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Title: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: paperbagkun on October 29, 2012, 05:44:06 PM
17:00 - ART GALLERY

Maeda Atsuko professionally slipped her way across the laser detection with her cat-like moves when suddenly someone's shrieking blared through her spy earpiece, distracting her in the process.
 Fortunately, she was able to position herself back up immediately. But it couldn't get anymore worst that she almost got her face touching the laser right in front of her, a few inches away from her nose.
A sweat trickled down her jaw as she gulped. She successfully made it across the laser detection.  :cow: (Yeay Atsuko!)

"That wasn't uncalled for." Atsuko spoke through her earpiece.

"Sorry, my popcorns fell off the desk. Hehe." A female voice replied.

"Anyway, I got the blueprint."

"Oh uhh by the way, there's a vent above you, right? Do me a favor and get up there and make your way until you see another vent entrance. Actually, I need you to spy on something. I think you're not the only spy there."

"Cool."

So, Maeda Atsuko pulled out her silenced 9mm gun and shot at the vent screws, gaining her access to get up there. She took a big jump and grabbed the edge of the vent, pushing herself going into it.

...to be resume mission

:welcome Welcome to my first AKB fanfic you JPHiP dwellers!  :jphip:
Title: Re: Obvious Agents - Atsumina (Prologue)
Post by: hazwani on October 29, 2012, 06:03:54 PM
YEAHHH,,,
NICE..
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
ATSUMINA THE BEST  :inlove:
Title: Re: Obvious Agents - Atsumina (Prologue)
Post by: Pdpond on October 29, 2012, 06:06:05 PM
Wow! New ATSUMINA Story  :heart:
look forward new update :deco:
Title: Re: Obvious Agents - Atsumina (Prologue)
Post by: yourockme on October 30, 2012, 03:19:20 AM
ATSUMINA!!!   :nya:
Whoo SEXY Acchan  :drool:
update soon
Thank You  :byebye:
Title: Obvious Agents - Chapter 1 - Mission #1 + Notes about this fic
Post by: paperbagkun on October 31, 2012, 08:41:40 AM
17:30 - CURATOR'S OFFICE

"We got the disc."

"Good. Now get to the extraction point. I can't provide you a chopper for easy escape though. But there'll be a van waiting in the parking lot. "

"Thanks anyway."

Takahashi Minami along with her companions, Kojima Haruna and Minegishi Minami were top secret agents. Apprentice level I might add. Had been briefed to make their escape.

"Parking lot?! That's like WAY below us!" Miichan shocked and started to rummage her hair.  :mon wtf:

"Don't worry. We'll make it." Takamina reassured.

 Unknowingly, someone was spying above them in a vent. Maeda Atsuko was keen to see what they're made of.

"Hey, Ace? You saw them? Are they agents of another agency?" A voice resonated through Atsuko's earpiece.

"I've never seen them. They stole a disc from the curator's computer."

"Eh... got nothing to do with us. Just get yourself out of there."

"I'll stick around a bit. Let's see what they've got."
---

19:03 - ART GALLERY - ONWARDS TO LASER DETECTION AREA

"I don't get it man. We wear wigs on missions too. It makes my scalp itch yo." A certain Minegishi complained.

"I was wondering about that. We also have to go undercover in school tomorrow. I don't like crossdressing." Haruna said and bumped into Miichan. "What the- Miichan!"
On the other hand, Atsuko caught up with them who was still in the vent. Turned back to the same place where she avoided those laser beams. And she couldn't believe her eyes.

"Takamina! You first!" Miichan shoved Takamina to front.

"No, after you!" Takamina shoved Haruna to front.

"Nay nay! After you!" Haruna shoved Miichan to front. And what it seems to be never ending of changing turns.  :panic:

 Neither of them wouldn't even dare to pass the first obstacle, arguing over who should go first. Maeda Atsuko thought that she had found those who could rival her... but they were just like those small fries she met. :smhid

"Wasted my time. I'm outa here. Get the chopper-"

BUMP!

KKKKKKKKRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!

"Damn!" Atsuko cursed.

"Ace, get out of there!" The voice through the earpiece warned.

"Give me five minutes! Get the chopper ready in air! We're changing the extraction point!"

"I'm on it!"


The alarm went off as Miichan stumbled on her leg and caused her to fall through the laser beams. She quickly scrambled on her feet. Mission went well for Atsuko in the first place but with the arrival of the three, it marred Atsuko's escape. She quickly put on her mask and leaped out of the vent. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan immediately sensed Atsuko's presence as they heard her footsteps.

"THEY'RE IN HERE!" A security guard appeared and roared to his mates.

Not wasting time, Atsuko signaled the three by whistling at them and bolted away.

"We have no choice. Let's follow that spy!" Takamina told her friends.

19:10 - WHILST ESCAPING

"Hey! Who are you?!" Haruna shouted at Atsuko who was right in front.

"Keep your head low, they're shooting at us and don't lose track of me!" Atsuko yelled.

PEW! PEW! PEW!

The sounds of gunshots deafening ears, made Minegishi jumped.

"Aaaaaaahhh man, bad idea!"  :OMG: Minegishi cried, avoiding the stray bullets. Takamina and Haruna were also trying their best to avoid.

"Minegishi, stop throwing tantrum!" Takamina shouted.

"I'm not! I'm just panic!

"Ace, chopper's ready near your position."

"The balcony? It's right infront of me!" Atsuko cried out, pressing on the earpiece in right her ear for clear hearing.

"Affirmative!"

"Roger! You three! At the end of the balcony, just jump into the chopper!" Atsuko shouted, slightly turning her head at the three behind her.

Atsuko took out a flashbang from her backpack and threw it to the back as the flashbang discharged, blinding the chasing security guards. The chase continued until the end of the balcony of the building. A chopper was already hovering in the air and its sliding door was opened for the agents to leap in. Following after, Atsuko waved her hand as a signal for the three to move further ahead of her as she pulled out another flashbang.

Thereafter Takamina, Haruna and Miichan leaped ahead from the balcony and went inside the chopper with Maeda behind them, jumping a few seconds late when the chopper takes off. She missed...

...to be resume mission...

I always wanted to see Acchan starring in spy movies. Oh recently there's a news that she stars in a horror movie! What fun!  :cow: I appreciate if you could give me ideas for this fic since I decided that this fic stars the AKB48 feat. Artists/Actors/Actresses. What do you think? I'm not a good writer, I lack vocab, spy things and all but I'll try my best.  :deco:


Title: Re: Obvious Agents - (Mission 1) + and a few notes about this fic
Post by: sakura_drop_ on October 31, 2012, 09:13:16 AM
This is soooo awesome!!! I hope Bakamina/Kai is going to catch her!!!  :wub: :wub:

And I hope Yuko-sama is going to appear. Well, I believe she's going to appear as we have Haruna in this fic  XD

Thank you for this cool update!!  :bow:

And yeah, I can imagine Acchan and Yuko-sama in some action packed movie, like spies or agents  :wub: :wub: :inlove:
Title: Obvious Agents - Chapter 1 - Mission #1 Accomplished
Post by: paperbagkun on November 01, 2012, 04:23:22 PM
19:30 - IN THE AIR

It was only a feet away from the balcony. However the chopper had already taken off the sooner she could enter. The agent name given to her- "Ace" just slapped her right in the face. The Ace that would die because she made a huge mistake on her jump certainly be downright funny to her fellow agents- how could aces make mistakes? Even an apprentice could survive jumping a skipping rope.

Then, a pair of hands appeared grasping both of Maeda's arms before she really fell. She was shocked, indeed because she thought she was going to die and leave the world- too soon for her age. A soothing voice knocked on her mind's door.

"Are you alright?"

Atsuko nodded and climbed up with Takamina's support. Atsuko lacked so much energy from all the mad adrenaline so she sits on the chopper's floor, away from the door. Takamina pushed the sliding door closed and went back joining her mates.

"Could it be that you boys are AIA agents?" Owner of the female voice appeared to them from the cockpit.

"Uhh... Takamina?" Miichan tugged on her sleeve.

"Don't worry. These guys are the JIA. Ahem. Yes, we're the AIA agents. I'm Agent Takahashi and these two are my comrades, Agent Kojima and Agent Minegishi." Takamina patted Miichan's back and answered the question.

"AIA?" Atsuko asked.

"Akihabara Intelligence Agency. They operate within Akihabara only. And also is our sister-agency." The female stated.

"Yes. And thanks for everything Agent..." Takamina looked at Atsuko.

"Agent Ace."

"Agent Horikita."

"Thanks for everything, Agent Ace and Agent Horikita. Pretty secretive aren't you, with that mask?" Haruna thanked and asked about Atsuko's identity masking.

"Ace usually does not wear a mask when she's off on a mission. So this time... actually kind of rare thing for me to see." Horikita said.

And the chopper flied towards Akihabara...

18:03 - AIA HQ

"Thanks for everything, Agent Horikita!" Takamina shook hands with Horikita before leaping off the chopper, joining Haruna and Miichan.
After that, the three would have to report everything to the leader of AIA, Akimoto Yasushi. They ran off to his office and found that Agent Oshima, who guides them on every mission also present there.

"You guys are alright!" Oshima exclaimed when she saw the three. She quickly went closer to them.

"Yeah." Haruna waved.

"I was getting worried because I received no transmission from you guys after that briefing." Oshima sighed.

"My bad. My earpiece probably dropped or got destroyed." Takamina frowned.

"We managed to get the disc anyway! Here, Akimoto-sensei!" Miichan walked to Akimoto's desk and handed the disc to him. He stood up from his seat and walked in front.

"Thankfully, you're all alright. You must never fail a mission as simple as this." He spoke.

"We actually encountered a problem when we're trying to get to the extraction point however, agents of JIA helped us through it and dropped us on the rooftop awhile ago." Haruna explained, sending death glares at Miichan.

Takamina walked to the corner of Akimoto Yasushi's office and let her body fall on the sofa there. So comfortable. Oh yes. Her action was rude but she knew Akimoto-sensei wouldn't mind anyway. He knew how tired the girls were being as undercover agents- to crossdress and act like men at the same time was a heavy task for them. Takamina pulled the wig off her head and fixed her hair.

"Mission accomplished anyway." Miichan pouted.

"I see. The JIA agents helped you three. Did you identify the agents?" Akimoto pushed his glasses upward and smiled- there was a hint of mysterious to it.

"Yes, Sir. They're Agent Ace and Agent Horikita." Haruna reported.

"I see. Tomorrow there will be recruits from JIA coming to assist AIA. I've requested three agents from them to your spy unit." Akimoto briefed.

"What?!" Takamina jerked up from the sofa.

"But take care not to expose your undercover." Akimoto put a serious tone.

"That's sudden, Sir. You did not mention about it earlier during the afternoon meeting." Oshima said.

"I like giving surprises, Oshima. So that'll add up to 7 spies." Akimoto smiled.

As much as they respected Akimoto... he could be a child at some points.

...mission accomplished...
   ...to be next chapter...

Haiyo everyone!  :jphip: I managed to finish this in a day! Agent Horikita- yes she's actress Horikita Maki! Woohoo! First actress appearance after Acchan! Horikita Maki as a gadget girl is so cool. I would definitely write a lot more scenes of her but this fiction will maintain its AKB48 fiction. If you're still confused, Takamina-Nyannyan-Miichan are undercover agents that crossdress. They're still women, yep.  :cow:

This is soooo awesome!!! I home Bakamina/Kai is going to catch her!!!  :wub: :wub:

And I hope Yuko-sama is going to appear. Well, I believe she's going to appear as we have Haruna in this fic  XD

Thank you for this cool update!!  :bow:

And yeah, I can imagine Acchan and Yuko-sama in some action packed movie, like spies or agents  :wub: :wub: :inlove:

@sakura_drop_ - Oh yes! Yuko is already part of this fiction!
Title: Re: Obvious Agents - Chapter 1 - Mission #1 Accomplished
Post by: saeyu on November 01, 2012, 05:51:56 PM
MAKI!!

Let's have danso party with Maki and Acchan!! lol

I absolutely love action stories! Let's see what these new joiners are gonna be next chapter...and Ace...
Title: (10 Nov) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: paperbagkun on November 10, 2012, 07:49:38 AM
07:00 - AIA DORMITORY


Takamina was the first to wake up amongst the three of them. She blinked her eyes a few times, slowly opened them and yawned, one hand covered her mouth. She sat up and stretched her arms upward then moved to her right, tapping Haruna's cheek then to her left, pinching Miichan's cheek.


"Ah, Takamina. 5 more minutes." Haruna groaned and pulled her blanket above her.


"Come on now. We can't be late for our first day." Said Takamina, getting off their king size bed.


"Takamina, are we visiting Akimoto-sensei first?" Miichan asked Takamina, as she rubbed her eyes.


"Yes, our class starts at 9. I'll go switch on the heater in the bathroom then to the kitchen to prepare our breakfast. You two better washed up already by the time I'm done." Takamina told them then proceeded into the bathroom. After a moment, she went out and headed to the kitchen.


"Haruna, get up." Miichan called.


"Go wash up first, I'll be next." Haruna's voice muffled.


"Ok." Miichan got up from the bed and wore her bedroom slippers. She then walked to the towel rack and took her towel then trotted into the bathroom.


The bathroom's temperature was warm as Takamina already switched on the heater earlier. Miichan spotted three toothbrushes each they owned rested in a mug which had a Minnie Mouse print on it. Minnie Mouse reminded her of Takamina, she thought. Quickly dismissed the thought, she turned the water tap and let the water flowed as her palms felt the cold water running. She then brought the water into her mouth as she picked her toothbrush and pinched a bit of toothpaste, brushing her teeth.


In the kitchen, Takamina was pondering on what should she cook for breakfast. Pondering back and forth to be exact. Well, she had to express it; scratching the back of her head which was not itching, stroking her imaginary beard, looking up to see if the bulb had been lighted in her cloud of imagination. She opened the fridge and eyed some eggs. She decided to make omellete rice.


Haruna was still in bed, just resting her eyes and pounded her legs on the bed to stay awake. Her mind was preoccupied with the thought that they had to start their college life in disguise. She didn't mind disguising as she was skilled in it but to disguise her gender was another matter. On top of that, as a male.


07:30


"Black or blonde...?" Takamina contemplated on her choice of wigs.


"I think both suit you but I prefer you wear the black one like you wore yesterday." Haruna pointed at the black wig.


"I think so too. The blonde one might... make you stand out so much with that height of yours." Said Miichan.


"You don't have to mention about my height." Takamina pouted then she put on the black wig.


"Oh, Haruna. Do you wanna wear my glasses? It doesn't have degrees on it." Miichan suggested as she handed the glasses to Haruna.


"Sure. But what about you?" Haruna asked.


"I'll wear a beanie hat. Don't wanna look plain and all." Miichan said.


"Takamina, are you just gonna wear like that?" Haruna turned to Takamina, seeing her putting some hair gel on her wig and raked the fringe up.


"Kakkoii. Where'd you get that idea havin' your hair like that?" Miichan complimented as she saw what Takamina did to her wig.


"Zayn Malik of One Direction." Takamina said and made sure how she looked like once more in front of the mirror, "Coz' you've got that one thing!" Takamina spun to the two, sung out a line from the lyric of the famous UK boyband's song.


"Ha, that's nice." Haruna smiled weakly and shrugged her shoulders then reached for her school bag.


"Aww come on! You admit that was good!" Takamina exclaimed.


"Let's go, midget! To sensei we go!" Miichan opened the door as Haruna went out.


07:34 - AIA BUILDING


Since they lived in the AIA's dormitory which was next to AIA building, the trip to Akimoto's office didn't take so much time. They took the elevator and went a few floors up. They got out and made their way to the reception.


"Morning. I'm Agent Takahashi. Is Akimoto-sensei's in his office?" Takamina asked the receptionist who was over the reception desk.


"Oh. He's not in his office at the moment. He said to come back after you finish your class this afternoon." The receptionist stood up.


"Ah man." Miichan groaned.


"He left you three something in Garage." The receptionist said.


"Cool! He let us drive!" Takamina high fives Haruna and Miichan.


"Also, words entered my ears that your unit will be working together with JIA's."


"Yeah. Suddenly Akimoto-sensei requested a unit from them. Are we that bad handling with Akihabara?" Haruna sighed.


"Perhaps Akimoto-sensei knew something and didn't tell you guys yet. You can meet the JIA unit in the lounge by the way. Have a nice day." The receptionist sat down and went back continuing his work.


The three thanked the receptionist and decided to head to the lounge. As they reached the lounge they heard a chattering then Takamina immediately pinned her back to the wall, followed by the other two. They crouched near the edge and secretly peeked.


 "Wow, that beauty wearin' catsuit early in the morning. Rawr." Miichan silently growled.


"Which?" Takamina asked.


"The one standing in the middle." Miichan said.


"I've been wanting to wear catsuit during missions-" Haruna mentioned.


"But we're stuck being undercover agents. And to top it, cross dress." Takamina continued.


"I know right." Miichan sighed.


 A female figure stood at the center of the lounge. Another two female sitting on a couch. One of them whom Takamina and friends quickly identified her as Agent Horikita. Lastly, a male standing near the mini bar, drinking a canned coffee drink.


"Acchan, you're really thinking through about taking Akimoto Yasushi-san's request, right?" Horikita spoke.


"I'm tired of worldwide missions anyway. Let's stay in Japan for awhile." The one called Acchan said.


"Where were we in the last mission before we're back in Japan? Oh yeah, you almost blew up Malaysia's Petronas Twin Towers' bridge! Ha ha ha! That's Ace quality, no offense there, Acchan." The male agent laughed.


"I know right." Acchan giggled.


In the hiding, Takamina turned to her friends and ushered them to stand up, leaving the area. She had seen enough, she knew how Agent Ace looked like behind her mask. The rest didn't matter to her, she began to wonder.


"That beauty you said, Miichan, she's Agent Ace." Takamina said.


"Serious?" Miichan had her hand on Takamina's shoulder.


"Say, where is Malaysia?" Haruna asked out of the blue.


"Southeast Asia." Takamina facepalmed.


08:00 - NIPPON PRIVATE UNIVERSITY


The three arrived with their motorbikes Akimoto provided. Shortly after, Agent Oshima came in her black Porsche driving into the campus parking lot.


"Huh? Isn't that Yuko?" Miichan pointed at the black Porsche.


"Yeah. Let's get her." Takamina said and the three drived their bikes into parking lot.


Oshima Yuko found a nice spot to park her Porsche. It was a good thing she came early. She turned off the engine and picked up her belongings as she opened her car's door.


"YUUUUUUKOOOOOO!" Miichan shouted the name as she jogged along with Takamina and Haruna.


"Ohayo." Yuko greeted after she locked her car. A few beeps heard. Then she walked with the three into the campus. They chatted whilst walking.


"Nyan Nyan looks handsome by the way." Yuko eyed at the tall person with glasses walking next to her. Haruna briefly looked at Yuko before she turned her attention in front. Her cheeks turned pink and Yuko definitely saw that.


"Desho?" Takamina chuckled and smacked Haruna's back.


"Urusai!" Haruna shouted.


"Ha ha ha ha ha!"


...to be continued...


This chapter has a lot of dialogues. I'm sorry but I managed to put some details. I'll improve more. Aaa about the pairings- Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc. thing... I'll be real and subtle about it lol good luck finding OTP moments
Title: Re: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: Haruko on November 10, 2012, 08:04:32 AM
 11LEt`s DANSO!!! :D yeah.. kojiyuu.. and atsumina? maybe?... but.. three new agents.. one of the is acchan ..
Title: Re: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 10, 2012, 06:57:51 PM
This is amazing, especially Yuko-sama  :wub: :wub:

I wait for mayuyu, Yukirin and Rena (especially her) to appear!  :deco:
Title: Re: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: bimbo on November 14, 2012, 07:49:04 AM
LOVE this  XD
Title: Re: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: kahem on November 18, 2012, 03:25:50 AM
Great! Can't wait to see what will happen ^^
Title: Re: (10 NOV) Obvious Agents - Chapter 2
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 12:57:24 PM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for interesting fanfic  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Ace Always Ace   :wub: :inlove:  :theking