afraid to make you bore.
But I still do my best and keep learning anything.

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## CHAPTER 2 ##





"Okaa san.. Okaa san... Hic hic" Mayu say seem she have a bad dream.
Suddenly Sae opened the nursery door. "What happen to her?" Sae run to Mayu whit  worried in her face.
"I don't know, she just fainted before take shinoda sensei punishment" Jurina still look at Mayu holding Mayu's hand.
"What punishment?" Sae ask curiously.
"I think it is because Mayun't had breakfast this morning, and she get punishment because she fell sleep at Shinoda sensei class" Yuki explain while added look at Sae. Then she caressed Mayu cheek and she realized Mayu face is burning.
"Sae chan... Mayu is burning!! Her face turn red too" Yuki say panicked to Sae.

"Oh god.. Yukirin, can you tell teacher, because I want to take Mayu at hospital now. So I and Mayu go home early today" Sae carried Mayu at her back and run from that room.
"Sae chan, but.." Yuki can't finish her word because Sae already disappear. Jurina just look at the scane.
"I think it's will be triangle love" he thought  and smirk.
"What that for? Huh?" Yuki feel irritated because of Jurina smirk at that time.
"No.. No.. I just forget to introduce my self to that persone, if I don't mistake who you call Sae chan.Oh let's back at class, I don't need lose my first time at school" Jurina say nervouse and smile awkward at Yuki.
"Oh you are right, let's go Jurina san"

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"Sae chan, I'm alraight, you don't need take me at hospital" Mayu say in low tone.
"Okay, but I still need to take care you. I will carried you to home" Say said whit lovely tone to Mayu.
"But it's really long way, you can't carried me home, I don't want you get tired. Next week your tournament come" Mayu want to refuse but Sae interrup her.
"No need to argure Mayu!! You're my cousin and now you're responsibillity of my parent." Sae said and raise her voice.
"Gomen ne.. Sae chan. And Arigatou for always taking care me" Mayu thighten her grip around Sae neck.
"Just sleep Mayu, if you keep talk to me. I'm sure I will be tired because I must carried and talk to you"


-Back To School-

Luch Time


"Yukirin san, do you mind have lunch with me?" Jurina ask carefully,
because this her first day and she thing she must  make a friend.
"I don't mind, let's have lunch at rooftop, there I usualy spend my lunch time" she say and take her bento, Jurina just follow Yuki who walk away from the class.. "Wait me Yukirin....!!!"

After they're arrived at rooftop.

"Heii Rena, you're so fast, because I think the lunch time just start 2 minute ago. Or maybe you're  don't take a class before?" Yuki greet the girl who like finish her lunch.
"Aahh.. Heii Yukirin.. I just don't want to take that class because I didn't feel comfortable because I think something bad just happened" she said and look at the girl beside Yuki. "Who is she? I never seen her before" Rena ask still stare at Jurina.
"Oh.. She's ten ko sai at my class. And she..." Yuki want to finish her word but Jurina interup her.
"Hei.. My name is Jurina, Matsui Jurina... But for you just call me Jurina chan" Jurina smile then she take Rena hand.
"Eehh.." Rena just get suprise about Jurina action but she didn't want look lose her modesty.
"My name Rena, Matsui Rena. You can call me Rena if you want" she give her charming smile while shake Jurina hand.
"Sou ka... Let's eat our lunch. Before next class attended" Yuki said then she  start to eat her bento.

When they're enjoying their lunch, Jurina realized there is something disturbing thoughts am Rena. "Etto.. Rena chan, you look like uncomfortable? What happen? Am I bothering you? Are you don't like if I join whit you and Yukirin?" Jurina ask many question to Rena whit sad face.
"It's not like that Jurina, I just wondered what happen to me. I just feel something bad happened." Rena felt guilty because her make Jurina feel bad.

"Aahh.. Rena, did you know that... Mayu get fainted before, and Sae carried Mayu to house, do you want to cheek her after school? Oh you're to Jurina, if you want.. You can join with us" Yuki said after finish her lunch.
"I'm really want to see Mayu, but I have part time after school" Rena look down she feel bad because can't be beside sick Mayu her best friend or maybe her soulmate.

"I see.. What about you Jurina?" Yuki look at jurina wait her respon.
Anoo... I have something to do after school. I'm sorry I can't accompany you, beside I even greet her before. Is will be awkward if I join." Jurina try to refuse Yuki invitation politely. 

"Ahh.. Alright.. I will go by myself, beside Sae bicycle still in parking lot. And I think I have to deliver it" Yuki say pouted because her will be goes to SaeMayu house by herself.
"Yukirin kawaii... You look really adorable if you pouted like that" Jurina teased Yuki then try to hug Yuki but she fall at the end because Yuki avoid that sudden hug.

"Yeah.. I'm sure you don't think she cute after you see her other side" Rena grinning to Yuki then she get punch at her shoulder.
"Tch... Whatever, I go to class first!!" Yuki get up and leave Jurina and Rena. But rena just smirk because Yuki act like 5 years old child who lose her ballons.
"Rena chan... Can we exchange phone number or email or your another social media?" Jurina give her puppy eyes who can make anyone melt if see that.
"What should I give it to you? We just know each other about a few minute ago" Rena widden her eyes because sudden ask.
"Because we're friend. Yuki is my friend and you're Yuki friend. That mean you're my friend to" Jurina explain to Rena hope her wish will be granted. "What kind of that equal you make" Rena say still hold her smile whit Jurina explanation.
"Pleasee.... Pleasee... I want make many friend, it's hard to make friend" Jurina still make her negotiation whit Rena will be succeed. But she's wrong... The bell interup them convercation. "I think it's will be next time.
"Bye Jurina" Rena waving her hand and smile at Jurina.
"Okay.." Jurina smile back at Rena.
"Next time I will make you're mine" Jurina thought.

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After arriving at home, Sae realized no one inside, then she go to Mayu's room and Sae laying Mayu in her bed, then she walk to the kitchen to take towel and a basin of water to compress Mayu. When she returned from the kitchen, she heard the sound of crying from Mayu's room. She walk faster than before to cheek what happen.

"Okaa san... Don't leave me.. Hic hic hic... I promise I won't be a little brat anymore" Mayu sobbing while sleep. Sae put towel to Mayu fore head.
"Don't leave me alone,, I'm afraid to be alone hic hic" Mayu still sobbing.
"Mayu chan" Sae worried about her cousin.
"I think she had that dream again" Sae thought
"I'm here Mayu, I don't wanna make you feel lonely. I... I..."

Suddenly the bell was ringging. Sae shigned and go to the door. And she realized the guest is Yuki.
"Aahhh... Yukirin, come in? What bring you to here? Are you skip class?" Sae said coriously, because it's to early to left the school.
"Ettooo.... What about Mayu condition, is she alraight?" Yuki try avoid Sae question, because actually she skip her class just for see Mayu or maybe Sae.

"She's sleep at her room and she's still burning. Ahh.. I want to make porridge for Mayu, do you want something to eat or drink? I will serve it to you" Sae goes to kitchen left Yuki is still at living room. But Yuki follow Sae. "I want to help you" She smile like an angle and goes to the kitchen prepare porridge for Mayu. Suddenly she saw something at refrigerator, and take it.



Sae chan..... I and your Dad will go to Taipei for 3 days for our bussines, I put money at closet. And don't forget to give Mayu's medicine. We love you.
NB: Don't dare you burn this house xD"




"Mayu's medicine?" Yuki murmured, she want to ask Sae but she think it's not a good time to aks that question. She just save it for another time. Yuki saw Sae who still busy prepare porridge for Mayu, she really know Sae so good at kitchen. She want to help Sae, but Sae refused her. So Yuki just sit and wait Sae finished her pouridge.

"Yuki, do you want something? I will cook it for you" Sae put the porridge on the bowl.
"I'm not hungry, ohh... I see it at your refrigerator" she give the paper what she take before. Sae read this and she just nodded.
But she just ignored and follow Sae.
"Thanks Yukirin, let's go to Mayu's room. You said you're here for her right?" Sae put the porridge, a glass of water and some medicines on tray and carried this to Mayu's room. Yuki wondered why Sae put any medicines if Mayu just get fever.

Sae put that tray at the table near Mayu's bed. Then she change Mayu's towel. "Mayu chan.... You still sleep? Sae carresed Mayu cheek but Yuki just stare that lovely scane.
"Uuhh.. Sae chan... I have that dream again" Mayu eyes started watery,she still sobbed in silent. Then Sae hug Mayu thight. "Don't ever be sad again, I'm here with you... We are her for you, you're not alone Mayu. Of course we love you"
Mayu hug Sae at the same way. Then she realized Yuki who still look at them, Mayu release Sae hug.

"Ehh.. Yukirin, gomen I didn't realize you're here, what bring you're here? You ready miss me?" Mayu teased Yuki then give Yuki her charming smile.
"Mou... Mayu don't tease me, I really worried about you, you're my best friend." Yuki sit at Mayu bed. "I think it's time for you're medicine Mayu, let's me feed you before you take you're medicine" Sae interrupt that conversation and start feed Mayu. After half of porridge, Mayu say she didn't want it anymore because she say she not hungry. And take her medicine.

"Sae chan, why don't you take Yukirin home. I want to sleep. Beside I afraid if any jerk will be try to do something bad to Yukirin" Mayu push Sae then she prepare to sleep again and covered her face whit blanket.

"Let's me take you home Yukirin" Yuki just nodded and sit at back sit of Sae bicycle. "Hug me, or you will be fall in the middle of  the street. Suddenly Yuki face become red to hug Sae but luckyly Sae didn't notice it. And still bike her bicycle as fast her can.



-At The Cafe




"I think there she is" Jurina turn in at manga cafe that she sure Rena do her part time here.

"Welcome to our cafe, qre you alone?" one of the maid greet her. Jurina just nodded and the maid pointed back sit and Jurina smile wider because someone she look appear from staff room (maybe).
After Jurina sit, the maid ask Jurina what she want to order, but Jurina pointed Rena.
"I want her to take my order" Jurina give her wink at the maid.

"How can do you find me?" Rena shout whit low voice at Jurina(????)
"Of course because I want to be your friend so I just to follow you and get my order" Jurina just see Rena whit her puppy eyes
"Alraight, what do you want to order?" Rena take her note and pen about to write Jurina order

"I want your number, your email and all of your social account" Jurina say still hold her smile. Rena just sigh, she think Jurina won't be give up until she get what she want.

"Okay.. You win" Rena write all of Jurina order and give it to her

##
Email : m.rena@xxxx.xxx
Phone : xxx-xxxxxx
Twitter : @rena_m

-Rena Matsui-
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"Happy now?" Rena want to walk away but Jurina grab her hand.
"Rena chan... Arigatou" Rena just smile then Jurina say to Rena about her actually order.
"Can I order banana split? I think I want to stay here for a while.. And I never think you will be damn handsome if you cross dreser "
Rena just blushing and walk away to continue her job.

[ Yeah I make Rena have her part time at danso cafe ]



-Yuki's Home--




"Thanks for taking me home, actually you don't must to did it, because Mayu still sick and she need you." Yuki say but she didn't dare look at Sae eyes. Sae notice it, she know Yuki always shy if there only two of them.

"I don't mind, you're my friend, and I don't want if beautifull girl like you walk to her home by byherself.
It's to dangerous" Sae said while hold Yuki's hand and that thing make Yuki blushing badly.

"Aahh... Kawaii ne.." Sae pinched Yuki cheek.
"Sae chan...." Yuki blushed like tomato.

"Nee.. Yukirin, thanks for be Mayu friend. Don't ever make her sad. Okay" Sae said in serious tone
"I promise, I will never make Mayu sad... She my really best friend and the someone who always be at first line if I down." Yuki said honestly to Sae.

"Sou ka... Don't leave Mayu alone to long.. She's your beautifull cousin to". Yuki give Sae her angelic smile.
"Ohh okay... Bye Yuki" Sae start to bike her bicycle to her house, while Yuki just wavet at her.

"Mayuu...." Suddenly this name come to Yuki's head but she just ignore that.



--SaeMayu House--



"Sae chan, you're home?" Mayu say whit low tone.
"I'm here Mayu" Sae hold Mayu hand
"Where is Oji-chan and Oba-chan?" Mayu ask her cousin because she feel this house really desolate.
"They go to Taipei about 3 days. So if you want something just ask me, okay"


"Sae chan...." Mayu want to ask something to Sae,
"Do you want something Mayu?" Sae look at Mayu gently.
"Sleep whit me tonight, can you? I little afraid because that dream. Please" Mayu held Sae hand like she doesn't want to let it go.

"Okay Mayu... But I want to clock the door before" Sae carresed Mayu cheek and kiss Mayu fore head. She actually know why Mayu act like this. She sure that dream really distrub her. Sae goes downstair and lock all of the door then she goes to Mayu's room again. Sae laid beside Mayu, suddenly she felt Mayu hug her.




"Sae don't ever leave me, like what them did to me"



-TO BE CONTINUED-


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Ahh I can't make long fic because I not good at english, and I can't promise you to update fast. I have another job. I don't want my boss yell at me,  If I finish late from the schedule that she gave.

And I will said this again---
Sorry for my bad grammar... I still try get better..
Thanks for read
« Last Edit: January 23, 2016, 11:47:19 AM by yumii07 »

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Which pairing do I prefer?
thats not important actually ,just write the pairing that you like the most :D

Well if you want I can proof-reading ur fic. just send me by PM

but you're getting better ,keep the hardwork! :on gay:
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Hi!!nice update you've finally made sae at mayu's relationship clear...

Well I'm a saeyuki and jurimayu and wmatsui shipper... So I'm liking this story

Don't be bothered by your english and grammar its understandable to me...
I'm not good at it too...lol..practice makes perfect

Just keep on writing....

Update soon...

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Somehow, I'm sensing that actually Yuki likes Mayu. Oh, I don't know. Maybe I'm just a bit biased since I'm a MaYuki shipper. :dunno:
But, hey! I LIKE this fic.
Well, if you're not sure with the grammar, having a proofreader is something that you need. :-)
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Jaa... 48 is about skinship

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@buciq : I still think about pair that I must choose in the end.
yeah I think I need help to make this fic will be better.. And I just write this fic by my phone
Because I was left my laptop at hometown.
@arawche079 : ahh.. So you are SaeYuki and Wmatsui shipper?
Yeah.. I'm happy if you like and didn't confuse whit my fic. Keep read
@mayuki_daisuki : ahh you're there? I like your fic too.. Thanks for read my fic
@faanpal : No actually Yuki just see Mayu as her bestfriend and her soulmate.
Thanks for comment..


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I think chapt 3 will be another person will be come..
But I still have much another job.
And I don't want to lose my job. Because It's very hard to find a job today.

One more again
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sugoiiii you write this whole chapter via phone only ?? :O

just think about it carefully ,either way us (reader) will accept author's decision.

if you needed any help just contact me okay, me also still learning how to write a good story.

just i'll be a good boy while wait for your update :on gay:
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After read the second chapter i realize that you always wrote "whit", i think you mean "with", i just want to correct it so this story become better.

Thank you for this story once more.  :thumbup
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sugoiiii you write this whole chapter via phone only ?? :O

just think about it carefully ,either way us (reader) will accept author's decision.

if you needed any help just contact me okay, me also still learning how to write a good story.

just i'll be a good boy while wait for your update :on gay:

Arigatou..... I hope you still read my fic after this





After read the second chapter i realize that you always wrote "whit", i think you mean "with", i just want to correct it so this story become better.

Thank you for this story once more.  :thumbup

Really???? I didn't notice it before
Thanks for tell me.... I was re-write it...

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Your welcome, i hope your fanfic continue to be better after this
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eeehhhh jurina falling in love with rena already ??? its interested..waiting for next chapter author san  :cow: XD
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Matsui Jurina-Kojima Haruna-Yuko Oshima

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Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae,Mayu,Yuki, Jurina,Rena,and Other) - Chapter 2 -
« Reply #17 on: January 24, 2016, 02:52:54 PM »
@Culjurio : are you WMatsui shipper? Hope you will like my fic.

Ahhh... I'm studying hard so that ways of writing I'm better. In this chapter will be new comer who showed up. hope you like it. And I hope no more mistake in my writing.

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##CHAPTER 3##



"Mayu, I will go to school now! You're sure will be alright if I left you alone?" Sae put the tray on Mayu's table.
"Don't worry Sae chan, I just get fever.. I will be alright soon, just get your ass and go to school, I don't want you to be late because you take care of me"

"Okay.. but make sure your ate this porridge  and all of  your pill!!

"Haiii.... Haiii.... Now you act like a doctor" Mayu chuckle and start to ate her breakfast even thought she don't really want to eat, because all that goes into her mouth tasted really bitter.

"I go now! But I will back so fast I can. Lock all of the door and don't go anywhere, or my parents gonna kill me, if something happens to you." Sae said and she left Mayu with hesitate on her mind.

"I know Sae chan.. Just go now" Mayu give a big smile to Sae, because she don't want to be vex her cousin. Then Sae goes to school left Mayu eventhought she really want to take care her cousin.



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"Why that dream always come lately?" Mayu thought because she always had a dream about her mother lately.


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-FLASHBACK


"Otou san....... Why? why did the stupid doctor said if my mom's will be gone forever? She just sleep right?" Little Mayu sobbing while  shake died body of her Mother.
"Mayu chan,, look at your mother... She's beautiful, isn't she? What the doctor said false.. She always beside you,, beside us" Mayu's father try to calm her little princess. Because he very understand how the feel if you lost someone important in early age.

"No!!! She lied, oka san always said she will be my side forever. But oka san lied to me. She sleep like she doesn't want to wake up anymore. She doesn't love me. She just love kami sama. So oka san left us and meet kami sama." Mayu crying hard and hug her mother.

"I hate oka san" Mayu still sobbed

"Mayu chan... Don't ever say like that.. She love us.. She love you"

"But, why she don't bring me with her. I want always by her side"

"Mayu chan... You still have me, your father.. We will meet again with your mother. But you must promise, you must to be good girl." What can his do just hug Mayu. He hold his tears, because he doesn't want look weak when it like this,especially infront her little princess.

Mayu's mother died because had liver cancer, but she never show her weakness infront anyone. She always smile like never feel hurt.

"Oka san... Hic hic,, I promise I will be god girl for you" Mayu swept her tears and give her mother kiss on forehead for last time.

"Otou san.. It's about two of us right.. You will be always beside me... Promise me" Mayu ask her father to pingky swear and her father smile and accept what his little girl want.

-END OF FLASHBACK-


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-Meanwhile At school gate-


"Here you're... Call me if your school finished, and I will pick you up" a girl who look like a cat said to another girl.
"Alright honey,, have a nice day" then she give a peek on her girlfriend lips.
"Jaa ne... Ahh.. Don't dare you firlt with another cute girl or I'm sure to kill you" the girl who look like a cat  said while pinched her girlfriend cheek.

"Okay.. I love you"

"I love you too"


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-SaeRena Class-


A girl come into the class with quiet she just look down, but she still be able to steal the entire outlook of the people who are in class. After she look her best friend, her face was change, her smile widened and she look like an angel who fell to  earth.

"Sae-chan.. It's very looong time not to see you" She hug her friend tightly.

"Easy Atsuko... Where have you been" Sae release herself from that long hug.

"I just go to Dubai for Vacation"
"WHAT!!! You left school just to vacation?"
"Heii!! Don't ever said like that.. There's no way that I left school without preparation. I took online classes"

"What do you mean about online class? Sae said with full curious in her face.

"You just have to know more about the owner of this school" she said as if that's a normal thing. Sae just shook her head because she don't know what else she must said.


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"Ohayou... *yaawn*" Rena greet her friend but she look like so damn sleepy.

"Ohaa!! Rena chan.. Don't miss me? Huh?"
"Kyaaa... Acchan... It's really you? I miss you so damn" the both of them give a teletubbies hug.

"Rena chan, why you look like so tired? Are you lack of sleep?" Sae said interrupt both of AtsuRena moment.

"Oh,, don't mind of me.. I just took hours extra work, because I need something to buy. And my salary is not enough to buy it... Heheee"

"Eehh... Don't ever do that again.. If you need money you can ask me"

"You help me so much at the past.. I don't want to vex you anymore"
"Renaa... You're my ex.. My best ex girlfriend I ever have. So if you get into big trouble just ask me okay?" Atsuko pinched Rena cheek who make Rena blush so hard.

"Aahh Sae you're just jealous right? You should search for girlfriend... And I'm sure you will realized what feel of love" Atsuko teasing her friend still clings at Rena arm.

"Of course I have!!!"

"WHO!!!" AtsuRena ask at the same time

"Ettoo... Ettooo"


-DING DONG DING DONG-


Suddenly the teacher come in, and all of the student sit on them own seat.
For this time Sae make it out of question she really wants to avoid.

"Fhiuuuhh... I'm safe now" Sae thought.


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(Let's Skip the school scene - this time school was finished)


-RING RING RING-

Mayu wake up and pick up her phone. It was Sae.
"Moshi.. Moshii"
"Mayu chan,, gomenasai... I have sudden practice, the tournament was close.. So the coach does not want us to lose in the game"

"No problem Sae chan, I'm feel better right now" Mayu said at the other line.



"get off your ass, and let's practice!" the coach shout to all tennis member.



"Mayu chan,, I will leave know.. Please take care"

*beeb*beeb*beeb*


"Sae chan,, why are you always worried about me?" Mayu look at wallpaper on her phone, it's she and Sae hug each other.


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A car stopped in front of the school gate and a woman standing near the car. it's for sure, she is waiting for someone who is in this school.

"Oh.. Honey! Did I make your wait for me?" The younger girl clings on the older girl.
"Who is she?" The older girl ask her girlfriend"
"Oh, she's my best friend. And actually she's my ex" the younger girl explain to her girlfriend.

"My name is Matsui Rena, nice to meet you, Kojima san"
"You know my name?" The older girl suprise because she really sure never meet this girl before.
"Of course, Atsuko tell me about you before" Rena give her angelic smile for the girlfriend of her ex.


Haruna face turn to blank, she don't know what to ask. But Atsuko patt her shoulder.. "Can we go now?"
"Oh.. Of course,, let's get in.. Good bye matsui san" she wave her hand to Rena

"I will go now,, bye Rena chan" Atsuko kiss Rena on the cheek. Who make Rena suprise and push Atsuko, because she don't want Kojima will be misunderstanding about them relationship.

Atsuko get in Haruna car and left Rena behind.

"Like I think, Atsuko never change.. She always warm to me even thought what I was did to her at the past" Rena smile while look the car.


(actually there someone who hide at bushes still look at the scene)

"Rena chan....."


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-At Danso Cafe-

"Ahh your came again" the danso maid (I don't know what they call) who she meet before greet her.
"I want banana split again, it's really delicious" Jurina said and give her puppy smile.
"Okay, take your seat here and we will bring your order"


*CLING*

Suddenly Jurina look at the person who new one come into the cafe. She felt recognized that person.

"Yukirin,, what bring you here?" Jurina wave her hand and ask Yuki to sit with her. And Yuki just nodded and sit with Jurina.

"Tell me, what bring you here? Are you into girl?" Jurina teased Yuki.

"Actually I usually come here, because Rena have part time at here and this cafe have a very strawberry cake I ever ate" Yuki try to explain then she felt about want to go to bathroom. And ask Jurina if the maid come to make order for her. Jurina just nodded.

Then the danso maid come back while bring what Jurina order. Like was Yuki said, she ordered Strawberry cake to the danso maid.



"Etto...."
"Yes? Anything you want to order?"
"Noo.. It's enough. I just want to ask. Where's Rena, I mean Matsui Rena? "

"Oh today it's her day off. Why do you ask? Do you like her? " The danso maid ask to Jurina, who make Jurina speechless. Then she smile at Jurina then walk away left blushing Jurina.

TO BE CONTINUED


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It's to short?
I'm sorry, but I think I must update today because I have huge job until next month.
I hope I can buy laptop next time,
it's really hard if I write by my phone.

And actually this fic don't ever edited before.. If there much mistake I'm really sorry. And just tell me.

I will edited next time.
« Last Edit: January 24, 2016, 05:12:22 PM by yumii07 »

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hey its me again

about the question you asked earlier
of course i'll read yours as long as you update this fic :D
*probably i'll update mine as well*

ojou(?) I think you mistaken ojou for otou.
ojou is kind like mistress something
otou is father
in this case I think otou is what you meant right?

hmmm...
I swore my heart skipped beat when I saw SaeRena *lol

so rena is working as danso maid (?)
and she is acchan's ex gf ?

still curious about next.

otsukareee~ :on gay:
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hey its me again

about the question you asked earlier
of course i'll read yours as long as you update this fic :D
*probably i'll update mine as well*

ojou(?) I think you mistaken ojou for otou.
ojou is kind like mistress something
otou is father
in this case I think otou is what you meant right?

hmmm...
I swore my heart skipped beat when I saw SaeRena *lol

so rena is working as danso maid (?)
and she is acchan's ex gf ?

still curious about next.

otsukareee~ :on gay:

Yeah,, Rena is Atsuko ex
And she be whit KojiHaru now

Ahh... I just forget about what father call in jpun..
So I search about it, but I see I get troll xD

Okay.. I will edit

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