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The Promise | Chapter 0|
« on: November 09, 2013, 07:43:59 PM »



Prologue




Long time ago, my grandfather made ​​a promise to his old friend that he will marry me to his father's grandson. Just a few minutes before his death he told us the news. WHAT!!! I'm still young!! I'm 18!!! And.... Why it must be him!I HATE THAT PERSON FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!!!!!!!






well... I know that have many fics ongoing but I really wanted to write this even it's too short :sweat: yes fic will be short not like others well I'll update next week for who are waiting for Don't be ashamed when you love me  :sweat:
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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2013, 08:33:40 PM »
mo-chan-san. genderbend?

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« Reply #2 on: November 09, 2013, 09:12:11 PM »

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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #3 on: November 09, 2013, 11:56:36 PM »
MOMO~~ WHY YOU GENDERBEND?!  :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :err: :err: :err: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:

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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2013, 12:06:07 AM »
I hope it Mayuki  :twisted:

Is twist?

 

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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2013, 04:22:51 AM »
UWA~! mo-chan has a new fic  :D a genderbend....  :nervous
oh come here Mayuyu, Tii still sees you as a girl don't worry  :sweatdrop:
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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2013, 05:33:49 PM »
Long time no see Mo-chan! Genderbend is quite popular for some time hah...well I kind of like the idea, hope you put your own mark on it though and not do the 'I hate him!! I hate him so much but suddenly I love him!' thing...   and about the genderbend >w> I'm still more into girlxgirl but no one around has tried the g!p ,right? g!p is my new obssession.

Can't wait to see how this fic will work out. Waiting for more~
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Re: The Promise | Prologue|
« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2013, 06:18:46 PM »
COUGH~!
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« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2013, 07:31:49 PM »

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Re: The Promise | Prologue| Poll~
« Reply #9 on: December 02, 2013, 04:38:02 PM »
lately I'm thinking about genderband thing
so I wanted to put a poll to be clear of your thoughts  :sweatdrop:
after this poll I'll really start to update chapters ><

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« Reply #10 on: December 02, 2013, 05:16:32 PM »
you know my answer momo  :lol:

CURSE YOUR SIGGY!!! AAAAHHHHHH XD
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Re: The Promise | Prologue|Poll~
« Reply #11 on: December 02, 2013, 06:32:15 PM »
GIRL MOMO!!!

And I'm not against the idea of Mayu be a girl who likes to danso every day hauahuahau

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Re: The Promise | Prologue|Poll~
« Reply #12 on: December 14, 2013, 02:30:12 PM »
Chapter 0


"WHAT?"

"Yes Yuki, you're going to marry Watanabe's older son"

My mother left me alone in the living room after confirming to me that I'm going to marry the eldest son of Watanabe Group Company.Watanabe Mayu. The most arrogant guy I've ever known. I had knew Mayu since my childhood and I really hate him. He is a playboy and a selfish person. He doesn't care of the emotions of other people.He always prove me that I'm stupid and I don't know anything . Unfortunately, our families have been friends for centuries. Our grandparents knew each other and they are made ​​that promise. I sat on the couch. I can't come to believe it. What about me? What about my choice?

"Congratulation Yukirin~ "

"Stop teasing me Rena! I can't belive it I don't want to believe it!!"

Rena chuckled and ruffled my hair " You didn't see it~ your eyes were  like they gonna pop out from their place"

Rena is my childhood friend. Since I knew her, we always had studied together in the same class.

"Stop it !! I'm serious..." Rena repressed her serious era and sat beside me.

"You know that you can't disobey to your parents"

"I know..."

"But, he is a kid Rena and he is still in high school and I'm university sudent??"

"At least Yuki he is cute~"

"Rena!! mou!"

I'm Kashiwagi Yuki,  18 years old, university student. The nightmare begins.

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I fixed my my gaze young man dressed in a black suit. It's Mayu. He was surrounded by a great number of rich people on the center of the hall. Everyone is congratulating him about our marriage.

“Mayu, I see that you‘ve really grown. Look at you? I’m sure that it’ll be easy for you to follow your father's footsteps.”  A guest praise him

“No doubt about it! Being just a 17 year old boy top 1 with high IQ. The Watanabe Group of Company is surely lucky to have you!”

“Hahaha, I don’t know about lucky? I just study that’s all.”  Mayu was laughing with them.

“Don’t say such naïve things, Mayu.”  Mayu's father said to him as he put his hand on Mayu's shoulder and he added. “Don’t forget that you’ll be the one handling the company.”

"Thanks father."
He is sure a great actor. I'm speechless... He wasn't  the same Mayu I talked with him days ago.

<Flashback>

It was a few days before our wedding. Our families have decided to meet. Mayu's father told us that the wedding will be in a week. I felt my blood boil inside my body. He was there. Mayu. He was sitting in a seat, drinking his cup of tea calmely. He didn't give a damn to listen to what our parents were talking about. I could not get enough of this charade. Annoyed by the fact that I still have only a few days to say goodbye to my life as a single, I went outside to the garden to take a breath.

"Come here! Yeah good boy!" I saw Mayu taking a rubbit in his arms and proceed to me. Why he is here!? I wanted to be alone!! Why?? Is he following me?

"STOP THERE!! Don't come near"

"What? You still get scared of rabbits?" He was laughing no he was making fun of me!! Even I told him to stop still he didn't listen to me. Other people find rabbits  cute and all but me it's the totale oposite I get scared of them. My eyes gets tearly. I'm really scared of that rabbit and that idiot of Mayu keeps teasing me!! I hate him he is a kid he can't understand me!! How can I marry someone like him? I colset my eyes and began screaming and yelling at him to stop and go away.

"It's ok I put it inside. Stop screaming you're hurting my ears" I opened to see an annoyed Mayu.

"You is really scared of you. How can you get scared of a little cute animal like this? I thought before cause you were a little girl but you are an adult now. It's really ridiculous."  He was talking to me with his famous cyborg stare.

"L-leave me alone" I proceed to walk away.
*viber* I took my phone from my bag. I smiled to myself when I saw his name on th screen. It was my first love and bestfriend. Sae.
<End Of Flashback>
TBC


Hey everybody I'm sorry I took too much time because of mu exams  :sweatdrop: I'm sorry it ended up a short chapter but I promise it will be longer in the next one  :sweatdrop:
The poll is locked and you know the genderband wins Mayu will be a guy even I prefer Mayu to be a girl and sorry if it's a boring chapter I didn't find good ideas  :doh:
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Re: The Promise | Chapter 1|
« Reply #13 on: December 14, 2013, 02:54:00 PM »
Mayu doesn't seem to be against the marriage or it's just me?

Sae.... :smhid

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« Reply #14 on: December 14, 2013, 03:36:11 PM »
Crap.. I if Mayu saw Sae Yuki firstlove and bestfriend

I wonder if Mayu is jealouse :3

Please update soon

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« Reply #15 on: December 14, 2013, 05:59:04 PM »
Poll
you know my answer momo  :lol:

CURSE YOUR SIGGY!!! AAAAHHHHHH XD

yea I know...  :sweatdrop:

GIRL MOMO!!!

And I'm not against the idea of Mayu be a girl who likes to danso every day hauahuahau

Sorry granny Mayu will be a guy  :doh: I really like your idea of danso  :cathappy:  :thumbsup

Chapter 0
Mayu doesn't seem to be against the marriage or it's just me?

Sae.... :smhid

mmm :yep: I see I see! well Kono-chin I never said that Mayu is against the marriage  :lol:
And this story will be in Yuki's POV so we'll never going to know what's going on in Mayu's mind  XD


Crap.. I if Mayu saw Sae Yuki firstlove and bestfriend

I wonder if Mayu is jealouse :3

Please update soon

We'll see Mayu he'll get jealous and punch Sae or not  :twisted:
« Last Edit: March 08, 2014, 12:29:40 PM by mo-chan »

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